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. 2021 Oct 15;16(10):e0258656. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0258656

Banned by the law, practiced by the society: The study of factors associated with dowry payments among adolescent girls in Uttar Pradesh and Bihar, India

Shobhit Srivastava 1, Shekhar Chauhan 2, Ratna Patel 3, Strong P Marbaniang 3, Pradeep Kumar 1,*, Ronak Paul 3, Preeti Dhillon 1
Editor: Nishith Prakash4
PMCID: PMC8519446  PMID: 34653223

Abstract

Background

Despite the prohibition by the law in 1961, dowry is widely prevalent in India. Dowry stems from the early concept of ’Stridhana,’ in which gifts were given to the bride by her family to secure some personal wealth for her when she married. However, with the transition of time, the practice of dowry is becoming more common, and the demand for a higher dowry becomes a burden to the bride’s family. Therefore, this study aimed to determine the factors associated with the practice of dowry in Bihar and Uttar Pradesh.

Methods

We utilized information from 5206 married adolescent girls from the Understanding the lives of adolescents and young adults (UDAYA) project survey conducted in two Indian states, namely, Uttar Pradesh and Bihar. Dowry was the outcome variable of this study. Univariate, bivariate, and multivariate logistic regression analyses were performed to explore the factors associated with dowry payment during the marriage.

Results

The study reveals that dowry is still prevalent in the state of Uttar Pradesh and Bihar. Also, the proportion of dowry varies by adolescent’s age at marriage, spousal education, and household socioeconomic status. The likelihood of paid dowry was 48 percent significantly less likely (OR: 0.52; CI: 0.44–0.61) among adolescents who knew their husbands before marriage compared to those who do not know their husbands before marriage. Adolescents with age at marriage more than equal to legal age had higher odds to pay dowry (OR: 1.60; CI: 1.14–2.14) than their counterparts. Adolescents with mother’s who had ten and above years of education, the likelihood of dowry was 33 percent less likely (OR: 0.67; CI: 0.45–0.98) than their counterparts. Adolescents belonging to the richest households (OR: 1.48; CI: 1.13–1.93) were more likely to make dowry payments than adolescents belonging to poor households.

Conclusion

Limitation of the dowry prohibition act is one of the causes of continued practices of dowry, but major causes are deeply rooted in the social and cultural customs, which cannot be changed only using laws. Our study suggests that only the socio-economic development of women will not protect her from the dowry system, however higher dowry payment is more likely among women from better socio-economic class.

Introduction

The preponderance of dowry and bride-price practices is culturally driven and existed as a way of marriage requirements [1]. In various traditional societies, the transfer of money or goods accompanies the initiation of marriage. When made to groom families from the bride families, such transfers are widely classified as dowry [2]. Historically, dowry served the fundamental purpose of inheritance for women as men were thought to inherit the family property in the Indian context [3]. Moreover, dowry has been seen as a way to compensate the groom’s family for the economic support they would provide to the new member of the family, i.e., the bride, as women tend to have a small role in the market economy and are dependent on their husbands [4]. The above interpretation holds true in the Indian scenario as historically; dowry has been practiced in upper-caste families where women’s economic opportunities are limited. In the lower caste; where women are seen as economic contributors, the bride-price’s custom was more common [5]. However, dowry dynamics have been changing in recent times, and people from the upper and lower caste are practicing dowry. Furthermore, recent studies noted that the dowry system is prevalent across many cultures and is no longer is treated as a contribution towards a suitable beginning of the practical life of newly married couples [6].

In India, dowry has been prevalent for ages. The custom of dowry in India is a deeply rooted cultural phenomenon [7]. The concept of Sanskritization was proposed by eminent sociologist Srinivas in 1952, and many communities that never took dowry before started practicing dowry probably due to the phenomenon of Sanskritization [8]. A study has noticed that dowry is being practiced in about 93 percent of Indian marriage and is almost universal [9]. Not only this, but studies have also noted that dowry payments have increased manifolds in India [10,11]. A clear explanation for rising dowry payments is the marriage squeeze [12]. However, in her study, Anderson refuted the claims of any association between marriage squeeze and dowry payments [11]. Marriage squeeze depicts tightness of marriage market. Chiplunkar and Weaver (2019) carefully documented the transition of dowry payments in India using the 1999 wave of the ARIS-REDS data and test which theories about dowry inflation are consistent with the data and which are not [13]. Chiplunkar and Weaver (2019) show that the theory of sanskritization cannot explain dowry inflation. Similarly, they also find that the REDS data offers limited support to the marriage squeeze hypothesis. Few researchers postulated the theory of ’sex ratios and dowry’ whereby changes in sex ratios due to population growth could alter dowry payments [8,14,15]. The spousal age gap difference remains a concern as male marry at older ages than women, so when population grows, as was the case in India in the 1950s and 1960s, there will be a surplus of women at marriageable ages relative to men at marriageable ages. In the resulting "marriage squeeze", competition over relatively scarce grooms may cause an increase in dowry [2,16]. Contrary to these predictions, Chiplunkar and Weaver do not find that sex ratio in the marriage market is related to increases in the prevalence or size of dowry [13]. Instead, the "squeeze" appears to be relieved by changes in the age of marriage, with a smaller average age difference between brides and grooms [11]. Zhang & Chan (1999) utilizing 1989 Taiwan Women and Family Survey data of 25–60 years old women stated that dowry improves the bride’s welfare in her family [17]. They further stated that dowry represents bequest by altruistic parents for a daughter which not only increases the wealth of new conjugal household but also enhances the bargaining power of the bride [17].

Researchers unanimously agreed that the issue of dowry could be associated with gender inequality and female deprivation [7,18]. Alfano (2017) argued that the presence of son preference resulting from deeply rooted attitudes that boys are more valuable than girls is mostly attributed to the dowry payments [19]. Alfano (2017) further stated that the economic intuition that sons are cheaper to raise than daughters stem from the dowry [19]. He opined that dowries increase the economic returns to sons and decrease the return to daughters [19]. Kumar (2020) is of the opinion that dowry prevails because of disempowerment of women, male dominance, and financial dependence on men [20]. He further stated that inability to give dowry causes victimization of brides; whereas, the glorification of dowry generates son preference leading to female feticide, sex-ratio imbalances, and gender inequality [20]. Prevailing son preference in Indian societies leads to female feticide so as to avoid the burden of dowry [2123]. Bhalotra et al., (2020) found a positive relationship between gold prices and the value of dowry payments [21]. They stated that payment in gold is essential in Indian marriages and further validated that gold prices marked the financial burden of dowry [21]. Further, Bhalotra et al. (2020) evidently provided evidence that gold prices impact dowry value and, that parents react to unexpected increases in gold prices by committing girl abortion or neglecting girls in the first month of life, when neglect more easily translates into death [21].

Parents desire their daughters to marry educated men with urban jobs, because such men have higher and more certain incomes, which are not subject to climatic cycles and which are paid monthly, and because the wives of such men will be freed from the drudgery of rural work and will usually live apart from their parents-in-law. In a sellers’ market, created by relative scarcity, there was no alternative but to offer a dowry with one’s daughter [24]. A different notion was put forward by Bloch & Rao (2002), where they stated that husbands are more likely to beat their wives when the wife’s family is rich because there are more resources to extract and the returns are greater [25]. A husband’s greater satisfaction with the marriage, indicated by higher numbers of male children, reduces the probability of violence against women [25]. Thus, it is likely that aspects of violent behavior are strongly linked to economic incentives [25]. Previous research has documented numerous factors associated with the dowry, such as socio-economic factors of the families [26], failure of the government in curbing the practice of dowry [27], first-born gender in the family [28]. A study showed that increasing the returns to women’s human capital could lead to the disappearance of marriage payments altogether [29]. Edlund (2006) hypothezing that rise in dowry payments in India has been associated with the disadvantaged position of women in the marriage market, has shown that in a much-used data set on dowry inflation, net dowries did not increase in the period after 1950 [30]. Moreover, the stagnation of net dowries after 1950 undermine claims that marriage market conditions for brides have worsened [30]. Answering the query of whether dowry is bequest or price, Arunachalam & Logam (2016) found that more than a quarter of marriages use dowry as bequests [31]. Arunachalam & Logam (2016) further noticed limited evidence on marriage squeeze as a factor for dowry [31].

