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. 2021 Aug 20;16(8):e0256286. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0256286

Classifying California’s stream thermal regimes for cold-water conservation

Ann D Willis 1,*,#, Ryan A Peek 1,#, Andrew L Rypel 1,2
Editor: João Carlos Nabout3
PMCID: PMC8378740  PMID: 34415917

Abstract

Stream temperature science and management is rapidly shifting from single-metric driven approaches to multi-metric, thermal regime characterizations of streamscapes. Given considerable investments in recovery of cold-water fisheries (e.g., Pacific salmon and other declining native species), understanding where cold water is likely to persist, and how cold-water thermal regimes vary, is critical for conservation. California’s unique position at the southern end of cold-water ecosystems in the northern hemisphere, variable geography and hydrology, and extensive flow regulation requires a systematic approach to thermal regime classification. We used publicly available, long-term (> 8 years) stream temperature data from 77 sites across California to model their thermal regimes, calculate three temperature metrics, and use the metrics to classify each regime with an agglomerative nesting algorithm. Then, we assessed the variation in each class and considered underlying physical or anthropogenic factors that could explain differences between classes. Finally, we considered how different classes might fit existing criteria for cool- or cold-water thermal regimes, and how those differences complicate efforts to manage stream temperature through regulation. Our results demonstrate that cool- and cold-water thermal regimes vary spatially across California. Several salient findings emerge from this study. Groundwater-dominated streams are a ubiquitous, but as yet, poorly explored class of thermal regimes. Further, flow regulation below dams imposes serial discontinuities, including artificial thermal regimes on downstream ecosystems. Finally, and contrary to what is often assumed, California reservoirs do not contain sufficient cold-water storage to replicate desirable, reach-scale thermal regimes. While barriers to cold-water conservation are considerable and the trajectory of cold-water species towards extinction is dire, protecting reaches that demonstrate resilience to climate warming remains worthwhile.

Introduction

Water temperature influences many biological, physical, and chemical processes in stream ecosystems [13]. While some research explores the behavioral response of aquatic organisms across stream temperature thresholds, particularly in a regulatory or management context [e.g., 4,5], other work considers annual stream temperature patterns, or thermal regimes, to characterize the dynamics between stream temperature and aquatic ecosystems [2,4]. Analogous to flow regimes, thermal regimes characterize the magnitude, frequency, duration, timing, and rate of change in water temperature [5]. An annual time series of water temperature data defines a thermal regime for a specific location, whereas thermal landscapes consider the pattern of thermal regimes over an entire region [4,6]. Thermal regime research from the refugia- to reach-scale has explored the relationship between the timing, magnitude, and extent of exposure to both elevated and cool water temperatures for limits to and overall productivity of aquatic ecosystems [711].

Given overall trends of stream warming due to climate change, the constriction and loss of habitat that supports coldwater species, such as salmonids, is a particular concern in land and water management [8,1214]. Globally, warming of thermal landscapes are a direct product of climate change [1517]. Across the United States, projections show nearly 50% of cold-water habitat could be lost due to climate change [8,18], though this decline varies widely depending on species, their thermal constraints, and landscape resistance to dispersal [18]. These changes are compounded by the regulation effects of dams. For example, changes in the timing and magnitude of peak temperatures caused by climate warming and dam regulation in the Columbia River and its tributaries have contributed to declining salmon populations [12,19]. For freshwater aquatic organisms, regulated thermal regimes alter important cues and processes for life-history strategies that evolved in unregulated regimes [7,2022].

Ecosystem classification frameworks are an important tool for facilitating improved natural resource conservation [2326]. Classification tools assist in more accurate analysis and comparisons of ecosystems and provide a science-based language for communication with stakeholders and policy makers. For example, given limited resources and the desire to target conservation investments for maximum environmental benefits [27], identifying long-term, viable cold-water habitats is critical [14]. Thermal regime modelling and classification has been widely used to characterize spatial and temporal thermal variability within and across watersheds and regions [2833]. However, natural resource management agencies in the United States have struggled to integrate concepts of thermal regimes and landscapes into strategies that target species of conservation or economic importance [6].

In California, cold-water conservation is complicated by geography and engineering. California’s Mediterranean climate includes extreme climatic and hydrologic variability [34]. At the southern extent of many cold-water fish species in the northern hemisphere, climate warming is likely to shrink the extent of unregulated cold-water habitat [35]. But unregulated reaches account for a small fraction of existing cold-water habitat: over 1,400 dams are on streams relevant to native fish conservation, making available habitat highly regulated [36]. However, despite numerous engineering studies that suggest dams ban be operated to achieve desirable thermal regimes [3739], few of these studies test those operational hypotheses against the extensive work (that primarily exsts in the ecological research community] around thermal regimes necessary to support aquatic ecosystems [6,20,4042].

In California, this scientific dissonance combines with its geographic vulnerability to climate change to create a powerful confluence of ambitious ecosystem goals for highly regulated streams with severe consequences if they are not achieved [43,44]. Water management and land use changes have already changed thermal regimes throughout the state, with warmer temperatures reducing the distribution and survival of cold-water fish species [45]. Previous studies of thermal regimes for cold-water ecosystems in California have generally neglected regulated reaches [8,24,31,35], and either explored California as part of a national analysis [8,31] or have focused on a specific region within the state [35,39,40,46]. Where studies have explored the effects of dams, the results suggest that they produce variable thermal regimes depending on size, the ability to selectively withdraw water depending on temperature (i.e., whether a dam possesses the necessary infrastructure to adjust the depth at which it draws water for releases), and operational objective(s) [47,48]; these regulated thermal regimes may or may not align with existing, unregulated regimes. In addition, methods used for some of these analyses rely on numerical modelling [35,39] or costly data collection [40]: resource-intensive approaches that are impractical for a statewide analysis. Other approaches that require less data (< 5 years) or are computationally efficient bring considerable uncertainty in the results [8,42,49].

This study develops a stream classification framework for California’s thermal regimes that allows for rapid identification of stream reaches with cool- and cold-water thermal regimes. In doing so, several fundamental questions related to cold-water conservation are are addressed. First, what constitutes a cold-water thermal regime, and how does it vary across a region? Second, do dams reset the longitudinal evolution of thermal regimes along a streamscape? Finally, can dams be used to manage and replicate desirable cold-water regimes? While this study focuses on cold-water habitat in California, the results can be applied to any region and ecosystem to explore how their thermal regimes may be distinct from alternative locations. The study results can help evaluate which stream reaches should be targeted for cold-water conservation. In addition, these results can be used to assess alternatives, such as whether regulated reaches are suitable trade-offs to historical conditions in unregulated habitat.

Data and methods

Data sources and site selection criteria

Stream temperature data were used to model the thermal regime for 77 stream sites throughout California. Data were downloaded from the United States Geological Survey (USGS) and California Data Exchange Center (CDEC), publicly accessible databases. Monitoring sites were initially filtered to exclude those in the Sacramento-San Joaquin Delta region to focus the analysis on freshwater thermal regimes and minimize the influence of tidal dynamics. Recent studies have recommended at least 8 to 12 years of continuous, daily average temperature data to reduce uncertainty from interannual variability [32,33]. Monitoring stations were filtered to identify those with at least 8 years of daily average stream temperature data to balance the desire for reduced uncertainty with sufficient spatial representation. Additional data were used from a long-term (10-year) monitoring network in the Shasta River watershed in Siskiyou County, northern California [46,50,51]. Final sites were located in 7 of 10 hydrologic regions of the state (as defined by the California Department of Water Resources: North Coast, North Lahontan, Sacramento River, San Francisco Bay, San Joaquin River, South Lahontan, Tulare Lake); no sites in the southern range of the state (Central Coast, South Coast, and Colorado River) had sufficient periods of record for our analysis. All data were reviewed to remove flagged data (per USGS and CDEC standards) and obvious outliers; the remaining years with a minimum of 8 daily average temperature observations for each day were used in the study. Any data gaps or missing values were not filled; the data was used as is. Daily average stream temperatures were calculated from sub-daily data sets using R (version 4.0) with RStudio [52,53].

Thermal regime modelling and classification

Thermal regime modelling used the mosaic package in R [54]. The reviewed datasets were used to calculate annual thermal regimes, defined by the daily mean temperature for each day of the water year (October 1 through September 30). Annual thermal regimes were modelled with a sine function [29,30]:

Tw=a+bsin2π365(n+no)

where Tw is water temperature, n is the day of water year, and a, b, and no are coefficients that correspond to annual mean, annual amplitude, and phase (Fig 1). Coefficients a, b, and no were optimized using least square regression. Model fitness for each site was quantified using residual standard error; values closer to zero indicated better fit. Modelled thermal regimes were classified based on clustering and statistical analysis methods developed in Maheu et al. [31], which are briefly summarized here: mean, amplitude (i.e., the difference between the annual mean and annual maximum water temperature), and phase (i.e., day of water year when annual maximum occurs) metrics were calculated from each thermal regime model (Fig 1), then classified using Ward’s method, an agglomerative nesting algorithm. Each class comprises a cluster of individual sites, and is defined based on unique features of the clustering parameters (e.g, a cluster of sites in a class all show similar annual variability and amplitudes that are distinct from the other classes). The number of classes was determined using Calinski and Harabasz’s (CH) index and the sum of squares (“Elbow”) method [55]. In addition, we used the silhouette method to validate the appropriate number of classes [56]. Classes were examined for stability using the Jaccard coefficient, with stable clusters indicated by coefficients greater than 0.75 [57]. Clustering and statistical indices were computed using R packages cluster [58], factoextra [59], and fpc [60].

