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. 2021 Mar 24;16(3):e0248618. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0248618

Willingness to pay for cataract surgery and associated factors among cataract patients in Outreach Site, North West Ethiopia

Mohammed Seid 1, Amare Minyihun 2, Gizachew Tilahun 1, Asmamaw Atnafu 2, Getasew Amare 2,*
Editor: Janhavi Ajit Vaingankar3
PMCID: PMC7990211  PMID: 33760830

Abstract

Introduction

In Ethiopia, cataract surgery is mainly provided by donors free of charge through outreach programs. Assessing willingness to pay for patients for cataract surgery will help explain how the service is valued by the beneficiaries and design a domestic source of finance to sustain a program. Although knowledge concerning willingness to pay for cataract surgery is substantive for developing a cost-recovery model, the existed knowledge is limited and not well-addressed. Therefore, the study aimed to assess willingness to pay for cataract surgery and associated factors among cataract patients in Outreach Site, North West Ethiopia.

Methods

A cross-sectional outreach-based study was conducted on 827 cataract patients selected through a simple random sampling method in Tebebe Gion Specialized Hospital, North West Ethiopia, from 10/11/2018 to 14/11/2018. The data were collected using a contingent valuation elicitation approach to elicit the participants’ maximum willingness to pay through face to face questionnaire interviews. The descriptive data were organized and presented using summary statistics, frequency distribution tables, and figures accordingly. Factors assumed to be associate with a willingness to pay were identified using a Tobit regression model with a p-value of <0.05 and confidence interval (CI ≠ 0).

Results

The study involved 827 cataract patients, and their median age was 65years. About 55% of the participants were willing to pay for the surgery. The average amount of money willing to pay was 17.5USD (95% CI; 10.5, 35.00) and It was significantly associated with being still worker (β = 26.66, 95% CI: 13.03, 40.29), being educated (β = 29.16, 95% CI: 2.35, 55.97), free from ocular morbidity (β = 28.48, 95% CI: 1.08, 55.90), duration with the condition, (β = -1.69, 95% CI: -3.32, -0.07), admission laterality (β = 21.21, 95% CI: 3.65, 38.77) and remained visual ability (β = -0.29, 95% CI (-0.55, -0.04).

Conclusions

Participants’ willingness to pay for cataract surgery in outreach Sites is much lower than the surgery’s actual cost. Early intervention and developing a cost-recovery model with multi-tiered packages attributed to the neediest people as in retired, less educated, severely disabled is strategic to increase the demand for service uptake and service accessibility.

Introduction

Globally, cataract is the second leading cause of blindness, accounting for 33% (52.6 million) blind people next uncorrected refractive error [1, 2]. In Ethiopia, 50% of blindness is also caused by cataracts [3]. Cataract surgery is the only treatment modality [4, 5]. According to Vision 2020 initiatives, the targeted cataract surgical rate (CSR) varies globally from 2000–5000 per million [6]. It was planned to be 2000 per million for African countries per year, but now it is less than 500 [7]. This underperformance was reasoned out by low patient demand, poor service delivery [7], low family income [8, 9], unable to afford surgical costs [8, 10, 11], logistical constraints, and fear of the surgery [9, 11], lack of knowledge, lack of family support [11], and time [9]. In 2005, the mean cost of the surgery per eye from various European countries was US$ 843.5 [12]. By the year 2004, in the United States of America, the mean cost was estimated to be US$2525 [13]. Moreover, studies from Africa and South East Asia reported that the actual cost exceeds the community’s willingness to pay (WTP) for cataract surgery [1418]. Overall, the proportion of WTP in Asia was very discrepant, which was ranged from 34% to 90%. Similarly, the mean amount of money participants willing to pay was varied from US$ 7 to US$ 968 [1922]. However, the mean amount of money participants willing to pay in Africa was ranged from US$2.3 to US$18.5, which was relatively low as compared to Asian nations [19, 21]. In addition to regional variation, WTP for cataract surgery was higher among hospital-based studies and the urban population. However, the findings of outreach-based studies, which were conducted on the rural community, indicated that people are less willing to accept and pay for the surgery. Conclusively, the amount of money WTP is related to setting variation. Moreover, several studies showed that willingness to pay is affected by economic status, gender, age, family support, knowledge about the surgery, preoperative visual ability, family size, occupation, level of perceived need, and the characteristics of local eye care programs even if the majority of analysis model were fitted for the proportion of WTP rather than amount of money to pay [15, 17, 1921, 2326]. Besides, WTP is also health state dependant which is affected by the preference and perceived health status of participants. This situation affects the research by over/under estimate result which may not reflect the actual price of the intervention [2733].

In Ethiopia, it is known that the eye care service is urban-centred, which is not easily accessible for rural dwellers. As a result, cataract surgery is being delivered through outreach programs, with the tremendous aid of donors, either free of charge or at a very low cost. Even if the program is essential and brought Socioeconomic welfare by reducing avoidable blindness associated with cataracts, this might not be financially sustainable for the long-run. Therefore, assessing WTP from the beneficiaries’ perspective is very important to understand how the users value the service and design a cost-recovery model that assures self-sustaining and high-volume surgical services [22].

Even if the knowledge regarding willingness to pay and the surgery’s actual cost is essential, the existing experience is not going through the intervention. Firstly, the study area’s existing knowledge is mainly centred on the proportion of willingness to pay rather than the amount of money [22]. Secondly, the amount of money WTP was not fully addressed with the appropriate analysis model. Thirdly, willingness to pay is highly setting-variant, which mainly varies with socioeconomic status and study setting. Consequently, it is difficult to apply the research finding done in other corners of the globe for this study area. Therefore, this study aimed to assess the willingness to pay for cataract surgery and associated factors among cataract patients at the Northwest Ethiopia outreach site.

Methods

Study design and setting

Outreach- based cross-sectional study was conducted. The campaign site was at Tebebe Gion Specialized Referral Hospital, Bahir Dar city, North West Ethiopia. There are only four Tertiary and general hospitals for about 14 million people in the catchment area, which provide comprehensive eye care services, including cataract surgical services in North West Ethiopia. However, all of them are urban-centred and not accessible for more than 80% of the community. Hence, the outreach program was planned for communities where cataract surgical services are not available and for peoples in disadvantaged areas with low socioeconomic status in North West Ethiopia. Initially, screening for cataracts was conducted in the nearby rural weredas, which are the third-level administrative units in the Ethiopian governance structure, before the campaign. During the screening, Cataract cases were diagnosed and informed about the condition and scheduled to attend the planned outreach program. As a result, a total of 1336 cataract cases were linked and admitted to the campaign from weredas of West Gojjam (628 patients), South Gondar (374 patients), Awi Zone (201 patients), Bahir Dar City (100 patients), and from East Gojjam (33 patients).

Thus, more than 93% of cases were from rural weredas and district towns. Therefore, this study’s findings could apply to rural residents admitted for cataract surgery in outreach programs.

Study population and sampling technique

All adult patients age ≥18 years admitted at the campaign Site, Tebebe Gion specialized Referral Hospital, for cataract surgery was the study population except those who had communication barriers (speech impairment and hearing impairment).

The sample size was determined using single population mean estimation formula, by assuming a 95% confidence level, a standard deviation of WTP from the previous study conducted in Jimma, Southwest Ethiopia (US$7.5 (138.4 ETB)) (24), and a margin of error within 0.5$ around the parameter at 95% confidence level. The final computed sample size, including a 10% non-response rate, was 926.

Thorough sampling procedures were followed to select the study participants. First, screening for cataract was conducted in the nearby weredas so that 1336 cases were appointed for the surgery. The patients were documented and provided identification number. The appointment was based on the rate of surgical procedures planned per day, 170 cataract cases. Thus, the campaign lasted for eight consecutive days. Daily sample participants were calculated proportionally based on the daily patient flow. The sampling frame was designed based on the list of daily admitted patients. Hence, based on this proportion, the study participants were selected from cases prepared for admission using a simple random sampling method.

Data collection procedures

Data were collected using a structured questionnaire through face to face questionnaire interview from 10/11/2018 to 14/11/2018. The participants’ maximum willingness to pay (MWTP) for the cataract surgery interims of monetary value was estimated using a bidding game format of contingent valuation (CV) method [3438]. The questionnaire was pretested on 47 patients at Ebnat primary hospital, the other equivalent outreach site.

Measurements and variables

Maximum willingness to pay (MWTP) for cataract surgery

Was the independent variable measured by questions prepared with a bidding game eliciting approach. After presenting the hypothetical scenario to assess how participants value the cataract surgery [39], the respondents were asked to accept or reject any positive price for cataract surgery. Those respondents who had accepted to pay some positive fees were asked their MWTP using the bidding format approach. The bidding game’s starting price was estimated from the actual cost of manual small incision cataract surgery per eye, 2824 ETB from a study done in Southern Ethiopia in 2010 [40]. In the Ethiopian context, the average household out pocket expenditure from the total health financing is around 35% [41, 42]. Based on this rate, the starting price we expected to be paid was 1000 Birr (0.35x2824birr).

After presenting the case scenario, all participants were asked:

  • Are you willing to pay some positive price for cataract surgery?

  • 1. Yes          2. No

Those who said no or unwilling to pay for the service were dropped for the next bidding game, which was used to assess the participants’ maximum willingness to pay for cataract surgery. But those who said yes for the first question were asked the maximum price they want to pay by the for the cataract surgery (Fig 1).

