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. 2020 Dec 9;15(12):e0242660. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0242660

Prevalence and associated factors of playing-related musculoskeletal disorders among music students in Europe. Baseline findings from the Risk of Music Students (RISMUS) longitudinal multicentre study

Cinzia Cruder 1,2,3,*, Marco Barbero 1, Pelagia Koufaki 2, Emiliano Soldini 4, Nigel Gleeson 2
Editor: Feng Pan5
PMCID: PMC7725387  PMID: 33296381

Abstract

Musculoskeletal (MSK) conditions among professional musicians and music students are frequent and may have significant physical and psychosocial consequences on their lives and/or on their playing abilities. The Risk of Music Students (RISMUS) research project was set up in 2018 to longitudinally identify factors associated with increased risk of playing-related musculoskeletal disorders (PRMDs) in a large sample of music students enrolled in pan-European institutions. The aim of this cross-sectional study was to describe the prevalence of playing-related musculoskeletal disorders (PRMDs) in this novel population at baseline of the RISMUS project. A further goal was to begin to identify variables that might be associated with the self-reported presence of PRMDs among music students. Eight hundred and fifty students from fifty-six conservatories and music universities in Europe completed a web-based questionnaire on lifestyle and physical activity participation levels, musical practice habits, health history and PRMDs, psychological distress, perfectionism and fatigue. A total of 560 (65%) out of 850 participants self-reported a positive history of painful MSK conditions in the last 12 months, 408 (48%) of whom self-reported PRMDs. Results showed that coming from West Europe, being a first- or a second-year Masters student, having more years of experience and higher rates of perceived exertion after 45 minutes of practice without breaks were factors significantly associated with self-reported presence of PRMDs. According to the authors’ knowledge, a large-scale multicentre study investigating prevalence and associated factors for PRMDs among music students at different stages of their education (from Pre-college to Masters levels) has not been conducted before. The high prevalence of PRMDs among music students, especially those studying at university-level, has been confirmed in this study and associated factors have been identified, highlighting the need for relevant targeted interventions as well as effective prevention and treatment strategies.

Introduction

Musculoskeletal (MSK) conditions are a common concern in the general population and the most prevalent cause of serious, long-term pain and physical disability, affecting 25% of all adults across European countries [14]. Besides MSK conditions leading to physical and work disability, some occupational groups have higher prevalence of MSK conditions that may be caused by the nature of their work. Jobs with frequently repeated movements and high physical demands in combination with psychosocial stress symptoms are often associated with MSK conditions [58]. In this regard, musicians represent a profession associated with MSK and psychosocial demands [9,10] that may limit their physical abilities, having a significant impact on their performances [11,12] but also a marked effect on their lives [9,10,13,14].

The term playing-related musculoskeletal disorders (PRMDs) was introduced by Zaza et al. in 1998 (“any pain, weakness, numbness, tingling, or other symptoms that interfere with your ability to play your instrument at the level you are accustomed to”) to identify musculoskeletal symptoms that interfere with the ability to play the instrument [12]. The most frequently reported factors common to the development of PRMDs in musicians include among others: the type of instrument, long hours of practice and insufficient rest breaks, poor physical condition, as well as muscle fatigue and overuse [13,1517]. Furthermore, several studies revealed that there were positive associations between the presence of MSK conditions and psychological stressors (i.e. anxiety and stress, depression and perfectionism) [15,1820].

Although the definition of PRMDs does not provide a causality of the disorder (i.e. the disorder is the result of playing the instrument), distinguishing PRMDs from non-playing-related or generic MSK conditions has the advantage of excluding symptoms without a significant impact and therefore not relevant for the musician [13,21]. Nevertheless, there are some discrepancies between terms that describe musicians’ conditions in the relevant literature. Several studies investigated painful MSK conditions using other descriptions than PRMDs [2125] or evaluated PRMDs without strictly following the definition or without reporting the definition in the methods section [2629].

A recent systematic review has reported the point prevalence of MSK conditions among musicians as between 57 and 68% for all complaints, and between 9 and 68% for playing-related complaints; similarly, PRMD lifetime prevalence oscillated between 62% and 93% [30]. However, the variety of definitions and the heterogeneity of types of prevalence, as well as heterogeneity amongst study populations has made comparison of the data unviable in this systematic review [30]. For this reason, recent studies and reviews strongly recommended conducting future research regarding the epidemiology of musicians’ PRMDs among large sample sizes, including the description of the measured MSK condition (i.e. distinguishing PRMDs and non-playing-related) and the use of adequate and validated outcome measures [18,30,31]. Similarly, the contemporary literature offers a large heterogeneity of methods amongst small samples that limit generalisations and meta-analytical synthesis of the evidence of music students’ MSK conditions [30,46]. This is despite a growing literature regarding MSK among music students [10,11,25,28,3239] and a proliferation of preventive courses as well as short-term health education programs during the last twenty years [4045]. Furthermore, in contrast to the literature on MSK conditions in the general population, scientific evidence is scarce concerning prevalence rates and associated factors in subgroups of age and different stages of occupation [30]. Therefore, there is a need to deliver robust and large-scale data on music students at different levels of their education to enhance an epidemiological appreciation of how best to prioritise the strategies for improving the management of PRMDs and to enhance evidence relating to the associated factors that may increase the risk of adverse outcomes.

The Risk of Music Students (RISMUS) research project was set up in 2018 to characterise clinical features of a large sample of students from pan-European music institutions and to longitudinally identify factors associated with increased and evolving risk of playing-related musculoskeletal disorders during their professional training [47]. This 12-months longitudinal multicentre investigation has evolved to incorporate recommendations within the current literature [18,30,31,46] that an effective way in which to predict the occurrence of PRMDs among musicians would be to conduct a longitudinal study, using an online-based administration of questionnaires. While necessarily involving musicians’ self-perception of status, it nevertheless has the benefit of being able to reach a larger population sample, addressing an identified gap in the existing literature.

Aims

The purpose of the present study was to examine the prevalence of PRMDs in a large-scale study population of music students enrolled in different pan-European music institutions at baseline of the RISMUS project, in order to characterise the study population at different levels of training (i.e. university-level students and Pre-college students). Our hypothesis was that there is a higher prevalence of PRMDs among university-level students in comparison with Pre-college students (i.e. transition between Pre-college and university-level) possibly due to the assumption that the exposure of playing-related activities is progressively demanding throughout their training. A further goal was to begin to identify variables that might be associated with the self-reported presence of PRMDs among music students. Specifically, an approach involving multivariable modelling might offer preliminary explorative and novel insights of the baseline findings to be further verified within the longitudinal analyses.

Materials and methods

This cross-sectional study focuses on part of the baseline data of RISMUS and refers to the overview of data from all music students participating in the research. One hundred and ninety schools have been invited to participate in this research and fifty-six of the approached institutions accepted to take part and contributed to the recruitment, by distributing the link to a web-based questionnaire to their student groups. The web-based questionnaire included questions about any PRMD that students had experienced and different potential risk factors. Before starting any procedure, participants had to complete and sign an electronic written consent form. Although beyond the scope of the present article, future articles will disseminate follow-up data from RISMUS considering PRMD aetiology amongst the professional training of music students. The research project was granted ethical approval by the Research Ethics Committee of Queen Margaret University of Edinburgh (REP 0177).

Participants

A total of nine hundred and ninety-seven students were recruited from the school registries of the aforementioned schools (see Table 1) for the baseline data collection between November 2018 and January 2019.

Table 1. Distribution of the study centres and students participating in the study.

country city music university/conservatory number of participants
Austria Eisenstadt Joseph Haydn Konservatorium 6
Innsbruck Tiroler Landeskonservatorium 12
Linz Anton Bruckner Privatuniversität 9
Salzburg Universität Mozarteum 24
Wien Universität für Musik und darstellende Kunst 28
Belgium Antwerp Royal Conservatoire Antwerp 15
Hasselt Robert Schumann Hochschule 8
Namur Institut supérieur de musique et de pédagogie 14
Denmark Copenhagen Royal Danish Academy of Music 4
Odense Danish National Music Academy 4
Estonia Tallinn Estonian Academy of Music and Theatre 8
Finland Helsinki Sibelius Academy (Uniarts) 21
France Bordeaux Pôle d'Enseignement Supérieur de la Musique et de la Danse 8
Lille École Supérieure Musique et Danse Hauts de France 12
Paris Conservatoire national supérieur de musique et de danse 18
Germany Dresden Hochschule für Musik Carl Maria von Weber 19
Düsseldorf Robert Schumann Hochschule 17
Frankfurt Hochschule für Musik und Darstellende Kunst 30
Hamburg Hochschule für Musik und Theater 19
Karlsruhe Hochschule für Musik Karlsruhe 11
Leipzig Hochschule für Musik und Theater Felix Mendelssohn Bartholdy 32
Lübeck Musikhochschule Lübeck 19
Osnabrück Universität Osnabrück 29
Stuttgart Hochschule für Musik und Darstellende Kunst 12
Weimar Hochschule für Musik Franz Liszt 4
Iceland Reykjavík Iceland University of Arts 3
Ireland Cork Cork School of Music 40
Dublin Royal Irish Academy of Music 14
Italy Cast.Veneto Conservatorio A. Steffani 50
Ferrara Conservatorio G. Frescobaldi 55
Fiesole Scuola di alto perfezionamento 9
Milano Conservatorio G. Verdi 21
Novara Conservatorio G. Cantelli 24
Parma Conservatorio A. Boito 26
Piacenza Conservatorio G. Nicolini 35
Roma Conservatorio S. Cecilia 28
Salerno Conservatorio G Martucci 12
Latvia Riga Jazeps Vitols Latvian Academy of Music 14
Portugal Porto Escola Superior de Música e Artes do Espetáculo 5
Scotland (UK) Glasgow Royal Conservatoire of Scotland 11
Spain Alicante Conservatorio Superior de Música Òscar Esplà 10
Las Palmas Conservatorio Superior de música de Canarias 7
Madrid Real Conservatorio Superior de Música 22
Murcia Conservatorio Superior de Música Manuel Massotti 13
S. Sebastián Musikene 7
Sevilla Conservatorio superior de música Manuel Castillo 20
Vigo Conservatorio Superior de Música 9
Sweden Malmö Malmö Academy of Music 2
Göteborg Academy of Music and Drama 18
Stockholm Royal College of Music—Kungliga Musikhögskolan 12
Switzerland Basel Hochschule für Musik 9
Bern Hochschule der Künste 14
Lugano Conservatorio della Svizzera italiana 48
Luzern Hochschule Luzern—Musik 70
The Netherlands Amsterdam Conservatorium van Amsterdam 2
Maastricht Conservatorium Maastricht 4
TOTAL 997

Inclusion criteria were men and women over 18 years old, playing a musical instrument commonly used in classical music as a main subject; Pre-college students in years 3 or 4; Bachelor of Arts students in years 1, 2 and 3 and Master of Arts students in years 1, 2, 3, 4; students attending gap year programs or continuing education courses. Exclusion criteria were as follows: Composers and conductors; positive history of chronic and highly disabling neurological and/or rheumatic and/or psychological conditions in the last 12 months; surgery of the upper limbs and/or the spine in the last 12 months. All eligible students received an e-mail with information about the study, a participant information sheet with the electronic consent form and the link to the web-based questionnaire site. The student registries of the music universities and conservatories presented in Table 1 were used to distribute the aforementioned e-mail and thus to recruit the participants. A reminder e-mail was sent 3 weeks after the first e-mail.

Outcome measures

This preliminary explorative study utilises a selection of the full menu of outcomes comprising the RISMUS project, which are available in the published protocol [47]. The use of questions and validated questionnaires allowed for a speculative exploration of suspected factors that were expected to be associated with a PRMD according to the current findings among the available literature.

The web-based survey included a bespoke questionnaire containing questions about: a) background and lifestyle (i.e. age, gender, self-reported height and weight, nationality, smoking status and sleeping habits); b) practice habits (i.e. main instrument, academic level, average time playing per week and years of experience, the perceived exertion after 45 minutes of practice without breaks [48], preparatory exercises and breaks during practice); c) health history (i.e. any painful MSK conditions, neurological and/or rheumatic and/or psychological disorders, surgery of the upper limbs and/or the spine or accidents/surgeries in the past 12 months and current medication) and the single question according to Zaza, Charles, and Muszynski [12] to identify the presence of PRMDs.