It was around sixty years back when India enacted the Dowry Prohibition Act, 1961, to prohibit the giving or taking of the dowry. However, the act has been unsuccessful in curbing down the dowry’s menace and failed in its basic fundamental of eliminating the demand for dowry [7]. The dowry is so profoundly entrenched that a way out seems a bit tedious task; even well-educated families begin saving wealth for their daughter after she is born in anticipation of the futuristic dowry payments [6]. Traditional marriage institutions affect the household’s financial decisions and influence saving behaviour [28]. Despite acknowledging the problem of dowry widely, there is a paucity of empirical studies that systematically analyze the correlates of dowry among adolescent girls in recent times [13]. Given the growing concerns about the dowry’s socioeconomic consequences, it is imperative to explore the correlates of dowry in India. Therefore, we have tried to examine the factors associated with dowry in India. This study captures data from adolescents aged 15–19 years of age. While examining the correlates of dowry among adolescent girls, this study contributes to the existing literature examining factors associated with dowry.

Methods

Data

This study’s data came from Understanding the lives of adolescents and young adults (UDAYA) project survey conducted in two Indian states Uttar Pradesh and Bihar, in 2016 by the Population Council under the guidance of the Ministry of Health and Family Welfare, Government of India. The survey collected detailed information on family, media, community environment, assets acquired in adolescence, and quality of transitions to young adulthood indicators. A total of 150 primary sampling units (PSUs)—villages in rural areas and census wards in urban areas have been selected in the state in order to conduct interviews in the required number of households. The 150 PSUs were further divided equally into rural and urban areas, that is, 75 for rural respondents and 75 for urban respondents. Within each sampling domain, survey adopted a multi-stage systematic sampling design. The 2011 census list of villages and wards (each consisting of several census enumeration blocks [CEBs] of 100–200 households) served as the sampling frame for the selection of villages and wards in rural and urban areas, respectively. This list was stratified using four variables, namely, region, village/ward size, proportion of the population belonging to scheduled castes and scheduled tribes, and female literacy. The UDAYA provide the estimates for states as a whole as well as urban and rural areas of the states. The required sample for each sub-group of adolescents was determined at 920 younger boys, 2,350 older boys, 630 younger girls, 3,750 older girls, and 2,700 married girls in the state. The sample size for Uttar Pradesh and Bihar was 10,350 and 10,350 adolescents aged 10–19 years, respectively. The sample size for this study was 5,206 adolescent girls who were married at the time of the survey [32,33]. In the present study the unmarried boys and girls were dropped and only married adolescent girls were included in the sample. Fig 1 represents the sample selection procedure for the present study.

Fig 1. Sample selection criterion for the present study.

Fig 1

Outcome variables

Dowry was the outcome variable of this study, which was binary. The question was framed as: "whether dowry paid at the time of marriage or later"? the response was coded as 0 means "no" and 1 means "yes." The variable measures the response of dowry if demanded during marriage or after marriage.

Explanatory variables

  1. Interaction with husband before marriage was named as "Husband known before marriage" and was recoded as not known and known.

  2. Age at marriage was recoded as less than legal age (<18 years) and more than equals to legal age (≥18 years). The sample in 18 and above age category would be small as the dataset contained married adolescent’s girl aged 15–19 years.

  3. Spousal age gap was recoded wife older/almost the same age (wife older or one year younger than husband) and husband older (husband two or more years older than wife).

  4. Spousal education recoded both not educated, only husband educated, only wife educated, and both educated.

  5. Working status of the respondent was recoded as no and yes.

  6. Whether vocation training was received or not by the respondent

  7. Mother’s education of the respondent was recoded as no education, 1–7, 8–9, and 10 and above years of education.

  8. Land ownership among in-laws was coded as no and yes. The measurements about the land owned was not available in the data set.

  9. Caste was recoded as Scheduled Caste and Scheduled Tribe (SC/ST) and non-SC/ST. The Scheduled Caste include a group of population which is socially segregated and financially/economically by their low status as per Hindu caste hierarchy. The Scheduled Castes (SCs) and Scheduled Tribes (STs) are among the most disadvantaged socio-economic groups in India [34].

  10. Religion was recoded as Hindu and non-Hindu.

  11. Wealth index was recoded as poorest, poorer, middle, richer, and richest. The survey measured household economic status, using a wealth index composed of household asset data on ownership of selected durable goods, including means of transportation, as well as data on access to a number of amenities. The wealth index was constructed by allocating the following scores to a household’s reported assets or amenities. Principal component analysis technique was used for creating the wealth index variable. The scores were divided into five quintiles using xtile command in Stata 14.

  12. Residence was available in data as urban and rural.

  13. Data were available for two states, i.e., Uttar Pradesh and Bihar, as the survey was conducted in these two states only.

Statistical analysis

Univariate, bivariate, and multivariate logistic regression analysis [35] were performed to find the factors associated with dowry payment during marriage.

The equation for logistic distribution is given as:

lnπ1-π=α+β1X1+β2X2+β3X3.+βnXn

Where π is the expected proportional response for the logistic model; β0,…..,βM are the regression coefficient indicating the relative effect of a particular explanatory variable on the outcome. These coefficients change as per the context in the analysis in the study. Svyset command using Stata 14 was used to control for complex survey design. Additionally, individual weights were used to present the representative results. Further it was evident from the robustness check that logit model had a better fit. S4 and S5 Tables provide the summary statistics and correlation matrix along with plot of logistic predicted probabilities vs linear model (S1 Fig) and Plot of logistic predicted probabilities vs linear probability model (LPM) (S2 Fig).

Next, we check the stability of the regression coefficients and their sensitivity to selection bias using standard methods [36,37]. We obtain bias-adjusted coefficients and calculate the absolute deviation from the non-bias-adjusted regression estimates to understand the extent of bias. Further, we calculate Oster’s δ, whose value higher than one would indicate that the regression coefficients are insensitive to omitted variable bias and variable selection bias [37]. All estimates were obtained with the assumption that the bias-adjusted model would explain 1.3 times variation in dowry payment status compared to the non-bias-adjusted model. The statistical analyses for coefficient stability check were performed using the psacalc command by estimating linear probability models in STATA [38].

Results

The socio-demographic profile of the study population (married adolescents aged 15–19 years) is presented in Table 1. About 65 percent of adolescent girls did not know their husbands before marriage. Most husbands were older than their wives (91%) in the study population, and 64 percent of spouses (both) were educated. Only 11.7 percent of adolescent girls were working, and about 16 percent of adolescent girls received vocational training. Around 42 percent of girls’ in-laws had land ownership. Nearly 30 percent of adolescents belonged to the SC/ST group, and most adolescents were Hindu (82.5%) and lived in rural areas (86%).

Table 1. Socio-demographic profile of married adolescents (15–19 years).

Variable Sample Percentage
Husband known before marriage
Known 3368 64.7
Not known 1838 35.3
Age at marriage
Less than legal age 4151 79.7
More than or equals to legal age 1055 20.3
Spousal age gap
Wife older/almost same age 485 9.3
Husband older 4721 90.7
Spousal education
Both not educated 541 10.4
Only husband educated 710 13.6
Only wife educated 616 11.8
Both educated 3339 64.1
Working status
No 4596 88.3
Yes 610 11.7
Vocational training received
Not received 4400 84.5
Received 806 15.5
Mother education (in years)
No education 4319 83.0
1–7 449 8.6
8–9 241 4.6
10 and above 196 3.8
In-laws land ownership
No 2999 57.6
Yes 2207 42.4
Caste
SC/ST 1543 29.7
Non-SC/ST 3663 70.4
Religion
Hindu 4296 82.5
Non-Hindu 910 17.5
Wealth index
Poorest 759 14.6
Poorer 1069 20.5
Middle 1222 23.5
Richer 1262 24.2
Richest 895 17.2
Place of residence
Urban 730 14.0
Rural 4476 86.0
State
Uttar Pradesh 3218 61.8
Bihar 1988 38.2
Total 5206 100.0

SC/ST: Scheduled Caste/Scheduled Tribe; Not legal age: Less than 18 years; Legal age: More than 18 years.

Table 2 depicts the distribution of adolescents who paid dowry by background characteristics. Overall, around 86 percent of adolescent girls reported that dowry was paid for their marriage. Bivariate results revealed that paid dowry was significantly higher among those who did not know their husbands before marriage (87.2%) than their counterparts (82.9%). It was more prevalent among those whose age at marriage was more than the legal age (89.1%). Similarly, dowry was more prevalent among married adolescent women whose husbands were older and higher if both husband and wife were educated. Interestingly, paid dowry was significantly higher among those who were not working (86%) and received vocational training (91%). Moreover, paid dowry was lower among the non-Hindu community (84.5%). Interestingly, the dowry was more prevalent in the richest households (88.7%). The rural-urban differential was observed for paid dowry. For instance, rural adolescents (86.8%) reported higher paid dowry than urban (78.7%) counterparts. S2 Table provides estimates for Uttar Pradesh and Bihar separately.

