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. 2021 Oct 20;16(10):e0258161. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0258161

Rise of the war machines: Charting the evolution of military technologies from the Neolithic to the Industrial Revolution

Peter Turchin 1,2,3, Daniel Hoyer 4,5,*, Andrey Korotayev 6,7, Nikolay Kradin 8, Sergey Nefedov 9, Gary Feinman 10, Jill Levine 4, Jenny Reddish 1, Enrico Cioni 3, Chelsea Thorpe 3, James S Bennett 11, Pieter Francois 3, Harvey Whitehouse 3
Editor: Olivier Morin12
PMCID: PMC8528290  PMID: 34669706

Abstract

What have been the causes and consequences of technological evolution in world history? In particular, what propels innovation and diffusion of military technologies, details of which are comparatively well preserved and which are often seen as drivers of broad socio-cultural processes? Here we analyze the evolution of key military technologies in a sample of pre-industrial societies world-wide covering almost 10,000 years of history using Seshat: Global History Databank. We empirically test previously speculative theories that proposed world population size, connectivity between geographical areas of innovation and adoption, and critical enabling technological advances, such as iron metallurgy and horse riding, as central drivers of military technological evolution. We find that all of these factors are strong predictors of change in military technology, whereas state-level factors such as polity population, territorial size, or governance sophistication play no major role. We discuss how our approach can be extended to explore technological change more generally, and how our results carry important ramifications for understanding major drivers of evolution of social complexity.

Introduction

From simple sharpened stone projectiles in the Paleolithic to the weapons of mass destruction in the modern world, what have been the main factors driving the evolution of military technology? Many have argued that the evolution of military technologies is just one aspect of a much broader pattern of technological evolution driven by increasing size and interconnectedness among human societies [13]. Several cultural evolutionary theories, conversely, highlight military technologies as a special case, arguing that steep improvements in both offensive and defensive capabilities of technologies along with accompanying tactical and organizational innovations resulted in “Military Revolutions” (note the plural), which in turn had major ramifications on the rise and, of particular concern here, the spread of state formations globally [48] and the evolution of religion and other cultural phenomena [9,10]. But the evolutionary mechanisms underlying general technological innovation, adoption, and transmission (especially in pre-industrial societies) are not well understood. Moreover, available theories have drawn on evidence that is limited both in geographical scope and temporal depth and deployed in ways that are subject to selection bias. Here we explore a variety of factors that previous scholarship suggests may have played a role in the evolution of military technologies by systematically quantifying the effects of those factors for thousands of years of world history.

Earlier efforts to quantify levels of technological complexity in eastern and western ends of Eurasia [11,12] have been criticized for being unduly subjective [13], especially when it comes to measuring rates of innovation in military technology, and are obviously limited in spatial coverage. Here we propose an alternative methodology for quantifying technological evolution and expand the geographic scope from just these two broad regions to 35 “Natural Geographic Areas” across all ten major world regions, using Seshat: Global History Databank, a major resource for studying patterns of sociocultural evolution in world history (see Materials and Methods below).

This article has two related goals. The first is to establish broad spatio-temporal patterns in the evolution of military technologies in pre-industrial societies. By technological evolution we mean here the dynamics of uptake (and possible loss) of technologies used by societies at significant scale (rather than simply whether the technology was known at all), regardless of how that society came to acquire that technology (indigenous innovation or adoption from another culture). For those interested in the study of technological evolution in general, focusing specifically on military technologies in pre-industrial societies has many practical benefits. Warfare was one of the most intensive activities of human societies, leaving abundant traces in the archaeological and historical record.

The second goal is to explore why these important military technologies developed or were adopted in the places, at the times, and as part of the technological packages as we observe in the historical and archaeological record. There have been several theoretical conjectures (discussed below) about the main causal drivers of technological innovation that we test. As our approach will show, the pattern of military technological evolution shows great variation in time and space, with different regions assuming a leading role in innovation at different moments in time.

Delineating the possible causes and observed consequences of changes in levels of military technologies will have far-reaching implications for understanding the evolution of technology broadly. To encourage further progress towards that ultimate goal, we present here a detailed methodology for testing theories about technological change in human history. This paper serves as a crucial step along this path.

Theoretical background

Here, we review several competing theoretical perspectives on the evolution of technologies offered in the past. Technological change is one of the fundamental drivers in social and cultural evolution and of long-term economic growth [1417]. Many have pointed to technology’s ramifying effects on warfare, state formation, and the development of information processing systems [1,1822]. Military technologies and their widespread application in particular have been shown to foment rises in social complexity and to spur related ideological developments [2327]. But what processes are responsible for the evolution–the development, spread, and cumulative adoption–of military technology globally and across time?

Following this link between military technologies and socio-cultural development, we might expect to find a positive feedback between technological innovation and population growth at the global scale [2,2832] see also [3336]. Indeed, a well-known and much discussed theory proposed by economist Michael Kremer and expanded by others suggests exactly this causal link [2]. According to Kremer, “high population spurs technological change because it increases the number of potential inventors.” Kremer notes that "this implication flows naturally from the nonrivalry of technology… The cost of inventing a new technology is independent of the number of people who use it. Thus, holding constant the share of resources devoted to research, an increase in population leads to an increase in technological change. Thus, in a larger population there will be proportionally more people lucky or smart enough to come up with new ideas" [2: 685]. This innovation, in turn, can spur further population growth, creating a positive feedback loop between technological and population growth; for instance, the proliferation of iron axes facilitated the clearing of agricultural land from forests [37], while the iron ploughshare improved the quality of plowing allowing for increased productivity [38] and, hence, larger populations to develop further innovations. Note that what is described by Kremer is virtually identical with what David Christian calls “collective learning” [39].

This process was expressed mathematically by Taagepera, Kremer, Podlazov and Tsirel in the following way:

dTdt=kNT (1)

This equation states that the technological growth rate at a given moment in time (dT/dt) is proportional to the global population, N (the larger the population, the larger the number of potential inventors) and to the current technological level, T. The second factor is included in the model to reflect the assumption that the wider the existing technological base, the greater the number of inventions that can be made on its basis. This model explicitly refers to global population level, rather than regional or localized populations of specific societies. To account both for the effect of global population size and the existing stock of technology, the Taagepera-Kremer model assumes that the rate of technology growth is proportional to the product of these two quantities. Taagepera and Kremer did not test this hypothesis empirically in a direct way. Empirical tests of this hypothesis performed by other researchers, however, have found support [34,40]. Note that Kremer observed that these new technologies would, in turn, likely generate population growth, suggesting a positive feedback between technological innovation and population. Here, however, we are concerned only with the effect of population on the evolution of technology, rather than the reverse.

A limitation of such population-focused theories, however, is the assumption that world population can be treated as having been an integrated information-exchanging system for many centuries, if not millennia. To address this problem, world-systems analysts have advanced an additional cluster of hypotheses. Chase-Dunn and Hall, for example, distinguish four types of networks of world-system communications: bulk good networks, political-military networks, prestige good networks, and information networks (IN) [41]. Korotayev et al. [4244] explicitly focus on INs as technological innovation diffusion networks, proposing that a systematic diffusion of technological innovations within a certain set of societies is a sufficient condition to consider them a “world-system”. Thus, an as-yet unexplored synthesis of these ideas is that, while population may be one factor in the pace and location of technological evolution, membership in such an information diffusion network may play an additional role in facilitating the exchange of ideas and propensity for wide-spread adoption of new technologies.

One important advantage of the population-driven model advocated by Kremer, Taagepera, and others is that it explicitly includes the effect of the existing stock of technologies on technological growth rate. The greater the existing stock, the greater number of new technologies the model expects to be developed in the next time period. Although this is only one, relatively straightforward, way to model the impact of the existing technology stock, there is substantial historical evidence to make it a strong contender to be tested empirically. For example, the improvement of metallurgy and metal processing led not only to the emergence of new tools such as iron ploughs, but also to the proliferation of various types of weapons—starting with knives, daggers, swords, battle axes, up to the appearance of rifles and artillery. Nevertheless, the model assumes that the means and knowledge to adapt and improve upon existing technologies are readily accessible as well as the organizational capacity to deploy these technologies at large scales, which are open questions requiring further scrutiny.

Further, once a military technology had proven advantageous in inter-state competition, there arose an existential pressure on nearby societies to adopt that technology as well, so as not to be left behind. This sort of mimetic diffusion has been observed with respect to key technologies such as horse-mounted warfare that spread initially among nomadic confederations and nearby agrarian societies located along the central Eurasian Steppe [4548]. Indeed, the domestication of the horse and its use in the civil and military sphere–including both the material components of horse-mounted archery as well as the tactical and organizational means to wield these weapons–appear to be of particular importance in the evolution of technologies and social complexity during the pre-industrial era, improving transportation, agriculture, and military capacities alike [47]. Further, the creation of new and more lethal weapons in one society could force people in their “strike zone” [27] to invent more sophisticated defenses while also often adopting the offensive technology themselves, prompting further technological advances. Following the invention of increasingly powerful, armor-piercing projectiles from bows and crossbows, for instance, we tend to see the means of protection improved as well to include chain mail, scaled armor, and plate armor.

Similarly, some work suggests that location is a critical factor in this process, as societies on the periphery, or semi-periphery [41], of larger, more complex imperial states will tend to be hotbeds of innovation, as they have both the incentive to increase (typically military) capability to compete with regional powers as well as the requisite flexibility to explore more radical innovation by being removed from the institutionalized practices and path-dependencies experienced by the larger societies “locked in” to the tools and habits that won them their hegemony [41,49,50].

