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. 2021 Apr 14;16(4):e0249488. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0249488

Atmospheric modelling of grass pollen rupturing mechanisms for thunderstorm asthma prediction

Kathryn M Emmerson 1,*, Jeremy D Silver 2, Marcus Thatcher 1, Alan Wain 3, Penelope J Jones 4, Andrew Dowdy 3, Edward J Newbigin 5, Beau W Picking 5, Jason Choi 6, Elizabeth Ebert 3, Tony Bannister 3
Editor: Chon-Lin Lee7
PMCID: PMC8046208  PMID: 33852572

Abstract

The world’s most severe thunderstorm asthma event occurred in Melbourne, Australia on 21 November 2016, coinciding with the peak of the grass pollen season. The aetiological role of thunderstorms in these events is thought to cause pollen to rupture in high humidity conditions, releasing large numbers of sub-pollen particles (SPPs) with sizes very easily inhaled deep into the lungs. The humidity hypothesis was implemented into a three-dimensional atmospheric model and driven by inputs from three meteorological models. However, the mechanism could not explain how the Melbourne event occurred as relative humidity was very low throughout the atmosphere, and most available grass pollen remained within 40 m of the surface. Our tests showed humidity induced rupturing occurred frequently at other times and would likely lead to recurrent false alarms if used in a predictive capacity. We used the model to investigate a range of other possible pollen rupturing mechanisms which could have produced high concentrations of SPPs in the atmosphere during the storm. The mechanisms studied involve mechanical friction from wind gusts, electrical build up and discharge incurred during conditions of low relative humidity, and lightning strikes. Our results suggest that these mechanisms likely operated in tandem with one another, but the lightning method was the only mechanism to generate a pattern in SPPs following the path of the storm. If humidity induced rupturing cannot explain the 2016 Melbourne event, then new targeted laboratory studies of alternative pollen rupture mechanisms would be of considerable value to help constrain the parameterisation of the pollen rupturing process.

1. Introduction

Thunderstorm asthma (TA) is a phenomenon characterised by a sudden increase in presentations of acute allergic asthma patients following a thunderstorm [1]. Although the mechanisms are not precisely understood, TA is thought to be caused by exposure to airborne allergenic particles such as fungal spores and pollen grains concentrated in thunderstorm downdrafts [24].

Grass pollen is one of the primary causes of hayfever in humans and is known to exacerbate asthma symptoms [57]. Whilst whole pollen concentrations correlate well with hayfever symptoms [8,9], whole pollen is too large to penetrate deep into the airways and cause TA. However, under certain conditions pollen can rupture, releasing sub-pollen particles (SPPs), which are sub-micron in diameter and capable of travelling beyond the pharynx into the small airways. SPPs have been shown to carry allergenic proteins [10,11]. It is not fully understood what causes whole pollen to rupture, but hypotheses range from ageing (fragility), mechanical friction, lightning activity within thunderstorm clouds and water-induced swelling [12,13]. The SPPs are then concentrated and transported to ground level, for example by cold down-drafts or outflows from a thunderstorm (Fig 1).

Fig 1. Schematic of hypothesised pollen entrainment into a thunder cloud, rupturing and deposition mechanisms/processes.

Fig 1

After Taylor and Jonsson [13].

Production of SPPs via humidity induced rupturing is the most cited mechanism for causing TA. Laboratory experiments have shown pollen rupturing after submersion in water [14,15], releasing around 700 SPPs per whole grass pollen grain [16]. There is also evidence of Bermuda grass pollen rupturing in water after application of an electrical current [17], and rupturing of birch pollen after being humified for 5 hours and air dried [11]. Hughes et al. [18] were the first to determine SPPs under high rainfall conditions using single-particle fluorescence spectroscopy coincident with measurements of pollen markers such as fructose.

The world’s most severe incidence of TA occurred on 21 November 2016 in Melbourne, Australia coinciding with the peak in the grass pollen season [19]. Dry storms with an associated gust front swept eastwards through Melbourne at 17:30 local time (06:30 UTC), when many people were outdoors. The 2016 Melbourne event was preceded by very hot dry weather (maximum temperature of 34°C), with strong north-westerly winds capable of transporting grass pollen and dust from surrounding agricultural regions to populated areas. Scant rainfall fell after the gust front passed through, with up to 4 mm west of Melbourne and up to 2 mm in the east [20]. Grundstein et al’s. [21] analysis of downdraft convective available potential energy over Melbourne was strongly suggestive of downdraft activity. The line of easterly moving storms that developed on 21 November meant that the strongest downdraft outflow pushed forwards in an easterly direction.

Large volumes of calls to the emergency services reporting severe breathing difficulties started occurring from 07:00 UTC after the storm front passed, suggesting that exposure to allergenic particles borne by the storm occurred immediately [19]. During that night, there was a 672% increase in patients arriving at emergency departments with respiratory problems [20], eventuating in 10 fatalities. The Melbourne event was extremely challenging to health service providers due to the sudden and unforeseen influx of large numbers of patients. One of the challenges in preparing for such episodes is their relative rarity; whilst south-eastern Australia and Melbourne in particular have the highest frequency of TA episodes globally [12], Silver et al. [22] estimate TA occurs in Melbourne approximately only once every five years.

The Victorian Grass Pollen Emission Module (VGPEM) [23] was developed to predict the risk of TA occurring as part of the Australian Bureau of Meteorology’s pilot forecasting system [24]. VGPEM is based on the aerodynamic properties (diameter and density) of ryegrass pollen (Lollium perenne). Ryegrass is an important pasture grass grown in large regions of western Victoria [25], and has very strong proven allergenic properties [26]. Ryegrass flowers in the austral spring, releasing pollen with a diameter of 30–40 μm. Prior to the 2016 pollen season, a wetter than average winter contributed to the vigorous growth of ryegrass [20], leading to a prediction that the season ahead would be problematic for sufferers [27]. During the 2017 grass pollen season in Victoria (October to December) VGPEM predicted the correct grass pollen category [28] on average 69% of the time across eight sites in the newly set-up Victorian Thunderstorm Asthma Pollen Surveillance (VicTAPS) network.

To date, the role of humidity induced grass pollen rupturing in TA has not been explored via atmospheric modelling studies. In this paper, we further develop VGPEM to test humidity induced pollen rupturing as a mechanism for the 2016 Melbourne event. We also use the model to test several alternative meteorological-driven mechanisms able to produce SPPs in the Melbourne atmosphere at the time of the storm, using inputs from three different meteorological models. We also investigate whether a dust parameterisation can produce a correctly timed increase in particulate matter, which provides confidence in the meteorological modelling.

2. Methods

2.1 Observations of pollen

For the purposes of this study, we obtained hourly average grass pollen observations using standard methods for a 34-hour period beginning on 20 November at 04:30 UTC and ending on 21 November at 13:30 UTC. The grass pollen measurements derive from a Hirst-type pollen trap (Burkard Manufacturing) situated on a roof-top at Melbourne University (144.965°E -37.797°N, 43 m elevation). Pollen is collected on slides coated with Sylgard adhesive, then prepared with Calberla’s stain to make observation easier and counted using light microscopy. The number of whole grass pollen and broken or empty pollen grains (called pollen ‘shells’ hereafter) was assessed across each hourly transect. We could not distinguish with confidence the taxa of these pollen shells; thus a total count is presented. Usual practice is to count pollen across 24-hour transects, as the process is manually demanding; for this study we counted vertical transects to obtain hourly measurements around the 21 November event, with pollen counts converted into grains m-3 (S1 Table in S1 File). 24-hour pollen counts on either side of 21 November were too low to consider hourly subdivision (S2 Table in S1 File). The respirable SPPs are too small to impact on the volumetric spore sampler and are not detectable with standard light microscopy procedures.

2.2 The Victorian Grass Pollen Emissions Model

The Victorian Grass Pollen Emissions Module (VGPEM1.0) treats whole pollen as 35 μm diameter particles with a density of 1000 kg m-3 [23]. The model uses the satellite derived Enhanced Vegetation Index product to estimate the seasonal variation in grass pollen emissions, together with hourly meteorological inputs for the shorter-term variations. High temperatures and low relative humidity (RH) promote pollen emission. The horizontal resolution of VGPEM is 3 km across Victoria, using 306 x 306 grid cells. The temporal resolution is hourly, time-stamped at the beginning of the hour.

VGPEM is an emissions module inside the CSIRO Chemical Transport Model (C-CTM) [29], which provides the atmospheric dispersion and deposition capabilities. In this work we drive the C-CTM with meteorological forecasts from three different weather models to gain an ensemble view representing uncertainty in the meteorological conditions. The first model is the numerical weather prediction version of the Australian Community Climate and Earth System Simulator (ACCESS) [30]. The ACCESS domain used here is nested within a global ACCESS run and does not require separate boundary conditions. The second model is the Conformal Cubic Atmospheric Model (CCAM) [31] using boundary conditions from ERA-Interim [32]. The third model version 4.1.1 of the Weather Research and Forecasting model (WRF) [33] using boundary conditions from National Centers for Environmental Prediction Final reanalyses (NCEP FNL) [34]. Details of the meteorological models used are given in S3 Table in S1 File. CCAM and WRF meteorological capabilities were evaluated across south east Australia and found to reproduce temperatures and local scale meteorological features well, with wind speeds and water vapour mixing ratios within benchmark ranges [35].

The C-CTM has previously been used with both ACCESS and CCAM and has an interface designed for both inputs. The vertical dimensions of ACCESS and CCAM are structured differently; ACCESS uses hybrid model levels (to 29 km on 67 levels), whilst CCAM is output on pressure levels (to 2.2 hPa on 35 levels). WRF is not interfaced with the C-CTM but is similarly structured on pressure levels like CCAM and was therefore reformatted to be used with the CCAM input interface. The C-CTM resolves to 11 km for ACCESS and 444 hPa in CCAM/WRF (~6 km). For consistency, data are stored for all models to a height of ~5 km.

In this paper we refer to the meteorological results from each of the driving models by their names, e.g. ACCESS, CCAM and WRF. The different results of whole pollen, pollen shells and SPPs predicted by the C-CTM and driven by each of these meteorological models will be referred to as ACCESSC-CTM, CCAMC-CTM and WRFC-CTM.

2.3 In-atmosphere humidity induced grass pollen rupturing process

We represent grass pollen rupturing following the theoretical approach of Wozniak et al. [36]. They describe in-atmosphere rupturing, which takes place using an 80% RH threshold. Wozniak et al. [36] treat this rupturing mechanism as an emission, whereas in this work we treat the in-atmosphere rupturing as an instantaneous process depending on the concentration of whole grass pollen grains present in any grid cell (g m-3). Note here that the C-CTM carries pollen in the model as a mass concentration of aerosol, which is converted to grains m-3 using the mass of one ryegrass pollen grain, mpol = 22.4 × 10−9 g derived in Emmerson et al. [23]. Once the pollen concentration is converted to grains m-3, χ, we calculate the number of whole grass pollen grains ruptured, Nrupt (grains m-3) if at least one pollen grain per m3 is present (1 grain m-3 = 0.0224 μg m-3) and when the RH reaches 80% at any model grid cell in space and time:

Nrupt=Frupt×χ, (1)

where Frupt is the fraction of whole grass pollen grains that rupture (= 0.7), based on the fraction of ryegrass pollen grains that rupture in water after 5 minutes [15]. Frupt is the same for all simulations in the absence of literature on other rates of ryegrass pollen rupturing. We assume that 1 empty shell is produced per whole pollen grain. Using Nrupt we calculate the number of SPPs generated by multiplying by the number of SPPs produced per grain of pollen, nspg. The measurements of Suphioglu et al. [16] on ryegrass showed around 700 SPPs per whole pollen grain of a size range 600 nm– 2.5 μm. We will use 700 SPPs per whole pollen grain with an SPP diameter of 600 nm which is the lower end of Suphioglu et al’s [16] measurements. The SPPs have the same density as whole grass pollen. This yields a mass of one SPP, mSPP = 1.13 × 10−13 g and a fall speed of 0.01 cm s-1. Upon rupturing, we convert the number of SPPs generated per m3 back into a mass concentration (using mSPP) to be carried by the C-CTM. This mass concentration is used twice; to be lost from the tracer containing the mass of whole pollen, and to be added to a tracer containing the mass of SPPs. We also track the number of whole pollen grains that rupture (Nrupt), as there are no observations of SPPs, only the pollen shells.

