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. 2020 Dec 7;15(12):e0243583. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0243583

Differences in the perception of harm assessment among nurses in the patient safety classification system

Kwangmi Lee 1,#, Kyeongsuk Yoon 2,#, Byeongsook Yoon 2,#, Eunhee Shin 3,*
Editor: Mojtaba Vaismoradi4
PMCID: PMC7721130  PMID: 33284853

Abstract

Background

Precise harm assessment by the medical staff is very important in a patient safety event reporting system but there are differences in perception due to insufficiencies in education.

Methods

We developed the survey tool consisting of nine patient safety incident scenarios to investigate the interrater agreement in the harm score assigning among nurses. The survey tool was distributed to 287 nurses working at two hospitals.

Results

The overall kappa value for interrater agreement was k = 0.21 for harm and k = 0.28 for harm duration. In nine patient safety event scenarios, such as “mislabeled specimen” or “chest tube drain”, when the degree of harm was not clear, the assessments of harm and harm duration were somewhat dispersed.

Conclusion

For the quality of the patient safety incident reporting system, the accurate harm assessment of medical personnel is highly important; however, results in this study indicated that theassessment of the degree of harm by Korean nurses was not standardized. The reason for this variability could be due to the lack of education that takes harm assessment into account. Therefore, training in harm assessment and the development of programs to support this training are both necessary.

Introduction

In 2003, the U.S. National Institute of Medicine for ‘Patient Safety: Achieving a New Standard of Care’ stated that in order to reduce the number of preventable medical accidents, information regarding patient safety, including near misses and adverse events, needs to be standardized and managed [1]. Nevertheless, due to differences in patient safety event reporting systems, differences in the definitions of accidents, measurements of their frequencies, and the tracking of patient safety events have been reported [2]. Heterogeneous data entry systems, differences in terminology and classification of patient safety, and inconsistent characteristic usage in patient safety event reporting systems make standardization difficult; furthermore, it has been reported that the analysis and interpretation of near misses and adverse events in each data set require different individual methods [3].

In order to make clear and direct efforts for patient safety, healthcare professionals rely on accurately described information regarding patient safety events, harm of event and the main causes of the event. Among these, the allocation of harm scores is a crucial step in the study of patient safety events, as it often provides an opportunity to trigger a response to the management of harm and the event on an organizational level [4]. Regarding patient safety events, the management of adverse events or sentinel events causing direct harm to patients in particular has recently become the main capability of relevant professionals [4].

Studies regarding harm of patient safety events were hardly performed until the beginning of the 1960s, and only deviations from clinical guidelines were examined in relation to preventable harm. In examining such harm, it is known to be very difficult to determine whether the harm originated from medical treatment, whether the medical treatment was unnecessary, or the harm was preventable. Consequently, from a patient-to-health care provider’s perspective, a variety of efforts such as the classification of harm from the occurrence of an event and the exact assessment are being continuously made [5].

To date, harm classification schemes have been developed by organizations such as the World Health Organization (WHO), the National Quality Forum (NQF), the National Coordinating Council for Medication Error Reporting and Prevention (NCC MERP), and the Agency for Healthcare Research and Quality (AHRQ) [46]. In particular, the National Coordinating Council for Medication Error Reporting and Prevention (NCC MERP) created its own index classifying medication errors by elaborating the definitions of harm levels in 2001. Moreover, in 2010, Version 1.1 of the Common Format Harm Scale was presented by the Agency for Healthcare Research and Quality (AHRQ) according to the Patient Safety and Quality Improvement Act of 2005, which requires all healthcare providers to employ a common set of data elements when reporting patient safety events for the purpose of data statistics and analysis, and to use the Patient Safety Organization’s (PSO’s) standardized method to collect and classify data. This version categorized the impact of patient safety events on patients’ functional capacities on a seven-point scale, categorized into five categories of “No Harm” and “Death,” and Version 1.2 was released in April 2012, allowing users to classify harm on a five-point scale from no harm to death [4].

Despite the widespread use of these various patient safety event reporting systems in medical institutions, factors that hinder consistent, timely and accurate reporting have been reported. First, factors that affect medical personnel who use the reporting system include the level of clarity about the purpose of the report, the usefulness of the system, and the degree to which reporting is emphasized in institutional communication [7, 8]. In addition, it is influenced by the reporter’s understanding and interpretation of the definition of harms and contributing factors, and the reporter’s perception and personal judgment, along with the organization’s safety culture [7, 9, 10]. In particular, for an accurate patient safety event reporting system, consistency is important in the definition and classification of near misses and adverse events of nurses and other medical personnel who enter data into the system [9, 11]. In many studies, it was reported that there were inconsistent results in the harm assessment in the report of patient safety events between medical staff [7, 10, 1214]. For the consistency of risk assessment, the need for related education programs was raised [10, 11].

In Korea, the Patient Safety Act was implemented and entered in force in 2015, and in accordance with the Patient Safety Act, healthcare workers and patients who have caused or become aware of patient safety events can report them autonomously, and the medical institution implements and operates a system for reporting and learning of patient safety accidents for investigation, research and sharing of such self-reporting contents. In the current patient safety event report learning system, there are general reports and intensive reports. In the general report form, the date and time of the event, the date of discovery, and the improvement measures to prevent the recurrence of the event are entered, and in the intensive report form, the degree of harm should be assessed along with the date and time of the event. Among these, the voluntary reporting of patient safety events and a standardized assessment of the harm degree of the event and contributing factors are strongly needed to manage patient safety events and promote qualitative improvement based on reported events.

