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. 2020 Dec 30;15(12):e0244561. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0244561

Temperament and sexual behaviour in the Furrowed Wood Turtle Rhinoclemmys areolata

Francesca Maura Cassola 1, Yann Henaut 1,*, José Rogelio Cedeño-Vázquez 1, Fausto Roberto Méndez-de la Cruz 2, Benjamín Morales-Vela 1
Editor: Cheryl S Rosenfeld3
PMCID: PMC7773281  PMID: 33378375

Abstract

The variation in temperament among animals has consequences for evolution and ecology. One of the primary effects of consistent behavioral differences is on reproduction. In chelonians some authors have focused on the study of temperament using different methods. In our research our first aim was i) establish a methodology to determine the degree of boldness among individuals Rhinoclemmys areolata. Our second aim was to ii) determine the role boldness plays during reproduction, with emphasis on courtship and copulation, considering a) the interactions between males and females, and b) competition between males. We used 16 sexually mature individuals of each sex. Males were observed in four different situations and 17 behavioral traits were recorded. We selected 12 traits that allowed us distinguish between the bolder and the shier individuals and found that five behavioral traits were specific for bolder individuals and five others for shier individuals. In a second step, we observed a male in presence of a female and recorded courtship behaviors and breeding attempts. Bolder individuals did not display courtship behaviors and just attempted to copulate. Shier individuals displayed courtship behaviors and copulation attempts were rarely observed. Finally, in the simulations that compared two males in the presence of a female we noticed that bolder individuals displayed courtship behaviors while the shier ones simply ignored the female. Our results first allowed us to determine which methodology is the best to determine temperament in turtles. Secondly, temperament seems to be an important factor in modulating interaction between males and females. Bolder individuals have an advantage during competition and display courtship behaviours only if other males are present. Shier males displayed courtship behaviors and only try to copulate when no competitors were present. These two different temperament-dependant strategies are discussed in terms of ecology, evolution and management.

Introduction

Inter-individual behavioral differences in an animal species are consistent or largely maintained over time and in diverse situations [1] and sometimes between one population and the other [2]. These differences are termed “temperament”, “behavioral syndrome” or “reactivity” [1,3,4] by scientists. They have been attributed to the combined influences of genetic, social and environmental factors that influence the behavior of an individual [5], varying in correlation with the physiology of the animal [6,7] leading to mediate the response of an individual in different ecological situations [8].

Animal behavioral differences can have important implications for fitness [9,10] and have been shown to influence ecological processes such as dispersion, invasion, response to climate change and risk of extinction [1113]. There is a high probability that temperament has a significant influence on the way in which animals respond to new environments (for example, new exhibitions or retention areas), to familiar and unfamiliar conspecifics, to strangers of other species, and to changes in their environment, affecting social compatibility, stability and success of a group [14]. Animal behavior and temperament can influence breeding capacity by directly connecting to a successful match (coupling success) or the number and viability of offspring produced (reproductive success) by the individuals [1517]. Since temperament affects the way in which individuals react to difficult situations, it can be predicted how a male can compete, select and be compatible with a sexual partner. Therefore, variations in individual behavior are a source of information in the field of sexual selection and reproductive success [9,18].

Individuals may systematically differ in one or more temperament traits, such as boldness, aggressiveness, reactivity, sociability, exploration or activity levels [1]. A feature that has been extensively studied in the field of temperament is boldness, defined as the inclination of individuals to explore their environment and take risks in a new situation [19]. Boldness and shyness are considered as a continuum [20,21], at one extreme we find shier individuals and on the opposite side the bolder ones.

This spectrum appears to have an adaptive explanation in terms of costs and benefits, related to the type of response to a risk. In general, bolder individuals tend to be more active, feed more often and in risky areas as they are more likely to explore and move away from safe and well-known locations [22]. This temperament, however, leads to an increased risk of encountering predators [23] and exposing themselves to parasites [24], decreasing their survival rate. On the other hand, shy individuals engage in an opposite strategy giving primary importance to survival over reproductive productivity. This implies that this temperament tries to achieve a balance between survival and other needs of the species [21].

There are few studies addressing the relationship between success of couples and behavioral compatibility. Knowledge on these individual differences provides essential information for captivity management and animal welfare [14,21]. For example, it allows us to understand why some individuals have reproductive problems in captivity and why they fail to satisfy their reproductive potential, even if they are physically and physiologically in health [25]. A few years ago individuals suitable for mating were chosen based on their hypothetical genetic compatibility [26,27], their state of health [28] and / or stages of life history [29,30]. However, couples who represent a good genetic combination do not necessarily produce offspring, and behavioral incompatibility is often cited for this failure [3134]. One way in which animal temperament can influence mating probability is through the effects associated with behavioral compatibility—the way individuals interact with each other [15]. When animals are paired for reproduction, some temperaments may be compatible, while others may be in conflict [14,35,36]. There are, for example, cases where behavioral similarity is the key to reproductive success, as in the case of zebra finches (Taeniopygia guttata) and cockatiels (Nymphicus hollandicus) [37,38]; while, in other species, different or even opposite temperaments can attain high reproductive performances as in the giant panda (Ailuropoda melanoleuca) and the black rhino (Diceros bocornis) [15,25,39].

Recently, boldness has been studied in aquatic turtles. The recognition between males and the reduction of competitive interactions are related to the boldness of males [40]. They showed that the response to chemical stimuli of known or unknown males of the Mediterranian Turtle Mauremys leprosa, depends on the level of boldness, in particular the shiest males are those who avoid encountering other males, of the same or different species contributing to the stabilization of social systems and reducing the frequency and intensity of aggressive encounters between males. Different methods are used to evaluate temperament in turtles. Reactivity level is measured using the straightening response, which is the time it takes for an individual to become upright after being turned upside down on its carapace [41]. A similar method has been used to study anti-predator responses in the European pond turtle Emys orbicularis [42]. Another method consists in placing individuals in a new environment: here, the latency to move from an initial position in an arena was used to evaluate exploration in the red-eared slider turtle Trachemys scripta [43] and in the Eastern hermann Eurotestudo boettgeri [44]. The presentation of a threatening stimuli was used to measure reactivity and the effect of new objects on investigative behaviors while researching exploration in the Agassiz´s desert tortoise (Gopherus agassizii) [4]. Boldness in the Eastern box turtle (Terrapene carolina) was evaluated by recording the time taken to emerge from the shell and to move after a short period of confinement [45]. Evidently, there are diverse methods applicable to turtles; however, none of the aforementioned studies tried to apply more than one method to a single species. Therefore, a unique methodology for the study of boldness in turtles is still lacking.

Unfortunately, there is very little research that specifically addresses how temperament may be related to the reproductive behavior of turtles, particularly its influence on male competition behavior, courtship and coupling. Thus, the aims of this study were to (i) determine the temperament of Rhinoclemmys areolata and provide a method that not only ascertains temperament for this species but also other species of terrestrial turtle (ii) understand if its temperament could be a factor in modulating the interaction between male and female, and (iii) between males during competition for a female.

Materials and methods

Ethical statement

The investigation was carried out in compliance with the institutional ethical standards and norms in force. All the animals come from private loans from the city of Chetumal (Quintana Roo–Mexico). Verbal consent was requested from the owners, and it was explained how the turtles would be used and for what objective. The individuals on loan were destined exclusively for specific research purposes, respecting all known needs for animal welfare, and were returned to their owners at the end of the data collection.

We were in possession of the permit N ° SGPA / DGVS / 002491/18 issued by Secretaria de Medio Ambiente y Recursos Naturales (SEMARNAT) for the collection of this species.

Experimental protocol was approved by Ethical Committee from the “El Colegio de la Frontera Sur”, Mexico.

Object of study

For the experiment, we used 16 males and 16 females of the furrowed wood turtle Rhinoclemmys areolata, all sexually mature. This species occurs in Yucatán Peninsula, Cozumel Island, Northern Guatemala, Belize, Northwestern Honduras, where it inhabits savannah, thorny scrub, broad-leaved forests, swampy and gouache areas [46]. It is used as a pet, for food and traditional medicine [47]. It is listed as Near-threatened by the IUCN Red List [48]. It is also known as “Chak pool” or “Mojina” [47]. It is characterized by 1 to 2 red, orange or yellow stripes on the top of the head, and the plastron is yellow with a dark spot of variable size (Fig 1). It presents a low level of sexual dimorphism, males having a longer and thinner tail than females, and also having a slightly more concave plastron; however, this is characteristic is not always detectable (Fig 2). It is a terrestrial species, whose only connection with the aquatic environment is during courtship and copulation, although this information solely derives from two anecdotic observations events where the individuals were kept in pools without the presence of a large terrestrial environment [49,50]. Courtship and copulation could be induced by spraying the individuals with water [46].

Fig 1. Details of Rhinoclemmys areolata morphology.

Fig 1

Fig 2. Detail of female (left) and male (right).

Fig 2

Differences between the tails (red arrow) are visible; females have a shorter and thicker tail, while males have a longer and thinner one.