The self-rated health (SRH) item [49] was included for the assessment of health status, using a reliable and a valid [50] single-item measure (“In general, would you say your health is”), answered on a five-point scale from excellent to poor, with precedent amongst general population samples [5153]. The short form of the International Physical Activity Questionnaire (IPAQ-SF) [54] was included for the assessment of physical activity participation levels. This widely used instrument for physical activity surveillance in adults (age range: 15–69 years old) [5456] investigates the physical activity of four separate intensity levels (i.e. vigorous-intensity activity, moderate-intensity activity, walking, and sitting) with moderate to high relative reliability (between 0.66 and 0.88). The Kessler Psychological Distress Scale (K10) [57] provides a reliable (kappa and weighted kappa scores range, 0.42 to 0.74) 10-item questionnaire of specific emotional states designed to measure anxiety and depression using five-level response scales (range: 10 to 50; 50 indicating the highest risk of anxiety or depressive disorder) [57]. Perfectionism among participants was assessed using the short form of the Multidimensional Perfectionism Scale (HFMPS-SF) [5860], involving a 15-item questionnaire and rating for each on a 7-point Likert scale (from 1 “disagree” to 7 “agree”). Items are structured according to three subscales: self-oriented (SOP), other-oriented (OOP), and socially prescribed perfectionism (SPP), where higher scores on each scale, indicating higher levels of perfectionistic attitudes and behaviours (Cronbach α = 0.88, 0.74, and 0.81 for SOP, OOP, and SPP, respectively) [60]. Finally, the Chalder Fatigue Scale (CFQ 11) [61] was included for the assessment of fatigue and severity of tiredness. Each of eleven items are answered on a 4-point Likert-type scale (0 –asymptomatic- increasing to 3 as responses become more symptomatic), with higher global scores (range: 0 to 33) indicating greater tiredness and incorporating separate physical fatigue (items 1–7) and psychological fatigue [811].

According to their playing posture and arm position while playing, participants were allocated into six groups: music students playing musical instruments with both arms elevated in a frontal position (i.e. harp, trombone, and trumpet); music students playing musical instruments with both arms elevated in the left quadrant position (i.e. viola, violin); music students playing musical instruments with only the left arm elevated (i.e. cello, double bass); music students playing instruments with only the right arm elevated (i.e. flute, guitar); music students playing instruments in a neutral position, without the elevation of arms (i.e. accordion, bassoon, clarinet, euphonium/tuba; French horn, harpsicord, oboe, organ, percussion, piano, recorder, saxophone); singers. The arm position was classified as elevated when ≥40° abduction and/or ≥40° forward flexion occurred while playing. All other positions were categorised as neutral [21,62]. The current study used an original classification of risk associated with an elevated arm position (≥40°) [62], but refined by the inclusion of two categories (i.e. “both arms elevated in a frontal position” and “both arms elevated in the left quadrant position”) alongside “both arms elevated” [21]. Moreover, an additional category for singers has been employed due to the specific characteristics of their musical practice [63].

Statistical analysis

Descriptive statistics were used to systematically summarise and present the data. For categorical variables, absolute and relative frequency distributions were presented. For continuous variables, since the normality test showed that all the variables considered were non-Gaussian, the median value and the range were used to summarise the variables.

Bivariate analysis was used to identify associations between the dependent variable MSK status and the covariates (i.e. demographic variables, as well as variables associated with health-related status and those associated with the playing of musical instruments) (see Table 2). According to their MSK status, participants were grouped into three sub-categories: (a) participants reporting no history of MSK conditions (NoMSK); (b) participants reporting MSK conditions related to musical practice (PRMD); [3] participants reporting MSK conditions not related to musical practice (MSK).

Table 2. Independent variables included in the study.

Type of variable Name of variable
Demographic variables Gender
Age
Nationality
Academic level
Variables associated with health-related status BMI
Perceived health [SRH]
Hours of sleep
Smoking
Medications
Physical activity participation levels [IPAQ score]
Psychological distress [K10 score]
Perfectionism [HFMPS-SF: SO, OO, SP sub-scale score]
Fatigue [CFQ 11 score]
Variables associated with the playing of musical instruments Instrument [classification]
Years of practice
Hours of practice per day
Perceived exertion after 45 minutes of practice without breaks
Preparatory exercises
Breaks during practice

BMI, Body Mass Index; SRH, Self-rated health; IPAQ, International Physical Activity Questionnaire; K10, Kessler Psychological Distress Scale; HFMPS-SF, Multidimensional Perfectionism Scale–short form; SO, Self-oriented; OO, Other-oriented; SP, Socially prescribed; CFQ 11, Chalder Fatigue Scale.

The distinction between the categories of MSK status was very important because it allowed descriptive contrast amongst factors associated with the general presence of MSK conditions (PRMDs or not) and factors specifically related to PRMDs. Since the MSK status variable was categorical, the statistical tests used were (a) chi-square test for verifying the associations with categorical variables (b) Kruskal-Wallis tests for verifying the associations with continuous variables.

In addition, a multivariable analysis was conducted with an explorative aim in order to assess which candidate covariates were significantly associated with the three categories considered (i.e. NoMSK; PRMD; MSK) of the dependent variable MSK status. Since this variable was categorical, the multinomial logistic regression analysis was used.

Three models were explored for associated factors of PRMDs, with relative risk ratios (RRR), as the exponential of the multinomial logistic regression coefficient, used to indicate the relative probability for each candidate variable (RRR > 1 indicating that the greater probability of the outcome belonging within the comparison rather than reference group as the variable's scores increase, and vice versa). The models involved PRMD, MSK and PRMD as comparison groups, with NoMSK, NoMSK and MSK as corresponding reference groups.

Each model was estimated twice, using a stepwise approach with (a) forward selection: starting with an empty model (no variable included), the variables providing the most statistically significant improvement of the fit were progressively added until none of the remaining variables proved statistically significant (threshold for statistical significance: p-value below 5%); (b) backward elimination: starting with the full model (all variables included), the least significant variables were progressively eliminated until all the remaining variables were statistically significant (threshold for statistical significance: p-value below 5%).

The comparison of the estimates allowed the identification of four different kinds of factors: overall factors (i.e. variables statistically significant in all three models), MSK factors (i.e. variables statistically significant in the first two models but not in the third), PRMD factors (i.e. variables statistically significant in the first and third models, but not in the second) and single factors (i.e. variables statistically significant in a single model only). Bivariate and multivariable analyses were performed on the overall sample and on the response of a sub-sample of participants not taking any supplements, contraceptives and/or actual medications to verify whether such an exogenous contribution could have biased the results or have influenced the responses.

Results

Of the 997 participants agreeing to participate in the study by completing the informed consent, only 900 completed the whole web-based questionnaire. A total of 850 participants were included in the sample for the analysis (Fig 1).

Fig 1. Flowchart of participant selection for the analysis.

Fig 1

A total of forty subjects were excluded from the analysis because they did not meet the inclusion criteria and 10 subjects were excluded because they were not able to determine if their MSK condition was a PRMD (i.e. interfered with their ability to play the instrument at the level to which they had been accustomed).

Descriptive statistics

The following tables show descriptive features of the participants, including demographic variables (see Table 3), variables associated with self-reported health-related status (see Table 4) and variables associated with the playing of musical instruments (see Table 5).

Table 3. Descriptive statistics of demographic variables.

Variable n %
Gender Female 522 61.4%
(n = 850) Male 325 38.3%
Other 3 0.4%
Age median 22
(n = 850) range 18–48
Nationality (region)* South Europe 386 45.4%
(n = 850) West Europe 312 36.7%
North Europe 81 9.5%
East Europe 35 4.1%
Other 36 4.2%
Academic level Pre-college 86 10.1%
(n = 850) Bachelors 1&2 150 17.6%
Bachelors 3&4 171 20.1%
Masters 1&2 124 14.6%
Masters 3&4 174 20.5%
Gap year/continuing education 145 17.1%

*This classification was made according to United Nations, S. D. Standard Country or Area Codes for Statistical Use, Series M, No. 49 (M49) <https://unstats.un.org/unsd/methodology/m49/> (1999).

Table 4. Descriptive statistics of variables associated with self-reported health-related status.

Variable n %
BMI in kg/m2 median 21.5
(n = 828) range 15.3–41.0
Perceived health [SRH] Excellent 65 7.6%
(n = 850) Very good 266 31.3%
Good 389 45.8%
Fair 117 13.8%
Poor 13 1.5%
Hours of sleep median 7
(n = 849) range 4–10
Smoking Yes 131 15.5%
(n = 848) No 717 84.5%
Medications Nothing 710 83.5%
(n = 850) Supplement/contraceptive 60 7.1%
Medicine 80 9.4%
Physical activity participation levels [IPAQ score] High 153 18.2%
(n = 843) Moderate 415 49.2%
Low 275 32.6%
Psychological distress [K10 score] median 20.0
(n = 843) range 10–46
Perfectionism [HFMPS-SF score]
SO sub-scale score median 25.0
(n = 830) range 5–35
OO sub-scale score median 18.0
(n = 838) range 5–35
SP sub-scale score median 17.0
(n = 836) range 5–35
Fatigue [CFQ 11 score] median 13.0
(n = 825) range 0–33

BMI, Body Mass Index; SRH, Self-rated health; IPAQ, International Physical Activity Questionnaire; K10, Kessler Psychological Distress Scale; HFMPS-SF, Multidimensional Perfectionism Scale–short form; SO, Self-oriented; OO, Other-oriented; SP, Socially prescribed; CFQ 11, Chalder Fatigue Scale.

Table 5. Descriptive statistics of variables associated with the playing of musical instruments.

Variable n %
Instrument Elevated both frontal 68 8.0%
[classification] Elevated both left 141 16.6%
(n = 850) Elevated left 63 7.4%
Elevated right 131 15.4%
Neutral 344 40.5%
Singers 103 12.1%
Years of practice median 13
(n = 850) range 6–35
Hours of practice per day median 3
(n = 849) range 3–8
Perceived exertion after 45 minutes of practice without breaks Median range 4 0–10
(n = 843)
Preparatory exercises Yes 354 41.7%
(n = 850) No 496 58.3%
Breaks during practice Yes 522 61.4%
(n = 850) No 328 38.6%

Elevated both frontal: Music students playing musical instruments with both arms elevated in a frontal position (i.e. harp, trombone, and trumpet); Elevated both left: Music students playing musical instruments with both arms elevated in the left quadrant position (i.e. viola, violin); Elevated left: Music students playing musical instruments with only the left arm elevated (i.e. cello, double bass); Elevated right: Music students playing instruments with only the right arm elevated (i.e. flute, guitar); Neutral: Music students playing instruments in a neutral position, without the elevation of arms (i.e. accordion, bassoon, clarinet, euphonium/tuba; French horn, harpsicord, oboe, organ, percussion, piano, recorder, saxophone).

Of the 850 participants, 11 played the accordion, 204 played a bowed instrument (violin, n = 117; viola, n = 24; cello, n = 44; double bass, n = 19), 90 a plucked instrument (guitar, n = 67; harp, n = 23), 142 a woodwind instrument (bassoon, n = 10; clarinet, n = 38; flute, n = 63; oboe, n = 21; recorder, n = 10), 101 a brass instrument (euphonium/tuba, n = 10; French horn, n = 20; saxophone, n = 26; trombone, n = 19; trumpet, n = 26), 28 percussion, 103 were singers, and 171 played the keyboards (harpsicord, n = 5; organ, n = 12; piano, n = 154).

Table 6 includes the distribution of participants, according to the six-year group levels and the six types of instruments’ classification.

Table 6. The distribution of participants, according to the six-year group levels and the classification of instruments.

n participants
category Pre-college 1&2 BA 3&4 BA 1&2 MA 3&4 MA Gap year/cont. education
Both arms elevated frontal (n = 68) 17 13 11 14 6 7
Both arms elevated left (n = 141) 12 24 22 23 35 25
Left arm elevated (n = 63) 7 12 12 9 11 12
Right arm elevated (n = 131) 9 25 28 17 32 20
Neutral (n = 344) 32 58 74 40 74 66
Singers (n = 103) 9 18 24 21 16 15
TOTAL 86 150 171 124 174 145

1&2 BA: Music students enrolled in their first and second year of Bachelor of Arts in Music; 3&4 BA: Music students enrolled in their third and fourth year of Bachelor of Arts in Music; 1&2 MA: Music students enrolled in their first and second year of Master of Arts in Music; 3&4 MA: Music students enrolled in their third and fourth year of Master of Arts in Music; Gap year/cont.education: Music students experiencing a gap year or enrolled in a continuing education programme.

