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. 2021 Aug 11;16(8):e0255304. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0255304

Coral reefs in the Gilbert Islands of Kiribati: Resistance, resilience, and recovery after more than a decade of multiple stressors

Sara E Cannon 1,*,#, Erietera Aram 2,, Toaea Beiateuea 2,, Aranteiti Kiareti 2,, Max Peter 2,, Simon D Donner 1,#
Editor: James R Guest3
PMCID: PMC8357116  PMID: 34379665

Abstract

Coral reefs are increasingly affected by a combination of acute and chronic disturbances from climate change and local stressors. The coral reefs of the Republic of Kiribati’s Gilbert Islands are exposed to frequent heat stress caused by central-Pacific type El Niño events, and may provide a glimpse into the future of coral reefs in other parts of the world, where the frequency of heat stress events will likely increase due to climate change. Reefs in the Gilbert Islands experienced a series of acute disturbances over the past fifteen years, including mass coral bleaching in 2004–2005 and 2009–2010, and an outbreak of the corallivorous sea star Acanthaster cf solaris, or Crown-of-Thorns (CoTs), in 2014. The local chronic pressures including nutrient loading, sedimentation and fishing vary within the island chain, with highest pressures on the reefs in urbanized South Tarawa Atoll. In this study, we examine how recovery from acute disturbances differs across a gradient of human influence in neighboring Tarawa and Abaiang Atolls from 2012 through 2018. Benthic cover and size frequency data suggests that local coral communities have adjusted to the heat stress via shifts in the community composition to more temperature-tolerant taxa and individuals. In densely populated South Tarawa, we document a phase shift to the weedy and less bleaching-sensitive coral Porites rus, which accounted for 81% of all coral cover by 2018. By contrast, in less populated Abaiang, coral communities remained comparatively more diverse (with higher percentages of Pocillopora and the octocoral Heliopora) after the disturbances, but reefs had lower overall hard coral cover (18%) and were dominated by turf algae (41%). The CoTs outbreak caused a decline in the cover and mean size of massive Porites, the only taxa that was a ‘winner’ of the coral bleaching events in Abaiang. Although there are signs of recovery, the long-term trajectory of the benthic communities in Abaiang is not yet clear. We suggest three scenarios: they may remain in their current state (dominated by turf algae), undergo a phase shift to dominance by the macroalgae Halimeda, or recover to dominance by thermally tolerant hard coral genera. These findings provide a rare glimpse at the future of coral reefs around the world and the ways they may be affected by climate change, which may allow scientists to better predict how other reefs will respond to increasing heat stress events across gradients of local human disturbance.

Introduction

Phase shifts or regime shifts, changes in the equilibria community in response to a persistent change in environmental conditions [1], are well-documented responses to disturbance on coral reefs. Phase shifts can happen over broad spatial scales, ranging from local (a few kilometers) to regional (thousands of kilometers), and wide time scales (from a period of 1–2 years to decades or longer) [2, 3]. There may also be time lags of several years or more between the disturbance and the resulting change in community composition. Together, these characteristics may make identifying the drivers of phase shifts challenging, but doing so can have important implications for resource management [3].

Once an ecosystem has undergone a phase shift, it is often difficult for it to return to the previous state, particularly when there are multiple disturbances occurring at once. However, there is some evidence that coral reefs that have undergone phase shifts can recover by alleviating the responsible stressors, or restoring the perturbed aspect of the system [1, 4]. One well-known example of this is the case of reefs in Kane’ohe Bay, Hawai’i, where diversion of sewage outflow led to a reversal of a previous phase shift to macroalgae [5]. This example illustrates that identifying and reversing a phase shift requires establishing a link between the drivers and the ecosystem response [3].

On coral reefs, the potential drivers of phase shifts have been well-documented, and may include acute (short-term) disturbances such as climate-driven events (e.g., marine heat waves or tropical cyclones) or chronic (long-term) disturbances (e.g., fishing pressure, nutrient enrichment, or sedimentation, or a combination of these) [6]. The most well-known examples of phase shifts on coral reefs are from coral-dominated to macroalgae-dominated states [79], but this may occur more often in the Caribbean than in the Indian and Pacific Oceans [1012]. Instead, phase shifts to other dominant organisms may be more common. For example, phase shifts to coral taxa with ‘weedy’ life history strategies [13] have been documented in parts of the Pacific [14], as well as shifts to sponges [15, 16] or corallimorphs [14, 17].

The coral reefs of Tarawa Atoll and its less populated neighbour Abaiang Atoll in the Republic of Kiribati provide a unique opportunity to investigate the role of chronic human disturbances on coral reef recovery from acute disturbances, and could also serve as examples of the ways that reefs in other parts of the world may respond to increasing frequencies of climate-driven heat stress events in the future. These reefs have been exposed to repeated bleaching-level heat stress events in the past 20 years due to the El Niño/Southern Oscillation (ENSO) [18, 19]; during central Pacific El Niño events, slowdown or reversal of easterly trade winds and the South Equatorial Current bring anomalously warm conditions to the central equatorial Pacific [20]. The two atolls, however, experience different levels of local human disturbance. Tarawa is home to roughly 60% of the 110,136 people in Kiribati according to the 2015 census [21]. About 90% of the Tarawa’s population is concentrated in communities spread across the southern rim of the atoll (referred to administratively as South Tarawa). By contrast, neighboring Abaiang Atoll, about seven miles north of Tarawa’s northern-most point, has less than a tenth of Tarawa’s population, about 5,500 people [21]. This difference in human population translates to a difference in chronic human-related pressures like fishing, nutrient loading, and sedimentation. For example, reefs in S. Tarawa experience much higher fishing pressure than those in N. Tarawa and Abaiang. Although fishers in Abaiang export much of their catch to S. Tarawa, a report from 2004 indicates that fish populations in Abaiang were healthy and showed no signs of overexploitation [22], and research suggests that such small-scale subsistence fisheries are unlikely to substantially affect reef fish assemblages [23].

The gradient in human pressures on the reefs emerged from the colonial history of Kiribati, more so than from recent governance. The Gilbert Islands, known as Tungaru by the i-Kiribati prior to colonization, were first settled 2,000–3,000 years ago [24]. The British seized control in 1892, and retained colonial oversight of the Gilberts until Kiribati’s independence in 1979, with the exception of a six-year period during and after World War II [24, 25]. During the colonial period, causeways were built that altered natural water flow and sedimentation patterns in S. Tarawa, and to a lesser extent in other atolls like Abaiang, and also blocked fish populations from reaching their traditional spawning and nursery grounds within the lagoon [2628]. The British centralized and expanded government activity in S. Tarawa, creating a draw for people looking for education, employment, and access to goods and services, and spurring the high population density in Tarawa today [2426]. The population of S. Tarawa is growing at about 4.5% per year and is expected to double by 2030 [29]. The Kiribati government has attempted to meet the needs of this growing population through major infrastructure projects in S. Tarawa, including many that are underway today [30]. Conversely, there have been few major infrastructure projects in N. Tarawa, Abaiang, and other “outer” atolls, with the exception of causeways [24]. Most outer atolls have experienced steady or declining human populations as people migrate to S. Tarawa [21].

South Tarawa’s growing population meant that sewage pollution was also increasing and becoming a growing threat to the health of both people and coral reefs. In 1985, the British completed the first sewage scheme in S. Tarawa [24], which aimed to improve water quality by pumping raw sewage out of three outflows at seven meters depth along the reef crest, via pipes crossing the reef flat. Until recently, the outfalls had not been regularly maintained and leaked untreated sewage onto the reef flats [31]. Notably, these sewage pipes only served a portion of the population on S. Tarawa; as of 2013, about 60% of residents use the ocean, beaches, or lagoon instead of toilets [29].

In 2019, Kiribati’s Ministry of Public Works and Utilities completed a project to improve access to toilets (reducing the number of residents not using toilets from 60% to 20%) and to update the sewage system, which included fixing the leaking pipes and moving the outflows from the reef crests to 30m depth [32]. The local government is concerned about the impacts of sewage pollution on reef health [31, 32]. Some coral taxa are unable to tolerate high concentration of nutrients, which can contribute to reef degradation by allowing fleshy macroalgae (as in the case of Kane’ohe Bay, Hawai’i) [5], or weedy coral species like Porites rus to outcompete the more sensitive corals [33].

These distinct histories of disturbance have influenced how reefs in Tarawa and Abaiang responded to recent acute disturbances, which include recurrent bleaching events and a CoTs outbreak. The first reported bleaching event at Tarawa and Abaiang occurred in 2004–2005, due to prolonged exposure to higher-than-average SSTs during an El Niño event [34]. There were no reports of bleaching on the outer reefs (in the published literature, grey literature, or via local experts) [34] and cores from massive Porites did not provide evidence of past bleaching events [18], although it is possible that mass bleaching occurred during past El Niño events but went unreported. After the first bleaching event, coral genera that are more tolerant of heat stress became more dominant, and researchers observed a similar pattern after a subsequent bleaching event in 2009–2010 [19, 34]. Then, in 2013–2014, an outbreak of the corallivorous Crown-of-Thorns (CoTs) sea star, Acanthaster cf solaris, occurred in both Tarawa and Abaiang [35]. A CoTs outbreak also occurred in the 1970s [26, 36], and other unreported events may have occurred in the intervening years [28]. Outbreaks of CoTs can cause widespread damage and coral loss on reefs [37], particularly after coral bleaching, when predation may target the thermally-tolerant surviving corals such as massive Porites [38, 39].

The weedy coral species Porites rus is also thermally tolerant, and previous studies document its spread over time in S. Tarawa, which likely contributed to these highly disturbed reefs’ greater resistance to the 2004–2005 and 2009–2010 bleaching events than those experiencing lower human influence [19]. After the first bleaching event ended in 2005, researchers documented a rapid increase in P. rus at a single site in Tarawa and hypothesized that it was temporary, but subsequent surveys showed that P. rus continued to survive or even proliferate across sites in S. Tarawa despite the subsequent heat stress event [19]. This could suggest that a phase shift was underway among reefs in S. Tarawa, where prior to bleaching in 2004, the coral community was more diverse; S. Tarawa’s reefs were home to larger populations of both fast-growing, thermally sensitive genera like Acropora and Pocillopora, and slower-growing, more thermally tolerant genera like massive Porites [19, 34]. In 2012, P. rus accounted for the majority of coral cover in S. Tarawa [19], while in Abaiang, coral reefs were still in the process of recovering from the last bleaching event and their future trajectory was unclear [19]. Detecting when a community is in the process of shifting is important because a single perturbation could push that community into a catastrophic shift to a degraded state [40]. If a phase shift has already occurred, identifying it, the parameters that may have caused it, and how the phase shift may affect ecosystem services could inform next steps for management.

Here, we add to the previous research investigating phase shifts on coral reefs by evaluating how benthic communities, including coral, algae, and other key taxa, have responded to multiple stressors in Abaiang and Tarawa Atolls. We examine benthic cover and size frequency data collected in surveys from 2012 through 2018 to evaluate a series of hypotheses about the trajectories of coral reef communities after disturbance. First, we test whether post-bleaching communities shifted towards dominance by disturbance-resistant coral taxa and macroalgae over the study period. Second, we tested whether the shift to P. rus in S. Tarawa, documented in previous studies, is persistent and represents a phase shift. Third, we test that the taxa-level response to the CoTs outbreak differs from that of bleaching, with massive Porites sensitive to CoTs but more resistant to bleaching. Finally, we examine whether the trajectories of post-bleaching communities differ based on local human disturbance. Our findings provide a rare glimpse at how coral reefs around the world may respond to the increasing frequencies of heat stress events across gradients of local human disturbance and could provide important lessons to guide the future management of coral reef resources in the face of climate change.

Materials & methods

Study sites

We sampled 19 sites on the outer reefs across Abaiang and Tarawa Atolls between 2012 and 2018 (Fig 1 and S1 Table). These outer reefs feature spur and groove formations from the reef crest seaward to approximately 10 to 15m depth. The southeastern and eastern reefs are more exposed to prevailing easterly wind directions and swells, and thus have narrower reef terraces than those on the western outer reefs.

Fig 1. Study sites in Tarawa and Abaiang.

Fig 1

This figure uses data extracted from the Millennium Coral Reef Mapping Project Version 4.0 [41], and the OpenStreetMap Foundation, available under a CC BY-SA 2.0 license with permission from © OpenStreetMap contributors, original copyright 2012 [42].

Because of the complexity of conducting fieldwork in such a remote location, we were unable to visit a consistent set of sites during each of our visits, resulting in uneven sampling across sites and atolls. Sites were unevenly sampled every two years from 2012 to 2016, and were selected to cover a range of habitats, population density, and coastal infrastructure. In 2018, we sampled a wide array of the intended sites, which provides the most recent and complete snapshot of benthic communities in both atolls. We obtained permission to access field sites and conduct scientific research from the Kiribati Ministry of Environment, Lands, and Agricultural Development for the 2018 surveys, and through an established research partnership with the Ministry of Fisheries and Marine Resource Development (MFMRD) for all previous surveys. Repeats of the 2018 surveys planned for 2020 had to be postponed indefinitely because of the COVID-19 pandemic.

All sites are on the ocean side of the atolls (we did not survey sites within the lagoons). Most sites are limited to the south and west rims of each atoll due to unsafe diving conditions and difficulties accessing the northern and northeastern reefs. As in previous work, sites located in the northern tip of North Tarawa (TRW005, TRW007) are grouped with sites from Abaiang because they are physically closer to Abaiang and have similar levels of human disturbance [19, 34]. Going forward, we refer to sites in North Tarawa and Abaiang as ‘Abaiang’, and sites in South Tarawa as ‘Tarawa.’

Survey methods

All data were collected between April and May in 2012, 2014, 2016, or 2018. Benthic community composition and size-frequency of coral communities were measured using the methods we described in a previous study [12]. A 50-m transect tape was laid randomly at 10-m depth at each site. We took 0.33m2-sized quadrat photos (50.0 cm width by 66.7 cm length) at 50 cm intervals along the transect, for a total of 100 photos per site. These photos were later analyzed to calculate the percent cover of macroalgae and coral genera, with other key benthic taxa, at each site (see Statistical Analysis.).

We also measured the diameter (in cm) of corals in situ along the transect, including all coral colonies ≥ 1 cm that lay at least partially within 25-cm on both sides of the tape. We considered corals with separate patches of living tissue > 3-cm apart from each other independent and measured them individually. All corals were identified to the genus level, with the exception of P. rus, which we identified to the species level.

