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. 2022 Feb 2;17(2):e0263041. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0263041

Visual aids in ambulatory clinical practice: Experiences, perceptions and needs of patients and healthcare professionals

Catherine Hafner 1,*, Julie Schneider 2, Mélinée Schindler 3, Olivia Braillard 3
Editor: Barbara Schouten4
PMCID: PMC8809598  PMID: 35108328

Abstract

This study aims to explore how visual aids (VA) are used in ambulatory medical practice. Our research group (two doctors, one graphic designer and one sociologist) have led a qualitative study based on Focus Groups. A semi-structured guide and examples of VA were used to stimulate discussions. Participants were healthcare professionals (HP) working in ambulatory practice in Geneva and French-speaking outpatients. After inductive thematic analysis, the coding process was analyzed and modified to eventually reach consensus. Six focus groups gathered twenty-one HP and fifteen patients. Our study underlines the variety of purposes of use of VA and the different contexts of use allowing the distinction between “stand-alone” VA used out of consultation by patients alone and “interactive” VA used during a consultation enriched by the interaction between HP and patients. HP described that VA can take the form of useful tools for education and communication during consultation. They have questioned the quality of available VA and complained about restricted access to them. Patients expressed concern about the impact of VA on the interaction with HP. Participants agreed on the beneficial role of VA to supplement verbal explanation and text. Our study emphasizes the need to classify available VA, guarantee their quality, facilitate their access and deliver pertinent instructions for use.

Introduction

Images are used to communicate and teach in a multitude of areas. In the medical field, the recall of information transmitted orally during consultation is unsatisfactory and written documents are often not adapted to patients [1]. The use of images seems to improve understanding, attention and recall of information [2]. A lot of interest has been devoted to the development and use of pictograms to improve medication adherence [35].

For the purpose of this article we have defined “visual aids” as all media or formats that are used to give information with the aid of non-moving images (aid to verbal or written information). Images comprise photographs, illustrations, drawings, infographics (method to visually communicate information) or pictograms (Fig 1) [6].

Fig 1. Examples of different types of images to represent the “hand disinfection” concept, using a photograph, an illustration, an infographic with illustration and a pictogram.

Fig 1

“How to Handwash?” under a CC BY 4.0 license, with permission from Altitude436, original copyright © Altitude436, 2021. Pictogram reprinted from “Vigigerme® Hygiène des mains” under a CC BY license, with permission from HUG, original copyright, © HUG 2017.

Other types of VA than pictograms (illustrations, infographics, photo stories and cartoons) have also been studied for patient education and risk communication among other fields [714]. Studies focus on a single type VA, a single purpose and take place in precise research context [15, 16]. It is therefore complicated to understand how visual materials can take place into real daily practice with the currently available data.

While many studies focus on the process of creation and validation of visuals, this study aims to examine the way users can profit from visuals already available. We want to identify the different types of VA that are used in clinical practice without focusing on a particular visual element or a specific purpose. Our aim is to understand how they are used by HP and patients and to identify benefits and constraints in real practice. The ultimate goal is to facilitate the use of VA in clinical practice in a safe and relevant manner.

Method

Context

Our study took place at the at the Geneva University Hospitals (HUG) which dispenses ambulatory care of general internal medicine to a population of different socio-educational backgrounds and diverse nationalities and cultures. Geneva is undeniably a cosmopolitan canton whose proportion of foreign nationals in the population is the highest in Switzerland [17]. This illustrates the variety of nationalities, cultures, spoken languages, socio-educational and economic levels in our canton and the potential communication hurdles that can ensue.

Methodological approach

Design

We conducted a qualitative study based on focus groups. Following a review of the literature, a guide to a semi-structured focus group (FG) was established in order to stimulate discussion. The interview guide (see Table 1) was validated in a pilot FG. Given the absence of modification to the guide, the pilot FG was included in the analysis.

Table 1. Interview guide used in the focus groups.
(1) Explore perceptions of participants related to visual aids (VA)
• Could you give us examples of VA? Examples in the medical field? Who are they for?
(2) Determine acceptance criteria for VA by exploring the views of patients and HP regarding VA as well as collecting their reactions to different types of images.
• Could you comment on this selection of images? (Presentation by the moderator of a selection of VA related to the medical field. The infographics were chosen to represent a palette of diverse tones and aesthetics: humorous, scientific and symbolic versus descriptive etc. Only paper-based VA were presented.)
• Do you enjoy using images to transmit information? Why?
• Could you give us personal examples where you have been confronted with images related to the medical field?
• Do you perceive that the use of images helps the transmission of information? How? Why?
(3) Identify determining factors that would influence the use of VA, in particular by questioning participants on the areas of healthcare where VA would be perceived as being the most useful and by exploring the needs and expectations of patients and HP.
• What criteria must be applied to a visual aid for it to be useful?
• Do aesthetics play a role in the interpretation of an image?
• What influences the use of VA?
• How could images be integrated into daily care?
• What areas would be the most relevant? (Examples: treatment, prevention, explanation of diseases, explanation of the healthcare system, anatomy).
• Which format seems to you the most suitable? Paper versus digital.