2.4 Humidity induced on-plant mechanical rupturing

We also include Wozniak et al’s [36] on-plant mechanical rupturing, Mrupt of pollen on the plant, which occurs when exposed to moisture from humidity and precipitation [11,15]. Similar to Wozniak et al. [36], we treat mechanical rupturing as an emission occurring at the surface only (g m-2 s-1):

Mrupt=FruptnspgPfx(1-fPRfRH)mSPPmpol, (2)

where Pfx is the emission rate of grass pollen from the plant (g m-2 s-1) predicted by VGPEM, and mSPP/mpol is the mass ratio of SPPs to whole grass pollen grains. The terms fPR and fRH are the emission activity factors for precipitation and RH, respectively. The idea is that mechanical rupturing will occur on the fraction of grass pollen left on the plant when humidity conditions are too high to warrant direct pollen emission to the atmosphere. The emission activity factors are calculated in the model using a logistic function, fl of the form:

fl(y:α,c)=11+eα(y-c), (3)

Where y is the variable of interest, e.g. RH or precipitation, for rate parameter α and location parameter c. For RH, the function follows Sofiev et al. [37]:

fRH=fbaseline+(1-fbaseline)×fl(RH;αRH,cRH) (4)

The rate and location parameters will give fl = 0.95 at 50% RH and 0.05 at 80%. fbaseline represents the fraction of pollen emitted at very low RH (= 0.33) and was used in Emmerson et al. [23].

The precipitation function fPR:

fPR=fbaseline+(1fbaseline)×fl(PR;αPR,cPR)/fl(0;αPR,cPR), (5)

where the logistical function parameters result in values of 0.95 for no precipitation falling and 0.05 for precipitation at 0.5 mm h-1. The terms αRH and αPR are both negative, meaning the pollen emission decreases as either the humidity or precipitation rates increase.

2.5 Using strong wind gusts as a mechanism for in-atmosphere rupturing

Given the strength of winds in the storm gust front it seems likely that a wind driven rupturing process could represent the pollen shell observations. Visez et al. [38] simulated the action of wind blowing birch pollen against solid surfaces and found higher concentrations of SPPs associated with stronger wind speeds. Here we test two variations; one using a function of wind speed, fWS described in Sofiev et al. [37], the other using wind speed (WS) directly to rupture the pollen. The function of wind speed takes the form:

fWS=fbaseline+(1-fbaseline)×(1-exp(-WS/Usat)), (6)

where Usat is a saturation wind speed of 5 m s-1 which constrains the pollen emission, and fbaseline is 0.33 as before. The Usat constraint suggests that high winds can only promote pollen release if pollen is available on the plant. The function takes the form of a curve, beginning at 0.33 for zero wind speed and asymptotes to 1 at wind speeds >15 m s-1. The pollen rupturing occurs using a variation to Eq 1 with no threshold value:

Nrupt=Frupt×χ×fWS, (7)

In the second case of rupturing directly with wind speed, we ensure windspeeds are above a threshold of Usat. This ensures that rupturing only occurs at higher wind speeds, as fWS will allow rupturing even at negligible wind speeds. The threshold Usat value of 5 m s-1 is equivalent to fWS = 0.75. Grass pollen rupturing then occurs similar to Eq 1, but with the condition of RH replaced with the Usat threshold.

2.6 On-plant mechanical rupturing using wind gusts

A prerequisite of in-atmosphere rupture is the presence of airborne pollen that is already disperse. We adjust Wozniak et al’s description of mechanical rupturing from Eq 2 to represent a wind speed induced emission of 600 nm particles from the ground, replacing (1-fPRfRH) with either fWS or wind speed as the part of the definition, e.g.:

Mrupt=FruptnspgPfxfWSmSPPmpol, (8)

This process considers the resuspension of previously deposited SPPs.

2.7 Electrical charge associated with low relative humidity

When air is humid, the moisture aids the transfer of electrical charges between atoms. At lower RH the electrical transfer is less effective and higher charges can build up. Vaidyanathan et al. [17] showed that electrical activity could trigger release of allergenic material, and observed Bermuda grass pollen rupture occurring when subjected to voltages of 10 kV m-1. Taylor et al. [39] thought the same was likely of ryegrass pollen, given its high allergenic properties and association with thunderstorm asthma, even in air with an RH of 40%. We explore the hypothesis that pollen particles could become electrically charged when the RH is low. In this simulation, we use Eq 1 again to represent this process but use a threshold RH value of ≤ 30% to start pollen rupturing.

2.8 Lightning

The presence of lightning strikes has been associated with increased asthma presentations generally [40], but not necessarily in conjunction with an epidemic event.

Lightning is not simulated by any of our meteorological models and are incorporated into the pollen simulations from lightning observations. The number of lightning occurrences per hour, nlightning, was re-gridded to our 3km resolution based on data from the World Wide Lightning Location Network (WWLLN) comprising of observations from a ground-based network of sensors [41]. The WWLLN includes both cloud-to-ground and cloud-to-cloud lightning, but preferentially detect the stronger cloud-to-ground occurrences as noted by Virts et al. [42]. If lightning occurred in any grid cell where whole pollen grains were also present, then this was used as the rupturing trigger. Eq 1 was again modified to include the lightning count, meaning that rupturing was stronger if there were more lightning occurrences:

Nrupt=Frupt×χ×nlightning, (9)

2.9 Dust

We examined existing C-CTM tracers representing mineral dust to replicate the action of particles being swept into the atmosphere by the strong winds in the storm inflow and outflow. The dust parameterisation relies on individual particles being saltated from land designated as bare ground and having a low soil moisture [43]. Three dust tracers are summed to represent PM10 (<2.5, 2.5–5 and 5–10 μm diameter).

In total, VGPEM has been set up to run with eight pollen rupturing mechanisms, and the C-CTM dust tracer described above. The different rupturing thresholds and rupturing equations are compared below in Table 1. In each run, the model will carry whole pollen, pollen shells and SPPs.

Table 1. Thresholds and variables used in each of the model experiments.

Experiment name Description In-atmosphere rupture, Nrupt On-plant mechanical rupture, Mrupt
RH ≥ 80% Humidity induced rupturing when RH is ≥ 80% Frupt × χ
Mrupt RH ≥ 80% Frupt × χ FruptnspgPfx(1-fPRfRH)mSPPmpol
fWS Rupturing (or emission) using a function of wind speed Frupt × χ × fWS
Mrupt fWS Frupt × χ × fWS FruptnspgPfxfWSmSPPmpol
WS ≥ 5 m s-1 Rupturing (or emission) using wind speeds ≥ 5 m s-1 Frupt × χ × WS
Mrupt WS Frupt × χ × WS FruptnspgPfxWSmSPPmpol
RH ≤ 30% Static electricity induced rupturing when RH is ≤ 30% Frupt × χ
Lightning Lightning induced rupturing Frupt × χ × nlighting
Dust Uses a dust tracer Not applicable

Frupt = fraction of whole pollen shells that rupture = 0.7. χ = airborne concentration of whole pollen, μg m-3, nspg = number of SPP per whole pollen grain = 700. Pfx = whole pollen emission rate, g m-3. Fpr = precipitation function. fRH relative humidity function. MSPP = mass of 1 SPP = 1.13 x 10−13 g. MPOL = mass of 1 whole pollen grain = 22.4 x 10−9 g. fWS = function of wind speed. WS = wind speed, m s-1. Nlightning = number of lightning occurrences.

3 Results and discussion

First, we examine the time-series of observed whole grass pollen at Melbourne University, which shows a maximum hourly average of 177 grains m-3 the day before the storm (Fig 2a), and lower concentrations on the day of the storm. Note the 24-hour average grass pollen measurement dated 21 November was 102 grains m-3, taken at 4pm local time, and therefore includes the grass pollen deposited on the trap after the slide was changed on 20 November at 4pm. The models also predict higher whole pollen concentrations the day before the storm but get the timing of this peak too early. At the time of the storm (06:30 UTC on 21 November) all the models capture the correct magnitude of whole grass pollen in the surface layer of the atmosphere. The observed whole grass pollen peaks at 131 grains m-3 at 05:30 UTC before dropping sharply to 40 grains m-3 by 08:30 UTC after the storm. The models also predict more than 100 grains m-3 in the hours prior to the storm, but the sharp decline occurs one hour later than the observations. Despite the mismatch in timing, the models show whole pollen is available in the atmosphere to be ruptured. Getting the magnitude in whole grass pollen grains correct is an important constraint for the pollen rupturing process, ensuring that neither too little nor too much whole pollen will be ruptured. However, our evaluations are limited by only one set of observations in the model domain (2016 was prior to the existence of the VicTAPs network).

Fig 2. Time series in whole grass pollen (a) and pollen shells (b–c) from the RH ≥ 80% experiment.

Fig 2

Panel (b) shows results from in-atmosphere only pollen rupturing, whilst panel (c) includes the on-plant mechanical rupturing from Eqs 25. Model values in (c) are on second y-axes to the right. s = slope of the linear regression and r = r correlations between modelled and observed pollen (or pollen shells), given in same colours as the legend. Vertical dashed line indicates the time of the storm.

We do not have measured SPP concentrations in this work. However, the observed concentration of pollen shells might indicate the potential concentration of SPPs present in the atmosphere (Fig 2b). Over the 34 hours of observations, the average concentration of pollen shells is approximately 68% of the concentration of whole grass pollen grains, with a range of 5 to 138%. At the time of the thunderstorm, the concentration of pollen shells was 48 grains m-3 or 51% of the whole grass pollen grains. This is only approximately one third of the peak recorded over the 34-hour observation period. The peak in pollen shell concentrations (134 grains m-3) was measured at 10:30 UTC on 20 November, 20 hours before the storm. Thus there is a lack of correlation between pollen shell concentrations and reported asthma events. This lack of correlation was also noted by Buters et al. [44] and Plaza et al. [45], who suggested that the allergenic properties of SPPs could vary 10-fold depending on how ripe the pollen was at release time. This produces other questions: could the SPPs have been more potent on 21 November as opposed to 20 November? Can whole pollen grains completely shatter and not leave a pollen shell behind (as opposed to only ejecting SPPs though the germination pore)? Could whole pollen also rupture within the windpipe due to moist conditions, similar to Sporik et al’s [46] research on fungal spores germinating in the respiratory tract and causing inflammation? The lack of correlation might also suggest that other fine particle sources contributed to human health effects, such as fungal spores [2,4]. Marks et al. [3] did show increases in both pollen shells and whole grass pollen during a 1997 storm in New South Wales, but the ratio of pollen shells to whole pollen did not increase due to the storm. By contrast, Hughes et al. [18] observed a decrease in whole pollen concentrations due to the rain.

3.1 Humidity induced grass pollen rupturing

Using the hypothesised rupturing process with an 80% RH threshold does not yield a sharp rise in the modelled pollen shells (or the SPPs) at the time of the storm front, as we would expect to observe given the huge increase in respiratory problems (Fig 2b). Key to the Hughes et al. [18] finding was that SPP increases were associated with high rates of rainfall coincident with thunderstorm activity. The difference in the Melbourne storm was the absence of rain. Lack of rain is the major factor in why so many people were outside at the time and were exposed. The models show that humidity induced rupturing was strongest at other times during the week e.g. on 18 and 19 November (Fig 2b), and also tends to occur each night rather than during the day (due to lower temperatures). Inclusion of the on-plant mechanical rupturing (Fig 2c) adds thousands of pollen shells into the atmosphere, but the process reinforces the wrong timing of the rupturing (at night) rather than contributing to the TA event. Using the RH ≥80% rupturing mechanism in the models under-predicts the pollen shell concentrations by a factor of ~30 for the in-atmosphere only case, whilst inclusion of the mechanical rupturing overpredicts by a factor of ~80.

Prior to the arrival of the gust front, observations from the closest surface weather station to Melbourne University (Olympic Park) showed very low RH of 18% (Fig 3a). Three other weather stations upwind of the airflow to the north (Essendon and Melbourne Airports) and west (Laverton) also observed RH between 18–19%. Humidity induced rupturing at the surface on the day of the storm could only occur when RH reached 80% some five hours after the storm had passed.

