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. 2021 Mar 4;16(3):e0247755. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0247755

Visual attention towards food during unplanned purchases – A pilot study using mobile eye tracking technology

Gerrit Hummel 1,*, Saskia Maier 1, Maren Baumgarten 1, Cora Eder 1, Patrick Thomas Strubich 1, Nanette Stroebele-Benschop 1
Editor: Zhifeng Gao2
PMCID: PMC7932502  PMID: 33661946

Abstract

This pilot study aims to investigate the relationships between consumers’ weight status, energy density of food and visual attention towards food during unplanned purchase behavior in a real-world environment. After more than a decade of intensive experimental eye tracking research on food perception, this pilot study attempts to link experimental and field research in this area. Shopping trips of participants with different weight status were recorded with mobile eye tracking devices and their unplanned purchase behavior was identified and analyzed. Different eye movement measurements for initial orientation and maintained attention were analyzed. Differences in visual attention caused by energy density of food were found. There was a tendency across all participants to look at low energy density food longer and more often.

1. Introduction

This study investigates the relationships between an individuals’ weight status measured as body mass index (BMI), energy density of food (ED) and visual attention (VA) towards food products during unplanned purchases in a real-life supermarket. The study adds to the body of literature that already investigated the relationships between food choice and VA towards food under experimental conditions [e.g. 18]. Furthermore, it extends this perspective by embedding it in the empirical approach of unplanned purchase behavior [9, 10]. There are several reasons that support investigating unplanned purchases as an appropriate way to explore VA towards food at the point of sale (POS). First, individual purchase decisions are in 40 to 70% of all purchases unplanned [1113]. Second, researching unplanned purchase behavior means researching real food choices made at the POS in everyday life without any constraint. Thereby a realistic combination of bottom up and top down control of VA [14, 15], linked to different stages of cognitive effort during food choice behavior [16] takes place. By measuring eye movements, it is possible to obtain insight into participants’ attention and infer linked cognitive processes [14, 17]. Third, exclusive researching of unplanned purchase behavior compared to all purchases, limits the number of relevant purchase decisions to a manageable amount for data preparation and analysis.

Besides marketing strategies at the POS [11, 16], the individuals’ physiological and psychological characteristics are also known as a driver of purchase and consumer behavior [18, 19]. Based on findings from former experimental studies, BMI [1, 2, 5, 8] and ED [20, 21] are considered as crucial drivers of VA towards food. However, findings regarding the relationship of BMI and initial orientation are mixed and not consistent. Castellanos et al. [1] found that participants with normal weight initially looked more often towards food than nonfood stimuli, whereas Werthmann et al. [8] found the opposite. Gearhardt et al. [2] showed a decreased initial attention towards fried food for participants with higher BMI compared to participants of lower BMI. With regard to maintained attention, Castellanos et al. [1] found that, especially in fed condition, participants with obesity maintained their increased VA towards food stimuli whereas the group with normal weight showed reduced VA in fed condition. The authors described this finding as “system reward dysregulation […] that is manifested as altered attentional salience” [1, p. 1070]. In 2019, Segovia, Palma, & Nayga [22] studied the effect of food anticipation on cognitive function. Thereby they used eye tracking technology to examine how an anticipatory food reward affects VA. They found that participants with overweight or obesity spent more time looking at regular snacks compared to normal weight individuals in a condition without anticipatory effect. In contrary, other studies [2, 3] did not find differences in maintained attention towards different food cues. Recently, Liu, Roefs, Werthmann, and Nederkoorn [23] reanalyzed data from three studies using trial level bias scores. They found that participants with overweight or obesity showed larger variability in their attention compared to participants with normal weight. Overall, there seem to be differences in VA to food between people with different BMI. Consequently, we derive our first hypothesis for unplanned purchases from this assumption. H1: Unplanned purchases that are made by participants with a lower BMI differ from purchases that are made by participants with higher BMI regarding their VA towards food.

ED can be seen as another important influence for VA towards foods. Nijs et al. [5] revealed an attentional bias towards food pictures compared to nonfood stimuli across all participants with no significant difference between weight status groups. Freijy et al. [21] examined interaction effects between type of stimuli and energy density of the presented food. The authors interpreted the bias towards high calorie food pictures and away from high calorie words as a result of the differences in cognitive processing regarding words compared to pictures. Doolan et al. [20] revealed an attention bias for both gaze direction and duration towards high calorie (HC) foods compared to low calorie (LC) foods across all participants regardless of their BMI. A study by Hummel et al. [4] found no differences in attention between foods with high and low energy density but between food preparation types of low energy density foods. Wang et al. [6] were able to show that lean participants directed their gaze longer towards high sugar foods than low sugar foods whereas overweight participants showed no such bias. Thus, most studies showed biases in VA affected by different stimuli types or varying energy density. Accordingly, we propose H2: There are differences in VA between unplanned purchases towards HC and LC food. Taking the assumed bivariate associations together, we postulate H3: There is an interaction effect between BMI of the participant and ED of food in regard to VA.

It is likely that the different paradigms (free viewing, visual probe tasks, search tasks) used across former studies may have led to the divergent findings [4, 24]. While most studies were conducted under experimental conditions, the current study is one of only a few [25, 26] that use an innovative approach in a real-world environment to investigate the relationships between VA towards food, BMI and ED of food under realistic conditions.

2. Materials and methods

The study was conducted in accordance with the Declaration of Helsinki and approved by the ethical committee of the University of Hohenheim. Permission from the supermarket owner was also obtained.

2.1 Sample and participant recruitment

Store familiarity influences in-store navigation [27] and unplanned purchases [9, 10]. Thus, data collection and participant recruitment were carried out in one full service supermarket located on the outskirts of a large city in south Germany that consists of a floor area of 1350 m2 with a comprehensive assortment of about 20.000 to 25.000 products. Since all participants had already visited the supermarket for at least one time before recruitment, it was assumed that the store was not totally unknown to them.

During recruitment, the participants were informed about the research procedure and after meeting inclusion criteria and signing written informed consent, participants could take part in the study. Participation was only permitted for persons between 20 and 65 years of age, who lived in a 2 to 5-person household, who usually went on one shopping trip per week (except for bread and small items), who followed no special diet, who had no food intolerance or other nutrition-related disorder and who did not wear glasses or contact lenses. All data was gathered from January to May 2017.

Each participant received a 50 € voucher for the supermarket after study completion. Twenty participants were recruited. Since one participant did not follow the instructions, data of this participant were excluded from further analysis.

2.2 Procedures

Participants were asked to document their individual shopping and purchase behavior by writing a weekly shopping list, by making only one major shopping trip per week (except for necessities such as bread or milk) and by collecting the grocery receipts for four weeks. Besides a documentation of each weekly shopping trip (with questions such as: “Who joined the shopping trip?” “When did the shopping trip start and end?”), all participants had to wear a mobile eye tracking device during two supermarket shopping trips. One of the trips was at the beginning of week one and the other one at the end of week 4 of the study. By recording the shopping trips with mobile eye tracking technology, no standardized purchase situations were generated, and no purchase was forced. The participants knew they would wear mobile eye tracking technology during the shopping trips and were instructed to conduct their shopping trips as usual.

2.3 Eye tracking apparatus and measurements

Tobii Pro Glasses 2 (Tobii AB, Sweden) recorded the purchase behavior (e.g. adding an item to the shopping cart) and eye movements of the participants at 50 Hz with an average measurement error of 0.6° - 1.2° of visual angle. Every recording of a shopping trip started after a calibration and individual adjustments. Maintained attention towards food was measured as fixation duration in seconds (s), visit duration in seconds (s), fixation counts and visit counts. These measurements can be seen as indicator for related information processing [17]. Furthermore, time to first fixation (in s) was measured as an indicator for initial orientation which shows automatic or unconscious responses regarding food [16]. Besides these eye movement measurements, self-reported measures, e.g. age, sex, family structures, income, height, weight and psychological scales such as the Big Five personality traits [28], Zimbardos Time Perspective Inventory [29] and a German version of the short form from the self-control scale [30] were recorded in two online questionnaires. Normally, it is advisable not to rely on self-reported measurements for size and weight but to measure them. In this study, the contact to the participant took place only in the supermarket. Unfortunately, there was no protected area there that would have allowed enough privacy for appropriate and respectful body measurements of the participants. Accordingly, we decided to request the body measurements in online surveys.

