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. 2021 Feb 25;16(2):e0247226. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0247226

Declining trend of smoking and smokeless tobacco in India: A decomposition analysis

Supriya Lahoti 1, Priyanka Dixit 2,*
Editor: Stanton A Glantz3
PMCID: PMC7906458  PMID: 33630963

Abstract

There has been a relative reduction of tobacco consumption between Global Adult Tobacco Survey-India (GATS-India) 2009–10 and GATS-India 2016–17. However, in terms of absolute numbers, India still has the highest number of tobacco consumers. Therefore, this paper aims to examine the socioeconomic correlates and delineate the factors contributing to a change in smoking and smokeless tobacco use from GATS (2009–10) to GATS (2016–17) in India. We used multivariable binary logistic regressions to examine the demographic and socioeconomic correlates of smoking and smokeless tobacco use for both the rounds of the survey. Further decomposition analysis has been applied to examine the specific contribution of factors in the decline of tobacco consumption over a period from 2009 to 2016. Results indicated that the propensity component was primarily responsible for major tobacco consumption decline (smoking- 41%, smokeless tobacco use- 81%). Most of the decrease in propensity to smoke has been explained by residential type and occupation of the respondent. Age of the respondent contribute significantly in reducing the prevalence of smokeless tobacco consumption during the seven-year period, regardless of change in the composition of population. To achieve the National Health Policy, 2017 aim of reducing tobacco use up to 15% by 2020 and up to 30% by 2025, targeted policies and interventions addressing the inequalities identified in this study, must be developed and implemented.

Introduction

Tobacco consumption globally is one of the leading causes of potentially preventable morbidity and mortality [1]. Tobacco stands as the leading cause for non-communicable disease (NCD) globally and mortality due to NCDs accounts to about 63% [2]. Globally, 80% of the tobacco-related deaths occur in the Low and Middle Income Countries (LMIC) [3]. According to World Health Organization’s (WHO) estimation, deaths due to tobacco-related diseases will rise from 1.4% in 1990 to 13.3% in 2020 [4]. Projected tobacco-associated mortality in India is estimated to be 1.5 million by 2020 [5]. Tobacco use is broadly categorised into two main forms, smoking and smokeless. India’s tobacco consumption situation is very complex, with not only a variety of smoking forms but also an array of smokeless tobacco products. Further, the choice of product and form of tobacco consumption are influenced by the interplay of various demographic, social, economic and cultural practices. In India predominantly, smoking is by way of bidis (tobacco hand-rolled and wrapped in dried leaves of specific trees) and cigarettes. Smokeless tobacco use consists of khaini, chewing pan (mixture of lime, areca nut pieces, tobacco and spices wrapped in betel leaf), gutkha or pan masala (powder mixture of scented tobacco, lime and areca nut), and mishri (a kind of toothpaste used for rubbing on gums) [6]. It has been documented that tobacco use in any form can result in serious health consequences [7].

A trend analysis of tobacco use in India, using nationally representative surveys documented an increase in the prevalence of any smokeless tobacco use from 15% in 1987 to 23.4% in 2005 while slight decline in any smoked tobacco from 19.8% to 18.3% in the same period [8]. Recent data in India shows that from Global Adult Tobacco Survey (2009–2010) to Global Adult Tobacco Survey (2016–2017), there has been a 4.5% decline, in prevalence of smokeless tobacco use from 25.9% to 21.4% and a 3.3% decline in smoking, from 14.0% to 10.7% [9]. The effect of socio-economic status on the prevalence of tobacco use has been documented well in literature [1013]. Previous studies have shown that community level (regions [10], place of residence [12]), household level (wealth status [14]) and individual level factors (age [12, 15], gender [15]) are associated with smoking and smokeless tobacco use in India.

In analytical terms, there are two main mechanisms through which the aggregate level of tobacco consumption can change over two points of time. One potential source of change is a shift in the proportion of population from one social group to another, which typically has low rates of any particular form of tobacco consumption (e.g. increase in the proportion of educated population). Aggregate change may also result from an increase in the likelihood of decreasing tobacco consumption among all subgroups or among those subgroups that had higher rates of tobacco consumption at an earlier time (reflecting diffusion processes, convergence of tobacco consumption behaviour among social strata and a conceivably deliberate programme targeting less favoured groups).

This study decompose overall change into these two underlying forces: compositional change and the rate of change. Decomposition analysis provides relevant insights into the causal mechanisms that underlie the observed trend of decline in tobacco consumption. Previous studies were mostly limited to examining tobacco consumption trends and its correlates in India [1015]. To the best of our knowledge there are no studies examining the specific contribution of factors in tobacco consumption decline over a period from 2009 to 2016. This paper, for the first time employs two nationally representative comparable tobacco consumption related data sets and desegregates the change in tobacco consumption in the smoking and smokeless forms in the different socio-economic and demographic sub-groups, allowing us to identify which factors contributed to the documented change in tobacco consumption in the inter-survey period. This analysis is potentially useful from a policy perspective given that it provides policy makers in the country with insights to address inequalities in tobacco consumption in pursuit of the 2030 agenda of Sustainable Development Goal of poverty reduction and good health.

Materials and methods

Data sources: Sample size and design

The data used for the present study has been gleaned from the Global Adult Tobacco Survey 2009–2010 (hereafter referred to as GATS-1) [16] & Global Adult Tobacco Survey 2016–2017 (hereafter referred to as GATS-2) [9] conducted in India. The Ministry of Health & Family Welfare (MoHFW), Government of India designated the International Institute for Population Sciences (IIPS), Mumbai and the Tata Institute of Social Sciences (TISS), Mumbai as the nodal implementing agency for GATS-1 and GATS-2 respectively. Data sets of both surveys are sufficiently similar to allow the construction of important predictors of different forms of tobacco use. Moreover, the interviewing procedures and sampling design were similar in both surveys and the design was such that it represents Indian residents. The GATS is a nationally representative, multi-stage, geographically clustered sample of households that covered men and women above 15 years of age in India’s 30 states (29 states in GATS-1) and two Union Territories (UTs). Multistage sampling procedure was adopted independently in each state, and within the states, independently in urban and rural areas to select the sample. In urban areas, a three-stage sampling process was adopted. At the first stage, the list of all the wards from all cities and towns of the state/ UT constituted the urban sampling frame, from which a required sample of wards, i.e., primary sampling units (PSUs) was selected using probability proportional to size (PPS) sampling. At the second stage, a list of all census enumeration blocks (CEBs) in each selected ward constituted the sampling frame from which one CEB was selected by PPS from each ward. At the third stage, a list of all residential households in each selected CEB constituted the sampling frame, from which a sample of required number of households was selected.

In rural areas, a two-stage sampling process was adopted. At the first stage of sampling, PSUs (village) were selected using the PPS sampling method. At the second stage, a list of all residential households in each selected village constituted the sampling frame, from which a sample of the required number of households was selected. From each eligible household, one respondent was selected. More details about sampling design, training of the survey team, and survey management are separately documented in GATS-1 and GATS-2 published report [9, 16].

After excluding the incomplete cases, the total sample size was reduced to 69,296 and 74,037 residents aged 15 years or above in GATS-1 and GATS-2 respectively. The overall response rate calculated as the product of the response rates at the household and person-level was 91.8 percent and 92.9 percent for GATS-1 and GATS-2 respectively.

The main objective of the GATS survey was to collect reliable information on tobacco use and tobacco control indicators in order to develop an understanding of the effectiveness of tobacco control measures undertaken during the inter-survey period. We used data from the two rounds of GATS to provide national-level estimates of different types of tobacco users and socio-economic and demographic correlates of two types of tobacco use (smoking and smokeless tobacco). GATS provides information on respondents’ background characteristics, tobacco use (smoking and smokeless), cessation, second hand smoke exposure, economics, media, and knowledge, attitudes and perceptions towards tobacco use.

Independent variables

Many factors have significant effects on tobacco consumption. Based on available literature, relevant variables have been included in the model to decompose the change in the smoking and smokeless tobacco consumption separately. We broadly categorized these variables as community, household and individual level.

The variables included under the community category were Regions (North, Central, East, Northeast, West and South) and residence (urban/rural). Based on geographical location and cultural factors, India was divided into six regions: North (Jammu & Kashmir, Himachal Pradesh, Punjab, Chandigarh, Uttarakhand, Haryana and Delhi); Central region (Rajasthan, Uttar Pradesh, Chhattisgarh and Madhya Pradesh); East (West Bengal, Jharkhand, Odisha and Bihar); North-east (Sikkim, Arunachal Pradesh, Nagaland, Manipur, Mizoram, Tripura, Meghalaya and Assam); West (Gujarat, Maharashtra and Goa) and South (Andhra Pradesh, Telangana, Karnataka, Kerala, Tamil Nadu and Puducherry). The new state of Telangana was created from Andhra Pradesh in the year 2014 and is included in southern region in the GATS-2 data.

The variables included under household category were wealth index quintiles (poorest, second, middle, fourth and richest), caste (Scheduled Castes [SCs] and Scheduled Tribes [STs], Other Backward Classes [OBCs], and Others [others caste includes non-SC, non-ST and non-OBC]) and religion (Hindu, Muslim and Others [Others religion includes non-Hindu and non-Muslims]).

The household wealth index was estimated using an asset index. The asset index was constructed based on household assets and possession of household consumer items using Principal Component Analysis technique. Based on time relevance, 10 and 14 household assets were included in GATS-1 and GATS-2 respectively to create the wealth index in the respective time period. Using rank methods, households were classified by wealth quintiles.

The variables included under individual category were age in completed years (15-24/25-44/45-64 and 65 and above), sex (male/female), level of education (no education, primary, secondary and higher), and type of occupation (government and non-government, self-employed, student, homemaker and retired/unemployed). Further, individual knowledge and perception variables included were knowledge that exposure to smoking causes serious illness, stroke, heart attack, lung cancer and chronic cough/ TB (Yes/No) and knowledge that smokeless tobacco causes serious illness, oral cancer and dental disease (Yes/No).

In multivariable regression and decomposition analysis, we have only included common variables available in GATS-1 and GATS-2, i.e. regions, type of residence, wealth index quintiles, age group, gender, education, occupation, knowledge that smoking causes serious illness, stroke, heart attack, lung cancer and knowledge that smokeless tobacco causes serious illness.

Outcome variables

The different forms of smoking tobacco included were bidis, cigarettes, cigars, cheroots, rolled cigarettes, tobacco rolled in maize leaf and newspaper, hukkah, pipes, chillum and chutta. The different forms of smokeless tobacco included tobacco leaf, betel quid with tobacco, sada/surti, khaini or tobacco lime mixture, gutkha, paan masala with zarda, mawa, gul, gudaku, mishri. The main dependant variable in the analysis is the tobacco use categorized into two types, namely, smoking tobacco and smokeless tobacco use.

Tobacco consumption has been divided into two categories:

  1. Smoking: all respondents who smoked tobacco (‘daily’ and ‘less than daily’) were coded as “1” whereas those who did not smoke (‘never’ and ‘former’) were coded as “0”.

  2. Smokeless: includes all respondents who consumed smokeless tobacco (‘daily’ and ‘less than daily’) were coded as “1” whereas those who did not use smokeless tobacco (‘never’ and ‘former’) were coded as “0”.