Turtles’ management and setup

Individuals of Rhinoclemmys areolata were kept within a 16 x 5 m enclosure, located in the facilities of El Colegio de la Frontera del Sur (ECOSUR) Unidad Chetumal (18° 32'37.4''N, 88° 15 ' 48.0''W). The area was fenced and divided into two parts of approximately the same size (5 x 8 m) containing male and female individuals, respectively. This division prevented any reproductive activity in the absence of the observer. It also ensured that the female did not store semen and therefore be less reactive to males. Females from some species of turtle are able to retain vital sperm for up to 4 years; however, it is not yet clear in which species, therefore we cannot dismiss that it could also occur in R. areolata [51].

The area inside the fence resembled as close as possible the natural habitat of R. areolata, by maintaining the presence of trees, foliage, natural soil and adding water sites (Fig 3).

Fig 3. Captive living area of Rhinoclemmys areolata at the ECOSUR campus.

Fig 3

Turtles were fed with fruit, vegetables and meat on alternate days. Inside the maintenance area, they were free to move, to find refuge and bathe in small pools. The water in the maintenance area was changed daily. They were subject to natural temperatures and rainfall for as long as they were inside the area in order to sustain optimum environmental conditions for their welfare.

All simulations were performed in a mobile enclosed area (2 x 2 m) (Fig 4). Each simulation was recorded through two cameras (YiLiteCam and Motorola Camera). The first video camera was positioned above the observation area while the second was moved manually by the observer in the event that details of specific events were required. There were no food or small pools in the experimental area that could have had an effect on turtle behavior [41].

Fig 4. Observation area viewed from the side and above.

Fig 4

Each simulation took place in the open air, on sunny days and during the hours of maximum turtle activity (8.30am-11.30am and 05.30pm—06.30pm) when temperatures were not very high.

Animals were separated after each observation session to avoid any additional intersexual interactions in absence of the observer. The observation area was moved to an adjacent area after each simulation to reduce the time elapsed between experiments and the recovery time for environmental conditions; subsequently a new group of turtles was placed into the observation area in order to repeat the simulation.

Experiments

Determination of temperament of Rhinoclemmys areolate

It was necessary to identify stable behavioral traits over time and in different situations. For this aim,16 males were observed individually and in isolation in four different situations:

  • Reaction to manipulation: a male is removed from confinement and handled briefly for 1 minute.

  • Reaction to risk of predation: a male is removed from confinement, handled briefly and gently released in an overturned position, that is, on his carapace.

  • Reaction to a new environment: a male is taken from the confinement and released into the experimental area unknown to the individual. (30min)

  • Reaction to the introduction of a new object: a male is removed from confinement, released into the experimental area and, after 5 minutes, an unknown object is suddenly presented (stuffed dog-like animal). (30min)

In order to organize males according to their level of boldness-shyness we: (i) extrapolated behavioral events of each simulation from video recordings, (ii) converted them into variables, (iii) defined occurrence (= 1) and absence (= 0) of each event obtaining binomial values; (iv) defined frequency and (v) time in seconds when possible, obtaining quantitative values; (vi) for the latter, the moment an abrupt change of slope occurred within the data range was recorded, allowing the classification of males as shy or bold (S1 Table).

Each event was considered as a variable and inserted into an Excel sheet. A boldness index was given to each male, dividing the sum of “occurrences” of variables that could describe a bold temperament by the total number of variables. This analysis allowed us to classify individuals into groups, according to their degree of boldness.

Subsequently, variables were analysed using a correlation matrix and the obtained values were inserted into a multidimensional scaling (MDS) that enabled the creation of a map showing relative positions between different events and relative distances.

Finally, a Mann-Whitney test was applied to determine which variables were significant in determining temperament.

Before initiating interaction experiments, we tested the influence of turtle length (that is considered a good indication of the age of each individual) on temperament. We implemented this test to ensure that our results were not the consequence of turtle size or age. Both groups obtained were analysed in relation to straight carapace length (SCL) and straight plastron length (SPL) by applying a Mann-Whitney test (S2 Table).

Temperament as a modulating factor during the interaction between male and female

16 groups of turtles consisting of one male and one female were created randomly. Each couple was released, sequentially, within the experimental area, each individual inside a metal box. They were soaked with water using an artificial sprayer to promote reproductive behavior and later freed to move around for 30 minutes.

For this experiment, the same individuals were not used more than once.

Each group remained sequentially in the experimental arena and was carefully observed.

As for the first simulations, we (i) extrapolated behavioral events from each simulation, (ii) converted them into variables, (iii) defined occurrence (= 1) and absence (= 0) of each event obtaining binomial values; (iv) defined frequency and (v) time in seconds when possible, obtaining quantitative values; (vi) for the latter, the moment an abrupt change of slope occurred within the data range was recorded (S3 and S4 Tables).

Each event was considered as a variable and inserted into an Excel sheet. Variables were analysed using a correlation matrix and the obtained values were inserted into a multidimensional scaling (MDS) allowing the creation of a map showing relative positions between different events and relative distances.

Temperament as a modulating factor during the competitive interaction between males in the presence of a female

Eight experimental groups were randomly created, each consisting of two males and one female. For this experiment, the same individuals were only used once.

The individuals were placed equidistant within the experimental area, soaked with water using an artificial sprayer to promote reproductive behavior and released to move around for 30 minutes.

Each group remained in the experimental area and was carefully observed.

As for the first simulations, we (i) extrapolated behavioral events from each simulation, (ii) converted them into variables, (iii) defined occurrence (= 1) and absence (= 0) of each event obtaining binomial values; (iv) defined frequency and (v) time in seconds when possible, obtaining quantitative values; (vi) for the latter, the moment an abrupt change of slope occurred within the data range was recorded (S5 and S6 Tables).

Each event was considered as a variable and inserted into an Excel sheet. Variables were analysed using a correlation matrix and the obtained values were inserted into a multidimensional scaling (MDS) that allowed the creation of a map showing relative positions between different events and relative distances.

Results

Determination of temperament of Rhinoclemmys areolata

Of 17 behavioral traits observed (S1 Table), we selected 12 for study (Table 1). For each male, the presence or absence of each of these traits was defined (Table 2). For this study, we used “bolder” and “shier” terms instead of “bold” and “shy” since boldness is a continuous spectrum and it is not possible to create sharp and fixed fractures for group definition.

Table 1. Variables selected for simulations, subdivision used in correlation analysis and multidimensional scaling with relative abbreviation.

Variable Subdivision for analysis Abbreviation
Kicking during manipulation (KM) Fast kicking FK
Slow kicking SK
Neck stretched during manipulation (NeSM) Yes neck stretched manipulation YNeSM
No neck stretched manipulation NoNeSM
Hiding inside shell during manipulation (HSM) Yes hide shell manipulation YHSM
No hide shell manipulation NoHSM
Neck retracted during manipulation (NeRM) Yes neck retracted manipulation YNeRM
No neck retracted manipulation NoNeRM
Straightening time during predation (STP) High straightening time predation HSTPr
Low straightening time predation LSTPr
Hiding inside shell during predation (HSP) Yes hide shell predation YHSPr
No hide shell predation NoHSPr
Walking time in a new environment (WTNE) High walking time new environment HWTNE
Low walking time new environment LWTNE
Hiding in a new environment (HNE) Yes hide new environment YHNE
No hide new environment NoHNE
Quiet time in new environment (QTNE) High quiet time new environment HQTNE
Low quiet time new environment LQTNE
Crossing a new environment (CrNE) Yes cross area YCrNE
No cross area NoCrNE
Exploration of stuffed toy (ExST) Yes exploring stuffed toy YExST
No exploring stuffed toy NoExST
Exploring time stuffed toy (ExST) High time exploring stuff toy HExST
Low time exploring stuffed toy LExST

Table 2. Presence (= 1) or absence (= 0) of variables selected for simulation and boldness index values.

Turtle Name Sum variables Boldness Index KM NeSM HSM NeRM STD HSPr WTNE HNE QTNE CrNE ExST ExTST
Alfredo 9 0,75 1 1 1 1 1 0 0 1 0 1 1 1
Benedicto 12 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
Carlos 8 0,67 1 1 1 1 1 0 0 1 1 1 0 0
Hector 8 0,67 1 1 1 0 1 0 1 1 1 0 1 0
Nestor 8 0,67 1 1 1 1 0 0 1 1 1 1 0 0
Erik 7 0,58 0 0 0 0 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 0
Garry 7 0,58 0 1 0 0 1 0 1 1 1 0 1 1
John 10 0,83 0 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 0
Oliver 8 0,67 1 0 1 0 1 0 1 1 1 1 1 0
Francesco 5 0,41 1 1 1 0 0 0 0 1 1 0 0 0
Kevin 3 0,25 0 0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 1
Marc 5 0,41 1 1 1 1 0 0 0 1 0 0 0 0
Patricio 3 0,25 0 0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 1
Denis 6 0,5 1 1 1 0 1 0 0 1 0 1 0 0
Ian 6 0,5 1 1 1 1 1 1 0 0 0 0 0 0
Lorenzo 5 0,41 1 0 1 0 1 1 0 0 0 0 1 0

In grey background color the individuals considered bolder, in white those considered shier.

In order to create two groups for the following experiments, we considered all turtles with an index less than or equal to 0.5 as shier, while those with an index greater than 0.5 bolder. As a result, individuals were divided into 9 bolder and 7 shier males (Table 2).

Straight carapace length and straight plastron length did not show a significant relationship with temperament (Carapace: Mann-Whitney U test: U = 20, P = 0.25; Plastron: Mann-Whitney U test: U = 19, P = 0.21) (S7 Table).

