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. 2020 Dec 30;15(12):e0244571. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0244571

Effect of different designs of interspinous process devices on the instrumented and adjacent levels after double-level lumbar decompression surgery: A finite element analysis

Hao-Ju Lo 1,2, Hung-Ming Chen 3, Yi-Jie Kuo 4,5, Sai-Wei Yang 1,*
Editor: Osama Farouk6
PMCID: PMC7773253  PMID: 33378405

Abstract

Recently, various designs and material manufactured interspinous process devices (IPDs) are on the market in managing symptomatic lumbar spinal stenosis (LSS). However, atraumatic fracture of the intervening spinous process has been reported in patients, particularly, double or multiple level lumbar decompression surgery with IPDs. This study aimed to biomechanically investigate the effects of few commercial IPDs, namely DIAMTM, CoflexTM, and M-PEEK, which were implanted into the L2-3, L3-4 double-level lumbar spinal processes. A validated finite element model of musculoskeletal intact lumbar spinal column was modified to accommodate the numerical analysis of different implants. The range of motion (ROM) between each vertebra, stiffness of the implanted level, intra stress on the intervertebral discs and facet joints, and the contact forces on spinous processes were compared. Among the three implants, the Coflex system showed the largest ROM restriction in extension and caused the highest stress over the disc annulus at the adjacent levels, as well as the sandwich phenomenon on the spinous process at the instrumented levels. Further, the DIAM device provided a superior loading-sharing between the two bridge supports, and the M-PEEK system offered a superior load-sharing from the superior spinous process to the lower pedicle screw. The limited motion at the instrumented segments were compensated by the upper and lower adjacent functional units, however, this increasing ROM and stress would accelerate the degeneration of un-instrumented segments.

Introduction

Lumbar spinal stenosis (LSS) is defined as a narrowing of the spinal canal and can cause considerable pain or numbness in the legs. The main causes of spinal stenosis are bulging of the intervertebral disc, hypertrophic facet capsular ligament, or the ligamentum flavum, which narrows the spinal cord or root. Surgical treatment of LSS typically involves resecting osteophytes and expanding the space between vertebrae, or alternatively fusing vertebrae in the region of the stenosis. The most common surgical treatment is single to multi-level decompressive laminectomy [1]. The dorsal decompression procedure provides instant chronic pain relief and allows the patient to rapidly resume everyday activities [2].

The lumbar interspinous process device (IPD) is based on this dorsal decompression principle and is placed at a symptomatic level to limit the extension of the lumbar spine and maintain a relatively flexible mobility at the intradiscal level to achieve the goal of symptom relief. In case of the patient's symptoms being not alleviated through a flexed posture, the traditional decompression surgery must be performed. Therefore IPDs are designed as a spacer to offload facet joints and release the entrapped spinal root nerves and as the intralaminar stabilizer [37].

The device materials vary from metals such as titanium (such as X-Stop, Coflex) to rigid polymers like polyetheretherketone (PEEK) (M-PEEK), or other elastomer compounds (DIAM, Silicone coated with Dacron). The fixation method for the device to the vertebral spinous processes may also be categorized as either static spacer, such as X-Stop (Medtronic, USA) and Wallis (Abbott Spine, France); or flexible implant such as Coflex (RTI Surgical, USA), DIAM (Medtronic Sofamor Danek, USA), and M-PEEK (a PPEK pedicle screw-based M shape interspinous spacer developed by Chen et al. [15].

The IPD is commonly implanted in single or double-level lumbar stenosis from L1-L5 in skeletally mature patients, and possible application in across multiple levels. Fracture of the spinous processes is considerable complication as placement of the device changes the mechanism of stress on the spinous process from a tension-bearing role to a compression-loaded structure during the trunk flexion, this is true particularly for single-level patients, but the risk of this complication in double-level cases has yet to be fully evaluated. Whether instrumented IPDs offer superior outcomes to non-instrumented bony decompression techniques is still controversial [810]. However, the advantage of ease of use and relatively short surgery time, IPD surgery is still accepted by the most of the patients. Besides the instrumented spinous fracture, a recognized complication termed the “sandwich phenomenon” also contribute to cracking of the intervening spinous process in patients with adjacent, double-level IPDs as reported with the use of two-level X-Stop [11]. In a multicenter study by Gazzeri et al. [12], the average postoperative spinous process fracture rate was about 2.05% with various IPDs implanted. Nevertheless, the patients treated with titanium X-Stop alone revealed at highest risk of fracture with an incidence rate of 3.79%. In this reason this product was off the market in 2015 [13, 14].