Fig 3. Time series in (a) 2m relative humidity (b) 2 m temperature and (c) 10 m wind speed at Melbourne Olympic Park, the closest automatic weather station to the pollen observation site.

Fig 3

The vertical dashed line indicates the time of the storm, the horizontal dashed line indicates the 80% RH threshold.

Differences in the timing of observed and predicted grass pollen concentrations could be due to errors in the modelled meteorological forcing. Of the meteorological models driving VGPEM, ACCESS and WRF capture the timing of the humidity increase and associated sudden temperature decrease (Fig 3b) after the storm passes better than CCAM, though wind speeds predicted by all models are lower than was observed prior to the storm (Fig 3c). Both CCAM and WRF tend to predict stronger wind speeds than ACCESS, and only CCAM predicts the correct wind speed at the time of the storm. All models predict RH above 80% at night on 19 and 21 November, whilst ACCESS also has a high RH at night on 20 November, coinciding with the timing of rupturing in Fig 2b and 2c.

Radiosonde soundings from Melbourne Airport (20 km north of central Melbourne) show the vertical profiles in RH at 00:00 UTC and 12:00 UTC; six hours before and after the storm (Fig 4a and 4c, respectively). None of the models track the observations precisely, and the shape of the modelled RH profiles tend to be better after the storm at 12:00 UTC. Vertical profiles of RH in the models are shown at 06:00 UTC (Fig 4b) and all show an increase in RH around 600 hPa which is where we expect the storm clouds to be. The high observed humidity at 600 hPa ±6 hours either side of the storm could reasonably be expected to persist throughout the day, so we infer the predictions of the meteorology models are reasonable at 06:00 UTC.

Fig 4.

Fig 4

(a-c) radiosonde observations at Melbourne Airport compared to model predictions for the 21 November 2016 of relative humidity from the surface to 0 hPa in each meteorological model. (d) pollen concentrations in VGPEM1.0 driven by each meteorological model. Dashed lines in (b) and (d) represent the thresholds for rupturing at 80% RH and 1 grain m-3, respectively. The maximum height of modelled pollen differs because CCAM and WRF are output on pressure levels, whilst the ACCESS height is converted to hPa from the 5 km model level.

We plot the 80% RH threshold in Fig 4b at the time of the storm, showing only ACCESS and WRF reach the required 80% RH at around 600 hPa (Fig 4b). In Fig 4d the corresponding vertical profile in whole grass pollen at Melbourne Airport shows whole grass pollen grains present throughout the lowest 5 km of the modelled atmosphere. The 1 grain m-3 threshold is lost at ~800 hPa in ACCESSC-CTM and CCAMC-CTM or ~2 km, and 630 hPa in WRFC-CTM. Vertical concentrations of whole grass pollen decrease exponentially from the surface, with most (62% average across models) situated in the first 40 m. It is only in the WRFC-CTM profile that the whole pollen may intersect with RH conditions being high enough for rupture, noting that observations plotted in Fig 4 were above Melbourne Airport whereas rupturing may have occurred at other locations in the model domain.

Large differences exist between the models in the whole pollen concentrations produced with altitude and highlights how running an ensemble is beneficial. Whilst our results, and those from Wozniak et al. [36] show an exponential decline in whole pollen concentrations with altitude, measurements at 2000m altitude in the mountainous Thessaloniki region of Greece show grass pollen 2.6 times less than the surface concentrations [47]. Our models produce whole pollen at 2000 m in the range 185–1770 times less than the surface, whereas the Wozniak et al [36] model produces >500 times less in the north east region of the USA in spring. We tested whether artificially increasing the model vertical whole pollen concentration in the RH ≥ 80% experiment would impact the rate of rupturing at the time of the storm. We applied a linear relationship such that the ratio of surface to 2000 m whole pollen concentrations is 2.6:1. The results are largely similar, with the RH ≥80% threshold producing more pollen shells and SPPs in the models outside of the storm period (and mainly at night) using this mechanism (S1 Fig in S1 File).

The vertical time series to 5 km from each model at Melbourne University shows whole grass pollen concentrations are maintained for some time before and after the storm (Fig 5a–5c), indicating availability of pollen to be ruptured. We still see most of the whole pollen concentrated close to the surface. There are very low concentrations of SPPs throughout the ACCESSC-CTM and CCAMC-CTM 5 km model atmospheres before and at the time of the storm (Fig 5d and 5e). The pre-gust front air was well mixed and turbulent, sweeping SPPs out of the Melbourne air, with no opportunity for resupply as the RH levels were between 10–30% to a height of 2 km in each of the models. The WRFC-CTM model shows SPPs present at the time of the storm, though this only translates into a pollen shell concentration of 2.2 grains m-3 at the surface (Fig 2b). Modelled pollen shell concentrations were higher on 19 and 20 November, but these dates did not coincide with health impacts.

Fig 5. Time series with altitude plots of whole grass pollen (a–c), SPPs to log base 10 (d–f), and relative humidity (g–i) in the atmosphere above the pollen counting site in Melbourne.

Fig 5

ACCESSC-CTM is shown in the left hand panels (a,d,g), CCAMC-CTM in the middle panels (b,e,h) and WRFC-CTM in the right hand panels (c,f,i). Vertical dashed line indicates the time of the storm.

To summarise our initial findings, we find that the RH throughout the atmosphere at central Melbourne to be well below the 80% required for pollen rupturing at the time of the storm on 21 November. The key finding is that more SPPs are produced regularly at other times when RH tends to be higher, such as at night rather than during a hot late spring day. The high risk of false positives does not make the RH ≥80% mechanism a good one for the prediction of thunderstorm asthma. On the day of the storm, SPPs were only produced in the models some hours after the storm had passed, as the humidity increased. This is too late to have caused the spike in emergency calls at 07:00 UTC in Melbourne. The condition of the 80% RH threshold required for pollen rupturing is also a condition that suppresses whole pollen emissions from the plant in VGPEM via the closing of anthers at high humidity. In the laboratory rupturing experiments cited earlier, pollen was observed to rupture after full submersion in water, or humidified for hours, and it is not clear whether a brief intersection of pollen and high humidity is enough to cause rupturing in the atmosphere.

3.2 Alternative mechanisms for the 2016 Melbourne event

We know that a process occurred in the atmosphere at 06:30 UTC on 21 November 2016, causing a high concentration of respirable particles to be inhaled. In this section we focus on the results of the other model experiments that could possibly explain how a sudden source of SPPs might have occurred. Each of the panels (b-g) in Fig 6 shows each experiment producing a high concentration of pollen shells, some of which produce peaks in line with the pollen shell observations (highest on 20 November, gives higher correlations e.g. (r = 0.86–0.91 in Fig 6d), and some which produce higher peaks at the time of the storm (with corresponding poor correlations, e.g. (r = 0.48–0.54 in Fig 6g).

Fig 6. Time series at Melbourne in (a) dust as PM10, and (b-g) pollen shells for the seven labelled rupturing experiments.

Fig 6

Note the modelled pollen shell concentrations are on the right-hand side y-axes in panels (b-g) and are not similar. s = slope of the linear regression and r = r correlations between modelled and observed pollen shells (or dust), given in same colours as the legend. Vertical dashed line indicates the time of the storm.

Fig 6a is different and shows the time series in the model dust tracers compared to hourly PM10 measurements from Footscray, the closest air quality monitoring site to the pollen observations. The dust tracers are normalised to the observed peak value for visual comparison, as dust only represents one fraction of total PM10. This experiment shows the three meteorological models simulate the gusty winds well, and that wind-driven processes would cause particles to spike in the Melbourne atmosphere during the storm. The timing of the modelled CCAMC-CTM and WRF C-CTM dust peaks coincides with the peak in hourly PM10 measurements (Fig 6a), with ACCESSC-CTM peaking slightly later. The peak of 699 μg m-3 in the 5-minute observations (not shown) occurred at 06:55 UTC as the storm front passed and PM10 remained above 100 μg m-3 for 20 minutes. There was no increase in observed PM2.5 mass concentrations across Melbourne air quality stations (at Footscray, Alphington and Geelong South), although whole pollen and dust are generally found in more coarse size fractions. Assuming SPPs were responsible for the 2016 Melbourne event, the PM2.5 observations at the three Melbourne stations suggest SPPs were too small to contribute much mass to PM2.5.

We now investigate wind driven rupturing processes. The time series in modelled and observed pollen shells fit quite well using both fWS and WS parameterisations (Fig 6b and 6c), suggesting more whole pollen ruptured on the evening of 20 November. However, ACCESSC-CTM predicts a slightly higher peak in pollen shells at the time of the storm, whilst CCAMC-CTM and WRFC-CTM predict more pollen shells the day before. More pollen shells result from fWS than the WS experiment because rupturing occurs without a threshold.

On-plant mechanical rupturing using fWS produces the best correlations between the model and observed pollen shells of all our experiments (r = 0.86–0.91 in Fig 6d). Whilst on-plant mechanical rupturing using fWS might therefore provide the best parameterisation of pollen shell concentrations in the atmosphere, it does not explain the severe respiratory impacts of the storm. On-plant mechanical rupturing using WS directly with a threshold of 5 m s-1 (Fig 6e) produces a peak in pollen shells at the time of the storm in all three models (CCAMC-CTM also produces a larger peak a few hours prior). The vertical time series in wind speed at Melbourne (not shown) shows wind speeds of up to 18 m s-1 throughout the lowest 5 km of the atmosphere, starting at 12:00 UTC on 20 November and remaining high above 2 km throughout 21 November. The downward transport of horizontal momentum in the thunderstorm downdraft likely contributed to the gusty winds that occurred on 21 November.

As fWS yields a value between 0 and 1 and the wind speed can be any value, the pollen shell concentrations resulting from the WS on-plant mechanical rupturing experiment are much higher (Fig 6d and 6e). In terms of the ratio of in-atmosphere to on-plant mechanical rupturing, mechanical rupturing provides 95–96% of the total concentration of pollen shells comparing Fig 6 panels (b) and (d) for fWS across all models and 80–94% comparing Fig 6 panels (c) and (e) for WS. Note here that as mechanical rupturing takes place before the pollen leaves the plant, the threshold of whole pollen grains in the air does not apply. Therefore, there are many thousands of pollen shells resulting from the mechanical rupturing experiments, as there is currently no model cap to the amount of pollen on the plants. The purpose of the experiment was to investigate whether a rapid increase in pollen shells could be achieved at the correct time. A parameter representing the SPP reservoir can be added when measurements of SPP concentrations are available.

We now review the possibility of pollen rupturing due to electrical activity when the RH is low. In the hours prior to the storm, RH was low in the observations and in all the models, particularly at the surface, and was < 20% in CCAM and WRF up to a height of ~2 km. The timings of the peaks produced by the RH ≤ 30% experiment (Fig 6f) are very similar to the in-atmosphere fWS experiment (Fig 6b), but with lower correlations (r = 0.56–0.76 Fig 6f). A peak in pollen shells is produced at the time of the storm, but it is not as large as the peak produced the day before.

Electrical activity due to lightning is now explored as a trigger for rupturing. Fig 7 shows that the pattern of lightning strikes traversed from north west Victoria to south of the city of Melbourne during the day of the storm, and that there were no counts of lightning in the city itself. In this experiment, whole pollen was ruptured to the west of Melbourne, and the pollen shells were transported to the monitoring site (Fig 6g). The models continue to predict two peaks in the time series of pollen shells. CCAMC-CTM and WRFC-CTM produce larger peaks in pollen shells at the time of the storm. However, the predicted concentration of pollen shells in Melbourne is low, partly because the location of the lightning was west of Melbourne, and partly because the parameterisation is dependent on the number of lightning occurrences per grid cell per hour. In this domain the maximum in any hour is only 6.

Fig 7. Location of lightning occurrences in 6-hourly blocks starting late 20 November into 21 November 2016.

Fig 7

The pink pixels coincide with timing of the storm passing Melbourne. Basemap from Igismap.com 2020.

