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. 2021 Nov 4;16(11):e0253104. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0253104

eDNA captures depth partitioning in a kelp forest ecosystem

Keira Monuki 1,¤,*, Paul H Barber 1, Zachary Gold 1
Editor: Hideyuki Doi2
PMCID: PMC8568143  PMID: 34735443

Abstract

Environmental DNA (eDNA) metabarcoding is an increasingly important tool for surveying biodiversity in marine ecosystems. However, the scale of temporal and spatial variability in eDNA signatures, and how this variation may impact eDNA-based marine biodiversity assessments, remains uncertain. To address this question, we systematically examined variation in vertebrate eDNA signatures across depth (0 m to 10 m) and horizontal space (nearshore kelp forest and surf zone) over three successive days in Southern California. Across a broad range of teleost fish and elasmobranchs, results showed significant variation in species richness and community assemblages between surface and depth, reflecting microhabitat depth preferences of common Southern California nearshore rocky reef taxa. Community assemblages between nearshore and surf zone sampling stations at the same depth also differed significantly, consistent with known habitat preferences. Additionally, assemblages also varied across three sampling days, but 69% of habitat preferences remained consistent. Results highlight the sensitivity of eDNA in capturing fine-scale vertical, horizontal, and temporal variation in marine vertebrate communities, demonstrating the ability of eDNA to capture a highly localized snapshot of marine biodiversity in dynamic coastal environments.

Introduction

Environmental DNA, or eDNA, is a metabarcoding approach for detecting and cataloging local community biodiversity, and is increasingly used in marine habitats [1,2]. eDNA approaches rely on the capture of freely dissociated cells/DNA originating from organisms in the environment, which can then be isolated and sequenced to reconstruct the community of organisms present [1,3]. Previous applications of eDNA metabarcoding in marine ecosystems demonstrate its effectiveness for measuring biodiversity and capturing important ecological information about taxa ranging from microbes to mammals [1,2], making it particularly useful for ecosystem monitoring.

The rapid rise of eDNA metabarcoding in marine ecosystems is driven by several key advantages of this technique. First, eDNA is cost-effective and has the potential for automation, allowing for increased sampling effort compared to traditional surveys [4,5]. Second, DNA barcoding approaches do not require extensive taxonomic expertise, allowing for the identification of a broad range of marine taxa from a single sample. Third, eDNA sampling only requires the collection of sea water, eliminating the potential risks associated with repeated dives needed for SCUBA-based visual surveys [4,6].

Despite these advantages, because eDNA is a relatively new technique, we know less about methodological biases compared to well-established visual survey methods. In particular, key questions remain about the temporal and spatial variability of eDNA signatures in marine environments, information that is critical for the effective design of eDNA biomonitoring efforts. Previous studies in dynamic freshwater ecosystems show daily variation in eDNA signatures [7], yet little is known about temporal variation in marine ecosystems. Degradation of eDNA signatures is relatively rapid in marine environments [810], with laboratory experiments showing degradation rates on the order of days [1113]. However, in field conditions, detection of a specific eDNA point source can degrade beyond detection limits in only a few hours [14,15]. This evidence for rapid eDNA turnover rates suggests that eDNA signatures at a given location could be highly dynamic over time, particularly for species that are transitory.

In addition to temporal variability, eDNA signatures vary across horizontal space. For example, Port et al. [16] distinguished distinct communities from eDNA samples separated by only 60 m in kelp forest ecosystems, and other studies report spatial variation in eDNA signatures on similar spatial scales [17,18]. In contrast, other studies such as O’Donnell et al. [19] and Lamy et al. [20] detect variation among communities across much larger distances, on the order of thousands of meters. A key difference in these studies is the latter two examine eDNA from a dynamic nearshore ecosystem, whereas Port et al. examined eDNA from a highly protected cove, suggesting that physical oceanographic processes may influence the scale of eDNA variation.

Although the studies above demonstrate variation of eDNA community signatures across horizontal space, less is known about variation in marine eDNA signatures across depth. In fact, most eDNA studies collect samples from consistent depths to control for depth variation [16,19,21]. The few studies that sample across multiple depths found significant variation in eDNA signatures. For example, Yamamoto et al. [17] found differences in Japanese jack mackerel eDNA concentrations between samples from 1.5 m and 31 m depth. Andruszkiewicz et al. [22] and Lacoursière-Roussel et al. [23] report similar differences in eDNA signatures between samples collected at the surface and at depth, suggesting that eDNA can resolve vertical differences in marine communities. In contrast, Stoeckle et al. [24] did not find eDNA differences between surface and bottom samples. They note, however, that their pelagic sampling area supports relatively uniform communities throughout the water column, indicating that their eDNA results may still reflect the communities present.

Importantly, the scale of depth variation of eDNA signatures in these studies was multiple tens of meters, yet marine communities can partition along much smaller depth gradients in nearshore environments [25,26]. In one study, Jeunen et al. [27] found fine-scale depth variation in eDNA signatures from samples separated by only 4 vertical meters. However, these samples were taken from a fjord characterized by a strong halocline and very low wave energy, both of which greatly reduce vertical mixing. It is unclear whether similarly fine-scale vertical variation in eDNA signatures exists in exposed, nearshore coastal marine ecosystems where dynamic physical oceanographic processes should promote vertical mixing, potentially homogenizing eDNA signatures across depth [27].

To better understand the scale of spatial and temporal variation of eDNA signatures, we examined eDNA vertebrate community composition in a nearshore kelp forest and adjacent surf zone habitat in Malibu, CA where dynamic physical oceanography may homogenize eDNA community signatures. Specifically, we test 1) whether eDNA can differentiate among vertically structured vertebrate communities across a fine-scale depth gradient, 2) whether eDNA signals from similar depths vary among adjacent near-shore habitats, and 3) whether these patterns are stable over time in an exposed coastal marine environment.

Materials and methods

We conducted our study at Leo Carrillo State Beach, Malibu, California, USA (34.0446° N, 118.9407° W). We sampled on three successive days (September 24 to September 26 in 2018) to test for temporal stability of spatial variation in eDNA signatures. On each day, we sampled at the highest tide of the mixed semidiurnal tide to minimize the impact of tidal variation on sampling.