Therefore, the goal of this work was to look into alterations in the biomechanical characteristics of the lumbar spine after implanting three different designed IPDs across two adjacent levels and the efficacy of stress relief as well as the ROM. We hypothesized that IPDs which leads to less limiting the extension range of motion (ROM) at instrumented levels decrease the “sandwich phenomenon”, and the higher limiting extension the higher stress over the disc annulus at the adjacent levels.

Materials and methods

FEMs of the lumbar spine and implant

The finite element software ANSYS 16.0 (ANSYS Inc., Canonsburg, PA) was used to create a 3-dimensional FE model of the 5-level intact ligamentous lumbar spine (Fig 1A). The 3D lumbar spinal column bony structure was obtained from CT images of a healthy male and then reconstructed to the nodal points of computer FEM geometry. In order to simplify the model, a specialized command in ANSYS was used to rotate, translate and scale the L3 vertebra to reproduce the L1, L2, L4, and L5 bony structure. These vertebrae were then aligned into a lordotic lumbar spine column according to the upright X-ray images of the same person (Fig 1B). The intact model was validated by applying a pure moment of 7.5 Nm in flexion, extension, torsion, and lateral bending, respectively; all degrees of freedom at the inferior surfaces of the L5 vertebra were constrained. The ROM of each vertebra and the facet joint forces at all segments was computed. Subsequently, 1000 N axial compressive force was acting on the top of L1 vertebra and the intradiscal pressures were calculated in comparing to published literatures [1520]. The material properties are listed in Table 1 [1618].

Fig 1.

Fig 1

Finite element model of the (a) intact lumbar spine implanted with two interspinous spacers of (b) DIAM, (c) pedicle screw-based M-rod (M-PEEK) system and (d) Coflex at L2/L3 and L3/L4 segments.

Table 1. The material properties of intact spine, Coflex, M-rod and DIAM model components.

Material Young’s modulus (MPa) Poisson’s ratio
Cortical bone 12,000 0.2
Cancellous bone 300/100 0.2
Annulus fibrous Mooney-Rivlin NA
c1 = 0.18, c2 = 0.045
Nucleus pulposus Mooney-Rivlin NA
c1 = 0.12, c2 = 0.03
Coflex (Titanium alloy) 113,000 0.3
Pedicle screw (Titanium alloy) 113,000 0.3
M-shaped device (PEEK) 4,000 0.3
DIAM (compression) 20 0.45
DIAM (extension) 5,000 0.3
Ligament
ALL 7.8 NA
PLL 10 NA
TL 10 NA
LF 15 NA
ISL 10 NA
SSL 8 NA
CL 7.5 NA

C1, C2 indicated two parameters of Mooney-Rivlin hyperelastic formation; NA = not applicable; ALL, anterior longitudinal ligament; CL, capsular ligament; ISL, interspinous ligament; LF, ligamentum flavum; PLL, posterior longitudinal ligament; SSL, supraspinous ligament; TL, transverse ligament.

The intact spinal model was then implanted with a DIAMTM, CoflexTM and M-PEEK in the interspinous space at L2-3 and L3-4 (Fig 1B–1D) as three simulation models, respectively. The M-PEEK system has a novel bilateral pedicle screws with diameter of 6.0 mm and a length of 45 mm into the laminar as the base pole. An “M” geometry rod with 5.5 mm diameter is attached to the base poles and the concave part is placed underneath the spinous process. The three FE implanted models were constructed according to the real implant dimension as well as material properties posted, and were validated in previous studies [15, 19, 20]. According to the surgical procedures, the Coflex and DIAM interspinous spacers were inserted between adjacent spinous processes of the lumbar spine to resist hyperextension of the lumbar spine. In the Coflex spinal model, spinal instability was simulated by cutting the ligamentum flavum, supraspinous ligament, interspinous ligament, and the facet capsules, and by removing 50% of the bilateral inferior bony facet at the L2, L3 and L4 segments. This process was repeated for the DIAM and M-PEEK models, except the supraspinous and interspinous ligaments were preserved in both cases (Fig 1B and 1C). The surface between the spinous process and the interspinous spacer was assigned as the contact surface. The heights of the interspinous space at L2-3 and L3-4 in all instrumented models were identical. Table 1 details the material properties of all implant components.

Boundary and loading condition

The hybrid testing protocol was carried out to evaluate the effect of implanting the interspinous spacers on the interspinous and adjacent levels [21]. The intact model was subjected to a 150 N compressive follower load combined with a 9.9 Nm moment under physiological motions. The follower load was simulated by taking a two-node link element attached near the geometric center of each vertebra and maintained at a tangent to the spinal curvature. This setup was intended to mimic physiological compressive loading and persist the lumbar lordotic angle [17, 19, 22]. The loading path of the follower load was able to constrain the ROM of each segment within 0.6 degrees for all FE models.