Statistical analysis

Bivariate analysis was used to estimate the prevalence of smoking and smokeless tobacco use in association with selected background variables described in the earlier section of GATS-1 and 2 data. The prevalence is presented in the form of percentages. The percent relative change was calculated using the formula (Prevalence in GATS-2)-(Prevalence in GATS-1)/ (Prevalence in GATS-1). The proportion of smokers and smokeless tobacco users was calculated using Univariate analysis. Multivariable binary logistic regression is used to investigate and assess the adjusted associations of socioeconomic, demographic and knowledge correlates of tobacco consumption in the smoking and smokeless forms in India. In the multivariable logistic regression we have adjusted the impact of clustering and stratification.

Finally, decomposition analysis has been used to examine the role of various factors in declining tobacco consumption during the seven-year period. The decomposition technique adopted in this paper is a well-established demographic technique built upon Kitawaga’ (1955) classical work on rate standardization [17]. This procedure yields three components: rates, composition and interaction. Rate change stands for the change in the likelihood of smoking and smokeless forms of tobacco consumption by the different social, economic and demographic subgroups of population as expressed by the β coefficients and constant terms of the binary regression, regardless of the change in the composition component. Compositional change refers to the structural changes in the population such as change in population literacy in the two time periods or a part of the overall change, which is ascribed to changes in the means of the covariates, keeping rate as a constant as it was in GATS-1. Interaction reflects the contribution of the change in smoking and smokeless tobacco use as a result of the interplay between compositional change and propensity to use tobacco by different socio-economic and demographic subgroups. With the help of this method, we have tried to determine the net contribution of each of the selected covariates to smoking and smokeless tobacco decline.

Model

The model takes the form

ln[Pi÷(1Pi)]=βiXi

Where ln[Pi ÷ (1 − P)i] are the log odds of tobacco consumption, Xi is a vector of explanatory variables, and βi is a vector of regression coefficients. The decomposition procedure (smoking and smokeless tobacco use) applied in this study is based on the logit models (smoking and smokeless tobacco use) estimated for the two surveys.

The difference

ln[Pi÷(1Pi))(GATS2)ln[Pi÷(1Pi)](GATS1)

is decomposed using the following equation (which considered GATS-1 as the base period)

log(GATS2)log(GATS1)=(β0(II)β0(I))+Pij(I)(βij(II)βij(I))+βij(I)(Pij(II)Pij(I))+Σ(Pij(II)Pij(I))(βij(II)βij(I))

Where Pij(II) = Proportion of the jth category of the ith covariate in GATS- 2;

Pij(I) = Proportion of the jth category of the ith covariate in GATS- 1;

β0(II) = Regression constant in GATS- 2;

β0(I) = Regression constant in GATS- 1;

βij(II) = Coefficient for the jth category of the ith covariate in GATS- 2;

βij(I) = Coefficient for the jth category of the ith covariate in GATS- 1;

I denotes GATS- 1 and II denotes GATS- 2.

STATA command svyset gatscluster [pweight = gatsweight], strata (gatsstrata) has been used to adjust complex analysis which includes adjustment of clustering and stratum effect. The analysis of the data has been carried out after assigning survey weights that is available in the GATS-1 and GATS-2 datasets. While generating all the tables of this paper, each record (individual case) was multiplied by survey weight. These weights were estimated for adjustment of 1) unequal probability of selection, 2) differential response rates across states and male/ female in rural/ urban areas within the states and 3) differences in the distribution of survey population and actual population (projected as on survey period) of each state by rural/urban areas and by sex and broad age-group. In other words, the weights were the adjustment within each individual state and across the states.

Further details of the weighting procedure are provided in section A 4, on GATS-1 report [16]. Data were analysed using IBM SPSS Statistics Version 22 (Armonk, New York, USA) and STATA Version 14.

Results

Prevalence of tobacco use by background characteristics

Table 1 presents the prevalence of tobacco in the form of smoking and smokeless tobacco use in India by different socioeconomic and demographic characteristics in GATS-1 and 2. The prevalence varies considerably by regions, rural-urban residence, age groups, gender, economic status of household and across some knowledge parameters. The prevalence of smoking was higher in the northern region of the country in GATS-1 (11.7%) and GATS-2 (12.0%), those living in the rural areas, from poor households, among males and illiterate, as compared to the other regions, urban residents, from the rich household and among literates. Smokeless tobacco use is highest in the north-eastern region and in rural areas of the country. Smokeless tobacco use shows an increase in the north-eastern region from GATS-1 to GATS-2 (24.9% to 32.6%). The rich poor differences were most visible among smokeless tobacco users. In both the rounds of the survey, minimum decline has been observed among the self-employed individuals in smoking (GATS-1:13.7%, GATS-2:12.3%) and smokeless tobacco use (GATS-1:26.9%, GATS-2:26.7%). Prevalence varies considerably by the knowledge of smoking association with lung cancer, and smokeless tobacco health hazards than the other two diseases.

Table 1. Prevalence of smoking and smokeless use of tobacco according to selected background characteristics in India, GATS-2009-10 and GATS-2016-17.

Explanatory variables Smoker Relative Change Smokeless tobacco user Relative Change
GATS-1 GATS-2 GATS-1 GATS-2
n % n % n % n %
Region
North 4816224 11.7% 9748877 12.0% 2.9% 2066425 5.0% 4217336 5.2% 3.8%
Central 22940948 8.9% 18407041 6.8% -23.5% 58501637 22.6% 57719118 21.3% -5.9%
East 13047984 7.8% 13260898 6.6% -15.6% 49961712 29.8% 46656444 23.1% -22.4%
Northeast 2722448 9.5% 3095637 9.0% -5.7% 7131380 24.9% 11269000 32.6% 31.1%
West 6120010 5.2% 4877760 3.5% -32.6% 26554721 22.4% 29114576 20.8% -7.3%
South 19258634 10.7% 18033548 8.9% -16.8% 19467462 10.8% 18313850 9.0% -16.4%
Type of Residence
Urban 17790277 7.7% 19123577 5.9% -22.3% 32737232 14.1% 41608645 12.9% -8.1%
Rural 51115971 9.1% 48300183 7.9% -12.9% 130946105 23.3% 125681680 20.6% -11.5%
Wealth index
Poorest 12214464 9.1% 13462085 8.3% -7.9% 41486565 30.8% 45601811 28.0% -9.0%
Poorer 17626338 9.6% 17112055 8.1% -15.3% 49823066 27.1% 48770798 23.2% -14.6%
Middle 14224853 9.0% 12877599 7.5% -16.2% 33202198 20.9% 31043159 18.1% -13.5%
Fourth 13898419 8.6% 14128400 7.0% -19.3% 24429997 15.2% 28404285 14.0% -7.7%
Richest 10942173 6.9% 9843622 5.3% -24.0% 14741510 9.4% 13470271 7.2% -22.8%
Religion
Hindu NA NA 53155306 7.1% NA NA NA 136155164 18.2% NA
Muslim NA NA 11247299 8.5% NA NA NA 24229108 18.3% NA
Others NA NA 3021156 6.0% NA NA NA 6906053 13.6% NA
Caste
SC & ST NA NA 21430548 8.2% NA NA NA 59836487 23.0% NA
OBC NA NA 27960139 6.6% NA NA NA 69884502 16.6% NA
Others NA NA 18033073 7.2% NA NA NA 37569336 15.0% NA
Age groups
15–24 5354715 2.3% 6573797 2.6% 15.6% 30729565 13.1% 28291836 11.4% -13.3%
25–44 28543798 8.5% 32417931 7.8% -8.3% 74906497 22.4% 80752666 19.5% -13.0%
45–64 27458653 15.9% 20808523 10.3% -35.4% 43245141 25.0% 42933878 21.2% -15.4%
65 and above 7549081 14.0% 7623509 11.5% -18.0% 14802134 27.5% 15311945 23.1% -16.0%
Gender
Male 61729247 15.0% 60797567 12.8% -15.0% 97102345 23.6% 111395181 23.4% -1.0%
Female 7177000 1.9% 6626193 1.5% -22.2% 66580991 17.3% 55895144 12.3% -29.2%
Education
No formal schooling 27191924 11.0% 24663234 10.0% -8.6% 68213879 27.5% 60628470 24.6% -10.4%
Upto Primary 20221853 10.6% 18529170 9.7% -8.9% 45026561 23.7% 44551669 23.3% -1.6%
Upto Secondary 14249400 6.3% 16731392 5.8% -7.3% 36573764 16.1% 45880945 15.9% -1.0%
Above Secondary 7243070 5.6% 7477931 3.6% -35.1% 13869133 10.7% 16087347 7.8% -27.1%
Occupation
Government and non-government employee 24284198 12.6% 8169490 7.9% -37.1% 46592501 24.2% 18266386 17.8% -26.7%
Self employed 31129017 13.7% 46461593 12.3% -10.5% 61007114 26.9% 101152182 26.7% -0.5%
Student 1089583 1.2% 1136483 1.0% -16.3% 4827254 5.4% 2928173 2.6% -51.4%
Homemaker 6350321 2.6% 4732720 1.7% -35.4% 39861046 16.4% 31840307 11.4% -30.8%
Retired or unemployed 5947826 13.7% 6871052 11.6% -15.3% 11102842 25.6% 13090757 22.1% -13.6%
Marital status
Single NA NA 5720679 2.7% NA NA NA 18605597 8.7% NA
Married NA NA 57698130 8.8% NA NA NA 131773056 20.2% NA
Separated NA NA 223404 5.5% NA NA NA 877563 21.8% NA
Divorced NA NA 237826 6.3% NA NA NA 886952 23.4% NA
Widowed NA NA 3543721 6.3% NA NA NA 15121905 26.9% NA
Smoking causes serious illness
Yes 60124053 8.4% 61907381 7.2% -14.4% 143116538 20.0% 151261370 17.6% -12.1%
No 8682187 11.1% 4493709 8.3% -25.8% 20269646 26.0% 12555812 23.1% -11.3%
Smoking causes stroke
Yes 29466415 7.5% 43758516 7.1% -5.1% 72892456 18.6% 100549553 16.4% -11.8%
No 14224129 10.4% 14446383 8.0% -23.6% 27318348 20.0% 39957765 22.0% 10.1%
Smoking causes heart attack
Yes 39308632 7.7% 51237641 7.2% -7.4% 92929275 18.3% 117921732 16.5% -9.9%
No 9950110 10.9% 10209391 8.1% -25.9% 21188958 23.2% 29848852 23.6% 1.8%
Smoking causes lung cancer
Yes 54976269 8.2% 61989668 7.1% -12.8% 132428115 19.6% 152557315 17.5% -10.9%
No 3513766 17.1% 3207903 9.0% -47.4% 4608607 22.4% 9276323 26.0% 16.0%
Smoking causes chronic cough or TB
Yes NA NA 62410636 7.3% NA NA NA 150005144 17.4% NA
No NA NA 3150129 7.4% NA NA NA 10509832 24.8% NA
Smokeless tobacco use causes serious illness
Yes 57437868 8.1% 63700270 7.1% -12.3% 141578562 20.1% 156848841 17.6% -12.4%
No 5263821 14.2% 2381842 9.2% -35.7% 8912298 24.1% 7070705 27.2% 12.8%
Smokeless tobacco causes oral cancer
Yes NA NA 62831242 7.1% NA NA NA 153956683 17.5% NA
No NA NA 2575714 8.5% NA NA NA 8597977 28.4% NA
Smokeless tobacco causes dental disease
Yes NA NA 60459366 7.1% NA NA NA 148219859 17.5% NA
No NA NA 4596711 8.3% NA NA NA 13773748 24.9% NA

Among smokers, prevalence of smoking tobacco varies considerably by the knowledge of smoking associated with lung cancer than the other three diseases in GATS-1. In GATS-2, prevalence of smokeless tobacco use among the users varies considerably by the knowledge of smokeless tobacco consumption associated with oral cancer than the other diseases.