Fig 1. Iterative bidding technique to elicit willingness to pay for cataract surgery in outreach Sites, North West Ethiopia.

Fig 1

First bidding questions: If the cost of cataract surgery for one eye is ETB 1000, are you willing to pay that amount? December 2018 Exchange rate: US$ 1 = ETB 27.8.

Pre-operative visual ability/visual function

The visual system’s function can be measured objectively or subjectively. Visual acuity measurement is one of the objective indicators of the visual system functionality. However, it does not indicate the overall visual performance of an individual. Hence, we used the subjective measurement, the visual function/visual ability, to assess the overall visual performance. Hence it was measured by using adapted Visual Function 14 Index (VF-14) tool. Previously, numerous researchers used the tool as a standard. However, based on the socioeconomic and cultural perspective of their study population, the tool was adapted. The response option was prepared with 5-point Likert’s scale format. The scale ranged from the 0–4 value for the degree of visual difficulties’ unable to do’ (scale 0), ’great difficulty’ (scale1), ’moderate difficulty’ (scale 2), ’little difficulty’ (scale 3) and ’no difficulty’ (scale 4). Then each scale was multiplied by 25. So, the value of each response ranges from 0–100. After that, the factored amounts were summed up. Finally, VF index was computed by dividing the summed factored amounts to the number of checked boxes and the visual ability were categorized [4345].

The calculation is elaborated across the studies, and the final classification is based on the International Council of Ophthalmology as normal or near-normal performance (≥50 visual ability score) and restricted performance (<50 visual ability score) [46].

Wealth index

Household wealth was measured by asking several questions on the possession of different agricultural products, non-productive assets, and household facilities. The wealth index quintile was derived by Principal Component Analysis (PCA) [47, 48].

Data processing and analysis

The data were coded and entered into Epi Info version 7 and was exported to Stata Version 14 for analysis. The Tobit econometric model was used to analyze the determinants of willingness to pay and the maximum amount of money that patients willing to pay. This model is used to estimate parameters when the outcome variable is continuous in one end and has a constrained range in another arm [4951]. The model is depicted as follow;

y={10
iMWTP=Bo+BXi+e>0
ifMWTP0

Y = Outcome variable; MWTP = Maximum WTP; Xi = Explanatory variables; βo = Slope;

β’ = Coefficient; ε = error term; 1 = Success/Yes; 0 = Failure/No

The model estimates the marginal effect of an explanatory variable on the expected value of the dependent variable. The descriptive data were organized and presented using summary statistics, frequency distribution tables, and figures accordingly. The Tobit model assumptions [52, 53] like normality, Multicollinearity (VIF = 1.23), and homoscedasticity (Breusch-pagan (hettest, X2 = 1.78, p = 0.18)) of error terms were checked. Regression coefficients (β), 95% confidence interval, and p-value of < 0.05 were used to measure a statistical association’s strength and presence.

Ethical considerations

Ethical clearance was obtained from the ethical committee of the Institute of Public Health, College of Medicine and Health Science, and the University of Gondar. An official letter of permission was also obtained from Amhara Regional Health Bureau and Bahir Dar Tibebe Gion Specialized Referral Hospital. After explaining the purpose and importance of the study, informed consent was obtained from each study participant. Participants were also informed that they have the right to withdraw from the study if they face any inconvenience during the interview processes.

Results

Socio-demographic and economic characteristics of participants

A total of 827 participants responded to the interviewer-administered questionnaire with a response rate of 89%. The median age of the participants was 65 years, with an interquartile range of 15. About 55% of the participants were age ≥ 65 years. The majority of the participants, 498 (60.2%), were males. The significant portion of the participants, 675(82%), were from rural and had no formal education of 786(95%). Most of the participants were currently married 515(62.2%). About 84% of the participants had a family head role. About two-thirds of the participants, 565 (68.3%), were in a state of still working (Table 1).

Table 1. Socio-demographic characteristics of the study participants for WTP for cataract surgery in outreach Site, Northwest Ethiopia, 2019 (n = 827).

Variables Willing to Pay Total (827)
Yes (456) No (371)
Frequency % Frequency % Frequency %
Sex
 Male 292 35.3 206 24.9 498 60.2
 Female 164 19.8 165 20 329 39.8
Age
 <65 years 220 26.6 154 18.6 374 45.2
 ≥65years 236 28.5 217 26.3 453 54.8
Residence
 Rural 373 45.1 302 36.5 675 81.6
 Urban 83 10.1 69 8.3 152 18.4
Marital status
 Married 315 38.1 200 24.2 515 62.3
 Widowed 111 13.4 118 14.3 229 27.7
 Divorced 21 2.5 42 5.1 63 7.6
 Single 9 1.1 11 1.3 20 2.4
Educational status
Noformal education 430 52 356 43 786 95
Formal education 26 3.1 15 1.9 41 5
Working state
Still working 349 42.2 216 26.1 565 68.3
Retired/unemployed 107 13 155 18.7 262 31.68
Household head
 Yes 387 46.8 308 37.2 695 84
 No 69 8.4 63 7.6 132 16
Family size
 <5 305 36.9 281 34 586 70.86
 ≥5 151 18.3 90 10.8 241 29.14
Wealth status
Poor 155 18.7 120 14.5 275 33.3
Medium 139 16.8 137 16.6 276 33.4
Rich 162 19.6 114 13.8 276 33.4

Health-related characteristics of participants

The majority of the participants, 638 (77.1%), were not familiarized with cataract surgery either from themselves or their family members. Nearly 714(86%) of the participants had unilateral operable cataracts. Preoperatively, the participants’ mean visual ability score was 42.38, with a standard deviation of 23. The majority of the participants, 536(65%), had restricted visual performance, that was less than 50 visual ability score. The mean time spent with the condition was 2years. About 787(95%) of the participants did not report ocular co-morbidity other than cataract. Likewise, most of the participants, 720(87%), did not report any systemic illness. More than half of the participants, 466(56.3%), stated that they utilized community-based health insurance services (Table 2).

Table 2. Health-related characteristics of the study participants for WTP for cataract surgery in outreach Site, North West Ethiopia, 2019 (n = 827).

Variables Willing to pay Total
Yes No
Frequency % Frequency % Frequency %
Familiarity with cataract surgery
 Yes 106 12.8 83 10.1 189 22.9
 No 350 42.3 288 34.8 638 77.1
Eye involved with cataract
 One eye 408 49.3 306 37 714 86.3
 Both eyes 48 5.8 65 7.9 113 13.7
Preoperative Visual ability
 <50 291 35.2 245 29.6 536 64.8
 ≥50 165 20 126 15.2 291 35.2
Time spent with condition
 <2years 147 17.8 96 11.6 243 29.4
 ≥2years 309 37.4 275 33.2 584 70.6
Self-reported ocular morbidity
 Yes 16 1.9 24 2.9 40 4.8
 No 440 53.2 347 42 787 95.2
Self-reported Systemic illness
 Yes 55 6.7 52 6.3 107 12.9
 No 401 48.4 319 38.6 720 87.1
Health insurance
 Yes 276 33.4 190 22.9 466 56.3
 No 180 21.8 181 21.9 361 43.7

Participants’ willingness to pay for cataract surgery

Fifty-five percent of the participants(456) were willing to pay something for the cataract surgery, and the average amount of money participants willing to pay was 500 ETB or 17.9 USD (10.9, 28.77).

It was calculated as follows:-

AMWTP=827(MWTP1+MWTP2++MWTP827)827=500birrforcataractsurgeryservice

Note1$USD = 27.9 birrs in May 2019 currency exchange, AMWTP is an average maximum willingness to pay

Associated factors for willingness to pay some positive price for cataract surgery

The study revealed that the eye involved with cataract, marital status, and occupation as significant variables for participants’ willingness to pay some positive price for cataract surgery.

Study participants whose one eye involved with cataracts were 36% (AOR = 0.64; 95% CI: 0.41, 0.98) less likely to pay some positive price for cataract surgery compared to those whose both eyes were involved. Besides, those who are not currently married were 1.55 (AOR = 2.55; 95% CI: 1.12, 2.14) times more likely to pay some positive cataract surgery price. The odds of participants who were still in working condition were 51% (AOR = 0.49; 95% CI: 0.35, 0.69) less likely to pay some positive price for cataract surgery than those who were not working (Table 3).

Table 3. Logistic regression for associated factors for willingness pay some positive price for cataract surgery in outreach Site, North West Ethiopia, 2019 (n = 827).

