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. 2022 Feb 7;17(2):e0262015. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0262015

Using eDNA techniques to find the endangered big-headed turtle (Platysternon megacephalum)

Ivan P Y Lam 1, Yik-Hei Sung 1, Jonathan J Fong 1,*
Editor: Mark A Davis2
PMCID: PMC8820637  PMID: 35130297

Abstract

We evaluate the efficacy of environmental DNA (eDNA) techniques to locate wild populations and estimate the population size of the endangered big-headed turtle (Platysternon megacephalum) in Hong Kong. The results from this study are important for identifying priority sites for protection and further research. Additionally, we assess the impact of two environmental variables (temperature and pH) on eDNA quantity. We surveyed 34 streams for three years, sampling four times each year. Four new populations were first identified with eDNA analysis, and then verified by field surveys. Our multi-year survey highlights that eDNA detection can be inconsistent over time, even in streams with known populations. There was no significant relationship between eDNA quantity and the environmental variables tested. Lastly, our results suggest that eDNA methods remain promising to estimate population size, since number of positive detections were positively correlated with population size in streams with known populations. We conclude that eDNA methods are powerful, but care must be taken when interpreting field results as they are affected by species ecology and environmental conditions.

Introduction

The big-headed turtle (Platysternon megacephalum) is distributed across East and Southeast Asia (China, Thailand, Vietnam, Cambodia, Laos, and Myanmar) [1]. Populations of P. megacephalum across its range have declined drastically due to severe hunting pressure [25]. This decline was highlighted in two studies conducted in South China, where they found only 16 individuals in over 4000 trapping days [6, 7]. This species is currently listed on CITES Appendix I [8] and classified as “Critically Endangered” on the IUCN Red List of Threatened Species [9] with recommendations [10].

While P. megacephalum has largely been extirpated across its geographical range, a remnant population exists in Hong Kong, providing a unique opportunity for research and conservation. However, work on P. megacephalum is hindered by incomplete knowledge of where wild individuals persist due to its secretiveness and rarity. Environmental DNA (eDNA) refers to DNA deposited in the environment (such as water, soil, and air) originating from the target species, and eDNA-based techniques provide a tool to assess the presence of a target species without observing it [11]. Methods have been developed to detect the eDNA of a wide range of taxa [1217]. Researchers have also tested the prospect of using eDNA approaches to estimate abundance, with some studies successful [16, 1820] and others unsuccessful [2124]. Recent achievements include locating a new population of the endangered Yamoto salamander (Hynobius vandenburghi) [25], differentiating populations of the harbour porpoise (Phocoena phocoena) [26], and potential use in population genetics studies [27, 28]. In this study, we test whether eDNA techniques can be applied to help locate, study, and conserve P. megacephalum.

In this study, we use a validated eDNA assay [29] to clarify the distribution of P. megacephalum across Hong Kong. Since P. megacephalum is a highly aquatic species with rare terrestrial movement [4], eDNA-based stream surveys are expected to assist in locating the species. The aims of our study are to evaluate the (1) usefulness of eDNA techniques in detecting lotic turtle populations, (2) impact of two environmental variables (temperature and pH) on eDNA quantity, and (3) effectiveness of eDNA data in abundance estimation. We conclude by discussing the potential factors that influence eDNA detection (eDNA degradation, production, transport, and dilution). For P. megacephalum in Hong Kong, the results from this study are important for identifying priority sites for protection and further research.

Materials and methods

Study site

The study was conducted in the Hong Kong Special Administrative Region, China (22°09’–22°37’N, 113°50’–114°30’E). Hong Kong has a subtropical climate characterized by cool, dry winters (“dry season”, November to February) and hot, humid summers (“wet season”, May to September) separated by mild autumns and springs [30]. A total of 34 streams with suitable habitat for P. megacephalum (rocky streams with fast flowing, clear water in secondary forest) were selected for eDNA water sampling. Streams were divided into three categories: (1) known populations based on long-term trapping surveys (KP; 8 streams), (2) historical records of presence with the latest report more than 10 years ago (HR; 9 streams), and (3) suitable habitat but unknown status (UN; 17 streams). Exact survey locations are not disclosed to protect populations of P. megacephalum, as this species is listed as Endangered (EN) on the IUCN Red List [9] and Appendix I of CITES [8], and subject to poaching [25].

Sample collection and processing

We collected water samples over an approximately three-year period (November 2016–August 2019). For each year, we collected samples twice for each wet season (in May and August) and dry season (in November and February). A total of 12 water samples were collected from each stream (4 samples/year × 3 years = 12 samples). One liter of water was collected from the water column [13, 3133] using a sterile 50-mL conical tube. At the same time, water temperature and pH were measured using a waterproof temperature/pH meter (Eutech pHTestr 30). Water samples were collected in sterile Whirl-Pak® sample bags (Nasco #B01027; WI, USA) and filtered using 0.45 μm pore size, cellulose nitrate filters (Nalgene analytical test filter funnel #145–2045; Thermo Fisher Scientific Inc; Waltham, MA, USA) either on site or in the laboratory within six hours. Filters were removed from the funnel using sterile forceps, with gloved hands, and stored in 95% ethanol at -20°C until DNA extraction was performed.

Prior to each lab work step, we sterilized laboratory benches and equipment with a 10% bleach solution for at least 5 minutes. The filters were divided into two pieces to provide two opportunities for DNA extraction. DNA was extracted using a DNeasy Blood & Tissue Kit and QiaShredder (Qiagen GmbH; Hilden, Germany) following a validated protocol [34]. DNA was eluted using 100 μL of TE buffer and stored at -20°C. The DNA concentration of each sample was measured using a Qubit 3 Fluorometer with the dsDNA HS Assay Kit (InvitrogenTM; Thermo Fisher Scientific Inc; Waltham, MA, USA). Samples were used in subsequent quantitative PCR (qPCR) analyses if DNA quantification recovered a positive value greater than the detection limit of the fluorometer (> 0.2 ng/μL). If DNA was not detected during quantification, DNA was extracted again from the second half of the filter, and amplified independently in qPCR without combining with the first extraction. Negative controls were included for all laboratory work to identify any contamination throughout sample processing (one for each set of twenty-three samples of DNA extractions, one for each set of twenty-three samples for DNA quantification, and two or three for qPCR in a 96-well plate).

Quantitative PCR

qPCR reactions were performed on a StepOnePlus Real-Time PCR System (Applied Biosystems; Thermo Fisher Scientific Inc; Waltham, MA, USA). We followed the qPCR conditions of a P. megacephalum specific assay targeting the ND4 region [29], of which the analytical sensitivity at 10 copies/μL was 0.95, indicating reliable detection of eDNA down to 10 copies/μL. A validation checklist of the selected qPCR assay following [35] can be found in S1 Table. We summarize the protocol herein. Each qPCR reaction included 1 μL eDNA template, 5 μL TaqMan® Environmental Master Mix (Thermo Fisher Scientific Inc; Waltham, MA, USA), 900 nM of each primer, 250 nM of probe, and enough autoclaved Milli-Q® water to make a final volume of 10 μL. The TaqMan® Exogenous Internal Positive Control (IPC) (1 μL IPC-Mix and 0.2 μL IPC-DNA following manufacturer’s protocol) was included to test for inhibition within each qPCR reaction. Negative controls (two or three for each 96-well plate) were included in all tests. Thermal cycler conditions were as follows: 50°C for 2 min, then 95°C for 10 min, followed by 40 cycles of 95°C for 15 s and the 60°C for 1 min. To quantify absolute concentration of eDNA, we employed a four-level standard curve (1,000,000 copies/μL, 100,000 copies/μL, 10,000 copies/μL, and 100 copies/μL), using a synthetic gene containing primer and probe binding sites (Tech Dragon Limited; Hong Kong). Serial dilution of the synthetic gene was done one week prior to qPCR to minimize contamination. qPCR fluorescence signal, threshold value and Cq value were calculated using the StepOneTM software v.2.3 (Applied Biosystems; Thermo Fisher Scientific Inc; Waltham, MA, USA).

For each water sample, we ran multiple qPCR reactions to determine the presence/absence of P. megacephalum eDNA [36]. Here, we define a few terms to distinguish between the results of a single qPCR reaction and the sample as a whole (two to five individual qPCR reactions). For a single qPCR reaction, we use the term “amplified” and similar terms (e.g., amplification) when qPCR amplification was observed above the default threshold value, and the qPCR curve exhibited a typical sigmoidal shape. For the sample as a whole, it was categorized as either positive detection, negative detection, or uncertain to indicate the presence of P. megacephalum, based on the combined result of all qPCR replicates performed on the sample (details below).

Fig 1 is a diagram of the assay workflow, separated in two phases. For the first phase, each DNA template was tested in duplicate. A sample was considered to have positive detection of P. megacephalum if both replicates amplified, and negative detection when both replicates did not amplify. A sample with 1/2 amplified replicates was tested again in the second phase. In the second phase, an additional three replicates were run for each sample. If two or three of these new replicates amplified, the sample was considered to have positive detection of P. megacephalum. If none of the three replicates showed amplification, the sample was considered to have negative detection of P. megacephalum. Lastly, if one of these new replicates amplified, the sample was considered as uncertain.

Fig 1. A diagram of the two-phase workflow to determine qPCR results.

Fig 1

Turtle surveys

These field survey data serve as a way to crosscheck the eDNA-based survey results. Trapping at KP sites is part of a long-term population monitoring program started in 2009. Since then, trapping surveys have been conducted one to two times a year in each stream, using baited hoop traps following protocol in [37]. For all HR and UN streams, we conducted at least one field survey at each site, using trapping and/or active searching. When trapping, we set at least 10 traps along the stream where we took water samples for eDNA analysis. For active searching, we walked along the stream looking for P. megacephalum using headlamps at night. Permits to possess and deploy traps and temporarily retain freshwater turtles were approved by the Agriculture, Fisheries and Conservation Department, HKSAR [(86) in AF GR CON 09/51 Pt. 7)].

Exploration of eDNA data

We explored three aspects of the eDNA data using correlation analysis: (1) usefulness of eDNA techniques in detecting lotic turtle populations, (2) impact of two environmental variables (temperature and pH) on eDNA quantity, and (3) effectiveness of eDNA data in abundance estimation. Shapiro-Wilk tests were used to test the normality of data for eDNA quantity, number of eDNA amplified samples, mean capture rate, and environmental variables. The only normally distributed (p < 0.05) variable was the number of eDNA amplified samples. We selected Kendall’s correlation analysis to evaluate the relationship between parameters. Statistical analyses and graphical representations were performed using R version 4.0.3 [38] and RStudio version 1.2.5042 [39]. For all correlation analyses, we subsampled the dataset to include samples with qPCR efficiency 90–110% [40], eDNA concentration above the limit of quantification (100 copies/μL), and KP streams. KP streams were selected because the presence of P. megacephalum is known and detection of eDNA is expected to be more consistent at these sites. Additionally, we compared results of two datasets: (1) positive detection and uncertain samples, and (2) positive detection samples only.

