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. 2020 Dec 14;17(12):e1003397. doi: 10.1371/journal.pmed.1003397

Impact of scaling up dolutegravir on antiretroviral resistance in South Africa: A modeling study

Anthony Hauser 1, Katharina Kusejko 2, Leigh F Johnson 3, Huldrych F Günthard 2,4, Julien Riou 1, Gilles Wandeler 1,5, Matthias Egger 1,3,6,*, Roger D Kouyos 2,4,*
Editor: Amitabh Bipin Suthar7
PMCID: PMC7735592  PMID: 33315863

Abstract

Background

Rising resistance of HIV-1 to non-nucleoside reverse transcriptase inhibitors (NNRTIs) threatens the success of the global scale-up of antiretroviral therapy (ART). The switch to WHO-recommended dolutegravir (DTG)-based regimens could reduce this threat due to DTG’s high genetic barrier to resistance. We used mathematical modeling to predict the impact of the scale-up of DTG-based ART on NNRTI pretreatment drug resistance (PDR) in South Africa, 2020 to 2040.

Methods and findings

We adapted the Modeling Antiretroviral drug Resistance In South Africa (MARISA) model, an epidemiological model of the transmission of NNRTI resistance in South Africa. We modeled the introduction of DTG in 2020 under 2 scenarios: DTG as first-line regimen for ART initiators, or DTG for all patients, including patients on suppressive NNRTI-based ART. Given the safety concerns related to DTG during pregnancy, we assessed the impact of prescribing DTG to all men and in addition to (1) women beyond reproductive age; (2) women beyond reproductive age or using contraception; and (3) all women. The model projections show that, compared to the continuation of NNRTI-based ART, introducing DTG would lead to a reduction in NNRTI PDR in all scenarios if ART initiators are started on a DTG-based regimen, and those on NNRTI-based regimens are rapidly switched to DTG. NNRTI PDR would continue to increase if DTG-based ART was restricted to men. When given to all men and women, DTG-based ART could reduce the level of NNRTI PDR from 52.4% (without DTG) to 10.4% (with universal DTG) in 2040. If only men and women beyond reproductive age or on contraception are started on or switched to DTG-based ART, NNRTI PDR would reach 25.9% in 2040. Limitations include substantial uncertainty due to the long-term predictions and the current scarcity of knowledge about DTG efficacy in South Africa.

Conclusions

Our model shows the potential benefit of scaling up DTG-based regimens for halting the rise of NNRTI resistance. Starting or switching all men and women to DTG would lead to a sustained decline in resistance levels, whereas using DTG-based ART in all men, or in men and women beyond childbearing age, would only slow down the increase in levels of NNRTI PDR.


Anthony Hauser and co-workers model the implications of dolutegravir scale-up for drug resistance in antiretroviral treatment in South Africa.

Author summary

Why was this study done?

  • The scale-up of antiretroviral therapy (ART) in resource-limited settings has achieved an unprecedented reduction in HIV-related morbidity and mortality.

  • The success of ART is however threatened by increasing levels of resistance to antiretroviral drugs of the non-nucleoside reverse transcriptase inhibitors (NNRTI) class.

  • Replacing NNRTIs by dolutegravir (DTG) may curb the spread of resistance, but it is unclear how effective this switch will be and which patient groups should be switched from NNRTI to DTG.

  • It has been debated whether DTG should be given to women, because of a potential risk of birth defects, and to patients already on an NNRTI-based therapy.

What did the researchers do and find?

  • Using a mathematical model simulating the HIV epidemic in South Africa, we find that scaling up DTG-based ART can halt the increase of NNRTI resistance.

  • This predicted effect of DTG depends crucially on including both women and people already on NNRTI-based ART among patients to whom DTG will be prescribed.

  • Restricting DTG to men or to patients initiating ART would substantially reduce its potential to curb resistance at the population level, as in this case it could merely slow down but not halt the spread of NNRTI resistance.

  • Patients still relying on NNRTI-based therapy would in this case face increased risk of resistance and therapy failure.

What do these findings mean?

  • Our model highlights the potential of DTG scale up to curb NNRTI resistance.

  • In order to halt the increase in NNRTI resistance, DTG should become accessible to both women and people currently on NNRTI-based therapy.

Introduction

The rollout of antiretroviral therapy (ART) in South Africa is estimated to have prevented 0.73 million HIV infections between 2004 and 2013 as well as 1.72 million deaths between 2000 and 2014 [1,2]. However, the spread of non-nucleoside reverse transcriptase inhibitor (NNRTI)-resistant viruses is threatening this success [3]. An estimated 16% of AIDS-related deaths and 8% of ART costs will be attributable to HIV drug resistance up to 2030 in the sub-Saharan African countries that reached HIV pretreatment drug resistance (PDR) levels above 10% in 2016 [4].

In Southern Africa, dolutegravir (DTG), an integrase inhibitor drug, is being introduced on a large scale as part of fixed-dose combinations of Tenofovir, Lamivudine, and Dolutegravir (TLD) [5]. With a high genetic barrier to resistance, DTG has the potential to curb the spread of antiretroviral resistance, as it is highly effective, well tolerated, and affordable in resource-limited settings [69]. Mathematical models explored the effectiveness and cost-effectiveness of prescribing DTG to all ART initiators [10]. These models found that the introduction of DTG was cost-saving and reduced HIV mortality in people living with HIV who initiate ART [10].