The instrumented spinal models were loaded with the same follower load as the intact model, but the moment was incrementally increased until the total ROM resembled to that of the intact model. The resulting deviations in ROM among the four FE models were controlled to be within 0.6 degrees (Table 2). All FE models were constrained on the bottom of the fifth vertebra. Each model was compared to the intact model in terms of ROM, peak intradiscal stress and facet joint contact force. In addition, the contact forces between the devices and spinous processes and the maximum Von-Mises stress on the spinous processes were analyzed.

Table 2. The ROMs of different implanted models in extension, flexion, axial rotation and lateral bending.

Model ROMs (degree) Total lumbar ROMs (degrees)
L1/L2 L2/L3 L3/L4 L4/L5
Extension
Intact 3.05 2.62 2.56 2.57 10.8
Coflex 4.61 0.73 0.54 4.86 10.73
DIAM 3.42 2.17 2.07 3.23 10.89
M-PEEK 4.11 1.25 1.13 4.34 10.83
Flexion
Intact 4.77 4.74 4.62 6.05 20.18
Coflex 4.85 4.64 4.54 6.14 20.17
DIAM 5.29 4.18 3.89 6.68 20.04
M-PEEK 4.80 4.74 4.62 6.03 20.19
Axial rotation
Intact 2.01 2.3 2.68 3.75 10.74
Coflex 2.11 2.17 2.71 3.79 10.78
DIAM 2.06 2.3 2.58 3.84 10.78
M-PEEK 2.05 2.3 2.61 3.81 10.77
Lateral bending
Intact 5.47 5.01 4.7 4.48 19.66
Coflex 5.71 4.12 3.81 6.02 19.66
DIAM 5.47 4.98 4.68 4.49 19.62
M-PEEK 5.47 5.01 4.7 4.48 19.66

Results

ROM at instrumented and adjacent level

In comparison to the intact model, the ROM of extension at instrumented L2-3 and L3-4 decreased in all implanted models. Among the results, the Coflex model had the most significant reduction of 72% and 79%, respectively, followed by the M-PEEK with 52% and 56% reduction, respectively. However, these limiting movement was compensated by the adjacent un-instrumented functional units, in which, the Coflex showed +51% increase at L1-2 and +89% at the L4-5; the M-PEEK showed +35%, and +69%, respectively. In flexion simulation, all three models had ROM similar to the intact one, except the DIAM system showed 12% and 16% decrease at L2-3, and L3-4 but compensated by +11%, and +10% at L1-2, and L4-5, respectively (Fig 2 and Table 2).

Fig 2. Difference in ROM as a percentage of the intact model (% of intact) at the implanted and adjacent levels in flexion, extension, axial rotation, and lateral bending.

Fig 2

Compared to the intact model in axial rotation, the ROM of instrumented and adjacent levels was very similar in the DIAM and M-PEEK models. In lateral bending, the ROM differences in all instrumented models were less than 1% for each segment as compared to the intact model; for the Coflex model, the ROM was more variation as compared to the intact model, as depicted in Fig 2 and Table 2.

Disc stress at instrumented and adjacent levels

Fig 3 presents the maximum disc stress at the instrumented and adjacent levels of the Coflex, DIAM and M-PEEK models. Compared to the intact model in extension, the peak stress at L2-3 and L3-4 instrumented levels decreased more than 40% in the Coflex and M-PEEK model. The peak stress slightly increased in adjacent levels at L1-2 in all instrumented models; it was increased more than L1-2 in L4-5 of the instrumented models. Likened to the intact model in flexion, the disc stress differences between all models was less than 1% for each segment except for the DIAM model, as expressed in Fig 3.

Fig 3. Differences in annulus stress as a percentage of the intact model (% of intact) at the implanted and adjacent levels in flexion, extension, axial rotation, and lateral bending.

Fig 3

In axial rotation, the disc stress differences between the intact, DIAM models was less than 6% for each segment; M-PEEK models was less than 2% for all segments; it was different more than 13% in all segments of Coflex model. In lateral bending, the disc stress was different to the intact less than 1% for each segment of DIAM model; it was different more than 13% in all segments of Coflex model, as expressed in Fig 3.

Contact force on the spinous process at the instrumented level

The maximum stress on the spinous process at the instrumented levels occurred during extension. Thus, this result was focused on the Von-Mises stress on the spinous process during extension, while loading during lateral bending or rotation were not addressed. For the Coflex, DIAM and M-PEEK models, the contact forces on the L2 spinous process were 277N, 32N and 155N, respectively, and the forces on the L3 spinous process were 280N, 38N and 161N, respectively (Fig 4A). Fig 4A also shows stress concentrations at the superior and inferior surface of the L3 spinous process in the Coflex model. While the DIAM model produced the lowest stress on the inferior surface of the L2 and L3 spinous process in extension.