Multivariable binary logistic regression for smokers

Table 2 depicts the results of the binary logistic regression model to enhance the understanding of the role of different covariates (whether their effects have remained constant or not on smoking form of tobacco use in the two survey periods) of smoking in India. The proportion (P), β coefficients and adjusted odds ratios (exponential β) along with a 95 per cent confidence interval (CI) estimate of smokers according to the various categories of a variable compared to the reference category is presented. The last column of this table presents the difference in the regression coefficients during the seven-year period.

Table 2. Multivariable binary logistic regression for smokers in India, GATS-2009-10 and GATS-16-17.

Explanatory variables GATS-1 GATS-2 Change
P β AOR 95% C.I. of AOR P β AOR 95% C.I. of AOR β gats-1 & β gats-2
Lower Upper Lower Upper
Region
(North) 1 1
Central 0.333 -0.118 0.889 0.801 0.985 0.273 -0.739 0.478 0.435 0.524 -0.621
East 0.189 -0.130 0.878 0.791 0.975 0.197 -0.892 0.410 0.371 0.453 -0.762
Northeast 0.04 0.573 1.773 1.629 1.930 0.046 0.494 1.638 1.512 1.775 -0.079
West 0.089 -1.103 0.332 0.293 0.376 0.072 -1.448 0.235 0.207 0.267 -0.346
South 0.279 -0.369 0.691 0.627 0.763 0.267 -0.644 0.525 0.481 0.574 -0.275
Type of Residence
(Urban) 1 1
Rural 0.742 0.019 1.019 0.954 1.088 0.716 0.090 1.094 1.026 1.167 0.071
Wealth index quintiles
(Poorest) 1 1
Poorer 0.256 0.216 1.242 1.110 1.390 0.254 -0.077 0.926 0.852 1.005 -0.294
Middle 0.206 0.136 1.145 1.020 1.285 0.191 -0.145 0.865 0.790 0.947 -0.280
Fourth 0.202 0.066 1.069 0.950 1.202 0.21 -0.251 0.778 0.708 0.856 -0.317
Richest 0.159 -0.065 0.937 0.827 1.063 0.146 -0.453 0.636 0.571 0.707 -0.388
Age groups
(15–24) 1 1
25–44 0.414 0.787 2.198 1.967 2.456 0.481 0.709 2.033 1.806 2.288 -0.078
45–64 0.398 1.066 2.904 2.580 3.268 0.309 1.028 2.795 2.472 3.161 -0.038
65 and above 0.11 0.926 2.525 2.164 2.945 0.113 0.783 2.189 1.908 2.511 -0.143
Gender
(Male) 1 1
Female 0.104 -2.631 0.072 0.064 0.081 0.098 -2.768 0.063 0.056 0.070 -0.137
Education
(No formal schooling) 1 1
Upto Primary 0.293 -0.254 0.776 0.712 0.845 0.275 -0.332 0.717 0.664 0.775 -0.078
Upto Secondary 0.207 -0.596 0.551 0.504 0.603 0.248 -0.710 0.491 0.453 0.533 -0.114
Above Secondary 0.105 -0.915 0.400 0.360 0.445 0.111 -1.215 0.297 0.267 0.329 -0.300
Occupation
(Government and non-government employee) 1 1
Self employed 0.452 -0.035 0.966 0.903 1.033 0.69 0.236 1.266 1.166 1.374 0.271
Student 0.016 -0.867 0.420 0.349 0.506 0.017 -0.859 0.424 0.348 0.516 0.008
Homemaker 0.092 -0.314 0.731 0.636 0.840 0.07 -0.020 0.980 0.849 1.132 0.294
Retired or unemployed 0.086 -0.092 0.912 0.808 1.029 0.102 0.002 1.002 0.888 1.129 0.094
Smoking causes serious illness
(Yes) 1 1
No 0.126 -0.152 0.859 0.603 1.223 0.068 -0.102 0.903 0.806 1.011 0.050
Smoking causes stroke
(Yes) 1 1
No 0.326 0.165 1.179 1.090 1.276 0.248 0.176 1.193 1.101 1.292 0.011
Smoking causes heart attack
(Yes) 1 1
No 0.202 0.093 1.098 1.000 1.205 0.166 -0.024 0.976 0.886 1.076 -0.117
Smoking causes lung cancer
(Yes) 1 1
No 0.06 0.104 1.110 0.925 1.332 0.049 0.247 1.281 1.093 1.500 0.143
Smokeless tobacco use causes serious illness
(Yes) 1 1
No 0.084 0.156 1.168 0.964 1.417 0.036 0.188 1.207 1.013 1.438 0.032
Intercept -1.184 -0.903

Note: P- Proportion of the population; AOR–Adjusted Odds Ratio; C.I.—Confidence interval;

= Reference category.

The coefficients in all the regions except the north east is found to be negative in both the rounds of the survey compared to the north region, indicating these regions had lower smoking levels as compared to North India. The eastern region followed by the central region has attained a higher rate of smoking decline as opposed to other regions. The rate of smoking has increased in rural areas during the inter-survey period.

In the year 2009–10, the rate of smoking was higher in the poorer categories of wealth index quintiles (WIQ) after adjusting the other covariates in the model. In the year 2016–17, the middle, richer and richest population had lower levels of smoking as compared to their poorest counterparts. Although the direction of the coefficients for the above mentioned groups has become negative in the year 2016–17, the richest section has accomplished relatively higher gain in declining smoking levels. Women have lower levels of smoking as compared to men in both the rounds of the survey.

Education shows the expected inverse relationship with smoking. As the education level increases, the level of smoking declines. The difference in the rate of smoking between illiterate and educated categories becomes more prominent during the inter-survey period. It reflects that the effect of education on smoking had become stronger in 2016–17 than in 2009–10.

The table shows that in the first round of the survey, as compared to government and non-government employees, students and homemakers have lower levels of smoking. In the second round, the rate of smoking was higher in the self-employed and students’ group. Students show an increase in the rate of smoking during the inter-survey period.

The population with no knowledge of smoking association with stroke, and lung cancer had higher levels of smoking. In GATS-2 time period, smoking was significantly higher among those who are not aware about smoking causes lung cancer.

Multivariable binary logistic regression for smokeless tobacco use

Table 3 depicts the results of the multivariable binary logistic regression model to understand the role of different covariates on smokeless tobacco consumption in India at two-survey points of time. The proportion (P), β coefficients and adjusted odds ratio along with a 95 percent CI estimate of smokeless tobacco users according to the various covariates is presented in Table 3. The last column of this table presents the difference in the regression coefficients during the seven-year period.

Table 3. Multivariable binary logistic regression for smokeless tobacco use in India, GATS-2009-10 and GATS-2016-17.

Explanatory variables GATS-1 GATS-2 Change
P β AOR 95% C.I. of AOR P β AOR 95% C.I. of AOR β gats-1 & β gats-2
Lower Upper Lower Upper
Region
(North) 1 1
Central 0.357 1.418 4.129 3.731 4.570 0.345 1.453 4.276 3.911 4.676 0.035
East 0.305 1.724 5.607 5.069 6.201 0.279 1.515 4.548 4.153 4.980 -0.209
Northeast 0.044 1.877 6.533 5.958 7.163 0.067 2.097 8.143 7.472 8.875 0.220
West 0.162 1.034 2.813 2.532 3.124 0.174 1.105 3.019 2.736 3.330 0.071
South 0.119 0.248 1.281 1.147 1.430 0.109 0.127 1.136 1.027 1.256 -0.120
Type of Residence
(Urban) 1 1
Rural 0.8 0.057 1.059 1.000 1.121 0.751 0.029 1.030 0.975 1.088 -0.028
Wealth index quintiles
(Poorest) 1 1
Poorer 0.304 0.046 1.047 0.960 1.141 0.292 -0.091 0.913 0.857 0.973 -0.137
Middle 0.203 -0.106 0.900 0.822 0.984 0.186 -0.175 0.839 0.781 0.902 -0.069
Fourth 0.149 -0.404 0.667 0.608 0.733 0.17 -0.380 0.684 0.633 0.739 0.025
Richest 0.09 -0.763 0.466 0.421 0.517 0.081 -0.814 0.443 0.404 0.486 -0.052
Age groups
(15–24) 1 1
25–44 0.458 0.440 1.553 1.432 1.684 0.483 0.562 1.755 1.612 1.910 0.122
45–64 0.264 0.423 1.527 1.394 1.673 0.257 0.627 1.871 1.709 2.050 0.203
65 and above 0.09 0.452 1.571 1.384 1.783 0.092 0.608 1.836 1.654 2.038 0.156
Gender
(Male) 1 1
Female 0.407 -0.571 0.565 0.527 0.605 0.334 -0.725 0.484 0.456 0.514 -0.154
Education
(No formal schooling) 1 1
Upto Primary 0.275 -0.010 0.990 0.923 1.061 0.267 -0.045 0.956 0.898 1.018 -0.034
Upto Secondary 0.223 -0.199 0.819 0.760 0.883 0.274 -0.280 0.756 0.708 0.808 -0.080
Above Secondary 0.085 -0.551 0.576 0.525 0.633 0.096 -0.754 0.470 0.431 0.513 -0.203
Occupation
(Government and non-government employee) 1 1
Self employed 0.373 -0.112 0.894 0.839 0.953 0.605 0.143 1.154 1.072 1.243 0.255
Student 0.03 -1.057 0.347 0.302 0.400 0.018 -1.147 0.318 0.272 0.371 -0.090
Homemaker 0.244 -0.577 0.562 0.516 0.611 0.19 -0.480 0.619 0.564 0.678 0.097
Retired or unemployed 0.068 -0.130 0.878 0.784 0.983 0.078 -0.155 0.856 0.769 0.953 -0.025
Smoking causes serious illness
(Yes) 1 1
No 0.124 -0.414 0.661 0.490 0.891 0.077 -0.162 0.850 0.774 0.934 0.252
Smoking causes stroke
(Yes) 1 1
No 0.273 0.137 1.147 1.072 1.228 0.284 0.239 1.270 1.190 1.356 0.102
Smoking causes heart attack
(Yes) 1 1
No 0.186 0.169 1.184 1.094 1.282 0.202 0.134 1.143 1.058 1.236 -0.035
Smoking causes lung cancer
(Yes) 1 1
No 0.034 -0.300 0.741 0.634 0.867 0.057 0.071 1.073 0.948 1.215 0.370
Smokeless tobacco use causes serious illness
(Yes) 1 1
No 0.059 0.194 1.215 1.031 1.430 0.043 0.060 1.061 0.920 1.224 -0.135
Intercept -1.861 -2.150

Note: P—Proportion of the population; AOR–Adjusted Odds Ratio; C.I.—Confidence interval;

= Reference category.

The coefficients in all the regions were found positive in both the rounds of the survey which indicates that adults from these regions had a higher rate of smokeless tobacco consumption compared to the northern region.