Fig 1. A thermal regime model fit to observed data.

Fig 1

This example uses data from USGS site 11390500 (Sacramento River below Wilkins Slough near Grimes, CA). Cluster analysis is based on annual mean, amplitude, and phase metrics for each thermal regime model. Amplitude and phase are analogous to annual maximum and day of annual maximum metrics. Figure adapted with permission from Maheu et al. [31]: Fig 1.

To further assess the relationship between each thermal metric and a given cluster, we used principal components analysis to describe the variation associated with each metric (annual mean, amplitude, and phase). We visualized the distribution of the clusters with an ordination plot of the first two principal components from the analysis, grouped by cluster. We examined relative contributions of each parameter to each principal component to determine which was more important to final clustering results. We also used the Principal Components Analysis (PCA) to identify the centroid of each cluster; then, we calculated the distance of each cluster member relative to the centroid of its respective cluster to identify weak members. For each thermal regime class, a histogram was made to examine the distribution of distance to centroid across all members. Weak members were defined as sites located furthest from the centroid. Additional clustering analysis was done using the same methods to assess whether weak thermal class members had fundamentally different dynamics that were lost in higher-order clustering, or were simply geographically distant from strong members in the same gradient or regime.

Influence of dam regulation

Dam regulation effects were examined by quantitatively and qualitatively assessing thermal regime patterns downstream of dams. The discontinuity distance downstream of a dam depends on many factors, including dam size, location on a river (e.g., headwaters versus lower reaches), operational objectives, and release strategy (e.g. hypolimnial release; [21]). Previous research showed that large dams in California’s Central Valley often influence thermal regimes 30–60 km downstream of release outlets [20,39]; Shasta Dam, impounding California’s largest reservoir, was shown to influence temperature patterns up to 250 km downstream [61]. Because varied dam sizes and reaches with multiple dams may show varied effects, histograms were generated for each thermal regime using sites that were within mainstem reaches 100 km or less downstream of a dam. Finally, thermal regimes in these regulated reaches were examined for member strength of each below-dam site to its respective regime class. We compared the distance of each site to its respective upstream dam to its strength as a member to its cluster as quantified by the PCA.

Results

Modelling results showed a reasonable sine curve fit for all sites included in the study (all model results, including regime classification and calculated metrics, and site metadata are included in S1 Table). Of the 77 sites, 53 had residual standard errors < 1.0°C, and all but two had residual standard errors < 2.0°C (Fig 2). Poorer model fits tended to occur at sites with greater temperature variability.

Fig 2. Histograms of residual standard error, grouped by thermal class.

Fig 2

The clustering analysis showed California’s thermal regimes were best divided into either three or five classes. An inspection of each result showed that k = 3 produced generally coarse groupings with little insight to the nuances of various thermal regimes. The five-class system was preferred due to its strong coefficients (Ward’s agglomerative coefficient = 0.96; CH index ranked k = 5 next favorable behind k = 3), and more refined characterization of the thermal landscape.

The two principal components represent different orthogonal variation of the three parameters (annual mean, annual amplitude, and phase), and together accounted for 88.6% of the total variation in the temperature data ([15], Fig 3A). PC1 was most correlated with annual mean temperature (46.6% variance explained) and annual amplitude (46.8%) in a thermal regime; PC2 was most strongly correlated with the effect of phase (93.4%). The five clusters generally represent unique combinations of thermal regime characteristics, with the exception of groups 2 and 4. Groups 1 and 3 were the least variable as expressed by Jaccard coefficients (Jc) of 0.86 and 0.95, respectively. Groups 2 and 4 had considerable overlap, and were more variable (Jc = 0.63 and 0.59, respectively); Group 5 was similarly variable (Jc = 0.63). Despite this instability, further examination of results showed a strong physical basis for each grouping. An examination of the elbow and silhouette results also supported k = 5 as the appropriate number of clusters (Fig 3B and 3C).

Fig 3. Results of the clustering analysis.

Fig 3

a) California’s thermal regimes were grouped into five clusters, with the centroid of each cluster marked by relatively larger symbols designated for each cluster. The inflection points at k = 5 in the b) elbow and c) silhouette analyses further support the selected groupings.

Because group 1 had a single member (USGS gage 10265150, Hot Creek in South Lahontan hydrologic region), it was not included in the weak-member analysis. Of group 5’s two members, the Shasta Dam outlet (SHD) was almost twice as far from the group’s centroid (43.2 units away from the centroid) as the other member, a groundwater-fed spring source (BSC_spring, 22 units; Fig 3). The remaining groups showed tighter membership around their centroids. The cluster plot of group 2 showed that most members were on the perimeter of the cluster, with distances from the centroid ranging 0.5–6.3 units, suggesting a highly variable range of member strength to the cluster. Group 3 was tightly distributed around its centroid (4.0–7.8 units) despite having a larger population (n = 30). Group 4 was slightly more dispersed, with member distances from the centroid ranging 3.3–8.6 units; unlike groups 2 and 3, members were scattered both within the cluster and around the perimeter. When sites were reclassified to allow for additional clusters (k = 6), all groups retained the same membership except group 4, which split into two clusters (n = 20 and n = 12).

Thermal regimes were plotted by the five original clusters and named based on patterns in mean annual maximum temperatures (T¯max > 20°C was warm; 15°C > T¯max > 20°C cool; T¯max <15°C cold) and their relative annual variability (Fig 4A). Groundwater-fed springs each established their own thermal regimes (stable cold and stable warm), differing in magnitude and timing of annual maximum temperature. The stable warm class was populated by a single site, with the warmest annual maximum and mean temperatures (T¯max = 28.7°C, T¯mean of 27.2°C), and the latest day of annual maximum (DOWY = 353, Sept. 19; Fig 4A–4C; Table 1). As this thermal regime described only one site, no assessment could be made of potential variability in this regime. The stable cold regime similarly described a groundwater-fed site, as well as the outlet of Shasta Dam. In contrast to the stable warm regime, the stable cold regime showed the coolest average annual maximum and mean water temperatures (T¯max = 11.9°C, T¯mean = 11.1°C), and the earliest day of annual maximum (DOWY = 89, Dec. 22; Fig 4A–4C; Table 1). The two members of this regime showed little variability in annual maximum and mean temperatures, but high variability in the timing of the annual maximum: at Shasta Dam outlet, the annual maximum occurred on DOWY 16 (Oct. 17); at the groundwater spring, it occurred on DOWY 148 (Feb. 26, S1 Table). Interestingly, the thermal regime at the Shasta Dam outlet showed the same annual pattern as the stable warm groundwater spring, while the stable cold groundwater spring showed a generally uniform temperature throughout the water year (Fig 4A).

Fig 4. Thermal regime models and metrics.

Fig 4

a) Classified models and box plots of b) annual mean, c) day of annual maximum, and d) annual amplitude; based on Maheu et al. [31]: Fig 3, with permission. Thermal regimes were characterized based on their mean annual maximum (warm, cool, or cold) and relative annual variability. The number of members for each class (n) is as follows: Stable warm (n = 1), variable warm (n = 30), variable cool (n = 12), stable cool (n = 32), stable cold (n = 2).

Table 1. A summary of thermal regime classes.

Thermal regime class summaries include the number of members (n); average annual maximum and mean water temperatures; and day of annual maximum.

Thermal regime n Average annual maximum (°C) Average annual mean (°C) Day of annual maximum: DOWY* (Date)
Stable warm 1 28.7 27.2 353 (Sept 19)
Variable warm 30 24.0 16.4 295 (Jul 23)
Variable cool 12 16.9 9.8 305 (Aug 2)
Stable cool 32 15.7 12.1 309 (Aug 6)
Stable cold 2 11.9 11.1 89 (Dec 22)

*DOWY = Day of Water Year.

The variable warm regime included 30 sites, with a T¯max = 24.0°C (DOWY = 295, Jul. 23) and T¯mean = 16.4°C (Table 1). This thermal regime showed the highest range of annual amplitude (Fig 4D) and second highest annual mean temperature (Fig 4B), both of which illustrated widely variable ranges. Of the classes with multiple members, the variable warm regime had the most consistent day of annual maximum, ranging from DOWY 287–298 (Jul. 15–Jul. 26), with a single site showing its day of annual maximum on DOWY 319 (Aug. 16 at site SCQ, the Tule River at the outlet of Success Dam; S1 Table).

The stable cool regime included 32 sites, with a T¯max = 15.7°C (DOWY 309, Aug. 6) and T¯mean = 12.1°C. While the stability was observed in terms of the overall range of annual temperatures across this thermal regime (Fig 4A, Table 1), each classifying metric showed variability across the regime’s member sites. The variable cool regime included 12 sites, with a T¯max = 16.9°C (DOWY 305, Aug. 2) and T¯mean = 9.8°C (Table 1). In contrast with the stable cool regime, the variable cool regime had a greater variable annual temperature pattern (i.e., the range of temperatures illustrated by the annual trend), but less variable range of annual maximum and mean temperatures, and day of annual maximum.