Rearranging the variables according to presence, frequency and times (Table 1), and through the multidimensional scaling, we obtained a total of 10 variables: five correlated with the shiest individuals and five associated with the boldest individuals (Fig 5).

Fig 5. Distribution of the variables (behaviors) of the individuals.

Fig 5

The red circle shows variables associated with the boldest individuals; the blue circle identifies behaviors associated with the shiest ones.

These variables were characteristic of the shier turtles: (i) hiding in a new environment, (ii) not crossing a new environment, (iii) a high duration of quiet time in a new environment, (iv) high straightening time during predation, and (v) low walking time in a new environment. Variables for boldest turtles were: (i) not hiding in a new environment, (ii) cross a new environment, (iii) low quiet time in a new environment, (iv) low straightening time during predation, and (v) high walking time in a new environment (Fig 5). Four of those variables were also statistically significant for the discrimination of the two groups (Fig 6, S8 Table).

Fig 6. Mean values and standard errors of the four significant binomial variables.

Fig 6

High time walking new environment, Bolder: mean±SE = 0,78±0,1, Shier: mean±SE = 0±0, Mann-Whitney U test: U = 7, p = 0.00*3; Not hiding new environment, Bolder: mean±SE = 1±0, Shier: mean±SE = 0,43±0,2, Mann-Whitney U test: U = 13,5, p = 0.013*; Low time quiet new environment, Bolder: mean±SE = 0,89±0,1, Shier: mean±SE = 0,14±0,14, Mann-Whitney U test: U = 37, p = 0.004*; Cross new environment, Bolder: mean±SE = 0,78±0,14, Shier: mean±SE = 0,14±0,1, Mann-Whitney U test: U = 37, p = 0.017*.

Temperament as a modulating factor during the interaction between male and female

As results for the relation between temperaments and male and female interaction, we observed behaviors linked with courtship and others with mating.

Regarding courtship, we determined 16 behaviors (S3 Table), but we only used 11 for the analysis, excluding behaviors showed by most of the individuals and those that did not present any differences between groups.

We determined if the behaviors occurred or not and how often to obtain their frequency (low or high) (Table 3). We observed that the following traits corresponded to shier individuals (Fig 7): (i) pushing the female, (ii) blocking the female, (iii) frontal approach with stretched legs and retracted neck (iv) pushing the ground with front leg, (v) approaching when excited. On the other hand, some bolder turtles did not show courtship behavior while in others this was not very frequent. Bolder individuals displayed the following behaviours: (i) do not block the female, (ii) do not push it, (iii) do not approach excitedly, (iv) do not walk backwards, (v) low frequency of frontal approach with stretched legs and extended neck (Fig 7).

Table 3. Courtship behaviors obtained from simulations male vs female, subdivision used in correlation analysis and multi-dimensional scale with relative abbreviation.

Variable Subdivision
Frontal approach with stretched legs and stretched neck High Frequency (HFASLSN)
Low Frequency (LFASLSN)
No Approach (NoFASLSN)
Frontal approach with stretched legs and retracted neck High Frequency (HFASLRN)
Low Frequency (LFASLRN)
No Approach (NoFASLRN)
Cross snouts High Frequency (HCrS)
Low Frequency (LCrS)
No Cross (NoCrS)
Push ground with front leg High Frequency (HPGL)
Low Frequency (LPGL)
No Push (NoPGL)
Block female Yes Blocking (YBlock)
No Blocking (NoBlock)
Pushing female Yes Pushing (YPush)
No Pushing (NoPush)
Walk backwards High Frequency (HWB)
Low Frequency (LWB)
No Walk (NoWB)
Excited male is approaching Yes excited male (YEMA)
No excited male (NoEMA)
Quiet male explores surroundings Yes Explore (YQMExp)
No Explore (NoQMExp)
Cloaca sniffing High Frequency (HCS)
Low Frequency (LCS)
Remote tracking Yes Remote (YRT)
No Remote (NoRT)

Fig 7. Distribution of courtship variables (behaviors) of the male individuals.

Fig 7

The red curve includes variables associated with the boldest individuals; the blue curve congregates behaviors associated with the shiest individuals.

Four behaviors (Table 4, S4 Table) were observed for mating. None of these behaviors was displayed by the shiest individuals, while the boldest were more associated with intent of mounts, and mount at high frequency (Fig 8, S1 Video).

Table 4. Mating behaviors obtained from simulations male vs female, subdivision used in correlation analysis and multi-dimensional scale with relative abbreviation.

Variable Subdivision
Neck stimulation High Frequency (HNS)
Low Frequency LNS)
No Stimulation (NoNS)
Mount attempt High Frequency (HMA)
Low Frequency (LMA)
No Mount attempt (NoMA)
Coitus Yes Coitus (YCo)
No Coitus (NoCo)
Mount High Frequency (HM)
Low Frequency (LM)
No Mount (NoM)

Fig 8. Distribution of mating variables (behaviors) of the male individuals.

Fig 8

The red curve encompasses variables associated with the boldest individuals; the blue curve includes behaviors associated with the shiest individuals.

Temperament as a modulating factor during the competitive interaction between males in the presence of a female

We obtained 12 behaviors related to courtship (Table 5, S5 Table). We considered the temperament of the two males together with a female and observed that courting variables are concentrated around the boldest regardless the temperament of their opponent (Fig 9). In contrast, the shiest individuals did not display particular behaviors with the exception of blocking the female during tracking (Fig 9) (S2 Video).

Table 5. Courtship behaviors obtained from simulations male vs male vs female used in correlation analysis and multi-dimensional scale with relative abbreviation.

Variable Abbreviation
Approaching cloaca AC
Stretching neck towards female SN
Cloaca sniffing CS
Lateral sniffing LS
Tracking T
Quiet alongside female Q
Bite Bi
Blocking female Bl
Lean leg to female LL
Walk backwards WB
Push female PF
Push ground with leg PGL

Fig 9. Distribution of courtship variables (behaviors) of the individuals.

Fig 9

The red circle delimits variables that are highly associated with the boldest competing males; the yellow circle encompasses those highly associated with a bold male competing with a shy individual; the green ellipse includes behaviors associated with the boldest individual regardless of competitor.

Discussion

A variety of methods were used separately to determine temperament in aquatic and terrestrial turtles [4,4145]. This is the first paper that tests all of these methods. In this study, we tested reaction to: manipulation, predation risk, a new environment and the introduction of a novel object with the aim of finding consistency, to determine accurately behaviors and in consequence the best method to define the level of boldness in turtles. Behaviors observed in a new environment appear to be the most reliable for determining boldness in turtles: hiding and limited walk for the shiest, quiet (shiest) or not quiet (boldest), walking frequently and crossing the new environment for the boldest. These results coincide with two previous works [43,44].

The test with the risk of predation also demonstrates that the time taken to straighten is associated with boldness, as observed in previous studies [41,42].

Our work focused only on males, and determining temperament in females or juveniles may be different even though the exploration of a new environment may be comparable irrespective of the sex and age of turtles that generally share the same life strategy. Therefore, to assure that behaviors associated with the reaction to a new environment can provide an improved method, we suggest further studies that examine this in females and juveniles.

An interesting element that emerges in this study is the modulation of males´ behavior.

When a bold male is alone with a female, he often skips courtship behaviors to devote himself to stimulating the female for mounting and mating; when the same male is found in the presence of another conspecific male, a potential sexual competitor, he first engages in courtship behaviors towards the female. A similar result has been observed in the common water strider Aquarius remiges (Gerridae, Insecta), where the most active and aggressive males spend most of their time searching for a female as well as presenting the highest copulation rates [52]. In the common lizard Zootoca vivipara (Lacertidae, Reptilia), males’ behavior together with the predatory context influence the mating preference of the females. Those that have not been exposed to predatory signals prior to mating, mate more often with more active males. If, on the other hand, these have been subjected to predatory signals, they tend to choose less active males that are more likely to have a longer life expectancy and to avoid the more active males in order to increase the survival of their offspring in an environment with risk of predation [53]. In our simulations, mating attempts of shier males were very rare; when the shier turtle is in presence of a competitor and a female, it ignores the female. In summary, the boldest individuals court females, but only if another male is present; otherwise these males immediately mount and attempt to copulate. Shier males will only court if other males are absent; even then mating is rare. This kind of behavior in the presence of a competitor was observed in Mauremys leprosa where responses to chemicals cues depended on boldness; in particular, shy turtles avoided chemical cues from familiar and unfamiliar bolder males [41]. However, it is possible shier animals require more time to display courtship and mating behavior. Therefore, we can argue that the degree of boldness can influence males’ reproductive behavior, in decision making and their reaction according to the situation. In terms of costs and benefits, boldness can be considered a factor that allows individuals to evaluate how to act during courtship and mating considering the presence of conspecifics of both sexes. Shier turtles could avoid injuries and the possibility of losing energy when a bolder male is competing. In our experimental contexts, we could not directly observe injury phenomena between males; however, in other experiments, we have observed that males have bitten each other when trying to approach the same female. In other species, male competition could be very costly because of fights, injuries, territory care and predatory danger during courtship. Some reptiles avoid or reduce their response to such competition and could provide an alternative strategy to prevent damage and predator costs, as shown in the Iberian wall lizard Podarcis hispanica, which uses chemical cues during competitive matches to recognize competitors and reduce fight intensity and resulting costs [54]. The success of different strategies dependent on temperament is to some extent subject to environmental constraints such as the presence of predators as observed for other animals [1]. For example, the broadhead skink Eumeces (Plestiodon) laticeps shows a sensitivity in predation risk during reproductive opportunities: when females were present, isolated and mate-guarding males initiate courtship, but isolated males permitted closer approach by a predator than did mate-guarding males. Furthermore, there is a high level of latency displayed by isolated males when a predator is close to the female, allowing them to balance predation risk with courtship behavior [55].