To ensure that results reflected variation in spatial sampling, rather than time, we synchronized watches and worked in multiple teams to simultaneously sample from five depths on SCUBA along a vertical transect in a kelp forest ~140 m from shore: 0 m (at the ocean surface), 1 m, 5 m, 9 m, and 10 m (just above the sea floor). We also sampled a sixth station along the shore in the surf zone, where we collected samples approximately 1 m below the water surface where depth was approximately 2 meters. At each location, we collected triplicate seawater samples using one-liter enteral feeding bags (Kendall-Covidien– 702500) following the methods of Curd et al [28]. After returning to shore, we immediately gravity filtered all samples through 0.22 μm Sterivex filters to isolate eDNA [28]. We similarly filtered one liter of distilled water as a negative template control. Upon completion of filtration, we stored the dried filters at -20˚C until extraction 48 hours later. No permits were required for sampling seawater in state waters outside of designated protected areas.

We extracted the DNA from the filters at UCLA using the Qiagen DNEasy Blood and Tissue kit (Qiagen, Valencia, CA, USA). To maximize eDNA recovery, we employed modifications made by Spens et al. [29], adding proteinase K and ATL buffer directly to the filter cartridges before overnight incubation in a rotating incubator at 56˚C. We amplified the extracted eDNA using the 12S MiFish Universal Teleost (MiFish-U) and MiFish Elasmobranch (MiFish-E) primers with linker modifications for Nextera indices (S1 Table) [30]. Though the primers target teleost fish and elasmobranchs, they can also amplify other vertebrate species such as birds and mammals [30,31]. PCR amplification and library preparation was conducted following the methods of Curd et al. [28] (S1 Appendix). After library preparation, we sequenced the library on a NextSeq at the Technology Center for Genomics & Bioinformatics (University of California, Los Angeles, CA, USA) using Reagent Kit V3 with 30% PhiX added to the sequencing run.

We processed the resulting sequencing data using the Anacapa Toolkit (version 1.0) for quality control, amplicon sequence variant parsing, and taxonomic assignment using standard parameters [28]. The Anacapa Toolkit sequence quality control and amplicon sequence variant (ASV) parsing module relies on cutadapt (version 1.16) [32], FastX-toolkit (version 0.0.13) [28], and DADA2 (version 1.6) [33] as dependencies and the Anacapa classifier module relies on Bowtie2 (version 2.3.5) [34] and a modified version of BLCA [35] as dependencies. We processed sequences using the default parameters and assigned taxonomy using two CRUX-generated reference databases following the methods of Gold et al. [18]. We first assigned taxonomy using the California Current Large Marine Ecosystem fish specific reference database [36]. Second, we used the CRUX-generated 12S reference database supplemented with California Current Large Marine Ecosystem fish specific references to assign taxonomy using all available 12S reference barcodes to identify any non-fish taxa following the methods of Gold et al. [36] using a Bayesian cutoff score of 60. Although CRUX relies on ecoPCR (version 1.0.1) [37], blastn (version 2.6.0) [38], and Entrez-qiime (version 2.0) [28] as dependencies, we note that Bayesian cutoff scores are not directly analogous to percent identity from blastn. The BLCA classifier incorporates alignment metrics, including percent identity and percent overlap, into the underlying Bayesian model which then returns the Bayesian cutoff score metric as a measure of confidence for each taxonomic rank for a given ASV (See [36] and [28] for more detail).

The resulting Anacapa-generated taxonomic tables were transferred into R for further processing [36,39]. We then decontaminated the taxonomic tables using methods developed by Kelly et al. [8] and McKnight et al. [40] as implemented in Gold [41], which removes sequences from index hopping and negative controls and conducts a site occupancy model to identify true rare sequences (S2 Appendix). We also manually removed sequences for species with taxonomic assignments for non-marine taxa (e.g. terrestrial mammals) in R. We then merged ASVs by summing reads by assigned taxonomy (e.g. summed all sequences reads from the 7 ASVs that assigned to Garibaldi, Hypsypops rubicundus).

Following decontamination, we converted the taxonomic tables into phyloseq objects (version 1.30.0) in R [42]. We analyzed the eDNA signatures across depth and across nearshore vs. surf zone habitats. We analyzed differences in eDNA across depth using only the nearshore signatures, excluding the samples collected in the adjacent surf zone. To examine species richness across depths, we conducted ANOVA and post-hoc Tukey tests using eDNA read counts (see S2 Table for eDNA read counts) [43]. We then transformed eDNA read counts to eDNA index scores, which better correlates to abundance, following the methods of Kelly et al. [44] (see S3 Table for eDNA Index scores). The eDNA index calculation standardizes eDNA abundance across samples and across taxa. To calculate the eDNA index values, we first calculated the relative abundance of each taxa in each sample. We then divided the relative abundance of each taxa by it’s maximum observed abundance across all samples to standardize the read counts per species per sample. This results in an index that ranges from 0 to 1 for each species where a value of 1 corresponds to the sample with the greatest relative abundance observed for that species. Although these eDNA index values allow for direct comparisons of relative abundance within individual species, allowing for direct comparisons in relative abundance by depth, location and/or time, it cannot be used for comparisons among different species. See Kelly et al. [45] for more detail.

To analyze the importance of sampling depth on eDNA vertebrate community composition, we conducted a PERMANOVA test using the vegan (version 2.5–6) package in R [43]. The PERMANOVA was run using Bray-Curtis dissimilarity and the model eDNA_Index ~ Depth + Day + Replicate. We also ran a multivariate homogeneity of group dispersions test using the betadisper function and Bray-Curtis dissimilarity using vegan. We then ran a Mantel Test and non-metric multi-dimensional scaling (NMDS) using vegan on Bray-Curtis dissimilarities to assess community composition differences across the depth gradient. We further analyzed vertical depth community composition by generating a gradient forest model using the gradientForest package (version 0.1–17) using 500 runs [45]. The environmental variables in the vertical depth gradient forest model included sampling depth, sampling day, and replicate. We then extracted the taxa with the highest model performances and plotted their eDNA index values across depth. Using the broken stick method [46], we defined highest model performance as ≥ 0.35 R2 importance, as there was a steep drop-off in R2 importance after 0.35.