Overall, previous theoretical work suggests that the evolution of military technologies depends on the total number of potential innovators involved in this process, the connectedness of distinct centers of innovation as well as of spheres of inter-state competition, and on the already existing stock of technologies, especially such fundamental developments as metal processing and transportation. In Materials and Methods below we discuss how we operationalize an empirical test of these hypotheses.

Materials and methods

A general approach to quantifying the evolution of pre-industrial societies

This article follows the general philosophy and procedures that have been developed by the Seshat: Global History Databank project [5154]. The Seshat Databank stores large volumes of historical and archaeological data on a growing number of variables for past polities going back to the late Neolithic. Supplementary Information (SI) contains a detailed description of the core methods and workflows underpinning the Seshat project, including how we incorporate differing levels of uncertainty and disagreement and data quality procedures involving experts and research assistants. We make the data used for the analyses presented here available online through a DataBrowser site (seshatdatabank.info/databrowser) and we encourage scholars to make use of and to augment our dataset.

The principal unit for data collection and analysis is a polity, defined as any independent political unit ranging from autonomous villages (local communities) through simple and complex chiefdoms to states and empires, regardless of degree of centralization [51,52]. Our sample of historic polities was developed using a stratified sample of the globe using the concept of ‘Natural Geographic Area’ (NGA). An NGA is a fixed spatial location of roughly 100 x 100 km delimited by naturally occurring geographical features (for example, a river basin, a coastal plain, a mountain valley, or an island). All polities that occupied the NGA, or part thereof, at a century mark (e.g. 200 CE), are included in our sample. This strategy avoids oversampling (redundantly repeating information across time points) while still capturing meaningful changes in the variables of interest. Although this granularity is relatively coarse, it is suitable for uncovering macro-level patterns in societal dynamics and exploring pathways of cultural evolution [24,53]. The data used in the analyses presented here come from 373 historic polities covering 35 NGAs.

Aggregation of military technology data into “Warfare Characteristics”

We quantified the sophistication of war-making capacity by encoding 46 binary variables indicating the presence or absence of different military technologies by a polity. These variables were aggregated into six general categories, termed Warfare Characteristics (WCs): Metals used in producing weapons and armor, the variety of Projectiles and hand-held Weapons, the sophistication of Armor, the use of transport Animals, and different kinds of Defensive Fortifications. Finally these WCs were aggregated into a composite, temporal MilTech variable for each NGA. See SI for details of the aggregation.

Of the six WCs, two (Metal and Animal) have a much broader area of application than specifically warfare. In some analyses below we investigate another measure (CoreMil) that focuses more narrowly on the sophistication of core military technologies by aggregating only the Projectiles, Weapon, Armor, and Defense WCs. As described below, we explore the impact of the spread of Iron and Cavalry in particular. Because Iron and Cavalry are correlated with the Metals and Animals WCs, analyzing CoreMil allows us to disentangle any potentially spurious effects of these WCs on overall military technology.

Hypotheses to be tested: Defining predictor variables

Our review in Theoretical Background suggested that the evolution of military technologies may be a function of the total number of potential innovators, the connectedness of innovation/adoption centers, and/or the existing stocks of technology. We measure these various potential explanatory factors in the following ways:

Following Taagepera and Kremer, we proxy the number of potential innovators with the world population (WorldPop, defined as log(10) of the global population at time t). We take data on the dynamics of world population during the Holocene from [55].

Connectedness is a harder variable to quantify. Here we build on the concept of IN used by Chase-Dunn and Hall and other world-systems theorists [34,43] who define the extent of any particular IN as the zone within which spatially and culturally distinct regions exchange information, so that technological innovations made in one society diffuse relatively rapidly (on the time scale of centuries) to all other societies within the system than to societies that may be close (spatially and culturally) but fall outside of the IN. As an example, the contacts between Western and Eastern Eurasia (mediated via Central Asia) in the third and especially the second millennia BCE led to the spread of multiple technological innovations between the western and eastern parts of Eurasia: wheat, cattle, horses, bronze metallurgy, wheeled chariots, among others [44,56]. Here, we constructed a predictor variable proxying the Centrality of each region within the evolving (eventually global) IN by calculating the distance between each of our NGAs and the system of Silk Routes that connected East and West Eurasia for the majority of the period under study [5760]. Our measure of Centrality is the inverse of the distance between an NGA and the nearest node on the Silk Route (see Fig 1; and SI for details).

Fig 1. Location of nodes on Silk Routes used in quantifying Centrality (red) along with NGA locations (black).

Fig 1

NGA Region NGACode
Basin of Mexico Mexico MX
Big Island Hawaii Hawaii USHI
Cahokia Illinois USMO
Cambodian Basin Cambodia KH
Central Java Indonesia JV
Chuuk Islands Micronesia MI
Crete Greece GR
Cuzco Peru PE
Deccan Deccan DEC
Finger Lakes New York USNY
Galilee Levant IL
Garo Hills Assam ASM
Ghanaian Coast Ghana GH
Iceland Iceland IS
Kachi Plain Pakistan PK
Kansai Japan JP
Kapuasi Basin Malaysia KAL
Konya Plain Turkey TR
NGA Region NGACode
Latium Italy IT
Lena River Valley East Siberia YAK
Lowland Andes Ecuador EC
Middle Ganga Uttar Pradesh UTPR
Middle Yellow River Valley Henan CN
Niger Inland Delta Mali ML
North Colombia Colombia CO
Orkhon Valley Mongolia MN
Oro PNG New Guinea NG
Paris Basin France FR
Sogdiana Uzbekistan UZ
Southern China Hills Yunnan YUN
Southern Mesopotamia Iraq IQ
Susiana Iran IR
Upper Egypt Egypt EG
Valley of Oaxaca Oaxaca OAX
Yemeni Coastal Plain Yemen YE

In addition to Centrality within the IN, we capture two additional kinds of connectivity, namely the possible influence of spatial proximity (Space) as well as cultural affinity (Phylogeny). These terms not only allow us to control for possible autocorrelations and phylogenetic effects in our response variable (see Dynamic Regression Analysis below), but can also carry important information about processes influencing the evolution of military technologies. In particular, Space captures the process by which technological innovations may travel between geographically proximate societies–separately from the possible mediating influence of an expanding IN described above–measuring the likelihood that neighboring regions will share similar levels of military technology. Phylogeny focuses on the cultural similarity between polities, however spatially close, proxied by the relatedness of their dominant languages.

Another possible factor in the evolution of technology identified in the theoretical review is the effect of the current technology stock. We measure this in two ways. First, we model MilTech as a temporal autoregressive process, in which past values of MilTech affect its future values (for the details of the statistical model, see the next section). Second, we focus on the potential effects of two specific fundamental technologies: horse-riding and iron smelting.

According to the Cavalry Revolution theory, the invention of effective horse-riding in the Pontic-Caspian steppes, combined with powerful recurved bows and iron-tipped arrows, triggered a process of military evolution that spread from the steppes south to the belt of farming societies over several centuries throughout the first millennia BCE and CE [8,47,61]. Specifically, the threat of nomadic warriors armed with this advanced (for the period) military technology spurred the development of counter-measures designed to mitigate the cavalry advantage, while also producing an incentive to adopt horse-riding and effective accompanying combat tactics in areas further and further away from the location of their initial invention within the Steppe. The history of the military use of the horse went through several stages: the use of the chariot, the development of riding, the formation of light auxiliary cavalry, the development of nomadic riding, the appearance of the hard saddle, armored cataphracts, stirrups and, finally, heavy cavalry—a major branch of troops across Afro-Eurasian societies between c. 550 and 1400 CE [62]. As a result, effective horse-riding had far-reaching consequences for the evolution of military technologies, and specifically armor, projectiles such as crossbows, and fortifications. We use the data from [63] to encode the Cavalry variable (see Fig 2).

Fig 2. Spread of horse-mounted Cavalry.

Fig 2

Data from [63].

The effect of Iron is similarly widespread. Multiple authors [6466] have suggested that the availability of iron had a major impact on the evolution of technologies, as this strong and malleable material served as an input for a host of important technologies, military and otherwise, throughout the period under investigation here. We use data from [67] to encode the Iron variable (see Fig 3).

Fig 3. Spread of iron metallurgy.

Fig 3

Data from [67].

Note that these two variables, Cavalry and Iron, are highly correlated with each other (compare Figs 2 and 3) and it may be difficult to estimate their effects separately (the problem of collinearity). To address this potential issue we created a synthetic variable, IronCav, that combines the two effects (by adding Cavalry and Iron together). IronCav, thus, takes the maximum value for societies with both mounted warfare and iron weapons, intermediate value for societies having one characteristic and not the other, and minimum for societies with neither characteristic. We explored with dynamic regressions whether IronCav turns out to be a better predictor than either of its constituent variables, reported below.