Fig 4.

Fig 4

a) Maximum contact force between the spinous process in extension, b) changes in facet contact force as compared to the intact model under extension, c) stress distribution on the spinous process in extension.

Facet contact forces at the instrumented and adjacent levels under extension

Fig 4B presents the bilateral facet loads at the instrumented and adjacent levels during extension. The facet contact forces at the instrumented levels under extension were lower than those in the intact model, but were higher at the adjacent levels. Compared to the intact model in extension, the contact forces decreased at the L2-3 and L3-4 instrumented level of all instrumented models. At the adjacent levels, the contact forces at L1-2 and L4-5 levels increased in all instrumented models (Fig 4B).

Discussion

The biomechanical behavior of the lumbar spine after implanting an IPD across two levels has not been reported on until now. Thus, the goal of this work was to look into alterations in the biomechanical characteristics of the lumbar spine after implanting an IPD across two adjacent levels and then to compare the significance with a single-level instrumented model.

The previous study showed that the Coflex device acted to significantly restrain the ROM of the implanted level in extension and lateral bending, but the adjacent level was not significantly affected [23]. For the DIAM device, Bellini et al. reported that the ROM of the instrumented level decreased in both flexion and extension after DIAM insertion, whereas the ROM of the adjacent levels was unchanged [24]. It is considered that the Coflex and DIAM devices are not capable of fully compensating for an unstable spine when loaded in different directions, with the exception of extension with a single-level insertion [5, 20, 25, 26]. Similarly, the M-PEEK model constrained the ROM of instrumented levels in extension, but movements on other motions were not significant [15]. In this study, the changes in the ROM of the double DIAM model were smaller than Coflex and M-PEEK models at all levels in extension.

During extension, the stress on the discs in the Coflex, DIAM and M-PEEK models at the instrumented levels (L2-3 and L3-4) were significantly decreased in comparison to the baseline levels of the intact model. The Coflex model had the lowest ROM in extension at the instrumented segments and, as such, the disc stress was a lot less than in the other models. An increased ROM in extension may result in greater compressive loading on the posterior disc and increase stresses within the disc. During flexion, there was no substantial difference in disc stresses at each layer in the intact, Coflex and M-PEEK model. This is probable because the Coflex and M-PEEK devices are not designed to constrain forward flexion. The DIAM model exhibited a significant increase in stress at the L4-5 disc at the adjacent level during flexion, most likely because the DIAM device decreases motion at the implanted levels and the adjacent segments are forced to compensate for this loss of motion. During axial rotation, the DIAM and M-PEEK models did not produce any significant change in disc stress at each level, but in the Coflex model the annulus stress, increased by 13% of the adjacent L1-2 segment and 19% of the adjacent L4-5 segment. The fixation method of the Coflex device means it rigidly holds the spinous processes at implanting segment, with the result that this type of fixation caused a higher stiffness at the implanted segments and greater stress at the adjacent levels in axial rotation. These results are in agreement with a cadaveric study from Tsai et al. [5]. In lateral bending, our results showed the Coflex model had the greatest changes in disc stress in instrumented levels of all models, with the peak stress being observed at the adjacent level. In general, these results are similar to those from studies on spinal fusion [27, 28].

Previous studies evaluating the contact forces on the facet joints reported that the highest force occurred during extension [20, 29]. As such, this study focused on the facet force during extension, while loading during lateral bending or rotation were not addressed. In all implanted models, there was a pronounced decrease in facet contract force on the instrumented segments, but both the upper and lower adjacent levels showed an increase in facet contract force, with the lower adjacent level showing the greatest increment in force. Although the Coflex and M-PEEK devices, both offered excellent resistance to extend, the M-PEEK device showed less changes in facet contact forces at adjacent levels. This is mainly down to the difference in fixation method between these devices. The M-PEEK device is fixed by two posterior pedicle screws at the implanted segment, and the associated load is transferred more towards the anterior column of the lower adjacent segment than with the Coflex or DIAM devices (Fig 5). In a FEM study of single-level implantation with a DIAM device [20], a decrease in facet forces was observed at the treated segment, but there was an increase at the adjacent segments, particularly in the lower adjacent segment. A finite element study by Byun et al. [23] revealed that the average facet contract force at the upper adjacent segment increased by 170% when using a Coflex implant, but the values from the lower adjacent segment were not recorded. A possible reason for the increase in adjacent facet force after inserting an IPD is that the instantaneous axis of rotation is shifted towards the posterior portion of the implant, leading to an increase in force being transferred through the posterior column of the adjacent facets. The results of this study showed that inserting an IPD across two levels caused a marked increase in adjacent facet force, which may lead to an increase in the risk of adjacent facet hypertrophy.