With the exception of the stable warm regime (which only described a single site), each regime occurred in several hydrologic regions and multiple thermal regimes occurred between the headwaters and mouth of each watershed (Figs 5 and 6, Table 2). Stable cold regimes were found in the North Coast and Sacramento River hydrologic regions; the variable warm and stable cool regimes occurred in the North Coast, Sacramento River, San Francisco Bay, San Joaquin River, and Tulare Lake hydrologic regions. The variable cool regime occurred in the North Coast, North Lahontan, Sacramento River, and San Joaquin River hydrologic regions. The frequency of variable warm sites increased towards inland, southern areas. While the North Coast and Sacramento River hydrologic regions had the same number of stable cool and stable cold sites (n = 12 and n = 1, respectively), the Sacramento River had more variable warm (n = 9 versus n = 3) and fewer variable cool (n = 2 versus n = 4) sites (Table 2). These differences increased in the San Joaquin River hydrologic region, with 15 variable warm sites and 8 stable cold; however, the San Joaquin had more variable cool sites than the Sacramento River (n = 3 versus n = 2).

Fig 5. Map of classified thermal regimes and dams located upstream of study sites in California.

Fig 5

Dotted lines show the borders of California’s hydrologic regions as defined by the state Department of Water Resources.

Fig 6.

Fig 6

Panels of thermal regimes below a) Shasta, b) Lewiston, c) New Melones, d) Friant, and e) Success dams. See Fig 5 for location of each inset map in the study area.

Table 2. Thermal regimes in each hydrologic region.

Hydrologic regions are defined the California Department of Water Resources; the Central Coast, South Coast, and Colorado River are not included as no study sites were located in those regions.

Stable warm Variable warm Stable cool Variable cool Stable cold
North Coast 0 3 12 4 1
North Lahontan 0 0 0 3 0
Sacramento River 0 9 12 2 1
San Francisco Bay 0 2 0 0 0
San Joaquin River 0 15 8 3 0
South Lahontan 1 0 0 0 0
Tulare Lake 0 1 0 0 0

The relative location of a site to a dam appeared to influence its thermal regime more than its hydrologic region. In general, sites upstream of reservoirs or in unregulated tributaries tended to have a variable cool thermal regime; stable cool regimes often occurred at dam outlets and extended downstream before transitioning to variable warm regimes (Figs 5 and 6). The outlet of Shasta Dam and Success Dam were two exceptions: Shasta Dam produced a stable cold regime at its outlet, while Success Dam (the southern-most site analyzed) produced a variable warm regime (Fig 6A and 6E). Above California’s Central Valley rim dams, thermal regimes were exclusively variable cool. In the Central Valley, stable warm regimes generally occurred in the mainstem Sacramento and San Joaquin rivers, despite stable cool regimes in their respective upstream tributaries.

In addition, the length of stream reach affected by an upstream dam varied. Stable cool regimes tended to occur closer to dams, while sites with variable warm regimes were more frequently farther away (Fig 7). Below Shasta, Lewiston, and New Melones dams, stable cool regimes were observed tens of kilometers downstream (Fig 4A–4C). New Melones produced a stable cold thermal regime 83 km below its outlet (site 11303000), the farthest range of influence observed below any of the dams included in this study (Figs 6C and 7). Success and Black Butte dams produced the shortest distance downstream to variable warm thermal regimes at 0.6 km and 1.9 km, respectively (Fig 5E; Black Butte panel not shown). The remaining dams could maintain stable cool regimes at least 40 km downstream from their outlets before transitioning to variable warm regimes (Fig 7).

Fig 7. Histogram of thermal regime location relative to nearest upstream dam.

Fig 7

Discussion

What constitutes a cold-water thermal regime?

In ecological terms, “cool” and “cold” are typically used to classify species based on temperatures that support optimal growth, and are often simplified to static thresholds. These thresholds vary by region: one study identified 10–15°C for cold-water fishes, 21°C for cool, and 30°C for warm in the Great Lakes region [62]; another suggested <20°C, 20–28°C, and >28°C for more general cold, cool, and warm-water optima [63]. Other studies use additional criteria to classify thermal regimes [6,31,41], but still rely on threshold-based definitions for cool and cold. Our results show that, based on criteria developed by Rahel and Olden [63], all but two of California’s thermal regimes would be considered cold; yet these supposedly equivalent cold regimes demonstrate a range of ecological performance related to targeted cold-water species objectives [64]. Regulatory guidance has trended toward more temporally refined thresholds based on target species and their life histories [65]. This analysis used three metrics to characterize annual trends and can be applied as a useful first step to identify desirable areas for cold-water management. Other studies show how additional metrics and short-term variability are useful to assess thermal regimes and their relationship to ecological function [6,41,42], which would be key factors in developing conservation strategies to support process-based thermal regime management. Refined classification, whether based on variability [31], geography [41], or some other feature, are important to distinguish thermal regimes that would otherwise be considered uniformly supportive of cold-water ecosystems using a threshold system.

In addition to developing a classification that captures the range of variability of California’s cool- and cold-water regimes, our objective was to provide a classification to support conservation decisions. To this end, the geographic scope of analysis showed important differences from other studies. Interestingly, our results showed more thermal classes for unregulated reaches when California was analyzed as a state as compared to national or regional analyses [31]. Five thermal classes were defined for unregulated sites, compared to three identified by Maheu et al. [31]. Two of those five classes were considered warm (both stable and variable), while the national analysis resulted in only cool and cold regimes in California. Some of these differences are explained by the inclusion of groundwater-dominated sites in this study, which accounted for two of the five classes. However, other sites that had been classified as cool (or stable) in the national analysis were reclassified as warm (or variable) in our analysis. Isaak et al. [41], which classified thermal regimes in California as part of the western U.S., identified five regime classes in California, though none represented groundwater and showed less diversty in hydrologic regions like the North Coast.

These results show the importance of geographic scope when developing a conservation strategy. Salmonids and other cold-water species have been documented as far south as Mexico [66], indicating that cool- and cold-water regimes extend further south than shown in this study. Though data gaps were not filled in this analysis, recent interpolation methods show promising utility for stream temperature records [67], which could potentially increase the number of sites included in the analysis and expand the geographic scope. Finally, while USGS and CDEC databases have many long-term temperature datasets, and temperature monitoring tends to focus on short-term summer periods, additional data may be available through other public, crowd-sourced sites as more comprehensive temperature data are collected [68].

The five-class system revealed nuanced differences between cool- and cold regimes, and highlighted the importance of groundwater-fed streams to support cold-water conservation. While agglomerative nesting showed comparable statistical strength of classifying California’s thermal regimes into three or five classes, fewer classes may be an oversimplification not necessarily useful for management decisions, which typically occur at state or local levels. Research by Null et al. [35] found that thermal regimes of California’s western Sierra Nevada rivers did not show the same shifts in desirable cold water habitat as in national-scale studies. Because California rests at the southern edge of the geographic range of many cold-water species [45], has diverse geographic and hydrologic streamscapes [34], and is strongly influenced by dam regulation [36], having high resolution of its thermal regimes and effects of regulation is desirable for conservation planning and investment. Thus, while three classes had slightly stronger statistical support, five classes provided more insightful differences between cool- and cold-water thermal regimes, particularly relative to groundwater and dam releases.

Warm and cold groundwater-fed springs accounted for two of California’s five thermal regimes: stable warm and stable cold. Although each class contained a single groundwater-fed site, these regimes illustrated a unique thermal pattern dominated by groundwater-fed spring sources. The stable cold regime, which included both a groundwater-fed spring and the outlet of Shasta Dam, was relatively unstable as indicated by its Jaccard coefficient and large spread of members from the cluster centroid. Additional data describing stable cold sources would improve understanding of this regime by indicating whether it is a stable class with high variability (which would account for the large spread of the initial two members) or better broken down into separate classes, possibly defined by large groundwater-fed springs and dams with large cold-water storage volumes. Despite studies that have classified thermal regimes in California [31,41], none explicitly identified thermal regimes for spring-fed sites in the state. However, the presence of “slightly thermal” groundwater-fed streams in California [50,69] suggests that such a class may be more prevalent than currently known. A separate, stable cold class dominated by releases from reservoirs, though, is unlikely given the dearth of reservoirs in California with the cold-water capacity comparable to Shasta Reservoir.

Do dams “reset” the longitudinal pattern of a stream’s thermal regimes?

Our study shows that dams do not reset thermal regimes: rather, they create discontinuities characterized by artificial regimes. These dynamics may persist for 10s-100s km downstream from a dam’s outlet [47,61], and tend to be compounded by multiple upstream dams (S2 Table). Differences between regulated and unregulated thermal regimes (excluding groundwater-dominated regimes) are illustrated by their annual magnitudes and variability. Variable cool regimes occurred exclusively in unregulated reaches, had more variable annual patterns (i.e., warmer annual maximums and cooler minimums), and had more predictable annual means, maximums, and day of annual maximum than stable cool regimes in regulated reaches. As a result of this variability, the sine model was a poorer fit for unregulated sites compared to regulated sites. Regulated thermal regimes showed the opposite trend. Stable cool regimes were strongly influenced by upstream dams and showed less annual variability, but higher variability among the three classifying metrics. Thus, although the overall annual temperature pattern was more stable in regulated reaches, the annual mean, annual maximum, and day of annual maximum varied more within this regime than in variable warm and cool regimes. This variability may relate to storage capacity, operational objectives, geography, or degree of regulation [36,41,48]. Stable cool regimes transitioned to variable warm regimes as the downstream distance from a dam increased. Variable warm regimes were generally at least 40 km downstream of dam outlets and may reflect a transition from regulated influences to dynamic equilibrium, when stream temperatures are dominated by heat flux due to ambient meteorological conditions [61].