In total, the prevalence of participants with a self-reported PRMD was 48% (n = 408), while less than 20% self-reported a MSK condition that was not related to the musical practice, and about one third self-reported having no MSK condition (Fig 2).

Fig 2. Musculoskeletal status among participants.

Fig 2

Prevalence of self-reported playing-related musculoskeletal disorders (PRMDs, n = 408; 48%), self-reported musculoskeletal condition not related to the musical practice (MSK, n = 152; 18%) and musculoskeletal condition (MSK, n = 152; 18%). PRMDs, Playing-related Musculoskeletal Disorders; MSK, Musculoskeletal.

Participants playing musical instruments with both arms elevated in a frontal position self-reported the highest prevalence of PRMDs (54.4%), followed by participants playing instruments with only the right arm elevated (51.1%) and with both arms elevated in the left quadrant position (50.4%). Participants playing instruments in a neutral position (i.e. without the elevation of the arms) self-reported a prevalence of 47.7% of PRMDs. Participants playing musical instruments with only the left arm elevated and singers self-reported a similar prevalence of PRMDs, almost 43% and 41% respectively (Fig 3).

Fig 3. Prevalence of self-reported playing-related musculoskeletal disorders (PRMDs) among groups according to their playing posture and arm position while playing.

Fig 3

Bivariate and multivariable analyses

Results of bivariate and explorative multivariable analyses derived from the overall sample and from a sub-sample of participants not taking any supplements, contraceptives and/or actual medications, did not reveal any significant variations or differences. This similarity amongst the findings indicated that the latter factors had not intruded substantively and accordingly, the overall sample’s results have been reported for simplicity. Statistically significant relations with the MSK status variable emerged for eight of the 21 variables considered (see Table 7).

Table 7. Bivariate associations between MSK status and factors reflecting demographics, health-related status and the playing of musical instrument.

MSK status Statistical test result
NoMSK PRMD MSK
Nationality (region)
South Europe 30% 45% 25% χ 2 (df, 8) = 46.8***
West Europe 40% 52% 8%
North Europe 37% 47% 16%
East Europe 14% 54% 31%
Other 42% 42% 16%
Total 34% 48% 18%
Academic level
Pre-college 45% 44% 11% χ 2 (df, 10) = 28.0***
Bachelors 1&2 36% 50% 14%
Bachelors 3&4 34% 44% 22%
Masters 1&2 25% 64% 11%
Masters 3&4 36% 43% 21%
Gap year/continuing education 31% 46% 23%
Total 34% 48% 18%
Psychological distress
[K10 score]
Median (range) 19 (10–46) 20 (10–45) 21 (10–44) χ 2 (df, 2) = 8.4**
Perfectionism [HFMPS-SF]
SP sub-scale score
Median (range) 16 (5–33) 18 (5–35) 18 (5–35) χ 2 (df, 2) = 12.4***
Fatigue [CFQ 11 score]
Median (range) 11 (1–28) 14 (0–33) 13 (2–33) χ 2 (df, 2) = 49.5***
Years of practice
Median (range) 12 (6–35) 14 (6–34) 13 (6–28) χ 2 (df, 2) = 10.4***
Perceived exertion after 45 minutes of practice without breaks
Median (range) 4 (0–10) 5 (0–10) 4 (0–10) χ 2 (df, 2) = 18.9***

*** p<0.001

** p<0.01

* p<0.05.

For categorical variables, the musculoskeletal (MSK) status relative distributions (row percentages) for every category of the variable considered has been reported, as well as the chi-square statistic and its statistical significance level. For continuous variables, the median and the range for each MSK status category has been reported, as well as the chi-square statistic of the Kruskal-Wallis test and its statistical significance level.

MSK, Musculoskeletal; SRH, Self-rated health; K10, Kessler Psychological Distress Scale; HFMPS-SF, Multidimensional Perfectionism Scale–short form; SP, Socially prescribed; CFQ 11, Chalder Fatigue Scale.

Nationality, academic level, perfectionism, fatigue, years of practice and perceived exertion after 45 minutes of practice without breaks (χ2 (df, 2 to 10) = 10.4 to 49.5; p<0.001), as well as psychological distress (χ 2 (df, 2) = 8.4; p<0.01) were related significantly with MSK status (NoMSK, PRMD and MSK). Participants from countries in West Europe self-reported the second-highest prevalence of PRMDs (52%) but simultaneously the lowest prevalence of MSK conditions that did not interfere with their playing ability (8%) (see Table 7). By contrast, participants from East Europe self-reported the highest prevalence of PRMDs (54%), a higher level of MSK conditions that did not interfere with their playing ability (31%), but also the lowest level of no MSK conditions (16%). Furthermore, students at the Pre-college academic level self-reported the highest prevalence of no MSK conditions (45%), while first- or second-year Masters students were notable for having the highest level of PRMDs (64%). Similarly, participants reporting the highest number of years of practice (14 years), highest perceived exertion after 45 minutes of practice without breaks (5 units), as well as the highest fatigue level (14 units) were also associated with reporting the prevalence of PRMDs. In general, the highest scores recorded for psychological distress [21] and perfectionism [18] were associated with participants reporting a MSK condition (including PRMDs).

Table 8 reports the RRR for each variable included within the models of the multivariable analysis. The pseudo-R2 (Cox-Snell, Cragg-Uhler/Nagelkerke) ranged from 0.11 to 0.19, indicating moderate accuracy amongst the models. An acceptable goodness-of-fit (0.70 to 0.80) [64] was confirmed by the separate logistic regression estimates of the three models, for which the area under the ROC curve ranged from 0.70 to 0.75. In addition, no multicollinearity has been identified (average variance inflation factor between 1.02 and 1.06, depending on the model).

Table 8. Multinomial logistic regression analysis of associations between MSK status and factors reflecting demographics, health-related status and the playing of musical instrument.

Variables PRMD vs NoMSK MSK vs NoMSK PRMD vs MSK
Nationality (reference category: South Europe)
West Europe 0.647* 0.220*** 4.524***
(0.125) (0.061) (1.196)
North Europe 0.589 0.410* 1.882
(0.180) (0.157) (0.684)
East Europe 2.133 2.344 0.391
(1.140) (1.352) (0.219)
Other 0.615 0.456 2.167
(0.254) (0.235) (1.089)
Academic level (reference category: Pre college)
Bachelors 1&2 1.504 1.776 -
(0.460) (0.833) -
Bachelors 3&4 1.271 2.210 -
(0.388) (0.987) -
Masters 1&2 2.747** 2.408 -
(0.938) (1.252) -
Masters 3&4 1.079 1.875 -
(0.337) (0.837) -
Gap year/ 1.302 2.811* -
continuing education (0.428) (1.286) -
Perceived health [SRH] (reference category: Excellent)
Very good 1.387 2.547 -
(0.445) (1.727) -
Good 1.766 3.188* -
(0.549) (1.560) -
Fair or poor 2.166* 3.799* -
(0.792) (2.067) -
Perfectionism [HFMPS-SF]
OO sub-scale score - 1.041* -
- (0.019) -
Fatigue [CFQ11 score] 1.104*** 1.084*** -
(0.019) (0.023) -
Years of practice 1.040* - 1.044*
(0.020) - (0.022)
Perceived exertion after 45 minutes of practice without breaks 1.009* - 1.011*
(0.004) - (0.004)
Constant 0.085*** 0.026*** 0.621
(0.043) (0.019) (0.216)

*** p<0.001

** p<0.01

* p<0.05.

The values reported in the table are the relative risk ratios (RRR) and the standard errors, which are indicated in parentheses. The RRR indicates how the probability of belonging within the comparison group (the first in the column) relative to the probability of belonging within the reference group changes with the variable considered. In the first column, the comparison is PRMD and the reference is NoMSK. In the second column, the comparison is MSK and the reference is NoMSK. In the third column, the comparison is PRMD and the reference is MSK. An RRR > 1 indicates that the probability of belonging within the comparison group relative to the probability of belonging within the reference group increases as the value of the variable increases, while it is the opposite for an RRR < 1.

PRMDs, Playing-related Musculoskeletal Disorders; MSK, Musculoskeletal; SRH, Self-rated health; K10, Kessler Psychological Distress Scale; HFMPS-SF, Multidimensional Perfectionism Scale–short form; OO, Other Oriented; CFQ 11, Chalder Fatigue Scale.

The analysis identified four different kinds of factors. The variable Nationality West Europe was the only overall factor that appeared statistically significant in all three models. For instance, as can be seen in Table 8 in the first model PRMD vs NoMSK (i.e. first column, where PRMD is the comparison group and MSK is the reference group), the RRR for West Europe equals 0.647, meaning that the probability of belonging within the comparison group is about 35% [This percentage was calculated according to the following formula: (0.647–1) ∙ 100 = - 35.3%] lower for Western European participants compared to Southern European participants, keeping all the other variables constant. By contrast, the direction changed in the focal model (i.e. third column PRMD vs MSK), showing that Western European participants had a higher probability (RRR = 4.524; RRR > 1) of belonging within the comparison group. On the other hand, the MSK factors (i.e. variables statistically significant in the first two models but not in the third) were found to be perceived health [SRH] (RRR = 1.104; RRR>1) and fatigue [CFQ 11 score] (RRR = 1.084) and thus related to the presence of a MSK condition in general but not specifically to the presence of PRMD. Moreover, PRMD factors (i.e. variables statistically significant in the first and third models, but not in the second) were found to be years of practice (RRR = 1.040; RRR>1) and perceived exertion after 45 minutes of practice without breaks (RRR = 1.044; RRR>1), suggesting that these factors were related to the specific presence of PRMD. Finally, there was only one PRMD-related single factor and was the variable academic level Masters 1&2 (RRR = 2.747; RRR>1), which appeared statistically significant in the first model PRMD vs NoMSK. When compared to Pre-college, students attending the 1st and 2nd year of Masters had a higher probability of belonging within the comparison group (i.e. PRMD) compared to not having any MSK conditions.

Discussion

This study focused on the prevalence of PRMDs in a large-scale study population of music students at different educational stages (i.e. university-level students and Pre-college students) and enrolled in different pan-European music institutions at baseline of the RISMUS project. Music students participating in this novel large-scale study involving 20 European countries self-reported a high prevalence of painful MSK conditions (65%), of those 48% self-reported PRMDs.

A further goal was to begin to identify variables that might be associated with the self-reported presence of PRMDs among this population that ultimately would facilitate future longitudinal analyses. Results highlighted that coming from West Europe, being a first- or a second-year Masters student, having more years of experience and higher rates of perceived exertion after 45 minutes of practice without breaks were factors significantly associated with self-reported presence of PRMD. In this regard, the current study integrates novel and robust descriptive data with explorative and speculative analyses via relatively sophisticated statistical modelling for factors that may be associated with PRMDs (i.e. multinomial regression model).

The present study’s findings can be contextualised with comparison to those from Pre-college participants, who offer a controlled reference as students who have not yet been clearly orientated towards a musical career by means of a university education. It could be argued that this group of participants were compromised as experimental controls reflecting the responses of the general public, as they inevitably undertake preparatory training in musicianship [65]. Nevertheless, they would not yet have undergone the requisite higher demands and more intense training to further work in the highly competitive musical profession. As such, Pre-college participants offered a reasonable compromise in regard to the likely responses of the general population, while simultaneously allowing this study to remain congruent with both Zaza et al.'s restrictive definition of only musicians being eligible to be afflicted by PRMDs, and a distinction between PRMDs and non-PRMDs in accordance with recommendations from the performing arts medicine field [18,30,31]. Indeed, nearly half of Pre-college participants self-reported having no MSK conditions (45%), as can be seen in Table 7. One of the most prominent findings indicated that between the different academic levels, the prevalence of PRMD had peaked within the Masters 1&2-year group (64%) having been recorded at more modest levels within the Pre-college group (44%) and the Masters 3&4-year group (43%). Students undertaking subsequent gap years or further study recorded an intermediate level of PRMD prevalence (46%). Future RISMUS analyses will corroborate the longitudinal patterning of these findings. Nevertheless, the present results are consistent with a recent study that reported a prevalence of playing-related health problems varying between 29% at the beginning of their university training and 42% among second year students, that later decreased to 36% in their third year [66].