To analyze differences between the kelp forest and surf zone, we ran Welch t-tests, PERMANOVA and betadisper tests, only including samples taken at 1 m depths from nearshore and surf zone habitats. We used the Bray-Curtis dissimilarity for both tests and the model eDNA_Index ~ Habitat (nearshore vs. surf zone) + Depth + Day + Replicate for the PERMANOVA. We also ran an additional gradient forest model with the environmental variables sampling depth, nearshore vs. surf zone, sampling day, and replicate for eDNA index scores from all stations. We then extracted the top performing taxa and plotted their eDNA index distributions, defining highest model performance as ≥ 0.40 R2 importance using the broken stick method, as there was a steep drop-off in R2 importance after 0.40. Because of the additional nearshore vs. surf zone variable, the R2 importance values were higher in this model, resulting in a different threshold R2 value than the one in the depth gradient forest model.

To test whether vertical and horizontal variation in eDNA signatures were consistent over time, we compared species richness across sampling days in an ANOVA framework, looking at both total community diversity as well as the eDNA index abundances. The linear models used for the eDNA index ANOVA tests were eDNA_Index ~ Station + Day + Station:Day.

Results

We generated a total of 23,504,223 sequence reads that passed filter from the NextSeq run. After decontamination, we recovered 21,231,865 reads and 980 ASVs representing 48 families, 71 genera and 71 species, with an average of 5.3 ASVs per taxa. Species detected included teleost fish (n = 57), elasmobranchs (n = 8), marine mammals (n = 2) and birds (n = 6) (S4 Table). Most teleost fish and elasmobranchs were demersal (rocky reef or sandy bottom species) (n = 56; 86%), while the others were pelagic (n = 9; 14%) (S4 Table) [47]. Of the six bird species, three were seabirds (Western gull Larus occidentalis, Brown pelican Pelecanus occidentalis and Pelagic cormorant Urile pelagicus) and three were terrestrial birds (American golden plover Pluvialis dominica, Band-backed wren Campylorhynchus zonatus, and Ruby-crowned kinglet Regulus calendula). The two marine mammal species were the Bottlenose dolphin (Tursiops truncates) and California sea lion (Zalophus californianus).

Vertical depth comparisons

Species richness

Species richness differed significantly across depth, with shallow sampling stations having lower species richness than deeper stations (ANOVA; p<0.001; Fig 1). Specifically, the 0m and 1m species richness values were significantly different from the 9m (both p = 0.001) and 10m (p = 0.001 and p = 0.002, respectively) species richness values. Mean species richness for the 0 m and 1 m sites were 31.4 and 32.1, respectively, while the 5 m, 9 m, and 10 m sites were 38.2, 45.7 and 44.8, respectively.

Fig 1. Boxplot of mean species richness (± standard error) across depth stations.

Fig 1

The deep stations had higher species richness than the shallow stations. Figure includes only the nearshore samples and does not include the surf zone samples. The colors represent relative depths of the stations: Yellow is shallow (0 m and 1 m), green is mid-water (5 m), and purple is deep (9 m and 10 m).

Community composition

Community composition differed significantly across depth (PERMANOVA; p = 0.001). Depth accounted for most of the variation in community composition (R2 = 0.16), followed by sampling day (R2 = 0.14) and bottle replicate (R2 = 0.03) (S1 Fig).

Pairwise PERMANOVA comparisons indicated that the 5 m, 9 m and 10 m stations were all significantly different from the 0 m and 1 m stations (all p<0.05). The 5 m station was significantly different from the 10 m station (p<0.05) but not the 9 m station (p = 0.14). Group dispersions also differed between the 1 m and 5 m stations (p = 0.02).

Mantel tests indicate that community composition significantly correlated with depth (Mantel statistic r = 0.405, p = 0.001). Further support for this result comes from the NMDS plots, which show that communities closer in vertical distance more closely resemble each other than communities separated by greater vertical distance (Fig 2).

Fig 2. NMDS of species assemblages across depth (m) using Bray-Curtis dissimilarity.

Fig 2

Differences in community composition increased with greater distance between depth stations (stress = 0.178). 0 m represents the surface and 10 m represents the sea floor.

Of the environmental variables in the gradient forest model, depth had the highest accuracy importance (0.010) and R2 importance (0.111) values, followed by sampling day (accuracy importance: 0.010; R2 importance: 0.109) and replicate (accuracy importance: -0.001; R2 importance: 0.006) (S2 Fig). There were 14 taxa characterized by model performances of R2 importance > 0.35 (S3 Fig). Pacific sardine Sardinops sagax, Topsmelt silverside Atherinops affinis and California grunion Leuresthes tenuis were most abundant the shallow stations (0 m and 1 m station). The remaining eleven taxa (Yellowfin drum Umbrina roncador, Barred sand bass Paralabrax nebulifer, California anchovy Engraulis mordax, Kelp bass Paralabrax clathratus, Speckled sanddab Citharichthys stigmaeus, California kingcroaker Menticirrhus undulatus, the surfperches of Family Embiotocidae, Queen croaker Seriphus politus, California sheephead Semicossyphus pulcher, Pacific angelshark Squatina californica and clinids of the Genus Gibbonsia) were most abundant in the mid and deeper stations (5 m, 9 m and 10 m) (Fig 3).

Fig 3. eDNA Index abundance depth distributions for the top predictor taxa.

Fig 3

eDNA Index mean and standard error (+/- 1SE) for taxa with greater than 0.35 R2 importance in the gradient forest model. See S1 and S2 Appendices for assigning. Family Embiotocidae and Genus Gibbonsia.

Overall, of the 67 teleost and elasmobranch taxa, 16 (24%) were most abundant in the shallow stations and 50 (76%) were most abundant in the mid and deep stations (S5 Table). One species, Gray smoothhound Mustelus californicus, was only found in the surf zone station.

Nearshore vs. surf zone analysis

Species richness

The surf zone station had a mean of 44.1 taxa per sample compared to 32.1 per sample for the corresponding 1 m nearshore station. Species richness differed between the 1 m surf zone and 1 m nearshore station (Welch two sample t-test: p = 0.02).

Community composition

Marine vertebrate community composition differed significantly between the 1 m surf zone and 1 m nearshore stations (PERMANOVA: p = 0.001; S4 Fig). The 1 m surf zone station also had significantly lower group dispersions than the 1 m nearshore station (p = 0.002).