The introduction of DTG has been complicated by the increased risk of neural tube defects (NTD) in women living with HIV using DTG at the time of conception [11] and other potential side effects such as weight gain [9,12]. Concerns surrounding NTD risk have delayed the rollout of DTG and, in some settings, led to recommending DTG-based regimens only for men and women who are not at risk of pregnancy [13,14]. For South Africa, a mathematical modeling study showed that DTG-based first-line ART for all women of child-bearing potential would prevent more deaths among women and more sexual HIV transmissions than either NNRTI-based ART for women of child-bearing potential or women without contraception, but increase pediatric deaths [15]. In its 2019 guidelines, WHO recommends DTG in combination with nucleoside reverse-transcriptase inhibitors (NRTIs) for first-line ART, with the proviso that “women should be provided with information about benefits and risks to make an informed choice regarding the use of DTG” [16].

It is likely that in many settings, people living with HIV on NNRTI-based first-line ART will be switched to DTG-based ART; however, the rate of the transition will vary between countries and settings. For second-line ART, WHO recommends DTG-based ART in people living with HIV for whom an NNRTI-based first-line regimen has failed [16]. Again, the rate of switching to DTG-based second-line ART will vary, influenced by concerns about the development of DTG resistance in patients who switch with preexisting resistance to NRTIs [17]. Taken together, it is likely that for the foreseeable future, a considerable fraction of people living with HIV, and particularly women, may continue to rely on NNRTI-based ART regimens, even in the case when guidelines recommend DTG. In this context, NNRTI resistance will likely remain an important issue during and after the rollout of DTG.

We adapted the MARISA model (Modeling Antiretroviral drug Resistance In South Africa) [18] to predict the impact of different scenarios regarding the scale-up of DTG-based ART on NNRTI PDR (NNRTI resistance in the remaining of this article) in South Africa for 2020 to 2040.

Materials and methods

Extended MARISA model

Described in detail elsewhere [18], MARISA is a deterministic compartmental model of both the general HIV epidemic and the NNRTI resistance epidemic in South Africa. It consists of 4 dimensions representing (1) care stages (see Fig 1); (2) disease progression according to the CD4 cell counts; (3) sex; and (4) NNRTI resistance. Care stages distinguish between infected, diagnosed, and treated individuals (either with NNRTI- or protease inhibitor (PI)-based regimen), with subsequent treatment-specific suppression (Supp compartment in Fig 1) or failure (Fail compartment). Treat init. compartments represent individuals treated for less than 3 months.

Fig 1. The adapted MARISA model.

Fig 1

The model differentiates DTG-eligible from DTG-ineligible women. The model structure related to the cascade of care is shown. DTG, dolutegravir; MARISA, Modeling Antiretroviral drug Resistance In South Africa; NNRTI, non-nucleoside reverse transcriptase inhibitor; PI, protease inhibitor.

We simulated the adapted model from 2005 to 2040 assuming the rollout of DTG-based ART started in 2020 under different scenarios (see below). We further assumed that all men and a proportion p1 of women are eligible for DTG, this proportion varied between scenarios. Before 2020, an NNRTI is used in first-line ART and PIs in second-line regimens. As first-line regimen, DTG is prescribed from 2020 on either to ART initiators (i.e., eligible and ART-naive people living with HIV) or for switching to DTG-based first-line ART (i.e., people on NNRTI and eligible for DTG). We assumed that patients failing DTG are switched to a PI-based regimen. For DTG-ineligible women, the cascade of care remains unchanged after 2020 (Fig 1).

Calibration and extension of the MARISA model

We previously calibrated the MARISA model by combining different sources of data. Rates related to either treatment response (NNRTI- or PI-based regimen) or disease progression (characterized by CD4 counts) were estimated using clinical data from data from 5 cohorts in South Africa (Aurum Institute, Hlabisa, Kheth’Impilo, Rahima Moosa, and Tygerberg) that participate in the IeDEA collaboration [19]. These cohorts provided longitudinal information for 30,317 HIV-infected adults. Other parameters were either estimated from the literature (e.g., resistance-related parameters) or fitted to estimates from the Thembisa model (e.g., diagnosis rates and treatment initiation rates). Thembisa is a demographic projection model on which the official UNAIDS estimates for South Africa are based [20]. More details about the calibration procedure can be found in [18] and in the Supporting information (S1 Text, Section 1.1).

We added and modified parameters in order to model the introduction of DTG. We assumed that the DTG initiation rate γDT3(t) is the same as the NNRTI initiation rate γDT1(t) from 2020. Both NNRTI and DTG initiation rates increase until 2022, as a consequence of the Treat-All policy that was implemented in 2017. From 2022 onwards, they are assumed to remain constant (S1 Text, Section 2.2). Finally, we fixed switching rates from NNRTI- to DTG-based regimens for both eligible suppressed (see “Scenarios”) and all failing individuals (γS1S3(t) and γF1T3(t), respectively) to 1 year−1. We assumed that suppressed individuals would stay suppressed when switching, while failing individuals would start DTG in the Treat init. compartment (see Fig 1). The main parameters are summarized in Table 1.

Table 1. Main parameters used in the extended MARISA model.

