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. 2021 Aug 16;16(8):e0254166. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0254166

Under nutrition and associated factors among adolescent girls attending school in the  rural and urban districts of Debark, Northwest Ethiopia: A community-based comparative cross-sectional study

Tewodros Getaneh Alemu 1,*, Addis Bilal Muhye 1, Amare Demsie Ayele 1
Editor: Madhavi Bhargava2
PMCID: PMC8366968  PMID: 34398878

Abstract

Introduction

Adolescence is the time of puberty in which a substantial changes in physical, mental, and emotional are observed; Nutritional requirements significantly rise as a result. Even though improving adolescent girls’ nutritional status helps to break the intergenerational cycle of malnutrition, many studies in Ethiopia focus on determining the nutritional status of under-five and pregnant women and even they don’t show disparities between urban and rural adolescent girls. Thus, this study was aimed at comparing the rural and urban prevalence’s of stunting and thinness and their associated factors among adolescent girls attending school in Debark district, Northwest Ethiopia, 2020.

Method

A community-based comparative cross-sectional study was conducted among 792 adolescent girls from February 25th to March 21st 2020. A multi-stage sampling followed by simple random sampling technique was used. Data were collected through a face-to-face interviewer-based questionnaire. Different anthropometric measurements were taken. The collected data were entered to Epi-data and exported into SPSS for analyses. Variables with p-values < 0.25 in the bivariable analysis were exported to multivariable logistic regression model to control confounders and identify the factor. The strength of association and statistical significance was declared using the adjusted odds ratios with its corresponding 95% CI, and p-value ≤ 0.05 respectively.

Results

A total of 757 adolescent girls with a response rate of 95.6% were participated in the study. The overall prevalence of stunting and thinness were 20.1% and 10.3%, respectively. Stunting among rural adolescent girls was 24.2%; whereas it was 16% among urban residents. Likewise, thinness among rural adolescent girls was 8.5%; whereas it was 12.1% among urban dwellers. No latrine [AOR: 1.95 (95% CI: 1.11, 3.43)], lowest media exposure [AOR: 5.14 (95% CI: 1.16, 22.74)], lower wealth class [AOR:2.58 (95% CI: 1.310, 5.091)], and middle wealth class[AOR: 2.37 (95% CI: 1.230, 4.554)] have risen the likelihood of stunting in rural setting while early adolescent age [AOR:3.17 (95% CI:1.445,6.95)] significantly associated with stunting in urban setting. Food insecurity [AOR: 1.95 (95% CI: 1.01, 3.78)] was associated with stunting in overall adolescent girls. Middle adolescent age groups in rural area have more than three times to experience thinness [AOR: 3.67 (95% CI: 1. 21, 11.149)]. Whereas urban resident girls fall in early adolescent age group developed thinness were eight times [AOR: 8.39 (95% CI: 2.48–28.30)].

Conclusion

Stunting was higher among rural adolescent girls as compared to urban. However, thinness was higher among urban dwellers. Lower wealth class, food insecurity, lowest media exposure, and age were significantly associated with stunting and thinness. Hence, increasing latrine coverage, boosting the economic status of the community, and increasing media exposure for adolescent girls should get due attention.

Introduction

The World Health Organization (WHO) defines, adolescent as the age between 10–19 years [1]. At the end of 2018, there were 1.2 billion adolescents that accounts one-fourth of the sub-Saharan Africa population [2].

In Ethiopia, children and adolescents together constitute about 48% of the population, of which one-quarter is adolescent girls [3]. Every year, more than 1.2 million adolescents die worldwide and nutrition related problem is the foremost risk factor contributing to many of the main causes of death [2]. Adolescence is the time of puberty in which there are dramatic physical, mental, and emotional alterations fundamentally observed which demand various nutrients [4].

During adolescence, the growth rate is faster than growth rate seen at any other time in the person’s life next to the infantile period [5]. Likewise, the hormones mediating the pubertal growth, pubertal sex hormones, and growth hormones normally rise together and are responsible for the optimal skeletal growth and sexual development. Which are modulated to a great extent by nutritional factors [57].

Globally, although there is a downward trend of stunting, still 130 million children and adolescents are suffering [8]. In low and middle-income countries, 67% of rural and 50% urban adolescents had a higher magnitude of underweight/thinness [9]. According to the Ethiopia Demographic and Health Survey (EDHS) 2016 report, the prevalence of thinness among Ethiopian adolescent girls was 29% [10]. Indeed, some other local studies have also revealed that the prevalence of stunting ranges from 12.5%-47.4% [11, 12], whereas thinnest is between 12.6% and 58.3% [13, 14].

Under-nutrition at this stage of life would continue to the next generation and shares the consequences to their children including low birth weight, short stature, and low resistance to infection [1518]. This problem would be devastating in Ethiopia, where about 27.7% adolescent girls become pregnant at the age of 19 [19].

Adolescents who participated in sports, have a chronic illness, in need of excessive diet, or those who use alcohol and drug have a special nutrient requirement. For these reasons, this age group is nutritionally vulnerable [2022]. Moreover, age, family size, maternal educational status, family income, frequency of feeding, and low dietary diversity score were frequently stated factors that affect the nutritional status of the adolescent girls [2325]. In cognizance of this problem, the government of Ethiopia has initiated Growth and Transformation Plan II, Second National Nutrition Program (NNP II), and Seqota Declaration to fight against nutritional problems of the country. Nonetheless, the prevalence of under-nutrition is still high.

Even though improving adolescent girl’s nutritional status helps to break the intergenerational cycle of malnutrition. Many studies in Ethiopia focus on under five and pregnant women nutrition and consider adolescents are low risk for under-nutrition. Previous evidences didn’t show the clear disparities of under-nutrition between urban and rural adolescent girls. Moreover, nearly 80% of Ethiopian population have been living in the countryside areas in which there is high fertility rates and low socioeconomic status. Therefore, this study was aimed at comparing stunting and thinness in rural and urban adolescent girls and their associated factors at the district of Debark, Northwest Ethiopia.

Methods and materials

Study design, period and area

A community-based comparative cross-sectional study was conducted among rural and urban adolescent girls in the district of Debark from February 25th, to March 21st, 2020. Debark district is found in North Gondar Zone of Amhara National Regional State. It is located 830 km far from Addis Ababa, the capital city of Ethiopia. It has a total of 30 kebeles. Based on the 2007 census report, the woreda has a total population of 159,193. of whom 80,274 are men and 78,919 women; 138, 354 (87%), and 20,839 (13%) are rural and urban inhabitants, respectively [3]. A total of 11807-second cycle primary and secondary school adolescent girl students were attending school.

Population

All school-going adolescent girls from a rural and urban school of Debark districts registered during the academic year 2019/2020 were the study participants. Adolescent girls who were from randomly selected schools in both areas in Debark district and available during the data collection period were included. However, adolescent girls with spinal curvature and other physical disabilities were excluded as there is no means to measure the anthropometrics.

Sample size determination, technique, and sampling procedure

The sample size for each dependent variables (stunting and thinness) was calculated using the formula for a double population proportion by taking the required statistical assumptions: Zα/2 = 1.96, power (β) = 0.84, r = ratio of N2 to N1 which is taken as one to one, and the sample size was 792 and 664 respectively. Therefore, is the larger sample size was 792. The calculated sample size was distributed equally among the two populations: i.e. 396 for rural and 396 for urban schools.