Researchers have already discussed that behavior plays a key role in animal survival and evolution, behavioral traits can help species to adapt to rapid changes in the environment [56], and survive to natural selection [57] as much as morphological and physiological traits. Differences in sexual behavior related to boldness or other behavioral traits can be an honest signal of mate quality [58]. Therefore, identifying these behavioral traits that can affect population viability is important to provide helpful information to integrate conservation plans [59].

The information obtained in this study represents an important tool for the conservation of reptiles and in particular for land turtles. Worldwide, turtles represent one of the vertebrate groups with the highest risk of extinction [60]. In recent years, many researchers have ensured the importance of not only increasing the behavioral information of the species, but also implementing these data in their conservation and monitoring strategies [14,61].

Assumptions have been made in the past about the likely relationship between temperament and reproductive behaviors [62], but to our best knowledge, this is the first work that formalizes it experimentally for land turtles.

The achievements in this study can be used as a first step for compatibility plans for turtles, in order to combine temperament traits that may contribute to successful breeding couples [14].

Temperament studies in couple compatibility have significant implications in ex situ conservation programs, since specific traits (such as aggressiveness and fear) have been related to reproductive success in some species raised in zoos [15]. In addition, certain temperaments may be more likely to thrive in captive environments, artificial selection for or against specific temperament traits may accelerate domestication processes, making animals raised for conservation less suitable for release in wildlife [32].

Our research showed that bolder males need less time to mount and mate, with perhaps higher fitness than shier ones.

Another application of our findings is the possibility of conserving the whole range of boldness. Considering behavioral variation, it is important to preserve boldness since it allows conservationists to reintroduce animals with all behavioural traits, giving them proper tools to survive in novel environments [57]. Considering this, in order to not to lose the behavioral pool during captive reproduction, we must be aware of the needs of different individuals. Therefore, our study demonstrates that shy turtles probably need more time for mating and need to be alone with the female, otherwise they lose interest. For the boldest animals, the necessary times are lower and they are potentially able to reproduce even with the presence of conspecifics.

Supporting information

S1 Table. List of responses found in behavioral simulation (occurrence = 1, absence = 0), with relative abbreviation and subdivision applied for statistical analysis.

The first column shows the names of each individual, bolder individuals have a grey backgrounds while those considered shier have white.

(DOCX)

S2 Table. Straight carapace and straight plastron length measurements of each male turtle.

Individuals considered bolder have grey backgrounds while those considered shier have white.

(DOCX)

S3 Table. List of courtship behaviors during male and female simulation (occurrence = 1, absence = 0), with relative abbreviation and subdivision applied for statistical analysis.

The first column shows the names of each individual. Bolder individuals have grey backgrounds while shier individuals have white.

(DOCX)

S4 Table. List of mating behaviors during male and female simulation (occurrence = 1, absence = 0), with relative abbreviation and subdivision applied for statistical analysis.

The first column shows the names of each individual, bolder individuals have grey backgrounds while shier have white.

(DOCX)

S5 Table. List of courtship behavior during male vs male competition in presence of female (occurrence = 1, absence = 0), with relative abbreviation and subdivision applied for statistical analysis.

The first column shows the names of each individual, bolder individuals have red backgrounds while shier have blue. Columns 2,3,4 and 5 indicate pairs by temperament (BB = boldVSbold, BS = boldVSshy, SS = shyVSshy, SB = shyVSbold).

(DOCX)

S6 Table. List of mating behavior during male vs male competition in presence of female (occurrence = 1, absence = 0), with relative abbreviation and subdivision applied for statistical analysis.

In the first column, there are names of each individual, in grey background color the bolder and in white the shier. Columns 2,3,4 and 5 indicate pairs by temperament (BB = boldVSbold, BS = boldVSshy, SS = shyVSshy, SB = shyVSbold).

(DOCX)

S7 Table. Statistical results of Mann-Whitney test on length measurements.

(DOCX)

S8 Table. Statistical results of Mann-Whitney test on variables selected for boldness index, significant variables are indicated by *.

(DOCX)

S1 Video. Shy courtship and bold mount.

(MP4)

S2 Video. Shy and bold male in presence of a female.

Shy male is walking around the arena while bold male courtships the female.

(M4V)

Acknowledgments

We would like to thank the citizens of Chetumal who gave and loaned individuals of R. areolata for this research; José Alberto García Angulo for his help in the design and construction of the turtle maintenance and observation areas; Dr. Gabriele Gheza, Martina Anna Belli and Antonin Mareš for their help in grammatical and linguistic revision.

We would like to express special thanks to Dr David Crews, who has critically read our manuscript, providing useful and substantial comments that have allowed us to improve our work.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

CFM and CVJR. El Colegio de la Frontera del Sur and CONACYT-OEA-AMEXCID scholarship program for the funds needed to cover expenses for data collection and specimen maintenance.

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Temperament and sexual behaviour in the Furrowed Wood Turtle Rhinoclemmys areolata

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2) To answer the editor comments about ethical statements (points 2, 3, 4, 5, 6), in the ethical declaration we added the following paragraph:

“All the animals come from private loans of the city of Chetumal (Quintana Roo – Mexico). Verbal consent was requested from the owners, and it was explained how the turtles would be used and for what objective. The individuals on loan were destined exclusively for specific research purposes, respecting all known needs for animal welfare, and were returned to their owners at the end of the data collection.

We were in possession of the permit N ° SGPA / DGVS / 002491/18 issued by Secretaria de Medio Ambiente y Recursos Naturales (SEMARNAT) for the collection of this species.”

3) Page 18 line 325: in Materials and Methods we corrected the mistake in the table caption, it was a typing error.

4) Pages 30-32 lines 581-620: We added the captions for supporting information files.

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Short Title

6) Page 1 Line 10: we deleted the short tittle after we revised Plos One style requirements (see Editor comments).

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7) Page 2 Lines 29-31: According to the reviewer comment, we changed the phrase “Finally, we observed two males in presence of one female and noticed that bolder individuals then displayed courtship behaviors while the shier just ignore the female.” with “Finally, in the simulations that compared two males in the presence of a female we noticed that bolder individuals showed courtship behaviors while the more shy ones simply ignored the female.” The change was made because the result does not come from a single anecdote as the previous sentence suggested, but from multiple individuals and repetitions.

8) Page 2 Lines 34-35: following the previous correction this sentence should now coincide with results from multiple experiments and not just one, as it previously seemed.

9) Page 2 line 48: we deleted the Key Word after we revised Plos One style requirements (see Editor comments).

Introduction

10) Page 3 line 44-45: as suggested by the reviewer we suppressed the term personality considered as anthropomorphic and controversial. Also, as suggested, we mentioned now the term “reactivity” and suppressed “permanently”.

11) Page 3 line 54: we changed “breed” with “breeding” as suggested by the reviewer.

12) Page 3 line 56: as suggested by the reviewer we added the citation “Gowaty PA, Drickamer LC, Schmid-Holmes S. Male house mice produce fewer offspring with lower viability and poorer performance when mated with females they do not prefer. Anim. Behav. 2003;65: 95-103”.

13) Page 3 line 59: as suggested by the reviewer we added the citation “Ah‐King, M., & Gowaty, P. A. (2016). A conceptual review of mate choice: stochastic demography, within‐sex phenotypic plasticity, and individual flexibility. Ecology and evolution, 6(14), 4607-4642”.

14) Page 4 line 69: as suggested by the reviewer, we added “giving primary importance to survival over reproductive productivity” to specify behaviors.

15) Page 4-5 lines 85-90: as suggested by the reviewer we suppressed the unnecessary sentence and add references (Beach FA and Leboeuf BJ 1967, Coital behaviour in dogs. I. Preferential mating in the bitch. Animal behaviour, 15(4) 546-548, Sánchez-Macouzet O, Rodríguez C, Drummond H. 2014 Better stay together: pair bond duration increases individual fitness independent of age-related variation. Proc. R. Soc. B 281: 20132843).

16) Page 4-5 lines 85-90: As suggested by the reviewer in the discussion, we added the following paragraph in the introduction “There are, for example, cases where behavioral similarity is the key to reproductive success, as in the case of zebra finches (Taeniopygia guttata) and cockatiels (Nymphicus hollandicus) [31-32] ; while, in other species, different or even opposite temperaments can reach high reproductive performances as in the giant panda (Ailuropoda melanoleuca) and in the black rhino (Diceros bocornis) [12, 25, 33].”

17) Page 5 line 91: we created a new sentence as suggested by the reviewer deleting “and the study shows that”

18) Page 5 line 98: as suggested by the reviewer we changed boldness for reactivity.

19) Page 5 line 105: as suggested by the reviewer we changed boldness for reactivity.

20) Pace 5 line 110: we changed “attempt to create” with “creating” as suggested by the reviewer.

