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. 2022 Mar 9;17(3):e0264852. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0264852

Alcohol drinking delays the rate of sputum smear conversion among DR-TB patients in northwest Ethiopia; A retrospective follow-up study

Mehari Woldemariam Merid 1,*, Atalay Goshu Muluneh 1, Getahun Molla Kassa 1
Editor: Mao-Shui Wang2
PMCID: PMC8906643  PMID: 35263367

Abstract

Background

Sputum smear microscopy is simple and feasible technique to assess the presence of acid-fast bacilli (AFB) in the respiratory tract of patients with Drug Resistance Tuberculosis (DR-TB). Conversion of sputum smear from positive to negative is considered as an interim indicator of efficacy of anti-tubercular treatment and the program effectiveness. Although evidences regarding the factors affecting the sputum smear conversion are available on drug susceptible TB patients, there is dearth of literature about smear conversion and its predictors among DR-TB patients in the study setting. Hence, shortening the time to sputum smear conversion is desirable to reduce the likelihood of mycobacterial transmission. This study has therefore aimed at estimating the median time of sputum smear conversion and to determine its predictors.

Methods

This was a retrospective follow-up study conducted among DR-TB patients registered for second-line anti-TB treatment in the four hospitals of Amhara regional state, Northwest Ethiopia. Of all patients enrolled to DR-TB treatment in the study setting from 2010 to 2017, 436 patients have been include for this study who fulfilled the eligibility criteria. The cox proportional hazard model was fitted and the adjusted hazard ratio (AHR) with 95% confidence interval (CI) and p <0.05 was used to declare statistical significance of the variables associated with the smear conversion.

Results

From the 436 patients with sputum smear positive at baseline, 351 (80.5%) converted sputum smear at a median time of 48 (IQR: 30–78) days. The median time of smear conversion was 59 (95% CI: 42, 74) and 44 (95% CI: 37, 54) days among patients who had and had no history of alcohol drinking, respectively. Similarly, the median time to smear conversion was 61 (95% CI: 36, 73) days among patients with comorbid conditions and 44 (95% CI: 38, 54) days among patients with no comorbid conditions. In the multi-variable analysis, only history of alcohol consumption [AHR = 0.66 (0.50, 0.87)] was found to delay significantly the rate of sputum smear conversion.

Conclusion

In our study, the median time of sputum smear conversion was with in the expected time frame of conversion. History of alcohol consumption was found to delay significantly the rate of sputum smear conversion. The DR-TB patients are strongly advised to avoid alcohol consumption.

Background

Tuberculosis (TB) is one of the most challenging infectious diseases in the globe. It affects people of all ages. According to the 2021 global TB report, there were an estimated 1.3 million deaths among HIV-negative people, up from 1.2 million in 2019, and an additional 214 000 deaths among HIV-positive people, a small increase from 209 000 in 2019. In 2020, the number of people dying from TB increased, previous declines in the annual number of people falling ill with TB slowed, far fewer people were diagnosed and treated for TB or provided with TB preventive treatment compared with 2019 and spending on essential TB services fell [1].

Although the Sustainable Development Goal targets at ending the TB epidemic by 2030, drug-resistant TB remains to be a serious public health problem throughout the world.

According to the World Health Organization (WHO), all TB patients should be monitored during the course of anti-tuberculosis treatment to assess their response to therapy [2]. The treatment response monitoring method mainly concerns on body weight and sputum smear examination which should be done, among others, at the end of the intensive phase of treatment [2].

Conversion of sputum smear from positive to negative is considered as an interim indicator of efficacy of anti-tubercular treatment and the program effectiveness [35]. The treatment outcomes are only available 18–24 months after treatment starts among drug resistance tuberculosis (DR-TB) patients [5]. Hence, sputum smear negativity is a measure of good response to anti-tuberculosis treatment.

Sputum smear microscopy is simple and feasible technique to assess the presence of acid-fast bacilli (AFB) in the respiratory tract of patients with pulmonary Drug Resistance Tuberculosis (DR-TB) [6]. Sputum smear microscopy tests were performed once a month for the first 6 months and once every 2 months from that point until the end of therapy [6].

Although evidence on the time to sputum smear conversion is dearth, some literatures conducted elsewhere have reported that median time of conversion ranges from 51 to 150 days [711]. Patients with non-conversion or prolonged time to sputum smear conversion may require close monitoring, longer hospitalization and protracted intensive treatment which results in unfavourable treatment outcomes [1215]. From the public health point of view, reducing the time to sputum smear conversion is an important infection control measure [16]. Hence, shortening the time to sputum conversion is desirable to reduce the likelihood of mycobacterial transmission. Moreover, sputum smear conversion is often used by clinicians to determine the duration of treatment for drug resistant tuberculosis patients.

Several factors, such as sex, age, baseline sputum grade, smoking habits, alcoholism, HIV co-infection, have been identified in previous studies as risk factors for delayed smear conversion [8, 12, 13, 16, 17].