The influence of dams and stable cool thermal regimes was further strengthed once factors like degree of regulation were taken into account. Grantham et al. [36] quantified the degree of regulation for California streams for both individual dams and cumulative number of dams above stream segments. The results for stable cool thermal regimes coincided with reaches that were strongly altered, specifically due to dams (alteration was defined as degree of regulation > = 1; see S2 Table). This extensive downstream effect of dam regulation begs the question of what a thermal regime’s natural evolution from headwater to lowland equilibrium may have looked like, and whether dams have eliminated an important transitional reach for temperature-sensitive ecosystem function. Additional analysis of thermal regimes given modeled, unregulated stream temperatures (e.g., [35]) could show the historic fate of thermal regimes over stream reaches currently dominated by dam releases and identify if the transition to equilibrium included regimes similar to those produced downstream of dams, or a more gradual shift in annual mean from variable cool to variable warm regimes.

Most notably, while stable cool regimes successfully mitigated elevated summer stream temperatures, they similarly constrained winter minimum temperatures and maintained artificially warm conditions. Research on the effects of dam regulation on stream temperatures tends to focus on the summer season [47], when elevated stream temperatures may lead to stress or increased mortality of cold-water species [12,45]. Fewer studies have focused on the negative effects of sustained periods of elevated winter temperatures on cold-water species [70]; we are unaware of studies that focus on the potential to replicate colder winter patterns with dam regulation.

Can dams be managed to replicate desirable cold-water regimes?

In stream reaches that lack a resilience to climate warming, cool- and cold-water habitat may be unachievable through dam regulation. In particular, the stable cool regime may present the greatest challenge to cold water conservation as it generally lacks the cooler winter temperatures of unregulated variable cool regimes. One notable result was the classification of the Shasta Dam outlet (site SHD)–the only reservoir to produce a stable cold thermal regime. At 4.6 million acre feet (MAF), Shasta Lake is California’s largest reservoir and maintains its cold pool through cold-water inflows, cooling that occurs during the winter, thermal stratification, and operational decisions [38]. Despite the large capacity of New Melones (2.4 MAF, 4th largest reservoir in California), it, or any other dam included in this analysis, was unable to produce a stable cold regime at its outlet.

This study only considered the effect of the nearest upstream dam to a study site. Many streams have several dams, perhaps with compounded thermal effects [71]. For dams that lack both the capacity to produce a stable or variable cold regimes and lack passage above the dam, these barriers may be insurmountable for species’ recovery. While reservoir operation to support cold-water habitat has shown promise [39,72,73], our results suggest that improving passage or dam removal is likely needed to reunite species with the thermal regimes in which their life-history strategies originally evolved. Potential constraints are considerable, though, given the fundamental shift in underlying, unregulated thermal patterns as a result of climate warming, particularly in mid-elevation streams [35].

Finally, despite similarities between groundwater-fed and dam-influenced reaches, the conservation value of these reaches should not be conflated. Streams like the McCloud River, Pit River, Battle Creek, and Big Springs Creek are highly influenced by groundwater-fed springs, and were the only upstream-of-reservoir reaches to replicate the same stable cool thermal regimes found below reservoirs. The regulated reach downstream of Shasta Dam also illustrates a distinct antinode-node pattern that is characteristic of large-volume, groundwater-fed streams [50,61]. Despite similar thermal regimes, other research has shown how other aspects of these groundwater-dominated streams differ from runoff and regulated reaches [74]. Historically, groundwater-dominated streams have out-produced non-groundwater-dominated streams [74,75], and, for the streams still accessible to fish, are preferentially selected [73,75]. Previous studies have shown even in regions sensitive to climate warming, watersheds with larger flow volumes and groundwater contributions, like California’s Feather River, are less vulnerable to climate change [31,35]. Also, some Californian spring-fed streams have novel hydroecological feedbacks that drive their thermal regimes [51], influence reaches tens of kilometers downstream from spring sources [46,50], and support robust ecological productivity and conservation potential [11,74]. Thus, other factors, such as water quality (nutrients), physical habitat, flow regime, and novel ecohydrological feedbacks may still make spring-fed reaches more desirable habitat than regulated reaches despite their similar thermal regimes.

Conclusions: Thermal regimes and conservation

Conservation planning for cold-water species can be a risky investment in California. The combination of California’s location at the southern range of cold-water species, vulnerability to climate warming, and highly regulated streams all pose major challenges. Extinction is likely for most (78%) of California’s native salmonids; though altered or degraded thermal regimes are a major stressor, they are not the only limitation [43]. Bold conservation actions are required to reverse the trend towards extinction.

To direct conservation resources effectively to reaches with regulated cold-water regimes in California, strategies should account for extensive regulated influences and capture nuances of highly variable geography and hydrology. Identifying areas where high-quality, cold-water habitats exist and understanding their thermal signatures and function will facilitate prioritization and habitat conservation, in addition to describing the core characteristics necessary for recreating or restoring thermal functionality in other locations. The thermal regime classification developed in this study can be used to identify areas where conservation investment will support the recovery and persistence of valued native species.

Supporting information

S1 Table. Model results and metadata.

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S2 Table. Summary of degree of regulation for regulated sites.

Data for each site’s drainage, mean annual runoff, dam storage, degree of regulation, and cumulative degree of regulation were provided by Grantham et al. [36]. Big Springs Dam is a small, privately owned dam; data defining its reservoir’s storage capacity was unavailable.

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Acknowledgments

Thank you to Drs. Jay Lund, Steven Sadro, Alexander Forrest, and two anonymous reviewers for their valuable feedback, which greatly improved this manuscript. Thank you to Drs. Audrey Maheu and Ted Grantham for providing data from their research to help contextualize our study.

Data Availability

Data and code are available via GitHub repository: https://github.com/ucd-cws/streamtemp_classification.

Funding Statement

AW received funding from the S.D. Bechtel, Jr. Foundation via an unrestricted donation to the U.C. Davis Center for Watershed Sciences and the John Muir Institute for the Environment (fund number 07427) for this work. RP received internal funding from the John Muir Institute for the Environment (fund number 07427). Dr. Jay Lund of the U.C. Davis Center for Watershed Sciences was major advisor to Dr. Ann Willis and provided feedback to the draft manuscript. Dr. Andrew Rypel, co-director of the U.C. Davis Center for Watershed Sciences, co-authored the manuscript and provided advice on study design, data analysis, and preparation of the manuscript. The S.D. Bechtel Jr. Foundation and John Muir Institute of the Environment had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript. The website for the S.D. Bechtel, Jr. Foundation is http://sdbjrfoundation.org/. The website for the UC Davis Center for Watershed Sciences is watershed.ucdavis.edu. The website for the John Muir Institute of the Environment is johnmuir.ucdavis.edu. The authors confirm there are no real or perceived financial conflicts of interest.

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Reviewer #1: I enjoyed reading the manuscript, “Classifying California Thermal Regimes” by Willis et al. It is generally well conceived and written. However, I do have some concerns about the use of PCA with a temperature dataset summarized by only three metrics and I suggest the authors also consider a S-type PCA directly on the daily mean temperatures as described below to see what this reveals about temporal dynamics among sites. I also have concerns about the representativeness of the observation dataset for all of California’s streams but this might be rectified by a simple modification of the title as stipulated below. If the authors can address these issues and several additional minor points below, I think the manuscript would be suitable for publication in PLoS.

Lines 47-48. Consider broadening the statement that “nearly 50% of cold-water habitat could be lost due to climate change” to something like “20-90% of cold-water habitat could be lost due to climate change for some species depending on their thermal constraints and landscape resistance to dispersal (LeMoine et al. 2020. Landscape resistance mediates native fish species distribution shifts and vulnerability to climate change in riverscapes. Global Change Biology. doi: 10.1111/gcb. 15281).

Line 51. Consider adding a complimentary reference to 14-McCullough et al., which is Isaak et al. 2018. Global warming of salmon and trout rivers in the Northwestern US. Transactions of the American Fisheries Society 147:566-587 because it describes the actual climate warming trends in the Columbia River and discusses effects on salmon populations, including the mass mortality events that occurred in 2015.

Line 65. Replace “As” with “At” at the beginning of the sentence.

Lines 64-76 paragraph discussing the extent of dam regulation in California. To set the context for later results, I think it would be useful to discuss the range of thermal outcomes that dams may induce on downstream thermal regimes. At opposite extremes, for example, small shallow reservoirs often cause downstream warming whereas large, deep reservoirs with cold hypolimnions cause cooling and dampen variability. Good references in this regard are Olden and Naiman (63) and Maheu (64), which the authors cite later in the discussion.

Line 102 and Figure 5. Water temperature site locations occur primarily at lower elevations in the Central Valley downstream of dams, which makes me wonder if the article’s title shouldn’t be modified to include the word “regulated”? Perhaps “Classifying California’s Regulated Stream Thermal Regimes for Cold-Water Conservation”? No doubt there are many dams in the state and much of the surface hydrology is altered but there are also substantial areas higher in the mountains and in northwestern California where free-flowing streams are common and that don’t appear to be represented in the study’s dataset. To better characterize what is represented I the samples, could the authors modify Table S1 to include descriptor fields such as site elevation, upstream watershed area as a surrogate if mean annual discharge data aren’t available, and the degree of upstream flow regulation?

