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. 2022 Mar 14;17(3):e0265038. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0265038

Health inequalities in post-conflict settings: A systematic review

Dieudonne Bwirire 1,*, Rik Crutzen 1, Edmond Ntabe Namegabe 2, Rianne Letschert 3, Nanne de Vries 1
Editor: Jakob Pietschnig4
PMCID: PMC8920275  PMID: 35286351

Abstract

Conflict can be a primary driver of health inequalities, but its impact on the distribution of social determinants of health is not very well documented. Also, there is limited evidence on the most suitable approaches aiming at addressing health inequalities in post-conflict settings. Thus, we undertook a systematic review of the literature concerning the current knowledge and knowledge gaps about structural determinants of health inequalities and assessed the effects of approaches aimed at addressing health inequalities in post-conflict settings. We performed a systematic search in bibliographic databases such as Web of Science, PubMed, and PsycINFO for relevant publications, as well as institutional websites that are relevant to this topic. The search was initiated in March 2018 and ultimately updated in December 2020. No time or geographical restrictions were applied. The quality of each study included in this review was independently assessed using criteria developed by CASP to assess all study types. Sixty-two articles were deemed eligible for analysis. The key findings were captured by the most vulnerable population groups, including the civilian population, women, children, internally displaced persons (IDPs), and people with symptoms of mental illness. A considerable range of approaches has been used to address health inequalities in post-conflict settings. These approaches include those used to address structural determinants of health inequalities which are accountable for the association between poverty, education, and health inequalities, the association between human rights and health inequalities, and the association between health inequalities and healthcare utilization patterns. However, these approaches may not be the most applicable in this environment. Given the multifactorial characteristics of health inequalities, it is important to work with the beneficiaries in developing a multi-sector approach and a strategy targeting long-term impacts by decision-makers at various levels. When addressing health inequalities in post-conflict settings, it may be best to combine approaches at different stages of the recovery process.

Introduction

Promoting health and well-being for all is essential to sustainable development. In recent years, notable progress has been made in this regard, but significant challenges remain as health inequalities persist within and among countries [1]. For instance, it has been reported that in Low and Middle-Income Countries (LMIC), the coverage of reproductive and maternal health services is lower among socioeconomically disadvantaged sub-groups. The proportion of births attended by skilled health care personnel differed (by up to 80%) between the richest and poorest sub-groups within 83 study countries, and the use of modern contraception was at least twice as high among women with secondary schooling or higher than among women with no education in almost half of 71 study countries varying in national socio-economic status [2]. Conflict adversely impacts health and health systems, deteriorating structural and social determinants of health, including economic, social, cultural, environmental, and political systems [3].

Very few empirical studies have measured health equity in conflict-affected settings, but those have suggested that conflict has a significant impact [4]. Most importantly, there is limited evidence on appropriate approaches for health equity in such environments. To accomplish equity, the prerequisite is first to ascertain the presence of inequality so that targeted interventions can be planned, implemented, and monitored to determine the progress [5]. This systematic review aims to collate the current knowledge and identify knowledge gaps about structural determinants of health inequalities within post-conflict settings and assess the effects of approaches aimed at addressing structural determinants of health inequalities in this environment. It contributes to the body of knowledge on structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings which is also the main outcome of this study.

The social determinants of health in conflict settings reflect and further reinforce these inequalities and the vulnerability of those who are disadvantaged because of poverty, marginalization, and discrimination [6]. Three social determinants are specifically important in conflict settings: (i) the loss of human rights, which can be seen as the first and most important social determinant in a conflict situation; (ii) breaches of medical neutrality, in violation of the Geneva Convention, Article 18; and (iii) progression from stress to distress and disease that results from constant, unremitting exposure to a life-threatening situation [7]. Through its pervasive harmful effects on children, armed conflict is a negative social determinant of child health [8]. Nevertheless, the social determinants affecting children in crisis settings are the same as those affecting children in Low and Middle-Income Countries: (i) poor environment: lack of safe water and sanitation, low-quality housing; (ii) poor nutrition; and (iii) lack of access to health services [7].

