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. 2021 Feb 26;16(2):e0244664. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0244664

Exploring determinants of hydrocele surgery coverage related to Lymphatic Filariasis in Nepal: An implementation research study

Choden Lama Yonzon 1,*, Retna Siwi Padmawati 1, Raj Kumar Subedi 2, Sagun Paudel 1, Ashmita Ghimire 1, Elsa Herdiana Murhandarwati 3
Editor: Yaobi Zhang4
PMCID: PMC7909642  PMID: 33635870

Abstract

Background

Hydrocele is a chronic condition in males in which there is an excessive collection of straw-colored fluid, which leads to enlargement of the scrotum. It is a common manifestation of lymphatic filariasis (LF) affecting nearly 25 million men worldwide. Surgery is the recommended treatment for hydrocele and is available free of cost in all government hospitals in Nepal. This research explored patient, provider, and community factors related to accessing hydrocele surgery services by the patients.

Methods

This study employed a qualitative method. The research was conducted in two LF endemic districts, namely Kanchanpur and Dhading, which are reported to have the highest number of hydrocele cases during morbidity mapping conducted in 2016. In addition to five key informant interviews with the LF focal persons (one national and 4 district-level), nine in-depth interviews were conducted with hydrocele patients (5 of whom had undergone surgery and 4 who had not undergone surgery) and with 3 family members, and two focus group discussions with the female community health volunteers.

Results

Most of the respondents did not have knowledge of hydrocele as one of the clinical manifestations of LF nor that it is transmitted through a mosquito bite. Although perceived as treatable with surgery, most of the patients interviewed believed in as well as practiced home remedies. Meanwhile, fear of surgery, embarrassment, lack of money, along with no knowledge of the free hydrocele surgery acted as barriers for accessing the surgery. On the other hand, financial support, flexible guidelines enabling the hospital to conduct surgery, decentralization and scaling up of morbidity mapping along with free hydrocele surgery camps in any remaining endemic districts were identified as enablers for accessing surgery.

Conclusion

Hydrocele surgery coverage could be improved if the program further addresses community awareness. There is a need for more focus on information dissemination about hydrocele and hydrocele surgery.

Introduction

Lymphatic filariasis (LF) is a mosquito-borne, highly disfiguring parasitic disease and is considered as one of the major public health problems in 73 countries worldwide, including Nepal [1]. One-third of the people affected with the disease live in India, one-third in Africa and most of the remainder are in South Asia, the Pacific and the Americas [2]. Filarial infection can damage patients’ lymphatic system causing pain, known as acute dermatolymphangioadenitis (ADLA) due to secondary infection of lymphoedematous tissues, chronic disfiguring and disabling conditions including hydrocele (scrotal swelling), lymphoedema (tissue swelling) and elephantiasis (skin/tissue thickening) of limbs [3]. In 2000, about 40 million people were disfigured and incapacitated by the disease, of which, there were 25 million men with hydrocele and 15 million people with lymphoedema. LF is a neglected tropical disease (NTD) and is considered to be one of the most common causes of long-term disability [4].

In line with the Global Program to Eliminate Lymphatic Filariasis (GPELF) launched by the World Health Organization (WHO) in 2000, Mass Drug Administration (MDA) and Morbidity Management and Disability Prevention (MMDP) are the two main strategies adopted by the government of Nepal to eliminate LF as a public health problem by 2020 [5]. MDA involves an annual provision of a combined dose of medications (DEC and Albendazole) to all eligible persons living in endemic areas for at least five years and MMDP involves a basic package of recommended health services which includes treating ADLA, surgery for hydrocele to prevent progression of lymphoedema to ADLA. As per the WHO guidelines, for endemic countries to successfully initiate a morbidity mapping program, morbidity data should be collected at least annually and include information relating to the estimated number of patients who have lymphoedema, hydrocele and ADLA, in addition to the actual number of those treated for these manifestations. For the GPELF to succeed in eliminating LF as a public health problem, achieving 100% geographical coverage of both MDA and MMDP is necessary [2].

Hydrocele is a chronic condition in men in which there is an excessive collection of straw-colored fluid in the tunica vaginalis, a two-layer sac that holds the testes and epididymis and the scrotum enlarges to various sizes, in rare cases obliterating the entire penis [2]. An increase in age prevalence is seen in hydrocele cases, as reported in most Asian and African sites, with as high as 50% prevalence seen in older age groups (above 45 years) and the size of hydrocele increases with age [6]. As much as the physical disability, the condition is also associated with significant social stigma, impact on marriageability, men’s physical and sexual function, and lower employment opportunity resulting in lowered economic input in household activity and family discord [6, 7].

As per the GPELF goal of 2020, many countries have scaled-up surveillance and morbidity management activities to satisfy WHO LF elimination dossier components required for validation [8]. Accordingly, Nepal also laid out and implemented both MDA and MMDP interventions; with nearly 82% (50 out of 61 districts) of endemic districts having stopped MDA and 14 districts completed Transmission Assessment Survey III (TAS III) [9]. Meanwhile for the MMDP component, it is also gradually scaling-up with morbidity mapping planned to cover all the endemic districts by 2020, along with hydrocele surgery coverage. As per the WHO guidelines, providing hydrocele surgery is the minimum recommended service and care for the hydrocele cases. While MMDP services such as hydrocele surgery, symptomatic treatment, management of acute attacks as well as home-based self-care instructions provided by the Female Community Health Volunteers (FCHVs) have been available since the beginning of the LF Elimination program [1], there were challenges as these services were provided as a mainstream health care services in the government health facilities. It often meant that cases like hydrocele surgery, could not be performed due to lack of skilled doctors and infrastructure in some of the district hospitals. Hence, it is only recently that the Ministry of Health and Population had scaled-up the MMDP component of Nepal’s LF Elimination Program by conducting active mapping of the LF morbidity cases in the endemic districts beginning in 2016 and focusing on hydrocele cases exclusively by conducting free hydrocele surgery in a camp-style approach in respective district hospitals with a separate budget allocation [10]. This camp-style approach was also recommended by the WHO per one guideline published in 2002 [6]. With this method, the patients are informed and referred to the free surgery camp through communication channels such as pamphlets, radio messages as well as through FCHVs prior to the camp.

In Nepal, LF baseline mapping conducted between 2001–2002 had reported approximately 20,000 hydrocele cases of LF. Morbidity mapping conducted in 2016 in only 12 (out of 61 endemic) districts has identified nearly 9,000 cases of hydrocele. Additionally, the latest update from the LF elimination program also states that 7,327 hydrocele surgeries have been performed across the country till 2018. Another challenge is the data of the number of surgeries conducted per district relative to the number of actual cases are still not available [1]. Based on the cases identified from just 12 endemic districts, it can be predicted that there are still many cases that need surgery and attention despite being available for free with expanded services.

Many effective and proven interventions fail to translate into meaningful patient outcomes across multiple contexts [11]. A WHO report of barriers and enablers of effective coverage from the country of Moldova states that, for each case that is not detected or treated, there are individual, community and health system factors that have contributed to the existing barriers to healthcare [12]. One recent study in Sri Lanka, where LF has already been eliminated as a public health problem, identified major operation challenges in implementing the MMDP component post-LF elimination phase such as lack of coverage of the services in the endemic regions, personnel shortages, especially staff with significant knowledge and expertise, distance of health facility from the community, and information dissemination [13]. Similar findings have been reported from one study in India, which identified the lack of advertisement as an important missing piece in the morbidity management program and recommended the use of information, education and communication (IEC) materials, especially targeting the populations from poor and less educated backgrounds [14]. One study in Nepal found little to no information on insights of healthcare seeking behavior, access to care, and self-care practice of LF patients. The active case finding, referral, and treatment of the LF patients are further complicated by the lack of integrated reporting of private hospitals [15]. This study aimed at understanding the barriers and enablers to accessing hydrocele surgery to facilitate and expedite the national LF elimination goal with necessary policy recommendations and thereby integrating hydrocele patients into society free from disease and disability.