All identification relied on taxonomy from Veron [43]. Since this resource was published, the taxonomy of the Favidae family has undergone several changes [44], which we were unable to reflect in these analyses because the size frequency data were collected in situ and the genera thus cannot be corrected to account for the most up-to-date taxonomy. We have included a list of species observed in Tarawa and Abaiang [36] in the supplementary materials for reference (S2 Table).

We used photos from the transects to calculate benthic percent cover using the open-source web tool CoralNet [45], which overlaid 20 random points per photo for 100 photos per site (for a total of 2000 points per site). Each photo covered 0.33 m2 (50.0 cm width by 66.7 cm length). We manually identified each point to the genus level for coral and macroalgae, and to functional group for sponges, soft corals, turf algae, crustose coralline algae (CCA), and cyanobacteria. We also identified the coral species P. rus, which has a ‘weedy’ life-history strategy [13], to the species level. To estimate the impacts of 2014’s CoTs outbreak, we manually counted the number of recent feeding scars visible in our photo quadrats at the sites we visited that year and identified the genera of the coral with the feeding scars (Fig 2). We considered scars recent if the dead coral patch was still white, and other organisms had not yet colonized the coral skeleton (e.g., algal turf). In this way, we avoided counting scars from bleaching or other causes of mortality, although this method likely underestimates the number of CoTs feeding scars as a result.

Fig 2. Daily sea surface temperature (red), Degree Heating Weeks (blue) averaged across study sites from 1985 through 2018, with the maximum monthly mean (black).

Fig 2

Human disturbance

We used two different metrics to estimate different aspects of human disturbance. First, we used 2015 census data from Kiribati, which provides the population for each village in the nation [21], to calculate a population metric. Using ArcGIS ArcMap 10.6.1, we measured the distance from each site to the center of the nearest village and then divided the population of that village by the distance. This metric incorporates localised human disturbance that is related to population (such as nutrification and fishing pressure).

We calculated the second human disturbance metric using the Normalized Difference Vegetation Index (NDVI), obtained from the United States Geological Survey’s Land Satellite 8 imagery following a method developed in a previous analysis of the neighbouring Republic of the Marshall Islands [12]. NDVI measures the amount of green terrestrial vegetation within a 60-m pixel on a scale of -1.0 to +1.0 and is commonly used to represent the extent of human disturbance on terrestrial ecosystems. This metric captures human alterations of the landscape and is not necessarily affected by local population size. We used NDVI in addition to a population metric to account for land-based disturbances where there are few permanent residents (e.g., Tarawa’s Bonriki airport). NDVI has an inverse relationship with disturbance; a high NDVI value indicates a low level of disturbance.

To calculate this metric, we obtained satellite data from November 11, 2017 and February 8, 2018, selected for coverage of all sites and for the low cloud cover on those days. Using ArcGIS ArcMap 10.6.1, we mosaicked the satellite data into a single data layer, and then cast a circle with a 1-km diameter (chosen to minimize overlap of the circles) around each site and traced the landmass that fell within the circle. We then calculated the average NDVI of the landmass, giving us a proxy to rank human influence at each site. For TRW014, the one site that was not within 1-km of land, we used the highest NDVI value from the sites closer to land (indicating the lowest level of disturbance, S1 Table).

Oceanographic data

Time series of daily SST and Degree Heating Weeks (DHW) for all sites for the years 1985 through 2018 were obtained from 0.05° x 0.05° resolution CoralTemp SST Version 3.1 satellite-derived data [46]. We calculated the coefficient of variation of SST (CVSST) for each site using the entire available dataset of SSTs (1985–2018) to represent temperature variability. We also calculated the monthly maximum mean (MMM), a baseline for estimating heat stress, using a monthly climatology calculated from daily SST values from 1985–1994. Finally, we obtained the satellite-derived monthly chlorophyll-a (chl-a) concentration (in mg m3) via NASA’s Moderate Resolution Imaging Spectroradiometer, from July 2002 –May 2019 [47], and applied a nearest value interpolation in order to fill missing values. We used this full dataset to calculate a mean chl-a value at each site.

Wind and wave exposure

We created a proxy for wind and wave exposure using the angle of each of our sites to the prevailing wind. We first calculated the average prevailing wind direction (p = 111°, roughly East-Southeast) for 2000–2008 using wind vector data recorded by the Kiribati Meteorological Service at the station in Betio, Tarawa. We then used Google Earth to measure the compass heading perpendicular to the reef crest at each of our sites (C). Using the prevailing wind direction (p) and the compass heading (C), we calculated a normalized exposure metric, where 1 is maximum exposure and 0 is minimum exposure to the prevailing winds:

ExposureMetric=1(|(pC)|)/180

Statistical analysis

We investigated change over time at available sites from 2012–2018 to evaluate a series of hypothesis about the trajectories of coral reef communities after disturbance. All statistical analysis was done using R version 4.0.2 [48] and RStudio version 1.3.959 [49]. Plots were created with the R packages ggplot2 [50] and ggbiplot [51].

We grouped the data into seven categories representing the most ecologically important and prevalent taxa: Acropora, Heliopora, Montipora, Pocillopora (genera), Favids (genera of the former family Faviidae), massive Porites (morphology of genus Porites, including the species Porites lutea and Porites lobata), and P. rus (species). The octocoral Heliopora is included in the coral taxa analysis because of its prevalence throughout the Gilbert Islands. Other key benthic taxa and substrate types analysed include Halimeda and Lobophora (macroalgae genera), crustose coralline algae (CCA), corallimorphs, cyanobacteria, rubble, sand, soft corals, sponges, and turf algae.

We began by testing our first hypothesis that post-disturbance communities were dominated by bleaching-resistant coral taxa and macroalgae, and the second hypothesis that the shift in P. rus in Tarawa was persistent. To do so, we investigated the change in percent cover for each key taxon and substrate type over time using linear mixed effects models (LMM) with the R package lme4 [52] followed by chi-square tests and Tukey’s post hoc tests. The percent cover data met the assumptions of normality and equal variance of residuals and were not transformed. The LMM allowed us to account for the uneven sampling of sites across years, by considering ‘Site’ a random effect and ‘Year’ a fixed effect. We tested the significance of ‘Year’ by comparing a null model (without ‘Year’ as a fixed effect) to a full model (which included the fixed effect) using chi-square tests. Finally, we conducted Tukey’s post hoc tests for each of the full LMM using the R package multcomp [53] to investigate the magnitude and direction of change in the percent cover of each taxa between years. We ran the models on three different datasets to ensure that the results were consistent despite the uneven sampling of sites: (1) the full dataset containing all sites, (2), from only the sites we visited each year from 2012 through 2018 (ABG001, ABG002, ABG003, TRW002, and TRW010; S1 Table), and finally (3) the sites where we found evidence of CoTs (S1 Table). Because of small sample sizes, we were not able to run the LMM separately for each of the key taxa within the atolls.

To investigate the third hypothesis that massive Porites was more sensitive to CoTs but resistant to bleaching, we ran an additional LMM, chi-square test, and Tukey’s post hoc tests for massive Porites within Abaiang, where we had observed greater prevalence of CoTs scars (discussed further below). We also conducted a similarity percentages analysis (SIMPER) using the full percent-cover dataset (999 permutations) [54] in the vegan package in R [55], to identify the key taxa driving differences in benthic communities across atolls and years.

We further tested our first hypothesis, along with our third hypothesis about the taxa-level response to the CoTs outbreak, by investigating changes in the size-frequency distributions of key coral taxa over the study period. We did not include P. rus in the size frequency analysis, despite its prevalence in Tarawa, because this species grows in extensive mats covering wide areas, and we were unable to distinguish between individual colonies. Size-frequency data were log-transformed to meet assumptions of normality, and critical values for all tests were adjusted using the Bonferroni correction to avoid Type I errors across multiple comparison tests. We first calculated demographic statistics on coral abundance and size for each of the key coral taxa (except for P. rus), including mean size, standard error, skewness and skewness standard error, and kurtosis and kurtosis standard error. We considered skewness and kurtosis values greater than two times the standard error significantly different than normal [56]. We used the Kolmogorov-Smirnov test to compare size frequency distributions across years and atolls [57], and Welch’s analysis of variance (ANOVA) tests to examine whether the mean size, coefficient of variation, skewness, or kurtosis for each of the six key taxa (excluding P. rus) varied over time [57]. We did not have large enough sample sizes to separate the results of the Welch’s ANOVA by atoll because of low sample sizes of some key taxa.

We then used permutational-based multivariate analysis (PERMANOVA), to test our final hypothesis that the trajectories of post-bleaching communities differed by local human disturbance. The analysis, conducted with 99,999 permutations [58], using the vegan package [55], tested for variation in means of all benthic taxa caused by five environmental variables: mean NDVI, the population metric, wind-and-wave exposure, the coefficient of variation of SST, and mean chl-a. To evaluate the impact that time played on the benthic community composition, we also made ‘Year’ a factor, with each of these environmental factors nested within ‘Year.’ Although PERMANOVA is not sensitive to collinearity, we excluded atoll as a factor because a factor analysis conducted using the R package psych [59] found that atoll and the population metric were closely correlated (F-statistic = 76.17, p <0.001) and because it did not add to the fit or explanatory power of the model. Instead, in addition to the PERMANOVA that included all sites from both atolls, we also ran the PERMANOVA separately for each atoll to investigate whether there were differences in how each of these factors influenced the benthic compositions within atolls.

Results

Disturbance history

We quantified the disturbances affecting reefs during our study period, to investigate our specific hypotheses about coral reef community trajectories post-disturbance. Our analysis of NOAA’s Coral Reef Watch historical SST data indicates that reefs in Abaiang and Tarawa experienced bleaching-level heat stress twice between 2012 and 2018. DHWs were greater than 8°C·week–considered by Coral Reef Watch a Bleaching Alert Level 2 event (severe bleaching and some mortality likely)–in 2012–2013 and 2014–2015, and again six months after the last surveys were conducted in 2018 (Fig 2). No bleaching was observed in our surveys or was reported to the MFMRD research team during our study period. The 2013–14 CoTs outbreak is described in a later section.

We confirmed that the levels of human disturbance on the atolls are statistically distinct based on the population metric and NDVI. Two-way ANOVAs confirmed what we had found when conducting the factor analysis to choose variables for the PERMANOVA (see Statistical Analysis): the atolls differed significantly based on the population metric, and these variables are highly correlated (F-statistic = 76.17, p < 0.001, adjusted r2 = 0.81). The atolls also varied significantly by NDVI, but the correlation is less strong (F-statistic = 13.304, p < 0.001, adjusted r2 = 0.23).

Benthic community trajectories between 2012 and 2018

The percent cover data by site and year for each of the key taxa is presented in Table 1. In Abaiang, both the average percent hard coral cover and the average percent macroalgae cover across all sites declined from 2012 to 2016, and then increased from 2016 to 2018 (Fig 3A). In Tarawa, hard coral cover and macroalgae cover followed slightly different trajectories (Fig 3B). Hard coral cover declined from 2012 to 2014, increased from 2014 to 2016, and then remained steady from 2016 to 2018; macroalgae cover declined from 2012 to 2014, and then increased from 2014 to 2018.

Table 1. Mean and standard deviations of the percent cover of key benthic category, for each survey year by atoll.

Category Atoll 2012 2014 2016 2018
Hard Coral Taxa
All Live Coral Abaiang 20.97 ± 5.68 16.37 ± 7.75 11.47 ± 6.86 18.26 ± 7.45
Tarawa 39.28 ± 10.60 14.16 ± 9.83 27.84 ± 19.17 28.26 ± 16.87
Acropora Abaiang 0.20 ± 0.20 0.17 ± 0.17 0.02 ± 0.04 0.21 ± 0.13
Tarawa 0.33 ± 0.41 1.09 ± 1.26 0.09 ± 0.04 0.11 ± 0.13
Favids Abaiang 2.41 ± 0.57 0.28 ± 0.27 0.34 ± 0.46 2.35 ± 1.25
Tarawa 0.41 ± 0.48 0.24 ± 0.40 0.07 ± 0.06 0.99 ± 1.24
Heliopora Abaiang 6.00 ± 4.25 8.59 ± 5.28 3.03 ± 2.31 6.52 ± 4.40
Tarawa 3.89 ± 3.09 2.40 ± 1.50 1.91 ± 1.43 1.81 ± 1.56
Montipora Abaiang 0.33 ± 0.01 0.09 ± 0.11 0.00 0.58 ± 0.27
Tarawa 0.18 ± 0.17 0.23 ± 0.26 0.08 ± 0.09 0.37 ± 0.42
Pocillopora Abaiang 1.20 ± 0.21 1.09 ± 0.88 0.57 ± 0.33 2.90 ± 1.65
Tarawa 1.56 ± 1.14 1.04 ± 1.10 1.29 ± 1.14 2.07 ± 1.14
Massive Porites Abaiang 6.17 ± 1.98 4.92 ± 4.93 3.09 ± 4.85 3.23 ± 2.25
Tarawa 0.71 ± 0.26 0.94 ± 1.20 0.23 ± 0.16 0.65 ± 0.72
P. rus Abaiang 0.11 ± 0.03 0.06 ± 0.05 0.26 ± 0.42 0.07 ± 0.04
Tarawa 28.31 ± 13.97 5.05 ± 4.19 22.19 ± 19.83 23.49 ± 19.84
Macroalgae Taxa
All Macroalgae Abaiang 38.13 ± 12.09 13.86 ± 5.96 7.93 ± 7.19 13.29 ± 8.70
Tarawa 9.90 ± 6.21 2.61 ± 3.88 5.40 ± 4.91 7.99 ± 3.96
Halimeda Abaiang 38.10 ± 12.04 13.74 ± 5.92 2.68 ± 0.40 13.04 ± 8.71
Tarawa 2.40 ± 3.47 2.27 ± 4.30 1.88 ± 3.44 3.09 ± 4.03
Lobophora Abaiang 0.00 0.10 ± 0.14 5.17 ± 6.80 0.12 ± 0.11
Tarawa 8.00 ± 4.06 0.86 ± 1.37 4.21 ± 5.06 6.70 ± 4.64
Other Benthic Taxa
CCA Abaiang 6.99 ± 0.52 10.38 ± 3.31 12.27 ± 2.31 9.83 ± 4.72
Tarawa 4.48 ± 2.04 9.34 ± 4.95 9.54 ± 4.42 9.02 ± 3.74
Corallimorphs Abaiang 0.00 0.05 ± 0.00 0.00 0.07 ± 0.03
Tarawa 8.85 ± 15.12 2.79 ± 2.38 2.64 ± 4.32 4.30 ± 5.74
Cyanobacteria Abaiang 2.76 ± 1.87 2.33 ± 0.66 1.96 ± 1.67 2.43 ± 2.42
Tarawa 4.50 ± 1.65 3.09 ± 5.22 4.69 ± 4.43 8.67 ± 4.86
Rubble Abaiang 2.49 ± 2.07 6.43 ± 4.45 8.90 ± 5.30 4.32 ± 3.10
Tarawa 2.07 ± 1.20 7.69 ± 4.45 3.29 ± 3.46 2.67 ± 3.02
Sand Abaiang 4.06 ± 3.21 6.70 ± 5.07 4.65 ± 2.85 8.31 ± 5.80
Tarawa 9.48 ± 12.20 17.46 ± 14.19 8.74 ± 9.25 5.20 ± 7.78
Soft Coral Abaiang 0.02 ± 0.04 0.27 ± 0.25 0.25 ± 0.44 0.13 ± 0.16
Tarawa 0.13 ± 0.19 0.00 0.04 ± 0.05 0.14 ± 0.12
Sponges Abaiang 1.95 ± 0.41 1.34 ± 0.48 3.59 ± 1.19 2.05 ± 0.91
Tarawa 6.59 ± 3.33 1.58 ± 1.03 4.05 ± 1.69 4.52 ± 1.76
Turf Algae Abaiang 22.45 ± 9.92 42.25 ± 4.25 48.73 ± 3.76 41.22 ± 6.96
Tarawa 21.58 ± 13.28 41.49 ± 13.61 35.52 ± 24.98 31.69 ± 13.71

Fig 3. Time series of mean percent cover of live coral, macroalgae, and turf algae by atoll.

