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. 2021 Jul 30;16(7):e0255094. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0255094

Urban-rural disparities in institutional delivery among women in East Africa: A decomposition analysis

Reta Dewau 1,*, Dessie Abebaw Angaw 2, Getahun Molla Kassa 2, Baye Dagnew 3, Yigizie Yeshaw 3, Amare Muche 1, Dejen Getaneh Feleke 4, Eshetie Molla 5, Enyew Dagnew Yehuala 6, Sisay Eshete Tadesse 7, Melaku Yalew 8, Zinabu Fentaw 1, Ahmed Hussien Asfaw 7, Assefa Andargie 1, Muluken Genetu Chanie 9, Wolde Melese Ayele 1, Anissa Mohammed Hassen 1, Yitayish Damtie 8, Foziya Mohammed Hussein 7, Zinet Abegaz Asfaw 8, Elsabeth Addisu 8, Bezawit Adane 1, Fanos Yeshanew Ayele 7, Bereket Kefale 8, Aregash Abebayehu Zerga 7, Tefera Chane Mekonnen 7, Mogesie Necho 10, Oumer Abdulkadir Ebrahim 11, Metadel Adane 12, Tadesse Awoke Ayele 2
Editor: Fernando C Wehrmeister13
PMCID: PMC8323938  PMID: 34329310

Abstract

Background

Though institutional delivery plays a significant role in maternal and child health, there is substantial evidence that the majority of rural women have lower health facility delivery than urban women. So, identifying the drivers of these disparities will help policy-makers and programmers with the reduction of maternal and child death.

Methods

The study used the data on a nationwide representative sample from the most recent rounds of the Demographic and Health Survey (DHS) of four East African countries. A Blinder-Oaxaca decomposition analysis and its extensions was conducted to see the urban-rural differences in institutional delivery into two components: one that is explained by residence difference in the level of the determinants (covariate effects), and the other components was explained by differences in the effect of the covariates on the outcome (coefficient effects).

Results

The findings showed that institutional delivery rates were 21.00% in Ethiopia, 62.61% in Kenya, 65.29% in Tanzania and 74.64% in Uganda. The urban-rural difference in institutional delivery was higher in the case of Ethiopia (61%), Kenya (32%) and Tanzania (30.3%), while the gap was relatively lower in the case of Uganda (19.2%). Findings of the Blinder-Oaxaca decomposition and its extension showed that the covariate effect was dominant in all study countries. The results were robust to the different decomposition weighting schemes. The frequency of antenatal care, wealth and parity inequality between urban and rural households explains most of the institutional delivery gap.

Conclusions

The urban-rural institutional delivery disparities were high in study countries. By identifying the underlying factors behind the urban-rural institutional birth disparities, the findings of this study help in designing effective intervention measures targeted at reducing residential inequalities and improving population health outcomes. Future interventions to encourage institutional deliveries to rural women of these countries should therefore emphasize increasing rural women’s income, access to health care facilities to increase the frequency of antenatal care utilization.

Introduction

Despite progress in reducing maternal mortality worldwide and an ambitious plan has been set to reduce the maternal mortality ratio below 70 per 100,000 live births by the year 2030, there were an estimated 295,000maternal deaths due to pregnancy and child birth by the year 2017 [1, 2]. In 2016, maternal death was the second foremost cause of mortality for women of reproductive-age, following HIV/AIDS, and it was the primary cause among women aged 15–29 years [2]. Almost all maternal deaths (95%) were recorded in low and lower-middle-income countries, and nearly two-thirds (65%) happened in Africa [2].

In 2017, the highest number of maternal mortalities in Africa was estimated in Ethiopia and Tanzania next to Nigeria and the Democratic Republic of Congo [1]. The ratio of maternal deaths was 556 in Tanzania [3], 412 in Ethiopia [4], 362 in Kenya [5] and 336 in Uganda [6] per 100,000 live births.

Most of these passings were avoidable with legitimate clinical consideration and sterile settings during delivery and by lessening the dangers of inconveniences and disease to either the mother or the baby. That is why institutional delivery has been broadly promoted as a key approach to reducing maternal deaths [4, 5, 79].

However, according to the 2016 Ethiopian Demographic Health Survey (EDHS), the proportion of facility institutional deliveries attended in Ethiopia was still desperately lower compared to countries in sub-Saharan Africa (SSA) 47% [4]. Even though women have accessed cost-free maternal and newborn care services, the proportion of institutional deliveries were in Ethiopia 26% [4], Kenya 61% [5], in Tanzania 63% [3] and in Uganda 74% [6]. Yet the goal of institutional delivery is to save the lives of mothers and their newborns through skilled health professional assistance and quality care [2, 4].

Moreover, evidence also revealed that urban-rural significant disparities in health facility deliveries in developing countries [4, 5, 9]. According to the EDHS 2016 report, of the total (26%) institutional deliveries, 79% of deliveries were in urban areas and only 21% of births in rural women [4]. In Kenya, urban institutional delivery was 82% and rural residents received 48.5% [5], in Tanzania it was 86.4% and rural residents received 53.7% [3] and in Uganda it was 87.8% in urban areas and 69.5% in rural areas [6]. It is well known that home delivery is particularly high in developing countries, especially among the poorest households, and rural area residents. There is considerable evidence that rural women gave home delivery compared to their urban counterparts [4, 5, 9, 10]. For instance, decomposition analysis unfolded that urban residences in India and Ghana positively contributed to the facility delivery inequalities [10, 11]. Another study conducted in Ethiopia [1214], Guinea-Bissau [15], and Malawi [16] also showed similar findings. These urban-rural discrepancies were also well documented in different countries, DHS and WHO reports [2, 4].

From different literatures, various explanatory variables were significantly linked with facility-based delivery women education [10, 13, 14, 1619] wealth index [10, 12, 17, 20], antenatal care [10, 13, 17, 1921], husband’s educational status [12, 18], average distance from health facility, birth order [12], mass media exposure [14, 18, 19, 21], maternal age [12, 14], marital status [16], parity [16, 22], age at first pregnancy [22], occupational status [22], types of pregnancy [12, 22, 23], and frequency of ANC Visit [22]. However, the decomposition analysis method helps to decompose inequalities in institutional deliveries in urban-rural settings. This difference was not rigorously explained using the decomposition method. Since the majority (64–80%) of Kenya, Tanzania, Uganda and Ethiopian population reside rurally [36] and their DHS data collection period proximity, we selected these countries for the analysis. Further progress in national maternal health outcomes cannot be realized, while not increasing facility delivery in rural areas. To develop effective strategies that minimize this urban-rural gap demands such, a greater understanding of the underlying factors contributing to these disparities in institutional deliveries between urban and rural areas has paramount importance. So, this study aimed to identify the sources of variation in institutional delivery between the urban and rural areas in East Africa by using a decomposition analysis method.

Methods

Source of data and population

This study used data from the most recent rounds of the Demographic and Health Survey (DHS) from Ethiopia, Kenya, Tanzania and Uganda conducted from 2014 to 2016 [36]. The DHS is an international survey conducted in 90 countries with the main objective of improving the collection, analysis, and dissemination of population, health, and nutrition data and to facilitate the use of these data for planning, policy-making and program management in developing countries. DHS collected data involving women 15–49 and men 15 to 59 as well as children under five. However, for the current study our analysis was restricted to only individual women’s dataset [24]. The source population for this study was all women of reproductive age (15–49 years) in the study area. The sampled population was all reproductive-age women in each household in the enumeration area, and focused on their deliveries during the 5 years preceding the survey for each country.

Sampling and sample size

Urban-rural based stratified two stage cluster sampling was employed for all countries. Stratification was done by region as well as place of residence for Ethiopia. In the first stage, clusters were selected based on the Probability Proportional to Size (PPS) method and in the second stage, equal numbers of households were selected using systematic random sampling [36]. From Ethiopia, Kenya, Tanzania and Uganda, 645, 1612, 608 and 697 clusters were sampled in the first stage respectively. For Ethiopia 28, Kenya 25, Tanzania 22 and Uganda, 30 households per cluster were selected in the second stage. A total of 92548 households (18,008 in Ethiopia, 40,300 in Kenya, 13,360 in Tanzania and 20,880 in Uganda) were sampled. Overall, the household response rate was 99% for Kenya and 98% for Ethiopia, Tanzania and Uganda. From identified eligible women, the response rate for women interviewed was 95% for Ethiopia and 97% for the rest of the countries. The current study incorporates 643 clusters and 10,547 births from Ethiopia [4], 1,593 clusters and 20,840 births from Kenya [5], 608 clusters and 10,175 births from Tanzania [3] and 696 clusters and 15,154 births from Uganda [6].

Study variable measurement

Dependent variable

Institutional delivery was the outcome of interest and was assessed using self-reported data on the place of delivery of all births that happened within 5 years of the dates of the surveys. For analysis, it was measured as a binary variable and was classified as “1” if a woman delivered in any healthcare facility and otherwise “0”.

Equity Stratifier variable

Area of residency was the key independent variable and was a binary; classified as urban or rural.

Explanatory variables

Additional variables were extracted from the recent DHS surveys of four countries and they were treated as covariates in all analyses. These included factors that are known to be associated with institutional delivery such as; education level (ordinal categorical variable with categories ‘no education’, ‘primary education’, ‘secondary education’, and ‘higher education’), wealth index (ordinal categorical variables with”poor”,”middle”, and”rich”), and distance from a health facility (binary variable classified as one if the woman considered the distance to be a barrier to accessing care and zero otherwise), Husband’s educational status (ordinal variable with “no education”, “primary education”, “secondary education”, and “higher education”), occupational status (nominal categories with “not working”, “agricultural” “government employed” or “manual worker”) and media exposure (dummy variable with “exposed” or “not exposed”). Socio-demographic factors include marital status (categorical variable with "Not married," "married," or "widowed" and age in years at birth of a young child (continuous variable created from the difference between the year of child birth (b2) and the year of maternal birth (V010). marital status (categorical variable with “Not married”, “married” or”widowed”). Antenatal care visits attended (categorical variable with “none”, and “one and above”), and parity (ordinal categorical variable representing the number of children born to a woman “1”, “2 to 4” and “5 and above “). These classification was made based on previous literatures [11, 12, 16, 17, 23, 25].

Operational definition

Media exposure. Women are considered as regularly exposed to media if they have at least one of the media (newspaper, radio or television) at least once a week otherwise considered as have no access [4].

Wealth index. Based on the number and kinds of consumer goods they own, households are given scores. Principal component analysis was used to derive these scores. National wealth quintiles are compiled by assigning the household score to each usual household member, and then dividing the distribution into five equal categories, each comprising 20% of the population from the lowest poorest to richest for the current analysis we combine poorest and poorer as poor, richest and richer as rich and middle as it is [4].

Statistical analyses

Data management and statistical analyses were conducted using STATA/MP 16.0 software. Means with standard deviation (SD) for normally distributed and median with Interquartile Range (IQR) for skewed continuous variables and frequency with percentages for categorical variables were calculated to describe the characteristics of the study population by area of residency. Skewness and kurtosis test with normal quantile plot were used to assess normality. During analysis the survey design has been taken into account. The Pearson chi-square test was used to examine whether the place of delivery in urban and rural women’s was statistically significant for categorical variables and independent t-test was used to compare the mean difference between urban and rural. To explain the urban-rural disparities in place of delivery among reproductive-age women, the Blinder-Oaxaca decomposition analysis was used. This technique decomposes the differences in an outcome for two groups can be explained by differences in the level or distribution of the determinants of the outcome (explained component/covariates effect), differences in the impact of these determinants on the outcome (unexplained component/coefficients effect), and/or the interaction of the two [26].