Research team

The research team included two general practitioners, a sociology researcher and a graphic designer. One of the doctors and the sociology researcher are experienced in qualitative research and in patient education.

Conduct

The research protocol was sent to the Research Ethics Council, which confirmed that in light of our methodology there was no need for a full submission. The inclusion criterion for all participants consisted of oral proficiency in French. For HP, the criterion of inclusion was healthcare practice in Geneva with ambulatory patients without focusing on a specific profession. Regarding patients, inclusion criteria consisted of having an experience of ambulatory medical follow-up in Geneva and not being hospitalized.

We carried out a purposive sampling in order to have the widest range of HP and patients. Criteria used for purposive sampling of patients were age (> 2 patients over 70 years old), native language (> 35% of non-french native language) and number of past ambulatory consultations. We aimed to have different types of ambulatory experiences (chronic disease follow up, emergency consultation, preventive care e.g.). Due to the impossibility to include non-french speaking patients in the FG, we chose the native language criteria to ensure a diversity of cultural backgrounds. The recruitment of HP was done via e-mail and posters. The pharmacists were recruited by e-mail and visits to dispensaries closest to the hospital in order to avoid too large recruitment.

The patients were recruited in waiting rooms or through posters in the hospital and in city pharmacies as well as directly by doctors working in the HUG. All participants received a gift voucher of CHF 20.—for a department store. Lunch was offered during focus groups and each participant signed informed consent.

Focus groups were moderated by the sociology researcher and took place between 24.05.2017 and 26.07.2017. One to two other members of the research group took handwritten notes of the sessions in addition to the audio recording. We have separated patients and HP for the focus groups in order to facilitate discussion within the group. The recorded interviews were transcribed ad verbatim by a remunerated external person. A proofreading was performed in order to verify the accuracy of the transcript.

Data analysis

All the members of the research group read the transcripts and established by consensus a first code list in an inductive manner with a precise definition of each code, so that the coders could refer to it during the analysis. There was no disagreement requiring an intervention of a third party.

Two members of the group have encoded the full content of the discussions using an analysis program (Dedoose, Version 8.1.21). The totality of the content was double-coded. The list of codes was refined as coding continued, always with the consensus of the entire research team.

Results

Three “healthcare professionals’ focus groups” (including the pilot FG) and three “patients focus groups” achieved data saturation. Fifteen patients and twenty-one HP participated. Patients groups lasted an hour and a half, HP sessions one hour. Table 2 enumerates specific occupations of HP and Table 3 patients’ characteristics. The 3 focus groups with HP included minimum 4 different professions.

Table 2. Healthcare professionals.

Occupation Number
Dispensary pharmacists 4
Physicians 4
Nurses 7
Dietician 1
Physiotherapist 1
Occupational therapists 2
Radiology technicians 2

Table 3. Patients’ characteristics.

Characteristics Number
Age:
<40 years old 3
40–70 years old 8
> 70 years old 4
Native Language
French 9
Other 6
Number of past ambulatory Consultation
<5 6
5–50 6
>50 3

The inductive thematic analysis resulted in bringing out five main themes: 1) identification and definition of VA 2) context of use, purpose and role of VA, 3) co-construction and reference systems, 4) accessibility and quality of VA and 5) patient-healthcare professional relationship.

Identification and definition of visual aids

When asked about examples of VA, the HP listed a multitude of visuals. Complete elaborate VA (infographics, posters, illustrated sets of cards) were cited as well as individual images such as pictograms or illustrations. Drawings, photographs and videos have also been mentioned as examples. The paper format is often used but its source is frequently digital. Original variations were also cited by patients when asked about VA such as the use of stones.

Patient: “I have a dermatologist who has stones at his medical office that are laid one on top of the other and he told me that’s the skin. So that’s the dermis, the epidermis, he showed me all the layers, but with a name.” (FG6)

While patients mostly described positive experiences with VA, a few expressed that a good explanation was enough.

Patient: “I think, a good doctor, or a good female doctor, explains it to you and for me it is enough. I don’t need images.” (FG6)

In the end, examples of VA listed by participants include a great variety of types and formats. The users do not seem to identify different categories of visual elements (pictograms versus illustration for example) but they focus rather on the roles and purposes of VA.