Fig 3

The shaded area around each line represents the standard deviation of the percent cover. The live coral excludes TRW013 or TRW014, which we did not visit in 2012.

The apparent decline in the average live coral cover in Tarawa in 2014 in Table 1 is at least partially a consequence of the sampling methods. The photo quadrat surveys of site TRW010, which features a spur-and-groove system with deep and sometimes wide grooves that consist largely of sand, inadvertently captured more sand than in other years (31.98% of total cover in 2014, compared to 18.1% in 2012 and 17.50% in 2016). In addition, we visited TRW013 and TRW014, which both had lower live coral cover than all other Tarawa sites (12.7% and 3.62%, respectively), for the first time in 2014; this gives a misleading impression that there was a large decline in live coral cover across Tarawa between 2012 and 2014. If we omit these sites and correct the total live coral and P. rus cover at TRW010 in 2014 by removing sand from the total percent cover, the decline from 2012 to 2014 is reduced by two-thirds (Fig 3B). Including TRW013 and TRW014 sites in the statistical analyses did not, however, affect the model results, and we therefore present the unadjusted values going forward.

We used LMMs and chi-square tests to investigate our first hypothesis, that post-bleaching communities are dominated by bleaching-resistant coral taxa and macroalgae, and second hypothesis, that the shift to P. rus was persistent in Tarawa. The results for the LMMs, including all sites across both atolls, suggest that the percent cover of several key taxa changed significantly from 2012–2018 (Table 2). There was not sufficient data to test whether cover is different between atolls and years. Year was a significant factor driving the change in percent cover of all live coral (χ2 = 8.36, p = 0.04), as well as changes in Favids (χ2 = 15.00, p < 0.01), Heliopora2 = 8.59, p = 0.04), Montipora2 = 16.41, p < 0.01), and Pocillopora2 = 14.77, p < 0.01) genera, and massive Porites2 = 9.62, p = 0.02) morphology. Year also was a significant factor in the change in percent cover of all macroalgae genera (χ2 = 19.68, p < 0.01) and for Halimeda specifically (χ2 = 14.27, p < 0.01), as well as for CCA (χ2 = 7.95, p = 0.05), rubble (χ2 = 9.81, p = 0.02), sponges (χ2 = 14.09, p < 0.01), and turf algae (χ2 = 14.34, p < 0.01). While we were unable to separate these results by atoll, some of the taxa were only present in one atoll or the other, which allows us to extrapolate which atolls were most affected. For example, P. rus and corallimorphs were rare in Abaiang, while massive Porites were rare in Tarawa. A repeat of the LMM using only those sites that we visited every year found similar results (S3 Table), so all sites for which we gathered data are used in the following analyses.

Table 2. Results of linear mixed effects models for each key benthic category.

Statistically significant results at α = 0.05 are in bold, while those that are significant at α = 0.10 are underlined.

Categories χ2 p Marg R2 Cond R2
Hard Coral Taxa
All Live Coral 8.36 0.04 0.03 0.89
Acropora 7.74 0.05 0.18 0.19
Favids 15.00 <0.01 0.32 0.49
Heliopora 8.59 0.04 0.05 0.79
Montipora 16.41 <0.01 0.35 0.45
Pocillopora 14.77 <0.01 0.14 0.68
Porites (Massive) 9.62 0.02 0.07 0.79
P. rus 6.75 0.08 0.02 0.91
Macroalgae Taxa
All Macroalgae 19.68 <0.01 0.29 0.53
Halimeda 14.27 <0.01 0.26 0.55
Lobophora 5.15 0.16 0.09 0.33
Other Benthic Categories
CCA* 7.95 0.05 0.14 0.38
Corallimorphs 4.06 0.26 0.12 0.51
Cyanobacteria 5.21 0.16 0.08 0.41
Rubble 9.81 0.02 0.14 0.53
Sand 6.33 0.10 0.06 0.71
Soft Coral 1.48 0.69 0.04 0.40
Sponges 14.09 <0.01 0.16 0.64
Turf algae 14.34 <0.01 0.17 0.66

*CCA = crustose coralline algae.

The difference between marginal and conditional r2 values in the LMM indicates the extent of the variance explained by the sites surveyed (the random effect) and the year (the fixed effect). For example, the cover of some taxa, such as Montipora, were more affected by the year of the survey (conditional r2 = 0.35, or 35% of the variance) than the sites surveyed (marginal r2—conditional r2 = 0.10, or 10%) (Table 2). For all live coral cover, the entire model explained 89% of the variance, with the majority of that (86%) explained by differences across sites, and only 3% explained by the difference across years. Similarly, the entire model explained most of the variance in massive Porites (79%), with sites surveyed explaining 72% of the variance and the year of the survey explain 7% (Table 2). This is not surprising, given that we found most massive Porites colonies at sites in Abaiang.

We followed the LMM with Tukey contrasts for multiple comparison of means, to produce specific quantitative estimates of how the percent cover of each taxa changed over time across all sites and years (significant results in Table 3; full results in S4 Table). The mean live coral declined by an estimated 7.59% across all sites from 2012 to 2014 (z = -2.74, p = 0.03). The percent cover of Favids, Montipora, and Pocillopora all increased modestly between 2014 and 2018 and between 2016 and 2018 (Table 3), while massive Porites was the only key coral taxa to decline significantly at α = 0.05 (by 1.92% between 2012–2016, z = -3.00, p = 0.01), although the decline between 2012 and 2018 was significant at α = 0.10 (S4 Table). While the percent change of the total benthic taxa across both atolls was small, massive Porites in Abaiang declined in half (from 6.17 ± 1.98% in 2012 to 3.09 ± 4.85% in 2016, Table 1). The Tukey results show that macroalgae declined significantly over time, while turf algae increased during the same periods. In Abaiang, there was roughly a two-thirds decline of Halimeda over our study period (from 38.10 ± 12.04% in 2012 to 13.04 ± 8.71% in 2018, Table 1), and an almost doubling of turf algae (from 22.45 ± 9.92 in 2012 to 41.22 ± 6.96 in 2018, Table 1). All other key taxa changed by less than 5% over the given time periods (Table 3).

Table 3. Significant results of Tukey contrasts multiple comparisons of means for changes in percent cover, using α = 0.05.

Categories Years Estimate St. Error z-value p-value
Hard Coral Taxa
All Live Coral 2012–2014 -7.59 2.77 -2.74 0.03
Favids 2014–2018 1.40 0.42 3.32 <0.01
2016–2018 1.40 0.42 3.38 <0.01
Montipora 2014–2018 0.30 0.11 2.70 0.03
2016–2018 0.42 0.10 4.18 <0.01
Pocillopora 2014–2018 1.06 0.33 3.25 <0.01
2016–2018 1.05 0.31 3.43 <0.01
Massive Porites 2012–2016 -1.92 0.64 -3.00 0.01
Macroalgae Taxa
All Macroalgae 2012–2014 -14.70 3.47 -4.24 <0.01
2012–2016 -14.46 3.42 -4.23 <0.01
2012–2018 -11.61 3.26 -3.57 <0.01
Halimeda 2012–2014 -13.99 4.47 -3.13 <0.01
2012–2016 -19.13 4.61 -4.15 <0.01
2012–2018 -12.95 4.44 -2.92 0.02
Other Benthic Categories
CCA 2012–2016 4.53 1.65 2.74 0.03
Rubble 2012–2014 3.92 1.41 2.79 0.03
2014–2018 -3.02 1.16 -2.60 0.04
Sponges 2012–2014 -2.41 0.71 -3.40 <0.01
2014–2016 1.96 0.61 3.19 <0.01
2014–2018 1.70 0.59 2.89 0.02
Turf Algae 2012–2014 16.88 5.04 3.35 <0.01
2012–2016 18.67 4.85 3.89 <0.01
2012–2018 13.38 4.61 2.90 0.02

In addition to changes in the percent cover of these key taxa, we found that the average size (in cm) of key coral taxa declined between 2012 and 2018 (we did not include P. rus in this analysis because it is difficult to distinguish individual colonies). The only exception is Acropora in Tarawa, which increased from a mean size of 10.3 cm in 2012 to 12.3 cm in 2018 (Table 4) but remained rare (average of two colonies per site in 2018). With some exceptions (Favids and Acropora in Tarawa), skewness increased for most of the key taxa, showing an overall shift to smaller sizes. Kurtosis, a measure of the steepness of the size-distribution curve, also increased for most coral taxa, suggesting that the size-frequency of each taxa has become more concentrated among a smaller range of values. By 2018, the size of most key coral taxa decreased, the range of sizes also decreased, and smaller corals dominated most of the benthic communities in each atoll, compared to 2012. None of the changes in mean size (in cm) and skewness among the key taxa between 2012 and 2018 were significant according to Welch’s two-way ANOVA tests, although the kurtosis and coefficient of variation did change significantly for Montipora and massive Porites (S5 Table). However, we were unable to separate this analysis by atoll because of the low sample sizes for some of the key taxa within certain years, and some of our sample sizes were too small to test (e.g., for Acropora).

Table 4. Size-frequency statistics for key coral taxa.

Skewness and kurtosis values that are significantly different from normal (greater than two times the standard error) are in bold.

Year Abaiang Tarawa
n* Mean Size (cm) Standard Error (SE) Skewness Skewness SE Kurtosis Kurtosis SE n* Mean Size (cm) Standard Error (SE) Skewness Skewness SE Kurtosis Kurtosis SE
Acropora 2012 3 22.0 4.8 1.0 1.5 -0.1 3.1 4 10.3 1.5 1.6 1.3 2.4 2.5
2014 1 24.3 7.5 -1.8 2.4 3.6 4.9 10 15.0 6.3 6.0 0.8 36.4 1.6
2016 1 5.0 0.0 NA 2.8 NA 5.7 1 9.9 2.2 0.5 1.9 -1.3 3.7
2018 6 12.9 0.9 1.4 0.7 2.2 1.5 2 12.3 1.9 1.6 1.3 2.4 2.6
Faviids 2012 22 22.6 1.7 1.0 0.6 0.1 1.2 7 10.5 1.4 1.7 0.9 3.2 1.9
2014 10 5.2 0.3 1.4 0.6 2.0 1.1 19 9.0 0.8 1.5 0.6 2.8 1.1
2016 11 6.8 0.4 1.2 0.8 0.9 1.5 10 5.1 0.3 1.7 0.6 3.2 1.2
2018 142 8.2 0.1 4.7 0.1 48.5 0.3 16 8.8 0.4 1.3 0.4 1.9 0.8
Heliopora 2012 16 56.1 5.4 1.4 0.7 2.5 1.4 15 22.6 2.9 2.9 0.6 9.9 1.3
2014 18 22.0 1.5 1.6 0.4 2.3 0.8 18 15.4 1.2 0.9 0.6 0.2 1.2
2016 7 10.3 1.4 1.6 0.9 1.7 1.8 43 9.7 0.8 4.9 0.3 30.6 0.6
2018 69 13.5 0.7 4.1 0.2 23.9 0.4 32 10.2 0.6 3.6 0.3 18.0 0.6
Montipora 2012 1 18.3 8.8 0.9 2.8 NA 5.7 2 28.5 5.3 0.8 2.0 0.3 4.0
2014 2 6.7 1.4 2.0 1.4 4.4 2.8 2 22.8 5.7 0.4 2.0 0.9 4.0
2016 3 8.8 0.8 0.8 1.5 1.9 3.0 1 7.4 0.9 -1.3 1.9 1.9 3.7
2018 17 12.9 0.6 1.6 0.4 3.8 0.8 2 16.0 2.1 1.0 1.3 0.8 2.5
Pocillopora 2012 11 25.4 2.0 0.3 0.8 -0.3 1.7 14 21.0 1.5 1.0 0.6 0.5 1.3
2014 3 21.9 1.9 -0.6 1.0 -0.3 2.0 9 21.4 2.1 1.1 0.8 3.2 1.7
2016 4 16.3 3.5 1.2 1.3 0.5 2.5 13 21.9 1.3 0.8 0.6 1.6 1.1
2018 69 10.2 0.4 2.3 0.2 5.4 0.4 121 16.1 1.0 1.9 0.4 5.4 0.7
Massive Porites 2012 18 45.5 4.9 1.8 0.7 3.7 1.3 2 31.7 7.5 0.5 2.0 -0.6 4.0
2014 16 20.7 2.0 2.0 0.4 3.5 0.9 2 15.9 6.1 2.1 1.6 4.6 3.3
2016 5 8.1 0.9 1.8 1.2 4.8 2.3 5 6.5 0.5 0.2 0.9 -0.9 1.9
2018 72 10.7 0.5 5.5 0.2 40.6 0.4 4 19.1 3.2 2.1 0.9 5.5 1.7

n* = n-values normalized to the number of sites we visited each year in each atoll.