For example, if Yi, was the outcome variable, and an independent variable X and we have two groups, urban and rural, then the place of delivery for the rural, and urban women are given asε

Yirural=βruralxi+εrural (1)
Yiurban=βurbanxi+εurban (2)

Thus the urban-rural gap in the mean place of delivery (Yurban −Yrural), is given as

  1. Oaxaca decomposition

YurbanYrural=(XurbanXrural)βrural+(βurbanβrural)Xurban+(XruralXurban)(βruralβurban) (3)
YurbanYrural=ΔXβurban+ΔβXrural+ΔXΔβ (4)
=E+C+CE (5)

Where ΔX is the mean difference explanatory variables (Xurban—Xrural) and similarly Δβ = βurban − βrural,

  • 2

    Blinder decomposition

YurbanYrural=(XruralXurban)βrural+(βruralβurban)Xurban+(XruralXurban)(βruralβurban) (6)
YurbanYrural=ΔXβrural+ΔβXurban+ΔXΔβ (7)
=E+C+CE (8)

So that the gap in average outcomes can be thought of as deriving from a gap in endowments (E), a gap in coefficients (C), and a gap arising from the interaction of endowments and coefficients (CE).

The Oaxaca [26] decomposition (4) utilizes the high group (urban women in this study) as the reference group, weighting contrasts in attributes by the coefficients of urban women and contrasts in coefficients by the covariates of rural women. The Blinder decomposition (7) on the other hand, utilizing the low group as the reference group (rural women in this study), and weighting contrasts in characteristics by the coefficients of the provincial women and differences in coefficients by the covariates of the urban women. The other methods used a weighted average of the two groups as weight. According to Reimers [27], the weighted mean should be computed as 0.5 (equal weights for the two groups), whereas Cotton [28] assumes it ought to be the extents of the two groups in the sample. Since the result of the decomposition is delicate to the weighting technique utilized, this study ran an alternate decomposition for each method: Oaxaca, Blinder, Reimers, and Cotton. Regressions were performed for urban and rural women independently and afterward the assessed coefficients and covariates were utilized to compute the decompositions. Consistent results using the different weights were thought to represent robustness of the study outcome. Powers et al. [29] developed a recent extension of the Oaxaca-Blinder method for non-linear dependent variables, mvdcmp, which was used for detailed decomposition. It is primarily intended for use in nonlinear decomposition and convenient methods for dealing with path dependency [30], as well as overcoming the identification problem associated with the selection of a reference category when dummy variables are included as Oaxaca. Multivariate decomposition (mvdcmp) determines the high-outcome group automatically and uses the low-outcome group as a reference [31].

Ethical considerations

Even if ethical procedures were the responsibility of the institutions that carried out the survey, authors of this research obtained written permission letter for utilization of the dataset from the Measure DHS International Program which authorized for the data-sets. The written approval letter was obtained from the Measure DHS International Program which authorized for the data-sets. Before data collection EDHS data collection materials approved for compliance of the requirements of 45 CFR 46, “Protection of Human Subjects” by Institutional Review Board (IBR) of each countries. Confidentiality was maintained anonymously and the data was used solely for the purpose of the current study.

Results

Urban rural delivery distribution in the study areas

Fig 1 illustrates the overall, as well as the urban and rural, women’s place of delivery in Ethiopia, Kenya, Ugandan and Tanzania. In Ethiopia only 27.43% women gave at health facility. The difference in health facility delivery between urban and rural residences was high (58.44%) Ethiopia. In Uganda, institutional delivery was relatively highest from selected study countries almost three-fourth (74.64%), and with the lowest urban-rural health facility delivery gap (17.75). However, urban-rural institutional delivery difference was highly statistically significant (Chi-square, p-value <0.001).

Fig 1. Proportion of institutional delivery in Ethiopia, Kenya, Uganda and Tanzania stratified by their residency.

Fig 1

Table 1 shows the differences in selected characteristics of households in the urban and rural regions in the four countries. The rural households, are on average, less educated, having lower access to media and at lower wealth status and distance of the health facilities is considered as a problem than urban households. While the urban-rural differentials are higher in the case of Ethiopia, for instance, 70.95% of women and 51.62% of husbands in rural resident have no formal education and 27.78% of women had no ANC follow up. The percentage of urban women with secondary or higher education is more than thirteen times of rural women in Ethiopia. However, this disparity was only two to three times in (Kenya, Uganda and Tanzania). Health facility distance was a big problem for 65.91% and 52.01% rural women in Ethiopia and Tanzania respectively. Ethiopia has the highest in not having ANC (41.15%). Regarding media access 87.44% rural Ethiopian and 61.56% Tanzanian households had no access (Table 1).

Table 1. Baseline characteristics of reproductive-age women by place of delivery in selected East Africa countries, 2014–2016.

Characteristics 2016 Ethiopia 2014 Kenya 2016 Uganda 2015 Tanzania
residence rural% urban% rural% urban% rural% urban% rural% urban%
Proportion 89.04 10.96 64.17 35.83 79.23 20.77 72.93 27.07
mean age at birth 27.4± 6.6* 27.1± 5.5* 26.7±6.6** 25.9±5.7** 26.47±6.8 26.15±6.2 27.21±7.25 26.73±6.4**
Education (%) chi2(3),48** chi2(3), 26** chi2(3),32** chi2(3),761**
No education 70.81 26.20 15.37 5.39 12.25 6.29 25.23 9.28
Primary 26.24 32.29 62.32 44.86 67.35 40.02 66.36 60.74
Secondary 2.56 21.90 18.19 33.64 17.07 36.20 8.19 27.33
Higher 0.39 19.60 4.11 16.10 3.33 17.49 0.22 2.65
Wealth index (%) chi2(2),133** chi2(2),98** chi2(2),52** chi2(2),62**
Poor 51.61 7.18 61.21 13.75 51.75 14.84 59.28 8.24
Middle 23.01 2.04 22.04 10.92 22.33 7.96 24.34 5.37
Rich 25.18 90.78 16.75 85.33 25.92 77.12 16.13 86.39
Marital status (%) chi2(2),97** chi2(2),22** chi2(2),70** chi2(2),111**
Not married 0.42 1.34 6.81 7.51 3.93 6.21 4.21 9.22
Married 95.29 91.78 84.44 82.83 84.71 81.03 85.11 76.46
Widowed 4.29 6.88 8.74 9.66 11.36 12.77 10.69 14.31
Distance from a health facility (%) chi2(1),22** chi2(1),405** chi2(1),617** chi2(1),238**
big problem 65.91 17.53 35.29 14.25 46.10 21.30 52.01 33.54
not a big problem 34.09 82.47 64.71 85.75 53.90 78.70 47.99 66.46
Pregnancy Characteristics
ANC visits chi2(1),896** chi2(1),134** chi2(1),2.99 chi2(1),0.51
No ANC 27.80 7.82 3.72 1.47 1.36 0.96 1.49 1.21
one and above 72.20 92.18 96.28 98.53 98.64 99.04 98.51 98.79
Parity chi2(2),582** chi2(2),706** chi2(2),302** chi2(2),345**
1 11.23 27.18 13.80 26.78 11.88 19.30 14.81 23.46
2–4 42.50 55.48 52.46 60.03 47.38 57.26 46.22 57.67
5 and above 46.27 17.33 33.75 13.19 40.74 23.44 38.98 18.87
Women occupation chi2(3),20** chi2(3),543** chi2(3),26** chi2(3),38**
not working 57.60 40.56 29.81 32.91 15.37 23.68 11.74 26.76
government employed 10.26 37.89 6.15 13.22 12.27 32.32 1.30 6.91
Agriculture 27.15 10.54 34.38 9.08 53.79 16.16 72.43 15.51
manual worker 4.99 11.01 29.67 44.78 18.57 27.84 14.53 50.82
Husband Education (%) chi2(3),38** chi2(3),654** chi2(3),949** chi2(3),754**
No education 51.62 18.88 12.75 3.29 7.79 4.85 17.77 4.03
Primary 40.84 29.55 58.58 38.03 60.80 34.37 72.15 60.59
Secondary 5.74 24.17 22.23 38.64 23.88 35.43 9.27 28.29
Higher 1.80 27.40 6.44 20.04 7.54 25.35 0.81 7.09
Husband occupation chi2(3),46** chi2(3),622** chi2(3), 878** chi2(3),28**
not working 7.73 3.71 1.85 0.82 3.23 2.74 1.01 0.75
government employed 7.55 35.16 12.20 22.97 15.69 35.27 3.51 11.14
Agriculture 70.70 18.66 32.32 6.00 43.38 10.68 72.57 19.48
manual worker 14.03 42.47 53.63 70.21 37.71 51.31 22.91 68.63
Birth order (mean) 4.17 2.71 3.58 2.48 3.96 3.01 3.82 2.79
media access chi2(1),48** chi2(1),889** chi2(1),889** chi2(1),561**
no access 87.44 35.41 36.55 13.91 41.74 24.73 61.56 33.05
have accesses 12.56 64.59 63.45 86.09 58.26 75.27 38.44 66.95

** Significant <0.01

* Significant at <0.05 and chi2 = chi-square.

Aggregate decomposition estimates

Table 2 presents the decomposition of the urban-rural institutional delivery gap into three components; a gap due to the difference in the level of characteristics, a gap due to the difference in the effect of the coefficients and a gap due to the interaction. The average total difference in predicted institutional delivery between the urban and rural groups was 0.58 for Ethiopia, 0.29 for Kenya, 0.18 for Uganda and 0.31 for Tanzania. The aggregate decomposition depicted that unexplained components were approximately 39.72% when using the Oaxaca decomposition, compared to 36.92% when using the Blinder decomposition, suggesting that discrimination to rural women contributes more to the gap in institutional delivery than favoritism of urban women in Ethiopia. These results are proven by the Cotton and Reimer decompositions, which are able to show how both discrimination and favoritism contribute to the gap. Certainly, using the Reimers decomposition, only 14.5% of the gap is explained by advantage to urban women, while 19.56% is explained by disadvantage to rural women. Likewise, when using the Cotton decomposition, solely 4.96% of the gap is explained by advantage to urban women, compared to 31.79% explained by disadvantage to rural women in Ethiopia.

Table 2. Three fold decomposition estimates of place of delivery by residence in the selected countries.