Lines 107-108. It’s very common to have missing data values in water temperature time series. Did those occur here, and if so, how were they treated?

Line 119. Seems awkward to say “methods developed in (31)”, here and elsewhere. Maybe instead say “methods developed by Maheu et al. (31)”

Line 138. It’s unclear where the principle analysis comes from as this is the first time it is mentioned. Please provide more information here on the PCA. It was only apparent later in the results section that the three summary metrics (annual mean, amplitude, and phase) were the subject of the analysis. It also seemed strange to do a PCA on so few metrics, as the analysis is usually done when there are numerous metrics to search for and summarize commonality and orthogonality among them. With only three metrics considered, the PCA plot in Figure 3 is almost identical to what a simple scatterplot of the phase metric vs. mean and/or amplitude would show and it’s hard to justify the additional analytical complexity. To pull more out of this dataset with PCA, the authors may want to consider a S-Type PCA wherein the analysis is run directly on the daily mean temperatures from the 77 sites. It’s simple to do and will highlight individual sites that behave as outliers and those which conform to broader group dynamics. A recent example of S-mode PCA applied to stream temperature time series is provided by Isaak et al. 2018. Principal components of thermal regimes in mountain river networks. Hydrology and Earth System Sciences 22:6225-6240.

Line 161. Insert “showed” into phrase “Modeling results a reasonable…”

Reviewer #2: This study uses a clustering method to enable classification of thermal regimes of around 70 sites across California, roles of dams in influencing thermal regimes and explored the possibility of using dams as regulators of thermal regimes. Although the information presented here is a useful for conservation planning and prioritization, the novelty of the questions or the method discussed here is hard to decipher. Also, the study did not attempt to investigate the different thermal regimes in detail such as correlate the presence of different thermal regimes to the flow regimes, microclimate, surface-subsurface interactions etc and primarily attributed varying thermal regimes to presence of dams. Hence, major revision is suggested in order for authors to address these concerns.

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Line 33-36: Don't understand the context/relevance of this sentence.

Line 46-51: Why are you just considering dams here? Addition of heated effluents (i.e. water pollution), among other factors, also causes warming of river reaches.

Line 107: Did your dataset have missing values? please mention how you dealt with missing values

Line 121: The classification of thermal regimes used 3 parameters for clustering namely, annual mean, amplitude, and phase. Why were other parameters such as timing, frequency (in lines with important parameters for flow regime) not used?

Line 290-293: How did you account for other sources of warming/cooling? In other words, how could you be sure that the observed regimes changes were solely due to dams?

Line 293-294: Sentence not clear, please reframe

Line 332-334: Considering that you used relatively long-term data (>5yrs), how did you account for shifts in thermal regimes and thermal trends?

Line 357: How does your classification spatially compare with other thermal classifications done for California as well as other national level classifications?

Figures: Please improve figure 5 (map), zoom in further to the study area

General: Please review text to eliminate grammatical errors and typos and to improve sentence framing.

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General comment: I enjoyed reading the manuscript, “Classifying California Thermal Regimes” by Willis et al. It is generally well conceived and written. However, I do have some concerns about the use of PCA with a temperature dataset summarized by only three metrics and I suggest the authors also consider a S-type PCA directly on the daily mean temperatures as described below to see what this reveals about temporal dynamics among sites. I also have concerns about the representativeness of the observation dataset for all of California’s streams but this might be rectified by a simple modification of the title as stipulated below. If the authors can address these issues and several additional minor points below, I think the manuscript would be suitable for publication in PLoS.

Thank you for your review. We appreciate your interest, and thought that your questions helped us develop several areas in our study where we had not clearly explained our motivations or objectives. We have provided more extensive answers to the individual comments listed below, including those related to our use of the PCA and the broader context of our study beyond regulated thermal regimes. In addition, we further developed the work around related dam regulation to thermal regimes, and appreciated the comment as the additional work helped strengthen our findings. We hope that they, combined with the revisions we made in the manuscript, address the concerns raised in this review.

Lines 47-48. Consider broadening the statement that “nearly 50% of cold-water habitat could be lost due to climate change” to something like “20-90% of cold-water habitat could be lost due to climate change for some species depending on their thermal constraints and landscape resistance to dispersal (LeMoine et al. 2020. Landscape resistance mediates native fish species distribution shifts and vulnerability to climate change in riverscapes. Global Change Biology. doi: 10.1111/gcb. 15281).

Thank you for providing an updated citation! Our understanding of the results in LeMoine et al. (2020) are that the 50% estimate is generally consistent with the Eaton and Scheller (1996) findings, with the broader potential losses occurring for sensitive species like slimy sculpin. The results that seemed most directly related to the suggested revision included the findings of 50% extirpation probabilities for bull trout and slimy sculpin (z-scores 0.79 and 0.23), with much higher probabilities occurring at z-scores > 1 or < 0 (results summarized in LeMoine et al. 2020 Figure 4). Given this useful and more detailed study, we revised our statement to read: “Across the United States, projections show nearly 50% of cold-water habitat could be lost due to climate change (10, 20), though this decline varies widely depending on species, their thermal constraints, and landscape resistance to dispersal (20).”

Line 51. Consider adding a complimentary reference to 14-McCullough et al., which is Isaak et al. 2018. Global warming of salmon and trout rivers in the Northwestern US. Transactions of the American Fisheries Society 147:566-587 because it describes the actual climate warming trends in the Columbia River and discusses effects on salmon populations, including the mass mortality events that occurred in 2015.

Thank you for suggesting a complimentary reference to 14-McCullough et al. We have added it to our manuscript.

Line 65. Replace “As” with “At” at the beginning of the sentence.

Thank you for suggesting the clarifying revision. We replaced “As” with “At” at the beginning of the sentence.

Lines 64-76 paragraph discussing the extent of dam regulation in California. To set the context for later results, I think it would be useful to discuss the range of thermal outcomes that dams may induce on downstream thermal regimes. At opposite extremes, for example, small shallow reservoirs often cause downstream warming whereas large, deep reservoirs with cold hypolimnions cause cooling and dampen variability. Good references in this regard are Olden and Naiman (63) and Maheu (64), which the authors cite later in the discussion.

Thank you for the suggestion. We agree that this would be a good place to set the context for later results, and appreciate the suggested framing. We added the line “Where studies have explore the effects of dams, the results suggest that they produce variable thermal regimes depending on size, the ability to selectively withdraw water depending on temperature (i.e., whether a dam possesses the necessary infrastructure to adjust the depth at which it draws water for releases), and operational objective(s) (43, 44); these regulated thermal regimes may or may not align with existing, unregulated regimes.”

Line 102 and Figure 5. Water temperature site locations occur primarily at lower elevations in the Central Valley downstream of dams, which makes me wonder if the article’s title shouldn’t be modified to include the word “regulated”? Perhaps “Classifying California’s Regulated Stream Thermal Regimes for Cold-Water Conservation”? No doubt there are many dams in the state and much of the surface hydrology is altered but there are also substantial areas higher in the mountains and in northwestern California where free-flowing streams are common and that don’t appear to be represented in the study’s dataset. To better characterize what is represented [I] the samples, could the authors modify Table S1 to include descriptor fields such as site elevation, upstream watershed area as a surrogate if mean annual discharge data aren’t available, and the degree of upstream flow regulation?

Thank you for the comment, as it has helped us think more carefully about the main points of our paper and expand more on some ideas that we may not have explored thoroughly in the original draft. Because the method we are using requires a relatively long dataset, relatively few sites met the analysis criteria. Of these sites, 14 were unregulated, and included two groundwater-dominant sites. Though this seems like a relatively small number, it is comparable to other studies using methods requiring long-term data sets for California. Maheu et al. (2016), which focused on using long-term datasets to classify the thermal regimes of unregulated sites, included 11 sites in California in runoff-dominated watersheds. We are unaware of other studies that take the same approach of using long-term data to develop a single annual trend that include more sites for California. We also think it is important to keep our classification broad to explore how unregulated site classification compared to other studies once we included regulated sites and narrowed the geographic scope to only California. Finally, while many of the sites are below dams, we observe that there is a limit to the extent of dam influence, particularly in the Central Valley. Thus, while the flows may be regulated, the thermal regimes adopt an equilibrium signature that seems independent of regulation. We have expanded our discussion of these points in the discussion sections of the manuscript to clarify the relevance of the unregulated classification results in our study. We have also added language to the first section of our discussion that specifically identifies this limitation and area for future work.

We agree that Table S1 could be modified with additional descriptor fields to be clearer about descriptor metrics that are relevant to the thermal regime classification. We found it cleaner to make additional tables, and have submitted Tables S2 and S3. Table S2 provides a summary of regulated and unregulated sites. Table S3 provides more details for the regulated sites, including upstream watershed area, mean annual discharge, degree of regulation, and cumulative degree of regulation for each site (based on the results published in Grantham et al. 2014).

Lines 107-108. It’s very common to have missing data values in water temperature time series. Did those occur here, and if so, how were they treated?