A multistage sampling technique was used. Initially, all primary second cycle and secondary schools (51 schools) in Debark district were stratified to urban and rural schools. Once again, stratification was done to each area by the school level (primary and secondary). A simple random sampling technique was used to select 20% of the 51 schools for each; accordingly, 9 schools from 44 rural schools and 4 schools from 7 urban schools were selected. From each of the 13 schools, all sections of grades from 5–12 were separately enlisted and again 20% of the section from each grade was selected by simple random sampling. A total of 4979 adolescent girls were enumerated from the recruited schools. The student’s classroom register was used as a sampling frame. About 396 from rural and 396 from urban resident girls were selected. Proportional allocation was done to select the number of students who participated from the selected grade. Finally, to select 792 study participants, a simple random sampling technique was used from the selected sections.

Study variables

Stunting and thinness were the outcome variables and the socio-demographic variables were: age, the grade of the study participants, religion, family size, income, educational status of a mother, educational status of a father, occupation of a mother, occupation of a father, residence; dietary related factors: meal frequency, dietary diversity, food security; health and nutrition information factors: mass media exposure; health-related: menstruation and diarrhea; and household environment: the source of drinking water, availability of waste disposal, availability of latrine facilities, water treatment, water source distance, hand washing were independent variables.

Definition of variables

  • Thinness: BMI-for-age <− 2Z scores [26].

  • Stunting: height-for-age <− 2Z scores [26].

  • Adolescents: individuals in the age group of 10–19 years of age [27].
    • Early adolescents: adolescents in the age group of10–13yearsofage.
    • Middle adolescents: adolescents in the age group of 14–16yearsofage.
    • Late adolescents: adolescents in the age group of 17–19yearsofage.
  • Poor dietary diversity: adolescent girls who consumed (<5 food groups) from the ten food items in the previous 24-hours [28].

  • good dietary diversity: adolescent girls who consumed (≥5food groups) from the ten food items in the previous 24-hours [28].

  • Food security: Based on the Household Food Insecurity Access Scale (HFIAS) score (0–27) of 0–1 is categorized as food secure [29].

  • Food insecurity: Based on (HFIAS) score(0–27) of 2 and above will be considered as food insecure [29].

  • Improved source of water: Include piped water, public taps, standpipes, tube wells, boreholes, protected dug wells and springs, and rainwater [10].

  • Non-improved source of water: including unprotected spring and unprotected well [10].

  • The variable mass media exposure was constructed from the frequencies of reading newspapers/magazines, watching television, and listening to radio together [30]. Accordingly:
    • Not exposed: All the three indicators are zero (Not at all)
    • Lowest exposed: the highest value of all the three indicators is 1, i.e., exposed less than once a week to any one or all of the indicators.
    • Moderately Exposed: the highest value of all the three indicators is 2, i.e., exposed at least once a week to any one or all of the indicators.
    • Very often exposed: the highest value of all the three indicators is 3, i.e., very often exposed to any one or all of the indicators.
  • Urban: per the Ethiopian urban planning law, an urban center is a locality with a minimum population size of 2000 inhabitants, at least 50% of whom are engaged in non-agricultural activities [31].

  • Rural: formed by the inhabitants of a given area whose members are engaged either in agricultural and/or non-agricultural activities [31].

  • Water treatment: adding bleach, boiling, filtration, if the household used either of them were taken as using appropriate water treatment methods, and if the household used neither of them considers inappropriate water treatment [32].

Data collection tool and procedure

A structured face-to-face interviewer-administered questionnaire along with anthropometric measurements was used. The tool comprised of information on socio-demographic, household environmental factors, health, and nutrition information factors, dietary-related factors, household income. Stadiometers with a sliding headpiece attached to a digital weight scale were used to measure height and weight, respectively. Height was measured to the nearest 0.1cm while weight to the nearest 0.1kg in standing position. Each participant was weighed with minimum clothing and no footwear. To avoid variability among the data collectors, the same specifically trained measurers were employed for anthropometric measurement.

The study participant’s wealth status was assessed by using questions adopting from Ethiopian Demographic and Health Survey, 2016 (EDHS). After labeling the variables between ‘0’ and ‘1’, the Principal Component Analysis (PCA) was applied. Then, the wealth status was ranked from the highest to the lowest.

Minimum dietary diversity (MDD) was assessed by interviewing participants to report how many of the 10 food items they consumed in the previous 24 hours before the survey. Dietary diversity questionnaires were prepared based on Food and Agricultural Organization (FAO) guideline 2016 [28]. Participants were informed to report as ‘Yes’ if she has eaten at least one food items, and coded as ‘1’. On the contrary, if the interviewee reports never consumed any food items, it was coded as’0’. Then, all responses were pooled and the variable, MDD was generated.

Household food security was classified based on responses to the nine severity items in the HFIAS. The procedure for scoring was used as follows: “0” was given if the event described by the question never occurred, “1” if it occurred during the previous 30 days. With regard to the occurrence, “1” was allotted if the events rarely occur, “2” sometimes and “3” often. Therefore, responses on the nine HFIAS questions were summed up to create a household food security score, with a minimum of “0” and a maximum score of “27.”

Furthermore, two supervisors who have second-degree in pediatric nursing and six data collectors who have first-degree in nursing were involved in the data collection process. The data were collected from the schools where students are found and in their residential household in the community.

Data quality control

The questionnaire was prepared first in English and then translated to the local language—Amharic and back to the English language to check its consistency. It was reviewed by language experts for translation of the language, and face validity was done by three public health nutritionists to check it’s appropriateness for assessing stunting, thinness, and the independent variables. Pre-test was done among the 5% of the samples in rural and urban schools around Gondar Zuria school and community before the actual data collection was commenced and little amendments were done based on the pre-test result. The scales were carefully handled and periodically calibrated by placing standard calibration weights of 2kg iron bars on the scale. Furthermore, social desirability bias was attempted to reduce through interviewing the participants relatively in privacy secured area. Likewise, recall bias was tried to minimize by asking what kind of food items they consumed in each mealtime (breakfast, lunch, snack, and dinner). The collected data were checked out for its completeness during data collection by the principal investigator and supervisors.

Data processing and analysis

Data were cleaned, coded, and entered to EPI data version 4.6 and exported to SPSS version 20 statistical packages for statistical analyses. Descriptive statistics were used to describe the socio-demographic characteristics of the respondents. Anthropometric measurements were converted to composite variables: height-for-age and BMI-for-age WHO Z scores by using Antro Plus software. Flags were corrected to be between +6 and -6 after sorting the scores of individuals. A score of <-2 SD of BMI-for-age and height-for-age was coded as ‘1’ and leveled as thin and stunted, respectively. On the other hand, a score of >-2 SD of BMI-for-age and height-for-age was coded as ‘0’ and leveled as not thin and stunted, respectively.

The income status was analyzed through PCA. All categorical and continuous variables were categorized to be between ‘0’ and ‘1’. Statistical assumptions of factor analysis were checked by Keiser-Meyer-Olkin (KMO) and Bartlett’s test of sphericity. Accordingly, KMO of 0.7 or greater and significant Bartlett’s test of sphericity (p-value<0.05) was considered as satisfying the assumption. In addition, communality value and Eigenvalues of 0.5 and greater and 1 respectively were included in factor analysis. Any variable with less than 0.5 of the communality value was removed from the analysis and the analysis was done repeatedly until all variables meeting the inclusion criteria for factor analysis. Next, all eligible factor scores were computed using the regression-based method to generate one variable, wealth status. Then after, the loading factors were sorted in their descending order and they were corrected to be between four and negative four. Following this, the final scores were ranked into three quantiles namely: first, second, and third. Finally, ranks were interpreted as upper class, middle class, and lower class respectively.