Materials and methods

Research type and design

The study employed an exploratory effort to understand the knowledge and perception of hydrocele and barriers and enablers of hydrocele surgery among the patients, and care providers. A qualitative study design was used by adopting the ecological framework developed by Durlak and Dupre in 2008 [16]. Consolidated criteria for reporting qualitative research (COREQ) checklist was used to report the methods used in this study (S1 Table). Details of data collection methods are as follows:

a. Key Informant Interview (KII)

KIIs were conducted with the stakeholders/focal persons of the LF elimination program from the central level in Kathmandu, district health offices and district hospitals in Kanchanpur and Dhading districts. Stakeholders are the focal persons of the LF elimination program in Nepal with decision-making authority.

b. Focus Group Discussion (FGD)

FGDs were conducted with the FCHVs in both Kanchanpur and Dhading districts.

c. In-Depth Interview (IDI)

IDIs were conducted with hydrocele patients (both with and without surgery) and family members (any immediate close family member/wife) of the patients who had not undergone surgery.

Research setting and time

The selected districts lie in two of the seven provinces of Nepal. The study was conducted in Kanchanpur and Dhading Districts of Nepal which are classified as endemic for LF. Kanchanpur District with an area of 1,610 square kilometres, has a total population of 451,248 as of the 2011 census and lies in Province No. 7 in the far-western region. It is bordered by another two districts on the east and north, and with India on the south and west border. Dhading is located in the hilly region of Province No. 3 of the central region of Nepal, and covers an area of 1,926 square kilometres with a population of 336,067 as per the 2011 census [17]. Kanchanpur and Dhading have the highest number of hydrocele cases based on the latest morbidity mapping survey, out of 12 endemic districts mapped till 2016 [1]. So far, three and two free hydrocele surgery camps had been conducted in Kanchanpur and Dhading districts, respectively by the time of data collection. The research was conducted between June-August 2019.

Sampling and sample size

Key Informant Interviews (KIIs)

Five KIIs were conducted with the stakeholders of the LF elimination program. One stakeholder from the central level and 4 stakeholders (2 from each district) from the district health office and district hospital in Kanchanpur and Dhading were selected.

Focus Group Discussions (FGDs)

Two FGDs were conducted, one in each district. FCHVs were identified in consultations with the district health offices and were contacted and selected based on their availability during the time of data collection. Seven FCHVs in Kanchanpur and 5 FCHVs in Dhading participated in the FGDs.

In-Depth Interviews (IDIs)

Both purposive and snowball samplings were used for selecting IDI respondents. With the suggestions of district stakeholders, villages were purposefully selected based on the number of cases and their proximity to the district headquarters. With the help of FCHVs as well as the registry from the district health offices and district hospitals, patients with hydrocele were located and approached for interviews. In addition, a few hydrocele patients were also identified with the help of hydrocele patients who participated in the interviews. Twelve IDIs in total from both districts were conducted which included nine hydrocele patients (5 of whom has had surgery and 4 of whom did not have surgery at the time of the interview) and three family members of hydrocele patients. Family members of hydrocele patients who had not yet undergone surgery were included in order to better understand family as well as community perspectives on the possible barriers to seeking care. Hydrocele patients who were recent migrants (less than 6 months) or temporary residents to the area, below 18 years of age and who had undergone surgery less than 6 months prior were not included in the study. The six-month timeframe was chosen with the assumption that the patient will have fully recuperated after the surgery. Telephone inquiries were done with the identified and potential respondents prior to the interviews to obtain their consent and time availability. Respondents were not known to the interviewer prior to interviewing. Informed consents were obtained from all the participants.

Data collection and research instruments

Stakeholders from the central level were consulted starting from the inception of the study. With their suggestions, stakeholders in both districts were approached for data collection. Focus group discussion, KII and IDI guidelines were developed in order to better address the research questions through the identified variables and to more completely present the findings in thematic order. The KII, IDI and FGD guidelines were developed based on the available literature of studies related to LF and hydrocele and were aligned with the objectives of the study. These guides were first developed in English and then translated into the Nepali language and reviewed for linguistic reliability and correctness in consultation with a local supervisor (RKS). Data triangulation was done for maintaining the validity of the tools by cross-checking data from the different group of respondents: IDI, KII and FGD. All of the interviews and FGDs were conducted with the help of a voice recorder. On an average, IDIs and KIIs lasted about 30–45 minutes and the FGDs took about one and half-hour.

All IDIs and KIIs were conducted in the respondent’s home and/or office in the local language. IDIs with hydrocele patient were conducted by a male research assistant who had nearly a decade of experience with data collection methods and is a university graduate from Nepal, (due to the sensitivity and hesitancy by male respondents towards the female lead author, CLY), with the help of the corresponding author (CLY). The research assistant was oriented about the study, objectives, methods, data collection tools, data management, interview techniques, and ethical issues prior to mobilization in the field. The corresponding author (CLY-student at Universitas Gadjah Mada) conducted the KIIs and FGDs. Data were collected until saturation, after making sure that all the questions and variables were covered from all groups of respondents and no new information was gathered. No observers were present at the time of the interviews. Debriefing was done at the end of each interview.

Data analysis

Interviews were recorded only after getting verbal and written consents from the participants. In addition, field notes were also taken to clarify and confirm responses. The data were transcribed verbatim within 24 hours by the principal interviewer (IDIs with hydrocele patients were transcribed by the research assistant as he carried out the interviews) in order to maintain clarity and avoid losing and missing any information. Transcriptions were further cross-checked with the field notes if and when necessary to ensure data quality and completeness. Transcribed data were further checked, then re-checked to ensure data quality by CLY, by going completely through the data recordings and transcriptions. Transcribed data were then translated into English and then read, and re-read to identify codes and themes as per the objectives and variables of the study. The data were then coded and grouped into various categories and sub-categories or themes. Thematic analysis of the data according to the research objectives was done by identifying similar patterns in responses. The corresponding author (CLY) did all the data coding and analysis manually. RSP and EHM helped to oversee the data processing.

Research ethics

Ethical approval was given by the Ethical Review Board of the Nepal Health Research Council in Nepal on May 16th, 2019 and the Medical and Health Research Ethics Committee of Universitas Gadjah Mada, Yogyakarta, Indonesia on July 23rd, 2019.

Results

Sociodemographic characteristics of the respondents

All of the five stakeholders interviewed (KII) were males who had more than two years of experience working in the same position (as a focal person in the LF elimination program) except one who had just 1.5 years of experience. Talking about hydrocele patients, both with and without surgery, the study encountered patients predominantly in a higher age group, with age range of 40–74 years and median age of 57 years. A total of 15 hydrocele patients were approached of which 9 agreed to participate in the study. Among the participants who had undergone surgery, 1 had surgery done through a hydrocele camp in Kanchanpur, 2 at private hospitals in Kathmandu and the remaining 2 in India. More details of respondents’ sociodemographic information are provided below in Table 1.

Table 1. Sociodemographic profile.

Characteristics Stakeholders Hydrocele patients Female Community Health Volunteers (FCHVs)
Total Kanchanpur Dhading Central Total Pre-surgery Post-surgery Family members Total Kanchanpur Dhading
Sex
Male 5 2 2 1 9 4 5 - - - -
Female - - - - 3 - - 3 12 7 5
Age (years)
35–44 2 1 1 - 3 1 - 2 9 6 3
45–54 3 1 1 1 3 - 3 - 2 1 1
55–64 - - - - 3 1 1 1 1 - 1
>65 - - - - 3 2 1 - - - -
Education
Illiterate - - - 4 2 1 1 - - -
Literate - - - 2 - 2 - 6 5 1
Primary - - - 4 2 1 1 6 2 4
Secondary - - - 2 - 1 1 - - -
Higher secondary 5 2 2 1 - - - - - - -
Occupation - - - NA NA NA
Unemployed 1 1 -
Farmer - - - 2 - 2
Laborer - - - 1 - 1
Driver - - - 2 2 -
Other 3 1 2
Work experience of stakeholders NA NA NA NA
<2 years 5 - 1 -
3–9 years 1 1 -
10–19 years 1 - 1 12 7 5

Knowledge and perception of hydrocele (IDI and FGD)

Almost all of the hydrocele patients and their family members and even some FCHVs did not know the cause of hydrocele was resulting from lymphatic filariasis and that it is transmitted by the bite of a mosquito. One respondent in Kanchanpur, who also happened to be an employee at the district health office, knew about its cause and mode of transmission. In Dhading, the patients attributed hydrocele to cold temperature, and thus the patients avoided getting cold or going out in the rain. In Kanchanpur, some respondents attributed the cause of hydrocele to heavy physical strenuous works such as riding bicycle, rickshaw, while others attributed it to accidental trauma, and injury to the scrotum.