Two-sample Kolmogorov-Smirnov (KS) tests found that the size distribution of Favids (D = 0.82, p-adjusted < 0.01), Heliopora genus (D = 0.51, p-adjusted <0.01), and the massive morphology of the Porites genus (D = 0.53, p-adjusted < 0.01) had significantly changed in Abaiang, but not Tarawa, between all years of the dataset. The results are similar comparing 2012 and 2018, with Favids (D = 0.69, p-adjusted < 0.01) and massive Porites (D = 0.76, p-adjusted < 0.01), which are uncommon in Tarawa, size distributions differing only in Abaiang.

Finally, we used the SIMPER analysis to identify and rank the taxa that had contributed the most to changes in the percent cover over time. Because atoll was closely correlated to the population metric, we ran the analysis separately for each atoll. In Abaiang, the changes in percent cover of Halimeda (macroalgae) and turf algae were significant components of the variation of benthic taxa (Table 5). In Tarawa, P. rus, turf algae, corallimorphs, sand, and Lobophora (macroalgae) were the most influential taxa to change, although none of these taxa were statistically significant components of variation across time.

Table 5. Most influential taxa in benthic community difference between 2012–2018, as identified by SIMPER analysis.

Statistically significant results are in bold.

2012–2018
Abaiang Tarawa
Taxa %* p Taxa %* p
Halimeda 33.38 0.01 P. rus 23.50 0.61
Turf algae 24.97 0.02 Turf algae 19.55 0.90
Sand 8.01 0.23 Corallimorphs 0.14 0.10
CCA** 4.84 0.36 Sand 8.26 0.97
-- -- -- Lobophora 6.16 0.52
-- -- -- Cyanobacteria 6.08 0.66
Total (%) 72.21 -- Total (%) 72.69 --

* Percent contribution.

** Crustose coralline algae.

At the end of our study period, sites in Tarawa had higher percent cover of live coral, despite experiencing greater localized human disturbance (Fig 4A). However, the live coral cover in Tarawa was almost entirely composed of the weedy coral P. rus (81.48% of all coral cover) while sites in Abaiang were composed of comparatively more diverse coral assemblages, including higher cover of the Pocillopora and the octocoral Heliopora (Fig 4B).

Fig 4. Percent cover of benthic taxa in 2018.

Fig 4

(A) Percent cover of key functional groups. (B) Percent cover of key reef-building coral taxa.

The effect of the CoTS outbreak

To test the hypothesis that the taxa-level response to the CoTs outbreak differs from that of bleaching, we counted the number of recent CoTs scars by taxa at all sites in 2014. Almost all the sites where CoTs scars were observed were in Abaiang; only one (TRW010) was in Tarawa (S1 Table). CoTs scars were most frequently noted on massive Porites, which accounted for 130 of the 146 observed scars (89%). The remaining 11% of scars were observed on the species P. rus (n = 6), the Favid family (n = 4), and the genera Platygyra (n = 2) and Turbinaria (n = 2), the table morphology of the Acropora genus (n = 1), and the encrusting morphology of the genus Porites (n = 1).

We also conducted a LMM using only those sites with evidence of CoTs but found similar results to LMM using all sites (S3 Table). While we did not have enough data to test how the percent cover of each of the key categories had changed across years within each atoll, we were able to use a LMM to specifically investigate how massive Porites had changed across years within Abaiang only. We found that the year of the survey was a significant factor in the model (χ2 = 8.27, p = 0.04). The Tukey analysis also showed that within Abaiang, massive Porites declined significantly between 2012 and 2016, by 3.00% (St. Err = 1.11, z = -2.72, p = 0.03), as suggested by CoTs scars observational data.

The cover of massive Porites declined by over 20% between 2012 and 2014 in Abaiang (from 6.17% cover in 2012 to 4.92% in 2014) and by 50% between 2012 and 2016 (3.09% in 2016), and the latter decline was statistically significant (Tukey post-hoc test, z = -2.72, p = 0.03). The average size of massive Porites also declined in Abaiang, from 45.5 cm in 2012 to 10.7 cm in 2018. While this change was not statistically significant, the KS test confirms that the size distribution of massive Porites shifted significantly over time in Abaiang (S3 Table).

The role of human disturbance

We used a PERMANOVA to investigate our final hypothesis, that local human disturbance was a significant factor driving changes in community composition over time (Table 6). Overall, the model containing data from all sites accounted for 44.74% of the variation in the benthic communities (Pseudo-F = 4.86, p-value < 0.01). The model results show that time alone (‘year’) accounted for little of the variation in percent cover across the dataset (3% of the variation) and was not statistically significant (Pseudo-F = 1.74, p-value = 0.14). The interaction between year and mean NDVI contributed most to the variation in the percent cover, and collectively explained 25% of the variation in community composition across sites. The other statistically significant interactions were with CVSST (7% of the variance) and the population metric explained (6% of the variance).

Table 6. PERMANOVA of predictors of benthic composition across sites.

Statistically significant values are in bold.

All Sites Abaiang Tarawa
Factor SS1 R2 F p SS1 R2 F p SS1 R2 F p
Year 0.14 0.03 1.74 0.14 0.14 0.13 3.52 0.02 0.10 0.04 1.82 0.14
Year: Mean NDVI 1.27 0.25 16.16 <0.01 0.11 0.10 2.67 0.05 0.58 0.24 10.55 <0.01
Year: Mean Chl-a 0.11 0.02 1.43 0.21 0.05 0.05 1.27 0.26 0.44 0.19 7.99 <0.01
Year: CVSST 0.37 0.07 4.71 <0.01 0.09 0.08 2.25 0.08 0.09 0.04 1.65 0.18
Year: Population Metric 0.32 0.06 4.11 <0.01 0.05 0.05 1.27 0.26 0.18 0.07 3.21 0.03
Year: Exposure 0.08 0.02 1.01 0.37 0.10 0.10 2.62 0.05 0.10 0.04 1.87 0.13
Residual 2.83 0.55 -- -- 0.52 0.49 -- -- 0.88 0.37 -- --

1Sum of Squares.

We also ran the PERMANOVA separately for each atoll (Table 6). In Abaiang, the full model accounted for 51.14% of the variation in benthic community composition across sites (Pseudo-F = 2.27, p = 0.01), while in Tarawa it accounted for 62.87% of the variation (Pseudo-F = 4.52, p < 0.01). In Abaiang, ‘Year’ was the only significant factor in the model at α = 0.05 (F = 3.53, p = 0.02), explaining 13% of the difference in benthic composition across sites. The interactions between Year and Mean NDVI (Pseudo-F = 2.67, p = 0.05), Year and CVSST (Pseudo-F = 2.25, p = 0.08), and Year and Exposure (Pseudo-F = 2.62, p = 0.05) were significant at α = 0.10 (accounting for 10%, 8%, and 10% of the variation in the benthos across sites, respectively). By contrast, in Tarawa, the percent cover changed differently across years based on the mean NDVI (Pseudo-F = 10.55, p < 0.01) and the population metric (Pseudo-F = 3.21, p = 0.03). The interactions between Year and the two metrics of human influence collectively accounted for 31% of the variation across sites in Tarawa (Year and Mean NDVI accounted for 24% of the variation, and Year and the population metric accounted for 7%). The interaction between Year and Chl-a was also significant in Tarawa (Pseudo-F = 7.99, p < 0.01), accounting for 19% of the variation across sites.

Discussion

This study investigated how the benthic communities at sites experiencing different levels of localized human-related degradation responded to a series of acute environmental disturbances, and also identified and documented the coral reef community trajectories after those disturbances. In addition to the coral bleaching events in the Gilberts that preceded our study period (2004–2005 and 2009–2010), which were described and evaluated in detail by Donner and Carilli (2019), there was a CoTs outbreak in 2014 and bleaching-level heat stress from 2014 through 2016, although the MFMRD did not report any bleaching and evidence was not apparent in our data. While it is possible that bleaching occurred between 2014 and 2016 and went unobserved, corals may not have bleached because the community composition in both atolls has shifted towards dominance by more heat-resistant coral taxa, such as P. rus in Tarawa and Heliopora and massive Porites in Abaiang [19]. Also, while the heat stress in 2014 through 2016 was long-lasting, the magnitude never reached the levels of the 2004–05 and 2009–10 events (>12°Cˑweek) (Fig 2).

The analysis broadly confirmed our four hypotheses about the trajectories of these post-disturbance coral reef communities. First, the LMM analyses suggest that post-bleaching communities shifted towards dominance by disturbance-resistant taxa over the study period. Second, those results also suggest the shift to P. rus in Tarawa, documented in previous studies, were persistent and could represent a phase shift. Third, the scar observations and coral cover data indicate that the taxa-level response to the CoTs outbreak differed from that of bleaching (with massive Porites more sensitive to CoTs but resistant to bleaching). Finally, the analysis of the 2018 data indicates that the benthic communities after the sequence of acute disturbances differed based on the level of local human disturbance.

Based on these hypotheses, we propose that most sites in Tarawa and Abaiang have followed the trajectories shown in Fig 5, and we refer to these trajectories to guide our discussion of the results. As indicated by the PERMANOVA, these distinct trajectories were driven by different levels of human disturbance across Tarawa and Abaiang. Before the bleaching event in 2004–2005, previous studies reported that outer reefs in Abaiang had high (>50%) coral cover, and communities were dominated by massive Porites, Pocillopora, Heliopora, Favids, the macroalgae Halimeda, and to a lesser extent, Acropora. In Tarawa, outer reef communities tended to have low coral cover, and were dominated by Pocillopora, P. rus, and Heliopora [34, 36]. After the 2004–2005 and 2009–2010 bleaching events, reefs in Abaiang shifted to lower coral cover dominated by hardier, slower-growing corals (like massive Porites), and Heliopora, a branching thermally-tolerant octocoral, while reefs in Tarawa adjacent to growing human communities shifted to higher coral cover that was almost entirely composed of P. rus [19, 34]. While Abaiang’s reefs were more impacted by bleaching and CoTs, they may still be able to recover to a similar coral-dominated state as what was there prior to the acute disturbances, due to the relative lack of localized human influence. Sites in Tarawa, by contrast, appear to have undergone a phase shift and settled into their current state, with sites that are dominated by P. rus. Below we discuss the trajectories of the coral reefs in Tarawa and Abaiang, respectively, the impact of CoTs relative to bleaching, and finally the implications of these results for future resource management in the Gilbert Islands.

Fig 5. Proposed drivers of community composition on reefs in Tarawa and Abaiang.

Fig 5

Tarawa

The results of this and past studies support our first and second hypotheses, that most outer reefs in Tarawa adjacent to dense human communities have shifted to dominance by disturbance-tolerant taxa, and that the coral reef communities adjacent to dense human populations in S. Tarawa have undergone a phase shift to communities dominated by a single coral species, P. rus. Here, when we say ‘dominated’, we mean that P. rus is the most common single taxa found on those reefs, not necessarily that it accounts for more than 50% cover. While reports of phase shifts from coral to macroalgae-dominated reefs are more common, studies from Micronesia and the Pacific region have observed phase shifts to weedy coral species [14], sponges [15, 16] and corallimorphs [14, 17].

A report on the state of the sewage system in Tarawa suggests that the benthic community’s shift to P. rus-dominance could have been begun as early as the mid-1980s, when installation of the sewage pipes damaged corals along the reef flats and crests (60). Unlike many other corals, P. rus is tolerant of nutrient loading (63,83), turbidity (84), and heat stress [6062]. The percent cover of P. rus remained relatively stable between 2012 and 2018 (representing on average between 28.31 ± 13.97% in 2012 to 26.51 ± 19.03% in 2018 across sites in Tarawa), although there was a decline from 2012 to 2014 due in part to previously mentioned sampling issues. This decline in P. rus between 2012 and 2014 could have also been in part the result of CoTs predation, although we did not find much evidence to support this. We only observed one example of CoTs feeding in Tarawa (and recorded only six CoTs scars, all from a single site), although this may have been the result of our sampling method, because scars are easier to identify on massive Porites than P. rus.

Research discussing phase shifts on coral reefs often consider recovery to the ‘original’ state, or phase shift reversals, as a goal for conservation efforts, while noting that the nature of phase shifts makes this difficult [63, 64]. Reversing a phase shift requires addressing the underlying drivers of change, which may ultimately create conditions that facilitate the natural recovery of reefs [64]. One of the most pressing and long-standing issues for reefs in Tarawa is the effects of sewage on the local water quality. In other places, when sanitation systems were improved, local reefs were able to recover from local degradation, although it took several decades before the effects were realized. For example, in Kāne’ohe Bay, Oahu, Hawai’i, reefs shifted from coral dominance to communities dominated by the macroalgae Dictosphaeria cavernosa after sewage was discharged into the bay. Like Tarawa, reefs in Kāne’ohe Bay also experienced other stressors, including dredging and siltation. In 1977, the sewage was diverted out of the bay, and by 2006, D. cavernosa had virtually disappeared. Since then, coral cover has increased, and after 44 years of research, researchers have declared that this a successful example of a phase shift reversal [6567].

While this example shows that removing sources of nutrient pollution can allow reefs to recover from degradation over long time scales, if the relatively stable benthic communities found in Tarawa have entered an alternative stable state, long-term recovery may be more challenging than simply removing the source. However, the definition of an alternative stable state is still being debated. Dungeon et al (2010) define them as occurring when ecosystems exhibit hysteresis (i.e. more than one state can exist under the same environmental conditions at different times). Per this definition, ecosystems with multiple stable states cannot be restored by simply reversing the stressor causing the system to shift into an alternative stable state [68, 69]. Others define alternative stable states as community changes resulting from trends of environmental change [40]; by this definition, there is no difference between an alternative stable state and a phase shift. There is also debate over whether alternative stable states exist at all in nature [70].