Furthermore, the binary logistic regression model was used to assess the association between dependent and independent variables for each outcome. A variable with a p-value of less than 0.25 was considered for multivariable logistic regression analysis. In the multivariable analysis, a p-value of less than 0.05 and an odds ratio with 95% CI were used to declare the presence and the strength of association between the independent and outcome variable. The Hosmer and Lemeshow test were used to diagnose the model fitness and the model was adequate. Finally, the result of this study was described in texts and tables.

Ethical considerations and conscent for participants

Ethical clearance was obtained from College of Medicine and Health Sciences, School of Nursing on the behalf of the Institutional Review Board (IRB) of University of Gondar. Then, a permission letter written from the Debark education office to the selected schools. Finally an official permission letter was obtained from each schools to proceed with the data collection. Written consent was obtained from the study participants by sending a letter to parents/guardians for each study participants less than 18 years. Then, assent was obtained from participants, and written consent was obtained from those ages greater than and equal to 18 years. Participation was after both informed written consent and assent were obtained. Voluntary engagement and confidentiality were retained to facilitate detailed and truthful self-disclosure.

Results

Socio-demographic characteristics

A total of 757 adolescent girls with a response rate of 95.6% (50.3% from urban and 49.7% from rural) were participated. The mean age of the adolescent girls was 14.7 (± 2.29SD). Regarding family size, 42.1% of the participants were in urban and 33.1% in rural schools live in a family size of five and below. About 10.9% of urban and 27.7% of rural participants were from lower wealth class (Table 1).

Table 1. Socio-demographic characteristics among school adolescent girls in Debark district, 2020 (n = 757).

Variables Response Urban (381) Rural (376)
Frequency % Frequency %
Age Early adolescent 142 37.3 106 28.2
Middle adolescent 146 38.4 164 43.6
Late adolescent 93 24.4 106 28.2
Level of education Primary 223 58.5 293 77.9
Secondary 158 41.5 81 21.5
Religion Orthodox 320 84 374 99.5
Muslim 61 16 2 0.5
Marital status Single 375 98.4 352 93.6
Married 6 1.6 24 6.4
Father’s educational status Unable to read and write 23 6 128 34
Read and write 111 29.1 191 50.8
Primary school 91 23.9 44 11.7
secondary school 64 16.8 9 2.4
college and above 92 24.1 4 1.1
Father’s Occupation Government employee 148 38.8
Farmer - - 360 95.7
Daily laborer 31 8.1 - -
Merchant 207 53.0 16 4.3
Mother’s educational status Unable to read and write 78 20.5 218 58
Read and write 103 27 130 34.6
Primary school 79 20.7 28 7.4
secondary school 64 16.8 - -
college and above 57 15 - -
Mother’s occupation Government employee 69 18.1 - -
Housewife 216 56.7 323 85.9
Farmer - - 53 14.1
Merchant 96 25.2 - -
Family size < or equal to 5 160 42.1 124 33.1
Greater than 5 220 57.9 251 66.9
Wealth class Lower class 39 10.9 104 27.7
Middle class 296 77.7 139 37.0
Upper class 46 12.1 133 35.4

Nutritional, health-related and environmental characteristics

The majority (84%) of girls from urban and a quarter (25%) in rural were from food secured. Less than three-quarters (70.9%) of them from urban and close to a quarter (24.7%) from rural had received adequate dietary diversity. (63.5%) of the adolescent girls in urban and (57.2%) of the in rural had eaten three and above times in a day. The majority (88.5%) of the adolescent girls from urban and, near to half (45.7%) of them from rural had a home latrine (Table 2).

Table 2. Nutritional, health-related, and environmental characteristics among school adolescent girls in Debark district, 2020 (n = 757).

Variables Response Urban (381) rural (376)
Frequency % Frequency %
Food frequency Less than 3 139 36.5 161 42.8
3 and above 242 63.5 215 57.2
Dietary diversity Adequate 270 70.9 93 24.7
Inadequate 111 29.1 283 75.3
Food security Food secure 320 84 94 25
Food insecure 61 16 282 75
Menstruation began Yes 195 51.2 190 50.5
No 186 48.8 186 49.5
Age at first menstruation 11 to 13 31 15.9 10 5.3
14 to15 136 69.7 120 63.2
16 to 17 28 14.4 60 31.6
Diarrhea Yes 18 4.7 26 6.9
No 363 95.3 350 93.1
Mass media Not exposed 98 25.7 272 72.3
Lowest exposed 50 13.1 22 5.9
Moderately exposed 103 27 47 12.5
Very often exposed 130 34.1 35 9.3
Source of drinking water Improved 381 100 312 83
Unimproved 64 17
Distance of water source < or equal to 30 381 100 291 77.4
Greater than 30 85 22.6
Availability of home latrine Yes 337 88.5 172 45.7
No 44 11.5 204 54.3
Hand washing after toilet Yes 232 60.9 142 37.8
No 149 39.1 234 62.2
Availability of waste disposal Yes 290 76.1 126 33.5
No 91 23.9 250 66.5

Prevalence of undernutrition

The overall magnitude of stunting among adolescent girls in schools of Debark district was 20.1% (95% CI: 17.3–23). The magnitude of stunting (24.2%) was higher among rural than urban school adolescent girls (16%). And the overall prevalence of thinness among adolescent girls in schools of Debark district was 10.3% (95% CI: 8.2%-12.7%). The prevalence of thinness was higher among urban adolescent girls (12.1%) than rural (8.5%).

Factors associated with stunting

The regression model of rural adolescent girls suggested that the odds of being stunted among adolescent girls who had no latrine at home is increased by 95% compared to those who had home latrine [AOR: 1.95 (95% CI: 1.11, 3.43)]. Adolescent girls who had the lowest media exposure are 5.1 times higher to develop stunting compared to those who have very often media exposure [AOR: 5.14 (95% CI: 1.16, 22.74)]. Adolescent girls who were in the lower and middle wealth class group were 2.5 [AOR: 2.58 (95% CI: 1.31, 5.09)] and 2.3 [AOR: 2.37 (95% CI: 1.23, 4.55)] times higher to experience stunting, respectively as compared to adolescent girls in the upper wealth class group (Table 3).

Table 3. Bivariable and multivariable logistic regression of factors associated with stunted among rural school adolescent girls, 2020 (n = 376).