Remarkably, the peak in prevalence of PRMDs amongst first or second year Masters students when collated with their non-PRMDs, contributed a prevalence of MSK conditions of 75%. The latter group’s prominence in this regard was also confirmed by the multinomial logistic regression analysis in which, when compared to Pre-college, students attending the 1st and 2nd year of a Masters course were associated with having a higher self-reported prevalence of PRMD (RRR > 1). This trend may be attributed to the fact that the transition to higher musical training (i.e. Masters studies) often requires an increase of practising’ hours to deal with higher demands, such as the ability to compete with others [66], tolerance and perseverance and the ability to develop an effective strategy for self-assessment. These are indispensable attributes for any aspiring musician in order to pass the difficult entrance examination, and to become familiarised with the higher performance demands that will be inevitable.

It was also notable that a peak in prevalence was recorded by students at the early stages of their Masters level education (Masters 1&2), and not amongst students at Masters 3&4. It would be interesting to speculate that progression to a third year of a Masters level education might represent a critical juncture at which students become either increasingly accustomed to the high levels and intensities of practice in order to reduce their risk of acquiring a PRMD, or similarly, change their playing technique to accommodate the effects of past MSK conditions. In addition, another possible reason for the reduction of PRMDs’ prevalence among Masters students at later stages could be that, although the literature reports that musicians engage poorly in health promoting behaviours [43,6769], courses and short-term health education programs have been recently developed to integrate useful insight from health professionals as well as knowledge from relevant health education settings [40,42,45]. Students at later stages could have had the possibility to engage in these useful programs and reduce or treat their painful condition. In addition, understanding potential mechanisms underpinning elevated prevalence of PRMD may be critical because approximately 12% of musicians abandon their musical careers due to such problems [17,70].

The patterns of prevalence for PRMDs during musicians’ education may also be related to different aspects of fatigue and physical exertion. In our findings, the median of CFQ 11 for the physical and psychological fatigue assessment [71] and the median of the perceived exertion after 45 minutes of practice without breaks were significantly higher among participants reporting PRMDs, suggesting that there was a possible relationship between these variables and playing-related conditions. In fact, if we consider PRMD vs NoMSK (comparison group: PRMD; reference group: NoMSK) in Table 8, it can be seen that CFQ 11 score was a statistically significant factor, and thus the probability of having a PRMD compared to not having any MSK condition increases by a factor of 1.104 (approximately 10%) for each additional point of the CFQ 11 score, keeping all the other variables constant. Nevertheless, these findings should be considered cautiously as they reflect speculative logistic regression modelling of multiple candidate variables within a cross-sectional design involving necessarily self-reported data.

Previous research regarding the effect of pain on muscle fatigue has reported that pain significantly influences fatigue [7274]. Another research study has shown that accomplishing peak performance depends on effective fatigue’ management, taking into account both fatigue and recovery processes [75]. In addition, despite the similarity of physical demands between musicians and athletes, in sport, periodisation is used to adapt the intensity, length and frequency of physical loading to optimise continuous development of performance, without excessive exertion that may increase the risk of injury for athletes [76]. Unfortunately, such approaches based on periodisation are not familiar concepts in musical settings, where rehearsal and performance schedules for instrumentalists are typically organised without any concern for physical loading and the guidelines for fatigue management are generally ignored in the musical environment. For instance, according to Rickert et al. [77], musicians often have a low-level of “control” over intensity of practice time, repertoire and busy schedules that may in turn lead to increased stress and physical effort. In fact, as can be seen in Table 8, the perceived exertion after 45 minutes practice without breaks (RRR > 1) was statistically significant in the PRMD vs NoMSK and PRMD vs MSK comparisons, but not in the MSK vs NoMSK comparison, suggesting that this factor might be related to the specific presence of PRMD, although a further longitudinal analysis will allow a careful evaluation of this important aspect.

In regard to a wider perspective on health-related artistic accomplishment and the impact of injury on participation, our findings have shown that, when compared to the reference category of having “excellent” health, the category “fair or poor” was associated with having a higher self-reported prevalence of a MSK condition (PRMD or not) (RRR > 1; see Table 8). These findings indicate that the impact of PRMDs on students’ health may be highly significant and are in line with previous evidence that painful MSK conditions may be related to a lower perception of life-quality and hamper playing-quality [31]. For instance, a similar picture is provided by other studies that have investigated health perception among music students, who rated their health worse compared to an age-and sex matched group of students who did not play music and reported worst behaviour records of health responsibility [37,43,67,69]. Similarly, Rickert et al. [78] reported an insufficient health awareness of injury among students playing the cello and Kreutz et al. [69] showed poor stress management, inadequate nutrition and low levels of health responsibility among music students, suggesting a consistent need for continuing to develop strategies to enhance health support as an essential aspect of conservatoire and music university education by for instance integrating it into students’ curricula and learning programs [43,78,79]. During their professional training, music students should learn how to cope with physical and psychological demands with the help of preventive measures. Body-oriented courses (i.e. posture, strength and conditioning exercises) and relaxation techniques, as well as psychological programs for stress and wellbeing have been shown to have a preventive effect [42,44,45,80]. This indicates that better results on MSK conditions among music students could be obtained by addressing health awareness and attitudes to injury at the university or even at the Pre-college. Indeed, music universities represent the primary channel for the improvement of health awareness and the implementation of injury prevention initiatives, being an important gateway to the professional world [81]. Therefore, strengthening attitudes and behaviours toward health music making will create a step change in educational and employment contexts, shaping future practice and addressing injury prevention to possibly avoid or at least reduce incidences of PRMDs. According to Rickert et al. [78] and Spahn et al. [80], health behaviours toward prevention may be easier to be addressed in the younger generation of musicians who may not already have such established habits. Preventive courses and health promotion among musicians should start already at the beginning of their musical training, with the objective to protect music students from PRMDs during their studies and to prepare them for the future professional demands. For instance, music students without a disorder at the beginning of their professional education would benefit of an increasing sensitisation in health promotion and injury prevention. On the other hand, students already suffering from health concerns need to be informed about potential strategies to reduce symptoms [80].

Consistent with previous studies [30,63], there was no statistical evidence of an association between PRMDs and instruments’ classification. Despite the large size of our study’s sample, instrument-specific analyses were not viable statistically, and anatomically-relevant categories of playing position were used instead [21,62]. Participants playing musical instruments with both arms elevated in a frontal position self-reported the highest prevalence of PRMDs (54.4%) and singers self-reported the lowest prevalence (40.8%). In the previous literature, playing string versus other instruments [12,23,29,82] and with elevated arms [21,62] provoked higher prevalence. It is plausible that any conflict amongst these findings may be attributed to heterogeneity of instrument group' classification or restricted study sample sizes with the contemporary literature. As such, evidence from future studies involving large, instrument-specific populations or consensus classification would facilitate meta-analytical synthesis and further understanding of the effects of biomechanical stress [31].

The regional distribution of the prevalence of PRMDs appears to be relatively homogeneous, despite East and West European participants self-reporting slightly higher rates (54% and 52%, respectively). In addition, West Europeans also self-reported lower prevalence of non-playing related disorders (8%) compared with East European counterparts (31%). This finding was corroborated by multinomial regression analyses, in which Western European participants had a lower probability of having a MSK condition (RRR<1) compared to Eastern Europeans, but a higher probability of having a PRMD relative to having a generic MSK condition (RRR>1; model 2) with relatively greater perceived interference with musical performance. It may be speculated that West European participants tended to suffer less from MSK conditions than their East European counterparts due to preventative interventions being more common in this region [11,37,66,83]. Future studies might explore music students' health education and health-related behaviours in order to further understand their potential impact on PRMD prevalence and impact. For instance, it is plausible that participants' origins might be considered as an important factor because knowing where participants have lived most of their lives can provide important information about their experience with regard to their instrumental practice and cultural preferences, and thus assessing the probability for developing a PRMD. These results could be employed to develop or improve targeted initiatives for prevention to improve musical performance and to enhance physical endurance, while avoiding overuse injuries and reducing muscular fatigue.

Limitations

There are limitations to be aware of when considering the findings. Firstly, the study used self-reported data without any physical examination to formally exclude any serious diseases that affect the musculoskeletal system. Nonetheless, the self-reported data was used in the best way possible to exclude some participants who had reported either histories of neurological, rheumatic and psychological disorders, or recent surgeries to the upper limb or spine, in order to ensure that the sample comprised only “healthy” participants. In addition, bivariate and multivariable analyses were performed on the overall sample and on a sub-sample of participants not taking any supplements, contraceptives and/or actual medications to verify whether such an exogenous contribution could have biased the results or have influenced the responses.

Secondly, this study used a web-based questionnaire that has the benefit of being able to reach the widest range of potential respondents in a more cost effective and safe way, but this could also represent a limitation. Furthermore, the invitation for participants to complete the questionnaire was sent by the school registries and not by the researchers, without the possibility of reinforcing the invitation by sending a reminder in another form (e.g. via a telephone interview). In addition, relevant information from non-respondents had not been accessible, which could have been used to assess for the intrusion of biases within the study’s results. However, the sample size was quite large and this could be considered as adding robustness to the study’s findings and enhancing the facilitating knowledge about the prevalence and development of PRMDs.

Furthermore, this study was performed amongst music students without a control group of non-musicians. However, as the distinction between PRMDs and non-PRMDs had been purposely emphasised within this study, this aspect could not have been achieved by including and considering the responses from a group of non-musicians. As described previously [47], Pre-college students, who would have been expected to have the least experience of musicianship, acted as a reference group.

Moreover, another limitation consists of the impossibility to control information on the individual and/or the institutional level of behaviours or attitudes toward prevention. For instance, engaging in health-prevention programs could represent a potential confounder that might have affected our results. However, the web-based questionnaire includes questions on strategies to reduce any MSK conditions they may have had in the past and thanks to the replies of the two follow-ups we will have more information and we will be able to record this important aspect. In addition, the participatory level of physical activity has been monitored with the International Physical Activity Questionnaire (IPAQ), which is a well-known measure to offer data on health–related physical activity. Nonetheless, whereas it is important to consider individual health-promoting behaviours [68,69], Perkins and colleagues [43] suggested that there is still the need to continue evaluating health behaviours and awareness among students and teachers inside music institutions, as well as environmental factors that might be perceived hampering or facilitating health and prevention. It is plausible to think that the environmental factors might be to some extent changed to accommodate research findings regarding the prevention of MSK conditions.

Furthermore, the authors cannot exclude a potential sampling bias as the information concerning the number of students enrolled in each school participating in the study is not available because it consists of confidential data, without a formal permission to publish.

Finally, the present explorative research study did not encompass complete coverage of all the potential factors contributing to precision within multinomial regression analyses predicting PRMDs in music students. Nonetheless, the models offered acceptable statistical power, absence of any multicollinearity and acceptable goodness of fit (0.70 to 0.80) [64]. The latter metric in particular suggests that other factors that were outside of the scope of this study, were influencing prevalence of PRMDs, and should be considered within future research. In summary, although the results of this study were exploratory, a large and varied sample of music students from different parts of Europe has been examined, constituting one of the largest studies in the performing arts medicine. In addition, a relatively sophisticated statistical modelling with an explorative perspective to identify factors that may be associated with PRMDs has been used. Examining the baseline data is an initial and necessary exploratory step toward better characterising the study population and the characteristics associated with self-reported PRMDs. It will help to guide further examination of our sample from a longitudinal perspective to determine the relative stability of these initial findings over time.

Conclusions

The high prevalence of PRMDs among music students, especially those studying at university-level, has been confirmed in this study and associated factors have been identified, highlighting the need for relevant targeted interventions as well as effective prevention and treatment strategies.

Although the results of this study should be interpreted with caution due to the cross-sectional and self-reported nature of the data, they reflect the findings from a relatively large-scale investigation involving multiple centres across Europe and importantly, students at different stages of their education (from Pre-college to Masters levels). These findings may contribute important adjunct findings to those from the antecedent literature facilitating effective approaches towards primary prevention of PRMDs and their associated burden among music students and professionals. They may usefully raise awareness further within the musical and scientific communities.