Rate Description Source/Definition
Rates estimated in the previous MARISA model [18]
γIDk,elig/inel,γDT1k,elig Diagnosis rate, treatment initiation rate to NNRTI Calibrated by fitting MARISA to Thembisa model (see [18]) from 2005 to 2016 (see S1 Text Section 2.2)
γT1S1,γT1F1,γF1S1,γS1F1 NNRTI suppression and failure rates Estimated with individual epidemiological data from IeDEA-SA [19] (see S1 Text Table B)
γT2S2,γT2F2,γF2S2,γS2F2 PI suppression and failure rates Estimated with data from IeDEA-SA [19] (see S1 Text Table B)
γF1T2k,elig/inel Rate of switching from NNRTI to PI (before 2020) Estimated with data from IeDEA-SA and then adjusted (see S1 Text Section 2.2)
Added rates
γT3S3,γT3F3,γF3S3,γS3F3 DTG suppression and failure rates Calibrated with data from NAMSAL study [12] (see S1 Text Section 2.5)
γDT3(t) (t≥2020) DTG initiation rate (from 2020) Same DTG initiation rate as for NNRTI (for DTG-inel. people) γDT3γDT1inel
γIDk,elig(t), γIDk,inel(t), (t≥2020) Diagnosis rate from 2020 (distribution across DTG-eligibility classes) γID1,elig(t)=p1·γID1(2020) and γID1,inel(t)=(1p1)·γID1(2020), for t≥2020 (see S1 Text Section 2.2)
γF1T2elig/inel(t), (t≥2020) Rate of switching from NNRTI to PI (DTG-inel.) γF1T2inel(t)=γF1T2,γF1T2elig(t)=0, for t≥2020 (see S1 Text Section 2.2)
γF3T2(t), (t≥2020) Rate of switching from DTG to PI γF3T2(t)γF1T2inel(t), t≥2020
γS1S3(t), (t≥2020) Switching rate from NNRTI to DTG (maintenance therapy) γS1S3k(t)1year1,t2020
γF1T3(t), (t≥2020) Switching rate from NNRTI to DTG (switch therapy) γF1T3(t)=1year1,t2020

DTG, dolutegravir; MARISA, Modeling Antiretroviral drug Resistance In South Africa; NAMSAL, New Antiretroviral and Monitoring Strategies in HIV-infected Adults in Low-income countries; NNRTI, non-nucleoside reverse transcriptase inhibitor; PI, protease inhibitor.

In the adapted MARISA model, we also added a fifth NRTI resistance dimension to model the impact of NRTI resistance on DTG-efficacy. NRTI resistance is defined as having resistance to both tenofovir (TDF) and lamivudine/emtricitabine (3TC/FTC), the 2 backbones that are usually combined with DTG (see S1 Text, Section 2.5) [21]. We assume that NRTI resistance is acquired when failing a NNRTI-based regimen. In view of the low levels of NRTI PDR that are observed in Africa and its rapid reversion to wild type, we assumed as an approximation that it cannot be transmitted. We investigated different impacts of NRTI resistance on DTG-based regimen and different DTG-efficacies. For this aim, we recalibrated the model so that it reflects different odds ratios (ORs) of DTG-failure between NRTI-resistant and NRTI-susceptible individuals (OR = 1, OR = 2, OR = 5). In the main analysis, we assumed that DTG-efficacy was similar to the one observed in the New Antiretroviral and Monitoring Strategies in HIV-infected Adults in Low-income countries (NAMSAL) study [12], corresponding to an OR of failure between NNRTI and DTG of 1.02, after adjusting for the different baseline characteristics of the 2 groups (see S1 Text, Section 2.5). Other DTG efficacy corresponding to an OR of 2 and 5 were investigated in an additional analysis (see supporting information S1 Text, Section 5.3). All code and manuscript are available from https://github.com/anthonyhauser/MARISA2. This study was approved by the Ethics Committee of the Canton of Bern, Switzerland.

Scenarios

The model investigated the impact of the introduction of DTG-based regimens on the level of NNRTI resistance in diagnosed individuals (i.e., NNRTI PDR) under 2 main scenarios, with 4 variations for each of the 2 scenarios. We also examined the scenario where DTG-based ART is not introduced. There were thus 9 scenarios in total. The 2 main scenarios were:

  1. DTG is only used in first-line regimen of ART-initiators and, as second-line, in patients failing NNRTI-based ART;

  2. DTG is used as initial first-line regimens (for ART-initiators), with all patients on NNRTI-based regimens being switched to a DTG-based regimen.

For the second scenario, we varied the impacts of NRTI resistance on DTG-based regimen, by either assuming an OR of DTG-failure between NRTI-resistant and NRTI-susceptible individuals of 1 (i.e., no impact) or of 2. Each scenario also investigated 4 different DTG eligibility levels p1 for women. The population eligible for DTG in each scenario was:

  1. only men (100% men, 0% women)

  2. men and women beyond reproductive age (100% of men, 17.5% of women)

  3. men and women beyond reproductive age or using contraception (100% of men, 63% of women)

  4. all men and women (100% of men, 100% of women)

The percentages of women eligible for DTG in (b) and (c) were determined by analyzing cohort data from IeDEA, which show that 17.5% adult women on ART are 50 or older [19], and estimates on the use of contraception from the World Bank [22] (see S1 Text, Section 3.1). Throughout the rest of the paper, scenarios (b) and (c) will be referred as “men and women beyond childbearing age” and “men and women not at risk of pregnancy,” respectively. Of note, to model scenario 1., we set γS1S3(t)=0 and γF1T3(t)=γF1T2inel(t) (as opposed to scenario 2., where γS1S3(t)=γF1T3(t)=1year1). We thus assumed that in all scenarios DTG will be used in second-line regimens for people failing NNRTI-based first-line ART.

Additional analyses

We predicted the impact of different levels of DTG introduction on the level of NNRTI failure. We considered the scenario where DTG was prescribed to ART initiators and those on NNRTI-based first-line ART were switched to a DTG-based regimen, with the 4 different levels of women accessing DTG-based ART (see “Scenarios”). However, we assumed that 99% of women were eligible for DTG in scenario (d) (instead of 100%), in order to estimate NNRTI failure when only a very small fraction of women rely on it. For each of these scenarios, we predicted the percentage of individuals failing an NNRTI-based regimen in 2035 after different durations on ART (1 or 2 years). For each of the scenarios, we ran the model from 2005 up to 2035 and retained the numbers of people starting NNRTI-based first-line ART (by CD4 groups, NNRTI resistance and sex) in 2035. We then ran the model for the compartments related to NNRTI-treatment, using the previously saved starting values. This way, we could predict the levels of NNRTI-failure in patients starting NNRTI in 2035 after 1 or 2 years of ART.