This paper has focussed on the timeseries of pollen shells measured at Melbourne University. Modelling has shown that lightning or a mechanism based on wind speed provides the best explanation of these measurements. We use Fig 8 to determine the spatial variation in surface SPPs produced at the time of the storm for four of the in-atmosphere rupturing experiments, fWS, WS ≥ 5 m s-1, RH ≤ 30% and lightning. Resulting SPP concentrations are in the range 1.4×104–1.4×105 m-3. The aim is to determine if these mechanisms produce a field in SPPs that resembles the position of the storm front, allowing for possible small timing differences related to the meteorology (c.f. Fig 3). There are only SPPs present in the WRFC-CTM atmosphere at this time using the RH ≥ 80% threshold option, with the highest concentrations ~5×103 m-3 situated on the coast (S2 Fig in S1 File). The first three experiments (fWS, WS ≥ 5 m s-1 and RH ≤ 30%) cause similar SPP fields than the lightning experiment. The first three experiments show SPPs both behind and ahead of the storm front in all three models. The north-south line of the storm is better predicted in ACCESSC-CTM, than CCAMC-CTM or WRFC-CTM which show alignment from the north-west to south-east direction. The only experiment to restrict the SPP field behind the storm front occurs using lightning in all three models. At 06:00 UTC the lightning occurred to the west of Melbourne, and the SPPs produced reached Melbourne in the following model timesteps (S3 Fig in S1 File). This is an artefact of the modelling process; in-atmosphere rupturing occurs at the end of each model time step after the airborne concentration of whole pollen is calculated. Transport then occurs at the beginning of the next time step. Following the pattern of lightning occurrences, the position of the peak SPPs incorrectly suggests that towns to the west of Melbourne (e.g. Creswick and Geelong) would receive the majority of the exposure. Although lightning indicates the presence of a thunderstorm, perhaps another meteorological variable of the storm such as diagnosis of strong atmospheric convergence lines might provide a better description of in-atmosphere rupturing [48].

Fig 8. Sub-pollen particles (m-3) in the surface atmosphere at 06:00 UTC.

Fig 8

Does not include mechanical rupturing. The heavy black line shows the approximate position of the storm front diagnosed from radar [19]. Panels (a-c) fWS, (d-f) WS > 5 m s-1 (g-i) RH < 30% and (j-l) lightning. Note the different scale for lightning colourbar. ACCESSC-CTM is shown in the left hand panels (a,d,g,j), CCAMC-CTM in the middle panels (b,e,h,k) and WRFC-CTM in the right hand panels (c,f,I,l). Basemap from Igismap.com 2020.

4 Conclusions

Within the constraints of the observations (short time-series of pollen shells and without any measurements of SPPs) and the models (e.g. finite temporal and spatial resolution, accuracy of the meteorology and the pollen emission, etc) we have explored possible mechanisms which could have caused the thunderstorm asthma event in Melbourne on 21 November 2016. The commonly cited pollen rupturing mechanism by which whole pollen absorbs water under high RH conditions and is subjected to osmotic shock did not produce peaks in pollen shell concentrations at the time of the storm. The RH was very low prior to the storm, both at the surface (< 20%) and at altitude. Humidity induced rupturing tended to occur at night, and in higher incidences on 19–20 November which did not coincide with reported health impacts.

We do not have measurements of the SPP concentrations in the Melbourne atmosphere at the time of the storm, therefore we cannot ascertain whether the concentrations of pollen shells and SPPs are correlated. Assuming that SPPs are responsible for the severe allergic reaction in humans, we investigated a dust tracer and six other mechanisms occurring in the atmosphere and on the plant, which might cause whole pollen grains to rupture at the time of the storm.

The model simulated a peak in dust particles to occur at the time of the storm, which also coincided with a peak in observed PM10 concentrations. This experiment gave rise to several wind-related in-atmosphere and mechanical rupturing experiments. Both in-atmosphere wind experiments caused a larger peak to occur 24 hours before the storm. On-plant mechanical rupturing using a wind speed function, fWS led to the best descriptor of the time series in observed pollen shells, but the peak did not coincide with the storm. On-plant mechanical rupturing using a wind speed threshold of 5 m s-1 produced very high concentrations of pollen shells at the right time. It is plausible that some form of wind action could have contributed to the asthma event, but the relative contributions of ryegrass pollen, fungal spores, wind-blown dust or some other component, alone or in combination, is unknown.

The in-atmosphere rupturing method that produced model peaks in pollen shells at the time of storm were driven by lightning counts. This method also tended to restrict the spatial field in SPPs to behind the storm front, which more accurately describes how the pattern of emergency calls for ambulances evolved after the storm [49].

All the experiments in this study tested aspects of the meteorology that might induce pollen rupturing. However, whilst it is not uncommon for the humidity or wind speed to be high, or there to be lightning associated with a thunderstorm during the peak in the grass pollen season, TA events are uncommon, with an estimated frequency of once every five years even in highly affected cities such as Melbourne. Inclusion of these tested methods into a routine dynamical pollen forecast system would likely lead to high incidences of false positives in TA risk. A high false positive rate for rare phenomena like thunderstorm asthma is likely to result in ‘warning fatigue’ from the public. Some new promising research suggests that a thunderstorm itself does not need to be present to cause epidemic asthma, only evidence of strong atmospheric convergence [48]. Very high-resolution modelling experiments to simulate the interaction of pollen with atmospheric boundary layer and in-cloud processes would provide additional insight on the efficacy of the hypothesised mechanism for pollen rupture shown in Fig 1.

The uncertainties highlighted by this work suggest that further targeted laboratory studies of pollen rupture would be of considerable value to help constrain the parameterisation of this process. We also need to understand how many SPPs are required to produce an asthma response and the circumstances in the lifecycle of an SPP which increase their allergenic properties.

Supporting information

S1 File

(DOCX)

S2 File

(XLSX)

Acknowledgments

Thanks to Matthew Wozniak of University of Michigan for helpful comments when implementing their pollen rupturing code.

Data Availability

Measured whole grass pollen and pollen shell concentrations from Melbourne University available in S1 and S2 Tables. Radiosonde data sourced from University of Wyoming: http://weather.uwyo.edu/upperair/sounding.html. Hourly PM10 and PM2.5 observations sourced from Environmental Protection Authority Victoria: https://discover.data.vic.gov.au/dataset/epa-air-watch-all-sites-air-quality-hourly-averages-yearly/historical. Code for VGPEM is available at: https://gmd.copernicus.org/articles/12/2195/2019/gmd-12-2195-2019-supplement.pdf. Radiosonde data sourced from University of Wyoming: http://weather.uwyo.edu/upperair/sounding.html.

Funding Statement

This research has been supported by the Victorian Department of Health and Human Services (contract no. C5949). https://www.dhhs.vic.gov.au/ The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Atmospheric modelling of grass pollen rupturing mechanisms for thunderstorm asthma prediction.

This paper describes an atmospheric modeling approach to investigate the likely mechanisms of pollen grain breakage under the specific conditions of the November 2016 thunderstorm asthma episode in Melbourne. The work is presented in a clear and understandable way. The article is overall pleasant to read and the conclusions are clearly highlighted.

Although the mechanisms of rupture of pollen grains in the aqueous phase or after exposure to moisture are widely documented in the literature, there is still, in my opinion, a lack of validation in real conditions of these mechanisms of allergen release in the fine fraction of the atmospheric aerosol, especially in stormy conditions. The approach by modeling atmospheric conditions and pollen grain rupture conditions is particularly interesting and brings new information for the aerobiology community. This study is the first to compare the amplitude of the different possible mechanisms of pollen grain rupture in real conditions. In my opinion, this work sheds new light on the question of pollen rupture in thunderstorm conditions, which should provoke a discussion in the 'pollen community', and this, even if some choices of parameterization are probably questionable. I am therefore in favor of a publication of this work but I have a series of questions for which I would like to have a discussion with the authors.

I will first outline these important questions that need to be answered and then in a second part I will list some minor points that could improve the article.

NB: I would like to make it clear that my review of the article does not include parameters related to meteorological models for which I am not a specialist.

Major issues.

• As I understand it, the value of Frupt is based on Taylor's work (2002) and Frupt has been set at 70%. However, it is not clear in the article whether the Frupt value is the same in the equations in lines L155, L178, L211, L221, L243. If the same value of 0.7 was taken for all rupture mechanisms, how can this be justified when it is a percentage breakage of pollen in water after 5 minutes of immersion. Frupt is for example probably different for mechanical or electrical stress.

• L161 – 166. The explanation of the calculation of nspg seems a little confused to me. SPPs include two main types of particles; starch granules and p-particles. The number of 700 to 1000 SPPs corresponds to starch granules (diameter 1.1 µm) (Suphioglu and Abu Chakra). The value of 106 corresponds to p-particles (diameter 0.3-0.4 µm) whose number is more difficult to estimate (Grote 1994, Heslop-Harrison 1982). The diameter value chosen by the authors seems to me too low (200 nm), and if this value is increased to 400 nm diameter, I am afraid that the number of one million p-particles induces a mass of SPPs greater than that of the whole pollen grain. I would therefore like to have the authors' point of view on these considerations and on their choices concerning the size and number of SPPs per pollen grain.

• Fig. 2b and L364-371. By examining the observed shell pollen concentration, it can be seen that it is not maximum at the time of the storm. Is this measurement of shell pollen with a Hirst reliable? Furthermore, if the rupture mechanism does not allow the presence of aerosolized shell pollen, the concentration of the aerosolized shell pollen in the air will not give any information on the concentration of SPPs.

• The mechanism for on-plant mechanical rupturing is not clear to me. How can the pollen rupture on plants because of wind? Can you please better describe this mechanism L218.

Minor issues.

• L151. A reference for the pollen mass is missing.

• Table 1. It would be relevant to add a first column with the description of the rupture mechanism (e.g. 'wet rupture' for RH>80%?). Is the line 'Dust' really useful in this table? Is there a misspelling in line “Mrupt WS” for column “Nrupt” ?

• Fig 1. Flowering grass -> flowering grasses?

• Fig. 5. Add ‘RH’ before %

• Fig 5. Is the unit “log10 SPP grains m-3” means log10 SPPs.m-3” ?

• The discussion on figure 8 should have a more comprehensive conclusion. This part is to my opinion less clear than the rest of the paper.

Reviewer #2: TITLE: Atmospheric modelling of grass pollen rupturing mechanisms for thunderstorm asthma

prediction

The manuscript entitled “Atmospheric modelling of grass pollen rupturing mechanisms for thunderstorm asthma prediction” explored different models to investigate factors influencing pollen rupture that produced high concentrations of SPPs and led to the thunderstorm asthma event in Melbourne. The study used valuable data obtained from several credible sources and demonstrated specialized expertise in this area. Although the data were limited to the locality and the isolated event in 2016, the study helps explain the discrepancies between previous predictions/explanations about pollen rupture mechanisms and the actual phenomenon and will be of interests to scholars worldwide. All data are available without restrictions. Due to the nature of the study, conventional statistical methods were mostly inapplicable.

My main recommendations for improving the manuscript are about making this work more accessible for general readers, especially general practitioners and allergists who will greatly benefit from reading this study. In particular,

The description of the three models in paragraph starting on LINE 123 should be accompanied by a table or a figure. Also, additional information about the similarity/differences between these models should be appreciated.

Several acronyms should be described when first mentioned e.g. C-CTM (LINE96), NCEP FNL analyses (LINE 132).

Overall, there is very little discussion about similarities and differences between the models used in this study compared to other previous models. For example, even though the model from Wozniak et al. was described several times in the methods section, it was never mentioned in the discussion.

LINE 92-93: “In this paper” was repeated twice. Please remove one.

LINE 96; “C-CTM” was introduced for the first time without any explanation. Perhaps, the description in LINE 123-124 should be moved to the Introduction section.

LINE 103: For consistency, “AEDT” should be changed to “UTC”.

LINE 475-487: This paragraph should belong to the discussion section rather than the conclusion section.

In summary, I would recommend a MINOR REVISION for this manuscript.