Method

Study design, setting, and population

An institutional based retrospective follow up study was conducted from all DR-TB patients registered for second-line anti-TB treatment in to the four second-line anti-TB drug treatment initiating center hospitals in Amhara regional state from September 2010 and December 2017. The Treatment Initiating Centers (TICs) include the University of Gondar comprehensive specialized hospital, Debremarkos referral hospital, Borumeda referral hospital, and Woldya general hospital. These four hospital accounts more than 90% of the RR/MDR-TB in the region. The region has the second highest number of TB cases notified yearly following Oromia region in the country. Amhara regional state is the second largest and populated state from the ten regional and two town administrative states in Ethiopia. All of the patients were bacteriologically confirmed RR/MDR-TB. The diagnosis of tuberculosis and its drug resistance was made either of the GeneXpert MTB/Rif assay or Line Probe Assay (LPA) and further triangulated by culture based phenotypic drug susceptibility testing.

All DR-TB patients registered for second-line ant-TB treatment in the region were the source population whereas those patients enrolled for treatment from September 2010 to December 2017 in the selected hospitals were the study population. Patients without recorded information on their smear conversion status were excluded. Data were extracted among 436 DR-TB patient medical records (Fig 1).

Fig 1. The diagrammatic presentation showing a selection of DR-TB patients in Amhara Regional State Public Hospitals from September 2010 to December 2017.

Fig 1

Data collection and quality control

Data were abstracted from the medical records using a structured data collection form. Baseline socio-demographic, behavioural, and clinical information (including sex, age, residency, marital status, education status, occupation, smoking history, history of alcohol drinking, functional status, sputum smear result, history of treatment for 1st line anti- tuberculosis, TB registration group, underlying comorbid diseases, and HIV co-infection) were obtained from medical record reviews. In addition, we have collected and assessed the development of adverse drug events and treatment outcome. To maintain the quality of the data a half day hands-on training was given to the data collectors. Data were collected by four BSc degree students under the close supervision of the researchers. The completeness and consistence of data were inspected and corrected day-to-day.

Study variables

Time to sputum smear conversion was the dependent variable; whereas socio-demographic characteristics (sex, age, residence, educational status, marital status), behavioural factors (smoking, alcohol drinking) and clinical characteristics (HIV co-infection, DR-TB treatment regimen, type of resistance, presence of chronic diseases, clinical complications, base line Body Mass Index (BMI), anaemia, smear grading and functional status) were the predictor variables for this study.

Operational definitions

Smear conversion was defined as two consecutive negative sputum smears taken at least 30 days apart following an initial positive sputum smear [5].

Time to sputum Smear conversion was defined as the time in months from the date of start of DR-TB treatment to the date of smear conversion for the first of two consecutive negative sputum smear results [5].

Censored was defined as when smear result has not been converted for an individual. This includes when the patient stops the treatment though the smear was positive, deceased before culture conversion, transferred out to another treatment site before culture conversion, and study time completion before culture conversion.

Anemia: was defined as hemoglobin value of less than 12 mg/dl for males and less than 11 mg/dl for females [18]. Sputum smear was graded as scanty, 1+, 2+, and 3+. Scanty is when the sputum contains 1–9 AFB in 100 fields, grade 1+ for 10–99 AFB in 100 fields, grade 2+ if 1–10 AFB per field (check 50 fields), and grade 3+ for more than 10 AFB per field (check 20 fields), respectively [19]. Body mass index (BMI): was defined as low when BMI < 18.5 kg/m2, and normal if BMI 18.5–24.99 kg/m2 [20]. Cigarette smoking: was recorded by asking respondents whether they have ever smoke cigarette in life history. It was dichotomized by 1 (Yes i.e., smoke cigarettes) and 0 (No smoke cigarettes). Alcohol consumption: was recorded by asking a respondents whether a respondents have ever drink alcohol or not. It was dichotomized by 1 (Yes i.e., drink alcohol) and 0 (No drink alcohol).

Data analysis

After data was entered in to epi-data 4.2.0.0, it was exported to Stata 14 for further cleaning, coding, recoding, and analysis. The baseline socio-demographic, behavioural, and clinical features of patients were analysed descriptively. Median time with inter quartile range and mean with Standard Deviation (SD) were used for skewed and normally distributed continues variables, respectively. Texts, tables, and figures were used to present results. The Chi-square assumptions was assessed and valued for categorical explanatory variables.

Kaplan–Meier survival curve was used to illustrate the median time to culture conversion. Bi-variable and multi-variable Cox proportional hazard model was used to identify the independent predictors of time to smear conversion. The adjusted hazard ratio (AHR) with 95% confidence interval (CI) was used to report the strength of association and statistical significance was declared at p <0.05.

Ethics approval and consent to participate

The Ethical Review Committee of the University of Gondar approved the study. A permission and support letters were also obtained from the Amhara public health institutions, the management committee of each hospital, and TB ward heads. Since we used secondary data retrospectively, permission letter to access the data was obtained from each study institution as alternative to informed consent. Thus, informed consent was waived as we received the institutional support letter. Information obtained at any course of the study was kept confidential. The data were anonymized and personal identifiers were not included and secured via password in computerized databases to ensure confidentiality.