First, we assessed the usefulness of using eDNA to detect lotic turtle populations, by comparing the number of samples with positive detection (maximum 12 samples/site) to capture rate (total number of turtles caught/total number of traps set). We used capture rate as an estimate of population size. For this analysis, we restricted the capture rate data to the trapping/visual surveys done during the study period. Next, we explored how environmental variables affect eDNA quantity by analyzing the relationship between temperature or pH and eDNA quantity. We used two site-based eDNA quantity datasets: stream KP5 only (the one stream with near-continuous eDNA detection) and all KP streams (n = 8). Lastly, we assessed the effectiveness of eDNA data for abundance estimation, by comparing eDNA quantity to capture rate. To minimize the impact of comparing asynchronous data from eDNA and trapping surveys, we only included data when a trapping and eDNA survey were conducted within a month of each other. Based on this criterion, data from 35 trapping/eDNA surveys were included in the analysis. As with the environmental variable analysis, eDNA quantity is based on two datasets—stream KP5 only and all KP streams.

Results

Quantitative PCR

A total of 408 water samples (34 locations × 3 years × 4 samples/year) were collected during the study. DNA was detected in all DNA extractions from the first half of the filter. Details and qPCR results for all replicates are found in S2 Table (qPCR efficiency: 96.99% ± 5.19; R2: 0.957 ± 0.03). No eDNA samples exhibited inhibition, and none of the negative controls exhibited qPCR fluorescence signal. All amplified water samples were above the limit of detection (10 copies/μL) as validated in [29], while all negative water samples yielded no qPCR fluorescence signal. Based on our qPCR testing approach (Fig 1), there was amplification of P. megacephalum eDNA in 37 samples: 24 samples were classified as positive detection and 13 samples were classified as uncertain. These 37 samples with amplification were from six KP, three HR, and five UN streams (Fig 2). Fig 2 is a heat map illustrating the temporal change of eDNA concentration over the study period from streams with eDNA amplification. The remaining 371 samples were classified as negative detection. A summary of amplified samples across the three categories of streams can be found in Table 1.

Fig 2. Heat map illustrating the concentration of eDNA detected in water samples from November 2016 to August 2019.

Fig 2

Each depth of color indicates a percentile of concentration level (interval = 0.2). A darker color represents a higher concentration level for positive detection (in green) and uncertain detection (in purple). Grey represents samples with no amplification, and categorized as negative detection.

Table 1. A summary of amplified samples across the three stream categories: Known Population (KP), Historical Record (HR), Unknown (UN).

KP HR UN Total
Positive 20 1 3 24
Negative 69 105 198 372
Uncertain 7 2 3 12
Total 96 108 204 408

Most of the samples with amplification (76%; 28 samples) were from KP streams. Of the eight total KP streams, only one (KP5) showed consistent eDNA amplification across the three-year period (11 out of 12 samples). Two KP streams had negative detection for all 12 samples during the study period. For the remaining five KP streams, there was occasional eDNA amplification (two to five samples with amplification), with samples with amplification being more frequent after May 2018.

Three of the samples with amplification (~8%) came from three HR streams. No amplification was detected in any of the 12 eDNA samples from the six remaining HR streams. The six remaining samples with amplification (~16%) came from five UN streams. No amplification was detected from any of the 12 eDNA samples from the remaining 12 UN streams. Among the HR and UN streams with amplification, most had only one sample with amplification throughout the three-year study period.

Turtle surveys

Table 2 summarizes the data from trapping surveys of KP streams during the study period, while capture rate corresponding to each eDNA sampling season can be found in S3 Table. There were two KP streams (KP3, KP8) that were categorized as negative detection in all samples throughout the study period. These two streams had the two lowest mean trapping rates (KP3 = 0.00, KP8 = 0.03) of the KP streams, likely indicating relatively small populations. Active searching and trapping outside of the eDNA study period verified the presence of P. megacephalum in both of these streams. Of the HR and UN streams with amplified P. megacephalum eDNA (three HR, five UN), the presence of P. megacephalum was either unconfirmed (HR8, HR9, UN15, UN17), or confirmed by trapping (UN10, UN11) or active searching (HR1, UN9). For the remaining 18 streams with negative eDNA detection (six HR streams, 12 UN streams), no turtles were caught or seen.

Table 2. Summary of trapping surveys throughout the eDNA sampling period at streams with known populations (KP).

There were positive sightings of Platysternon megacephalum using active searching at all streams.

Stream Number of surveys Mean capture rate
KP1 9 0.14
KP2 3 0.18
KP3 5 0.00
KP4 1 0.10
KP5 8 0.56
KP6 3 0.27
KP7 7 0.67
KP8 1 0.03

Exploration of eDNA data

The results were the same for both datasets (positive and uncertain samples, positive only). Here we detail the statistical results from the dataset of positive and uncertain samples. First, for assessing the usefulness of eDNA methods to detect lotic turtle populations, we found a significant, positive correlation (rs = 0.718, p = 0.02) between the number of samples with amplified eDNA and mean capture rate (Table 2). In other words, sites with a higher number of positive detections had a higher mean capture rate and likely larger, more stable populations. Next, for assessing the impact of two environmental variables (temperature and pH) on eDNA quantity, no significant relationship was found for both site-based eDNA quantity datasets (KP5 only: rs = -0.056, p = 0.814 and rs = -0.294, p = 0.212, and all KP streams: rs = 0.043, p = 0.619 and rs = -0.277, p = 0.116 for temperature and pH respectively]. Lastly, for assessing the viability of abundance estimation using eDNA quantity, there was no significant relationship for the dataset of KP5 only (rs = -0.036, p = 0.90), and for the dataset of all KP streams (rs = 0.267, p = 0.056).

Discussion

We demonstrate the usefulness of eDNA-based surveys to locate wild turtles in lotic systems by using a previously developed qPCR assay for P. megacephalum [29]. We targeted three types of streams: (1) known populations based on long-term trapping surveys (KP), (2) historical records of presence (HR), and (3) suitable habitat but unknown status (UN). For the KP streams, the detection results varied; of the 12 samples from a single stream (4 samples/year × 3 years), eDNA detection between streams ranged from nearly continuous (11 of 12 samples) to no detection (no positive samples), with no clear variation based on time of year. Focusing on these streams with known populations, the number of eDNA detections was positively correlated with mean capture rate, suggesting that sites with larger populations have higher probability of eDNA detection.

In eight streams without known populations, eDNA of P. megacephalum was occasionally detected (one to two positive samples). Three of these streams had historical records (HR streams), while the other five streams have no previously confirmed turtle populations (UN streams). We carried out follow-up surveys (trapping and/or active searching) at these streams, and turtles were found in four streams (HR1, UN9, UN10, and UN11). We raise several possible explanations of these results, of which we cannot currently distinguish between. It should also be noted that with positive results from several streams, different explanations may be needed for each situation.

First, these occasional positive results could be false positives. Template concentration was found to affect primer specificity [41], although this factor had no significant effect in another study [42]. More specifically, a high concentration of non-target template may cause non-specific qPCR amplification [41]. Since DNA concentration for our samples was generally low (average eDNA concentration of amplified samples collected in our study is 2.70 ng/μL), we do not expect such false positives to be a major factor in our study. The remaining potential explanations assume that the results are true positives—the qPCR assay is species-specific, and the samples contain eDNA of P. megacephalum. We discuss these potential explanations below in the sections about eDNA degradation, production, transport, and dilution.

Estimation of population size has been raised as a potential use of eDNA-based surveys. Since we had eDNA quantity and capture rate data from the same streams, we had an opportunity to assess the viability of estimating population size based on eDNA results. There was a significant, positive correlation between eDNA quantity and capture rate from streams with known populations, but no such relationship when focusing on the one stream with continuous eDNA detection (KP5). These results suggest that eDNA methods remain promising to aid in estimating population size or biomass, but need to be refined based on differences in the habitat and species ecology. Although the quantity of eDNA should increase with more individuals, eDNA detected with qPCR assays may not be proportional to the number of individuals due to eDNA degradation, production, transport [43], and dilution. These processes are influenced by environmental factors and cause eDNA quantity to vary, making abundance estimation difficult. We discuss these four processes in detail, as well as the issue of false negatives and limitations to our study.

eDNA degradation

Researchers have attempted to clarify how environmental factors affect eDNA degradation in water. Two major variables studied are temperature and pH. Multiple studies indicated that higher water temperature increases eDNA degradation rate [4347], while other studies did not find any significant relationship [16, 48, 49]. One caveat is that temperature may also increase eDNA concentration, which we discuss in the eDNA production section below. pH may also facilitate eDNA degradation [43, 46]. We tested for a relationship in the single stream with relatively consistent eDNA detection (KP5), and no significant relationship was found. Our result is similar to the results of another study [48] that found eDNA did not vary significantly with pH and water temperature (and dissolved oxygen and turbidity), when using eDNA methods to study the lake trout (Salvelinus namaycush). Although we tried to control for the effects of other variables by focusing on a single stream, temporal variation in eDNA production and transport may have influenced our results. To advance our knowledge of environmental factors on eDNA degradation, we suggest controlled laboratory experiments, followed by mesocosm-type experiments in the field.

eDNA production

eDNA production can be influenced by environmental factors and life stage of the organism. An increase in water temperature can increase eDNA production, due to an increase in an animal’s metabolism [49, 50]. This phenomenon is also expected in poikilothermic turtles, but has yet to be studied. A counterpoint to this is the “shedding hypothesis” [51], which suggested turtles would shed less eDNA compared to other animals, as they are covered with keratinized integument.

The life stage of an organism has also been documented to affect eDNA production [5254]. A significant increase in eDNA quantity during the breeding season of the target species was documented in [23]. The breeding season of P. megacephalum is from May to July, with hatchlings emerging in October [55]. At the same time, the increase of eDNA in the breeding season may be less significant to species that live in low-density, as the effect would be easily masked by multiple environmental factors that influence eDNA quantity. Unfortunately, our sampling was not frequent enough to detect changes during the breeding season. We encourage researchers to address such questions for their specific study organism, in the hope that combined datasets can give us a general view of eDNA production.

eDNA transport

The transport of eDNA in an environmental system needs to be taken into consideration, especially for lotic systems. Unlike lentic systems where eDNA distribution is highly localized in space and time [56], a lotic system with a fast flowing stream can cause eDNA distribution to vary in an unknown way. A controlled experiment of a lotic system showed that eDNA is transported unevenly, and eDNA retention and resuspension involves the benthic substrate [57]. As benthic sediment and hydrology differ between streams, each study site will vary in the way eDNA is transported [57]. Additionally, eDNA in lotic systems has been demonstrated to travel long distances, with no significant decrease of DNA concentration for over 1.7 km [58] and even up to 9.1 km [59]. Transportation of eDNA raises the potential of the target species being located upstream of where the water sample was collected. In our study, eDNA was detected in four streams with unconfirmed presence of P. megacephalum, and we believe the assay may be detecting eDNA from turtles located further upstream in areas inaccessible for trapping and active searching.

eDNA dilution

Dilution caused by high stream flow affects eDNA concentration through multiple mechanisms, potentially with opposite outcomes. eDNA dilution may reduce detection probability [60]. In the wet season, eDNA is expected to be diluted via higher water volume and faster water flow, hence reducing eDNA detection probability or causing false negatives [60, 61]. On the other hand, fast water flow may lead to false positives by resuspending historical eDNA bound to soil (discussed in detail below). In our study, the number and concentration of amplified eDNA samples were statistically indistinguishable across wet and dry seasons. Researchers may consider using mixed-effects models to investigate effects of multiple factors on eDNA concentration [60].