In the nearshore vs. surf zone gradient forest model, depth still had the highest accuracy importance (0.011) and R2 importance (0.122) values (S5 Fig). Nearshore vs. surf zone designations had the second highest accuracy importance (0.006) and R2 importance (0.060) values, followed by sampling day (accuracy importance: 0.006; R2 importance: 0.055) and replicate (accuracy importance: -0.001; R2 importance: 0.005) (S5 Fig). There were seven taxa with performances in the model with > 0.40 R2 importance values (S6 Fig). Five taxa (California kingcroaker Menticirrhus undulatus, surfperches of Family Embiotocidae, Yellowfin drum Umbrina roncador, Queen croaker Seriphus politus and Zebra perch sea-chub Hermosilla azurea) were most abundant in the surf zone station (Fig 4). Barred sand bass Paralabrax nebulifer and Kelp bass Paralabrax clathratus were most abundant in the deep nearshore stations (9m and 10 m) (Fig 4).

Fig 4. The top predictor taxa eDNA index abundance nearshore and surf zone distributions.

Fig 4

eDNA Index mean and standard error (+/- 1SE) for the taxa with greater than 0.40 R2 importance in nearshore vs. surf zone gradient forest model. See S1 and S2 Appendices for assigning Family Embiotocidae.

Temporal comparisons

Species richness

Species richness did not differ across sampling days (ANOVA: p = 0.195). Mean species richness was 37.8 on Day 1, 38.1 on Day 2 and 42.6 on Day 3.

Community composition

There were fourteen taxa that varied strongly in the gradient model with > 0.35 R2 importance values (S3 Fig). Six taxa (Yellowfin drum Umbrina roncador, California anchovy Engraulis mordax, California kingcroaker Menticirrhus undulatus, surfperches of Family Embiotocidae, Queen croaker Seriphus politus, and clinids of Genus Gibbonsia) were most abundant on Day 1, three taxa (Pacific sardine Sardinops sagax, Topsmelt silverside Atherinops affinis, California grunion Leuresthes tenuis) were most abundant on Day 2, and four taxa (Barred sand bass Paralabrax nebulifer, Speckled sanddab Citharichthys stigmaeus, California sheephead Semicossyphus pulcher, Pacific angelshark Squatina californica) were most abundant on Day 3 (S6 Table). Kelp bass Paralabrax clathratus was most abundant in Day 2 and Day 3 (S6 Table).

Of the 67 teleost and elasmobranch taxa, 46 (69%) had depth distribution patterns that did not vary across the three days (p>0.05; see S7 Table for p-values). Interestingly, 37 of these taxa (80%) are characterized as nonmigratory and non-transitory species (S7 Table). Of the 21 taxa with variable depth distributions (p<0.05), 10 (48%) of the taxa are transitory or migratory (S7 Table).

Discussion

Results of eDNA surveys in a dynamic, California coastal ecosystem demonstrate fine-scale vertical and horizontal variation in marine vertebrate communities. Differences in vertebrate eDNA signatures across a 10 m depth gradient largely reflect species-specific variation in microhabitat depth preferences, particularly within fishes [48]. Similarly, eDNA discriminated between nearshore and surf zone communities with patterns also reflecting known ecological differences among fishes. While eDNA signatures varied across time, signatures of resident taxa were relatively stable. Combined, these results underscore the sensitivity of eDNA to discriminate ecologically relevant vertical, horizontal, and temporal variation.

Other studies report depth variation in eDNA over larger depth ranges [17,22], or similar scales in marine ecosystems with limited vertical mixing [25]. Studies also report horizontal partitioning on larger spatial scales along exposed coastlines [18] or on similar spatial scales in protected coves. Our results are unique in that eDNA discerned fine-scale vertical and horizontal variation in marine vertebrate communities in a dynamic, exposed coastal ecosystem, highlighting the ability of eDNA to provide a highly localized snapshot of marine diversity across depth and habitat type.

eDNA distinguishes marine communities by depth

Previous eDNA studies report differences in eDNA signatures across depth [17,22,23,27], but these differences were observed across large depth ranges across tens of meters. The finest depth partitioning reported in an eDNA study, only 4 m [27], occurred in a unique marine ecosystem with a pronounced pyncocline driven by a 3–4 ˚C temperature gradient and 20–30 PSU salinity gradient [26], values that greatly exceed those observed in Southern California [49]. In such a stratified water column, in an ecosystem with limited wave energy, vertical movement of eDNA would be limited to diffusion, or potentially other processes such as biogenic vertical mixing [50,51], allowing for fine-scale variation in eDNA signatures.

While results of this study also differentiated eDNA community signatures over 4–5 m, our study site was a wave-exposed coastal environment, where currents and wave energy should facilitate vertical water mixing. Over the three sampling days of this study, daily tidal fluctuations exceeded 1 m (0.15 m low tide, 1.5 m high tide), swell height ranged from 0.23–0.43 m, and surf height ranged from 0.3–0.9 m, providing water movement and wave energy to facilitate mixing. Although we sampled at the end of the boreal summer, when the nearshore Southern California summer thermocline is typically most pronounced and within a few meters of the ocean surface [52,53], observed surface temperatures were typical for the time of year (19.2–19.4˚C) and neither divers or dive computers observed a thermocline that would limit vertical mixing. As such, the community variation in eDNA signatures across a depth gradient of 4–5 m cannot be attributed to water stratification and limited mixing.

Instead, the composition of vertebrate communities detected with eDNA corresponded to species-specific depth preferences [47,48]. Fifty-one (77%) of the taxa had eDNA depth distribution patterns that match their known depth preferences (pelagic vs. demersal). This result held true particularly for 13 of the 14 highest performing taxa (R2 > 0.35) in the gradient forest model. For example, the coastal-pelagic species Pacific sardine Sardinops sagax, Topsmelt silverside Atherinops affinis and California grunion Leuresthes tenuis were most abundant in the 0 m and 1 m stations [48,5456]. Ten demersal taxa (Barred sand bass Paralabrax nebulifer, clinids of the Genus Gibbonsia, Yellowfin drum Umbrina roncador, Speckled sanddab Citharichthys stigmaeus, California kingcroaker Menticirrhus undulatus, surfperches of the Family Embiotocidae, Queen croaker Seriphus politus, Kelp bass Paralabrax clathratus, California sheephead Semicossyphus pulcher and Pacific angelshark Squatina californica) were most abundant in the mid and deeper stations [48,57]. The correspondence in species-specific eDNA relative abundances and the preferred microhabitats of these species strongly suggests that eDNA is recovering ecologically informative depth variation in marine communities, adding to a growing list of studies highlighting the ability of eDNA to accurately discriminate fine-scale habitat partitioning in nearshore marine environments [48,57,58].