Thank you for the question. Indeed, we found many years that were incomplete. Because we wanted to focus on full, empirical datasets, and because the methodology we were following meant we would average all daily average temperatures for a given day into a single, annual trend, we eliminated any sites that had fewer than 8 daily average observations for any given day for the full period of record. This greatly reduced the number of potential sites that met the criteria of full datasets for a minimum of 8 years of daily data. We did not interpolate or fill data gaps in our study, which may have increased the number of sites we could have included, but also left us concerned that we might introduce bias into the annual trends of sites for which we filled data gaps. We added this clarifying language into the manuscript: “All data were reviewed to remove flagged data (per USGS and CDEC standards) and obvious outliers; the remaining years with a minimum of 8 daily average temperature observations for each day were used in the study.”

Line 119. Seems awkward to say “methods developed in (31)”, here and elsewhere. Maybe instead say “methods developed by Maheu et al. (31)”

Thank you for the observation and suggested revision. We agree that our original language was awkward, and have revised three instances where we referred to Maheu et al. only by its reference number. We confirmed with the PLOS-ONE editorial support that this was change was in line with the journal formatting, as we had previously misunderstood the guidelines (which is what had prompted the original, awkward language). Thanks again for the note. See lines 131-32, 148, and 233 for the changes.

Line 138. It’s unclear where the principle analysis comes from as this is the first time it is mentioned. Please provide more information here on the PCA. It was only apparent later in the results section that the three summary metrics (annual mean, amplitude, and phase) were the subject of the analysis. It also seemed strange to do a PCA on so few metrics, as the analysis is usually done when there are numerous metrics to search for and summarize commonality and orthogonality among them. With only three metrics considered, the PCA plot in Figure 3 is almost identical to what a simple scatterplot of the phase metric vs. mean and/or amplitude would show and it’s hard to justify the additional analytical complexity. To pull more out of this dataset with PCA, the authors may want to consider a S-Type PCA wherein the analysis is run directly on the daily mean temperatures from the 77 sites. It’s simple to do and will highlight individual sites that behave as outliers and those which conform to broader group dynamics. A recent example of S-mode PCA applied to stream temperature time series is provided by Isaak et al. 2018. Principal components of thermal regimes in mountain river networks. Hydrology and Earth System Sciences 22:6225-6240.

Thank you for the comment. There were a few reasons why we choose to include a PCA analysis, which we will explain here and expand on in our manuscript as well. The primary advantage of using a PCA was to easily explore the variation explained by a given metric, normalized against the variation of other metrics. Though we focused on three metrics, we preferred to use PCA to visualize the clusters on a uniform, two-dimensional scale. In addition to more clearly emphasize the effect of each metric on the overall classification, the PCA illustrated the relationship between cluster strength and regulation at each site. We expanded our explanation of our motivations and objectives in the methods section.

In considering this comment, we also completed an S-Type PCA to see if the results varied from our original analysis. The results of the S-Type PCA were consistent with our original findings, which encouraged us. But as the findings were not substantively different from our original analysis, we opted to keep our initial approach for our methods. Thank you again for the comment, and for the suggestion of an alternative that helped us explore our results from another perspective.

Line 161. Insert “showed” into phrase “Modeling results a reasonable…”

Thank you for catching the error. We revised the sentence to read, “Modelling results showed a reasonable sine curve fit for all sites included in the study…”

Reviewer 2 comments:

General comment: This study uses a clustering method to enable classification of thermal regimes of around 70 sites across California, roles of dams in influencing thermal regimes and explored the possibility of using dams as regulators of thermal regimes. Although the information presented here is a useful for conservation planning and prioritization, the novelty of the questions or the method discussed here is hard to decipher. Also, the study did not attempt to investigate the different thermal regimes in detail such as correlate the presence of different thermal regimes to the flow regimes, microclimate, surface-subsurface interactions etc and primarily attributed varying thermal regimes to presence of dams. Hence, major revision is suggested in order for authors to address these concerns.

Thank you for your review. We appreciate the insightful questions and specific issues you identified, and are pleased to have an opportunity to further develop our study. The novelty of our work is shown in three aspects: exploring the relationship of stream thermal regimes in the context of regulated versus unregulated reaches, the role of groundwater-dominated streams in creating distinct classes of unregulated thermal regimes, the oversight of poorly replicated winter thermal patterns by dams, and how the spatial scope of a study influences actionable science outcomes. We have expanded our discussion of each of these topics to more clearly show our study’s contribution to the broader field of stream temperature research.

The focus of this study was to explore thermal regimes given a few easily obtainable metrics so that it could be widely replicated. While flow regimes, microclimate, surface-subsurface interactions, etc, can influence discrete temperatures, such data is rarely available on the scale necessary to explore landscape thermal regimes in depth and were beyond the scope of this study. Our results also suggest the metrics we included were well-suited to identify and distinguish different cold-water thermal regimes in California. We find it meaningful that, despite the different drivers and buffers in thermal regimes, all unregulated regimes classified the same, with the exception of groundwater-dominated systems. However, we expanded our exploration of the role of dams and their ability to account for our results by incorporating data from Grantham et al. (2014) about watershed area, mean annual runoff, and degree of regulation (both as a result of dams located directly upstream of each site and the cumulative degree of regulation of all upstream dams).

Comments:

Line 33-36: Don't understand the context/relevance of this sentence.

Thank you for your comment. The sentence introduces the application of water temperature analysis for regulation and management and the different ways it has been approached. As our study explores the application of thermal regimes as the framework for guiding conservation, we wanted to acknowledge another approach that was historically more common (i.e., identifying target temperature thresholds to manage cold water for aquatic ecosystems) before focusing on the body of research that explores temperature using a thermal regime framework.

Line 46-51: Why are you just considering dams here? Addition of heated effluents (i.e. water pollution), among other factors, also causes warming of river reaches.

Thank you for your question. We are particularly interested in dams for two reasons: first, because dams have widely been shown to disrupt temperature patterns without much research quantifying their long-term thermal regimes and how they compare to unregulated thermal regimes; second, because much work has been dedicated in the engineering literature to suggest that dams can be operated to achieve desirable thermal regimes without actually testing this hypothesis against the extensive work that primarily exists in the ecological research community around thermal regimes necessary to support aquatic ecosystems. In California, these objectives combine with its geographic vulnerability to climate change to present a powerful confluence of ecosystem goals with severe consequences if they are not achieved.

We acknowledge and agree that there are other potential sources of heating (heated effluent, degraded channel and riparian zones, stream diversions, etc.). We focused on one – groundwater dominated systems – because these were the only reaches where notable variability that was unrelated to dam regulated was illustrated by our results. We expected to see a broader range of regimes if other factors produced important variability. Our results did not support the hypothesis that other factors were necessary to understand the difference in thermal regimes on a landscape scale. Thus, given that our results did not show evidence of a strong influence on thermal regimes unrelated to regulation or groundwater-dominated streams, we did not extend our analysis to include specific alternative factors.

Line 107: Did your dataset have missing values? [p]lease mention how you dealt with missing values

Thank you for the question. Indeed, we found many years that were incomplete. Because we wanted to focus on full, empirical datasets, and because the methodology we were following meant we would average all daily average temperatures for a given day into a single, annual trend, we eliminated any sites that had fewer than 8 daily average observations for any given day for the full period of record. This greatly reduced the number of potential sites that met the criteria of full datasets for a minimum of 8 years of daily data. We did not interpolate or fill data gaps in our study, which may have increased the number of sites we could have included, but also left us concerned that we might introduce bias into the annual trends of sites for which we filled data gaps. We added this clarifying language into the manuscript: “All data were reviewed to remove flagged data (per USGS and CDEC standards) and obvious outliers; the remaining years with a minimum of 8 daily average temperature observations for each day were used in the study.”

Line 121: The classification of thermal regimes used 3 parameters for clustering namely, annual mean, amplitude, and phase. Why were other parameters such as timing, frequency (in lines with important parameters for flow regime) not used?

We wanted to adhere as closely as possible to the methods used in Maheu et al. (2016) so that we could understand potential differences between our results and previous results by changing only one variable: including regulated reaches. Thus, we wanted to introduce as little change to the analytic methods as possible. Though an exploration of timing and frequency were beyond the scope of this study, we are continuing our research by exploring how those factors fit into thermal regime management, too. We added language to the discussion to emphasize the need for additional research in this area.

Line 290-293: How did you account for other sources of warming/cooling? In other words, how could you be sure that the observed regimes changes were solely due to dams?

Thank you for the question, as it gets to the crux of our findings related to dam influences on thermal regimes. While we didn’t explicitly account for other sources of warming/cooling, we would expect our results to show more variability in regimes if those sources were dominant drivers/buffers. The shift in thermal regime from variable cool to stable cool were consistent with dams occurring in between sites, and occurred in each stream included in the analysis for the entire geographic region of California. While there are other sources of warming/cooling, it seems unlikely that a unique combination of those feedbacks occur throughout the study area, independent of the dams, which would explain the consistent shift across dam sites. We have expanded the discussion in the section related to dams’ influences on thermal regimes to address this issue.

Line 293-294: Sentence not clear, please reframe

Thank you for the comment. We have revised the sentence into two, which now read as: “Specifically, we found that many different thermal regimes could be defined as “cold,” though these regimes vary depending on what metrics are used. Therefore, when conservation efforts focus on managing cold-water ecosystems, multiple metrics should be considered to replicate an effective “cold” thermal regime at the local or regional scale.”