The duration as well as the sequence of the different steps of the study and the intervals between them were standardized for all participants (see Fig 1). The intervals between shopping trips and surveys were chosen as long as possible to minimize mutual influences.

Fig 1. Study procedure.

Fig 1

B5 = Big Five personality traits, ZTPI = Zimbardos Time Perspective Inventory, SCS-K-D = German version of the self control-scale.

2.4 Data preparation and analysis

In our study, we have chosen a simple and thus quite reliable definition and measurement for unplanned purchases. All purchases that were not previously planned by writing them down on the shopping list were defined as unplanned purchases. After cross checking grocery receipts and shopping lists to identify all unplanned purchases, the unplanned purchases had to be mapped in the video material to generate computable data. Therefore, two coders were trained until reaching 99% coders agreement and a relative error variance of less than 0.4%, which can be classified as very high and sufficient reliability [4, 31].

To make data comparable, standardized product grids of every single purchase situation had to be generated. Within these grids, products and labels (that show additional information such as organic or gluten-free and price tags that were attached to the shelf) are arranged around the chosen product which is in the middle of the map (see Fig 2). As a result, data are comparable across all unplanned purchases with the limitation that certain information of the products (such as size, shape and color) are not available for further analysis. However, areas of interest (AOI) were marked without overlapping the edge of the represented products. In one last step, the entire data had to be mapped in Tobii Pro Lab (Version 1.76.9338). For the mapping procedure, fixations were defined via software implemented I-VT filter settings. Referring to former studies [4, 6, 32], fixations were defined as eye movements that showed a velocity of less than 30°/s, remained stable for at least 100 ms, and occurred during unplanned purchase behavior.

Fig 2. Heat maps for visual attention towards products and shelf labels.

Fig 2

The bought product is placed in the middle of the map and can be identified by the letter P (for product) on the left side and the letter P (for product) below the heat map. The corresponding shelf label can be found directly under the bought product and can be identified by the letter L (label) on the left side and the letter P (product) below the heat map. The product one shelf higher and one row to the left of the bought product can be identified by the coordinates P+1 on the left side and -1 below the heat map. Heat maps show prevalence of attention across all purchases (A), time to first fixation measured in seconds (B), durations for fixations and visits measured in seconds (C) and number of fixations and visits (D). Darker colors in A, C and D indicate longer durations and higher number of fixations and visits. Darker colors in B indicate higher first fixations and delayed awareness. Grey fields mark areas without fixations.

For further analysis, eye movement measurements were aggregated by building the means. Some single observations showed very high values regarding VA and duration of the unplanned purchase behavior. Therefore, data were adjusted for outliers that were outside the double standard deviation for total visit duration, fixation duration, duration of the unplanned purchase and total time during unplanned purchase behavior. After adjusting data for outliers, a total number of 88 unplanned purchases were used for analysis. At first, further potential influences (such as pre-hunger ratings, duration of the shopping trip and relative shelf height of the product) were controlled for. Second, heat maps were visualized to investigate patterns of VA and the role of the bought product in comparison to other products and shelf labels. Third, independent-samples t-Tests (two-tailed) and Pearson’s Chi-squared test with Yates’ continuity correction were conducted to show differences between BMI and ED groups. Finally, linear mixed effect analysis was performed for the eye tracking parameter using the lmer function in the R package lme4 [33]. As fixed effects BMI (exact), energy density (exact), shopping companion (with partner) and sex entered the analysis. As random effect we had intercepts for subjects. Assumptions have been checked and they were satisfied. P-values were calculated by likelihood ratio tests of the full model against the model without the inspected effect. For time to first fixation, the inclusion of the random intercepts for subjects was leading to worse model. Also, multiple linear regression models had no acceptable fit. Steps one and three of the analytical plan were pre-specified to test the hypotheses. In addition, step two was added after building the heat maps to show that participants’ attention was mainly focused on the chosen product and was not driven by additional information at the POS. Mixed effect models were calculated at the end of the analyses to consider possible influences of the repeated measurement and to control for the strength of the individual effects. All effects are reported as significant at p < 0.05. All analyses were conducted on the level of unplanned purchases using R statistics version 3.6 [34].

3. Results

3.1 Sample

Results were generated from 19 participants, wearing the eye tracking device during two different shopping trips. During these trips, 16 participants showed unplanned purchase behavior and three participants showed no unplanned purchase behavior (see Table 1). For further analysis, participants were classified as participants with normal weight (18.5 < BMI < 25, calculated as kg/m2) and overweight or obesity (BMI ≥ 25). There were no participants with underweight (BMI < 18.5) in the sample. According to the sample mean (M = 259.33, SD = 227.33), food was divided into lower (< 260kcal/100g) and higher energy density food (≥ 260kcal/100g). Participants with normal weight made 58 unplanned purchases (66%), while participants with a higher BMI made 30 unplanned purchases (34%). In 51 unplanned purchase choices (58%), the energy density of food was LC, and in 37 choices (42%), the energy density of the product was HC.

Table 1. Sample and weight status groups’ characteristics for unplanned purchase behavior and social demographics.

weight status groups sample
normal weight overweight/ obese
absolute in % absolute in % absolute in %
number of participants 10 53 9 47 19 100
… with unplanned purchase behavior 9 56 7 44 16 100
number of unplanned purchases 58 66 30 34 88 100
…of LC 39 76 12 24 51 100
…of HC 19 51 18 49 37 100
social demographics M SD M SD M SD
age 35.1 10.0 34.6 10.7 34.8 10.0
gender absolute in % absolute in % absolute in %
  female 8 80 5 56 13 100
  male 2 20 4 44 6 100
household M SD M SD M SD
household size 2.4 1.2 2.4 0.5 2.4 0.9
Income (per month and household) absolute in % absolute in % absolute in %
  less than 1000,- € 1 10 2 22 3 16
  1001,- € - 2000,- € 1 10 1 11 2 11
  2001,- € - 3000,- € 4 40 2 22 6 32
  3001,- € - 4000,- € 3 30 4 44 7 37
  more than 4000,- € 1 10 - 0 1 5

Note: HC = high calorie foods, LC = low calorie foods.

3.2 Control for additional influences

Food choice behavior is very complex [15]. It consists of a highly diverse mix of internal influences, aspects at the POS and external factors. Time spent on a shopping trip [19], the number of aisles that have been shopped [9, 13], the position of the bought product [17] hunger [1] and the number of accompanying persons during each shopping trip [35, 36] were examined before the main analyses were conducted. In a study over several weeks, time influences, learning effects or negative motivational reasons cannot be excluded. Therefore, we have examined whether a week effect can be observed. Results of these analyses are reported in Table 2. Considering participants’ weight status, a significant difference was found for the accompanying person, Χ² = 14.6, p = < .001, Cramer’s V = 0.4. In the group of participants with normal weight, the partner was the companion in only 2% of purchasing situations. In contrary, the partner was present in 43% of all purchasing situation in the group of participants with overweight or obesity. No other significant differences for any of the tested variables were found. Unplanned purchases of food with lower energy density occurred on average eight minutes earlier (M = 11.1 min, SD = 9.0) than unplanned purchases of food with higher energy density (M = 19.2 min, SD = 9.1), t(82) = -4.18, p < .001. Results showed also significant differences for relative time of purchase, described as the relation between the time of purchase and the shopping trip duration. On average, unplanned purchases of food with lower energy density occurred after 47% of the shopping time, while unplanned purchases of higher energy density food occurred on average after 71% of the shopping time, t(82) = -4.04, p < .001. There were no significant differences between unplanned purchases with products of lower and higher energy density for shelf position, how long it took to pick out the unplanned food choice or participants’ self-rated hunger before shopping.

