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. 2021 Feb 9;16(2):e0244787. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0244787

Seasonal influence of snow conditions on Dall’s sheep productivity in Wrangell-St Elias National Park and Preserve

Christopher L Cosgrove 1,*, Jeff Wells 2, Anne W Nolin 1,3, Judy Putera 4, Laura R Prugh 5
Editor: Emmanuel Serrano6
PMCID: PMC7872280  PMID: 33561149

Abstract

Dall’s sheep (Ovis dalli dalli) are endemic to alpine areas of sub-Arctic and Arctic northwest America and are an ungulate species of high economic and cultural importance. Populations have historically experienced large fluctuations in size, and studies have linked population declines to decreased productivity as a consequence of late-spring snow cover. However, it is not known how the seasonality of snow accumulation and characteristics such as depth and density may affect Dall’s sheep productivity. We examined relationships between snow and climate conditions and summer lamb production in Wrangell-St Elias National Park and Preserve, Alaska over a 37-year study period. To produce covariates pertaining to the quality of the snowpack, a spatially-explicit snow evolution model was forced with meteorological data from a gridded climate re-analysis from 1980 to 2017 and calibrated with ground-based snow surveys and validated by snow depth data from remote cameras. The best calibrated model produced an RMSE of 0.08 m (bias 0.06 m) for snow depth compared to the remote camera data. Observed lamb-to-ewe ratios from 19 summers of survey data were regressed against seasonally aggregated modelled snow and climate properties from the preceding snow season. We found that a multiple regression model of fall snow depth and fall air temperature explained 41% of the variance in lamb-to-ewe ratios (R2 = .41, F(2,38) = 14.89, p<0.001), with decreased lamb production following deep snow conditions and colder fall temperatures. Our results suggest the early establishment and persistence of challenging snow conditions is more important than snow conditions immediately prior to and during lambing. These findings may help wildlife managers to better anticipate Dall’s sheep recruitment dynamics.

Introduction

The terrestrial ecology of the Arctic Boreal region (ABR) is changing rapidly as a result of amplified increases in temperatures [14]. Seasonal snow coverage exists in the ABR for up to 10 months annually and profoundly impacts ecosystem function. Studies point towards continued reduction in the annual duration of snow cover and overall accumulation in the ABR, with region and elevation dependent variations in trend and severity [5]. Mid-winter warming events have been seen to cause substantial alteration to snow properties and the incidence and severity of these events are thought to be increasing [68]. Snow processes have been linked to the population dynamics, movement, habitat selection, and life-cycles of a wide variety of mammals living in the ABR ranging in size from polar bears (Ursus maritimus, [9]) and moose (Alces alces, [10]), through to lemmings (Lemus lemus, [11]) and snowshoe hares (Lepus americanus, [12]). Due to their importance to Northern societies, ungulates native to the ABR, such as moose, caribou (Rangifer tarandus) and muskoxen (Ovibos moschatus) have been subject to broad scientific enquiry [10, 1320]. These studies indicate that ungulate populations in the ABR are negatively affected by extreme conditions that could increase in severity and frequency due to climate change [21, 22]. For example, ‘locked-pastures’, where access to winter forage is restricted through either deep snow or ice-layers, have been linked to caribou and muskox mass mortality events [2225].

Snow cover in mountain areas is highly variable in both space and time [26] as the interplay of temperature, precipitation, solar radiation, vegetation cover and wind produces intricate patterns of depth, density and stratigraphy in complex terrain. While remote sensing products utilising optical and infrared wavelengths have some ability to detect this variability, their coarse spatial grain (~500 m) at daily time scales, impediment by cloud cover, and inability to quantify snow depth and density, limit their application in snow ecology questions [27]. Passive microwave derived remote-sensing products have shown promise in mapping snow properties such as water equivalent [28] and rain-on-snow events [29], but these products currently have a spatial resolution of >5 km, limiting their usefulness in mountain contexts.

Physically-based snow evolution models offer a promising means of obtaining a variety of snow properties that cannot be obtained from remote sensing alone. These models solve the surface mass-energy balance to map snow properties at a user-defined spatial and temporal resolution. However, there has been limited application of these models in wildlife research relative to those incorporating remotely sensed snow data, possibly due to the different technical skills required. Models have been used to simulate detailed snow data at single point locations for comparison to long-term wildlife data [24, 30], or to quasi-spatialize a single grid cell model at a coarse, 45 km resolution [31]. To our knowledge, no study has yet exploited the ability of modern snow models to produce longer time series of spatially-distributed data to compare to population dynamics of wildlife. Here, we use a leading snow evolution model, SnowModel [32], capable of operating with a 3D snow redistribution sub-model [33], to map daily snow and climate conditions at a high spatial resolution for a mountainous sub-Arctic domain inhabited by a population of Dall’s sheep (Ovis dalli dalli) that has been surveyed periodically over the past 50 years. The advantage of this approach is that it allows identification of important seasonal snow properties, and allows the simulation of snow conditions across Dall’s sheep alpine habitat as opposed to potentially non-representative point-locations, such as meteorological stations in valley-bottoms [34].

We examined the importance of the preceding season’s snow conditions on summer lamb production of Dall’s sheep in Wrangell-St Elias National Park and Preserve, Alaska, USA (WRST) using model derived covariates of snowpack quality. Dall’s sheep are a wild ungulate endemic to mountains of the ABR in north-western North America and are an important herbivore in high-latitude alpine ecosystems that may be acutely vulnerable to climate change [35]. They are also a highly prized Alaskan game species [41]. Dall’s sheep often use windward aspects during snow-covered months, where they rely on wind-scoured patches of snow-free or soft and shallow snow-covered forage to buffer caloric deficit [37]. Populations of Dall’s sheep have historically fluctuated widely in size [36, 3840]. These fluctuations are thought to be largely governed by variations in the production and survival of lambs, as adult survival has been shown to be relatively stable except after extreme winter events [41, 42], and only a limited number of mature rams are harvested each year [43]. Mature Dall’s sheep ewes typically produce one lamb in mid-May to early-June [44], and decreased summer production and survival of lambs has been linked to adverse winter weather and persistent or deep snow conditions [38, 42, 4547]. However, previous studies have relied upon remotely-sensed snow cover phenology metrics, with vertical properties of snow, e.g. greater depth and density, inferred from the longer persistence of snow covered areas [42, 47]. Thus, the seasonal importance of different snow properties such as depth and density on Dall’s sheep remains unknown.

Snow properties are thought to affect ungulates such as Dall’s sheep in 3 main ways. First, access to forage may be restricted where snow is deeper or harder [48]. Second, movement may be energetically expensive where deeper snow does not support an animal’s weight [49]. Third, susceptibility to predation may be enhanced in deep snow conditions where the snow density supports a predator’s foot load but impedes movement of an ungulate [50]. Forage restriction from deep or hard snow cover established in fall has been shown to have stronger impacts on reindeer populations than restriction later in the winter or spring [51], but whether these patterns occur in mountainous regions with more heterogeneous snow properties is not known.

Here, we examine the relationships between preceding snow conditions and Dall’s sheep productivity, measured as the number of lambs per ewe-like sheep (hereafter, lamb-to-ewe ratios). Our methodology affords the novelty of examining when and which snow properties are most important. In other studies of alpine ungulates and Dall’s sheep low winter temperatures and high snowfall have been shown to decrease summer productivity [e.g., 45, 52], so we study these climate variables for influence relative to, and in combination with, model derived snow properties. Additionally, we present trends in modelled snow and climate covariates from 1980 to 2017 to shed light on potential linkages between climate change, snow properties, and Dall’s sheep population dynamics.

To establish the relative importance of the seasonality of snow conditions we tested two contrasting hypotheses: (H1) the cumulative effects of persistent snow conditions that are unfavourable for Dall’s sheep productivity will be most important, in which case snow conditions established in the fall months and persisting through the winter months should better explain summer lamb-to-ewe ratios; (H2) snow conditions in the lambing season will have the strongest effect, in which case snow conditions in the spring months should better explain lamb-to-ewe ratios. As adult survival is considered stable relative to that of Dall’s sheep lambs, our first hypothesis proposes that the effect of snow conditions indirectly influences lamb production and survival via ewe body condition, which is affected by the winter-long accumulative effect of snow conditions aiding or abetting forage and movement. The second hypothesis instead emphasises that snow conditions may have a more direct influence on lamb survival, and hence productivity, both through their effect on foraging and movement immediate to and after birth.

Materials and methods

Study area

Our study area was a 8,678 km2 region located in northern Wrangell-St Elias National Park and Preserve (WRST; 62°18’46"N, 143° 15’ 31"W; Fig 1). A small portion of the study area was outside WRST and included portions of state, U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service, and private lands. Our study area falls within the Southeast Interior Alaska climate division, as mapped by Bieniek et al. [53]. Precipitation is relatively low, given the rain-shadowing of the Chugach mountain range to the south, and falls predominantly in May through to October. The annual range of mean monthly temperatures is ~15°C in July to ~-20°C in January [53]. In the subalpine zone (1200–1400 m.a.s.l), patches of 1 to 2 m high dwarf birch (Betula glandulosa) and willow (Salix spp.) are separated by lichens and moss [54]. Alpine areas (> 1400 m.a.s.l) are either dry communities of low, matted alpine vegetation, consisting mostly of Dryas, or moist areas of grasses (Festuca spp. and Poa spp.) and sedges (Carex spp.) with occasional patches of low willow and birch shrubs [54]. Dall’s sheep habitat extends from shrubline (~1400 m) into alpine areas where they favor areas close to rugged escape terrain [55]. Using Moderate Resolution Imaging Spectroradiometer (MODIS) derived snow cover data from 2000 to 2015, Cherry et al. (2017) found a median start of the continuous snow season (CSS) of the 26th September (±32 days SD) for elevations between 1219 m and 1524 m, and 30th August (±34 days SD) for elevations above 1524 m, across Denali National Park, Yukon Charley National Preserve and WRST. The median date for the end of the CSS at these elevations were respectively 30th May (±37 days SD) and the 28th June (±34 days SD) [56].

Fig 1. Map of study area located in the northern Wrangell-St. Elias National Park and Preserve (WRST; brown dashed outline) and Alaska (inset).

Fig 1

Field-based snow surveys, including the installation of remote cameras upon Jaeger Mesa and near Nabesna, took place in the central Jacksina sheep survey unit (yellow outline) to calibrate a physically-based, spatially distributed snow evolution model. With the calibrated model we simulated daily snow conditions for high-elevation Dall’s sheep terrain within the Jacksina survey unit domain from 1980 to 2017. A remote sensing analysis determined that the mean snow disappearance date (SDD) in 8 other survey units (outlined orange) was more similar to that of Jacksina compared to that of other units in the WRST (outlined red). We hence used observations of summer lamb-to-ewe ratios from Jacksina and these 8 nearby units to compare to model-derived metrics of seasonal snow conditions. GIS data for sheep survey units and WRST park boundary were sourced from [57, 58] respectively, the background digital elevation model is built from 1 Arc-second Digital Elevation Models (DEMs) of the United States Geological Service National Map 3D Elevation Program [59].