Contexts of use, purposes and roles of visual aids

We have identified two main contexts of use of VA. On the one hand, some VA were mainly created for use outside consultation, either by patients or HP on their own (posters, brochure, medical file etc.). We propose to call this type of VA: “stand-alone VA”. On the other hand, the majority of examples given by participants concerned the usage during consultation where a visual aid is presented/created by the healthcare professional to interact with the patient. We propose to name those VA: “interactive VA”.

Participants cited a few examples where VA were used out of consultation, e.g. posters in waiting rooms or hospital orientation signs. Their primary purpose was unilateral transmission of information or spatial orientation. These “stand-alone VA” as opposed to “interactive VA”, are used without healthcare professional’s guidance. Participants underlined that in order to transmit information, they rely considerably on the text, given the absence of verbal explanation. However, if the stand-alone visual aid is a reminder of a known information, the image alone can be very helpful.

Healthcare professional: “Afterwards, I think, these are things that are clear to us because we see them every day. But afterward, if you are a patient, it will probably, be the first time that you will be confronted with this image. There we will have to explain to him at one time or another otherwise we risk not being on the same wavelength… precisely that risks causing problems later…we start on a bad note.” (FG1)

For the majority of patients, the primary role of images in the context of stand-alone VA is to attract attention.

Patient 1: “There is too much text in relation to the image. And what must strike is the image and not the text, that’s what strikes people.”

Patient 2: “Yes sometimes it’s a strong and simple image” (FG5)

This role seems important given that compared to text alone, participants were clearly more attracted to infographics combining both images and text.

Moderator: “And if there had been the text alone, you would have read it too or not?”

Patient: “If there is too much reading, no. Because, finally, there are sometimes terms in the things you are given, therapeutic names, you really have to go back and ask again later to find out what it means (….).” (FG4)

However, participants underlined the risk of overloading stand-alone VA with details or a multitude of information because essential meaning could be missed.

Moderator: “Yes but why more speaking?”

Patient: “Because there are less images, one can more easily catch the…. because the others, it is a bit, messy, one can’t….one doesn’t know where to look.” (FG 4)

Participants also emphasized the importance of the "tone" given to the message. Indeed, an image can also discourage the patient as exemplified by participants’ reactions (1 patient and 2 HP) to an infographic about diabetes with a seemingly frightening pictogram showing an amputated person.

Healthcare professional 1: “Well, it needs to catch attention, but I mean… Aggressive at this point…”

Healthcare professional 2: “Yeah… not that it’s too aggressive either but…all the same you understand right away, it has to be understood right away.”

Healthcare professional 3: “I think it’s hard to do both… that there is at the same time a reaction from the general public but also that it doesn’t scare too much, in order to de-stigmatize the disease a little, finally. As we do for AIDS-HIV.” (FG1)

Another cited type of stand-alone visual aid consists of pictograms for Hospital Hygiene Signage (Vigigerme®) [18]. Those pictograms were listed as examples of efficient stand-alone VA which render the transmission of information easy and became so common that patients and HP often do not need additional verbal or written information.

Regarding the use of VA during medical consultation as “interactive VA”, different purposes were identified: explanation, overcoming communication barrier, recall and situation setting. Table 4 allows to list some examples of “interactive VA”, as opposed to “stand-alone VA”, also with mention of roles, purposes, advantages and constraints.

Table 4. Purposes and roles of interactive visual aids with cited examples (not exhaustive) and their advantages and constraints of use.

Purpose Examples (not exhaustive) Role of visual Advantages and constraints of use
Explanation Anatomic sheets Helps to explain information that depends on the visual. Level of complexity can be adapted.
Drawing of a surgical procedure
Helps with verification of understanding
Visual representation of risk Helps to understand complex information. Possibility of making the patient active.
Overcoming a communication barrier Photograph depicting acts of daily life Support for communication Risk of use as a translation tool for language
Recall Medication schedule Simplifies information. Possibility of co-construction with patient.
Dietary sheets Decreases the amount of text. Allows dialogue.
Draws attention. Helps with verification of understanding.
Can impact motivation.
Situation setting Images of acts of daily life Helps to project oneself Possibility of exploration, verification of understanding Roleplay
Abstraction

In the context of a medical consultation, VA are often used as tools to improve communication when the circumstances are challenging (linguistic barrier, aphasia, illiteracy, hypoacusis). Some HP underlined the lack of interactive VA for translation purposes when oral communication is impossible and requested tools designed for translation. Others, on the contrary, underlined their determination to avoid substitution of oral communication with interactive VA because of the risk of misinterpretation.

Healthcare professional: “I find that […] finally, the visual tools are more… finally, useful for the patient, after, finally I find it really necessary to have, finally either to construct them with the patient, or that there is an explanation provided at the same time as the presentation of these tools.” (FG2)

Even when communication is not an issue, interactive VA are used to help with explanation of visual information, especially related to anatomy, or complex concepts (statistical risk e.g.) by representing them in an illustrated way.