Variable Response Stunted COR (95% CI) AOR (95% CI)
No Yes
Education status of the mother Unable to read and write 154 64 3.463(1.0101–11.878) 2.633(0.729–9.512)
read and write 106 24 1.887(0.526–6.761) 2.028(0.533–7.719)
Primary school 25 3 1.0 1.0
Availability of latrine No 138 66 2.812(1.679–4.709) 1.954(1.114–3.427) *
Yes 147 25 1.0 1.0
you wash your hands after visited Toilet No 165 69 0.436(0.257–0.748) 1.187(0.603–2.334)
Yes 120 22 1.0 1.0
Availability of waste disposal No 177 73 2.475(1.404–4.370) 1.309(0.659–2.598)
Yes 108 18 1.0 1.0
media exposure not exposed 198 74 3.987(1.185–13.412) 2.889(0.882–10.158)
lowest exposed 13 9 7.385(1.720–31.703) 5.135(1.159–22.741) *
moderately exposed 42 5 1.270(0.282–5.711) 1.216(0.265–5.586)
very often exposed 32 3 1.0 1.0
Food security Food secure 77 17 1.0 1.0
Food insecure 208 74 1.611(0.895–2.902) 1.453(0.773–2.731)
Age category Early 77 29 1.841(0.949–3.573) 1.423(0.655–3.093)
Middle 120 44 1.793(0.971–3.311) 1.304(0.664–2.563)
Late 88 18 1.0 1.0
Distance source water ≤ 30 226 65 1.0 1.0
>30 59 26 1.532(0.895–2.623) 0.902(0.494–1.647)
Adolescent education Primary 216 77 1.865(0.976–3.564) 1.472(0.699–2.731)
Secondary 68 13 1.0 1.0
Wealth index Lowest class 71 33 3.171(1.647–6.108) 2.583(1.310–5.091) **
Middle class 98 41 2.855(1.526–5.559) 2.366(1.230–4.554) **
Upper class 116 17 1.0 1.0

* = p value<0.05

** = p value < 0.01, p-value of Hosmer and Lemeshow test: 0.903.

Urban adolescent girls who were in the early adolescent age were 3 times higher to experience stunting as compared to adolescent girls in the late adolescent age [AOR: 3.17 (95% CI: 1.45, 6.95)] (Table 4).

Table 4. Bivariable and multivariable logistic regression of factors associated with stunted among urban school adolescent girls, 2020 (n = 381).

Variable Response Stunted COR (95% CI) AOR (95% CI)
No Yes
Occupation of father Government employee 130 18 0.661(0.358–1.220) 0.667(0.358–1.244)
Daily laborer 23 8 1.660(0.686–4.014) 1.401(0.566–3.473)
Merchant 167 35 1.0 1.0
Age category Early 106 36 3.170(1.446–6.946) 3.170(1.446–6.946) **
Middle 130 16 1.149(0.485–2.719) 1.149(0.485–2.719)
Late 84 9 1.0 1.0
Adolescent education Primary 178 45 2.244(1.217–4.136) 1.018(0.374–2.774)
Secondary 142 16 1.0 1.0

** = p value<0.01, p-value of Hosmer and Lemeshow test: 0.86.

The regression model of overall adolescent girls revealed that the odds of stunting among adolescent girls from food insecure household was increased by 95% compared to those from food secured households [AOR: 1.95 (95% CI: 1.01, 3.78)]. Those adolescent girls who were at the middle-age stage were 3 times more likely to be stunted as compared to late adolescent stage at first menstruation [AOR: 3.05 (95% CI: 1.22, 7)]. Adolescent girls who were in the lower wealth class group were 2.2 times more likely to be stunted as compared to adolescent girls in the upper wealth class group [AOD: 2.24 (95% CI: 1.01, 4.86)] (Table 5).

Table 5. Bivariable and multivariable logistic regressions of overall factors associated with over stunting among school adolescent girls in Debark district, 2020 (n = 757).

Variable Response Stunted COR (95% CI) AOR (95% CI)
No Yes
Residence Urban 320 61 1.0
Rural 285 91 1.675(1.167–2.404) 0.542(0.189–1.549)
Education status of the mother Unable to read and write 222 74 2.381(1.035–5.480) 1.901(0.208–17.377)
read and write 190 43 1.617(0.686–3.810) 1.682(0.185–15.304)
Primary school 89 18 1.445(0.565–3.695) 2.771(0.294–26.145)
Secondary school 54 10 1.323(0.468–3.741) 4.395(0.437–44.231)
College and above 50 7 1.0 1.0
Availability of latrine No 172 76 2.517(1.750–3.622) 1.531(0.648–3.613)
Yes 433 76 1.0 1.0
wash your hands after visited Toilet No 293 90 1.546(1.078–2.217) 0.651(0.337–1.255)
Yes 312 62 1.0 1.0
Availability of west disposal No 253 88 1.913(1.334–2.743) 0.862(0.361–2.061)
Yes 352 64 1.0 1.0
Media exposure not exposed 280 90 2.204(1.316–3.692) 1.901(0.695–5.199)
lowest exposed 54 18 2.286(1.132–4.617) 3.225(0.996–10.441)
moderately exposed 127 23 1.242(0.656–2.350) 2.169(0.764–6.160)
very often exposed 144 21 1.0 1.0
Food security Food secure 347 67 1.0 1.0
Food insecure 258 85 1.706(1.192–2.442) 1.951(1.008–3.779) *
Age category Early 183 65 2.263(1.380–3.711) 0.000(0.000–0.000)
Middle 250 60 1.529(0.933–2.506) 0.899(0.432–1.871)
Late 172 27 1.0 1.0
First menstruation 11 to 13 38 3 1.079(0.256–4.546) 2.101(0.470–9.383)
14 to 15 213 43 2.759(1.131–6.727) 3.048(1.223–7.6) *
16 to 17 82 6 1.0 1.0
Distance source water ≤30 546 126 1.0 1.0
>30 59 26 1.910(1.158–3.150) 1.660(0.649–4.247)
Adolescent education Primary 394 122 2.242(1.447–3.475) 1.523(0.808–2.871)
Secondary 210 29 1.0 1.0
Water treatment Untreated 251 78 1.487(1.040–2.124) 0.855(0.325–2.252)
Treated 354 74 1.0 1.0
Wealth index Lowest class 165 76 2.948(1.785–4.867) 2.215(1.008–4.864) *
Middle class 280 51 1.166(0.696–1.954) 0.581(0.228–1.483)
Upper class 160 25 1.0 1.0

* = p value<0.05, p value of Hosmer and Lemeshow test: 0.353.

Factors associated with thinness

The regression analysis revealed that rural adolescent girls s who were in the middle adolescent age were 3 times more likely to be thin as compared to adolescent girls in the late adolescent age [AOR: 3.67 (95% CI: 1.20, 11.15)] (Table 6).

Table 6. Bivariable and multivariable logistic regression of factors associated with thinness among rural school adolescent girls, 2020 (n = 376).

Variable Response Thinness COR (95% CI) AOR (95% CI)
No Yes
DDS Inadequate 256 27 1.856(0.694–4.968) 1.658(0.605–4.544)
Adequate 88 5 1.0 1.0
Age category Early adolescent 97 9 2.366(0.705–7.935) 2.753(0.812–9.330)
Middle adolescent 145 19 3.341(1.104–10.114) 3.665(1.205–11.149) *
Late adolescent 102 4 1.0 1.0
Distance source water ≤30 263 28 1.0 1.0
>30 81 4 0.464(0.158–1.362) 0.403(0.136–1.194)
Wealth index Lowest class 93 11 1.092(0.468–2.548) 1.118(0.458–2.730)
Middle class 131 8 0.564(0.226–1.407) 0.586(0.231–1.484)
Upper class 120 13 1.0 1.0

* = p value<0.05, p-value of Hosmer and Lemeshow test: 0.343.