Survey unit selection

Within WRST there are 34 survey units in which summer Dall’s sheep surveys are conducted by the Alaska Department of Fish and Game (ADF&G) and National Park Service (NPS) (Fig 1). These are delineated by high elevation terrain bounded by water courses or glaciated valleys and are kept to a manageable size for surveying. We used survey data from 9 northern units that were selected based on proximity and similarity to the Jacksina survey unit (JSU) where our ground-based snow surveys were conducted (Fig 1). In the absence of long-term in-situ snow cover data within each survey unit, we used a 500 m MODIS-based remote sensing product, snow disappearance date (SDD), to identify units with similar snow cover phenology as the JSU from 2000–2016 [60]. We evaluated all units whose center point was within 100 km of the centre of the JSU (n = 17 units; Fig 1 in S1 Appendix). This search diameter of 200 km approximates to the maximum meso-β scale length forwarded by Orlanski [61] as typical for mountain disturbances on meteorology, thus ensuring all units had similar climatic influences. SDDs were generally later for units south of the JSU, whereas units to the north, east, and west had similar values (Fig 2 in S1 Appendix), suggesting the high-elevation ice-fields that separated the northern and southern units influenced snow conditions. Thus, we used sheep survey data from units 1 (Mentasta Mountains), 2 (Mount Sandford), 4E (Cross Creek), 4W (Nikonda Creek), 5E (Mount Allen), 5W (Stone Creek), 7W (Chisana) and 10 (Mount Drum), alongside that of the JSU, unit 3 (Fig 1).

Sheep surveys

Sheep survey data was obtained from a collated dataset of state and federal monitoring surveys conducted by ADF&G and NPS. A study period of 1980 to 2017 was determined by the availability of meteorological forcing data for SnowModel (see below), and within this period 19 years of sheep survey data were available from 41 surveys in our selected survey units (Table 1 in S1 Appendix, Fig 1). The earliest survey date was 21st June and the latest the 4th of August. Mean lamb-to-ewe ratio was 0.30 (Max. = 0.55; Min. = 0.09, SD ±0.10) and the mean total sheep counted in each survey was 654 (Max. = 2549 Min. = 87, SD ±564). Surveys were conducted using either a small fixed-wing plane or by helicopter and all followed a minimum count method [62]. We note that aerial minimum count methods are subject to potential biases in comparison to distance-based population estimates [63] but we only use full surveys, i.e. where the entire Survey Unit is reported as covered, in our dataset. The difficulty of distinguishing the sex of non-mature Dall’s sheep via aerial survey can lead to yearlings of both sexes and small-horned rams often being counted as ewes. A ‘ewe-like’ category is often used due to this uncertainty, and we therefore used reported ‘ewe-like’ counts as the denominator in lamb-to-ewe ratios where they are available. While this ratio is not a perfect measure of productivity because it is affected by a combination of factors including parturition rates, lamb survival, and adult survival, the juvenile-to-female ratios have been shown to be a useful measure of productivity in other ungulate species because the majority (96%) of the variation in the ratio is caused by variation in juvenile survival [64]. The inclusion of ‘ewe-likes’ leads to lower values than the true lamb-to-ewe ratio, but it is still a useful index of productivity and has been used as such in other Dall’s sheep studies [56, 57].

SnowModel

Snow and climate covariates were produced using SnowModel [32] at a daily timestep for the Jacksina study domain. SnowModel has been used successfully in wide variety of latitudinal settings and has previously been used for studies in continental Alaska and mountain regions [6466] SnowModel’s five sub-models, MicroMet [67], EnBal [68], SnowPack [69], SnowTran-3D [33], and SnowAssim [70] in combination with topographic, land cover and meteorological data simulate a comprehensive set of snowpack evolution processes in a physically based manner (please refer to sub-model references for details on their physics and validation). MicroMet ingests meteorological data and distributes them throughout the model domain at each timestep on the basis of known relationships between landscape and meteorological variables. EnBal simulates the surface energy exchange according to the meteorological data distributed by MicroMet and snow evolution from the previous timestep. SnowPack evolves snow depth, density, and temperature according to precipitation input and surface conditions produced by EnBal. Last in the modelling process, SnowTran-3D redistributes snow in response to the interaction between the wind-fields at each timestep, surface topography, and vegetation snow holding capacity. SnowAssim allows the user to input in-situ or remotely sensed measurements of snow water equivalent and corrects the precipitation forcing retroactively before a second model simulation. A workflow diagram of the modelling procedure can be found in the Fig 3 in S1 Appendix.

We obtained meteorological data from the NASA Modern Era Retrospective-Analysis for Research and Applications Version 2 [MERRA-2; 71]. This gridded climate data is available hourly from 1980 to present at a resolution of 0.5° latitude to 0.625° longitude (~55 km by ~32 km). We aggregated the hourly surface forcing variables from 16 grid points covering the study domain into daily values, using the meteorological inputs required by MicroMet; temperature, relative humidity, wind speed, wind direction and precipitation. The topographic and vegetation layers required by SnowModel were derived from the Advanced Spaceborne Thermal Emission and Reflection Radiometer Global Digital Elevation Model Version 2 [ASTER GDEM; 72] and the National Land Cover Database 2011 [NLCD; 73] respectively. We conducted a simple analysis of the land cover change in each of the 9 survey units by cropping a further dataset, the NLCD 2011 Land Cover Alaska 2001 to 2011 From To Change Index [74], and analysing the extent of landcover change from 2001 to 2011. Of the 8678 km2 of all 9 units, only 27 km2, or 0.32%, had been classified in this dataset has having changed in landcover over the 10 year period (Table 2 in S1 Appendix). We do not believe that the rate and magnitude of this change was fast or great enough to impinge on Dall’s sheep populations within the timeframe of this study, and we therefore kept land cover as a static layer in the modelling procedure. The ASTER GDEM was chosen for its complete coverage of the study domain and comparable 1-arc second resolution to the 30 m NLCD data. It was resampled (bilinear) to this resolution and reprojected into the Alaska Albers Equal Area Conic coordinate reference system to match that of NLCD. To cover the JSU, a domain of 1680 by 2244 30-m grid cells (~50 km by 67 km) was created. The 30 m resolution represents a balance between computational efficiency and the ability of the model to simulate important features of the snowscape, e.g., wind-blown areas and drifts, that occur in mountainous regions.

Snow surveys

We obtained ground-based snow observations from September 2016 to August 2017 to calibrate and validate SnowModel. We installed 22 Reconyx Hyperfire PC900 [75] time-lapse cameras in two areas of the domain, Jaeger Mesa (~1600 m to ~2100 m elevation) and a site near Rambler Mine, Nabesna (~900 m to ~1200 m elevation). Each camera was aimed at a 1.5 m tall snow stake with bands every 5 cm, and cameras were programmed to take hourly photos (Fig 2). Camera sites were selected to capture gradients in elevation, vegetation and aspect with consideration for field safety in steep and rugged terrain. We conducted snow surveys in and around the camera sites from 18th to 24th March 2017. A snow pit was excavated at a randomly selected location within 5 m of each camera and we recorded the stratigraphic profile, the temperature profile at 10 cm intervals using a digital thermometer, and the density profile double-sampled at 10 cm intervals using a Snowmetrics 1000c cutter [76] and a digital scale. For ingestion into SnowAssim, the mean density of the double sample at each interval was calculated and converted into snow water equivalent (SWE). The product of each interval’s SWE was then used to calculate the bulk SWE for each pit location. In total 18 pits were possible with the remaining 4 cameras being located in areas that were snow-free. Alongside the snow pit measurements, 7806 snow depth measurements were taken and recorded using both manual and automated methods [77], with location recorded by GPS in both instances. These measurements were obtained at 2 m intervals using 4 sampling configurations: (1) 50 m transects in a cross-pattern from each camera site, (2) transects following the elevation gradient between cameras grouped by aspect on the east and west sides of Jaeger Mesa and at Rambler Mine, (3) 50 m ‘spirals’ randomly located on top of Jaeger Mesa, and (4) a sequence of traverses running north-to-south, east-to-west and along the edge of the northern tip of Jaeger Mesa. This sampling strategy was conducted to characterise different scales of snow-depth variability in different configurations of topography and vegetation.

Fig 2.

Fig 2

(a) Remote camera and snow stake installation looking northeast to the Nabesna river from Jaeger Mesa on 20th March 2017. Note the wind-blown, snow free areas on the slopes to the immediate sides of the snow stake. Photo C. Cosgrove. (b) Nursery band of Dall’s sheep on Jaeger Mesa. (c) Laura Prugh operating the Magnaprobe to survey snow depth atop Jaeger Mesa. Photo Anne Nolin. (d) Chris Cosgrove surveying a snow pit for stratigraphy, temperature and density profile. Photo L. Prugh. The individuals in this manuscript have given written informed consent (as outlined in PLOS consent form) to publish these images.

Calibration of SnowModel

A fundamental first step in improving the modelled description of snow evolution is to assess and correct the precipitation forcing ingested in the model. To do this, SnowAssim was utilised with our recorded SWE measurements in low-elevation, sparsely forested areas near Rambler Mine within a modelling run from 1st September 2016 to 1st April 2017. Using only the forested SWE data protected against error caused by assimilating SWE values from areas subject to greater wind redistribution. The synoptic scale of precipitation in the region is greater in size than that of the modelling domain, so the precipitation accumulating in low-elevation forest areas is proxy to that falling in high elevations but is less likely to be highly redistributed by wind. A precipitation correction factor of 0.37 was found using this procedure and hence applied to the precipitation forcing from 1980 to 2017.

To reproduce the field-observed patterns of snow distribution in our model simulations, we compared snow depth, density and water equivalent field measurements from a subset of the domain to their equivalent modelled outputs. Given the focus of this study on snow conditions in Dall’s sheep habitat (see below), we calibrated the model for optimum performance at high-elevations and thus used only field observations from alpine areas in this part of the calibration procedure.

Initial examination of the wind forcing data derived from MERRA-2 revealed it to be insufficiently strong to redistribute snow, a potential bias in the original data but also likely due to the suppression caused by aggregating hourly data into daily values. As snow density and wind speed interact with one another, we adjusted a scalar increasing the windspeed in the meteorological forcing data and a SnowModel parameter controlling the snow density evolution together. After an initial sensitivity analysis, our calibration involved 72 SnowModel simulations from 1st September 2016 to 1st April 2017 with the density adjustment factor ranging from 2.0 to 10.0 in increments of 1.0, and the wind speed scalar ranging from 1.5 to 5.0 in increments of 0.5. To establish the best calibration, each snowpit-observed bulk snow density measurement was compared to the modelled bulk snow density in the equivalent model grid-cell and the Root Mean Squared Error (RMSE) was computed. Using the same procedure, observed snow depth was compared to modelled snow depth, with observed snow depths being aggregated into a mean value for each grid cell given the high resolution of our depth surveys. Additionally, for the grid cells where bulk density was available, we compared observed SWE to modelled SWE. RMSE values for density, depth, and SWE were ranked among the 72 simulations, and the mean ranking of each simulation was then calculated. The parameters from the top-ranked calibration were then used to model snow properties for the study domain from September 1st 1980 to August 31st 2017. To further test the calibration, a validation was conducted using the snow depths acquired from the remote camera installations.