Fig 5.

Fig 5

Stress path of facet joint in a) M-PEEK and b) Coflex and DIAM under extension.

Fracture of the spinous process is the primary complication of interspinous devices [11, 30, 31]. A cadaveric study by Shepherd et al. [32] recorded the average failure load of an intact spinous process as 339 N under a superiorly-directed load from a spinous process device. In this study, the maximum contact force on the spinous processes occurred in the L3 process in all instrumented models and is safe within the strength of the bone. Nevertheless, it should also be considered that under repeated loading, the load to failure may decrease and cause a fracture of the spinous process. This is one of the limitations of this study.

Likewise, the high contact force at the spinous processes of instrumented levels recorded in the Coflex model demonstrated the risk of spinous process fracture. The sandwich phenomenon of the intervening spinous process in patients with adjacent, double-level IPDs has been demonstrated [11]. The phenomenon may lead to fracture of the spinous process between the double IPDs and subsequent implant migration or failure. In contrast, the sandwich phenomenon is unlikely to occur with the use of the M-PEEK or DIAM device. The M-PEEK device creates a load sharing from the superior spinous process to the lower pedicle screws, instead of to the lower spinous process, and the lower stiffness of the DIAM device offers superior load-sharing capacity between the two bridge supports (Fig 4C).

There are several limitations of this study that arise from the simplified finite element models. All vertebral bodies were simplified to the same shape, but the size was scaled to match each individual vertebral dimension from the radiography images. The material properties of all vertebrae bodies were also assumed as homogenous and isotropic, which might not be true for each vertebra. The simulation revealed that the ROM of instrumented levels in Coflex model in flexion was higher than DIAM model, this might be due to removing the supraspinous and interspinous ligaments. But literatures revealed that lumbar intervertebral disc and facet joints are the major load carrier during the functional unit motion. Further, the Young moduli of the supraspinous and interspinous ligaments in this study were 8 and 10Mpa, respectively, that are much smaller value in comparison with the cortical bone and implants. Therefore, we hypothesized that both ligaments might have a limited contribution in ROM, the main cause of larger instrumented level motion is mainly due to the dimension and location of the Coflex implant as the pivot of extension. Moreover, the loading conditions were not precisely the same as a physiological loading because these finite element models could not simulate as a real muscle contraction. As well, the adjacent segments must compensate more for ROM when using rigid implants than mobile devices [33], because the use of the hybrid method [21]. The ligamentous lumbar spine model performs a low resistance initially, while past its neutral position the ligaments mechanical stiffness increased gradually when as load increased. Therefore, the ROM of adjacent segments may vary [33] even all segments are subject to the same loading.

Conclusions

Of the three devices, the Coflex implant shows the limited ROM at the instrumented level but compensating larger ROM at the two adject segments. In combined with highest annulus stress on adjacent level, which may accelerate the degeneration of the adjacent segments. This might be the factor of the sandwich phenomenon at the spinous process was only happened in Coflex model. The DIAM and M-PEEK devices offered superior load sharing and could be expected to be at lower risk of developing adjacent level degeneration as well as spinous process fracture. The design features such as load transmission from the superior spinous process to lower vertebra and offering superior load-sharing capacity between the two bridge supports, should be considered in future implant designs.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper.

Funding Statement

This study was funded by the Ministry of Science and Technology, ROC. (106-2221-E-010 -007 -MY2, 106-2221-E-075 -002.) The funding sources played no role in the design, implementation, data analysis, interpretation, or reporting of the study.

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Reviewer #1: The authors present a finite element study on 3 interspinous devices and analyse the range of motion, stress on the disc and facet joints as well as contact forces on the spinous processes to investigate the causes of spinal process fractures.

The authors could find that the devices have different Impacts on the spinal structures, especially in 2-segment Implantation.

I have several issues:

- The M-PEEK was developed in the institution of the authors. Please state the connection to the developer of the device.

- The function and validity of the ANSYS Software should be explained in more detail (at least 2-3 sentences), please do not refer to other studies only.

Reviewer #2: General comments

. Meaning of any abbreviation must be mentioned on its first use in the abstract (as a separate entity) and in the manuscript text. Afterword, the abbreviation must be used instead of the original word. The term interspinous devices was used throughout the introduction and then the abbreviation IPD was used from line 80. Lumbar spinal stenosis was abbreviated as (LSS) in line 40 and then the full term (lumbar spinal stenosis) was used in the "Discussion" section in lines 217-218.