Variable Category Willing to pay COR (95% CI) AOR (95% CI) P-value
Yes No
Age < 65 years 220 154 0.76 (0.58, 1.00) 0.86 (0.63, 1.19) 0.37
> = 65 years 236 217 1
Family head Yes 387 308 0.87 (0.60, 1.67) 0.70 (0.47, 1.06) 0.09
No 69 63 1
Residence Rural 373 302 1
Urban 83 69 1.03 (0.72, 1.46) 0.90 (0.59, 1.37) 0.63
Familiarity with cataract surgery Yes 106 83 1
No 350 288 1.05 (0.76, 1.46) 1.29 (0.71, 1.42)
Self-reported ocular co-morbidity Yes 16 24 1
No 440 347 0.53 (0.28, 1.01) 0.54 (0.27, 1.06) 0.07
Eye involved with cataract One 408 306 0.55 (0.37,0.83) 0.64 (0.41, 0.98) 0.04*
Both 48 65 1
Self-reported systemic co-morbidity Yes 55 52 1
No 401 319 0.84 9)0.56. 1.26 0.95 (0.61, 1.47) 0.82
Health Insurance Yes 276 190 0.68 (0.52, 0.90) 0.82 (0.61, 1.11) 0.20
No 180 181 1
Preoperative Visual Ability < 50 291 245 1
> = 50 165 126 0.91 (0.68, 1.21) 0.80 (0.59, 1.10) 0.17
Time spent with cataract < 2 years 147 96 0.73 (0.54, 0.99) 1.24 (0.90, 1.71) 0.19
> = 2 years 309 275 1
Wealth status Poor 155 120 1
Medium 139 137 1.27 (0.91, 1.78) 1.31 (0.91, 1.91) 0.15
Rich 162 114 0.91 (0.65, 1.27) 1.03 (0.72, 1.47) 0.87
Marital status Married 315 200 1
Not-married 141 171 1.91 (1.44, 2.54) 1.55 (1.12, 2.14) 0.008*
Educational status No formal education 430 356 1
Formal education 26 15 0.70 (0.36, 1.34) 0.65 (0.32, 1.33) 0.24
Occupational status Retired/unemployed) 349 216 1
Still working 107 155 0.43 (0.32, 0.58) 0.49 (0.35, 0.69) 0.001*
Family size < 5 305 281 1.55 (1.34, 2.10) 1.29 (0.92, 1.80) 0.14
> = 5 151 90 1
Constant 3.89

Associated factors for willingness to pay for cataract surgery and their marginal effects

The study showed that the still working participants were willing to pay 26.66USD more than the participants who retired or unemployed, keeping other variables constant (β = 26.66,95%CI13.03, 40.29). This variable’s marginal effect revealed that changing the working state from retired/unemployed to active working state increases WTP for cataract surgery by 14.46 USD from mean willingness to pay (dy/dx = 14.46, 95% CI 7.48, 21.51). Participants who had formal education were WTP 29.16 USD more than participants who had no formal education (β = 29, 16, 95%CI 2.35, 55.97).

Participants who had no ocular-comorbidity were willing to pay 28.48USD more than those with ocular co-morbidity, holding other variables constant (β = 28.48, 95%CI1.08, 55.90). The study depicted that being free from ocular morbidity increases WTP for cataract surgery by 14.26 USD from mean willingness to pay (dy/dx = 14.26, 95%CI 2.48, 26.04).

Likewise, participants with unilateral cataracts were WTP 21.21USD more than those with bilateral cataracts, holding other variables constant (β = 21.21, 95%CI3.65, 38.77). This variable’s marginal effect showed that only having unilateral cataract increases WTP for cataract surgery by 11.20 USD from mean willingness to pay (dy/dx = 11.20, 95% CI 2.68, 19.73).

It was also depicted that a one-year increment in years spent with the condition, the participants’ WTP decreases by 1.69 USD, keeping the other variables constant (β = -1.69,95%CI -3.32, -0.07). This variable’s marginal effect indicated that increasing years lived with the condition by one year, it may decrease the WTP for cataract surgery by 1.12 USD from the mean (dy/dx = -1.12, 95%CI -2.05, -0.19).

As the better eye’s visual ability increases by one unit, the participants’ WTP decreases by 0.29USD (β = -0.29, 95%CI -0.55, -0.04). This variable’s marginal effect revealed that increasing the visual ability in the better by one unit can decrease the WTP for cataract surgery by 0.16USD from mean willingness to pay (dy/dx = -0.16,95% CI-0.31, -0.02) (Table 4).

Table 4. Maximum likelihood of Tobit econometric analysis of factors associated with WTP for cataract surgery in outreach Site, North West Ethiopia,2019(n = 827).

Variables for MWTP Category β coefficients SE t-value p-value 95% CI Lower, upper Dy/dx(95% CI)
Age N -0.34 0.26 -1.30 0.19 -0.85, 0.17 0.19(-0.48, .098)
Being Married (ref, single) D 9.43 6.83 1.38 0.17 -3.98, 22.84 5.31(-2.14, 12.78)
Being Urban (ref, rural) D -0.77 8.24 -0.09 0.93 -16.95, 15.42 2.94 (-5.80, 11.68)
Formal education (ref, no formal education) D 29.16 13.66 2.14 0.03* 2.35, 55.97 18.62(-0.22,37.46)
Still working (ref, retired/unemployed) D 26.66 6.94 3.84 0.001* 13.03, 40.29 14.49 (7.48, 21.51) *
Being Family head(ref, No) D 5.25 8.10 0.65 0.517 -10.65, 21.15 -0.44 (-9.61, 8.74)
Visual ability N -0.29 0.13 -2.26 0.024* -0.55, -0.04 -0.16(0.31, -0.02) *
Time spent with the condition N -1.96 0.83 -2.37 0.018* -3.59, 0.34 -1.12 (-2.05, -0.19) *
Familiarity with cataract surgery (ref, yes) D 0.68 6.79 0.10 0.920 -12.67, 14.03 0.39 (-7.18, 7.96)
No ocular co-morbidity (ref, yes) D 28.49 13.96 2.04 0.04* 1.08, 55.90 14.26 (2.48, 26.04) *
No systemic illness (ref, yes) D 0.77 8.65 0.09 0.93 -16.2, 17.76 0.43 (-9.18, 10.06)
Involved eye with cataract(ref, both eyes) D 21.21 8.95 2.37 0.018* 3.65, 38.77 11.20 (2.68,19.73) *
Medium ref, poor) D -12.44 7.3 -1.70 0.089 -26.76, 1.89 -7.05(-15.16, 1.05)
Rich (ref, poor) D -4.51 6.90 -0.65 0.51 -18.07, 9.04 -2.65 (-10.62, 5.31)
Having Health insurance(ref, No) D 9.52 6.02 1.58 0.114 -2.28, 21.33 5.39 (-1.25, 12.04)
Family size N 1.52 1.73 0.88 0.38 -1.87, 4.91 0.86 (-1.06, 2.79)
Constant -29.02 28.07 -1.03 0.30 -84.12, 26.07
/Sigma 73.08 2.68 67.82 78.34

D, Dummy variable; N, numeric variable; ref, reference category;

* significant with p-value <0.05.

Tobit/OLS/Truncated econometric analysis of factors associated with WTP for cataract surgery

Tobit, OLS, and Truncated analysis were performed for factors related to WTP for cataract surgery. Educational status, working condition, visual ability, time spent with the disease, eye involved with cataract, and self-reported ocular co-morbidity were significant variables for WTP for cataract surgery by the Tobit model. In the OLS model, educational status, visual ability, and cataract eyes were significantly associated with WTP for cataract surgery. Besides, participants’ educational level and visual ability were the significant variables for WTP (Table 5).

Table 5. Tobit/OLS/Truncated econometric analysis of factors associated with WTP for cataract surgery in outreach Site, North West Ethiopia, 2019 (n = 827).

Variables Category Tobit Model OLS Model Truncated Model
β coefficients SE P-value β coefficients SE P-value β coefficients SE P-value
Age N -0.34 0.26 0.19 -0.23 0.15 0.13 -0.45 0.30 0.13
Being Married (ref, single) D 9.43 6.83 0.17 2.57 4.01 0.56 -11.9 7.72 0.12
Being Urban (ref, rural) D -0.77 8.24 0.93 -1.8 4.86 0.71 -9.1 9.17 0.32
Formal education (ref, no formal education) D 29.16 13.66 0.03* 22.7 8.28 0.006* 30.3 13.49 0.03*
Still working (ref, retired/unemployed) D 26.66 6.94 0.001* 12.5 4.02 0.002 -0.46 8.20 0.96
Being Family head(ref, No) D 5.25 8.10 0.517 0.36 4.78 0.94 -11.02 8.92 0.22
Visual ability N -0.29 0.13 0.024* -0.79 0.08 0.008* -0.35 0.14 0.01*
Time spent with the condition N -1.96 0.83 0.018* -0.79 0.46 0.09 1.1 0.96 0.29
Familiarity with cataract surgery (ref, yes) D 0.68 6.79 0.920 -0.46 4.05 0.91 -1.8 7.53 0.82
No ocular co-morbidity (ref, yes) D 28.49 13.96 0.04* 13.4 7.81 0.09 11.4 17.53 0.52
No systemic illness (ref, yes) D 0.77 8.65 0.93 0.25 5.10 0.96 -2.3 9.88 0.81
Involved eye with cataract(ref, both eyes) D 21.21 8.95 0.018* 11.9 5.14 0.02* 12.7 10.86 0.24
Medium ref, poor) D -12.44 7.3 0.089 -6.9 4.33 0.11 -0.46 8.09 0.52
Rich (ref, poor) D -4.51 6.90 0.51 -3.6 4.15 0.38 -6.1 7.60 0.42
Having Health insurance(ref, No) D 9.52 6.02 0.114 6.7 3.55 0.06 8.2 6.79 0.23
Family size N 1.52 1.73 0.38 0.92 1.03 0.38 0.10 1.89 0.96
Constant -29.02 28.4 94.2 31.3

Discussion

This study aimed to assess WTP for cataract surgery and associated factors to provide substantive evidence for developing a cost-recovery model that assures self-sustaining and high-volume surgical services. Although more than half of the patients admitted for cataract surgery (55%) were willing to pay something for the surgery, the average amount of money ready to pay for the surgery per eye was 500ETB (17.9USD).