Model derived covariates

To limit our modelled snow properties to Dall’s sheep habitat, we selected only pixels that correspond to their preferred land cover above 1200 m. Roffler et al. (see see supplementary materials RSF_S3.png in [78]) found this elevation to be the lower limit of Dall’s sheep core habitat in WRST using locations of sheep observed during surveys, albeit for summer months. To delineate the land cover that Dall’s sheep select for, we included only pixels corresponding to the Dwarf Shrub and Barren Land classifications in the NLCD product [73]. This follows numerous studies that have found that Dall’s sheep select for open, sparsely vegetated areas at mid- to high-elevations [e.g., 55], and recent habitat selection models driven by GPS-collar data have confirmed this [65]. We recognise that Dall’s sheep may use lower elevations in winter, but there are no currently published data describing their winter distribution in our study region.

Four snow covariates were derived for comparison to the following summer’s lamb-to-ewe ratios: mean snow depth, mean snow density, total snowfall and percent ‘forageable area’. Additionally, we included SnowModel-derived mean air temperature as a climate covariate. For mean snow depth, mean snow density, total snowfall, and mean air temperature, the daily mean was found for all grid cells matching the above criteria first. Seasonal means (fall = September, October and November; winter = December, January and February; spring = March, April and May) were then calculated from the daily data in the case of mean snow depth, mean snow density and mean air temperature, whereas the daily data was summed by season for total snowfall. Higher incidences of snow depth, snow density and snowfall were expected to be deleterious to Dall’s sheep productivity, with increases in air temperature anticipated to lead to increases in lamb-to-ewe ratios. The final covariate, mean percent ‘forageable area’, was calculated as the seasonal mean of the daily percentage of Dall’s sheep habitat with snow depth beneath half-chest height (0.25 m) and snow density beneath 330 kg m-3. These snow conditions were found by Mahoney et al. [65], and confirmed in the field by Sivy et al. [79], to be selected by Dall’s sheep at movement scales typical of foraging behaviour. We hence expected greater percentages of forageable area to correlate with increased Dall’ sheep productivity. To test whether there was a delayed effect from conditions in the previous snow season to parturition, i.e. >1 yr previous to the summer of sheep survey, we also calculated aggregate metrics for all of the above variables for both the previous summer (reported as ‘Previous Summer’) and all months where snow cover is a dominant feature in the study area (September through May, reported as ‘Previous Year’).

Statistical analyses

To examine the relationships between the model derived snow and climate metrics and lamb-to-ewe ratios, we employed multiple regression models after a covariate selection process. All analyses were conducted in the R program [80]. As a first step we tested whether the inclusion of Survey Unit as a random effect was significant in models using each of our seasonal snow and climate covariates as a single predictor. To do this we used ANOVA to test for significant difference between paired models of the same predictor but fitted with and without Survey Unit as a random effect using the R package nlme [81]. At this step, all models were fitted using restricted maximum likelihood (REML) to allow for valid comparison between the model with and the model without the random effect [82] and we additionally tested a null model. We then ranked each single predictor model and the null model, when fitted without the addition of the random effect term and using Ordinary Least Squares (OLS), by their second-order Akaike Information Criterion (AICc). Covariates that were found to be ranked higher than the null model as single predictors were subsequently considered as additional additive terms in multiple regression models. To avoid over-parameterization on a small dataset we restricted the number of predictors per model to three and excluded any covariates that had a collinearity of greater than 0.7 in the same model. The final list of single- and multi-predictor models was finally ranked by their AICc to discern which snow and climate covariates had the greatest explanatory power in isolation or combination. Linear regression was used to test for trends in covariate values from 1980 to 2017 by season. Likewise, the coefficient of variation (CV) was calculated for a rolling 10-year window for each snow and climate metric, and linear regression was used to test whether the degree of interannual variability increased over time. An alpha of 0.05 was used for evaluating statistical significance throughout, with the exception of testing each productivity model’s intercept and predictor estimates, where a Bonferroni-corrected alpha level, as calculated by alpha divided by the total number of models in the final list, is reported to reduce the chance of type 1 error.

Results

SnowModel calibration

The parameter combination that best produced our observations of depth, density and SWE was a density adjustment factor of 6.0 and a wind speed increase of 2.5, producing RMSEs of 0.09 m snow depth, 31.71 kg m-3 snow density and 0.04 m SWE (Fig 4 and Table 3 in S1 Appendix). Taking the snow depth from images recorded daily at 12:00 Alaska Standard Time, there were 4996 available days of data from 17 cameras located outside of forested and shrub areas. Comparison of the camera snow depth to model snow depth yielded an RMSE of 0.08 m, which is comparable to that from the spatial calibration albeit with an average 0.06 m bias towards over estimation (Fig 5 in S1 Appendix).

Summary of sheep surveys and modelled snow and climate metrics

Of the 41 surveys across 19 years included in the analysis (Table 1 in S1 Appendix), the mean lamb-to-ewe ratio was 0.30 (±0.10 SD), with a maximum of 0.55 sampled in the Mount Drum survey unit in 1981 and a minimum of 0.09 sampled in Jacksina in 1993. Snow depths in fall (mean = 0.28 m ±0.06 SD) were always lower than both winter (mean = 0.40 m ±0.06 SD) and spring (mean = 0.42 m ±0.07 SD), which generally had a similar mean snow depth and closely followed the interannual variability established in fall (Table 4 in S1 Appendix; Fig 3).

Fig 3. Time series and trends of each snow and climate covariate by season 1980 to 2017 within the Jacksina sheep survey unit within Wrangell-St. Elias National Park and Preserve, Alaska.

Fig 3

Note the similar pattern of snow depth year-on-year across all three seasons and the close similarity of the mean snow depth in winter and spring.

Model derived covariates and lamb-to-ewe ratios

The addition of Survey Unit as a random effect was not shown to be significant for any of the initial single predictor models (see Table 5 in S1 Appendix). Hence, we continued our model selection with models fitted by OLS. When comparing the single predictor models of each snow and climate covariate 11 models were ranked higher by AICc than the null model (see Table 5 in S1 Appendix), none of which contained a covariate pertaining to the previous year’s Summer or snow season indicating that there wasn’t a delayed-effect from the previous snow season. Of the covariates ranked higher than the model only snowfall (fall, winter, and spring in order of weighting) and air temperature (fall) were found to be under the cut-off for collinearity. Fall snowfall and fall air temperature were therefore used in two and three predictor linear models in combination with the other covariates leaving 40 models, inclusive of the null model, in our final list (see Table 6 in S1 Appendix).

Of the top ranked models, 5 are shown to be well supported (ΔAICc < 2) and all include a seasonal covariate of snow depth and fall air temperature in their predictors (Table 1). The highest ranked model, fall snow depth and fall air temperature has an adjusted R-squared of 0.41 and is significant to the Bonferroni-corrected alpha level for the intercept and fall snow depth terms, and alpha for fall temperature (Table 1). Coefficients from this model indicate that increases in fall snow depth and decreases in fall air temperature lead to a decline in the following summer’s lamb-to-ewe ratio (Fig 4). All models that contain snow depth as a term outperform models using other snow and climate metrics (see Table 6 in S1 Appendix). Estimates of snow depth, snow density and snowfall in all models indicate that increases in these variables decreased lamb-to-ewe ratios, whereas estimates for air temperature and forageable area showed a positive relationship between these predictors and lamb-to-ewe ratios, following expected relationships (Table 1, Table 6 in S1 Appendix).

Table 1. Top 10 models as ranked by second order Akaike Information Criterion (AICc).

Model Intercept (SE) 1st Predictor Estimate (SE) Fall Air Temperature (SE) Fall Snowfall (SE) K Delta AICc AICc weight R-Sq. Adjusted R-Sq.
Fall Snow Depth + Fall Air Temperature 0.690 (0.094)** -0.738 (0.193)** 0.027 (0.012)* 3 0 0.188 0.439 0.41
Winter Snow Depth + Fall Air Temperature + Fall Snowfall 0.900 (0.112)** -0.599 (0.214)* 0.032 (0.012)* -0.818 (0.398)* 4 0.134 0.176 0.472 0.429
Spring Snow Depth + Fall Air Temperature + Fall Snowfall 0.851 (0.111)** -0.522 (0.192)* 0.027 (0.013)* -0.940 (0.388)* 4 0.523 0.145 0.467 0.424
Fall Snow Depth + Fall Air Temperature + Fall Snowfall 0.780 (0.114)** -0.593 (0.219)* 0.030 (0.012)* -0.593 (0.435) 4 0.592 0.14 0.466 0.423
Winter Snow Depth + Fall Air Temperature 0.792 (0.103)** -0.738 (0.211)** 0.029 (0.012)* 3 1.963 0.071 0.412 0.381
Fall Snow Depth 0.511 (0.046)** -0.895 (0.187)** 2 2.328 0.059 0.37 0.354
Spring Snow Depth + Fall Snowfall 0.689 (0.081)** -0.720 (0.173)** -0.848 (0.402)* 3 2.374 0.057 0.406 0.375
Spring Snow Depth + Fall Air Temperature 0.706 (0.099)** -0.623 (0.199)* 0.023 (0.014) 3 3.949 0.026 0.383 0.35
Fall Snow Depth + Fall Snowfall 0.552 (0.068)** -0.818 (0.211)** -0.367 (0.452) 3 4.084 0.024 0.381 0.348
Spring Snow Depth 0.577 (0.064)** -0.788 (0.177)** 2 4.45 0.02 0.336 0.319

Standard error (SE) shown in brackets for both the intercept and estimate of each predictor in each model. 1st Predictor indicates the 1st snow and climate covariable listed in the Model column.

** indicates significance at a Bonferroni corrected alpha level of 0.00125 (alpha / total models)

* indicates significance at alpha = 0.05. P-values were computed in R by the Wald test method via use of the ‘summary’ core package [80].

Fig 4.

Fig 4

A) An increase in fall mean snow depth decreases Dall’s sheep summer productivity, here defined as lamb-to-ewe ratio, whereas B) increased fall mean air temperature increases summer productivity. Estimates and the shaded grey 95% confidence interval are derived from the top model as ranked by AICc in Table 3.

Trends and variance in seasonal covariates 1980 to 2017

No statistically significant trends were found for modelled snow metrics from 1980 to 2017 (Table 7 in S1 Appendix; Fig 3). However, model estimates indicated decreasing snowfall, snow depth and snow density, and increasing forageable area and air temperature for all seasons (Fig 3). The interannual variation in winter snow density significantly increased during the time series (Table 8 in S1 Appendix; Fig 5). In contrast, winter snowfall was found to be significantly less variable over time (Table 8 in S1 Appendix; Fig 5). The highest interannual CVs (non-rolling) occurred in fall for both snow depth (CV = 22.21%) and snow density (CV = 8.06%), winter for both snowfall (CV = 21.87%) and forageable area (CV = 15.46%), and spring for air temperature (CV = 17.36%; Table 4 in S1 Appendix).