Table 2. Selected potentially influencing variables on unplanned purchase behavior across weight status groups and energy density of the chosen foods.

weight status (BMI)
normal weight (n = 58) overweight/ obesity (n = 30)
potential influences M (SD) M (SD) t(p)
time of unplanned purchase (in min) 14.2 (8.9) 15.1 (11.6) -0.40 (0.694)
relative time of purchase 0.6 (0.3) 0.6 (0.3) -0.85 (0.396)
unplanned purchase duration (in s) 10.1 (6.3) 10.9 (6.9) -0.54 (0.590)
relative shelf height 0.6 (0.3) 0.6 (0.3) 0.38 (0.709)
duration shopping trip (in min) 26.2 (9.3) 22.2 (9.3) 1.91 (0.061)
pre hunger (10 cm VAS) 3.1 (2.2) 3.0 (2.3) 0.11 (0.913)
n (in %) n (in %) Χ² (p)
Cramer’s V/φ
with shopping companion 4 (7) 13 (43) 14.6 (< .001)
0.4
accompanied by a child 4(7) 1(3) 0.0 (0.843)
0.0
accompanied by a partner 1 (2) 13 (43) 22.6 (< .001)
0.5
number of purchases made during shopping trip one 28 (48) 9 (30) 2.0 (0.156)
0.2
energy density
LC (n = 51) HC (n = 37)
potential influences M (SD) M (SD) t(p)
time of unplanned purchase (in min) 11.1 (9.0) 19.2 (9.0) -4.18 (<0.001)
relative time of purchase 0.5 (0.3) 0.7 (0.3) -4.04 (<0.001)
unplanned purchase duration (in s) 10.6 (6.3) 10.2 (6.7) 0.28 (0.780)
relative shelf height 0.6 (0.3) 0.6 (0.3) 0.31 (0.756)
duration shopping trip (in min) 23.2 (9.8) 27.0 (8.4) -1.95 (0.054)
pre hunger (10 cm VAS) 3.4 (2.6) 2.7 (2.1) 1.36 (0.178)
n (in %) n (in %) Χ² (p)
Cramer’s V/φ
with shopping companion 12 (24) 5 (14) 0.8 (0.367)
0.1
accompanied by a child 3 (6) 2 (5) 0.0 (1.000)
0.0
accompanied by a partner 10 (20) 4 (11) 0.7 (0.413)
0.1
number of purchases made during shopping trip one 23 (45) 14 (38) 0.2 (0.644)
0.0

Note: Participants’ weight status was classified in participants with normal weight (18.5 < BMI < 25) and participants with overweight or obesity (BMI ≥ 25). Energy density of food was divided into low (LC < 260kcal/100g) and high (HC ≥ 260kcal/100g) energy density. Relative shelf height resulted from the relation between the shelf on which the product stands and the maximum number of shelves in the cabinet. VAS = visual analogue scale. Independent samples t-Tests (two-tailed) and Pearson’s Chi-squared test with Yates’ continuity correction are reported.

3.3 Heat maps and patterns of visual attention

The heat maps (Fig 2) show the diversity and patterns of VA towards different products and shelf labels in the product grid.

The prevalence of attention indicates the number of products that have been fixated for at least once. Fig 2 plot A shows a very strong central tendency towards the selected product. In 81 of 88 spontaneous purchases (92%), the bought product was at least fixated one time. There was also a difference in visual attention between products and labels. While information labels and price tags were on average focused three times during spontaneous purchase decisions (M = 3.1, SD = 5.1), the products themselves were focused more than twice as often (M = 7.3, SD = 11.9). There were also significant differences comparing products and labels across all purchases regarding fixation duration, t(45) = 3.12, p < .01 (see Fig 2, plot C1). While participants fixated products on average for 0.6 seconds (SD = 0.5), they fixated shelf labels for only 0.4 seconds (SD = 0.3). The same can be shown for visit duration (Fig 1, plot C2). Participants viewed products (M = 0.8, SD = 0.8) significantly longer than labels (M = 0.4, SD = 0.3), t(45) = 3.61, p < .001). There were also statistically significant differences between products and labels regarding the number of fixations (t(45) = 3.98, p < .001) and visits (t(45) = 5.88, p < .001). Both showed higher values for products than for labels. Products were fixated on average 1.4 times (SD = 0.4), while means for labels showed only 1.1 fixations (SD = 0.3). Also, initial orientation showed differences between products on the one hand and labels on the other hand. Products were fixated on average after 2.9 seconds (SD = 2.2) for the first time while labels were fixated much later (on average after 4.6 seconds, SD = 3.5).

3.4 Group comparisons for BMI and energy density

Results of the group comparisons for spontaneous purchases made by participants with overweight or obesity and normal weight and purchases of food with higher and lower energy density can be seen in Fig 3. Purchases made by participants with overweight or obesity took a longer time to first fixation (M = 5.4 s, SD = 4.9) than purchases that were made by participants with normal weight (M = 2.8 s, SD = 2.8), t(38) = -2.47, p < .05. In contrast, purchases made by participants with overweight or obesity had a lower visit duration (M = 1.3 s, SD = 0.8) than purchases made by participants with normal weight (M = 1.9 s, SD = 1.7), t(81) = 2.01, p < .05. Thus, participants with normal weight noticed the food of their choice earlier and looked longer at it than participants with overweight or obesity (see Fig 3). Therefore, the purchases of the two weight status groups differ in terms of initial and maintained attention and H1 can be confirmed.

Fig 3. Visual attention towards the chosen product during unplanned purchase behavior.

Fig 3

Black bar plots show means and standard errors for unplanned purchases (n = 81) that have been made by participants with normal weight (18.5 < BMI < 25) and overweight or obesity (BMI ≥ 25) and for low calorie food (< 260kcal/100g) and high calorie food (≥ 260kcal/100g). ED = energy density. Independent-samples t-Tests (two-tailed): p-values above the brackets show differences between groups.

LC foods were on average looked at for 1.9 seconds (SD = 1.8), while HC foods were looked at for only 1.3 seconds (SD = 0.8) before they were chosen, t(71) = 2.03, p < .05. All participants showed more fixations (M = 5.5, SD = 5.0) towards LC food than towards HC food (M = 3.8, SD = 2.5), t(72) = 1.98, p = 0.05. Participants showed also more visits towards LC food (M = 2.2, SD = 1.3) than towards HC food (M = 1.7, SD = 0.7), t(74) = 2.16, p < .05. Overall group comparisons show that products with a lower energy density were fixated longer and more often than products with higher energy density.

3.5 Regression analysis to estimate maintained attention

BMI and energy density were included into the mixed model regression as fixed effects. Since gender is not equally distributed in our sample (see Table 1) and gender also had an influence on VA in other experimental studies [4, 32], gender was included in the model as a fixed effect. The presence of a shopping companion might also have a significant influence for VA (see Table 2). For regression analyses we must be aware of repeated measures with multiple responses from the same subject. Fig 4 shows the individual variation for the measurements of maintained VA (durations and counts for fixations and visits). The figure shows different participants having slightly different eye movements. For example, participant 18bT27 shows an average fixation duration of about 2 seconds while 18bT16 has an average fixation duration of less than one second (see Fig 4). Due to this issue the assumption of independence is violated. By using mixed models, the individual differences can be considered as random intercepts for each participant. And therefore, using mixed models can fix issues of non-independence.

Fig 4. Individual differences for eye tracking measurements.

Fig 4

Boxplots show individual measures for maintained attention (n = 83).

For the last analyses, mixed models for measures of maintained attention (durations and counts) were calculated. Results for durations and counts are shown in Table 3. Unfortunately, the inclusion of the random intercepts for subjects is leading to a worse model that did not converge for time to first fixation. Also, using a multiple linear regression did not work since the overall F-Test was not significant in all tested models (even without sex and shopping companion).