Table 2. Percentage distribution of adolescents who paid dowry by background characteristics, 15–19 years.

Variable Paid dowry (SD) p<0.05
Husband known before marriage *
Known 82.9 (0.5)
Not known 87.2 (0.9)
Age at marriage *
Less than legal age 84.8 (0.5)
More than or equals to legal age 89.1 (1.1)
Spousal age gap
Wife older/almost same age 84.6 (1.8)
Husband older 85.8 (0.5)
Spousal education *
Both not educated 77.7 (1.5)
Only husband educated 82.4 (1.4)
Only wife educated 83.6 (1.4)
Both educated 88.0 (0.5)
Working status *
No 86.0 (0.5)
Yes 83.3 (1.5)
Vocational training received *
Not received 84.7 (0.5)
Received 91.1 (1.0)
Mother education (in years) *
No education 85.1 (0.5)
1–7 87.2 (1.6)
8–9 90.5 (1.8)
10 and above 89.2 (2.1)
In-laws land ownership
No 84.4 (0.6)
Yes 87.4 (0.8)
Caste *
SC/ST 85.4 (0.9)
Non-SC/ST 85.8 (0.5)
Religion *
Hindu 85.9 (0.5)
Non-Hindu 84.5 (1.2)
Wealth index *
Poorest 81.6 (1.3)
Poorer 83.4 (1.1)
Middle 87.0 (0.9)
Richer 86.6 (0.9)
Richest 88.7 (1.1)
Place of residence *
Urban 78.7 (0.9)
Rural 86.8 (0.5)
State *
Uttar Pradesh 84.4 (0.8)
Bihar 87.8 (0.5)
Total 85.7

*if p<0.05; SC/ST: Scheduled Caste/Scheduled Tribe; SD: Standard Deviation; Not legal age: Less than 18 years; Legal age: More than 18 years.

Estimates from logistic regression analysis for adolescents who paid dowry by important predictors were presented in Table 3. The likelihood of paid dowry was 48 percent significantly less likely (OR: 0.52; CI: 0.44–0.61) among adolescents who knew their husbands before marriage compared to those who do not know their husbands before marriage. Moreover, if adolescent girls who got marry after legal age (OR: 1.60; CI: 1.14–2.14) were 60 per cent more likely to pay dowry than their counterparts. The likelihood of paid dowry was 25 percent more likely among adolescents whose husband was older (OR: 1.25; CI: 1.03–1.67) than their counterparts. The odds of paid dowry were 39 percent, 47 percent, and 89 percent significantly more likely if only husband (OR: 1.39; CI: 1.05–1.83), only wife (OR: 1.47; CI: 1.11–1.96), and both were educated (OR: 1.89; CI: 1.48–2.4) respectively, than when both were not educated. Interestingly, if an adolescent’s mother was having ten and above years of education, the likelihood of dowry was 33 percent less likely (OR: 0.67; CI: 0.45–0.98) than their counterparts. Wealth quintile has a positive relationship with adolescents who paid dowry for marriage. For instance, the odds of paid dowry were 33 percent, 39 percent, and 48 percent more likely among adolescents whose family gave dowry to marry them in middle (OR: 1.33; CI: 1.03–1.73), richer (OR: 1.39; CI: 1.06–1.83), and richest (OR: 1.48; CI: 1.07–2.05) families respectively compared to poorest counterparts. Moreover, the likelihood of paid dowry was 54 percent more likely in rural areas (OR: 1.54; CI: 1.28–1.86) than urban areas. Importantly, Bihar has higher odds for paid dowry (OR: 1.42; CI: 1.19–1.70) compared to Uttar Pradesh. Additionally, the estimates were provided for urban and rural place of residence as many covariates may vary by place of residence (S1 Table). Moreover, stepwise regression analysis was used to check for sensitivity bias (S3 Table).

Table 3. Logistic regression estimates for adolescents who paid dowry by background characteristics (15–19 years).

Variables AOR (95% CI)
Husband known before marriage
Known 0.52*(0.44,0.61)
Not known Ref.
Age at marriage
Less than legal age Ref.
More than or equals to legal age 1.60* (1.14; 2.24)
Spousal age gap
Wife older/almost same age Ref.
Husband older 1.25*(1.03,1.67)
Spousal education
Both not educated Ref.
Only husband educated 1.39*(1.05,1.83)
Only wife educated 1.47*(1.11,1.96)
Both educated 1.89*(1.48,2.4)
Working status
No Ref.
Yes 0.84(0.66,1.06)
Vocational training received
Not received Ref.
Received 1.16(0.91,1.47)
Mother education (in years)
No education Ref.
1–7 0.98(0.72,1.34)
8–9 1.39(0.89,2.18)
10 and above 0.67*(0.45,0.98)
In-laws land ownership
No Ref.
Yes 1.09(0.89,1.34)
Caste
SC/ST Ref.
Non-SC/ST 1.09(0.9,1.31)
Religion
Hindu Ref.
Non-Hindu 0.93(0.74,1.17)
Wealth index
Poorest Ref.
Poorer 1.10(0.85,1.42)
Middle 1.33*(1.03,1.73)
Richer 1.39*(1.06,1.83)
Richest 1.48*(1.07,2.05)
Place of residence
Urban Ref.
Rural 1.54*(1.28,1.86)
State
Uttar Pradesh Ref.
Bihar 1.42*(1.19,1.7)

*if p<0.05, Ref: Reference; AOR: Adjusted Odds Ratio; CI: Confidence Interval; SC/ST: Scheduled Caste/Scheduled Tribe; Not legal age: Less than 18 years; Legal age: More than 18 years.

Table 4 gives the results of the coefficient stability check of the explanatory variables of dowry payment among female adolescents. From the bias-adjusted estimates (see column 8), we observed that the multivariable association between husband familiar before marriage, age at marriage, spousal education, wealth index, residence and state with dowry payment is statistically significant (at 5% level) and lies in the same direction as the uncontrolled estimates. Moreover, from the difference shown in column 10, we can say that the bias-adjusted and non-bias-adjusted regression coefficients are similar. However, Oster’s delta revealed that the statistically significant multivariable association of age at marriage and state with dowry payment suffers from omitted-variable and selection bias.

Table 4. Coefficient stability results of the Linear probability model estimates for the multivariable association between dowry payment and explanatory characteristics.

Characteristics Uncontrolled estimates Controlled estimates Bias-adjusted estimates Difference in Degree of bias
Coefficient SE R2 Coefficient SE R2 Coefficient SE Coefficients(c) Delta (δ)
Husband known before marriage -0.079* (0.010) 0.011 -0.082* (0.011) 0.031 -0.084* (0.011) 0.002 23.016
Age at marriage 0.036* (0.014) 0.001 0.047* (0.014) 0.031 0.051* (0.013) 0.004 -13.895
Spousal age gap 0.025 (0.019) 0.000 0.030 (0.019) 0.031 0.031 (0.016) 0.001 -22.415
Spousal education 0.026* (0.004) 0.007 0.025* (0.005) 0.031 0.024* (0.005) 0.001 5.842
Working status -0.046* (0.015) 0.002 -0.027 (0.016) 0.031 -0.020 (0.017) 0.007 3.824
Vocational training period 0.025 (0.014) 0.001 0.018 (0.014) 0.031 0.016 (0.012) 0.002 7.909
Mother’s education (in years) 0.003 (0.005) 0.000 -0.005 (0.005) 0.031 -0.007 (0.005) 0.002 -1.982
In-laws land ownership 0.037* (0.010) 0.002 0.005 (0.012) 0.031 -0.010 (0.015) 0.015 0.332
Caste 0.021* (0.011) 0.001 0.008 (0.011) 0.031 0.003 (0.013) 0.005 1.505
Religion -0.028* (0.013) 0.001 -0.008 (0.014) 0.031 0.000 (0.016) 0.008 1.048
Wealth Index 0.011* (0.004) 0.002 0.014* (0.004) 0.031 0.015* (0.005) 0.001 12.206
Residence 0.045* (0.010) 0.004 0.053* (0.011) 0.031 0.057* (0.013) 0.004 14.698
State 0.032* (0.010) 0.002 0.040* (0.011) 0.031 0.043* (0.012) 0.003 -41.775
Analytical sample size 5,206 5,206 5,206

Note–(1) * denotes p-value<0.05; (2) SE: Standard Error, R2: Coefficient of determination of linear probability model;

(c)Absolute difference between the controlled and bias-adjusted coefficients;

(d) Value of δ<1 denotes biased coefficients.