Urban adolescent girls who were in the early age were 8 times more likely to be thin as compared to late adolescent age [AOR: 8.38 (95% CI: 2.48, 28.30)] (Table 7)

Table 7. Bivariable and multivariable logistic regression of factors associated with thinness among urban school adolescent girls, 2020 (n = 381).

Variable Response Thinness COR (95% CI) AOR (95% CI)
No Yes
Father education Unable to read and write 20 3 1.230(0.310–4.888) 1.112(0.267–4.631)
Read and write 90 21 1.913(0.851–4.302) 1.658(0.719–3.824)
Primary school 86 5 0.477(0.156–1.454) 0.511(0.163–1.597)
Secondary school 57 7 1.007(0.362–2.802) 1.321(0.456–3.825)
College and above 82 10 1.0 1.0
Age category Early 111 31 8.378(2.480–28.301) 8.378(2.480–28.301) ***
Middle 134 12 2.687(0.737–9.789) 2.687(0.737–9.789)
Late 90 3 1.0 1.0
Mother education Unable to read and write 69 9 1.728(0.505–5.919) 2.421(0.525–11.151)
Read and write 85 18 2.806(0.901–8.742) 3.256(0.803–13.209)
Primary 72 7 1.288(0.359–4.627) 1.512(0.356–6.430)
Secondary 56 8 1.893(0.538–6.657) 2.520(0.614–10.339)
College and above 53 4 1.0 1.0
Availability of latrine No 36 8 1.749(0.757–4.039) 1.317(0.502–3.455)
Yes 299 38 1.0 1.0
Wash hands after visited toilet No 135 14 0.648(0.333–1.260) 0.613(0.305–1.232)
Yes 200 32 1.0 1.0
Adolescent education Primary 183 40 5.537(2.286–13.412) 2.592(0.723–9.293)
Secondary 152 6 1.0 1.0
Wealth index Lower class 37 2 0.775(0.123–4.890) 1.256(0.170–9.285)
Middle class 255 41 2.305(0.683–7.775) 1.606(0.431–5.986)
Upper class 43 3 1.0 1.0

*** = p value<0.00, p-value of Hosmer and Lemeshow test: 0.901.

The regression model of overall adolescent girls who were from farmer mothers were 2.8 times more likely to be thin as compared to adolescent girls from merchant mothers [AOR: 2.85 (95% CI: 1.05, 7.71)]. Adolescent girls who were in the early and middle adolescence age were 4.7 [AOR: 4.73 (95% CI: 2.05, 10.91)] and 2.9 [AOR: 2.95, 95% CI: 1.26, 6.87)] times more likely to be thin, respectively, as compared to adolescent girls in the late adolescence age. Adolescent girls who were in the middle wealth class group were 1.9 times more likely to be thin as compared to adolescent girls in the upper wealth class group [AOR: 1.97 (95% CI: 1.04, 3.72)] (Table 8)

Table 8. Bivariable and multivariable logistic regressions of overall factors associated with overall thinness among school adolescent girls in Debark district, 2020 (n = 757).

Variable Response Thinness COR (95% CI) AOR (95% CI)
No Yes
Residence Urban 335 46 1.0 1.0
Rural 344 32 0.677(0.421–1.090) 0.803(0.337–1.913)
Father education Unable to read and write 136 15 0.949(0.408–2.207) 1.134(0.401–3.201)
Read and write 266 36 1.164(0.554–2.443) 1.190(0.477–2.969)
Primary school 127 8 0.542(0.206–1.428) 0.532(0.181–1.564)
Secondary school 64 9 1.209(0.464–3.149) 1.259(0.433–3.658)
College and above 86 10 1.0 1.0
Occupation of mother Government employee 63 6 0.608(0.219–1.688) 0.670(0.237–1.889)
Housewife 490 49 0.638(0.332–1.228) 1.046(0.521–2.099)
Farmer 43 10 1.485(0.602–3.663) 2.848(1.053–7.704) *
Merchant 83 13 1.0 1.0
Age category Early adolescent 208 40 5.275(2.308–12.056) 4.727(2.047–10.913) ***
Middle adolescent 279 31 3.048(1.315–7.063) 2.947(1.264–6.873) *
Late adolescent 192 7 1.0 1.0
Family size ≤5 249 35 1.0 1.0
>5 428 43 0.715(0.445–1.147) 0.813(0.495–1.335)
Adolescent education Primary 449 67 3.093(1.603-5-968) 1.798(0.830–3.895)
Secondary 228 11 1.0 0.137
Wealth index Lower class 226 15 0.701(0.337–1.458) 0.744(0.351–1.578)
Middle class 284 47 1.748(0.961–3.180) 1.967(1.041–3.718) *
Upper class 164 16 1.0 1.0

* = p value<0.05

*** = p value<0.001, p value of Hosmer and Lemeshow test: 0.403.

Discussion

This study illustrated the prevalence and associated factors of stunting and thinness among urban and rural adolescent girls. Accordingly, the overall prevalence of stunting and thinness was 20.1% (95% CI: 17.3, 23) and 10.3% (95% CI: 8.2%, 12.7%) respectively. Stunting was 24.2% and 16% among rural and urban adolescent girls, respectively. Besides, 12.1% of urban and 8.5% of rural girls were thin.

The overall prevalence of stunting was lower than studies conducted in West Bengal, India 32.5% [33], Rajabanshi, India 39% [34], Gondar 31.1% [35]. The West Bengal and Rajabanshi India’s studies enrolled entirely participants aged from 10 to 14 years-old who are believed to be highly prone to stunting [36]. As to the Gondar’s study, there is a time gap between the current study versus study conducted in Gondar. In the meantime, there was implementation of safetynet program and Sequota Declaration (a program designed to fight against malnutrition and its determinants in Ethiopia). Those interventions could reduce the findings in this study.

Nevertheless, it is higher than the finding from South Asia, 11.1% [37]. Besides, it is also higher than a study done in Nigeria 10% [38]. In Nigeria’s study most of the study participants were from urban residents that would impose less risk to develop stunting associated with better dietary practice, minimal work load, and awareness about feeding [9]. Furthermore, it’s higher than the finding studies done in Eastern Ethiopia Balile 15% [39]. This might be due to a variation in cultural practices and socio-demographic characteristics.

Likewise, the study revealed that thinness was 10.3% (95% CI: 8.2%, 12.7%). This finding is consistent with a study conducted in Aksum, Ethiopia 12.6% [13]. However, it is lower than a finding from South Asia 38.6% [37], Hyderabad, Pakistan 27% [40], and Islamabad 46% [41]. In Pakistan’s study adolescence in menstruation is prone to different risk factors like under-nutrition [42]. Besides, it is lower than finding from West Bengal, India 20.2% [33], and Rajabanshi, India16% [34]. The possible reason for the difference might be in the study of West Bengal and Rajabanshi, India were used early aged adolescents as a study participant, as a result of the early growth spurt seen in adolescent girls with a sudden increase in nutritional requirement in early age group [6]. Similarly, it is lower than finding from Southwest Nigeria 16% [43]. The Nigeria’s study was done only in rural adolescent girls but this study was done in both urban and rural areas. Furthermore, it is lower than finding from Ethiopian studies, Babile district 21.6% [24], Goba 20.9% [39], Adwa 21.4% [11], and Bale zone 13.6% [44]. This might be due to a difference in barriers in thinness such as cultural differences and other socio-demographic characteristics. Nevertheless, it is higher than a study conducted in Nigeria 5% [38]. This is possibly due to the difference in the study area. The study was conducted in one of the Nigeria state situated in the equatorial rain forest region which may have good nutrition access. Further, it could be associated with food culture practices among the two nations.