Table 3. Results of the linear mixed-effects models of maintained attention towards the bought product during unplanned purchases.

fixation duration (s) visit duration (s)
fixed effects estimate SE Χ² (p) estimate SE Χ² (p)
 intercept 3.09 1.37 4.58 (0.032) 3.67 0.63 5.32 (0.021)
 BMI (exact) -0.02 0.05 0.19 (0.658) -0.03 0.06 0.25 (0.620)
 energy density (exact)t -0.001 0.001 5.39 (0.020) -0.001 0.001 4.19 (0.041)
 companion (partner) -1.21 0.54 4.58 (0.032) -1.21 0.62 3.65 (0.056)
 gender -0.76 0.52 2.01 (0.156) -0.69 0.62 1.20 (0.272)
random effect variance SD variance SD
 participant 0.47 0.69 - 0.40 0.63 -
 residual 0.71 0.85 - 1.60 1.27 -
fixation counts visit counts
fixed effects estimate SE Χ² (p) estimate SE Χ² (p)
 intercept 10.19 4.74 4.16 (0.041) 3.66 1.16 8.40 (0.004)
 BMI (exact) -0.11 0.19 0.33 (0.564) -0.02 0.05 0.26 (0.611)
 energy density (exact)t -0.004 0.002 4.29 (0.038) -0.001 0.001 2.49 (0.115)
 companion (partner) -2.94 1.90 2.33 (0.127) -0.71 0.47 2.23 (0.135)
 gender -1.10 1.86 0.35 (0.556) -0.76 0.47 2.43 (0.119)
random effect variance SD variance SD
 participant 4.72 2.17 - 0.24 0.49 -
 residual 11.78 3.43 - 0.87 0.93 -

Note: For each eye tracking variable a separate mixed effect model has been conducted. Gender: 0 = male, 1 = female. Presence of a companion: 0 = none, 1 = partner. P-values were calculated by likelihood ratio test of the full model against the model without the effect that has been inspected. Each p-value was calculated as likelihood ratio test of the full model against the model without the according effect. P-values are not given for covariance parameters. tSince estimates and standard errors for energy density are very small they are rounded to three decimal places instead of two.

The overall model predicting fixation duration successfully converged. The model’s intercept is at 3.09 seconds (SE = 1.37, 95% CI [0.40, 2.69], Χ²(1) = 4.58, p<0.05). Within the model, the effect of BMI and gender are not significant (p>.05). The effect of energy density is significant (estimate = -0.001, SE = 0.001, 95% CI [-0.002, -0.000], Χ²(1) = 5.39, p<0.05) and can be considered very small. The effect of the presence of a companion is significant (estimate = -1.21, SE = 0.54, 95% CI [-2.27, -0.14], Χ²(1) = 4.58, p<0.05) and can be considered small.

The overall model predicting visit duration successfully converged. The model’s intercept is at 3.67 seconds (SE = 1.53, 95% CI [0.68, 6.67], Χ²(1) = 5.32, p<0.05). Within the model, the effect of BMI, the presence of a companion and gender are not significant (p>.05). Only the effect of energy density is also significant for visit duration (estimate = -0.001, SE = 0.001, 95% CI [-0.002, -0.000], Χ²(1) = 4.19, p<0.05) and can be considered very small.

The overall model predicting fixation count successfully converged. The model’s intercept is at 10.19 counts (SE = 4.74, 95% CI [0.89, 19.49], Χ²(1) = 4.16, p<0.05). Within the model, the effect of BMI, the presence of a companion and gender are not significant (p>.05). The effect of energy density for fixation counts is significant (estimate = -0.004, SE = 0.002, 95% CI [-0.008, -0.003], Χ²(1) = 4.19, p<0.05) and can be considered very small.

The overall model predicting visit count successfully converged. The model’s intercept is at 3.66 counts (SE = 1.16, 95% CI [1.40, 5.93], Χ²(1) = 8.40, p<0.01). Within the model, no tested effect is significant (p>.05).

While the pairwise comparisons have pointed to influences of BMI and energy density, the complex regression models only show an influence of energy density on maintained attention. Consequently, H1 cannot be confirmed whereas H2 can be confirmed. Models with and without interaction effects for BMI and energy density were calculated. In none of the cases did the addition of an interaction effect lead to an improvement of the model. Therefore, it can be assumed that for our models no interaction effects between BMI and energy density exist. H3 can therefore not be confirmed.

4. Discussion

This pilot study is the first to examine the association of BMI, ED and VA during unplanned purchases in a real-world setting. This innovative approach is characterized by the examination of unforced shopping behavior in a real supermarket. Therefore, findings from this study can confirm and enhance knowledge of former experiments regarding the relationship between VA and foods.

The first analyses revealed differences regarding the bought products of lower energy density. Participants with normal weight made 76% of the unplanned purchases of lower energy density foods, while only 24% of the unplanned purchases of lower energy density foods were bought by participants with overweight or obesity. In contrast, there was no difference between both groups regarding food with higher energy density. Referring to a study by Kaisari et al. [37], these findings might imply a healthier mindset for participants with lower BMI.

There were also differences in the time of the selected unplanned purchases between LC and HC food. On average, LC food was bought earlier during the shopping trip than HC food. This finding mirrors the general product arrangement in supermarkets. As in most supermarkets in Germany and elsewhere, fresh produce (LC food) are displayed in the first section when entering the store. In contrast, sweets, salty snacks such as potato chips, fast food and other HC foods can be found in the later sections.

In addition, we found that participants with overweight or obesity shopped more often with a partner than participants with normal weight. Already in 2005, Luo was able to show that the presence of peers or family members may influence (unplanned) purchase behavior. The stronger the ties between the family members or peers, the stronger is the potential influence of the companions. In this study, we cannot exclude the possibility that the mere presence of companions has already influenced the perception or food choice. However, we have tried to exclude direct influences on shopping behavior. The participants were briefed not to let themselves be influenced by the companion while shopping. Furthermore, all spontaneous purchases where an influence could be triggered by visual or auditory stimuli of the accompanying person were excluded from the analyses (this could be the case if, for example, a partner points out that he wants something by telling about it or pointing to a product).

In the second stage of the analysis, heat maps revealed differences between VA towards shelf labels and products. Products received significantly more attention than information or price labels. Recently, some studies [38, 39] showed comparable results for labels on packages. Song et al. [38] showed that less than 50% of the participants in their study evaluated product information and a large number of participants did not even recognize them in a natural shopping environment. They concluded that most of the food choices were made based on previous experience and habits rather than information prompts on product labels. Besides the differences between VA towards products and labels, heat maps also revealed a strong central focus towards the bought product. Since the variety and heterogeneity of the information on the shelf labels was relatively high, it cannot be assumed that a difference in the density of information between shelf labels and products led to the differences in VA. Similar to findings from previous studies with experimental setups [40] and real-world settings [6, 25], heat maps from the current study confirmed that the duration and number of fixations and visits can be seen as a good predictor for consumers’ choices.

In the last step of the analysis, VA towards the chosen product was estimated across the different weight status groups, energy density groups and a combination of both. Analysis for unplanned purchases made by participants with different weight status showed differences in the time to first fixation and visit duration. During unplanned purchases made by participants with lower BMI, the chosen product was fixated earlier and viewed longer than in purchases made by participants with higher BMI. Especially the earlier fixation of the chosen product by participants with lower BMI stands in contrast to findings from previous experimental studies [1, 3, 8]. One reason for these contrary findings might be the differences in the study setup. While the number of simultaneously presented stimuli in experimental settings is small (2 < n < 5), the number of products and alternatives in a real-world setting is immense. Therefore, the time to first fixation is inevitably higher in the current study within a natural environment than in experimental studies. Gidlöf et al. [26] specified a natural decision segmentation model that defines a longer orientation stage at the beginning of every decision-making process. Following their idea, initial orientation, as it was measured in the current study, cannot be interpreted as an unconscious inclination towards certain foods, but rather as a conscious search for foods and alternatives, that takes place within the first seconds of a food choice.

With regard to the ED of foods, differences in duration and number of visits were found. During LC purchases, the chosen products were viewed significantly longer and more often. There was a tendency to look longer towards LC products across the entire sample. Especially the combination of the participants’ weight status and energy density of the product affected the fixation and visit duration towards food. Purchases made by participants with lower BMI had higher visit durations towards LC food and lower visit durations towards HC food, while purchases made by participants with higher BMI had higher visit durations towards HC foods and lower visit durations towards LC food. These findings appear to confirm the assumption that the mindset towards food affect VA in natural environments [37].

While the pairwise comparisons have pointed to influences of BMI and energy density, the complex regression models only showed an influence of energy density on maintained attention. The influence of the energy density is very constant and can be observed for almost all measurements of maintained attention (except visit counts). Higher energy density led in almost all models to lower visit durations or less fixation counts. Regression model for fixation duration also suggests that the presence of a partner leads to lower fixation durations. The influence of the BMI disappears completely in the regression models and is also not found in any interaction effect.