This result was comparable with outreach based studies done in Jimma, Ethiopia (US$12.4 [22], and in Northern Nigeria (US$18.5) [19]. On the other hand, it is greater than the campaign based studies conducted in Tanzania (US$2.3 [20], Malawi (3US$), [21], and Nepal (US$7) [17]. Despite design similarity, they were conducted on a minimal sample size selected with non-probability sampling. This may be a reason for the discrepancy. However, this result was lower than the studies done in Hong Kong (US$ 552) [23] and China (USD 968) [25]. Both studies involved cataract patients on the waiting list in hospitals and used a bidding format for eliciting the willingness to pay. Relatively, their target price was higher as compared to the present study. Having a difference in target price and research setting might be taken as a reason for the variation.

Overall, this amount of money willing to pay matches the subsidized price for cataract surgery at General and Tertiary Hospitals. However, it was significantly lower than the current cost of the surgery area, 2824 ETB(101.56USD) [40], and the proposed target price by 50%. Lack of money, lack of knowledge to access the services, and waiting for the campaign were the main reason cited to be unwilling to pay and unable to seek eye care services previously.

Currently, cataract surgery is being delivered for districts through outreach programs, with the tremendous aid of donors, free of charge. Nevertheless, this might not be financially sustainable for the long-run. This study’s findings imply that if the government or private sectors plan to sustain the program with domestic resources, it is strategic to develop an inclusive cost-recovery model that can assure services accessibility, self-reliance, and equity. The Aravind Eye Care System in India is the best lesson: providing high-quality and high-volume (350,000 eye operations per year) services to those who can afford to pay market rates and then uses the profits to fund care for those who cannot. Patients who cannot afford to pay are given cataract surgery for free. However, the government reimburses Aravind US$10 for each procedure [54]. The Ethiopian health care financing policy considers the systematizing fee waiver system, while such approaches are not applied for cataract surgical services so far.

Moreover, the WTP’s comparability with the current price of cataract surgery set for General and Tertiary Hospitals indicates that there is a probability of integrating the service in the existing health care system at the district level if the Ethiopian government invests on human resource development and infrastructure.

The working state’s impact on willingness to pay is depicted that the participants who were still working were WTP 26.66USD more than the participants who were retired/unemployed. This result is supported by a study conducted in rural china [15] though some studies concluded that willingness to pay was not affected by the working state [18, 21, 25]. This relationship can be explained in a way that employees can be related to greater productivity. This implies that retired/ unemployed persons would be a potential target for cost- recovery.

Persons with formal education were 29.16 USD more WTP than those who had no formal education for surgery. This finding is consistent with a study done in China [24]. This may suggest that educated persons may value their vision more and may have good knowledge about the service’s cost-benefit aspects. However, many studies found that WTP for cataract surgery was not significantly affected by literacy because these studies were done in nations where there is higher educational coverage [15, 18, 22, 23]. Hence, significant variation based on education might not be observed. This result indicated that extra efforts in outreach programs need to be invested in prospering illiterate persons’ knowledge with non-printed media.

Patients with no ocular-comorbidity and unilateral cataracts were more willing to pay than those with ocular co-morbidity and bilateral cataract. Previous studies also reported that preexisting eye diseases and bilateral cataracts affect willingness to pay for cataract surgery [25]. This may be explained so that persons with co-morbidity and bilateral cataract might have poor visual performance. Hence, their productivity and economy may be compromised, making them desperate to have good vision and uptake the services. On the other hand, as the visual performance of a better eye decreases by one unit, the participants’ WTP increases by 0.29USD.

Similarly, a study reported that persons with poor visual performance were more willing to pay for the surgery [23]. The justification might be that patients with poor visual ability can be highly ambitioned to enhance their daily base activities regardless of their ability to pay. On the contrary, two studies found that as the preoperative visual acuity becomes more impaired, the willingness to pay decreases. The visual functionality was measured objectively [21, 24]. These findings imply that cataract surgery’s subsidization is substantive for patients with a severe visual disability, ocular-comorbidity preexisted condition, and bilateral cataract. Thus, even if resource utilization efficiency is sacrificed, equity among services consumers might be logical.

The study also depicted that one year increment in years lived with visual impairment, the participants WTP decreases by 1.69 USD. The explanation might be that as the duration increase without intervention, the severity of visual disability and complication associated with cataract can be increased. This increases the psycho-socio-economic burden of the condition. Hence, it ends up with a poor vision-related quality of life and poor ability to pay. This implies that early intervention may promote a greater willingness to pay and service utilization.

Limitation of the study

The method used only shows the service’s values or benefits, which didn’t consider the full economic evaluation approach. The other limitation of this study is the strategic response bias in which the respondents will intentionally overestimate or underestimate the price, which is not their actual price. We tried to minimize this bias using a well-stated case scenario and Bidding game format as an elicitation approach.

Conclusion

Willingness to pay for cataract surgery among adults with operable cataracts in outreach sites is much lower than the surgery’s actual cost. People with a state of having a formal education, working state, less time spent with the condition, free from co-morbidity, and bilateral cataracts were more willing to pay for cataract surgery. Therefore, the provision of cataract surgical services by offering a multi-tiered package attributed to the population’s characteristics is essential and applicable.

Supporting information

S1 File

(DOCX)

S1 Questionnaire

(DOCX)

S1 Data

(DTA)

Acknowledgments

The authors would like to thank all respondents for their willingness to participate in the study. We are also grateful to the Amhara public health institute, Tebebe Gion Specialized Referral Hospital, and the University of Gondar for material support. Finally, our appreciation goes to data collectors for their unreserved contribution in data collection activities.

List of abbreviations

CV

Contingent Valuation

EDHS

Ethiopian Demographic and Health Survey

ETB

Ethiopian Birr

GDP

Gross Domestic Product

HEP

Health Extension Program

HEW

Health Extension Worker

HP

Health Post

HSDP

Health Sector Development Program

MWTP

Maximum Willingness to Pay

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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Reviewer #1: Access to healthcare is a fundamental human right. Understanding the willingness to pay for cataract surgery and the associated factors are crucial in designing self-sustaining and efficient eyecare programs. I applaud the authors for contributing to the body of evidence.

However, as there was no line number given in the manuscript, sticky-notes were used (by the reviewer) to provide specific comments on the manuscript. It is highly recommended to use line numbers in the next versions. The sticky notes contain comments targeted to specific sentences or wordings; whereas the suggestions shared here are more general in nature. Authors are suggested to first go through the general-comments and then check the sticky-note-comments.

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1. The manuscript (including the abstract) demands massive improvement in writing. Moreover, there are typos and grammatical errors that need to be corrected.

2. WTP are health-state dependent, hence, it depends on the context and techniques applied (e.g. double bounded dichotomous choices) to elicit WTP. Sharing the tool (as supplementary documents) might be a good to option to let the reader understand the WTP estimation techniques applied in this study.

3. Generally outreach-sites are socio-demographically different from the general population. A comparison of socio-demographic characteristics between the sample and general population of North-West-Ethiopia or Ethiopia might provide a better understanding of the sample as-well-as understanding the differences in WTP in general context.

4. The ‘Introduction’ mentions about the mean costs of cataract surgery in Europe and USA. The cost of the surgery varies across the globe. As the study estimates the WTP for cataract surgery in Ethiopia, it would be wise to also state literatures that estimate WTP of other African and Asian countries (similar economies).

5. The ‘Introduction’ ends with a non-justifiable argument (Please check the sticky-note-comment). The manuscript states about the context-dependent WTP, however, it does not state any literature on context or health-state dependencies of estimated WTP. Also, please provide a detailed description of the context (i.e. WTP elicitation approach) in the method section.

6. There are various surgical techniques of cataract surgery (e.g. Small incision cataract surgery, phacoemulsification). For which technique of surgery respondents elicited their WTP for? Did they have full information or any prior knowledge on the surgical procedure(s)?

7. The ‘Study design and setting’ section should focus on the eyecare provided by the hospital. Please provide a summary of the eyecare facilities available in North West Ethiopia. It will help the reader to understand the representativeness of the setting (i.e. hospital) from which respondents were selected.

8. The ‘Study population and sampling technique’ section needs to improve its clarity in describing the sampling technique used for the study. Simple random sampling technique requires selecting subjects from a predetermined sampling frame. If the list of 1336 cataract patients was used as the sampling frame, then at least two things needs to be clarified:

(a) The sampling frame was prepared based on the patients visited the facility from June 10, 2018 to June 17, 2018; were the subjects chosen on a daily basis or based on an aggregated list.

(b) As the program provides free of cost cataract surgery, the subjects interviewed in this study should already have a preconceived estimation about the cost of the treatment; this has a definite impact on the elicited WTP (e.g. only 55 percent respondents elicited a non-zero WTP).

9. The description of bidding procedure given in page 5 needs clarity. How was initial bid (i.e. 1000 ETB) was chosen? A schematic representation of the DBDC experiment would help reader to visualize the context better. Please check the following reference:

[Islam M.N., Engles T., Hossain S., Sarker M., Rabbani A. “Willingness-to-pay for cataract surgeries among patients visiting eye-care facilities in Dhaka.” Applied Health Economics and Health Policy 17, no. 4 (2019): 545-554. DOI: 10.1007/s40258-019-00478-3]

10. About 45 percent respondents were not willing to pay a positive price for the service, how were these responses handled in the analysis? In addition, if some people were not willing to pay, were these people statistically different from those that were willing to pay?