Result

Socio-demographic and Behavioural characteristics of patients

A total of 436 patients were included in the analysis. Majority (84.86%) of the patients were in the age range of 35–54 years. Regarding the residence of the patients, about half of them were residents of urban 225 (51.61%). About one-fifth 91 (20.87%) of the patients had alcohol drinking history at the time of treatment commencement (Table 1).

Table 1. Socio-demographic characteristics and behavioural among DR-TB patients in North West Ethiopia (N = 436).

Characteristics Frequency (%) Characteristics Frequency (%)
Age in years Baseline smoking history
< 34 284 (65.14) Yes 66 (15.14)
35–54 129 (29.59) No 370 (84.86)
> = 55 23 (5.28) Baseline alcohol drinking history
Sex Yes 91 (20.87)
Male 255 (58.49) No 345 (79.13)
Female 181 (41.51) Marital status
Educational status Married 203 (46.56)
Unable to read and write 184 (42.20) Single 233 (53.44)
Primary 114 (26.15) Residence
Secondary and above 138 (31.65) Urban 225 (51.61)
Occupation Rural 211 (48.39)
Farmer 123 (28.21)
Housewife 69 (15.83)
Daily labourer 56 (12.84)
Employed 46 (10.55)
Private 142 (32.57)

Clinical characteristics of patients

More than three-fourth 335 (76.83%) of the patients were having a BMI of less than 18.5 kg/m2 at the start of treatment. And above one-fourth 116 (26.61%) of the patients were HIC co-infected during the time they start DR-TB treatment. Moreover, a significant number, 181 (41.51%) of patients had a baseline sputum smear result grading of 3+ (Table 2).

Table 2. Clinical characteristics of patients and treatment related factors among DR-TB patients in North West Ethiopia (N = 436).

Characteristics Frequency (%) Characteristics Frequency (%)
Body mass index (BMI) in kg/m2 Adverse drug event
<18.5 335 (76.83) Yes 281 (64.45)
18.5–24.9 101 (23.17) No 155 (35.55)
HIV co-infection Treatment interruption
Yes 116 (26.61) Yes 60 (13.76)
No 320 (73.39) No 376 (86.24)
TB registration group Functional status
New 58 (13.30) Working 151 (34.63)
Relapse 63 (14.45) Ambulatory 216 (49.54)
After failure of treatment 315 (72.25) Bed ridden 69 (15.83)
Type of regimen *Comorbid conditions
E-Z-CM-LFX-ETO-CS 96 (22.02) Yes 69 (15.83)
Z-CM-LFX-ETO-CS 52 (11.93) No 367 (84.17)
Z-CM-LFX-PTO-CS 288 (66.06) Baseline sputum smear result grading
History of treatment for 1st line anti-TB treatment 1–9 bacili 81(18.58)
Yes 380 (87.16) 1+ 91(20.87)
No 56 (12.84) 2+ 83 (19.04)
3+ 181 (41.51)

*comorbid conditions other than HIV such as diabetes mellitus and Hypertension; E- Ethambutol, Z- Pyrazinamide, CM- Capreomycin, ETO-Ethionamide, PTO- prothionamide, Cs- Cycloserine, LFX- Levofloxacin.

Sputum smear status and conversion time

A total of 436 patients had positive sputum smear microscopy result at the start of the study. The baseline smear status of the patients, graded as scanty, grade 1+, grade 2+, and grade 3+ was reported as 18.58%, 20.87%, 19.04%, and 41.51%, respectively. From the 436 patients with sputum smear positive at baseline, 351 (80.5%) of them converted sputum smear at a median time of 48 (IQR: 30–78) days. The median time to smear conversion was 61 (95% CI: 36, 73) days among patients with comorbid conditions and 44 (95% CI: 38, 54) days among patients with no comorbid conditions. Similarly, the median time to smear conversion was 59 (95% CI: 42, 74) and 44 (95% CI: 37, 54) days among patients who had and had no history of alcohol drinking, respectively. Moreover, patients who experienced an adverse drug event were smear converted at the median time of 54 (IQR: 41–60) days and those with no adverse drug event were converted at a median time of 40 (IQR: 35–53) days.

The overall incidence rate of sputum smear conversion was 1.93 per 100 Person-Month (PM) (95% CI: 1.69, 2.22) with 11787 total observations. The proportion of sputum smear conversion at 30, 60, 90, and 120 days of treatment initiation was 90%, 42%, 19%, and 9%, respectively (Fig 2).

Fig 2. The Kaplan Meier survivor function for the probability of smear conversion among DR-TB patients in North West Ethiopia (N = 436).

Fig 2

Predictors of time to smear conversion

The different socio-demographic, behavioural and clinical factors were considered as predictors for smear conversion in the analysis. Accordingly, residence, marital status, history of alcohol drinking, registration group, type of regimen at baseline, history of treatment for 1st line anti-TB treatment, adverse drug event, and baseline sputum smear result grading were found to have a p-value of less than 0.25 in the bi-variable cox regression model and thus considered for the multi-variable analysis. Accordingly, only history of alcohol consumption [AHR = 0.66 (0.50, 0.87)] was found to delay significantly the rate of sputum smear conversion. After controlling for the confounding effect of a number of variables as indicated in the table below, only history of alcohol drinking at baseline was found to be the significant predictor of sputum smear conversion (Table 3).