Historical eDNA

Historical eDNA leaching from sediment originating from past populations is a potential eDNA source. eDNA in soil may last for decades to centuries [62]. For eDNA persistence in water, studies have shown high variability; eDNA of the target species could not be detected within an hour upon removal of individuals [45], while other studies showed persistence for 24 hours [63], 48 hours [56, 64, 65], and even 45 days [66]. For soil, eDNA persistence highly depends on the nature and origin of the sediment [67]. In our study, eDNA was amplified from two HR streams with no confirmation of turtles being present. Based on our knowledge of these streams (turtles historically present) and survey results (only 1/12 positive water samples, no turtles found), the persistence of historical DNA is a possible explanation for these results. Our result shows that false positives should be considered when interpreting eDNA data, especially in scenarios with sporadic detection.

False negatives

False negatives are a concern when interpreting results of eDNA studies, especially for low-density taxa. The volume and number of replicates of water sampled have been pointed out to be important factors affecting detection rate of target species [6871]. A larger sampling volume (45–1000 L) is expected to boost eDNA detection rate [68, 7274]. However, there is a trade-off between water volume and factors such as filtration efficiency and risk of PCR inhibition. The use of relatively small sampling volumes is common in eDNA studies, with sampling volumes of <1 L [75, 76] to 1–2 L [13, 3133, 77]. Mächler et al. [69] suggested the optimal sampling volume depends on the species-habitat combination, therefore, pilot studies are required for each study system. Studies comparing sample volume and detection rate found number of species detected saturated at 68 L in tropical streams and rivers [68] and 1 L in natural, small rivers [71].

The sampling environment in our study (small, narrow streams) is similar to that of Sakata et al. [71]. The consistent detection of P. megacephalum eDNA in our study suggests that 1 L of water is sufficient to give present/absence data in narrow streams. However, we cannot rule out the possibility of false negatives due to insufficient water volume. We emphasize the importance of conducting pilot field experiments for each study system to determine the minimum volume of water sample required to detect a population of target species.

Limitations of the study

eDNA quantification in qPCR can be estimated by building a standard curve from samples with known concentration. Optimal qPCR efficiency (90–110%) and R2 (> 0.990) are two indicators of qPCR with robust results [39]. Despite using the same protocol, reagents and equipment of a previously developed assay (average efficiency: 94.15%, R2: 0.97; [29]), four amplified eDNA samples in this study had lower values (efficiency: 82.8–87.6%). This suggests eDNA quantification was affected in some samples. We were unable to pinpoint the cause of these results. Future researchers should be aware and ensure high efficiency and R2 when performing qPCR to increase reliability of data. Adjustment of laboratory protocol (primer design, reaction volume and reagent concentration) may be required when amplifying environmental water samples.

Conclusion

In this study, we field tested and validated a species-specific eDNA assay to detect and monitor the endangered P. megacephalum: sites with known turtle populations had positive eDNA detection, while new turtle populations were discovered in some streams. These results will be used to guide conservation of P. megacephalum; in Hong Kong, these data will be shared with the relevant governmental departments and NGOs to direct conservation efforts to sites with populations, while in other countries within the range of P. megacephalum, we will explore extending the use of this eDNA assay to locate wild populations.

We also highlight the potential difficulties interpreting eDNA results from natural environments. Even in streams with known turtle populations, eDNA detection can be inconsistent, raising the importance of understanding the study system—ecology of the organism, environmental conditions of the collection sites, and their influence on eDNA detection. As environmental factors and their interactions vary among sites, we believe each study site is unique in terms of eDNA distribution, degradation, production, transportation, and dilution. To faithfully interpret eDNA results, one must understand eDNA behaviour spatially and temporary in the natural environment. We caution against applying generalizations of eDNA properties across sites, and recommend performing pilot studies to design a site-specific eDNA sampling and data analysis strategy. eDNA methods are powerful tools that have tremendous potential to aid in species detection, monitoring, and conservation. However, like many scientific approaches, using eDNA methods blindly or without appropriate preliminary testing will result in erroneous results and interpretation. We believe that with advances in and refinement of methods, eDNA-based surveys will make positive contributions to the conservation of turtles and other organisms.

Supporting information

S1 Table. A validation checklist for qPCR assay.

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S2 Table. qPCR quantification of Platysternon megacephalum ND4 assay in eDNA survey.

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S3 Table. Capture rate of Platysternon megacephalum trapping surveys.

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Acknowledgments

We thank the following people for invaluable discussions on eDNA: Kathryn Stewart, Caren Goldberg, David Pilliod, Tracie Seimon, and Brian Horne. We would also like to thank the team that helped with fieldwork: Jose Wellington Alves dos Santos, Anchalee Aowphol, Liu Lin, Li Ding, Fengyue Shu, Itzue Caviedes Solis, Abby Bauer, Hing Fong Cheung, Siu Chung Lo, and Siu Yin Yu.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

The sources of funding of the work submitted are as follows: 1. Research Grants Council of Hong Kong (Early Career Scheme #23100216), from The Government of Hong Kong Special Administrative Region; received by J.J.F. (URL: https://www.ugc.edu.hk/eng/rgc/) 2.Environment and Conservation Fund (#ECF2017-04), from The Government of Hong Kong Special Administrative Region; received by Y.H.S. (URL: https://www.ecf.gov.hk/en/home/index.html) 3.Ocean Park Conservation Foundation Conservation Fund (#RP01.1718), from Ocean Park Conservation Fundation Hong Kong; received by Y.H.S. (URL: https://www.opcf.org.hk/en/) 4. Croucher Foundation Chinese Visitorship (#870026), from Croucher Foundation; received by J.J.F. (URL: https://croucher.org.hk/funding/enabling-the-exchange-of-ideas-between-hong-kong-scientists-and-their-counterparts-in-mainland-china-and-overseas/croucher-chinese-visitorships) The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Using eDNA techniques to find the endangered big-headed turtles (Platysternon megacephalum)

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Both reviewers note that this manuscript is an important contribution, as it focuses on a woefully understudied species that is of clear conservation concern. Given its status, low population numbers, and difficulty to detect using conventional means, environmental DNA analysis would seem to be an important advancement for monitoring this species. However, for eDNA approaches to be successful, the methodology must be fully-validated and reliable. Both reviewers (and I concur) that 1) critical information required (e.g. LoD and LoQ) to fully assess the assay's performance are lacking, and 2) other parameters (e.g. efficiency and R2) may indicate an assay that is not fully optimized. The reviewers both provide critical recommendations around these issues (in addition to other issues, both trivial and non-trivial) to increase transparency and to allow for a full vetting of the assay itself. Moreover, other critical issues regarding study design (i.e. sample sizes and water volumes) and interpretation (i.e. the treatment of "false negatives") require adjudication and, at the very least, contextualization in the discussion before this can be fully considered for publication in this volume.

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I have reviewed the manuscript ‘Using eDNA techniques to find the endangered big-headed turtles (Platysternon megacephalum)’. This is an interesting manuscript that uses environmental DNA (eDNA) analysis to assess the distribution of the endangered big-headed turtle and evaluate whether eDNA analysis can be used to assess relative abundance. The study indicates that big-headed turtle can be detected using eDNA analysis, eDNA results can potentially reveal new populations as well as existing populations, and eDNA analysis shows promise for relative abundance estimation. eDNA detection was inconsistent and the authors presented several suggestions for this. However, I have concerns about the experimental design, sampling strategy and qPCR analysis that may be responsible for inconsistent and negative detections.

First and foremost, the authors only took one 1 L water sample from each stream. This is extremely low sampling effort for lotic systems with no biological replication. Without a pilot field experiment, mesocosm experiment or power analysis, how can the authors be certain that this was enough water to detect smaller populations of big-headed turtle? I appreciate the authors probably cannot repeat the study due to cost, time and effort that was required to collect and process samples. However, they should at least discuss the implications of low sampling effort.

Second, the limit of detection and method used to establish this are not clearly reported in the manuscript. It is unclear whether negative samples simply fell below the limit of detection but yielded a Ct value or did not yield a Ct value at all. If the limit of detection was relatively high and authors classed samples falling below this as negative, then this indicates the assay should have been redesigned or optimised to increase sensitivity. The lowest standard curve point should really be 10 copies/μl or 1 copy/μl.

The range and average of R-squared and efficiency values for qPCR should also be reported in the main text. Having looked at the Supporting Information, both values were lower than what is acceptable for qPCR according to the MIQE guidelines (Bustin et al. 2009 Clinical Chemistry https://doi.org/10.1373/clinchem.2008.112797) with R-squared less than 0.990 and efficiency less than 90%. Low qPCR efficiency indicates poor primer design and non-optimal reagent concentration or reaction conditions whereas low R-squared indicates pipetting inaccuracy. Both of these will influence qPCR detection and quantification and should be discussed.

Overall, the authors seem to be too quick to assume that sporadic eDNA detections are false positives due to eDNA transport or ancient DNA from soil. More detections may have been observed from these sites with increased sampling effort or optimisation of the qPCR assay. Alternatively, contamination may have still occurred even though negative controls did not exhibit amplification. Without knowing how many negative controls were included, contamination cannot be ruled out. Furthermore, the authors have not stated how their gBlock was prepared and handled. Was this prepared and added to qPCR plates/tubes in a separate laboratory to eDNA samples?

The quality and resolution of all figures needs to be improved substantially before publication, and the authors should use past tense throughout the manuscript. There is currently a mix of past and present tense. I have a number of minor comments to help improve the clarity of the manuscript, which I have detailed in the specific comments to the authors below.

Specific comments

Abstract: The abstract would benefit from a sentence or two on the conservation status of the target species and the benefits of environmental DNA analysis for monitoring this species.

Line 19: Insert ‘analysis’ after ‘(eDNA)’.

Line 23: Change ‘are’ to ‘were’.

Line 24: Change ‘population’ to ‘populations’.

Line 42: Change ‘eDNA based’ to ‘eDNA-based’.

Line 71: Change ‘collecting’ to ‘survey’.

Line 79: Remove ‘column’.

Line 82: Change ‘0.45m’ to ‘0.45μm’.

Lines 82-87: How were filters removed from the filter funnels and divided into two pieces? Were gloved hands, forceps and/or scissors used?

Lines 93-94: For samples where both halves of the filter were extracted, were the extracts combined for qPCR or amplified independently?

Line 94: How many of each type of negative control were included?

Line 98: Change ‘in’ to ‘on’.

Lines 106-107: Write values as numerals, i.e. 1,000,000, 100,000, 10,000.

Line 149: Use ‘consistent’ instead of ‘continuous’?

Line 158: Change ‘streams.’ to ‘streams’.

Line 172: Did negative samples include those that amplified but fell below the limit of detection?

Line 173: What was the limit of detection?

Line 317: Change ‘spotty’ to ‘sporadic’.

Line 336: Change ‘result’ to ‘results’.

Line 341: Change ‘advances and refinement’ to ‘advances in and refinement of’.