While the accurate assessment of harm by medical staff is highly important, factors such as lack of sufficient training contribute to differences in perception; therefore, in this study, a harm assessment tool comprising nine patient safety scenarios for nurses working in medical institutions was applied to evaluate the degree of differences in the perception of harm among nurses.

Materials and methods

Research design

The present study is an exploratory study to determine the degree of agreement in harm assessment among nurses working in national cancer centers and advanced general hospitals in different regions using an assessment tool for the harm of patient safety events.

Subject of study and data collection from subjects

The number of subjects required varies from the minimum reported by Mundfrom et al. [15], according to whom an absolute number of at least 100 study subjects are needed for factor analysis, to studies reporting that at least 3 to 20 times the number of factors are needed. However, there is to date no consensus on the size of the research sample adequate for exploratory factor analysis. Therefore, as 287 nurses participated in the actual survey of this study, a total of 287 subjects were included in the analysis.

Data were collected using self-report questionnaires conducted to nurses working in National Cancer Center from March 5 to March 14, 2018 and Yonsei University Wonju Severance Christian Hospital from June 25 to 5 July, 2019. The subjects who wished to voluntarily participate in this study via recruitment notice received a written explanation about this study and completed the questionnaire after agreeing to the consent form.

Research tools

Instrument

The questionnaire was developed with reference to the content of the study conducted by Tamara et al. [4] with the Common Format Harm Scale Version 1.2 of the AHRQ and was configured to assess harm and harm duration for each of nine patient safety incidents scenarios: (1) medication given via wrong route, (2) body part laceration during surgery, (3) contrast allergy, (4) abdominal infection, (5) mislabeled specimen, (6) wrong site surgery, (7) chest tube drain, (8) medication overdose, and (9) medication given at the wrong time. However, we organized the patient safety incident scenarios from the “Patient Safety Event Cases and Prevention” [16], published by the Korean Hospital Nurse Association to better reflect the real-world incidents in Korea. After completing the scenarios, three experts working in patient safety departments at medical institutions and one university professor reviewed and examined whether the selected scenarios were appropriate, after which this study was performed.

The questionnaire also included 13 descriptive questions to determine each subject’s gender, current department, working period at current job, job satisfaction at current job, Whether or not getting a patient safety training at current job, method of a patient safety training, contents of a patient safety training, time patient safety training, whether or not participating events of a patient safety at current job, experience of patient safety incident at current job, type of patient safety incident, reporting on patient safety incident, types of patient safety incidents experienced.

Definition of harm and harm duration of questionnaire

In this study, the assessment of harm and harm duration for domestic patient safety events in each scenario was based on the following classification by applying the criteria [17] suggested by NCC MERP. The harm was categorized as near miss (A): an circumstances or events that have the capacity to cause error, such as disorganized medical equipment; near miss (B): an error occurred but the error did not reach the patient; no harm (C): an error occurred that reach the patient but did not cause patient harm; mild harm (D): an error occurred that reached the patient and required monitoring to confirm that it resulted in no harm to the patient and/or required intervention to preclude harm; Moderate harm (E): an error occurred that may have contributed to or resulted in temporary harm to the patient and required intervention; Severe harm (F): an error occurred that may have contributed to or resulted in permanent patient harm and required the short-term or long-term hospitalization; and a sentinel event: an error occurred that may have contributed to or resulted in the patient’s death. Harm duration was categorized as permanent: an error occurred to the patient persisting over a year; temporary: an error occurred to the patient persisting less than a year; and unknown.

Ethical considerations

To ensure ethical consideration of the subjects, this study was approved by the Ethical Committee of National Cancer Center (IRB No.: NCC 2018–0033) and Sangji University (IRB No.: IRB 46). The researcher provided a written explanation including the purpose of the study, voluntary participation, and their anonymity, and a consent form for nurses who wished to voluntarily participate in the study. When the subject completed the consent form, the researcher requested that the subject complete the questionnaire.

Data analysis

Collected data were analyzed using SPSS 26.0 (SPSS Inc, Chicago, IL, USA). The general characteristics of the study subjects were presented as frequency and percentage, and the frequency of respondents was calculated for each scenario. In addition, Fleiss’ kappa was calculated by estimating the interrater agreement for each scenario among respondents. A standard statistical analysis of the kappa values was used. The levels of agreement were almost perfect when kappa had a value of 0.81–1.00; a substantial agreement when it was 0.61–0.8; a moderate agreement when it was 0.41–0.60; a fair agreement when it was 0.21–0.40; a slight agreement when it was 0.01–0.20; and 0 or less was interpreted as virtually no agreement.