Acknowledgments

We wish to thank the participating music students and the study centres in helping recruiting the participants, as well as Alessandro Chiarotto for his assistance in selecting the assessment measures and Alessandro Schneebeli for his assistance in the classification of instruments according to their position. In addition, we would like to thank Andrea Cavicchioli and Paola Di Giulio for their assistance in the classification of the medicines during the analysis of data.

Data Availability

Data cannot be shared publicly because they contain potentially identifying or sensitive participants' information and disclosure to third parties has been prohibited by the QMU Ethics Committee. Data are only available for researchers who meet the criteria for access to confidential data and are stored at a secure server hosted by Queen Margaret University. These data can be made available to interested researchers upon request to the corresponding author, who will have to ask the permission for data access to the QMU Ethics Committee at ResearchEthics@qmu.ac.uk.

Funding Statement

The research data reported in this article is part of RISMUS: A longitudinal investigation of the factors associated with increased RISk of playing-related musculoskeletal disorders in Music students, an investigation funded by the Swiss National Science Foundation (grant ref. 10531C_182226) and supported by Queen Margaret University-Edinburgh for the fulfilment of a PhD research award. This funding source had no role in the design of this study and will not have any role during its execution, analysis and interpretation of the data.

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Prevalence and associated factors of playing-related musculoskeletal disorders among European music students. Baseline findings from the Risk of Music Students (RISMUS) longitudinal study

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Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. You have undertaken a study to describe the prevalence and characteristics of self-reported baseline musculoskeletal in a cohort of European music students participating in the RISMUS study.

Thank you for your very interesting and thoughtful manuscript. It was well written and a pleasure to read. I have a few small queries, mainly for clarification. Thank you for the attention to detail in your work.

1. Introduction: It would be useful to include a sentence on your initial hypothesis.

2. Table 1: Could you please add what region each country belongs to. It would assist with interpretation of the results.

3. Page 4, line 112: you have a typo here for 997, it should read nine hundred and ninety seven, or just type the number.

4. I’m a little unclear about why you excluded people with a positive history of neurological, or psychological disorders given you are looking at injuries and psychological health (page 5). I assume you mean chronic or severe health conditions rather than acute or less severe symptoms? For example, you have mentioned tingling in your description of injuries, which I would interpret as a neurological condition. The same with psychological health, what was your cutoff and how did you classify it. Could you please include a few examples here to clarify your exclusions.

5. Methods: (page 6), Self-report health item: could you please include the anchor points here (e.g. 5 points, poor to excellent)

6. Statistical significance: I am a little concerned about the “reaching significance” of <0.1 described. You may wish to remove this, I do not think it adds anything to your message, especially given the size of your cohort.

7. Page 16, line 415, You appear to have missed the Barret reference no. here.

8. Page 17, line 450. Seems to need a slight re-wording. Perhaps …and thus assessing the probability…

9. Figure 1: you are missing a ) on the n=8 (not meeting inclusion criteria)

Reviewer #2: This is a valuable study and I was delighted to see this come in for review. This type of information is very much needed. The conclusions are clear and well justified and the information presented in a way that is easily understood by the reader. I have much praise.

Just a couple of tiny things to consider:

There are a few typos in the manuscript (eg p3, line 72 is it "has" instead of "had"?; p3, line 79 is it "Therefore, there is a need. . "; p3 line 94 is it "analysis" or "analyses" at end of line (I'm assuming it's plural?)

I personally would like to have seen a table that summarizes the numbers of participants according to the six year group levels, and the six types of instruments. This would allow me to see that there were sufficient respondents in each cell.

Also, p8, lines 217 - this is really methodology not results, so this section would fit better, I think, within one of the previous sections where the methodology and procedure is detailed.

This is a great study though and one that I look forward to reading when it comes out in print.

Reviewer #3: The authors report a cross-sectional study on music students' musculoskeletal problems across European countries including a sample of 850 participants. They ask about the prevalence and associated factors contributing to health conditions and observe that a majority of respondents (560) reported problems. Some contributing factors are identified and discussed. They conclude that this study is new.

My overall impression is an intersting piece of work. However, I can see (lots of) scope for refinement and improvement before publication could be recommended. The conclusions are off-topic, which is I rated them as partially convincing. However, this could be fixed, but all sections need to be addressed.

Abstract

I am not sure whether musculoskeletal disorders need to be a priori and categorically be playing-related. Students could fall off a bicycle or injure themselves during sports to report problems. I can understand that those are less interesting, but they still happen and perhaps put into relation to playing-related problems. The second large group of conditions which affects musicians are mental health issues (e.g. performance anxiety). Physical and psychological health problems seem to interact. https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/29600306/ The results suggest that perceived exertion could play a role. Therefore, I wonder whether psychological factors should be also addressed as key dependent measures, if such variables were recorded.

Conclusions: The authors should conclude about their findings rather than just saying they did a heroic job. And it is not true that this is the first study of this kind:

Kreutz, G., Ginsborg, J., & Williamon, A. (2008). Music students' health problems and health-promoting behaviours. Medical Problems of Performing Artists, 23(1), 3-11.

See also

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/30204822/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/24925174/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/30061850/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/20795333/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/31130887/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/29066983/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/24647455/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/24925172/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/27942697/

Recently, for example, unbalanced posture patterns have been identified as a potential cause of problems.

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/32655447/

I believe that reflecting this broader literature on music students and health (focusing on conservatoire students) could tremendously enrich the current paper and expand its base in the introduction as well as enrich the conclusions that are drawn from the data. For example, how do the prevalence findings by Kreutz and colleagues (2008) relate to the current data, which did not include students from the UK, by the way? I do not wish to impose new research questions to these authors, but instead I believe that answering those questions should entail a discussion of these related findings.

I find a review of the literature that seemed to have escaped the authors' attention, rather important as background to the present study. I am surprised that the study protocol seems to have been approved without the demand to review the literature more thoroughly, what could have surfaced in the present manuscript

In brief, the authors should write a conclusion in the abstract that reflects the implications of their findings. Having conducted a study, whether or not it is genuinely a new study, is not an implication at all.

Introduction

I invite the authors to explore and review the literature referenced above. I believe that many, if not most study will be relevant in the present context to expand the introduction.

The authors should critically reflect on Zaza's categorizition instead of simply accepting it without hesitation. Specifically, what does "playing-related" entail, and what does it not entail? This is not just a matter of definition, but, as we are social scientists, a matter of developing an appropriate model that could predict the prevalence of musculoskeletal problems. Counting those and putting them in a basket is not what the authors intend to do, I believe. And given that the authors succeed in identifying associated factors, this information could be used to develop a (simple) model as a starting point. I am not convinced that setting up a project can act as a replacement for such a model. Instead of the last paragraph of the Introduction, a section header "Aims, Research Questions, and Hypotheses" is needed to guide the reader through the research interests of this group. Setting up a project is just a means, but does not give a clue what the authors want to learn.

Materials and Methods

- please refrain from overstatements such as "for the first time". The authors have not thoroughly reviewed the literature and are in no position for such sweeping claims. Moreover, of what value are such assertions in this section?

Table 1: It would be more informative to learn the percentage of participants relative to the total student population at each conservatiore. It may or may not turn out that the smaller conservatoires contribute a relatively higher percentage of participant. This could be a source of bias as students at larger (perhaps) more prestiguous institutions show less interest.

What are "assessment measures"? (p6, top). Instead the authors should present dependent and independent measures of their study. Those are important. It appears inappropriate to put in a reference rather than stating (in brief) what the measures are.

The measurement instruments could be reported in an Appendix. They should also present more specifics about which variables were used as demographic and musical background, playing-related problems, or variables that were then identified as associated factors. In other words, please categorize your sets of variables such that reader can gain a better overview. A Table would be very helpful.

Statistical Analysis

The first para is difficult to understand. The first two lines relate to categorical, the third sentence to continuous variables? Please be more clear. Did you consider confidence intervals to represent continuous measures?

"In addition, a multivariable analysis was conducted with an explorative aim in order to assess, at a multivariate level ..." this is a tautology.

Results

Again, you could well report how many students relative to the approximate total student population participated.

There seems to be a fair amout of significant psychological factors in the regression models. I think that this should be better reflected in the Abstract.

Discussion

The first para reports results. But the Discussion should address implications of those results, using numbers only to a minimum. I think that it is important to formulate the aims, research questions and hypotheses more clearly at the end of the intro as an independent section just because those can be addressed in the Discussion.

Interpreting regression models at a formal level distinguishes between predictor and criterion variables. It seems correct to me to consider those relationships between variables as associations. Nevertheless, I would find it appropriate on the basis of those models to talk about the extent to which some of the independent variables predict health problems. The implication is, that if it is playing-related, playing musical instruments must be assumed as a cause. But the direction of causality is not so clear. In that sense, psychological factors such as fatigue or perfectionism might predict playing-related health issues. On the other hand, musculoskeletal problems may cause greater fatigue etc. Readers might benefit from a differentiated discussion. If the authors proposed a model to base their assumptions upon, it would be easier to discuss findings in relation to that model.

I think that one point for Discussion might also be what student behaviours might contribute or not to better health by referencint studies such as Kreutz, G., Ginsborg, J., & Williamon, A. (2009). Health-promoting behaviours in conservatoire students. Psychology of Music, 37(1), 47-60.

The Discussion should at least briefly address potential mechanisms which drive the observed associations.

Limitations

"Despite the novelty and original approach ... " Avoid such phrasing as it has no meaning to the content of this study.

Limitations could also address the need for more elaborate models that entail mechanisms and moderators in the identified associations. How about students engaging in health-prevention programs? Is there reason to believe that they could benefit from reduced health problems? How about aerobic fitness, mental health programs etc.? In other words, one concrete limitation is that information of individual and/or institution level health-prevention needs to be more fully addressed to better understand the current findings.

Currently, due to the corona pandemic, the quality of education appears to deteriorate. Will this bring larger health problems in the future? Personally, I believe that music students may be exposed to greater health risks through distance teaching. On the other hand, a decline could also be expected as practice intensity could be limited by lack of availability of practice rooms for some instrumentalists.

Conclusions

"The present study reports a substantial part of the findings from the baseline examination of the longitudinal research project

491 RISMUS..." - This is not a conclusion.

"offers valuable insights" avoid such contentless phrasing. Readers may judge themselves what is of value to them. This is not your job.

Why does the conclusion repeat the first para of the Discussion. Neither here nor there is the content appropriate.

"statistical approaches has not been conducted before among European music students at different stages of their education." - That is not true and authors are advised to refrain from such phrasing.

"...primary prevention, including raising awareness within the musical and scientific

502 community, is important for the development of successful interventions and programs..." - The authors should appreciate the efforts documented in an extensive research literature first before proposing such sweeping demands.

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PLoS One. 2020 Dec 9;15(12):e0242660. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0242660.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


26 Oct 2020

We would like to sincerely thank the reviewers for the very careful review of our paper and for the valuable comments, corrections and constructive criticism, which were of great help in revising the manuscript and helped to significantly improve the quality of the manuscript.

We believe that the revised manuscript has been systematically improved accordingly, with new information and additional interpretations.

Below, you will find a point-by-point description of how each point has been addressed in the manuscript.

[REVIEWER #1]

Dear study authors

Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. You have undertaken a study to describe the prevalence and characteristics of self-reported baseline musculoskeletal in a cohort of European music students participating in the RISMUS study.

Thank you for your very interesting and thoughtful manuscript. It was well written and a pleasure to read. I have a few small queries, mainly for clarification. Thank you for the attention to detail in your work.

We appreciate the positive feedback, as well as your accurate and careful reading.

1. Introduction: It would be useful to include a sentence on your initial hypothesis.

We fully agree with this comment and following your recommendations, we have now added a sentence containing our initial hypothesis in the introduction.

[Page 4, line 101-104]: “Our hypothesis was that there is a higher prevalence of PRMDs among university-level students in comparison with pre-college students (i.e. transition between pre-college and university-level) possibly due to the assumption that the exposure of playing-related activities is progressively demanding throughout their training.”

2. Table 1: Could you please add what region each country belongs to. It would assist with interpretation of the results.