Reviewer #3: Asthma related to thunderstorms (TA) is one of the phenomena that represents a threat to human health which needs to be deeply studied for a correct prevention. Exacerbations of asthma appearing during a thunderstorm in pollen seasons are characterized, at the beginning of the storms, by a rapid increase in visits to the general practitioners or in the emergency departments of hospitals due to attacks of asthma in subjects with allergic IgE-mediated sensitization to allergenic pollens (prevalently Gramineae and Parietaria) or mold spores of Alternaria alternata. In the first 20 to 30 minutes of a thunderstorm, patients with pollen allergy can inhale a high concentration of allergens released in atmosphere from pollen grains after the rupture of pollens. Patients without asthma symptoms, but who suffer from seasonal rhinitis may have an asthma attack during a thunderstorm in pollen seasons .

During the events of TA there is a strong association with the elevation of atmospheric concentrations of pollen grains, such as grasses or other species of allergenic plants and symptoms of respiratory allergy and asthma attacks. . A possible explanation for TA involves the role of rainwater promoting the release of inhalable particles deriving from the rupture of pollen grains. The world’s most severe thunderstorm asthma event occurred in Melbourne, Australia on 21 November 2016, coinciding with the peak of the grass pollen season with 10 deaths and about one twousand persons with asthma attacks.

As mentioned before, the aetiological role of thunderstorms in these events is thought to derive from the rupture of pollens in high humidity conditions, releasing large numbers of sub-pollen particles (SPPs) with pauci-micronic size very easily inhaled deep into the lungs. In this manuscript the authors try to explain the pathogenetic background of TA. The humidity hypothesis was implemented into a three dimensional atmospheric model and driven by inputs from three meteorological models, but the mechanism could not explain how the Melbourne event occurred because relative humidity was very low throughout the atmosphere. Tests in this paper showed humidity induced rupturing occurred frequently at other times and would likely lead to recurrent false alarms if used in a predictive capacity. They used the model to investigate a range of other possible pollen rupturing mechanisms which could have produced high concentrations of subpollen particles in the atmosphere during the storm. The mechanisms studied involve mechanical friction from wind gusts, electrical build up and discharge incurred during conditions of low relative humidity, and lightning strikes.

In particular the mechanisms studied involve mechanical friction from wind gusts, the humidity and the electrical role of thunderbolds ( lightning strikes) . The results of this study suggest that these mechanisms likely operated in tandem with one another, but the lightning method was the only mechanism to generate a pattern in SPPs following the path of the storm. If humidity induced rupturing cannot explain the 2016 Melbourne event, then new targeted laboratory studies of alternative pollen rupture mechanisms would be of value to help constrain the parameterisation of the pollen rupturing process.

In my opinin this is an intersting update on pathogenetic mechanisms of TA but

I suggest to add considerations on the clinical importance of these events to better understand the pathogenesis of these event to prevent in future the risk of near fatal asthma and of deaths for asthma.

Considering that these events occurred not only in Australia but exacerbations and asthma epidemics related to thunderstorms have been described in several cities, mainly in Europe (Birmingham and London in the United Kingdom and Naples in Italy), I suggest to add in the references also manuscripts published in journals of American Academy AAAAI such as JACI ( D'Amato G, et al Thunderstorm-related asthma attacks .J Allergy Clin Immunol. 2017 Jun;139(6):1786-1787. doi: 10.1016/j.jaci.2017.03.003. Epub 2017 Mar 23.PMID: 28342913 ) and European Academy EAACI ( D'Amato G, et al . Latest news on relationship between thunderstorms and respiratory allergy, severe asthma, and deaths for asthma. Allergy. 2019;74(1):9-11.)

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I do not suggest to accept the paper considering that authors haven’t modified the manuscript following my suggestions. You asked my engagemend as reviewer, I worked a lot to read the paper and to suggest some variations and integrations that authors haven’t accepted my suggestions, in particular, they havent’ accepted to integrate references with two recent publications publishd in Journals of American Academy of Allergy, Asthma and Clinical Immunology (JACI) and in the journal of European Academy (Allergy). In my opinion, as invited reviewer , the paper can’t be accepted for publication without this integration of citations.

Reviewer #4: This manuscript uses atmospheric models to test and predict the concentrations of pollen grains and sub-pollen particles (SPP) in the atmosphere surrounding the 20-21 November thunderstorm asthma epidemic in Melbourne, Australia. The article addresses an important topic and concludes that a better understanding of pollen rupturing under laboratory conditions is needed to develop accurate predictive models.

Several aspects of the manuscript are in need of significant improvement prior to consideration for publication. In particular, the observational data should be expanded well beyond the 34 hours surrounding the thunderstorm asthma epidemic to enable more robust model evaluation at times when asthma was not triggered, but pollen counts may have been high. Further, more robust quantitative analysis of model performance in reproducing observations is needed. Model assumptions, particularly the number of SPP per pollen grain needs further consideration and justification. Some highly relevant and recently literature should be considered.

1. The use of only 34 hours of intact pollen grain counts and pollen shell data is much too limited. For the results presented herein to be considered robust, the authors must expand the time period of experimental observations to include additional time periods before and after this period. One week should be considered the minimum duration for consideration. This is particularly important to evaluation of the model accuracy. Further, it is critical to demonstrating how the model could over-predict SPP outside of the selected thunderstorm asthma event.

2. In exploring different scenarios that could contribute SPP to the atmosphere (section 3.2 and figure 6), it is critical for the authors to consider time periods outside of the 34 hours to assess model accuracy. For example, do the models suggest wind speeds > 5 m/s outside of the 21 November event contribute to pollen shells?

3. Throughout the manuscript the authors refer to correlations between the model and observations (e.g., line 368, 378, 380, 383, 403, 430, etc.), but no correlation coefficients are presented. Quantitative comparisons to evaluate the model accuracy are needed.

4. The approximation by Wozniak et al. 2018 of 106 SPP per pollen grain was intended to be an upper estimate of the number of cloud condensation nuclei (CCN) to estimate the maximum potential impact of SPP on precipitation. It is not a realistic estimate, especially in light of the SPP size distributions observed experimentally for ryegrass, which includes a large number of starch granules 1-2 μm in diameter (Suphioglu et al. 1992, Taylor et al. 2002) that dominate the mass of SPP. Consequently, the chosen nSPP is a large over-estimate of the number of SPP per ryegrass pollen grain. Further discussion of experimental data and justification for the assumptions made are needed.

5. It is incorrect that SPP cannot be monitored with current techniques (lines 279 and 483). Hughes et al. (2020) report the first online measurements of SPP (a.k.a. pollen fragments) during convective storms using single-particle fluorescence spectroscopy and chemical tracers.

6. The findings of Hughes et al. (2020) should be considered and discussed in the context of the model evaluation. Key points to consider is the timing of SPP concentrations with respect to the arrival of the thunderstorm (e.g., line 289), their observation of SPP in the absence of lightning, concentrations of SPP observed relative to the model (e.g., line 447), their observations of higher SPP concentrations in strong storms with high windspeeds and downdrafts (which may help to explain differences across 20 and 21 November (e.g., line 479), and their observations of SPP in precipitation events of many types during tree pollen season (which suggests SPP events are quite common, but vary in strength; line 505-507).

7. Interestingly, Hughes et al. (2020) estimate that at least one-third of the pollen grains ruptured in the convective storm highlighted in their article, similar to the fraction of total pollen grains that the pollen shells in this study, suggesting similarities in the number of pollens that rupture in the case of ryegrass in Melbourne.

8. The model described appears to allow for pollen rupturing at high humidity (section 3.1). Does the model consider and account for the closing of anthers at high humidity to minimize pollen exposure to humid air? This is a likely source of error contributing to the high estimates of SPP at night that is not consistent with observations.

9. In stating “we find that the RH throughout the atmosphere to be well below the 80% required for pollen altitude described in Taylor and Jonsson (2004), which is suggested to approach 100% at the cloud base? For example, in Figure 4, it appears that the 80% threshold is met by some models at a pressure of 600 hPa, which is relevant to pollen grains entrained in updrafts. The statement in the abstract that most pollen remained within 40 m of the surface at line 24 suggests that the model may not accurately represent the vertical distribution of pollen grains in the atmosphere.

10. Like 396 – the statement that SPP are too small to contribute much to PM2.5 is not supported with any evidence. Meanwhile, prior work by Rathnayake et al. (2017) showed that pollen contributed 0.74 μg/m3 corresponding to 42% of PM2.5 mass on 2 May 2013 during tree pollen season when a thunderstorm struck.

11. In considering the role of lightning (paragraph beginning at line 433) – have the authors considered cloud-to-cloud lightning, or only cloud-to-ground lightning strikes? Both may be relevant to pollen rupturing, particularly to pollen grains at higher altitudes.

12. Line 49 – Provide an explanation for how SPP would become concentrated at ground level.

13. Figure 1 – Define the meaning of the symbols used, especially different types of arrows, plusses, and minuses.

14. Table 1 – It would be helpful to the reader if you defined the many variables in these equations as part of the table.

15. Terminology – pollen “exine” is a more biologically accurate term than “shell”

Works Cited

Hughes, D. D., C. B. A. Mampage, L. M. Jones, Z. Liu and E. A. Stone (2020). "Characterization of Atmospheric Pollen Fragments during Springtime Thunderstorms." Environmental Science & Technology Letters 7(6): 409-414.

Rathnayake, C. M., N. Metwali, T. Jayarathne, J. Kettler, Y. Huang, P. S. Thorne, P. T. O'Shaughnessy and E. A. Stone (2017). "Influence of rain on the abundance of bioaerosols in fine and coarse particles." Atmos. Chem. Phys. 17(3): 2459-2475.

Suphioglu, C., M. B. Singh, P. Taylor, R. Bellomo, P. Holmes, R. Puy and R. B. Knox (1992). "Mechanism of grass-pollen induced asthma." Lancet 339(8793): 569-572.

Taylor, P. E., R. C. Flagan, R. Valenta and M. M. Glovsky (2002). "Release of allergens as respirable aerosols: A link between grass pollen and asthma." Journal of Allergy and Clinical Immunology 109(1): 51-56.

Taylor, P. E. and H. Jonsson (2004). "Thunderstorm asthma." Current Allergy and Asthma Reports 4(5): 409-413.

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Reviewer #1: PONE-D-20-27816

Atmospheric modelling of grass pollen rupturing mechanisms for thunderstorm asthma prediction.

This paper describes an atmospheric modeling approach to investigate the likely mechanisms of pollen grain breakage under the specific conditions of the November 2016 thunderstorm asthma episode in Melbourne. The work is presented in a clear and understandable way. The article is overall pleasant to read and the conclusions are clearly highlighted.

Although the mechanisms of rupture of pollen grains in the aqueous phase or after exposure to moisture are widely documented in the literature, there is still, in my opinion, a lack of validation in real conditions of these mechanisms of allergen release in the fine fraction of the atmospheric aerosol, especially in stormy conditions. The approach by modeling atmospheric conditions and pollen grain rupture conditions is particularly interesting and brings new information for the aerobiology community. This study is the first to compare the amplitude of the different possible mechanisms of pollen grain rupture in real conditions. In my opinion, this work sheds new light on the question of pollen rupture in thunderstorm conditions, which should provoke a discussion in the 'pollen community', and this, even if some choices of parameterization are probably questionable. I am therefore in favor of a publication of this work but I have a series of questions for which I would like to have a discussion with the authors.

I will first outline these important questions that need to be answered and then in a second part I will list some minor points that could improve the article.

NB: I would like to make it clear that my review of the article does not include parameters related to meteorological models for which I am not a specialist.

Major issues.

1) As I understand it, the value of Frupt is based on Taylor's work (2002) and Frupt has been set at 70%. However, it is not clear in the article whether the Frupt value is the same in the equations in lines L155, L178, L211, L221, L243. If the same value of 0.7 was taken for all rupture mechanisms, how can this be justified when it is a percentage breakage of pollen in water after 5 minutes of immersion. Frupt is for example probably different for mechanical or electrical stress.

The value of Frupt is 0.7 for all experiments, as there is no literature on the rupturing rate of ryegrass pollen for other mechanisms. By keeping the rupturing rate the same across all simulations, it allows us to directly compare the amplitudes of the different mechanisms. I realise that we didn’t actually specify the 0.7 in the text.

At line 156 ‘where Frupt is the fraction of whole grass pollen grains that rupture (=0.7). Frupt is the same for all simulations in the absence of literature on other rates of ryegrass pollen rupturing.’