In 2016–17, individuals belonging to all the better off wealth index groups (poorer, middle, richer, richest) had lower levels of smokeless tobacco use as compared to the poorest. The result indicates that women have lower levels of smokeless tobacco use as compared to men in both the rounds of the survey. The rate of smokeless tobacco use in 2009–10 was higher in all age groups as compared to those in the ‘15–24 years age group’ category. As age advances, the levels of consumption also increase. This trend is witnessed in both the rounds of the survey.

Education showed the expected inverse relationship with smokeless tobacco use. The difference in the rate of smokeless tobacco use between uneducated and educated categories becomes more prominent during the inter-survey period. It reflects that the impact of education on smokeless tobacco consumption had become stronger in 2016–17 than in 2009–10.

The table shows that in 2009–10, all occupation groups had lower levels of smokeless tobacco use than the government and non-government employees’ group. However, the rate of smokeless tobacco consumption has increased in the self-employed and homemaker groups during the inter-survey period. The differentials between the self-employed and ‘government and non-government employees’ categories have widened in the year 2016–17 than in 2009–10.

In the first round of the survey, the rate of smokeless tobacco consumption was higher in the population with no knowledge of smokeless tobacco association with serious illnesses than those who were aware. Those who did not have knowledge of smoking association with stroke and heart attack had higher levels of smokeless tobacco use in both the rounds of the survey. In 2009–10, the population who did not have knowledge of smoking association with lung cancer had significantly lower levels of smokeless tobacco use. However, in the same time period the levels of consumption have increased among the people were aware about smokeless tobacco use causes serious illness, indicating the importance of health-related knowledge on tobacco consumption.

Decomposition of change in smoking by using multivariable binary logistic regression model in India, 2009–10 and 2016–17

Table 4 depicts the decomposition of the overall decline in the smoking form of tobacco consumption into different components, namely—rate, composition and interaction. The result in this Table is based on the coefficients of multivariable binary logistic regression and proportional distribution of population reported in Table 2. It is evident from the Table that the leading components of decline in the level of smoking is propensity and interaction, which explains around 41 per cent and 42 per cent of the overall smoking consumption change respectively. Interaction is an inter-play of the rate and composition components—(interaction at aggregate and sub-group levels). Around 17 per cent of the overall decline is being explained by a shift in the population-composition component.

Table 4. Decomposition of change in smoking by using multivariable binary logistic regression model in India, 2009–10 and 2016–17.

Explanatory variables Percentage change due to
Rate Composition Interaction
Intercept 501.96
Region
(North)
Central -136.40 4.67 24.58
East -95.00 -0.69 -4.02
Northeast -2.08 2.27 -0.31
West -20.25 12.37 3.87
South -50.61 2.92 2.18
Total -304.34 21.54 26.29
Type of Residence
(Urban)
Rural 34.75 -0.33 -1.22
Total 34.75 -0.33 -1.22
Wealth index quintiles
(Poorest)
Poorer -49.48 -0.28 0.39
Middle -38.18 -1.35 2.78
Fourth -42.24 0.35 -1.67
Richest -40.69 0.56 3.33
Total -170.59 -0.72 4.82
Age groups
(15–24)
25–44 -21.30 34.78 -3.45
45–64 -9.98 -62.58 2.23
65 and above -10.38 1.83 -0.28
Total -41.65 -25.97 -1.50
Gender
(Male)
Female -9.40 10.41 0.54
Total -9.40 10.41 0.54
Education
(No formal schooling)
Upto Primary -15.07 3.02 0.93
Upto Secondary -15.57 -16.12 -3.08
Above Secondary -20.78 -3.62 -1.19
Total -51.42 -16.72 -3.34
Occupation
(Government and non-government employee)
Self employed 80.80 -5.49 42.54
Student 0.08 -0.57 0.01
Homemaker 17.84 4.56 -4.27
Retired or unemployed 5.33 -0.97 0.99
Total 104.05 -2.48 39.27
Smoking causes serious illness
(Yes)
No 4.16 5.82 -1.91
Total 4.16 5.82 -1.91
Smoking causes stroke
(Yes)
No 2.37 -8.49 -0.57
Total 2.37 -8.49 -0.57
Smoking causes heart attack
(Yes)
No -15.59 -2.21 2.78
Total -15.59 -2.21 2.78
Smoking causes lung cancer
(Yes)
No 5.66 -0.75 -1.04
Total 5.66 -0.75 -1.04
Smokeless tobacco use causes serious illness
(Yes)
No 1.77 -4.94 -1.01
Total 1.77 -4.94 -1.01
Grand total 41.24 16.60 42.17

= Reference category.

Further, this table indicates that place of residence and occupation of the respondent covariates contribute significantly in reducing the prevalence of smoking during the seven-year period, regardless of change in the composition of population. The positive sign of the propensity factors found in the above mentioned covariates indicates that the rate of smoking form of tobacco use has declined more among their subgroups than their reference category. Occupation and type of residence added around 104 and 35 per cent respectively to the overall change in smoking, keeping the composition of population as a constant. The contribution of the self-employed and homemakers in reducing smoking was relatively high from government and non-government employees.

The negative sign in the sub-group who did not have knowledge of smoking causing heart attack leads to the proposition that this group did not contribute to the decline in smoking with respect to the reference category. This implies that those having knowledge that smoking is associated with heart attack contributed more to lowering the rate of smoking. Those who were unaware that smoking causes stroke and lung cancer contributed around two and six per cent, respectively while those unaware that smokeless tobacco causes serious illness contributed around two percent to the total decline in smoking.

The signs of negativity propensity were found in the case of covariates of region, wealth index, age groups, gender, and education. It can be inferred that those living in northern India, poorest population, 15–24 age group, males, and government and non-government employees were having lower rate of smoking in the year 2016–2017 in comparison to the earlier period 2009–2010.

The decline in the level of smoking that took place due to shifts in population structure is explained by region and gender keeping the rate of GATS-1 as a constant. Regional changes explained around 22 per cent of the total change in smoking regardless of the change in smoking behaviour within the regions. Most of the change has occurred because of a shift of population from the northern region towards the western and central regions. Similarly, the change that has occurred in the shift of composition of gender (females) also favours the decline in smoking.

Most of the changes in the interaction of rate and population structure that have occurred during the seven-year period have favoured a decline in the level of smoking. Regions, wealth status, gender, occupation, explain the decline in the level of smoking due to interaction. Occupation explained around 39 per cent of the total change in smoking. The interaction of rate and population composition of the self-employed group resulted in a significant reduction in the level of smoking during the seven years period. Decline in the percentage of smokers in the age group of 45–64 years helped in reducing the level of smoking.

The second foremost component is the interaction that occurred in the regions, which explained around 27 per cent of the overall change in the level of smoking of adults aged 15 years and above during GATS-1 and GATS-2. The interaction of rate and population composition in the central region favours the decline in smoking.

Decomposition of change in smokeless tobacco consumption using multivariable binary logistic regression model in India, 2009–10 and 2016–17

Table 5 depicts the decomposition of the overall decline in the smokeless form of tobacco consumption into different components, namely—rate, composition and interaction at aggregate and sub-group levels. It is evident from the Table that the leading component of decline in the level of smokeless tobacco is change in propensity, which explains around 81 per cent, eight per cent of the overall decline is being explained by a shift in the population-composition component and the interaction contributed by around 11 per cent.

Table 5. Decomposition of change in smokeless tobacco consumption using multivariable binary logistic regression model in India, 2009–10 and 2016–17.

Explanatory variables Percentage change due to
Rate Composition Interaction
Intercept 71.14
Region
(North)
Central 1.84 -2.50 -0.06
East -9.37 -6.59 0.80
Northeast 1.42 6.35 0.74
West 1.69 1.82 0.13
South -2.12 -0.36 0.18
Total -6.54 -1.28 1.78
Type of Residence
(Urban)
Rural -3.29 -0.41 0.20
Total -3.29 -0.41 0.20
Wealth index quintiles
(Poorest)
Poorer -6.12 -0.08 0.24
Middle -2.06 0.26 0.17
Fourth 0.53 -1.25 0.07
Richest -0.67 1.01 0.07
Total -8.33 -0.05 0.56
Age groups
(15–24)
25–44 8.21 1.62 0.45
45–64 7.92 -0.44 -0.21
65 and above 2.06 0.13 0.05
Total 18.19 1.31 0.28
Gender
(Male)
Female -8.91 6.13 1.60
Total -8.91 6.13 1.60
Education
(No formal schooling)
Upto Primary -1.21 0.01 0.04
Upto Secondary -2.66 -1.49 -0.61
Above Secondary -2.49 -0.89 -0.32
Total -6.35 -2.37 -0.89
Occupation
(Government and non-government employee)
Self employed 13.82 -3.82 8.59
Student -0.41 1.86 0.16
Homemaker 3.48 4.58 -0.77
Retired or unemployed -0.30 -0.19 -0.04
Total 16.58 2.43 7.94
Smoking causes serious illness
(Yes)
No 4.63 2.86 -1.75
Total 4.63 2.86 -1.75
Smoking causes stroke
(Yes)
No 4.13 0.22 0.17
Total 4.13 0.22 0.17
Smoking causes heart attack
(Yes)
No -1.07 0.40 -0.09
Total -1.07 0.40 -0.09
Smoking causes lung cancer
(Yes)
No 1.85 -1.01 1.25
Total 1.85 -1.01 1.25
Smokeless tobacco use causes serious illness
(Yes)
No -1.16 -0.46 0.32
Total -1.16 -0.46 0.32
Grand total 80.88 7.76 11.36

= Reference category.

Further, this table indicates that the covariates of age group and occupation of the respondent contribute significantly in reducing the prevalence of smokeless tobacco consumption during the seven-year period, regardless of change in the composition of population. Age group and occupation added around 18 and 17 per cent respectively to the overall change in smokeless tobacco consumption, keeping the composition of population as a constant.

Further, the negative sign in the sub-group who did not have knowledge of smoking association with heart attack and smokeless tobacco association with serious illnesses’ leads to the proposition that this group did not contribute to the decline in smokeless tobacco use with respect to the reference category. This implies that those having knowledge that smokeless tobacco causes serious illnesses contributed more to lowering the rate of smokeless tobacco use. Those who were unaware that smoking causes serious illnesses, stroke, and lung cancer contributed around five, four and two per cent respectively to the decline in smokeless tobacco use.

Most of the decline in the level of smokeless tobacco use that took place due to shifts in population structure is explained by gender, occupation, and age keeping the rate of GATS-1 as a constant. The foremost component of composition is the shift in the structure of the gender of the population (towards female), which explained around six per cent of the overall change in the level of smokeless tobacco consumption of adults aged 15 years and above during GATS-1 and GATS-2. Most of the change has occurred because of an increase in population from the male towards female category. Similarly, the change that has occurred in the shift of composition of occupation of the population (towards homemakers) favours the decline in smokeless tobacco consumption.