Species at depth greatly outnumbered species at the surface (≤1 m), with the 0 m and 1 m stations having, on average, 13 fewer taxa than the deeper stations (5 m, 9 m, 10 m). While the partitioning of shallow and deeper water vertebrate communities broadly conformed to known habitat preferences, taphonomic processes may also reduce the detection of surface-dwelling taxa. Solar radiation, particularly ultraviolet (UV) light, is highest in surface waters and may increase DNA denaturation and degradation [5963]. Similarly, surface water temperatures are warmer, potentially increasing microbial and enzymatic activity, accelerating eDNA degradation [61,64]. Conversely, settlement processes could also elevate eDNA community diversity at depth [65]. Common sources of eDNA (e.g. feces) are often too large to remain suspended, potentially inflating eDNA community diversity at depth as these particles sink [6668]. In our study, some pelagic, surface-dwelling species were found in the deep stations, possibly due to such settlement processes. For example, Topsmelt silverside Atherinops affinis, California grunion Leuresthes tenuis and Pacific sardine Sardinops sagax were pelagic species found in the 9 m and 10 m stations. Though these three species were found in the deeper stations, they had low abundances in these stations and had much higher abundances in the shallow stations (Fig 3). These relative abundances reflect their habitat preferences, which suggests that, because community composition largely matches microhabitat differences, the impacts of settlement processes are likely relatively minor.

eDNA fate and transport is likely limited

The strong depth gradient in eDNA signatures strongly suggests limited persistence and transport of eDNA, even in dynamic nearshore coastal environments. However, previous laboratory experiments and modeling studies indicate marine eDNA degradation rates on the scale of multiple days, with potential transport distances of hundreds of meters to kilometers [9,13,17,19]. One possible explanation to reconcile this apparent contradiction is high shedding rates of endogenous eDNA. If local sources of eDNA generation are high and continuous, recently generated eDNA should dominate signatures [8], as eDNA from more distant sources would have much lower concentrations due to diffusion and degradation processes during transport. Controlled field and lab experiments are needed to explicitly test this hypothesis.

eDNA recovers nearshore and surf zone communities

Surf zone and nearshore rocky reef community eDNA signatures varied significantly, and was comparable to variation observed by O’Donnell et al. [19] over kilometers in a dynamic coastal ecosystem. The PERMANOVA and low group dispersions for the surf zone station both indicate that the surf zone community is distinct from the nearshore community. Importantly, four of the five taxa in the nearshore vs. surf zone gradient forest model that were most abundant in the surf zone station (California kingcroaker Menticirrhus undulatus, surfperches of Family Embiotocidae, Yellowfin drum Umbrina roncador, and Queen croaker Seriphus politus) are all associated with surf zone habitats, providing further evidence that eDNA accurately recovers distinct communities across adjacent habitat types (S4 Table) [48,57]. Combined with the above, these results indicate that eDNA can capture variation in nearshore marine ecosystems, both vertically and across habitats, highlighting that eDNA is a localized snapshot of marine diversity.

eDNA signatures vary across time

The PERMANOVA and gradient forest analyses indicate eDNA signatures varied daily, similar to previous in situ eDNA studies [810]. Importantly, much of the temporal variance appears to result from species behavioral patterns. Of the 67 teleost and elasmobranch species, 47 (70%) had temporal variation in eDNA depth distributions that matched their known behavior. Twenty-one (31%) taxa had significantly variable depth distributions (S7 Table). Of these 21 taxa, ten (48%) are transitory or migratory, including species such as Queen croaker Seriphus politus, Pacific sardine Sardinops sagax, and the Pacific anchovy Engraulis mordax (S7 Table). These mobile species transit in and out of kelp forest ecosystems [48,55], potentially contributing the observed daily temporal variation in eDNA signatures. Furthermore, the relative abundances of less mobile taxa were fairly consistent over time at different depths. Forty-six (69%) of species exhibited consistent eDNA depth distributions across the three days. Of these taxa with consistent depth distributions across the three days, 37 (80%) are nonmigratory and relatively stationary species, such as Speckled sanddab Citharichthys stigmaeus, California sheephead Semicossyphus pulcher the Barred sand bass Paralabrax nebulifer (S7 Table). Together, the majority of species exhibited depth variation were consistent with their behavior, indicating eDNA is likely reflecting behavioral patterns of marine vertebrates within the ecosystems they inhabit (S7 Table).

However, there were taxa whose eDNA temporal variation did not match their known behavior. For example, Kelp bass Paralabrax clathratus, a non-migratory, less mobile species, had highly variable eDNA abundances across days, while Chub mackerel Scomber japonicus, a transitory species, had consistent abundances. It is unknown whether this discrepancy indicates an incomplete understanding of the ecology of these fishes, variability in generation or degradation rates among these species, or whether physical oceanographic processes obscure potential eDNA-derived behavior patterns (e.g. algae dwelling species eDNA trapped within the boundary layer). Regardless, the broad concordance of eDNA distributions and species ecologies underscores its ability to accurately recover marine communities over space, depth and time, opening the door to future applications of eDNA to better understand the behavior of marine organisms.

Conclusions

Our study demonstrates the power of eDNA to distinguish unique vertebrate community microhabitats, both across depth at a single location, and across horizontally distinct communities. Patterns in spatial partitioning were relatively stable despite sampling a dynamic, nearshore marine environment, and reflected ecological differences in vertebrate communities. This consistency provides confidence for the application of eDNA methods in coastal biodiversity assessments. For example, eDNA can help us better understand species habitat distributions and how these distributions change over time with increased global change. However, our results also highlight the incredible sensitivity of eDNA metabarcoding approaches and suggest eDNA signatures only integrate biodiversity information across short time periods and small depth ranges.

These results underscore the importance of consistent sampling depth in marine eDNA studies, as variation in sampling depth could impact results. Moreover, for studies that seek to maximize sampling of local biodiversity through eDNA, efforts may need to incorporate sampling across horizontal space, depth, and time, as one depth and one location may not accurately reflect the full scope of local biodiversity of a given kelp forest. Fortunately, given the ease and cost-effective nature of eDNA sampling, such sampling efforts are not cost prohibitive, and will help us better document and monitor changes in coastal marine biodiversity.

Supporting information

S1 Fig. Apportioned variance plot of the three variables in the PERMANOVA model.