In addition to the theoretically-motivated predictors–WorldPop, Centrality, Iron, and Cavalry, along with our autocorrelation terms Space and Phylogeny–we explore other potential polity- and NGA-specific predictors to proxy interesting subsidiary hypotheses, as explained below. These measures are taken from previously published analyses using Seshat data [68] and enable us to reduce the potential “hidden variable” (or omitted variable bias) problem, which arises when analysis implicates X as a causal factor for Y, while in reality the true cause could be Z, with which X is closely correlated [69,70]. The additional predictor variables include the following:

  1. Social scale (Scale) represents the first principal component (PC) of the Seshat variables polity population, polity territory, population of the largest settlement, and the number of hierarchical levels. The hypothesis here is that larger and more complexly organized and productive societies (in both population, territory) will have more resources to both generate new inventions and to implement them, or adopt them from elsewhere, especially the costly ones like sophisticated siege engines or elaborate fortifications. This measure also reflects having larger shares of the population not mainly engaged in primary production, proxied by the population of the largest settlement [71,72]. Further, more stratified and administratively complex societies–measured by the number of levels in administrative, military, and settlement hierarchies (combined here as one measure of hierarchical levels–see SI)–are hypothesized to be better equipped to implement useful technologies along with developing or adopting effective tactical and organizational models at scale. Thus, by this logic, increases in military technology should occur preferentially in larger scale societies. Previous analysis [53] reveals that these four dimensions are highly correlated within the Seshat sample and so represent an effective cross-cultural measure of societal scale to explore this hypothesis.

  2. SocSoph (“social sophistication”) represents the first PC of the Seshat variables governance, infrastructure, information systems, and money. This measure likewise derives from previous analysis of the dimensions of social complexity [53], capturing the important non-scale institutional and informational aspects. The hypothesis here is that societies with more sophisticated, pre-existing mechanisms for the exchange and implementation of ideas will generate and/or adopt innovations into widespread use at a faster pace.

  3. Agricultural productivity (Agri) is the estimated yield of different regions, measured as tonnes per hectare of the major carbohydrate source consumed in each of our NGAs. These data are taken from the analyses in [73]. The term is included here to test the possibility that productivity affects the amount of resources that are available for technological advances.

Social scale and productivity, thus, give us two complementary views of the resource base that may drive the evolution of technology. Agri tracks the underlying material resource base in a given geographical region (our NGAs) needed to support development, including technological evolution. Social scale, on the other hand, is a measure of the territorial and population size of specific historical polities. Larger polities can gather resources from a large territory, including the human energy from large populations, even where agricultural productivity is low. Separately SocSoph represents the sophistication of infrastructure and exchange media that could conceivably facilitate the flow of ideas from invention (whether within or outside of the society) to widespread adoption.

Statistical analysis

In addition to standard correlational statistical analyses of our response and predictor variables, we used a general non-linear dynamic regression model to investigate factors affecting the evolution of military technology. This dynamic regression analysis distinguishes correlation from causation by estimating the influence potential causal factors at a previous time have on the response variable at a later time (known generally as Wiener-Granger causality [74,75]). While an improvement over ‘static’ correlations, where causal direction remains ambiguous, this method is, nevertheless, insufficient for making absolute claims of causality. Further scrutiny will be required to provide additional support for the provisional causal interpretations suggested below.

Our model takes the following form [70]:

Yi,t=a+τbτYi,tτ+cijexp[δi,jd]Yj,t1+hijwi,jYj,t1+kgkXk,t1+ϵi,t

Here Yi,t is the response variable (MilTech) for location (NGA) i at time t. We construct a spatio-temporal series for Seshat response and predictor variables by following polities (or quasi-polities, such as archaeologically attested cultures) that occupied a specific NGA at each century mark during the sampled period. Thus, the time step in the analysis is100 years.

On the right-hand side, a is the regression constant (intercept). The next term captures the influences of past history (“autoregressive terms”), with τ = 1, 2, … indexing time-lagged values of Y (as time is measured in centuries, Yi,t– 1 refers to the value of MilTech 100 years before t).

The third term represents potential effects resulting from geographic diffusion using our Space term. We used a negative-exponential form to relate the distance between location i and location j, δi,j, to the influence of j on i. Unlike a linear kernel, the negative-exponential does not become negative at very large δi,j, instead approaching 0 smoothly. The third term, thus, is a weighted average of the response variable values in the vicinity of location i at the previous time step, with weights falling off to 0 as distance from i increases. Parameter d measures how steeply the influence falls with distance, and parameter c is a regression coefficient measuring the importance of geographic diffusion. For an overview of potential effects resulting from geographic diffusion, see [69,76]; for a description of how we avoided the problem of endogeneity, see [70].

The fourth term detects autocorrelations due to any shared cultural history at location i with other regions j using our Phylogeny variable. Here w represents the weight applied to the phylogenetic (linguistic) distance between locations (set to 1 if locations i and j share the same language, 0.5 if they are in the same linguistic genus, and 0.25 if they are in the same linguistic family). Linguistic genera and families were taken from The World Atlas of Language Structures and Glottolog [77].

The next term on the right-hand side represents the effects of the main predictor variables Xk [70]; gk are regression coefficients. These variables (described in the previous section) are of primary interest because they enable us to test various theories about the evolution of MilTech against each other. Finally, εi,t is the error term. We also include quadratic versions of these terms at a time lag (not shown) in order to explore non-linear responses to response and predictor factors.

Model selection (choosing which terms to include in the regression model) was accomplished by exhaustive search: regressing the response variable on all possible linear combinations of predictor variables. The degree of fit was quantified by the Akaike Information Criterion (AIC). Standard diagnostic tests were performed for the best-fitting models [70].

Missing values, estimate uncertainty, and expert disagreement in the predictors were dealt with by multiple imputation [78,79]. The response variable, MilTech, however, was not imputed as that can result in biased estimates [76]. For details of the multiple imputation procedure see SI. Because diagnostic tests indicated that the distribution of residuals are not gaussian, we used nonparametric bootstrap to estimate the P-values associated with various regression terms (see the SI for details). Additional robustness checks are similarly detailed in the SI.

Results

Spatio-temporal patterns

We first examined the frequency distributions of the variables of interest and the cross-correlations between WCs, overall MilTech, which combines all WCs, as well as calendar Time and the various aspects of social complexity and productivity. As expected, we find that all WCs are closely correlated with each other and with the overall MilTech variables. Plotting MilTech as a function of time for each NGA (Fig 4), we observe that there is a general upward trend, as expected. However, there are also periods when some technologies are lost, for a time. Most importantly, there is a great amount of variation between different geographic regions in the timing of MilTech increases. Interestingly, all WCs are more strongly correlated with the two dimensions of social complexity specified here–Scale and SocSoph–rather than with Time, suggesting that key drivers of MilTech evolution go beyond merely the additive nature of technology through the ‘march of time’. The nature of any causality between complexity and MilTech is discussed below.

Fig 4.

Fig 4

MilTech trajectories in Seshat NGAs, divided by major world region: (A) Europe and Africa; (B) Western Asia; (C) East and SE Asia; (D) Americas and Oceania.

We next focus on “technology leaders”, NGAs that at some point in their history had the highest value of MilTech available at the time. Fig 5 shows them, roughly in the order that they achieved world leadership (note that this order is also affected by how far back in the past we have data). The hot spot of technological development, through either innovation or adoption, appears to roughly coincide with the “Imperial Belt” of the Old World, located just south of the Great Eurasian Steppe (and in places, impinging into it, as in Sogdiana), which can be seen by the location of the ‘leader’ NGAs (mapped in Fig 5).

Fig 5. “Technological leaders”: NGAs that at some point achieved the highest MilTech score available at that time.

Fig 5

This same territory also of course corresponds roughly to the path of the overland silk routes used in our analyses (Fig 1). We return to this pattern below. Overall, the pattern is that most of the leading regions exhibit an increase in their overall MilTech levels roughly together and at a fairly regular, almost linear pace (after the 4th millennium BCE), with late comers accelerating at various points to merge with leaders. This is seen clearly in this graph on the example of Sogdiana, but it is a general pattern discernible in the regional examples (Fig 4).

We explored the “similarity” between NGAs by calculating the number of MilTech variables in each NGA shared with other NGAs at each time-step. As explained in SI (see Similarity Analysis and S1 Fig in S1 File) we trace how NGAs join the expanding Eurasian (eventually global) IN by noting the time when they achieve a similarity index of 10, that is, when they share 10 or more specific MilTech variables with one or more other NGAs. As the histograms in S1 Fig in S1 File show, the first NGAs that achieve this threshold of similarity appear between 3000 and 2500 BCE. As time progresses, more and more NGAs cross this threshold. Fig 6 maps the expansion of this IN–initially restricted to central Eurasia but growing eventually into a global network–by color coding the date when the NGA cross this threshold. Thus, the similarity analysis reveals that different regions not only saw rapid increases in their overall level of MilTech, but these areas came increasingly to share specific technologies. A plausible interpretation for this pattern is that, as the IN expands, each new region accelerates its development of MilTech to join the level achieved by the network leaders, until, eventually, all regions in diverse areas around the globe adopt similar ‘MilTech packages’. Future work is needed to disentangle occasions where these late-comer regions adopt or adapt existing technologies from cases where ‘leader’ societies simply take over others, imposing their technologies (along with a host of other socio-political and cultural traits) onto this new regions.

Fig 6. Results of similarity analysis.

Fig 6

NGAs are binned into 6 categories according to the earliest time they share 10 or more MilTech variables with another NGA, displayed by color: dark red = 2500 BCE or before; orange = between 2500 and 1500 BCE; yellow = between 1500 and 500 BCE; green = between 500 BCE and 500 CE; blue = after 500 CE; grey = did not display any similarities during our sample period. Unfilled red circles indicate Silk Route Nodes as in Fig 3.

Dynamic regression results

The best fitting model from our general dynamic regression analysis is shown in Table 1.