Patient: “I also have a small ear problem, and then… often you can’t actually picture the problems one has, and then by drawing, sometimes it can be of help. I think it’s simpler, it’s more understandable.” (FG 4)

HP can also benefit from the use of a visual as pointed out by this patient:

Patient: “I think you put this in front of the doctor, who will explain this in front of the patient; well yes, it is much easier, for the doctor, for the explanation and at the same time for the patient to understand.” (FG 5)

Indeed, HP report that using an interactive visual aid is an opportunity to simplify information and therefore to select the main message to be transmitted.

Healthcare professional: “there is […] so much info now, between the Internet, applications, in any case regarding food, and I tell myself that going back to things a little bit essential, it can also help to sort info, even for professionals, for us, and then for the patients.” (FG 1)

Another purpose of use is to help with the recall of information. The interactive visual aid used during consultation can become a reminder. Indeed, participants (patients and HP) particularly cited interactive VA using a format which can be consulted at home.

Patient: “we can take it with us, it’s clear. And it was very useful to me precisely because she [his wife] was not there and when she arrived, I explained to her, I had to pull out the graph. Yes, I pulled out the graph, and voilà, really, I understand even more.” (FG 4)

Situation setting is also a purpose for the use of interactive VA when images represent situations of daily life or a future intervention. Their role is to help the patient to project himself into a different context in order to anticipate potential difficulties and answer questions.

The main common characteristic of interactive VA is how they are integrated during consultation by the healthcare professional allowing the patient to react, facilitating discussion and interaction. It can help patients to express their choices and the healthcare professional can verify the patient’s understanding.

Healthcare professional: “but even just having a little visual to have the patient confirm, whether he understood or not, is good. Whether by explanation or a drawing, he should say yes I have really understood, or not I have not understood, so that we can change the technique, in case he did not understand.” (FG 3)

The patients agreed that they also wanted to take an active role, to guide the healthcare practitioner and to create a dialogue while using interactive VA.

Patient 1: “Yes absolutely, yes, we share it at the same time.”

Moderator: “If you, you understand, he goes further, or he goes back to…”

Patient 1: “See, the intestine, it’s that and that, and then etc. and then you show it all together, if you want.” (FG4)

Healthcare professional: “If I can add something, a good tool is necessarily interactive, so a ready-made thing is not very effective, so the patient must have something to do, whatever the activity, but that he have something to do.” (FG 2)

The active role of the patient while using interactive VA is essential but it should also be the case in the process of creation of VA.

Co-construction and reference systems

HP identify the risk of using overelaborate symbols, not adapted to the health literacy level-education level or symbols based on an occidental cultural reference not shared by patients.

Healthcare professional: “we tend to put our images, our perceptions, or those which would correspond to our culture, and often they can be misinterpreted. I always have in mind one case in South America where in fact an alcoholic beverage was marketed with the pictogram of a pregnant woman, who should not drink, but then the population understood that if you are not pregnant, you cannot drink this beverage.” (FG 2)

A telling example is that of the medication schedule card.

Healthcare professional: “one quickly realizes that even a simple double entry table with the name of the drug on the left and schedules on top, most people don’t understand, because it’s a concept, it’s a thing we learned in school, which to us seems to be absolutely obvious, but which is not at all obvious to some people, it still remains something not simple and finally what they understand best, that’s right.” (FG 3)

Indeed, during focus groups we have not been able to identify a systematic pattern of how VA are read by patients. Some patients focused on the text, others on details of the images or the atmosphere of the VA. We also found that a too literal interpretation of images can be confusing, for example on dietary sheets representing meals where patients literally focus on the illustrated food instead of the concept of a meal: breakfast, lunch, dinner, etc.

Patient: “for me, compared to that one, it took me a little time to understand, because I know what it is about, […] because I am dieting, I know what it is about. But for someone who has normal habits […], he may think that it is an advertisement for oil.” (FG 5)

Two solutions were suggested in order to prevent the risk of confusion related to a discrepancy in reference systems of the healthcare professional and the patient: the co-construction of VA with patients was proposed by HP, and the acquisition of a common reference system by both HP and patients. The medication schedule card for example can be co-constructed with the patient. The often cited example of traffic signs supports our ability to develop and learn a common language thanks to their high visibility in our daily lives.

Healthcare professional: “I think that before SMS existed we all had the reference of the Highway Code. Since then, emoticons have become widely spread. So now do we have to create new ones or should we be inspired by them?” (FG 1)

Accessibility and quality of visual aids

Given the notion that patients and HP could learn a common reference system, participants emphasize the importance of sharing VA, enabling the construction of a common visual language. Some HP are also interested in sharing access to VA with patients.