Adolescent girls lived in rural area are highly affected by stunting, 24.2% (95% CI: 20.2, 29) than those who are lived in urban area 16.0%(95% CI: 12.3%-19, 4%). This finding is supported by studies carried out in different areas of the world: a study conducted in South Asia’s ranges from 30 to 60% in rural whereas 15 to 39% in urban [37], west Bengal India 35.7% in rural and 29.0% in urban [33], other study in India ranges from 22.7% to 31.5% in rural and 17.6% to 29.4% in urban [45], Mizan tepi 40.95% in rural and 17.8% in urban [46].

This disparity might be due to adolescent girls in urban has a good intake of a diversified diet than their counterpart rural residents [47]. Besides, adolescent girls from rural area were more likely to live in a poor socioeconomic condition that might affect their dietary intake [48]. Similarly, poor health-seeking behavior in the rural residents might limit them from gaining access tonutrition services [47]. Intestinal parasitic infection are also common in rural inhabitant that would lead them to malabsorption, anemia, and other problem [49]. In general, this finding indicated that adolescent girls from rural settings are the most vulnerable for stunting that could further lead them to complications.

Similarly, 12.1% (95% CI: 8.9%, 15.5%) adolescent girls in urban area have experienced thinness. Whereas, 8.5% (95% CI: 5.6–11.4) of them from rural areas are thin. This finding is supported by a study in Rajasthan, India [45]. However, it contradicts with studies done in Adwa and Guyint [11, 25]. This disparity might be due to post-harvest weight gain since the data collection period of this study was in the post-harvest season while a study was done in Adwa and Goba was in pre-harvest season [50].

Overall adolescent girls from food insecure households near to two times more likely to be stunted which is supported by other local reports in Amhara national region [23], Dabat [12], Jimma [51]. It’s the fact that one of the underlying causes of under-nutrition is food insecurity [52, 53]. This implies food insecure individuals have been affected by stunting and exposing them to further complications like poor school performance and poor reproductive outcomes. It’s advised that accessing nutritious food for the destitute community would savage the lives of adolescent girls and their upcoming generations too.

In this study, the overall adolescent girls aged between 14 and 15 at first menstruation were three times more likely to be stunted as compared to those aged 16–17 at first menstruation. This may be due to early initiation of menstruation increased iron losses for a prolonged time which leads to reduce bone composition and bone mass [42]. Moreover, adolescent girls in menstruation experience decreased appetite [54]. The concerned body shall halt stunting during this critical period through diversified strategies such as iron supplementation and food fortification.

The overall adolescent girls who were in the lower wealth class group were two times more likely to be stunted as compared to those who are in the upper. Besides the finding also showed that rural adolescent girls who were in the lower wealth class and middle wealth class groups were 2.5 and 2 times respectively more likely to be stunted as compared to those in the upper wealth class group. This may be due to a reduction in the quantity of foods consumed and/or the replacement of higher-priced foods which are often less nutritious. Over a prolonged period, such changes may have adverse consequences for nutrition and a grave measure should be in place [55].

Likewise, rural adolescent girls who had lowest media exposure were five times more likely to be stunted. This finding consistent with a study done in rural community of Amhara national region [23]. Better media exposure would allow them to get better information about healthy eating and the consequences of poor dietary practices [56]. And it indicates that adolescent girls who did not have access to media exposure in rural settings had not get reliable and clear nutritional information.

In this study, rural adolescent girls who had no home latrine were two times higher odds of being stunted than those who had a home latrine. This finding was in agreement with another study in the rural community of Tigray [14]. It’s the fact that proper sanitation can reduce stunting by preventing diarrheal and parasitic diseases [57]. Thus, it’s indicated that it’s important to address environmental sanitation, particularly in a rural setting.

The finding also showed that the urban adolescent girls who were in the early adolescent age were three times more likely to be stunted as compared to those in the late adolescent age. This finding is in agreement with other studies in Bangladesh [58], Assam [59], kaver district, Nepal [60]. Early adolescence is explained by a rapid physical maturation and they would be stunted related with the imbalance requirement and supply [36, 61].

Correspondingly, overall adolescent girls who were from farmer mothers are near to three times more likely to be thin as compared to those adolescent girls from merchant mothers. A study conducted here in Ethiopia has shown a similar finding [25]. This could be farmer mothers are loaded by laborious work [62]. As well, lack of knowledge about adolescent nutrition [63].

In this study, urban adolescent girls who were in the early adolescent age were eight times more likely to be thin as compared to adolescent girls in the late adolescent age. This finding was in agreement with studies in India [64], and another study in urban area of India [33]. Likewise, rural adolescent girls who are in the middle adolescent age are three and half times more likely to be thin as compared to adolescent girls in the late adolescent age. This finding consistent with a study in a rural area of India [65], rural Bangladesh [58]. Girls tend to develop moderate to high levels of disorder of eating behavior refers to many disturbing eating patterns, affects the nutritional status of adolescent girls [66].

The overall adolescent girls from the family with middle wealth class are near to two times more likely to be thin as compared to those adolescent girls from the family upper wealth class. This finding is supported by another study in Aksum, Ethiopia [13]. Middle household wealth status reflects the poor long-term economic status of the household which leads to poor nutritional status [55].

Limitation of the study

The data collection period was in fasting season by Christian followers it might affect food frequency and dietary diversity factors.

Conclusion

The prevalence of stunting was higher among rural adolescent girls than urban adolescent girls unlike thinness that was higher among urban than rural adolescent girls. Lowest media exposure, availability of home latrine, and lower and middle wealth class are important factors contributing to stunting among rural adolescent girls. Early adolescent age is an important factor contributing to stunting among urban adolescent girls. Correspondingly, being middle-aged and early age adolescent girls are an important contributing factor for thinness among rural and urban adolescent girls respectively. It’s essential in targeting resources appropriately to raise the nutritional status the poor and the most vulnerable groups, including adolescent girls. Nutrition related media program for adolescents should be addressed through school mini-media, particularly in rural residences. Latrine coverage should be increased. In addition to ongoing efforts to fight child under nutrition, Ethiopia’s Federal Ministry of Health (FMOH) should focus on policies and strategies that favor females. Finally, better to do a longitudinal study about the reason for poor growth throughout the period of adolescence.

Supporting information

S1 Questionnaire. English version of questionnaire.

(DOCX)

S2 Questionnaire. Amharic version of questionnaire.

(DOCX)

S1 Data

(SAV)

Acknowledgments

The authors acknowledge the University of Gondar for securing ethical clearance for this study. We would like to extend our gratitude to the Debark Town Education Office for their support and individual households. The authors also acknowledge data collectors and supervisors.

List of abbreviation

BMI

Body Mass Index

CM

Centimeter

DDS

Dietary Diversity Score

EDHS

Ethiopian Demographic and Health Survey

FAO

Food and Agricultural Organization

FMOH

Federal Ministry of Health

HFIAS

Household Food Insecurity Access Scale

KG

Kilogram

KMO

Keiser Meyer Olkin

MDD

Minimum Dietary Diversity

NNP

National Nutrition Program

PCA

Principal Component Analysis

SDG

Sustainable Development Goal

WHO

World Health Organization

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

the author(s) received no specific fund for this work.