Country Ethiopia Kenya Uganda Tanzania
Decomposition Coefficient Percentage (%) Coefficient Percentage (%) Coefficient Percentage (%) Coefficient Percentage (%)
Oaxaca Decomposition weight = 1
Explained 0.371 55.18 0.252 87.34 0.107 59.24 0.230 73.66
Unexplained 0.234 36.39 0.039 13.58 0.096 52.65 0.070 22.36
Interaction -0.016 8.44 -0.003 -0.93 -0.022 -11.88 0.012 3.98
Total 0.589 100 0.288 100 0.181 100 0.313 100
Blinder Decomposition: Weight = 0
Explained 0.355 63.62 0.249 86.42 0.086 47.35 0.243 77.65
Unexplained 0.217 44.82 0.037 12.66 0.074 40.76 0.082 26.34
Interaction 0.017 -8.44 -0.003 0.93 0.022 11.88 -0.012 -3.98
Total 0.589 100 0.288 100 0.181 100 0.313 100
Reimers Decomposition: Weight = 0.5
productivity 0.388 64.70 0.252 87.49 0.076 53.77 0.242 77.41
Advantaged 0.085 17.33 0.016 5.48 0.032 17.57 0.033 10.49
Disadvantage 0.115 17.97 0.020 7.03 0.052 28.67 0.038 12.09
Total 0.589 100 0.288 100 0.181 100 0.313 100
Cotton: De weight = 0.79 weight = 0.65 weight = 0.82 weight = 0.76
Productivity 0.372 65.09 0.252 87.27 0.090 49.76 0.244 77.86
Advantage 0.029 6.13 0.010 3.62 0.011 5.90 0.014 4.49
Disadvantage 0.187 28.78 0.026 9.11 0.081 44.35 0.055 17.65
Total 0.589 100 0.288 100 0.181 100 0.313 100
Neumark (pooled regression coefficients)
Productivity 0.478 72.04 0.264 91.45 0.116 63.87 0.252 81.64
Advantage 0.123 24.41 0.015 5.25 0.051 28.27 0.042 13.30
Disadvantage 0.017 3.53 0.010 3.30 0.014 7.85 0.016 5.06
Total 0.589 100 0.288 100 0.181 100 0.313 100

De = decomposition.

Regarding Kenya aggregate decomposition portrayed that unexplained components were approximately 14% when using the Oaxaca decomposition, compared to 13% when using the Blinder decomposition, showing that discrimination to rural women contributes more to the gap in institutional delivery than favoritism of urban women in Kenya. This result is also parallel with the outcome obtained by the Reimer and Cotton decompositions. Certainly, using the Reimers decomposition, 5.48% of the gap is explained by advantage to urban women, while 7.03% is explained by disadvantage to rural women. Similarly, when using the Cotton decomposition, 3.62% of the gap is explained by advantage to urban women, compared to 9.11% explained by disadvantage to rural women in Kenya. The finding also gives almost similar result for Ugandan and Tanzania.

Across to the four countries the explained (endowment) component made the largest percentage of the gap, ranging from 59.24% (Uganda) to 87.34% (Kenya) for the Oaxaca decomposition and 47.35% (Uganda) to 86.42% (Kenya) for Blinder decomposition (Table 2).

Detailed decomposition

Difference in characteristics (covariate distribution)

Tables 3 and 4: demonstrates the contribution of individual characteristics to the institutional delivery gap in place of residence. These results showed a significant facility delivery gap in urban rural residencies (0.61, 0.32, 0.19 and 0.30, p < 0.001) in Ethiopia, Kenya, Uganda and Tanzania respectively. About 82%, 67%, 57% and 75% of the institutional delivery disparities were explained by the differences in distributions of characteristics (endowments) between urban and rural residences in Ethiopia, Kenya, Uganda and Tanzania respectively.

Table 3. Detailed decomposition of institutional delivery by place of residence for Ethiopian and Kenyan women.
Country Ethiopia Kenya
Decomposition estimate se Percent estimate se Percent
Raw difference 0.608** 0.017 100 0.318** 0.011 100
Explained 0.498** 0.046 81.92 0. 214** 0.015 67.2
Unexplained 0. 110* 0.052 18.08 0.015** 0.021 32.8
Endowment (Explained component) = difference in characteristics (E)
wealth index
Poor -0.222** 0.042 -36.55 -0.002 0.012 -0.61
Middle ref ref
Rich 0.428** 0.0565 70.40 0.118** 0.016 37.30
Distance from HF
Big problem 0.005 0.025 0.81 -0.0001 0.005 0.04
Not a big problem reference ref
Parity
1 0.036** 0.010 5.89 0.009* 0.004 2.95
2–4 ref ref
5 and above 0.091** 0.016 14.87 0.019** 0.007 5.88
Age at birth 0.005** 0.001 0.85 -0.003 0.002 -1.14
ANC follow up
No reference ref
Yes 0.053** 0.015 8.67 0.004** 0.001 1.31
Husband occupation
Not working ref ref
Government employed -0.028 0.017 -4.58 0.01 0.01 3.02
Agriculture 0.051 0.032 8.37 -0.008 0.014 -2.54
Manual worker -0.026 0.015 -4.33 0.013 0.031 4.09
Husband education
no education ref ref
Primary -0.006 0.005 -0.96 0.014* 0.007 4.39
secondary 0.024* 0.012 4.01 -0.000 0.006 -0.03
higher 0.062** 0.017 10.26 0.018* 0.007 5.75
Media exposure
No access reference
Have access 0.052** 0.023 8.57
Women education
No education ref ref
Primary 0.004 0.003 0.66 -0.008 0.005 -2.55
Secondary 0.030 0. 015 4.99 0.014* 0.006 4.52
Higher 0.030 0.021 4.87 0.035** 0.008 10.88
Mothers occupation
Not working ref
Government employed -0.003 0.003 -0.83
Agriculture -0.005 0.008 -1.73
Manual worker -0.001 0.004 -0.44
unexplained (Due to difference in coefficients (C))
Wealth
Poor 1.02 1.31 167.78 0.047* 0.021 14.88
Middle ref ref
Rich 0.571 0.741 94.01 0.027** 0.006 8.52
Distance from HF
Big problem 0.125 0.155 20.60 -0.031 0.019 -9.87
Not a big problem ref ref
Parity
1 0.0145 0.015 2.39 -0.009 0.005 -2.75
2–4 Ref ref
5 and above -0.308 0.408 -50.68 0.017 0.014 5.21
Age at birth 1.21 1.719 199.35
ANC follow up
No Ref ref
Yes 0.108 0.255 17.76 -0.015 0.09 -4.76
Husband occupation
Not working Ref ref
Government employed -0.035 0.047 -5.86 0.008 0.012 2.52
Agriculture -0.259 0.419 -42.66 0.013 0.031 4.09
Husband education
No education ref ref
Primary 0.043 0.089 7.13 -0.145** 0.028 -45.69
Secondary -0.001 0.013 -0.22 -0.043** 0.012 -13.50
Higher 0.005 0.008 0.87 -0.010 0.010 -0.029
Media exposure
No access Ref
Have access 0.032 0.047 5.41
Women Education
No education Ref ref
Primary -0.012 0.039 -2.01 -0.017 0.026 -5.40
Secondary 0.001 0.007 0.14 -0.014 0.009 -4.26
Higher 0.0003 0.002 0.040 0.004 0.004 1.11
Mothers occupation
Not working ref
Government employed -0.004 0.004 -1.15
Agriculture 0.0004 0.014 0.12
Manual worker -0.009 0.010 -2.77

*Significant at p-value <0.05 confidence level

** Significant at p-value<0.01 confidence level, se = standard error HF = health facility, ref = reference category.

Table 4. Detailed decomposition of institutional delivery by place of residence for Ugandan and Tanzanian women.
Country Uganda Tanzania
Decomposition estimate se Percent estimate se Percent
Raw difference 0.192** 0.010 100 0.303** 0.13 100
Explained 0. 110** 0.014 57.31 0.228** 0.038 75.16
Unexplained 0.082** 0.019 42.69 0.075 0.044 24.84
Endowment (Explained component) = difference in characteristics (E)
Wealth
Poor -0.003 0.013 -1.47 0.049 0.032 16.20
Middle ref ref
Rich 0.052** 0.020 27.19 0.097** 0.036 32.23
Age at birth -0.0003 0.0002 -0.21 -0.004 0.002 -1.39
Number of ANC
ANC< = 3 ref ref
ANC> = 4 0.006** 0.002 2.91 0.005 0.006 1.49
Women Education
No education ref ref
Primary 0.003 0.012 1.49 0.025 0.04 8.33
Secondary 0.010 0.010 5.59 -0.004 0.007 -1.19
Higher 0.005 0.012 2.68 - - -
Husband education
No education ref ref
Primary 0.010 0.013 5.32 0.005 0.008 1.47
Secondary -0.002 0.006 -1.02 0.007 0.013 2.17
Higher 0.009 0.012 4.64 0.015* 0.007 4.83
Parity
1 0.006 0.003 3.15 0.003 0.003 0.84
2–4 ref ref
5 and above 0.013* 0.005 6.89 0.036** 0.009 11.92
unexplained (Due to difference in coefficients (C))
Wealth
Poor 0.019 0.027 10.14 0.030 0.043 -9.89
Middle ref ref
Rich 0.022 0.014 11.62 0.009 0.012 3.05
Age at birth 0.211* 0.099 -17.60
Number of ANC
ANC< = 3 ref
ANC> = 4 -0.016 0.022 -8.40 -0.021 0.020 -7.22
Women Education
No education ref ref
Primary -0.007 0.045 -3.88 0.025 0.04 8.33
Secondary 0.001 0.014 0.71 -0.004 0.007 -1.19
Higher -0.009 0.005 -4.84 - - -
Husband education
No education ref ref
Primary -0.037 0.046 -19.37 -0.083 0.059 -27.34
Secondary -0.022 0.021 -11.43 -0.0031 0.010 -1.03
Higher -0.003 0.009 -1.34 0.004* 0.002 1.37
Parity
1 0.006 0.009 2.88 -0.011 0.012 -3.65
2–4 ref ref
5 and above -0.033 0.019 -17.60 -0.047 0.025 -15.56

*Significant at 90% confidence level

** Significant at 95% confidence level, se = standard error.

In Ethiopia the majority of the gap in institutional delivery was explained by wealth status difference between urban and rural women, poor wealth status (-36.55%) contributed for widening of the gap and rich wealth status (70.40%) contributed for narrowing of this gap. The distribution of antenatal care follow up (8.67%), women having one parity (5.89%), and having more than four parity (14.87%), having access to mass media (8.57%), husband’s secondary (4.01%) and higher (10.26%) education level were factors that helping to achieve narrowing of the urban-rural institutional delivery gap if these covariate distribution equalized to the level of urban women for rural women as well.

Rich wealth, both one and grand parity (>4), ANC follow up, and secondary and higher women’s education, both primary and higher husband education in Kenya were factors act to narrow the institutional delivery gap between urban and rural residences (Table 2).

The rich wealth, four and above number of ANC visit, grand parity Uganda and rich wealth, higher husband education, and more than four parity in Tanzania were covariate distribution contributing for narrowing the urban rural institutional delivery differences (Table 4).

Difference due to coefficients (the effect of covariate differences)

We found that differences in effects (difference due to in coefficients) account for 18.08%, 32.8%, 42.69% and 24.84% of the observed urban-rural differential in the place of delivery in Ethiopia, Kenya, Uganda and Tanzania respectively.

For Kenya, both the effect of poor (14.88%) and rich (8.52%) wealth status contribute for narrowing the gap of institutional delivery between urban and rural women if the rural women wealth increased from poor to middle level wealth and from middle to rich wealth status as their urban counterparts. Whereas, the effect of primary and secondary husband education status were responsible for widening of urban rural institutional delivery gap by 45.69% and 13.5% in place of residences if the rural women education improved from no formal education to primary and secondary level respectively.

For Uganda the effect of each one year increase in maternal age at child birth in rural residents increase the urban rural institutional delivery by 17.60%. For Tanzania the effect of higher husband education contributes 1.37% reduction urban rural institutional delivery disparities if rural Tanzanian husbands able to attend higher education as their rural counterparts (Table 4).