11. The DBDC experiment ends with an interval of WTP. Did you check the interval regression techniques to estimate the associated factors? (If yes) Were the results different with an interval regression model?

12. The average WTP can be estimated using a constant only interval regression model. Although, 45 percent respondents did not elicit a positive WTP, their true WTP might be greater than zero but less than the last bid (750 ETB). In that case counting them as zero (as done in this manuscript) might not be pragmatic. Please check the following reference:

[Islam, M.N., Rabbani, A. & Sarker, M. “Health shock and preference instability: assessing health-state dependency of willingness-to-pay for corrective eyeglasses.” Health Economics Review 9, no. 1 (2019): 32. DOI:10.1186/s13561-019-0249-3]

13. The robustness of the Tobit models can be checked estimating coefficients of both censored and truncated samples as-well-as estimating the OLS coefficients. Please report the results (as supplementary documents). This practice will help the readers understand the robustness of the results obtained by the study.

14. The ‘Participant’s health-related characteristics’ section requires to provide sufficient details of the variables (what and how the measurements were taken; e.g. Systemic illness).

15. The discussion and conclusion need to be improved.

Reviewer #2: Dear Editor,

Thank you for inviting me to review this interesting article on willingness to pay for cataract surgery. The authors have attempted to tackle a very pertinent issue in appropriate pricing of cataract surgery. However, there are some concerns.

The overall standard of academic English is low and one has to struggle to read between the lines to understand the otherwise important information being conveyed. May I suggest the authors seek professional assistance is preparing the grammatical content of the manuscript.

Many of the references are out of date. There are more recent references on the prevalence and causes of blindness, globally.

In the Methods section, the authors state that all patients admitted for cataract surgery at Tebbe Gion Hospital formed the study population, then mentions that the patients were screened for cataract. What was the purpose of the screening?

When was this study conducted?

Several unfamiliar analytical terms are mentioned.

Double Bounded Dichotomous Choice Variant of the Contingent Valuation (CV)

Principal Component Analysis (PCA)

Homoscedasticity of error terms through Breush-pagan for Heterosekedasticity test

The authors should briefly explain what they are and put a reference as this is a broad remit medical journal.

The authors mention visual ability score; an unusual term to assess visual acuity. Standard visual acuity measures are available e.g. Snellens notation or the logMAR.

In summary, I believe the authors have an important message to convey, but this is obfuscated in poor grammar and complex analytical terminology.

Reviewer #3: I found it quite difficult to understand the text because the English is not written in standard syntax and grammar. I strongly suggest that the authors engage the service of a professional English editing service prior to re-review of the manuscript. In addition, the methods and statistics require some more explanation for clarity and ease of understanding by the reader.

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PLoS One. 2021 Mar 24;16(3):e0248618. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0248618.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


22 Jul 2020

Response reviewer

Reviewer 01

Question 1.

The manuscript (including the abstract) demands massive improvement in writing. Moreover, there are typos and grammatical errors that need to be corrected.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for your comments and questions.

We tried to look and revise the whole document based on the given comments.

Question 02

WTP are health-state dependent, hence, it depends on the context and techniques applied (e.g. double bounded dichotomous choices) to elicit WTP. Sharing the tool (as supplementary documents) might be a good to option to let the reader understand the WTP estimation techniques applied in this study.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for your comments and questions.

We tried to include the WTP elicit schematic diagram on page 9.

Question 03

Generally, outreach-sites are socio-demographically different from the general population. A comparison of socio-demographic characteristics between the sample and general population of North-West-Ethiopia or Ethiopia might provide a better understanding of the sample as-well-as understanding the differences in WTP in a general context.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for your comments and questions.

It is rewritten in a way that describes socio-demographic characteristics of the study population and for whom the study would be inferred. Stated in Page 6 as “Campaign Based cross-sectional study was conducted and the site was at Tebebe Gion Specialized Referral Hospital, Bahir Dar city, North West Ethiopia. There are only four Tertiary and general hospitals for about 14 million people in the catchment area, which provide comprehensive eye care services including cataract surgical services in North West Ethiopia. However, all of them are urban-centered and not accessible for more than 80% of the community. Hence, the outreach program was planned for communities where cataract surgical services are not available and for peoples in the disadvantaged area with low socio-economic status in North West Ethiopia. Initially, screening for cataracts was conducted in the nearby rural weredas before the campaign. During the screening, Cataract cases were diagnosed and informed about the condition and scheduled to attend the planned outreach program. Hence, the cases were selected and linked to the campaign from weredas of West Gojjam, South Gondar, and Awi Zone. A total of 1336 cases (628 cases from West Gojjam, 374 cases from South Gondar, 201cases from Awuyi zone, 100 cases from Bahir Dar City, and 33 cases from East Gojjam) were admitted to the outreach Site. Thus more than 93% of cases were from rural weredas and district towns. Therefore, the findings of this study could apply to rural residents admitted for cataract surgery in outreach programs”

Question 04

The ‘Introduction’ mentions the mean costs of cataract surgery in Europe and USA. The cost of the surgery varies across the globe. As the study estimates the WTP for cataract surgery in Ethiopia, it would be wise to also state literatures that estimate WTP of other African and Asian countries (similar economies).

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for the comments and questions.

It is rewritten in pages 4-5 as “Moreover, studies from Africa and South East Asia reported that the actual cost exceeds the community’s willingness to pay for cataract surgery (15-20). Overall, the proportion of WTP in Asia was very discrepant, which was ranged from 34% to 90%. Similarly, the mean amount of money willing to pay was significantly varied from US$ 7 to US$ 968 (17, 19, 21, 22, 26). However, the mean amount of money WTP in Africa was ranged from US$2.3 to US$18.5, which was low as compared to Asian nations (15, 16, 20, 24)

Question 05

The ‘Introduction’ ends with a non-justifiable argument (Please check the sticky-note-comment). The manuscript states about the context-dependent WTP, however, it does not state any literature on context or health-state dependencies of estimated WTP. Also, please provide a detailed description of the context (i.e. WTP elicitation approach) in the method section.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for the comments and questions

It is stated on page 5 as “Even if the knowledge regarding willingness to pay and the actual cost of the surgery is essential, the existed knowledge is not plenty to go through the intervention. Firstly, the existed knowledge in the study area is mainly centered on the proportion of willingness to pay rather than the amount of money (23). Secondly, the factors for the amount of money WTP were not fully addressed with the appropriate analysis model. Thirdly, willingness to pay is highly setting-variant, which mainly varies with socioeconomic status, and study setting. Consequently, it is difficult to apply the research finding done in other corners of the globe for this study area. Therefore, this study aimed to assess the willingness to pay for cataract surgery and associated factors among cataract patients at the outreach site in Northwest Ethiopia’’.

Question 06

There are various surgical techniques of cataract surgery (e.g. Small incision cataract surgery, phacoemulsification). For which technique of surgery respondents elicited their WTP for? Did they have full information or any prior knowledge of the surgical procedure(s)?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for your comments and questions.

It is stated on page 8 as “First, the participants were asked his/her willingness to pay something for the Manual Small incision cataract surgery.” Regarding prior information, they have been informed during screening, which is stated on page 6, as ‘During the screening, Cataract cases were diagnosed and informed about the condition…...”

Question 07

The ‘Study design and setting’ section should focus on the eye care provided by the hospital. Please provide a summary of the eye care facilities available in North West Ethiopia. It will help the reader to understand the representativeness of the setting (i.e. hospital) from which respondents were selected.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for your comments and questions.

It is written on page 6 as an “Outreach- based cross-sectional study was conducted. The campaign site was at Tebebe Gion Specialized Referral Hospital, Bahir Dar city, North West Ethiopia. There are only four Tertiary and general hospitals, for about 14 million people in the catchment area, which provide comprehensive eye care services including cataract surgical services in North West Ethiopia. However, all of them are urban-centered and not accessible for more than 80% of the community. Hence, the outreach program was planned for communities where cataract surgical services are not available and for peoples in disadvantaged areas with low socioeconomic status in North West Ethiopia. Initially, screening for cataracts was conducted in the nearby rural weredas, which are the third-level administrative units in the Ethiopian governance structure, before the campaign. During the screening, Cataract cases were diagnosed and informed about the condition and scheduled to attend the planned outreach program. As a result, a total of 1336 cataract cases were linked and admitted to the campaign from weredas of West Gojjam(628cases), South Gondar (374cases) Awi Zone (201 cases), Bahir Dar City (100 cases) and from East Gojjam (33cases). Thus more than 93% of cases were from rural weredas and district towns. Therefore, the findings of this study could apply to rural residents admitted for cataract surgery in outreach programs.”

Question 08

The ‘Study population and sampling technique’ section need to improve its clarity in describing the sampling technique used for the study. A simple random sampling technique requires selecting subjects from a predetermined sampling frame. If the list of 1336 cataract patients was used as the sampling frame, then at least two things need to be clarified.

1. The sampling frame was prepared based on the patients who visited the facility from June 10, 2018, to June 17, 2018; were the subjects chosen daily or based on an aggregated list.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for the comments and questions.