Regardless of how alternative stable states are defined (and whether they exist), as Fung et al. [71] point out, tackling multiple human stressors simultaneously can maximize coral reef resilience to phase shifts. Because we have no way of empirically testing whether sites in Tarawa have undergone phase shifts or entered an alternative stable state, we do not speculate further here. Reversing all the threats facing coral reefs in Tarawa will not be possible; coral reef resources are integral for local food and economic security, and while the water quality will likely improve after the sewage system updates, some nutrient pollution is unavoidable. Because of the ‘wicked’ nature [72] of human-related coral reef degradation in Tarawa, direct human intervention (via coral transplantation projects, for example) will likely be required to change the state of local reefs regardless of whether they entered an alternative stable state and/or have undergone a phase shift.

Understanding the trade-offs associated with the shift to P. rus-dominant reefs will therefore be integral for local decision makers who are tasked with conserving reefs and the ecosystem services that they provide in S. Tarawa. For example, a reef dominated by a single species like P. rus may be less able to protect shorelines from wave activity than reefs that are more diverse and are home to a wider range of coral morphologies. That said, recent work from these sites found that there was not a significant difference in the rugosity (or structural complexity) of reefs between Abaiang and Tarawa [73], and complexity is key to reefs’ ability to protect shorelines [74]. This difference in complexity across atolls is likely because of the low coral cover in Abaiang [73], and if reefs in Abaiang are able to regain coral cover and larger colonies, we may see that reefs in Abaiang become more structurally complex than those in Tarawa in the future.

Abaiang

In Abaiang, where the population is smaller compared to the urban communities found along the southern rim of Tarawa, P. rus is rare or absent at all sites (Table 1). Sites in Abaiang do not experience the same influx of nutrients and sediments that are found in Tarawa, nor do they experience high fishing pressure. Our results supported our first hypothesis, that post-disturbance communities shifted to dominance by disturbance-resistant benthic taxa. After the 2004–2005 bleaching event, coral reef communities in Abaiang were dominated by relatively thermally tolerant coral taxon such as massive Porites. They may have remained in this state after bleaching had they not experienced further disturbance, but the 2013–2014 CoTs outbreak occurred, along with 2009–2010 bleaching event, likely drove the shift in benthic communities toward a turf-dominated state. As a result, coral cover dropped to the lowest measured since the 2004–2005 bleaching event 11.47 ± 6.86%, with half the sites below the 10% cover threshold proposed for reefs to grow fast enough to keep up with rising sea levels [75]. Although coral cover increased to 18.26 ± 7.45 percent in 2018, one of the sites (ABG002) remained below the 10% threshold.

As hypothesized, the CoTs outbreak disproportionately affected massive Porites in Abaiang, one of the ‘winners’ after the 2009–2010 bleaching event. The results show that massive Porites has declined in terms of the percent of the benthos it covers, and the size-structure of the community has shifted towards smaller size classes, which may indicate fragmentation due to partial mortality from the CoTs outbreak. This explanation is consistent with other studies, which found that CoTs outbreaks commonly cause partial mortality of coral colonies [76]. The fragmentation of massive Porites could have long-term implications for coral communities in Abaiang. For example, smaller corals of reproductive age release less gametes, which will likely slow recovery of massive Porites populations [77]. Massive Porites are also slow-growing, stress-tolerant corals, and recovery from disturbance therefore takes longer than it might for faster-growing genera like Acropora (although fast-growing, competitive corals also tend to be less resilient to environmental perturbations; this could explain why Acropora were rare in Abaiang) [13].

Previous analyses found that the percent cover of Pocillopora declined significantly between 2004 and 2012 [19], which may have made massive Porites more vulnerable to CoTs predation in 2014. Pocillopora is often one of the ‘losers’ of coral bleaching events, while massive Porites are more tolerant of heat stress and are more likely to be ‘winners’; this is consistent with what Donner and Carilli (2019) observed when investigating the impacts of the 2004–2005 and 2009–2010 bleaching events. Pocillopora, a branching coral, also may indirectly protect massive Porites from predation by CoTs. Both Acropora and Pocillopora are preferred food of CoTs, and thus CoTs will consume those genera over massive Porites when there is plenty of prey available [37, 38]. CoTs will actively avoid feeding on massive Porites unless its preferred foods are scarce [78].

We found some evidence that reefs in Abaiang could be beginning to recover from coral loss after bleaching and the CoTs outbreak. Although the cover of the many common taxa remained low (as a percent) in all years, the mean percent cover of Pocillopora in Abaiang increased by over 60% between 2014 and 2018 (from 1.09 ± 0.88% in 2014 to 2.90 ± 1.65% in 2018), while the mean cover of Favids increased by 88% (from 0.28 ± 0.27% in 2014 to 2.35 ± 1.25% in 2018), and Montipora increased by 85% (from 0.09 ± 0.11% in 2014 to 0.58 ± 0.27% in 2018). Overall, the mean live coral cover in Abaiang in 2018 increased by almost 40% between 2016 and 2018 (to 18.26 ± 7.45% in 2018, from 11.47 ± 6.86% in 2016). We had originally planned to repeat our benthic surveys in 2020, but our plans were delayed indefinitely because of COVID; future surveys will hopefully help to further untangle the current and future trajectories of reefs in Abaiang.

We have suggested three potential recovery scenarios for reefs in Abaiang, which are currently dominated by turf algae, in the absence of future acute stressors. In one scenario, the reefs follow a trajectory similar to that experienced by a reef in Moorea, where researchers were able to observe the entire trajectory of a CoTs outbreak [79]. Like what we observed from Abaiang, turf algae were the first taxa to colonize the empty spaces left after CoTs had decimated coral populations, but coral dominance returned about a decade post-disturbance, and the communities went from coral-dominant to turf algae-dominant, and then back to coral-dominant. Under this scenario, Abaiang’s communities recover to become dominated by thermally-tolerant species such as massive Porites and Heliopora, along with some fast-growing species, such as Pocillopora but likely not Acropora. Because Pocillopora is a brooding species, its recovery is not density-dependent like most Acropora species, which are vulnerable to Allele effects [77, 80, 81]. Corals of the Acropora genera were rare in Abaiang prior to the study period [19], and bleaching and CoTs both disproportionately negatively affect Acropora [39].

Alternatively, it is possible that reefs in Abaiang will experience a shift towards Halimeda-dominance in the future (with Halimeda cover exceeding that of turf algae), if the local reef fishery is enough to limit herbivory on reefs; Halimeda is vulnerable to predation from common herbivorous reef fish, in particular Acanthuridae and Scaridae [82]. The data suggest this is unlikely, given that Halimeda has declined significantly over the current study period (Table 2). Indeed, the case study from Moorea suggests that a phase shift to macroalgae dominance would require an additional disturbance post-CoTs, such as a reduction in grazing due to fishing pressure or poor water quality [79]. We have no evidence that either of these two conditions currently exist in Abaiang.

The third potential scenario we propose for reefs in Abaiang is that they remain in their current state. If future acute disturbances occur in Abaiang, they may prevent coral communities from recovering. However, we also find it unlikely that benthic communities in Abaiang will remain dominated by turf-algae given that the percent cover and size frequency of corals have both changed after disturbance in Abaiang. A previous study found that massive Porites in the Gilberts that survived bleaching in 2004–2005 were less susceptible to bleaching in 2009–2010 [18]. This suggests that the corals remaining in Abaiang that survived both bleaching and CoTs are less likely to bleach during future heat stress events.

CoTs outbreak

Previous research suggested that low-latitude coral reefs might be less susceptible to CoTs outbreaks because CoTs are not tolerant of SSTs that are higher than 30°C [66, 83]. Survivorship, particularly of larvae and juveniles, declines above 30°C, and temperatures above 29°C can negatively impact embryonic and larvae development [37]. Extended La Niña conditions lowered SSTs in the Gilberts from 2010–2013, during which SST at our sites averaged 28.62°C, just below the 29°C temperature threshold for negative impacts on CoTs larvae development (for comparison, the mean SST for 2010–2018 was 29.08°C). These slightly cooler-than-average conditions could have facilitated the survival of CoTs larvae, contributing to the outbreak in 2013–2014. However, CoTs may be able to adapt to increasing SSTs [84], in which case Tarawa and Abaiang may be vulnerable to more CoTs outbreaks in the future. We suggest that future studies investigate the potential links between ENSO events and CoTs outbreaks in the central Pacific.

The CoTs affected sites in Abaiang disproportionately, and we are unable to account for the different severities of the outbreak across atolls. While larvae may have reached Tarawa at the same time as Abaiang, they may not have been as successful at settling and/or reaching maturity in Tarawa, but it is unlikely that this differential survivorship would be due to excess nutrients in Tarawa; on the Great Barrier Reef, researchers have found that CoTs outbreaks are positively correlated with high levels of nutrients [85, 86]. CoTs will actively avoid feeding on P. rus in favor of other corals, but they will feed on less-preferred prey when their preferred food items are scarce [7, 67, 87].

Because we were not able to conduct reef surveys at beginning of the outbreak, these data represent a limited snapshot of the event at one point in time. Reports to the MFMRD from the outer atolls suggest the outbreak was widespread, stretching from Butaritari Atoll (3°N) to at least Abemama Atoll (~0°), where a related team observed a CoTs outbreak during fieldwork in October–November, 2013 [35]. Synchronous outbreaks of CoTs over wide distances has occurred before [88]; still, even if we assume that all sites in Abaiang were affected by CoTs, we are unable to say whether all sites experienced the same levels of predation and/or outbreak duration. CoTs larvae may have been more likely to settle and survive at some sites than others. Their survival and impact at specific reefs may have varied by local conditions, including oceanography, water quality, and the amount and type of coral prey available and quality. In addition, the CoTs scars we counted in Abaiang are likely underestimated because we only counted scars that were recent (as indicated by the visibility of the coral skeleton); any scars that had already been colonized by turf algae or other taxa were excluded because we could not say positively how old they were or that they were not caused by other factors. Many of the dynamics of CoTs larvae settlement and their survival post-settlement are largely unresolved [37].

Disturbance, reef health, and resilience

Our sites at both atolls exhibit characteristics that are the opposite of what we would expect if we had relied on the most common metrics of disturbance on coral reefs, for example, the percent of all macroalgae or the percent of all live coral cover. For example, high macroalgae cover is often used by coral reef researchers to quantify degradation or to distinguish between ‘healthy’ and ‘unhealthy’ reefs [12]. However, macroalgae was most common on reefs in Abaiang (and had very low cover in Tarawa). The percent cover of the macroalgae genera Halimeda has declined over time in Abaiang, while turf algae has increased. Sites in Abaiang had lower coral cover than sites in Tarawa; if we had chosen to consider the percent cover of all live coral a metric for reef health, we may have mistakenly concluded that sites in Tarawa are healthier and less degraded than those in Abaiang. That said, while reefs in Abaiang are arguably less degraded than reefs in Tarawa (that is, less impacted by local human disturbance), we also would not necessarily consider them ‘healthy,’ given that the community composition in Abaiang at the end of our study period is the result of repeated acute disturbances from which they have yet to recover. Our past work in the Marshall Islands similarly found that using broad categories of taxa like macroalgae and live coral to classify the health of coral reefs could be misleading and lead to incorrect conclusions [12]. Here, we echo that call to use more concise metrics and language when discussing the state of coral reefs facing multiple stressors at different scales.

This work may support the hypothesis proposed by other reef scientists that more degraded reefs may be more resistant to the impacts of climate change [89, 90], which is contrary to the argument that controlling local stressors could improve resistance to and recovery from temperature stress and other acute disturbances [89]. For example, sites in Tarawa were more impacted by local stressors than sites in Abaiang, but the coral cover has remained higher in Tarawa. The percent cover of P. rus did not change significantly over time in Tarawa, indicating that P. rus was largely unaffected by both heat stress and the CoTs event. There is evidence that P. rus is indeed insensitive to heat stress [6062], and is also not significantly affected by short-term exposure to high pCO2 [91]. Combined with the evidence that P. rus is also resilient to localized human impacts such as nutrient loading and turbidity, we find it likely that P. rus will be able to outcompete other species that are more sensitive to multiple stressors in the future, particularly if local impacts continue unabated (although the sewage upgrades will likely reduce nutrient loading). Unlike other corals that are sensitive to high pCO2, increased acidification does not appear to negatively impact calcification rates of P. rus, and researchers do not expect that the calcification of this species will be affected strongly by the projected increase in pCO2 that is expected to occur by the end of the century [91].

However, for a coral reef to be considered resilient, it must be both resistant to disturbance and be able to recover to the original community structure post-disturbance, without an associated loss in function and services [90]. We have provided further evidence that the P. rus-dominated reefs in Tarawa are more resistant to heat stress than those in Abaiang, which is in agreement with previous studies [19]. Sites in Abaiang may become more resistant to heat stress in the future, depending on their recovery trajectory (if, for example, coral cover increases and is composed of more thermally tolerant genera). Also, because sites in Tarawa were dominated by a single coral species (P. rus), they are potentially vulnerable to future ‘ecological surprises’ [92]; any disturbance that has a disproportionate impact on P. rus could have a severe impact on the ecosystem as a whole. There was also likely a loss in function and services associated with the phase shift to P. rus at sites in Tarawa, which indicates that while these reefs are resistant to heat stress, they may not be resilient. Surveys of fish and invertebrate assemblages, as well as and reef structural complexity, would provide useful information about how the phase shift to P. rus is influencing the ecosystem services that are valuable to people residing in Tarawa.

Coral reefs in the Gilbert Islands have experienced years with prolonged heat stress more frequently than 99% of the world’s coral reefs [19], but this may change in the future; other reefs will likely experience more heat stress going forward, given that climate change-driven global coral bleaching events have increased in frequency and are expected to continue increasing in the due to climate change [93]. Reefs in the Gilbert Islands could therefore provide a rare glimpse into what reefs may look like in the future while also accounting for a gradient of local human impacts. We hope this work, coupled with further investigations into the potential trade-offs associated with locally degraded but climate-resistant reefs such as found in Tarawa versus reefs with more long-term ability to recover but with less resistance such as those in Abaiang, will provide novel information that is important for the future management of coral reef resources. Specifically, these findings may help to predict the ways that climate change will affect the millions of people around the world who depend on coral reefs, so that they may prepare for the future.

Supporting information

S1 Table. Environmental variables, coordinates, and years data were collected for 19 study sites visited between 2012 and 2018.

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S2 Table. Coral order, family, and species observed in Tarawa and Abaiang atolls (as reported by Lovell et al, 2000 [30]).

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S3 Table. Results of linear mixed effects models for each key benthic category, including additional LMMs for subsets of the data.