5. Conclusions

To the authors’ knowledge, these are the first results available that focused on the relation of unplanned purchase behavior, weight status and energy density of foods in a real-world setting. In addition to former findings from experimental studies, the results from the current study might indicate that especially energy density of food plays a key role in VA during unplanned purchases. But these findings must be interpreted with caution. Previously (see again Table 2), the relationship between the arrangement of high and low calorific food in the supermarket and the time of spontaneous purchases of these foods has already been pointed out. It would also be plausible that low-calorie foods were looked at longer and more frequently, since the participants were not yet under time pressure at this time of purchase. In the current study, the focus was on external validity. Accordingly, we refrained from changing factors that the natural setting dictates. Under experimental conditions, the starting point of each shopping trip could have been varied to experimentally control for the influence of time and time pressure. In this study, the study team decided against this option. Instead, the time of purchase was recorded, and it was statistically controlled whether a variation of this influence leads to differences in the eye movement measurements during the shopping trips. The results now provide evidence that, in addition to the relationship between energy density and eye movement measurements, there is also a relationship between the timing of spontaneous purchase and eye movement measurements. Which influence has the larger effect remains unclear at this point. Here we have reached the limits of an observational study. Nevertheless, this finding provides the opportunity for further experimental studies to investigate this phenomenon in more detail.

This pilot study has further fundamental limitations. Since the number of unplanned purchases was difficult to predict and the recruitment of the participants for the eye tracking study challenging, results are based on 88 unplanned purchases made by 16 individuals. Consequently, results based on this sample and analysis are highly preliminary and have to be confirmed by further studies with larger samples. Even the results of more complex calculations such as regression models can only be interpreted with extreme care due to the small number of cases. In each model, the number of chosen predictors is at the edge of overfitting the model.

Where the differences in attention and interest for different types of food come from cannot be answered by this study. Both habit formation as well as genetic factors might play a role [41, 42]. While genetic factors are difficult to change, positive eating habits can be formed from early age [4345]. Therefore, the importance of looking into unplanned food purchasing behavior in relation to an individual’s weight status is obvious. If attention and selection differences between weight status groups regarding food types can be found, shopping behavior and in particular the control of unplanned purchases should play a more dominant role in both research and treatment. One potential intervention tool could be health goal priming [46, 47] given its potential to support conscious forms of decision making as a method of unconscious regulation. Up to now, the relevance of food selection while shopping does not seem to be adequately mentioned or discussed in weight or obesity management [48, 49]. Further research in this area is necessary and might increase opportunities for behavioral changes in both prevention and treatment.

Acknowledgments

We want to thank the supermarket owner, who allowed us to use his supermarket for recruitment and data collection.

Data Availability

The data file is available from the figshare database: Hummel, Gerrit (2020): et_super_long. figshare. Dataset. https://doi.org/10.6084/m9.figshare.12962912

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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This papers uses a field experiment to examine the relationship between individuals’ weight status, food energy density, and visual attention during unplanned purchases. Results indicate that participants with higher BMI show an attention bias towards high-calorie foods compared to low-calorie foods. The opposite effect is found for subjects with lower BMI.

There is much to like about this paper. It addresses a very important public health problem (unhealthy eating) in a novel way. It considers distributional effects across relevant groups (i.e. BMI categories), which are generally understudied. Having said that, I have major concerns which are mainly related to the lack of information on the experimental procedures and the small number of observations. Please find my concerns below.

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1. My biggest concern relates to sample size. There are two weight classifications (high and low BMI), with less than 10 subjects in each category. This is a low number unlikely to be supported by an ex ante power calculation. I understand that obtaining a large number of participants in a real setting, particularly subjects with high BMI, can be somewhat of a challenge. But any statistical analysis based on such few subjects would, at best, be highly preliminary. I would encourage the authors to increase their sample size significantly.

2. Subjects are classified into two weight categories based on self-reported measures of height and weight. Since BMI classification is a main component of this study, relying on self-reported measures is not ideal. If the authors are to increase sample size, I suggest they look into ways to collect weight and height measures during the experiment; for example, experimenters could collect these measures at the end of the last shopping trip, right before payment.

3. I find the description of experimental procedures to be exceptionally sparse. When was the eye tracking data collected? Was the same weeks used for all subjects? (e.g. eye tracking data was collected for all subjects in weeks 2 and 4), Did subjects knew they would be using eye tracking glasses during those trips beforehand?

4. How many online questionnaires were collected by subject and when were these implemented? What information did they collect besides socio-economic characteristics? This is important because the type of questions could prime subjects and affect their subsequent purchasing behavior. For example, it would make a big difference if the self-reported weight and height measures were collected at the beginning or at the end of the experiment as asking for subjects’ weight might prime them towards specific food products or product quantities.

5. Who are the participants? The authors mentioned that socio-economic characteristics were collected in the online survey (e.g. gender, age, income); however they do not provide any description of the sample population. I find it a significant omission for an experimental paper to not present a summary of the demographic profile of the sample. This is not necessarily a criticism of the experiment procedures, but rather the written summary of the procedures. I suggest the authors provide a table with a summary of the demographic profile for all the sample and by BMI category (normal weight and overweight/obese).

6. Each participant received a 50 € voucher as compensation fee at the end of the experiment. Was there another incentive throughout the experiment? If subjects knew they would be receiving the voucher for completing the study, there was no incentive for them to truthfully report their preferences during each shopping visit (i.e. while making shopping lists and purchases). The compensation should have been split into weekly payments.

7. Why was participation restricted to households with 2-5 members? Were participants shopping by themselves? This is important as the presence of a second individual might steer participants toward specific products. For example, Papoutsi et al. (2013) show that children’s pestering power strongly affects parents in making unhealthier food choices. I suggest the authors use data from the online questionnaires (e.g. Who joined the trip?) to control for the number of people in the shopping trips as well as household size.

8. Subjects were asked to write a weekly shopping list and collect grocery receipts for four weeks. When were the receipts and lists collected by the experimenter? If these were collected at the end of the experiment, subjects had the opportunity to revise their shopping lists as much as they wanted. Also, there is the possibility that after 1-2 weeks subjects got an idea of the purpose of the experiment and started adjusting their behavior. I suggest the authors control for week effects.

9. The results in Table 1 and Table 2 should be split by BMI and energy density. For example, I would like to see the number of LC and HC unplanned purchases for each BMI category, same for all statistics reported in Table 2. This might cause the significant effects in Table 2 to disappear due to the small sample size, which highlights the need to collect more data.

10. Throughout the paper, there is no mentioning of the type of statistical tests used (t-tests, one or two-sided, etc.) when statistical analysis is performed. This information needs to be clarified, particularly in Tables and Figures. The authors refer to p-values in Table 2 and Figure 2– what are the statistical tests? The authors should include the relevant missing information in the table notes and figure captions so that they are self-contained.

11. The analysis is generally lacking in statistical rigor. The results are primarily based on pairwise-comparison tests and I think there are several important factors that need to be controlled for using model specifications/regressions. For example, I would strongly encourage the authors to explore whether the results vary over time (by week); are the findings consistent if one looks at early purchases (e.g. first 2 weeks) vs. later purchases (2 latest). The authors should also control for time-of-the-day effects and individual characteristics such as hunger level, gender, household size, income, eating habits.

12. Related to my previous comment, the authors are using the observations (unplanned purchases) made by the same individual in different weeks as independent observations. I suggest they consider using models for panel data that cluster the standard errors at the individual level and control for all factors described in the previous comment. They can also test for interaction effects between weight status and energy density using these models rather than ANOVA tests (or complement both).

13. The authors compare attention bias towards the bought product and the labels. What information was provided in the shelf labels? If the only information provided was the product price, a possible explanation for the lower amount of time spent looking at the labels compared to the product could be the familiarity with this attribute. It is reasonable to think that since individuals compare product prices on a regular basis, they might not need as much time to process price information. I think the authors could make more use of the eye tracking data by creating AOIs for the product labels instead of shelf labels. They could explore whether subjects fixate longer on calorie content or health claims such as low-fat, sugar reduced, fat-free, etc. and relate this to unplanned food choices.

14. It would have been interesting to see more results related to heterogeneity of unplanned purchases/visual attention of individuals who were more/less hungry according to the scale the authors collected. There is a vast literature on how hunger might produce different effects, and this paper could have something to say about this.

Other comments

1. The relationship between visual attention and food choice across BMI categories is an important contribution that has been highly understudied. Only few studies that have examined such distributional effects (Segovia et al. 2019). This is worth stressing more in the paper.