Healthcare professional: “[…] I also think what is interesting is that the documents could be shared, […] visible both from the outside by the patients and also by us, […] it can already nourish […] consultations and also that they can already have access to the documents, perhaps before coming to consultation so they have time to read a little…” (FG 1)

HP complain that the difficulty of accessing VA restricts their use. Therefore, participants suggest the creation of a digital database.

Nevertheless, HP mention that the quality of VA should be guaranteed and the source identifiable. Some HP qualify as "Do It Yourself" the creation of VA by themselves or doing a Google search in front of the patient. HP are concerned about an inappropriate message or a misunderstanding if VA are not validated.

Patient-healthcare professional relationship

Patients seem to appreciate any effort aimed at conveying clear information to them. They appreciate being adequately informed and often report situations where medical jargon or the complexity of the information limits their understanding. The fact that an image is drawn or explained by the healthcare professional seems to add value to the tool.

Patient: “I think a drawing by a doctor, I don’t ask that he is fully professional or a graphic designer, but that he explains to you with a drawing and that he explains it to you at the same time that he does it, then it’s meaningful […]. Yes, precisely very meaningful because my doctor did this for me.” (FG 4)

Thus, any effort to convey clear information, whether it takes the form of a visual aid or not, is appreciated and probably strengthens the relationship.

We have observed that patients are concerned about the time of interaction with the healthcare professional.

Patient: “Because it takes work on the part of the doctors. And when I see that they barely look at the person…they’re stressed out there because there’s the other one waiting (…). At the start, well he gives an explanation (verbal) (…) but then I don’t know if we can still look at the drawing, there indeed… the time…” (FG 5)

Any tool which may end up as a substitute for this exchange with a healthcare professional would constitute a threat to the patient-healthcare professional relationship. However, VA which synthesize information or focus on key points are cited as beneficial for recall because HP sometimes do not have time to summarize or repeat the main points at the end of an interview.

Discussion and conclusion

Summary of results

HP described a variety of contexts for the use of VA with different roles, formats and sources. They question the quality of certain VA and seem restricted by the lack of easy access to referenced tools. Co-construction of VA is a significant asset to them.

Patients experienced difficulty identifying what VA are and how they are useful. Concern was expressed that they will replace the interaction with HP.

We have found that VA are highly appreciated when they replace or supplement written information without being a substitute for oral explanation. Patients appreciate that HP transmit quality information to them but the challenge is the synthesis and simplification of explanations.

Strengths and limitations

The purposive sampling may have selected participants interested in VA and patient education. The broad scope of the VA and the single site methodology might limit the exhaustiveness of the results. As in any qualitative study, data collection and analysis may be subject to bias. However, our research team of various professions and career paths has brought wealth and weight to the qualitative analysis. This study is innovative by its transversal approach to various areas of care and the active participation of both patients and HP.

Discussion

Our transversal approach revealed that participants are exposed to a wide diversity of VA (pictograms, illustrations, infographics, etc.). Both HP and patients do not distinguish VA by their visual type (pictograms vs illustration, e.g.), but rather by their purpose (information vs situation setting e.g.). Participants emphasize the importance of general aesthetics and the need to catch the patient’s attention. This fact validates the importance of collaboration between patients, HP and graphic designers to take into account purposes as well as visual needs [2, 19, 20].

Our study underlines the difference between a stand-alone visual aid given out of consultation and an interactive visual aid used with a patient by a healthcare professional during consultation. Only the latter provides an opportunity to initiate dialogue and make the patient active. This finding is paramount to this study as most of the benefits and constraints of VA identified in this study are related on how the VA is used as an interactive visual aid (vs a stand-alone visual aid) rather than which VA or graphic type should be used.

The main risk of using VA described by both HP and patients is misinterpretation, especially when VA are used as a support out of consultation and without explanation or when the patient has a different cultural background. Without distinction of context, recommendations on the use of VA agree on the importance of verbal and/or written explanation to accompany graphic elements in order to reduce the likelihood of misinterpretation [2, 21].

The literature has demonstrated the risks of communicating exclusively with the use of graphical symbols because they are not inherently universal [2224]. A study proposes the creation of pictogram "sets" when translation is not possible but they must be adapted and validated for the target population [25]. Cultural background is essential to validate VA for a specific population. However, we were not able to define any specific pattern of reading patterns or preferences of patients of similar characteristics in our study, underlying the complexity of this topic and the need of further individualization of a VA.