“…. I used to ride cycle a lot. I [initially] thought maybe it [hydrocele] was because I used to ride too much cycle. Later I found out many cases are caused by the bite of a mosquito. (IDI post-surgery, Kanchanpur)

“To be honest, I still don’t know the cause of hydrocele. They say it is because of the cold, that is the common belief around here. (FGD, FCHV, Dhading)

Most of the respondents have developed hydrocele dating back as far as one year to 20 years, and it progressed and increased in size with age. They mentioned having difficulty in doing mundane day to day activities such as simple walking, bathing and working. Because the severity and size of hydrocele tend to grow with time, the degree of challenges seemed to vary among the respondents. Due to the pain and obvious visibility, they had clothing restrictions, as quoted in the following responses:

“It is difficult while bathing and going to some religious ceremonies and interacting with friends. We have to wear a dhoti [sarong]. When I wear dhoti with only underpants, scrotum moves around and due to friction, it hurts. I cannot wear small/tight clothing as well. (IDI, post-surgery, Kanchanpur)

Some patients mentioned about not being able to work and loss of income due to pain and shame. Although people do not directly discriminate against hydrocele patients, they would be the topic of gossip and societal scrutiny. Because of this, patients experienced having low self-esteem, being self-conscious and being confined at home on many occasions.

“…I had difficulty in working as well. I couldn’t work. You know in labor work, there are females in working place. People would make fun and talk things about me. Hence, I stopped working for some days. I felt very uncomfortable. Then after nearly one year of having surgery, I started working again. (IDI, post-surgery, Kanchanpur)

“I stopped going to my friends and my relatives. It [hydrocele] would be seen clearly if I wear trousers. I felt embarrassed in front of the sisters. So, I stopped going anywhere altogether. I had difficulty in working as well. People would make fun and talk things about me. (IDI, post-surgery, Kanchanpur)

In most cases, there were no visible and direct discrimination nor stigmatization towards hydrocele patients. The patients themselves and even the larger community seem to know that hydrocele can be treated, and surgery is the recommended method of treatment. However, self-stigmatization and shame were inherently attached to the persons affected, because it involved sensitive information about the genital organs of the males.

“…There is no discrimination toward hydrocele patients. Almost everyone believes it can be treated with surgery and the swelling is due to accumulation of fluid. (FGD, FCHV, Dhading)

Maybe due to the nature of the disease, it was intriguing to find that some respondents considered that hydrocele was sometimes associated with infertility and sexually transmitted infections (STIs) as well as marriageability.

“Some people used to say, ‘you have this big scrotum, but you got married. I am not sure whether you will have children or not’. They used to suggest me to get it examined since I might not be able to have a child. (IDI, post-surgery, Kanchanpur)

FCHVs admitted that most hydrocele patients do not open up or even accept having discussion about their hydrocele. Since FCHVs are females, it might have to do with gender; a male discussing a disease in his male organs with a female is culturally sensitive, and hence some men also found it offensive when asked about it.

“Normally, men are very ashamed about it. They are offended if we ask about it directly, and they usually deny. When we talk with their wives, then they will disclose. (FCHV, FGD, Kanchanpur)

When confronted, some would also deny having it and simply brush off the questions. It was only when immediate family and friends noticed the swelling, then the patient would talk about it and consider getting the necessary help. Otherwise, they wished to keep their private condition to themselves.

“One of my relatives had hydrocele., but he would always deny it saying that there is nothing wrong with him and we shouldn’t interfere. Later, when there was [hydrocele] camp, he went with one of his brothers [for surgery] whom we had informed about the camp. (FGD, FCHV, Kanchanpur)

A series of home remedies were also informed to have been practiced and still being practiced in both the districts but to what degree, differed from individual to individual. Most of the home remedies were practiced for easing and ameliorating the pain and swelling, and when it did not work, which was the case admitted by most of the patients, they only then sought for professional help.

“…Like potato is a cold thing right, it contains water. So, people say that you should not consume potatoes and meat. Even I gave up eating meat. Someone told me, rice is more beneficial than chapati [flat bread]. (IDI, pre-surgery, Kanchanpur)

Most of the patients who had undergone surgery admitted that those home remedies were ineffective as they look back now, while those who do not have surgery yet, admitted to still practicing until recently. In addition, most of them took medicines at some point or once in a while for pain relief and to carry on with their lives while avoiding surgery.

“Due to cold, scrotum swells. That’s why they warm swollen part with heated bricks wrapped in cloth. They sit on top of heated bricks. We cannot say that it doesn’t work because I also don’t know whether it works or not, to be honest. They also avoid eating potato, and tomato. (FGD, FCHV, Dhading)

These findings reflect the social stigma regarding hydrocele among the patients themselves which deeply affects their self-confidence level and explains the lengths they would go to hide the condition until they could find the treatment themselves, primarily at home. Respondents expressed that since the problem involves a man’s genitalia, it is hard to open up and talk about it to just anyone. The LF Elimination Program in Nepal should better address the need of proper information dissemination because patients have no reliable sources to find out about their condition leaving them vulnerable to ineffective home remedies resulting in low self-esteem as well as physical restrictions.

Knowledge and perception of free hydrocele surgery program

Stakeholders of LF elimination program

The focal person from the central level explained that when the program was designed to be implemented from 2016, in order to meet the dossier component of WHO for LF elimination declaration, they had targeted and expected to complete the program by 2020. When asked about how and whether the program addresses any community-level awareness activities, stakeholders had a common perception that hydrocele does not have any taboo and stigma attached to it, which was also supported and explained by the FCHVs as well. As a result of this misperception, only the institution-level program of providing free hydrocele surgery was considered enough to address the morbidity of hydrocele patients, as voiced by the stakeholders in the central level.

to be honest, we have not found and witnessed such stigma and discrimination towards hydrocele patients from the community. One reason we think is that people know it is not a communicable disease and is also not associated with mortality. (KII, Central Level)

Regarding the possibility and necessity of providing other additional incentives to patients such as transportation cost (as a form of motivation), the stakeholders explained that hydrocele surgery is a simple surgery that does not involve admissions in the hospital and has few if any post-surgery complications. That is why the program has provisions of only free surgery.

“…we feel that for patients who have been living with the condition for such a long period of time, getting free treatment is in itself a big thing. (KII, Central Level)

Focal persons from Dhading and Kanchanpur both agreed that there are very limited time and budget for information dissemination regarding upcoming hydrocele camps among the public. In addition, budget dissemination for conducting the programs is uncertain, because there is no fixed schedule of budget allocation, which leads to uncertainty in organizing the camp. When the camp was finally organized, due to limited time and budget constraints, they felt that the patient turnout rate was hampered by the lack of community awareness. The district stakeholders stressed that more budget and time is needed for advocating and advertisement of camp.

“…with the budget we conducted interaction workshop, printed pamphlets, run ads on radio, gave allowance for the meeting attendees, you know we have that provision in Nepal. So that budget was not sufficient actually. (KII, Dhading)

FCHVs viewed free hydrocele surgery camps to be very effective but wished that it happened every year on a fixed schedule. They further explained that hydrocele patients usually do not open up and disclose to them about their condition, but when camp is organized, they tend to show up.

“This program should be conducted on a regular basis. There should be a fixed routine for organizing camps so that people are more aware of it. Those who missed this year will be assured that they can come back again next year and get the treatment. (FCHV, FGD, Kanchanpur)

Hydrocele patients

The study found that most of the patients did not have any idea about the program. In fact, we encountered only one patient who underwent surgery through the camp and he seemed content with the service. As for the others, the perception regarding the service was mixed with some mentioning that they did not want to take risks with surgery in government hospitals, which is why they went to private hospitals for surgery.

“I heard that treatment is available, and it [camp] will arrive soon. I also went for an examination there. But some of my neighbors had undergone [hydrocele] surgery there previously, and it was not successful [post-surgery complications]. They suggested me to go to Kathmandu instead of having surgery here and not just worry about the cost as health is more important. So, we decided to go to Kathmandu. (IDI, post-surgery, Dhading)

Barriers for accessing free hydrocele surgery

Hydrocele manifestation

People only tend to seek and receive medical services, when their condition causes extreme pain and discomfort or has some risk of mortality. Generally, this trend is common, as confirmed in our study. Post-surgery respondents recalled their experience of having extreme pain and discomfort because of hydrocele in addition to feeling shame and embarrassment, and thus they decided to finally seek treatment. Meanwhile in the IDIs, most of the hydrocele patients who had not had surgery yet mentioned not feeling any pain and discomfort due to hydrocele and thus do not feel they need to have surgery.