Statistically significant results at α = 0.05 are in bold, while those that are significant at α = 0.10 are underlined.

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S4 Table. Tukey results for linear mixed effects models, percent ~ year + (1|site).

All p-values have been adjusted for multiple comparisons. Results significant at sigma = 0.05 are in bold; those significant at sigma = 0.10 are underlined.

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S5 Table. Results of size frequency statistical analyses.

Includes Welch’s ANOVA of size-frequency statistics between years, and KS test results comparing size frequency distributions across years within each atoll.

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Acknowledgments

This work would not have been possible without Tooreka Teemari, Karibanang Tamuera, and all our colleagues at the Kiribati Ministry of Fisheries & Marine Resource Development and the Ministry of Environment, Lands, and Agricultural Development. We also thank the Kiribati Meteorological Station for providing local wind vector data. We are grateful to Heather Summers for her help and comradery during fieldwork, Pedro Gonzalez for collecting and extracting the satellite data, Eric Leinberger, who produced the map of our research sites, and our undergraduate student assistants Katrina Bernaus, Alex Tso and Steuart Tannason for their work processing quadrat photos and conducting the NDVI calculations. Finally, we thank editor Dr. James Guest and the anonymous reviewers whose comments and suggestions made this work stronger. We would also like to acknowledge that all statistical analyses were conducted on the unceded, traditional, and ancestral territories of the xʷməθkʷəýəm (Musqueam) people, in what is now called Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada.

Data Availability

The data are held in the public repository Zenodo and the links are as follows: https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.4456048 https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.4470114.

Funding Statement

This work was supported by a Natural Sciences and Engineering Research Council of Canada Discovery Grant (SDD; www.nserc-crsng.gc.ca, RGPIN-2019-04056). The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Coral reefs in the Gilbert Islands of Kiribati: Resistance, resilience, and recovery after more than a decade of multiple stressors

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I note that you are using the term Favid as a taxon name. I suggest looking at the most up to date taxonmy of corals. My understanding is that Faviidae has changed to Merulinidae (see papers by Danwei Huang and others for the most updated revisions of the Merulinidae, or Bigmessidae as they call it!)..

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Reviewer #1: This study addresses coral reef community dynamics in the Gilbert Islands, which represents a remote corner of the world with fascinating lessons to be learned about coral reef ecology that will benefit understanding of coral reefs throughout the world. Cannon and colleagues have accomplished an impressive task of surveying these reefs and overcoming challenging logistics at the end of a very long supply chain from Canada.

Like many coral reef studies, this analysis seeks to report on the recovery of reefs following major disturbances, and it uses multiple surveys conducted from 2012 to 2018 to describe changes in cover and changes in size frequency structure of common coral genera. The effort to go beyond reporting coral cover is laudable! The content of this paper is interesting and worthy of publication, but the length of the presentation, the complexity of data, and the weak focus greatly detracts from comprehension. This type of material does not require a 10 page introduction and 66 references to set the scene, and the discussion needs to address broader issues beyond the confines of the study locality. Likewise, the presentation of the results in 11 tables and 7 figures strongly argues for a great reduction in scope, a focus on testable hypothesis, and a more judicious selection of salient data to convey the key outcomes. This process might lead to the logical conclusion that the study should be split into multiple papers.

Intellectually, the context of the paper is provided by phase change theory and how this has been applied to coral reefs. This material is fascinating and appropriate, but it is only part (perhaps only half) of the critical context: what about alternative stable state theory? While this is a topic that gains much attention and debate, and researchers tend to be polarized in their opinion, discussion of how coral reefs have changed from coral to macroalgae really is not complete without some treatment of alternative stable states. Critically, if the changes affecting the reef represent an alternative stable state, then simply reversing the disturbances that caused the change will be insufficient to restore the initial state. Obviously this has important implications for conservation and recommendations for management.

Reviewer #2: This manuscript evaluated changes in benthic community structure on Tarawa and Abaiang Atolls in relation to warming events and a Crown of Thorns outbreak. The authors compare communities at multiple levels of human disturbance (which they calculate two ways). They also investigate some oceanographic drivers that may be influencing benthic community structure.

Overall, I think that the information presented in this manuscript is important for understanding trajectories of ecosystem change in central Pacific reefs. I do think that the manuscript should be shortened and tightened up considerably. Both the Introduction and the Discussion were a bit meandering, and therefore somewhat hard to follow. I think that this should be published, but that improvements should be made to clarify the structure and story throughout. I have included some specific suggestions below.

ABSTRACT

Please include some percent cover values in the abstract. Much of the paper is focused on comparing percent cover of different taxa at different locations, but these results should be explicitly mentioned in the abstract. The information in lines 694-698 would be a good candidate here.

INTRODUCTION

- You mention that the first bleaching event recorded at Tarawa and Abaiang occurred in 2004-2005, is there any local knowledge that would suggest if bleaching events have been noticed before?

- I actually liked the depth that you went into regarding the history and changes that have occurred in the Gilberts. Usually I'd recommend cutting down the intro quite a bit, but instead I would like to recommend that you try to streamline it a bit more. This will shorten it, and can also help with the flow of the manuscript. Focus on the topic sentences, and then tighten each paragraph up a bit.

METHODS

- There are *a lot* of tables in this manuscript. Which is great (!) because you have so much data to share. However, I think that some of them should be moved to the Supplementary Material, so you only retain those which are most important to your main findings.

- Table 1 - please include a brief description of each of the included metrics

- Would it be possible to add some text regarding which species of coral are expected on these atolls. Specifically, you list percent cover at the genus level, but it would be helpful to know what species might be present. I assume that this wasn't collected during sampling, but with all your research there, perhaps you have a species list you could include as a supplement? This would be particularly useful for "Favids" as this is potentially a very broad taxon.

- Note that NOAA calculates MMM based on 1985-1993 but excludes the years 1991 and 1992, they don't calculate based on 1985-1994.

- I was curious about how currents might influence your analysis described in lines 442-446. If currents are strong or directional, it might matter less how far away you are from a sewer outfall and more whether you're downstream of the outfall.

RESULTS

- Lines 516-532 - I think that it would be a good idea to run these analyses with the two atolls separately along with the grouped analysis that you've already done. I think the version in the manuscript is informative, but I am curious about how presence/absence of certain taxa on each atoll affects the interpretation of these results. Breaking it up by atoll would also allow you to look at finer scale change over time. If you did do this, and I somehow missed it, it would be helpful to improve clarity about which analyses were done, as this was a bit hard to follow.

- Why did you decide to use annual mean SST versus maximum monthly mean or similar?

- The results of the PERMANOVA as reported a little unconventionally. Specifically, in line 606 "The factor contributing most to the variation in the percent cover was 'year and mean NDVI'". I believe this should be reported as "the interaction between year and mean NDVI". That is, percent cover changes differently across years based on mean NDVI. This should be more clearly stated.

- I also think that the PERMANOVA should be run again, and separately for each island. I am not convinced that there isn't bias based on which locations were sampled during each field season, and would be convinced if you found similar results with individual models. I noticed that you ran the SIMPER for each atoll specifically, which I think was a good idea.

DISCUSSION

- The discussion is too long, and should be streamlined considerably. One thing that would be helpful would be careful thought toward the overall organization, and trimming unnecessary information that doesn't speak directly to your results and conclusions. For example, the paragraph from lines 755-769 is mostly unnecessary.

- Lines 1037-1038 - "we therefore do not find it likely that the presence of Halimeda in Abaiang was triggered by any acute disturbances that allowed the macroalgae to outcompete corals." I do not think this is well supported by the results, as you don't know the history before the 1990s, and whether the reefs did (or did not) rapidly change from coral dominance to Halimeda dominance.

- When talking about the percent cover metrics in the context of calling a reef "healthy" or "degraded" I think the point (that percent coral doesn't tell you everything) is good (e.g. in lines 1038-1045), however, in the following paragraph (lines 1047-1061), you label those reefs dominated by P. rus to be "resilient". I think it would be worthwhile to consider, and explicitly define, what makes a reef resilient. If a reef with relatively high coral cover isn't "healthy" (e.g., sites at Tarawa), is it actually resilient? Sure, it is resilient as it seems like this may be a stable state that the ecosystem tends towards under these conditions, but under that definition, an algal dominated reef is also resilient, just toward a different state. Usually in this context resilient means something more - that reefs will maintain their structure and function - which is likely not true at Tarawa. I think this is an important point that needs to be discussed in the manuscript.

FIGURES

Figure 3 - Is it possible to include earlier dates for historical warming at this location?

Figure 4 - Since you mention the difference between macroalgae and turf, would it be possible to include turf on both of these panels, in addition to live coral and macroalgae?

Figure 5 - Pocillopora is spelled incorrectly

EDITS

Line 20 - change "in" to "on"

Line 26 - change "The" to "These"

Line 27 - remove "the"

Lines 65-66 - I'm not convinced about saying "most commonly" here, and I'd suggest removing it

Line 122 - rephrase "more recent work questions that conclusion" to "this conclusion is still under debate"

Line 202 - add in "Hawaii" after Kane`ohe Bay

Line 217 - replace "continue" with "continued"

Line 219 - remove "researchers found that"

Line 220 - replace "had been" with "was"

Line 224 - replace "the" with "these"

Line 260 - does "ocean side" mean "reef slope" please be a little more specific

Line 375 - remove "the" from "For the percent cover"

Line 470 - Table 2 - what is "other morphology/species" for Porites?

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


23 Apr 2021

21 April, 2021

Re: PONE-D-21-04308, “Coral reefs in the Gilbert Islands of Kiribati: Resistance, resilience, and recovery after more than a decade of multiple stressors”

Dear Dr. Guest,

Thank you for the detailed and helpful feedback and the two anonymous reviews you have shared with us for our recent manuscript submission to PLOS ONE. On behalf of my co-authors, I am submitting a revised manuscript that responds to the very helpful suggestions and concerns raised by the reviewers.

In response to the reviewer’s comments, we have significantly shortened the manuscript (by roughly 6,000 words), stated our tested hypotheses in the introduction, added a more complete discussion of alternative stable states, removed some of the superfluous analyses, and made a number of other small changes (as detailed further below). The manuscript is now a concise summary of this research and how it fits into the relevant existing literature.

The reviewers disagreed about the inclusion of the history of Kiribati in the introduction. We have decided to shorten the history but to keep it in the manuscript because we deemed it important that we discuss the colonial drivers of current stressors on these reefs. While we needed to discuss the stressors existing locally, we could have done this without the historical context. However, this context is integral to avoid implying that these stressors were caused by local mismanagement, which could inadvertently bolster the perception that local managers are not equipped to manage marine resources themselves. Unfortunately, our personal experience tells us that this perception is not uncommon among researchers working in this part of the world. Instead, the current states of these ecosystems are the result of processes that were outside of the control of the people who are responsible for addressing them today. That said, we agree with the feedback that you and both reviewers provided that the introduction was long and difficult to follow. We have made changes to streamline the introduction in response to the suggestions and are grateful that this feedback has helped us to make the manuscript more concise and intelligible.

I am including my responses to each of the comments below (the original comment is in regular text and my response is in italics). I have highlighted where changes were made in the manuscript to address the comments and have also uploaded two versions of the revised manuscript (one that tracks the changes, and one that does not), per your instruction.

Thank you again for your response and suggestions. We are grateful for the opportunity to respond and look forward to hearing back from you.

Sincerely,

Sara E. Cannon, M.Sc., Ph.D. Candidate

University of British Columbia

Response to Reviews

Additional Editor Comments:

I note that you are using the term Favid as a taxon name. I suggest looking at the most up to date taxonomy of corals. My understanding is that Faviidae has changed to Merulinidae (see papers by Danwei Huang and others for the most updated revisions of the Merulinidae, or Bigmessidae as they call it!).

Thank you for highlighting these changes in coral taxonomy. While we used photos to calculate the percent cover and could therefore re-identify anything categorized as a ‘Favid’ to reflect the most current taxonomy, we identified the corals for the size frequency analyses in situ. Some corals that were difficult to identify to the genus level were identified at the family level during data collection; also, within the Favid family, some of the species have since been split into different genera and families (we did not identify corals to the species level, with the exception of Porites rus). Unfortunately, we are therefore unable to correct those data for the updated taxonomy. We have updated the text of the manuscript in the methods section to note the changes in taxonomy, and to clarify that we are using the taxonomy from Veron (2000) Corals of the World which do not reflect these changes, along with our reasoning for doing so [1], as we have seen done in other recent papers [for example, see 2].

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We have added this information to the manuscript. This research was made possible by an ongoing relationship between S. Donner and the Coastal Fisheries Division of the Ministry of Fisheries and Marine Resource Development, which emerged out of the Kiribati Adaptation Project in 2007. All surveys were conducted with our MFMRD co-authors and are coupled with their work activities. Prior to 2018, the surveys were treated as a part of MFMRD activities and thus we did not require a permit. For the 2018 surveys, Cannon and Donner requested and secured permission from the Ministry of Environment, Lands, and Agricultural Development (MELAD) to meet new regulations (they do not issue official permits or permit numbers).

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Reviewer #1: This study addresses coral reef community dynamics in the Gilbert Islands, which represents a remote corner of the world with fascinating lessons to be learned about coral reef ecology that will benefit understanding of coral reefs throughout the world. Cannon and colleagues have accomplished an impressive task of surveying these reefs and overcoming challenging logistics at the end of a very long supply chain from Canada.

Like many coral reef studies, this analysis seeks to report on the recovery of reefs following major disturbances, and it uses multiple surveys conducted from 2012 to 2018 to describe changes in cover and changes in size frequency structure of common coral genera. The effort to go beyond reporting coral cover is laudable! The content of this paper is interesting and worthy of publication, but the length of the presentation, the complexity of data, and the weak focus greatly detracts from comprehension. This type of material does not require a 10 page introduction and 66 references to set the scene, and the discussion needs to address broader issues beyond the confines of the study locality.

Thank you for this helpful feedback and for your suggestions. We are grateful for the time you have taken to share your expertise in order to strengthen this manuscript.

We have made several changes to the introduction in order to streamline the manuscript. The original introduction was 2,625 words with 66 references, and it is now 1,669 words with 40 references. We have also incorporated your suggestion to focus on testable hypotheses (Lines 163-173), and we agree that doing so has helped to improve the focus of the paper (specifically, it helped us to highlight which analyses could be removed without detracting from the overall findings).