It is rewritten on page 6 as “Initially, screening for cataracts was conducted in the nearby rural weredas, which are the third-level administrative units in the Ethiopian governance structure, before the campaign. During the screening, Cataract cases were diagnosed and informed about the condition and scheduled to attend the planned outreach program. As a result, a total of 1336 cataract cases were linked and admitted to the campaign from weredas of West Gojjam(628cases), South Gondar (374cases) Awi Zone (201 cases), Bahirdar City (100 cases) and from East Gojjam (33cases).

Thus more than 93% of cases were from rural weredas and district towns. Therefore, the findings of this study could apply to rural residents admitted for cataract surgery in outreach programs.’’

1. As the program provides free of cost cataract surgery, the subjects interviewed in this study should already have a preconceived estimation about the cost of the treatment; this has a definite impact on the elicited WTP (e.g. only 55 percent respondents elicited a non-zero WTP).

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for the comments and questions.

We have developed a case Scenario to minimize information asymmetry regarding cataract surgery and to estimate how beneficiaries value this service rationally. Even if we use the Case scenario to minimize strategic bias, the WTP approach is deemed not free of the afro-mentioned problem. So we have stated it in the limitation section. we have attached the case scenario at the supplementary file with the data collection tool.

Case Scenario

” Introduction: Cataract is clouding of the eyes natural lenses and it is the leading cause of blindness worldwide. This problem can be caused by aging, family history, hypertension, obesity, diabetes mellitus, smoking, significant alcohol consumption, and other courses. To overcome this problem cataract surgery is the only treatment option. This outreach program which is designed for cataract surgery is funded by foreign donors and aims to fight blindness due to cataract by assuring accessibility and equity of the services for people living in districts. You are getting these services by now free of charge, but this is because of the cost is covered by funding organizations. However, in the future, this service will no longer be funded and sustainable.

Benefits of cataract surgery:

The cataract surgery helps to improve vision, prevent avoidable blindness, increasing productivity, and improve quality of life. As we have said before to make the service sustainable and accessible, designing a cost-recovery model is very important.

Question 09

The description of the bidding procedure given on page 5 needs clarity. How was the initial bid (i.e. 1000 ETB) was chosen? A schematic representation of the DBDC experiment would help the reader to visualize the context better

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for your comments and questions.

The biding experiment is put on page 9 now. It is clarified again as follows on page 8, as “The starting price for the biding game was estimated from the actual cost of manual small incision cataract surgery per eye, which was 2824 ETB from a study done in Southern Ethiopia in 2010 (34). In the Ethiopian context, the average household out pocket expenditure from the total health financing is about 35%. Based on this rate, the starting price that we expected to be paid was 1000 Birr (0.35x2824birr). During eliciting, the participants were asked their willingness to pay something for the Manual Small incision cataract surgery initially. If the participant was willing to pay, he/she was asked WTP for the target price (ETB 1000 per eye).’’

Question 10

About 45 percent of respondents were not willing to pay a positive price for the service, how were these responses handled in the analysis? Besides, if some people were not willing to pay, were these people statistically different from those that were willing to pay?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for the comments and questions.

To handle those participants who are not willing to accept to pay any price for the cataract surgery, Tobit regression econometric model was used. This model also considered as censored regression model used to estimate the parameters of how explanatory variables affect the latent dependent variable. So, 45 % of participants who are considered as censored for the lower limit were included in the model with an analysis of the Tobit regression model.

Question 11

The DBDC experiment ends with an interval of WTP. Did you check the interval regression techniques to estimate the associated factors? (If yes) Were the results different from an interval regression model?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for the comments and questions.

We are using the Contingent valuation method with a bidding game elicitation approach to explore the participants’ maximum willingness to pay for cataract surgery. The participants were asked as biding up or down based on their responses to the preceding price. The end question given for the participants was not Yes/No, rather an open question about their maximum willingness to pay. So, the final response for all participants who are willing to pay any positive price for cataract surgery was open continues price, not kind of Yes/No answer for the stated price. We only use those sated prices to elicit and manage the biding game to get the maximum value participants will give for the service. Due to this, we didn’t run the interval regression to identify associated factors.

Question 12

The average WTP can be estimated using a constant only interval regression model. Although, 45 percent respondents did not elicit a positive WTP, their true WTP might be greater than zero but less than the last bid (750 ETB). In that case counting them as zero (as done in this manuscript) might not be pragmatic

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for the comments and questions.

After presenting the scenario the initial question raised for the participants was as they willing to accept some price for the cataract surgery or not. So, those who were not willing any amount of payment for the cataract surgery (around 45% of the participants) waived the next biding game which was used to explore the maximum amount of price they want to pay for the service. The biding game approach was only applied to those participants (55%) who were willing or volunteer to pay some price for the service. Those participants who were not willing to pay any positive price were considered as a censored sample.

Question 13

The robustness of the Tobit models can be checked estimating coefficients of both censored and truncated samples as-well-as estimating the OLS coefficients. Please report the results (as supplementary documents). This practice will help the readers understand the robustness of the results obtained by the study.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for the comments and questions.

We have estimated the coefficients using the censored (Tobit) regression model, truncated regression model, and using the OLS model and attached as a supplementary file.

Question 14

The ‘Participant’s health-related characteristics’ section requires to provide sufficient details of the variables (what and how the measurements were taken; e.g. Systemic illness).

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for the comments and questions.

The respondents were asked about their self-reported systemic illness.

Question 15

The discussion and conclusion need to be improved.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for your comments and questions.

We tried to revise and rewrite the discussion and the conclusion.

Reviewer 02

Question 01

The overall standard of academic English is low and one has to struggle to read between the lines to understand the otherwise important information being conveyed. May I suggest the authors seek professional assistance is preparing the grammatical content of the manuscript.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for your comments and questions.

We have revised the manuscript both grammatically and content-wise.

Question 02

Many of the references are out of date. There are more recent references on the prevalence and causes of blindness, globally.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for your comments and questions

We have revised the references in the main document

Question 03

In the Methods section, the authors state that all patients admitted for cataract surgery at Tebbe Gion Hospital formed the study population, then mentions that the patients were screened for cataract. What was the purpose of the screening? When was this study conducted?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for your comments and questions.

Dear reviewer thanks for the comments. We have put detailed information on how and why cataract pre-screening was done and when was the study conducted on pages 6 and 7. We put it as follows.

“An Outreach- based cross-sectional study was conducted. The campaign site was at Tebebe Gion Specialized Referral Hospital, Bahirdar city, North West Ethiopia. There are only four Tertiary and general hospitals, for about 14 million people in the catchment area, which provide comprehensive eye care services including cataract surgical services in North West Ethiopia. However, all of them are urban-centered and not accessible for more than 80% of the community. Hence, the outreach program was planned for communities where cataract surgical services are not available and for peoples in disadvantaged areas with low socioeconomic status in North West Ethiopia. Initially, screening for cataracts was conducted in the nearby rural weredas, which are the third-level administrative units in the Ethiopian governance structure, before the campaign. During the screening, Cataract cases were diagnosed and informed about the condition and scheduled to attend the planned outreach program. As a result, a total of 1336 cataract cases were linked and admitted to the campaign from weredas of West Gojjam(628cases), South Gondar (374cases) Awi Zone (201 cases) Bahirdar (100 cases) and from East Gojjam (33cases). Thus more than 93% of cases were from rural weredas and district towns. Therefore, the findings of this study could apply to rural residents admitted for cataract surgery in outreach programs.’’

Question 04

Several unfamiliar analytical terms are mentioned.

Double Bounded Dichotomous Choice Variant of the Contingent Valuation (CV)

Principal Component Analysis (PCA)

Homoscedasticity of error terms through Breush-pagan for Heterosekedasticity test

The authors should briefly explain what they are and put a reference as this is a broad remit medical journal

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for your comments and questions.

We have explained these terms in the main document method part and we have also included the reference.

Question 05

We didn’t measure visual acuity rather Visual ability which is the overall visual performance including visual acuity, color vison, contrast sensitivity, and visual field. So, the visual ability was measured using modified VF-14 tool, not Snellen’s notation or the log MAR.

Reviewer 03

Question 01

I found it quite difficult to understand the text because English is not written in standard syntax and grammar. I strongly suggest that the authors engage the service of a professional English editing service before re-review of the manuscript

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for your comments and questions

We have revised the manuscript both content-wise and grammatically.

Question 02

Besides, the methods and statistics require some more explanation for clarity and ease of understanding by the reader.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer thanks for your comments and questions.

We explain those terms like WTP, CV method, Bidding game elicitation approach, and Tobit regression econometric model at the method section.

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21 Aug 2020

PONE-D-19-31270R1

Willingness to Pay for Cataract Surgery and Associated Factors among Cataract Patients in Outreach Site, North West Ethiopia

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Title: Willingness to pay for cataract surgery and associated factors among cataract patients in outreach site, North West Ethiopia

I thank the editor for the opportunity to review the manuscript once again. I also appreciate the authors’ for the efforts given to revise the manuscript according to the suggestions shared. However, there are a few important issues that require additional revisions or clarifications. The suggestions are as follows:

In reply to the authors’ response to the Reviewer #1-Comment #1:

The schematic description can provide a summarized picture of the bidding, however, it will not help the reader to replicate the experiment precisely in a similar manner. Including the tool as a supplementary document will provide the chance to the reader to understand what information was given to the respondents before and while eliciting WTP. Also, it would help the reader to design a similar questionnaire/tool for their experiments.