Results

General characteristics of subjects

A total of 287 subjects were included in this study and 272 (94.8%) were female. The subjects’ working departments included 192 (66.92%) general wards, 77 (26.8%) special departments such as intensive units and emergency departments, 10 (3.5%) outpatient departments. The largest group, consisting of 136 subjects (47.4%), had worked at least 1 year and less than 5 years in their current job; 76 subjects (26.5%) had worked more than 10 years; 64 subjects (22.3%) had worked at least 5 years and less than 10 years; and 9 subjects (3.1%) had worked less than a year. Of the subjects, 194 (67.6%) reported they were satisfied with their current jobs. Currently, 283 subjects (98.6%) reported that they had received the patient safety training at work. In regard to the training methods for patient safety with duplicate answers, 217 subjects (75.6%) had trained with the “theoretical lectures”, followed by 196 (68.3%) with “certificated brochure training” and 191 (66.6%) with “department conveying training”. As for the contents of patient safety training, 261 (90.9%) reported the “understanding of patient safety”, and 257 (89.5%) reported the “incident reporting procedure”. The number of subjects who spent more than one hour and less than four hours on patient safety training was the highest at 170 (59.2%). Regarding the participating events of a patient safety such as special lectures, seminars, and campaigns at their current workplace, 150 subjects (52.3%) reported that they had participated (Table 1).

Table 1. General characteristics of study subjects.

Variables Categories n (%)
Gender Male 15(5.2)
Female 271(94.4)
Missing 1(0.3)
Current department General ward 192(66.9)
Special ward (ICU, ER, etc) 77(26.8)
Outpatient department 10(3.5)
Others+ 7(2.4)
Missing 1(0.3)
Working period at current job (year) <1 9(3.1)
≥1-<5 136(47.4)
≥5-<10 64(22.3)
≥10 76(26.5)
Missing 2(0.7)
Job satisfaction at current job Very satisfied 10(3.5)
Satisfied 184(64.1)
Unsatisfied 80(27.9)
Very unsatisfied 12(4.2)
Missing 1(0.3)
Whether or not getting a patient safety training at current job Yes 283(98.6)
No 3(1.0)
Missing 1(0.3)
Method of a patient safety training (duplication check) Theoretical lectures 217(75.6)
Case-based discussion training 40(13.9)
Certificated brochure training 196(68.3)
Department conveying training 191(66.6)
Others++ 15(5.2)
Contents of a patient safety training (duplication check) Understanding Patient Safety 261(90.9)
Time and method of patient identification 247(86.1)
Grade and criteria of patient safety incident reporting 180(62.7)
Incident reporting procedures 257(89.5)
Inpatient care management 148(51.6)
Activating near miss reporting 194(67.6)
Others 1(0.3)
Time of a patient safety training (hour) <1 44(15.3)
≥1–<4 170(59.2)
≥4–<8 36(12.5)
≥8 35(12.2)
Missing 2(0.7)
Whether or not participating events§ of a patient safety at current job Yes 150(52.3)
No 133(46.3)
Missing 4(1.4)

+Operating room,

++ Cyber training, practical training,

§ Special lecture, seminar, Campaign, etc.

Subjects’ patient safety incident experiences

When asked about their experiences with patient safety incident at current job, 207 subjects (72.1%) reported they had experienced patient safety incidents at work. Regarding the types of patient safety incidents that they had experienced, 147 subjects (51.2%) reported with near miss and 131 subjects (45.6%) reported with no harm events as duplicate answers, while 61 subjects (21.3%) reported with adverse events and 22 subjects (7.70%) reported with sentinel events. When asked whether they had written a report regarding the patient safety incidents, 171 (59.6%) of the subjects reported that they had. In the question about the type of patient safety incidents that they had experienced, which allowed multiple answers, 152 subjects (53.0%) reported with medication errors, followed by falling, answered by 124 subjects (43.2%) (Table 2).

Table 2. Experience of patient safety accident in study subjects.

Variables Categories n(%)
Experience of patient safety incident at current job Yes 207(72.1)
No 77(26.8)
Missing 3(1.0)
Type of patient safety incident (duplication check) Near miss 147(51.2)
No harm safety event 131(45.6)
Mild/Moderate/Severe safety event 61(21.3)
Sentinel event 22(7.7)
Reporting on patient safety incidents Yes 171(59.6)
No 38(13.2)
Missing 78(27.6)
Types of patient safety incidents experienced (duplication check) Surgery 11(3.8)
Delivery 0(0.0)
Treatment procedure 20(7.0)
Anesthesia 1(0.3)
Clinical examination 22(7.7)
Blood transfusion 3(1.0)
Medication 152(53.0)
Infection 4(1.4)
Computerized disorder 7(2.4)
Medical equipment/Medical device 15(5.2)
Hospital meal 20(7.0)
Fall 124(43.2)
Treatment material contamination /failure 2(0.7)
Suicide/Self-harm 18(6.3)
Other 2(0.7)