There is evidence that conflict can be a primary driver of health inequalities [9]. Specifically, socio-economic status (as measured by education, income or occupation) is a key determinant of health. But, there are other more important determinants of health which are specific to the post-conflict environment [10], such as: 1) differential exposure—which may vary (by type, amount, and duration) between social groups 2) differential vulnerability—even when a given risk factor is distributed evenly across social groups, its impact on health may be unevenly distributed due to underlying differences between social groups in their vulnerability or susceptibility to that factor and 3) differential consequences—the impact of a certain health event differs depending on an individual’s or family’s socio-economic circumstances or health. Furthermore, life expectancy and mortality trends are familiar ways of measuring health status and monitoring health inequalities. Countries without basic data on mortality (including post-conflict countries), by socioeconomic indicators might have difficulties progressing their health equity agenda. The example of the DRC illustrates the links between conflict and regional inequalities in mortality. It indicates that mortality rate was higher in unstable eastern provinces compared to stable provinces, and suggest that life expectancy was lower in more deprived areas.

Through a series of mortality surveys conducted between 2000 and 2004, the International Rescue Committee (IRC) has documented the humanitarian impact of war and conflict in the DRC. These studies estimated that 3.9 million people had died since 1998, arguably making the DRC’s conflict the world’s deadliest crisis since World War II. Less than 10 percent of all deaths were due to violence, with most deaths attributed to easily preventable and treatable health conditions (indirectly caused by conflict—and resulting in inequitable health) such as malaria, diarrhea, respiratory infections, and malnutrition [11]. Furthermore, deaths are often used as the primary indicator for the effect that conflict has on civilians; indeed, the number of these deaths declined in the DRC following an increase in security [1214].

Key concepts

To study health inequalities, it is of importance to clarify the following concepts: social determinants versus structural determinants of health; inequalities versus inequities in health; conflict versus post-conflict settings, effects of conflict on health equity, and right to health. Without clearly understanding those key concepts, no one can develop effective policies for health equity in this environment. This paper helps to define those key concepts that are needed to better understand health inequalities in post-conflict settings, such as:

Social determinants versus Structural determinants of health

Because the concept of ‘social determinants’ refers simultaneously to both the determinants of health and the determinants of inequalities in health, we will expand our review of social determinants of health to include the terms ‘‘structural determinants of health” as we assess the literature on this topic. In this article, the term "structural determinants of health inequalities" refers specifically to the interplay between the socio-economic-political context, structural mechanisms generating social stratification, and the resulting socio-economic position of individuals. These mechanisms configure social groups’ health opportunities based on their placement within hierarchies of power, prestige, and access to resources [15]. We hypothesize that structural determinants affect the distribution of resources and have the potential to influence health inequalities.

Health inequalities versus health inequities

Health inequalities and health inequities have often been used interchangeably in academic and policy literature. For this paper, health inequalities refer to differences in the distribution of a specific factor (such as health status, income, opportunities) between different population groups, while health inequities, on the other hand, are inequalities in which the outcome is unnecessary and avoidable, as well as unjust and unfair [16]. Following clarification of their meanings and underlying values, we will now use both terms interchangeably throughout this paper.

Conflict versus post-conflict settings

There is no consensus in the literature about the definition of post-conflict settings. From a global perspective, post-conflict has been defined as the aftermath of a situation that poses challenges severe enough to threaten the continued existence of an established political, economic, and social system. Post-conflict rarely means that violence and strife have ceased at a given moment in all corners of a country’s territory [17]. For this systematic review, post-conflict countries have been defined as having four characteristics: (i) the signing of a formal peace agreement; (ii) a process of political transition by-elections, military or civilian coups; (iii) increased levels of security; and (iv) a perception among national and international actors that there is an opportunity for peace and recovery [18]. Importantly, not all of these characteristics must be present simultaneously. Post-conflict countries can be volatile. Some countries, such as Angola, Liberia, and the Democratic Republic of Congo (DRC), repeatedly cycle between peace and war [18]. As regards the term ‘conflict-affected’: we use this term because, obviously, the interest in post-conflict areas arises from the very fact that the conflict-affected the health situation of the population.