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Madhavi Bhargava

7 Apr 2021

PONE-D-21-06490

Undernutrition and Associated Factors among Adolescent Girls Attending School in the rural and urban districts of Debark town, Northwest Ethiopia: A community-based comparative cross-sectional study.

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Reviewer #1: Comments on manuscript entitled” Undernutrition and Associated Factors among Adolescent Girls Attending School in the rural and urban districts of Debark town, Northwest Ethiopia: A community-based comparative cross-sectional study”. PONE-D-21-06490

The authors assessed the association between the prevalence of undernutrition and different socio-demographic factors among school going adolescent girls of Debark district, Northwest Ethiopia.

I have the following few comments…

1. In the title, the authors mentioned as Adolescent Girls Attending School in the rural and urban districts of Debark town. It is not clear, whether Debark is town or district and whether Debark has rural and urban districts.

2. In abstract, total number of adolescent girls was mentioned as 792 in methodology and 757 in results. Need to clarify the same. Correct the error in spelling of stunting.

3. Page 10, line 3. Delete you in “low resistance to infection due you to low immunity”

4. Authors reported in methodology as—Lottery method was used to select 20% of the 51 schools. Thus, accordingly we need 10 schools; however, a total 13 schools were covered. Similarly, authors have not selected the schools proportionately. Authors need to explain whether they selected the number of schools purposively or there is any rationale behind it.

5. Authors selected 396 adolescent girls each from rural and urban areas. Here also authors have not followed the PPS method for selection of adolescent girls.

6. Discussion part is exhaustive. Need to condense the same

Reviewer #2: The topic is interesting and the findings are unique, it is a study that shows originality of the subject.

In the abstract: the data collection should not be written as indepth interview since the study design is not qualitative, it is a quantitative study. It is mentioned in the conclusion (in the abstract) that food insecurity associated with stunting and thinness, however this variable is not mentioned in the results (in the abstract).

In the introduction: The reason for conducting the study in adolescent nutrition is justified, however it should be better to add justification for investigating the disparities between urban and rural adolescent girls. Why we need to examine the disparities, what previous research tell about this? Is disparity between urban and rural become a big problem in Ethiopia?

In the method: The operational definition section provides detail explanation about each variable. The difference between moderately exposed and very often exposed is not clear, the cut off value for very often needs to be added.

Assessment of MDD requires respondents to report consumption of 10 food items, it needs explanation on what basis or consideration to choose/generate this list of foods?

The explanation of upper, middle, and lower class based on the quantiles in method section is not consistent with that described in narration of table 3 and 5 in the result section.

In the result: There is an error of typing drinking (dirking) water in table 2. Narration for table 3 mentions that adolescent girls who were in the lower and middle class experience stunting more than the upper class, referring the wealth index in the table (1st, 2nd, and 3rd quantile). This needs to be rechecked since in the method section, it is mentioned that 1st quantile as upper class, 2nd quantile as middle, and 3rd quantile as the lowest. It seems there is inconsistency for labelling the wealth class. The same problem with the narration of table 5. In table 6, wealth index uses different name of categories (i.e. lower, middle, late), I recommend to use same name of categories across tables.

In discussion: please provide practical implications based on the findings, for instance implication for policy or programs. I recommend to indicate contribution of this work to the scientific community.

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28 May 2021

Authors’ response to concerns of Editor and Reviewers

Dear Editor and Reviewers, we the authors of this article would be very happy to convey our deepest gratitude for your immense contribution - rigorous editorial and review concerns for which we will go one by one to make our manuscript suitable for publication in PLOS ONE journal. Therefore, we are going to respond the Editor, Reviewer #1 and Reviewer #2 concerns respectively as presented hereunder:

1. Editor concerns and Authors’ responses:

Editor concern: “1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming.”

Authors’ response: Dear Editor, in all parts of the revised manuscript, we have used PLOS ONE’s requirements for publication of manuscripts. All the changes have been presented in a manuscript with track changes and without track changes.

Editor concern: “2. Please provide additional details regarding participant consent. In the ethics statement in the Methods and online submission information, please ensure that you have specified what type you obtained (for instance, written or verbal, and if verbal, how it was documented and witnessed). If your study included minors, state whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians. If the need for consent was waived by the ethics committee, please include this information.

Once you have amended this/these statement(s) in the Methods section of the manuscript, please add the same text to the “Ethics Statement” field of the submission form (via “Edit Submission”).”

Authors’ response: Dear Editor, in the revised manuscript, we have included the details of participant consent in the ‘Methods and Materials’ section. Previously, the ethical statement was written as a separate section; but now it is being moved to the methods part. Therefore, all the ethical statement queries and changes have been presented in a manuscript with track changes and without track changes.

Editor concern: “3. Please state in your methods section whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians of the minors included in the study or whether the research ethics committee or IRB approved the lack of parent or guardian consent.”

Authors’ response: Dear Editor, in the revised manuscript, we have included the details of consent from parents or guardians of the minors included in the study in the ‘Methods and Materials’ section. Previously, the ethical statement of consent from guardians or parents of minors was written as we took assent from them; but now it is being moved to the methods part and written explicitly as per your recommendation. Therefore, all the ethical statement queries and changes about assent from guardians or parents of minors have been presented in a manuscript with track changes and without track changes.

Editor concern: “4. Please include additional information regarding the survey or questionnaire used in the study and ensure that you have provided sufficient details that others could replicate the analyses. For instance, if you developed a questionnaire as part of this study and it is not under a copyright more restrictive than CC-BY, please include a copy, in both the original language and English, as Supporting Information. Moreover, please include more details on how the questionnaire was pre-tested, and whether it was validated.”

Authors’ response: Dear Editor, in the revised manuscript, we have included the information regarding the survey or questionnaire used in the study. We have stated the tool availability both in Amharic and English, its pretest and validation process before the actual data collection. Therefore, all the changes have been presented in a manuscript with track changes and without track changes.

Editor concern: “5. We suggest you thoroughly copyedit your manuscript for language usage, spelling, and grammar. If you do not know anyone who can help you do this, you may wish to consider employing a professional scientific editing service.”

Authors’ response: Dear Editor, in the revised manuscript, we included an updated English language usage, spelling and grammar. We have given the manuscript for language edition and all the changes have been included in the manuscript with track changes and without track changes attached as supporting files.

Editor concern: “Your ethics statement should only appear in the Methods section of your manuscript. If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please move it to the Methods section and delete it from any other section. Please ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics statement entered into the online submission form will not be published alongside your manuscript.”

Authors’ response: Dear Editor, in the revised manuscript, the ethical statement it is being moved to the methods part only, and we have presented it in a manuscript with track changes and clean version.

Editor concern: “Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.”

Authors’ response: Dear Editor, in the revised manuscript, there is no any change that we made in the list of references.

2. Reviewer #1 concerns and Authors’ responses:

Reviewer concern: “1. In the title, the authors mentioned as Adolescent Girls Attending School in the rural and urban districts of Debark town. It is not clear, whether Debark is town or district and whether Debark has rural and urban districts.”

Authors’ response: Dear Reviewer, when we say, in the rural and urban districts of Debark, we mean that Debark is a districts with rural and urban areas in its administration.

Reviewer concern: “2. In abstract, total number of adolescent girls was mentioned as 792 in methodology and 757 in results. Need to clarify the same. Correct the error in spelling of stunting.”