Consistency rate among subjects regarding the scenarios

In response to each scenario, 135 subjects responded “mild harm (D)” to the scenario “medication given via wrong route” and 74 subjects responded “moderate harm (E)”. Regarding the harm duration of the same scenario, 128 subjects responded “temporary”, but 146 responded “unknown.” In the second scenario, “body part laceration during surgery”, 151 subjects evaluated it as a “severe harm (F)” and harm duration was also rated the highest, with 153 subjects responding “permanent”. To the third scenario “contrast allergy”, 131 subjects responded “moderate harm (E)” and 115 subjects responded “severe harm (F)”, while regarding harm duration, 211 subjects answered “temporary”. The fourth scenario, “abdominal site infections” was assessed by 143 subjects as “severe harm (F)” and by 95 subjects as “sentinel event”. One hundred twenty-five subjects responded to the harm duration of this scenario with “permanent” but 97 subjects answered “unknown”. The degree of harm in the fifth scenario, “mislabeled specimen” was assessed by 110 subjects as a “moderate harm (E)” and by 103 subjects as a “sentinel event”; regarding the harm duration, 144 subjects evaluated it as “temporary”. The harm degree of the sixth scenario, “wrong site surgery” was evaluated by 203 subjects as a “sentinel event” and the harm duration was rated as “permanent” by 271 subjects. The harm degree of the seventh scenario, “chest tube drain” was rated by 121 subjects as a “mild harm (D)” and by 82 subjects as a “moderate harm (E)”; the harm duration was rated by 244 subjects as “temporary.” In the eighth scenario, “medication overdose”, 138 subjects responded “mild harm (D)”and 92 subjects responded “moderate harm (E)” and regarding the harm duration, 176 subjects answered “temporary.” With regard to the harm degree of the last scenario, “medication given at the wrong time”, 107 subjects responded “mild harm (D)” and the harm duration was rated “temporary” by 153 subjects.

Upon analysis of the interrater agreement rate among the respondents using Fleiss’ kappa, the harm evaluation yielded a value of 0.21 and the value for harm duration was 0.28. (Table 3).

Table 3. Agreement values for harm scale and harm duration.

Scenario Harm Score: Frequency of Respondents (%) Harm Duration: Frequency of Respondents (%) kappa value a
Near Miss
(A)
Near Miss
(B)
No Harm
(C)
Mild Harm
(D)
Moderate Harm
(E)
Severe Harm
(F)
Sentinel Event Permanent Temporary Unknown Harm score Harm duration
1. Medication given via wrong route 19 (6.6) 9 (3.1) 22 (7.6) 135 (46.9) 74 (25.7) 16 (5.6) 11 (3.8) 12 (4.2) 128 (44.4) 146 (50.7) 0.483 0.575
2. Body part laceration during surgery 0 (0.0) 1 (0.3) 0 (0.0) 2 (0.7) 79 (27.4) 151 (52.4) 54 (18.8) 153 (53.3) 75 (26.1) 58 (20.2) 0.526 0.537
3. Contrast allergy 3 (1.0) 2 (0.7) 8 (2.8) 17 (5.9) 131 (45.6) 115 (40.1) 9 (3.1) 18 (6.3) 211 (73.5) 56 (19.5) 0.527 0.661
4. Abdominal site infection 7 (2.4) 9 (3.1) 0 (0.0) 13 (4.5) 17 (5.9) 143 (49.8) 95 (33.1) 125 (43.6) 63 (22.0) 97 (33.8) 0.522 0.512
5. Mislabeled specimen 1 (0.3) 2 (0.7) 2 (0.7) 2 (0.7) 110 (38.3) 66 (23.0) 103 (35.9) 47 (16.4) 144 (50.2) 95 (33.1) 0.496 0.532
6. Wrong site surgery 0 (0.0) 2 (0.7) 0 (0.0) 1 (0.3) 8 (2.8) 72 (25.1) 203 (70.7) 271 (94.4) 7 (2.4) 8 (2.8) 0.645 0.914
7. Chest tube drainage 3 (1.0) 19 (6.6) 51 (17.8) 121 (42.2) 82 (28.6) 6 (2.1) 4 (1.4) 4 (1.4) 244 (85.0) 38 (13.2) 0.481 0.778
8. Medication overdose 5 (1.7) 10 (3.5) 10 (3.5) 138 (48.1) 92 (32.1) 22 (7.7) 8 (2.8) 11 (3.8) 176 (61.3) 99 (34.5) 0.509 0.601
9. Medication given at the wrong time 10 (3.5) 54 (18.8) 91 (31.7) 107 (37.3) 18 (6.3) 6 (2.1) 1 (0.3) 2 (0.7) 153 (53.3) 132 (46.0) 0.469 0.596
Overall kappa value b (Harm scale) 0.205
Overall kappa value b (Harm duration) 0.279

a Fleiss’ kappa calculated by adding option standard variables.

bIndex of agreement with Fleiss’ Kappa.

Adapted from Williams T, et al. The reliability of AHRQ Common Format Harm Scales in rating patient safety events. J Patient Saf 2015 Mar;11(1):52–9.

Discussion

Our findings demonstrate that the overall interrater agreement for harm of patient safety incidents is 0.21 in this study, which is significantly lower than the result of the similar studies using AHRQ Common Format Ham Scale Version 1.2 [4, 18]. In the study conducted by Tamara et al. [4], the value of interrater agreement was 0.45, and other study conducted by Toni et al., the value was 0.48 [4, 18]. In the general characteristics of the study subjects, most of subjects of this study are nurses who have experience in their current workplace for more than one year and less than five years, and who have received patient safety training for more than one hour and less than four hours. While the study subjects of the research conducted by Tamara et al. [4] were quality, risk and safety managers, and thus had more likely to have an experience in assessing the harm of patient safety incidents. However, the subjects in the study by Toni et al. [18] had 5 years of experience or less which is similar to the characteristics of the subjects in our study. As the patient safety reporting system was activated in Korea in accordance with the relevant laws in 2015, it is possible that nurses in our study had less experience in harm assessment than those in previous studies but further research is needed in the future considering other factors.