Depth accounted for 16% variance (p = 0.001), collected date accounted for 14% variance (p = 0.001) and replicate accounted for 3% variance (p = 0.426).

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S2 Fig. Importance of variables in the depth gradient forest model.

Sampling depth had the highest accuracy importance and R2 weighted importance in the depth gradient model.

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S3 Fig. Performance of species in the depth gradient forest model.

There were fourteen top predictor species with R2 values greater than 0.35 in the gradient forest model.

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S4 Fig. NMDS for shore vs. 1 m stations.

Surf zone community composition differs from the nearshore community composition. NMDS stress is 0.082.

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S5 Fig. Importance of variables in the nearshore vs. surf zone gradient forest model.

Sampling depth had the highest accuracy importance and R2 weighted importance in the nearshore vs. surf zone space gradient forest model.

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S6 Fig. Performance of species in the nearshore vs. surf zone space gradient forest model.

There were seven top predictor species with R2 values greater than 0.40 in the gradient forest model.

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S1 Table. MiFish-U and MiFish-E primer sequences.

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S2 Table. Taxonomy table with read counts after decontamination.

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S3 Table. Taxonomy table with eDNA Index values after decontamination.

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S4 Table. Species list.

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S5 Table. eDNA abundance patterns (shallow vs. deep stations) for all teleost and elasmobranch taxa.

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S6 Table. Mean eDNA Index across days for top predictor taxa in the gradient forest model.

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S7 Table. Ecology, behavior and depth distribution variability across days.

Table includes p-values for the Day:Station interaction of the ANOVA for the linear model of eDNA index abundance.

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S1 Appendix

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S2 Appendix

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Acknowledgments

We thank Camille Gaynus, Nury Molina, Eric Caldera, Erick Zerecero, and Elizabeth Reid-Wainscoat for their assistance in eDNA sample collection, and thank the Barber lab undergraduates Markus Min, McKenzie Koch, Bridget Foy, Beverly Shih, Nikita Sridhar, and Cristopher Ruano for their help with laboratory work.

Data Availability

All data is available through Dryad (https://doi.org/10.5068/D18H47). Code used for analyses is available on GitHub at https://github.com/ksmonuki/eDNA-analysis. A Zenodo link for the code is available at https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.5574141. The raw sequences are available on NCBI at http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/bioproject/771917 with accession number PRJNA771917.

Funding Statement

Funding was provided by the UCLA Ecology and Evolutionary Biology Whitcome Undergraduate Summer Research Fellowship and the UCLA Honors Programs Irving and Jean Stone Research Award (http://www.honors.ucla.edu/honors-summer-research-stipends/). K.M. was supported by the UCLA Undergraduate Research Scholars Program (http://sciences.ugresearch.ucla.edu/programs-and-scholarships/ursp/), Z.G. was supported by the US-NSF Graduate Research Fellowship, grant number DEG No. 1650604, and an HHMI professor award to P.H.B. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: This manuscript reports on vertebrate eDNA by depth in a kelp forest California. At a site 140 meters offshore, water sample were collected daily for 3 days at five depths from surface to bottom--0, 1, 5, 9,and 10m (bottom), plus at an adjacent surf zone site. This is a well done study that adds useful information on how eDNA signals differ by depth in this ecosystem, which is highly relevant to designing and interpreting eDNA surveys of marine animals. This is one of few studies to date looking at eDNA differences by depth.

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Line 4. I'm not sure what "microhabitats" are. The main finding is fish species richness and community composition differs from surface (0-1m) and bottom (4-5 m). I think a title with "depth" in it would be more informative.

line 25. Is the surf zone part of the kelp forest? If not you need to re-word this.

line 27. Only 3 marine birds and 2 marine mammals were detected, this does not qualify as "a broad-range of marine vertebrates". With so few species, findings on birds and mammals are of uncertain signficance, would take out of abstract.

line 29. "across 4-5m depth" is unclear, how about "between surface and depth"

line 34. Unlike depth and surf zone/kelp forest findings, for temporal variation, you don't have evidence that this reflects variation in local marine biodiversity. It could be due to variable transport or degradation of eDNA. I think this part of conclusion should be omitted.

Line 51. Regarding traditional methods, most marine surveys are not SCUBA-based, you include references to trawl and sound based methods.

line 57. Nicely said regarding methodological biases.

line 76. "vertically" and "depth" are redundant, just say one or the other.

line 81. Re eDNA by depth studies, suggest include ICES J 2020 Stoeckle et al which did not find eDNA differences by depth in coastal ocean up to 30m depth.

Line 121. Regarding methods, please include here or in Appendix S1 what was extracted DNA volume, so reader can know what proportion is represented by 1ul DNA input. Also it's not clear when the MiFish-U and MiFish-E amplifications were combined--after sequencing?

line 149. The paragraph in Supplemental Methods S1 which describes how reads were converted to indices belongs in the main text. Also a sentence stating the limitation of this approach, which is that you can't compare relative abundance across species, only relative abundance within species.

line 151. I may have missed this, I didn't understand the point of analyzing the more frequently occurring species separately. To my eye there is no clear break 80% in Table S1. I see on line 407 that the core group explained variance better, but I didn't see what the point of that is, the direction of difference is the same. If you're going to exclude data, you need a better rationale than that it makes findings look better.

Line 174. I think it would be more accurate to say differences between kelp forest and surf zone, not "differences across horizontal space".

line 189. It would help to better understand how ID works. There were 980 ASVs, and a total of 71 vertebrate species. What happened to all the ASVs? Is there a lumping threshold? What about likely contaminants such as human DNA? In Supplemental Methods S2 it refers to IDs with "55-59% confidence scores" as being "high confidence". That doesn't sound like a good match to me, percent identity might be more informative?

Line 202. This is a repeat of sentence on line 192.

Line 211. I can guess but what do the box plot lines and whiskers represent?

Line 211. I think you should include that the surf zone data is not included in figure. It's slightly misleading since the surf zone data was used to calculate the indices.

Line 215. Can't you summarize p-values somehow in text, instead of referring reader to Supplementary Material?

Also please be specific if sequences were matched to a local fish database, or to whatever is in GenBank.

Appendix S1 line 10. I don't understand how triplicate amplification helps "to account for PCR artifacts".