Discussion

The practice of dowry is widely prevalent in India [9], despite the prohibition by the law in 1961. Dowry stems from the early concept of ’Stridhana,’ in which gifts were given to the bride by her family to secure some personal wealth for her when she married [39]. However, with the transition of time, dowry has become a common practice, and the demand for a higher dowry becomes a burden to the bride’s family. Srinivasan (2005) describes that modern dowry comprises demands that include gold, cash, and consumer goods that far exceed what families can afford, exploiting its obligatory symbolic nature and the fact that they are gifts of love woman from her natal family [40]. This study aimed to determine the factors associated with the practice of dowry among adolescent girls. The study reveals that the practice of dowry is still prevalent and is influenced by many factors such as spousal age gap, spousal education, and household socioeconomic status.

Our study report that a girl knowing her husband before marriage is less likely to pay dowry than those not known about the husband. This may be because the information about knowing each other is much better in a love match [41], and the practice of dowry is almost non-existent in the case of love marriage [40,42]. Other studies mentioned that in an arranged marriage where information about each other is limited, the groom’s quality is inferred through his education, associated with the dowry level [41]. The age of the bride is the main factor in marital negotiation, particularly in rural India. Our study found that a girl married to a husband older than her is more likely to pay dowry than an older girl or of similar age to her husband. One possible explanation by Maitra (2006) in his study on dowry inflation in India, argues that the excess supply of younger brides in the marriage market can leads to increase in dowry price when an older man marries the younger brides [43]. Another reason could be groom late age at marriage may be associated with pursuing of higher education [44]. Higher groom education is often found to be associated with higher dowry; this is because due to the competition among the brides for a particular groom leads to offers of higher and higher prices of dowries [41]. Also, suppose a potential bride’s cares about the qualities of the groom like commitment, sincerity, and loyalty which is important for a peaceful marriage, however if these qualities are unobservable and likely to be true, the brides may judge from the groom education as the signal of these qualities [45]. Hence, the bride’s family is ready to pay more dowries for a more educated person, not for higher education, but the underlying desirable qualities signals [45].

However, our study reveals contrasting results as girl education does not impact reducing the amount of dowry paid. Dalmia & Lawrence (2005) while examined the continued prevalence of dowry system in India explained that the amount of dowry or money transfer from brides and their families to grooms and their families does not decrease with increasing bride’s level of education [2]. Our results show that educated girls are more likely to pay dowry than the uneducated girls whose husband is also not educated. One possible explanation could be that the brides’ education is a good indicator of her household wealth. Hence, higher education and higher dowry are effects of bride’s household wealth [45]. Girl having a higher level of education tends to marry at a later age because they are more job aspirants than the lower educated girl [46]. The study of Dhamija & Chowdhury(2020) noted that a delay in marriage is associated with more education, low fertility, and possibly higher dowry for Indian women [47]. Findings by Field & Ambrus (2008) show that marriage opportunities curtail schooling investment suggest that the benefits to girls of delaying marriage come at a cost to the families, probably in higher dowry payments or less desirable spouses [48]. A more educated girl puts her parents in a difficult situation because it is very difficult to get a suitable boy for an educated girl. By virtue of her feminine status, a girl is expected to marry a man who should be in a better position and more educated than her. Drèze & Sen (1995) explained that if an educated girl marries a more educated boy, then the dowry payment will be more likely to increase with the groom’s education [49]. As Mathew (1987) explained, the expected dowry’s mean value increased with the prestige of the groom’s education [50]. Foreign degrees drew the highest dowries, Ph.D. degree received the lowest than engineering and medical degrees. However, on the other way, in the case of a rift, a more educated bride is more likely to walk out of the marriage, and the groom is bearing a greater risk of separation. So, given grooms value marital life’s stability or longevity, they will want to be paid a higher price for marrying with more educated brides as a premium for bearing the additional risk that such marriages entail [45].

The studies of Saroja & Chandrika (1991) found that as the bride, parental income increased, and dowry also increased [51]. This is consistent with our study’s findings, where the girls from the wealthier family were more likely to pay the dowry at marriage. The possible reason for this result is that the higher the parents’ income, the chance with which dowry demands can be agreed with ease, and more smoothly, the dowry payment can take place [52]. Our study shows that girls from Bihar were more likely to pay dowry than girls in Uttar Pradesh, this finding warrant qualitative study on dowry practices between these two states, because the information from the present study is not sufficient to draw a conclusion for this finding.

The study has some limitations as the study was conducted only in two Indian states, so the researchers could not establish a general conclusion from this study. Also, as our study in quantitative, we are unable to capture the individual social and cultural view point on dowry practice. Additionally, national representative data will be helpful for further study to understand the scenario of dowry practice in India, as because India is a country with diverse social and cultural practices, dowry will vary with respect to their cultural norms. Although the coefficient stability check revealed that the majority of the explanatory characteristics are insensitive to omitted-variable and selection bias, the results for age at marriage and state need to be interpreted with caution.

Conclusion

The study sought to explore the factors associated with the practice of dowry in Bihar and Uttar Pradesh. It is evident from this study that the practice of dowry is still widespread, and the results show that increasing age, education, and household economic status of girls are associated with the likelihood of high dowry payment. Limitation of the dowry prohibition act is one of the causes of continued practices of dowry [53]. However, significant causes are deeply rooted in social and cultural customs, which cannot be changed using laws. Our study suggests that socio-economic development of women will not protect her from the dowry system, however higher dowry payment is more likely among women from better socio-economic class.

Supporting information

S1 Fig. Plot of logistic predicted probabilities vs. linear model.

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S2 Fig. Plot of logistic predicted probabilities vs. LPM.

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S1 Table. Logistic regression estimates for adolescents who paid dowry by background characteristics (15–19 years).

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S2 Table. Percentage distribution of adolescents who paid dowry by region, 15–19 years.

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S3 Table. Stepwise logistic regression estimates for adolescents who paid dowry by background characteristics (15–19 years).

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S4 Table. Summary statistics for LPM.

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S5 Table. Correlation index for robustness check of LPM.

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Acknowledgments

Authors are thankful to Population Council, India for providing UDAYA data for research. This paper was written using data collected as part of Population Council’s UDAYA study, which is funded by the Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation and the David and Lucile Packard Foundation.

Data Availability

The data can be found from the following link: https://dataverse.harvard.edu/dataset.xhtml?persistentId=doi:10.7910/DVN/RRXQNT.

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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Banned by the law, practiced by the society: The study of factors associated with dowry payments in Uttar Pradesh and Bihar, India

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Summary & General Evaluation

Dowries are wealth transfers from the bride’s family to the groom or groom’s family paid at the time of the wedding. In India, the practice of dowry payment is highly prevalent and typically several times the yearly household income, despite being illegal since 1961. This paper studies the factors associated with a dowry payment using data from the Understanding the Lives of Adolescents and Young Adults (UDAYA) project, consisting of 5206 married adolescent girls from two states in India, Utter Pradesh, and Bihar.

Using logistic regression analysis, the authors document associations between the practice of dowry payment and various socio-economic factors such as the age of the girl, education of the girl, household socioeconomic status, spousal education and, spousal age gap, to name a few.

Let me start by saying that I find the exercise of establishing correlations between dowry payments and important socio-economic variables worthwhile, and the paper definitely furthers our understanding of the possible determinants of the decision to pay a dowry along with confirming some of the previous findings in the literature. However, in its current version, the paper could be significantly improved in terms analysis and writing. Below I summarize my main comments.

Main Comments

Data and Regression Analysis. The following are my specific concerns with the data and analysis in the paper (The main text from the article is in blue with quotations):

"The sample size for this study was 5,206 adolescent girls who were married at the time of the survey" – The original sample is 10,350 adolescents from Utter Pradesh and 10,350 adolescents from Bihar; from this, you select 5206 adolescents. Please explain the sample selection procedure.

"Wealth index was recoded as poorest, poorer, middle, richer, and richest. The survey measured household economic status, using a wealth index composed of household asset data on ownership of selected durable goods, including means of transportation, as well as data on access to a number of amenities. The wealth index was constructed by allocating" - Doing a Principal Component Analysis on the variables and, creating a wealth component would be preferred.

"This is consistent with our study's findings, where the girls from the wealthier family were more likely to pay the dowry at marriage." – I am not sure what variable are you using for natal family wealth?

Since your sample by definition only includes girls aged 15-19. The fraction of girls who are legally going to marry above the legal age of 18 is by construction going to be small. The authors should mention this point in the paper.

π needs to defined precisely in the specified logistic regression.

As a robustness check, the authors could see if these correlations hold true using a linear probability model instead of logistic regression.

Relation to existing works. The authors could have been more thorough in writing this paper, especially in citing relevant literature while explaining the main findings. There is extensive theoretical literature in economics on the emergence and the existence of dowries. In the introduction, while motivating the presence of dowries in societies like India, the authors cite some of the papers such as Anderson (2003) but miss out on some critical articles like Anderson and Bidner (2015); Botticini and Siow (2003).