“I would have asked around [for treatment] if mine hurt. It doesn’t hurt, so I didn’t do anything, didn’t ask anyone. (IDI, pre-surgery, Kanchanpur)

Although infection can occur at an early age, manifestation of hydrocele happens usually at an older age. All the IDI respondents we identified in the study were above 40 years of age. Hence, old age could be another barrier to accessing the surgery.

“I just didn’t want to get treatment. You know I am old, what do I have to do, I just stay at home doing nothing. I felt there was no need for treatment. But it started to hurt slowly, so finally, I went. (IDI, post-surgery, Dhading)

Fear of surgery

The study found that “fear of surgery” is one of the key barriers as well as preconceived notions among the respondents. It is presumable to say that the word “surgery” in itself instills fear and worry among most people. That fear of surgery coupled with “surgery of one’s genitalia” acts like adding insult to the injury- with worry and confusion among the patients.

“I got scared of the surgery. I thought it might not get bigger [even without surgery]. My friend’s [hydrocele] got bigger within 3–4 months. People might avoid treatment because if they go to the health facility, they will be asked for having surgery, so because of shame and fear, they might avoid it. (IDI, pre-surgery, Kanchanpur)

It would not be an exaggeration to say that for any lay person, the very concept of surgery triggers certain fear in general. In hydrocele cases, in addition to the possible pain involved, the fear is further amplified because it involves the genitalia. Fear of surgery outcomes such as infertility or even death hindered people from getting the required treatment. More awareness and knowledge regarding surgery are essentially important to have more people elect to access the treatment offered.

Mistrust in government services and accessibility

The study noticed that most of the patients had very low faith and trust in government services, which in turn could have affected the hydrocele surgery program as well. Patients mostly complained of a lack of qualified staff and inadequate number of doctors in government hospitals. Some respondents also recounted having bitter experiences in district hospitals such as negligence and rude behaviors by health workers while seeking other treatments and mentioned dissatisfaction with the services provided there.

“The truth is they do not give any information for the poor. We take a loan and go for treatment, but they focus on taking our money before giving proper care first. (IDI, wife of a patient, Kanchanpur)

“There are many hydrocele patients in our district, to be honest. But I think due to fear, many patients didn’t come this year due to last years’ experience. There was lots of infection last year. (FGD, FCHV, Dhading)

This issue of mistrust in their district healthcare could have further amplified the barriers to seeking care. For example, one stakeholder admitted that for most of the people in Kanchanpur, going to Seti zonal hospital in Dhangadi (another district) or even in India (as it is a bordering district to India) is more feasible than coming to Mahakali hospital. Dhading, on the other hand, is the closest district to the capital city of Kathmandu, and the patients from Dhading feel they would rather go to Kathmandu for better care.

“Sadly, there is no service available here [Mahakali Zonal Hospital]. There are no capable doctors here, what to do. Many people go to India due to the lack of services here. If service was available here, people would not go to India. (IDI, pre-surgery, Kanchanpur)

“I admit that we have a severe lack of skilled manpower. On top of that Seti zonal hospital and India are very near from here. Due to that reason also, many people either prefer Dhangadhi or India, as service is trustworthy and easily accessible there. (KII, Kanchanpur)

Information dissemination and awareness

The limited and insufficient budget allocated for generating awareness and information dissemination concerning the surgery camp can be identified as one of the barriers since stakeholders from both Dhading and Kanchanpur informed that optimal information dissemination was not done, which in turn affected the patient turn-out rate. Similar to Dhading, out of 72 targeted, only 21 patients showed up during the hydrocele surgery camp last year.

use of many information dissemination media for awareness raising such as radio, TV, newspaper has not been used optimally as I have realized. Although we did dissemination through pamphlets, posters, and FM radio, we couldn’t do it effectively due to the ceiling in our budget. (KII, Kanchanpur)

Economic barrier

Because surgery is considered crucial, many people believe that post-surgery requires a long resting time in order to gain back their strength and fitness. This would mean that they would have to avoid going to work and thus compromising their livelihood and income for an extended period. Since males are mostly the sole breadwinners of the family, for people living paycheck to paycheck, the decision to undergo surgery becomes a critical one.

“After he gets his salary, we are planning to go [for surgery]. He can also rest after surgery for some time since driving will also be affected due to the rainy season coming soon. He has to rest for 1–2 months, at least. We have children to feed. What if the owner replaces another driver if he is absent for long time, you know? (IDI, wife of a patient, Kanchanpur)

Since the patients identified were mostly from city (district headquarters) areas, the study could not find accounts of geographical constraints from the patient side, but certainly, the patients expressed that transportation service and incentives for patients could serve as a motivation to access the healthcare services.

it is not easy for people living in rural areas to come to the headquarter for getting service. Even though the cost of surgery is free, the cost of transport coupled with days lost at work, not only of the patient but also one caretaker tagging along the patient accounts a lot for a poor person. What I mean is, if we could carry out mobile camps in communities closer to the settlement, then it would greatly increase the output. (KII, Dhading)

In addition, district-level stakeholders and FHCVs alike were vocal about the importance of giving additional travel allowance for those patients who live far away from the district headquarter or exploring the possibility of conducting mobile surgery camps for those from hard to reach areas.

“After surgery, if they could be provided with some minimal amount as transportation allowance, then I think it would motivate people to come and get treatment as it would cover some of their miscellaneous expenses. (FGD, FCHV, Kanchanpur)

Enablers for accessing free hydrocele surgery

The following themes were identified as enablers for accessing free hydrocele surgery as perceived by the stakeholders as well as hydrocele patients.

Financial support and sufficient budget

The budget for conducting the camp was a package cost of 6,000 rupees (around $55) per patient. The stakeholders agreed that the budget allocated for the hydrocele surgery camp was enough to bear the expenses that occurred, although the budget allocated for information dissemination prior to the camp was insufficient.

“We didn’t have any shortage of budget. In the first year, we were able to provide surgery to about 200 patients, and the budget was allocated accordingly. But due to lack of trained doctors, after the first year we have not been able to provide this service accordingly. (KII, Kanchanpur)

Flexibility of guideline

According to the stakeholders, the program guideline is flexible in order to accommodate the need and context of place/health facility where the camp is planned. For example, in case of a lack of surgeons and infrastructures for conducting the camp, the hospital administration can coordinate with any private hospitals or agencies for necessary coordination, and hire a surgeon/consultant temporarily.

“Well, the program guideline illustrates that if the [government] hospital does not have required human resource, Operation Theatre (OT) setup and other resources, they can coordinate with the private hospital without exceeding the budget ceiling. (KII, Central level)

Post-surgery experience

Patients who already had surgery revealed that they feel extremely happy and comfortable after having surgery. Irrespective of where they had surgery, every one of them reported feeling confident and energetic after surgery and some even mentioned regretting not doing it any sooner.

“It is all well now. It would have been better, had I done it earlier. I did it only after growing old. She [wife] says it’s okay. It’s alright now. (IDI, post-surgery, Kanchanpur)

“There has been a lot of changes. I can go anywhere. I can work any kind of job. I was ashamed and embarrassed before due to hydrocele. Now I am at peace. There is no tension now. I can walk anywhere with ease. (IDI, post-surgery, Kanchanpur)

Increased awareness and scale-up of the program in all remaining endemic districts

People are more aware of and more informed about services and facilities than previous times as recounted by FCHVs during the FGDs. They further mentioned that people with the right information and knowledge are more willing to get the services compared to those who have no knowledge of hydrocele nor awareness about the services. Some hydrocele patients themselves were open about talking about their condition and shared that they are not ashamed of having hydrocele and are willing to get treated. In addition, stakeholders were optimistic about gradually scaling-up of program in all other endemic districts which means that more people can access the service, so it is hoped that the surgery turnout rate is going to be improved in the coming years.