We assessed the impact of different switching rates from NNRTI- to DTG-based regimens, fixed to 1 year−1 for both suppressed and failing individuals. We varied both rates γS1S3(t) and γF1T3(t) within a range corresponding to a time to switch of between 0.5 and 10 years after start of ART. For each analysis, the percentage of women who are DTG-eligible varied from 0% to 100%.

Sensitivity analyses

The values of 8 parameters were varied in the sensitivity analysis: 3 transmission-related parameters (percentage of men who have sex with men (MSM), probability of male-to-male infection per sexual contact, and HIV prevalence ratio between MSM and heterosexuals), 4 resistance-related parameters (resistance rates, reversion to wild-type rate, and the effect of NNRTI resistance on NNRTI efficacy), and 1 parameter related to treatment (efficacy of DTG-based treatment). Multivariate uncertainty within specified ranges was assessed using Latin hypercube sampling [23]. Each model estimate is reported with a 95% sensitivity range. Further details are available in S1 Text, Section 3.2. and Fig C and D. In addition, we also investigated the impact on NNRTI PDR of (1) lower treatment-initiation rates than suggested by the Treat-All policy (as suggested by [24]); (2) treatment interruption; and (3) higher efficacy of DTG and different impacts of NRTI resistance on DTG (S1 Text, Section 5).

Results

Use of NNRTIs and levels of resistance

The percentages of patients treated with DTG and NNRTI for 9 scenarios are shown in Fig 2. The predicted evolution of levels of NNRTI PDR up to 2040 across 13 scenarios is shown in Fig 3. The model predicts that while NNRTI PDR would increase substantially under continued NNRTI-based ART, the introduction of DTG-based ART can halt this increase, if in addition to starting new patients on a DTG-based regimen the patients on NNRTI-based regimens are switched to DTG-based first-line ART. Specifically, under the scenario of continued NNRTI-based ART as standard first-line therapy, NNRTI PDR would increase to 29.8% (95% sensitivity range: 7.4% to 39.4%) by 2030 and 52.4% (21.1% to 63.4%) by 2040 (Fig 3A). At the other end of the spectrum, initiating all new ART patients on DTG-based ART and rapidly switching all patients currently on NNRTI-based ART to DTG-based regimens, independently of their sex, would stabilize NNRTI PDR at a moderate level, with a prevalence of 8.4% (2% to 11.8%) by 2030 and 10.4% (4.4% to 13.8%) by 2040 (Fig 3B). When assuming an impact of NRTI resistance on DTG-failure (Fig 3C), we found slightly higher levels of NNRTI PDR: 9.7% (2.4% to 13%) in 2030 and 13.2% (5.6% to 16.9%) in 2040, but a similar impact of the different scenarios of DTG introduction. Using DTG only in first-line regimens of patients initiating ART is not sufficient to curb the increase of NNRTI PDR, even when given to all men and women (Fig 3A).

Fig 2. Predicted use of NNRTI- and DTG-based regimens.

Fig 2

Percentages of patients treated with NNRTI- and DTG-based regimens (left and right panels, respectively) are shown. Panels A represent the scenarios where DTG is used in patients initiating ART, while in panels B, patients are also switched to DTG-based first line ART. ART, antiretroviral therapy; DTG, dolutegravir; NNRTI, non-nucleoside reverse transcriptase inhibitor.

Fig 3. Predicted levels of NNRTI PDR in South Africa 2005–2040.

Fig 3

DTG is introduced in 2020 under 3 scenarios: DTG as first-line regimen for ART-initiators (panel A), DTG for all patients (panel B) or DTG for all patients, assuming an impact of NRTI resistance on DTG-efficacy (panel C), and with different eligibility criteria for women (colors). The baseline model shows the situation without the introduction of DTG (black line). The 2 boxes on the right of each panel represent the levels of NNRTI PDR in 2040 and their 95% sensitivity ranges. ART, antiretroviral therapy; DTG, dolutegravir; NNRTI, non-nucleoside reverse transcriptase inhibitor; NRTI, nucleoside reverse-transcriptase inhibitor; PDR, pretreatment drug resistance.

If restricted to men, DTG-based ART will not curb the increase in NNRTI PDR: The prevalence of resistance is predicted to increase over the entire study period, reaching values of close to 40% by 2040 (Fig 3B). The situation is similar under the scenario of initiating or switching men and women beyond childbearing age (17.5% of women in the IeDEA cohorts). However, the model estimates that the increase in the prevalence of NNRTI PDR is substantially slowed down if women beyond the age of reproduction or on contraception (63% of women) also initiate a DTG-based regimen or switch to DTG. Under this scenario, the prevalence of NNRTI PDR is predicted to reach 25.9% (8.5% to 37%) in 2040 and 13.3% (3% to 18.7%) in 2030, if DTG is given to both ART-initiators and individuals already on NNRTI-based ART (Fig 3). Again, slightly higher NNRTI PDR levels are observed when including the impact of NRTI resistance on DTG-efficacy: 27% (9.3% to 37.9%) in 2040 and 14.2% (3.4% to 19.3%) in 2030.

Impact of switching rates

We calculated levels of NNRTI PDR for 2035 for different average switching delays and percentages of women eligible for DTG-based ART, however, without considering the effect of NRTI resistance. We considered the effect of a modified switching rate both in suppressed individuals (Fig 4A) and in individuals on a failing regimen (Fig 4B). The predicted levels of NNRTI PDR range from 8.4% to 33.1%. The results indicate potential benefits of both strategies to reduce NNRTI resistance. However, as shown by the greater variation in the prevalence of NNRTI PDR in the vertical than horizontal direction in Fig 4, allowing a higher proportion of women access to DTG-based ART has a greater impact than increasing switching rates.