Discussion

In low and middle-income countries, there is documented evidence that, averagely, urban women have higher health facility births compared to rural residents [4, 5, 9]. In fact, giving birth in a health facility can prevent maternal and infant deaths by providing timely skilled birth attendants and appropriate medications to address birth complications. In this study, we comprehensively investigated, and identified the underlying factors, behind the urban-rural gap in institutional delivery in Ethiopia, Kenya, Ugandan and Tanzania, using a Blinder-Oaxaca and related decomposition analysis, on which limited research has been conducted. To our knowledge, this is the first study to explain the observed gap in institutional delivery between urban and rural women in East African countries. This helps to inform and guide policies aimed at reducing women’s health inequalities and improving population health in the study area.

We discovered significant urban-rural disparities across the study countries, though they were not uniform: the highest urban-rural institutional delivery disparity was documented in Ethiopia (58.44 percentage points (urban 79% and rural 21%), 32.19 in Kenya, 30.42% in Tanzania, and the lowest disparity was observed in Uganda (17.75%) (Fig 1). This variation could be due to rural women’s poor wealth status, low antenatal care coverage, husband illiteracy and less access to media in Ethiopia, as confirmed by our descriptive statistics that almost a third (28%) of pregnant women have no any ANC follow-up, and more than 87% of women have no access to mass media as compared to 92.18–99% women had at least one ANC follow up in urban settings and 65–86% had access to media at least one per week. It is obvious that rich women in urban areas have easy access to information regarding maternal and child health through different media, which helps them to have ANC follow up and finally to give birth at a health facility [32].

Our findings show that, when the coefficient effect is held constant, more than half of the observed disparities in institutional delivery among urban and rural women in the study area can be attributed to differences in the distribution of institutional delivery covariates between these groups, regardless of the decomposition type. Meaning that, contribution of composition (endowments) changes were more important than behaviour (coefficient) changes to reduce the gap between urban-rural women’s institutional delivery. This could be because urban women are more likely to give birth in a health facility than rural counterparts because they are better endowed with the factors that encourage institutional delivery (rich wealth, ANC, access to media, both maternal and husband education). This explanation was supported by our descriptive result (Table 1), which revealed that 90.78% of urban women compared to 25.8% of rural women were rich in wealth, and rich wealth status with its positive coefficient (Tables 3 and 4) implying that if rural women wealth reached the level of urban women counterparts, the gap in institutional delivery would be narrowed. This was also true for ANC follow up, presence of media access, single and grand parity. This finding is also supported by results in India [10] in Ghana [11] and in 80 low and middle-income countries study result [33]. In addition, husband secondary and higher education and age at childbirth were all important contributors to close the urban-rural gap of institutional delivery in Ethiopia. Secondary and higher education for women, as well as primary and secondary education for husbands, were also important factors in Kenya. Factors such as Ethiopia’s low wealth status, Kenya’s primary and secondary husband education, and Uganda’s maternal age at childbirth all contributed to the widening of the gap. These findings are consistent with previous studies that identified wealth [10, 12, 17, 20], antenatal visits [22], and parity [16, 22] as important predictors of institutional delivery, and are supported by our descriptive analysis, which depicted women in wealthy households, a higher proportion of women attending antenatal care visits, and lower parity among urban women compared to rural women (Table 1).

About 19.98% and 2.25% proportional covariate change in antenatal care follow up between urban and rural women in Ethiopia and Kenya (Table 1) contribute to 8.67%, and 1.31% change in institutional delivery (Table 3) between urban and rural women respectively. The possible reason might be the fact that women who had at least first antenatal follow-up were more informed about the benefits of institutional delivery [34] and more likely to deliver at health facilities than those who had no follow-up at all [22, 34]. And the service (ANC) is predominantly distributed in urban settings with public and private options.

In Ethiopia, 65.60%, Kenya 68.58%, Uganda 51.20% and Tanzania 70.26% urban-rural proportional change in rich wealth contributed to the change of 70.40%, 37.30%, 27.19% and 32.23% change in institutional delivery between urban-rural settings respectively. Despite the fact that the governments of each county provided free maternal and child services in order to expand the opportunities for institutional delivery [35, 36], a significant number of rural women chose home delivery due to financial constraints. This could be because women from low-income households may not have access to antenatal care follow-up due to daily agronomic duties in rural areas, as well as dispersed health facilities to easily access maternity services. Poor rural women may be more likely to give birth at home due to a lack of a substituted role for women and the difficulty of accessing health care services [37, 38]. Moreover, women in poor rural households are uneducated to be informed on the benefit of institutional delivery as supported by our descriptive results (Table 1) and other studies [3840]. This implies that improving the economic status of rural women by itself could improve institutional delivery from 27.19% to more than 70% and the population’s health at large. Moreover, if poor rural women’s wealth equalized to urban middle wealth level, institutional delivery will be improved more than urban middle-wealth status women by about 36.55%. This implies wealth status improvement interventions in rural settings, particularly in poor households, significantly contribute to the improvement of institutional delivery. On the other hand, rural middle-class mothers are treated the same as urban rich women, and institutional delivery in rural areas will be increased to match but not exceed the level of urban women’s institutional delivery. This is in agreement with our argument that poor wealth in rural women is a major problem for getting time for ANC and other important information to make decisions on place of delivery than middle and rich wealthy women in urban settings. Whereas, in middle wealth status, women in urban areas, institutional delivery is less affected by wealth difference [29].

For Uganda, on average, the one year age difference at the birth of a child between urban and rural women contributed to a 17.60% change in institutional delivery. If rural women had a similar age at child birth as urban women, the 17.6% rural-urban institutional delivery gap would be increased. This implies the age of the mother for urban women at birth is less sensitive than rural women to give birth at a health facility.

Keeping endowment characteristics in mind, about 18.08%, 32.8%, 42.69%, and 24.84% of the difference in urban-rural institutional delivery in Ethiopia, Kenya, Uganda, and Tanzania was contributed by behavior change (due to differences in coefficients) to the place of delivery. Significant positive contributions to behavior change in terms of rich wealth for Kenya, and higher husband education in Tanzania were noted. As a result, not only does the covariate effect of rich wealth influence the institutional delivery gap, but the behavioral effect of rich wealth also plays a significant role in narrowing the urban rural gap by raising the wealth of rural women to that of their urban counterparts, and this finding is supported by findings in Ghana [11].

The positive coefficients of the unexplained component suggest that a change in covariates that increases institutional delivery would lead to insignificant improvement in rural areas’ institutional delivery compared to urban areas since behavior change enhancing intervention are predominantly important. So, for Kenyan women, for example, approximately 32.8% of the urban-rural institutional delivery disparity will be reduced not only by improving rural women’s income (wealth status), but also by increasing women’s understanding of the benefits of institutional delivery through broad coverage of women’s education, prenatal care, and access to information on maternal health issues [11, 17, 23]. Unexplained component contribution was particularly high in Uganda and Kenya (42.69% and 32.8%) respectively, implying that governments and policymakers should place a greater emphasis on behavioral and awareness creation interventions in rural women to close the gap between the two groups, in addition to accessing determinant factors that increase institutional delivery.

In the current study, results of the Blinder-Oaxaca decomposition suggest that the rural-urban gap in institutional delivery in all countries is primarily explained by the difference in the magnitude of the determinants of institutional delivery (covariate effect is dominant), rather than by differences in their effect. In particular, wealth disparity between urban and rural households accounts for most of the overall gap. This is consistent with numerous study findings in Ghana [11], Ethiopia [23], Malawi which demonstrated socio-economic status associations with institution delivery. This implies that redistribution of wealth, and improving antenatal care and increasing media access for women in rural areas would be effective to reduce the residential inequalities in institutional delivery and improve maternal and child health in rural areas. However, in Uganda and Kenya, while the difference in determinants is significant and accounts for a large portion of the health facility delivery gap, the difference in the effect of covariates (coefficient effects) also plays a significant role in determining the institutional delivery gap between urban and rural women. This is also concurrent with findings in Ghana [11] and Kenya [17]. According to these studies, education is a major determinant of maternal health care utilization, and education improves the ability to weigh the costs and benefits of health care facility services, as well as properly understand and conform to health messages. For these reasons, the redistribution of wealth, media access, controlling parity and overall upgrading in the level of the determinants in rural areas may not be adequate to achieve urban-rural institutional delivery. Accordingly, behavioral and awareness packages that would improve the effect of the determinants would be required interventions to narrow the rural-urban gap in institutional delivery inequalities.

Limitations, strength and generalizability

The current study is not free from limitations. One limitation is the cross-sectional nature of the study design limits the ability to establish temporal relationship between time-varying variables. Second, both the dependent and independent variables were self-reported and are likely to have reporting and recall bias. However, since the survey data were focused on births, which are too big events, to be forgotten soon, we expect the accuracy of the data to be acceptable.

Third, the data analyzed here is relatively outdated; thus, the findings may not exactly reflect the current situation in study countries with regards to institutional delivery. Finally, important variables that will change the ratio of unexplained portions like region due to their inconsistent classification in the study area and other variables (like husband and mother-in-low decision in the place of delivery) due to their absence were omitted from analysis, leading to variable omitting bias. Despite these limitations, this study is important in that it gives an understanding and quantification of the drivers and magnitude of institutional delivery inequalities in urban-rural settings. The finding also generalized to similar countries as the data were representative and quality assured.

Conclusions

The urban-rural institutional delivery disparities were high in study countries, particularly in Ethiopia. Covariate effects of institutional delivery explained a larger portion of the difference in institutional delivery rates between rural and urban women in these countries. Wealth, antenatal care, husband education, and access to the media were all significant factors. Future intervention to encourage institutional deliveries in rural women of these countries should therefore emphasis on increasing rural women income, access health care facilities to facilitate antenatal care utilization and to limit their children. However, unexplained components (effect of determinants) were significantly higher in Uganda, Kenya and Ethiopia, calling for integrated interventions on behavioral and awareness packages that would improve the effect of the determinants would be necessary interventions to close the rural-urban gap in institutional births. Researchers are also recommended to explore effective strategies to improve rural women’s prosperity.

Acknowledgments

We would like to extend our deepest gratitude to measure DHS for their permission to use the dataset.

Lists of abbreviations

ANC

Antenatal care

EDHS

Ethiopian Demographic and Health Survey

ES

Enumeration Areas

HF

Health Facility

Data Availability

The data used in this study are third party data from Measure DHS (http://www.dhsprogram.com) and can be accessed following the protocol outlined in the Methods section.

Funding Statement

The authors received no specific funding for this work.

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Reviewer #1: Factors affecting the institutional delivery in LMIC is an important topic to explore. The authors used an interesting method to quantify the phenomenon. As authors stated the paper will be the first to use the Oaxaca-Blinder decomposition to examine the urban rural disparity in institutional delivery in selected east African countries

The paper is too long and most of information is not needed here or can be shortened

Background:

The last paragraph of the background “page 12 lines 112-121”) can be moved to methods section

Methods:

- Study population is just the women that have delivered in the past 5 years.

- Question: if a woman had delivered more than once in the past 5 years, please explain how are you exploring the information: are you considering all deliveries or just the last one?

Page 14, line: 148 delete “cite”

Results section:

Table 1 needs some statistical tests to these differences..

Table 2 needs some statistical tests and also there is a big problem for percentage of the “pregnancy-related deaths” (0.8%). The PRD is not affecting old women and most of deceases are women 60 years and above. You should recalculate this proportion based only on women of reproductive age (15-49years). This proportion will be much high that what the authors published. I think it will be more than 3%.