Fig 5. Time series of 10-year rolling coefficient of variability (CV) for each snow and climate covariate by season within the Jacksina sheep survey unit within Wrangell-St. Elias National Park and Preserve, Alaska.

Fig 5

Discussion

The impact of changing snow conditions on wildlife in northern ecosystems is of both ecological and societal concern as these remote regions are signalling major impacts of accelerated warming [83]. However, studies are limited by data that are scarcely distributed in time and space in the region, especially in alpine areas [27], and there remains uncertainty as to when and what snow conditions are most important to wildlife demography. Here we use a spatially distributed snow model to simulate snow and climate conditions over 37 years in the northern Wrangell-St Elias National Park and Preserve (WRST) to better understand the influence of snow properties on the dynamics of Dall’s sheep. Snow conditions, most notably increased snow depth, were strongly associated with declines in Dall’s sheep productivity, with decreased air temperature and increased snowfall also leading to decreased lambs being observed in summer, though with less predictive power in comparison to snow depth. Our top-ranked model(s) indicated that fall was the time period that these snow and climate conditions were most important. These findings suggest that challenging snow conditions that persist throughout the snow year, as per our first hypothesis, are more important to Dall’s sheep productivity than conditions during the spring lambing season, as described by our second hypothesis.

Similar to other alpine and Arctic ungulates, Dall’s sheep access forage by either ‘cratering’, wherein they dig through the snow, or by finding snow-free areas. Deeper snow has been shown to reduce foraging efficiency in studies of other ungulates, potentially leading to increased caloric deficit and decreased birth mass in offspring [48, 84]. Thus, early establishment of deep snow conditions may lead to energetically challenging conditions over many months, protractedly decreasing the body condition of ewes and therefore decreasing their ability to successfully produce, protect and nurse healthy lambs in the weeks immediately after birth. The significance of Fall air temperature as an additional term in the top models further suggests that early-season calorific expenditure, through the increased cost of thermoregulation in this instance [85], is more damaging to productivity than that occurring closer to lambing.

Two recent large-scale studies stand in contrast to our results. Van de Kerk et al. [47] and Rattenbury et al. [42] found that the date of snow disappearance best predicted Dall’s sheep productivity, with later dates resulting in lower lamb-to-ewe ratios. Both studies noted that this relationship was weaker at lower latitudes, including that of WRST, and suggested the comparatively extended growing season in these ranges may buffer the effect of severe winters due to increased forage abundance and quality. However, van de Kerk et al. [47] additionally found that snow cover duration, i.e. the number of days snow is present each winter, also had an effect on lamb-to-ewe ratios, albeit relatively weaker than snow disappearance date, and hence proposed that extended exposure to difficult conditions is less important than the snow cover immediately before or after to lambing. Snow disappearance dates depend on the energy balance of a snowpack, along with weather conditions and other variables. Thin, low density snow cover can extend later into the year if air temperatures are cool enough to preserve it, while deep, dense snows can rapidly disappear due to early spring conditions with high temperatures and rain [86]. Hence, inference of the vertical properties of snow from its extended presence in remote sensing data is not always reliable and cannot describe the evolution of snow depth and density throughout the entirety of a snow season. Our methods here highlight the importance of vertical snow properties on northern wildlife such as Dall’s sheep and show that detailed, local analyses of snow properties can reveal new insights that range-wide remote sensing methodologies, such as van de Kerk et al. [47] and Rattenbury et al. [42], may not be able to detect. Our results also compare well statistically; while van de Kerk et al. [47] do not report comparable metrics, for the Nabesna area within their analysis, which is within our study area, Rattenbury et al. [42] report an R-squared of 0.33 [42; see Fig 4], which is lower than our top model’s adjusted R-squared of 0.41.

The effects of snow on the movement, habitat selection, and energetics of various wildlife has been relatively well studied [27], but there is a lack of evidence linking the impact of snow conditions on fine-scale behavior to broad-scale demographic consequences [65]. Mahoney et al. [65] found that Dall’s sheep in Lake Clark National Park strongly favoured areas of less dense, shallow snow at fine-scale movements associated with foraging, illustrating that habitat selection is affected by snow density as well as depth. Forageable area, a variable derived from the area available below a threshold density and snow depth found in Mahoney et al. [65], showed relatively poor predictive power (Table 5 in S1 Appendix). This was unexpected given the forageable area metric’s increased detail and foundation in field observations [79]. However, we suggest that an explanation for this might be that the actual forageable area is quite different from the modelled forageable area. For example, low-snow or snow-free areas might be devoid of forage or, even if forage is present, these areas might be in terrain that is avoided by Dall’s sheep due to predation risk. Mean snow depth, conversely, is highly ranked for all seasons and is possibly a more reliable metric for describing the relative efficiency of winter foraging behaviour.

Here we have focused on the impact of snow conditions on Dall’s sheep productivity. However, it is important to note that productivity and survival are influenced by additional factors, including predation and interspecific population dynamics [43, 45, 87], forage quantity and quality [44, 45], and in rare cases by disease [87]. Other mountain ungulates have shown declines in productivity in response to high population densities and climactic forcing [e.g., 8891]. However, a preliminary study of a simple regression of density (as calculated by the total number of surveyed adult sheep, inclusive of yearlings, divided by the area of the Survey Unit) vs lamb-to-ewe ratios in our dataset did not show any relationship suggesting density dependence was not important in our study area. This follows the findings of van de Kerk et al. [47; see Appendix 2] that found no effect of the survey date and population density on lamb-to-ewe ratios and used data from a much larger, range-wide dataset of 534 surveys. However, habitat-selection models of Dall’s sheep, e.g. Roffler et al. [78], suggest that Dall’s sheep likely utilize only certain locations of the Survey Units they are reported within, e.g. areas predominantly near escape terrain and devoid of tall vegetation. Hence, the simple calculation of density described above, and used by van de Kerk et al. [47], is likely to be prone to underestimation and vary in accuracy according to the relative abundance of preferred habitat in each Survey Unit. We therefore suggest that further work incorporates insights from habitat selection modelling to better test for any density dependence on productivity in Dall’s sheep.

In response to other studies that show a lagged effect of snow and climate conditions on the body condition and parturition rate of other ungulates [e.g., 91, 92] we tested the importance of the previous summer’s and the previous snow season’s snow and climate conditions on productivity. No significant relationships were found (Table 5 in S1 Appendix), suggesting that the snow and climate conditions for the season immediately before lambing are more important for productivity. Our dataset however does not include variables pertaining to the quality of vegetation available to ewes in the summer preceding or current to lambing. Both early [93] and more recent work [94] has connected metrics of summer forage quality with both lamb survival rates [93, 94] and Dall’s sheep productivity [93]. Also beyond the scope of the current study are the effects of interspecific relationships. The primary predators of Dall’s sheep, coyote (Canis latrans) and golden eagles (Aquila chrysaetos), have been shown to account for less lamb mortality in summers with a high Normalized Difference Vegetation Index (NDVI) [94] and are likely to prey more on Dall’s sheep during years with low snowshoe hare numbers [43, 45]. To gain a more holistic understanding of Dall’s sheep productivity and population dynamics, attention needs to be paid to a wide range of biotic and abiotic factors that are not considered here. The adjusted R-squared of our top ranked model with only snow properties included (fall snow depth, R-sq. = 0.35; Table 1), is likely indicative of our narrow focus. However, our findings do illustrate that snow properties, and in particular their early establishment, are important factors for Dall’s sheep productivity and stand to inform further research into population dynamics of Dall’s sheep and other wild ungulates.

Seasonal snow throughout the northern hemisphere is being altered in terms of its coverage, timing, duration and physical properties as a response to climate change [7]. The increase in extreme events, such as late snow disappearance in spring 2013 in Alaska, are considered a likely product of climate change that might impinge on Dall’s sheep productivity [95]. However, we found no evidence that snow conditions important to Dall’s sheep productivity have markedly changed in WRST from the long-term mean or have increased in terms of interannual variability during our study period. This may be due to the sub-Arctic location of northern WRST in Alaska’s dry interior where changes to the form and volume of precipitation are less pronounced than in wetter and warmer maritime regions [7].

Verbyla et al. [60] noted substantial differences in climate and snowline elevation throughout Dall’s sheep ranges and found that the mean snow line elevation on May 15th had pronounced interannual variability in the central and eastern Brooks Range. It is in these Arctic Alaskan ranges that are on the fringe of suitable Dall sheep habitat where the greatest population decreases in Dall’s sheep have been observed, prompting emergency harvest closures in some areas [36]. Dall’s sheep sensitivity to spring snow conditions at these high latitudes has been established by van de Kerk et al. [47] and Rattenbury et al. [42], and it may be that higher interannual variability in the elevation of spring snow line, potentially indicating a greater frequency of extreme events, is responsible for the recent declines in Dall’s sheep populations in these areas [42, 47, 60]. Dall’s sheep populations in sub-Arctic ranges in Alaska, including WRST, have population trends that are generally regarded as being stable, with the exception of the maritime Kenai peninsula [36]. If the impact of climate change on snow conditions in these ranges has yet to be acute, such as in the case of our results, it is possible that low-latitude interior mountain ranges may represent refugia for Dall’s sheep and other snow-influenced alpine species [96]. Wildlife populations, particularly those that have low reproductive rates like Dall’s sheep, may be resilient to sporadic extreme conditions but become vulnerable if extreme conditions become more frequent [97]. Hence, further work examining regional, long-term trends in the interannual variability of snow conditions would prove valuable in determining where climate change poses the greatest threat to alpine wildlife populations.

Our modelling approach combined with several decades of survey data demonstrated seasonal variation in the impact of snow conditions on Dall’s sheep productivity in Wrangell-St Elias National Park and Preserve. However, some caution should be exercised when extending our results to other regions given the specificity and assimilation of in-situ data from our study area. While our methodological approach yields novel insights regarding seasonal snow properties in comparison to alternative approaches using optical remote sensing datasets, it also comes with its own inherent disadvantages, including limited spatial coverage, high computational demand, necessity of technical expertise, and inherent uncertainties when modelling a physical environment. Although we conducted intensive field surveys to improve the calibration of our model, these surveys occupied a small spatial and temporal extent within the larger modelling domain. This is despite efforts made to sample a wide representation of elevation, aspect and landcover during snow surveys and the installation of remote cameras. With data lacking to test the model against in-situ measurements from previous years it is possible that the model is only representative to its calibration year. While this is an important source of uncertainty, the small RMSE and bias shown in our calibration and temporal validation results does suggest our approach has promise in long-term studies of other wildlife, especially so where there are in-situ, long-term snow and meteorological datasets for model-forcing and assimilation.