Fig 4. Level of NNRTI PDR in 2035, by rate of switching to DTG-based ART and percent women eligible for DTG-based ART.

Fig 4

Panel A relates to patients on first-line ART with suppressed HIV-1 replication, and panel B to individuals failing NNRTI-based ART. The average time to switching (i.e., the inverse of the switching rate) varies from 0.5 to 10 years for individuals with viral suppression (panel A) or failure (panel B). ART, antiretroviral therapy; DTG, dolutegravir; NNRTI, non-nucleoside reverse transcriptase inhibitor; PDR, pretreatment drug resistance.

Impact of DTG-eligibility on the rate of NNRTI failure

As expected from their effect on NNRTI resistance, the different scenarios of the rollout of DTG-based ART also influence the virological failure under NNRTI-based ART. Fig 5 shows the predicted proportion of NNRTI-failure after 1 and 2 years among DTG-ineligible women according to different scenarios of DTG-introduction. In the absence of DTG introduction, we observe a high level of failure in women starting NNRTI in 2035, reaching 18.2% after 2 years of ART. If all men are started on or switched to DTG, it would help diminish the level of failure by 2 years to 14.3% in 2035, and to 14.5% when including the impact of NRTI resistance. This percentage decreases to 13.1%, when including all women not at risk of pregnancy (13.4% when including NRTI resistance), and to 12.3% (12.7% when including NRTI-resistance) if all men and 99% of women are included. Finally, we find that the increase of virological failure in DTG-ineligible women who still rely on NNRTI can be stopped by the introduction of DTG (see S1 Text Fig E).

Fig 5. Predicted percentage of women failing NNRTI-based ART after 1 and 2 years of ART in 2035, depending on the scenario of the rollout of DTG-based ART.

Fig 5

Note that the scenario in which DTG is given to all men and 99% of women (in red) replaces the scenario in which DTG was given to all men and women (see “Additional analyses”). Failure is given after 1 and 2 years of ART. ART, antiretroviral therapy; DTG, dolutegravir; NNRTI, non-nucleoside reverse transcriptase inhibitor.

Discussion

We adapted the epidemiological MARISA model to examine the impact of the scale-up of DTG-based ART on NNRTI PDR in South Africa. Overall, our findings suggest that if a large fraction of women is excluded from receiving DTG-based ART, they will not only receive a potentially inferior NNRTI-based regimen but will also face increasing rates of resistance to this regimen due to the population level effects of continued NNRTI use. In contrast, the spread of NNRTI resistance can be slowed down if DTG-based ART is made accessible both to women at low risk of pregnancy and to people currently on an NNRTI-based first-line regimen, thereby indirectly protecting those still requiring an NNRTI-based treatment. Model simulations emphasize the importance of starting on or switching a maximum number of women to DTG-based ART: Increasing use of DTG-based regimens was the strategy with the greatest potential to curb the spread of NNRTI resistance. The latter strategy will also lower the risk of virologic failure in women who have to rely on NNRTI-based ART in the future. Finally, it is interesting to observe that, even when using DTG for all patients, NNRTI PDR is not expected to decrease but rather to remain approximatively stable at a moderate level, due to the very slow reversion of NNRTI resistance that allows subsequent transmission of NNRTI resistance (in line with [25]).

While some countries, such as South Africa, first considered limiting access to DTG to men, menopausal women, and women using long-term family planning as a potential policy, the new WHO guidelines state that women should not in principle be excluded from DTG-based ART, even women who are at risk of pregnancy or desire to get pregnant. WHO recommends a woman-centered approach where women should be provided with information about benefits and risks to make an informed choice [16,26]. It is unclear what proportion of women will effectively receive DTG-based ART, as it depends on individual women’s decisions. In this context, model simulations are essential in order to assess the impact of the different options proposed and different levels of DTG uptake. A strength of our model is that it deals with the 2 most significant sources of uncertainty associated with the introduction of DTG, namely DTG uptake in women and the delay in switching people currently on NNRTI regimens. Despite the uncertainty concerning the uptake of DTG in women, it is likely that a proportion of women will continue to rely on NNRTI-based ART. Therefore, even with the rollout of DTG, NNRTI resistance will continue to be relevant for these women. Compared with other modeling work that assessed risks and benefits of DTG introduction (e.g., [15]), our model focused on its indirect, population-level impact on NNRTI resistance. Rather than assigning a level of NNRTI resistance that is fixed over time, HIV care and disease stages (as in [15]), our model considered the dynamic development of NNRTI resistance under relevant scenarios.

Our model also has several limitations. First, real-world data on the efficacy of DTG, especially in resource-limited settings, are scarce. Therefore, we conservatively assumed that DTG has a similar efficacy as observed in the NAMSAL study [12]. Higher DTG efficacies as well as different impacts of NRTI resistance on DTG-failure are investigated in supplementary analyses (see S1 Text, Section 5.3). Second, predictions of levels of NNRTI resistance over the next 20 years are naturally uncertain, as reflected by the wide sensitivity ranges in Fig 3. However, despite the uncertainty, it is clear that the different strategies of rolling out DTG-based ART influenced the levels of NNRTI resistance. Finally, the MARISA model includes some simplifying assumptions, e.g., we did not model prevention of mother-to-child transmission (PMTCT), or treatment interruption. However, relaxing some of these assumptions did not drastically change our conclusion (see S1 Text, Section 5).