Many participants (patients and HP) express the importance of being able to personalize VA and even co-construct them during consultation. The benefit of integrating the patient in the creation of visual media is mainly developed in the literature for the creation of visual databases for a specific population [20, 26]. In patient education, the co-construction of a pedagogical aid, whether in the process of creation or during consultation, is considered necessary to encourage patient engagement [21, 27]. Co-construction of an interactive visual aid is then not only a creation process with the possibility of individualization but it can also become a pedagogical process [20]. HP should however be trained for such an approach.

Although our findings emphasize benefits of VA when they are used as interactive VA rather than stand-alone VA, verbal communication around VA is not frequently assessed in research studies. The recommendations focus rather on the necessity of pointing to images while talking or explain the benefits of an image for a specific purpose as compared to another [2, 6, 28]. We think that the addition of instructions for use is thus necessary. This would ensure pertinent and safe usage and guide HP to promote dialogue and partnership with the use of interactive VA.

The HP state many constraints to the use of VA in their practice: complicated access and lack of guarantee of quality. These elements are consistent with the literature which underlines the importance of following through the processes of creation and validation of VA [2, 3]. The authors note the significant cost of this type of development and the lack of an accessible free database [16].

The concept of learning a visual language is addressed by HP. The creation of universal pictograms or pictograms personalized for each individual is unrealistic [16]. Research avenues are proposed in this direction to determine whether exposure to a repeatedly occurring visual language associated with a verbal explanation could make acquisition possible [22]. Given the limitations cited above, an interesting prospect would be the coordination of all efforts to create a common visual language and teach patients and HP to understand and use it, similarly to traffic signs.

Conclusion

Current research highlights the strengths of integrating VA into medicine as well as the constraints. VA integrated in consultation can become valuable tools for explanation, fostering dialogue with the patient, supporting learning and cultivating the therapeutic relationship. The main constraints don’t question the VA usefulness or efficacy but rather the processes that might endanger their use: lack of access, quality assessment or individualization to the patient need or preferences. Future research should shift from “which” standardized visual aid should be used to “how” to integrate them into daily practice.

Practice implications

VA are useful in clinical practice for different purposes as information, overcoming communication barrier, recall or situation setting, but should not replace oral communication. VA should be co-developed with patients, knowing that a unique VA can’t be adequate for all patients. HP and patients should be able to personalize them in the way that VA supports patients to express their needs and preferences. The development of a common reference system might also be an alternative to ensure VA’s adequacy with different profiles of patients. VA should also be easily accessible and their quality guaranteed to enable their use in daily practice.

Data Availability

Data are available: http://doi.org/10.5255/UKDA-SN-855201.

Funding Statement

The funders (Edmond J. Safra Foundation) had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript. Funds were used to pay for salary for one person to transcribe verbatims and fees for one author (JS), as well as for various costs related to the organization of the study. Three of the authors are employed by HUG, while one author: Julie Schneider is an independent graphic designer (at Altitude 436), her time producing materials for the study was financially compensated, without any conflict of interest. The funder provided support in the form of salaries for authors JULIE SCHNEIDER, but did not have any additional role in the study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript. The specific roles of these authors are articulated in the ‘author contributions’ section.

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PONE-D-20-29419

Visual aids in clinical practice: experiences, perceptions and needs of patients and healthcare professionals

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Reviewer #1: Many papers have been published about visual aids. This manuscript adds relevant additional knowledge to current insights based on qualitative interviews. The research question is well embedded in literature, the methodology fits, the results are described clearly. My main issue is that I would expect some more citations to illustrate the findings, as some paragraphs don’t use any citation at all. I have the following minor issues as suggestions for further improvement.

Methods:

• When was the study performed?

• Focusgroup: what number of participants was your aim? What were criteria for purposive selection (e.g. gender, age, health literacy, experience)?

• With respect to the criteria for purposive selection: did you find any indication how the results were influenced by these criteria? Did you look for conflicting evidence?

• The definition of VAs is somehow problematic, as you did leave this to the focus group (and later you give direction to the discussion by giving examples). Hence it is not clear what kind of VAs this research addresses.

o In general, I believe this is not problematic in the context of this paper. As the results show, different types of VA were named during the FGs.

o Please discuss this (also with respect to more modern/complex interventions that include visual material, such as instruction video’s, animations, instruction games).

o Did you notice any differences in benefits and limitations with respect to the type of VAs?

• Please include the interview guide in the manuscript (not as supplement).

Results

• The use of citation seems unbalances (no citation in the first paragraphs, appropriate citations in the second part)

• I believe line ‘117 Professions of healthcare participants’ can be skipped.

• Paragraph Identification.

o Please support your findings in this paragraph with appropriate citations.