Discussion

Smoking and smokeless tobacco consumption imposes extensive burden of disease and death on the public health. The Government of India has undertaken various initiatives and legislation aimed at tobacco control. The Cigarettes and Other Tobacco Products (Prohibition of Advertisement and Regulation of Trade and Commerce, Production, Supply and Distribution) Act (COTPA) came into force in 2003 [18], making it the principal comprehensive law governing tobacco control in India. Some of the rules promulgated under this law were prohibition of direct and indirect advertisements of tobacco products, sale of tobacco to minors, smoking in public places, and within a radius of 100 yards of educational institutions [19]. It also included mandatory display of pictorial warning on tobacco product packages, testing of tar and nicotine content of all tobacco products. These rules faced numerous socio-political and legal blockades, following which the Revised Smoke-free Rules came into effect from 2008 [20]. The Government of India ratified the WHO Framework Convention on Tobacco Control (WHO FCTC) in 2004, which enlists key strategies for reduction in demand and supply of tobacco [21]. Further, to strengthen implementation of the tobacco control provisions under COTPA and the WHO FCTC, the Government of India piloted the National Tobacco Control Programme (NTCP) in 2007–2008 [8]. From their inception, these tobacco control initiatives have evolved and expanded across the country. The inter survey period of GATS witnessed the emergence of additional interventions from both, the central and state governments resulting in powerful mechanisms for tobacco control. These include Food Safety and Standards Authority of India (FSSAI) prohibition regulations for gutka, steep excise duties on tobacco products, judicial clarifications on regulations pertaining to tobacco product bans and mandatory 85% graphic health warnings on all tobacco product packages [22, 23].

Result shows that the level of smoking and smokeless tobacco consumption has declined in India from 2009–10 to 2016–17, but there are differentials in consumption. These variations are generally viewed in terms of socio-economic variables such as education, gender, age, economic condition and place of residence. Previous studies have shown that the tobacco consumption is disproportionately higher among lower socio-economic groups, manifested in the lower age of initiation [11], and lower quit rates among these groups [24]. In addition, in India, culture plays an important role in influencing the type and pattern of tobacco use. The decline in tobacco use could be the result from a decrease in use among a particular socio-economic group or a change in the population composition of the same group. Therefore, with the help of nationally representative GATS-1 and GATS-2 database, this study tries to examine the contribution of such factors to the change in smoking and smokeless tobacco use in India.

The central finding of the study is that the propensity component is primarily responsible for major tobacco consumption decline. For smoking, and smokeless tobacco the propensity component explained about 41 per cent and 81 per cent respectively. Moreover, the composition component contributed about 17 per cent for smokers and eight per cent for smokeless tobacco use, of the total change. The inter-play of propensity and population composition contributed 42 and 11 percent for change in smoking and smokeless tobacco use respectively.

Previous studies have documented regional variations in all forms of tobacco use, which may be due to contextual factors such as the social environment (deprivation, area-level mean income, area-level income inequality and social capital), shared cultural and social norms regarding tobacco use and the availability and implementation of tobacco control policies in a given area [25]. The results of this paper based on GATS-2009-10 show that compared to the northern region, all the other regions had lower levels of smoking (excluding northeast). This trend has continued during the seven-year period, with the northern region showing higher smoking in 2016–17. Similar trends of smoking being higher in the northern and northeast regions in the country has been documented in past studies [10, 12]. One of the factors contributing to this trend in the above mentioned regions was the higher prevalence of smoking among women [8, 12, 26, 27]. Apart from tradition, politico-legal and geographical factors, the extent to which each state has been able to implement the anti-tobacco measures plays a pivotal role in inter-state and regional variations [8, 28]. This persisting regional trend highlights the need for more intensive and gender sensitive tobacco cessation interventions in north and northeast India.

Health being a subject in the State List in India [29], has led to the development of state legislations and programmes for tobacco control based on the socio-political, economic and cultural context. These regional variations could be explained due to the above mentioned inter-state differences in successful implementation of tobacco control initiatives. For instance, Rajasthan, a state in the central region levies the highest tax on all tobacco products [19]. Additionally, it launched several innovative campaigns against tobacco consumption at places like schools, colleges, police stations and government offices, culminating in the state being the recipient of the WHO Tobacco Control Award in 2019 [30]. According to the WHO Global Tobacco Epidemic Report 2017, big cities such as Kanpur, Lucknow from the state of Uttar Pradesh and Jaipur from Rajasthan (central region), and Kolkata from West Bengal (eastern region) have achieved high levels of coverage in tobacco control measures such as awareness of dangers of tobacco use and availability of help to quit [31]. Moreover, in 2013, Bihar, a state in eastern India carried out an excellent example of tobacco cessation intervention outside the health sector comprising of educational efforts, tobacco control policies and cessation support [32, 33]. These rigorous and innovative campaigns by different states in the eastern and central region can explain the higher rates of decline in these regions in smoking and smokeless tobacco consumption.

The contribution of the 25–44 years age group to decline in smokeless tobacco use related to rate and composition is around eight and two percent respectively. In both the rounds of GATS, the age groups of 25 years and above had higher levels of smokeless tobacco use. The contribution of age in reducing smokeless tobacco use declines with increasing age. Previous studies have also shown the same trend of an increase in smokeless tobacco usage with age [34]. This could be due to people adopting the habit of smokeless tobacco use by the time a particular age is reached and lower quitting rate due to its addictive nature. Therefore, it is important that tobacco control policies target the adolescents and younger age groups that can improve the knowledge and awareness of the ill effects of tobacco in this group. Strategies to prevent the adoption of smoking and smokeless tobacco use in the first place are more effective and successful than tobacco cessation measures in reducing the overall prevalence of tobacco consumption [35].

The wealth status of household is a significant predictor of smoking. Our results based on disaggregated data on smoking and smokeless tobacco use shows that the smoking levels declined with improving wealth status indicated by lower levels of smoking in the middle, richer and richest wealth population groups in 2016–17. A study conducted by Singh et al. (2015) found that cigarette smoking was positively associated with household wealth and the richest category had higher odds of smoking cigarettes [3.86 (95% CI: 2.54–5.86)] relative to the poorest group. It can be inferred that the better off population (richer and richest) realised the harmful effects of smoking leading to a decline in their consumption. However, the poorer population groups continue to smoke bidis [36]. India has historically had absent or lower taxes on bidis and a complex system of taxing cigarettes resulting in lower prices. Another possible factor that can explain the higher smoking in the poorer groups is the differential treatment of the taxation policy towards bidis. For instance, in the fiscal year 2015–16, the central excise tax was 16 rupees (US$0.22) per 1000 handmade bidi sticks while it was 3790 rupees (US$51.4) for 1000 cigarettes of lengths of 75 mm and over [37]. This has resulted in the price of bidis being as low as 0.20 rupees (US$0.0027), and pack prices between three (US$0.041) and 20 rupees (US$0.27) across India [38]. Further, a rise in disposable incomes in India could have also lead to an increase in cigarette consumption among the poorer groups [39]. Cigarettes become affordable when they are sold as loose sticks and not in a pack. The poorer population can therefore, in addition to bidis, purchase and consume loose cigarette sticks resulting in modest declines in their consumption during the inter-survey period. Studies conducted across countries have shown that cigarette consumers in low-and middle-income countries are more sensitive (reduction in smoking) to an increase in the price as compared to the high-income countries [40]. Higher taxation of tobacco products has been established as the single most effective intervention to reduce consumption [41]. Despite efforts of the government to increase the taxes on tobacco products, India is still lower than the WHO’s limit of 75 percent on retail price. This affordability and differential pricing has lead to widespread use of tobacco products. For smokeless tobacco consumption as well, wealth status is a significant predictor during GATS-1 and GATS-2. Studies have proven an inverse association between household wealth status and smokeless tobacco use [42]. This study shows that in both the rounds of GATS, almost all better-off wealth quintile groups had lower levels of smokeless tobacco use as compared to the poorest.

The contribution of the self-employed and homemaker groups to the decline in smoking related to rate is around 81 and 18 per cent respectively. For decline in smokeless tobacco use, the self-employed and homemakers contributed 14 and three per cent respectively.

Women contributed less to the decline in smoking as compared to men. Earlier studies have shown that minority proportion of women access tobacco cessation clinics and out of this, most of these women are smokeless tobacco users [43]. It is known that women smoking tobacco is culturally unacceptable in India [44], thereby creating an obstacle to avail help for quitting. Hence, it is essential to make the NTCP more gender inclusive so that women can avail tobacco cessation services easily. Women had lower levels of smokeless tobacco consumption in GATS-1 and GATS-2 and contributed lesser to the decline in use as compared to men. This decline can be attributed to policy measures such as a blanket ban imposed by the government on production, storage, or distribution of all forms of chewing tobacco products including zarda and pan masala in 2011 [45].

The population with knowledge of smokeless tobacco association with serious illnesses contributed more to the decline in smokeless tobacco use as compared to those who did not know. Those who did not have knowledge of the association of smoking with serious illness and specific conditions (stroke, lung cancer) contributed more to the decline in smoking that those who had the knowledge. This knowledge of tobacco causing specific diseases and ailments has not translated into encouraging practices that lead to decline in the levels of smoking and smokeless tobacco consumption. This indicates potential for improvement in the mass media campaigns especially those highlighting the specific diseases and ill effects of smoking and smokeless tobacco.

Learning from experiences of other low-and-middle income countries such as Nepal, to enforce more effective tobacco control it is important for developing countries like India to engage with politicians, legislators, the media, civil society and raise awareness among citizens regarding the tobacco lobby as well as different provisions of tobacco control [46].

This paper has a few limitations. First, the self-reported nature of the data collected in GATS may lead to underestimation of tobacco prevalence. Second, certain predictor variables included in the second round of GATS were not included in the first, which prevented a comparative analysis and subsequently led to exclusion of those variables from the analysis. Third, the study does not document the decline in smoking and smokeless tobacco use separately categorised for the array of products consumed under the above two forms due to a small sample size. Fourth, though we have tried to identify different programmes and interventions and their impact on tobacco use. However, direct linkage could not be established since the data collected in GATS does not reflect the effect on actual quitting. Moreover, to understand the reasons underlying the identified pattern of tobacco consumption and the barriers and facilitators for cessation of tobacco, contextually relevant qualitative research studies must be designed.

Conclusion

India faces a high burden of tobacco consumption. Different factors influence the prevalence of smoking and smokeless tobacco use. In addition to socio-economic inequalities, regional inequalities must be monitored. The northern and north-eastern region need more focus on tobacco control programmes since they show a trend of higher tobacco burden over time. Moreover, the population that is aware of the ill effects of tobacco on health mostly have a relatively lower contribution as compared to the unaware, to the declining tobacco consumption. Since 2016, the government has allowed warnings to cover 85% of the front and back of the package, and a combination of graphic and regional language text warnings are currently used in the country. Studies have documented that these written statutory warnings are predominantly in English and Hindi [4749]. Keeping in mind the linguistic diversity influenced by regional variations and socio-economic inequalities in tobacco use in India, all campaigns and warnings on product packages must be in the local language or dialect enabling the user to clearly comprehend the damaging effect of consuming tobacco.

Smokeless tobacco use in work and public places must be prohibited akin to the smoking ban. To achieve the Indian health target that aims to reduce tobacco use by 15% by 2020 and by 30% by 2025 [6], culture and context specific strategies addressing the inequalities in tobacco use must be devised, accompanied by strict implementation of the tobacco control policies.

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Data Availability

The data underlying this study is publicly available at: GATS-1 and 2 India Data https://www.who.int/tobacco/surveillance/survey/gats/gats_india_report.pdf?ua=1.

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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Reviewer #1: Introduction section is lengthy, please concise it.

Authors only focused on community or individual level determinant factor of smoking but tobacco industry activities, tobacco control policies and its implementation are also crucial on tobacco control.