Right to health

Good health and well-being are considered human rights. Often, the right to health is associated with access to health care and the construction of health infrastructures. However, the right to health extends further; it should set the conditions for a right to health care systems, facilities, services, and goods (including the underlying determinants of health), which should be sufficiently available, physically and economically accessible, acceptable, and of good quality [19]. In recent years, increasing attention has been paid to good health and well-being by human rights treaty monitoring bodies included in various international instruments adopted under the auspices of the United Nations [20,21] or the World Health Organization [22]. Also, in the more recently acclaimed Sustainable Development Agenda, ambitions relating to health and well-being have been included, aiming to offer a new chance to ensure that everyone can access the highest health and health care standards, not just the wealthiest [1]. Nevertheless, failings and shortcomings affecting proper healthcare caused by, among others, armed conflict, widespread crime, persecution, corruption are daily realities. In contrast, several countries have emerged from war and made steady gains on the road to reconstruction, peacebuilding, and development, which led to reduced inequalities, vulnerability, and exclusion [22,23].

Effects of conflict on health equity

Many studies have investigated the effects of conflict and its aftermath on health and health systems [2428]. In general, it has been established that conflict harms health indicators [7,29]. However, the effect of conflict on health equity and the distribution of social determinants of health is not well documented. Also, the extent to which the most vulnerable population sub-groups experience health inequalities in post-conflict settings has not been systematically studied. Using existing literature, this paper addresses this gap.

Materials and methods

This systematic review was conducted according to internationally accepted guidelines; we adhered to the Preferred Reporting Items for Systematic Reviews and Meta-Analysis statement (S1 Checklist. PRISMA) [30] and the PRISMA extension-checklist (PRISMA-E, which enabled an equity-focused systematic review) [31].

The outcome of interest was structural health inequalities and the population of interest consisted of the most vulnerable population groups [32,33] living in post-conflict areas such as the civilian population, women, children, IDPs, and people with symptoms of mental illness—as these are generally affected the most. The majority of the study population sub-groups was identified beforehand. In particular, we would not feel comfortable discussing the most vulnerable sub-groups in this environment without giving proper attention to women. The reasons for this are multifold: 1) traditional networks that form the foundation of women’s social and family roles may be disrupted during the conflict, 2) women may also leave their communities and husbands for other partners to guarantee a source of food for themselves and their families, and 3) women have to assume the role of the primary breadwinners and caretakers of their families—putting them more at risk [34,35]–for instance, the employment opportunities they could fall back on would be low-paying jobs because they may not meet the educational requirements for a better paying job [36].

While applying a stepwise data extraction approach, we found an additional sub-group of interest which consisted of the civilian population and added this afterward to the final sub-group selection. By civilian population, we mean people who are not active members of the security forces of the state, or members of an organized armed militia or opposition group. Government officials (e.g., members of parliament, governors, and councilors) are also excluded as they are instead seen as representatives of the government of a state. This sub-group is made up of individual civilians who do not belong to any of the various sub-groups that are typically recognized as being most vulnerable to inequalities in health.

Search strategy

The search of the literature was initiated in March 2018 and ultimately updated in December 2020. The search strategy was comprehensive to allow for a wide variety of study designs and interpretations of structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict environments to be included.

We used the PROGRESS-Plus as an organizing framework to assess the structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings. Using PROGRESS-Plus enables the inclusion of a range of factors and circumvents reliance on any single measure to assess inequities, as this is insufficient. The PROGRESS-Plus acronym stands for: Place of residence, Race/ethnicity/culture/language, Occupation, Gender/Sex, Religion, Education, Socio-economic status, and Social capital [37], the factors identified by WHO as relevant stratifiers that can be used to define social groups [38].

We searched the following bibliographic databases: Web of Science (S3 File), PubMed, and PsycINFO for relevant publications, as well as institutional websites that are relevant to this topic, including those of the World Health Organisation, the Health and Fragile States Network, Evidence aid and the 3i.e (International Initiative for Impact Evaluations) database of systematic reviews. References from included studies were checked to identify other relevant studies. Within the bibliographic databases, we searched for published and unpublished articles and abstracts using three sets of key concepts i.e., post-war, inequality, and health [39], in combination with any of the above-mentioned PROGRESS-Plus factors. Depending on each database’s specifications and to increase the sensitivity to retrieve information, MeSH (Medical Subject Headings) and non-MeSH keywords were used as appropriate. No time or geographical restrictions were applied.