• Paragraph context

o I believe Table 2 might be skipped as the information is well covered within the text.

o Illustrate the first part ‘context’ with citations

o Should the text below the Table be part of the Title of Table 3 ‘Purposes and roles of visual tools with cited examples (not exhaustive) and their advantages and constraints of use.’?

o Line 214, page 12. What is the active rol (as this is not clear)? Please give an example: The active role of the patient while using “visual tools” is essential but it should also be the case in the process of creation of VA.

• I believe the paragraphs Summary of results and Strengths and limitation should be part of the discussion

Discussion:

• Some more limitations might be discussed, such as the interview guide, the very broad scope of the topic (ranging from pictograms to games).

• Discusion please include the following aspects in your discusion

o How do the cultural background and patient characteristics such as age, gender and disease characteristics influence the need for VA, and what cultural aspects are most relevant in this context?

o Co creation: very interesting topic. Is this meant in the context of development of VA, or might this also apply to the use of VA during every single consultation?

o How should be accounted for diversity in health literacy in the use and development of VAs?

Remark:

• Statement concerning data availability: it seems that the underlying data (complete transcriptions, analysis and audio-taped focusgroup interviews) are not available. I do not believe this is needed for this paper. However I believe the statement that “all data underlying the findings described fully available, without restriction, and from the time of publication” is not true.

Reviewer #2: Overall impression

The authors describe a study consisting of focus groups with patients and healthcare professionals on the use of visual aids in ambulatory medical practice. Their aim is to understand how visual aids are used and to identify benefits and practical constraints. The authors conclude that there is a need for visual aids in medical practice, that patients are concerned about replacing the conversation with visual aids and that practitioners are looking for support with access to high quality materials. It is a topic worth exploring, with a commonly-used methodology and great to see a multidisciplinary researcher team. However, there are major weaknesses in the paper with regards to presenting the data (i.e., only for some part of the Results are data presented in a way that shows they follow from the interview; other sections read more like the authors' interpretations) and logic (i.e., conclusions are drawn that do not seem to follow from the presented data and that are not in line with the presented research questions). In addition, the practice implications to create a database with visual elements does not seem to follow from the study findings.

Introduction

1. The introduction should ideally begin with an explanation of the problem that will be addressed in the study, along the lines of “In the medical (…) adapted to patients”, lines 47-49

2. 41-42: The definition of visual aids appears to be incomplete. The description seems to cover ‘visual’ without focussing on the role of ‘aid’

3. The examples in lines 42-43 are incomplete and not very informative. There are several mentions of ‘.etc’ in the first few pages (lines 38, 42, 52) where it would be more appropriate to present a fuller context.

4. 52: the ‘therefore’ does not follow logically from the sentence before. The authors may want to consider adding something like “It is therefore difficult to draw evidence-based conclusions on what can be considered good practice…”

Methods

5. The described methods generally sound appropriate, but are not tailored to the question on insight into current use of visual aids, for which you would preferably have a wider cross-section. The described method would be better suited to address the question on stakeholders’ perceptions on helpful ways(/barriers) to use visual aids instead.

6. In addition to this, the focus group guide (supplementary file) does not appear to address practical constraints, which is one of the indicated research questions.

7. Line 99-100: Please expand on why the separation of patients and HCPs seemed important or how it helped facilitate discussion, e.g. did they feel more comfortable to share their stories?

8. Line 109: Please provide the intercoder reliability for the double-coded section.

Results

9. Major issue - This section does not meet standards for qualitative reporting. It is generally unclear what was discussed in the interviews and what is interpretation by the authors (e.g. line 214-215: “The active role … creation of VA”). It is also unclear whether findings were mentioned once by a single stakeholder or whether there was group consensus – it would be helpful to add numbers or general indicators (“the group agreed that..”). Quotes should be added, like in section 178-202. The summary of results (283-291) indicates the potential of interesting findings from the interview data, but this is not adequately presented in the results section.

10. It is great to see the diversity of healthcare professionals included. I am missing the characteristics/demographics of the patient participants. Characteristics such as being a chronic vs new patient, age, literacy levels and cultural background can have great impact on preferences for the use and look of visual aids.

11. 125: what do the authors mean with “complete elaborate VA”?

12. 129-135: this is more a methodological consideration re the researchers’ use of language in the interviews than a result to report.

13. 142+145: the authors make a distinction between ‘visual support’ and ‘visual tool’. However, the language used for this distinction is not very intuitive. If I understand the difference right, I would suggest using ‘stand-alone visual aids’ vs ‘interactive visual aids’. This is in line with what the authors state in line 206 that ‘the main common characteristic of visual tool is their context of use’.

14. 164: The authors list ‘some examples of visual support’ in table 2. This list needs to be extensive, as the aim of the work is to understand how visual aids are being used.