Table 1. Regression results for the best (lowest AIC) regression model.
Estimate Std. Error t value Pr(>|t|) Bootstrap estimated P
(Intercept) 0.000 0.006 0.000 1.000000 0.521
MilTech 1.043 0.025 42.114 < 2e-16 0.000
MilTech.sq -0.175 0.026 -6.862 1.12e-11 0.000
IronCav 0.047 0.012 3.973 0.000076 0.000
Agri 0.020 0.008 2.542 0.011 0.028
WorldPop 0.039 0.011 3.505 0.00047 0.001
Centrality 0.027 0.008 3.375 0.00076 0.000
Phylogeny 0.037 0.008 4.486 8.01e-06 0.005

Estimate shows the standardized regression coefficients, which provide a direct measure of relative effects by the lagged predictors on the response variable. Thus, MilTech here represents the linear autoregressive term, AR(1). The column “t value” lists t-statistics, a measure of statistical significance of regression terms associated with various predictors. Pr(>|t|) is the statistical significance for regression assuming the Normal distribution of residuals, while Bootstrap estimated P is the result of nonparametric bootstrap that does not make this assumption.

Our analysis identifies the following variables as having the strongest causal influence on MilTech:

  • Autocatalytic effects (the value of MilTech in the previous time step).

  • Global population size (WorldPop).

  • Connection to an expanding (eventually global) Information Network (Centrality).

  • Spread of Iron+Cavalry (IronCav), revealing both the importance of prior technology stock on continued technological evolution as well as the incentive that these advances placed on societies within connected information and competition spheres to adopt or develop additional technologies in response.

  • Cultural similarity (Phylogeny), revealing that polities linguistically similar to polities with high MilTech are more likely to have high MilTech themselves. This effect could be a result of either common inheritance or easier diffusion of technology between culturally similar polities, or, most likely, both.

  • Productivity of the resource base (Agri).

Investigation of the effects of Cavalry and Iron as predictor variables indicate that either, separately, has a statistically significant effect of similar strength on the evolution of MilTech. The synthetic variable, IronCav, however, is a better predictor than either of its constituents. For this reason, the results here are reported for IronCav only.

We estimated how location with respect to the system of Silk Routes affects the evolution of MilTech in each region. Our measure of Centrality (inverse distance to the nearest Silk Route node) finds strong empirical support, although we ran analyses using alternate methods of proxying this type of spatial effect (see SI for details). Overall our best model predicts the level of military technology with regression coefficient of determination (R2) of 0.96. While some of this high predictability is a result of strong temporal autocorrelation, rerunning the regression omitting all autocorrelation terms nevertheless yields an R2 of 0.72. Thus, more than 70% of the variation in MilTech is explained by WorldPop, Centrality, IronCav, and Agri.

We performed several supplemental analyses and robustness checks to detect any biases in our results. Several of these checks are discussed below and detailed in the SI.

Table 2 shows a comparison between the best fitting model and other models with ΔAIC ≤ 2. Strong effects are detected in these alternative models for all terms in the best model including Agri, which, though its standardized coefficient is the smallest, remains statistically significant at the conventional P < 0.05 level. However, additional robustness tests using multiple datasets built by random sampling from among the different WCs comprising the MilTech variable indicate that Agri is not always supported (see SI for details). Neither measures of social complexity, Scale and SocSoph, appear to have a consistent significant positive effect on MilTech evolution (they show up in several of the alternative models, but with small t-values and negative signs for Scale).

Table 2. Alternative model selection results.
MilTech MilTech.sq Scale SocSoph IronCav Agri WorldPop Centrality Phylogeny ΔAIC
42.11 -6.86 3.97 2.54 3.50 3.38 4.49 0.00
41.83 -6.70 -0.61 4.02 2.61 3.51 3.40 4.43 1.63
41.77 -6.74 0.20 3.92 2.38 3.51 3.37 4.47 1.96
41.74 -6.73 -0.98 0.79 3.97 2.43 3.57 3.42 4.32 3.00

The table shows t-statistics associated with each of the predictors (column headings) for the best models with ΔAIC (the AIC difference with respect to the best model) less than 2. The best model by AIC is included as the top row. An empty entry indicates that the term associated with this predictor is not included in the model.

Further checks indicate that these results are robust to the inclusion of additional spatial and temporal autocorrelation effects: Neither geographic diffusion (Space) nor higher temporal lags (τ = 2 centuries or greater) are significant. In addition, as we discussed in Materials and Methods, because our measure of MilTech includes the Metals and Animal WCs, which might confound the effect of IronCav due to a potential circularity, we re-ran the analysis using CoreMil, our measure of military technologies that does not include these WCs. This analysis yields essentially identical results (see SI), thus suggesting that the effect of IronCav is not spurious.

What is remarkable is that neither Scale nor SocSoph variables, which characterize polities, have any detectable effect on the level of MilTech. Overall, these results suggest that MilTech evolves almost entirely as an exogenous variable: it is little, if at all, affected by such polity characteristics as the population, territory size, the sophistication of information systems or administrative institutions, or provision of infrastructure and public goods.

As noted, our dynamic regression approach cannot offer a definitive demonstration that the factors in the best model are the central causal forces driving the evolution of military technologies. These variables may simply be highly correlated with the ‘true’ causal factors, not included in our analyses, or the causal link may be indirect, as these factors, as well as MilTech, could be caused separately by additional factors whose effects were felt at different time-scales. We explored such a possible ‘hidden variable bias’ as much as possible through supplemental analyses of several variables for which we had reliable information. As our findings remain robust to various tests, we provisionally conclude that these results offer appealing and parsimonious causal explanation for the long-run and global evolution of military technologies. Future research will need to scrutinize whether these results hold up to the inclusion of additional factors and exploration using alternate statistical methods or mechanistic models perhaps using agent-based modelling [24,27,80].

Discussion

Our goals were to investigate the global spatio-temporal evolution of key pre-industrial military technologies to illuminate the major forces driving the evolution of these critical tools, whether by innovation, adoption and adaption, or a combination of these processes. Further, our approach to testing theoretically-informed hypotheses against a broad and diverse set of empirical historical data taken from Seshat: Global History Databank serves as an example of how more general patterns of technological evolution can be explored in future research, as well as more fine-grained analyses seeking to distinguish these different processes or explore the pathways taken by individual regions or societies. Here we surveyed various causal hypotheses, which together suggested that the evolution of military technology would be a function of some combination of global population size, connectedness to information exchange networks, involvement in inter-state competition networks, and prior histories of technological innovation and adoption (especially major breakthroughs such as iron metallurgy and horse riding), along with, perhaps, various properties of polities and their resource base. We set out to test these theories empirically against the evidence from world history, using a stratified sample of polities in Seshat, dating from the Neolithic to the Industrial Revolutions.

While we found some empirical support for each of these hypotheses, no one theory alone accounted for the observed dynamics of military technology as well as a combination of the factors suggested by these various proposals. Our results not only explain why these theories have found support in previous studies, but also why a general understanding of the evolution of military technology has proven elusive. Our robust historical sample and extensive dynamic analyses allowed us to compare and combine elements of different theories proposed as critical drivers of military technology. Specifically, we found that global population size is a strong predictor of the subsequent levels of MilTech. While this result supports the Kremer-Taagepera model, it does not rule out other possible causal explanations based on additional variables, which, while correlated with global world population, could turn out to be a better predictor of MilTech. One such addition in future work could be to distinguish societies by their general affluence or social mobility [81], rather than treating populations as indistinguishable, which may play such a causal role driving both population increases and technological evolution.

Our analysis found that stock of prior technological innovations played an important role in the observed levels of military technology, not only from the autoregressive terms (again, supporting the Kremer-Taagepera model) but critically because the combination of iron metallurgy and horse riding had a particularly strong effect on innovation and adoption of militarily technologies in the periods under investigation here.

Importantly, we found that location within the central Eurasian IN was also a strong predictor of our response measure, in line with the insights of World Systems and cultural evolutionary theorists. This result supports the impact of being connected to other major centers of development and innovation, as well as being incorporated into spheres of inter-state competition.

However, it is noteworthy that geographic proximity between NGAs itself (proxied here by our Space measure) does not appear to be a strong predictor of the evolution of military technologies, contrary to what might be expected from certain cultural evolution theories and ideas of mimetic diffusion. This underscores the significance of iron and cavalry diffusion in particular, which have a strong effect on subsequent levels of MilTech, supporting previous work highlighting the unique role of the nomadic pastoralists of the Eurasian Steppe, early adopters of mounted archery tactics, in driving not only technological innovation among nearby agrarian populations, but in driving the expansion of social complexity and, relatedly, technological evolution throughout Afro-Eurasia [8,24,26,27,4548,82]. The development of iron-smelting, as an input material for so many valuable weapons, appears to play a similarly crucial role [6467]. These findings suggest that iron and cavalry were particularly critical technologies that conferred an important enough advantage that they fomented widespread adoption as well as sparked ‘arms races’ among competitors that included a host of other, related technologies as discussed above, which would explain the observed patterns.

This interpretation gains further support from our similarity analysis. Our main result indicate that the overall level of MilTech–measured with our aggregate MilTech score–generally rose over time (with some losses, noted above), with more and more regions coming to exhibit the same level of MilTech over time. Our similarity analysis unpacks this finding, demonstrating that not only did regions increasingly exhibit the same overall MilTech score, but they also came to share the same ‘packages’ of specific military technologies. Further, as expected, the regions with the highest combined similarity scores followed the same pattern as seen in the Centrality measure, as the NGAs closest to a Silk Route node both appeared as sharing MilTech variables with other NGAs earlier and continued to display similar MilTech packages with other NGAs that joined the IN over time, resulting in their larger combined scores (see Fig 4).