2. The authors should be consistent in the terminology used for BMI categories, sometimes they refer to the groups as high vs. low BMI, sometimes as BMI<25 vs. BMI>25, and other times as normal weight vs. overweight/obese.

3. Are there underweight subjects in the sample? (BMI< 18.5). If so, they should not be part of the normal weight group.

4. Page 15, lines 357-358: sentence makes no sense. Please edit.

5. The limitations of the study can be discussed in the conclusions section, no need for a separate section.

References

Papoutsi, Georgia, Rodolfo Nayga, Panagiotis Lazaridis, and Andreas Drichoutis. "Nudging parental health behavior with and without children's pestering power: Fat tax, subsidy or both?." (2013).

Segovia, Michelle S., Marco A. Palma, and Rodolfo M. Nayga Jr. "The effect of food anticipation on cognitive function: An eye tracking study." PloS one 14, no. 10 (2019): e0223506.

Reviewer #2: This paper investigated the link between visual attention and unplanned food purchase decisions in a real-world environment, while incorporating conceptually relevant variables such as participants’ weight status and cues presented on food labels such as energy density. The authors adequately reviewed the literature and formed the hypotheses in a manner that help to shed light on earlier inconsistencies in the literature on this topic. An important contribution, as the authors also highlighted, is the use of visual attention data generated in a real-world environment as opposed to a controlled laboratory. On the flip side, experimenting in a real-world setting represents a host of challenges that can interfere with the investigation that aims to link visual attention to other individual-specific characteristics or product-specific attributes. Additionally, while the introduction of the paper is well prepared, there are some shortcomings in the description of the experimental procedures. Please see my review comments below.

Comments

- The experiment design and hence the findings suffer from a major issue due to the product arrangement in a supermarket. As indicated in Lines 313-315, if the LC foods are offered in the first section, while the HC foods are located in the later sections. This gives a basis to consider that consumers may face less time pressure or constraints in choosing LC foods (i.e., beginning of the shopping experience) and more time pressure/constraint in choosing HC food (i.e., toward the end of the shopping experience). Because of this arrangement, consumers may spend more time and pay more visual attention to LC foods, while paying less visual attention to HC foods. In other words, we don’t know for sure whether the differences in visual attention between HC and LC foods (and across BMI groups) were caused by the product arrangement or the differences in energy density that the authors tried to identify in the study. Generalizing statement such as “There was a tendency across all participants to look at low energy density food longer and more often.” (Lines 12-13) need to be interpreted with caution. The authors may want to acknowledge this as a major limitation of this study.

- Lines 283-287: The authors compared fixation duration between low BMI participants for LC, high BMI participants for LC, and low BMI participants for HC. From my point of view, the authors should conduct a complete between-group and within-group comparison to capture the interaction between BMI and energy density on all VA measures. Using fixation duration as an example, between-group comparison should be conducted for a) between low BMI participants’ fixation duration for LC foods, and high BMI participants’ fixation duration for LC foods, b) between low BMI participants’ fixation duration for HC and high BMI participants’ fixation duration for HC. Within group comparison should be conducted for a) between low BMI individuals’ fixation duration for LC and HC, b) between high BMI individuals’ fixation duration for LC and HC foods.

- The authors may consider adding a table reporting the demographic variables comparison between the low and high BMI groups as we know BMI is closely related to individual characteristics such as age and income. This information is completely missing in the current version. Demographic information is particularly important for this study because the sample size is very small.

Other comments or clarification needed

- Section 2.4. The authors identified consumers’ unplanned purchases by checking their grocery receipts for the past four weeks. As shoppers ourselves, we know perfectly that there are times when last-minute items pop up when we are already at the store, even with a shopping list. Since this is a major variable of interest and used to test two of the three hypotheses, I have concerns about the reliability of this procedure. Please comment.

- Section 3.1. The number of participants in this study is a concern. I am well aware of the difficulties associated with implementing eye tracking studies, especially at a grocery store. However, without reporting the full picture of the visual attention variable statistics and demographic characteristics, it is difficult to make a judgement about the reliability of the results.

- Lines: 129-131: You are listing three different measures - maintained attention, counts for fixations, and counts for visits. Then, in the next sentence, you are saying both (referring to two) measures are acceptable measures to be included in the analysis. I have no doubt that visual attention variables are relevant in such analyses. However, there are important distinctions between fixation counts (within an AOI or across AOIs) and AOI visits. One can measure fixation counts within an AOI during a single or multiple visits. The other measure, visit counts, can be used (e.g., comparing two different AOIs) without incorporating any fixation counts. Please clarify the exact measure that you are using.

- Section 2.3. By “maintained attention towards food” are you referring to fixation duration as used in Tobii Pro manuals?

- Section 3.3. Heat map grid:

o Plot C – Duration for fixations and visits. Is this the duration of the total number of fixations and total number of visits within an AOI/grid? Again, the number of fixations and number of visits are conventionally defined differently. Unless you are assuming different definitions in this particular study. Please explain.

o Plot D – Again, I am not sure how the number of fixations and visit can be measured as one variable. One can visually attend to (visit) an AOI, and fixate multiple times during that one visit. Please clarity.

o How was the irregular size of the product spaces on real store shelves mapped into the current grid system? If the space above or below the purchased product includes more than one product, how were situations like those handled. I would be interested in examining the actual heatmaps and the manual mapping of the fixations and the image of the purchased product shelves.

- Section 2.1. When was the experiment conducted? Was the recruitment done right at the store?

- Section 3.2.

o What is the measure of shelf height in Table 2?

o Is the unplanned purchase duration (in seconds) measured when taking the item from the shelf and placing in the cart?

o It would be useful to include a column that defines these variables.

o First time use of VAS in table 2. Please explain what it means.

Reviewer #3: The study evaluates the visual attention for unplanned purchases in a grocery store using mobile eye tracking technology and related the visual attention to the energy density of the food. I believe this is an interesting study. Some aspects of the study were not clear to me and are included in my comments to the authors.

ABSTRACT

• Line 9: attention bias. If attention is influenced by energy density and weight status, why is it necessarily a bias?

• Line 13: Can you explain more about the interaction: “Interaction effects between weight status and energy density for fixation and visit duration were found”

INTRODUCTION

• Line 22, can you better define unplanned purchases?

• Line 33: what about food purchases, how many are unplanned?

• Line 52: initial orientation? What do you mean?

• Line 55: “Gearhardt et al. (2012) showed a decreased initial attention towards fried food for participants with higher BMI”, decreased compared to what?

• Line 69: you hypothesize that is differs, but can you be more specific? Do you think VA will be higher or lower?

• Line 87: In what way is there in interaction? What is the direction? Can you be more specific of your H3?

METHOD

• How did you know which purchases were unplanned?

• Line 36: why no constraints? What do you mean by this?

• Line 127: what is the measurement error etc.

• Line 132: “first fixation”, do you mean “time to first fixation”?

• Line 149-150: what is the disadvantage using no overlap? What about peripheral vision? What about eye tracking errors? Should it not be accounted for a bitmore by making the AOIs a bit larger than the products themself?

RESULTS

• Was there a relation between attention and choice and if so, was this influenced by the weight status?

• Line 177: “ During these trips, 16 participants showed unplanned purchase behavior and three participants showed no unplanned purchase behavior at all” . How do you know it is unplanned? How did you measure this? How did you define it?

• Line 218 identi-fied: typo

• The product in the middle is row P. Did each isle have 7 shelves? What if a chosen product is on the bottom shelf, then there is no P-1, P-2, P-3. It is not clear how you addressed this.

• Line 222: “The product one row above”. Do you mean one shelf higher?

• Line 261: “ normal weight noticed the food of their choice earlier and looked longer at it than participants with overweight or obesity”. Due to this result, you confirm H1. However in H1 you only state that the VA would differ. Did you have a specific hypothesis how it would differ? In which case would it be higher? Does the results match this hypothesis?

• Line 235-236: “ While information labels and price tags were on average focused by three spontaneous purchase decisions (M = 3.1, SD = 5.1), the products themselves were focused more than twice as often (M = 7.3, SD = 11.9).” This sentence is not clear. The labels and price tags were focused by purchase decisions? Please rephrase.

• Check, sometimes VA and sometimes in full “Visual attention”. Please be consistent in the use of the abbreviations.