2) L161 – 166. The explanation of the calculation of nspg seems a little confused to me. SPPs include two main types of particles; starch granules and p-particles. The number of 700 to 1000 SPPs corresponds to starch granules (diameter 1.1 µm) (Suphioglu and Abu Chakra). The value of 106 corresponds to p-particles (diameter 0.3-0.4 µm) whose number is more difficult to estimate (Grote 1994, Heslop-Harrison 1982). The diameter value chosen by the authors seems to me too low (200 nm), and if this value is increased to 400 nm diameter, I am afraid that the number of one million p-particles induces a mass of SPPs greater than that of the whole pollen grain. I would therefore like to have the authors' point of view on these considerations and on their choices concerning the size and number of SPPs per pollen grain.

The values used were those cited in the Wozniak et al. 2018 paper. However the model is very quick to re-run. Similar to comment 19, we have decided to change the parameters to be specific to the ryegrass measurements of Suphioglu et al (1992), and are now using nspg = 700, diameter of SPP = 600 nm which is the lower end of Suphioglu et al (1992) measurements (600 nm – 2.5 �m) to be conservative. Use of the 600 nm diameter means the mass of 1 SPP is now 1.13 x 10-13 g.

Please note that most of the figures in the paper use the number of whole pollen ruptured, Nrupt which does not change with these new SPP parameters.

We alter the text starting at line 158 to say ‘ The measurements of Suphioglu et al. (1) on ryegrass showed around 700 SPPs per whole pollen grain of a size range 600 nm – 2.5 �m. We will use 700 SPPs per whole pollen grain with an SPP diameter of 600 nm which is the lower end of Suphioglu et al’s (16) measurements. The SPPs have the same density as whole grass pollen. This yields a mass of one SPP, mSPP = 1.13 × 10-13 g and a fall speed of 0.01 cm s-1.’

3) Fig. 2b and L364-371. By examining the observed shell pollen concentration, it can be seen that it is not maximum at the time of the storm. Is this measurement of shell pollen with a Hirst reliable? Furthermore, if the rupture mechanism does not allow the presence of aerosolized shell pollen, the concentration of the aerosolized shell pollen in the air will not give any information on the concentration of SPPs.

The Hirst or Burkard spore trap remains the standard way to measure pollen. At line 102 “using standard methods”

Other researchers, both published and unpublished have observed asthma events occurring without a correlation with broken pollen shells (see line 366).

We state in section 2.1 that we only have observations of the shell pollen and not the SPPs. We do not know how many SPPs were in the air at the time of the storm. What the paper is trying to do is create a peak in Nrupt at the time of the storm and then hypothesise the concentration of SPPs from this.

4) The mechanism for on-plant mechanical rupturing is not clear to me. How can the pollen rupture on plants because of wind? Can you please better describe this mechanism L218.

Wozniak et al (2018) describe a mechanism for pollen rupturing on the plant using the precipitation and relative humidity functions. What we have done is replace these parameters with wind speed to describe the process of sweeping particles into the atmosphere. The key point is that Mrupt is not reliant on pollen already being airborne in order to rupture it, as it is an emission from the ground. This could account for resuspension of deposited SPPs.

We add text at line 222: ‘A prerequisite of in-atmosphere rupture is the presence of airborne pollen that is already disperse. We adjust Wozniak et al’s description of mechanical rupturing from Eq. 2 to represent a wind speed induced emission of 600 nm particles from the ground, replacing (1-fPRfRH) with either fWS or wind speed as the part of the definition, e.g.:

M_rupt=〖F_rupt n_spg P〗_fx f_WS m_SPP/m_pol , (8)

This process considers the resuspension of previously deposited SPPs.’

Minor issues.

5) L151. A reference for the pollen mass is missing.

At line 151 ‘Derived in Emmerson et al. (2019)’

6) Table 1. It would be relevant to add a first column with the description of the rupture mechanism (e.g. 'wet rupture' for RH>80%?). Is the line 'Dust' really useful in this table? Is there a misspelling in line “Mrupt WS” for column “Nrupt” ?

We’d like to keep the dust line in the table as it is a model simulation. We have replaced the threshold column with a description of the simulation.

Yes, there was a misspelling, it is corrected now.

Experiment name Description In-atmosphere rupture, Nrupt On-plant mechanical rupture, Mrupt

RH ≥ 80% Humidity induced rupturing when RH is ≥ 80% F_rupt×χ

Mrupt RH ≥ 80% F_rupt× χ 〖F_rupt n_spg P〗_fx (1-f_PR f_RH ) m_SPP/m_pol

fWS Rupturing (or emission) using a function of wind speed F_rupt× χ 〖×f〗_WS

Mrupt fWS F_rupt× χ× f_WS 〖F_rupt n_spg P〗_fx f_WS m_SPP/m_pol

WS ≥ 5 m s-1 Rupturing (or emission) using wind speeds ≥ 5 m s-1 F_rupt× χ×WS

Mrupt WS F_rupt ×χ ×WS 〖F_rupt n_spg P〗_fx WS m_SPP/m_pol

RH ≤ 30% Static electricity induced rupturing when RH is ≤ 30% F_rupt× χ

Lightning Lightning induced rupturing F_rupt×χ〖 ×n〗_lightning

Dust Uses a dust tracer Not applicable

7) Fig 1. Flowering grass -> flowering grasses?

Done

8) Fig. 5. Add ‘RH’ before %

Done

9) Fig 5. Is the unit “log10 SPP grains m-3” means log10 SPPs.m-3” ?

Corrected to log10 SPP m-3

10) The discussion on figure 8 should have a more comprehensive conclusion. This part is to my opinion less clear than the rest of the paper.

Line 445 ‘This paper has focussed on the timeseries of pollen shells measured at Melbourne University. Modelling has shown that lightning or a mechanism based on wind speed provides the best explanation of these point measurements. We use figure 8 to determine the spatial variation in SPPs produced at the time of the storm from each of the model simulations, with the aim being to determine if the mechanisms produce a field in SPPs that resembles the position of the storm front, allowing for possible small timing differences related to the meteorology (c.f. Figure 3). ‘

Line 458 ‘At 06:00 UTC the lightning occurred to the west of Melbourne, and the SPPs produced reached Melbourne in the following model timesteps (supplementary figure S2). This is an artefact of the modelling process; in-atmosphere rupturing occurs at the end of each model time step after the airborne concentration of whole pollen is calculated. Transport then occurs at the beginning of the next time step. Following the pattern of lightning occurrences, the position of the peak SPPs incorrectly suggests that towns to the west of Melbourne (e.g. Creswick and Geelong) would receive the majority of the exposure. Although lightning indicates the presence of a thunderstorm, perhaps another meteorological variable of the storm such as diagnosis of strong atmospheric convergence lines might provide a better description of in-atmosphere rupturing (Bannister et al 2020). ’

Reviewer #2: TITLE: Atmospheric modelling of grass pollen rupturing mechanisms for thunderstorm asthma

prediction

The manuscript entitled “Atmospheric modelling of grass pollen rupturing mechanisms for thunderstorm asthma prediction” explored different models to investigate factors influencing pollen rupture that produced high concentrations of SPPs and led to the thunderstorm asthma event in Melbourne. The study used valuable data obtained from several credible sources and demonstrated specialized expertise in this area. Although the data were limited to the locality and the isolated event in 2016, the study helps explain the discrepancies between previous predictions/explanations about pollen rupture mechanisms and the actual phenomenon and will be of interests to scholars worldwide. All data are available without restrictions. Due to the nature of the study, conventional statistical methods were mostly inapplicable.

My main recommendations for improving the manuscript are about making this work more accessible for general readers, especially general practitioners and allergists who will greatly benefit from reading this study. In particular,

11) The description of the three models in paragraph starting on LINE 123 should be accompanied by a table or a figure. Also, additional information about the similarity/differences between these models should be appreciated.

Several acronyms should be described when first mentioned e.g. C-CTM (LINE96), NCEP FNL analyses (LINE 132).

Overall, there is very little discussion about similarities and differences between the models used in this study compared to other previous models. For example, even though the model from Wozniak et al. was described several times in the methods section, it was never mentioned in the discussion.

The Wozniak model was built to represent pollen rupture in terms of providing CCN for precipitation, not for thunderstorm asthma purposes. We use their rupturing mechanisms which are the model simulations referred to as RH >80% and Mrupt RH > 80%.

We include this table for the supplementary section. At line 132 ‘Details of meteorological models used are given in supplementary Table S1’.

ACCESS CCAM WRF

Boundary conditions Global ACCESS ERA Interim NCEP/FNL

Topography Geoscience Australia digital elevation Mapping Geoscience Australia digital elevation Mapping Geoscience Australia digital elevation Mapping

Sea surface temperatures Global Australian Multi-Sensor SST Analysis Daily 0.25° (2)

ERA Interim Real-Time Global NCEP

Boundary layer scheme Lock et al (3) , Edwards et al. (4)

Prognostic turbulence kinetic energy and eddy dissipation (5)

Mellor-Yamada-Janjic scheme (6)

Microphysics scheme Wilson and Ballard (7) single-moment bulk microphysics scheme; rain as a prognostic variable

Prognostic condensate scheme (8,9)

Morrison double-moment scheme (10)

Radiation Edwards and Slingo (11) with incremental time stepping scheme (12)

Longwave: Schwarzkopf and Ramaswamy (13) Shortwave: Freidenreich and Ramaswamy (14)

Rapid radiative transfer model (RRTM) (15)

Land surface scheme The Met Office Surface Exchange Scheme version 2 (MOSES2; Essery et al. (16)

Kowalczyk et al (17)

Noah (18)

Convection Gregory and Rowntree (19)

Mass-flux closure Grell 3D ensemble Scheme (20)

Aerosol feedbacks No Prognostic aerosols with direct and indirect effects (21)

No

Cloud feedbacks yes Wilson et al. (22)

yes yes

At line 139 ‘CCAM and WRF meteorological capabilities were evaluated across south east Australia and found to reproduce temperatures and local scale meteorological features well, with wind speeds and water vapour mixing ratios within benchmark ranges (Monk et al. 2019).’

12) LINE 92-93: “In this paper” was repeated twice. Please remove one.

Done

13) LINE 96; “C-CTM” was introduced for the first time without any explanation. Perhaps, the description in LINE 123-124 should be moved to the Introduction section.

We have removed ‘C-CTM’ at line 96, and keep the description on line 123..

NCEP FNL is National Centers for Environmental Prediction Final reanalyses.

14) LINE 103: For consistency, “AEDT” should be changed to “UTC”.

Done

15) LINE 475-487: This paragraph should belong to the discussion section rather than the conclusion section.

Done

In summary, I would recommend a MINOR REVISION for this manuscript.

Reviewer #3:

Asthma related to thunderstorms (TA) is one of the phenomena that represents a threat to human health which needs to be deeply studied for a correct prevention. Exacerbations of asthma appearing during a thunderstorm in pollen seasons are characterized, at the beginning of the storms, by a rapid increase in visits to the general practitioners or in the emergency departments of hospitals due to attacks of asthma in subjects with allergic IgE-mediated sensitization to allergenic pollens (prevalently Gramineae and Parietaria) or mold spores of Alternaria alternata. In the first 20 to 30 minutes of a thunderstorm, patients with pollen allergy can inhale a high concentration of allergens released in atmosphere from pollen grains after the rupture of pollens. Patients without asthma symptoms, but who suffer from seasonal rhinitis may have an asthma attack during a thunderstorm in pollen seasons .

During the events of TA there is a strong association with the elevation of atmospheric concentrations of pollen grains, such as grasses or other species of allergenic plants and symptoms of respiratory allergy and asthma attacks. . A possible explanation for TA involves the role of rainwater promoting the release of inhalable particles deriving from the rupture of pollen grains. The world’s most severe thunderstorm asthma event occurred in Melbourne, Australia on 21 November 2016, coinciding with the peak of the grass pollen season with 10 deaths and about one twousand persons with asthma attacks.