Reviewer #2: Overall:

In the study, “Using eDNA techniques to find the endangered big-headed turtles (Platysternon megacephalum)” the authors used environmental DNA to locate endangered turtles. Overall the paper covers a taxon that has been relatively understudied using eDNA (I was very excited to see a turtle eDNA paper). The authors should be commended on a well-written paper that used eDNA over such a long-term study.

Below I provide more specific comments and request further clarification on laboratory procedures (field blanks, LOD) and statistical analysis.

Abstract:

L19: Could clarify “for crosschecking eDNA results”.

L19: Revise to add “and” to sentence, to read, “…were first identified with eDNA and then verified…”

Introduction:

L47-48: Revise ending of sentence to read, “..and potential use in population genetics…”

Methods:

L79: Do the authors mean that water samples were collected by submerging a whirl-pak bag to collect water (not surface water samples)? Then consider revising to something like, “One liter of water was collected from the water column…”

L92: What does “recovered a positive value” mean? That eDNA samples had to have concentrations greater than 0.00 ng/µL?

L94-95 or L78-79: Were field blanks collected?

L100-103: What was the volume of the eDNA added to each qPCR reaction?

Also, curious as to why 5 µL of TaqMan Environmental Master Mix was used? That seemed low compared to other eDNA papers.

L136: Were eDNA samples collected separately from trapping?

L146-147-Why not consider using occupancy modeling to analyze the data? There are multiple replications over years at multiple sites, some with detections and some with no detections. The authors could then assess detection and occupancy probability and use AIC or some other information criterion to assess the impacts of multiple a priori variables (pH, temperature, etc.) to assess model fit instead of correlation analyses?

A helpful reference might be: Akre et al. 2019 Concurrent visual encounter sampling validates eDNA selectivity and sensitivity for the endangered wood turtle (Glyptemys insculpta). PLoS ONE 14:e0215586. https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0215586

L148-150: What do the correlations look like when all the data are included vs. only those from KP streams? I can see from Figure 2 that detections in the other streams are limited, but it seems almost like cherry-picking data to only analyze some of the sampled streams.

Results:

L103-104: Were any of the samples inhibited? This is not mentioned again in the results.

L167 and section on qPCR: Please provide R2 and estimates of efficiency here. Such information is available in the supplemental information

L173: “all amplified water samples were above the limit of detection as validated in [30].” Could the authors please clarify the limit of detection? I looked at the reference and could not easily identify the LOD/LOQ, was it 10 copies/µL?

L189: Suggest editing sentence to read, “No amplification was detected in any of the 12 eDNA…”

Discussion:

This section needs some work. While there is good discussion of factors that are important for eDNA degradation, production, and transport, there should be further explanation of the results so that future research might gain new understanding and discussion of the shortcomings.

For example, only one water sample was collected at a time. How might the lack of replication influence the results? There are several papers that show that increasing volume of water and/or number of replicates increases detection.

How might the definition of “amplified” vs. “uncertain” from Figure 1 influence the results. Other eDNA researchers use similar classifications, but might the exclusion of the uncertain simples indicate low-abundance individuals producing little eDNA? What do the correlational analyses look like if these are included?

From the Supplemental Table 1. Some of the r2 and %efficiencies are lower than would be advised to attempt quantification. Generally, R2>0.99 and %efficiency should be 90-110% to attempt to quantify eDNA. How might this influence the results?

L244: replace “u” with “µ”

L245:Were any of the positive eDNA samples sequenced to confirm species? See the comment below, but I was surprised to read about false negative and false positives. As it seemed the assay worked well and the eDNA generally was confirmed by trapping/active searches.

L255-257: It may also be other factors like turtle biomass or age that influences this relationship.

L264-265: Others have found that temperature is an important reproductive cue and eDNA rates are higher on warmer temperatures. Not just that temperature causes degradation.

L271-273: Such laboratory experiments examining eDNA degradation and persistence have already been conducted; what future experiments should be done? Further explanation needed.

L286-288: Not sure this is true and requires further explanation on what environmental factors-because pH and temperature as measured in this study do not appear to influence eDNA. As others have found increased eDNA detection for low-abundance species during breeding seasons. As an example, see de Souza et al. 2016. Environmental DNA (eDNA) detection probability is influenced by seasonal activity of organisms. PLoS ONE 11:e0165273. https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0165273

L293 and section on eDNA transport: What about dilution? Were there noticeable differences between the wet and dry season? If few organisms are present, that might suggest that less eDNA is available in water and thus, during high flows it would be more difficult to detect eDNA (dilution).

L307-318: I think this section could be deleted or condensed and combined with a different section. It is not possible to assess whether deposited eDNA was resuspended and caused false positives.

L334-335: Was there evidence of false negatives and false positives? This came as a surprise to me as a reader.

Literature Cited:

Scientific names should be italicized in the references, see #11, 24, 47.

Figures:

Figure 1 and 2 were blurry and difficult to read. Not sure if this was a conversion issue within the submission stage.

I would have liked to see the correlation figures and not the raw data.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


20 Aug 2021

Reviewer #1: General comments

I have reviewed the manuscript ‘Using eDNA techniques to find the endangered big-headed turtles (Platysternon megacephalum)’. This is an interesting manuscript that uses environmental DNA (eDNA) analysis to assess the distribution of the endangered big-headed turtle and evaluate whether eDNA analysis can be used to assess relative abundance. The study indicates that big-headed turtle can be detected using eDNA analysis, eDNA results can potentially reveal new populations as well as existing populations, and eDNA analysis shows promise for relative abundance estimation. eDNA detection was inconsistent and the authors presented several suggestions for this. However, I have concerns about the experimental design, sampling strategy and qPCR analysis that may be responsible for inconsistent and negative detections.

First and foremost, the authors only took one 1 L water sample from each stream. This is extremely low sampling effort for lotic systems with no biological replication. Without a pilot field experiment, mesocosm experiment or power analysis, how can the authors be certain that this was enough water to detect smaller populations of big-headed turtle? I appreciate the authors probably cannot repeat the study due to cost, time and effort that was required to collect and process samples. However, they should at least discuss the implications of low sampling effort.

RESPONSE:

We agree the 1 L sampling effort is relatively low compared to currently published eDNA studies. This is one of the difficulties with a multi-year study; we had designed out study based on eDNA studies and guidelines 4 years ago, when many of these factors were not as well understood. We appreciate the reviewer’s understanding on the concern of cost, time and effort to repeat the experiment. To address the issue of low sampling effort, we conducted a literature review on sampling volume and eDNA detection efficiency. We found that using large-volume sampling strategy, for instances, 45 L to 1000 L, can enhance eDNA detection. However, with larger volumes, filtration efficiency will decrease and risk of PCR inhibition will increase. We found two studies (Cantera et al. 2019; Sakata et al. 2020) comparing the sampling volume and eDNA detection rate. The result of these two studies vary greatly in terms of the volume when number of species detection is saturated (1L in Sakata et al. 2020, versus 68L in Cantera et al. 2019).

In our study, the system is similar to that in Sakata et al. (2020), both being small, narrow streams. In our study, we included sites with stable Platysternon megacephalum populations, and 1 L of water gave us consistent detection of turtle eDNA, providing some confidence that in those streams 1 L is sufficient. Nevertheless, the sporadic eDNA detection at other sites may be associated with insufficient water sampling, and we hedge our interpretation by including the possibility of false negatives. We organized the discussion above and included a new paragraph “False negative” in the Discussion section.

Reference:

Cantera I, Cilleros K, Valentini A, Cerdan A, Dejean T, Iribar A, et al. (2019). Optimizing environmental DNA sampling effort for fish inventories in tropical streams and rivers. Scientific Reports 9:3085. doi: 10.1038/s41598-019-39399-5

Sakata M, Watanabe T, Maki N, Ikeda K, Kosuge T, Okada H, et al. (2020). Determining an effective sampling method for eDNA metabarcoding: a case study for fish biodiversity monitoring in a small, natural river. Limnology 22(9). doi: 10.1007/s10201-020-00645-9

Second, the limit of detection and method used to establish this are not clearly reported in the manuscript. It is unclear whether negative samples simply fell below the limit of detection but yielded a Ct value or did not yield a Ct value at all. If the limit of detection was relatively high and authors classed samples falling below this as negative, then this indicates the assay should have been redesigned or optimised to increase sensitivity. The lowest standard curve point should really be 10 copies/μl or 1 copy/μl.

RESPONSE:

We adopted a previously developed assay, and the limit of detection was tested in Lam et al. (2020). The testing process are summarized as follows: A synthetic gene fragment containing the primer and probe binding region of target species P. megacephalum was made to test for analytical sensitivity. The assay was then tested against a 4-level dilution series (10,000, 1000, 100, and 10 copies per μL) of the synthetic gene with 20 replicates for each concentration level. Lam et al. (2020) found that the analytical sensitivity of the assay at 10 copies / μL was 0.95, indicating a reliable detection of eDNA down to 10 copies / μL. In this study, we estimated eDNA quantity using a standard curve. To reduce the variation of standard curve, we used 100 copies per μL as the lowest level to ensure 100% amplification among replicates.

In processing qPCR data, all samples classified as negative had no fluorescence signal (no Ct value). In other words, we observed no samples with qPCR fluorescence signal that fell below threshold value calculated by the qPCR software. We clarified these details in the methodology and results section.

The range and average of R-squared and efficiency values for qPCR should also be reported in the main text. Having looked at the Supporting Information, both values were lower than what is acceptable for qPCR according to the MIQE guidelines (Bustin et al. 2009 Clinical Chemistry https://doi.org/10.1373/clinchem.2008.112797) with R-squared less than 0.990 and efficiency less than 90%. Low qPCR efficiency indicates poor primer design and non-optimal reagent concentration or reaction conditions whereas low R-squared indicates pipetting inaccuracy. Both of these will influence qPCR detection and quantification and should be discussed.

RESPONSE:

In this study, R-squared (0.89–0.99) and efficiency (82.8%–109%) values were relatively low compared to the assay developed in Lam et al. (2020) (R-squared: 0.97; efficiency: 94.15%). Although we followed the same laboratory protocol as Lam et al. (2020), the qPCR efficiency had high variation and R-square was low. We are unable to redo this labwork, so we follow the recommendation from Review #1, to discuss how low R-squared and efficiency values will influence qPCR detection and quantification.

To minimize the impact of low qPCR efficiency, we analyze a subset of the data excluding these low qPCR efficiency samples, only including samples with 90–100% efficiency. Four amplified eDNA samples were removed in the new dataset. The results were consistent, only with differences in rs and p-value. The updated result are as follows:

1. A significant, positive correlation (rs = 0.718, p = 0.02) between the number of samples with amplified eDNA and mean capture rate.

2. Environmental variables (temperature, and pH) have no significant relationship with eDNA quantity datasets (KP5, and all KP streams).

3. No significant relationship between eDNA quantity and capture rate for the dataset KP5 (rs = -0.036, p = 0.90)

4. A significant, positive relationship between eDNA quantity and capture rate for dataset in all KP streams (rs = 0.265, p = 0.046).

We included the discussion of non-optimal qPCR R-square, efficiency in a new paragraph “Limitations of the study” in discussion section; and updated the result of statistical analysis in the result section.