Material and Methods

21) Page 6 line 125: we deleted the hyphenation in “North-western”.

22) Page 7 line 146: we change the tense of “avoid” to “avoided”.

23) Page 7 line 147: we were talking about sperm storage that was studied in different turtles’ species but there aren’t any available work about this species. For a better understanding we changed the word “recollecting” with “storing”.

24) Page 8 line 167: during the trial we used water only to spraying the individuals, no pool or drinking point were used, therefore there was no reason to refill something. The water we used to spray was always new and after every trial we changed the position of the observation area into a dry one.

25) Page 10 line 228: we changed the tense from “will not be” to “were”.

26) Page 10 line 232: We used “sequentially” to explain that the experiments were done one after the other, but the term is maybe not adequate. We deleted this word to avoid confusion.

Results

27) Page 12 line 262: we changed the word “organisms” with "turtles” as suggested by the reviewer.

28) Page 12 line 265: we changed “didn’t” with “did not” as suggested by the reviewer.

29) Page 12 line 273: as suggested by the reviewer we change “for the shier” by “characteristic of the shier turtles”.

30) Page 12 line 276: As suggested by the reviewer we changed “for the boldest” by “. Variables for the boldest turtles were”.

Discussion

31) Page 20 line 361: we changed the beginning of the sentence from “Also, our” to “Our” as suggested by the reviewer.

32) Page 21 line 386: we deleted “the”.

33) Page 21 line 386: we added “animals”.

34) Page 21 line 393-394: according to referee’s commentary, we add in the sentence that it was observed for other species “In other species, male competition could be very costly”.

35) Page 22 lines 407-408: in order to rewrite the sentence as suggested by the reviewer, we changed “respond” with “adapt” and we delete “pass under the clutches of” to add “survive to”.

36) Page 22 line 418: according to the reviewer comment we suppressed” behavioral trait” and added “temperament” to be more specific in our affirmation.

37) Page 22: we deleted the paragraph “In the study of Spoon et al (2006), it can be seen that compatible pairs (male-female) of the Cockatiel Nymphicus hollandicus showed higher levels of coordination in parental care and raised more chicks; another example is given by Carlstead et al (1999a, b) who observed in Black Rhino Diceros bocornis that smaller enclosures determined the breeding of dominant males, while domination decreased in males housed in larger enclosures. In addition, dominance levels were related to reproductive success, with the conclusion that the number of births per year was higher in pairs of rhinos composed of a submissive male and a dominant or aggressive female. This information gives an idea of the optimal conditions for the breeding of captive rhinos, including large enclosures, which facilitate submissive behavior in males, which in turn affects the compatibility of couples; in the giant panda Ailuropoda melanoleuca, Martin-Wintle et al (2017) conducted behavioral studies to further improve reproductive performance and found that specific combinations of temperament traits showed better reproductive performance than others. Males who were more aggressive than their partners were more likely to mate and produce puppies than when the female had a higher level of aggression than the male or even couples with less fearful males, regardless of the fear of the female, obtained better reproductive results. The application of these results to captive breeding management strategies should result in higher reproductive rates and the production of more candidates for the giant panda reintroduction program.” and added a resumed version in page 4 lines 95-100.

38) Page 22 lines 428: we deleted “focused on boldness degree of males”, same with “therefore they could have a” and added “with perhaps”.

39) Page 23 lines 435 and 437: we deleted “has allowed to understand” and added “demonstrates” and added “animals”.

40) Page 23: as suggested by the reviewer and to avoid repetition of the same idea, we deleted the sentence “By another way in term of evolution, being shiest may have some advantages and, if not for reproduction, they may be for antipredatory behaviour, making shiest individuals, that are more prudent in term of exploration, and as we observed in the new environment, generally less predated than boldest individuals as discussed for other species.”

41) Page 24: as suggested by the reviewer we deleted the last paragraph.

Bibliography

42) Following the suggestions of the reviewer we made changes in the citations. We added the following works:

- Gowaty PA, Drickamer LC, Schmid-Holmes S. Male house mice produce fewer offspring with lower viability and poorer performance when mated with females they do not prefer. Anim. Behav. 2003;65: 95-103.

- Ah‐King M, Gowaty PA. A conceptual review of mate choice: stochastic demography, within‐sex phenotypic plasticity, and individual flexibility. Ecol. Evol. 2016;6: 4607-4642.

- Beach FA and Leboeuf BJ Coital behaviour in dogs. I. Preferential mating in the bitch. Anim Behav. 1967; 15: 546-548.

- Sánchez-Macouzet O, Rodríguez C, Drummond H. Better stay together: pair bond duration increases individual fitness independent of age-related variation. Proc. R. Soc. B. 2014; 281: 20132843.

And deleted:

- Cable RN. Oh, Behave: When wildlife behavior matters in Conservation. Mich. J. Sustain. 2013;1

- Cooper Jr WE. Variation in escape behavior among individuals of the striped plateau lizard Sceloporus virgatus may reflect differences in boldness. J. Herpetol. 2009;43:495-502.

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9 Sep 2020

PONE-D-20-14068R1

Temperament and sexual behaviour in the Furrowed Wood Turtle Rhinoclemmys areolata

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PLoS One. 2020 Dec 30;15(12):e0244561. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0244561.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


23 Oct 2020

We responded editor’s comment, in green in the manuscript with track change.

We respond each one of the comments made by the referee during his first revision (yellow) and his second revision (blue) in the manuscript with track change.

We added an acknowledgment to the reviewer, Dr David Crews to express special thanks for the critics and work he did to help us to improve our work.

Considering the referee comments about the poor quality of the English in the text, and we apologize about that, we contracted a native English speaker for the entire revision of the manuscript: Dr. Julian Flavell (http://www.linkedin.com/pub/dir/Julian/Flavell). His corrections are noticed in grey in the manuscript with track change.

A) Editor comments (changes in green in the document)

1) We revised Plos One style requirements.

2) To answer the editor comments about ethical statements (points 2, 3, 4, 5, 6), in the ethical declaration we added the following paragraph:

“All the animals come from private loans of the city of Chetumal (Quintana Roo – Mexico). Verbal consent was requested from the owners, and it was explained how the turtles would be used and for what objective. The individuals on loan were destined exclusively for specific research purposes, respecting all known needs for animal welfare, and were returned to their owners at the end of the data collection.

We were in possession of the permit N ° SGPA / DGVS / 002491/18 issued by Secretaria de Medio Ambiente y Recursos Naturales (SEMARNAT) for the collection of this species. Experimental protocol was approved by Ethical Committee from the “El Colegio de la Frontera Sur”, Mexico.”

3) Page 18 line 334: in Materials and Methods we corrected the mistake in the table caption, it was a typing error.

4) Pages 30-32 lines 618-658: We added the captions for supporting information files.

5) We revised all the references and updated all the new citations.

B) First Revision (in yellow in the document):

Short Title

6) Page 1 Line 10: we deleted the short tittle after we revised Plos One style requirements (see Editor comments).

Summary

7) Page 2 Lines 30-32: According to the reviewer comment, we changed the phrase “Finally, we observed two males in presence of one female and noticed that bolder individuals then displayed courtship behaviors while the shier just ignore the female.” with “Finally, in the simulations that compared two males in the presence of a female we noticed that bolder individuals showed courtship behaviors while the more shy ones simply ignored the female.” The change was made because the result does not come from a single anecdote as the previous sentence suggested, but from multiple individuals and repetitions.

8) Page 2 Lines 35-36: following the previous correction this sentence should now coincide with results from multiple experiments and not just one, as it previously seemed.

9) Page 2 line 48: we deleted the Key Word after we revised Plos One style requirements (see Editor comments).

Introduction

10) Page 3 line 43-44: as suggested by the reviewer we suppressed the term personality considered as anthropomorphic and controversial. Also, as suggested, we mentioned now the term “reactivity” and suppressed “permanently”.

11) Page 3 line 55: we changed “breed” with “breeding” as suggested by the reviewer.

12) Page 3 line 57: as suggested by the reviewer we added the citation “Gowaty PA, Drickamer LC, Schmid-Holmes S. Male house mice produce fewer offspring with lower viability and poorer performance when mated with females they do not prefer. Anim. Behav. 2003;65: 95-103”.

13) Page 3 line 60: as suggested by the reviewer we added the citation “Ah‐King, M., & Gowaty, P. A. (2016). A conceptual review of mate choice: stochastic demography, within‐sex phenotypic plasticity, and individual flexibility. Ecology and evolution, 6(14), 4607-4642”.

14) Page 4 line 72: as suggested by the reviewer, we added “giving primary importance to survival over reproductive productivity” to specify behaviors.

15) Page 4-5 lines 88-93: as suggested by the reviewer we suppressed the unnecessary sentence and add references (Beach FA and Leboeuf BJ 1967, Coital behaviour in dogs. I. Preferential mating in the bitch. Animal behaviour, 15(4) 546-548, Sánchez-Macouzet O, Rodríguez C, Drummond H. 2014 Better stay together: pair bond duration increases individual fitness independent of age-related variation. Proc. R. Soc. B 281: 20132843).