Another limitation of this study is the fact that the MARISA model does not take into account resistance to DTG and uses a simplified representation of NRTI resistance. In the context of the introduction of DTG-based ART, modeling of NRTI resistance is particularly relevant as individuals starting on DTG as a functional monotherapy due to resistance to both NRTI backbones—TDF and 3TC—experience higher risk of treatment failure [27]. As they are considerably less frequently transmitted [28] and revert back quickly [29,30], NRTI resistances might primarily be an issue for ART-experienced individuals and more specifically, in patients failing NNRTI-based regimens, who often exhibit high levels of NRTI resistance [31]. These patients who are on non-suppressive NNRTI-based regimens are expected to switch to DTG, either after identification of treatment failure, following the new WHO guidelines, or blindly [17]. In the context of modeling the DTG rollout, this consideration has 2 important implications. First, patients currently failing NNRTI-based regimens are expected to have higher DTG failure rates, mainly due to previously acquired NRTI resistance. Second, due to ongoing viral replication and due to preexisting NRTI resistance, they are at higher risk of accumulating resistance, which may also lead to the emergence of DTG resistance. So far, data on emergence of DTG resistance are primarily available from patients in whom treatment failure was detected relatively early, which may not be the case in African settings [9]. Therefore, to understand risk inherent in the emergence of DTG resistance, adapting the MARISA model by extending its resistance dimension to DTG resistance will be necessary.

Conclusions

In conclusion, our study indicates that giving access to DTG-based ART to all women not at risk of pregnancy could limit the increase of NNRTI PDR, but even if all women receive DTG-based ART, the level of NNRTI PDR will remain above 10% in South Africa. Our model highlights the importance of a rapid switch of patients currently on NNRTI-based to DTG-based ART in order to limit the increase in NNRTI PDR. Women who remain on NNRTI-based ART will indirectly benefit from a high level of DTG uptake due to a reduced risk of virologic failure.

Supporting information

S1 Text. Supporting information.

Section 1: description of the adapted MARISA model. Section 2: description of model parameters. Section 3: model simulation. Section 4: model equations. Section 5: additional results and sensitivity analyses.

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Acknowledgments

Computations were conducted on UBELIX (http://www.id.unibe.ch/hpc), the high performance computing cluster at the University of Bern, Switzerland.

Abbreviations

3TC/FTC

lamivudine/emtricitabine

ART

antiretroviral therapy

DTG

dolutegravir

MARISA

Modeling Antiretroviral drug Resistance In South Africa

MSM

men who have sex with men

NAMSAL

New Antiretroviral and Monitoring Strategies in HIV-infected Adults in Low-income countries

NNRTI

non-nucleoside reverse transcriptase inhibitor

NRTI

nucleoside reverse-transcriptase inhibitor

NTD

neural tube defects

OR

odds ratio

PI

protease inhibitor

PDR

pretreatment drug resistance

TDF

tenofovir

TLD

Tenofovir, Lamivudine, and Dolutegravir

Data Availability

All code and manuscript are available from https://github.com/anthonyhauser/MARISA2. In addition, the values of all the model parameters are reported in S1 Text. The patient data from the HIV cohort studies are confidential and cannot be shared publicly.

Funding Statement

This study was supported by the National Institutes of Health (www.nih.gov) (National Institute of Allergy and Infectious Diseases and the Eunice Kennedy Shriver National Institute of Child Health and Human Development; grant number 2U01AI069924 to ME) and the Swiss National Science Foundation (Grant No. 174281 to ME). RDK was supported by the Swiss National Science Foundation (Grant number BSSGI0_155851). The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Decision Letter 0

Emma Veitch

9 May 2020

Dear Matthias,

Thank you very much for submitting your manuscript "Impact of Scaling up Dolutegravir on Antiretroviral Resistance in South Africa: A Mathematical Modelling Study" (PMEDICINE-D-19-03520) for consideration at PLOS Medicine.

Your paper was evaluated by a senior editor and discussed among all the editors here. It was also discussed with an academic editor with relevant expertise, and sent to independent reviewers, including a statistical reviewer.

My sincere apologies that this paper took longer to peer-review than would be usual (or hoped-for); unfortunately despite the policy value of the analyses presented, it was difficult to sign up qualified reviewers with good modelling expertise in this case. However, we do now have three valuable reviews all of whom recognise the potential of the paper for PLOS Medicine and, we hope, make useful comments that will help to refine the article for potential publication. Please see the reviews below.

In addition to the reviews, the Academic Editor for your article commented that it may be valuable to update the text and place it in the current HIV programmatic context. Given the IeDEA team has cohorts across all over the world, countries will be able to communicate DTG eligibility for women of reproductive potential. The AE noted that in South Africa, updated guidelines were set out in Oct 2019 by the South Africa Department of Health, link: https://sahivsoc.org/Files/2019%20Abridged%20ART%20Guidelines%2010%20October%202019.pdf ). These guidelines suggest that South Africa has proposed DTG in adult and adolescent males and opted for a women-centred approach where women are informed of benefits and risks and decide on their regimen. For females < 6 weeks into their pregnancy and females planning to get pregnant in the future, efavirenz appears to be preferred. For females >6 weeks into their pregnancy and females not pregnant and not planning to get pregnant, DTG is preferred. Some of the discussion in the article could potentially be updated in this respect.

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Comments from the reviewers:

Reviewer #1: A modelling study to predict the impact of various scenarios of DTG-based ART rollout in South Africa on the levels of pretreatment NNRTI-resistance. The model uses the established MARISA model based on 5 HIV cohorts. The work is well performed with many relevant scenarios being modelled, suggesting that DTG rollout for all will lead to a substantial drop in NNRTI-resistance.

Major comment: L239-259: The authors here describe as limitations what I find a major omission of the model, or a missed opportunity. The impact of co-existing NRTI-resistance on DTG resistance development, (long-term) DTG effectiveness in real-life programmatic conditions, the influence of non-B subtypes on DTG resistance patterns, the lack of stringent VL monitoring allowing for ongoing VF, the resultant potential of transmission of DTG-resistant trains, who in turn can compromise first-line DTG-based regimens. In my view, the current model has taken a fairly narrow approach focusing on NNRTI resistance as the main outcome; it would be more useful and timely to undertake a serious attempt (even given limited available data) to include the broader outcomes connected to DTG effectiveness and resistance.