Specifically, we hypothesized that 1) post-bleaching communities shifted towards dominance by disturbance-resistant coral taxa and macroalgae over the study period, 2) that the shift to P. rus in S. Tarawa is persistent and represents a phase shift, 3) that the taxa-level response to the CoTs outbreak differs from that of bleaching, and finally, 4) that the trajectories of post bleaching communities differed based on human disturbance.

The two reviewers disagreed on the inclusion of the historical context. As mentioned in the cover letter, we opted to retain the majority of this material in order to counter misconceptions about local capacity to manage coral reef resources. However, we condensed this material significantly and reordered the introduction significantly in response to your comments.

Likewise, the presentation of the results in 11 tables and 7 figures strongly argues for a great reduction in scope, a focus on testable hypothesis, and a more judicious selection of salient data to convey the key outcomes. This process might lead to the logical conclusion that the study should be split into multiple papers.

We are grateful for this feedback. We have taken your suggestion to reduce the scope of the paper by removing several analyses that upon reflection, we felt detracted from the key themes of the paper. We also re-organized the paper to focus on four testable hypotheses, per your suggestion (which further supported our decision to reduce the number of analyses).

Specifically, we removed the analysis of P. rus cover and distance to the sewage pipes in S. Tarawa and the linear mixed effects model to test for a relationship between the percent cover of Halimeda and sea surface temperature. We also removed the Principal Component Analysis because we felt that it did not add any information that was not already incorporated in the SIMPER Analysis and the PERMANOVA. We also reduced the number of tables to seven (moving some to the supplementary materials, for transparency), and the number of figures to five.

Intellectually, the context of the paper is provided by phase change theory and how this has been applied to coral reefs. This material is fascinating and appropriate, but it is only part (perhaps only half) of the critical context: what about alternative stable state theory? While this is a topic that gains much attention and debate, and researchers tend to be polarized in their opinion, discussion of how coral reefs have changed from coral to macroalgae really is not complete without some treatment of alternative stable states. Critically, if the changes affecting the reef represent an alternative stable state, then simply reversing the disturbances that caused the change will be insufficient to restore the initial state. Obviously this has important implications for conservation and recommendations for management.

Thank you for this perspective. We originally decided not to address alternative stable states it in the discussion because we are unable to test whether an alternative stable state exists in Tarawa. We had also hoped to avoid polarizing readers due to the controversy in the literature. However, after receiving your feedback, we have given this further thought and agree that the discussion is incomplete without some mention of alternative stable states. We have updated the manuscript accordingly, per your suggestion.

Specifically, we added two paragraphs to the discussion, beginning at line 688:

“While this example shows that removing sources of nutrient pollution can allow reefs to recover from degradation over long time scales, if the relatively stable benthic communities found in Tarawa have entered an alternative stable state (ASS), long-term recovery may be more challenging than simply removing the source. However, the definition of ASS is still being debated. Dungeon et al (2010) define them as occurring when ecosystems exhibit hysteresis (i.e. more than one state can exist under the same environmental conditions at different times). Per this definition, ecosystems with multiple stable states cannot be restored by simply reversing the stressor causing the system to shift into an alternative stable state [68,69]. Others define alternative stable states as community changes resulting from trends of environmental change [40]; by this definition, there is no difference between an ASS and a phase shift. There is also debate over whether ASS exist at all in nature [70].

Regardless of how ASS is defined (and whether they exist), as Fung et al. [71] point out, tackling multiple human stressors simultaneously can maximize coral reef resilience to phase shifts. Because we have no way of empirically testing whether sites in Tarawa have undergone phase shifts or entered an ASS, we do not speculate further here. Reversing all of the threats facing coral reefs in Tarawa will not be possible; coral reef resources are integral for local food and economic security, and while the water quality will likely improve after the sewage system updates, some nutrient pollution is unavoidable. Because of the ‘wicked’ nature [72] of human-related coral reef degradation in Tarawa, direct human intervention (via coral transplantation projects, for example) will likely be required to change the state of local reefs regardless of whether they entered an ASS and/or have undergone a phase shift.”

We then follow these paragraphs with a discussion of the potential trade-offs associated with a shift to P. rus-dominated reefs in S. Tarawa, beginning at line 711.

Reviewer #2: This manuscript evaluated changes in benthic community structure on Tarawa and Abaiang Atolls in relation to warming events and a Crown of Thorns outbreak. The authors compare communities at multiple levels of human disturbance (which they calculate two ways). They also investigate some oceanographic drivers that may be influencing benthic community structure.

Overall, I think that the information presented in this manuscript is important for understanding trajectories of ecosystem change in central Pacific reefs. I do think that the manuscript should be shortened and tightened up considerably. Both the Introduction and the Discussion were a bit meandering, and therefore somewhat hard to follow. I think that this should be published, but that improvements should be made to clarify the structure and story throughout. I have included some specific suggestions below.

Thank you for the feedback. As noted in the response to Reviewer #1, we have substantially reduced the length of the manuscript and focused the introduction and the discussion in particular, although we have also substantially edited the methods and results to reflect the reduced number of analyses.

ABSTRACT

Please include some percent cover values in the abstract. Much of the paper is focused on comparing percent cover of different taxa at different locations, but these results should be explicitly mentioned in the abstract. The information in lines 694-698 would be a good candidate here.

Thank you for this suggestion. We have updated the abstract to include more specifics about our findings, including some percent cover values as you recommended. Specifically, we added the following, beginning on line 31:

“In densely populated South Tarawa, we document a phase shift to the weedy and less bleaching-sensitive coral Porites rus, which accounted for 81% of all coral cover by 2018. By contrast, in less populated Abaiang, coral communities remained comparatively more diverse (with higher percentages of Pocillopora and the octocoral Heliopora) after the disturbances, but reefs had lower overall hard coral cover (18%) and were dominated by turf algae (41%).”

INTRODUCTION - You mention that the first bleaching event recorded at Tarawa and Abaiang occurred in 2004-2005, is there any local knowledge that would suggest if bleaching events have been noticed before?

Thank you for this question. We have asked during our many years of work in Tarawa and Abaiang, but no one has reported mass bleaching prior to 2004. It is very possible that bleaching did occur; a previous analysis [3] examined past climate history using satellite data and found that bleaching-level heat stress did occur prior 2004 in accordance with central Pacific El Niño events. The only bleaching report (for 1998) is based on later measurement of radial growth of Porites microatolls (https://repository.si.edu/handle/10088/4931), and the evidence is limited to the shallow, warm Abaiang lagoon (personal communication with the author, the scientist and teacher Charles Flora, who lived in Abaiang at the time).

However, as noted in [3], surveys of the published literature, grey literature, the online database Reefbase, and local experts and found no reports of bleaching prior to 2004. Additionally, a coral coring study [4] found no evidence of partial mortality scars or significant reduction in growth rates of multiple cores in massive Porites spp. in Abaiang or Tarawa, although the majority of the cores went back only to 1980. Therefore, while it is possible bleaching occurred and did not affect the massive Porites sampled, there are no direct observations. We have updated this in the manuscript beginning at line 132.

- I actually liked the depth that you went into regarding the history and changes that have occurred in the Gilberts. Usually I'd recommend cutting down the intro quite a bit, but instead I would like to recommend that you try to streamline it a bit more. This will shorten it, and can also help with the flow of the manuscript. Focus on the topic sentences, and then tighten each paragraph up a bit.

Thank you for this insight and we are glad you agree with our inclusion of this history, although we agree with suggestion to streamline the introduction. As mentioned in the response to Reviewer #1, we have taken your advice to reorganize and to tighten the paragraphs, and hope that it has made the introduction more comprehensible.

METHODS

- There are *a lot* of tables in this manuscript. Which is great (!) because you have so much data to share. However, I think that some of them should be moved to the Supplementary Material, so you only retain those which are most important to your main findings.

Thank you for this suggestion. We have deleted Table 2 and moved Tables 8 and 9 to the supplementary materials per your feedback. We now have seven tables, instead of the eleven we had in the original manuscript.

- Table 1 - please include a brief description of each of the included metrics

We have updated the table to include brief descriptions of the metrics, per your suggestion.

- Would it be possible to add some text regarding which species of coral are expected on these atolls. Specifically, you list percent cover at the genus level, but it would be helpful to know what species might be present. I assume that this wasn't collected during sampling, but with all your research there, perhaps you have a species list you could include as a supplement? This would be particularly useful for "Favids" as this is potentially a very broad taxon.

Thank you for this suggestion. We have not identified corals in these locations to the species level, and unfortunately are unable to provide a recent list of species. The last inventory of coral species was collected in the late 1990’s and recorded 127 distinct species of hard corals in Abaiang and Tarawa [5]. We have recreated this list to include it as a supplement (with some minor changes in formatting, because the original table included species that were found at other nearby locations such as atolls in the Marshall Islands) and have referenced it in the manuscript.

- Note that NOAA calculates MMM based on 1985-1993 but excludes the years 1991 and 1992, they don't calculate based on 1985-1994.

Here, we calculated the MMM ourselves using data from 1985-1994, and we recognize that this time period is distinct from how NOAA calculates the MMM (which now is based on centering the climatology around 1987 using regression of SST trends). Thanks to this comment, we realized that the way we worded our methods made it sound as if we were employing the same methods to calculate the MMM that NOAA uses. We have rephrased the methods to avoid this confusion.

- I was curious about how currents might influence your analysis described in lines 442-446. If currents are strong or directional, it might matter less how far away you are from a sewer outfall and more whether you're downstream of the outfall.

This is an important point and we appreciate that you raised it. The prevailing winds are north/northwest, hence blowing towards the southern and eastern parts of the atolls. We do not have data on the currents at depth, but surface observations suggest some westerly water movement on South Tarawa’s outer reef caused by the winds and the geography of atoll. Before the outflows were moved in 2019, they expelled sewage at approximately 7m depth. The sewage outflows roughly face south, which means that the sewage would likely have been pushed back onto the reef crests, and likely also westward along the southern rim of the atoll. However, in the interest of reducing the size of the manuscript, and given that the sewage outfalls are only one source of local nutrient loading (until recently, less than half of S Tarawa residents had toilets, i.e. lived in homes connected to sewage outfalls), we decided to remove this analysis from the manuscript.

RESULTS

- Lines 516-532 - I think that it would be a good idea to run these analyses with the two atolls separately along with the grouped analysis that you've already done. I think the version in the manuscript is informative, but I am curious about how presence/absence of certain taxa on each atoll affects the interpretation of these results. Breaking it up by atoll would also allow you to look at finer scale change over time. If you did do this, and I somehow missed it, it would be helpful to improve clarity about which analyses were done, as this was a bit hard to follow.

Thank you for making this point. We had attempted to run all of the analyses with the two atolls separately, but we were unable to for almost all of them because we did not have enough observations for some of the key taxa. We noted this in the original manuscript but understand that this information was most likely lost in the text because of the overwhelming number of analyses and the unclear structure of the paper.

We did run an LMM specifically for massive Porites within Abaiang because we had large enough observation sizes and because we specifically wanted to test if the percent cover had changed for massive Porites because of the CoTs outbreak. The methods for this analysis are explained in lines 340 – 345, and the results are described in lines 555 – 562.

- Why did you decide to use annual mean SST versus maximum monthly mean or similar?

We only used the annual mean SST in one part of the analysis, when investigating whether SST influenced the percent cover of Halimeda (we use CVSST for the remainder of the analyses to capture the variation in temperatures over time). We had included this analysis because we wanted to investigate whether there was any relationship between ENSO dynamics and the percent cover of Halimeda (which influences the annual SST values; SSTs would be higher during El Niño events and lower during La Niña years). However, given the length of the manuscript and the complexity of the data we discuss, we have decided to remove this analysis from the manuscript.

- The results of the PERMANOVA as reported a little unconventionally. Specifically, in line 606 "The factor contributing most to the variation in the percent cover was 'year and mean NDVI'". I believe this should be reported as "the interaction between year and mean NDVI". That is, percent cover changes differently across years based on mean NDVI. This should be more clearly stated.

Thank you for this feedback. We have corrected this in the manuscript.

- I also think that the PERMANOVA should be run again, and separately for each island. I am not convinced that there isn't bias based on which locations were sampled during each field season, and would be convinced if you found similar results with individual models. I noticed that you ran the SIMPER for each atoll specifically, which I think was a good idea.

Thank you for this suggestion. We ran the PERMANOVA separately for each atoll and have updated the manuscript accordingly. As part of the reorganization of the manuscript, we have added subsections to the results to make them easier to follow (and to clearly relate them back to our hypotheses, please see our response to the first reviewer above). We have included the updated PERMANOVA results in the subsection titled “The Role of Human Disturbance, beginning on line 573.

DISCUSSION

- The discussion is too long, and should be streamlined considerably. One thing that would be helpful would be careful thought toward the overall organization, and trimming unnecessary information that doesn't speak directly to your results and conclusions. For example, the paragraph from lines 755-769 is mostly unnecessary.

Thank you for this feedback. We have taken this into consideration and attempted to streamline the discussion, per your comments. We also removed/rewrote lines 755-769 as you suggested.

Specifically, we restructured the discussion to address the four hypotheses we describe in our response to Reviewer 1 above. We also added a section about the effects of the CoTs outbreak and how it affected the trajectories of the benthic communities within each atoll. We reduced the discussion to 4,626 words (from 5,230 words in the original manuscript). The revised discussion also includes new paragraphs to discuss the possibility of alternative stable states, per the suggestion from Reviewer 1 above.

- Lines 1037-1038 - "we therefore do not find it likely that the presence of Halimeda in Abaiang was triggered by any acute disturbances that allowed the macroalgae to outcompete corals." I do not think this is well supported by the results, as you don't know the history before the 1990s, and whether the reefs did (or did not) rapidly change from coral dominance to Halimeda dominance.

Thank you for this important point. We agree that we do not have enough evidence to back up this assertion and have removed it from the manuscript.

- When talking about the percent cover metrics in the context of calling a reef "healthy" or "degraded" I think the point (that percent coral doesn't tell you everything) is good (e.g. in lines 1038-1045), however, in the following paragraph (lines 1047-1061), you label those reefs dominated by P. rus to be "resilient". I think it would be worthwhile to consider, and explicitly define, what makes a reef resilient. If a reef with relatively high coral cover isn't "healthy" (e.g., sites at Tarawa), is it actually resilient? Sure, it is resilient as it seems like this may be a stable state that the ecosystem tends towards under these conditions, but under that definition, an algal dominated reef is also resilient, just toward a different state. Usually in this context resilient means something more - that reefs will maintain their structure and function - which is likely not true at Tarawa. I think this is an important point that needs to be discussed in the manuscript.