Line 332-334: Considering that you used relatively long-term data (>5yrs), how did you account for shifts in thermal regimes and thermal trends?

Thank you for the question. We did not explicitly account for shifts in thermal regimes and thermal trends. However, we are aware that given climate change and California’s geographic vulnerability to stream warming, this could be a potential issue. To explore whether members showed evidence of shifting thermal regimes, we used the PCA results to identify strong and weak members. We have added language to the discussion specifying the limits of this classification method, particularly if used to implement actionable science outcomes for conservation.

Line 357: How does your classification spatially compare with other thermal classifications done for California as well as other national level classifications?

Thank you for the question. We have added language to our discussion that puts our results in the context of other thermal classifications.

Figures: Please improve figure 5 (map), zoom in further to the study area

Thank you for your comment. We have revised figure 5 to more clearly illustrate the study area and results, and have created a companion figure that focuses on the inset panels identified in the map. Please see figures 5 and 6.

General: Please review text to eliminate grammatical errors and typos and to improve sentence framing.

Thank you for the comment. We have reviewed the text to eliminate grammatical errors/typos and reframe sentences.

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Manuscript Title: Classifying California's stream thermal regimes for cold-water conservation

I reread the revised manuscript and think that the author’s have done a generally good job responding to concerns raised in my original review. If the author’s can address several additional items listed below, I think the paper could be made acceptable for publication on PONE. Most of the items are relatively minor, with the exception of revising the discussion section as noted below.

1. The Abstract needs revision. I’d suggest adding a few sentences between lines 25 and 26 to describe the dataset and analytical procedures. Otherwise, the conclusion statements starting on line 26 have no foundation.

2. Line 87. Sentence starts awkwardly, “Other, more data and computationally…” and could use revision.

3. Line 91 states “This study develops a classification framework…for rapid identification of stream reaches likely to sustain cool- and cold-water regimes.” The phrase “likely to sustain” implies to me that a temporal trend analysis will be done such that reaches which will remain cold in the future are being identified, despite climate change or other factors that may cause warming. I’d slightly rephrase this by deleting “likely to…” from the sentence since the analysis of regimes here is based on classifying discriminating characteristics for an eight-year snapshot of time.

4. Line 128. Do the a, b, and n coefficients correspond to the mean, amplitude, and phase? This isn’t clear from the text or the associated figure.

5. Lines 187-188. This sentence belongs in the methods section. The standard name for this type of graph is an ordination plot I believe.

6. Line 193. If PC2 is most strongly correlated with phase, and the stable cold category of stream reaches a peak earlier than all the other classes (Fig 4c), why does this class plot intermediately along the PC2 axis (Fig 3) rather than at one of the extremes?

Discussion section

1. One limitation of the Maheu three parameter approach is that it ignores short-term variability (e.g., daily cycles and weekly variation) because it’s smoothing the annual cycle with a sine wave fit. In Isaak et al.’s 2020 classification of western U.S. stream thermal regimes based on dozens of metrics (reference 60 cited by the authors), that short-term variability was the primary determinant of PC2 (as was also the case in Rivers-Moore et al. 2013 multi-metric classification of South African streams; reference 46 cited by the authors) and others studying thermal regimes, as described in the discussion section of the Isaak paper, have argued that short-term thermal variation has particular ecological importance. In the discussion section of the present manuscript, it would be useful for the authors to elaborate on potential tradeoffs associated with using different metric sets for regime description and classification.

2. Lines 335-338. There are numerous papers that have already developed metrics to describe and explore stream thermal regimes based on frequency, rate of change, duration, magnitude, etc. some of which should be cited here (e.g., Steel et al. 2017 (reference 8 cited by authors in earlier context); Rivers-Moore et al. 2013 (reference 46 cited by authors in earlier context).

3. Paragraph lines 339-349. I think this paragraph needs significant revision because the potential already exists to mine information from a much larger database than the USGS & CDEC gage datasets that form the basis of the author’s analysis. The publicly available NorWeST database (https://www.fs.fed.us/rm/boise/AWAE/projects/NorWeST.html) contains stream temperature records for 3,681 unique sites in California as part of a much larger west-wide database. The dataset was published by Isaak et al. 2017 (Water Resources Research 53:9181-9205). Granted, most of the NorWeST records consist of short summer-only monitoring records but many do not and the records are easily sortable to extract those with more comprehensive records for regime analysis.

Also relevant to this paragraph of the discussion is the utility of modern imputation techniques for filling gaps in temperature records. In my experience, these work remarkably well with stream temperature records at both regulated and unregulated sites due to the strong temporal synchrony among sites, especially when the sites are part of dense monitoring networks as is the case here. The recent paper by Johnson et al. 2021 (Heed the data gap: guidelines for using incomplete datasets in annual stream temperature analyses. Ecological Indicators 122:107229) highlights the application of the imputation techniques developed by Josse et al. (2012. Handling missing values in exploratory multivariate data analysis methods, Journal of the Société Francaise de Statistique, 153, 79–99; and Josse and Husson 2016. MissMDA: a package for handling missing values in multivariate data analysis, Journal of Statistical Software 70: 1–31) to stream temperature records.

4. The discussion section as a whole at 11 pages is quite long compared to the overall 25 pages of text. I’d recommend looking for opportunities to streamline so that the strengths of the paper are highlighted while more speculative elements of the discussion are shortened or eliminated.

Reviewer #2: Thank you for revising your manuscript based on the comments. The revisions have made the manuscript clearer and more robust. In general, specific responses to the reviewer comments and associated revisions in the manuscript seem satisfactory. I do have a few minor comments to those below. All in all, this manuscript is an important contribution to the field of river temperature research and suitable for publication in PlosOne.

Minor comments:

Comment on Your response to Reviewer 2’ comment on Line 46-51:

Your explanation to the comment clarifies the rationale behind focusing on regulated reaches and the inclusion (or exclusion) of other factors. However, this rationale does not come across as clearly in the manuscript. I suggest to make this rationale more explicit in the introduction. The rationale in the introduction should also mention the novelty or research gaps that you are addressing (such as including in the paragraph starting line 91).

Comment on Your response to Reviewer 2’ comment on Line 107:

Your response clarifies how you dealt with missing values. Although you have included a clarificatory line in the methods pertaining to this, I think it should be mentioned explicitly that data gaps/missing values were used as it as and not filled.

Lines 220-259: Including a table showing different thermal classes and their characteristics (mean, max, min, n, CV, DOWY etc) would be useful for better comprehension and for reducing the amount of text in these paras.

Figure 4: Please also include the ‘n’ for each class within in the figure/legend/figure title.

There are still plenty of grammatical errors in the manuscript. Please correct them. Correcting some typos below:

Line 27: Groundwater streams are not a class of thermal regimes. They may exhibit a certain class of thermal regimes.

Line 34: worth “the” investment

Line 38: Replace “whereas” with “while”

Line 82: explore”d”

Line 146: "example" instead of examples

Line 151: Principal Components Analysis (PCA)

Line 395: “Some of these differences are” instead of “Some of this difference is”

Line 401: “importance of” instead of “important of”

Line 552: review”ers”

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PLoS One. 2021 Aug 20;16(8):e0256286. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0256286.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


27 Jul 2021

Reviewer #1: Manuscript Number: PONE-D-20-40523R1

Manuscript Title: Classifying California's stream thermal regimes for cold-water conservation

I reread the revised manuscript and think that the author’s have done a generally good job responding to concerns raised in my original review. If the author’s can address several additional items listed below, I think the paper could be made acceptable for publication on PONE. Most of the items are relatively minor, with the exception of revising the discussion section as noted below.

1. The Abstract needs revision. I’d suggest adding a few sentences between lines 25 and 26 to describe the dataset and analytical procedures. Otherwise, the conclusion statements starting on line 26 have no foundation.

Thank you for the comment. We have revised the abstract to describe the dataset and general analytical procedures. We revised the abstract to include the following:

“We used publicly available, long-term (> 8 years) stream temperature data from 77 sites across California to model their thermal regimes, calculate three temperature metrics, and use the metrics to classify each regime with an agglomerative nesting algorithm. Then, we assessed the variation in each class and considered underlying physical or anthropogenic factors that could explain differences between classes. Finally, we considered how different classes might fit existing criteria for cool- or cold-water thermal regimes, and how those differences complicate efforts to manage stream temperature through regulation.”

2. Line 87. Sentence starts awkwardly, “Other, more data and computationally…” and could use revision.

Thank you for the suggestion. We have revised the sentence to read as follows:

“Other approaches that require less data (< 5 years) or are computationally efficient bring considerable uncertainty in the results (10, 45, 46).”

3. Line 91 states “This study develops a classification framework…for rapid identification of stream reaches likely to sustain cool- and cold-water regimes.” The phrase “likely to sustain” implies to me that a temporal trend analysis will be done such that reaches which will remain cold in the future are being identified, despite climate change or other factors that may cause warming. I’d slightly rephrase this by deleting “likely to…” from the sentence since the analysis of regimes here is based on classifying discriminating characteristics for an eight-year snapshot of time.

Thank you for the comment (and suggestion for further analysis!). We have revised the sentence to replace “likely to sustain viable” with “with”.

4. Line 128. Do the a, b, and n coefficients correspond to the mean, amplitude, and phase? This isn’t clear from the text or the associated figure.