Minor comments:

Adding a scenario of transitioning ALL patients (1st and 2nd line) to DTG would be useful.

Line 150: "Specifically, under the scenario of continued NNRTI-based ART as standard first-line therapy, NNRTI resistance would increase to 46.8% (95% sensitivity range: 19.7%-54.5%) by 2030 and 58.5% (32.5%-68.9%) by 2040 (Fig 3A). In my view, it would be unrealistic to assume that these high levels of NNRTI resistance would be accepted without any policy actions, either in terms of genotypic resistance testing, enhanced VL monitoring, or accelerated access to DTG. So the scenario modelled is too simplistic.

L156: "would stabilize NNRTI resistance at a low level, with a prevalence of 14.3% (3.5%-17.5%) by 2030 and 14.8% (6.6%-19.5%) by 2040 (Fig 3B)."

Actually, these levels of NNRTI resistance are not so low at all, and would still warrant a guide line change to standard non-NNRTI first-line according to current WHO guidelines.

Line 21: " at risk of pregnancy" epidemiologist jargon, better say "of childbearing potential"

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Reviewer #2: Impact of Scaling up Dolutegravir on Antiretroviral Resistance in South Africa: A Mathematical Modelling Study

The manuscript by Hauser et al., describes how the scale-up of dolutegravir (DTG) will impact HIV drug resistance, with specific interest on non-nucleoside reverse transcriptase inhibitors (NNRTIs). Although modelling studies have their limitations, they are useful in predicting possible outcomes based on current knowledge. Hauser et al., performed a comprehensive analysis based on the MARISA model and highlighted some very important results, especially with regards to use of DTG in women of child-bearing potential.

General Comments:

1. This paper clearly highlights that increasing access to DTG for women has a great impact on curbing NNRTI resistance, even when compared to increasing the rate of switching ART.

2. However, and as mentioned at the end of the discussion section, it would be useful in future analysis to extend the models resistance dimension to NRTI resistance, as NRTIs are the main drug class administered together with DTG. Compromised NRTI drugs (such as tenofovir) will pose a risk of DTG functional monotherapy.

3. As the manuscript describes pretreatment NNRTI resistance, and in some cases NNRTI resistance at virological failure, I would suggest the authors refrain from using the term NNRTI resistance when referring to the pretreatment time-point. Rather the authors should consider using the following terms consistently:

a. NNRTI PDR; when referring to NNRTI pretreatment resistance, and

b. NNRTI resistance; when referring to resistance at virological failure.

4. Overall, the manuscript is well written and was a pleasure to read.

Specific Comments

Abstract

Background

1. "We used mathematical modelling to examine the impact of the scale-up of DTG-based ART on NNRTI pre-treatment drug resistance (PDR) in South Africa, 2019-2040."

I would suggest the authors use the term "predict" rather than "examine".

Methods and results

2. "If all men and women beyond reproductive age or on contraception are started on or switched to DTG-based ART, NNRTI resistance would reach 35.1% in 2040."

I think here the authors are trying to say, "If ONLY men and women beyond reproductive age or on contraception are started on or switched to DTG-based ART, NNRTI resistance would reach 35.1% in 2040." If so, please consider including the term only so that it distinguishes this group of people from the ones in the preceding sentence.

Conclusions

3. "Starting or switching all men and women to DTG would lead to a sustained decline in resistance levels whereas using DTG-based ART in all men, or in men and women beyond childbearing age, would slow down the increase in levels of NNRTI resistance."

Consider saying, "… would only slow down the increase in levels of NNRTI resistance."

Introduction

1. "Again, the rate of switching to DTG-based second-line ART will vary, influenced by concerns about the development of dolutegravir resistance in patients who switch with pre-existing resistance to NRTIs [17]." (Line 34).

The abbreviation for dolutegravir should be used as it has already been introduced previously.

2. "We adapted the MARISA model (Modelling Antiretroviral drug Resistance In South Africa) to examine the impact of different scenarios regarding the scale-up of DTG-based ART on NNRTI pre-treatment drug resistance ("NNRTI resistance" in the remaining of this article) in South Africa for 2019-2040." (Line 41).

As mentioned previously, I would suggest the authors use the term "predict" rather than "examine".

Materials and methods

3. "We added and modified parameters in order to model the introduction of DTG. We assumed that the DTG initiation rate γD→T3(t) is the same as the NNRTI initiation rate γD→T1(t) from 2019." (Line 76).

Here the assumption is that the rate at which DTG will be introduced is the same as that of NNRTIs. This assumption on the initiation rate could be limited in that less people are expected to be viraemic and to transmit HIV following the introduction of DTG, due to higher viral suppression rates with DTG compared to NNRTIs. If interpreted correctly, I would suggest the authors consider including this assumption as a limitation of the study.

Results

4. "At the other end of the spectrum, initiating all new ART patients on DTG-based ART and rapidly switching all patients currently on NNRTI-based ART to DTG-based regimens, independently of their gender, would stabilize NNRTI resistance at a low level, with a prevalence of 14.3% (3.5%-17.5%) by 2030 and 14.8% (6.6%-19.5%) by 2040" (Line 152).

14.8% (6.6%-19.5%) NNRTI PDR with no use of NNRTIs at all still seems a bit high. Please check to make sure the model approximations are correct.

Again as mentioned in the general comments, the authors should be clear that they are referring to NNRTI PDR when they say NNRTI resistance.