The grey literature was collected from various relevant conferences on this topic (e.g., the Post-Conflict Transitions symposium organized by the World Bank). Lastly, we screened relevant public health journals (e.g., Bulletin of the World Health Organisation; PubMed indexed public health journals, etc.). Given a large number of potentially relevant grey literature on the topic, only peer-reviewed reports were included. We finally contacted experts for advice (e.g., the plan to use PRISMA standard in combination with PRISMA-E was discussed with the editor in chief of the Campbell Collaboration Library).

Study selection

The first author and an information specialist from Maastricht University independently screened the titles and abstracts of all references retrieved by the search strategy to exclude irrelevant results. Potentially relevant studies about structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings were primarily assessed and reviewed for eligibility based on specified study characteristics. Publications had to meet the following initial criteria: a) post-conflict environment was explicitly described as study setting; b) the most vulnerable sub-groups were considered as study participants, c) assessing and addressing the structural determinants of health inequalities were seen as interventions, d) qualitative or quantitative (or mixed methods) studies were used. To be included in the final review, publications had to meet the following eligibility criteria (S1 File): (i) contain at least one of the three key concepts (post-war, inequality, and health) (S2 File); (ii) include at least one PROGRESS-Plus acronym of interest and, (iii) have all of the above-described study characteristics (a to d). Studies about structural determinants of health inequalities in contexts other than post-conflict environments were excluded (e.g., natural disasters/post-tsunami, terror victims, intimate partner violence). Abstract-only studies, conference abstracts, studies about ongoing conflict settings, and studies on serving or former military personnel were excluded. All other reasons for exclusion have been documented in a PRISMA chart, and available in supporting information (S1 Fig).

The PRISMA flow diagram represents the search strategy and the study selection process. From the initial search in different bibliographic databases, a total of 4,742 potentially relevant studies were identified; 1,743 studies were duplicates and therefore removed. For the remaining 2,999 studies, 1,773 were excluded based on title screening. Of the remaining 1,226 studies, 886 studies were excluded based on abstracts.

After removing duplicates and screening the titles and abstracts, 340 full-text papers were retrieved and read. Of these, 284 studies were excluded, based on diverse reasons specified in the PRISMA flow diagram [S1 Fig], and 55 articles were selected and included in the final review. The above searches were supplemented with a systematic search of the International Initiative for Impact Evaluations (3i.e) database of systematic reviews. We identified 107 potentially relevant studies from which 7 articles were included in the final review.

As shown in S1 Fig, 62 publications about structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings were identified and included in this review. All retrieved articles were checked for inclusion and exclusion criteria by two reviewers (DB, GF).

Data extraction and analysis

All identified indexed records concerning this topic were downloaded into EndNote software by the first author and cross-checked by a second reviewer. Discrepancies and disagreements were discussed. A third reviewer mediated when consensus could not be reached.

A stepwise approach for data extraction was adopted as follows: i) filtering by the title and abstracts for relevance, followed by ii) full-text retrieval and review of all potentially relevant publications by a single reviewer (DB) to determine their eligibility for inclusion in this review iii) reference lists of included articles were manually screened to identify additional studies that our strategy could have missed. We also applied the same approach to the grey literature (S1 Fig).

Based on the study objectives, a predesigned data extraction sheet (S1 Table) was used for retrieving information from the selected studies, including author details, topic, study setting, and population, the phenomenon of interest, study design, type of health inequalities studied, evaluation (study outcomes), research type, study results, and study quality. Segments of text describing approaches/interventions to reduce health inequality within the most vulnerable sub-groups were also extracted.

We analyzed relevant information from included papers and synthesized this using different steps, including i) the textual description of the study, which is the process of identification of key findings from each included primary study; ii) the grouping and clustering by organizing the key findings from individual studies into themes and iii) the content analysis for translating data was thoughtfully applied resulting in the generation of analytical themes.

Data was described, analyzed, criticized, summarized by the most vulnerable sub-groups, and reported as part of the evidence in this systematic review.