CONCLUSION

• Line 305: “Participants with normal weight made 76% of the unplanned purchases”. Again, I wonder how you defined unplanned purchases and how this was measured.

• What are the results for people with overweight? Does your study provide insight in how we can help them to attend to energy information?

• What about planned food purchases?

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Reviewer #3: The authors have has improved the manuscript. However, a few small questions still remain.

• You mention that you changed attention bias to visual attention. However, this is not adjusted everywhere (for example line 281). Please explain.

• The product in the middle is row P. Did each isle have 7 shelves? What if a chosen product is on the bottom shelf, then there is no P-1, P-2, P-3. It is not clear how you addressed this. You mention that a product at the bottom shelf, will not have P-1, P-2 etc. How did this impact the generation of Figure 1?

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Comments to the reviewers

We thank the reviewers for their helpful and inspiring advices. We believe with your help we were able to im-prove the manuscript once again.

Before we address the questions of the reviewers in the table below, we would like to point out an error in the old manuscript. In the old version of the manuscript, the name of the cut-off point for the division into high and low calorie foods was incorrectly defined. The cut off was labeled as 100kcal/100g. The correct label for the value is 260kcal/100g. The 260kcal/100g mark is the average value of the energy density of the bought prod-ucts in the current study and can roughly be seen as the transition point from high calorie food to lower energy density foods (Bechtold, 2014, S.5). We added this information in the paragraph in the manuscript. The correc-tion of the label has no effect on the calculations. The calculations have already been performed with the cor-rect values and only the label was incorrectly defined. We must apologize for this mistake and hope that the changes will meet the demands of the reviewers.

Below you will find our comments and answers to your questions.

Comments reviewer 2

Most of the comments have been addressed and the manuscript has been largely improved.

Basically, this major comment was not addressed and was not addressable at this stage because this issue should have been considered in the experimental de-sign stage. But thank you for recognizing this as one of the limitations of this study in the Conclusions sec-tion. We want to thank reviewer 2 for this positive feed-back.

Unfortunately, there was no way to manipulate the arrangement in the supermarket and collect data in the real world. Collecting data in the real world setting also means having to make compromises. That’s why we controlled for this influence and discussed this is-sue at the end of the manuscript.

Thank you for addressing this comment by conduct-ing additional regression analysis. However, I do have some questions regarding the interpretation of the regression results.

First, what does the intercept measure? Taking Fixa-tion Counts as an example. How would you interpret the estimate of 10.19 (P<0.05)? Applying the stand-ard logic of interpretating the intercept in linear re-gression, the intercept of 10.19 essentially means that the average fixation counts of the sample is around 10 times (i.e., the fixation counts of a male shopper with zero BMI, without companion, purchas-ing a product with zero ED is about 10). The fixation counts in Figure 3 for low ED is <6 and about 4 for high ED (lower panel). So the regression results are consistent with Figure 3 in terms of statistical signifi-cance.

This estimate is much higher than the fixation counts plot in Figure 3 even taking into consideration of the negative impact of companion. With a companion re-duces almost three fixation counts. The negative im-pact of ED is statically significant but marginal as the coefficient is very small.

My guess is that the variable BMI (exact) and energy density (exact) are not binary variables. They are the exact number of (self-reported) BMI of each partici-pant and the exact ED of each product purchased. Please correct me if I am wrong.

Therefore, my suggestion would be why not run the regression model using BMI and ED dummies (say, high BMI=1, high ED=1). Then the intercept actually captures the average fixation counts (fixation dura-tion, visit counts, visit duration) for a male shopper with low BMI, without companion purchased low ED product. The interpretation of the intercepts as well as other coefficients in all four maintained attention models would be neat, interesting and comparable with your plots in Figure 3.

In addition, you mentioned in the revised manuscript that adding interaction terms do not improve model (Lines 376-382). With my suggestion of using dum-mies, I would like you to try the interaction terms of BMI and ED dummies again to see if the interaction term is significant or not. Combining the coefficients of BMI, ED and the interaction term of BMI and ED, will provide you the effect between and within group compaction that I mentioned. Reviewer 2 is right. The variables BMI (exact) and energy density (exact) are not binary variables. They are the exact number of (self-reported) BMI of each participant and the exact ED of each product pur-chased. We decided to use the exact numbers in-stead of dichotomized grouping variables which may already contain an inaccuracy due to the ‘artificial’ grouping.

Nevertheless, we would like to fulfill the reviewer's wish and calculate the regressions again with the di-chotomized variables for BMI and energy density.

The results for this analysis can be seen in tables 1a, 1b, 2a, and 2b. All tables are attached (outside the textbox) below.

We have calculated two models for each eye tracking measurement (FD, VD, FC, VC). The models have been calculated including variables for gender, the presence of a companion, BMI (dichotomized) and energy density (dichotomized) as fixed effects. We additionally included the interaction between BMI and energy density as a fixed effect in model 1. The indi-vidual level was included as random effect in all models.

The additional analyses are leading to two results.

1.) Even with dichotomized variables we cannot see any significant interaction effect for any eye tracking measurement.

2.) Since the new calculations with dichotomous vari-ables did not result in a significant improvement of the regression models, we decided to keep the first mod-els with continuous variables.

One last information about the interpretation of the intercepts of the fixed effect in random effect models. The estimator of the fixed effect for the random ef-fects models is the appropriate estimate for the inter-cept of the random-effects. Below (inside the textbox) you will find the output of the estimates for the ‘indi-vidual intercepts’ for the random effects for the re-gression model calculated for FD. In one last step, one can calculate the mean of these values and will get the value for the intercept.

Table1a: regression models for fixation duration

fixation duration (s)

model 1 model 2

fixed effects estimate SE Χ² (p) estimate SE Χ² (p)

intercept 2.60 0.48 17.88

(<.001) 2.55 0.51 16.41

(<.001)

BMI -0.98 0.56 2.92

(0.087) -0.45 0.49 0.00

(1.000)

energy

density -0.64 0.25 6.29

(0.012) -0.46 0.23 3.93

(0.047)

companion (partner) -0.67 0.59 1.29

(0.256) -0.98 0.60 1.73

(0.189)

gender -0.85 0.49 2.85

(0.091) -0.80 0.52 1.46

(0.227)

BMI x

energy density 0.96 0.56 2.76

(0.097) - - -

random effect variance SD variance SD

participant 0.39 0.62 - 0.48 0.69 -

residual 0.71 0.84 - 0.71 0.84 -

Table1b: regression models for visit duration

visit duration (s)

model 1 model 2

fixed effects estimate SE Χ² (p) estimate SE Χ² (p)

intercept 3.02 0.59 18.25

(<.001) 2.95 0.62 16.98

(<.001)

BMI -1.17 0.70 2.68

(0.102) -0.56 0.56 0.00

(1.000)

energy

density -0.77 0.37 4.22

(0.040) -0.54 0.33 2.57

(0.109)

companion (partner) -0.54 0.71 0.59

(0.443) -0.89 0.71 0.62

(0.430)

gender -0.79 0.60 1.70

(0.192) -0.74 0.63 0.33

(0.564)

BMI x

energy density 1.09 0.77 1.85

(0.174) - - -

random effect variance SD variance SD

participant 0.32 0.57 - 0.43 0.65 -

residual 1.61 1.27 - 1.61 1.27 -

Table2a: regression models for fixation count

fixation count

model 1 model 2

fixed effects estimate SE Χ² (p) estimate SE Χ² (p)

intercept 7.82 1.79 13.82

(<.001) 7.62 1.83 12.17

(<.001)

BMI -3.23 2.10 2.27

(0.132) -.170 1.71 0.00

(1.000)

energy

density -1.86 1.03 3.20

(0.074) -1.31 0.92 1.97

(0.160)

companion (partner) -1.14 2.17 0.28

(0.599) -1.97 2.13 0.00

(1.000)

gender -1.47 1.81 0.65

(0.419) -1.33 1.86 0.00

(1.000)

BMI x

energy density 2.65 2.20 1.41

(0.235) - - -

random effect variance SD variance SD

participant 4.25 2.06 - 4.67 2.18 -

residual 11.96 3.46 - 12.02 3.05 -

Table2b: regression models for visit count

visit count

model 1 model 2

fixed effects estimate SE Χ² (p) estimate SE Χ² (p)

intercept 3.12 0.44 24.35

(<.001) 3.09 0.46 24.25

(<.001)

BMI -.053 0.52 0.99

(0.319) -0.22 0.42 0.41

(0.522)

energy

density -0.52 0.28 3.40

(0.065) -0.40 0.25 2.55

(0.110)

companion (partner) -0.41 0.53 0.58

(0.447) -0.59 0.53 1.37

(0.242)

gender -0.81 0.45 2.988

(0.084) -0.77 0.46 2.97

(0.085)

BMI x

energy density 0.55 0.57 0.85

(0.357) - - -

random effect variance SD variance SD

participant 0.19 0.44 - 0.24 0.49 -

residual 0.88 0.94 - 0.87 0.93 -

Comments reviewer 3

The authors have has improved the manuscript. However, a few small questions still remain. We thank reviewer 3 for this positive feedback.