Please revise table 1 and table 2. The description in the manuscript is too confusing. I think on page 12, line 261 it is probably Table 2 and line 265 it is Table 1. Please review it again.

Table 1: Why not can provide the percentages instead of numbers? Too confusing.

What is the difference between table 1 and figure 1. I think they are providing the same information. If yes select only one of them.

Minors

The paper needs a deeper editing to correct several words: for instance:

Page 9, line 48: correct “differece” to “difference”

Page 10, line 65: correct “bellow” to “below”

Page 10, line 69: delete “(cite)”

The titles of the tables and figures should be more explicit.

Overall: the paper is too long and I will recommend the authors to shorten it by deleting or reducing several sections. For instance the last paragraph of the background is the same information that was described in the method. The description of the decomposition method is well known and can be shortened and authors can just provide references as needed. The results section can describe briefly the most important results and not provide too much information. At the end the readers are lost. Also the results sections should be shortened by describing results instead of providing some explanations in the results section with references in this section. All explanations and reference in the results section should be moved to Discussion section

Reviewer #2: - The authors have attempted to study drivers of urban-rural gap in facility delivery in four countries in East Africa. The line of research is interesting and has the potential to add something to knowledge on this area. However, the paper requires major and substantial revision to get most out of it. Substantial improvement in language is required to improve the readability of the paper. Every section of the paper needs revision. I put some suggestions (major and minor) according to the different sections of the manuscript.

Abstract

method

-indicate that the study was in four east African countries

result

-“covariate effect was dominate”; this contradicts with the result in the body

Conclusion

-“regional inequality” is confusing;

-“facilitate antenatal care utilization” is not clear, which ANC care? Four or more? Be specific

-“plan number of children” is vague

Introduction/background

-this section is an awkward and poorly written. You incoherently moved between different ideas; you begin with mortality, and then jumped to facility delivery and then back to mortality. Pls rewrite this section and ensure that the transitions between paragraphs are effective and clear. Also, you need to further substantiate it by adding points directly related with urban-rural disparity in facility delivery. Do not forget that you still follow certain chronological flows.

- in the “maternal mortality rate below 70”, change rate into ratio

-Lines 112-120: take this to method section

Methods

-DHS involves women 15-49 and men 15 to 59 as well as children under five. You need to mention this in the method section through your analysis in this study has been restricted to only women. You need to also clarify the distinction between “study population” and “sample”. All women in the reproductive age group in the selected households are samples, not study populations, unlike what you have said. Pls avoid the confusion around these terms

- the “sampling and sample size” section is too vague to understand how and how many enumeration areas (ESs) and participants were enrolled into the study. It needs to be clearly expounded that the DHS follows a stratified two-stage cluster design, where, following stratification by both urban and regions/districts (you just mentioned that stratification was based solely on urbanization and that is false), eligible women were selected in two stages. In this section, you can explain that succinctly. How many EAs were sampled in the first stage? How many households were sampled in each EA? What was the household and individual response rates? What is primary sampling unit/cluster and SSU? Explain

-what are the secondary dependent variables, since you have mentioned that facility delivery was the primary outcome variable? In this section, there some author notes that you should have avoided (non-cited statements)

- place of residence is the stratifier variable, not an exposure/independent variable. It is a variable the inequality was measured by accounting for the influences of exposure variables

-maternal age (age during the time of the surveys administrations) could not be an exposure variable, because it comes long after the outcome variable occurs. The word “cautious” is ambiguous in the “age at birth”

-it is strange that you did not explain how these variables were selected, and no citation to prior similar works was made. You need to tell us that these variables show certain theoretical and or statistical relationship with the intended response variables.

-region is missing from being an exposure variable

- distance from health facility: if this variable was created based on the variable v467d, then that is incorrect. This variable reflects access problem at the time of the survey for a woman's medical help, and is not related with facility delivery.

-how was media exposure variable was created and produced? Explain that to allow replication for other studies as well as to improve transparency. This applies also to other variables.

-marital status variable was measured in DHS at the time of the survyes, and might not reflect marital status of the women before becoming pregnant, and there fore might not be an exposure variable for facility delivery; it has to come before or at least as the same time as the outcome variable to call it an exposure variable. Pls see this variable in the DHS guide for scrutiny.

Analysis

-how did you assess the normality and skewness of the variables? Explain that.

-you have described that the analyses were all ”population-weighted” and that “survey design” was taken into cognizant during analysis. This expression is very misleading for many reasons. First, the phrase “population-weighted” adds noting to understanding except that it brings confusion with it. You simply say you analysis is “weighted”. Second, you did not explain how your analysis should be weighted. Third, when we say, survey design is taken into account, we are saying that we are accounting for the disproportionate sampling (that we weight our analysis) and the stratification and clustering effect are taken into account to produce nationally representative estimates. So, the later expression, that is, the survey design is taken into account is enough and there is no any reason to repeat that analyses were weighted as far as you have mentioned that you have already mentioned that the complex nature of the data has been accounted for. Finally, when you say survey design was accounted for, I am not sure whether you have accounted for both stratification and clustering, and if you have missed on of them, then the estimated Standard errors were most likely be erroneous.

-it is not clear why you have also used the decomposition techniques suggested by powers et al after you have calculated BO decomposition? Both methods can be used of binary variables. But the problem with BO is that results could hugely differ depending on the reference category chosen during analysis, aka “identification problem”. So, with BO, YOU must do normalization to make the finding consistent with the chosen reference categories of categorical variables.

- in the ethics section, please also mention that ethical procedures were the responsibility of the institutions that carried out the survey.

Results

urban rural delivery distribution in the study areas

-Since your outcome is facility delivery, just report that; reporting home deliveries adds only confusion

- the “delivery rate” is inappropriate usage as rate has a different meaning and does not go with delivery

-the statement “however…, Table-1” is very vague and I cannot understand it

- the statement “Kenya has the highest 249 (35.83%) urban resident women” is not clear

-lines 251-261: the texts here do not correspond to the content of table 1. Presented in table 1 is completely different from what the texts talks about. The texts about the differentials of urban and rural need to be presented well in terms of all the exposure variables so that we can see where these variables dominate, and this would then help us interpret the decomposition findings presented table 2 through table 4.

-Lines 262-265: it is the replication of table 2; pls avoid repetitions and redundancies

-Lines 287-288: I think the contributions of the variables in the decomposition can be to either widen or narrow down the gap; this is the most interesting portion of the findings and hence requires further explanation in the discussion section. Why some variables contribute in terms of widening the gap, but not others?

-lines 290-292: take this into the discussion

-Lines 249-356: this paragraph actually lacks clear interpretations/presentations of findings. When you say that disparity could be reduced if urban and rural settings have similar levels of wealth, for instance, it can also be interpreted that disparity can be lowered if wealth in urban areas is reduced to a level in rural settings, which is not actually the case. So, you need to clearly present that when wealth in rural settings are increased to a level in urban areas, urban-rural disparities can be narrowed by certain amount. Also, make sure that in this text, you have not repeated what you have already presented in the Table.

-Lines 357-359: in this small paragraph, you attempted to attach meaning to the observed contributions of the exposure variables. You are interpreting that variables with positive contribution like wealth tend to narrow down the disparity. However, how do these variables contribute this way? How do I know that these variables narrow, not widen the gap? I rather interpret the opposite way. I strongly recommend you to first document where these variables dominate (in urban or rural areas). For instance, if the richest and richer categories of wealth are predominantly found in the urban area, and if these categories have the capacity to increase the chance of giving birth in facilities, then surely, wealth tends to widen the disparity, rather than narrowing. Also, it is extremely important to show the contributions of each of the five categories of wealth, and of other categorical variables, and without doing that, you cannot interpret whether a variable contributes by widening or narrowing. At currently stands, wealth has 16% contribution to the disparity in Ethiopia, and we cannot know whether this contribution is to close the gap or not. My same comment applies to the other similar findings in the subsequent lines

Discussion

-Lines 408-410: revise the vague statement

-Lines 414-415: Even though there might not be a study on these countries together, there could be a number of studies that investigated facility delivery inequality in these countries, so unless you are 100% certain that there are no previous study, you should rather avoid making such bold statement that there were no prior studies.

-Lines 420-427: you need to show that the variation has been explained by the factors whose contributions have been explored and presented in the tables in the result section. For instance, in these lines, you have mentioned that the urban-rural disparity has been partly explained by the disparity in formal education and at least one ANC (or the lack thereof). However, in the result sections, you did not show separately that such variables have contributed to the disparity. Also, the word “ignorance” has nothing to do with your finding and seems also unethical.

-lines 433-435: it is important how the unequal distributions of endowments encourage urban women to attend to facility delivery. Which of these variables encourage urban women to deliver at facility, which variables discourage them? Explain the mechanism of actions of these variables to benefit women in urban and rural settings.

-lines 437-440: avoid the repetitions. How these variables widen the urban-rural gap?

-lines 446-448: not clear, and needs some clarification to help the statement read well

-lines 448-450: this interpretation is unclear; the evidence in the result section does not support the interpretations in these lines; how do we know that more frequent ANC visits could help urban women attend facility delivery in the absence of findings on the contributions of the specific categories ( that is 1-3 and >4= ANC visits) of the number of ANC visit?

-for the subsequent paragraphs, there is a need to make a major revision and make sure that every piece of your interpretation is completely informed by your findings. Since the analysis is incomplete, this has seriously affected the interpretations of the findings in this section of the paper.

-Also, it is good if you briefly elaborate on the policy implications of the study.

-it is not correct to blame the study being cross sectional as limitations of the study; causality cannot be made by a single study even with RCT, and more importantly, temporality is not the problem in the study at least for some of the variables like education and wealth. One important limitation in this is that in the BO decomposition, findings differ depending on the chosen reference categories of categorical variable, and hence requires further adjustment using “normalization” process. But, you need to overcome this problem in the study to get valid results.

-I cannot assume that these findings are generalized to the east African community since these four countries do not represent the entire sub-region.

-Your conclusion is not supported by the findings, pls see my comment in the result and discussion section. To higjlight on the contribution of wealth to the favor of the urban women, I should first see which categories of wealth ( poorest, poor, richest etc) dominate where ( urban or rural) and their respective contributions in the decompositions, because wealth is a categorical variable. Also, how do we specifically overcome the differential effect of the determinants to close the urban-rural gap in terms of use of facility delivery? That is an important dimension of your work and is better to further elaborate on how these can be challenged.

-the last statement of the conclusion has an incorrect word “strategist”

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Factors affecting the institutional delivery in LMIC is an important topic to explore. The authors used an interesting method to quantify the phenomenon. As authors stated the paper will be the first to use the Oaxaca-Blinder decomposition to examine the urban rural disparity in institutional delivery in selected east African countries

Comment 1: The paper is too long and most of information is not needed here or can be shortened

Response 1: we have tried to concise the document

Background:

Comment 2: The last paragraph of the background “page 12 lines 112-121”) can be moved to methods section

Response 2: we have deleted it from background

Methods:

Comment 3: Study population is just the women that have delivered in the past 5 years. Question: if a woman had delivered more than once in the past 5 years, please explain how are you exploring the information: are you considering all deliveries or just the last one?

Response 3: all births in the last five years were considered

Results section

Comment 4: Table 1 needs some statistical tests to these differences..

Table 2 needs some statistical tests and also there is a big problem for percentage of the “pregnancy-related deaths” (0.8%). The PRD is not affecting old women and most of deceases are women 60 years and above. You should recalculate this proportion based only on women of reproductive age (15-49years). This proportion will be much high that what the authors published. I think it will be more than 3%.