Similarly, there is a growing empirical literature studying the determinants of dowry payments that have carefully analyzed questions related to this paper’s main findings. I recommend the authors carefully review the following articles:

Chiplunkar and Weaver (2019) carefully document the transition of dowry payments in India using the 1999 wave of the ARIS-REDS data and test which theories about dowry inflation are consistent with the data which are not. I highly recommend the authors to read this paper thoroughly. For example, the authors in the introduction talk about the Sanskritization theory, Chiplunkar and Weaver (2019) show that this theory cannot explain dowry inflation. Similarly, they also find that the REDS data offers limited support to the marriage squeeze hypothesis.

Edlund (1999): The author also studies the hedonic regressions of dowry on bridal traits. However, she looks at actual magnitude dowry payments, different from this paper that looks at dowry payments on the extensive margin. A couple of sentences comparing results in this paper to yours will be beneficial.

Arunachalam and Logan (2016) is also a related paper.

Exposition and takeaways. The discussion and the conclusion section need to significantly re-written for clarity. The authors make a series of claims in the discussion section that require a relevant citation. Similarly, the conclusion section can also be reworded in line with the main contribution of the paper. I list some of the specific instances below (The main text from the article is in blue with quotations):

"Researchers unanimously agreed that the problem lies with gender inequality and female deprivation at every stage" - This sentence needs to be reworded for clarity, and relevant literature that has documented the relationship between dowry payment and gender inequality at different stages of a woman’s life needs to be cited (Alfano, 2017; Bhalotra et al., 2020; Bloch and Rao, 2002; Zhang and Chan, 1999). Further, the claim that dowries are associated with female deprivation at every stage is not supported by the existing literature (Zhang and Chan, 1999).

"Despite acknowledging the problem of dowry widely, there is a paucity of empirical studies that systematically analyze the correlates of dowry among adolescent girls in recent times." - The authors need to cite relevant papers here.

"However, with the transition of time, the practice of dowry is becoming mandatory, and the demand for a higher dowry becomes a burden to the bride’s family." - There is a shift in dowries from a stridhan to a groom-price (Srinivas, 1984), but what is the evidence that the practice is becoming more mandatory?

"Finally, national representative data will be helpful for further study to understand the scenario of dowry practice in India, as because India is a country with diverse social and cultural practices, dowry will vary with respect to their cultural norms." - Rural Economic and Demographic Survey (REDS) of India is a nationally representative survey that contains dowry information.

"Instead, a massive social reform and action are urgently required to stop the practice and change their attitude about the system. A community-level approach is necessary to develop their level of understanding and awareness to understand the negative impact of such an evil custom. Simultaneously, it is necessary to restructure the existing dowry prohibition law to make it more effective. There are some unique and exceptional causes regarding dowry that need to be considered during policy development." - This goes well beyond the scope of the paper. The paper is documenting interesting correlations in a unique dataset between dowry payment and socio-economic characteristics. The conclusion should be about these associations.

Other comments

"However, in his study, Anderson refuted the claims of any association between marriage squeeze and dowry payments [11]." - This sentence has a notable typo; it should be in her study.

The paper in its current version has several typos and grammatical errors. The references section needs to be edited, too; please follow one reference style consistently throughout the paper.

Reviewer #2: Comments regarding three major areas - contribution, mechanisms and empirical analysis are attached. These are the key areas in this which this paper needs a significant improvement from its current draft.

Reviewer #3: The paper uses data on 5206 married adolescent girls from the Understanding the lives of adolescents and young adults (UDAYA) conducted in Uttar Pradesh and Bihar for studying correlates of dowry payment in India. Main findings are - dowry likelihood lower if husband is known to the female, if the adolescent’s mother has more than 10 years of education; dowry likelihood higher if the couple is more educated, girl above legal age, husband was older, wealthier families, and in rural areas.

Major comments

1) Definition of dowry and who answered the question matters: While the authors mention that their main variable of interest comes from what a household’s response is to the question – “whether dowry paid at the time of marriage or later?” – what is not clear is the inclusions in the term “dowry”. A clarity on this would be valuable for the readers. There are two potential measurement issues with this variable

o One, if perception of dowry (inclusions) and hence reporting varies by education or other economic correlates, then this can potentially contaminate the findings of the paper.

o Second, dowry is a sensitive issue and reporting might vary – although whether it varies along the dimensions that the authors study would need to be argues. If it is underreported by the same fraction by all groups then it does not matter. However, the rural-urban differential can vary because of reporting sensitivity too where urban households maybe aware of dowry prohibition act.

o Importantly, who answers the question is also important and implications of these both should be adequately discussed, even though I suppose addressing these issues is not feasible.

2) The authors mention – “Higher education is often found to be associated with higher dowry; this is because due to the competition among the brides for a particular groom leads to offers of higher and higher dowries” and cite a paper by Munshi (2017). But I am not certain if this is the only theoretical channel that should drive the effect of education on dowries. It is possible that more education leads to more awareness about evils of dowry and can potentially also lower the dowry payment? In general, it would be good to present a theoretical framework of why each result that the authors obtain can be justified theoretically (not a theoretical model, but channels are enough). At least, what are the hypothesis of the authors (based on different channels) should be mentioned before they go on to the empirical strategy and discuss the covariates they include. The current discussion in the results seems a bit superfluous and lacks conceptual clarity, hence the results do not seem to come together coherently.

3) While discussing the results the authors discuss results from previous studies which examine both probability of dowry payment and amount of dowry paid – it would be good for a reader to clearly differentiate between these two types of studies.

4) The authors also make an argument on page 13 about girls from Bihar more likely to pay dowry than UP and relate it to social norms. In my understanding, as a reader, both Bihar and UP, two bordering northern states of India have very similar social norms around gender so this argument needs to be validated and cannot be left as an open statement. Does Bihar do worse than UP on indicators of gender equality?

5) I would also suggest estimating separate regressions for rural and urban areas since education effects can vary by region too and it would be good to know how they vary.

Minor comments

6) The authors write – “However, in his study, Anderson refuted the claims of any association between marriage squeeze and dowry payments.” Siwan Anderson is a female economist and therefore the correct pronoun must be used for her.

7) More than legal age is defined by authors as (≤18 years) – seems like a typo?

8) Table 1 – would be good to report the standard errors

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Reviewer #1: Referee Report on "Banned by the law, practiced by the society: The study of factors associated with dowry payments in Uttar Pradesh and Bihar, India"

Summary & General Evaluation

1. Dowries are wealth transfers from the bride’s family to the groom or groom’s family paid at the time of the wedding. In India, the practice of dowry payment is highly prevalent and typically several times the yearly household income, despite being illegal since 1961. This paper studies the factors associated with a dowry payment using data from the Understanding the Lives of Adolescents and Young Adults (UDAYA) project, consisting of 5206 married adolescent girls from two states in India, Utter Pradesh, and Bihar. Using logistic regression analysis, the authors document associations between the practice of dowry payment and various socio-economic factors such as the age of the girl, education of the girl, household socioeconomic status, spousal education and, spousal age gap, to name a few.

Response: Authors are thankful to the reviewer for reading the manuscript critically and for giving his valuable inputs.

2. Let me start by saying that I find the exercise of establishing correlations between dowry payments and important socio-economic variables worthwhile, and the paper definitely furthers our understanding of the possible determinants of the decision to pay a dowry along with confirming some of the previous findings in the literature. However, in its current version, the paper could be significantly improved in terms analysis and writing. Below I summarize my main comments.

Response: Authors have carried out the revisions as suggested by the reviewer.

Main Comments

3. Data and Regression Analysis. The following are my specific concerns with the data and analysis in the paper (The main text from the article is in blue with quotations): "The sample size for this study was 5,206 adolescent girls who were married at the time of the survey" – The original sample is 10,350 adolescents from Utter Pradesh and 10,350 adolescents from Bihar; from this, you select 5206 adolescents. Please explain the sample selection procedure.

Response: Dear reviewer, we dealt with only married adolescent girls aged 15-19 (N=5206). The remaining sample was for unmarried adolescent boys and girls. We mentioned in the last line of the method section “ The sample size for this study was 5,206 adolescent girls who were married at the time of the survey”

4. "Wealth index was recoded as poorest, poorer, middle, richer, and richest. The survey measured household economic status, using a wealth index composed of household asset data on ownership of selected durable goods, including means of transportation, as well as data on access to a number of amenities. The wealth index was constructed by allocating" - Doing a Principal Component Analysis on the variables and, creating a wealth component would be preferred.