16) Page 4-5 lines 88-93: As suggested by the reviewer in the discussion, we added the following paragraph in the introduction “There are, for example, cases where behavioral similarity is the key to reproductive success, as in the case of zebra finches (Taeniopygia guttata) and cockatiels (Nymphicus hollandicus) [31-32] ; while, in other species, different or even opposite temperaments can reach high reproductive performances as in the giant panda (Ailuropoda melanoleuca) and in the black rhino (Diceros bocornis) [12, 25, 33].”

17) Page 5 line 94: we created a new sentence as suggested by the reviewer deleting “and the study shows that”

18) Page 5 line 101: as suggested by the reviewer we changed “boldness” for “reactivity”.

19) Page 5 line 108: as suggested by the reviewer we changed “boldness” for “reactivity”.

20) Pace 5 line 113: we changed “attempt to create” with “creating” as suggested by the reviewer. Edit: this correction was subsequently revised and changed by the translator (see correction in gray)

Material and Methods

21) Page 7 line 140: we deleted the hyphenation in “North-western”.

22) Page 7 line 161: we change the tense of “avoid” to “avoided”. Edit: this correction was subsequently revised and changed by the translator (see correction in gray)

23) Page 7 line 164: we were talking about sperm storage that was studied in different turtles’ species but there aren’t any available work about this species. For a better understanding we changed the word “recollecting” with “storing”. Edit: this correction was subsequently revised and changed by the translator (see correction in gray)

24) Page 8 line 167: during the trial we used water only to spraying the individuals, no pool or drinking point were used, therefore there was no reason to refill something. The water we used to spray was always new and after every trial we changed the position of the observation area into a dry one.

25) Page 11 line 249: we changed the tense from “will not be” to “were”.

26) Page 10 line 232: We used “sequentially” to explain that the experiments were done one after the other, but the term is maybe not adequate. We deleted this word to avoid confusion.

Results

27) Page 12 line 271: we changed the word “organisms” with "turtles” as suggested by the reviewer.

28) Page 12 line 274: we changed “didn’t” with “did not” as suggested by the reviewer.

29) Page 12 line 282: as suggested by the reviewer we change “for the shier” by “characteristic of the shier turtles”.

30) Page 12 line 285: As suggested by the reviewer we changed “for the boldest” by “. Variables for the boldest turtles were”.

Discussion

31) Page 20 line 371: we changed the beginning of the sentence from “Also, our” to “Our” as suggested by the reviewer.

32) Page 21 line 398: we deleted “the”.

33) Page 21 line 399: we added “animals”.

34) Page 21 line 407: according to referee’s commentary, we add in the sentence that it was observed for other species “In other species, male competition could be very costly”.

35) Page 22 lines 422-423: in order to rewrite the sentence as suggested by the reviewer, we changed “respond” with “adapt” and we delete “pass under the clutches of” to add “survive to”.

36) Page 22 line 437: according to the reviewer comment we suppressed ”behavioral trait” and added “temperament” to be more specific in our affirmation.

37) Page 22: we deleted the paragraph “In the study of Spoon et al (2006), it can be seen that compatible pairs (male-female) of the Cockatiel Nymphicus hollandicus showed higher levels of coordination in parental care and raised more chicks; another example is given by Carlstead et al (1999a, b) who observed in Black Rhino Diceros bocornis that smaller enclosures determined the breeding of dominant males, while domination decreased in males housed in larger enclosures. In addition, dominance levels were related to reproductive success, with the conclusion that the number of births per year was higher in pairs of rhinos composed of a submissive male and a dominant or aggressive female. This information gives an idea of the optimal conditions for the breeding of captive rhinos, including large enclosures, which facilitate submissive behavior in males, which in turn affects the compatibility of couples; in the giant panda Ailuropoda melanoleuca, Martin-Wintle et al (2017) conducted behavioral studies to further improve reproductive performance and found that specific combinations of temperament traits showed better reproductive performance than others. Males who were more aggressive than their partners were more likely to mate and produce puppies than when the female had a higher level of aggression than the male or even couples with less fearful males, regardless of the fear of the female, obtained better reproductive results. The application of these results to captive breeding management strategies should result in higher reproductive rates and the production of more candidates for the giant panda reintroduction program.” and added a resumed version in page 4 lines 95-100.

38) Page 23 lines 445: we deleted “focused on boldness degree of males”, same with “therefore they could have a” and added “with perhaps”.

39) Page 23 lines 452 and 454: we deleted “has allowed to understand” and added “demonstrates” and added “animals”.

40) Page 23: as suggested by the reviewer and to avoid repetition of the same idea, we deleted the sentence “By another way in term of evolution, being shiest may have some advantages and, if not for reproduction, they may be for antipredatory behaviour, making shiest individuals, that are more prudent in term of exploration, and as we observed in the new environment, generally less predated than boldest individuals as discussed for other species.”

41) Page 24: as suggested by the reviewer we deleted the last paragraph.

Bibliography

42) Following the suggestions of the reviewer we made changes in the citations. We added the following works:

- Gowaty PA, Drickamer LC, Schmid-Holmes S. Male house mice produce fewer offspring with lower viability and poorer performance when mated with females they do not prefer. Anim. Behav. 2003;65: 95-103.

- Ah‐King M, Gowaty PA. A conceptual review of mate choice: stochastic demography, within‐sex phenotypic plasticity, and individual flexibility. Ecol. Evol. 2016;6: 4607-4642.

- Beach FA and Leboeuf BJ Coital behaviour in dogs. I. Preferential mating in the bitch. Anim Behav. 1967; 15: 546-548.

- Sánchez-Macouzet O, Rodríguez C, Drummond H. Better stay together: pair bond duration increases individual fitness independent of age-related variation. Proc. R. Soc. B. 2014; 281: 20132843.

And deleted:

- Cable RN. Oh, Behave: When wildlife behavior matters in Conservation. Mich. J. Sustain. 2013;1

- Cooper Jr WE. Variation in escape behavior among individuals of the striped plateau lizard Sceloporus virgatus may reflect differences in boldness. J. Herpetol. 2009;43:495-502.

C) Second Revision (in light blue in the document):

Abstract

1) Page 2 line 16: we changed “Temperament variability in animals have consequences for evolution and ecology” to “The variation in temperament among has animals consequences for evolution and ecology”

2) Page 2 line 18: we deleted “works”

3) Page 2 line 18: we deleted “for its measurement”

4) Page 2 line 19: we changed “boldness degree, in the turtle Rhinoclemmys areolata” to “the degree of boldness among individuals Rhinoclemmys areolata”

5) Page 2 line 20: we changed “Secondly, we wanted” to “We also sought”. Edit: this correction was subsequently revised and changed by the translator (see correction in gray)

6) Page 2 line 22: we changed “copula” to “copulation”

7) Page 2 line 22: we changed “male and female” to “males and females”

8) Page 2 line 25: we changed “allowed us to determine” to “distinguish between”

9) Page 2 line 29-30: we changed “rare copula attempts” to “copulation attempts were rarely observed”

Introduction

10) Page 3 line 46: we added the sentence “varying in correlation with the physiology of the animal leading to mediate the response of an individual in different ecological situations” we integrate these aspects following the comment of the reviewer about the importance of the context in behavioral interactions.

11) Page 3 line 46: we added the citations “Clarke et al 1995” and “Michelangeli et al 2017”

12) Page 3 line 47: we added the citation “Michelangeli et al 2019”

13) Page 4 line 68-75: we rewrite the paragraph in response to what behaviors we were considering “In general, bolder individuals tend to be more active, feed more often and in risky areas as they are more likely to explore and get away from safe and well-known locations [22]. This temperament, however, leads to an increased risk of encountering predators [23] and exposing themselves to parasites [24], decreasing their survival rate. On the other hand, shy individuals engage in opposite strategy giving primary importance to survival over reproductive productivity. This implies that this temperament would allow to regulate survival with other needs of the species [21].”

14) Page 4 line 71: we added the citation “Wilson et al 1994”

15) Page 4 line 72: we added the citation “Sasaki et al 2018”

16) Page 4 line 73: we added the citation “Gharnit et al 20202

Material and Methods

17) Pages 7-8 lines 162-165: we added a paragraph “Female turtles are able to retain vital sperm for up to 4 years, but it is not yet clear in which species therefore we cannot exclude that it can also occur in R. areolata [51].” to better explain the capacity of female turtles to storage sperm. Edit: this correction was subsequently revised and changed by the translator (see correction in gray)

18) Page 8 line 169 and 177: we explained in two parts “The water in the maintenance area was changed daily.” and “There were no food or small pools in the experimental area in order not to affect the behaviors [41].”, respectively, that the water in the maintenance area was changed every day, while in the experimental area there was never any use of pools with water, therefore there was no presence of pheromones of other individuals.

19) Page 11 line 249: we changed “not used more than once” to “only used once”

Results

20) Page 12 line 267: we changed “We observed 17 behavioral traits (S1 Table) but several of them were displayed by all the turtles and were not useful to distinguish temperaments; therefore, we selected 12 behavioral traits that were used as variables” to “Of 17 behavioral traits observed (S1 Table), we selected 12 for study”

Discussion

21) Page 20 line 381: we changed “the” to “he”

22) Page 20 line 385: we changed “copula” to “copulation”

23) Page 20 line 385: we deleted “,and in” and started a new sentence “In the common”

24) Page 20 lines 385-391: we modified the paragraph “where males prefer the more active males when they find themselves alone and without the presence of predators in their surroundings, whereas when shier specimens find themselves alone in the presence of a female, they spend time and energy in courtship behaviour [47].” to “males’ behavior together with the predatory context influence the mating preference of the females. Those, which have not been exposed to predatory signals prior to mating, mate more often with more active males. If, on the other hand, these have been subjected to predatory signals, they tend to choose less active males with likely a longer life expectancy and to avoid the more active males in order to increase the survival of the offspring in an environment with risk of predation [53].”