“Previously there were such misconceptions like; after surgery they might be unable to have kids. People used to be scared if their whole scrotum would be cut off. But I don’t think people believe that anymore. (FGD, FCHV, Kanchanpur)

Discussion

Knowledge and perception of hydrocele

The study found that the knowledge of the cause of hydrocele was very minimal among the respondents. Varied causal factors such as cold, trauma or injury, heavy physical work, and illicit sexual activity were attributed to the causation of hydrocele, while only one patient mentioned mosquito bite as the primary cause of hydrocele. But none of the respondents had any remote idea or mentioned about LF being associated with hydrocele. Similar mistaken beliefs have been reported in studies in countries like Kenya, and India dating back to the 1990’s [18]. The fact that it still persists now is certainly worrisome and shows our intervention designs’ inability to address local misperceptions and misunderstandings. Reassuringly, despite having no knowledge of the actual cause of hydrocele, people perceived hydrocele as a treatable disease, and most of the patients had been to a medical practitioner for a check-up or for symptomatic pain relief at least once after having the hydrocele. Although societal level stigma and discrimination were not reported nor associated with hydrocele, however, it was clearly expressed that people with hydrocele felt like an outcast, and were noticed, talked and laughed about behind their backs. Hydrocele patients feel ashamed of themselves in participating in community gatherings and celebrations although the community is usually accepting and sympathizing [18]. The patients mentioned having low self-esteem, lack of confidence in themselves and suffering from extreme pain and discomfort as time passed.

All the patients reported to trying home remedies, with some even seeking faith healers before going to medical practitioners. A recent study in Nepal reports similar findings of LF patients visiting traditional faith healers and practicing home remedies before seeking medical help [15]. We can argue that it could be due to not knowing the disease etiology nor about the role of mosquitoes in the transmission of LF and attributing this to the prevalent beliefs in the society. Limited finances, lack of knowledge, and belief in traditional healing practices have been associated with low levels of health care utilization [19]. Since hydrocele manifests usually in the later age, with a gradual increase in size and pain, the patients’ trend of seeking medical help was usually found to be much later after the first appearance of hydrocoele. Patients tended to seek medical treatment only when the disease seriously affected their livelihood [20]. According to the respondents, although pain could be seen as an apparent precursor for seeking treatment here, it is also very crucial to not rule out the inherent shame and self-discrimination the patients feel about seeking treatment. It is not presumptuous to draw an inference that as long as they did not feel pain, the patients would prefer to keep the disease private instead of making it known by seeking treatment. Many patients avoided accessing care for fear of being identified as LF patients and only contacted medical help once it hindered their work significantly [21]. Accordingly, it is imperative that the program providers and stakeholders understand and acknowledge that focusing only on meeting targets of surgery with centralized services might not be adequate.

Knowledge and perception of free hydrocele surgery program

The camp-style approach is deemed suitable in the Nepalese context, which was also expressed by the stakeholders because not all hospitals are equipped with necessary infrastructures nor adequate human resources for conducting surgery as a mainstream service. Further, this approach is also recommended by the WHO since it does not require high-level facilities, although it should be performed by trained medical personnel [6]. Thomas et al. (2009) also reported similar success stories of mass surgery weeks in Nigeria in reaching a large number of hydrocele populations in a short amount of time [22]. Although the services are delivered through the government hospitals only, through networking, coordination, and outsourcing with private hospitals, effective service could be provided as per the guideline of the program, which was adopted by district hospitals as well. This flexibility of program guidelines in order to address the contextual needs was one of the enablers of the program. Adaptability (flexibility) and compatibility (contextual appropriateness) have been identified as two important characteristics of the implementation success. While adaptability refers to the programmatic aspect, compatibility refers to programs’ capacity to address the provider’s preferences, organizational needs as well as community needs [16]. In these terms, the study found that the LF Elimination Program in Nepal should revisit and reflect on its compatibility with community needs and preferences, to determine whether this ‘one size fits all’ approach could be tailored contextually based on community knowledge and perspectives because the study found no such endeavors from the program side. The role of FCHVs in creating awareness is instrumental and their contribution to reaching community members is of paramount importance and widely recognized in Nepal [23]. Although FCHVs have been mobilized primarily for MDA and also identifying patients in MMDP, we found that their role could be further enhanced if they themselves were equipped with knowledge about LF and its morbidities. FCHVs confessed that sometimes people do not take them seriously since they cannot answer all of their queries, which creates a gap for people to learn about the disease in order for them to decide whether or not to access the services. In hydrocele cases, in particular, gender stigmatization further creates barrier among FCHVs and hydrocele patients. Given the commendable successes of the FCHV program in Nepal in safe motherhood program, with their instrumental role in community-level awareness raising, it might seem like a best option to tap onto the same resource for LF elimination program. However, it is crucial that the stakeholders and healthcare providers recognize the issue of gender stigmatization in this situation, before mobilizing FCHVs in communities, for addressing community-level barriers, as our study has shown. To be precise, male volunteers or health workers might prove to be a more suitable choice in this situation.

Sub-optimal information dissemination was identified as one of the barriers to accessing the free hydrocele surgery. The majority of the patients who were interviewed also mentioned having no information on the free surgery program and shared that they are willing to get surgery if it is provided free of cost. Little or no information on hydrocele surgery has been identified as a rectifiable weakness in the MMDP program [13]. A low level of knowledge among the target population acted as an obstacle among many control interventions [24]. Surgery was avoided in some cases because it was associated with perceived complications such as infertility, impotence, decreased physical strength, and even death [15]. This lack of knowledge of the free surgery camps, poor knowledge of hydrocele surgery procedures are further aggravated by the fact that generally, patients had some level of mistrust in government services. This reason for mistrust was supported and accepted by district stakeholder’s view, who mentioned that easy accessibility to neighboring district hospital and more physical capacity to cater to the needs of the people, availability of competent and qualified doctors as compared to the constant vacant positions in the district hospital were cited as some of the reasons for the preference for other hospitals over the district hospitals both in Dhading and Kanchanpur. This is a key barrier for accessing services, since only those patients with the means and residing near the border districts could receive the surgery. Communication is a fundamental part of modern medicine [25], so it is an absolute need that stakeholders and health providers improve both communication and education side by side while providing the desired services. It is also important to not misrepresent the accessibility problem of the patients since the service is based in district hospitals only. One study done by the WHO on the accessibility of health services mentions that not providing user fees and transport costs can have a negative impact on accessing health services by the poor and vulnerable populations [12]. Travel cost, lost time from work, and indirect costs incurred while accessing distant government service were cited as barriers for accessing care by low-income participants [20, 21]. Mobile mass surgery camps have been proven to solve this discrepancy of accessibility and thus should be explored [26]. Therefore, scaling-up of these camps should be done by increased funding and allocating more human resources in order to meet the need of affected men living in remote and hard to reach areas [27]. Coordination between the local stakeholders, district health office and district hospitals should be strengthened by clearly defining the roles and responsibilities of the actors involved in order to explore these possibilities respective to their context and place.

Interviewing and engaging all focal personnel from the national level stakeholders to community volunteers and hydrocele patients is a key strength of this study. In addition, exploring the socio-economic barriers faced by hydrocele patients provides much-needed patient and community level insights into the mostly centralized data driven policies. However, there are several limitations that should be considered in this study and addressed in future studies such as: (i) the small number of hydrocele patients was mostly limited to a relatively older-age group which might have limited the possibility of other emerging themes; (ii) the study setting was focused on semi-urban areas, surrounding the district headquarters which seriously limits generalization to the rural areas; (iii) the loss to follow-up on respondents who declined participating in the study; and (iv) there may have been some recall bias of hydrocele patients to recount their experiences of complications in the presence of the interviewer.

Conclusions

The study explored provider, program and individual patient factors related to the hydrocele surgery coverage under the LF Elimination Program in Nepal. The study highlights the barriers faced by patients to access the free hydrocele surgery including socio-economic and cultural barriers as well as their limited knowledge and misperceptions of hydrocele, difficulties they face and other challenges. Furthermore, the study explores the limitations, opportunities of free hydrocele surgery program and potential considerations needed in order to improve the program output with input from national as well as district level stakeholders. Thus, the findings and recommendations could supplement efforts by the national LF Elimination Program to put more focus on hydrocele surgery in line with the national LF elimination target.

Supporting information

S1 File. Interview guidelines in English.

(DOCX)

S2 File. Interview guidelines in Nepali.

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S3 File. Categorised data sets.

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S1 Table. COREQ checklist.

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Acknowledgments

The study team would like to thank all the respondents who participated in this study for their time and information.

Data Availability

All relevant data (De-identified and categorised) are within the paper and its Supporting Information files. Full and raw transcripts cannot be shared publicly due to confidentiality issues involving personal details of human subject. In order to request access to the data, please contact Emilia Sri Wulandari, emilia@ugm.ac.id, or Yuyun Yohana, yuyun.yohana@ugm.ac.id.