Thank you for the observation. Yes, coefficients a, b, and no correspond to annual mean, annual amplitude, and phase. We have clarified this in the manuscript with the following:

“…where Tw is water temperature, n is the day of water year, and a, b, and no are coefficients that correspond to annual mean, annual amplitude, and phase (Fig 1). Coefficients a, b, and no were optimized using least square regression.”

5. Lines 187-188. This sentence belongs in the methods section. The standard name for this type of graph is an ordination plot I believe.

Thank you for the suggestion. We removed those lines from the results, and revised the methods (line 160) to read: “We visualized the distribution of the clusters with an ordination plot of the first two principal components from the analysis, grouped by cluster.”

6. Line 193. If PC2 is most strongly correlated with phase, and the stable cold category of stream reaches a peak earlier than all the other classes (Fig 4c), why does this class plot intermediately along the PC2 axis (Fig 3) rather than at one of the extremes?

Thank you for the question. While PC2 is correlated with phase, but is not completely driven by phase; thus we would not expect to see the class plot entirely at one of the extremes. Nevertheless, when we look at the position of each member in that group on the plot, they fall strongly along the PC2 axis, but in opposite directions. Thus, the centroid is located along the PC2 zero axis, but the members themselves illustrate a more extreme relationship.

Discussion section

General comment: as we have completed a major revision of the discussion, we have not listed every instance of revised language as much of the feedback has been incorporated throughout the discussion. We have provided examples of lines where we specifically incorporated comments into our revisions.

1. One limitation of the Maheu three parameter approach is that it ignores short-term variability (e.g., daily cycles and weekly variation) because it’s smoothing the annual cycle with a sine wave fit. In Isaak et al.’s 2020 classification of western U.S. stream thermal regimes based on dozens of metrics (reference 60 cited by the authors), that short-term variability was the primary determinant of PC2 (as was also the case in Rivers-Moore et al. 2013 multi-metric classification of South African streams; reference 46 cited by the authors) and others studying thermal regimes, as described in the discussion section of the Isaak paper, have argued that short-term thermal variation has particular ecological importance. In the discussion section of the present manuscript, it would be useful for the authors to elaborate on potential tradeoffs associated with using different metric sets for regime description and classification.

Our method can be used as a rough cut to identify areas where conservation investment should be prioritized, particularly where desirable thermal regimes are independent of regulation. Once those areas have been identified, additional metrics such as those described in Isaak et al. and Rivers-Moore et al. can be used to understand the key metrics whose short-term variability has particular ecological importance, and that can be supported through process-based thermal regime management. We have added language to our discussion to specifically identify these limitations of our study (example, lines 334-339). We similarly address some of the comments regarding the range of metrics that have been developed, availability of long-term datasets, and interpolation methods (comments 2 & 3 below). We have condensed our discussion of these issues in the discussion section to focus more on the strengths of the findings, as per comment #4 below.

2. Lines 335-338. There are numerous papers that have already developed metrics to describe and explore stream thermal regimes based on frequency, rate of change, duration, magnitude, etc. some of which should be cited here (e.g., Steel et al. 2017 (reference 8 cited by authors in earlier context); Rivers-Moore et al. 2013 (reference 46 cited by authors in earlier context).

Thank you for the comment. We have added language to the discussion to address this issue, cited the recommended studies (example, lines 334-339), and eliminated the speculative language around more research needed in this area from our discussion.

3. Paragraph lines 339-349. I think this paragraph needs significant revision because the potential already exists to mine information from a much larger database than the USGS & CDEC gage datasets that form the basis of the author’s analysis. The publicly available NorWeST database (https://www.fs.fed.us/rm/boise/AWAE/projects/NorWeST.html) contains stream temperature records for 3,681 unique sites in California as part of a much larger west-wide database. The dataset was published by Isaak et al. 2017 (Water Resources Research 53:9181-9205). Granted, most of the NorWeST records consist of short summer-only monitoring records but many do not and the records are easily sortable to extract those with more comprehensive records for regime analysis.

Also relevant to this paragraph of the discussion is the utility of modern imputation techniques for filling gaps in temperature records. In my experience, these work remarkably well with stream temperature records at both regulated and unregulated sites due to the strong temporal synchrony among sites, especially when the sites are part of dense monitoring networks as is the case here. The recent paper by Johnson et al. 2021 (Heed the data gap: guidelines for using incomplete datasets in annual stream temperature analyses. Ecological Indicators 122:107229) highlights the application of the imputation techniques developed by Josse et al. (2012. Handling missing values in exploratory multivariate data analysis methods, Journal of the Société Francaise de Statistique, 153, 79–99; and Josse and Husson 2016. MissMDA: a package for handling missing values in multivariate data analysis, Journal of Statistical Software 70: 1–31) to stream temperature records.

Thank you for the comments. Regarding the observation of data available from NorWeST, we admit that we considered using this resource, but two issues persuaded us to limit our data queries to USGS and CDEC. First, our general impression from previous exploration with this database was that the majority of temperature records were short-term, summer-only monitoring. Second, the workflow of finding the longer-term records from NorWeST was not intuitive to us. Admittedly, this may be something that becomes less of an issue as we continue to explore and gain experience with this database. But at the time of this analysis, our lack of familiarity and previous experience with the NorWeST database prevented us from fully exploring its potential to supplement our study sites. Regardless, we have noted the database as a potential source for other studies in our manuscript (example: lines 362-365), and look forward to working more with it. Thank you for the suggestion and encouragement.

We have added language to our discussion to address the potential of filling datagaps using the methods identified in the suggested citations (example: lines 360-362). Thank you very much for the recommended sources.

4. The discussion section as a whole at 11 pages is quite long compared to the overall 25 pages of text. I’d recommend looking for opportunities to streamline so that the strengths of the paper are highlighted while more speculative elements of the discussion are shortened or eliminated.

Thank you for the comment. Characterizing some of the discussion as speculative was an incredibly helpful way of framing areas that crowded the stronger areas, and helped us quickly evaluate whether a statement or paragraph should be shortened or eliminated. We have made a major revision to our discussion to focus on the main areas of insight related to the results, and removed the more speculative observations. The revised discussion focuses on the definition of cold when referring to thermal regimes and the implications of alternative methods, and the role of dams in replicating/managing these regimes. We removed several paragraphs from the beginning of the discussion, which were mainly preamble or included statements that were repeated and explored in the context of the results later in that section. We also shorted our discussion of the methods, and included those points in relation to the other discussion topics. The remaining discussion allowed us to focus on the stronger elements of the paper, and retain additional discussion from the previous revision that expanded on dam regulation.

Reviewer #2: Thank you for revising your manuscript based on the comments. The revisions have made the manuscript clearer and more robust. In general, specific responses to the reviewer comments and associated revisions in the manuscript seem satisfactory. I do have a few minor comments to those below. All in all, this manuscript is an important contribution to the field of river temperature research and suitable for publication in PlosOne.

Minor comments:

Comment on Your response to Reviewer 2’ comment on Line 46-51:

Your explanation to the comment clarifies the rationale behind focusing on regulated reaches and the inclusion (or exclusion) of other factors. However, this rationale does not come across as clearly in the manuscript. I suggest to make this rationale more explicit in the introduction. The rationale in the introduction should also mention the novelty or research gaps that you are addressing (such as including in the paragraph starting line 91).

Thank you for your comment and advice about the clarity of our explanation in our first response to reviewer comments. We have revised the introduction to include the clearer language in our earlier response and identify the research gaps we are addressing.

Comment on Your response to Reviewer 2’ comment on Line 107:

Your response clarifies how you dealt with missing values. Although you have included a clarificatory line in the methods pertaining to this, I think it should be mentioned explicitly that data gaps/missing values were used as it as and not filled.

Thank you for the suggestion. We have added the following line to the methods: “Any data gaps or missing values were not filled; the data was used as is.”

Lines 220-259: Including a table showing different thermal classes and their characteristics (mean, max, min, n, CV, DOWY etc) would be useful for better comprehension and for reducing the amount of text in these paras.

Thank you for the suggestion. We have added a table to the main manuscript summarizing the number of members (n); average annual maximum and mean water temperatures; and day of annual maximum. We have also revised the text to remove some instances where we explicitly catalog the results, with the exception of statements where the results were necessary for clarity.

Figure 4: Please also include the ‘n’ for each class within in the figure/legend/figure title.

Thank you for the suggestion. The caption clarifies which portion of the figure indicates the ‘n’ for each class with the following language: “The number of members for each class (n) is as follows: stable warm (n = 1), variable warm (n = 30), variable cool (n = 12), stable cool (n = 32), stable cold (n = 2).”

There are still plenty of grammatical errors in the manuscript. Please correct them. Correcting some typos below:

Line 27: Groundwater streams are not a class of thermal regimes. They may exhibit a certain class of thermal regimes.

Line 34: worth “the” investment

Line 38: Replace “whereas” with “while”

Line 82: explore”d”

Line 146: "example" instead of examples

Line 151: Principal Components Analysis (PCA)

Line 395: “Some of these differences are” instead of “Some of this difference is”

Line 401: “importance of” instead of “important of”

Line 552: review”ers”

Thank you for your careful reading. We have corrected the errors and typos that were listed, as well as others found during our revision.

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Classifying California's stream thermal regimes for cold-water conservation

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