Response: Dear reviewer, we used Principal Component Analysis for creating wealth component. However, it was not mentioned. We have now mentioned that in the respective variable description.

5. "This is consistent with our study's findings, where the girls from the wealthier family were more likely to pay the dowry at marriage." – I am not sure what variable are you using for natal family wealth?

Response: We used the household wealth index to measure girls’ level of economic status. Wealth index is a proxy indicator to understand the economic status of the household. This is a composite index constructed by using the information such as availability of land, having Radio, TV, Type of house, Source of drinking water, Type of latrine facility etc.

6. Since your sample by definition only includes girls aged 15-19. The fraction of girls who are legally going to marry above the legal age of 18 is by construction going to be small. The authors should mention this point in the paper.

Response: Comment incorporated in the description of the respective variable description.

7. π needs to defined precisely in the specified logistic regression.

Response: comment incorporated.

8. As a robustness check, the authors could see if these correlations hold true using a linear probability model instead of logistic regression.

Response: Dear reviewer, thank you for such a useful insight. The authors checked for the linear probability model instead of logistic regression; however, as per the literature available and results from our analysis revealed that logistic regression model was best fit model.

9. Relation to existing works. The authors could have been more thorough in writing this paper, especially in citing relevant literature while explaining the main findings. There is extensive theoretical literature in economics on the emergence and the existence of dowries. In the introduction, while motivating the presence of dowries in societies like India, the authors cite some of the papers such as Anderson (2003) but miss out on some critical articles like Anderson and Bidner (2015); Botticini and Siow (2003).

Response: the authors are thankful to the reviewer for suggesting some potential studies that the authors missed. Accordingly the introduction section has been revised by including the suggested studies.

10. Similarly, there is a growing empirical literature studying the determinants of dowry payments that have carefully analyzed questions related to this paper’s main findings. I recommend the authors carefully review the following articles:

Chiplunkar and Weaver (2019) carefully document the transition of dowry payments in India using the 1999 wave of the ARIS-REDS data and test which theories about dowry inflation are consistent with the data which are not. I highly recommend the authors to read this paper thoroughly. For example, the authors in the introduction talk about the Sanskritization theory, Chiplunkar and Weaver (2019) show that this theory cannot explain dowry inflation. Similarly, they also find that the REDS data offers limited support to the marriage squeeze hypothesis.

Edlund (1999): The author also studies the hedonic regressions of dowry on bridal traits. However, she looks at actual magnitude dowry payments, different from this paper that looks at dowry payments on the extensive margin. A couple of sentences comparing results in this paper to yours will be beneficial.

Arunachalam and Logan (2016) is also a related paper.

Response: Authors are very much thankful to the reviewer for critically studying the paper and suggesting relevant literature. Accordingly, we have included all the suggested literatures in the manuscript.

11. Exposition and takeaways. The discussion and the conclusion section need to significantly re-written for clarity. The authors make a series of claims in the discussion section that require a relevant citation. Similarly, the conclusion section can also be reworded in line with the main contribution of the paper. I list some of the specific instances below (The main text from the article is in blue with quotations):

"Researchers unanimously agreed that the problem lies with gender inequality and female deprivation at every stage" - This sentence needs to be reworded for clarity, and relevant literature that has documented the relationship between dowry payment and gender inequality at different stages of a woman’s life needs to be cited (Alfano, 2017; Bhalotra et al., 2020; Bloch and Rao, 2002; Zhang and Chan, 1999). Further, the claim that dowries are associated with female deprivation at every stage is not supported by the existing literature (Zhang and Chan, 1999).

Response: Authors are thankful to the reviewer for suggesting the previously related study. We have read all the studies coherently and added the related information in the revised manuscript as suggested by the reviewer.

12. "Despite acknowledging the problem of dowry widely, there is a paucity of empirical studies that systematically analyze the correlates of dowry among adolescent girls in recent times." - The authors need to cite relevant papers here.

Response: Authors have cited the relevant literature at the given place in the text.

13. "However, with the transition of time, the practice of dowry is becoming mandatory, and the demand for a higher dowry becomes a burden to the bride’s family." - There is a shift in dowries from a stridhan to a groom-price (Srinivas, 1984), but what is the evidence that the practice is becoming more mandatory?

Response: The authors want to clarify here, that in the above statement, we mean to say that dowry becomes a common practice, instead of mandatory. We have reframed the sentence

14. "Finally, national representative data will be helpful for further study to understand the scenario of dowry practice in India, as because India is a country with diverse social and cultural practices, dowry will vary with respect to their cultural norms." - Rural Economic and Demographic Survey (REDS) of India is a nationally representative survey that contains dowry information.

Response: I do agree that REDS is a nationally representative data. However, REDS conduct the survey only in Rural India and a sample of only 9500 household will not give good country level representation for a country like India with a large population.

15. "Instead, a massive social reform and action are urgently required to stop the practice and change their attitude about the system. A community-level approach is necessary to develop their level of understanding and awareness to understand the negative impact of such an evil custom. Simultaneously, it is necessary to restructure the existing dowry prohibition law to make it more effective. There are some unique and exceptional causes regarding dowry that need to be considered during policy development." - This goes well beyond the scope of the paper. The paper is documenting interesting correlations in a unique dataset between dowry payment and socio-economic characteristics. The conclusion should be about these associations.

Response: Thank you for the comment. We now have incorporated the suggestion.

16. Other comments: "However, in his study, Anderson refuted the claims of any association between marriage squeeze and dowry payments [11]." - This sentence has a notable typo; it should be in her study. The paper in its current version has several typos and grammatical errors. The references section needs to be edited, too; please follow one reference style consistently throughout the paper.

Response: Thank you for highlighting the issue of typing error. The same has been corrected. Also, the references have been modified as per given suggestion.

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Reviewer 2:

Summary: This paper looks at the correlates of the prevalence of dowry in UP and Bihar in India. It uses an adolescent survey conducted in these two states. Using a conditional correlation empirical setup, it documents important correlates such as education, wealth, and age at marriage, thereby aiming to contribute to the knowledge of dowry prevalence in India. There are some key areas in which this paper needs significant modifications. Following comments are aimed at highlighting those areas and providing suggestions wherever possible.

Response: Authors are thankful to the reviewer for providing his valuable inputs.

Comments:

1. While the goal of the paper is clearer, the contribution needs more work. Authors cite literature that has looked at the factors explaining cross-sectional differences in dowry practice and linking it to marriage market conditions and socio-economic factors. The variables authors look at are not too different from these factors and the contribution seems unclear. Authors need to clearly explain how their study is an addition/complementary to the existing work. In addition to that, the paper needs to document what gaps it is attempting to bridge in the literature. While doing that, a clear and coherent discussion of the existing literature is required. It is imperative to document the main findings of existing studies and any unexplored gaps. Finally, how this study aims to fill those gaps and what equips this study to look further than the existing literature. Also, how is the survey different from other larger-scale publicly available survey data such as IHDS and DHS? What is specific about this survey that allows for an exploration which would have not been possible otherwise (if so)?

Response: The manuscript has been revised on the suggested lines. Introduction and discussion section has been improved a lot.

2. This comment relates to the lack of mechanisms in this paper. The paper relies on existing literature and links their findings to the empirical analysis in this paper. However, this is not adequate in terms of exploring mechanisms. In absence of a non-causal setup, this becomes particularly difficult but no less important. Before linking the correlates to the theoretical work in the field (as cited by the authors), authors should try to explore the mechanisms of their findings using an empirical framework and the data used in this study.

Response: We have analysed the correlates of dowry in two states of India without much focus on mechanism and empirical framework. However, we have extensively improved upon the introduction section that provides a viable framework for this study.

a) Regional or cluster level heterogeneities in explanatory variables can be utilized to explore the link between the prevalence of dowry and potential mechanisms (which can often be conflicting based on the findings of existing theoretical and empirical literature). These heterogeneities could be based on:

I. Regional differences in education levels of marriageable girls and boys.

II. Regional difference in age of marriage for both girls and boys.

III. Regional differences in wealth.

IV. Regional differences in caste mix. Homogeneity in caste mix may have different implications for dowry practice as compared to higher diversity in caste mix working through the channels of societal norms, culture, etc.

Response: A supplementary table is now added with the disaggregated analysis by region.

b) Dowry prevalence is highly correlated with individual characteristics and regional or group characteristics. It can be thought of as a function of differences in the distribution of individual independent variables and the differences in groups and regions induced by 2 these independent variables. Authors should explore if they can decompose the observed effect into these categories using methods like Oaxaca-Blinder decomposition. This may go a long way in unmasking some important effects and put them in the context of existing literature.