Due to the heterogeneity of study settings, populations, and interventions (aiming to reduce health inequalities in post-conflict areas) captured in the included publications, it was impossible to conduct a meta-analysis.

Quality assessment

The quality of the included studies was assessed using the adapted critical appraisal skills program (CASP) checklist developed for systematic reviews [40], consisting of 10 questions that can be answered with "Yes," ‘‘No,” and ‘‘Can’t tell” about the methodological and reporting issues. This original checklist was designed to be used as an educational pedagogic tool, thus does not suggest a scoring system. Therefore, included studies were assigned an overall score of ‘high’, ‘medium’ or ‘low’ based on methodological quality rating of included papers- a summary is presented in S4 Table. Additionally, we assessed the quality of the studies using different areas such as the research question, study design, data collection methods, data analysis, study findings, and ethics [41,42]. Quality was not used as an exclusion criterion.

Results and discussion

All included articles were published in English. Most of these were published from 2002 onwards, with at least more than one article published each year. On average, 5 articles were published each year in 2008, 2012, 2014, and 2019 (S2 Table). There were peaks in publications in 2013 (10) and 2015 (9).

Among the included publications, 24 were quantitative studies, 22 were qualitative, and 16 were mixed methods design. Of the total of 62 publications included in our final review, 57 studies were conducted in post-conflict settings. There were 6 studies in which the setting was not always clearly defined.

The majority of the studies were based on data collected in sub-Saharan Africa (27/62 total publications; 43%), followed by South Asia (7/62 total publications; 11%)–suggesting that most conflicts have occurred in both geographic regions in the past decade, and the Middle East (6/62 total publications; 9%), and North Africa region (6/62 total publications; 9%). Small numbers of papers emanated from three regions, including Asia Pacific, South America, and Europe—an indicator that recent peace agreements have been reached in these regions. Only one study collected data in the Russia and Eurasia region.

Publications identified by our search varied with regards to population, context, design, outcome measures, or whether the primary study focus was on health, inequality, post-war, or any PROGRESS-Plus factor of interest, making comparisons difficult. To capture this significant heterogeneity, a narrative synthesis approach was adopted.

The methodological quality of each study included in this review was independently assessed using customized criteria developed by CASP to assess all study types. The quality of the studies ranged from high-quality [4358], medium-quality [5995], and low-quality [96103].

Key findings regarding current knowledge and knowledge gaps about structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings are presented by the most vulnerable population sub-groups, including (i) the civilian population, (ii) women, (iii) children, (iv) IDPs, and (v) the people with symptoms of mental illness. Additionally, key approaches aimed at addressing health inequalities in this setting are presented.

Structural determinants of health inequalities by the most vulnerable population sub-groups:

Civilian population

The social determinants of health such as infrastructure, poverty, housing, education, and discrimination affect the context in which people are born, grow, live, work, and age and their influence on health [58]; they are major contributors to inequalities in health [104]. We found thirty studies [43,4547,49,51,5560,63,66,67,70,71,74,76,80,83,86,89,90,93,94,97,100,101,103] examining the multiple interrelated and complex social determinants of health in conflict and post-conflict environments. Most of these studies [45,46,51,5658,67,89,93,97,100,103] report an association between poverty, education, and health inequality. For instance, Bisogno and Chong [45] identified that the higher the level of education attained, the higher the earnings.

Within the healthcare setting, education may also be linked to self-efficacy. For example, discussing care options with the healthcare provider and insisting on receiving adequate care [89], suggesting that the higher the level of patient’s education, the greater confidence will be expressed, a finding that is consistent with the literature on the subject [105]. Similarly, a cross-sectional survey examining the factors contributing to the resilience of women in the aftermath of Peruvian demonstrated that low levels of education were all associated with lower resilience [88].

Twelve studies [47,49,55,63,80,83,86,90,93,100,101,103] report on healthcare utilization patterns and how a well-functioning and equitable health system can promote health equity in post-conflict. In particular, one cross-sectional study examining health care utilization patterns for mental, behavioral, and emotional problems in Georgia [47], reported that only just over a third of those with a current mental disorder sought any assistance from health services. Despite meeting the criteria for a current mental health disorder, the other persons did not use health services quite simply because they did not report the presence of mental health problems. This suggests that the demand for facility-based services may decrease in environments where there has been political instability regardless of their availability; thus rebuilding trust in the health system may be as important as rebuilding facilities and improving which services are available [90].