5. "Restricting DTG-based ART to men to avoid the risk of DTG-associated neural tube defects in newborns will not curb the increase in NNRTI resistance: the prevalence of resistance is predicted to increase over the entire study period, reaching values of close to 50% by 2040."

Neural tube defects should be abbreviated as NTDs as introduced before in the introduction (Line 17). NNRTI resistance should be changed to NNRTI PDR as previously suggested, and in any instances where the authors refer to pretreatment NNRTI resistance.

6. "As expected from their effect on NNRTI resistance, the different scenarios of the rollout of DTG-based ART also influence the rate of virological failure in women NNRTI-based ART among DTG-ineligible." (Line 181).

I think the word "on" is missing here, i.e. "…virological failure in women on NNRTI-based ART…" Besides that, this sentence is a bit confusing and the authors should consider rephrasing.

Discussion

7. "Overall, our findings suggest that if a large fraction of women is excluded from receiving DTG-based ART, they will not only receive a potentially inferior NNRTI-based regimen but will also face increasing rates of resistance to this regimen due to the population level effects of continued NNRTI use." (Line 195).

This is a very important statement, but I agree with it partially. This is because levels of NNRTI PDR in women will inevitably decrease if all men are switched to DTG. So chances are that we will no longer worry about NNRTI PDR among women, especially in South Africa where it has been shown that most NNRTI PDR is due to heterosexual transmission. So the non-inferiority of the NNRTIs will play a major role in those that already got transmitted NNRTI mutations, but the effect will likely reduce drastically in later years with the reduction of NNRTI resistance among men due to DTG use. Just giving a thought.

8. "Model simulations emphasize the importance starting on or switching a maximum number of women to…"

I think the sentence is missing the word "of", i.e. "Model simulations emphasize the importance of starting on or switching a maximum number of women to…"

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Reviewer #3:

This is a modelling study concerned with an interesting issue, upscaling the use of Dolutegravir. While the paper is well-written and carefully conducted, some methodological issues related to the treatment of uncertainty are unclear and require clarification. Specific comments are given below.

This article is essentially a large extrapolation exercise into the future. Extrapolations are potentially dangerous and should be made with caution, placing particular attention to uncertainty representation. Here the authors conduct a multivariate (multi-way) sensitivity analysis and this is appropriate. In addition, they depict uncertainty in their figures in a clever way, thus avoiding cluttering in the main part of the figure.

However, the analysis is based on deterministic models which, depending on their treatment, tend to underestimate uncertainty. To this end it would be useful to add the evolution of uncertainty over time. Also, it would be useful to report the uncertainty of each parameter used. For example, on table 1 and table 1 of the supplement they could add the parameter value, it's range and any distributional assumptions made for each parameter. For the calibration parameters (supplement table 1) this is vital since the results of any survival analysis should incorporate the associated uncertainty.

This issue also relates to the selected range of the sensitivity analysis, how were the numbers on supplement table 4 informed, were they evidence-based or assumption-based?

Finally, it would be good to partly amend the discussion of the results, fully reflecting the uncertainty of the findings, including the absence of "statistically significantly different" results, which simply give a scientifically honest picture reflecting the inherent uncertainty of such modelling exercises.

The design of this modelling study crucially depends upon the selected scenarios. One plausible option is to look extensively into the consequences of using NNRTI-based ART as first line treatment and DTG-based ART as second line. Presumably the evidence and long-term knowledge of the genetic interactions this may cause and the possibility of future DTG resistance development is relatively scarce? It appears that these issues deserve further discussion.

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Decision Letter 1

Richard Turner

26 Aug 2020

Dear Dr. Egger,

Thank you very much for re-submitting your manuscript "Impact of Scaling up Dolutegravir on Antiretroviral Resistance in South Africa" (PMEDICINE-D-19-03520R1) for consideration at PLOS Medicine.

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Requests from Editors:

Please revisit your data statement and state how parameter details will be made available by the time of publication (preferably in the form of supplementary files). We suggest modifying the statement to note that you are not able to distribute prior clinical data used in the study (assuming this is correct) and that inquiries should be made to the IeDEA group about this, for example.

To your title, please add a study descriptor following a colon, e.g., "...: a modeling study".

In your abstract, we suspect the text should be amended to "... a DTG-based regimen ...". Just before this, we suggest rephrasing " ... both ART initiators" (we think that the word "both" can be omitted).

We suggest "substantial uncertainty" rather than "high uncertainty".

In the sixth summary point, please make that "predicted effect of dolutegravir".

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At line 237, please substitute "all patients", or similar, for "everybody".

At line 240, please make that "... considered limiting access ...".

Please spell out the author group name for reference 12; and format the author list for reference 25 as for other references.

Can the title for reference 26 be converted to lowercase text?

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Decision Letter 2

Richard Turner

10 Nov 2020

Dear Prof. Egger,

On behalf of my colleagues and the academic editor, Dr. Amitabh Bipin Suthar, I am delighted to inform you that your manuscript entitled "Impact of Scaling up Dolutegravir on Antiretroviral Resistance in South Africa: a modeling study" (PMEDICINE-D-19-03520R2) has been accepted for publication in PLOS Medicine.

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Associated Data

    This section collects any data citations, data availability statements, or supplementary materials included in this article.

    Supplementary Materials

    S1 Text. Supporting information.

    Section 1: description of the adapted MARISA model. Section 2: description of model parameters. Section 3: model simulation. Section 4: model equations. Section 5: additional results and sensitivity analyses.

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    Submitted filename: Response_to_reviewers Hauser.pdf

    Data Availability Statement

    All code and manuscript are available from https://github.com/anthonyhauser/MARISA2. In addition, the values of all the model parameters are reported in S1 Text. The patient data from the HIV cohort studies are confidential and cannot be shared publicly.


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