Funding Statement

This work was funded provided by, the Special Programme for Research and Training in Tropical Diseases based at the World Health Organization in Geneva (WHO-TDR), Switzerland. The corresponding author (CLY) received specific funding for this work from WHO/TDR special program for implementation research. The funders had no role in the study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: The manuscript has the potential to make a critical contribution to published literature about barriers to access to hydrocele surgery. However, it needs some significant rewriting to link the findings to previous studies, clearly explain the methodology used, and clarify the data analysis conducted. The results also could benefit from inclusion of some quantitative statistics, e.g. of the 10 people interviewed, 7 knew the cause of hydrocele. Finally, the manuscript could benefit from an English-language editor; I did not include specific editorial suggestions in my comments below.

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- The introduction section needs reworking and editing. For example, in some parts (e.g., lines 105-114) it reads like an advocacy document as opposed to a research article. As another example, referring to the LF Elimination Program consistently throughout would be useful; instead it is referred to at various times as the MOHP, EDCD, or the LF program.

- Lines 89-90. Please clarify what you mean by ‘scale up the MMDP component of the LF elimination program’ if MMDP services are already available in all endemic areas. This seems contradictory.

- Line 110. Please include references to past research on hydrocele surgery access here, as well as throughout the introduction. The discussion section has a few references, but more exist on hydrocele surgery barriers as well as access to essential surgery in general and would be useful to cite.

- The background section would benefit from including the elements on MMDP needed for WHO to validate the elimination of LF as a public health problem and how this research links to those elements/helps national LF elimination programs overcome barriers to elimination.

- Line 114. The study seemed to aimed to understand the barriers to surgical access as opposed to addressing them. Consider rewording. It also would be useful to clarify here or in the discussion what was to be done with this increased understanding – make policy recommendations to the MOHP? Share with global policymakers?

- Throughout the methods section, it would be useful to standardize presentation of details about in-depth interviews (IDI), key informant interviews (KII) and focus group discussions (FGD) and discuss in the same order in each sub-section. As written, it was slightly unclear who was included in each group, what the sampling methods were for each, what data analysis was done for each, etc. This would also hold true for presentation of the results – a consistent approach could help readers comprehend what was learned from each group of respondents.

- Why were the three family members included in the IDIs? To me, it is more interesting to see what responses comes from the patients vs all others and inclusion of the family members with the patients confuses the perspective of the patients.

- Line 138-140. Although mentioned that purposive sampling ensures diversity in terms of age, SES, urban/rural, the text states that the purposive selection was only based on in terms of highest number of hydrocele patients. Consider deleting 139-140. It is also unclear when snowball sampling was employed.

- Line 143: Related to this, in the results, clearly state number (%) of patients located and number of patients consenting to take part.

- Line 147: how many FCHVs took part in each FGD?

- Line 148: What was the purpose of the telephone inquiries prior to the interviews?

- Line 156: How was data triangulation done? By whom?

- Line 168: How was data saturation measured?

- Lines 176-177: Who transcribed the data? Who ensured data quality?

- Lines 179-184: This is very vague. Was any specific qualitative data analysis guidance followed to code and group the data? Did more than one person code the data? How was intercoder variance addressed?

- Lines 197-206: It could be helpful to organize this by IDI, KII, and FGD sociodemographic characteristics and include IDI median age (range), rate of refusal, # of years with hydrocele, occupation, # had surgery at govt camp vs private hospital; KII sex, age, # years in current position; and FGD age, # years in the position.

- Lines 278-280: As described, that is more budget than most LF programs allocate for hydrocele camps or routine hydrocele services. Might be useful to include some information about what activities the respondent felt were lacking, if that is available.

- The entire barriers section might flow better if it were organized by the steps in accessing services, e.g. first a patient needs to recognize they need surgery (hydrocele manifestation), second their fear of surgery needs to be overcome, then their mistrust of government services needs to be overcome, then they need to be aware of the camps, and finally economic barriers need to be overcome.

- The discussion section might flow better if knowledge and perception of hydrocele comes before the knowledge and perception of the free hydrocele surgery program.

- How were results shared with the MOHP and others responsible for improving services?

- What specific policy or other recommendations do the authors have to the MOHP and/or the LF elimination program to overcome these barriers?

- What recommendations do the authors have for other countries implementing similar programs?

Reviewer #2: The manuscript by Yonzon et al. aims to identify barriers and enablers of access to surgical services for LF-related hydrocoele in Nepal. Data for the study come from a series of qualitative surveys among hydrocele patients, family members, community health volunteers and other stakeholders from two high-burden districts of the country. This is an important study, as there is currently limited information in the literature on this topic, and the authors do a good job of placing this study within the wider context of the global lymphatic filariasis elimination effort and morbidity service provision. While the conclusions are supported by the data, the very small sample size of the hydrocele patients for the study (only 5 people who underwent hydrocele surgery and 4 hydrocele patients who had not) severely weakens the study. It does not invalidate the data obtained from the study participants and other study participant groups, but it does call into question the study design and representativeness of the core findings—particularly as these participants were spread over two districts.

Specific comments are provided below.

Major comments:

1. Sample size/study design: Why were so few hydrocele patients included in this study? How was snowball sampling employed if the numbers of participants in each survey type was so small?

2. The Results section is difficult to follow as the authors organize results thematically rather than by sample group (KII, FGD, IDI). The result is repeated switching between sample groups that disrupts the logical flow of the Results section. If possible, I recommend re-organizing results by sample group (KII, FGD, IDI) then highlighting specific themes within each group. If this is not feasible, then at least clarify in each paragraph which survey group is being described.

3. I recommend a table summarizing, by survey group, the socio-demographic characteristics and quantitative analysis of key questions (e.g. the proportion of respondents who know the cause of hydrocele; the proportion who know that it is transmitted by mosquito, etc.).

4. Did the study ask hydrocele patients about enablers to seeking surgery? I don’t see such data reported.

5. The Discussion should include a section acknowledge the limitations of the study—including, but not limited to the study’s small sample size, age bias in sample population, geographic bias, etc.

6. I appreciate that English likely is not the authors’ first language. However, the manuscript would benefit from editorial assistance to improve grammar and overall English.

Minor comments:

7. Introduction, 3rd paragraph: Suggest adding “in Nepal” to the sentence beginning on line 95 to clarify the paragraph’s contents relate to Nepal specifically.

8. Methods (line 130 and 133): please verify the numbers “1,71,304” and “3,36,067”.

9. Methods. I don’t see that “stakeholders” is defined. Who are they?

10. Methods: Research setting. Please add information on how many surgical camps have been conducted in the survey districts.

11. Please clarify which sample population is referred to in the first line of the results (line 197).

12. Please double check the author listing for reference #12 – it does not look correct.

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30 Sep 2020

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• Response: Thank you for your suggestions. We agree with you and have incorporated this in the method section under the sub-head “Sampling and sample size” (page-9, Line208-210). A table depicting a sociodemographic profile has been added in the result section (page-12,13).

3. Please include additional information regarding the interview guide used in the study and ensure that you have provided sufficient details that others could replicate the analyses. For instance, if you developed a guide as part of this study and it is not under a copyright more restrictive than CC-BY, please include a copy, in both the original language and English, as Supporting Information. In addition, please include further details of the development and validation of this tool.

• Response: Thank you for your insight. We have uploaded the interview guides as Supporting Information. Details are provided under sub-head “Data collection and research instruments” ( page-9, Line 218-224).

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• Response: Thank you for your suggestion. We have incorporated your suggestion in the revised manuscript.

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• Response: Thank you for your assessment. We have made de-identified and categorised data sets available as Supporting Information and other relevant data are within the paper. However, the raw transcripts generated cannot be made publicly available for ethical reasons. Public availability would compromise participants confidentiality as it contains personal information of the participants as well as references throughout most of the transcripts such as job title, location, which has the potential to identify the respondents. Our consent form explicitly states that the no information would be made available that could compromise their identity. Our institution does not have an established point of contact to field external request for access to raw data. Hence, additional relevant information can be made available on reasonable request to the corresponding author. We hope the presented data sets meets the requirement of the journal.

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• Response: Thank you for your suggestion. We have incorporated accordingly.

REVIEWER 1 COMMENTS:

1. The manuscript has the potential to make a critical contribution to published literature about barriers to access to hydrocele surgery. However, it needs some significant rewriting to link the findings to previous studies, clearly explain the methodology used, and clarify the data analysis conducted. The results also could benefit from inclusion of some quantitative statistics, e.g. of the 10 people interviewed, 7 knew the cause of hydrocele. Finally, the manuscript could benefit from an English-language editor; I did not include specific editorial suggestions in my comments below.