25) Page 21 lines 393-394: we modified the sentence “boldest individuals court the female only in presence of a potential competitor and directly mate with” to “the boldest individuals court females, but only if another male is present; otherwise these males immediately mount and attempt to copulate.”

26) Page 21 line 395: we modified “courtship the female only if no competitor is present and is not very effective at mating.” to “males will only court if other males are absent; even then mating is rare.”

27) Page 21 line 398: we deleted “for”

28) Page 21 line 398: we changed “that more time is necessary to display a mating behavior” to “shier animals require more time to display courtship and mating behavior”

29) Page 21 line 399: we deleted the sentence “anyway our work shows apparent differences in the sexual behavior according to males’ temperaments.”

30) Page 21 line 402: we changed “specimens” to “individuals”

31) Page 21 line 403: we modified the sentence “On the other hand, it avoids competition and the possibility of losing energy when a bolder male is competing.” to “Shier turtles could avoid injuries and the possibility of losing energy when a bolder male is competing. In our experimental contexts, we could not directly observe injuries phenomena between males, however we did observed, but not during those experiment, that males have bitten each other trying to approach the same female.” to explain that bolder individuals can hurt opponents if they are led to do so.

32) Page 21 line 408: we deleted “Therefore we cannot exclude that the temperament may have an influence on competition” since we explained the phenomena in the prior paragraph.

33) Page 22 line 433: we changed the sentence “To our best knowledge, this is the first work that connects behavioral trait to reproductive behaviors in land turtles” to “Assumptions have been made in the past about the likely relationship between temperament and reproductive behaviors, but to our best knowledge, this is the first work that formalizes it experimentally for land turtles” given that as the reviewer commented, Auffenberg talked about the possibility of the existence of shy specimens during mating in the genus Gopherus, but until now it had not been formally tested and proven for any land turtle species. We also added the reference “Auffenberg 1996”.

34) Page 23 line 452: we changed “specimens” to “individuals”.

Acknowledgments

35) Page 23 line 462: we wanted to add an acknowledgment to the reviewer “We would like to express special thanks to Dr David Crews, who has critically read our manuscript, providing useful and substantial comments that have allowed us to improve our work.”

Bibliography

36) Following the suggestions of the reviewer we made changes in the citations. We added the following works:

- Clarke AS, Boinski S. Temperament in nonhuman primates." American Journal of Primatology. Am. J. Primatol. 1995;37: 103-125.

- Michelangeli M, Goulet CT, Kang HS, Wong BB, Chapple DG. Integrating thermal physiology within a syndrome: Locomotion, personality and habitat selection in an ectotherm. Funct. Ecol. 2018;32: 970-981.

- Michelangeli M, Chapple DG, Goulet CT, Bertram MG, Wong BB. Behavioral syndromes vary among geographically distinct populations in a reptile. Behav. Ecol. 2019;30: 393-401.

- Wilson DS, Clark AB, Coleman K, Dearstyne T. Shyness and boldness in humans and other animals. Trends Ecol. Evol. 1994;9: 442-446.

- Sasaki, T., Mann, R. P., Warren, K. N., Herbert, T., Wilson, T., & Biro, D. Personality and the collective: bold homing pigeons occupy higher leadership ranks in flocks. Philos. Trans. R. Soc. Lond., B, Biol. Sci. 2018;373:20170038.

- Gharnit E, Bergeron P, Garant D, Réale D. Exploration profiles drive activity patterns and temporal niche specialization in a wild rodent. Behav. Ecol. 2020.

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Abstract

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8) Page 2 line 25: “we” and added “and”

9) Page 2 line 26: we deleted “the” and added “individuals”

10) Page 2 line 29: we changed “attempt” to “attempted”

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14) Page 2 line 34: we changed “to modulate” to “in modulating”

15) Page 2 line 36: we changed “try to copulate only” to “only try to copulate”

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Introduction

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26) Page 4 line 71: we added “an” before opposite

27) Page 4 line 74: we changed “would allow to regulate survival with” to “tries to achieve a balance between survival and”

28) Page 4 line 77: we changed “Knowing these” to “Knowledge on these”

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32) Page 5 line 99: we changed “, as it could help stabilize social systems and reduce” to “contributing to the stabilization of social systems and reducing”

33) Page 5 line 102: we changed “straighten up” to “become upright after”

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35) Page 5 line 104: we changed “to insert” to “in placing”

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37) Page 5 line 108: we changed “to measure” to “while researching”

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40) Page 5 line 110: we changed “using the time” to “by recording the time taken”

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42) Page 5 line 111: we changed “Therefore” to “Evidently”

43) Page 5 line 112: we changed “different” to “diverse”

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45) Page 5 line 113: we substituted “of them” with “method”

46) Page 5 line 113: we substituted “For this reason” with “Therefore”

47) Page 6 line 116: we changed “a lack of work addressing specifically” to “very little research that specifically addresses”

48) Page 6 line 117: we changed “if it influences” to “its influence on”

49) Page 6 line 119: we changed “determinate” to “determine the”

50) Page 6 line 119: we substitute “to determine the temperament in these species that can also be used for others terrestrial turtle species” with “that not only ascertains temperament for this species but also other species of terrestrial turtle”

51) Page 6 line 121: we changed “that may modulate” to “in modulating”

52) Page 6 line 122: we deleted “the” before “competition”

Materials and methods

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54) Page 6 line 141: we changed “It is used as pet, food and in the traditional medicine” to “It is used as a pet, for food and traditional medicine”

55) Page 7 line 145: we changed “has” with “presents a”

56) Page 7 line 147: we changed “but” to “; however,”

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58) Page 7 line 148: we changed “; however, these derive” to “, although this information solely derives”

59) Page 7 line 149: we changed “them” to “the individuals”

60) Page 7 line 153: we changed “It can be seen the difference between the tails (red arrow), “ to “Differences between the tails (red arrow) are visible;”

61) Page 7 line 161: we substituted “avoided” with “prevented”

62) Pages 7-8 lines 162-165: we substituted “It also avoids female from storing semen from males and be less reactive to males. Female turtles are able to retain vital sperm for up to 4 years, but it is not yet clear in which species therefore we cannot exclude that it can also occur in R. areolata [51].” with “It also ensured that the female did not store semen and therefore be less reactive to males. Females from some species of turtle are able to retain vital sperm for up to 4 years; however, it is not yet clear in which species, therefore we cannot dismiss that it could also occur in R. areolata [51].”

63) Page 8 line 166: we substituted “was” with “resembled”

64) Page 8 line 166: we deleted “to” before “the natural”

65) Page 8 line 167: we deleted “it was possible”

66) Page 8 line 171: we changed “keep the best” to “sustain optimum”

67) Page 8 line 177: we substituted “in case details of the events were needed” with “in the event that details of specific events were required”

68) Page 8 line 178: we substituted “in order not to affect the behaviors” with “that could have had an effect on turtle behavior”

69) Page 8 lines 181-183: we changed “Each simulation took place in open air, on sunny days, during hours of maximum activity of turtles (8.30am-11.30am and 05.30pm - 06.30pm), when the temperatures are not very high” to “Each simulation took place in the open air, on sunny days and during the hours of maximum turtle activity (8.30am-11.30am and 05.30pm - 06.30pm) when temperatures were not very high”

70) Page 8 lines 185-188: we changed “The observation area was moved in an adjacent area after every simulation to reduce waiting time between experiments and recovery time of environmental conditions, then a new group of turtles was placed to repeat simulation” to “The observation area was moved to an adjacent area after each simulation to reduce the time elapsed between experiments and the recovery time for environmental conditions; subsequently a new group of turtles was placed into the observation area in order to repeat the simulation”

71) Page 9 line 191: we changed figure 4 tagline to “Observation area viewed from the side and above”

72) Page 9 line 196: we changed “reason” to “aim”

73) Page 9 line 197: we changed “taken” to “removed” and we deleted “the” before “confinement”

74) Page 9 line 199: we changed “taken” to “removed”

75) Page 9 lines 201-202: we changed “in” to “into the”

76) Page 9 line 203: we changed “taken” to “removed”

77) Page 9 line 202: we changed “in” to “into the”

78) Page 9 line 202: we substituted “released” with presented

79) Page 9 line 206: we changed “To organize males in order to describe their boldness-shyness level” to “In order to organize males according to their level of boldness-shyness”

80) Page 9 lines 210-211: we changed “it was measured the moment of abrupt change of slope within data range, this way it was possible to classify male” to “the moment an abrupt change of slope occurred within the data range was recorded, allowing the classification of males”

81) Page 10 line 216: we changed “Afterwards” to “Subsequently”

82) Page 10 line 217: we changed “allowed us to elaborate” to “enabled the creation of”

83) Page 10 line 219: we changed “variables were analysed through a Mann-Whitney test to determine which ones” to “a Mann-Whitney test was applied to determine which variables were significant”

84) Page 10 line 222: we substituted “starting” with “initiating”

85) Page 10 line 223: we changed “linked with” to “a good indication of”

86) Page 10 lines 223-225: we substituted “We did this test to ensure results are not the consequence of the size or age of the turtles” with “We implemented this test to ensure that our results were not the consequence of turtle size or age”

87) Page 10 line 225: we substituted “The two” with “Both”

88) Page 10 line 226: we substituted “through” with “by applying a”

89) Page 11 lines 239-240: we substituted ” it was measured the moment of abrupt change of slope within data range” with “the moment an abrupt change of slope occurred within the data range was recorded”

90) Page 11 line 243: we changed “that allowed us to elaborate” to “allowing the creation of”

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93) Page 11 line 261: we changed “us to elaborate” to “that allowed the creation of”

Results

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95) Page 12 line 270: we deleted “as shier”

96) Page 12 line 271: we changed “that had an” to “with an”

97) Page 12 line 272: we added “as shier”

98) Page 12 line 272: we changed “bolder were those that had an index greater than 0.5.” to “those with an index greater than 0.5 bolder.”