Also, the reason for the low interrater agreement in this study could have been subjective judgments about harm scores because the description of harm scores was only provided with patient safety scenarios in the questionnaire. Another reason for the low interrater agreement rate in the harm assessment are that the level of understanding of the reporter’s harm scale is reported to affect the assessment [7]. When harm assessments were conducted for nine scenarios involving patient safety incidents in this study, a generally moderate agreement was shown when the harm was known, such as “body part laceration during surgery” or “wrong site surgery”. On the other hand, in cases in which the assessment of harm was unclear, such as “mislabeled specimen” or “chest tube drain” the evaluation of harm and harm duration were shown to be somewhat dispersed.

As such, the need for education among reporter is raised as a more accurate harm assessment method. In many studies including Pronovost et al., professional training and sharing of ideas in practice have been reported to help enhance the perception of medical personnel in patient safety incident scenarios [7, 10, 14, 19].

In the results of harm assessment for patient safety incidents for nurses with similar experience, the interrater agreement value of this study was significantly lower than that of other studies. Therefore, it is necessary to develop a training program in Korea to actively assist nurses in performing their patient safety duties through continuous monitoring of patient safety reports and practical training on harm assessment in reporting patient safety incidents. It is also required that the development of multidisciplinary, academic tools for the standardization of harm assessment.

Despite the fact that such research was first conducted in Korea, where much attention has been paid to patient safety along with the establishment of a patient safety reporting system, as a main limitation of this study, there is a lack of generalizability since only nurses working at two medical institutions were surveyed. Next, in terms of validity of the questionnaire, we only performed the content validity with three experts without pilot study, face validity and criterion validity.

In addition, the study involved working nurses based on the assumption that they had already received the respective primary training, so no explanation or separate training regarding harm or harm duration assessment was provided. Consequently, since the nurses were prompted to read and evaluate each scenario in the questionnaire immediately, individual differences might have affected the interpretation of the scenario and assessment, and differences in individual education and clinical experience might be reflected in their assessment.

Conclusion

In the patient safety incident reporting system, the accurate assessment of medical personnel is highly important; however, there are differences in perception due to factors such as inadequate training. Therefore, in the present study, AHRQ Common Format Ham Scale Version 1.2 was applied to identify differences in perception of harm assessment among nurses. This study analyzed the interrater agreement among respondents via Fleiss’ kappa, for which a value of 0.21 was found for harm assessment and 0.28 for harm duration. These values indicated significantly lower consistency in the harm assessment among nurses.

For the quality of the patient safety incident reporting, it is important for healthcare professionals to accurately assess the degree of patients’ harm. This study found that the assessment of the degree of harm by Korean nurses was not standardized. The reason for this variability could be due to the lack of education that takes harm assessment into account. Therefore, training in harm assessment and the development of programs to support this training are both necessary.

Supporting information

S1 Questionnaire. (English version).

(PDF)

S2 Questionnaire. (Korean version).

(PDF)

S1 Dataset

(XLSX)

Acknowledgments

The contributions of all participants in this study are greatly appreciated. We would like to thank Editage (www.editage.co.kr) for English language editing.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting information files.

Funding Statement

This study was supported by the NRF(National Research Foundation of Korea) funded by the MOE(Ministry of Education) (NRF-2018R1D1A3B07049955). The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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5. Thank you for providing the Korean version of the questionnaire as Supporting Information. Please also include an English copy as Supporting Information.

6. Thank you for including your ethics statement:

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer #1: In this study, the authors attempt to assess the differences in nurses' perceptions of harm using scenarios. While this is an interesting study, I have concerns about the following:

According to the author, this study is based on the fact that accurate assessment of harm by healthcare providers is highly important, and that factors such as lack of adequate training can lead to differences in perceptions of harm. However, there is no citation from the literature on this in the Introduction section.

The relationship between the importance of standardization of classifications and terminology in incident reporting, which the author mentions in the Introduction and at the beginning of the Discussion, and the differences in nurses' perceptions of events (particularly in terms of impact on patients and duration of harm) that this study tried to identify is unclear. I think that this lack of clarity can be attributed to the lack of reference to how differences in nurses' perceptions of harm may be detrimental to incident reporting.

This problem also affects the Discussion. The first paragraph of the Discussion is what should be stated in the Introduction, and the second paragraph just redefines what has already been defined in the Methods. In the Discussion, starting from the third paragraph, the results of this study, the following sections have not been adequately discussed: 1) General Characteristics of subjects, 2) Subjects' patient safety event experiences, and 3) Consistency Rate among subjects regarding the scenarios. This may be because the purpose of this study is not properly established in the Introduction by citing the literature. Therefore, the authors did not compare the results of this study to the findings of previous studies and show what new findings this study represents in this research area. The paragraph from line 228 suddenly refers to education, but the authors should mention more about the relationship between education and this study in the Introduction.

In summary, it is necessary to clearly state what this study tries to identify in the field of incident reporting and patient safety and to state that this requires a method of determining the rate of agreement between the nurses' perceptions of harm based on the scenarios. The results obtained then need to be discussed in relation to previous studies.