Table 3. Bi-variable and multi-variable cox regression analysis of the predictors for sputum smear conversion among DR-TB patients in North West Ethiopia (N = 436).

Variables Categories Event (%) Censored (%) CHR 95% CI AHR 95% CI
Residence Rural 170 (80.57) 41 (19.43) 1 1
Urban 181 (80.44) 44 (19.56) 0.87 (0.71,1.08) 1.19 (0.95, 1.48)
Marital status Single 158 (79.79) 40 (20.21) 1 1
Married 193 (81.09) 45 (18.91) 0.85 (0.69,1.06) 1.23 (0.98, 1.54)
History of alcohol drinking at baseline No 277 (80.29) 68 (19.71) 1 1
Yes 74 (81.32) 17 (18.68) 0.84 (0.64,1.09) 0.66 (0.50, 0.87)
TB-registration group at baseline treatment after failure 263 (83.49) 52 (16.51) 0.64 (0.46,0.89) 1
New 42 (72.41) 16 (27.59) 1 1.21 (0.55, 2.63)
Relapse 46 (73.02) 17 (26.98) 0.81 (0.53,1.24) 1.24 (0.89, 1.72)
Type of regimen at Baseline Z-CM-LFX-PTO-CS 225 (78.13) 63 (21.87) 1 1
E-Z-CM-LFX-ETO-CS 84 (87.5) 12 (12.5) 0.75 (0.58, 0.96) 0.81 (0.61, 1.09)
Z-CM-LFX-ETO-CS 42 (80.77) 10 (19.23) 0.66 (0.47, 0.92) 0.72 (0.51, 1.01)
1st line anti-TB treatment history No 41 (73.21) 15 (26.79) 1 1
Yes 310 (81.58) 70 (18.42) 0.67 (0.48, 0.93) 0.96 (0.69, 1.35)
Adverse drug event No 116 (74.84) 39 (25.16) 1 1
Yes 235 (83.63) 46 (16.37) 0.80 (0.64, 1.02) 1.19 (0.94, 1.50)
Baseline sputum smear result grading 1–9 bacili 65 (80.25) 16 (19.75) 1 1
1+ 81 (89.01) 10 (10.99) 0.79 (0.57,1.09) 0.70 (0.57, 1.12)
2+ 66 (79.52) 17 (20.48) 0.82 (0.58, 1.16) 0.81 (0.56, 1.16)
3+ 139 (76.80) 42 (23.20) 0.82 (0.61, 1.10) 0.78 (0.57, 1.08)

Discussion

In this study, from a total of 436 patients with sputum smear positive at baseline, 351 (80.5%) of them converted sputum smear at a median time of 48 (IQR: 30–78) days. Tuberculosis patients on anti-tubercular patients are expected to convert the positive sputum smear to negative result at 60 days. As such, the patients in our study had delayed sputum smear conversion than the expected time of conversion.

In this study, the median time of smear conversion was shorter compared to some studies conducted elsewhere [7, 911]. The participants’ socio-demographic, time difference across studies, and other factors, the study setting could have been responsible for the observed differences in the median time of sputum smear conversion across studies. For instance, one of the studies cited above was a longitudinal study conducted from 2010 to 2012 in which it was relatively earlier than our study. Due to the time gap, there could be numerous transitions in the educational status of the population, people might have more access to the health care and more awareness about the importance of adhering to the treatment thereby they will have short time of smear conversion.

On the other hand, the median time of smear conversion in our study was found to be longer compared to previous studies done in different countries [4, 16, 21]. One of the possible reason for such discrepancy could be that some of the hospitals included in this study had no facility for culture testing during the earlier years of service provision so that they collect and send sputum to the regional health bureau and to other hospitals. This, in turn, might result in delayed reporting or sometimes missing of the result might have occurred thereby longer smear conversion date might be reported. In this study, a number of factors known to affect the rate of sputum smear conversion were evaluated among DR-TB patients. Accordingly, only history of alcohol consumption [AHR = 0.66 (0.50, 0.87)] was found to delay significantly the rate of sputum smear conversion. Previous evidences have also indicated that alcohol drinking has effect on sputum and culture conversion, treatment response and thereby treatment outcome of TB/DR-TB patients [12, 2225]. For example, a multi-centre study conducted in five countries including Peru, Estonia, the Philippines, Latvia, and Russia noted that alcohol drinking resulted in delayed smear/culture conversion time [26].

There could be different justifications for the delayed smear conversion in relation to alcohol drinking. For instance evidence indicated that alcohol consumption is associated with low Pharmacodynamics or delayed effectiveness the anti-TB drugs among alcohol users and thereby delayed smear conversion rate and poor treatment response [27].