As mentioned before, the aetiological role of thunderstorms in these events is thought to derive from the rupture of pollens in high humidity conditions, releasing large numbers of sub-pollen particles (SPPs) with pauci-micronic size very easily inhaled deep into the lungs. In this manuscript the authors try to explain the pathogenetic background of TA. The humidity hypothesis was implemented into a three dimensional atmospheric model and driven by inputs from three meteorological models, but the mechanism could not explain how the Melbourne event occurred because relative humidity was very low throughout the atmosphere. Tests in this paper showed humidity induced rupturing occurred frequently at other times and would likely lead to recurrent false alarms if used in a predictive capacity. They used the model to investigate a range of other possible pollen rupturing mechanisms which could have produced high concentrations of subpollen particles in the atmosphere during the storm. The mechanisms studied involve mechanical friction from wind gusts, electrical build up and discharge incurred during conditions of low relative humidity, and lightning strikes.

In particular the mechanisms studied involve mechanical friction from wind gusts, the humidity and the electrical role of thunderbolds ( lightning strikes) . The results of this study suggest that these mechanisms likely operated in tandem with one another, but the lightning method was the only mechanism to generate a pattern in SPPs following the path of the storm. If humidity induced rupturing cannot explain the 2016 Melbourne event, then new targeted laboratory studies of alternative pollen rupture mechanisms would be of value to help constrain the parameterisation of the pollen rupturing process.

In my opinin this is an intersting update on pathogenetic mechanisms of TA but

I suggest to add considerations on the clinical importance of these events to better understand the pathogenesis of these event to prevent in future the risk of near fatal asthma and of deaths for asthma.

Considering that these events occurred not only in Australia but exacerbations and asthma epidemics related to thunderstorms have been described in several cities, mainly in Europe (Birmingham and London in the United Kingdom and Naples in Italy), I suggest to add in the references also manuscripts published in journals of American Academy AAAAI such as JACI ( D'Amato G, et al Thunderstorm-related asthma attacks .J Allergy Clin Immunol. 2017 Jun;139(6):1786-1787. doi: 10.1016/j.jaci.2017.03.003. Epub 2017 Mar 23.PMID: 28342913 ) and European Academy EAACI ( D'Amato G, et al . Latest news on relationship between thunderstorms and respiratory allergy, severe asthma, and deaths for asthma. Allergy. 2019;74(1):9-11.)

I do not suggest to accept the paper considering that authors haven’t modified the manuscript following my suggestions. You asked my engagemend as reviewer, I worked a lot to read the paper and to suggest some variations and integrations that authors haven’t accepted my suggestions, in particular, they havent’ accepted to integrate references with two recent publications publishd in Journals of American Academy of Allergy, Asthma and Clinical Immunology (JACI) and in the journal of European Academy (Allergy). In my opinion, as invited reviewer , the paper can’t be accepted for publication without this integration of citations.

We are confused by this review. Firstly our manuscript has never been submitted or reviewed anywhere else, and the reviewer has mistaken it for another piece of work they have reviewed. As stated in the covering letter, our manuscript has an atmospheric modelling focus, not on the clinical aspects of asthma. We don’t think the manuscript warrants lengthening with such a clinical discussion.

Reviewer #3 does not have any comments on the science of our manuscript, only that it doesn’t include two of his references. If the editor decides this is an impediment to our publishing this manuscript, then we will include them.

Reviewer #4:

This manuscript uses atmospheric models to test and predict the concentrations of pollen grains and sub-pollen particles (SPP) in the atmosphere surrounding the 20-21 November thunderstorm asthma epidemic in Melbourne, Australia. The article addresses an important topic and concludes that a better understanding of pollen rupturing under laboratory conditions is needed to develop accurate predictive models.

Several aspects of the manuscript are in need of significant improvement prior to consideration for publication. In particular, the observational data should be expanded well beyond the 34 hours surrounding the thunderstorm asthma epidemic to enable more robust model evaluation at times when asthma was not triggered, but pollen counts may have been high. Further, more robust quantitative analysis of model performance in reproducing observations is needed. Model assumptions, particularly the number of SPP per pollen grain needs further consideration and justification. Some highly relevant and recently literature should be considered.

16. The use of only 34 hours of intact pollen grain counts and pollen shell data is much too limited. For the results presented herein to be considered robust, the authors must expand the time period of experimental observations to include additional time periods before and after this period. One week should be considered the minimum duration for consideration. This is particularly important to evaluation of the model accuracy. Further, it is critical to demonstrating how the model could over-predict SPP outside of the selected thunderstorm asthma event.

We now expand the time series plots in figures 2 and 6 to include 1 full week of model results.

It is not possible to expand the hourly pollen grain nor pollen shell data, as 24-hour concentrations of pollen measured on days prior to, and after Nov 21st were mostly too low to make hourly counting worthwhile (minimum 50 grain m-3).

Date 24-hour whole pollen concentration grains m-3

18.11.16 60

19.11.16 22

20.11.16 29

21.11.16 102

22.11.16 19

23.11.16 3

24.11.16 17

We have included these 24-hourly observations in the time series plot of figure 2a.

At line 111. “Usual practice is to count pollen across 24-hour transects, as the process is manually demanding; for this study we counted vertical transects to obtain hourly measurements around the 21 November event, with pollen counts converted into grains m-3. 24 hour pollen counts either side of 21 November were too low to consider hourly subdivision.”

Line 290 ‘The models show that humidity induced rupturing was strongest at other times in the week, e.g. 18 and 19 November (Figure 2b),’

17. In exploring different scenarios that could contribute SPP to the atmosphere (section 3.2 and figure 6), it is critical for the authors to consider time periods outside of the 34 hours to assess model accuracy. For example, do the models suggest wind speeds > 5 m/s outside of the 21 November event contribute to pollen shells?

We have expanded the model timeseries in figure 6 to include 1 week from 18-24 November 2016 (with the exception of the dust simulation). The wind gusts were strongest on 20 - 21 November which is already discussed in section 3.2.

18. Throughout the manuscript the authors refer to correlations between the model and observations (e.g., line 368, 378, 380, 383, 403, 430, etc.), but no correlation coefficients are presented. Quantitative comparisons to evaluate the model accuracy are needed.

Correlation coefficients are presented within the legends of each panel within figures 2 and 6. We include them within the text to make it clearer.

Line 368 (r =0.08 – 0.30) Line 378 (r=0.33 – 0.51 in figure 6d) Line 380 (r=0.03 – 0.30 in figure 6g) Line 383 ‘r correlations’ Line 403 (r=0.33 – 0.51 in figure 6d) Line 430 (r=0.04 – 0.28 figure 6f)

19. The approximation by Wozniak et al. 2018 of 106 SPP per pollen grain was intended to be an upper estimate of the number of cloud condensation nuclei (CCN) to estimate the maximum potential impact of SPP on precipitation. It is not a realistic estimate, especially in light of the SPP size distributions observed experimentally for ryegrass, which includes a large number of starch granules 1-2 μm in diameter (Suphioglu et al. 1992, Taylor et al. 2002) that dominate the mass of SPP. Consequently, the chosen nSPP is a large over-estimate of the number of SPP per ryegrass pollen grain. Further discussion of experimental data and justification for the assumptions made are needed.

As with comment 2, we have re-run the model using the diameter of 1 SPP = 600 nm and 700 SPP per whole pollen ruptured. These new parameters now represent ryegrass pollen observations. Text changed as per comment 2.

20. It is incorrect that SPP cannot be monitored with current techniques (lines 279 and 483). Hughes et al. (2020) report the first online measurements of SPP (a.k.a. pollen fragments) during convective storms using single-particle fluorescence spectroscopy and chemical tracers.

At line 279 ‘We have not measured SPP concentrations in this work’

At line 483 ‘As we cannot determine the concentrations of SPPs in the Melbourne atmosphere at the time of the storm, we do not know whether the concentrations of pollen shells and SPPs are correlated.’

21. The findings of Hughes et al. (2020) should be considered and discussed in the context of the model evaluation. Key points to consider is the timing of SPP concentrations with respect to the arrival of the thunderstorm (e.g., line 289), their observation of SPP in the absence of lightning, concentrations of SPP observed relative to the model (e.g., line 447), their observations of higher SPP concentrations in strong storms with high windspeeds and downdrafts (which may help to explain differences across 20 and 21 November (e.g., line 479), and their observations of SPP in precipitation events of many types during tree pollen season (which suggests SPP events are quite common, but vary in strength; line 505-507).

The Hughes (2020) paper is methodologically interesting and shows pollen rupturing after most rain events, but it lacks any connection between the increased amounts of ruptured pollen in the air and a clinical outcome, such as an outbreak of acute bronchospasm and an increased demand on the hospital system. We’re not convinced that the findings of Hughes et al (2020) can explain the Melbourne event because there was very little rain.

Line 57. ‘Hughes et al. (2020) were the first to determine SPPs under high rainfall conditions using single-particle fluorescence spectroscopy coincident with measurements of pollen markers such as fructose.’

At line 289 ‘ Key to the Hughes et al (2020) finding was that SPP increases were associated with high rates of rainfall coincident with thunderstorm activity. The difference in the Melbourne storm was the absence of rain. Lack of rain is the major factor in why so many people were outside at the time and were exposed.’

At line 369. ‘Marks et al. (23) did show increases in both pollen shells and whole grass pollen during a 1997 TA event in New South Wales, but the ratio of pollen shells to whole pollen did not increase due to the storm. By contrast, Hughes et al observed a decrease in whole pollen concentrations due to the rain.’

22. Interestingly, Hughes et al. (2020) estimate that at least one-third of the pollen grains ruptured in the convective storm highlighted in their article, similar to the fraction of total pollen grains that the pollen shells in this study, suggesting similarities in the number of pollens that rupture in the case of ryegrass in Melbourne.

Hughes et al (2020) say that at least one-fifth (or 20%) of the pollen in the air is ruptured, not one third. This is much less than the 70% rupturing rate observed by Taylor et al (2002) on ryegrass pollen in the laboratory. We’re using 70% as the fraction of pollen that ruptures, from Taylor et al (2002).

23. The model described appears to allow for pollen rupturing at high humidity (section 3.1). Does the model consider and account for the closing of anthers at high humidity to minimize pollen exposure to humid air? This is a likely source of error contributing to the high estimates of SPP at night that is not consistent with observations.

The emission parameterisation for whole pollen at high humidity takes into account the closing of anthers (Emmerson et al., 2019). Thus whole pollen is only emitted when the humidity is low enough to do so.

At line 361. ‘The condition of the 80% RH threshold required for pollen rupturing is also a condition that suppresses whole pollen emissions from the plant in VGPEM, via the closing of anthers at high humidity.’

24. In stating “we find that the RH throughout the atmosphere to be well below the 80% required for pollen altitude described in Taylor and Jonsson (2004), which is suggested to approach 100% at the cloud base? For example, in Figure 4, it appears that the 80% threshold is met by some models at a pressure of 600 hPa, which is relevant to pollen grains entrained in updrafts. The statement in the abstract that most pollen remained within 40 m of the surface at line 24 suggests that the model may not accurately represent the vertical distribution of pollen grains in the atmosphere.

The 80% threshold is only just met at Melbourne airport for the WRF model in figure 4. We show the spatial concentrations of SPPs in WRFC-CTM in figure S1, which shows that SPPs are present. However the key point of this paper is that more SPPs are produced regularly at other times, which does not make the mechanism a good one for the prediction of thunderstorm asthma (see line 508).

At line 353 ‘ At the time of the storm in central Melbourne we find that the RH throughout the atmosphere to be well below the 80% required. The key finding is that more SPPs are produced regularly at other times when RH tends to be higher, such as at night rather than during a hot late spring day. This does not make the mechanism a good one for the prediction of thunderstorm asthma.’

We disagree that the model may not accurately represent the vertical distribution in the atmosphere. Observations by Damialis et al (2017) show that grass pollen is mainly found at the surface (>77% of total). Less than 18 % of total grass pollen was found at 2000 m.