Overall, the authors seem to be too quick to assume that sporadic eDNA detections are false positives due to eDNA transport or ancient DNA from soil. More detections may have been observed from these sites with increased sampling effort or optimisation of the qPCR assay.

RESPONSE:

We agree more detections may have been observed with a larger sampling volume, and further adjustment in qPCR protocol. We included the potential influence of sampling volume, and implication of non-optimal qPCR result in the discussion section.

Alternatively, contamination may have still occurred even though negative controls did not exhibit amplification. Without knowing how many negative controls were included, contamination cannot be ruled out.

RESPONSE:

For every round of DNA extraction, we included one negative control alongside field-collected samples. The DNA concentration of negative control, together with environmental samples were measured by Qubit 3.0. No DNA was detected in negative controls.

In every qPCR event, we included 2–3 negative controls per 96-well plate. Fluorescent signal was not detected in any negative controls, and no Ct value was calculated based on qPCR software.

We clarified the information above in the methodology section.

Furthermore, the authors have not stated how their gBlock was prepared and handled. Was this prepared and added to qPCR plates/tubes in a separate laboratory to eDNA samples?

RESPONSE:

A synthetic gene fragment containing primer and probe binding site was made by a local company (Tech Dragon Limited; Hong Kong) for producing the standard curve. Serial dilution of the synthetic gene was conducted prior to qPCR event a week before.

The dilution of synthetic gene was added to qPCR 96-well plates in the same laboratory with eDNA samples. Nevertheless, synthetic gene and environmental samples were added, and stored separately to minimize contamination risk, with regular cleaning of lab benches and equipment with a 10% bleach solution.

We added the details above in the methodology section.

The quality and resolution of all figures needs to be improved substantially before publication, and the authors should use past tense throughout the manuscript. There is currently a mix of past and present tense. I have a number of minor comments to help improve the clarity of the manuscript, which I have detailed in the specific comments to the authors below.

RESPONSE:

We believe the resolution of figures is a conversion problem during submission. We submitted a better quality of figures in re-submission. We apologies for using inconsistent tenses throughout the manuscript. We screened grammatical mistakes in our amended manuscript.

Specific comments

Abstract: The abstract would benefit from a sentence or two on the conservation status of the target species and the benefits of environmental DNA analysis for monitoring this species.

RESPONSE:

We add text to the abstract as suggested. “The results from this study are important for identifying priority sites for protection and further research in Hong Kong.”

Line 19: Insert ‘analysis’ after ‘(eDNA)’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 23: Change ‘are’ to ‘were’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 24: Change ‘population’ to ‘populations’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 42: Change ‘eDNA based’ to ‘eDNA-based’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 71: Change ‘collecting’ to ‘survey’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 79: Remove ‘column’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 82: Change ‘0.45m’ to ‘0.45μm’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Lines 82-87: How were filters removed from the filter funnels and divided into two pieces? Were gloved hands, forceps and/or scissors used?

RESPONSE:

Filters were removed from the funnel with sterile forceps. Each filter was then folded and stored in 95% ethanol. Prior to DNA extraction, the filter paper was divided into two equal parts with sterile scissors and forceps. Gloved hands were used in all laboratory procedures. We clarified the details above in the methodology section.

Lines 93-94: For samples where both halves of the filter were extracted, were the extracts combined for qPCR or amplified independently?

RESPONSE:

We followed previous protocols that cut the filter in half, so there are two chances to extract DNA. In this study, there were no failure of DNA extraction. Hence, all the extraction used in this study are originated from half of the filter only. We clarified the details above in the methodology section.

Line 94: How many of each type of negative control were included?

RESPONSE:

In each DNA extraction event, we at most extract 23 eDNA samples, plus one negative control. We performed DNA quantification using Qubit 3.0 after each DNA extraction event, and include one negative control each time. For each qPCR event (a 96-well plate), we include 2-3 negative controls. We clarified the details above in the methodology section.

Line 98: Change ‘in’ to ‘on’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Lines 106-107: Write values as numerals, i.e. 1,000,000, 100,000, 10,000.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 149: Use ‘consistent’ instead of ‘continuous’?

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 158: Change ‘streams.’ to ‘streams’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 172: Did negative samples include those that amplified but fell below the limit of detection?

RESPONSE:

Samples that we classified as “not amplified” could either have zero Ct value or have a Ct value that is below the threshold. All not amplified samples in our study had a zero Ct value.

Line 173: What was the limit of detection?

RESPONSE:

The limit of detection of the assay was tested against a 4-level dilution series (10,000, 1000, 100, and 10 copies per μL) of the synthetic gene with 20 replicates for each concentration level (Lam et al. 2020). The analytical sensitivity of at 10 copies/μL = 0.95, indicating a reliable detection to 10 copies/μL (Lam et al. 2020).

Line 317: Change ‘spotty’ to ‘sporadic’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 336: Change ‘result’ to ‘results’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 341: Change ‘advances and refinement’ to ‘advances in and refinement of’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Reviewer #2: Overall:

In the study, “Using eDNA techniques to find the endangered big-headed turtles (Platysternon megacephalum)” the authors used environmental DNA to locate endangered turtles. Overall the paper covers a taxon that has been relatively understudied using eDNA (I was very excited to see a turtle eDNA paper). The authors should be commended on a well-written paper that used eDNA over such a long-term study.

Below I provide more specific comments and request further clarification on laboratory procedures (field blanks, LOD) and statistical analysis.

Abstract:

L19: Could clarify “for crosschecking eDNA results”.

RESPONSE:

Apart from the presence or absence of eDNA, we performed field survey (turtle trapping or active searching) at each study site. The term “crosschecking” here means using result of field survey to verify the presence or absence of turtle in each study site. We removed the sentence to avoid confusion, and clarified the details in the methodology section.

L19: Revise to add “and” to sentence, to read, “…were first identified with eDNA and then verified…”

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Introduction:

L47-48: Revise ending of sentence to read, “..and potential use in population genetics…”

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Methods:

L79: Do the authors mean that water samples were collected by submerging a whirl-pak bag to collect water (not surface water samples)? Then consider revising to something like, “One liter of water was collected from the water column…”

RESPONSE:

We amended the sentence as suggested. The sentence is revised as “One liter of water was collected from the water column (Davy et al. 2015; Laramie et al. 2015; Feng et al. 2019; Kirtane et al. 2019), using a sterile 50-mL conical tube”

L92: What does “recovered a positive value” mean? That eDNA samples had to have concentrations greater than 0.00 ng/µL?

RESPONSE:

After DNA extraction, we quantify concentration of eDNA samples using Qubit 3.0 Fluorometer with dsDNA HS Assay Kit. The limit of detection of the kit ranged from 0.2 to 100ng. Hence, the term “recovered a positive value” means eDNA samples contain at least 0.2ng/µL eDNA.

We added the detection limit of Qubit in the sentence. The sentence is revised as “Samples were used in subsequent quantitative PCR (qPCR) analyses if DNA quantification recovered a positive value greater than the detection limit of fluorometer (>0.2ng).”

L94-95 or L78-79: Were field blanks collected?

RESPONSE:

We agree that including field blanks in our study would be much better, but we unfortunately did not do this. In our study, each collecting trip was from a single site, and all samples from a single collecting trip was filtered at the same time. In this case, the use of a field blank would help us detect contamination between samples from a single site. The analysis of our data was grouped site-by-site. Therefore, although it would have been more methodologically sound to collect a field blank, we believe that not including them did not dramatically affect our results.

L100-103: What was the volume of the eDNA added to each qPCR reaction?

RESPONSE:

In each qPCR reaction, 1 µL of eDNA extraction was added.

We included the volume of eDNA used in the sentence. The sentence is revised as “Each qPCR reaction included 1 μL eDNA template, 5 μL TaqMan® Environmental Master Mix (Thermo Fisher Scientific Inc; Waltham, MA, USA), 900 nM of each primer, 250 nM of probe, and enough autoclaved Milli-Q® water to make a final volume of 10 μL.”

Also, curious as to why 5 µL of TaqMan Environmental Master Mix was used? That seemed low compared to other eDNA papers.

RESPONSE:

We adopted a previously developed qPCR assay in Lam et al. (2020), and followed the qPCR protocol as suggested. In this paper, 5 µL was tested and considered to be sufficient to produce consistent results.

L136: Were eDNA samples collected separately from trapping?

RESPONSE:

Yes. In this study, eDNA samples were collected separately from turtle trapping. This was because we utilized some data from a long-term population monitoring programme. We clarified this in the text.

L146-147-Why not consider using occupancy modeling to analyze the data? There are multiple replications over years at multiple sites, some with detections and some with no detections. The authors could then assess detection and occupancy probability and use AIC or some other information criterion to assess the impacts of multiple a priori variables (pH, temperature, etc.) to assess model fit instead of correlation analyses?

A helpful reference might be: Akre et al. 2019 Concurrent visual encounter sampling validates eDNA selectivity and sensitivity for the endangered wood turtle (Glyptemys insculpta). PLoS ONE 14:e0215586. https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0215586

RESPONSE:

As suggested, we conducted a dynamic occupancy modeling using R package “unmarked”. We determined factors affecting detection probability using pH, temperature, and season (wet and dry) as covariate, while assuming constant for colonization and extinction probability in the model. Both models created using pH and temperature as covariate were regarded as the best model (lowest AICc, with difference <2). However, both of the covariates did not significantly affect detection probability (p>0.05). We included the information above in the methodology and result section.

L148-150: What do the correlations look like when all the data are included vs. only those from KP streams? I can see from Figure 2 that detections in the other streams are limited, but it seems almost like cherry-picking data to only analyze some of the sampled streams.

RESPONSE:

In this study, correlation analysis was tested against combination of multiple variables. We believed that the most appropriate comparison was sites that we had estimates of the population size. The variable “capture rate”, was obtained from a long-term population monitoring programme, which were only conducted in KP streams, but not HR and UN streams. Therefore, it is not possible to compare eDNA quantity of the entire dataset with capture rate (data missing in HR and UN stream).

We summarize all possible correlation analysis combination as follows:

1. Number of samples with amplified eDNA, versus mean capture rate

- Only KP stream dataset were useful.

- A significant, positive relationship was found.

2. Environmental variables (temperature, and pH), versus eDNA quantity

- Both the entire dataset, and KP stream dataset were useful

- No significant relationship was found for both dataset

3. eDNA quantity, versus capture rate

- KP stream dataset, and KP5 stream dataset were useful.

- A significant, positive relationship was found in KP stream dataset.

- No significant relationship was found in KP5 stream dataset.

We organized and made our text clearer in the manuscript to reflect this.

Results:

L103-104: Were any of the samples inhibited? This is not mentioned again in the results.

RESPONSE:

We included the TaqMan® Exogenous Internal Positive Control (IPC) to test for inhibition in each qPCR reaction. As no IPC showed inhibition in this study, no eDNA samples were regarded as inhibited. We included a sentence “No eDNA samples exhibited inhibition.” In the “Results” section.

L167 and section on qPCR: Please provide R2 and estimates of efficiency here. Such information is available in the supplemental information

RESPONSE:

We added the required details (qPCR efficiency: 96.99% ± 5.19; R2: 0.957 ± 0.03) in the methodology section.