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PLoS One. 2021 Nov 4;16(11):e0253104. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0253104.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


10 Oct 2021

Reviewer #1: This manuscript reports on vertebrate eDNA by depth in a kelp forest California. At a site 140 meters offshore, water sample were collected daily for 3 days at five depths from surface to bottom--0, 1, 5, 9,and 10m (bottom), plus at an adjacent surf zone site. This is a well done study that adds useful information on how eDNA signals differ by depth in this ecosystem, which is highly relevant to designing and interpreting eDNA surveys of marine animals. This is one of few studies to date looking at eDNA differences by depth.

My main suggestions for improvement are that the study design and methods could be more clearly described, some limitations need to be addressed, and some of data are over-interpreted.

We thank you for your review and for your kind words about the importance of our study. We appreciate and agree with your suggestions and have addressed the specific comments below. The main change is the removal of the highest occurring species analyses and the inclusion of analyses for all species.

Specific comments.

Line 4. I'm not sure what "microhabitats" are. The main finding is fish species richness and community composition differs from surface (0-1m) and bottom (4-5 m). I think a title with "depth" in it would be more informative.

We agreed with this suggestion and changed the title to “eDNA Captures Depth Partitioning in a Kelp Forest Ecosystem” (Line 4)

line 25. Is the surf zone part of the kelp forest? If not you need to re-word this.

The surf zone is not part of the kelp forest. We clarified this distinction in the sentence “[…] eDNA signatures across depth (0 m to 10 m) and horizontal space (nearshore kelp forest and surf zone) over three successive days in Southern California” (New Line 27)

line 27. Only 3 marine birds and 2 marine mammals were detected, this does not qualify as "a broad-range of marine vertebrates". With so few species, findings on birds and mammals are of uncertain signficance, would take out of abstract.

Thank you for the suggestion. We changed the sentence to “Across a broad range of teleost fish and elasmobranchs […]” (New Line 28)

line 29. "across 4-5m depth" is unclear, how about "between surface and depth"

We changed the sentence to reflect this suggestion “[…] results showed significant variation in species richness and community assemblages between surface and depth […]” (New Line 30)

line 34. Unlike depth and surf zone/kelp forest findings, for temporal variation, you don't have evidence that this reflects variation in local marine biodiversity. It could be due to variable transport or degradation of eDNA. I think this part of conclusion should be omitted.

We removed the previous sentence “Patterns of microhabitat partitioning in eDNA signatures across space and time were largely consistent with known habitat preferences and species behavior” (Old Line 32). We added the sentences “Community assemblages between nearshore and surf zone sampling stations at the same depth were also significantly different and consistent with known habitat preferences. Assemblages also varied across three sampling days, but 69% of habitat preferences remained consistent.” (New Line 31)

Line 51. Regarding traditional methods, most marine surveys are not SCUBA-based, you include references to trawl and sound based methods.

Thank you for this comment. We changed the wording to “traditional surveys” (New Line 51)

line 57. Nicely said regarding methodological biases.

Thank you.

line 76. "vertically" and "depth" are redundant, just say one or the other.

We removed “vertically” (New Line 77)

line 81. Re eDNA by depth studies, suggest include ICES J 2020 Stoeckle et al which did not find eDNA differences by depth in coastal ocean up to 30m depth.

We thank you for suggesting this study. We included a brief discussion of their findings in the Introduction: “In contrast, Stoeckle et al. [23] did not find eDNA differences between surface and bottom samples. They note, however, that their sampling area supports relatively uniform communities throughout the water column, indicating that their eDNA results may still reflect the communities present.” (New Line 84)

Line 121. Regarding methods, please include here or in Appendix S1 what was extracted DNA volume, so reader can know what proportion is represented by 1ul DNA input. Also it's not clear when the MiFish-U and MiFish-E amplifications were combined--after sequencing?

Thank you for these comments. We added a sentence to the beginning of S1 Appendix “The extracted DNA volume for each sample was 100 μL.” (New Line 1). To clarify when the MiFish-U and MiFish-E amplifications were combined, we added a sentence in S1 Appendix: “We indexed the MiFish-U and MiFish-E PCR products from the same sample with the same index, except for one sample with different indices for the MiFish-U and MiFish-E PCR products (sample Day2_10m_A).” (New Line 19). We also added “[…] pooled even copy numbers for each marker (MiFish-U and MiFish-E)” for clarity. (New Line 29)

line 149. The paragraph in Supplemental Methods S1 which describes how reads were converted to indices belongs in the main text. Also a sentence stating the limitation of this approach, which is that you can't compare relative abundance across species, only relative abundance within species.

Thank you for these suggestions. We added S1 Supplemental Methods to main text (New Line 169) and removed them from the Supplemental Methods. Also added a sentence on the limitations of using eDNA index (New Line 175): “The eDNA index calculation standardizes eDNA abundance across samples and across taxa. To calculate the eDNA index values, we first calculated the relative abundance of each taxa in each sample. We then divided the relative abundance of each taxa by it’s maximum observed abundance across all samples to standardize the read counts per species per sample. This results in an index that ranges from 0 to 1 for each species where a value of 1 corresponds to the sample with the greatest relative abundance observed for that species. We note that this transformation does not allow for direct comparisons of relative abundance between species only within species. See Kelly et al. [45] for more detail.” (New Lines 169-178)

line 151. I may have missed this, I didn't understand the point of analyzing the more frequently occurring species separately. To my eye there is no clear break 80% in Table S1. I see on line 407 that the core group explained variance better, but I didn't see what the point of that is, the direction of difference is the same. If you're going to exclude data, you need a better rationale than that it makes findings look better.

We agree with this suggestion. Analyses of frequently occurring species were removed from the Results and Discussion sections, and analyses were added for all species. In the Results, we added sentences “Overall, of the 67 teleost and elasmobranch taxa, 16 (24%) were most abundant in the shallow stations and 50 (76%) were most abundant in the mid and deep stations. One species, Gray smoothhound Mustelus californicus, was not found in the nearshore stations.” (New Line 269) and “Of the 67 teleost and elasmobranch taxa, 46 (69%) had depth distribution patterns that did not vary across the three days (p>0.05; see S7 Table for p-values). Interestingly, 37 of these taxa (80%) are characterized as nonmigratory and non-transitory species (S7 Table). Of the 21 taxa with variable depth distributions (p<0.05), 10 (48%) of the taxa are transitory or migratory (S7 Table).” (New Lines 310-314)

In the Discussion, we added the sentence “Fifty-one (77%) of the taxa had eDNA depth distribution patterns that match their known depth preferences (pelagic vs. demersal).” (New Line 353). We removed the paragraph discussing the highest occurring taxa from the Discussion (Old Line 405) and added the sentence “Controlled field and lab experiments are needed to explicitly test this hypothesis.” (New Line 395). We also added a discussion of all species in the “eDNA signatures vary across time” section: “Of the 67 teleost and elasmobranch species, 47 (70%) had temporal variation in eDNA depth distributions that matched their known behavior…indicating eDNA may reflect behavioral patterns of marine vertebrates within the ecosystems they inhabit (S7 Table).” (New Lines 411-425).