Conclusions

The establishment of a deep snowpack in fall alongside low fall temperatures was found to best explain decreased Dall’s sheep productivity during the following summer. An incremental effect of season-long environmental conditions on ewe body condition hence appears to be of greater importance than spring snow conditions in our study area, a finding contrary to studies based on snow cover rather than depth [42, 47]. Our results potentially demonstrate an important link between known fine-scale effects of snow conditions, i.e. selection of shallow and/or less dense snow, with broad-scale patterns of demography. We hence propose that our utilization of a spatially distributed snow model has scope for application in studies of other snow-influenced wildlife. Though additional data that establishes direct links between snow properties, animal movements and body condition, forage opportunity, and infant survival rates are needed for a complete mechanistic understanding of snow impacts. We found no significant trends in the long-term mean, or in a rolling measure of interannual variation, of modelled snow properties that were shown to be important to Dall’s sheep productivity. Climate change hence appears to not yet be having a strong effect on snow conditions in our study domain, a result that is of broader ecological interest. However, if climate change does lead to major changes in future snow depths, our findings indicate that Dall’s sheep productivity may be strongly affected.

Supporting information

S1 Appendix. Document containing supporting figures and tables listed in manuscript.

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S1 Data. Table containing raw data of northern Wrangell St Elias Sheep surveys.

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S2 Data. Table containing model derived snow covariates for each snow year from 1981 to 2017.

Where; snod = snow depth, sden = snow density, forage = forageable area, and spre = snowfall, tair = air temperature.

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S3 Data. Table combing sheep surveys and snow covariates.

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S4 Data. Snow depth derived from SnowModel.

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S5 Data. Snow density derived from SnowModel.

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S6 Data. Snowfall derived from SnowModel.

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S7 Data. Forageable area derived from SnowModel.

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S8 Data. Air temperature derived from SnowModel.

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S1 File. Python script combining snow variable data with sheep survey data.

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S2 File. Python script compiling snow covariate data by season from 1981 to 2017.

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S3 File. Python script compiling snow and sheep data together.

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S4 File. R script compiling Fig 3 and Table 7 in S1 Appendix.

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S5 File. R script compiling Fig 5 and Table 8 in S1 Appendix.

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S6 File. Zip file containing data, scripts and instructions to create Fig 2 in S1 Appendix.

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S7 File. Zip file containing data, scripts and instructions to create Fig 4 in S1 Appendix.

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S8 File. Zip file containing data, scripts and instructions to create Fig 3 in S1 Appendix.

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S9 File. R script compiling Tables 5 and 6 in S1 Appendix and Table 1 and Fig 4 in manuscript.

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S10 File. Zip file containing data, scripts and instructions to create Fig 3 in S1 Appendix.

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Acknowledgments

Major thanks go to Glen Liston for assisting in the calibration and running of SnowModel. The Ellis family in Nabesna, AK and 40 Mile Air in Tok, AK greatly aided field logistics. Kelly Sivy and Anika Pinzner assisted with the field surveys. We thank the ADF&G, NPS and contracted (e.g. pilots) personnel who conducted the sheep surveys. Comments and insight from the academic editor and 3 reviewers appreciably improved the paper.

Data Availability

Daily rasters of snow properties, generated by SnowModel as described in the manuscript, will be held at the Oak Ridge National Laboratory (ORNL) DAAC, https://daac.ornl.gov. Scripts that process this daily data into the seasonal aggregates used in the analysis will be additionally included. This data is not possible to submit as supplementary information given its multiple terabyte size and is in the process of being archived. Field data used to calibrate SnowModel, as described in the manuscript, is already archived at the ORNL DAAC - see https://daac.ornl.gov/cgi-bin/dsviewer.pl?ds_id=1656. Scripts and methods used in the calibration of SnowModel to these data are included in the Supplementary Information. Dall's sheep survey data and the seasonally aggregated, SnowModel-derived, snow property data are included in the Supplementary Information alongside scripts preparing them for analysis (S2 to S10). All scripts used to generate figures are included in the Supplementary Information. Additional data used to create figure A2 in S1 Appendix can be located at https://daac.ornl.gov/ABOVE/guides/Last_Day_Spring_Snow.html.

Funding Statement

AWN and CLC received funding from grant number NNX15AV86A from the National Aeronautics and Space Administration Terrestrial Ecology Program - https://above.nasa.gov/cgi-bin/inv_pgp.pl?pgid=3379&projType=project&projID=3379&progID=6. LRP received funding from grant number NNX15AU21A from the National Aeronautics and Space Administration Terrestrial Ecology Program - https://above.nasa.gov/cgi-bin/inv_pgp.pl?pgid=3379&projType=project&projID=3379&progID=6. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Seasonal influence of snow conditions on Dall’s sheep productivity in Wrangell-St Elias National Park and Preserve

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Reviewer #1: General comments

My critical review of Cosgrove et al.’s paper on Seasonal influence of snow conditions on Dall’s sheep productivity will be fairly short, as ~70% of the paper (at last in the methods section) deals with subjects (i.e. remote sensing, climatic analyses) that are out of my area of expertise (wildlife/ungulate biology). I would thus recommend the editor to base his evaluation also on the comments of experts in these other fields.

That said, the MS appears generally well written, with mostly appropriate analyses (but see comments below) and suitable for the readership of PLoS ONE. After some adjustments, I think it will represent a nice addition to the existing literature on mountain ungulate ecology.

Specific comments

l. 116-128: before these paragraphs you have correctly discussed several snow characteristics that can have an impact on sheep (and wildlife in general), but then here you use the somewhat fuzzy term ‘snow conditions’. What does that mean? Hardness? Persistence? Depth?

l. 190-195: so, the sheep counts were not spatially explicit, or? I am not sure I understand at which spatial scale you coupled counts and snow cover conditions.

l. 195-204: I am not sure I understand here. So, lambs have been clearly identified I suppose, and ‘ewe-like’ counts have been pooled together with ‘true’ ewe counts, even though they might have been yearlings (of either sex) and/or young rams, right? If I misunderstood, please clarify. If I understood correctly, I am wondering why you would need to include them in the denominator in the first place. Can’t you simply use the ‘true’ ewe counts as a more robust (less error-prone) proxy of lamb-to-ewe ratio? Non-mature individuals and rams do not contribute to lambing anyway, so why would you include them in the counts?

l.349-369: The stats are all in all alright, but can be much improved. First, it is not clear to me why you would use total counts as a weight in your model. Did you have issue of heteroskedasticity? Second, and most importantly, using only snow metrics as predictors is rather simplistic. Mountain ungulate demography is well known to be affected by the synergistic effect of climate and density (see Jacobson et al. 2004 or Corlatti et al. 2019). So, at least I would have expected the inclusion of the interactive effect of snow metrics with a proxy of population density (which should include yearling, rams and ewes, but not lambs), possibly with a delayed effect. Just looking at your data in Table 1 I suspect (but I might be wrong) that some density-dependent effect may be present. Other climatic features might also play a role, temperature for instance. The main point here is that snow may surely be the single most important parameter driving sheep dynamics, yet you ideally need to provide some more support for that (i.e. you need to convince the reader that no other parameter is driving the lamb-to-ewe ratio). Third, I am not sure why you did not test for at least a 1-year delayed effect of snow: the lamb-ewe ratio may well depend on the fact that the mother was not fertilized in the first place, because of poor body conditions, which might depend on the snow conditions of the year before.

l. 396-407: a test and a measure of goodness of fit of your selected linear model are missing. Did you inspect model residuals? Can you provide a measure of R2 (marginal and conditional)?

In absence of clarifications with respect to potentially different drivers (i.e. density dependence, delayed effects on lamb-to-ewe ratio) is difficult to evaluate the Discussion.

References

Jacobson, A.R., Provenzale, A., von Hardenberg, A., Bassano, B. & Festa-Bianchet, M. (2004). Climate forcing and density dependence in a mountain ungulate population. Ecology 85, 1598–1610.

Corlatti, L., Bonardi, A., Bragalanti, N. and L. Pedrotti. 2019. Long-term dynamics of Alpine ungulates suggest interspecific competition. Journal of Zoology 309, 241–249.

Reviewer #2: To question 1: I answered yes, but there are, a few instances where there was over-interpretation of the results (e.g. AICc model selection).

To question 2: I answered yes, but the concerns mentioned for question 1 are still valid. I think the authors have mostly used the statistical models presented in the manuscript in an appropriate fashion. However, they should have used a different approach to confronting multi-collinearity. Also, I am not an expert on the SnowModel and thus cannot judge this section.

To question 3: I answered yes because the data is available.

To question 4: I answered yes because the manuscript is well-written and in standard English. However, I think the manuscript could be shortened with more concise writing.

Additional comments are in an attached file.

Reviewer #3: This is a very relevant modelling study conducted to link ungulate productivity with environmental constraints on the landscape, particularly in relation to snow cover and other associated variables. Use is made of remote sensing data to establish snow cover extent and timings and to verify topographical distribution of key study areas. Use is made of a long time series of Dall Sheep population data to establish relationships between these population numbers, particularly ewe to lamb ratios, and modelled snow cover over the duration of the study using a year of environmental data to constrain the model. The suitability of the model is determined through RMSE analysis relating to the in situ data with snow depth from remote cameras used as the independent verification source.

Abstract

The study is well outlined in the abstract. There is clear emphasis of the research question to be addressed as well as providing some descriptions of the results. Quantitative reporting of the regression and statistical key results would be welcome here in more detpth. Another thing to consider in the abstract is to report the RMSE of the model to the snow characteristics you are trying to replicate. This is an essential part of the study. Additionally it would be useful to discount the role of temperature in these relationships at this stage so that the focus is clearly established on snow cover independent of temperature.

Introduction

The hypotheses of the study are well presented at the end of the section and are preceded by a clear understanding of the relevant literature in relation to the ungulate behaviour and the theories relating to their productivity.

Materials and Methods

Study site and condition is thoroughly described. Reference is made to the use of MODIS to provide average snow cover conditions over a 15 year period. A valid approach given the almost daily temporal resolution of the system. Spatial resolution limitations should not be an issue. Reference should be made to how snow is identified in terms of spectral approach.

The survey unit selection section should comment on the MODIS resolution cell size for the used snow disappearance product. There is no issue with the use of this product but it could be described in more detail. Is it a 1km product?

Animal counts are appropriately conducted and logged for the study period. Appropriate justification is provided for the use of “ewe like” classification with reference to the variability associated with this assertion.

The use of SnowModel and its packages could be better justified with reference to the accuracy of the model. Reference to the environmental scenarios in which it has been tested and validated would be welcome. More consideration of its appropriate application to different latitude settings would also be appropriate here as would information about its handling of the continental location. Is there potential for overfitting the model with the large amount of inputs to be replicated for a particular site? How sensitive is the model and can it capture the variation exhibited in previous years accurately?

Justified assumptions are presented regarding landcover variation over the duration of the study period. Use of ASTER GDEM is validated but is a 60m product being used (2 arc second)? Does this study precede ASTER GDEM V3 where 1 arcsecond data is available?

Good evidence and methodology is provided regarding the calibration model to the site specific scenario using in situ data collections. More emphasis on the RMSE values would be welcome here to instil further confidence in the modelling approach.

A key improvement to make which will enhance the study is that the modelling approach could be much better visualised by using a work flow diagram. This would outline how each package interacts with one another and the external sources of calibrating data. It’s difficult to follow using the provided descriptive words alone particularly given the multi faceted aspect of the model.