L173: “all amplified water samples were above the limit of detection as validated in [30].” Could the authors please clarify the limit of detection? I looked at the reference and could not easily identify the LOD/LOQ, was it 10 copies/µL?

RESPONSE:

Yes. According to Lam et al. (2020), the assay was then tested against a 4-level dilution series (10,000, 1000, 100, and 10 copies per μL) of the synthetic gene with 20 replicates for each concentration level. The analytical sensitivity of the assay at 10 copies / µL was 0.95.

We included the details of limit of detection in the sentence. The sentence is revised as “All amplified water samples were above the limit of detection (10 copies / μL) as validated in [30], while all negative water samples yielded no qPCR fluorescence signal.”

L189: Suggest editing sentence to read, “No amplification was detected in any of the 12 eDNA…”

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Discussion:

This section needs some work. While there is good discussion of factors that are important for eDNA degradation, production, and transport, there should be further explanation of the results so that future research might gain new understanding and discussion of the shortcomings.

For example, only one water sample was collected at a time. How might the lack of replication influence the results? There are several papers that show that increasing volume of water and/or number of replicates increases detection.

RESPONSE:

We agree the 1 L sampling effort and no replicates could have influenced our results. This is one of the difficulties with a multi-year study; we had designed out study based on eDNA studies and guidelines 4 years ago, when many of these factors were not as well understood. We appreciate the reviewer’s understanding on the concern of cost, time and effort to repeat the experiment. To address the issue of low sampling effort, we conducted a literature review on sampling volume and eDNA detection efficiency. We found that using large-volume sampling strategy, for instances, 45 L to 1000 L, can enhance eDNA detection. However, with larger volumes, filtration efficiency will decrease and risk of PCR inhibition will increase. We found two studies (Cantera et al. 2019; Sakata et al. 2020) comparing the sampling volume and eDNA detection rate. The result of these two studies vary greatly in terms of the volume when number of species detection is saturated (1L in Sakata et al. 2020, versus 68L in Cantera et al. 2019).

In our study, the system is similar to that in Sakata et al. (2020), both being small, narrow streams. In our study, we included sites with stable Platysternon megacephalum populations, and 1 L of water gave us consistent detection of turtle eDNA, providing some confidence that in those streams 1 L is sufficient. Nevertheless, the sporadic eDNA detection at other sites may be associated with insufficient water sampling, and we hedge our interpretation by including the possibility of false negatives. We organized the discussion above and included a new paragraph “False negative” in the Discussion section.

Reference:

Cantera I, Cilleros K, Valentini A, Cerdan A, Dejean T, Iribar A, et al. (2019). Optimizing environmental DNA sampling effort for fish inventories in tropical streams and rivers. Scientific Reports 9:3085. doi: 10.1038/s41598-019-39399-5

Sakata M, Watanabe T, Maki N, Ikeda K, Kosuge T, Okada H, et al. (2020). Determining an effective sampling method for eDNA metabarcoding: a case study for fish biodiversity monitoring in a small, natural river. Limnology 22(9). doi: 10.1007/s10201-020-00645-9

How might the definition of “amplified” vs. “uncertain” from Figure 1 influence the results. Other eDNA researchers use similar classifications, but might the exclusion of the uncertain simples indicate low-abundance individuals producing little eDNA? What do the correlational analyses look like if these are included?

RESPONSE:

We agree that uncertain samples may have come from sites with a low-abundance of individuals. As a result, we modify the analysis to include data from uncertain eDNA samples in correlation analysis, as shown in manuscript.

Here we provide a comparison of result between inclusion, and exclusion of uncertain samples in our correlation analysis:

1. Number of samples with amplified eDNA, versus mean capture rate

- A significant, positive relationship was found in both inclusion, and exclusion of uncertain sample dataset.

2. Environmental variables (temperature, and pH), versus eDNA quantity

- No significant relationship was found in both inclusion, and exclusion of uncertain sample dataset.

3. eDNA quantity, versus capture rate

- A significant, positive relationship was found in KP in both inclusion, and exclusion of uncertain sample dataset.

- No significant relationship was found in KP5 stream of both inclusion, and exclusion of uncertain sample dataset.

In summary, the result of overall correlation analysis was the same between inclusion, and exclusion of uncertain sample dataset.

We clarified we have included data from uncertain eDNA samples in correlation analysis by adding the following sentences at the beginning of the paragraph: “We performed correlation analysis using dataset including eDNA quantification from uncertain samples, followed by dataset excluding uncertain samples. Both datasets shown the same result, statistics here were from dataset including uncertain samples.”

From the Supplemental Table 1. Some of the r2 and %efficiencies are lower than would be advised to attempt quantification. Generally, R2>0.99 and %efficiency should be 90-110% to attempt to quantify eDNA. How might this influence the results?

RESPONSE:

In this study, R-squared (0.89–0.99) and efficiency (82.8%–109%) values were relatively low compared to the assay developed in Lam et al. (2020) (R-squared: 0.97; efficiency: 94.15%). Although we followed the same laboratory protocol as Lam et al. (2020), the qPCR efficiency had high variation and R-square was low. We are unable to redo this labwork, so we follow the recommendation from Review #1, to discuss how low R-squared and efficiency values will influence qPCR detection and quantification.

To minimize the impact of low qPCR efficiency, we analyze a subset of the data excluding these low qPCR efficiency samples, only including samples with 90–100% efficiency. Four amplified eDNA samples were removed in the new dataset. The results were consistent, only with differences in rs and p-value. The updated result are as follows:

1. A significant, positive correlation (rs = 0.718, p = 0.02) between the number of samples with amplified eDNA and mean capture rate.

2. Environmental variables (temperature, and pH) have no significant relationship with eDNA quantity datasets (KP5, and all KP streams).

3. No significant relationship between eDNA quantity and capture rate for the dataset KP5 (rs = -0.036, p = 0.90)

4. A significant, positive relationship between eDNA quantity and capture rate for dataset in all KP streams (rs = 0.265, p = 0.046).

We included the discussion of non-optimal qPCR R-square, efficiency in a new paragraph “Limitations of the study” in discussion section; and updated the result of statistical analysis in the result section.

L244: replace “u” with “µ”

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

L245:Were any of the positive eDNA samples sequenced to confirm species? See the comment below, but I was surprised to read about false negative and false positives. As it seemed the assay worked well and the eDNA generally was confirmed by trapping/active searches.

RESPONSE:

We agree that we would be more confident if we sequence amplified positive eDNA samples, we have not done so in this study.

The reason behind discussing false negative and false positive is to be more conservative. As we highlighted potential difficulties interpreting eDNA results, we caution against applying generalizations of eDNA properties across sites, and recommend performing pilot studies to design a site-specific eDNA sampling and data analysis strategy. We prefer leaving some room for other possibilities, rather than solely relying on eDNA result until a promising refinement of eDNA method was adopted in eDNA surveys.

L255-257: It may also be other factors like turtle biomass or age that influences this relationship.

RESPONSE:

We agree that other factors (turtle biomass, age, etc.) as suggested can influence the relationship between eDNA quantity and turtle capture rate. Upon literature review, Maruyama et al. (2014), Klymus et al. (2015), and Toshiaki et al. (2018) successfully demonstrated fish biomass and age class as two of factors affecting eDNA production. We believed the findings could be applied to turtles as well.

We discussed life stage as one of the factors in influencing eDNA production in the discussion – eDNA production section. We revised the sentence as “These results suggest that eDNA methods remain promising to aid in estimating population size or biomass, but need to be refined based on differences in the habitat and species ecology.”

L264-265: Others have found that temperature is an important reproductive cue and eDNA rates are higher on warmer temperatures. Not just that temperature causes degradation.

RESPONSE:

We agree temperature is also a factor increasing eDNA production rate. Robson et al. (2016) and Lacoursière‐Roussel et al. (2016) documented the findings. We discussed temperature as a factor of increasing eDNA production in the discussion - eDNA production section.

To clarify temperature can both cause eDNA degradation and increase production, we made a note on the sentence and it is revised as “Multiple studies indicated that higher water temperature increases eDNA degradation rate (see also eDNA Production below), while other studies did not find any significant relationship.)

L271-273: Such laboratory experiments examining eDNA degradation and persistence have already been conducted; what future experiments should be done? Further explanation needed.

RESPONSE:

Laboratory experiments investigating eDNA degradation and persistence were often conducted in ideal and controlled environment, which may not reflect realistic field conditions. As multiple factors (other than temperature, pH, dissolved oxygen, etc.) potentially affecting eDNA concentration (both increase and decrease), experiments focusing on a few factors may not be applicable in practice. We suggest in situ pilot experiment conducted in sites with known target species abundance. The pilot study will provide information on eDNA fluctuation (including both eDNA degradation and persistence) in that site. With the aid of field surveys with enough survey effort, relationship between eDNA concentration and species abundance can be established.

We added the discussion above in the conclusion section, and deleted the sentence “To advance our knowledge of environmental factors on eDNA degradation, we suggest controlled laboratory experiments, followed by mesocosm-type experiments in the field.”

L286-288: Not sure this is true and requires further explanation on what environmental factors-because pH and temperature as measured in this study do not appear to influence eDNA. As others have found increased eDNA detection for low-abundance species during breeding seasons. As an example, see de Souza et al. 2016. Environmental DNA (eDNA) detection probability is influenced by seasonal activity of organisms. PLoS ONE 11:e0165273. https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0165273

RESPONSE:

As the target species has a relatively short breeding season (May to July). We believed our sampling effort (twice in wet season, and twice in dry season) was not frequent enough to detect changes during the breeding season. We added the literature suggested in the paragraph to provide more background information of eDNA production during breeding season.

L293 and section on eDNA transport: What about dilution? Were there noticeable differences between the wet and dry season? If few organisms are present, that might suggest that less eDNA is available in water and thus, during high flows it would be more difficult to detect eDNA (dilution).

RESPONSE:

We agreed that eDNA may be more difficult to detect during high flows in wet season, especially for low-abundance species. If we compare the number of amplified eDNA samples between wet and dry season, there were no noticeable difference in this study (19 and 18 amplified samples respectively). On the other hand, if we compare the eDNA concentration, wet season generally yield a higher concentration. We caution interpreting the comparison result in the effect of dilution as it is outside the scope of this study. Nevertheless, we would like to discuss the effect of dilution on eDNA concentration, as it may affect eDNA detection probability.

eDNA is expected to be diluted under faster water flow, hence reducing eDNA detection probability, or even causing false negatives. While at the same time, an opposite outcome caused by fast water flow may be re-suspending precipitated eDNA or buried eDNA from soil, hence increasing eDNA detection probability. False positive may be possible if historical eDNA were amplified when target species are no longer there anymore. As the effect of dilution may cause complicated eDNA fluctuation in natural environment, we suggest researchers using mixed-effect models to address multiple factors affecting eDNA concentration at the same time, as shown in Curtis et al. 2020.

We organized the discussion above and include a new paragraph in the discussion – eDNA Dilution.

L307-318: I think this section could be deleted or condensed and combined with a different section. It is not possible to assess whether deposited eDNA was resuspended and caused false positives.