Authors’ response: Dear Reviewer, in the abstract section of our manuscript, we mentioned 792 adolescent girls in the methodology part and while 757 in the results part. We would assume that these numbers are correctly stated in the abstract that 792 adolescent girls were the minimum sample size that was calculated while we design the research work. Whereas, on the field work, we actually collected the data from 757 adolescent girls that were included in the data analyses processes which would give us a response rate of 95.6%. That means 35 of our study participants were non-respondents.

The word ‘stunding’ in the original abstract is being corrected as ‘stunting’ in the revised version of the manuscript with track changes and without track changes.

Reviewer concern: “3. Page 10, line 3. Delete you in “low resistance to infection due you to low immunity”

Authors’ response: Dear Reviewer, the word ‘you’ in the original manuscript is being deleted in the revised version of the manuscript with track changes and without track changes.

Reviewer concern: “4. Authors reported in methodology as—Lottery method was used to select 20% of the 51 schools. Thus, accordingly we need 10 schools; however, a total 13 schools were covered. Similarly, authors have not selected the schools proportionately. Authors need to explain whether they selected the number of schools purposively or there is any rationale behind it.”

Authors’ response: Dear Reviewer, as you clearly mentioned, if we took 20% of 51 schools, they would have been 10 schools to cover all the sampling issue. However, the number of schools from rural districts (we took 9 from 44 schools) gave us enough number of adolescent girls as per the proportional allocation; whereas taking proportionately calculated schools from the urban districts (we would have taken 1 from 7 schools), the number of adolescent girls there not enough to cover the required sample size from urban districts. Referring to the World Health Organization Guideline for Sampling Design for Community-based studies recommends that the proportion of study population should not be below 20%. It also recommends that there is a possibility to increase more than this proportion. Therefore, we took 4 schools in the urban districts to meet the minimum sample size required for our study. Finally, the 4 urban schools were selected by lottery method among the available 7 schools there.

Reviewer concern: “5. Authors selected 396 adolescent girls each from rural and urban areas. Here also authors have not followed the PPS method for selection of adolescent girls.”

Authors’ response: Dear Reviewer, we have calculated the sample size of our study using a double population proportion formula where we used two different prevalence [Prevalence 1 (P1) for rural and Prevalence 2 (P2) for urban. This sample was calculated for a single group thereby we multiplied by two to get a sample of two settings. Moreover, we have used a 1:1 ratio of samples from rural and urban districts assuming that the we could get enough number of cases from the rural districts which was assumed have exposed for undernutrition. Finally, based on our ratio of samples, the overall sample size was divided equally for rural and urban districts.

Reviewer concern: “6. Discussion part is exhaustive. Need to condense the same”

Authors’ response: Dear Reviewer, the discussion part of our original manuscript is being condensed in the revised version of the manuscript with track changes and without track changes.

3. Reviewer #2 concerns and Authors’ responses:

Reviewer concern: “In the abstract: the data collection should not be written as in-depth interview since the study design is not qualitative, it is a quantitative study. It is mentioned in the conclusion (in the abstract) that food insecurity associated with stunting and thinness, however this variable is not mentioned in the results (in the abstract).”

Authors’ response: Dear Reviewer, in the abstract section of our original manuscript, the phrase ‘in-depth interview’ is being replaced by ‘face-to-face interview’; and the variable ‘food insecurity’ is being included in the ‘results’ section of the abstract. Both are available in the revised version of the manuscript with track changes and without track changes

Reviewer concern: “In the introduction: The reason for conducting the study in adolescent nutrition is justified, however it should be better to add justification for investigating the disparities between urban and rural adolescent girls. Why we need to examine the disparities, what previous research tell about this? Is disparity between urban and rural become a big problem in Ethiopia?”

Authors’ response: Dear Reviewer, we have planned and conducted a comparative cross-sectional (urban and rural disparity) study assuming that there are higher exposure variables for undernutrition among rural adolescents. Previous evidences didn’t show us the clear variation in undernutrition among urban and rural settings. Moreover, nearly 80% of Ethiopian population have been living in the countryside areas in which the there is high fertility rates and low socioeconomic status. Therefore, in the revised version of the manuscript, we have included the points you raised in a manuscript with track changes and without track changes.

Reviewer concern: “In the method: The operational definition section provides detail explanation about each variable. The difference between moderately exposed and very often exposed is not clear, the cut off value for very often needs to be added.”

Authors’ response: Dear Reviewer, the cut off value for ‘moderately exposed’ was ‘the highest value of all the three indicators is 2, i.e., at least once a week to any one or all of the indicators; whereas the cut of value for ‘very often exposed’ was ‘the highest value of all of the three indicators is 3, i.e., very often exposed to any one or all of the indicators. Therefore, in the revised version of the manuscript, we have included these cuts of values as in a manuscript with track changes and without track changes.

Reviewer concern: “Assessment of MDD requires respondents to report consumption of 10 food items, it needs explanation on what basis or consideration to choose/generate this list of foods?”

Authors’ response: Dear Reviewer, the Dietary Diversity Questionnaire (DDQ) were prepared based on the items presented in the Food and Agricultural Organization (FAO) Guideline 2016. Therefore, the list of food items was taken from this guideline and data were collected using this standard questionnaire.

Reviewer concern: “The explanation of upper, middle, and lower class based on the quantiles in method section is not consistent with that described in narration of table 3 and 5 in the result section.”

Authors’ response: Dear Reviewer, in the revised version of the manuscript, we have used a consistent categorization of wealth status as upper, middle and lower classes; and the changes were presented in a manuscript with track changes and without track changes.

Reviewer concern: “In the result: There is an error of typing drinking (dirking) water in table 2. Narration for table 3 mentions that adolescent girls who were in the lower- and middle-class experience stunting more than the upper class, referring the wealth index in the table (1st, 2nd, and 3rd quantile). This needs to be rechecked since in the method section, it is mentioned that 1st quantile as upper class, 2nd quantile as middle, and 3rd quantile as the lowest. It seems there is inconsistency for labelling the wealth class. The same problem with the narration of table 5. In table 6, wealth index uses different name of categories (i.e., lower, middle, late), I recommend to use same name of categories across tables.”

Authors’ response: Dear Reviewer, in the revised version of the manuscript, we have changed the word ‘dirking’ as ‘drinking’ and in all section of the results part of the manuscript, we have used a consistent categorization of wealth status as upper, middle and lower classes; and the changes were presented in a manuscript with track changes and without track changes.

Reviewer concern: “In discussion: please provide practical implications based on the findings, for instance implication for policy or programs. I recommend to indicate contribution of this work to the scientific community.”

Authors’ response: Dear Reviewer, in the revised version of the manuscript, we have included the implication of our work for policy, program and scientific community. The changes were presented in a manuscript with track changes and without track changes.

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Decision Letter 1

Madhavi Bhargava

22 Jun 2021

Undernutrition and Associated Factors among Adolescent Girls Attending School in the rural and urban districts of Debark town, Northwest Ethiopia: A community-based comparative cross-sectional study.

PONE-D-21-06490R1

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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6 Aug 2021

PONE-D-21-06490R1

Under nutrition and Associated Factors among Adolescent Girls Attending School in the  rural and urban districts of Debark, Northwest Ethiopia: A community-based comparative cross-sectional study.

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