We agree with your important point that this discussion is warranted and that the manuscript is incomplete without it. Ironically, in our call for using more precise language when discussing the health and resilience of coral reefs, were imprecise in using the term ‘resilient’ where ‘resistant’ was more appropriate. We have added a discussion of the definition of ‘resilience’ (which includes but is not limited to resistance to disturbance, and whether sites in Tarawa meet that definition) per your suggestion and we agree that it was an important concept to address.

Specifically, we added the following (beginning at line 886, in a section of the discussion titled “Disturbance, reef health, and resilience”):

“However, for a coral reef to be considered resilient, it must be both resistant to disturbance and be able to recover to the original community structure post-disturbance, without an associated loss in function and services [90]. We have provided further evidence that the P. rus-dominated reefs in Tarawa are more resistant to heat stress than those in Abaiang, which is in agreement with previous studies [19]. Sites in Abaiang may become more resistant to heat stress in the future, depending on their recovery trajectory (if, for example, coral cover increases and is composed of more thermally tolerant genera). Also, because sites in Tarawa were dominated by a single coral species (P. rus), they are potentially vulnerable to future ‘ecological surprises’ [92]; any disturbance that has a disproportionate impact on P. rus could have a severe impact on the ecosystem as a whole. There was also likely a loss in function and services associated with the phase shift to P. rus at sites in Tarawa, which indicates that while these reefs are resistant to heat stress, they may not be resilient. Surveys of fish and invertebrate assemblages, as well as and reef structural complexity, would provide useful information about how the phase shift to P. rus is influencing the ecosystem services that are valuable to people residing in Tarawa.”

FIGURES

Figure 3 - Is it possible to include earlier dates for historical warming at this location?

Yes, we have updated the figure to include the full dataset (from 1985 – 2018) per your suggestion.

Figure 4 - Since you mention the difference between macroalgae and turf, would it be possible to include turf on both of these panels, in addition to live coral and macroalgae?

Thank you for this recommendation. We have redone the figure to include turf algae, in addition to live coral and macroalgae. We removed the dotted line for the corrected live coral values and instead used those corrected values to represent the live coral for Tarawa, because it was difficult to see the two separate lines representing live coral cover (one for the original values and one for the corrected values) after adding the line for turf algae. We discuss our reasoning for the corrected values in the text of the manuscript instead of showing both corrected and uncorrected values on the plot.

Figure 5 - Pocillopora is spelled incorrectly

Thank you for catching this error. We decided to remove the PCA from the manuscript because the information it includes is largely captured through the SIMPER analysis as well as the stacked bar chart.

EDITS

Line 20 - change "in" to "on"

Line 26 - change "The" to "These"

Line 27 - remove "the"

Lines 65-66 - I'm not convinced about saying "most commonly" here, and I'd suggest removing it

Line 122 - rephrase "more recent work questions that conclusion" to "this conclusion is still under debate"

Line 202 - add in "Hawaii" after Kane`ohe Bay

Line 217 - replace "continue" with "continued"

Line 219 - remove "researchers found that"

Line 220 - replace "had been" with "was"

Line 224 - replace "the" with "these"

Line 260 - does "ocean side" mean "reef slope" please be a little more specific

Line 375 - remove "the" from "For the percent cover"

Line 470 - Table 2 - what is "other morphology/species" for Porites?

Thank you for these suggestions. We have made all of the corrections in the manuscript. In Table 2, other morphologies/species of Porites was encrusting Porites. We have removed this table and instead described these numbers in the text of the manuscript, and we’ve changed ‘other morphology/species’ to ‘encrusting. By ‘ocean side’, we meant the outside rim of the atoll (in other words, not in the lagoon). We have clarified this in the manuscript.

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3. Donner SD, Kirata T, Vieux C. Recovery from the 2004 bleaching event in the Gilbert Islands, Kiribati. Atoll Research Bulletin. 2010;587:1–27.

4. Carilli J, Donner SD, Hartmann AC. Historical temperature variability affects coral response to heat stress. PLoS ONE. 2012;7(3):1–9.

5. Lovell E. Coral Reef Benthic Surveys of Tarawa and Abaiang Atolls, Republic of Kiribati. Tarawa, Kiribati: The South Pacific Applied Geoscience Commission; 2000 Aug p. 1–88. Report No.: 310.

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Reviewer #1: Cannon et al. have made an adequate attempt to revise their manuscript, and this version is better than the first. Overall, the science message is fine and the results support the conclusion. The text remains parochial with limited appeal to readers who don’t work on coral reefs or even those who don’t have interest in the Gilbert Islands, and the manuscript remains far longer than it needs to be. This sort of material does not need 7 tables (including 2 full page versions) to summarize and present the pertinent data, and further consideration should be given to moving these to supplemental material, or replacing them with a more synthetic data summary. The “Future Directions” and “Conclusions” statements should be dropped from the manuscript since they either contain material that is not relevant to the questions/hypothesis guiding this work or are duplicative. Let’s not propagate the use of “ASS” as an acceptable acronym in coral reef literature.

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Edits

Line 23 - 'year' should be 'years'

Line 28 - repeated phrase

Line 113 - 'sewerage' should be 'sewage'?

Reference entry errors - lines 474, 483,

Line 688 (and following) - I think you should just use the whole phrase 'alternative stable state', as I just couldn't get past repeatedly reading 'ASS'.

Lines 762-766 - It feels a little weird to include these specific numbers without the associated error, especially since the errors overlap in at least some cases. I think you could leave it as is, but add in the errors to the numbers in parentheses; e.g., "(from 1.09% in 2014 to 2.90% in 2018)"

Lines 791-792 - I am a little hesitant about this, as it seems like you're using a lack of evidence to suggest that there aren't chronic disturbances in Abaiang. Although I know that Abaiang is much less populated than Tarawa, it still does have a human population, and so there could be disturbances that you aren't measuring. Please soften this statement to acknowledge that possibility.

Line 930 - repeated word

Line 935 - change 'what' to 'which'

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PLoS One. 2021 Aug 11;16(8):e0255304. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0255304.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


15 Jun 2021

15 June, 2021

Re: PONE-D-21-04308, “Coral reefs in the Gilbert Islands of Kiribati: Resistance, resilience, and recovery after more than a decade of multiple stressors”

Dear Dr. Guest,

Thank you for the detailed and helpful feedback and the two anonymous reviews you have shared with us for our recent manuscript submission to PLOS ONE. On behalf of my co-authors, I am submitting a revised manuscript that responds to the very helpful suggestions and concerns raised by the reviewers.

In response to the reviewer’s comments, we have removed the acronym ‘ASS’ (although please note that we did not invent this acronym; it was used in the literature we cited) and removed the first full table to the supplementary materials, have integrated the future directions section into the discussion (with less detail), and have added a paragraph to explain the importance of these results to coral reefs outside of the Gilbert Islands.

I am including my responses to each of the comments below (the original comment is in regular text and my response is in italics). I have highlighted where we made changes in the manuscript to address the comments and have also uploaded two versions of the revised manuscript (one that tracks the changes, and one that does not), per your instruction.

Thank you again for your response and suggestions, and for the opportunity to respond. We look forward to hearing back from you.

Sincerely,

Sara E. Cannon, M.Sc., Ph.D. Candidate

University of British Columbia

Reviewer #1: Cannon et al. have made an adequate attempt to revise their manuscript, and this version is better than the first. Overall, the science message is fine and the results support the conclusion. The text remains parochial with limited appeal to readers who don’t work on coral reefs or even those who don’t have interest in the Gilbert Islands, and the manuscript remains far longer than it needs to be. This sort of material does not need 7 tables (including 2 full page versions) to summarize and present the pertinent data, and further consideration should be given to moving these to supplemental material, or replacing them with a more synthetic data summary. The “Future Directions” and “Conclusions” statements should be dropped from the manuscript since they either contain material that is not relevant to the questions/hypothesis guiding this work or are duplicative. Let’s not propagate the use of “ASS” as an acceptable acronym in coral reef literature.

Thank you for your helpful feedback. We have moved the first table with all of our site information to the supplementary materials to further reduce the number of tables in the manuscript and have added more information in the introduction and the discussion sections about why this work is important for coral reefs in other parts of the world (although we understand that it may not be relevant to people working outside of coral reef ecology).

Specifically, we edited the second paragraph of the abstract to read:

“The coral reefs of the Republic of Kiribati’s Gilbert Islands are exposed to frequent heat stress caused by central-Pacific type El Niño events, and may provide a glimpse into the future of coral reefs in other parts of the world, where the frequency of heat stress events will likely increase due to climate change.”

We also added a similar message to lines 45-50 of the abstract, which now read:

“These findings provide a rare glimpse at the future of coral reefs around the world and the ways they may be affected by climate change, which may allow scientists to better predict how other reefs will respond to increasing heat stress events across gradients of local human disturbance. We end with suggestions for future research that would address gaps in our analyses, with implications for coral reefs and the people depending on them, both locally and globally.”

In the introduction, we added at line 81:

“The coral reefs of Tarawa Atoll and its less populated neighbor Abaiang Atoll in the Republic of Kiribati provide a unique opportunity to investigate the role of chronic human disturbances on coral reef recovery from acute disturbances, and could also serve as examples of the ways that reefs in other parts of the world may respond to increasing frequencies of climate-driven heat stress events in the future.”

We also added, at line 184:

“Our findings provide a rare glimpse at how coral reefs around the world may respond to the increasing frequencies of heat stress events across gradients of local human disturbance and could provide important lessons to guide the future management of coral reef resources in the face of climate change.”

Finally, in the conclusion, we removed the sections “Future Directions” and “Conclusions” per your suggestion, and added a paragraph to summarize the importance of this work for reefs in other places in the future, beginning at line 956:

“Coral reefs in the Gilbert Islands have experienced years with prolonged heat stress more frequently than 99% of the world’s coral reefs [19], but this may change in the future; other reefs will likely experience more heat stress going forward, given that climate change-driven global coral bleaching events have increased in frequency and are expected to continue increasing in the due to climate change [93]. Reefs in the Gilbert Islands could therefore provide a rare glimpse into what reefs may look like in the future while also accounting for a gradient of local human impacts. We hope this work, coupled with further investigations into the potential trade-offs associated with locally degraded but climate-resistant reefs such as found in Tarawa versus reefs with more long-term ability to recover but with less resistance such as those in Abaiang, will provide novel information that is important for the future management of coral reef resources. Specifically, these findings may help to predict the ways that climate change will affect the millions of people around the world who depend on coral reefs, so that they may prepare for the future.”

We have also removed the acronym ASS per your suggestion and agree that it is less than ideal, although please note that it was not our invention (the acronym is already in use in several of the publications that we cited).

Reviewer #2: Overall, I think that the authors did a good job of reorganizing the manuscript and clarifying their questions and hypotheses. I have just a few small comments on the revised version, but after they are addressed, I think this manuscript is ready for publication.

Edits

Line 23 - 'year' should be 'years'

Line 28 - repeated phrase

Line 113 - 'sewerage' should be 'sewage'?

Reference entry errors - lines 474, 483,

Line 688 (and following) - I think you should just use the whole phrase 'alternative stable state', as I just couldn't get past repeatedly reading 'ASS'.

Lines 762-766 - It feels a little weird to include these specific numbers without the associated error, especially since the errors overlap in at least some cases. I think you could leave it as is, but add in the errors to the numbers in parentheses; e.g., "(from 1.09% in 2014 to 2.90% in 2018)"

Thank you for these suggested edits. We have made the changes in the manuscript.

Lines 791-792 - I am a little hesitant about this, as it seems like you're using a lack of evidence to suggest that there aren't chronic disturbances in Abaiang. Although I know that Abaiang is much less populated than Tarawa, it still does have a human population, and so there could be disturbances that you aren't measuring. Please soften this statement to acknowledge that possibility.

We appreciate you pointing this out and we agree that chronic disturbances likely do exist in Abaiang, although at much less intensity/severity than in Tarawa. We have updated the text to now read the following, on line 857-858: “We have no evidence that either of these two conditions currently exist in Abaiang.”

Line 930 - repeated word

Line 935 - change 'what' to 'which'

Thank you for your comments and suggested edits. We have removed this section from the manuscript per the suggestion of the other reviewer.

Attachment

Submitted filename: ResponsetoReviewers.docx

Decision Letter 2

James R Guest

14 Jul 2021

Coral reefs in the Gilbert Islands of Kiribati: Resistance, resilience, and recovery after more than a decade of multiple stressors

PONE-D-21-04308R2

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Additional Editor Comments (optional): I think you've dealt well with all of the suggested changes. I still feel that the paper is probably longer than it needs to be, but that in itself is not a reason not to accept it. I have one minor suggestion which is to change coral "length" to coral "diameter" in the methods as this is a more commonly used term.

Acceptance letter

James R Guest

21 Jul 2021

PONE-D-21-04308R2

Coral reefs in the Gilbert Islands of Kiribati: resistance, resilience, and recovery after more than a decade of multiple stressors

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Associated Data

    This section collects any data citations, data availability statements, or supplementary materials included in this article.

    Supplementary Materials

    S1 Table. Environmental variables, coordinates, and years data were collected for 19 study sites visited between 2012 and 2018.

    (DOCX)

    S2 Table. Coral order, family, and species observed in Tarawa and Abaiang atolls (as reported by Lovell et al, 2000 [30]).

    (DOCX)

    S3 Table. Results of linear mixed effects models for each key benthic category, including additional LMMs for subsets of the data.

    Statistically significant results at α = 0.05 are in bold, while those that are significant at α = 0.10 are underlined.

    (DOCX)

    S4 Table. Tukey results for linear mixed effects models, percent ~ year + (1|site).

    All p-values have been adjusted for multiple comparisons. Results significant at sigma = 0.05 are in bold; those significant at sigma = 0.10 are underlined.

    (DOCX)

    S5 Table. Results of size frequency statistical analyses.

    Includes Welch’s ANOVA of size-frequency statistics between years, and KS test results comparing size frequency distributions across years within each atoll.

    (DOCX)

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    Submitted filename: ResponsetoReviewers.docx

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    Data Availability Statement

    The data are held in the public repository Zenodo and the links are as follows: https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.4456048 https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.4470114.


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