Thank you for your important comment. We apologise that the information was not clear enough. The information contained within Table 1 is related only to the locations of the involved conservatories with the number of students who completed the web-based questionnaire. The nationality, classified for convenience in regions in Table 3 (Descriptive statistics of demographic variables) was an important variable (i.e. associated factor) but did not necessarily correspond to the locations of universities. Unfortunately, we were not allowed to match nationality and university’s membership for ethical reasons and thus we are not able to add the information you have kindly suggested to add.

3. Page 4, line 112: you have a typo here for 997, it should read nine hundred and ninety seven, or just type the number.

Thank you for bringing this typo to our attention. The word “ninety” has been replaced by “nine [Page 4, line 122].

4. I’m a little unclear about why you excluded people with a positive history of neurological, or psychological disorders given you are looking at injuries and psychological health (page 5). I assume you mean chronic or severe health conditions rather than acute or less severe symptoms? For example, you have mentioned tingling in your description of injuries, which I would interpret as a neurological condition. The same with psychological health, what was your cutoff and how did you classify it. Could you please include a few examples here to clarify your exclusions.

Thank you for your important comment and please accept our apologies for not being clear enough in our exclusion criteria.

We fully agree with your comment and following your recommendations, we have now revised the exclusion criteria.

[Page 6, line 130-131]: “…positive history of chronic and highly disabling neurological and/or rheumatic and/or psychological conditions in the last 12 months”

We excluded chronic and highly disabling mental or physical conditions (i.e. focal dystonia, fibromyalgia syndrome, rheumatoid arthritis or borderline personality disorder) which might prevent students from playing and practising. Nonetheless, we’d like to reiterate that this study comprises part of a larger longitudinal study that involves cohorts of music students who, according to their health condition, were able to play and practice.

5. Methods: (page 6), Self-report health item: could you please include the anchor points here (e.g. 5 points, poor to excellent)

Thank you for your valuable comment. Following your suggestion, we inserted the anchor points for self-rated health item.

[Page 6, line 151]: “…, answered on a five-point scale from excellent to poor…”

6. Statistical significance: I am a little concerned about the “reaching significance” of <0.1 described. You may wish to remove this, I do not think it adds anything to your message, especially given the size of your cohort.

Thank you for bringing this to our attention. Thanks to your comment, we have realised that p-values were wrongly reported and have now been corrected.

[Page 13, line 300; Page 14, line 329]: “*** p<0.001, ** p<0.01, * p<0.05”

[Page 13, line 308-310]: “Nationality, academic level, perfectionism, fatigue, years of practice and perceived exertion after 45 minutes of practice without breaks (χ2 (df, 2 to 10) = 10.4 to 49.5; p<0.001), as well as psychological distress (χ 2 (df, 2) = 8.4; p<0.01) were related significantly with MSK status (NoMSK, PRMD and MSK).”

7. Page 16, line 415, You appear to have missed the Barret reference no. here.

Thank you for highlighting this. The reference number has now been included, as kindly pointed out [Page 17, line 428].

8. Page 17, line 450. Seems to need a slight re-wording. Perhaps …and thus assessing the probability…

Thank you for the suggestion. The sentence has been revised, as suggested [Page 18, line 483].

9. Figure 1: you are missing a ) on the n=8 (not meeting inclusion criteria)

Thank you for your careful reading and for highlighting this. We have now added the parenthesis in Figure 1.

REVIEWER #2 (GARY MC PHERSON)

This is a valuable study and I was delighted to see this come in for review. This type of information is very much needed. The conclusions are clear and well justified and the information presented in a way that is easily understood by the reader. I have much praise.

We would like to frankly thank Prof Mc Pherson for the positive feedback and valuable suggestions.

Just a couple of tiny things to consider:

There are a few typos in the manuscript (eg p3, line 72 is it "has" instead of "had"?; p3, line 79 is it "Therefore, there is a need. . "; p3 line 94 is it "analysis" or "analyses" at end of line (I'm assuming it's plural?)

Thank you for highlighting this. We found your comments extremely helpful and have revised accordingly.

[Page 3, line 75]:” …has made comparison…”

[Page 3, line 84]:”Therefore, there is a need to…”

In addition, the word “analysis” has been replaced by “analyses” [Page 4, line 107].

I personally would like to have seen a table that summarizes the numbers of participants according to the six year group levels, and the six types of instruments. This would allow me to see that there were sufficient respondents in each cell.

Thank you for your important comment. Following your suggestion, we inserted a table containing the number of music students according to the six-year group levels and the six types of instrument to assist the reader with interpretation of the results.

[Page 11, line 258-259]: “Table 6 includes the distribution of participants, according to the six-year group levels and the six types of instruments’ classification.”

Also, p8, lines 217 - this is really methodology not results, so this section would fit better, I think, within one of the previous sections where the methodology and procedure is detailed.

Thank you for your valuable comment, which made us reflect on this important aspect. We have checked the STROBE checklist for cross-sectional studies https://www.strobe-statement.org/index.php?id=available-checklists, where it is recommended (but not stipulated) to report this information (i.e. Examination of for eligibility, inclusion in the study, use of a flow diagram) in the results’ section (section of the STROBE cross-sectional studies: 13c).

Nonetheless, if you would prefer in this manuscript, for us to move this paragraph [Page 9, line 227-230] to the methods’ section, we will be delighted to do so.

This is a great study though and one that I look forward to reading when it comes out in print.

Thank you for your appreciation and encouragement! They are very much appreciated.

REVIEWER #3

The authors report a cross-sectional study on music students' musculoskeletal problems across European countries including a sample of 850 participants. They ask about the prevalence and associated factors contributing to health conditions and observe that a majority of respondents (560) reported problems. Some contributing factors are identified and discussed. They conclude that this study is new.

My overall impression is an intersting piece of work. However, I can see (lots of) scope for refinement and improvement before publication could be recommended. The conclusions are off-topic, which is I rated them as partially convincing. However, this could be fixed, but all sections need to be addressed.

We would like to thank you for taking time and effort necessary to review our manuscript. We sincerely appreciate your valuable comments and we are grateful for your suggestions and thoughts.

Abstract

I am not sure whether musculoskeletal disorders need to be a priori and categorically be playing-related. Students could fall off a bicycle or injure themselves during sports to report problems. I can understand that those are less interesting, but they still happen and perhaps put into relation to playing-related problems.

The second large group of conditions which affects musicians are mental health issues (e.g. performance anxiety). Physical and psychological health problems seem to interact. https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/29600306/

The results suggest that perceived exertion could play a role. Therefore, I wonder whether psychological factors should be also addressed as key dependent measures, if such variables were recorded.

Thank you for your important comment.

It is entirely plausible that amongst the challenges of writing towards a word-limit, we would not been entirely successful in describing our intentions, and for which we apologise for causing any confusion. If we may clarify, we are not interested solely in investigating music students’ musculoskeletal (MSK) disorders, but instead, we are also focusing on the impact of how existing musculoskeletal conditions and symptoms might influence the way in which music can be played, practised and performed. Although the definition of PRMDs does not provide a causality of the disorder (i.e. the disorder is the result of playing the instrument), and we would readily concede that there are inevitable difficulties in selecting the scope of this field of study (to which you allude), we would suggest politely that it could be seen as being the best definition currently available and it has been deployed often in the contemporary literature (Ackermann and Driscoll, 2010 21120266; Ackermann et al., 2011 22045531; Ackermann et al., 2012 23247873; Ajidahun and Philips, 2013 23752284; Arnason et al., 2014 24925174; Baadjou et al., 2016 27138935; Baadjou et al., 2018 30085148; Berque et al., 2016 27281378; Chan et al., 2014a 24213243; Chan et al., 2014b 25433253; Kaufman- Cohen and Ratzon, 2011 21273187; Kenny et al., 2016 26966957; Kochem and Silva, 2018 30077421; Möller et al., 2018 30204820; Sousa et al., 2015 26343102; Sousa et al., 2017 28555556; Steinmetz et al., 2012 23138678; Steinmetz et al., 2015 24389813). In regard to the latter point, we would therefore prefer to use Zaza et al.’s definition of PRMD in order to facilitate the interrogation of the literature and to offer comparability with data from studies already published in this area. The authors had felt that the last point was particularly important because, according to recent systematic reviews, the extensive heterogeneity of types of methods and definitions already evident amongst the literature has made synthesis of the evidence limited if not impossible (Kok et al., 2016 26563718; Rotter et al., 2019 31482285).

In addition, we sought to include other MSK disorders in the analysis and to distinguish them from PRMDs in accordance with recommendations from the performing arts medicine field (Baadjou et al., 2016 27138935; Kok et al., 2016 26563718). We think that the distinction between the two categories was very important because it allowed descriptive contrast amongst factors associated with the general presence of MSK conditions and factors specifically related to PRMDs.

Nonetheless, we very much appreciate your helpful suggestion of a wider remit for factors affecting musculoskeletal disorders, as it’s something with which the authors have already wrestled for an ideal solution. In the future, we would gladly wish to consider the much greater scope associated with musculoskeletal disorders in general. However, in this instance and for the reasons that we have offered, we have been persuaded that on balance, it would be reasonable to offer a more focal consideration on musculoskeletal conditions and symptoms that affect the playing of music.

In relation to mental health, we agree wholeheartedly with your insightful comments that it could be also a problem concerning musicians. With this possibility in mind, we did include a global measure of psychological distress based on questions about anxiety and depressive symptoms (i.e. Kessler Psychological Distress Scale K10 developed within the Harvard Medical School, Boston, USA) to verify the interaction between psychological distress and MSK status [Page 2, line 36].

Nonetheless, in this first instance of exploration, our study was designed to focus specifically on musicians MSK disorders and PRMDs. If at all possible, we are hoping that it would be seen as being reasonable to keep the focus and coherence intact. In future studies however, it may be entirely relevant and desirable to evaluate the association between performance anxiety (as a dependent variable) and physical health factors, in order to gain greater insight into the mechanisms and personal significance of MSK disorders among musicians in relation to the performance.

Conclusions: The authors should conclude about their findings rather than just saying they did a heroic job. And it is not true that this is the first study of this kind:

Kreutz, G., Ginsborg, J., & Williamon, A. (2008). Music students' health problems and health-promoting behaviours. Medical Problems of Performing Artists, 23(1), 3-11.

See also

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/30204822/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/24925174/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/30061850/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/20795333/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/31130887/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/29066983/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/24647455/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/24925172/

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/27942697/

Recently, for example, unbalanced posture patterns have been identified as a potential cause of problems.

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/32655447/

I believe that reflecting this broader literature on music students and health (focusing on conservatoire students) could tremendously enrich the current paper and expand its base in the introduction as well as enrich the conclusions that are drawn from the data. For example, how do the prevalence findings by Kreutz and colleagues (2008) relate to the current data, which did not include students from the UK, by the way? I do not wish to impose new research questions to these authors, but instead I believe that answering those questions should entail a discussion of these related findings.

I find a review of the literature that seemed to have escaped the authors' attention, rather important as background to the present study. I am surprised that the study protocol seems to have been approved without the demand to review the literature more thoroughly, what could have surfaced in the present manuscript

In brief, the authors should write a conclusion in the abstract that reflects the implications of their findings. Having conducted a study, whether or not it is genuinely a new study, is not an implication at all.

The authors are very grateful for this insightful selection of comments.

In regard to the abstract’s conclusions, we apologise if there was a sense inadvertently of self-congratulation: That wasn’t our intention in any way. The authors are very grateful to the reviewer for highlighting a selection of additional antecedent studies contributing to this field of study.

In that context, and as we’ve alluded to previously, our reason for maintaining that our study is new and original may not have been explained with sufficient clarity. Nevertheless, according to our knowledge, we think that it’s reasonable to conclude specifically that there are currently no large-scale studies on music students who have included several university centres/conservatoires in Europe and at the same time investigating prevalence and associated factors for both PRMDs and musculoskeletal disorders at different levels of study (from pre-college to Masters levels). We were routinely aware that there are several studies in the literature (including a selection of those that you’d kindly listed) that had considered the prevalence of musculoskeletal disorders of music students but, according to our knowledge, they are not multicentre studies taking into consideration the important distinction between PRMDs and generic MSK disorders.

We have been pleased nevertheless to incorporate your advice about the manuscript in this context and have revised the conclusions accordingly. We have now hopefully stated the novelty of our study in a more precise way and consistently with the aims.