Authors provided several interventions during the study period from 2009 to 2016 and the prevalence of tobacco use declined from 35% to 29%. If authors can provide previous than this study period declining trend on tobacco use in India, it is good to know the effects of these interventions. I am unable to read reference no 15.

Last two paragraph of Introduction section needs to revise. Authors can provide details of the analysis in supplemental file. Rationale is not much convincing why this study had done, why decomposition analysis, what are the difference compared to other analysis. If there any study used other analysis approach and had limitations or any discrepancy.

Who supported GATS in India, who was the implementation agency?

What does it mean by Indian residents? Citizen or any who reside in India for certain time.

Sampling details is not available, how the household was selected? How individual was selected in the household?

What was the response rate for both period?

Please delete from Line 108 to 110. Just provide the references in the text and authors need to provide details in the study.

Line 112 to 115 is useless. In fact, the variables were not selected on the basis of the literature, and the survey only included demographic variables.

Line 116 to 125 is not useful.

I don’t think caste and religion are household level category. Religion and caste should be an individual choice. What is backward classes and scheduled caste?

How many household assets were included for wealth index?

Line 140, what are the common variables? Please provide details about the variables only which you had used in your study.

It would be good to see any tobacco use in the dependent variable.

What is the reference category for smoking only and smokeless only? It included never user or former and never user.

How they calculated percent relative change? Was it a weighted percent?

Line 155 to 173 is very hard to understand. It is better to specify different analytic approaches separately. For example, why, when and how authors used logistic (may be) regression model? What they did with this regression model? So on….. I don’t think authors did multivariate analysis.

It is better to provide details about decomposition analysis in supplemental file. Authors can provide step by step process of this analysis with SPSS syntax.

Please specify, how the survey weights were used in the study?

It is not clear whether authors combined both survey or analyzed separately, if combined how they treated survey weights.

How the interaction worked in bivariate regression model? How propensity matched in bivariate model? Which propensity match was used?

What was the accuracy of the decomposition model?

Explain your model with Rate, Composition and Interaction.

Please specify proportion of the population in Tables 2 and 3. How it was calculated?

Line 201, …..and dual use tobacco…… I didn’t see the dual use tobacco in tables and Methods, how dual use was defined? and why not presented in the results?

Very hard to follow Methods and Results section. Tables title shows multivariate analysis but Methods section did not mention about it.

Interpretation of results is very hard to understand, please make it simple and clear. Authors can focus on major significant results on their interpretation.

It would be better to put tables 2 and 3 in supplemental files. In addition to tables 4 and 5, I would suggest another table for Any Tobacco use.

How Grand total was calculated in Tables 4 and 5. If the tables 4 and 5 outcomes were from bivariate analysis, how could you eliminate the variable selection bias?

First paragraph of the Discussion section is repeated literature from the Introduction.

Dual tobacco uses again came in the Discussion but there is no results about dual use tobacco.

Please provide the references for Line 461 to 464, please provide these regions means which one…what interventions are available? Author should discuss potential contributing factors for higher and lower regional reduction in tobacco use.

Discuss one factor at single place. For example, age is discussed in several paragraphs in the Discussion.

Conclusion is similar to discussion. Please rewrite your conclusion with your study’s main finding.

Please try to include original articles in the references instead internet websites. Some websites are not trusty.

Reviewer #2: This is a well written manuscript on comparing tobacco use prevalence across two waves of Global Adult Tobacco Survey in India. Authors have compared tobacco use prevalence data from GATS-1 and GATS-2 conduced in India to examine the demographic and socioeconomic correlates of

smoking and smokeless tobacco use for both the rounds of the survey.

Please see my feedback below.

General Comments

1. The manuscript may benefit from a good language and grammar editing.

Introduction:

2. line 47-48: ADD Khaini under Smokeless tobacco (ST) use, which is the most prevalent form of ST use in India.

3. Line 75-78: Please refer to these published papers on the theme: Suliankatchi Abdulkader R, Sinha DN, Jeyashree K, et al. Trends in tobacco consumption in India 1987-2016: impact of the World Health Organization Framework Convention on Tobacco Control. Int J Public Health. 2019;64(6):841-851. doi:10.1007/s00038-019-01252-x

Singh A, Arora M, Bentley R, et al Geographic variation in tobacco use in India: a population-based multilevel cross-sectional study BMJ Open 2020;10:e033178. doi: 10.1136/bmjopen-2019-033178

Material and Methods:

4. Role of Geographical areas need to be considered in this analysis, given published literature in india using GATS has highlighted that people’s use of tobacco products varies by local areas (city ward and village) across India and the variation in this clustering by tobacco products.

5. Zones and Region has been used inter-changeably between text and Table1, thus confuses the reader.

Discussion: Overall discussion needs to be revised to make it aligned with results presented in the manuscript as it discusses and makes recommendations on many issues not related to the results of this manuscript.

6. line 548-549: Pack warning in India as per rules and notification are supposed to be in regional languages too. The rules mention that warning language will be as per language used for branding. Please correct this.

7. lines 554-555: Smokeless tobacco is also cheap as it is sold in small sachets. how does affordability of single sale of cigarette compare to sale of bidis and smokeless tobacco? This explanation is not clear and not aligned with results.

8. Lines 562-566: Unsure which result is being discussed here.

Overall check policy development years and details mentioned in Introduction and discussion section of the manuscript.

Reviewer #3: The manuscript entitled ‘Declining Trend of Smoking and Smokeless Tobacco in India: A Decomposition Analysis’ with the aim to examine the socioeconomic correlates and delineate the factors contributing to a change in smoking and smokeless tobacco.

The manuscript requires further improvement.

Comments

Statistical analysis

The description of the statistical analysis requires improvement and reorganization. A subtitle Statistical Analysis to be provided Information on the variable coding to be provided. The word adjusted to be used where applicable. The information on multicollinearity (if any), variable selection method in the analysis, interaction (if any), goodness of fit/model fit etc to be stated.

Line 150 -153, the coding for ‘0’ categories to be provided.

Line 196-197, more information to be provided.

Line 197, typo ‘Statisticsversion’.

Results

Line 213, the results for dual use to be provided in the table(s).

Table 1, SCT, ST and OBC to be denoted in the table footnote. n to be provided apart from %.

Line 235, the sentence ‘The Central region followed by the Western region has attained a higher rate of smoking decline as opposed to other regions’ not clear based on the table and requires revision.

Line 244, the sentence ‘However, the rate of smoking among women has increased during the seven-year period’ requires revision. The increment was not much.

Line 308 the sentence requires revision. To include except ‘smoking cause heart attack’

Line 329, what omitted category refers to, reference category?.

Line 334-338, the statement quite confusing on ‘smoking causes serious illness based on the Table 4. Also the specific illness (stroke, heart attack, lung cancer, smokeless tobacco on serious illness) to be highlighted in the results section.

Line 380, the results on specific illnesses to be described.

The p value to be provided or denoted in the table(s) footnote.

For the tables, Exp B to be replaced with OR. For reference category, value 1 to be added.

Conclusion too long and to be incorporated into the discussion.

References to conform with the journal format.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


22 Sep 2020

Response to Reviewers

The authors are grateful to the reviewers, who provided valuable comments and suggestions on earlier version of our work, which helped immensely in improving the quality of the paper.

Reviewer #1:

1. Introduction section is lengthy, please concise it.

As per the suggestion we have concise the introduction part.

2. Authors only focused on community or individual level determinant factor of smoking but tobacco industry activities, tobacco control policies and its implementation are also crucial on tobacco control.

The suggestion is valid however, no direct information is available in the Global Adult Tobacco Survey (GATS 1 and 2) dataset on tobacco industry activities, control policies and implementation. We have used decomposition analysis on both round the data set to capture these effect indirectly.

3. Authors provided several interventions during the study period from 2009to 2016 and the prevalence of tobacco use declined from 35% to 29%. If authors can provide previous than this study period declining trend on tobacco use in India, it is good to know the effects of these interventions.

As per the suggestion we have added few lines in the introduction part related to trend.

4. I am unable to read reference no 15.

We have made the needful changes.

5. Last two paragraph of Introduction section needs to revise. Authors canprovide details of the analysis in supplemental file. Rationale is notmuch convincing why this study had done, why decomposition analysis,what are the difference compared to other analysis. If there any studyused other analysis approach and had limitations or any discrepancy.

As per the suggestion we have revised last two paragraph of Introduction section. Also revised the rationale of the study.

6. Who supported GATS in India, who was the implementation agency?

GATS 1 and 2, India is the project of the Ministry of Health & Family Welfare (MoHFW), Government of India. MoHFW designated the International Institute for Population Sciences (IIPS), Mumbai for GATS-1 and Tata Institute of Social Sciences (TISS), Mumbai for GATS-2 as the nodal implementing agency for the survey. We have included this information in the section ‘Description of dataset’.

7. What does it mean by Indian residents? Citizen or any who reside inIndia for certain time.

In GATS survey the term India residents has been defined as those residents aged 15 or above, living in their usual residence prior to the survey date. The survey has excluded institutional population comprising those living in collective living places like students’ dormitories, hospitals, hotels, prisons, military barracks, etc

8. Sampling details is not available, how the household was selected? Howindividual was selected in the household?

As per the suggestion, we have included sampling details as follows

“The GATS is a nationally representative, multi-stage, geographically clustered sample of households that covered men and women above 15 years of age in India's 30 states (29 states in GATS-1) and two Union Territories (UTs). Multistage sampling procedure was adopted independently in each state, and within the states, independently in urban and rural areas to select the sample. In urban areas, a three stage sampling process was adopted. At the first stage, the list of all the wards from all cities and towns of the state/ UT constituted the urban sampling frame, from which a required sample of wards, i.e., primary sampling units (PSUs) was selected using probability proportional to size (PPS) sampling. At the second stage, a list of all census enumeration blocks (CEBs) in each selected ward constituted the sampling frame from which one CEB was selected by PPS from each ward. At the third stage, a list of all residential households in each selected CEB constituted the sampling frame, from which a sample of required number of households was selected.

In rural areas, a two stage sampling process was adopted. At the first stage of sampling, PSUs (village) were selected using the PPS sampling method. At the second stage, a list of all residential households in each selected village constituted the sampling frame, from which a sample of the required number of households was selected. From each eligible household, one respondent was selected. More details about sampling design, training of the survey team, and survey management are separately documented in GATS-1 and GATS-2 published report.”

For ref., please see:

International Institute for Population Sciences (IIPS), Ministry of Health and Family Welfare (MoHFW), Government of India (2010) Global Adult Tobacco Survey India report (GATS India), 2009–10. New Delhi: MoHFW, Government of India; Mumbai: IIPS.

Tata Institute of Social Sciences (TISS), Ministry of Health and Family Welfare, Government of India. Global Adult Tobacco Survey GATS 2 India 2016-17 [Internet]. Available from: https://mohfw.gov.in/sites/default/files/GlobaltobacoJune2018.pdf.

9. What was the response rate for both period?

We have mentioned the response rate in the dataset description as follows .

“The overall response rate calculated as the product of the response rates at the household and person-level was 91.8 percent and 92.9 percent for GATS-1 and GATS-2 respectively.”

10. Please delete from Line 108 to 110. Just provide the references in thetext and authors need to provide details in the study.

We have deleted the above lines and provided the references in the Dataset description along with the details of both the surveys.

11. Line 112 to 115 is useless. In fact, the variables were not selected onthe basis of the literature, and the survey only included demographicvariables.