There have been established facts about the impact of alcohol use on the immune system of DR-TB patients during the course of anti- TB treatment and its outcome. As such, alcohol consumption was known to reduce macrophage response to immune system modifiers such as cytokines, including interleukin-6 (IL-6), IL-1β, TNF-α, and IL-8 and to prevent the protective effect exerted by the cytokines [2830]. Moreover, history of alcohol exposure may suppress the capacity of monocytes to produce cytokines, which directly inhibit bacterial growth [22, 31, 32]. Finally, alcohol consumption leads to inhibition of the antigen-specific T-cell activation so that the Th2 population (humoral immunity) dominates the Th1 population (cell-mediated immunity which is responsible for overcoming TB infection) [33, 34]. This shift disturbs a balance between the two basic types of immune system, compromising the immune defense that results in delayed smear conversion and protracted course of treatment thereby poor treatment outcome as a result of alcohol exposure [3537].

Similarly, the other reason for delayed smear conversion could be related to poor nutritional status, and the direct toxic effects of alcohol on the immune system and poorer adherence to anti-tuberculosis treatment [38, 39]. Also, alcoholism causes drug resistance by decreasing the immunity status and delay sputum smear conversion among DR-TB patients [40].

Though we conducted this study in different sites and across couples of years which will be mentioned as strength, there has been some limitation in our study. Since the study was based on secondary data, it was not possible to have data on the frequency and type of the alcohol that patients have drunk to further investigate the relationship with the smear conversion rate and the treatment outcome. Moreover, data regarding the radiographic characteristics which has important implication of the rate of smear conversion was not recorded. We however, triangulate the DR-TB registration book, the patients’ medical chart, and the computerized data record to extract the required data.

Conclusion

In our study, the median time of sputum smear conversion was with in the expected time frame of conversion. History of alcohol consumption was found to delay significantly the rate of sputum smear conversion.

Supporting information

S1 Data

(XLS)

Acknowledgments

It was our pleasure to acknowledge the University of Gondar Specialized hospital for giving permission to conduct this research. We do wish to extend our gratitude to supervisors and data collectors.

Abbreviations

DST

Drug Susceptibility Testing

MDR-TB

Multidrug-Resistant Tuberculosis

DR-TB

Drug-Resistant Tuberculosis

RR-TB

Rifampicin-Resistance Tuberculosis

TB

Tuberculosis

SLD

Second Line ant-TB Drugs

WHO

World Health Organization

MTB

Mycobacterium Tuberculosis

RIF

Rifampicin

LPA

Line Probe Assay

IQR

Interquartile range

Data Availability

All relevant data supporting this study are attached as Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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PONE-D-21-34232Alcohol drinking delays the rate of sputum smear conversion among DR-TB patients in northwest Ethiopia; A retrospective follow-up studyPLOS ONE

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Title

• Title is not clear. Title of the study should reflect the outcome variable, population and study area. But the title of this topic lacks the description of outcome variable, population and study area. It needs modifications?

• I believe the main reason to put title in this way is due to the finding of your study. Only one factor is significantly associated with outcome variable. If so, what was new with your findings. Even the median time is within the expected time, what is the significance of this study for the existing knowledge/literature?

• What mean by retrospective follow up study?

Abstract

• The background section of abstract lacks a gap ( a gap in literature, gap in outcome measurement, a gap population, a gap in methodology….)

• Include the aim of the study/objective at the last paragraph Background

Methods

• Add “s” on method

• I think the method section lacks very important components of writing method in abstract, please re-write it (add study area, participants, study area, sample size and sampling techniques)

Results: add “s” on result

Conclusion

• … expected time frame…what was the expected time frame?

• Add recommendation based on the findings of your study. If your finding lack recommendation, your finding lacks signific

Introduction

• Introduction part is very shallow, it is not detail, please add by considering different literatures that focus on this area. What is the magnitude of the problem, where is the gap, what is the significance of conducting this study? If your introduction is not well stated, there is no way to convince the reader for the presence of the problem.

• The second paragraph of introduction cited with one reference, please revise the paragraph

• The third and fourth paragraph of introduction lacks references????

• Overall the introduction part need major revisions

Methods

• What is retrospective follow study?

• Line 89 and 90 of method part is not clear, please re-phrase it.

• Why u used September 2010 as baseline for study period?

• Second paragraph requires a references

• Operational definition need references

• Please explain method of model building

Result

• Briefly write how 436 patients cards included in the final analysis

• Adverse drug effect- what are the lists of ADE

• Scanty, grade 1+, grade 2+, and grade 3+ need operational definition

• What was the proportion censored outcome (for each censored categories)

• What was the incidence rate of smear conversion and person time observation?

• The final table need revision

Discussion

In second paragraph of discussion you stated that socio-demographic and other factors are the reason for discrepancy. What are the socio-demographic and other factors that contribute for the differences and how they could contributes for observed discrepancy?

How sample size increase or decrease the median time to sputum conversion. This is an awkward statement. Or clearly put justification to convince the reader.

Overall, the discussion section is very shallow and it needs major modification. It seems a report of some preliminary data, not the study conducted with advanced statistics.