Please revise table 1 and table 2. The description in the manuscript is too confusing. I think on page 12, line 261 it is probably Table 2 and line 265 it is Table 1. Please review it again.

Table 1: Why not can provide the percentages instead of numbers? Too confusing.

What is the difference between table 1 and figure 1. I think they are providing the same information. If yes select only one of them

Response 4: Thank you very much, we have included chi-square and t-tests accordingly for categorical variables and continuous variables to show the presence of significant difference in place of residence. We have removed table 2 since the massage is similar with figure 1. Our study participants were 15 to 49 years women not 15 to 60 years and we haven’t any statement “pregnancy-related deaths” (0.8%)” in our document. Please you can check the result. Sorry for creating confusion we have corrected it by deleting table 2. The overlapping information reduced from table 1 and each has its own separate information.

Comment 5 minor comments

Response 5: thank you, we have edited and deleted per comments.

Comment 6: Overall: the paper is too long and I will recommend the authors to shorten it by deleting or reducing several sections. For instance the last paragraph of the background is the same information that was described in the method. The description of the decomposition method is well known and can be shortened and authors can just provide references as needed. The results section can describe briefly the most important results and not provide too much information. At the end the readers are lost. Also the results sections should be shortened by describing results instead of providing some explanations in the results section with references in this section. All explanations and reference in the results section should be moved to Discussion section

Response 6: for this comments we have deleted parts from background, method and result accordingly without missing the flow of the manuscript.

Reviewer #2: -

Abstract

Method

Comment 1: -indicate that the study was in four east African countries

Response 2: we have mentioned that our analysis data was from “four East African countries”

Comment 2: covariate effect was dominate”; this contradicts with the result in the body

Response 2: we have corrected the body part that that the covariate effect is the dominant for the change in this study

Conclusion

Comment 3: -“regional inequality” is confusing;

-“facilitate antenatal care utilization” is not clear, which ANC care? Four or more? Be specific

-“plan number of children” is vague

Response: for clarity we have replaced regional inequality with residential inequalities,

- facilitate antenatal care utilization also replaced with to increase frequency of antenatal care utilization

- Plan number of children removed

Introduction/background

Comment 4: Introduction/background

-this section is an awkward and poorly written. You incoherently moved between different ideas; you begin with mortality, and then jumped to facility delivery and then back to mortality. Pls rewrite this section and ensure that the transitions between paragraphs are effective and clear. Also, you need to further substantiate it by adding points directly related with urban-rural disparity in facility delivery. Do not forget that you still follow certain chronological flows.

- in the “maternal mortality rate below 70”, change rate into ratio

-Lines 112-120: take this to method section

Response 4: we have critically considered the comment and we have rewritten the background section accordingly, please see the background for confirmation.

-we have changed rate into ratio

-we removed the method section from background

Methods

Comment 5: DHS involves women 15-49 and men 15 to 59 as well as children under five. You need to mention this in the method section through your analysis in this study has been restricted to only women. You need to also clarify the distinction between “study population” and “sample”. All women in the reproductive age group in the selected households are samples, not study populations, unlike what you have said. Pls avoid the confusion around these terms

Response 5: we have included in the method “DHS involves women 15-49 and men 15 to 59 as well as children under five. For the current study we used women 15-49 years”.

-Our sample population: - sample population was all reproductive-age women in each household at the enumeration area.

Comment 6: the “sampling and sample size” section is too vague to understand how and how many enumeration areas (ESs) and participants were enrolled into the study. It needs to be clearly expounded that the DHS follows a stratified two-stage cluster design, where, following stratification by both urban and regions/districts (you just mentioned that stratification was based solely on urbanization and that is false), eligible women were selected in two stages. In this section, you can explain that succinctly. How many EAs were sampled in the first stage? How many households were sampled in each EA? What was the household and individual response rates? What is primary sampling unit/cluster and SSU? Explain

Response 6:we have address these comments as “Urban-rural based stratified two stage cluster sampling was employed for each region. In the first stage clusters were selected randomly and in the second stage equal numbers of households were selected using systematic random sampling [3–6]. From Ethiopia, Kenya, Tanzania and Uganda 645, 1612, 608 and 697 clusters were sampled in the first stage respectively. For Ethiopia 28, Kenya 25, Tanzania 22 and Uganda 30 households per cluster were selected in the second stage. From these in Ethiopia 18008, Kenya 40,300, Tanzania 13,360 and Uganda 20,880 households were sampled. Overall the household response rate was 99% for Keya and 98% for Ethiopia, Tanzania and Uganda. From identified eligible women the response rate for women interview was 95% for Ethiopia and 97% for the rest countries. The current study incorporates 643 clusters and 10,547 births from Ethiopia [4], 1,593 clusters and 20,840 births from Kenya [5], 608 clusters and 10,175 births from Tanzania [3] and 696 clusters and 15,154 births from Uganda [6].”

Comment 7: place of residence is the stratifier variable, not an exposure/independent variable. It is a variable the inequality was measured by accounting for the influences of exposure variables

Response 7: we have corrected residence as “Stratification variable” since have learned the issue.

Comment 8: maternal age (age during the time of the surveys administrations) could not be an exposure variable, because it comes long after the outcome variable occurs. The word “cautious” is ambiguous in the “age at birth”

Response 8: Thank you “Mr” Gebretsadik Shibre for this critical comment make as to find solutions for the challenge and we compute the exact age of the mother at the birth of their child by subtraction of the year of birth b2 of the Child from the year of birth of the mother (v010). And reanalyze.

Comment 9: it is strange that you did not explain how these variables were selected, and no citation to prior similar works was made. You need to tell us that these variables show certain theoretical and or statistical relationship with the intended response variables.

Response 9: we have cited our sources that were used as a base for our classification.

Comment 10: Region is missing from being an exposure variable

Response 10: the reason we missed regions from exposure variables in our study is that regional classification is not similar to compare across study countries

Comment 11: Distance from health facility: if this variable was created based on the variable v467d, then that is incorrect. This variable reflects access problem at the time of the survey for a woman's medical help, and is not related with facility delivery.

Response 11: yes we used v467d, because we assume that access is one of the possible hindering factors for institutional delivery.

Comment 12: How was media exposure variable was created and produced? Explain that to allow replication for other studies as well as to improve transparency. This applies also to other variables.

Response 12: for clarity we put in the method section operational definition heading “women are considered as regularly exposed to media if they have at least one of the media (newspaper, radio or television) at least once a week otherwise considered as have no access”. For transparency we generate media exposure from three variables (frequency of reading newspaper or magazine (v157), frequency of listening to radio (v158) and frequency of watching television (v159) and three of them have three responses (not at all (0), less than once a week(1) and at least once a week (2)). Based on this information we generate media exposure as this do file we do

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gen media_exposure=.

replace media_exposure=1 if v157==2|v158==2|v159==2

replace media_exposure=0 if media_exposure==.

label variable media_exposure "media exposure"

label define mediaexposure 0 "no accesses media" 1 "have accesses to media"

label values media_exposure mediaexposure

Comment 13: marital status variable was measured in DHS at the time of the survyes, and might not reflect marital status of the women before becoming pregnant, and therefore might not be an exposure variable for facility delivery; it has to come before or at least as the same time as the outcome variable to call it an exposure variable. Pls see this variable in the DHS guide for scrutiny.

Response 13: Really it is true some variation will be happen at time of birth and at the time of survey since marital status is time varying variable. However, the study design is cross-sectional which measure association but not able establish temporality. For this we acknowledged the limitations of the study.

Analysis

Comment 14: how did you assess the normality and Skewness of the variables? Explain that.

Response 14: we applied Skewness and kurtosis test with normal quantile plot to assess normality.

Comment 15: -you have described that the analyses were all ”population-weighted” and that “survey design” was taken into cognizant during analysis. This expression is very misleading for many reasons. First, the phrase “population-weighted” adds noting to understanding except that it brings confusion with it. You simply say you analysis is “weighted”. Second, you did not explain how your analysis should be weighted. Third, when we say, survey design is taken into account, we are saying that we are accounting for the disproportionate sampling (that we weight our analysis) and the stratification and clustering effect are taken into account to produce nationally representative estimates. So, the later expression, that is, the survey design is taken into account is enough and there is no any reason to repeat that analyses were weighted as far as you have mentioned that you have already mentioned that the complex nature of the data has been accounted for. Finally, when you say survey design was accounted for, I am not sure whether you have accounted for both stratification and clustering, and if you have missed one of them, then the estimated Standard errors were most likely be erroneous.

Response 15: we have used only “the survey design is taken into account”

Comment 16: it is not clear why you have also used the decomposition techniques suggested by powers et al after you have calculated BO decomposition? Both methods can be used of binary variables. But the problem with BO is that results could hugely differ depending on the reference category chosen during analysis, aka “identification problem”. So, with BO, YOU must do normalization to make the finding consistent with the chosen reference categories of categorical variables.

Response 16: so as to get detailed decomposition and normalized decomposition we used powers et al (Yun decomposition) and (nldecompose) for aggregate decomposition. However we missed the dummies and we have included in the revision.

Comment 17: - in the ethics section, please also mention that ethical procedures were the responsibility of the institutions that carried out the survey.

Response 17: thank you, we have mentioned it.

Results

Comment 18: -Since your outcome is facility delivery, just report that; reporting home deliveries adds only confusion

Response18: we have corrected with facility delivery percentage

Comment 19: the “delivery rate” is inappropriate usage as rate has a different meaning and does not go with delivery

Response 19: we have removed rates

Comment 20: the statement “however…, Table-1” is very vague and I cannot understand it

- The statement “Kenya has the highest 249 (35.83%) urban resident women

Response 20: sorry for making confusion, we have removed it but what we want to express is in the other country far most women reside in rural area.

Comment 21: lines 251-261: the texts here do not correspond to the content of table 1. Presented in table 1 is completely different from what the texts talks about. The texts about the differentials of urban and rural need to be presented well in terms of all the exposure variables so that we can see where these variables dominate, and this would then help us interpret the decomposition findings presented table 2 through table 4.

Response 21: here what we have tried is to compare the study areas by background characteristics with consideration of its importance to our discussion later.

Comment 22: Lines 262-265: it is the replication of table 2; pls avoid repetitions and redundancies

Response 22: really it is repetitions and we have removed

Comment 23: Lines 287-288: I think the contributions of the variables in the decomposition can be to either widen or narrow down the gap; this is the most interesting portion of the findings and hence requires further explanation in the discussion section. Why some variables contribute in terms of widening the gap, but not others?

Response 23: we did

Comment 24: lines 290-292: take this into the discussion

Response 24: we have moved it to discussion

Comment 25: -Lines 249-356: this paragraph actually lacks clear interpretations/presentations of findings. When you say that disparity could be reduced if urban and rural settings have similar levels of wealth, for instance, it can also be interpreted that disparity can be lowered if wealth in urban areas is reduced to a level in rural settings, which is not actually the case. So, you need to clearly present that when wealth in rural settings are increased to a level in urban areas, urban-rural disparities can be narrowed by certain amount. Also, make sure that in this text, you have not repeated what you have already presented in the Table.

Response 25: thank you based on the comment we have analyzed with dummies of the categorical variable to show the clear direction either to wide or narrow the gap.