In reply to the authors’ response to the Reviewer #1-Comment #5:

In the previous review, the author was suggested to shed some light on the health-state dependency of the WTP and discuss how that would affect the results of their study. Looking at the available literature in this context would have been an appreciable initiative. However, the current version of the manuscript neither properly discussed nor provided any reference on their statements made in this context. There are researches that provide theoretical background as-well-as empirical evidences that WTP is health-state dependent. I would request the author to re-address comment #5.

In reply to the authors’ response to the Reviewer #1-Comment #9:

The schematic description of the DBDC experiment (shown on page 9) does not contain the percentage of respondents on each of the decision nodes and the interval they ended up before answering the maximum WTP and the average maximum WTP for different paths taken. It would provide the reader with a summary of the bidding experiment and would help understand whether the prices used for the experiment were reasonable or there were too many censored observations at any particular price points. I would strongly recommend the authors consider adding the information on the diagram shown on page 9.

Moreover, the statement made in lines 147-148 of page 8 needs a proper reference. Can you please add any literature that provides a background of this 35 percent out of pocket health expenditure as a proportion of the total healthcare spending of Ethiopia?

In reply to the authors’ response to the Reviewer #1-Comment #12:

The authors mentioned that 45 percent of the respondents who did not elicit any positive WTP were excluded from the further bidding experiments. There are three issues that need to be addressed:

1. The current schematic description (shown on page 9) does not include the initial question regarding the positive WTP. Please revise it accordingly.

2. If 45 percent of the respondents are not willing to pay any positive price, then, are there any systematic differences in their sociodemographic and/or health-related characteristics? Please provide both pooled and separated descriptive statistics in Table 1 and 2. Also, test the statistical significance of the differences by conducting either bivariate analyses or test a multivariable selection model for the two groups (i.e. =1 if positive WTP, 0 otherwise).

3. As these 45 percent of the respondents did not participate in the second phase of the bidding game, the Tobit model should also be estimated for both pooled and samples with only positive WTP. The authors have already estimated the models while addressing Comment #13. However, authors may consider showing and discussing them with the main results instead of just keeping in the appendix.

General suggestions:

The regression table shared as the supplementary document does not contain all the necessary information required to assess the robustness of the results. Please provide at least the standard errors and indications of statistical significance for all the models estimated.

There are a few minor grammatical errors and typos that require correction (e.g. see lines 21-23 on page 2). There are a few technical errors too that demand authors’ attention (e.g. lines 28-29 on page 2; simple random sampling).

If possible, please use an equation writing tool (such as equation writer in MS Word) and convert the lines 230-231 into an equation.

The data needs additional clarifications and missing the original variables. Standard practice should be to share the cleaned data according to the questionnaire/tools shared. Moreover, the MWTP data contains decimal characters; are these original MWTP or convert figures?

Reviewer #2: This is a very important topic and the authors should be congratulated on carrying out this research. However, there are several concerns that have not been addressed.

Technical Issues

1. Many of the references are out of date. There is more recent data on the prevalence and causes of global blindness and visual impairment. Flaxman et al 2017, Bourne et al 2017

2. Several statements in the introduction are non- factual.

E.g. Cataract accounts for a third of all global blindness, not 51% as you stated.

Universal Eye Health from the World Health Organization's (WHO) Global Action Plan for eye health was launched in 2013, yet you provide references from 2001 and 2011.

3.. Visual acuity as classified by the WHO International classification of disease is the most common descriptor for assessing vision. You insist on using visual ability. The references you quote for visual ability are silent on this terminology.16, 18, 20-22, 24-27

Grammatical issues.

4. Incorrect grammar and syntax through out the article.

Reviewer #3: I appreciate the fact that the authors have made concerted efforts to improve the quality of the manuscript. However, I still had considerable difficulty with understanding the text and deciphering the message that the authors want to communicate to the reader. I do understand that English is not the first language of the authors but in order to ensure effective communication, the manuscript must be intelligible. Therefore, I wish to repeat my suggestion that the authors engage the service of a professional English editing service before re-review of the manuscript.

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PLoS One. 2021 Mar 24;16(3):e0248618. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0248618.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


28 Sep 2020

Response reviewers

Reviewer 1

Issues raised by the reviewer on comment #1

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions.

We have revised the manuscript as per the comment, and we have added the bidding approach tool we used as a supplementary file.

Issues raised by the reviewer on comment #5

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions.

We have revised the main manuscript on page 5 from line 75 to 78. We have included the health state dependant nature of WTP.

Issues raised by the reviewer on comment #9

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions.

We have revised the main manuscript as per the given comment. We have analyzed the percentage of respondents at each node and stated in the main document on page 9.

We have also included the reference in the main manuscript for the issue raised on page 8.

Issues raised by the reviewer on comment #12

1. The current schematic description (shown on page 9) does not include the initial question regarding the positive WTP. Please revise it accordingly.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions.

We have revised the main manuscript accordingly, as per the comment on page 8.

2. If 45 percent of the respondents are not willing to pay any positive price, then are there any systematic differences in their sociodemographic and/or health-related characteristics? Please provide both pooled and separated descriptive statistics in Table 1 and 2. Also, test the statistical significance of the differences by conducting either bivariate analyses or test a multivariable selection model for the two groups (i.e. =1 if positive WTP, 0 otherwise).

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions.

We have revised the main manuscript, and we present the pooled and separated descriptive statistics on table 1 and table 2. We have also run the logistic regression for WTP (1 = willing to pay and 0 = otherwise), and we have presented the finding in the main manuscript as table 3.

3. As these 45 percent of the respondents did not participate in the second phase of the bidding game, the Tobit model should also be estimated for both pooled and samples with only positive WTP. The authors have already estimated the models while addressing Comment #13. However, authors may consider showing and discussing them with the main results instead of just keeping in the appendix.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions.

We have revised the table and included in the main manuscript as table 5.

For 1eneral suggestions raised by the reviewer

1. The regression table shared as the supplementary document does not contain all the necessary information required to assess the robustness of the results. Please provide at least the standard errors and indications of statistical significance for all the models estimated.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions.

We have provided the standard error and p-value for the regression table and presented as table 5 in the main manuscript.

2. There are a few minor grammatical errors and typos that require correction (e.g., see lines 21-23 on page 2). There are a few technical errors that demand authors’ attention (e.g., lines 28-29 on page 2; simple random sampling).

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions.

We have revised the manuscript as per the comment.

3. If possible, please use an equation writing tool (such as equation writer in MS Word) and convert the lines 230-231 into an equation.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions.

We have revised it and used the equation writing tool

4. The data needs additional clarifications and missing the original variables. Standard practice should be to share the cleaned data according to the questionnaire/tools shared. Moreover, the MWTP data contains decimal characters; are this original MWTP or convert figures?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions.

The MWTP is the converted one since initially, the MWTP was collected in Ethiopian Birr (ETB) and converted to USD for reporting and analysis. We have included the variables used for analysis in the main data, and the wealth index variable is computed from data collected from household assets by PCA.

Reviewer 2

Question 1

1. Many of the references are out of date. There are more recent data on the prevalence and causes of global blindness and visual impairment. Flaxman et al 2017, Bourne et al 2017

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions.

We have revised the main manuscript as per the given comment.

2. Several statements in the introduction are non- factual.

E.g., Cataract accounts for a third of all global blindness, not 51%, as you stated.

Universal Eye Health from the World Health Organization’s (WHO) Global Action Plan for eye health was launched in 2013, yet you provide references from 2001 and 2011.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions.

We have revised the main manuscript as per the given comment on page 4, lines 49 to 51.

3. Visual acuity, as classified by the WHO International classification of disease, is the most common descriptor for assessing vision. You insist on using a visual ability. The references you quote for visual ability are silent on this terminology.16, 18, 20-22, 24-27

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions.

We were considering to measure overall visual function with visual ability, which includes visual acuity as one component. As you stated, most literature used visual acuity to measure visual function. Visual acuity and visual ability have scope differences in which visual acuity is more specific, and visual ability is a general one. We want to acknowledge the comment you give us, and we appreciate the difference between visual ability and visual acuity. We use the references used for visual acuity because of both visual acuity, and visual ability reflects the visual function of the participants. We admit the comment you gave us, and if necessary, we can mention this in the limitation section.

4. Incorrect grammar and syntax throughout the article.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments.

We tried to revise and edit the grammar of the main manuscript accordingly.

Reviewer 3

Incorrect grammar and language

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments.

We tried to revise and edit the grammar of the main manuscript accordingly.

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Decision Letter 2

Janhavi Ajit Vaingankar

11 Nov 2020

PONE-D-19-31270R2

Willingness to Pay for Cataract Surgery and Associated Factors among Cataract Patients in Outreach Site, North West Ethiopia

PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

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Reviewer #2: No

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: I Don't Know

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Reviewer #1: I thank the editor for the opportunity to review the manuscript for the third time. I also appreciate the authors’ for the efforts given to revise the manuscript according to the suggestions shared. However, there are a few inconsistencies that need to be corrected. My comments are as follows:

1. Please mention the dates of data collection also in the main body.

2. The exchange rate used for the survey is the one of 2018. However, the world bank data the manuscript refers to in line no. 149 on page 8 is of the year 2009 (see reference no. 43). Moreover, the manuscript mentions that the out of pocket health expenditure is 35 percent of the total health expenditure in Ethiopia. Whereas, the report it refers to in reference no. 43 shows that it is 37 percent for Ethiopia. Authors should be very transparent and careful about the methodologies used and the methodologies described in the manuscript.