Two studies [49,76] describe the presence of an accountability mechanism and community participation as significant program facilitators. The first study assessed community scorecards feasibility in a post-conflict context through the joint engagement of service providers and community members in the design of patient-centered services. It concluded that joint interface meetings facilitated transparent dialogue between the community and service providers resulting in creative and participatory problem-solving mechanisms and mobilization of resources. The second study examined the accountability mechanisms in a community-driven reconstruction program and found that accountability was translated into informal and oral, rather than formal and written, mechanisms. The findings suggest that an adaptation to the local context enhances the working of accountability but restricts its possible impact as it becomes part of local power dynamics in the process.

Need is the primary determinant of healthcare utilization. In post-conflict settings, health services should be available to users in proportion to need rather than social status, and financing for health services should require proportionately fewer contributions from those with the lowest incomes [53]. Furthermore, healthcare utilization is determined by the need for care, by whether people know that they need care, by whether they trust and want to obtain care, and by whether care can be accessed. Other factors (e.g., poverty, geographic area of residence, sex, age, and language) are also important [106]. More evidence on the instrumental role that health systems can play in reducing inequities is available from countries at peace where integrated health systems approaches have been shown to reduce disparities in access to care and improve financial protection from catastrophic health care costs for the poor [107110].

Women

It is widely recognized that armed conflict has a particularly negative impact on women’s lives [111,112]. They suffer disproportionate effects during and after the war, such as inaccessibility of health and education services and sexual violence [113]. As such, “Gender affects exposure to situations which have an impact on health, dictates who has access to health care services and influences its planning and provision [114]—Pg.2”. We found ten studies [52,61,68,69,73,84,88,92,95,99] explicitly reporting on women. Ultimately, there is some available evidence on the links between social determinants of women’s health and health inequalities in post-conflict settings. For example, Hynes [99] point out how women are harmed by war-related disintegration of health, education, and social services and by the loss of essential environmental assets, such as potable water, sanitation, land, and food.

A study investigating whether differences in women’s rights or gender inequalities were associated with stroke mortality at the country-level confirmed a consistent association between women’s rights inequalities and worse health outcomes [73]. The result indicates that gender inequality status is associated with women’s stroke outcomes.

Two studies [61,68] examined gender justice in post-conflict areas. The first study shows that underlying power inequalities and gender ideologies continue to act against changes in gender relations. The findings suggest a link between men’s rigid adherence to gender roles and expectations and the incidence of sexual and gender-based violence. The other study suggests if gender justice is to be improved, it is necessary to place women, their experiences, and their opinions at the center of thinking about transitional justice mechanisms.

Another study assessing inequalities in access to reproductive and maternal health services in Colombia shows that failure to provide these services to females undermines the goal of universal health coverage [84]. This finding suggests a pattern of marginal exclusion and cumulative patterns of inequality in the reproductive and maternal health care service provided to females affected by armed conflict. Elsewhere in Timor-Leste, factors associated with the non-utilization of health services for childbirth in post-conflict were investigated [52]. The authors found that women residing in rural areas were almost three times more likely not to utilize a health facility for childbirth than their urban counterparts. The authors cite as a possible explanation that women living in urban areas have better transportation, economic status, and access to hospital and health services, which enhance their opportunity for facility delivery.

Although a substantial amount of literature has been published on the provision of Sexual and Reproductive Health (SRH) services in post-conflict settings, there is a lot we do not know yet about how to address the problem. To illustrate, a recent systematic review of monitoring and evaluation indicators for SRH demonstrates that rigorous reporting on a core list of indicators is a prerequisite for identifying the changes that a country wants to see concerning SRH and the investments required to save lives [115].

Women and men have different exposures to situations that affect their health and access to health care, they also have differential power to influence decisions regarding the provision of health services. Moreover, women and men have different needs, including unequal access to and control over power, resources, human rights, institutions, and the justice system. According to Sorenson [116], health care and other social facilities remain inadequate for women’s health in the post-conflict period. As such, they face new challenges (e.g. their traditional roles and relationship) and inherit additional responsibilities. The social transformation occurring in the post-conflict context opens up opportunities that should not be missed for women.