For any term used one time, no need to be abbreviated e.g Intermittent neurogenic claudication (INC) (line 48)

.Figures, figure legend and tables must be moved after the end of the text. Then figures and tables are cited in the text. Examples: lines 120-122: “Fig 1 Finite element model of the a) intact lumbar spine implanted with two interspinous spacers of (b) DIAM, (c) pedicle screw-based M-rod (M-PEEK) system and (d) Coflex at L2/L3 and L3/L4 segments”. Lines 172-173 & “Fig 2. Difference in ROM as a percentage of the intact model (% of intact) at the

implanted and adjacent levels in flexion, extension, axial rotation, and lateral bending” must be moved to Figure legend after the references

Abstract

Lines 22-23; "Recently, various designs and material manufactured interspinous process devices (IPDs)

23 are on the market in managing symptomatic lumbar spinal pathology" Lumbar spinal pathology should be changed to "Lumbar spinal stenosis".

Introduction

Is too long with a lot of repetitions. It must be shortened and concentrate on the aim of the current study.

Line 85: “..middle spinous process…” what does it mean? Middle in relation to what?

Results

The authors did not perform any statistical testing for their results

. Lines 177-178: “..for the Coflex model, the ROM was more variation as compared to the intact

model, as depicted in Fig 2 and Table 2.”

What is the meaning of this word?

. Discussion

is long and should be shortened

. Line 237: “Effect“ is better to be used than “result”

. Lines 316-317: “Also, the adjacent segments must compensate more for range of motion when using rigid

implants than mobile devices [33] because the use of the hybrid method.” What is the meaning of this word?

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


3 Sep 2020

Response to reviewers:

The modified lines mentioned below are indicated in the text by highlighting in the file "Revised Manuscript with hightlight for response.docx"

Reviewer #1: The authors present a finite element study on 3 interspinous devices and analyse the range of motion, stress on the disc and facet joints as well as contact forces on the spinous processes to investigate the causes of spinal process fractures.

The authors could find that the devices have different Impacts on the spinal structures, especially in 2-segment Implantation.

I have several issues:

- The M-PEEK was developed in the institution of the authors. Please state the connection to the developer of the device.

Response: The first author, corresponding author and the developer (Dr. Hsin-Chang Chen) of M-PEEK device were colleagues in Department of Biomedical Engineering, National Yang-Ming University, Taipei, Taiwan. We study the same field of spinal biomechanics.

- The function and validity of the ANSYS Software should be explained in more detail (at least 2-3 sentences), please do not refer to other studies only.

Response: The statements of the model validation have been added in Lines 100-105 as follows, “The intact model was validated by applying a pure moment of 7.5 Nm in flexion, extension, torsion, and lateral bending, respectively; all degrees of freedom at the inferior surfaces of the L5 vertebra were constrained. The ROM of each vertebra and the facet joint forces at all segments was computed. Subsequently, 1000 N axial compressive force was acting on the top of L1 vertebra and the intradiscal pressures were calculated in comparing to published literatures [16-18].”

Reviewer #2: General comments

. Meaning of any abbreviation must be mentioned on its first use in the abstract (as a separate entity) and in the manuscript text. Afterword, the abbreviation must be used instead of the original word. The term interspinous devices was used throughout the introduction and then the abbreviation IPD was used from line 80. Lumbar spinal stenosis was abbreviated as (LSS) in line 40 and then the full term (lumbar spinal stenosis) was used in the "Discussion" section in lines 217-218.

For any term used one time, no need to be abbreviated e.g Intermittent neurogenic claudication (INC) (line 48)

Response: The abbreviation problems of IPD, LSS and INC have been fixed in revised manuscript.

.Figures, figure legend and tables must be moved after the end of the text. Then figures and tables are cited in the text. Examples: lines 120-122: “Fig 1 Finite element model of the a) intact lumbar spine implanted with two interspinous spacers of (b) DIAM, (c) pedicle screw-based M-rod (M-PEEK) system and (d) Coflex at L2/L3 and L3/L4 segments”. Lines 172-173 & “Fig 2. Difference in ROM as a percentage of the intact model (% of intact) at the implanted and adjacent levels in flexion, extension, axial rotation, and lateral bending” must be moved to Figure legend after the references

Response: The figure legend and tables have been moved after the end of the text in the revised manuscript.

Abstract

Lines 22-23; "Recently, various designs and material manufactured interspinous process devices (IPDs) 23 are on the market in managing symptomatic lumbar spinal pathology" Lumbar spinal pathology should be changed to "Lumbar spinal stenosis".

Response: The term “Lumbar spinal pathology” has been changed to “Lumbar spinal stenosis” in Line 23 in our revised manuscript.

Introduction

Is too long with a lot of repetitions. It must be shortened and concentrate on the aim of the current study.