An interesting and somewhat surprising finding is that the properties of polities, including such seemingly important characteristics as their scale (population and territory) and sophistication (e.g., information systems), have no significant impact on the evolution of military technologies wielded by the polity (with the partial exception of Phylogeny, discussed below). We expected both scale (Scale) and non-scale (SocSoph) aspects of social complexity to play a significant role in these processes, due to an increased availability of populations and resources to put towards technological development as well as how developments in organizational and informational-exchange capacities could facilitate the adoption and adaption of existing technologies from elsewhere. However, these terms display no significant effect on subsequent levels of MilTech, suggesting that the level of technology characterizing a particular polity (whether invented or adopted) depends not on the polity’s characteristics, but rather on the characteristics of the inter-polity informational and competitive interaction spheres to which it belongs, along with the other factors identified above. The Arabian Peninsula, for example, despite being relatively low-scale in the early first millennium CE, adopts much of the ‘military package’ seen in other parts of Eurasia around 300 CE (see Fig 4 and the Similarity Analysis in the SI), as it became increasingly incorporated into Silk Route trade connections via the Persian and Roman imperial systems, before becoming its own seat of imperial power with the rise of Islam a few centuries later.

The only polity-related term that is included in the best regression model is Phylogeny, which can reflect an operation of one of two (or both) processes: inheritance of technological sophistication from a “common ancestor” (for example, Italy and France inheriting technologies from the Roman Empire), or easier spread of innovations between culturally similar countries (such as between Romance-speaking Italy and France, or between Arabic-speaking Egypt and Mesopotamia). The latter process likely reflects the greater likelihood that an innovation developed in one polity will be more compatible with existing institutional, social, cultural, and economic systems of a culturally similar polity than those of a more distant one [83]. One major component of this effect might be that military technologies require specific tactical and organizational apparatus to wield effectively. Cultural similarity then could not only facilitate exchange of information about a new, useful technology across societies, but facilitate the spread of knowledge of and increase the ability to acquire these more ephemeral aspects accompanying the material components of this new technology. Alternatively, linguistically similar polities might have engaged in more frequent and intense competition, which could lead to a similar impact (likely correlated strongly with the IronCav and Centrality effects) on overall MilTech. This is less plausible than the other processes, however, as interstate competition has been shown to be most intense involving culturally dissimilar polities [45,47,61]. Additional study is needed to fully clarify the different possible causal forces driving this effect and to explore the possible causal role that each of these potential processes play in the overall development and spread of these key military technologies, along with technological evolution more generally. Nevertheless, the finding that Phylogeny is a significant predictor of MilTech further speaks to the importance of connection-mediated information exchange, over and above closeness in space.

Lastly, we find that agricultural productivity, measured here as per-hectare tons of major carbohydrates, displays a significant effect on subsequent levels of MilTech. While we had no strong theoretical motivations for this idea, we included the term in analyses to test the possibility that an increased resource base would impact technological development. Its inclusion in our best model suggests that a certain level of agriculture productivity may have been a necessary component in generating and adopting new technologies. Perhaps a more efficient productivity was required to support large enough populations not primarily employed in agriculture, or expanding a society’s general resource base and extractive capacity provided the raw materials and intermediate goods used in constructing key military technologies. As noted, however, this factor displays a much weaker effect compared to the others, and is least robust to supplemental analyses. Thus, this result must remain tentative. Exploring more deeply the impact of agricultural productivity on the evolution of technology stands out as an important avenue for future research.

While these findings constitute an important first step towards identifying some of the major long-term drivers of technological evolution in general, and in the domain of military capacity in particular, and finding broad support for previously somewhat speculative theories, there is still much to be done to build on this line of research. First, it would be desirable to extend the geographical coverage beyond the stratified global sample used in the present study, particularly relating to the phylogenic connections in the spread of existing technologies and the different possible processes that lead to this interesting effect. Second, it would be important to explore the downstream consequences of changes in military technology for other aspects of human life, including levels of peacefulness (or, alternatively, mortality rates due to violence), equality (e.g. distributions of wealth, rights of citizenry, levels of exploitation and oppression based on class or ethnicity) and public health (e.g. longevity, infant mortality, nutrition, infection rates, etc.). Third, our goal was to offer a preliminary exploration of some key causal forces proposed to support the evolution of military technology, ignoring differences between the initial innovation of new technologies and subsequent adoption by other societies. Future work is needed to pinpoint the source(s) of invention and distinguish advances made by innovation from advances by later spread to assess whether the same or different factors drive each of these separate processes. Fourth, additional potential drivers of technological innovation in general should be explored, over and above the effects of population size, connectivity, and existing stocks of critical innovations, as well as analyzing further the potential causal role played by rising agricultural productivity. These explorations would include factors impacting resource scarcity (e.g. due to drought, pestilence, and other natural disasters), more direct measures of intergroup competition (e.g. levels and intensities of external warfare, cultural distance between competitors, and other exogenous factors), identifying various different regional INs which might (partially) overlap in time and space.

Finally, it is important for future studies to ‘narrow in’ on the details of some of the more macro-level processes suggested by the present study. In particular, it will useful to explore the possible impact of regional-level factors along with a broader range of technological innovations within the polity (e.g. in energy, construction, transportation, and information sectors). Seshat data is relatively coarse, resolved here to 100-year intervals. While this granularity is well suited to exploring broad, global-level dynamics over thousands of years, it likely misses some of the nuances and outlying patterns. Future effort can hopefully generate more fine-grained temporal data allowing for meso- and even micro-level scrutiny of the pathways to technological evolution taken by different societies in various times and places. Alongside this, we require more qualitative investigation into the details of the specific items as well as the less material, tactical and managerial aspects of technological development employed in a host of specific historical cases.

Beyond the insights gained from these analyses on the development of military technologies over the very long-term, we hope that the approach presented here, which explores likely casual theories against a wide body of empirical data gathered by the Seshat project, will provide a roadmap to these important future studies, allowing scholars to delve deeper into not only the critical ‘Military Revolutions’ throughout history, but into the evolution of technology generally.

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Acknowledgments

The authors are grateful to Sergey Nefedov who reviewed data and provided helpful comments. We thank also Christopher Chase-Dunn, Peter Grimes, Gene Anderson, and the SetPol project for their constructive critique on earlier versions of the manuscript, as well as Jennifer Larson and Alan Covey for helpful comments on previous drafts. We gratefully acknowledge the contributions of our team of research assistants, post-doctoral researchers, consultants, and experts. Additionally, we have received invaluable assistance from our collaborators. Please see the Seshat website (www.seshatdatabank.info) for a comprehensive list of private donors, partners, experts, and consultants and their respective areas of expertise.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting Information files. Additionally, all data are available alongside a preprint publication of this article, accessible at: https://osf.io/mkhde/

Funding Statement

This work was supported by: a John Templeton Foundation grant to the Evolution Institute, entitled "Axial-Age Religions and the Z-Curve of Human Egalitarianism" (HW, PF, PT); a Tricoastal Foundation grant to the Evolution Institute, entitled "The Deep Roots of the Modern World: The Cultural Evolution of Economic Growth and Political Stability" (PT); an Economic and Social Research Council Large Grant to the University of Oxford, entitled "Ritual, Community, and Conflict" (REF RES-060-25-0085) (HW); a grant from the European Union Horizon 2020 research and innovation programme (grant agreement No 644055 [ALIGNED, www.aligned-project.eu]) (HW, PF); a European Research Council Advanced Grant to the University of Oxford, entitled “Ritual Modes: Divergent modes of ritual, social cohesion, prosociality, and conflict" (HW, PF); a grant from the Institute of Economics and Peace to develop a Historical Peace Index (HW, PF, PT, DH); and the program “Complexity Science,” which is supported by the Austrian Research Promotion Agency FFG under grant #873927 (PT).

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Decision Letter 0

Olivier Morin

25 Jun 2021

PONE-D-21-17737

Rise of the War Machines: Charting the Evolution of Military Technologies from the Neolithic to the Industrial Revolution

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Dear Daniel Hoyer,

I have received two reviewers' report on your manuscript and decided I would not wait for the third reviewer that I had invited. The two reviewers, I'm happy to say, concur that your manuscript is an important and valuable contribution to the cultural evolution literature. I share their point of view. Each reviewer offers specific recommendations that I would ask you to follow closely when revising the paper.

Reviewer 1 remarks that reducing the history of military technology to "hard" technologies (e.g. weapons or transportations) neglects important aspects of war tactics: "military doctrines, logistics, tactical skill, organizational structures, and ability to learn". In other words, your study captures the evolution of tactical "hardware", but not that of tactical "software", so to speak. They note that a more qualitative approach could capture this dimension. Please discuss this possible limitation of your study in the revision. Reviewer 1 also asks you to specify how your analysis can distinguish between technological change due to innovation vs. diffusion.

Reviewer 2 makes two specific and useful recommendations regarding your statistical analysis. The first is to make sure that the way you bundle military-technology related variables is justified. In other words, you should rule out the possibility that the effects you document are driven by one or a few outlier variables. Please implement the analysis they recommend, i.e., analysing random subsets of the 46 variables. Re-running your models with a subset of military technology variables is something you already do when you substitute "Core MilTech" for "MilTech". Reviewer 1 would like you to generalise this method to multiple, randomly selected subsamples. Reviewer 2 also suggests an alternative analysis for the impact of existing stock of technologies on the progress of military technologies.

In addition to these remarks, I have a number of editorial recommendations of my own, detailed below. Provided the revision appears to fulfil the reviewers' requirements and mine, I may not be sending it back for a new round of reviews.

My recommendations are either stylistic or related to the way statistical results are reported.