Comment 26: Lines 357-359: in this small paragraph, you attempted to attach meaning to the observed contributions of the exposure variables. You are interpreting that variables with positive contribution like wealth tend to narrow down the disparity. However, how do these variables contribute this way? How do I know that these variables narrow, not widen the gap? I rather interpret the opposite way. I strongly recommend you to first document where these variables dominate (in urban or rural areas). For instance, if the richest and richer categories of wealth are predominantly found in the urban area, and if these categories have the capacity to increase the chance of giving birth in facilities, then surely, wealth tends to widen the disparity, rather than narrowing. Also, it is extremely important to show the contributions of each of the five categories of wealth, and of other categorical variables, and without doing that, you cannot interpret whether a variable contributes by widening or narrowing. At currently stands, wealth has 16% contribution to the disparity in Ethiopia, and we cannot know whether this contribution is to close the gap or not. My same comment applies to the other similar findings in the subsequent lines

Response 26: yes we have accepted the comment and addressed it as we have mentioned in response 25. We have also in showed that these factors are significantly different between urban and rural residences. Please see table 1.

Discussion

Comment 27: Lines 408-410: revise the vague statement

Response 27: we have tried to clarify by shortening sentences and selecting suitable words.

Comment 28: Lines 414-415: Even though there might not be a study on these countries together, there could be a number of studies that investigated facility delivery inequality in these countries, so unless you are 100% certain that there are no previous studies, you should rather avoid making such bold statement that there were no prio0r studies.

Comment 29: Lines 414-415: Even though there might not be a study on these countries together, there could be a number of studies that investigated facility delivery inequality in these countries, so unless you are 100% certain that there are no previous study, you should rather avoid making such bold statement that there were no prio0r studies.

Response 29: Thank you; yes it needs humble expression that is why we say to “our knowledge”.

Comment 30: Lines 420-427: you need to show that the variation has been explained by the factors whose contributions have been explored and presented in the tables in the result section. For instance, in these lines, you have mentioned that the urban-rural disparity has been partly explained by the disparity in formal education and at least one ANC (or the lack thereof). However, in the result sections, you did not show separately that such variables have contributed to the disparity. Also, the word “ignorance” has nothing to do with your finding and seems also unethical.

Response 30: Yes in the previous document we had missed it but in current document tables 3 and 4 answer this gap since we have reanalyzed per your comment. For the word ignorance we use uneducated mothers.

Comment 31: lines 433-435: it is important how the unequal distributions of endowments encourage urban women to attend to facility delivery. Which of these variables encourage urban women to deliver at facility, which variables discourage them? Explain the mechanism of actions of these variables to benefit women in urban and rural settings.

Response 31: we have mentioned variables and the possible mechanisms with reference

Comment 32: -lines 437-440: avoid the repetitions. How these variables widen the urban-rural gap?

Response 32: we have revised it to express additions rather than to repeat what already said

Comment 33: -lines 446-448: not clear, and needs some clarification to help the statement read well

Response 33: this expression was the combination of (table 1) covariate distribution differences between urban and rural women; and the facility delivery gap the will be narrowed if the gap in this covariate distribution increased in rural women (table 3).

Comment 34: lines 448-450: this interpretation is unclear; the evidence in the result section does not support the interpretations in these lines; how do we know that more frequent ANC visits could help urban women attend facility delivery in the absence of findings on the contributions of the specific categories ( that is 1-3 and >4= ANC visits) of the number of ANC visit?

Response 34: yes we have missed dummies and it was not directional. As we have addressed in response 25, this ambiguity will be solved in the current document.

Comment 35: for the subsequent paragraphs, there is a need to make a major revision and make sure that every piece of your interpretation is completely informed by your findings. Since the analysis is incomplete, this has seriously affected the interpretations of the findings in this section of the paper.

Response 35: similar with responses 25 and 34

Comment 36: -Also, it is good if you briefly elaborate on the policy implications of the study.

Response 36: we have tried to elaborate the policy implications for countries need covariate redistribution and behavioral interventions.

Comment 37: -it is not correct to blame the study being cross sectional as limitations of the study; causality cannot be made by a single study even with RCT, and more importantly, temporality is not the problem in the study at least for some of the variables like education and wealth. One important limitation in this is that in the BO decomposition, findings differ depending on the chosen reference categories of categorical variable, and hence requires further adjustment using “normalization” process. But, you need to overcome this problem in the study to get valid results.

Response 37: thank you for make us reconsider this limitation; however, our insight is that almost 16% of women at birth were less than 20 years. So they can change their education and wealth over time including with marriage or change in marriage. For identification problem we applied normalization.

Comment 38: I cannot assume that these findings are generalized to the east African community since these four countries do not represent the entire sub-region.

Response 38: we have corrected with this “The finding also generalized for similar countries as the data were representative and quality assured”

Comment 39: Your conclusion is not supported by the findings, pls see my comment in the result and discussion section. To higjlight on the contribution of wealth to the favor of the urban women, I should first see which categories of wealth ( poorest, poor, richest etc) dominate where ( urban or rural) and their respective contributions in the decompositions, because wealth is a categorical variable. Also, how do we specifically overcome the differential effect of the determinants to close the urban-rural gap in terms of use of facility delivery? That is an important dimension of your work and is better to further elaborate on how these can be challenged.

Response 39: we have addressed in result and discussion similar with responses 25 and 34

Comment 40: -the last statement of the conclusion has an incorrect word “strategist”

Response 40: corrected as “strategies”

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Urban-rural disparities in institutional delivery among women in East Africa: a decomposition analysis

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PLoS One. 2021 Jul 30;16(7):e0255094. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0255094.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


28 May 2021

Author response to Reviewer

Dear Reviewer, Dr. Gebretsadik Shibrie

We are very grateful for your constructive comments and suggestions. Here under are authors’ responses to the comments raised during second revision.

Background

Comment 1: In every piece of your writing in this section, make sure you have touched issues for all the four countries under investigation. But as it currently stands, some paragraphs (e. g. the paragraph that comes after paragraphs which explain about maternal mortality burden) concentrated solely on situations of Ethiopia. Here, you mentioned about the coverage of skilled delivery in Ethiopia as of 2016 EDHS, what about coverage of the same indicator in the other study countries?

Response 1: we have added the figures regarding to the rest three countries. (Kenya 61% [5], in Tanzania 63% [3] and in Uganda 74% [6])

Comment 2: In this same paragraph, the statement “……..Even though women have accessed cost free 148 services, the proportion of institutional deliveries in Ethiopia was 26%” is a bit confusing; the physical services are in fact offered free of charge, but they are not available for free as women incur a lot of other costs to get the skilled maternal health care services. I suggest you revise it to read more clearly. The statement in the lines 151-152 is incomplete; it is a phrase.

Response 2: we have rephrase like this, Even though women have accessed cost-free maternal and new-born care services, the proportion of institutional deliveries were in Ethiopia 26%......

Comment 3: The 79% (urban) vs.20% (rural) deliveries do not add up to 100%. Pls revise the figures.

Response 3: figure 20% is corrected as 21%.

Comment 4: In this paragraph, the urban-rural scenario of skilled delivery was made for only Ethiopia and Kenya; you need to also do the same for the other countries, which you are going to assess their disparities. Without first establishing whether disparity exists between urban and rural in terms of your response variable, you could not logically go on to explain (through decomposition) the disparity.

Response 4; for the rest of the countries we have added “In the case of Kenya urban institutional delivery was 82% and 48.5% in rural residents [5], in Tanzania urban 86.4% and rural 53.7% [3] and in Uganda it was reached 87.8% in urban and 69.5% in rural areas [6]. ”

Comment 5: The last statement in this paragraph, that reads “These inconsistencies were 161 also well documented in different countries DHS and WHO reports” does provide only confusion, since no inconsistencies have been mentioned in that paragraph, which inconsistencies you are referring about? Instead, you have discussed similar findings about the existence of urban-rural inequality around institutional deliveries in developing nations including Ethiopia and Kenya.

Response 5: inconsistency was replaced with “These urban-rural discrepancies”

Comment 6: Line 162 begins with “Other explanatory variables”; this has brought a huge confusion because in the preceding paragraph, you just were explaining about the existence of the urban-rural disparity, not about factors that drive the disparity. Mentioning that there is disparity is one thing; describing the factors that could underlie an observed disparity is another thing. I suggest you could give one paragraph for the latter case as the first case has already been done.

Response 6: Other explanatory variable was replaced with “From different literatures various explanatory variables were significantly linked with facility-based delivery; women education…..”

Comment 7: The statement “However, these studies were lacking to determine 168 the observed differences in rates of health-facility deliveries between rural and urban women” requires more nuanced explanation to make it a strong reason for drawing attention to this topic in the first place; many attempts have already been made to show the difference between urban and rural settings in terms of institutional birth, but probably, what is lacking is that, this difference was not explained rigorously using the decomposition method you are using.

Response 7: we have rephrase like this, “However, decomposition analysis method help to decomposing inequality in institutional deliveries in Urban-rural settings, this difference was not rigorously explained using the decomposition method.”

Comment 8: I suggest you revise and substantiate this last paragraph of the background as readers want to see where the novelty of this study lies in the midst of a prolific number of similar articles on this same area. Finally, I look forward to seeing a reason that justify the restriction of the present study to just Easter Africa, while it is possible to do the same study in any other settings.

Response 8: we have tried to rephrase as such “To develop effective strategies that minimize this urban-rural gap demands as such, a greater understanding of the underlying factors contributing to these disparities in institutional deliveries between urban and rural has paramount importance. So, this study aimed to identify the sources of variation in institutional delivery between the urban and rural areas in East Africa by using a decomposition analysis method.” Please see the manuscript.

Methods

Comment 9: The first paragraph that details about the nature and purpose of DHS goes without citation.

Response 9: thank you for reminding we have cited properly.

Comment 10: The authors have substantially improved the section which details about sampling procedure for each country. But one thing that is conspicuously missing is that, you have said that stratification was done before selection of samples. However, it is not clear whether stratification was done on both place of residence and regions for all the four countries. On line 200, the statement that reads “Urban-rural based stratified two stage cluster sampling was employed for all regions” is too vague to understand; do you mean that stratification was done by region as well as place of residence for Ethiopia? Pls clarify that.

Response 10: it was for all countries urban rural based but for Ethiopia both regional and residence based stratification was applied.

Comment 11: Further, I am not sure whether the same applies for the other settings. I even wonder whether “regions” are available in the other countries, and other terms might have been used in the place of regions. I suggest to double check this.

Response 11: yes you are right; in other countries regional classifications are geographical and are not similar with Ethiopia. The word regions to mean countries that were included in the study and we have corrected it.

Comment 12: On the lines 200 and 201, you went on to say that “clusters were selected randomly”; nevertheless, I found this information not true since clusters are normally selected based on Probability Proportional to Size (PPS) approach, not randomly.

Response 12: really we miss it and we have corrected per your comment and checking the approach from reports. Thank you!

Variables

Comment 13: The way the response variable is measured varies by where deliveries took place; in Ethiopia, health extension workers can be counted as skilled attendant and by extension, delivery in health post can be treated as institutional delivery. So, it is good to briefly summarize how the response variable is measured in all the four settings.

Response 13: For analysis, place of delivery was measured as a binary variable and was classified as “1” if a woman delivered in any healthcare facility and otherwise “0”. any healthcare facility is a facility minimum maternal cares and child care (bleeding control, vaccine and referral service). The name of minimum service providing facilities can be different health post in Ethiopia to dispensary Tanzania.