Statistical analysis appears to be performed appropriately as described.

Results

Results are described in an adequate way. Statistical outputs are appropriately interpreted. Graphs are suitably presented.

I would recommend also reporting the RMSE values in relation to a mean value in the text to further establish the validity of the results. I assume that the RMSE values should be reported in metres to match with the data shown in Figure A3 and not the data displayed in the subsequent table (slight consistency error but changes the results quite significantly).

I'd like to see more reference to p values and significance regarding modelling results where possible.

Discussion

A question that remains. The model is calibrated using in situ data collection for calibration. Could the in situ measurements be replicated for a single year but not representative of long term variability or inter-site values? Is the remote camera data suitable for this purpose? Is there a case for overfitting here? Was the optimum setting tested independently to confirm its validity or was it only for snow depth? What are the problems arising from this?

An alternative explanation for snow’s effect on sheep productivity, where snow conditions in spring influence the vulnerability of lambs to predation, is harder to establish. How was this going to be established through this study? Should it be included as a hypothesis to test if there is very little evidence to justify this? Possibly better to consider this only in the discussion rather than setting the study out to address this.

There is more focus on general subject discussion rather than interpretation and critical analysis of the presented results. The section could be viewed as overly long as a consequence of this and seems to skirt around the key issues of the paper at times. A much more succinct format could be presented.

A much larger discussion should investigate the limitations of this particular modelling approach particularly with regards to calibrating using a single year of data in a long time series analysis.

Conclusion

Th modelling exercise has been conducted competently and has presented a very interesting finding of how snow condition and timing can impact Dall Sheep productivity.

A slight issue is that as a reader I am left wondering whether it is simply the temperature that is influencing the Lamb to Ewe ratio. The stated importance of season long environmental conditions would suggest this is a possibility. I would suggest addressing this factor as an appropriate further correction to make.

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PLoS One. 2021 Feb 9;16(2):e0244787. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0244787.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


12 Sep 2020

Reviewer #1:

General comments:

My critical review of Cosgrove et al.’s paper on Seasonal influence of snow conditions on Dall’s sheep productivity will be fairly short, as ~70% of the paper (at last in the methods section) deals with subjects (i.e. remote sensing, climatic analyses) that are out of my area of expertise (wildlife/ungulate biology). I would thus recommend the editor to base his evaluation also on the comments of experts in these other fields.

That said, the MS appears generally well written, with mostly appropriate analyses (but see comments below) and suitable for the readership of PLoS ONE. After some adjustments, I think it will represent a nice addition to the existing literature on mountain ungulate ecology.

Specific comments:

l. 116-128: before these paragraphs you have correctly discussed several snow characteristics that can have an impact on sheep (and wildlife in general), but then here you use the somewhat fuzzy term ‘snow conditions’. What does that mean? Hardness? Persistence? Depth?

This has been altered now to read snow properties, which we hope is a more explicit term that links to the properties (depth/density) described in the previous paragraph

l. 190-195: so, the sheep counts were not spatially explicit, or? I am not sure I understand at which spatial scale you coupled counts and snow cover conditions.

An additional sentence has been included to clarify this. Only full surveys, where the entire Survey Unit was covered, are included in our dataset.

l. 195-204: I am not sure I understand here. So, lambs have been clearly identified I suppose, and ‘ewe-like’ counts have been pooled together with ‘true’ ewe counts, even though they might have been yearlings (of either sex) and/or young rams, right? If I misunderstood, please clarify. If I understood correctly, I am wondering why you would need to include them in the denominator in the first place. Can’t you simply use the ‘true’ ewe counts as a more robust (less error-prone) proxy of lamb-to-ewe ratio? Non-mature individuals and rams do not contribute to lambing anyway, so why would you include them in the counts?

You understand correctly, but the difficulties of judging these animals, especially from a plane, often means that surveyors end up including young animals of either sex into a ‘ewe-like’ category and do not attempt to classify or report any animal as a definite ‘ewe’. Our raw survey data has very few instances of yearlings and young rams being reported and we would question accuracy even when known-ewe categories are used. The section in question has been updated for clarity.

l.349-369: The stats are all in all alright, but can be much improved. First, it is not clear to me why you would use total counts as a weight in your model. Did you have issue of heteroskedasticity? Second, and most importantly, using only snow metrics as predictors is rather simplistic. Mountain ungulate demography is well known to be affected by the synergistic effect of climate and density (see Jacobson et al. 2004 or Corlatti et al. 2019). So, at least I would have expected the inclusion of the interactive effect of snow metrics with a proxy of population density (which should include yearling, rams and ewes, but not lambs), possibly with a delayed effect. Just looking at your data in Table 1 I suspect (but I might be wrong) that some density-dependent effect may be present. Other climatic features might also play a role, temperature for instance. The main point here is that snow may surely be the single most important parameter driving sheep dynamics, yet you ideally need to provide some more support for that (i.e. you need to convince the reader that no other parameter is driving the lamb-to-ewe ratio). Third, I am not sure why you did not test for at least a 1-year delayed effect of snow: the lamb-ewe ratio may well depend on the fact that the mother was not fertilized in the first place, because of poor body conditions, which might depend on the snow conditions of the year before.

Following this comment, and those from other reviewers, we have updated our statistical analyses (see 313 to 374). The counts were originally used as a weighting to buffer against the effect of small survey sizes having a disproportionate effect in our results. However, after further testing, including for heteroskedasticity, we did not see this play out and hence removed the weighting variable. This had the additional advantage of allowing a measure of R2 to be reported – which was to be marginal and conditional if the random effect of Survey Unit was still found to be significant. But due to the weighting variable being removed the random effect of Survey Unit was no longer important so we could instead fit models by Ordinary Least Squares and report R-sq. and adjusted R-sq. values instead.

We additionally tested for density dependence on lamb-to-ewe ratios but found no relationship, which follows the findings of van de Kerk et al. 2018, so did not include this in our model terms. Likewise, we included variables pertaining to a 1-year delayed effect of snow but did not find any of them to be a better predictor than the null model. Conversely, air temperature, which is an optional output from the MicroMet sub-model of SnowModel, was found to have some power as a predictor.

In the discussion we further include a critique of our focus largely on snow properties.

l. 396-407: a test and a measure of goodness of fit of your selected linear model are missing. Did you inspect model residuals? Can you provide a measure of R2 (marginal and conditional)?

In absence of clarifications with respect to potentially different drivers (i.e. density dependence, delayed effects on lamb-to-ewe ratio) is difficult to evaluate the Discussion.

See previous comment.

References

Jacobson, A.R., Provenzale, A., von Hardenberg, A., Bassano, B. & Festa-Bianchet, M. (2004). Climate forcing and density dependence in a mountain ungulate population. Ecology 85, 1598–1610.

Corlatti, L., Bonardi, A., Bragalanti, N. and L. Pedrotti. 2019. Long-term dynamics of Alpine ungulates suggest interspecific competition. Journal of Zoology 309, 241–249.

Reviewer #2:

Comments to the Author

This manuscript explores how different snow properties affect the population dynamics of a northern alpine ungulate. More precisely, it explores the effects of snow depth, snow density, forageable area and snowfall on lamb to ewe ratios in Dall sheep. The authors use a spatially- explicit snow evolution model to determine snow cover properties. Subsequently, they evaluate the correlation between these properties and lamb to ewe ratios obtained from periodic summer aerial surveys which spanned over 37 years.

Overall, the manuscript is well structured and written. However, I think it could be slightly shortened by cutting certain sentences and avoiding excessive repetition of the same information in different sections. The analytical approach is elegant and convincing. However, I have never used nor read about spatially-explicit snow evolution models for my own research and I am not an expert on this specific matter. The research question isn’t so novel, but the methods to address it are. The results from this manuscript are hence novel and will be, in my opinion, of interest for management and conservation of ungulates and other species living in snowy environments. I enjoyed reviewing this manuscript and mostly have minor comments except for the advised use of sequential regression to confront multicollinearity and the over-interpretation of the AICc model selection. Fitting models with multiple snow properties and their interactions as covariates could greatly improve explanatory power and give a more accurate picture of the total effect of snow properties on Dall’s sheep productivity. I also think this manuscript could be improved and broadened be making it less “Dall sheep centric”. The application of SnowModel could also be interesting for studies of many plant and animal species living in snowy environments.

Introduction

The introduction could be slightly shortened by using less examples, more concise writing and less repetition. For example, at lines 116-117, the method used to determine the lamb to ewe ratios (aerial surveys) doesn’t need to be mentioned here and is simply a repetition of the what should remain in the methods.

The introduction has been edited and shortened by ~100 words

Line 42: I don’t think the reference to global climate systems is relevant to this manuscript.

Agreed and removed

Lines 55-61: Despite mentioning muskoxen, there is no citation pertaining to the species but there are 2 on deer. I think a citation on muskoxen is warranted.

The appropriate citation, which got lost in revisions prior to submission, has been put back in

Lines 86-88: I understand the idea here, but are there examples of studies where point-locations were non-representative? Though it is only one example, at my study site, which is also in an alpine environment, temperature is highly correlated (>0.85) to that of the nearest meteorological station in a valley-bottom ~15km away.

A highly cited paper (see below) exploring this is now referenced in the manuscript. It’s certainly true that temperature at valley bottom and alpine sites are likely to be highly correlated but snow properties are highly variable across spatial scales. In relatively dry, cold mountain environments like our study site the snowpack at the valley bottom is likely to accumulate without much disturbance from wind processes however in alpine areas over a distance of a few meters there can be snow-free areas and >2m deep drift features.

Molotch, N.P. and Bales, R.C., 2005. Scaling snow observations from the point to the grid element: Implications for observation network design. Water Resources Research, 41(11).

Lines 98-101: “These fluctuations are thought to be largely governed by variations in the production and survival of lambs” – The authors should also cite relevant articles that have highlighted the greater importance of juvenile survival and recruitment in ungulate population dynamics such as Gaillard et al. 1998 (Population dynamics of large herbivores: variable recruitment with constant adult survival; https://doi.org/10.1016/S0169-5347(97)01237-8 ) or Gaillard et al. 2000 (Temporal Variation in Fitness Components and Population Dynamics of Large Herbivores; https://doi.org/10.1146/annurev.ecolsys.31.1.367).

Gaillard et al. 1998 is now referenced

Lines 108-109: Citation on forage accessibility? References 79 or 80 from this manuscript?

Robinson et al. 2012 is now referenced

Lines 122-128: Very interesting contrasting hypotheses, but I don’t think the word predict should be used here. This study doesn’t exactly assess predictive power/accuracy using recognised methods such as cross-validation. In my opinion, a rephrasing like “...snow conditions established in the fall months should explain more variance in summer lamb-to-ewe ratios.” would be more appropriate.

Agreed – explain used now instead of predict

Methods

Line 142-143: Are average temperatures essential?

We believe that they are a useful indicator of the study area’s environment and hence likely snow regime/classification.

Lines 143-147: The description of lower elevation vegetation is not necessary and lengthy. It is indicated at line 151 that sheep range starts at around 1400 m. Also, it is later indicated that only pixels above 1200 m were selected at line 319.