Response: Thanks for the suggestion. The authors completely agree with this. However, applying Oaxaca-Blinder decomposition is beyond the scope of this paper. The author may explore this in future research on the next round of UDAYA data where a sample of married women would be large enough to do such analysis including intersectionality or combinations of groups, regions and decomposing their effects.

c) After the empirical work exploring the channels that data allows for, existing literature on societal norms, culture, and prevalence of dowry can form a more organic link between the findings and possible explanations of the findings.

Response: The introduction and discussion section has been updated to incorporated the changes on the suggested lines.

d) Authors can use other publicly available primary data such as DHS and IHDS to explore a much larger set of regional heterogeneities in relevant explanatory factors. This however is condition on being able to link the regions (district etc.) in the survey to these other datasets.

Response: Authors are aware of those data source, however, the aim was to cetagorize the risk factor of dowry in two of the most backward states in India utilizing the latest data source.

3. Empirical work in this study needs improvement on multiple grounds. Some very important areas are below:

a) The paper currently lacks the features of a representative conditional correlational analysis in the field. In the presence of a potential omitted variable bias and no direct measure in form of a causal framework to counter that, I would suggest the following:

I. Testing the sensitivity of explanatory variables to addition and removal of other linked controls. All explanatory factors should be added sequentially and their sensitivity to the addition of further variables/controls should be documented before the direction and magnitude of their correlation to dowry prevalence can be discussed in results. For a few key variables such as household wealth, education, etc – their coefficient stability can be subjected to randomly dropping other regional and demographic controls.

Response: Authors have tried the analysis as suggested by the reviewer. Accordingly, three supplementary tables have been added during the revision. Certain analysis were not possible as they were not related to study objectives, or were not significant or authors were not aware of the techniques.

II. Explore the coefficient stability more formally using statistical exercises that provide bounds for the treatment effects, such as Oster (2016).

Response: Dear reviewer, this is for the linear model, authors are not sure in the case of logistic if it can be applied

b) Multiple correlates can be thought of as multiple hypotheses being tested. The coefficients should be subjected to tests for multiple hypotheses such as BenjaminiHochberg correction.

Response: Dear reviewer the authors are not aware of this technique. As per authors knowledge, cross tabulations between multiple variables (with categorical nature) and using chi square test is sufficient to establish the association.

c) Discuss why a logistic distribution is more appropriate for this setup as compared to something like a linear probability model.

Response: Dear reviewer, thank you for such a useful insight. The authors checked for the linear probability model instead of logistic regression; however, as per the literature available and results from our analysis revealed that logistic regression model was best fit model.

d) Formally describe the model along with the variable construction. Are there any regional fixed effects? What is the level of clustering of standard errors?

Response: We have analysed the data and results are presented in supplementary tables. We have made analysis urban-rural wise to depict regional variations.

e) Results should be reported with the difference in coefficients and standard errors.

Response: Dear reviewer, in table-2 the authors have added standard errors.

f) Are there any sampling weights? They are more important in conditional correlations.

Response: Dear reviewer, the authors used individual weights to provide representative estimates. Now added in the statistical analysis section.

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Reviewer 3:

Reviewer #3: The paper uses data on 5206 married adolescent girls from the Understanding the lives of adolescents and young adults (UDAYA) conducted in Uttar Pradesh and Bihar for studying correlates of dowry payment in India. Main findings are - dowry likelihood lower if husband is known to the female, if the adolescent’s mother has more than 10 years of education; dowry likelihood higher if the couple is more educated, girl above legal age, husband was older, wealthier families, and in rural areas.

Major comments

1) Definition of dowry and who answered the question matters: While the authors mention that their main variable of interest comes from what a household’s response is to the question – “whether dowry paid at the time of marriage or later?” – what is not clear is the inclusions in the term “dowry”. A clarity on this would be valuable for the readers. There are two potential measurement issues with this variable

Response: A more refined discussion on dowry has been included to avoid any confusion.

a) One, if perception of dowry (inclusions) and hence reporting varies by education or other economic correlates, then this can potentially contaminate the findings of the paper.

Response: Authors have revised the paper on the suggested lines.

b) Second, dowry is a sensitive issue and reporting might vary – although whether it varies along the dimensions that the authors study would need to be argues. If it is underreported by the same fraction by all groups then it does not matter. However, the rural-urban differential can vary because of reporting sensitivity too where urban households maybe aware of dowry prohibition act.

Response: The reporting of dowry could be underreported and authors agreed with this point. Furthermore, we have provide supplementary table to look into the urban-rural differential as suggested by the reviewer.

c) Importantly, who answers the question is also important and implications of these both should be adequately discussed, even though I suppose addressing these issues is not feasible.

Response: A more refined discussion has been included now.

2) The authors mention – “Higher education is often found to be associated with higher dowry; this is because due to the competition among the brides for a particular groom leads to offers of higher and higher dowries” and cite a paper by Munshi (2017). But I am not certain if this is the only theoretical channel that should drive the effect of education on dowries. It is possible that more education leads to more awareness about evils of dowry and can potentially also lower the dowry payment? In general, it would be good to present a theoretical framework of why each result that the authors obtain can be justified theoretically (not a theoretical model, but channels are enough). At least, what are the hypothesis of the authors (based on different channels) should be mentioned before they go on to the empirical strategy and discuss the covariates they include. The current discussion in the results seems a bit superfluous and lacks conceptual clarity, hence the results do not seem to come together coherently.

Response: Thank you for the comment. We now have incorporated the comment.

3) While discussing the results the authors discuss results from previous studies which examine both probability of dowry payment and amount of dowry paid – it would be good for a reader to clearly differentiate between these two types of studies.

Response: Thank you for the comment. We have incorporated the comment and cited the source of the study.

4) The authors also make an argument on page 13 about girls from Bihar more likely to pay dowry than UP and relate it to social norms. In my understanding, as a reader, both Bihar and UP, two bordering northern states of India have very similar social norms around gender so this argument needs to be validated and cannot be left as an open statement. Does Bihar do worse than UP on indicators of gender equality?

Response: Thank you for the comment. We now have reframed the discussion for this finding.

5) I would also suggest estimating separate regressions for rural and urban areas since education effects can vary by region too and it would be good to know how they vary.

Response: Comment incorporated and results are depicted through supplementary tables.

Minor comments

6) The authors write – “However, in his study, Anderson refuted the claims of any association between marriage squeeze and dowry payments.” Siwan Anderson is a female economist and therefore the correct pronoun must be used for her.

Response: The authors are really sorry for typing error. The same comment has also been raised by another reviewer. Accordingly, the error has been corrected.

7) More than legal age is defined by authors as (≤18 years) – seems like a typo?

Response: Comment incorporated.

8) Table 1 – would be good to report the standard errors

Response: Dear sir, in table-1 the authors estimated descriptive statistics using percentage and sample. So, it was not possible to add standard errors in that table. However, in table-2 we have provided standard errors for the estimates.

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Decision Letter 1

Nishith Prakash

14 Jun 2021

PONE-D-21-04546R1

Banned by the law, practiced by the society: The study of factors associated with dowry payments among adolescent girls in Uttar Pradesh and Bihar, India

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Dear Dr. Kumar,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. I enjoyed reading the revised draft. The paper has clearly improved from the last version, but I see that you have not carried out many revisions that I was hoping. I will like you to address the following:

1. Elaborate on the sample selection procedure – what steps were followed.

2. Robustness on LPM must be added as a table.

3. Please use Oster (2016) when you do the LPM (linear probability model).

4. I will like to see a table comparing the basic descriptive statistics with IHDS or REDS (I will prefer REDS over IHDS).

After you resubmit the paper I will handle the decision myself. To make this easier, please send me a letter telling me which changes you made.

Thank you.

Nishith

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


18 Jun 2021

1. Elaborate on the sample selection procedure – what steps were followed.

Response: Comment incorporated (Figure-1).

2. Robustness on LPM must be added as a table.

Response: Comment incorporated.

3. Please use Oster (2016) when you do the LPM (linear probability model).

Response: Comment incorporated.

4. I will like to see a table comparing the basic descriptive statistics with IHDS or REDS (I will prefer REDS over IHDS).

Response: The authors cannot use IHDS or REDS data for the following issues.

(a): IHDS data gives estimates at national level and therefore, state-level analysis cannot be performed. It is not a good idea to perform state-level analysis as the data is not state-representative. In this study, we have used UDAYA data specifically designed for Uttar Pradesh and Bihar. Conceptually, it is not feasible to compare the two datasets.

(b): The UDAYA data we used is from 2016. However, the latest REDS data is from 2006. Therefore, the descriptive analysis may not be that useful. So, authors feel that it won’t be a good idea to generate a table (using IHDS/REDS data) for bivariate association.