Line 174. I think it would be more accurate to say differences between kelp forest and surf zone, not "differences across horizontal space".

Thank you for this comment. We changed the sentence to “To analyze differences between the kelp forest and surf zone […]” (New Line 192).

line 189. It would help to better understand how ID works. There were 980 ASVs, and a total of 71 vertebrate species. What happened to all the ASVs? Is there a lumping threshold? What about likely contaminants such as human DNA? In Supplemental Methods S2 it refers to IDs with "55-59% confidence scores" as being "high confidence". That doesn't sound like a good match to me, percent identity might be more informative?

We added sentences to clarify the species ID process. We added the sentences “Second, we used the CRUX-generated 12S reference database supplemented with California Current Large Marine Ecosystem fish specific references to assign taxonomy using all available 12S reference barcodes to identify any non-fish taxa following the methods of Gold et al. [36] using a Bayesian cutoff score of 60. Although CRUX relies on ecoPCR (version 1.0.1) [37], blastn (version 2.6.0) [38], and Entrez-qiime (version 2.0) [28] as dependencies, we note that Bayesian cutoff scores are not directly analogous to percent identity from blastn. The BLCA classifier incorporates alignment metrics, including percent identity and percent overlap, into the underlying Bayesian model which then returns the Bayesian cutoff score metric as a measure of confidence for each taxonomic rank for a given ASV (See [36] and [28] for more detail). (New Lines 144-152)

We also added the sentences “We also manually removed sequences for species with taxonomic assignments for non-marine taxa (e.g. terrestrial mammals) in R. We then merged ASVs by summing reads by assigned taxonomy (e.g. summed all sequences reads from the 7 ASVs that assigned to Garibaldi, Hypsypops rubicundus).” (New Lines 158-161)

Line 202. This is a repeat of sentence on line 192.

We removed this sentence.

Line 211. I can guess but what do the box plot lines and whiskers represent?

We changed the caption to “Boxplots of mean species richness (� standard error) across depth stations” (New Line 228).

Line 211. I think you should include that the surf zone data is not included in figure. It's slightly misleading since the surf zone data was used to calculate the indices.

Thank you for this suggestion. We added a sentence in the caption “Figure includes only the nearshore samples and does not include the surf zone samples.” (New Line 229)

Line 215. Can't you summarize p-values somehow in text, instead of referring reader to Supplementary Material?

We agree with this comment. We summarized p-values in main text: “Species richness differed significantly across depth, with shallow sampling stations having lower species richness than deeper stations (ANOVA; p<0.001; Fig 1). Specifically, the 0m and 1m species richness values were significantly different from the 9m (both p=0.001) and 10m (p=0.001 and p=0.002, respectively) species richness values. (New Line 222-227)

Also please be specific if sequences were matched to a local fish database, or to whatever is in GenBank.

We matched the sequences first using the California Current Large Marine Ecosystem fish specific reference database and then CRUX-generated 12S database. We describe the matching process in the Methods: “We first assigned taxonomy using the California Current Large Marine Ecosystem fish specific reference database [36]. Second, we used the CRUX-generated 12S reference database supplemented with California Current Large Marine Ecosystem fish specific references to assign taxonomy using all available 12S reference barcodes to identify any non-fish taxa following the methods of Gold et al. [36] using a Bayesian cutoff score of 60.” (New Lines 142-147)

Appendix S1 line 10. I don't understand how triplicate amplification helps "to account for PCR artifacts".

We removed “To account for PCR artifacts” from the sentence (S1 Appendix New Line 10)

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eDNA Captures Depth Partitioning in a Kelp Forest Ecosystem

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    Supplementary Materials

    S1 Fig. Apportioned variance plot of the three variables in the PERMANOVA model.

    Depth accounted for 16% variance (p = 0.001), collected date accounted for 14% variance (p = 0.001) and replicate accounted for 3% variance (p = 0.426).

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    S2 Fig. Importance of variables in the depth gradient forest model.

    Sampling depth had the highest accuracy importance and R2 weighted importance in the depth gradient model.

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    S3 Fig. Performance of species in the depth gradient forest model.

    There were fourteen top predictor species with R2 values greater than 0.35 in the gradient forest model.

    (TIFF)

    S4 Fig. NMDS for shore vs. 1 m stations.

    Surf zone community composition differs from the nearshore community composition. NMDS stress is 0.082.

    (TIFF)

    S5 Fig. Importance of variables in the nearshore vs. surf zone gradient forest model.

    Sampling depth had the highest accuracy importance and R2 weighted importance in the nearshore vs. surf zone space gradient forest model.

    (TIFF)

    S6 Fig. Performance of species in the nearshore vs. surf zone space gradient forest model.

    There were seven top predictor species with R2 values greater than 0.40 in the gradient forest model.

    (TIFF)

    S1 Table. MiFish-U and MiFish-E primer sequences.

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    S2 Table. Taxonomy table with read counts after decontamination.

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    S3 Table. Taxonomy table with eDNA Index values after decontamination.

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    S4 Table. Species list.

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    S5 Table. eDNA abundance patterns (shallow vs. deep stations) for all teleost and elasmobranch taxa.

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    S6 Table. Mean eDNA Index across days for top predictor taxa in the gradient forest model.

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    S7 Table. Ecology, behavior and depth distribution variability across days.

    Table includes p-values for the Day:Station interaction of the ANOVA for the linear model of eDNA index abundance.

    (XLSX)

    S1 Appendix

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    S2 Appendix

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    Data Availability Statement

    All data is available through Dryad (https://doi.org/10.5068/D18H47). Code used for analyses is available on GitHub at https://github.com/ksmonuki/eDNA-analysis. A Zenodo link for the code is available at https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.5574141. The raw sequences are available on NCBI at http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/bioproject/771917 with accession number PRJNA771917.


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