Removed

Lines 194-195: Aerial surveys do not offer perfect detection. This could be especially true in Dall sheep which have a fission-fusion aggregation dynamic in which group size and composition can drastically change over the year. Potential biases of aerial surveys and the minimum count method have already been studied in Dall sheep, e.g. Udevitz et al. 2010 (Evaluation of Aerial Survey Methods for Dall's Sheep; https://doi.org/10.2193/0091- 7648(2006)34[732:EOASMF]2.0.CO;2 ) and Schmidt et al. 2012 (Using distance sampling and hierarchical models to improve estimates of Dall's sheep abundance; https://doi.org/10.1002/jwmg.216 ). Schmidt et al (2012) even highlight a bias in lamb abundance estimates which could be a serious issue in this manuscript. A sentence relating to the potential biases of these methods should be added.

We have address the above with the inclusion of the Schmidt reference, note of the known issues with the minimum count method, and further clarification that we only used full minimum count surveys in our dataset

Lines 206-209: I think this table should be in an appendix. It is lengthy and a sentence or two with descriptive statistics in the text (e.g. min and max date of flight, min and max number of individuals reported...) could replace it.

As suggested, the table has been moved to the appendix and a short summary of descriptive statistics is included instead

Lines 210-346: I am not familiar with the specifics of SnowModel and its calibration, nor am I an expert on snow properties. I thus cannot comment these specific aspects.

Line 307: Is this not Root Mean Squared Error?

Corrected

Lines 318-333: This section could be condensed into only 3-4 short sentences by greatly cutting down on the descriptions of the cited studies (e.g. only including the citation is enough for the choice of altitudinal range).

Section has been shortened as suggested

Line 343: How high is half-chest height?

This is now stated in the manuscript (0.25 cm)

Lines 345-346: I would add “...Dall’s sheep productivity...” to avoid confusion with plant productivity because this part refers to forage.

Implemented

Lines 349-350: The developers of the R software should be cited. Use citation() in R to obtain the appropriate citation (https://astrostatistics.psu.edu/su07/R/library/utils/html/citation.html)

Implemented

Lines 350-352: The authors should consider including the date of the survey in their models given the relatively wide timespan in survey date (26 June to 4 August) and potential lamb summer mortality. I doubt this will have a large effect, but it is worth evaluating.

This was considered but previous work has not found survey date to effect lamb-to-ewe ratios – see van de Kerk et al. 2018 Appendix 2. We have included mention of this now in the Discussion section

Lines 354-355: Rather than including only one snow property variable per model, all four variables, a combination of variables and/or a combination of variables and their interactions should be tested using a sequential regression method. This exercise could be very informative if, as I expect (given lines 404-407), the full model or a model with a combination of different snow properties and their interactions is the most parsimonious and best explains variance in Dall’s sheep productivity. Sequential regression is done by including what is judged as the most important variable and then adding the residuals of the regression of a less important variable against the more important one. These residuals represent the effect of the second variable independent of the first. This process can be extrapolated to multiple collinear variables. See Graham 2003 (Confronting multicollinearity in ecological multiple regression; https://doi.org/10.1890/02-3114) and Dormann et al. 2013 (Collinearity: a review of methods to deal with it and a simulation study evaluating their performance; https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1600- 0587.2012.07348.x) for further explanations of the method.

Please see the reply above to Reviewer #1’s comment on our statistical analyses and the updated section in the manuscript.

Results

Lines 389-394: The table or the figure should go in an appendix because they are mostly a repetition of the same information. I personally think the figure should stay.

Although the selected model was that of autumn snow depth, I think it would be interesting to have a figure showing the effect of the other more important snow properties. A 3 or 4 panel plot would be great.

Table has been moved to the appendices leaving a revised figure of the updated top model, we are reluctant to clutter the manuscript with further figures of other highly ranked models but welcome thoughts on this matter.

Discussion

Line 442: Remove “an iconic mountain ungulate”.

Removed

Lines 442-444: “...conditions that inhibit Dall’s sheep, ...” Dall sheep by themselves can’t be inhibited. Their productivity or recruitment, however, can. I think what is meant here is simply: “Snow conditions, most notably increased snow depth in the fall, were strongly associated with declines in Dall’s sheep productivity”.

Adjusted following suggestion

Lines 457-461: Distinguishing between effects of predation and foraging efficiency/forage quantity seems far stretched given the results in this manuscript. Spring snow conditions can also influence productivity because of their influence on the length of the growing season. However, I agree that snow conditions in fall appear more important than snow conditions in spring for Dall’s sheep productivity.

This section has now been revised

Line 460: Remove “that”.

As above

Line 470: I am not sure I understand this. Shouldn’t it be “...immediately after lambing.”.

Adjusted to read ‘…immediately before or after lambing.’

Lines 486-492: Care must be taken when interpreting an AICc model selection. The fact that Fall forageable area was the third highest ranked model is not indicative that the “...methodology had some power in mapping the extent of snow conditions that could potentially impact foraging.”. AICc values are in no way representative of power nor do they represent the proportion of the variance explained. For instance, a model could be the highest ranked model from a candidate set based on an AICc model comparison and still explain <1% of the variance if the other modelsare even worst. Instead, to evaluate and compare model performance, I suggest using the rsquared function from the piecewiseSEM package in R (https://rdrr.io/cran/piecewiseSEM/man/rsquared.html). This function returns (pseudo)-R2 values for all generalized linear mixed effects models.

This section has been revised in line with the new statistical analyses and R2 values are now reported and discussed.

Reviewer #3:

This is a very relevant modelling study conducted to link ungulate productivity with environmental constraints on the landscape, particularly in relation to snow cover and other associated variables. Use is made of remote sensing data to establish snow cover extent and timings and to verify topographical distribution of key study areas. Use is made of a long time series of Dall Sheep population data to establish relationships between these population numbers, particularly ewe to lamb ratios, and modelled snow cover over the duration of the study using a year of environmental data to constrain the model. The suitability of the model is determined through RMSE analysis relating to the in situ data with snow depth from remote cameras used as the independent verification source.

Abstract

The study is well outlined in the abstract. There is clear emphasis of the research question to be addressed as well as providing some descriptions of the results. Quantitative reporting of the regression and statistical key results would be welcome here in more depth. Another thing to consider in the abstract is to report the RMSE of the model to the snow characteristics you are trying to replicate. This is an essential part of the study. Additionally it would be useful to discount the role of temperature in these relationships at this stage so that the focus is clearly established on snow cover independent of temperature.

RMSE and bias of the modelled snow data to the remote cameras has now been included. Likewise model statistics and description of the top-ranked model that includes fall temperature as a term.

Introduction

The hypotheses of the study are well presented at the end of the section and are preceded by a clear understanding of the relevant literature in relation to the ungulate behaviour and the theories relating to their productivity.

Materials and Methods

Study site and condition is thoroughly described. Reference is made to the use of MODIS to provide average snow cover conditions over a 15 year period. A valid approach given the almost daily temporal resolution of the system. Spatial resolution limitations should not be an issue. Reference should be made to how snow is identified in terms of spectral approach.

The survey unit selection section should comment on the MODIS resolution cell size for the used snow disappearance product. There is no issue with the use of this product but it could be described in more detail. Is it a 1km product?

Updated to include reference to 500 m resolution

Animal counts are appropriately conducted and logged for the study period. Appropriate justification is provided for the use of “ewe like” classification with reference to the variability associated with this assertion.

The use of SnowModel and its packages could be better justified with reference to the accuracy of the model. Reference to the environmental scenarios in which it has been tested and validated would be welcome. More consideration of its appropriate application to different latitude settings would also be appropriate here as would information about its handling of the continental location. Is there potential for overfitting the model with the large amount of inputs to be replicated for a particular site? How sensitive is the model and can it capture the variation exhibited in previous years accurately?

References to SnowModel’s previous use in Alaska have now been included. The references for each of SnowModel’s submodels include descriptions of their physics and validation and a note now added after them indicating this.

Some discussion of the modelling uncertainties is included at the end of the Discussion previously that address the above concerns towards overfitting and model sensitivity. With a limited calibration/validation dataset for the field site it is hard to comprehensively assess model performance but SnowModel is highly regarded and much used by the snow science community in a diverse range of settings and applications.

Justified assumptions are presented regarding landcover variation over the duration of the study period. Use of ASTER GDEM is validated but is a 60m product being used (2 arc second)? Does this study precede ASTER GDEM V3 where 1 arcsecond data is available?

A 1 arc second product is being used as referenced on line 239 in the latest ms.

Good evidence and methodology is provided regarding the calibration model to the site specific scenario using in situ data collections. More emphasis on the RMSE values would be welcome here to instil further confidence in the modelling approach.

This suggestion is slightly confusing – do you mean the RMSE values reported in the SnowModel calibration of the results section?

A key improvement to make which will enhance the study is that the modelling approach could be much better visualised by using a work flow diagram. This would outline how each package interacts with one another and the external sources of calibrating data. It’s difficult to follow using the provided descriptive words alone particularly given the multi faceted aspect of the model.

A workflow diagram of the modelling procedure has been included in the supplementary materials. To produce this with a visual description of the calibration/validation/assimilation procedures produced an overly complex diagram so a simple timestep to timestep depiction is used.

Statistical analysis appears to be performed appropriately as described.

Results

Results are described in an adequate way. Statistical outputs are appropriately interpreted. Graphs are suitably presented.

I would recommend also reporting the RMSE values in relation to a mean value in the text to further establish the validity of the results. I assume that the RMSE values should be reported in metres to match with the data shown in Figure A3 and not the data displayed in the subsequent table (slight consistency error but changes the results quite significantly).

I'd like to see more reference to p values and significance regarding modelling results where possible.

As with a previous comment I am unsure as to what the reviewer means when mentioning RMSE in relation to the mean value here? RMSE has been updated to metres to match with the table in the appendix – an oversight in the original manuscript.

Significance is referred to for each term in the highest ranked model.

Discussion

A question that remains. The model is calibrated using in situ data collection for calibration. Could the in situ measurements be replicated for a single year but not representative of long term variability or inter-site values? Is the remote camera data suitable for this purpose? Is there a case for overfitting here? Was the optimum setting tested independently to confirm its validity or was it only for snow depth? What are the problems arising from this?

This is an important point which is alluded to in the final paragraph of the discussion in the original manuscript and has now been extended upon. It is quite possible for the model to be overfitted for the only year where we have data to calibrate/validate to. However, given the coarseness generated by aggregating the snow covariates in time (seasonally) and space (across the modelling domain) it is likely that the model captures the magnitude of the interannual variability of snow properties reasonably well as it relies on well-proven physics to do so.

An alternative explanation for snow’s effect on sheep productivity, where snow conditions in spring influence the vulnerability of lambs to predation, is harder to establish. How was this going to be established through this study? Should it be included as a hypothesis to test if there is very little evidence to justify this? Possibly better to consider this only in the discussion rather than setting the study out to address this.

This has now been removed from the hypotheses.