99) Page 12 line 273: we changed “This allowed us to divide individuals” to “As a result, individuals were divided”

100) Page 12 line 283: we changed “high” to “a high duration of”

101) Page 13 Table 1: we changed “peluche” with “stuffed toy”

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105) Page 15 line 305: we substituted “We defined if they” with “We determined if the behaviors”

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108) Page 15 line 310: we changed “are linked with” to “displayed the following behaviours”

109) Page 15 lines 314-315: we changed “None of those behaviors is displayed by shiest individuals, while the boldest are more linked with” to “None of these behaviors was displayed by the shiest individuals, while the boldest were more associated with”

110) Page 16 line 319: we revised the table tagline changing “must-dimensional” with “multi-dimensional”

111) Page 17 line 323: we revised the table tagline changing “must-dimensional” with “multi-dimensional”

112) Page 17 line 328: we added “the” before “temperament”

113) Page 17 line 331: we substituted “On the contrary” with “In contrast”

114) Page 17 line 331: we added “individuals” after “shiest”

115) Page 17 line 331: we changed “except for” to “with the exception of”

116) Page 18 line 333: we revised the table tagline changing “must-dimensional” with “multi-dimensional”

117) Page 18 line 337: we revised the description of Figure 5 from “The red circle shows variables linked with the boldest individuals, the blue circle identifies behaviors linked to the shiest ones.” to “The red circle shows variables associated with the boldest individuals; the blue circle identifies behaviors associated with the shiest ones.”

118) Page 19 line 347: we revised the description of Figure 7 from “The red curve includes variables linked with boldest individuals, the blue curve congregates behaviors linked with the shiest individuals.” to “The red curve includes variables associated with the boldest individuals; the blue curve congregates behaviors associated with the shiest individuals.”

119) Page 19 line 350: we revised the description of Figure 8 from “The red curve encompasses variables linked with boldest individuals, the blue curve includes behaviors linked with the shiest ones.” to “The red curve encompasses variables associated with the boldest individuals; the blue curve includes behaviors associated with the shiest individuals.”

120) Page 19 line 353: we revised the description of Figure 9 from “The red circle delimits variables highly linked with boldest males in competition with each other, the yellow circle encompasses those highly linked with a bold male in competition with a shy one, the green ellipse includes behaviors linked with the boldest not considering who is its competitor.” to “The red circle delimits variables that are highly associated with the boldest competing males; the yellow circle encompasses those highly associated with a bold male competing with a shy individual; the green ellipse includes behaviors associated with the boldest individual regardless of competitor.”

Discussion

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124) Page 19 line 363: we changed “the most accurate” to “accurately”

125) Page 19 line 365: we changed “seem to be the best to determine the” to “appear to be the most reliable for determining”

126) Page 19 line 366: we changed “being quiet (shiest) or not” to “quiet (shiest) or not quiet”

127) Page 20 line 367: we substituted “a lot” with “frequently”

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132) Page 20 line 370: we changed “the determination” to “determining”

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134) Page 20 line 372: we substituted “equivalent whatever” with “comparable irrespective”

135) Page 20 line 373: we changed “strategy of life” to “life strategy”

136) Page 20 line 374: we changed “linked” to “associated”

137) Page 20 line 375: we changed “be a better method, we suggest further studies to test it also” to “provide an improved method, we suggest further studies that examine this”

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141) Page 20 line 389: we changed “with likely” to “that are more likely to have”

142) Page 21 line 392: we added “turtle” after “shier”

143) Page 21 line 396: we changed “towards” to “in the presence of”

144) Page 21 line 405: we changed “injuries” to injury”

145) Page 21 line 406: we changed “we did observed, but not during those experiment, that males have bitten each other” to “, in other experiments, we have observed that males have bitten each other when”

146) Page 21 line 408: we changed “and refraining those costs could also be” to “Some reptiles avoid or reduce their response to such competition and could provide”

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149) Page 21 line 412: we changed “intensity and costs of the fights” to “fight intensity and resulting costs”

150) Page 21 line 413: we changed “dependant of the temperament is under environmental constraint” to “dependent on temperament is to some extent subject to environmental constraints”

151) Page 22 line 418: we substituted “Moreover” with “Furthermore”

152) Page 22 lines 418-420: we changed “by isolated males when a predator is close to the female so they were able to balance risk of predation with courtship behavior” to “displayed by isolated males when a predator is close to the female, allowing them to balance predation risk with courtship behavior”

153) Page 22 line 425: we substituted “those” with “these”

154) Page 22 line 436: we changed “What we have achieved” to “The achievements in this study”

155) Page 22 line 437: we changed “might compose a” to “may contribute to”

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158) Page 23 line 452: we substituted “likely” with “probably”

159) Page 23 line 559: we deleted “needed”

Supporting information

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161) Page 30 line 625: we changed the description of Table S2 from “In grey background color the individuals considered bolder, in white those considered shier.” to “Individuals considered bolder have grey backgrounds while those considered shier have white.”

162) Page 30 line 630: we changed the description of Table S3 from “In the first column, there are names of each individual, in grey background color the bolder and in white the shier.” to “The first column shows the names of each individual. Bolder individuals have grey backgrounds while shier individuals have white.”

163) Page 30 line 635: we changed the description of Table S4 from “In the first column, there are names of each individual, in grey background color the bolder and in white the shier.” to “The first column shows the names of each individual, bolder individuals have grey backgrounds while shier have white.”

164) Page 30 line 640: we changed the description of Table S5 from “In the first column, there are names of each individual, in red the bolder and in blue the shier. Columns 2,3,4 and 5 indicate pairs by temperament (BB=boldVSbold, BS=boldVSshy, SS=shyVSshy, SB=shyVSbold).” to ” The first column shows the names of each individual, bolder individuals have red backgrounds while shier have blue. Columns 2,3,4 and 5 indicate pairs by temperament (BB=boldVSbold, BS=boldVSshy, SS=shyVSshy, SB=shyVSbold).”

165) Page 30 line 657: we changed the description of S2 Video from “Shy is walking around the arena while the bold courtships the female.” to “Shy male is walking around the arena while bold male courtships the female.”

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    S1 Table. List of responses found in behavioral simulation (occurrence = 1, absence = 0), with relative abbreviation and subdivision applied for statistical analysis.

    The first column shows the names of each individual, bolder individuals have a grey backgrounds while those considered shier have white.

    (DOCX)

    S2 Table. Straight carapace and straight plastron length measurements of each male turtle.

    Individuals considered bolder have grey backgrounds while those considered shier have white.

    (DOCX)

    S3 Table. List of courtship behaviors during male and female simulation (occurrence = 1, absence = 0), with relative abbreviation and subdivision applied for statistical analysis.

    The first column shows the names of each individual. Bolder individuals have grey backgrounds while shier individuals have white.

    (DOCX)

    S4 Table. List of mating behaviors during male and female simulation (occurrence = 1, absence = 0), with relative abbreviation and subdivision applied for statistical analysis.

    The first column shows the names of each individual, bolder individuals have grey backgrounds while shier have white.

    (DOCX)

    S5 Table. List of courtship behavior during male vs male competition in presence of female (occurrence = 1, absence = 0), with relative abbreviation and subdivision applied for statistical analysis.

    The first column shows the names of each individual, bolder individuals have red backgrounds while shier have blue. Columns 2,3,4 and 5 indicate pairs by temperament (BB = boldVSbold, BS = boldVSshy, SS = shyVSshy, SB = shyVSbold).

    (DOCX)

    S6 Table. List of mating behavior during male vs male competition in presence of female (occurrence = 1, absence = 0), with relative abbreviation and subdivision applied for statistical analysis.

    In the first column, there are names of each individual, in grey background color the bolder and in white the shier. Columns 2,3,4 and 5 indicate pairs by temperament (BB = boldVSbold, BS = boldVSshy, SS = shyVSshy, SB = shyVSbold).

    (DOCX)

    S7 Table. Statistical results of Mann-Whitney test on length measurements.

    (DOCX)

    S8 Table. Statistical results of Mann-Whitney test on variables selected for boldness index, significant variables are indicated by *.

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    S1 Video. Shy courtship and bold mount.

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    S2 Video. Shy and bold male in presence of a female.

    Shy male is walking around the arena while bold male courtships the female.

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