15. 166, Table 2 – also, 174, Table 3: Were the roles of the visuals and advantages and constraints of use discussed in the interviews, or are these the authors’ interpretations?

16. 166, Table 2: The body of the text talks about the importance of ‘tone’ and ‘frightening pictogram’. The table does not mention emotional effects as a consideration for use.

17. 174, Table 3: The authors may want to think about a more specific term for ‘Communication’ as a purpose, as explanation and situation setting are also forms of communication.

18. 185: Could the authors clarify what they mean with ‘typically visual information’?

19. 230: Could the authors clarify what they mean with “we have not been able to identify a system of how VA are read by patients”

20. 238: Who offered this solution of co-construction?

21. 248: Did the patients and healthcare professionals mention it was a good idea to learn a common reference system or do the authors make this claim based on literature?

22. 258: Who suggested to create a digital database? Seems like a pretty big leap from a conversation about the use of visual aids, and most patients not having much experience with it as the authors describe, to them suggesting the development of a digital database.

23. 265-266: “We have senses… been explicitly stated”. This is not data but the authors’ interpretation.

24. 295-296: Could the authors please elaborate on how their experience has helped to mitigate bias in the research

25. 298: If the authors were interested to explore stakeholders’ perceptions on potential uses of visual aids, the statement regarding generalisation might be true to some extent. But findings on how visual aids are being used in a single location are not necessarily generalisable to different healthcare context. The authors should be more realistic and specific about the extent to which their findings are generalisable.

Discussion

26. Although there appear to be some interesting findings, this section is confused as well. It presents some data that is not apparent in the results section, e.g. lines 332-33: “several healthcare professionals… for translation purposes” and lines 343-345: “the healthcare professionals… context of the patient.”

27. 307: While I see how the classification of visual aids in practice can be helpful for the research team, I am not convinced that this is a priority finding in the context of use of visual aids and barriers and facilitators in practice. Perhaps the authors can restructure the discussion to place more emphasis on discussing the research questions.

28. 302-303: These sentences seem to contradict each other: “they do not… by their graphic characteristics” vs “…emphasize the importance of aesthetics”, which is shaped by the graphic characteristics.

Conclusion

29. 356: The conclusion does not answer the research question of how visual aids are used in ambulatory practice and identifying practical constraints. Instead, the conclusions mainly focus on integrating visual aids in clinical practice, although it does seem to address the question on benefits of visual aids in practice.

30. 363-364: I am unsure what this conclusion is based on.

Practice implication

31. 366-368: This might be a helpful project, but does not follow from the described work and could have been proposed regardless of the specific study findings.

Others

32. Spelling/grammar could be improved in places, e.g. leave out ‘have’ in several instances (lines 34, 104, 113…)

33. I would suggest to make the title a more specific: single-site and ambulatory care

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Visual aids in clinical practice: experiences, perceptions and needs of patients and healthcare professionals

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Reviewer #1: Some minor remarks (line numbers from version with track changes):

Definition of VA (introduction): you seem to focus on non-moving images, also illustrated by your examples. Please add this to your definition.

Methods: include in the manuscript when the interviews were performed.

Approach: purposive selection: please include your criteria for selection of HP as well (including motivation). You should mention some key characteristics of these professionals (experience, gender) as well, and mention if the were distributed well over the focus groups

Ethics (p6, line 102-103): it is not clear if the proposal was submitted to the Research Ethics Council or not. The authors state: 'full submission was not required'. Does this mean that there was a procedure that the Counsil approved a brief version of the protocol? Or was the protocol not submitted nor judged in any respect at all?

Minor detail (p7, line 123) authors state that seperation of patients SEEMED important. It looks like this WAS CONSIDERED by the authors, and not based on a result of this study.

Results (p 17, line 287, semantic point): main characteristic of interactive VA was their context of use. I doubt if you can call this a characteristic, if this is part of your definition. It is valuable to read how HP and professionals interact with VA, but this is not be both an essential element of the definition and a characteristic.

P20, line 370: please include a citation for 'pateints fear time of interaction with HP may be suppressed' as this seems an important point that comes back in the summary of results.

In my opinion, the abstract does not cover your main findings. You might consider to include the concepts of stand alone and interactive VA, and the purpose of VAs in the abstract.

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PLoS One. 2022 Feb 2;17(2):e0263041. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0263041.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


9 Dec 2021

Thank you again for the helpful comments. We have answered all of the comments/questions in the attached rebutal letter (revision letter).

We thank you for the delay that allowed us to work on the changes.

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12 Jan 2022

Visual aids in clinical practice: experiences, perceptions and needs of patients and healthcare professionals

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PONE-D-20-29419R2

Visual aids in ambulatory clinical practice: experiences, perceptions and needs of patients and healthcare professionals

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