Response: Thank you for review’s suggestion. The introduction section has been shortened and concentrate on the aim of the current study as our revised manuscript.

Line 85: “..middle spinous process...” what does it mean? Middle in relation to what?

Response: The “..middle spinous process...” means “the intervening spinous process in patients with adjacent, double-level IPDs”. This term has been rewriting as “the intervening spinous process in patients with adjacent, double-level IPDs” in Line 80 and Line 251.

Results

The authors did not perform any statistical testing for their results

Response: The results of ROM or contact force in the specific segmentation or disc of specific model in this study is unique and repeatable when the boundary condition, loading condition and material properties were the same. Therefore, we did not perform any statistical testing for our results.

. Lines 177-178: “..for the Coflex model, the ROM was more variation as compared to the intact model, as depicted in Fig 2 and Table 2.” What is the meaning of this word?

Response: This sentence means the ROM differences between the Coflex and INT models are larger and obviously in lateral bending. In contract, the ROM differences between the DIMA/M-PEEK and INT models are very similar.

. Discussion is long and should be shortened

Response: Thank you for review’s suggestion. The discussion section has been shortened and concentrate on the aim of the current study as our revised manuscript.

. Line 237: “Effect“ is better to be used than “result”

Response: The “but the result on other movements was not significant” has been modified as “but movements on other motions were not significant” in Line 198-199 of our revised manuscript.

. Lines 316-317: “Also, the adjacent segments must compensate more for range of motion when using rigid implants than mobile devices [33] because the use of the hybrid method.” What is the meaning of this word?

Response: With the use of the hybrid method, the moment placed on the fusion segment increases proportionally to the additional adjacent segment motion. Therefore, adjacent segments must compensate more when using rigid implants than mobile devices [33]. The stiffness of the adjacent segments directly impacts the motion distribution among these segments. Due to its nonlinear behavior, the spine offers low resistance to movement when in its neutral position, but gradually stiffens when loaded. This means that the stiff adjacent segments will typically have a lower range of motion than mobile segments. Therefore, even though all segments are subjected to the same loading, the mobility of adjacent segments may vary.

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Decision Letter 1

Osama Farouk

23 Sep 2020

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Effect of different designs of interspinous process devices on the instrumented and adjacent levels after double-level lumbar decompression surgery: A finite element analysis

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The authors have addressed all comments adequately.

Reviewer #2: General comments

English language is poor and must be improved

Introduction

Lines 51-52: “The lumbar interspinous process device (IPD) is based on this principle and is placed at

a symptomatic level to limit the extension of the lumbar spine” What do the authors mean by “this principle”?

Repetitions are still present: authors reported mechanism of action of these IPDs at 3 sites in the Introduction only:

. Lines 51-53: …and is placed at

a symptomatic level to limit the extension of the lumbar spine and maintain a relatively flexible

mobility at the intradiscal level to achieve the goal of symptom relief.

. Lines 57-58; These IPDs are designed to enlarge the canal space and to relieve pain by offloading the

entrapped spinal root nerves and as the intralaminar stabilizer .

. Lines 59-62: Such devices provide significant

improvements in managing the spinal pathology by rapid indirect decompression, and

progressively decrease intradiscal and facet loads, which restores the neuroforaminal spaces

and stabilize the spinal column in different postures

. Lines 71-72: What do the authors mean by “with limited disclosure information” ?

. Line 87: This study aimed to investigate the effect of different designs and material used

of the IPDs in the management of neurological pain due to LSS”

This study did not investigate any point related to effect of these IPD on neurological pain

. The goal of the syudy was not clarified in the “Introduction” but clarified in the “Discussion” Lines 187-190 to be “The goal of this work was to look into

alterations in the biomechanical characteristics of the lumbar spine after implanting an IPD across two adjacent levels and then to compare the significance with a single-levelinstrumented model.” I would recommend that the authors clarify the aim of the work in the “Introduction”

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. Material and Methods

. Lines 188-119: the supraspinous and interspinous ligaments were

preserved in both the DIAM and M-PEEK models. Do this make difference between the models that may affect the results?

The authors must answer this question in the discussion

Conclusions

. “Of the three devices, the Coflex implant resulted in the most limited ROM in extension

and highest annulus stress on adjacent level, which may result in accelerated degeneration of

the adjacent segments as the sandwich phenomenon”.

. What is the relation between the accelerated degenerative process and the fracture of the spinous process of the middle vertebra on applying IPD at 2 adjacent level?

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


7 Nov 2020

Dear Editor and reviewers:

Thank you so much for your work in reviewing this manuscript and your comments are addressed below.

Response to reviewers:

Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed all comments adequately.

Thanks very much for your work in review this manuscript and we have made the changes/corrections you have suggested.