RESPONSE:

We agree it is not possible to assess whether deposited eDNA was resuspended, and caused false positives. The reason behind of discussing historical eDNA is to raise the possibility based on our eDNA and field survey data (sporadic eDNA detection, no turtles found in subsequent field survey). Although we cannot definitively prove this is the reason, we think it is useful to raise this possibility to the reader.

L334-335: Was there evidence of false negatives and false positives? This came as a surprise to me as a reader.

RESPONSE:

We do not have any evidence of false negatives and false positives in this study. However, we wanted to raise the possibility of false negatives and false positives, based on influences from various environmental factors and process as documented in literature. We agree the sentence is misleading to readers, and therefore should be clarified.

The sentence is revised as “It is important to understand eDNA behaviour spatially and temporary in a natural environment, with care in interpretation of eDNA result.”

Literature Cited:

Scientific names should be italicized in the references, see #11, 24, 47.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Figures:

Figure 1 and 2 were blurry and difficult to read. Not sure if this was a conversion issue within the submission stage.

I would have liked to see the correlation figures and not the raw data.

RESPONSE:

We believed the resolution of figures maybe a conversion problem during submission. We will submit a better quality of figures in re-submission. We tested making a correlation figure, but it did not seem so useful and meaningful because there were so many samples with zero amplification, so we kept Figure 2 as is.

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PONE-D-21-13336R1Using eDNA techniques to find the endangered big-headed turtles (Platysternon megacephalum)PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: General comments

I have reviewed the manuscript ‘Using eDNA techniques to find the endangered big-headed turtles (Platysternon megacephalum)’. I am largely satisfied with the changes the authors have made to the manuscript, but still have a number of minor comments I would like the authors to address to help improve the clarity of the manuscript. I have detailed these in the specific comments to the authors below. I also recommend that the authors complete the validation checklist provided in Thalinger et al. (2021) for the assay used and provide this as a supplementary file.

Thalinger, B., Deiner, K., Harper, L.R., Rees, H.C., Blackman, R.C., Sint, D., Traugott, M., Goldberg, C.S. & Bruce, K. (2021) A validation scale to determine the readiness of environmental DNA assays for routine species monitoring. Environmental DNA, 3, 823–836.

https://doi.org/10.1002/edn3.189

Specific comments

Line 19: Change ‘survey’ to ‘surveyed’.

Lines 22-23: Change ‘eDNA quantity and the environmental variables tested had no significant 23 relationship’ to ‘There was no significant relationship between eDNA quantity and the environmental variables tested.

Line 26: Remove comma.

Line 81: Remove comma before ‘using’

Line 89: Insert ‘to’ after ‘Prior’. How long was equipment immersed in 10% bleach solution for sterilisation?

Line 96: Insert ‘the’ before ‘fluorometer’.

Line 99: Change ‘the process’ to ‘sample processing’.

Line 100: Insert ‘23’ before ‘extractions’.

Line 107: Remove ‘a’ before ‘reliable’.

Lines 108-111: I appreciate that the authors will not be repeating qPCR at this stage due to cost and time, but one way of increasing assay sensitivity would have been to use larger reaction volumes for qPCR.

Lines 111-112: What volume was used for the TaqMan Exogenous Internal Positive Control assay in qPCR reactions?

Line 128: Remove comma after ‘uncertain’.

Line 129: Change ‘of’ to ‘performed on’.

Line 147: Change ‘eDNA water samples’ to ‘water samples for eDNA analysis’. Insert ‘walked’ before ‘along’.

Line 153: Insert ‘(‘ before ‘1)’.

Lines 181-183: I suggest joining these sentences with the previous paragraph.

Lines 191-190: Change ‘all negative controls exhibited no qPCR fluorescence signal’ to ‘none of the negative controls exhibited qPCR fluorescence signal’. There is a slight issue here as the qPCR standard curve used in the present study only went down to 100 copies/ul. This is the limit of quantification in this study as 100 copies/ul was the last point on the standard curve against which eDNA samples were being compared. If samples quantified below this, you can only somewhat rely on the copy number estimates produced for these samples as they are outwith the range of the standard curve. It is not good practice to use a standard curve from other studies (e.g. Lam et al. 2020) as it does not accurately reflect the qPCR reactions performed in the present study. I suggest the authors clarify whether their samples were above or below 100 copies/ul. If below, they can still count these as positive detections as there is clearly eDNA present, but these samples shouldn’t really be used in analyses examining eDNA quantity.

Line 243: Change ‘, but, a significant, positive’ to ‘, but a significant positive’.

Line 246: Change ‘in’ to ‘on’.

Line 248: Change ‘them was statistically significant in affecting’ to ‘these covariates significantly influenced’.

Line 276: Change ‘species specific’ to ‘species-specific’.

Line 293: Change ‘Degradation’ to ‘degradation’.

Line 298 and 308: Change ‘Production’ to ‘production’.

Line 310: Change ‘increases’ to ‘increase’.

Line 313: Change ‘produce less eDNA by shedding’ to ‘shed less eDNA’.

Line 323: Change ‘in hopes’ to ‘in the hope’.

Line 326: Change ‘Transport’ to ‘transport’.

Line 328: Change ‘which’ to ‘where’.

Line 329: Change ‘cause eDNA distribution vary’ to ‘can cause eDNA distribution to’.

Line 340: Change ‘Dilution’ to ‘dilution’.

Line 345: Change ‘amplifying’ to ‘resuspending’.

Line 347: Change ‘model’ to ‘models’.

Line 363: Change ‘result’ to ‘results’.

Line 368: Change ‘volume’ to ‘volumes’.

Line 375: Insert ‘of’ after ‘detection’.

Line 376: Change ‘present/absent’ to ‘presence/absence’.

Line 389: Insert ‘reaction volume’ before ‘and’.

Reviewer #2: The authors provided thoughtful and thorough revision of their paper. Great work!

However, I still have some confusion around reporting of assay performance and present minor comments below.

L89: Add “to” to this sentence: “Prior to each lab work step,..”

L147-148: Suggest revising sentence to read something like, “For active searching, we looked for P. megacephalum along the stream at night using headlamps.”

L149: Change “was” to “were”

L173: Delete extra “.” after “...and all KP streams. (n=8).”

Reporting of qPCR metrics (R2, %efficiency and LOD):

1. Because the authors quantify, both the limit of detection and limit of quantification need to be reported. So the limit of quantification also needs to be reported. Additionally, the copy number estimates need to be reported as reference to the LOD in the paper cited copies/μL.

2. I am confused about the multiple R2 and % efficiency reported, at L106 & L385 (R2=0.97, efficiency=94.15%), L189-190 and Supplemental Table 1 (R2=0.957 ± 0.03; efficiency: 96.99% ± 5.19), and the discussion of lower values at L386. I think reporting of the values only from the qPCR runs in this study should be reported in the results section and then mention the comparison with the previous study in the limitation sections (L381-390).

3. As a reader, I am also confused about the reported LOD at 10 copies/μL at L191. In the paper and in the authors’ response it looks like the limit of detection run in this study was 100 copies/μL (L116). I am not sure that LOD is necessarily transferable from study to study, especially given that the R2 and % efficiency for some runs were lower than what would be recommended to quantify eDNA.

Results:

L238-240: Add the rs and p values here for the correlation relationships between temperature and pH.

I had previously suggested that occupancy modeling might be useful in determining which factors are important to detect turtle eDNA. I sincerely apologize if this was not clear. But there is not enough explanation of the parameters included and the results are not fully explained. For example, use of AICc and p-values are generally not used together, there is no null model or global model included. As these relationships are still compared with correlations at L238-240, I suggest deleting this section (246-249), as it's not completely explained.

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PLoS One. 2022 Feb 7;17(2):e0262015. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0262015.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


11 Nov 2021

Reviewer #1: General comments

I have reviewed the manuscript ‘Using eDNA techniques to find the endangered big-headed turtles (Platysternon megacephalum)’. I am largely satisfied with the changes the authors have made to the manuscript, but still have a number of minor comments I would like the authors to address to help improve the clarity of the manuscript. I have detailed these in the specific comments to the authors below. I also recommend that the authors complete the validation checklist provided in Thalinger et al. (2021) for the assay used and provide this as a supplementary file.

Thalinger, B., Deiner, K., Harper, L.R., Rees, H.C., Blackman, R.C., Sint, D., Traugott, M., Goldberg, C.S. & Bruce, K. (2021) A validation scale to determine the readiness of environmental DNA assays for routine species monitoring. Environmental DNA, 3, 823–836.

https://doi.org/10.1002/edn3.189

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

We appreciated the recommendation from the reviewer, and completed the validation checklist provided by the literature suggested. The checklist is attached as supplementary table 1.

Specific comments

Line 19: Change ‘survey’ to ‘surveyed’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Lines 22-23: Change ‘eDNA quantity and the environmental variables tested had no significant 23 relationship’ to ‘There was no significant relationship between eDNA quantity and the environmental variables tested.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 26: Remove comma.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 81: Remove comma before ‘using’

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 89: Insert ‘to’ after ‘Prior’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

How long was equipment immersed in 10% bleach solution for sterilisation?

We immersed equipment in 10% bleach solution for at least 5 minutes for sterilization each time. We clarified the details in the corresponding sentences.

Line 96: Insert ‘the’ before ‘fluorometer’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 99: Change ‘the process’ to ‘sample processing’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 100: Insert ‘23’ before ‘extractions’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 107: Remove ‘a’ before ‘reliable’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Lines 108-111: I appreciate that the authors will not be repeating qPCR at this stage due to cost and time, but one way of increasing assay sensitivity would have been to use larger reaction volumes for qPCR.

RESPONSE:

Thank you for your suggestion, we will keep this in mind for the future.

Lines 111-112: What volume was used for the TaqMan Exogenous Internal Positive Control assay in qPCR reactions?

RESPONSE:

TaqMan Exogenous Internal Positive Control assay composed of two parts: IPC-Mix and IPC-DNA. Following manufacturer’s instruction, we added 1 μL of IPC-Mix and 0.2 μL of IPC-DNA into each reaction, We clarified the details in the corresponding sentences.

Line 128: Remove comma after ‘uncertain’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 129: Change ‘of’ to ‘performed on’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 147: Change ‘eDNA water samples’ to ‘water samples for eDNA analysis’. Insert ‘walked’ before ‘along’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 153: Insert ‘(‘ before ‘1)’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Lines 181-183: I suggest joining these sentences with the previous paragraph.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Lines 191-190: Change ‘all negative controls exhibited no qPCR fluorescence signal’ to ‘none of the negative controls exhibited qPCR fluorescence signal’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

There is a slight issue here as the qPCR standard curve used in the present study only went down to 100 copies/ul. This is the limit of quantification in this study as 100 copies/ul was the last point on the standard curve against which eDNA samples were being compared. If samples quantified below this, you can only somewhat rely on the copy number estimates produced for these samples as they are outwith the range of the standard curve. It is not good practice to use a standard curve from other studies (e.g. Lam et al. 2020) as it does not accurately reflect the qPCR reactions performed in the present study. I suggest the authors clarify whether their samples were above or below 100 copies/ul. If below, they can still count these as positive detections as there is clearly eDNA present, but these samples shouldn’t really be used in analyses examining eDNA quantity.