Adjust line 333 ‘Modelled vertical concentrations of whole grass pollen are largely logarithmic, with most (62% average across models) situated in the first 40 m, similar to the ground-based measurements made by Damialis et al. (24) who showed 77% grass pollen at the surface and less than 18 % at 2000 m. It is only in the WRFC-CTM profile that the whole pollen may intersect with RH conditions being high enough for rupture, noting that observations plotted in Fig 4 were above Melbourne Airport whereas rupturing may have occurred at other locations in the model domain. ’

25. Like 396 – the statement that SPP are too small to contribute much to PM2.5 is not supported with any evidence. Meanwhile, prior work by Rathnayake et al. (2017) showed that pollen contributed 0.74 μg/m3 corresponding to 42% of PM2.5 mass on 2 May 2013 during tree pollen season when a thunderstorm struck.

Air quality monitoring sites in Melbourne reported a peak in PM10 at the time of the storm, but no coincident peak in PM2.5. Yet there was a thunderstorm asthma event.

We will change line 396 to read “There was no increase in observed PM2.5 mass concentrations across Melbourne, although whole pollen and dust are generally found in more coarse size fractions. Assuming SPPs were responsible for the 2016 Melbourne event, the air quality observations suggest SPPs were too small to contribute much mass to PM2.5”.

26. In considering the role of lightning (paragraph beginning at line 433) – have the authors considered cloud-to-cloud lightning, or only cloud-to-ground lightning strikes? Both may be relevant to pollen rupturing, particularly to pollen grains at higher altitudes.

The WWLLN dataset includes both cloud-to-ground and cloud-to-cloud lightning. The Hughes et al (2020) paper suggests that neither cloud-to-cloud nor cloud-to-ground lightning was required for pollen fragments to occur.

At line 239 “The WWLLN dataset includes both cloud-to-ground and cloud-to-cloud lightning, but preferentially detect the stronger cloud-to-ground occurences as noted by Virts et al. (25)”

27. Line 49 – Provide an explanation for how SPP would become concentrated at ground level.

We have added the gust front outflow to figure 1, as described in Marks et al (2001)

28. Figure 1 – Define the meaning of the symbols used, especially different types of arrows, plusses, and minuses.

+ and – signs represent the electrical charge within the thunderstorm cloud. We have added a key to remove some of the different arrow styles.

29. Table 1 – It would be helpful to the reader if you defined the many variables in these equations as part of the table.

Frupt = fraction of whole pollen shells that rupture = 0.7. χ = airborne concentration of whole pollen, �g m-3, nspg = number of SPP per whole pollen grain = 700. Pfx = whole pollen emission rate, g m-3. Fpr = precipitation function. fRH relative humidity function. MSPP = mass of 1 SPP = 1.13 x 10-13 g. MPOL = mass of 1 whole pollen grain = 2.24 x 10-9 g. fWS = function of wind speed. WS = wind speed, m s-1. Nlightning = number of lightning occurrences.

30. Terminology – pollen “exine” is a more biologically accurate term than “shell”

Changed to exine

Works Cited

Hughes, D. D., C. B. A. Mampage, L. M. Jones, Z. Liu and E. A. Stone (2020). "Characterization of Atmospheric Pollen Fragments during Springtime Thunderstorms." Environmental Science & Technology Letters 7(6): 409-414.

Rathnayake, C. M., N. Metwali, T. Jayarathne, J. Kettler, Y. Huang, P. S. Thorne, P. T. O'Shaughnessy and E. A. Stone (2017). "Influence of rain on the abundance of bioaerosols in fine and coarse particles." Atmos. Chem. Phys. 17(3): 2459-2475.

Suphioglu, C., M. B. Singh, P. Taylor, R. Bellomo, P. Holmes, R. Puy and R. B. Knox (1992). "Mechanism of grass-pollen induced asthma." Lancet 339(8793): 569-572.

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Taylor, P. E. and H. Jonsson (2004). "Thunderstorm asthma." Current Allergy and Asthma Reports 4(5): 409-413.

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Decision Letter 1

Chon-Lin Lee

9 Feb 2021

PONE-D-20-27816R1

Atmospheric modelling of grass pollen rupturing mechanisms for thunderstorm asthma prediction.

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Reviewer #1: The corrected version completely answers my questions and I consider this paper suitable for publication in PLOS ONE.

However, I have a problem with the "shell/exine" correction suggested by a fellow reviewer. The use of shell in order to refer to the empty pollen enveloppe was correct and I strongly disagree with the use of exine to replace shell. The term shell is used in microencapsulation study, see for example :

Diego–Taboada A, Beckett ST, Atkin SL, Mackenzie G (2014) Hollow pollen shells to enhance drug delivery. Pharmaceutics 6: 80–96

Chapter 24 - Pollen and Spore Shells—Nature’s Microcapsules, Microencapsulation in the Food Industry A Practical Implementation Guide 2014, Pages 283-297

The term exine refers to the outer layer of the pollen wall; it is only a part of the pollen enveloppe (Halbritter et al., Illustrated Pollen Terminology, 2018). I would suggest to use pollen shell, pollen enveloppe, empty (emptied ?) pollen, broken pollen grain, fragmented pollen, but not exine which make incomprehensible some sentences.

Minor comments.

L283 – the pollen mass should be 2.24 x 10-8 g not 2.24 x 10-9 g (22 ng)

Reviewer #2: Review Comments to the Author

I feel that the authors have addressed my concerns and the manuscript acceptable for publication.

Reviewer #3: Minor revision (but important for acceptance or rebuttal, see my enclosed comment).

I realize that authors refused to modify the manuscript following my suggestions . In particular they refuse , in my opinion without motivation, to add two references published in the two most important journals of allergology in the world (JACI and Allergy) . In my opinion these references have importance as a link between pathogenetic and clinical aspects of thunderstorm asthma to clarify the mechanism of rupture of pollen grains during a thunderstorm in pollen seasons and this point is important for the readers

Reviewer #4: This manuscript presents modeling studies of pollen grains and ruptured pollen (called pollen exine) surrounding the Melbourne, Australia thunderstorm asthma epidemic in 2016. The authors examine the extent to which current pollen rupturing mechanisms documented in the literature can parameterize the occurrence of sub-pollen particles. Overall, the authors reports show that the current understanding of pollen rupturing mechanisms (e.g., humidity > 80%, presence of lightning, wind speeds) are lacking and model predictions do not agree well with experimental observations. The authors conclude that a better understanding of pollen rupturing is needed to support modeling efforts and development of an early-warning system.

The authors have addressed most of the reviewer’s concerns. Additional improvements are needed prior to publication, which are outlined below. I concur with the authors that Reviewer 3’s comments appear are not applicable to the current manuscript.

1. The statistics reported are not yet to the high technical standard required by PLOS ONE. Correlations are widely used as a means of model comparison; however, only Pearson’s correlation coefficients (R values) are reported. When comparing measurement and model results, the slope of the relationship is also needed to compare the magnitude of the model prediction to the experimental data.

2. Line 167: Provide justification for the use of 0.7 for the fraction of whole grass pollen grains that rupture; i.e. that this is the fraction of ryegrass pollen grains that rupture in water after 5 minutes and is the only data available in the literature of its kind.

3. Clarification is needed in the discussion of observed and modeled pollen exines. Is it assumed in the model that one exine fragment is produced for one pollen grain?

4. In discussing Figure 2, please comment on the ability of the model to capture the magnitude of pollen exines. It appears that there is a large under-prediction in panel (b) and a large over-prediction in panel (c).

5. Also in discussing Figure 2 in the paragraph beginning at line 297, the authors should discuss the observations of pollen exine on 20 November. It appears that there is experimental evidence of high concentrations of ruptured pollen grains, although no epidemiological evidence of a thunderstorm asthma outbreak. This seems to suggest that pollen exine is not always linked to negative respiratory outcomes, and that it is not a good measure of allergenic sub-pollen particles that trigger thunderstorm asthma.

6. The discussion of the data from Damailis et al. (2017, doi:10.1038/srep44535) should be improved. In Damailis et al. (2017), Poaceae (grass) pollen had concentrations of 76 grains m-3 at 2000m (measured by aircraft) and 196 grains m-3 at the surface. This corresponds to a 2.6 times higher concentration at the surface compared to 2000 m. The numbers cited by the authors (in Damailis et al. Table 1) correspond to a the “contribution to the total concentration”, which represents the relative abundance of Poaceae pollen relative to other pollen types (17.6% at 2000m and 77.7% at ground level) which is not appropriate for model comparison in this context.

7. To resolve the error identified above, the authors should provide a comparable model comparison to these experimental data. This may be done by comparing the ratio of the modeled pollen grain concentration at the surface concentration to that at 2000 m. Observations show the surface is 2.6 times more concentrated than at 2000 m. A glance at Figure 4 panel d indicates the models predict this ratio to be in the range of 50 for WRF, 1000 CCAM, and 10,000 for ACCESS, suggesting a large under-estimation of pollen grain concentrations at 2000m and disagreement between the three meteorological models.

8. The authors should reconsider the accuracy of their vertical distributions of pollen grains as a likely source of model error. It appears like the model incorrectly predicts the vertical distribution of pollen grains, keeping them concentrated at the surface and away from higher RH at higher altitude where osmotic rupturing would occur. This is a concern raised by reviewer 4 (comment 24 in the response letter) that has not been adequately addressed in the revised manuscript, because the response incorrectly interprets the results of Damailis et al. (2017) as noted in the earlier comment. Relevant to this topic, are the broader results of Damailis et al. (2017) that airborne concentrations of pollen (at 2000m), measured by aircraft, exceeded those at ground level in the case of 12 of 14 observed pollen species, with Poaceae being one of two pollen types having higher concentrations at ground level. Overall, Damailis et al. (2017) conclude that “our data and the statistical analysis have actually proved lower [pollen and fungal spore] concentrations at lower elevations.”

9. Line 382 – explain why “this does not make the mechanism a good one for the prediction of thunderstorm asthma”, e.g., because it would lead to false positives.

10. PLOS ONE requires that all data be made available. It appears that only the radiosonde data is available (line 567), but the 24-h and hourly pollen and pollen exine counts are not listed. Please add these observational data to these data archives, or provide an alternate link to a permanent database.

Minor comments

11. Line 116: italicized word missing - pollen counts on either side of 21 November

12. Line 382: Cite the “rupturing experiments cited earlier” here, too, to avoid ambiguity.

13. Line 430: Please name the specific “air quality observations.” If not described in the methods of this paper, please provide a reference (e.g., to an online database of hourly PM2.5).

14. Line 460: Revise “when measurements of SPP concentrations are possible” following recent observations of SPP by Hughes et al. (2020, reference 18).

15. Clarify – SPP concentrations should not have units of “grains m-3” because they are not intact grains. A number concentration with units of “m-3” is more appropriate.

16. Line 523: Clarify – “As we did not determine the concentrations of SPPs….”

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


18 Feb 2021

Dear Editor,

As requested, we have focussed on responding to comments from reviewer #4. In particular we have completed another test to address their concerns about the vertical concentration of whole pollen in the models. By forcing higher concentrations of whole pollen at 2000 m in the model we have shown that rupturing still does not occur at the time of the storm due to low relative humidity. Higher rupturing rates remain at other times in the week, and mainly at night. The conclusion of the manuscript remains the same – that use of a relative humidity threshold to rupture pollen in a forecast system would lead to frequent false alarms of thunderstorm asthma.

We have also responded to the couple of comments from reviewer #1, and were happy to revert back to the nomenclature of pollen 'shells' at their request.

Please see the 'response to reviewers' file for full details.

Kind regards

Kathryn Emmerson

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Decision Letter 2

Chon-Lin Lee

19 Mar 2021

Atmospheric modelling of grass pollen rupturing mechanisms for thunderstorm asthma prediction.

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Atmospheric modelling of grass pollen rupturing mechanisms for thunderstorm asthma prediction

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    Data Availability Statement

    Measured whole grass pollen and pollen shell concentrations from Melbourne University available in S1 and S2 Tables. Radiosonde data sourced from University of Wyoming: http://weather.uwyo.edu/upperair/sounding.html. Hourly PM10 and PM2.5 observations sourced from Environmental Protection Authority Victoria: https://discover.data.vic.gov.au/dataset/epa-air-watch-all-sites-air-quality-hourly-averages-yearly/historical. Code for VGPEM is available at: https://gmd.copernicus.org/articles/12/2195/2019/gmd-12-2195-2019-supplement.pdf. Radiosonde data sourced from University of Wyoming: http://weather.uwyo.edu/upperair/sounding.html.


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