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Decision Letter 2

Nishith Prakash

28 Jun 2021

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Banned by the law, practiced by the society: The study of factors associated with dowry payments among adolescent girls in Uttar Pradesh and Bihar, India

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Dear Dr. Kumar

There are few things I really want you to address:

1. I cannot find the Oster (2017) table.

2. Please have detailed notes in all tables -- some have no notes.

3. Have proper labels for all variables used in the tables.

4. IHDS (2005 and 2011) can be used for state level analysis as its representative (so is REDS). Although its an older data, it important to show the table.

I cannot proceed unless you address these 4 points. Also, I found the tables quite sloppy.

Best,

Nishith

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Author response to Decision Letter 2


20 Jul 2021

Editor’s comments:

1. I cannot find the Oster (2017) table.

Response: Dear Editor, We are really sorry as we are unable to understand the Oster (2017) table. We tried our best but could not prepare the required table. We also took help from some of the individuals/researchers, however, none of them could come out to our rescue as everyone failed to understand the concept. We are really sorry on our part as we were unable to understand the relevant methodology and therefore, we are not including Oster (2017) table. If the table is absolute necessity, we would seek the editor’s guidance in this regard.

2. Please have detailed notes in all tables -- some have no notes.

Response: All the tables have been updated as suggested.

3. Have proper labels for all variables used in the tables.

Response: Labels have been formatted as per the suggestion.

4. IHDS (2005 and 2011) can be used for state level analysis as its representative (so is REDS). Although its an older data, it important to show the table.

Response: Authors have used IHDS data to show the relevant information. Please find the table attached to this response.

Table : Socio-economic characteristics of married girls 15-19, 2004-05 and 2011-12

Background characteristics IHDS 2004-05 IHDS II 2011-12

Sample Percentage Sample Percentage

Gift paid at the time of marriage

No 0 0 N/A N/A

Yes 347 100 N/A N/A

Age at marriage (in years)

Less than 15 124 35.7 70 30.0

15 and more 223 64.3 163 70.0

Literate

No 196 57.0 79 33.9

Yes 148 43.0 154 66.1

Working status

No 256 73.78 184 79.0

Yes 91 26.22 49 21.0

Caste

SC/ST 95 27.4 67 28.8

Non-SC/ST 252 72.6 166 71.2

Religion

Hindu 293 84.4 184 79.0

Non-Hindu 54 15.6 49 21.0

Wealth index

Poorest 97 28.0 47 20.2

Poorer 61 17.6 47 20.2

Middle 77 22.2 46 19.7

Richer 59 17.0 47 20.2

Richest 53 15.3 46 19.7

Residence

Urban 66 19.0 37 15.9

Rural 281 81.0 196 84.1

State

Uttar Pradesh 245 70.6 155 66.5

Bihar 102 29.4 78 33.5

Total 347 100 233 100

N/A: Data Not available;

Dowry is assessed from the question "Generally in your community for a family like yours, what are the kind of things that are given as gifts at the time of the daughter's marriage?" Gold, Silver, Land, Car, Scooter/motorcycle, TV, Fridge, Furniture, Pressure Cooker, Utensils, Mixer grinder, Bedding/mattress, Watch, Bicycle, Sewing machine, Livestock, Tractor and Cash.

* Please note that the dowry prevalence is 100 percent for the year 2004-05. The question related to dowry asked in IHDS was different than what was asked in UDAYA data.

Furthermore, authors could not utilize REDS data as the relevant data were not provided to the authors. We requested to the concerned authority for data access, however, we were told that they only grant access in certain conditions that are needed to be fulfilled by the institution. They only grant access to the institution and from institution only we can borrow data after receiving proper IRB approval which was not feasible in this case.

This is what they said:

To obtain cross-walk to village identifiers and/or previous survey rounds or any of the 2006 data, the investigator must obtain IRB approval from their respective university or institution. The IRB-approved proposal should indicate the following:

a) that statistical identification of households or villages is possible with the secure data

b) that linked data and cross-walks will be kept in a secure environment

c) names of all investigators and research assistants with access to the linked data

d) that linked data will only be used on projects with IRB approval

e) that the linked data or the cross-walk cannot be provided to investigators or researchers

not specifically identified in (c)

f) that publications and presentations must not reveal village or individual level identifiers.

I cannot proceed unless you address these 4 points. Also, I found the tables quite sloppy.

Response: We have edited the tables as per given suggestions. Furthermore, we tried to incorporate all the comments suggested by the editor except that Oster (2017) related comment. We seek advice from editor on this issue.

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Decision Letter 3

Nishith Prakash

17 Aug 2021

PONE-D-21-04546R3

Banned by the law, practiced by the society: The study of factors associated with dowry payments among adolescent girls in Uttar Pradesh and Bihar, India

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Author response to Decision Letter 3


30 Sep 2021

MANUSCRIPT TITLE: Banned by the law, practiced by the society: The study of factors associated with dowry payments among adolescent girls in Uttar Pradesh and Bihar, India

MANUSCRIPT ID: PONE-D-21-04546R3

Respected editor,

Thank you for giving us the opportunity of submitting an improved version of our manuscript for publication in the PLOS One. We are highly grateful to receive your insightful comments and suggestions. We appreciate the time and effort that you have put forward to provide valuable feedback that has significantly improved our paper. Kindly note that we have incorporated the changes that were suggested. The modifications have been shown using track changes within the revised manuscript. Please see below for a point-by-point response to each of the comments and suggestions.

Hoping that you and your family members are safe and sound in these challenging times,

Yours Sincerely,

Authors

EDITOR COMMENTS:

1. Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.

Response: Thank you for pointing this out. Comment has been incorporated.

2. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Please see: https://emilyoster.net/research/. On this page look for JOURNAL OF BUSINESS ECONOMICS AND STATISTICS, JUNE, 2019, Unobservable Selection and Coefficient Stability: Theory and Validation. They provide the do file to undertake the exercise. W/o this paper I cannot proceed.

Response: Dear Editor thank you very much for the suggestion. Based on your comment, we proceeded for stability check of the study coefficients after reading Emily Oster’s research article. The results for the same has been shown in Table 4 of the manuscript. The methodology has been discussed in the “statistical methods” section as shown below:

Next, we check the stability of the regression coefficients and their sensitivity to selection bias using standard methods. We obtain bias-adjusted coefficients and calculate the absolute deviation from the non-bias-adjusted regression estimates to understand the extent of bias. Further, we calculate Oster's δ, whose value higher than one would indicate that the regression coefficients are insensitive to omitted variable bias and variable selection bias. All estimates were obtained with the assumption that the bias-adjusted model would explain 1.3 times variation in dowry payment status compared to the non-bias-adjusted model. The statistical analyses for coefficient stability check were performed using the psacalc command by estimating linear probability models in STATA.

The results for the stability check are discussed in the “Results” section (Page 13):

Table 4 gives the results of the coefficient stability check of the explanatory variables of dowry payment among female adolescents. From the bias-adjusted estimates (see column 8), we observe that the multivariable association between husband familiar before marriage, age at marriage, spousal education, wealth index, residence and state with dowry payment is statically significant (at 5% level) and lies in the same direction as the uncontrolled estimates. Moreover, from the difference shown in column 10, we can say that the bias-adjusted and non-bias-adjusted regression coefficients are similar. However, Oster's delta revealed that the statistically significant multivariable association of age at marriage and state with dowry payment suffers from omitted-variable and selection bias.

Further, we have added the following line as study limitation in the discussion section (Page 18):

Although the coefficient stability check revealed that the majority of the explanatory characteristics are insensitive to omitted-variable and selection bias, the results for age at marriage and state need to be interpreted with caution.

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Decision Letter 4

Nishith Prakash

4 Oct 2021

Banned by the law, practiced by the society: The study of factors associated with dowry payments among adolescent girls in Uttar Pradesh and Bihar, India

PONE-D-21-04546R4

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Best,

Nishith

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Acceptance letter

Nishith Prakash

8 Oct 2021

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Banned by the law, practiced by the society: The study of factors associated with dowry payments among adolescent girls in Uttar Pradesh and Bihar, India

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    Supplementary Materials

    S1 Fig. Plot of logistic predicted probabilities vs. linear model.

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    S2 Fig. Plot of logistic predicted probabilities vs. LPM.

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    S1 Table. Logistic regression estimates for adolescents who paid dowry by background characteristics (15–19 years).

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    S2 Table. Percentage distribution of adolescents who paid dowry by region, 15–19 years.

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    S3 Table. Stepwise logistic regression estimates for adolescents who paid dowry by background characteristics (15–19 years).

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    S4 Table. Summary statistics for LPM.

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    S5 Table. Correlation index for robustness check of LPM.

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