3. Line no. 152-154 mentions that the respondents were asked – “Are you willing to pay some positive price for cataract surgery?”, however, the questionnaire attached as a supplementary file states that, “by considering the above scenario, if the service is vailing for you, are you willing to pay something for this service”. Although, the sentences provide the same understanding of the question, there should not be any inconsistencies between what is written in the manuscript and what was actually asked. If the author wants to describe this as part of the methodology they applied; then, the exact question need not to be mentioned. This could be written differently, such as, “After briefing the case scenario, all the participants were asked whether they are willing to pay any positive price for the proposed cataract surgery”.

4. The intervals are not correctly specified in the schematic diagram. If anyone is not willing to pay 500 ETB, then the interval they fall into is 0 to <500 ETB. They intervals should be fixed by the experiment-design, not the average maximum WTP.

5. The dataset still does not contain the bidding experiment data. Sharing partial dataset will not help serving the right purpose of data-sharing.

Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed some of my comments. The main concern I had and still have is about the visual ability measurement. This is not a regular term and the authors have not defined it or explained how it was assessed. The crux of the paper is the relationship between visual ability and WTP, so this is a major flaw which the authors have not addressed. Visual acuity is usually used for WTP research. The references provided about visual ability refer to visual acuity.

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PLoS One. 2021 Mar 24;16(3):e0248618. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0248618.r006

Author response to Decision Letter 2


5 Dec 2020

Reviewer 1 comments and questions: -

1. Please mention the dates of data collection also in the main body.

Author response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions

We have revised the manuscript as per the given comment. Please see page 7 and line 136 of the revised manuscript.

2. The exchange rate used for the survey is the one of 2018. However, the world bank data the manuscript refers to in line no. 149 on page 8 is of the year 2009 (see reference no. 43). Moreover, the manuscript mentions that the out of pocket health expenditure is 35 percent of the total health expenditure in Ethiopia. Whereas, the report it refers to in reference no. 43 shows that it is 37 percent for Ethiopia. Authors should be very transparent and careful about the methodologies used and the methodologies described in the manuscript.

Author response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions

We have revised the reference, and we have removed the previous reference, and we have added the world bank group 2017 report of Ethiopia and Sub-Saharan African countries. Please see page 8 and lines 148 to 150 of the revised manuscript.

3. Line no. 152-154 mentions that the respondents were asked – “Are you willing to pay some positive price for cataract surgery?”, however, the questionnaire attached as a supplementary file states that, “by considering the above scenario, if the service is vailing for you, are you willing to pay something for this service”. Although, the sentences provide the same understanding of the question, there should not be any inconsistencies between what is written in the manuscript and what was actually asked. If the author wants to describe this as part of the methodology they applied; then, the exact question need not to be mentioned. This could be written differently, such as, “After briefing the case scenario, all the participants were asked whether they are willing to pay any positive price for the proposed cataract surgery”.

Author response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions

We have reviewed it, and we have made it consistent have was written on the methodology and the tool part.

4. The intervals are not correctly specified in the schematic diagram. If anyone is not willing to pay 500 ETB, then the interval they fall into is 0 to <500 ETB. The intervals should be fixed by the experiment-design, not the average maximum WTP.

Author response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions.

We tried to revise the intervals in each experimental design. Please see page 9 figure of the revised manuscript.

5. The dataset still does not contain the bidding experiment data. Sharing partial dataset will not help serving the right purpose of data-sharing.

Author response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions

We have included the biding experiment data in the revised data set. Please see the revised data set.

Reviewer 2 comments and questions: -

1. The authors have addressed some of my comments. The main concern I had and still have is about the visual ability measurement. This is not a regular term and the authors have not defined it or explained how it was assessed. The crux of the paper is the relationship between visual ability and WTP, so this is a major flaw which the authors have not addressed. Visual acuity is usually used for WTP research. The references provided about visual ability refer to visual acuity.

Authors response

Dear reviewer, thanks for your comments and questions

We have accepted your comments, and we measured pre-operative visual ability by using the Visual Function 14 Index (VF-14) tool. The response option was prepared with Likert’s scale format. The scale ranged from the 0-4 value for the degree of visual difficulties ‘unable to do’ (scale 0), ‘great difficulty’ (scale1), ‘moderate difficulty’ (scale 2), ‘little difficulty’ (scale 3) and ‘no difficulty’ (scale 4). Then each scale is multiplied by 25. So, the value of each response ranges from 0-100. After that, the factored amounts were summed up. Finally, VF index was computed by dividing the summed factored amounts to the number of checked boxes. Visual ability was categorized as normal or near-normal performance (≥50 visual ability score) and restricted performance (<50 visual ability score) based on the international council of Ophthalmology visual ability classification. We have included this in the method section on page 10 and lines 180 to 189 of the revised manuscript.

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Decision Letter 3

Janhavi Ajit Vaingankar

6 Jan 2021

PONE-D-19-31270R3

Willingness to Pay for Cataract Surgery and Associated Factors among Cataract Patients in Outreach Site, North West Ethiopia

PLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Amare,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 20 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

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We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

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Reviewer #2: Partly

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: I Don't Know

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Thank you for considering the suggestions and making all the efforts in revising accordingly. I also thank the editor for sharing such an interesting work. Best wishes.

Reviewer #2: Some of my previous comments have been addressed. However, there are still a few concerns.

1. The quality of the grammar and syntax is not of academic standard and may require the services of a professional to bring it up to the required standard.

2. The authors have explained their methods for calculating visual ability. However, they should include references for the calculation and examples of where this has been used in ophthalmic literature. Visual ability is not a term commonly used in ophthalmic literature and the thesis of this manuscript is the relationship between visual ability and willingness to pay.

3. There are a few statements that are not factually correct. The opening sentence states that cataract is the second commonest cause of blindness worldwide; Cataract is the commonest cause of blindness globally. Refractive error is the commonest cause of visual impairment globally.

4. Cataract surgical coverage and Cataract Surgical rate are two different indicators for assessing the quantity of cataract surgery.

5. In sum therefore, I believe that this article has some merit, but a lot of work still needs to be done.

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Reviewer #2: Yes: Ada Aghaji

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Author response to Decision Letter 3


3 Feb 2021

Response to Reviewers

Reviewer 2 comments and questions: -

Some of my previous comments have been addressed. However, there are still a few concerns.

1. The quality of the grammar and syntax is not of academic standard and may require the services of a professional to bring it up to the required standard.

Author Response

Dear reviewer thank you for your comments and questions. We have revised the English language of the manuscript by the professional language editor. Please see the whole revise manuscript.

2. The authors have explained their methods for calculating visual ability. However, they should include references for the calculation and examples of where this has been used in ophthalmic literature. Visual ability is not a term commonly used in ophthalmic literature and the thesis of this manuscript is the relationship between visual ability and willingness to pay.

Author Response

Dear reviewer thank you for your comments and questions. The function of the visual system can be measured either objectively or subjectively. Visual acuity measurement is one of the objective indicators of the visual system functionality. However, it does not indicate the overall visual performance of an individual. Hence, we used the subjective measurement, the visual function/visual ability, to assess the overall visual performance. Hence it was measured by using adapted Visual Function 14 Index (VF-14) tool. Previously, numerous researchers used the tool as a standard. However, based on the socio-economic and cultural perspective of their study population, the tool was adapted. The response option was prepared with 5-point Likert’s scale format. The scale ranged from the 0-4 value for the degree of visual difficulties ‘unable to do’ (scale 0), ‘great difficulty’ (scale1), ‘moderate difficulty’ (scale 2), ‘little difficulty’ (scale 3) and ‘no difficulty’ (scale 4). Then each scale was multiplied by 25. So, the value of each response ranges from 0-100. After that, the factored amounts were summed up. Finally, VF index was computed by dividing the summed factored amounts to the number of checked boxes and the visual ability were categorized.

The calculation is elaborated across the studies, and the final classification is based on the International Council of Ophthalmology as normal or near-normal performance(≥50 visual ability score) and restricted performance(<50 visual ability score). We have included references in the revised manuscript at page

3. There are a few statements that are not factually correct. The opening sentence states that cataract is the second commonest cause of blindness worldwide; Cataract is the commonest cause of blindness globally. Refractive error is the commonest cause of visual impairment globally.

Author Response

Dear reviewer thank you for your comments and questions

4. Cataract surgical coverage and Cataract Surgical rate are two different indicators for assessing the quantity of cataract surgery

Author Response

Dear reviewer thank you for your comments and questions. We have revised the manuscript based o the raised issue. Please see page 4 from lines 51 to 53 of the revised manuscript.

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Decision Letter 4

Janhavi Ajit Vaingankar

3 Mar 2021

Willingness to Pay for Cataract Surgery and Associated Factors among Cataract Patients in Outreach Site, North West Ethiopia

PONE-D-19-31270R4

Dear Dr. Amare,

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Janhavi Ajit Vaingankar

11 Mar 2021

PONE-D-19-31270R4

Willingness to Pay for Cataract Surgery and Associated Factors among Cataract Patients in Outreach Site, North West Ethiopia

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