Minor comments

p.7, line 139 - I think the author forgot to delete the phrase, "Contents of a patient safety training."

p.7, line 141 - Please make sure the phrase "the number of patients." is correct.

p.9, line 157 - Please define "patient safety event."

p.9, line 163 - It is difficult to understand the phrase, "medication error was the most common answer ".

p.10, line 189 - Please use the word for Fleiss' assessment of the Kappa value in the Method section of line 123. "Showing a certain degree of, but very low, agreement" is what I think should be included in the Discussion part.

p.12, line 203 - Please reconsider the transition "therefore"; I think that the relationship between the preceding and following sentences is not cause and effect.

p.12, line 213 – Among other things, the author defines near misses here; however, it is unclear how this relates to the definition on p.5, line 98. Also, if you are going to provide a definition, please describe it in the Methods section.

Reviewer #2: General, I think the major flaw of your work is methodological issues.

Please provide a structured abstract

Please provide the English translation of Korean version of the questionnaire.

Please provide more information about the validity of Korean version of the questionnaire. Did you calculated judgmental or empirical validity?? The information about validity should be included completely in the manuscript. And if you do not, there is a big flaw in your work.

There was a need to follow the questionnaire validity steps in your work so that we can trust the results of your study.

The questionnaire detail should be completely included in the methods.

I did not find any information about reliability of the questionnaire

Line 98-99: Classification of harm and harm duration

the item A and B is “near miss”?? Is that correct?

You could develop data analysis and perform a regression model between participants characteristics and patient safety event experiences

General Characteristics form should be introduced in the methods.

It is recommended to add the mean and SD for quantitative variables in the General Characteristics of the participants.

Line 130-132: there is need to reworded, It is confusing.

Please summarize key findings of the study In initial part of the discussion.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


21 Sep 2020

Dear Editor and Reviewer:

We would like to thank the reviewers for their thoughtful review on our manuscript entitled “Differences in the perception of harm assessment among nurses in the patient safety classifica-tion system”. Those comments are all valuable for revising and improving our paper. We agree with their comments and we have revised our manuscript accordingly.

Please find our responses to the reviewers’ comments below.

Response to comments from editor and reviewers:

Journal Requirements:

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Response: We have modified our manuscript and file name by referring to the PLOS ONE’s style requirements.

2) In your financial disclosure, please clearly specify whether the funders played any role in the study.

Response: We have specified the role of funders in the financial disclosure.

3) Please provide further details regarding how participants were recruited, including the partic-ipant recruitment date.

Response: We have added how we recruited subjects including the recruitment date. Please refer to ‘Subject of Study’.

4) Please clarify in the methods section where the nurses were recruited from (which hospi-tal/study sites).

Response: We have specifically added from which institution the subjects were recruited. Please refer to “Subject of Study”.

5) Thank you for providing the Korean version of the questionnaire as Supporting Information. Please also include an English copy as Supporting Information.

Response: We would include an English version of the questionnaire.

6) Please amend your current ethics statement to include the full name of the ethics commit-tee/institutional review board(s) that approved your specific study. Once you have amended this/these statement(s) in the Methods section of the manuX-X-SCRIPT, please add the same text to the “Ethics Statement” field of the submission form (via “Edit Submission”).

Response: We added the full name of the ethics committee/institutional review board in the section of “Ethical Considerations” and “Ethics Statement” field of the submission form.

In the case of Yonsei University Wonju Severance Christian Hospital, one of the institutions that conducted the study, only the approval of the nursing department was required for re-search targeting nurses, so the study was conducted with the approval of the Sangji University IRB, which the principal investigator belongs to. Please refer to “Ethical Considerations”.

Reviewers' comments:

1) According to the author, this study is based on the fact that accurate assessment of harm by healthcare providers is highly important, and that factors such as lack of adequate training can lead to differences in perceptions of harm. However, there is no citation from the literature on this in the Introduction section.

Response: We have described the differences in perception between system reporters among the factors that have not been reported more accurately by the patient safety incident reporting sys-tem, and added to the Introduction section on the need for education. Please refer to “Introduc-tion”.

2) The relationship between the importance of standardization of classifications and terminolo-gy in incident reporting, which the author mentions in the Introduction and at the beginning of the Discussion, and the differences in nurses' perceptions of events (particularly in terms of im-pact on patients and duration of harm) that this study tried to identify is unclear. I think that this lack of clarity can be attributed to the lack of reference to how differences in nurses' per-ceptions of harm may be detrimental to incident reporting.

Response: We have described in the Discussion section how differences in perception among nurses can be a problem for the patient safety reporting system. Please refer to “Discussion”.

3) This problem also affects the Discussion. The first paragraph of the Discussion is what should be stated in the Introduction, and the second paragraph just redefines what has already been defined in the Methods. In the Discussion, starting from the third paragraph, the results of this study, the following sections have not been adequately discussed: 1) General Characteris-tics of subjects, 2) Subjects' patient safety event experiences, and 3) Consistency Rate among subjects regarding the scenarios. This may be because the purpose of this study is not properly established in the Introduction by citing the literature. Therefore, the authors did not compare the results of this study to the findings of previous studies and show what new findings this study represents in this research area. The paragraph from line 228 suddenly refers to education, but the authors should mention more about the relationship between education and this study in the Introduction.

Response: We have revised the Discussion section as a whole with reference to your valuable comments. Please refer to “Discussion”.

4) In summary, it is necessary to clearly state what this study tries to identify in the field of in-cident reporting and patient safety and to state that this requires a method of determining the rate of agreement between the nurses' perceptions of harm based on the scenarios. The results obtained then need to be discussed in relation to previous studies.