We have conducted a literature review mentioned in the second paragraph of the ‘Introduction section’ that led us to choose the selected variables. Further, the selection was based on the variables that would be associated with a decline in tobacco use and availability in both the rounds of the survey.

12. Line 116 to 125 is not useful.

In line 116 to 125 we have mentioned about the recoding of states into six regions. In decomposition analysis result shows that regions are playing one of the important role in declining tobacco consumptions. Therefore, it is important to inform which states belongs to which region.

13. I don't think caste and religion are household level category. Religionand caste should be an individual choice. What is backward classes andscheduled caste?

In Indian setting,caste and religion are considered as the household levelvariable as itdoes not vary from one household member to other household member.

The “caste system” is an Indian social stratification system which is used to represent the socio-economic status of an individual. The “caste” or “Jati” is hereditary and broadly divided into four groups for administrative reasons, namely, Scheduled Castes (SCs), Scheduled Tribes (STs), Other Backward Classes (OBCs), and General Castes (non-disadvantaged castes). For details, see Ref.,

The Pervasive and Persistent Influence of Caste on Child Mortality in India [Internet]. [cited 2020 Sep 3]. Available from: https://www.researchgate.net/publication/5153771_The_Pervasive_and_Persistent_Influence_of_Caste_on_Child_Mortality_in_India

14. How many household assets were included for wealth index? Should we include this in the methods?

For wealth index, 10 household assets were included in GATS 1 and 14 household assets were included in GATS 2. Based on time relevance, asset information has been captured in the surveys and that information has been used to create the wealth index in the respective time period.

15. Line 140, what are the common variables? Please provide details aboutthe variables only which you had used in your study.

All the variables information has been shown in Table 1 separately for GATS-1 and 2 and variables not common have been marked with ‘NA’. In regression and decomposition analysis, we have explicitly usedthe common variables listedin the last part of the ‘Independent variables’ section(Line 173 to 175).

16. It would be good to see any tobacco use in the dependent variable.

The objective of our paper is to decompose specifically the smoking and smokeless form of tobacco from GATS 1 to GATS 2. We have not included any tobacco use because it would not provide us a clear picture regarding which set of variables were responsible for a decline in smoking and smokeless tobacco usesaperatly. We have analysed the two forms of tobacco individually so that according to the results the government can plan an intervention or programme.

17. What is the reference category for smoking only and smokeless only? Itincluded never user or former and never user.

We have revised the ‘Outcome variables’ section to specifically mention the reference category for smoking and smokeless includes those who are former and never user of smoking and smokeless tobacco.

18. How they calculated percent relative change? Was it a weighted percent?

We calculated relative change using the formula (Prevalence in GATS 2)-(Prevalence in GATS 1)/ Prevalence in GATS 1. We have use a weighted percent.

19. Line 155 to 173 is very hard to understand. It is better to specifydifferent analytic approaches separately. For example, why, when and howauthors used logistic (maybe) regression model? What they did with thisregression model? So on….. I don't think authors did multivariateanalysis.

First multivariate logistic regression models have been applied to find outcoefficientscorresponding to the different background characteristics. Thesecoefficientswere further used in the decomposition analysis.

We have applied separately four multivariate regression models: two regression models for smoking and smokeless tobacco in GATS 1 and two regression models for smoking and smokeless tobacco in GATS 2.

As per the suggestion we have modified the ‘Statistical Analysis’ section to provide more clarity.

20. It is better to provide details about decomposition analysis insupplemental file. Authors can provide step by step process of thisanalysis with SPSS syntax.

In SPSS, four separate logistic regression models have been applied to get the coefficients.Proportion has been calculated from GATS 1 and GATS 2 dataset. This proportion and rate we got from the logistic regression has been used todecomposethe tobacco decline analysis.

21. Please specify, how the survey weights were used in the study?It is not clear whether authors combined both survey or analysedseparately, if combined how they treated survey weights.

Standard survey weights is given in the GATS 1 and GATS 2 file for population level estimate. For detailed information “The collected data was suitably weighted to improve representativeness of the sample in terms of size, distribution, and characteristics of the study population. The weights were derived considering design weight (reciprocal of the probability of selection), household response rate and individual response rate. Post-stratification calibration was done for ages-residence distribution on the survey period in each state/UT. Details of the weighting procedure are provided in Appendix B on Sample design in the GATS Report”.

We have analysed GATS 1 and GATS 2 separately and therefore there was no need to combine the survey weight.

22. How the interaction worked in bivariate regression model? How propensitymatched in bivariate model? Which propensity match was used?

We have not included any interaction variable in the regression model. We got the Interaction term with the help of Decomposition analysis and the formula has been written in the paper.

23. What was the accuracy of the decomposition model?

The decomposition technique adopted in this paper is a well-established demographic technique built upon Kitawaga’ (1955) classical work on rate standardization .

Kitagawa, E. M. (1955). Components of a difference between two rates. Journal of the American Statistical Association, 50, 1168–1194. https://doi.org/10.2307/2281213

24. Explain your model with Rate, Composition and Interaction.

According to the comments we have mentioned the explanation of Rate, Composition and Interaction in ‘Regression and Decomposition Analysis’ section.

25. Please specify proportion of the population in Tables 2 and 3. How itwas calculated?

Univariate analysis was performed for all background characteristics of smokers and smokeless tobacco users for both, GATS-1 and GATS-2. This analysis revealed a description of the respondents categorized in the twoforms of tobacco use, i.e. proportion of the population.

26. Line 201, …..and dual use tobacco…… I didn't see the dual usetobacco in tables and Methods, how dual use was defined? and why notpresented in the results?

We have removed the term ‘dual use’.

27. Very hard to follow Methods and Results section. Tables title showsmultivariate analysis but Methods section did not mention about it.

As per the suggestion we have added about multivariate analysis and try to simplify the language.

28. Interpretation of results is very hard to understand, please make itsimple and clear. Authors can focus on major significant results ontheir interpretation.

We have simplified the Results and Discussion section.

29. It would be better to put tables 2 and 3 in supplemental files. Inaddition to tables 4 and 5, I would suggest another table for AnyTobacco use.

As any tobacco is not our focus of interest, we have not included in the paper. Decomposition analysis is built upon proportion and rate, therefore we feel that table 2 and 3 should be in the main tables.

30. How Grand total was calculated in Tables 4 and 5. If the tables 4 and 5outcomes were from bivariate analysis, how could you eliminate thevariable selection bias?

While using the decomposition formula mentioned in the paper, first we got contribution of each and every attributes of listed variables and finaly we have added their contribution to get Grand total mentioned in Table 4 and 5. Table 4 and 5 were outcomes from multivariate logistic regression.

31. First paragraph of the Discussion section is repeated literature fromthe Introduction.

The first paragraph in the Discussion section enlists specific policy and programme interventions from the Government of India in the periodpreceding GATS 1.We have modified the Discussion section so that it comprehensively mentions all the programmes and interventions at one place in the Text.

32. Dual tobacco uses again came in the Discussion but there is no resultsabout dual use tobacco.

We have removed the term ‘dual use’.

33. Please provide the references for Line 461 to 464, please provide theseregions means which one…what interventions are available? Authorshould discuss potential contributing factors for higher and lowerregional reduction in tobacco use.

We have written this section again in line with the comments. We have discussed certain factors in the form of interventions and innovative programmes due to which certain regions have shown a higher contribution to the decline in tobacco use.

34. Discuss one factor at single place. For example, age is discussed inseveral paragraphs in the Discussion.

We have re-written the Discussion according to the feedback.

35. Conclusion is similar to discussion. Please rewrite your conclusion withyour study's main finding.

We have revised conclusion part of the paper.

36. Please try to include original articles in the references instead of internet websites. Some websites are not trusty.

We have updated the references according to the feedback.

Reviewer #2: This is a well written manuscript on comparing tobacco use

prevalence across two waves of Global Adult Tobacco Survey in India.

Authors have compared tobacco use prevalence data from GATS-1 and GATS-2

conduced in India to examine the demographic and socioeconomic

correlates ofsmoking and smokeless tobacco use for both the rounds of the survey.

Please see my feedback below.

General Comments

1. The manuscript may benefit from a good language and grammar editing.

We have tried to improve language and grammar part.

2. line 47-48: ADD Khaini under Smokeless tobacco (ST) use, which is themost prevalent form of ST use in India.

In line with the comments, we have added the term ‘Khaini’ as one of the prevalent forms of smokeless tobacco use in India.

3. Line 75-78: Please refer to these published papers on the theme:

Suliankatchi Abdulkader R, Sinha DN, Jeyashree K, et al. Trends intobacco consumption in India 1987-2016: impact of the World HealthOrganization Framework Convention on Tobacco Control. Into J PublicHealth. 2019;64(6):841-851. doi:10.1007/s00038-019-01252-x

Singh A, Arora M, Bentley R, et al Geographic variation in tobacco usein India: a population-based multilevel cross-sectional study BMJ Open2020;10:e033178. doi: 10.1136/bmjopen-2019-033178

We have gone through the above papers and it has helped us strengthen our Discussion section.

Material and Methods:

4. Role of Geographical areas need to be considered in this analysis,given published literature in using GATS has highlighted thatpeople's use of tobacco products varies by local areas (city ward andvillage) across India and the variation in this clustering by tobaccoproducts.

We have highlighted the role of Regions and used previous literature to supplement our findings in the Discussion section. However, absence of local areas like districts, city , ward and village in GATS survey, we are not able to explain variation within states.

5. Zones and Region has been used inter-changeably between text andTable1, thus confuses the reader.

We have corrected this and the term ‘Region’ is used throughout the text and Tables.

Discussion: Overall discussion needs to be revised to make it alignedwith results presented in the manuscript as it discusses and makesrecommendations on many issues not related to the results of thismanuscript.

We have revised discussion part .

6. Line 548-549: Pack warning in India as per rules and notification aresupposed to be in regional languages too. The rules mention that warninglanguage will be as per language used for branding. Please correct this.

We have corrected the statement.

7. Lines 554-555: Smokeless tobacco is also cheap as it is sold in smallsachets. how does affordability of single sale of cigarette compare tosale of bidis and smokeless tobacco? This explanation is not clear andnot aligned with results.

We have done correction in that line.

8. Lines 562-566: Unsure which result is being discussed here.

We have modified it to include the result from our decomposition analysis.

Overall check policy development years and details mentioned inIntroduction and discussion section of the manuscript.

We have rechecked the details and provided references for the same.

Reviewer #3: The manuscript entitled 'Declining Trend of Smoking andSmokeless Tobacco in India: A Decomposition Analysis' with the aim toexamine the socioeconomic correlates and delineate the factorscontributing to a change in smoking and smokeless tobacco.

The manuscript requires further improvement.

Comments

1. Statistical analysis

The description of the statistical analysis requires improvement and reorganization. A subtitle Statistical Analysis to be provided.Information on the variable coding to be provided. The word adjusted tobe used where applicable. The information on multicollinearity (if any),variable selection method in the analysis, interaction (if any),

goodness of fit/model fit etc to be stated.

According to the suggestion we have revised description of statistical analysis and reorganize it. We have added a section ‘Statistical analysis’ and reorganized it according to the feedback. We have provided variable coding , added adjusted word . We have mentioned variable selection method in the method section and checked multicollinearity and possibility of interaction term in the regression model.

2. Line 150 -153, the coding for '0' categories to be provided.

We have provided the coding for “0” category.