Conclusion and recommendation

• In our study, the median time of sputum smear conversion was with in the expected time frame of conversion…what means by expected time frame of conversion. If it is with expected time frame what is new with this study?

• Please add the recommendation based your findings

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Strength of this

Study could be like:

1.What special approach did you use to increase the quality this

paper?

2.What special characters or features or components did you

include in this study?

3. Since you used secondary data, what special measures did you

take to reduce the limitation associated with secondary data?

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Methods and Materials: Sounded, great

1. why you selected the study period between from September 2010 and December, 2017

2. Are you sure all data (i.e Baseline socio-demographic, behavioral, and clinical information can be accessed from medical record reviews? Since it is retrospective cohort study

Result: well narrated

Discussion: Well expressed, however, it will be good if you include the clinical implication of the finding

In conculsion: “In our study, the median time of sputum smear conversion was within the expected time frame of conversion” what is the parameter to concluded median time of sputum smear conversion was within the expected time frame?

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Rebuttal letter

PONE-D-21-34232

Alcohol drinking delays the rate of sputum smear conversion among DR-TB patients in northwest Ethiopia; A retrospective follow-up study

Mehari Woldemariam Merid

To PLOS ONE

Dear all,

We the authors of this manuscript are pleased to thank the journal editors and the reviewers for revising the manuscript and giving your valuable and constructive comments and suggestions that help to improve the manuscript. We have made a rigorous revision of the manuscript as per your questions and comments. We have included the point by point response in the table below framed as editors’ comment/question and authors’ response. We have made a severe revision on the entire manuscript that we believe had merit in improving the manuscript and attached it as tracked change and clean version separately. We are happy to receive additional revision if any that would have merit in improving the manuscript.

Editor comments Authors Response

Editors comment/suggestion

1. We noticed you have some minor occurrence of overlapping text with the following previous publication(s), which needs to be addressed:

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2796667/?tool=pmcentrez&renderty=

In your revision ensure you cite all your sources (including your own works), and quote or rephrase any duplicated text outside the methods section. Further consideration is dependent on these concerns being addressed Thank you for your feed back

As per your comment, we made detail revision on the overlapping text and we paraphrased the text. We also include citations for all the sources we used. This is noted in the tracked change file. Page 3

2. Please provide additional details regarding participant consent. In the ethics statement in the Methods and online submission information, please ensure that you have specified (1) whether consent was informed and (2) what type you obtained (for instance, written or verbal, and if verbal, how it was documented and witnessed). If your study included minors, state whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians. If the need for consent was waived by the ethics committee, please include this information.

If you are reporting a retrospective study of medical records or archived samples, please ensure that you have discussed whether all data were fully anonymized before you accessed them and/or whether the IRB or ethics committee waived the requirement for informed consent. If patients provided informed written consent to have data from their medical records used in research, please include this information. Thank you very much for your comment!

This study was solely based on the retrieval of data from the medical charts of DR-TB patients retrospectively (based on secondary data only). Since we used secondary data retrospectively, permission letter to access the data was obtained from each study institution as alternative to informed consent. Thus, informed consent was waived as we received the institutional support letter.

The patient’s data confidentiality was maintained by omitting direct and indirect potential identifiers from the data collection tool. Lines 162-170

3. We note that the grant information you provided in the ‘Funding Information’ and ‘Financial Disclosure’ sections do not match.

When you resubmit, please ensure that you provide the correct grant numbers for the awards you received for your study in the ‘Funding Information’ section. Thank you again

As clearly mentioned in the revised manuscript, this study has no any funding body.

4. We note that you have indicated that data from this study are available upon request. PLOS only allows data to be available upon request if there are legal or ethical restrictions on sharing data publicly. For more information on unacceptable data access restrictions, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-unacceptable-data-access-restrictions.

In your revised cover letter, please address the following prompts:

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We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide. Thank you very much for your feedback! And we apologies for the inconvenience.

Since there is no legal restrictions on sharing the data supporting the findings of the current study, we have uploaded the minimal anonymized data set as supporting information files.

5. Your ethics statement should only appear in the Methods section of your manuscript. If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please move it to the Methods section and delete it from any other section. Please ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics statement entered into the online submission form will not be published alongside your manuscript. Thank you again for your critique.

Initially, we were placed the ethics statement under the declaration section of the manuscript as per the submission guideline of PLOS One. Now, we moved it in the method section as per your recommendation. Lines 162-170

Reviewer 1

Questions/Comments Response

Title

1. Title is not clear. Title of the study should reflect the outcome variable, population and study area. But the title of this topic lacks the description of outcome variable, population and study area. It needs modifications? We really appreciate the reviewer’s insight.

We now made the appropriate modifications on the revised version of the manuscript

As it currently stands, “Alcohol drinking delays the rate of sputum smear conversion among DR-TB patients in northwest Ethiopia; A retrospective follow-up study”

We thought it possesses the information you raised.

Outcome variable- rate of sputum smear conversion

Population- among DR-TB patients

Study area- in northwest Ethiopia

The details are just included in the method section.