Comment 14: I suggest that you change “stratification variable” into equity stratifier. The former confuses with the sampling procedure you mentioned prior to this section.

Response 14: we have changed stratification variable to equity stratifier variable.

Comment 15: Some explanatory variables require further scrutiny. The variable “occupation” has many categories in DHS and I did not see all of them here. Cite a reason.

Response 15: our classification was for analysis amenity and interpretation.

Comment 16: How can age of a woman at birth leads to institutional birth? Age at pregnancy could give more sense.

Response 16: yes age at pregnancy is appropriate. However, this age is mathematically computed nearly age at birth minus one year, since there is no recorded pregnancy age for those recent gave births but for currently pregnant women. Moreover the variable is not significant in the current study in both collapsed and as the questionnaire form.

Comment 17: Why did you collapse wealth quintiles into three categories? Pls justify; shrinking the categories from 5 to 3 could result in loss of important information.

Response 17: Since in different literatures both classifications were used to make our manuscript concise we have reported the three classification approach.

Comment 18: Any reason for using two methods as the same time; BO and multivariate decomposition (“mvdcmp” command) for decomposition?. I previously commented on the need to clarify whether authors have implemented “normalization” procedure when running BO decomposition as this method suffers from identification problem. Now, in the revised version, authors have provided the following response:

“so as to get detailed decomposition and normalized decomposition we used powers et al (Yun decomposition) and (nldecompose) for aggregate decomposition”. Here, why then you have used BO decomposition if everything has been done with the former method? Put another way, a BO decomposition that is not normalized results in a finding that varies by the type of reference group you chose in your analysis. For instance, if I were to re-analyze these same data and want to figure out the contribution of wealth, with the richest as referent group, then, surely, I will end up with a finding that is in no way comparable with what you have generated. This is the greater caveat of BO decomposition that could be minimized by undergoing normalization. If you have done this in this revised version, please indicate that. Plus, the “nldecompose” does not support all the three design elements I talked about somewhere in this recommendation.

Response 18: nldecompose with different weighting provide results of Oaxaca, Blinder, Reimer, and Cotton that is why we prefer it for aggregate decomposition.

Authors prefer multivariate decomposition for detailed decomposition analysis and interpretation suit as both methods used in normalized detailed decomposition. As we have read ” mvdcmp is primarily intended for use in nonlinear decomposition and is based on recent contributions, which include convenient methods to handle path dependency (Yun 2004), computing asymptotic standard errors (Yun 2005a), and overcoming the identification problem associated with the choice of a reference category when dummy variables are included among the predictors (Yun 2005b, 2008).

To be transparent and for any comments suit if we are expected to learn our command become this one as a sample

mvdcmp residence1, normal (wealth_index1 wealth_index2 wealth_index3| distance1 distance2 | husb_occup1 husb_occup2 husb_occup3 husb_occup4| media_exposure1 media_exposure2| hus_educ1 hus_educ2 hus_educ3| ANCF1 ANCF2 | No_live_child1 No_live_child2 No_live_child3 ): logit p_delivery wealth_index1 wealth_index3 distance1 husb_occup2 husb_occup3 husb_occup4 media_exposure2 hus_educ2 hus_educ3 hus_educ4 ANCF2 No_live_child1 No_live_child3 age [pw=wt]

# In the introduction if the Oaxaca decomposition make confusion we replace with decomposition method.

Comment 19: On lines 239 and 240, in the statement “These included factors that are known to be associated with 240 institutional delivery and/or area of residency”, you should avoid the “and/or residency” as all of the presumed covariates/explanatory variables should be associated with facility delivery alone, not with place of residence; place of residence in this study serves only one purpose, serving as “equity stratifier”.

Response 19: thank you, but in this comment was addressed based on your previous comment.

Comment 20: On the wealth index, you could add more information on which household possessions and durable materials were used to construct the index, and whether similar materials were used in all the four study areas. Furthermore, you need to back up the fact that the percentage of each of the four categories of wealth index deviates from 20% as shown in your result. But in the method section, you said that each category of wealth score accounts for 20%. Why this deviation?

Response 20: this classification is originated from DHS guide. So, all countries use similar classification. “Households are given scores based on the number and kinds of consumer goods they own, ranging from a television to a bicycle or car, and housing characteristics such as source of drinking water, toilet facilities, and flooring materials. These scores are derived using principal component analysis. National wealth quintiles are compiled by assigning the household score to each usual (de jure) household member, ranking each person in the household population by her or his score, and then dividing the distribution into five equal categories, each comprising 20% of the population.” (Uganda,Tanzania , Ethiopia and Kenya DHS) as well as DHS guide.

As we have mentioned in methods section for the current analysis we merge poorest and poorer to poor and richer and richest to rich and middle as it is so each three category account for 40%, 40% and 20%.

Comment 21: The authors remain stubborn with their reason for ignoring region in their analysis. But, I would argue that, since they analyzed the data for each countries separately, it poses no problem if they include country specific variables in their analysis. Otherwise, omitting an important variable from for one or the other countries amounts to the so-called Omitted Variable Bias (OVB). Similarity of variables is must for pooled analysis, where an author needs to append one data beneath another to create one mega-data.

Response 21: yes it could be another limitation but we have no other reason other than we have mentioned in first review.

Comment 22: I see a problem in the “distance” variable; since you used this name to proxy access, make sure that the variable “distance” in this study refers exclusively to access. Plus, this variable was gathered at the time of the administration of the surveys, but institutional birth happened five years ago; how can these two variables be related as a presumed factor and outcome? Can this be highlighted as limitation? There are a few more variables that have such similar problems.

Response 22: yes you are right it is one of the limitations of the cross-sectional study design that suffer from temporal relationship. As you said some individuals status during interview may be different from at a time of child birth and it is not for all and we couldn’t avoid in cross-sectional study. Moreover, if see years lived in place of residence (v104) more than 90% were resided 5 and more years and as you Know the expansion of health facility is not significantly high in this period. It was mentioned as a limitation in the first manuscript.

Analysis

Comment 23: It is not clear whether you have taken into account of all the three design elements (weighting, stratification, and clustering). It is extremely important for authors to be honest and explicitly state their analysis for other researchers to be able to replicate the analysis. DHS manual highly encourages researchers who are relying on DHS data to account their analysis for all of the three design elements.

Response 23: to be honest the only think we account is probability weighting. The reason is we cannot found a command that can account the three survey natures. We have tried to see the effect of

svyset v021 [pweight=wt], strata(v022) vce(linearized) singleunit(missing) on mvdcmp but it has no effect. But only weight has shown difference from unweight outcome.

Result

Comment 24 I found it very difficult to judge whether a contribution is to narrowing or widening the urban-rural gap. I think it is worthwhile to briefly discuss in the method section on the techniques used to interpret the positive and negative contributions. For instance, how does “poor” contributed to widen the gap? since the largest proportion of poor was found in rural settings, you may be tempted to arguing that it widens the gap, but the same logic applies for rich category as the largest portion of this category is found among the urban settings. So, I may conclude that the rich as well widens the gap, but this time by helping women in urban areas to get most of the institutional delivery. Here, the difference between poor and rich’s contribution is the mechanism of action; the poor by preventing rural women from getting the service and the rich by promoting the urban women to get the service. So, I strongly recommend you to clearly state how one can easily interpret how and why an exposure variable contributes to widen or shrunken the observed urban-rural disparity. To this end, it would be useful to fit a logistic regression for urban and rural settings separately to see whether exposure variables have positive or negative effect on your outcome variable, and this would greatly assist the interpretations of their influence on the disparity. If the effect of the poor group is to really prevent women from getting their child delivered at facility, and if the largest percentage of the poor concentrates among the rural settings, then the poor could widen the gap. If the effect of the rich is to increase the uptake of institutional delivery and if the largest percentage of the rich is found among the urban settings, then, again, this widens the gap by stimulating women to get the service more than the poor rural women do. But, we do not this hidden interesting mechanism of action until you run a logistic regression to see the effect on the outcome variable of the exposure variables. Then, use the regression result to interpret the contributions as well as the mechanisms of action of the variables. Just take a look at the following statement from your analysis and see how unclear it is for readers, On line 484-485:

“poor wealth status (-36.55%) contributed for 485 widening of the gap and rich wealth status (70.40%) contributed for narrowing of this gap.” Why does the poor widen? Why the rich does helps to shrink the gap? See my explanation above to get this problem fixed.

Response 24: for the fear of the length of the manuscript and the reviewer 1 comment most of the methodology should be cited not fully discussed. We prefer to only cite the materials. To clarify our result, the negative coefficients indicate the less sensitivity of the higher group for that particular factor like poor wealth that means if rural poor women became as equal as urban women wealth the institutional delivery in rural women become higher than urban women. The protective effects of poor wealth in home delivery are not as strong for urban as they are for rural. We have tried to discuss the meaning and implication of the wealth in the discussion part and we showed urban rural significant wealth difference in the descriptive analysis.

The implication of positive coefficient is if that factor become equalised between lower group and higher group (rural and urban) the outcome (institutional delivery difference in high and lower group become narrow). The implication of negative coefficient is that the higher groups are less sensitive to that factor and if the lower groups get the chance of equality with their factor of difference the change in outcome may become greater than the higher group.

Regarding to logistic regression we have fitted it before we conduct multivariate decomposition to select the factors and visualise their effect. Why we miss in the result is to minimise size of the manuscript. For a simple demonstration the effect of wealth in urban and rural separately supports our argument.

Comment 25: Finally, what does unexplained portion of the decomposition imply? Does this correspond to discrimination? Pls explain it as it has a huge policy implication.

Response 25: Unexplained (coefficient) effect is the effect of the factor rather than the distribution of factors or behavioural changes and that need quality of the factors rather than the distribution of the factors. We have put the policy implication of unexplained portion immediately before the limitation.

Limitations

Comment 26: The problems associated with the use of BO decomposition has not been duly explained in this section. The sheer use of BO decomposition is neither a problem nor a limitation by itself; pls describe a specific attribute of the method that you can consider as a weakness or limitation.

Response 26: Although Oaxaca method has limitations like, Ordering of variables problem, Index problem, Observations matching problem and Choice of sample weights, we have applied Oaxaca extension mvdcmp approach to hand this. That is why preferred to reserve from mentioning limitations.

Comment 27: You have described that temporality remains to be a problem for the study. However, this limitation was not taken into account while interpreting your findings; if the temporality of the exposure variables were not known, why have you interpreted the findings as if they are like causes for institutional birth? When you say that wealth contributes to facility delivery, you are labelling at as a determinant factor. Pls pay attention to this discrepancy.

Response 27: The authors consider, understanding the cross-sectional nature of the study and appreciating its limitation like temporality problem in the limitation section will portray this gaps.

Comment 28: I highly recommend them to get the paper copyedited by someone highly proficient in English as poorly written manuscript is likely not to provide messages it intends to portray to readers. Also, I highly encourage them to edit the entire paper for some technical additions.

Response 28: we have tried to show our paper for language and grammar editing with language expert in our university

Comment 29: Finally, I would like to thank the authors for their great work and for substantially improving the first version.

Response 29: Really I am speechless to thank reviewer (Gebretsadik Shibrie) for your time dedication, constructive comments and helping in extensive improvement of the manuscript. Given comments are not only for current manuscript improvement but also increasing our overall understanding of the analysis and research. We may not satisfy you in addressing all issues even we have tried, but we really learnt from what we have done in future as well.

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