Concerning the reporting of results, my main concern is related to the repeated causality claims made in the manuscript. Given the data and methods, the results establish (at best) predictive causality in the sense of Granger. This type of causality cannot be equated with causality simpliciter, among other things because it does not rule our latent confounding effects. Please qualify all claims related to causality or causal inference.

I suspect there is a significant mistake in Table 1, which lists both MilTech and MilTech sq. as variables in the best-fitting model. This seems to contradict the description given on l. 301, but more importantly including two versions of the same variable in the same model raises obvious issues (multicollinearity, etc.). I suspect that you in fact tested 2 versions of the model, one with MilTech and the other with MilTech sq.

In general the manuscript in its current version assumes too much familiarity with the Seshat database and project, its organisation and its acronyms. Key constructs like "NGA" or "IN" are not explained or even glossed. Other constructs, like the "Scale" variable, will be familiar to readers who already read Seshat-based studies, but are only cursorily explained here (the characterisation given on l. 279 is insufficiently clear). For yet other variables like "SPC1" an explanation is promised but never provided (l. 349). There is also a tendency to use your own abbreviations for standard statistical constructs (e.g. using "delAIC" for ∆AIC or delta AIC). What is missing is not only a basic explanation of the Seshat lingo, but a sense of why the constructs were designed in the way that they are — for instance, why the Scale variable is a better measure of a polity's size than other possible measures.

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Reviewer #1: This is a very valuable paper providing the most systematic large-n analysis to date of the evolution of military technology. It should acknowledge more clearly that large-n studies are just one of the tools needed for a proper explanation, but should definitely be published.

(Editor's note: I am here  pasting Reviewer 1's attached comments since they may not be automatically added to this action letter for word limit reasons. OM)

This is a valuable paper, making a real contribution to a significant debate. My one reservation is that I think this kind of large-n survey usually has to be combined with more detailed work to explain something as complicated as military technologies. Military historians typically find that technology is only one part of effectiveness, and not always the most important part. The most interesting result in this paper is the lack of fit between SocSoph and technological gains (lines 455-56, 532-36), but I wonder how much of this is because technologies are little use without appropriate doctrine (the central point in Stephen Biddle’s book Military Power [2004]). Fig. 5 illustrates this—looking at the scores for Latium around 2kya, they’re not very different from other societies, because Roman military technology wasn’t actually that different from other Mediterranean, Middle Eastern, and European societies (as measured in the categories at lines 287-98 in the supporting material); however, the Roman army’s ability to apply these technologies transformed what they meant in practical terms, and that was probably determined primarily by Roman SocSoph. I also immediately think of the classical Greeks, whose military technologies were very ordinary but their application of them was extraordinary.

One difficulty for large-n surveys is that while technological categories are relatively easy to identify in the archaeological record, military doctrines, logistics, tactical skill, organizational structures, and ability to learn aren’t; and even when ancient and medieval writers describe such doctrines, there’s no obvious way to score them. This paper should absolutely be published, because there’ve been few (if any) large-n surveys of this level of sophistication, but the main point it illustrates is perhaps that large-n surveys are only the beginning of the study of warfare, and we have to follow up on their results with analytic narratives and case studies.

I also thought that the paper should distinguish more between technological innovation and diffusion. I’m currently reading two case studies of the Comanches, who probably had the best light cavalry in the world in the 18th century. They didn’t invent light cavalry, because there were no horses in North America to invent it with before the Spaniards brought them, but they did adopt and then adapt horse-herding and perfect styles of mounted fighting much better than the Apaches or even the Spaniards and Mexicans. They didn’t adopt or adapt firearms because their light-cavalry tactics made muzzle-loading muskets irrelevant. The Comanches were eventually defeated because Texans adopted and adapted Comanche tactics in the 1830s and combined them with revolvers and, later, breech-loading rifles that had been invented on the US East Coast. Neither the Comanche nor the Texans could have invented revolvers and rifles themselves, but the US Army failed to figure out how to use the new technologies until Texans put them together with tactics in new ways; but the final Comanche defeat in the 1870s depended on the US Army learning from the Texans and then exploiting the scale of US federal infrastructure. 

These points aren’t just details that can be subsumed within a large-n model; we’re missing what really happened if we only see the coarse-grained technological/geographical narrative. The paper should be clearer that while a large-n survey is a necessary condition for a good explanation, it’s not sufficient, and should be treated as a starting point for other kinds of analysis.

One final detail: the throwaway comment on naval warfare on line 69 isn’t adequate. 

Reviewer #2: This paper examines the long-term evolution of military technologies using the Seshat: Global History Databank. Creating a series of composite variables, which use simpler variables as a proxy for more complex ones such as Information Complexity or Military Technologies, the authors then test several theoretical claims in the literature. Several factors seem to significantly predict the advancement of Military Technology (MilTech), e.g., global population size, cultural similarity, and the spread of iron and cavalry. They also find variables that do not appear to dramatically influence of the level of military technology. Specifically, with the notable exception of phylogeny, characteristics such as the scale and sophistication of a polity appear to be non-significant predictors. This leads them to conclude that military technology evolves, for the most part, as an exogenous variable.

Overall, I applaud the authors for doing a very thorough and ambitious investigation in the evolution of military technology. I believe the paper will provide a catalyst for many follow up studies and serve a vital role of stimulating scientific debate. I do, however, have two general points that I’d like to make.

For my first point, I want to highlight a potential limitation of this approach, in that aggregation might mask a simpler explanation for the results of your model. That is, your predictors might be predicting only a subset of your 46 binary variables used to create your MilTech measure. One way to deal with this is to create alternative MilTech measures by randomly sampling from your set of 46 variables. What you do here is create multiple MilTech measures composed from different, randomly sampled subsets of your 46 variables. How much does this change your overall results in this study? It might be the case that what your model is predicting is a specific subset of technologies that disproportionately influence the overall result. If the result is not robust to these random subsets, then I believe it diminishes your claim that the variables are predicting military technology per se. Instead, it might be the case that your models are predicting a specific subset of the technologies, as opposed to an aggregate measure of overall military technology.

My second point relates to the variable for the existing stock of technologies. Here, you use the existing stock of technology as a proxy for the influence of current technological level on military technological evolution. This is done in two ways: as a temporal autoregressive process and focusing on horse riding and iron smelting. For the temporal autoregressive measure, you could also look at a related approach such as transfer entropy. The advantage of this is that it does not rely on using a single timeseries to predict its future state. Instead, you can use separate timeseries (X and Y), as predictors of one another. This tells you how much uncertainty is reduced in the future values of Y by knowing the past values of X given the past values of Y. It is a way of measuring the influence of one timeseries process (X) on another timeseries process (Y). I feel that this would help you disentangle the directionality of the relationship between some of your variables (as the measure is non-symmetric and X|Y does not equal Y|X). So, for instance, you could have the existing stock of technology as one timeseries and the miltech variable as another timeseries. You would predict that the information flow goes from the existing stock to miltech, but not necessarily the other way around.

Finally, a minor point is that for the results in Table 1, you should probably use scientific notation for extremely small p-values (especially for the MilTech and MilTech.sq p-values where you just have 0). In fact, after writing this comment, I noticed you already did this in your supplementary materials (so it should be easy to address).

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


7 Aug 2021

Our response to Reviewer and Editor comments are included in the uploaded file 'Response to Reviewers.docx'. We copy our responses below as well

Response to Editor

We thank both peer reviewers for their thoughtful and helpful comments as well as the Editor’s helpful summary and additional comments, and for allowing us the chance to revise our manuscript. Both reviewers had very favorable things to say about our analytical approach and description of results, each concluding that the paper will make a valuable contribution to the field.

The main concerns seemed to revolve around ensuring that we properly motivate our analytical approach and test the robustness of results to alternate methods, as well as properly qualifying our interpretations in light of the limitations of our methods. This later point is in line with the Editor’s main concern about our overly-ambitious causal inferences. We feel these are valid and quite useful critiques. We have made numerous edits and performed additional supplementary analyses to clarify our approach and interpretations and provide fuller support for our claims, while also highlighting the need for future work and alternative methods to further explore the evolution of military technology. Overall, our manuscript is much improved as a result of these comments, and we are grateful to the Reviewers for pointing out shortcomings in how we described and justified some of our central arguments.

Lastly, in the response to the original submission the PLOS editors requested that we add a Competing Interests Statement and amend the Funding Statement based on the idea that the Complexity Science Hub, Vienna (CSH), with which some of our coauthors are affiliated, is a commercial company. This is incorrect, as the CSH is a non-profit research institute based in Vienna. It is registered as a Verein (‘public association’) with the Austrian Vereinsbehoerden (you can find it listed as well with the Research Organization Registry, id: ror.org/023dz9m50). We have attached a file from the Austrian government regarding the CSH’s status. If you require further information about the CSH and its non-profit status, please contact Philipp Marxgut (marxgut@csh.ac.at), CSH Secretary General. I have reaffirmed the lack of competing interests with all coauthors.

Responses to Editor Comments

Reviewer 1 remarks that reducing the history of military technology to "hard" technologies (e.g. weapons or transportations) neglects important aspects of war tactics: "military doctrines, logistics, tactical skill, organizational structures, and ability to learn". In other words, your study captures the evolution of tactical "hardware", but not that of tactical "software", so to speak. They note that a more qualitative approach could capture this dimension. Please discuss this possible limitation of your study in the revision. Reviewer 1 also asks you to specify how your analysis can distinguish between technological change due to innovation vs. diffusion.