We can modify it as;

Time to sputum smear conversion and its predictors among DR-TB patients in northwest Ethiopia; A retrospective follow-up study”

2. I believe the main reason to put title in this way is due to the finding of your study. Only one factor is significantly associated with outcome variable. If so, what was new with your findings. Even the median time is within the expected time, what is the significance of this study for the existing knowledge/literature? Thank you very much again!

Perfect, we prefer to write the title based on the finding from the study, to make emphasis on factors affecting the rate of sputum smear conversion. Accordingly, alcohol drinking was the only factor found to statistically determine the outcome variable.

As `a researcher, one may not anticipate the finding in favor of his/her wishes. We did the research and it was fortunate that the median time of smear conversion was with in the expected time of conversion as per the protocol (with in two month of treatment commencement). And among the factors considered, only one (alcohol drinking) was remained significant predictors after controlling the confounder variables.

3. What mean by retrospective follow up study? Thank you again!

A retrospective follow up study meant to refer that an event (smear conversion in this study) has been occurred and recorded after being followed for certain period of time historically. The patients have been followed for different time period till smear conversion staring from the time of treatment commencement.

Abstract

1. The background section of abstract lacks a gap ( a gap in literature, gap in outcome measurement, a gap population, a gap in methodology….)

Thank you for the issue you raised!

Although evidences regarding the factors affecting the sputum smear conversion are available on drug susceptible TB patients, there is dearth of literature about smear conversion and its predictors among DR-TB patients in the study setting. Lines 28-30

2. Include the aim of the study/objective at the last paragraph Background Thank you for the comment

We have included the aim of the study as per your recommendation;

This study has therefore aimed at estimating the median time of sputum smear conversion and to determine its predictors. Lines 32-33

Methods

1. Add “s” on method

Thank you again

“s” is added

2. I think the method section lacks very important components of writing method in abstract, please re-write it (add study area, participants, study area, sample size and sampling techniques) Thank you again for the comment.

As per your comment, we have modified it as follows;

This was a retrospective follow-up study conducted among DR-TB patients registered for second-line anti-TB treatment in the four hospitals of Amhara regional state, Northwest Ethiopia. Of all patients enrolled to DR-TB treatment in the study setting from 2010 to 2017, 436 patients have been include for this study who fulfilled the eligibility criteria.

Results:

1. add “s” on result Thank you!

Corrected

Conclusion

1. … expected time frame…what was the expected time frame? Thank you again!

The expected time of conversion was to mean receiving smear negative result within two months of treatment commencement as per the protocol

2. Add recommendation based on the findings of your study. If your finding lack recommendation, your finding lacks significance Thank you for the comment

DR-TB patients are strongly advised to avoid alcohol consumption.

Introduction

1. Introduction part is very shallow, it is not detail, please add by considering different literatures that focus on this area. What is the magnitude of the problem, where is the gap, what is the significance of conducting this study? If your introduction is not well stated, there is no way to convince the reader for the presence of the problem.

Thank you dear reviewer.

The introduction part is currently updated as per your recommendation in the revised manuscript. Page 3-4.

The significance of the study is also written as;

Patients with non-conversion or prolonged time to sputum smear conversion may require close monitoring, longer hospitalization and protracted intensive treatment which results in unfavorable treatment outcomes (12-15) . From the public health point of view, reducing the time to sputum smear conversion is an important infection control measure (16). Hence, shortening the time to sputum conversion is desirable to reduce the likelihood of mycobacterial transmission. Moreover, sputum smear conversion is often used by clinicians to determine the duration of treatment for drug resistant tuberculosis patients.

2. The second paragraph of introduction cited with one reference, please revise the paragraph Thank you again

The reverence is changed.

3. The third and fourth paragraph of introduction lacks references???? Thank you again dear reviewer

Now, we have included citation in the revised manuscript.

4. Overall the introduction part need major revisions Thank you

We made a severe revision of the introduction section as per your recommendation.

Methods

1. What is retrospective follow study?

Thank you dear reviewer

By retrospective follow-up study, we used it to refer the historical nature of the study where we included patients who have been enrolled to treatment couples of years ago (2010 to 2017).

2. Line 89 and 90 of method part is not clear, please re-phrase it. Thank you dear reviewer

There was an error of text duplication. It is now removed/corrected.

3.Why u used September 2010 as baseline for study period? Thank you dear reviewer

September 2010 was the starting time for DR-TB treatment in most hospitals of the region (study setting). We therefore prefer to include all patients since the treatment commencement date.

4. Operational definition need references Thank you dear reviewer

We added references for the reaming terms operationally defined in the revised manuscript.

5. Please explain method of model building Thank you dear reviewer

We have just tested the assumption for proportional hazard and was found to satisfy for the data and we fitted the Cox proportional hazard model. We then fitted the model with the variables we have after which a variable having 0.2 p-values in the bi-variable analysis was considered for the multi-variable analysis.

Result

1. Briefly write how 436 patients cards included in the final analysis

Thank you dear reviewer

This has been clearly explained by the diagram presented in figure 1.