Response: We have clearly described what this study seeks to identify in the areas of patient safety reporting system, and stated that a method for determining the rate of agreement be-tween nurses' perceptions of harm is needed. Please refer to “Discussion”.

Minor comments:

1) p.7, line 139 - I think the author forgot to delete the phrase, "Contents of a patient safety training."

2) p.7, line 141 - Please make sure the phrase "the number of patients." is correct.

3) p.9, line 157 - Please define "patient safety event."

4) p.9, line 163 - It is difficult to understand the phrase, "medication error was the most com-mon answer ".

5) p.10, line 189 - Please use the word for Fleiss' assessment of the Kappa value in the Method section of line 123. "Showing a certain degree of, but very low, agreement" is what I think should be included in the Discussion part.

6) p.12, line 203 - Please reconsider the transition "therefore"; I think that the relationship be-tween the preceding and following sentences is not cause and effect.

7) p.12, line 213 – Among other things, the author defines near misses here; however, it is un-clear how this relates to the definition on p.5, line 98. Also, if you are going to provide a defini-tion, please describe it in the Methods section.

Response: As suggested by the reviewer, we have reviewed carefully the entire manuscript and have modified referring to the minor comments.

Reviewer #2 comments:

1) Please provide a structured abstract.

Response: We have revised the abstract. Please refer to “Abstract”.

2) Please provide the English translation of Korean version of the questionnaire.

Response: We would submit an English version of the questionnaire.

3) Please provide more information about the validity of Korean version of the questionnaire. Did you calculated judgmental or empirical validity?? The information about validity should be included completely in the manuX-X-SCRIPT. And if you do not, there is a big flaw in your work.

4) There was a need to follow the questionnaire validity steps in your work so that we can trust the results of your study.

Response: We developed the Korean version of the questionnaire to evaluate the reliability of harm score assignment entered into the patient safety incidents reporting system by nursing staff. We prepared the questionnaire by referring to the paper below, and the questionnaire was consisted of nine scenarios of patient safety incidents occurring in the clinical field of Korea and required the subjects to evaluate the harm and harm duration of each scenario. Also, after completing the Korean version of the questionnaire, we received reviews and feedback from experts working at clinical and university on whether the scenario of patient safety incidents in the questionnaire reflects the real-world incidents. We have described these details more clearly in the Research Tools, Instrument section.

- Williams T, et al. The reliability of AHRQ Common Format Harm Scales in rating pa-tient safety events. J Patient Saf 2015 Mar;11(1):52-9.

Please refer to the “English version of the questionnaire” & “Instrument”.

5) The questionnaire detail should be completely included in the methods.

Response: We have revised the details of questionnaire in Instrument section. Please refer to the “Instrument” & “Definition of Harm and Harm Duration of Questionnaire”.

6) I did not find any information about reliability of the questionnaire.

Response: To evaluate the reliability of harm score assignment, we calculated the Fleiss’ kappa which is a statistical measure for assessing agreement among multiple raters assigning categori-cal ratings. Please refer to the “Data Analysis”.

7) Line 98-99: Classification of harm and harm duration.

Response: We described about the classification of harm and harm duration in the Definition of Harm and Harm Duration of Questionnaire section. Please refer to the “Definition of Harm and Harm Duration of Questionnaire”.

8) the item A and B is “near miss”?? Is that correct?

Response: The harm assessment criteria used in our study were developed by NCC MERP, which is currently widely applied in harm assessment in Korean medical institutions. A detailed description of near miss A and B is provided in the Definition of Harm and Harm Duration of Questionnaire section. Please refer to the “Definition of Harm and Harm Duration of Question-naire”

9) You could develop data analysis and perform a regression model between participants char-acteristics and patient safety event experiences.

Response: Thank you for your valuable comment. In this study, we intended to evaluate the consistency of the harm assessment among nurses, and we would like to conduct further re-search to analyze and compare the general characteristics such as patient safety experience and their relevance to the harm assessment.

10) General Characteristics form should be introduced in the methods.

Response: We have added the details of General Characteristics in the Instrument section. Please refer to the “Instrument”.

11) It is recommended to add the mean and SD for quantitative variables in the General Char-acteristics of the participants.

Response: In this study, all of the general characteristics of the subjects were measured as cat-egorical variables, and therefore we calculated the frequency and percent.

12) Line 130-132: there is need to reworded, It is confusing.

Response: We have modified the line 130-132.

13) Please summarize key findings of the study In initial part of the discussion.

Response: We have modified the Discussion section. Please refer to the “Discussion”.

We sincerely hope the revision will meet with your requirements.

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Decision Letter 1

Mojtaba Vaismoradi

19 Oct 2020

PONE-D-20-19403R1

Differences in the perception of harm assessment among nurses in the patient safety classification system

PLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Shin,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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Prof, Mojtaba Vaismoradi, PhD, MScN, BScN

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer #1: Thank you for taking the time to respond to my comments.

Your revision has helped me understand the position of this study in the patient safety field. I think the methods, results, and discussion sections are adequate. However, your conclusions need to be brief and correspond to the introduction section. The conclusions have overlapped slightly with what has been stated in your results and discussion sections.

I would suggest that you instead try to write a straightforward description of the most important findings of this study.

I understand the background and purpose of this study as follows.

 For quality reporting of patient safety event, it is important for the reporter to accurately categorize the degree of patients’ harm.