Specifically,

- The introduction section needs reworking and editing. For example, in some parts (e.g., lines 105-114) it reads like an advocacy document as opposed to a research article. As another example, referring to the LF Elimination Program consistently throughout would be useful; instead it is referred to at various times as the MOHP, EDCD, or the LF program.

• Response: Thank you very much for providing these insights. We agree with your assessment and have made significant changes in the introduction, methodology as well as result section. A table has been added to highlight the socio-demographic data quantitatively. The final copy of the manuscript has been edited by an English-language editor.

2. Lines 89-90. Please clarify what you mean by ‘scale up the MMDP component of the LF elimination program’ if MMDP services are already available in all endemic areas. This seems contradictory.

• Response: Thank you for your assessment. We agree that the sentence seemed rather contradictory. Thus we have explained further by giving a detailed description in page no. 5-6, line 112-124.

3. Line 110. Please include references to past research on hydrocele surgery access here, as well as throughout the introduction. The discussion section has a few references, but more exist on hydrocele surgery barriers as well as access to essential surgery in general and would be useful to cite.

• Response: Thank you for your suggestion. We have incorporated more references.

4. The background section would benefit from including the elements on MMDP needed for WHO to validate the elimination of LF as a public health problem and how this research links to those elements/helps national LF elimination programs overcome barriers to elimination

• Response: Thank you for your assessment. We have incorporated your suggestion by giving a little background on WHO’s guideline on MMDP as well as national elimination program. It is reflected in page no. 4 (line 89-95) and page no. 5 (line 111-114).

5. Line 114. The study seemed to aimed to understand the barriers to surgical access as opposed to addressing them. Consider rewording. It also would be useful to clarify here or in the discussion what was to be done with this increased understanding – make policy recommendations to the MOHP? Share with global policymakers?

• Response: Thank you for your valid assessment. We have incorporated your suggestions. (page 7, line 151-154) and addressed more in the discussion section.

6. Throughout the methods section, it would be useful to standardize presentation of details about in-depth interviews (IDI), key informant interviews (KII) and focus group discussions (FGD) and discuss in the same order in each sub-section. As written, it was slightly unclear who was included in each group, what the sampling methods were for each, what data analysis was done for each, etc. This would also hold true for presentation of the results – a consistent approach could help readers comprehend what was learned from each group of respondents.

• Response: We agree with your assessment and have incorporated changes throughout the methods and result section.

7. Why were the three family members included in the IDIs? To me, it is more interesting to see what responses comes from the patients vs all others and inclusion of the family members with the patients confuses the perspective of the patients.

• Response: You have raised several interesting questions. In the beginning of the study, we also discussed whether including family members would be necessary or not. After discussion, we decided to include family members of hydrocoele patients who have not had undergone surgery yet, hoping that it would provide us some in-depth information on what the family or community thinks about hydrocoele and underlying reasons for not undergoing surgery (yet) in case hydrocoele patient would not disclose it openly.

8. Line 138-140. Although mentioned that purposive sampling ensures diversity in terms of age, SES, urban/rural, the text states that the purposive selection was only based on in terms of highest number of hydrocele patients. Consider deleting 139-140. It is also unclear when snowball sampling was employed.

• Response: Thank you for this insight. We have deleted the sentence. Some hydrocoele patients were identified with the help of those who participated in the interview. Hence both purposive and snowball sampling were used to identify IDI respondents.

9. Line 143: Related to this, in the results, clearly state number (%) of patients located and number of patients consenting to take part.

• Response: Thank you for the suggestion. We have incorporated in the result section.

10. Line 147: how many FCHVs took part in each FGD?

• Response: Seven FCHVs in Kanchanpur and 5 FCHVs in Dhading took part in FGDs.

11. Line 148: What was the purpose of the telephone inquiries prior to the interviews?

• Response: Telephone inquiries were done primarily to inquire about their availability as well as confirm their consent to participate.

12. Line 156: How was data triangulation done? By whom?

• Response: Data triangulation was done by cross-checking data from different group of respondents, by the corresponding author.

13. Line 168: How was data saturation measured?

• Response: Data saturation was insured by making sure all the questions and variables have been covered from all group of respondents and no new information was gathered.

14. Lines 176-177: Who transcribed the data? Who ensured data quality?

• Response: Data was transcribed by principal interviewer (research assistant and corresponding author). Data quality was ensured by the principal interviewer and corresponding author.

15. Lines 179-184: This is very vague. Was any specific qualitative data analysis guidance followed to code and group the data? Did more than one person code the data? How was intercoder variance addressed?

• Response: Thank you for your insights. Data coding and analysis were done manually by the corresponding author.

16. Lines 197-206: It could be helpful to organize this by IDI, KII, and FGD sociodemographic characteristics and include IDI median age (range), rate of refusal, # of years with hydrocele, occupation, # had surgery at govt camp vs private hospital; KII sex, age, # years in current position; and FGD age, # years in the position.

• Response: Thank you for the suggestion. We have incorporated your feedback by adding a table depicting the socio-demographic profile of the respondents.

17. Lines 278-280: As described, that is more budget than most LF programs allocate for hydrocele camps or routine hydrocele services. Might be useful to include some information about what activities the respondent felt were lacking, if that is available.

• Response: We agree with your observation. In our revisions, we have attempted to address this more clearly and we think that the barrier section also highlights your suggestion, We hope that you agree (line 413 and 424).

18. The entire barriers section might flow better if it were organized by the steps in accessing services, e.g. first a patient needs to recognize they need surgery (hydrocele manifestation), second their fear of surgery needs to be overcome, then their mistrust of government services needs to be overcome, then they need to be aware of the camps, and finally economic barriers need to be overcome.

• Response: Thank you for your important insight. We have incorporated your suggestions accordingly in our revision.

19. The discussion section might flow better if knowledge and perception of hydrocele comes before the knowledge and perception of the free hydrocele surgery program.

• Response: Thank you for your insightful observation. We have incorporated it accordingly.

20. How were results shared with the MOHP and others responsible for improving services?

• Response: The stakeholders were briefed about the preliminary findings during the time of KII. Detail findings were shared later on after completion of report writing online due to COVID-19 restrictions.

21. What specific policy or other recommendations do the authors have to the MOHP and/or the LF elimination program to overcome these barriers?

• Response: We have reflected on this comment by incorporating arguments and recommendations related to our findings as well as other studies throughout the discussion section.

22. What recommendations do the authors have for other countries implementing similar programs?

• Response: You have asked a very interesting question. We believe that contextual difference should be addressed by policy makers and stakeholders alike wherever this program is being implemented and tailored according to the ground reality instead of blanket approach. In fact, within countries also, approaches could or should be varied and flexible to cultural contexts.

REVIEWER 2 COMMENTS:

The manuscript by Yonzon et al. aims to identify barriers and enablers of access to surgical services for LF-related hydrocoele in Nepal. Data for the study come from a series of qualitative surveys among hydrocele patients, family members, community health volunteers and other stakeholders from two high-burden districts of the country. This is an important study, as there is currently limited information in the literature on this topic, and the authors do a good job of placing this study within the wider context of the global lymphatic filariasis elimination effort and morbidity service provision. While the conclusions are supported by the data, the very small sample size of the hydrocele patients for the study (only 5 people who underwent hydrocele surgery and 4 hydrocele patients who had not) severely weakens the study. It does not invalidate the data obtained from the study participants and other study participant groups, but it does call into question the study design and representativeness of the core findings—particularly as these participants were spread over two districts.

Specific comments are provided below.

Major comments:

1. Sample size/study design: Why were so few hydrocele patients included in this study? How was snowball sampling employed if the numbers of participants in each survey type was so small?

• Response: Thank you for your important insights. We agree that the study employed a very small number of respondents and have thus acknowledged it as one of the limitations to our study. While collecting data, after making sure that all the variables were collected as per the interview guide, and no new information was obtained from the respondents, we felt it that it had reached saturation. Some hydrocoele patients were identified with the help of those who participated in the interview. Hence both purposive and snowball sampling were used to identify IDI respondents.