2. Adverse drug effect- what are the lists of ADE Thank you dear reviewer for your valuable comment

In our study, we have included major adverse drug events among DR-TB patients including the following; Acute kidney injury, electrolyte disturbance such as Hypokalemia, Hepatotoxicity, acute psychosis and major gastro-intestinal problems that require treatment.

3. Scanty, grade 1+, grade 2+, and grade 3+ need operational definition Thank you dear reviewer

We have now operationally defined sputum smear grading as follows:

Sputum smear was graded as scanty, 1+, 2+, and 3+. Scanty is when the sputum contains 1-9 AFB in 100 fields, grade 1+ for 10-99 AFB in 100 fields, grade 2+ if 1-10 AFB per field (check 50 fields), and grade 3+ for more than 10 AFB per field (check 20 fields), respectively (19). Lines 141-144

4. What was the proportion censored outcome (for each censored categories) Thank you dear reviewer for the comment

As per your comment we now included the proportion in the revised manuscript.

5. What was the incidence rate of smear conversion and person time observation? Thank you dear reviewer

The objective of this study was to estimate the median time of smear conversion and determine the predictors. We, however, added the incidence rate of smear conversion in the revised manuscript as follows;

The overall incidence rate of sputum smear conversion was 1.93 per 100 Person-Month (PM) (95% CI: 1.69, 2.22) with 11787 total observations.

6. The final table need revision Thank you dear reviewer

As per, your recommendation, the table is update in the revised manuscript. Pages 9-11 table 3

Discussion

1. In second paragraph of discussion you stated that socio-demographic and other factors are the reason for discrepancy. What are the socio-demographic and other factors that contribute for the differences and how they could contributes for observed discrepancy?

How sample size increase or decrease the median time to sputum conversion. This is an awkward statement. Or clearly put justification to convince the reader.

Overall, the discussion section is very shallow and it needs major modification. It seems a report of some preliminary data, not the study conducted with advanced statistics.

Conclusion and recommendation

• In our study, the median time of sputum smear conversion was with in the expected time frame of conversion…what means by expected time frame of conversion. If it is with expected time frame what is new with this study?

• Please add the recommendation based your findings Thank you dear reviewer

As per your valuable comment, we have made a detail revision on the discussion section and improved it in the revised manuscript.

Some of the modifications are as follows.

………For instance, one of the studies cited above was a longitudinal study conducted from 2010 to 2012 in which it was relatively earlier than our study. Due to the time gap, there could be numerous transitions in the educational status of the population, people might have more access to the health care and more awareness about the importance of adhering to the treatment thereby they will have short time of smear conversion.

…….One of the possible reason for such discrepancy could be that some of the hospitals included in this study had no facility for culture testing during the earlier years of service provision so that they collect and send sputum to the regional health bureau and to other hospitals. This, in turn, might result in delayed reporting or sometimes missing of the result might have occurred thereby longer smear conversion date might be reported.

Page….

As `a researcher, one may not anticipate the finding in favor of his/her wishes. We did the research and it was fortunate that the median time of smear conversion was with in the expected time of conversion as per the protocol (with in two month of treatment commencement).

Reviewer 2

1. Strength of this

Study could be like:

1.What special approach did you use to increase the quality this

paper?

2.What special characters or features or components did you

include in this study?

3. Since you used secondary data, what special measures did you

take to reduce the limitation associated with secondary data?

If you have relevant answer to these or similar questions you can

mention as strength of this study Thank you very much for commending our work!

We have made our maximum effort to extract data by integrating the patients’ unique DR-TB number with the computerized data base so as not to miss the data not registered in the medical charts. We just triangulate the DR-TB registration book, the patients’ medical chart, and the computerized data record to extract the required data.

2. Methods and Materials: Sounded, great

1. why you selected the study period between from September 2010 and December, 2017

2. Are you sure all data (i.e Baseline socio-demographic, behavioral, and clinical information can be accessed from medical record reviews? Since it is retrospective cohort study Thank you very much for your valuable comment.

Most of the DR-TB treatment initiating centers started enrolling patients since 2010 in the region. Hence, to ensure representativeness and obtain adequate sample, we prefer to study from 2010 to 2017. Some variables were not recorded in the medical charts. For those variables, we tried to search from the DR-TB registration and computerized data base.

3. Result: well narrated

Discussion: Well expressed, however, it will be good if you include the clinical implication of the finding

In conculsion: “In our study, the median time of sputum smear conversion was within the expected time frame of conversion” what is the parameter to concluded median time of sputum smear conversion was within the expected time frame? Thank you again for your valuable comment.

The expected time of conversion was to mean receiving smear negative result within two months of treatment commencement as per the protocol

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18 Feb 2022

Alcohol drinking delays the rate of sputum smear conversion among DR-TB patients in northwest Ethiopia; A retrospective follow-up study

PONE-D-21-34232R1

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PONE-D-21-34232R1

Alcohol drinking delays the rate of sputum smear conversion among DR-TB patients in northwest Ethiopia; A retrospective follow-up study

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