RESPONSE:

We follow the suggestion from the reviewer, indicating whether the samples were above the limit of quantification (100 copies/μL) in text, and in Figure 2. We also remove samples with below 100 copies/μL from statistical analysis. Upon the removal of the data, eDNA quantity and turtle capture rate had no significant relationship anymore (rs = 0.267, p = 0.056). We updated the latest result in the Result section.

Line 243: Change ‘, but, a significant, positive’ to ‘, but a significant positive’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 246: Change ‘in’ to ‘on’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 248: Change ‘them was statistically significant in affecting’ to ‘these covariates significantly influenced’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 276: Change ‘species specific’ to ‘species-specific’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 293: Change ‘Degradation’ to ‘degradation’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 298 and 308: Change ‘Production’ to ‘production’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 310: Change ‘increases’ to ‘increase’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 313: Change ‘produce less eDNA by shedding’ to ‘shed less eDNA’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 323: Change ‘in hopes’ to ‘in the hope’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 326: Change ‘Transport’ to ‘transport’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 328: Change ‘which’ to ‘where’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 329: Change ‘cause eDNA distribution vary’ to ‘can cause eDNA distribution to’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 340: Change ‘Dilution’ to ‘dilution’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 345: Change ‘amplifying’ to ‘resuspending’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 347: Change ‘model’ to ‘models’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 363: Change ‘result’ to ‘results’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 368: Change ‘volume’ to ‘volumes’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 375: Insert ‘of’ after ‘detection’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 376: Change ‘present/absent’ to ‘presence/absence’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 389: Insert ‘reaction volume’ before ‘and’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested. 

Reviewer #2: The authors provided thoughtful and thorough revision of their paper. Great work!

However, I still have some confusion around reporting of assay performance and present minor comments below.

L89: Add “to” to this sentence: “Prior to each lab work step,..”

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

L147-148: Suggest revising sentence to read something like, “For active searching, we looked for P. megacephalum along the stream at night using headlamps.”

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

L149: Change “was” to “were”

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

L173: Delete extra “.” after “...and all KP streams. (n=8).”

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Reporting of qPCR metrics (R2, %efficiency and LOD):

1. Because the authors quantify, both the limit of detection and limit of quantification need to be reported. So the limit of quantification also needs to be reported. Additionally, the copy number estimates need to be reported as reference to the LOD in the paper cited copies/μL.

RESPONSE:

We apologize for the confusion between LOD and LOQ. In this study, we used 100 copies/μL as the lowest point of standard curve, hence, the limit of quantification. In Lam et al. (2020), the limit of detection was tested to be 10 copies/μL. We clarified the limit of detection in the Methodology section – Quantitative PCR, and the limit of quantification in the Methodology section - Exploration of eDNA Data.

2. I am confused about the multiple R2 and % efficiency reported, at L106 & L385 (R2=0.97, efficiency=94.15%), L189-190 and Supplemental Table 1 (R2=0.957 ± 0.03; efficiency: 96.99% ± 5.19), and the discussion of lower values at L386. I think reporting of the values only from the qPCR runs in this study should be reported in the results section and then mention the comparison with the previous study in the limitation sections (L381-390).

RESPONSE:

We apologize for making the confusion. We removed qPCR values (R2 and % efficiency) from other studies from the methodology and result section to minimize confusion. All comparison of qPCR values can be only found in Discussion – Limitation of the study sections as suggested.

3. As a reader, I am also confused about the reported LOD at 10 copies/μL at L191. In the paper and in the authors’ response it looks like the limit of detection run in this study was 100 copies/μL (L116). I am not sure that LOD is necessarily transferable from study to study, especially given that the R2 and % efficiency for some runs were lower than what would be recommended to quantify eDNA.

RESPONSE:

To be conservative, we removed amplified eDNA samples with quantity below 100 copies/μL from the analysis. Upon the removal of the data, eDNA quantity and turtle capture rate had no significant relationship anymore (rs = 0.267, p = 0.056). We updated the latest result in the Result section.

Results:

L238-240: Add the rs and p values here for the correlation relationships between temperature and pH.

RESPONSE:

The corresponding rs and p values were added into the sentences suggested.

I had previously suggested that occupancy modeling might be useful in determining which factors are important to detect turtle eDNA. I sincerely apologize if this was not clear. But there is not enough explanation of the parameters included and the results are not fully explained. For example, use of AICc and p-values are generally not used together, there is no null model or global model included. As these relationships are still compared with correlations at L238-240, I suggest deleting this section (246-249), as it's not completely explained.

RESPONSE:

We sincerely apologize for not enough explanation on the parameters. However, as the reviewer said, the relationship was compared with correlations at L238-240, we followed the suggestion from the reviewer, to delete the section, and the corresponding paragraph in the Methodology section.

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Decision Letter 2

Mark A Davis

6 Dec 2021

PONE-D-21-13336R2Using eDNA techniques to find the endangered big-headed turtles (Platysternon megacephalum)PLOS ONE

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I have reviewed the manuscript ‘Using eDNA techniques to find the endangered big-headed turtles (Platysternon megacephalum)’. I am largely satisfied with the changes the authors have made to the manuscript, and recommend the manuscript be published after minor comments are addressed. I have detailed these in the specific comments to the authors below.

Specific comments

Line 99: Add number of sampled in a set for DNA quantification, i.e. ‘one for each set of X samples for DNA quantification’.

Line 100: Change ‘2-3’ to ‘two or three’.

Line 107: Change ‘qPCR assay provided’ to ‘the selected qPCR assay’. Change ‘supplementary table’ to ‘Supplementary Table’.

Line 113: Change ‘2-3’ to ‘two or three’.

Line 114: Change ‘are’ to ‘were’.

Line 124: Change ‘2-5’ to ‘two to five’.

Lines 125-126: Change ‘when the qPCR assay recovered DNA amplification’ to ‘when qPCR amplification was observed’.

Line 127: Change ‘is’ to ‘was’.

Line 129: Change ‘performed on all qPCR reactions of the sample’ to ‘of all qPCR replicates performed on the sample’.

Line 133-134: Remove ‘were’. Change ‘had zero amplification’ to ‘did not amplify’.

Line 135: Change ‘2-3’ to ‘two or three’.

Lines 136 and 137: Change ‘showed amplification’ to ‘amplified.

Line 144: Change ‘1-2’ to ‘one to two’.

Line 155: Change ‘Shapiro-Wilk’s’ to ‘Shapiro-Wilk’.

Line 162: Change ‘quantity data’ to ‘concentration’.

Line 203: Change ‘2-5’ to ‘two to five’.

Line 220: Change ‘3 HR, 5 UN’ to ‘three HR, five UN’.

Line 223: Change ‘6 HR’ to ‘six HR’.

Line 237: Change ‘[‘ to ‘(‘.

Line 238: Remove ‘)’. Insert ‘:’ after ‘streams’.

Line 239: Change ‘]’ to ‘)’.

Line 256: Change ‘1-2’ to ‘one to two’.

Line 280: Change ‘in’ to ‘with’.

Line 281: Change ‘organism’ to ‘individuals’.

Line 360: Change ‘1-2L’ to ‘1-2 L’.

Line 378: Change ‘suggest’ to ‘suggests’.

Line 647: Change ‘of qPCR assay’ to ‘for the qPCR assay’.

Supplementary Table 1: The assay validation checklist from Thalinger et al. (2021) has not been completed properly. Please complete the ‘Checklist template’ sheet in the Excel spreadsheet titled ‘Appendix S1’ that was uploaded as part of the Supporting Information for Thalinger et al. (2021).

Thalinger, B., Deiner, K., Harper, L.R., Rees, H.C., Blackman, R.C., Sint, D., Traugott, M., Goldberg, C.S. & Bruce, K. (2021) A validation scale to determine the readiness of environmental DNA assays for routine species monitoring. Environmental DNA, 3, 823–836.

https://doi.org/10.1002/edn3.189

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PLoS One. 2022 Feb 7;17(2):e0262015. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0262015.r006

Author response to Decision Letter 2


7 Dec 2021

Reviewer #1: General comments

I have reviewed the manuscript ‘Using eDNA techniques to find the endangered big-headed turtles (Platysternon megacephalum)’. I am largely satisfied with the changes the authors have made to the manuscript, and recommend the manuscript be published after minor comments are addressed. I have detailed these in the specific comments to the authors below.

Specific comments

Line 99: Add number of sampled in a set for DNA quantification, i.e. ‘one for each set of X samples for DNA quantification’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 100: Change ‘2-3’ to ‘two or three’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 107: Change ‘qPCR assay provided’ to ‘the selected qPCR assay’. Change ‘supplementary table’ to ‘Supplementary Table’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 113: Change ‘2-3’ to ‘two or three’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 114: Change ‘are’ to ‘were’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 124: Change ‘2-5’ to ‘two to five’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Lines 125-126: Change ‘when the qPCR assay recovered DNA amplification’ to ‘when qPCR amplification was observed’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 127: Change ‘is’ to ‘was’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 129: Change ‘performed on all qPCR reactions of the sample’ to ‘of all qPCR replicates performed on the sample’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 133-134: Remove ‘were’. Change ‘had zero amplification’ to ‘did not amplify’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 135: Change ‘2-3’ to ‘two or three’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Lines 136 and 137: Change ‘showed amplification’ to ‘amplified.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 144: Change ‘1-2’ to ‘one to two’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 155: Change ‘Shapiro-Wilk’s’ to ‘Shapiro-Wilk’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 162: Change ‘quantity data’ to ‘concentration’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 203: Change ‘2-5’ to ‘two to five’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 220: Change ‘3 HR, 5 UN’ to ‘three HR, five UN’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 223: Change ‘6 HR’ to ‘six HR’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 237: Change ‘[‘ to ‘(‘.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 238: Remove ‘)’. Insert ‘:’ after ‘streams’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 239: Change ‘]’ to ‘)’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 256: Change ‘1-2’ to ‘one to two’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 280: Change ‘in’ to ‘with’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 281: Change ‘organism’ to ‘individuals’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 360: Change ‘1-2L’ to ‘1-2 L’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 378: Change ‘suggest’ to ‘suggests’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Line 647: Change ‘of qPCR assay’ to ‘for the qPCR assay’.

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested.

Supplementary Table 1: The assay validation checklist from Thalinger et al. (2021) has not been completed properly. Please complete the ‘Checklist template’ sheet in the Excel spreadsheet titled ‘Appendix S1’ that was uploaded as part of the Supporting Information for Thalinger et al. (2021).

Thalinger, B., Deiner, K., Harper, L.R., Rees, H.C., Blackman, R.C., Sint, D., Traugott, M., Goldberg, C.S. & Bruce, K. (2021) A validation scale to determine the readiness of environmental DNA assays for routine species monitoring. Environmental DNA, 3, 823–836.

https://doi.org/10.1002/edn3.189

RESPONSE:

Revised as suggested. An updated checklist as Supplementary Table 1 will be submitted with the manuscript.

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

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Decision Letter 3

Mark A Davis

16 Dec 2021

Using eDNA techniques to find the endangered big-headed turtles (Platysternon megacephalum)

PONE-D-21-13336R3

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Mark A Davis

28 Jan 2022

PONE-D-21-13336R3

Using eDNA techniques to find the endangered big-headed turtle (Platysternon megacephalum)

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