2. The Results section is difficult to follow as the authors organize results thematically rather than by sample group (KII, FGD, IDI). The result is repeated switching between sample groups that disrupts the logical flow of the Results section. If possible, I recommend re-organizing results by sample group (KII, FGD, IDI) then highlighting specific themes within each group. If this is not feasible, then at least clarify in each paragraph which survey group is being described.

• Response: Thank you for your suggestion. We believe this is a very valid assessment and have tried to incorporate this suggestion throughout result section making sure that the results are not repeated and the flow is maintained.

3. I recommend a table summarizing, by survey group, the socio-demographic characteristics and quantitative analysis of key questions (e.g. the proportion of respondents who know the cause of hydrocele; the proportion who know that it is transmitted by mosquito, etc.).

• Response: Thank you for your suggestions. We have added a table highlighting the socio-demographic profile of the respondents (page 12, 13)

4. Did the study ask hydrocele patients about enablers to seeking surgery? I don’t see such data reported

• Response: Thank you very much for an important query. While defining enablers, we tried to focus on the factors which enabled the surgery (camp) to take place in general programmatic sense and thus identifying the barriers would highlight the issues that is needed to be addressed in addition to the already available conditions which made hydrocoele surgery possible in the first place. This is presuming that understanding and then addressing the identified barrier (patient side as well as programmatic side), would automatically enable the patient to access the service.

5. The Discussion should include a section acknowledge the limitations of the study—including, but not limited to the study’s small sample size, age bias in sample population, geographic bias, etc

• Response: Thank you for your important insight. We have incorporated your suggestion and made changes (page 31, line 718-728).

6. I appreciate that English likely is not the authors’ first language. However, the manuscript would benefit from editorial assistance to improve grammar and overall English.

• Response: We agree with you. Final manuscript copy has been edited by an English-language editor.

Minor comments:

7. Introduction, 3rd paragraph: Suggest adding “in Nepal” to the sentence beginning on line 95 to clarify the paragraph’s contents relate to Nepal specifically.

• Response: Thank you for your suggestion. We have revised the introduction section and have incorporated your suggestion. We hope you agree that these changes are better.

8. Methods (line 130 and 133): please verify the numbers “1,71,304” and “3,36,067”

• Response: Thank you for your important insight. We have made corrections.

9. Methods. I don’t see that “stakeholders” is defined. Who are they?

• Response: Thank you for important observation. We have clarified in the method section sub-head “research type and design” (page 7, line 167-168).

10. Methods: Research setting. Please add information on how many surgical camps have been conducted in the survey districts.

• Response: Thank you for your suggestion. We have incorporated accordingly (page 8, line 184-187)

11. Please clarify which sample population is referred to in the first line of the results (line 197)

• Response: Thank you for your insight. We have clarified that (page-11, line 262)

12. Please double check the author listing for reference #12 – it does not look correct.

• Response: We agree with you and re-checked the author listing. It might be due to the name of one of the author (deSilva), we believe it is the correct listing as the author’s name is Nilanthi R. deSilva.

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Decision Letter 1

Yaobi Zhang

11 Nov 2020

PONE-D-20-21081R1

Exploring determinants of hydrocele surgery coverage related to Lymphatic Filariasis in Nepal: An implementation research study

PLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Lama Yonzon,

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Reviewer #2: The authors have done an adequate job of addressing the majority of issues highlighted in the previous version, including all the major concerns raised. A few minor issues remain unaddressed, as well as several novel issues introduced by the revisions.

Minor comments (line numbers refer to the clean version of the revised manuscript):

1. Abstract, line 36: it would be useful to state the type of persons interviewed (e.g. national and district LF focal persons), as “stakeholders” is not defined in the abstract and can refer to a wide variety of individuals both internal and external to the program.

2. Introduction, line 107. The WHO process for LF elimination as a public health problem is “validation”, not “certification”.

3. Introduction, line 107-109: Given that it is now late 2020, the sentence beginning, “Nepal is also gearing-up to achieve LF elimination by 2020; ….” does not seem realistic. Stating MDA has reached 100% coverage is also not relevant toward this goal. What is the percentage districts that have stopped MDA? Completed TAS-3?

4. Methods (lines 178 and 182): please correct the format for numbers given in “X,XX,XXX” format.

5. Methods (line 213-214): “Written and informed consents”. Do the authors mean “Written informed consent”? All consent should be informed consent.

6. Discussion (line 684): The statement that “Stakeholders and healthcare providers should consider this issue in order to use the already established network of FCHV….” does not comport with the finding that “gender stigmatization further creates barrier among FCHVs and hydrocele patients”. Suggest revising.

7. Discussion (line 692): suggest adding “perceived”: “Surgery was avoided in some cases because it was associated with perceived complications such as…..”

8. The incorrect reference was #12 in the original manuscript; #21 in the revised manuscript. The correct citation is Thomas et al., not Jindau et al.

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


13 Dec 2020

Re: Resubmission of manuscript, “Exploring determinants of hydrocele surgery coverage related to Lymphatic Filariasis in Nepal: An implementation research study”, PONE-D-20-21081R1

Yaobi Zhang, M.D., Ph.D.

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Zhang,

Thank you once again for inviting us to submit a revised draft of our manuscript titled, “Exploring determinants of hydrocele surgery coverage related to Lymphatic Filariasis in Nepal: An implementation research study” to PLOS ONE. We really appreciate the time and effort you and each of the reviewers have dedicated by providing insightful feedback to further improve our paper. We have incorporated changes that reflect the suggestions you have graciously provided. We hope that the responses we have provided, and the changes made satisfactorily address all the concerns you and the reviewers have noted.

To facilitate your review of our revisions, point-by-point responses to the comments are provided below.

REVIEWERS’ COMMENTS:

Reviewer #2: The authors have done an adequate job of addressing the majority of issues highlighted in the previous version, including all the major concerns raised. A few minor issues remain unaddressed, as well as several novel issues introduced by the revisions.

Minor comments (line numbers refer to the clean version of the revised manuscript):

1. Abstract, line 36: it would be useful to state the type of persons interviewed (e.g. national and district LF focal persons), as “stakeholders” is not defined in the abstract and can refer to a wide variety of individuals both internal and external to the program.

• Response: Thank you very much for your insights. We agree with your assessment and have made changes accordingly.

2. Introduction, line 107. The WHO process for LF elimination as a public health problem is “validation”, not “certification”.

• Response: Thank you for your assessment. We have made the correction.

3. Introduction, line 107-109: Given that it is now late 2020, the sentence beginning, “Nepal is also gearing-up to achieve LF elimination by 2020; ….” does not seem realistic. Stating MDA has reached 100% coverage is also not relevant toward this goal. What is the percentage districts that have stopped MDA? Completed TAS-3?

• Response: Thank you for your valid assessment. We agree with you and have thus revised the section which reflects recent data.

4. Methods (lines 178 and 182): please correct the format for numbers given in “X,XX,XXX” format.

• Response: Thank you for your assessment. We have made the corrections accordingly.

5. Methods (line 213-214): “Written and informed consents”. Do the authors mean “Written informed consent”? All consent should be informed consent.

• Response: Thank you for your valid assessment. We have corrected the sentence.

6. Discussion (line 684): The statement that “Stakeholders and healthcare providers should consider this issue in order to use the already established network of FCHV….” does not comport with the finding that “gender stigmatization further creates barrier among FCHVs and hydrocele patients”. Suggest revising.

• Response: We agree with your assessment and have incorporated changes as reflected in page 29-30, line 685-692.

7. Discussion (line 692): suggest adding “perceived”: “Surgery was avoided in some cases because it was associated with perceived complications such as…..”

• Response: Thank you for your valid insight. We agree with you and have made the correction accordingly.

8. The incorrect reference was #12 in the original manuscript; #21 in the revised manuscript. The correct citation is Thomas et al., not Jindau et al.

• Response: Thank you for this important insight. We agree with you and have thus made corrections.

Thank you once again for giving us the opportunity to strengthen our manuscript with your valuable comments and suggestions. We have worked hard to incorporate your feedback and hope that these revisions persuade you to accept our submission.

Sincerely,

Choden Lama Yonzon

Corresponding Author

Universitas Gadjah Mada

Yogyakarta, Indonesia

yonzon.chhoden.cy@gmail.com

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Exploring determinants of hydrocele surgery coverage related to Lymphatic Filariasis in Nepal: An implementation research study

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18 Feb 2021

PONE-D-20-21081R2

Exploring determinants of hydrocele surgery coverage related to Lymphatic Filariasis in Nepal: An implementation research study

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