Reviewer #2: General comments

English language is poor and must be improved.

Thank you for these comments. It is good to learn when intended messages do not translate well to the reader due to the English written. we have had a professional scientific editor to proofread and polish this manuscript and adjusted the section on clustering

Introduction

Lines 51-52: “The lumbar interspinous process device (IPD) is based on this principle and is placed at a symptomatic level to limit the extension of the lumbar spine” What do the authors mean by “this principle”?

The “this principle” implies the “decompressive laminectomy with the dorsal decompression procedure” this is the common surgical principle, which addressed in the first paragraph of Introduction. We added “dorsal decompression” to more clarification, at Line 50 (clean MS)

Repetitions are still present: authors reported mechanism of action of these IPDs at 3 sites in the Introduction only:

Lines 51-53: …and is placed at a symptomatic level to limit the extension of the lumbar spine and maintain a relatively flexible mobility at the intradiscal level to achieve the goal of symptom relief.

Lines 57-58; These IPDs are designed to enlarge the canal space and to relieve pain by offloading the entrapped spinal root nerves and as the intralaminar stabilizer.

Lines 59-62: Such devices provide significant improvements in managing the spinal pathology by rapid indirect decompression, and progressively decrease intradiscal and facet loads, which restores the neuroforaminal spaces and stabilize the spinal column in different postures.

Thanks your comment, the three paragraphs were attempted to address the mechanism of IPD, it did sound redundant we have rewritten this paragraph and coincide the sentences as shown at Line 50 to 56

Lines 71-72: What do the authors mean by “with limited disclosure information” ?

The FDA approved the surgical procedure limited to two segments only, however, some surgeons might have over two-level implication without revealing in available literatures. We have deleted the words to avoid the confuse adding.

Line 87: This study aimed to investigate the effect of different designs and material used of the IPDs in the management of neurological pain due to LSS” This study did not investigate any point related to effect of these IPD on neurological pain. The goal of the study was not clarified in the “Introduction” but clarified in the “Discussion” Lines 187-190 to be “The goal of this work was to look into alterations in the biomechanical characteristics of the lumbar spine after implanting an IPD across two adjacent levels and then to compare the significance with a single level instrumented model.” I would recommend that the authors clarify the aim of the work in the “Introduction”.

Thanks, your valued suggestion, the aim of the work had been moved from Discussion section and clarified in the Introduction section in our revised manuscript. In addition, the effect of IPDs on neurological pain was also removed from the goal of this work.

Material and Methods

Lines 188-119: the supraspinous and interspinous ligaments were preserved in both the DIAM and M-PEEK models. Do this make difference between the models that may affect the results? The authors must answer this question in the discussion.

As indicated at Line 107, due to design consideration and following real surgical procedures, in the Coflex surgical procedure, the supraspinous and interspinous ligaments have to dissect in order to insert the implant.

As far as the contribution of the motion restrain of the ISL and SSL, the Young modulus in this study are 10 and 8 Mpa for ISL and SSL, respectively. Which is very small value in comparison with the cortical bone and implants. Literatures revealed that lumbar intervertebral disc and facet joints are the major load carrier during the functional unit motion. Our results revealed that this difference between Coflex and DIAM/M-PEEK affected the ROM in flexion. The ROM of instrumented levels in Coflex model in flexion was higher than DIAM model, removing the supraspinous and interspinous ligaments might be one of the factors, but the dimension and location of the implant as the pivot of extension could be the major cause. Nevertheless, it did not affect our main findings of adjacent level problems and a fracture of the spinous process. In addition, this is also a limitation in this study to have identical ligaments constraints in each model. Thank you for the comment and your inquiry was addressed in the discussion of this study, starting at the Line 257-265.

Conclusions

“Of the three devices, the Coflex implant resulted in the most limited ROM in extension and highest annulus stress on adjacent level, which may result in accelerated degeneration of the adjacent segments as the sandwich phenomenon”. What is the relation between the accelerated degenerative process and the fracture of the spinous process of the middle vertebra on applying IPD at 2 adjacent level?

So far there is no study reveals the relationship between degeneration of the adjacent segments and the sandwich phenomenon on spinous process. This statement had been rewritten as “Of the three devices, the Coflex implant shows the limited ROM at the instrumented level but compensating larger ROM at the two adject segments. In combined with highest annulus stress on adjacent level, which may accelerate the degeneration of the adjacent segments.” in Conclusion section in our revised manuscript. Staring line 275-277

Thank you again for all your comments. They have helped us develop the manuscript considerably.

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Osama Farouk

14 Dec 2020

Effect of different designs of interspinous process devices on the instrumented and adjacent levels after double-level lumbar decompression surgery: A finite element analysis

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