See below for responses to R1’s comments

Reviewer 2 makes two specific and useful recommendations regarding your statistical analysis. The first is to make sure that the way you bundle military-technology related variables is justified. In other words, you should rule out the possibility that the effects you document are driven by one or a few outlier variables. Please implement the analysis they recommend, i.e., analysing random subsets of the 46 variables. Re-running your models with a subset of military technology variables is something you already do when you substitute "Core MilTech" for "MilTech". Reviewer 1 would like you to generalise this method to multiple, randomly selected subsamples.

This is a very good suggestion. We implemented this by using a kind of bootstrap, generating multiple response variables by randomly resampling Warfare Components that make up our primary MilTech measure. We repeated the procedure 100 times to obtain and analyze the 100 best models by AIC. This analysis revealed that the most strongly supported terms found in the primary analysis remain supported, appearing in the best models in all or all-but-one instance. The only significant difference is the Agri term, which appeared in only 64 of the 100 cases using this bootstrap method.

This analysis suggests that randomly choosing WCs has a small effect on our results, with the exception of Agri. The implication is that different WCs can substitute for each other with little loss of information, something that was already hinted at with the comparison between MilTech and Core MilTech.

We have included this supplementary analysis in the SI (under the subheading ‘Testing bias in aggregation of MilTech variables’) with a description of results. We also added a discussion of this robustness check in the main text (in the Dynamic Regression Results section) and a paragraph in the Discussion detailing the more limited support that Agri receives as a key driver of MilTech compared to the other factors.

Reviewer 2 also suggests an alternative analysis for the impact of existing stock of technologies on the progress of military technologies.

See our response below.

In addition to these remarks, I have a number of editorial recommendations of my own, detailed below. Provided the revision appears to fulfil the reviewers' requirements and mine, I may not be sending it back for a new round of reviews.

My recommendations are either stylistic or related to the way statistical results are reported.

Concerning the reporting of results, my main concern is related to the repeated causality claims made in the manuscript. Given the data and methods, the results establish (at best) predictive causality in the sense of Granger. This type of causality cannot be equated with causality simpliciter, among other things because it does not rule our latent confounding effects. Please qualify all claims related to causality or causal inference.

This is a very good point and we agree that our original language did not adequately convey the appropriate qualifications to our interpretation of results. We have edited text throughout the MS to make this more clear.

Specifically, we added an explanation in the Statistical Analysis section explaining how we use the dynamic analyses to support Granger-type causal inference, but stressing also that these inferences are partial and provisional and need further study to support. We have also added text at the end of the Results section clarifying that our interpretations are based on the predictive relationships between our (theoretically-motivated) predictor and response variables. We stress as well that our interpretations are provisional and subject to additional analyses and alternate approaches. Finally, we have modified text throughout the Discussion section to qualify the conclusiveness of our claims and highlight the suggestive nature of these results, requiring future work to explore further.

I suspect there is a significant mistake in Table 1, which lists both MilTech and MilTech sq. as variables in the best-fitting model. This seems to contradict the description given on l. 301, but more importantly including two versions of the same variable in the same model raises obvious issues (multicollinearity, etc.). I suspect that you in fact tested 2 versions of the model, one with MilTech and the other with MilTech sq.

This is not a mistake. We routinely perform checks for nonlinearity in how predictors affect the response variable. This check showed that the relationship between MilTech(t+1) and MilTech(t) (that is, lagged value of the response variable) is curvilinear. We capture this nonlinearity with a quadratic term, MilTech (t) squared. There is a strong statistical support for this form, because both the linear and quadratic MilTech have high t-values, and P << 0.0001. For this reason, we retain both terms in the best-fitting model. The interpretation of this statistical result is that the evolution of MilTech is characterized by stabilizing selection, with the equilibrium trajectory set by the predictors. If a random perturbation moves MilTech level away from the equilibrium, the negative quadratic term ensures that MilTech returns to it.

We have added text in the Statistical Analysis section clarifying the inclusion of this square term. Detailing the statistical model, we now note: "We also include quadratic versions of these terms at a time lag (not shown) in order to explore non-linear responses to response and predictor factors. "

In general the manuscript in its current version assumes too much familiarity with the Seshat database and project, its organisation and its acronyms. Key constructs like "NGA" or "IN" are not explained or even glossed. Other constructs, like the "Scale" variable, will be familiar to readers who already read Seshat-based studies, but are only cursorily explained here (the characterisation given on l. 279 is insufficiently clear). For yet other variables like "SPC1" an explanation is promised but never provided (l. 349). There is also a tendency to use your own abbreviations for standard statistical constructs (e.g. using "delAIC" for ∆AIC or delta AIC). What is missing is not only a basic explanation of the Seshat lingo, but a sense of why the constructs were designed in the way that they are — for instance, why the Scale variable is a better measure of a polity's size than other possible measures.

We are grateful for bringing to our attention this deficiency in our descriptions. We have modified text throughout to provide additional details about our methods and terms used as part of the Seshat project. Firstly, we explain our data coding procedure and define key terms early on in the main text (in A General Approach to Quantifying the Evolution of Pre-Industrial Societies subsection), and have added more detail to the descriptions of the factors used in analyses in Materials and Methods (‘Hypotheses to be Tested: Defining Predictor Variables’ subsection), particularly the Scale and SocSoph factors. We also clarified our NGA-based sampling procedure and edited text in the SI to clarify what the different factors were (e.g. the relationship between Scale and SocSoph to each other and as different dimensions of social complexity, as well as further detail on how and why we constructed the alternate response measure CoreMil).

Responses to Reviewer 1 Comments

This is a valuable paper, making a real contribution to a significant debate. My one reservation is that I think this kind of large-n survey usually has to be combined with more detailed work to explain something as complicated as military technologies. Military historians typically find that technology is only one part of effectiveness, and not always the most important part. The most interesting result in this paper is the lack of fit between SocSoph and technological gains (lines 455-56, 532-36), but I wonder how much of this is because technologies are little use without appropriate doctrine (the central point in Stephen Biddle’s book Military Power [2004]). Fig. 5 illustrates this—looking at the scores for Latium around 2kya, they’re not very different from other societies, because Roman military technology wasn’t actually that different from other Mediterranean, Middle Eastern, and European societies (as measured in the categories at lines 287-98 in the supporting material); however, the Roman army’s ability to apply these technologies transformed what they meant in practical terms, and that was probably determined primarily by Roman SocSoph. I also immediately think of the classical Greeks, whose military technologies were very ordinary but their application of them was extraordinary. One difficulty for large-n surveys is that while technological categories are relatively easy to identify in the archaeological record, military doctrines, logistics, tactical skill, organizational structures, and ability to learn aren’t; and even when ancient and medieval writers describe such doctrines, there’s no obvious way to score them. This paper should absolutely be published, because there’ve been few (if any) large-n surveys of this level of sophistication, but the main point it illustrates is perhaps that large-n surveys are only the beginning of the study of warfare, and we have to follow up on their results with analytic narratives and case studies.

This is an excellent point and we agree that the material components of technological development are only one part of the story. The tactical, organizational, and managerial aspects that go into how these technologies are wielded certainly play key roles in their effect. Here we are primarily interested in the evolution of the technologies themselves rather than the other aspects, both because, as R1 notes, coding these more ephemeral aspects is very difficult (though certainly possible using our approach to similar doctrinal ideological categories; e.g. Mullins et al. 2018, Whitehouse et al. forthcoming) and beyond the scope of what we could include here, but also because part of the motivation for the present study is to model an approach that could be extended to such follow-up questions.

We have added text in various places in the main text to make this explicit. In particular, we added to the Discussion section text noting the limitations of our approach and the relatively coarse detail of our data, remarking how more fine-grained study and qualitative investigation are important areas for future research.

It is worth noting too that we entirely agree that the lack of significant effect seen between SocSoph and our response measure is an important (and somewhat surprising) result. It may very well have been expected that the SocSoph measure would mediate the ability of societies to effectively wield technologies as R1 notes; namely, that societies with more sophisticated information storage and exchange systems would be better equipped to develop or adapt the tactical and organizational mechanisms that accompany material technologies. Yet, as noted we do not see a significant relationship between SocSoph and MilTech or any other polity-specific factors. As we discuss in the main text, we interpret this as suggesting that MilTech is driven largely by extra-polity processes. The accompanying tactics and other ephemeral aspects that accompany technological change may develop after the technologies themselves have been widely adopted, or evolve through separate processes; again, future work exploring tactical and organizational aspects of technological evolution would be needed to provide insight into this open question, which is beyond the scope of the present study but we feel is ripe for investigation using the Seshat approach evidenced here; we have added text at the end of the Discussion section remarking on this.

Finally, the tactical knowledge aspect of technological change may be reflected to some degree in our measure of cultural similarity (Phylogeny). Indeed, it may be that the tactical knowledge accompanying major technological developments (or standing on their own merits) is driven by external competition or other forces, and is then spread more effectively to culturally similar societies than dissimilar ones, since closeness in both language and socio-cultural systems could facilitate the adoption and adaption of these tactics. This may help to explain the result showing that Phylogeny is a significant predictor of subsequent MilTech, in addition to the benefits of exchanging information about the material and mechanical components of new technologies. We have added discussions to this effect in the Discussion section where we treat this finding. We feel that our overall findings are strengthened by this additional dimension and thank R1 for raising this very important and interesting aspect of our results that we had not fully considered before.

Ref:

Mullins, Daniel Austin, Daniel Hoyer, Christina Collins, Thomas Currie, Kevin Feeney, Pieter François, Patrick E. Savage, Harvey Whitehouse, and Peter Turchin. “A Systematic Assessment of ‘Axial Age’ Proposals Using Global Comparative Historical Evidence.” American Sociological Review 83, no. 3 (May 8, 2018): 596–626. https://doi.org/10.1177/0003122418772567.