• You mention that you changed attention bias to visual attention. However, this is not adjusted everywhere (for example line 281). Please explain. We thank the reviewer for the attentive reading and this note. Accordingly, we have revised corresponding parts in the Manuscript. See lines 281-282 and line 462-463.

• The product in the middle is row P. Did each isle have 7 shelves? What if a chosen product is on the bottom shelf, then there is no P-1, P-2, P-3. It is not clear how you addressed this. You mention that a product at the bottom shelf, will not have P-1, P-2 etc. How did this impact the generation of Figure 1? The product in the middle of the standardized heat map is always the bought product (and abbreviated as P).

Not every isle in the supermarket had 7 shelves or was 11 product rows wide. Some isles even had more than 7 shelves and many isles had more than 11 product rows. Thus, the heat maps represent a standardized and reduced section of the shelf walls in the supermarket surrounding the pur-chased product. The aspect ratio of the heat maps was chosen as land-scape format according to human vision.

Average relative shelve height is 0.6 (see table 2). Further measures of dispersion for relative shelf height are: min=0.14, max=1, Q1=0.33, Q3=0.85. Thus, the middle 50% of all bought products have been posi-tioned in the relative shelve height between 0.33 and 0.85. (see Boxplot for relative shelve height).

The results show what we already know from former studies. The majority of the purchased products were found in the middle shelf area, slightly above the middle of the shelves (which is at 0.5). Some measurements were found in the lower and some in the upper areas. Since the values are quite equally distributed over the entire height of the shelves, the effect on the production of the heat maps should be quite small and negligible.

References

Bechtold, A. (2014). Energiedichte der Nahrung und Körpergewicht Wissenschaftliche Stellungnahme der DGE. https://www.ernaehrungs-umschau.de/fileadmin/Ernaehrungs-Umschau/pdfs/pdf_2014/01_14/EU01_2014_M014_M023_-_002d_011d.qxd.pdf

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Decision Letter 2

Zhifeng Gao

6 Jan 2021

PONE-D-20-12685R2

Visual attention towards food during

unplanned purchases – A pilot study using mobile eye tracking technology

PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #2: (No Response)

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Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #2: 1) You did briefly discuss the issue of fixed arrangement at the end of the manuscript. I also read in your response the following: “That’s why we controlled for this influence and discussed this issue at the end of the manuscript.” However, my understanding is that you did not control the influence of fixed arrangement in your experiment. Please clarify your statement.

One way to control the influence of fixed arrangement would be through randomizing the starting point of your participants’ shopping experiences. For example, if low caloric foods were located in the front sections of the store (and high caloric foods in the back), you could instruct half of your participants to start shopping from the front. The other half of the participants would then start shopping from the back of the store. This would ensure that all of your participants didn’t start by paying attention to and purchasing low caloric foods first, thus controlling for the fixed arrangements. Does this make sense?

2) Thank you for taking into consideration of my suggestion and conducted additional analysis using dichotomous variables.

First off, I want to note that the presentation of your regression results were messy. You should preview your response file before submitting. Because the results shown in Tables 1a, 1b, 2a, and 2b are not really in a table format, it took me some time to figure out which number corresponds to what. If my understanding is correct, Model 1 in Tables 1a, 1b, 2a, 2b incorporated interaction terms and thus parallel/comparable to Table 3 in your manuscript.

By comparing Model 1 results with Table 3, I understand that using dichotomous variables does not significantly alter the results and thus all the results in Table 3 are retained (i.e., MBI, energy density as continuous variables).

However, you may already realize that your Tables 1a, 1b, 2a, 2b results are actually more consistent/comparable with Figure 3. This is because intercepts in your regression measure exactly the FD, VD, FC and VC of your base group, adding (or subtracting if negative) the coefficients of BMI, and ED provides estimates for the other group.

Figure 3 are plots based on raw data, while results in Tables 1a, 1b, 2a, 2b control for individual characteristics. Hopefully this explanation make sense to you why I wanted to see regression results based on dichotomous groups.

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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PLoS One. 2021 Mar 4;16(3):e0247755. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0247755.r006

Author response to Decision Letter 2


14 Jan 2021

Dear Reviewers, dear Editor.

With the help of the reviewers and the editor, we have been able to steadily improve the publication to this day. We are aware of this development and the understanding of the reviewers and thank them for their support throughout the whole review process.

We understand that the paper in its current version still has some weaknesses that need to be improved before publication. Some misunderstandings and format issues have arisen. These include the issues raised by the reviewer, which we will address now.

1) In our last review, particularly in the response letter to the reviewers, we indicated that we controlled for the influence of the arrangement. Unfortunately, we were a little too imprecise. We did not mean that we controlled for the arrangement by randomizing the starting point as reviewer 2 points out. This would have been a very appropriate control method for testing the influence of the arrangement for an experiment. Nevertheless, our study describes much more an observational study in which we as scientists have only a very limited influence on certain variables, including the arrangement in the supermarket. We were interested in observing and evaluating spontaneous purchases in situations that were as natural as possible and not ‘artificial’. A high external validity was clearly the focus of our study. The benefit of this study is therefore the recording and analysis of realistic shopping situations and behavior in a real-world setting. Therefore, we had to forgo many experimental controls such as testing the influence of the arrangement by varying the starting point. In addition, varying the starting point would also have led to people having to walk unrealistic distances, possibly even having to walk distances twice or three times to be able to buy all the products. The time of the purchase would have changed with it and as far as time and time pressure are really connected as reviewer 2 assumed, the time pressure would have changed with it as well. Thus, varying the starting point in a realistic setting does not lead to the desired controls without significant side effects. The research team had already thought about these conditions before the study and deliberately refrained from varying this factor in any way. In our opinion, this inevitably leads to more unrealistic conditions and thus contradicts our fundamental intention. Accordingly, we followed observational studies and collected such influencing variables with our data to be able to statistically control for them as part of our analyses afterwards. And that is what we mentioned when we wrote we controlled for this variable. Since the reviewer also pointed out deficiencies in the manuscript in this respect, we added an additional part in the discussion describing this issue again in more detail and justifying our approach. Furthermore, we have extended the discussion regarding time and time pressure and a possible confounding with eye movement measurements and pointed out more clearly and again possible limitations of our results. We hope we were able to satisfy the reviewers and editors sufficiently regarding this point. We hope we were able to satisfy the reviewers and editors sufficiently about this point.

2) I am personally very embarrassed by this point, especially the formatting. The way it is presented is in no way appropriate. Unfortunately, I had copied the table into the text template and assumed that the formatting would be preserved. This was not the case. In the future I will check this several times or use figures of the tables if necessary. To provide the tables at least now in an appropriate format, I attach them to this document again.

We very much hope that the additions to the manuscript and the additional descriptions in this letter will help to better describe our approach so that we can meet the requirements of the reviewers and the editor. We thank again all reviewers and the editor for their help.

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Decision Letter 3

Zhifeng Gao

15 Feb 2021

Visual attention towards food during

unplanned purchases – A pilot study using mobile eye tracking technology

PONE-D-20-12685R3

Dear Dr. Hummel,

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Zhifeng Gao

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Reviewer #2: No

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Acceptance letter

Zhifeng Gao

18 Feb 2021

PONE-D-20-12685R3

Visual attention towards food during unplanned purchases – A pilot study using mobile eye tracking technology

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    The data file is available from the figshare database: Hummel, Gerrit (2020): et_super_long. figshare. Dataset. https://doi.org/10.6084/m9.figshare.12962912


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