[Page 2, line 41-45]: “According to the authors’ knowledge, a large-scale multicentre study investigating prevalence and associated factors for PRMDs among music students at different stages of their education (from Pre-college to Masters levels) has not been conducted before. The high prevalence of PRMDs among music students, especially those studying at university-level, has been confirmed in this study and associated factors have been identified, highlighting the need for relevant targeted interventions as well as effective prevention and treatment strategies.”

In order to be consistent, the title has also been changed. In addition, the name of the project has been added as well.

[Page 1, line 1-3]: “Prevalence and associated factors of playing-related musculoskeletal disorders among music students in Europe. Baseline findings from the Risk of Music Students (RISMUS) longitudinal multicentre study”

The authors have taken the liberty of discussing the contribution of Kreutz et al. briefly within the next section of our responses to your comments.

The work of Kreutz et al. is very interesting as it focuses on the prevalence of both musculoskeletal and non-musculoskeletal health problems in music students and their relationship to perceived practice and performance quality as well as to students’ self-reported health-promoting behaviours. However, we would respectfully suggest that our study is distinct from Kreutz et al.’s in several aspects, as detailed below:

1. Although Kreutz and colleagues focused on music students, neither the age range of participants (in fact, this study has been excluded by two recent systematic reviews – Kok et al., 2016 26563718; Rotter et al., 2019 31482285), nor the academic level are stated in the method section. Instead, we have focused our study on the prevalence’s difference between different academic levels (i.e. Pre-college and university-level).

2. In the study of Kreutz and colleagues, musculoskeletal and non-musculoskeletal problems were assessed in relation to different groups of instruments. However, the classification of instruments used within the study was determined according to the “instrument families” (i.e. keyboard instruments; strings; woodwinds; brass; plucked instruments; percussion; voice; composition). Since our study is mainly focused on MSK status, we think that participants should be grouped according to playing posture and the elevation of the arm as a recognised risk factor for the development of MSK disorders (Nyman et al., 2007 17427201; Kok et al., 2017 28282473).

3. In the study of Kreutz et al., the second and third research questions/aims were related to the association between musculoskeletal and non-musculoskeletal problems and perceived practice and performance quality, as well as health-promoting behaviours. Although these aspects are interesting and inspiring, in this instance and for the reasons that we have offered previously in our responses to your comments, we have used the definition of Zaza to investigate the interference of musculoskeletal disorders on music students’ playing ability. In addition, we are grateful to you for your comments in this context and concur fully with your arguments that health-promoting behaviours are important. Having been very aware already of the critical role of behaviours, we would wish to consider this important aspect in future studies to gain greater insight into strategies toward health promotion that music students might adopt to protect them from the effects of the development of MSK disorders and PRMDs.

However, while the authors would always be open to considering expert advice on these matters, we feel somewhat constrained currently as we have already received a favourable ethical approval for the project as a whole using the current definition of Zaza et al. and the study’s protocol with this definition has been already published. Although we understand the concerns and issues with this definition, as you might imagine, we are a bit reluctant to change the terms and criteria used for recruitment that have been approved and are available in the public domain.

In relation to the studies you have kindly suggested, we have been delighted to now include some of them that enhance our manuscript, and for which we thank you.

[Page 3, line 78-80]: “Similarly, although there is a growing literature regarding MSK among music students (10, 11, 25, 28, 32-39) and preventive courses as well as short-term health education programs have proliferated during the last twenty years (40-45) …”

Having undertaken a careful review of the antecedent and contemporary literature, we’re still of the opinion that the contemporary literature in particular offers a large heterogeneity of methods amongst small samples that limit generalisations and meta-analytical synthesis of the evidence. We were reassured because these sentiments have also been reinforced recently by Rotter and colleagues (2019) within their systematic review. In light of the latter, it would seem that studies with larger sample-sizes, involving different institutions and countries, as well as students at different levels of training are needed. In this regard, we were hopeful that our study involving a multicentre research, a relatively large sample and with different levels of training sought correctly in some small way to build on the accomplishments of those already contributing to knowledge in the topic area.

Unfortunately, some of the studies you have kindly mentioned have not been inserted because we felt that they were somewhat tangential to our study and instead they focused mainly on wellbeing (Antonini et al., 2019) or had not focused on musculoskeletal conditions (Araujo et al., 2017; Spahn et al., 2014) or included music students under 16 years of age (Romero et al., 2016).

Similarly, in relation to unbalanced posture patterns, we would like to thank you very much for the suggestion of this reference, about which we did not know because was published after our submission. In this instance, Nusseck and Spahn have investigated postural stability and balance in musicians compared with a control group. Although this approach is very interesting and inspiring to us, unfortunately, in their results, no significant differences were found amongst groups for problems of the musculoskeletal system. As such, unbalanced posture patterns had not been identified as a potential cause of musculoskeletal problems. Furthermore, it was not clear how patterns of unbalanced posture had been assessed, as the description of its outcome measure was missing within the methods’ section.

Introduction

I invite the authors to explore and review the literature referenced above. I believe that many, if not most study will be relevant in the present context to expand the introduction.

The authors should critically reflect on Zaza's categorizition instead of simply accepting it without hesitation. Specifically, what does "playing-related" entail, and what does it not entail? This is not just a matter of definition, but, as we are social scientists, a matter of developing an appropriate model that could predict the prevalence of musculoskeletal problems. Counting those and putting them in a basket is not what the authors intend to do, I believe. And given that the authors succeed in identifying associated factors, this information could be used to develop a (simple) model as a starting point. I am not convinced that setting up a project can act as a replacement for such a model. Instead of the last paragraph of the Introduction, a section header "Aims, Research Questions, and Hypotheses" is needed to guide the reader through the research interests of this group. Setting up a project is just a means, but does not give a clue what the authors want to learn.

Once again, the authors are very grateful to you for your comments above specifically focusing on the manuscript’s introduction and to which we’ve paid particular attention. We should be grateful if you’d consider the following responses alongside those offered earlier which relate to issues of definition and a conceptual framework for the research.

We’d like to reiterate that this study comprises part of a larger longitudinal study, which aims to identify factors associated with increased risk of PRMDs in music students. We’d considered carefully that a robust way in which to search for risk factors was to conduct a prospective, longitudinal study, with a large sample size and an a priori-defined model based on current literature (Hayden et al., 2013 23420236). This model should adequately represent and encompass the population (e.g. different academic levels and different instruments, as well as different countries).

Among the relevant literature, which has been deeply explored on our part, the definition of exposure of most studies was often insufficient (Rotter et al., 2019 31482285). As authors, we are attempting to be as thorough and diligent as possible and we would wish to follow the recommendations of latest systematic reviews (Baadjou et al., 2016 27138935; Kok et al., 2016 26563718; Rotter et al., 2019 31482285), which we think have been conducted in a respectable and careful way. In addition, the authors deemed it important to provide clear definitions and valid outcome measurements of risk factors in order to follow current methodological requirements. In fact, according to a recent systematic review, the body of evidence concerning prevalence, risk factors and effectiveness of the prevention or treatment of MSK disorders among musicians is still missing, mainly due to methodological concerns (Rotter et al., 2019 31482285).

PRMD is a collective term that was defined by Zaza et al. (1998 10075243) as “any pain, weakness, numbness, tingling or other symptoms that interfere with the ability to play your instrument at the level you are accustomed to”. This definition has been already used in several studies with music students (Baadjou et al., 2016 27138935; Baadjou et al., 2018 30085148; Arnason et al., 2014 24925174; Möller et al., 2018 30204820; Steinmetz et al., 2012 23138678; Zaza et al., 1998 10075243). One of those is indeed of Zaza et al., who collected data from 281 classically trained professional musicians and university music students.

We understand and agree that this definition has many limitations and currently, a gold standard definition for musculoskeletal disorders related to musicians’ playing activity does not exist. However, in order to avoid continuing to nourish heterogeneity in this field of research, the authors felt that it would be both a useful and reasonable strategy to deploy the most recognised one. Therefore, we have attempted to use the best possible current definition, but at the same time differentiating the characteristics associated with these disorders from the more generic ones (MSK) in this explorative paper. It is not able to address all aspects, but the definition used offers the reasonable approach to a step-forward compared to what might have conducted before.

Nonetheless, following your valuable suggestion a new paragraph containing the aims of the study has been inserted.

[Page 4, line 98-107]: “Aims. The purpose of the present study was to examine the prevalence of PRMDs in a large-scale study population of music students enrolled in different pan-European music institutions at baseline of the RISMUS project, in order to characterise the study population at different levels of training (i.e. university-level students and Pre-college students). Our hypothesis was that there is a higher prevalence of PRMDs among university-level students in comparison with pre-college students (i.e. transition between pre-college and university-level) possibly due to the assumption that the exposure of playing-related activities is progressively demanding throughout their training. A further goal was to begin to identify variables that might be associated with the self-reported presence of PRMDs among music students. Specifically, an approach involving multivariable modelling might offer preliminary explorative and novel insights of the baseline findings to be further verified within the longitudinal analyses.”

Materials and Methods

- please refrain from overstatements such as "for the first time". The authors have not thoroughly reviewed the literature and are in no position for such sweeping claims. Moreover, of what value are such assertions in this section?

Thank you very much for this comment.

As we’ve alluded to previously within our responses to you, we have now hopefully stated the novelty of our study in a more precise way and consistently with the aims ([Page 2, line 41-45]), and will refrain from reiterating this aspect unnecessarily, especially within a ‘materials and methods’ section, where of course, it’s entirely superfluous.

In addition, we have now moved the information of the longitudinal investigation “RISMUS” in the introduction, without repeating it in the methods’ section.

[Page 3, line 89-92]: “The Risk of Music Students (RISMUS) research project was set up in 2018 to characterise clinical features of a large sample of students from pan-European music institutions and to longitudinally identify factors associated with increased and evolving risk of playing-related musculoskeletal disorders during their professional training (32). This 12-months longitudinal multicentre investigation has evolved to incorporate recommendations within the current literature…”

Table 1: It would be more informative to learn the percentage of participants relative to the total student population at each conservatiore. It may or may not turn out that the smaller conservatoires contribute a relatively higher percentage of participant. This could be a source of bias as students at larger (perhaps) more prestiguous institutions show less interest.

Thank you for your suggestion, with which we fully agree. Unfortunately, responses from all the institutions have not yet been forthcoming and without the accurate data about student numbers and permission to publish, the authors are constrained in this respect for this baseline manuscript. Should the data become available prior to publication, then we’d be delighted to include the relevant figures at the earliest possible opportunity.

Nonetheless, we have mentioned this aspect as a limitation.

[Page 19, line 520-522]: “Furthermore, the authors cannot exclude a potential sampling bias as the information concerning the number of students enrolled in each school participating in the study is not available because it consists of confidential data, without a formal permission to publish. “

What are "assessment measures"? (p6, top). Instead the authors should present dependent and independent measures of their study. Those are important. It appears inappropriate to put in a reference rather than stating (in brief) what the measures are.

The measurement instruments could be reported in an Appendix. They should also present more specifics about which variables were used as demographic and musical background, playing-related problems, or variables that were then identified as associated factors. In other words, please categorize your sets of variables such that reader can gain a better overview. A Table would be very helpful.

Thank you for your comment. “Assessment” has been replaced by “Outcome” [Page 6, line 137]

We have actually reported in brief what the measures concern together with the psychometric properties [Page 6-7, line 150-167] to offer the reader a better understanding of the outcome measures used.

In relation to the measurement instruments, it is already available as an appendix of the published protocol [Page 6, line 138-139]: “…which are available in the published protocol”

Following your kind suggestion, the clarification of dependent variable (MSK status) has been added and a table that hopefully describes the variables in a more clear and specific way has been inserted to assist the reader with interpretation of the results.

[Page 7, line 186-188]: “Bivariate analysis was used to identify associations between the dependent variable MSK status and the covariates (i.e. demographic variables, as well as variables associated with health-related status and those associated with the playing of musical instruments) (see Table 2)”.

Statistical Analysis

The first para is difficult to understand. The first two lines relate to categorical, the third sentence to continuous variables? Please be more clear. Did you consider confidence intervals to represent continuous measures?

Thank you for highlighting this please accept our apologies for not being clear enough. The paragraph has now been revised accordingly.

[Page 7, line 182-184]: “For categorical variables, absolute and relative frequency distributions were presented. For continuous variables, since the normality test showed that all the variables considered were non-Gaussian, the median value and the range were used to summarise the variables.”