3. Line 196-197, more information to be provided.

We have provided more information on the survey weight.

4. Line 197, typo 'Statistics version'.

We have corrected this error.

5. Results

Line 213, the results for dual use to be provided in the table(s).

We have removed the term ‘dual use’ from the Text.

6. Table 1, SCT, ST and OBC to be denoted in the table footnote. n to be

provided apart from %.

We have written the full description in the Methods section.

7. Line 235, the sentence 'The Central region followed by the Western

region has attained a higher rate of smoking decline as opposed to other

regions' not clear based on the table and requires revision.

We have made the changes as follows “The eastern region followed by the central region has attained a higher rate of smoking decline as opposed to other regions”.

8. Line 244, the sentence 'However, the rate of smoking among women has

increased during the seven-year period' requires revision. The increment

was not much.

We have revised the line to read as “The result indicates that women have lower levels of smoking as compared to men in both the rounds of the survey”.

9. Line 308 the sentence requires revision. To include except 'smokingcause heart attack'

We have revised the line according to the feedback “In the year 2016-17, the population who was unaware of ‘smoking as a cause of specific diseases excluding heart attack’ had higher levels of smokeless tobacco use as well”.

10. Line 329, what omitted category refers to, reference category?

Omitted category refers to reference category and we have made the changes in the manuscript.

11. Line 334-338, the statement quite confusing on 'smoking causes seriousillness based on the Table 4. Also the specific illness (stroke, heartattack, lung cancer, smokeless tobacco on serious illness) to behighlighted in the results section.

We have reworded the statement to make the impact of the knowledge factor more clear as follows “The negative sign in the sub-group who did not have knowledge of ‘smoking causing serious illnesses’ leads to the proposition that this group did not contribute to the decline in smoking with respect to the reference category. This implies that those having knowledge that smoking causes serious illnesses contributed more to lowering the rate of smoking”.

We have highlighted the findings related to specific illnesses in the Results as follows “Those who were unaware that smoking causes stroke, heart attack and lung cancer contributed around 3%, 13% and 1% respectively while those unaware that smokeless tobacco causes serious illness contributed around 6% to the total decline in smoking”.

12. Line 380, the results on specific illnesses to be described.

We have described the results on specific illnesses as follows “Those who were aware that smoking causes serious illnesses, stroke, and lung cancer contributed to the decline in smokeless tobacco use. Those unaware that smoking causes heart attack contributed around four per cent to the total decline in smokeless tobacco use”.

13. The p value to be provided or denoted in the table(s) footnote.

We have denoted the p value in the table footnote.

14. For the tables, Exp B to be replaced with OR. For reference category,

value 1 to be added.

We have replaced Exp B with AOR (adjusted odds ratio). We have added the value for the reference category in the tables and denoted it in the footnote.

15. Conclusion too long and to be incorporated into the discussion.

We have revised the Conclusion section according to the feedback.

16. References to conform with the journal format.

We have reworked the references.

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Decision Letter 1

Stanton A Glantz

13 Oct 2020

PONE-D-20-16653R1

Declining Trend of Smoking and Smokeless Tobacco in India: A Decomposition Analysis

PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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Reviewer #1: Authors have partially responded my previous comments and without complete corrections there are no further improvisations in the manuscript. I have major concern in their analysis process. This is a complex survey conducted in India and authors should follow the complex survey analyses on their analyses. I have commented about weights and weights related analyses in the entire manuscript. I have noted to provide brief analyses process of entire manuscript which could be published in supplemental file, especially how the numbers were calculated for Rate, Decomposition and Interaction in the tables. Authors did not provide explanations how their models were multivariate. Discussion and conclusion are very hard to follow.

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Dharma N Bhatta

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PLoS One. 2021 Feb 25;16(2):e0247226. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0247226.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


26 Nov 2020

Reviewer #1:

1. Authors have partially responded my previous comments and without complete corrections there are no further improvisations in the manuscript.

Explanation: As per reviewers suggestion we have revised the analysis, result, discussion and conclusion part of the paper.

2. I have major concern in their analysis process. This is a complex survey conducted in India and authors should follow the complex survey analyses on their analyses.

Explanation: As per the reviewers valuable suggestion and in view of the complex survey, we have adopted the analysis accordingly. In the multivariate logistic regression analysis we have adjusted the impact of clustering and stratification.

3. I have commented about weights and weights related analyses in the entire manuscript.

Explanation: The analysis of the entire data including multivariate regression analysis has been carried out after assigning survey weights that is available in the GATS-1 and GATS-2 datasets. Further details of the weighting procedure are provided in Appendix B on Sample design in the GATS report (9,16).

4. I have noted to provide brief analyses process of entire manuscript which could be published in supplemental file, especially how the numbers were calculated for Rate, Decomposition and Interaction in the tables.

Explanation: As per reviewers suggestion we have provided syntax in the supplementary file and added an explanation .

5. Authors did not provide explanations how their models were multivariate. Discussion and conclusion are very hard to follow.

Explanation: We have applied Multivariate binary logistic regression model to investigate the adjusted associations of socioeconomic, demographic and knowledge correlates of tobacco consumption in the smoking and smokeless forms in India. In this paper we have applied four multivariate logistic regression models. In all these regression models we have included 18 covariates together to get an adjusted estimates from multivariate model. We have also provided syntax in supplementary file.

As per the suggestion we have revised the discussion and conclusion part.

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Decision Letter 2

Stanton A Glantz

7 Dec 2020

PONE-D-20-16653R2

Declining Trend of Smoking and Smokeless Tobacco in India: A Decomposition Analysis

PLOS ONE

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We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

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PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

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Reviewer #1: How authors applied data weights in their analysis is still not clear. Details are not available in the manuscript. Authors referred reference 9 and 16 Appendix B for weight calculation procedures, but referred document did not provide details about how to use calculated weights. Authors should provide detailed procedures how they applied calculated weights in their entire outcomes. Were they use STRATA, PSU and Weights or STRATA and Weights or PSU and Weights or only Weights? I don’t see any weight related variables in the syntax as well. I guess, there are different steps in SPSS than other statistical software for complex sample analysis. How they develop .csplan file in SPSS for complex sample or How they prepared “Analysis Preparation Wizard”? Were these all available GATS dataset.

After reading their syntax, I don’t think their logistic regression is multivariate, it should be multivariable logistic regression.

For decomposition, detailed provided in the supplemental file should be in the Method section instead of that complex equation.

4th para of conclusion, limitations of the paper should be incorporated in the Discussion section.

There are redundancies in the Conclusions section and its longer than Discussion. Conclusions should be within one short para probably 4 to 5 sentences.

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PLoS One. 2021 Feb 25;16(2):e0247226. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0247226.r006

Author response to Decision Letter 2


28 Dec 2020

Reviewers Response

Reviewer #1: How authors applied data weights in their analysis is still not clear. Details are not available in the manuscript. Authors referred reference 9 and 16 Appendix B for weight calculation procedures, but referred document did not provide details about how to use calculated weights. Authors should provide detailed procedures how they applied calculated weights in their entire outcomes. Were they use STRATA, PSU and Weights or STRATA and Weights or PSU and Weights or only Weights? I don’t see any weight related variables in the syntax as well.

Explanation: Survey weight is given in the GATS-1 and 2 data files. Initially we have performed analysis in SPSS software and used syntax weight on. After reviewers suggestion, to adjust complex analysis we have adjusted clustering and stratum effect while doing analysis in STATA-14 software and applied the survey weight to handle the complex survey design.

While generating all the tables of this paper, each record (individual case) was multiplied by survey weight. These weights were estimated for adjustment of 1) unequal probability of selection, 2) differential response rates across states and male/ female in rural/ urban areas within the states and 3) differences in the distribution of survey population and actual population (projected as on survey period) of each state by rural/urban areas and by sex and broad age-group.

In other words, the weights were the adjustment within each individual state and across the states.

Further details of the weighting procedure are provided in section A 4 page 216, on GATS-1 report.

https://www.healis.org/pdf/special-report/GATS_1.pdf

2. I guess, there are different steps in SPSS than other statistical software for complex sample analysis. How they develop .csplan file in SPSS for complex sample or How they prepared “Analysis Preparation Wizard”? Were these all available GATS dataset.

Explanation: Complex analysis adjustment has been done in stata software. We have used the command svyset gatscluster [pweight= gatsweight], strata (gatsstrata). All the mentioned variable are available in GATS dataset.

3. After reading their syntax, I don’t think their logistic regression is multivariate, it should be multivariable logistic regression.

Explanation : The term multivariate and multivariable are often used interchangeably in the public health literature. However, as per the suggestion we have used multivariable logistic regression in manuscript.

4. For decomposition, detailed provided in the supplemental file should be in the Method section instead of that complex equation.

Explanation : As per the journal guideline we have written question in the method section and according to readers ease of understanding question explanation has been given in supplementary file.

5. 4th para of conclusion, limitations of the paper should be incorporated in the Discussion section. There are redundancies in the Conclusions section and its longer than Discussion. Conclusions should be within one short para probably 4 to 5 sentences.

Explanation :As per the suggestion we have revised the conclusion part and added limitation in the discussion part of the paper.

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Decision Letter 3

Stanton A Glantz

25 Jan 2021

PONE-D-20-16653R3

Declining Trend of Smoking and Smokeless Tobacco in India: A Decomposition Analysis

PLOS ONE

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Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Authors provided following responses to my weight related comments in the response section only but did not included in the manuscript. I would like to suggest authors to include these explanations into the Analysis section of the manuscript, so that readers can understand how authors had done their analysis.

(Comment 1): Explanation: Survey weight is given in the GATS-1 and 2 data files. Initially we have

performed analysis in SPSS software and used syntax weight on. After reviewers suggestion,

to adjust complex analysis we have adjusted clustering and stratum effect while doing analysis

in STATA-14 software and applied the survey weight to handle the complex survey design.

While generating all the tables of this paper, each record (individual case) was multiplied by

survey weight. These weights were estimated for adjustment of 1) unequal probability of

selection, 2) differential response rates across states and male/ female in rural/ urban areas

within the states and 3) differences in the distribution of survey population and actual

population (projected as on survey period) of each state by rural/urban areas and by sex and

broad age-group.

In other words, the weights were the adjustment within each individual state and across the

states.

Further details of the weighting procedure are provided in section A 4 page 216, on GATS-1

report.

https://www.healis.org/pdf/special-report/GATS_1.pdf

(Comment 2): Explanation: Complex analysis adjustment has been done in stata software. We have used the

command svyset gatscluster [pweight= gatsweight], strata (gatsstrata). All the

mentioned variable are available in GATS dataset.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Dharma N Bhatta

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PLoS One. 2021 Feb 25;16(2):e0247226. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0247226.r008

Author response to Decision Letter 3


1 Feb 2021

Reviewer #1: Authors provided following responses to my weight related comments in the response section only but did not included in the manuscript. I would like to suggest authors to include these explanations into the Analysis section of the manuscript, so that readers can understand how authors had done their analysis.

Explanation: As per suggestion we have included the explanation in the analysis section of the paper.

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Decision Letter 4

Stanton A Glantz

4 Feb 2021

Declining Trend of Smoking and Smokeless Tobacco in India: A Decomposition Analysis

PONE-D-20-16653R4

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Stanton A Glantz

8 Feb 2021

PONE-D-20-16653R4

Declining Trend of Smoking and Smokeless Tobacco in India: A Decomposition Analysis

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