There is more focus on general subject discussion rather than interpretation and critical analysis of the presented results. The section could be viewed as overly long as a consequence of this and seems to skirt around the key issues of the paper at times. A much more succinct format could be presented.

A much larger discussion should investigate the limitations of this particular modelling approach particularly with regards to calibrating using a single year of data in a long time series analysis.

In response to this comment and those of the other reviewers the discussion has been reworked and, hopefully, refined to include more critical analysis of our results and methodology while maintaining its original length. We feel that a larger discussion investigating the limitations of the modelling approach in depth would confuse the intention and subject of the paper. Difficulties with modelling snow in complex environments are well known and we make an effort to contrast the relative merits and disadavantages of using a modelling approach vs remote sensing in settings with little in-situ data

Conclusion

Th modelling exercise has been conducted competently and has presented a very interesting finding of how snow condition and timing can impact Dall Sheep productivity.

A slight issue is that as a reader I am left wondering whether it is simply the temperature that is influencing the Lamb to Ewe ratio. The stated importance of season long environmental conditions would suggest this is a possibility. I would suggest addressing this factor as an appropriate further correction to make.

We hope the updated statistical analyses and the inclusion of air temperature as a covariate addresses this issue.

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Seasonal influence of snow conditions on Dall’s sheep productivity in Wrangell-St Elias National Park and Preserve

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Reviewer #1: I thank the author for their detailed answer to my queries. I think the paper is a nice contribution to the existing literature on ungulate population dynamics, and I would recommend publication, after some very minor adjustments (see below).

I appreciate that the authors tested the effect of density dependence and of other climatic variables with delayed effects in their models. While I do understand that it makes sense to exclude density dependence and delayed effects from the final models, I would still recommend to at least mention that preliminary analyses revealed no density dependence and no delayed effects. Density dependence is a major driver of ungulate population dynamics (see references provided in the first round of review), and I think the reader needs to be reassured that you tested for this effect, even if only at a preliminary stage. One or 2 sentences would suffice.

I still cast doubts about the choice of pooling young rams and young ewes in a ewe-like category, but I do not know the field situation there, and the authors provide sufficient information to allow the reader understand and evaluate their procedure, so I am fine with it. Perhaps, instead of lamb-to-ewe, I would use “birth rate” or something the like, this would likely create less confusion in the reader.

l. 123-134: I don’t quite get why in their hypotheses the authors did not include the winter effect on lamb-to-ewe ratio. Clearly, the effect hypothesized in H1 can owe to winter conditions, so why would they only mention the fall months? (also considering that winter months were included in the list of models).

Best wishes,

Luca Corlatti

Reviewer #2: My comments have adequately been addressed. The manuscript has been shortened were it should and the statistical analyses have been greatly improved. Limitations to the study have also been addressed.

Reviewer #3: This is a very much improved manuscript. The changes that have been made are quite significant and follow the guidance of the reviewers very closely. From my perspective my concerns have largely been addressed either through corrections or justifications and their remains only a few typographical errors that remain to be corrected. A slight issue in the review process was the inability to see the tabulated data fully in the new submission via the track changes, as such I was unable to immediately confirm the reported values in Table 1.

With respect to the author reply, the comment regarding RMSE values in the earlier section was suggested for inclusion to outline the performance of the calibration regarding snow depth and bulk snow density. Being part of the calibration process rather than a result of the study, my suggestion was to include the RMSE of the calibration at this earlier methodological stage. This is a matter of choice, and I'm happy for you to report both of these results at the start of the results section if you choose to do so. Reporting the bulk snow density RMSE would be appropriate alongside the snow depth RMSE declaration in the results section if you decide on this approach.

A particular typo to be aware of is the reference to 30 years of data early in the manuscript (Line 92 in track changes document) and later referred to as 37 years at Line 519. Further context to the statement of "with less predictive power" could also be provided on Line 524. Very minor issues alongside the other typos that can be corrected through further proof reading.

Accept following the addressing of these very minor concerns. An enjoyable study to read about.

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PLoS One. 2021 Feb 9;16(2):e0244787. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0244787.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


16 Dec 2020

Response to the review PONE-D-20-03620 ‘Seasonal influence of snow conditions on Dall’s sheep productivity in Wrangell-St Elias National Park and Preserve’

Dear Dr Serrano,

We are grateful to you and the reviewers for the further comments on our manuscript and are glad that our original revisions were well received. As the comments were relatively few, I will address them individually in the following paragraphs.

In your emailed response you noted that Reviewer 3 was concerned with the R-squared values we report relative to other cited studies. To address this, I have included a comparison on lines 499 to 502 of our top-model to the R-squared reported by Rattenbury et al. (2018) for a region that is within our study area, Nabesna. We report an adjusted R-squared of 0.41, whereas Rattenbury et al. (2018), using the remote-sensing derived date of the end of the continuous snow season as their predictor of lamb-to-ewe ratios, report an R-squared of 0.33 (see figure 4 in Rattenbury et al.). The similar study of van de Kerk et al. (2018) only reported AICc for their various models, hence direct comparison is not possible. Of note is that Rattenbury et al. (2018) report a combined R-squared of 0.31 for all five Dall’s sheep count areas included in their study, and an R-squared of 0.65 for the Itkillik sub-area alone, which is the only sub-area to have an R-squared > 0.41. However, I believe it’s not appropriate to compare results from quite different Dall’s sheep ranges, Itkillik, for example, is in the Brooks Range where the snow season and landscape is dissimilar to the Wrangells, so only include Rattenbury et al.’s (2018) Nabesna result in the text. In response to why our R-squared could be perhaps thought of as relatively low, we offer the existing discussion between lines 539 and 552, which discusses other factors affecting Dall’s sheep productivity.

Reviewer 1 asked for the preliminary analysis of density dependence and delayed effects to be mentioned within the text. We appreciate this point and I have cleared up the discussion of this on lines 521 to 527 to be more explicit as to what we did to address in terms of density dependence. Likewise, I have hopefully clarified our delayed effect results (see line 407) and guide the reviewer to consider lines 534 to 538, where this result is reflected upon in the Discussion section. A further comment considered our choice of using ‘lamb-to-ewe’ to describe our metric of productivity and suggested using different terminology. We are sympathetic to the reviewer’s point, especially in respect to the potential inclusion of young-rams into the ‘ewe’ pool. However, we do feel confident that our explanation of the metric, and how it was derived, is clear with careful reading (see lines 192 to 204) and that it is appropriately and consistently termed in respect to similar, contemporary studies, e.g. van de Kerk et al. (2018) and Rattenbury et al. (2018). Reviewer 1 also makes a salient point on our hypotheses, questioning why we also analyse winter snow and climate conditions when our hypotheses only address fall and spring. This was an oversight on our part, so we have updated hypothesis 1 (lines 120 to 123) to now include; ‘…in which case snow conditions established in the fall months and persisting through the winter months should better explain summer lamb-to-ewe ratios’. The original idea in including the winter months in the analysis was to capture persistent effects of snow cover in the instance of a relatively mild and low-snow early fall followed by a relatively ‘snowy’ and cold late-fall and winter, which might still show a persistent effect on productivity vs spring conditions alone.

Reviewer 3 additionally discussed the location within the text of the results from the SnowModel calibration and the reporting of the bulk density RMSE in them. Prior to submission we considered whether the SnowModel calibration results should be contained within the Methods section but came to the opinion that, as they were results in and of themselves, they were more appropriately placed in the Results section. We also felt that it was possibly more readable in this format. The bulk density RMSE is now reported on line 382. Lastly, Reviewer 3 mentioned some typographical errors – after further proofreading we hope that we have caught these, especially those relating to incorrectly numbered references due to inadequate use of my referencing software.

We hope that you find the above and the updated manuscript to your satisfaction, and thank you again for the time taken to review it with care. We look forward to your response.

Sincerely,

Chris Cosgrove

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Decision Letter 2

Emmanuel Serrano

17 Dec 2020

Seasonal influence of snow conditions on Dall’s sheep productivity in Wrangell-St Elias National Park and Preserve

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Associated Data

    This section collects any data citations, data availability statements, or supplementary materials included in this article.

    Supplementary Materials

    S1 Appendix. Document containing supporting figures and tables listed in manuscript.

    (PDF)

    S1 Data. Table containing raw data of northern Wrangell St Elias Sheep surveys.

    (CSV)

    S2 Data. Table containing model derived snow covariates for each snow year from 1981 to 2017.

    Where; snod = snow depth, sden = snow density, forage = forageable area, and spre = snowfall, tair = air temperature.

    (CSV)

    S3 Data. Table combing sheep surveys and snow covariates.

    (CSV)

    S4 Data. Snow depth derived from SnowModel.

    (CSV)

    S5 Data. Snow density derived from SnowModel.

    (CSV)

    S6 Data. Snowfall derived from SnowModel.

    (CSV)

    S7 Data. Forageable area derived from SnowModel.

    (CSV)

    S8 Data. Air temperature derived from SnowModel.

    (CSV)

    S1 File. Python script combining snow variable data with sheep survey data.

    (PY)

    S2 File. Python script compiling snow covariate data by season from 1981 to 2017.

    (PY)

    S3 File. Python script compiling snow and sheep data together.

    (PY)

    S4 File. R script compiling Fig 3 and Table 7 in S1 Appendix.

    (R)

    S5 File. R script compiling Fig 5 and Table 8 in S1 Appendix.

    (R)

    S6 File. Zip file containing data, scripts and instructions to create Fig 2 in S1 Appendix.

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    S7 File. Zip file containing data, scripts and instructions to create Fig 4 in S1 Appendix.

    (ZIP)

    S8 File. Zip file containing data, scripts and instructions to create Fig 3 in S1 Appendix.

    (ZIP)

    S9 File. R script compiling Tables 5 and 6 in S1 Appendix and Table 1 and Fig 4 in manuscript.

    (R)

    S10 File. Zip file containing data, scripts and instructions to create Fig 3 in S1 Appendix.

    (ZIP)

    Attachment

    Submitted filename: Larue_Review_11_03_2020.pdf

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    Submitted filename: Response to Reviewers.docx

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    Data Availability Statement

    Daily rasters of snow properties, generated by SnowModel as described in the manuscript, will be held at the Oak Ridge National Laboratory (ORNL) DAAC, https://daac.ornl.gov. Scripts that process this daily data into the seasonal aggregates used in the analysis will be additionally included. This data is not possible to submit as supplementary information given its multiple terabyte size and is in the process of being archived. Field data used to calibrate SnowModel, as described in the manuscript, is already archived at the ORNL DAAC - see https://daac.ornl.gov/cgi-bin/dsviewer.pl?ds_id=1656. Scripts and methods used in the calibration of SnowModel to these data are included in the Supplementary Information. Dall's sheep survey data and the seasonally aggregated, SnowModel-derived, snow property data are included in the Supplementary Information alongside scripts preparing them for analysis (S2 to S10). All scripts used to generate figures are included in the Supplementary Information. Additional data used to create figure A2 in S1 Appendix can be located at https://daac.ornl.gov/ABOVE/guides/Last_Day_Spring_Snow.html.


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