 In particular, it is important to standardize the assessment of the degree of harm by nurses because they have many opportunities to report it.

 Although some studies have considered the standardization of the assessment of patients’ harm in other countries, the issue remains unclear in Korea.

 Therefore, this study aims to determine whether Korean nurses accurately judge the degree of harm by using a scenario to determine the variability in harm ratings.

 The conclusions for this introduction could be as follows.

 For quality patient safety incident reporting, it is important for healthcare professionals to accurately assess the degree of patients’ harm. This study found that the assessment of the degree of harm by Korean nurses was not standardized. The reason for this variability could be due to the lack of education that takes harm assessment into account. Therefore, training in harm assessment and the development of programs to support this training are both necessary.

 

 If you feel that I have understood exactly what you are trying to say, please refer to my comments.

 If not, please write your own concise conclusions.

Reviewer #2: Dear authors

Thank you for addressing the comment and improvement has been observed. I have two additional short comments.

Line 11: Should be “tool”

In this study for assessing the validity of the developed tool only content validity with 3 experts (without pilot study, face validity, criterion validity) was used. This issue should be mentioned as a main limitation.

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


26 Oct 2020

Dear Editor and Reviewers:

We would like to thank the reviewers for their thoughtful review on our manuscript entitled “Differences in the perception of harm assessment among nurses in the patient safety classifica-tion system”. Those comments are all valuable for revising and improving our paper. We agree with their comments and we have revised our manuscript accordingly.

Please find our responses to the reviewers’ comments below.

Response to comments from reviewers:

Reviewer #1 comments:

1) Your revision has helped me understand the position of this study in the patient safety field. I think the methods, results, and discussion sections are adequate. However, your conclusions need to be brief and correspond to the introduction section. The conclusions have overlapped slightly with what has been stated in your results and discussion sections. I would suggest that you instead try to write a straightforward description of the most important findings of this study. I understand the background and purpose of this study as follows. For quality reporting of patient safety event, it is important for the reporter to accurately categorize the degree of patients’ harm. In particular, it is important to standardize the assessment of the degree of harm by nurses be-cause they have many opportunities to report it. Although some studies have considered the standardization of the assessment of patients’ harm in other countries, the issue remains unclear in Korea. Therefore, this study aims to determine whether Korean nurses accurately judge the de-gree of harm by using a scenario to determine the variability in harm ratings. The conclusions for this introduction could be as follows. For quality patient safety incident reporting, it is important for healthcare professionals to accurately assess the degree of patients’ harm. This study found that the assessment of the degree of harm by Korean nurses was not standardized. The reason for this variability could be due to the lack of education that takes harm assessment into account. Therefore, training in harm assessment and the development of programs to support this training are both necessary.

Response: Thank you for your valuable and kind comments. We have revised the Conclusion section more clearly with reference to your comments. Please refer to “Conclusion”.

Reviewer #2 comments:

1) Line 11: Should be “tool”. In this study for assessing the validity of the developed tool only content validity with 3 experts (without pilot study, face validity, criterion validity) was used. This issue should be mentioned as a main limitation.

Response: We described about the main limitation on the validity of the questionnaire with reference to your valuable comments in the Discussion section. Please refer to the “Discussion”.

We sincerely hope the revision will meet with your requirements.

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Decision Letter 2

Mojtaba Vaismoradi

19 Nov 2020

PONE-D-20-19403R2

Differences in the perception of harm assessment among nurses in the patient safety classification system

PLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Shin,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

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We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Kind regards,

Prof, Mojtaba Vaismoradi, PhD, MScN, BScN

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer #1: Thank you for revising your conclusions.

I now have a clearer understanding of the conclusions of your study.

Unfortunately, the conclusions have not been changed in the Abstract, even though the Conclusions have been revised.

Could you please consider whether it is necessary to include the revised conclusion in the Abstract?

I would appreciate it if you could revise it.

Reviewer #2: Dear authors

Thank you for the revised manuscript according comments. In my opinion, no other revisions are needed.

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Author response to Decision Letter 2


20 Nov 2020

Dear Editor and Reviewers:

We would like to thank the reviewers for their thoughtful review on our manuscript entitled “Differences in the perception of harm assessment among nurses in the patient safety classifica-tion system”. Those comments are all valuable for revising and improving our paper. We agree with their comments and we have revised our manuscript accordingly.

Please find our responses to the reviewers’ comments below.

Response to comments from reviewers:

Reviewer #1 comments:

1) Thank you for revising your conclusions. I now have a clearer understanding of the conclu-sions of your study. Unfortunately, the conclusions have not been changed in the Abstract, even though the Conclusions have been revised. Could you please consider whether it is neces-sary to include the revised conclusion in the Abstract? I would appreciate it if you could revise it.

Response: Thank you for your comments. We should have revised the abstract as well as revised the conclusion. Unfortunately, we missed that point. We have revised the Abstract section with reference to your comments. Please refer to “Abstract”.

We sincerely hope the revision will meet with your requirements.

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Decision Letter 3

Mojtaba Vaismoradi

24 Nov 2020

Differences in the perception of harm assessment among nurses in the patient safety classification system

PONE-D-20-19403R3

Dear Dr. Shin,

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26 Nov 2020

PONE-D-20-19403R3

Differences in the perception of harm assessment among nurses in the patient safety classification system

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