Whitehouse, Harvey, Pieter François, Daniel Hoyer, Kevin Chekov Feeney, Enrico Cioni, Rosalind Purcell, Robert M. Ross, et al. “Big Gods Did Not Drive the Rise of Big Societies throughout World History.” OSF Preprints, April 1, 2021. https://doi.org/10.31219/osf.io/mbnvg.

I also thought that the paper should distinguish more between technological innovation and diffusion. I’m currently reading two case studies of the Comanches, who probably had the best light cavalry in the world in the 18th century. They didn’t invent light cavalry, because there were no horses in North America to invent it with before the Spaniards brought them, but they did adopt and then adapt horse-herding and perfect styles of mounted fighting much better than the Apaches or even the Spaniards and Mexicans. They didn’t adopt or adapt firearms because their light-cavalry tactics made muzzle-loading muskets irrelevant. The Comanches were eventually defeated because Texans adopted and adapted Comanche tactics in the 1830s and combined them with revolvers and, later, breech-loading rifles that had been invented on the US East Coast. Neither the Comanche nor the Texans could have invented revolvers and rifles themselves, but the US Army failed to figure out how to use the new technologies until Texans put them together with tactics in new ways; but the final Comanche defeat in the 1870s depended on the US Army learning from the Texans and then exploiting the scale of US federal infrastructure.

We entirely agree that the distinction between invention and later diffusion is a critical one to make to understand the histories of technological spread and use. However, as noted above we intend for this piece to be only the opening salvo in a line of work investigating the various aspects of technological evolution, military and more generally. We feel it is important to lay the foundation and model an approach to these such future work by focusing on technological evolution more broadly – which, as we define here, includes innovation as well as adoption and adaptation. This is why we conflate these different processes in this piece.

We have added text to make this more clear to readers. Specifically, in the Introduction we clarify how we define ‘technological evolution’ for the purposes of this study. We also clarify in the Results and Discussion sections that change in MilTech can occur through multiple mechanisms, e.g. when describing regional patterns in the pace of technological change (distinguishing early-adopters from late-joiners to the growing global information network) we explain that we do not distinguish innovation from later adoption. We also highlight that disentangling these process will be an important focus of future studies.

The example R1 cites is very interesting. From the perspective of the evolution of military technology broadly, this case actually illustrates well the processes identified by our analyses; various technologies (and tactics) not invented in North America are introduced as the area becomes entangled in the information exchange networks of western Europe (through conquest, settlement, and expansion) and then these become widespread in use within a context of fierce interstate competition. While our coarse-grained macro-level model can not predict which group would win out in this competition, the key point from this level of analysis is that information exchange and inter-group competition seem to have facilitated the spread of key military technologies (herding, mounted archery, hand-held firearms) into an area that did not have them previously

These points aren’t just details that can be subsumed within a large-n model; we’re missing what really happened if we only see the coarse-grained technological/geographical narrative. The paper should be clearer that while a large-n survey is a necessary condition for a good explanation, it’s not sufficient, and should be treated as a starting point for other kinds of analysis.

We, indeed, agree that more fine-grained and detailed study is a necessary component of reconstructing social dynamics, as noted above. We would argue though that neither the fine-grained nor the broader, macro-level approach reveals what ‘really happened’, rather that both are needed together to untangle these complicated patterns; these are complimentary, rather than competing approaches (we discuss this in for example in Turchin 2008 as well as Francois et al 2016). For the reasons detailed above, here our focus is on the macro-level patterns. We note this in the Materials and Methods section and have provided additional text in the Discussion section emphasizing that future work exploring more fine-grained data and qualitative case studies is needed to delve deeper into the broader patterns and processes suggested by the analyses here.

Refs:

Turchin, Peter. “Arise ‘Cliodynamics.’” Nature 454, no. 7200 (2008): 34–35.https://doi.org/10.1038/454034a.

François, Pieter, J. G. Manning, Harvey Whitehouse, Rob Brennan, T. E. Currie, Kevin Feeney, and Peter Turchin. “A Macroscope for Global History. Seshat Global History Databank: A Methodological Overview.” Digital Humanities Quarterly 10, no. 4 (2016). http://www.digitalhumanities.org/dhq/vol/10/4/000272/000272.html.

One final detail: the throwaway comment on naval warfare on line 69 isn’t adequate.

This is a good point and we agree that this was a poorly articulated point. We have removed this ‘throwaway’ comment from the main text, which we believe reads more clearly now. We discuss our inclusion of primarily land-based, rather than specifically maritime, technologies in the SI (the Defining the Response Variable: coding military technologies in past societies section) which we feel is adequate to explain our approach to readers. We would however be willing to add a discussion on this in the main text, if that would be useful to readers.

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This paper examines the long-term evolution of military technologies using the Seshat: Global History Databank. Creating a series of composite variables, which use simpler variables as a proxy for more complex ones such as Information Complexity or Military Technologies, the authors then test several theoretical claims in the literature. Several factors seem to significantly predict the advancement of Military Technology (MilTech), e.g., global population size, cultural similarity, and the spread of iron and cavalry. They also find variables that do not appear to dramatically influence of the level of military technology. Specifically, with the notable exception of phylogeny, characteristics such as the scale and sophistication of a polity appear to be non-significant predictors. This leads them to conclude that military technology evolves, for the most part, as an exogenous variable.

Overall, I applaud the authors for doing a very thorough and ambitious investigation in the evolution of military technology. I believe the paper will provide a catalyst for many follow up studies and serve a vital role of stimulating scientific debate. I do, however, have two general points that I’d like to make.

We thank R2 for this positive and encouraging assessment.

For my first point, I want to highlight a potential limitation of this approach, in that aggregation might mask a simpler explanation for the results of your model. That is, your predictors might be predicting only a subset of your 46 binary variables used to create your MilTech measure. One way to deal with this is to create alternative MilTech measures by randomly sampling from your set of 46 variables. What you do here is create multiple MilTech measures composed from different, randomly sampled subsets of your 46 variables. How much does this change your overall results in this study? It might be the case that what your model is predicting is a specific subset of technologies that disproportionately influence the overall result. If the result is not robust to these random subsets, then I believe it diminishes your claim that the variables are predicting military technology per se. Instead, it might be the case that your models are predicting a specific subset of the technologies, as opposed to an aggregate measure of overall military technology.

We addressed this point by the analysis and results described above (in our responses to the Editor). Note that randomly sampling from the 46 variables is not a feasible approach because of the way we construct our Warfare Characteristics (WCs). For example, if a society has iron technology, than we assume that it also has the knowhow to produce “simpler” technologies (copper, bronze). Similarly, if a society has crossbows, then it doesn’t matter whether they know atlatls. Thus, sampling randomly form the raw binary variables will not yield the desired test. Instead we implemented this suggestion by randomly sampling from the six WCs – please see the results above and the discussion of these results now included in the SI.

My second point relates to the variable for the existing stock of technologies. Here, you use the existing stock of technology as a proxy for the influence of current technological level on military technological evolution. This is done in two ways: as a temporal autoregressive process and focusing on horse riding and iron smelting. For the temporal autoregressive measure, you could also look at a related approach such as transfer entropy. The advantage of this is that it does not rely on using a single timeseries to predict its future state. Instead, you can use separate timeseries (X and Y), as predictors of one another. This tells you how much uncertainty is reduced in the future values of Y by knowing the past values of X given the past values of Y. It is a way of measuring the influence of one timeseries process (X) on another timeseries process (Y). I feel that this would help you disentangle the directionality of the relationship between some of your variables (as the measure is non-symmetric and X|Y does not equal Y|X). So, for instance, you could have the existing stock of technology as one timeseries and the miltech variable as another timeseries. You would predict that the information flow goes from the existing stock to miltech, but not necessarily the other way around.

This is a good point and we have improved our explanation of the logic underlying our dynamic regression methodology. The approach we use is known among the econometricians as ‘Granger Causality’, as was pointed out by the Editor above. Transfer Entropy (TE) is a closely related approach; in fact, it was shown to be the equivalent to Granger Causality for Gaussian variables (Barnett et al. 2009). There is some discussion in the literature about which approach is better to take. TE is a nonparametric method, and so it doesn’t depend on the assumption of linearity. However, we test for nonlinearities and include nonlinear effects, where detected, using polynomials. On the downside, nonparametric methods require more data and have lower statistical power when variables are well-behaved. In our case, both inspection of scatter plots and formal regression results suggest that in most cases linear forms capture well the relationships between the response and predictors. And where this is not the case (as with the functional relationship between MilTech and its lag), the quadratic relationship appears to capture the curvature well (which is not huge, as visual inspection suggests).

To summarize, we believe that our approach is doing precisely what the reviewer would like us to do – exploring the full range of possible cross-relationships between our data – and we feel that using TE would not add any additional information, but would reduce the statistical power of results. For these reasons, we have not included a TE analysis or discussion of this decision in the main text or as a supplementary analysis

Ref:

Barnett, L., A. B. Barrett and A. K. Seth (2009). "Granger Causality and Transfer Entropy Are Equivalent for Gaussian Variables." Physical Review Letters 103(23): 238701.

Finally, a minor point is that for the results in Table 1, you should probably use scientific notation for extremely small p-values (especially for the MilTech and MilTech.sq p-values where you just have 0). In fact, after writing this comment, I noticed you already did this in your supplementary materials (so it should be easy to address).

We thank R2 for pointing out this oversight. We have corrected this in Table 1 of the main text.

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