"In addition, a multivariable analysis was conducted with an explorative aim in order to assess, at a multivariate level ..." this is a tautology.

Thank you for pointing out this. “At multivariate level” has been deleted [Page 8, line 202].

“…a multivariable analysis was conducted with an explorative aim in order to assess...”

Results

Again, you could well report how many students relative to the approximate total student population participated.

There seems to be a fair amout of significant psychological factors in the regression models. I think that this should be better reflected in the Abstract.

Once again, the authors are very grateful to you for your comments above specifically focusing on the total number of students of each school that participated in the study. As alluded to previously in our responses to your query about Table 1, details of student numbers from all the institutions, although requested by the authors, have not yet been forthcoming. We reiterate here that without the accurate data about student numbers and permission to publish, the authors are constrained in this respect for this baseline manuscript. Should the data become available prior to publication, then we’d be delighted to include the relevant figures at the earliest possible opportunity.

Nonetheless, we have mentioned this aspect as a limitation.

[Page 19, line 520-522]: “Furthermore, the authors cannot exclude a potential sampling bias as the information concerning the number of students enrolled in each school participating in the study is not available because it consists of confidential data, without a formal permission to publish.”

According to the bivariate analysis, psychological distress was related with MSK in general (PRMDs and non-PRMDs, with a higher median for MSK than PRMD or noMSK). We fully appreciate the need to reflect the scope of findings, especially in relation to psychological factors, which we agree are potentially very important. However, on this occasion, we’ve thought that it would be reasonable to report only factors in relation to PRMDs, in order to be consistent with the stated aims of the study.

Discussion

The first para reports results. But the Discussion should address implications of those results, using numbers only to a minimum. I think that it is important to formulate the aims, research questions and hypotheses more clearly at the end of the intro as an independent section just because those can be addressed in the Discussion.

We fully agree with this comment and following your recommendations, we have now deleted results from the first paragraph of the discussion section.

[Page 15, line 359-368]: “This study focused on the prevalence of PRMDs in a large-scale study population of music students at different educational stages (i.e. university-level students and Pre-college students) and enrolled in different pan-European music institutions at baseline of the RISMUS project. Music students participating in this novel large-scale study involving 20 European countries self-reported a high prevalence of painful MSK conditions (65%), of those 48% self-reported PRMDs.

A further goal was to begin to identify variables that might be associated with the self-reported presence of PRMDs among this population that ultimately would facilitate future longitudinal analyses. Results highlighted that coming from West Europe, being a first- or a second-year Masters student, having more years of experience and higher rates of perceived exertion after 45 minutes of practice without breaks were factors significantly associated with self-reported presence of PRMD. In this regard, the current study integrates novel and robust descriptive data with explorative and speculative analyses via relatively sophisticated statistical modelling for factors that may be associated with PRMDs (i.e. multinomial regression model).”

Interpreting regression models at a formal level distinguishes between predictor and criterion variables. It seems correct to me to consider those relationships between variables as associations. Nevertheless, I would find it appropriate on the basis of those models to talk about the extent to which some of the independent variables predict health problems. The implication is, that if it is playing-related, playing musical instruments must be assumed as a cause. But the direction of causality is not so clear. In that sense, psychological factors such as fatigue or perfectionism might predict playing-related health issues. On the other hand, musculoskeletal problems may cause greater fatigue etc. Readers might benefit from a differentiated discussion. If the authors proposed a model to base their assumptions upon, it would be easier to discuss findings in relation to that model.

Thank you very much for your important comment.

As you might imagine, we have been very excited by the possibility through this research, as you’ve intimated, of being able eventually to identify factors that may be labelled as correlates, determinants, predictors, or indeed causal for provoking PRMDs.

Nevertheless, for many of the reasons that we’ve already offered in these responses to your commentary, and especially in the context of this study being exploratory, we’ve opted to include terms such as “associated factors” and “associations” because on balance. We’d argue respectfully that cross-sectional studies cannot ultimately be considered appropriate to investigate the mechanisms of risk factors (Baadjou et al., 2016 27138935) or predictors.

Even if it could be based on carefully constructed conceptual models and mediation-type analyses involving patterning of statistical correlation, the interpretation of associations from cross-sectional studies for direction of cause and effect it is extremely difficult to establish (Croft et al., 2001 11514090). As you’d be aware, this is because the presence of risk factors and the occurrence of an outcome (i.e. PRMDs) are being assessed simultaneously.

For example, as you correctly suggested, fatigue may well be an important risk factor for the development of PRMDs, but it is equally possible that PRMDs might contribute to increased fatigue. We’d suggest that although it is plausible for there to be a robust conceptual and physiological framework to support the expectation of a linkage between the physical performance capability status characteristics of musicians and risks of developing PRMDs, there is currently neither sufficient scientific evidence for this linkage nor the basis on which clinical prevention of PRMD can be developed (Baadjou et al., 2016 27138935; Berque et al., 2016 27281378).

Therefore, we might reasonable assume that these variables are related. Nevertheless, until the relative importance of fatigue compared to other candidate factors can be established, we would suggest that its utility may be compromised and even offer spurious indications for the mechanisms underpinning PRMDs. The latter would be suspected of being beyond the evidence from within this exploratory study. We would be very hopeful that our subsequent longitudinal analyses, which are in preparation, will have the capability of informing our understanding of these issues.

I think that one point for Discussion might also be what student behaviours might contribute or not to better health by referencint studies such as Kreutz, G., Ginsborg, J., & Williamon, A. (2009). Health-promoting behaviours in conservatoire students. Psychology of Music, 37(1), 47-60.

The Discussion should at least briefly address potential mechanisms which drive the observed associations.

Thank you for suggesting this important aspect, which has now been included in the discussion.

[Page 16, 402-407]: “In addition, another possible reason for the reduction of PRMDs’ prevalence among Masters students at later stages could be that, although the literature reports that musicians engage poorly in health promoting behaviours (43, 67-69), courses and short-term health education programs have been recently developed to integrate useful insight from health professionals as well as knowledge from relevant health education settings (40, 42, 45). Students at later stages could have had the possibility to engage in these useful programs and reduce or treat their painful condition.”

[Page 17-18, line 439-460]: “For instance, a similar picture is provided by other studies that have investigated health perception among music students, who rated their health worse compared to an age-and sex matched group of students who did not play music and reported worst behaviour records of health responsibility (37, 43, 67-69). Similarly, Rickert et al. (78) reported an insufficient health awareness of injury among students playing the cello and Kreutz et al. (69) showed poor stress management, inadequate nutrition and low levels of health responsibility among music students, suggesting a consistent need for continuing to develop strategies to enhance health support as an essential aspect of conservatoire and music university education by for instance integrating it into students’ curricula and learning programs (43, 78, 79). During their professional training, music students should learn how to cope with physical and psychological demands with the help of preventive measures. Body-oriented courses (i.e. posture, strength and conditioning exercises) and relaxation techniques, as well as psychological programs for stress and wellbeing have been shown to have a preventive effect (42, 44, 45, 80). This indicates that better results on MSK conditions among music students could be obtained by addressing health awareness and attitudes to injury at the university or even at the Pre-college. Indeed, music universities represent the primary channel for the improvement of health awareness and the implementation of injury prevention initiatives, being an important gateway to the professional world (81). Therefore, strengthening attitudes and behaviours toward health music making will create a step change in educational and employment contexts, shaping future practice and addressing injury prevention to possibly avoid or at least reduce incidences of PRMDs. According to Rickert et al. (78) and Spahn et al. (80), health behaviours toward prevention may be easier to be addressed in the younger generation of musicians who may not already have such established habits. Preventive courses and health promotion among musicians should start already at the beginning of their musical training, with the objective to protect music students from PRMDs during their studies and to prepare them for the future professional demands. For instance, music students without a disorder at the beginning of their professional education would benefit of an increasing sensitization in health promotion and injury prevention. On the other hand, students already suffering from health concerns need to be informed about potential strategies to reduce symptoms (80).”

Limitations

"Despite the novelty and original approach ... " Avoid such phrasing as it has no meaning to the content of this study.

Limitations could also address the need for more elaborate models that entail mechanisms and moderators in the identified associations. How about students engaging in health-prevention programs? Is there reason to believe that they could benefit from reduced health problems? How about aerobic fitness, mental health programs etc.?

In other words, one concrete limitation is that information of individual and/or institution level health-prevention needs to be more fully addressed to better understand the current findings.

Currently, due to the corona pandemic, the quality of education appears to deteriorate. Will this bring larger health problems in the future? Personally, I believe that music students may be exposed to greater health risks through distance teaching. On the other hand, a decline could also be expected as practice intensity could be limited by lack of availability of practice rooms for some instrumentalists.

“Despite the novelty and original approach…” has been deleted from the paragraph [Page 19, line 488].

In addition, following your suggestion, we have inserted the limitation regarding the impossibility to control for confounding factors.

[Page 19, line 508-518]: “Moreover, another limitation consists of the impossibility to control information on the individual and/or the institutional level of behaviours or attitudes toward prevention. For instance, engaging in health-prevention programs could represent a potential confounder that might have affected our results. However, the web-based questionnaire includes questions on strategies to reduce any MSK conditions they may have had in the past and thanks to the replies of the two follow-ups we will have more information and we will be able to record this important aspect. In addition, the participatory level of physical activity has been monitored with the International Physical Activity Questionnaire (IPAQ), which is a well-known measure to offer data on health–related physical activity. Nonetheless, whereas it is important to consider individual health-promoting behaviours (68, 69), Perkins and colleagues (43) suggested that there is still the need to continue evaluating health behaviours and awareness among students and teachers inside music institutions, as well as environmental factors that might be perceived hampering or facilitating health and prevention. It is plausible to think that the environmental factors might be to some extent changed to accommodate research findings regarding the prevention of MSK conditions.”

Conclusions

"The present study reports a substantial part of the findings from the baseline examination of the longitudinal

research project RISMUS..." - This is not a conclusion.

"offers valuable insights" avoid such contentless phrasing. Readers may judge themselves what is of value to them. This is not your job.

Why does the conclusion repeat the first para of the Discussion. Neither here nor there is the content appropriate.

Thank you for your feedback. The conclusions’ section has now been revised according to your very helpful suggestions. However, it includes a summary of the findings to be consistent with the aims, and the implications in the last sentences of the last paragraph.

[Page 20, line 538-546]: “The high prevalence of PRMDs among music students, especially those studying at university-level, has been confirmed in this study and associated factors have been identified, highlighting the need for relevant targeted interventions as well as effective prevention and treatment strategies.

Although the results of this study should be interpreted with caution due to the cross-sectional and self-reported nature of the data, they reflect the findings from a relatively large-scale investigation involving multiple centres across Europe and importantly, students at different stages of their education (from Pre-college to Masters levels). These findings may contribute important adjunct findings to those from the antecedent literature facilitating effective approaches towards primary prevention of PRMDs and their associated burden among music students and professionals. They may usefully raise awareness further within the musical and scientific communities.”

"statistical approaches has not been conducted before among European music students at different stages of their education." - That is not true and authors are advised to refrain from such phrasing.

Thank you for your advice here.

We’ve omitted mention of our perceptions of what might have been attempted previously from the manuscript and as we’ve intimated from earlier, mention of the novelty of our study has been confined and delivered in a more precise way and consistently with the aims [Page 2, line 41-45].

"...primary prevention, including raising awareness within the musical and scientific community, is important for the development of successful interventions and programs..." - The authors should appreciate the efforts documented in an extensive research literature first before proposing such sweeping demands.

Once again, thank you very much for your helpful comments.

We do sincerely appreciate what has been done in the extensive literature so far. As alluded to previously in our responses, while we have some misgivings about the methodological heterogeneity amongst some studies, we nevertheless recognise the importance of offering balanced critical evaluation of our findings in the context of the contemporary and historical literature.

We are immensely grateful to you for the time in reviewing our manuscript and for your valuable assistance in improving its content with exceedingly useful comments, whether they differed from our thoughts or not: Your comments have helped our manuscript to become clearer and more readable.

As such, we’ve also taken your advice and modified the final aspects of the manuscript’s conclusions accordingly.

[Page 20, line 543-546]: “These findings may contribute important adjunct findings to those from the antecedent literature facilitating effective approaches towards primary prevention of PRMDs and their associated burden among music students and professionals. They may usefully raise awareness further within the musical and scientific communities.”

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