Significant differences in sociodemographic and lifestyle characteristics between men and women were documented in northern Uganda in a cross-sectional community survey. The authors found that more women were divorced and widowed than men; underweight was higher among men than women, with elderly and young men being more likely to be underweight [86]. Further studies [117,118] report the same trends, with underweight being more prevalent among men and overweight more prevalent among women. These findings highlight the importance of continuous health and nutritional assessments of all population groups that reflect local social determinants and family structures.

Children

Seven studies [48,62,64,78,95,96,102] explored current knowledge and knowledge gaps of social determinants of health and health inequality in children in post-conflict zones. Two studies [48,62] show how children’s well-being was impacted by the scarcity of resources. This included the shortage of electricity, shortage of clean drinking water, disturbed community life, and unsafe streets and playgrounds in the first study. In the second study, the scarcity of resources was characterized by the chronic lack of specialized facilities to address the complex issue of severe malnutrition.

Two other studies [78,96] describe the post-war educational system. The first study discusses post-war education and gender equity in Sierra Leone [78], it shows that post-war educational reconstruction is unlikely to rectify gender inequities that remain well established within mainstream schooling and in the broader social context. The authors argue that the capacity of education to contribute to gender-based change has not been entirely muted. The second study examines the link between schooling, conflict, and gender differentials in these links [96]. The results indicate that boys’ schooling was more negatively affected than that of girls because boys are withdrawn by their families to contribute to the household income or because they are drafted into (armed) serving in the conflict.

In a study of the effects of the conflict on mortality both in utero and during the first year of life in the DRC, Dagnelie and colleagues [64] show that in utero exposure to conflict negatively affects the number of males (by a reduction of the number of male fetuses) reaching birth. The authors show that conflict exposure increases infant mortality specifically among girls. Possible explanations for such an outcome are in utero biological factors. In another study discussing why achieving gender equality is of fundamental importance to improve the health and well-being of future generations, Roseboom [95] notes that prenatal exposure to violence has been associated with long-term effects on children’s health, especially on brain structure and neural function, that can still be detected many years later. A case study examining the role that young boys and girls assume in negotiating household poverty and enhancing their livelihood opportunities in small-scale mining communities from rural sub-Saharan Africa [102] reveals that the implications of their involvement are often complex than international children’s rights advocates understand them to be suggesting that Western notions of “progress” and development often do not match up with the complex realities or competing visions of local people.

Little is known about how the circumstances of a post-conflict setting could affect the health status of children. A recent systematic review of the effects of armed conflict on child health and development [8] shows some gaps in the medium and long-term effects. The authors report limited data on child health and further supports the need for research on how conflict and structural inequalities affect children and subsequent generations. According to the Human Security Centre, child mortality is high in post-conflict countries due to food insecurity leading to malnutrition and the disruption of the water supply and sanitation [119]. This suggests that children are more vulnerable during and after conflicts, as a consequence of a quick transition from conflict to post-conflict in these environments.

Internally displaced persons (IDPs)

Most of the time, IDPs are unable to meet their basic needs. They have specific burdens over belonging, housing, occupation, welfare, security, and loss of communities.

Eight studies [44,65,72,75,81,82,85,120] involving IDPs were identified, they collate some evidence of knowledge and gaps about social determinants of health of persons who have been forced to leave their homes due to armed conflict but remained within the borders of their countries. The majority of these studies [65,72,75,81,82] have reported a link between IDPs and poor health outcomes. Specifically, three studies [65,72,81] have reported a long-term effect of conflict on IDP’s health and health care provision. The first study in Bosnia-Herzegovina claims that IDPs remain a forgotten and vulnerable sub-group long after the conflict has ceased and illustrates how the provision and utilization of healthcare services can alleviate some of this vulnerability [72]. The second study investigated the long-term health impacts of internal displacement [65], this study indicated that the IDPs are more likely to report poor self-rated health (SRH) than non-IDPs, suggesting that internally displaced experience poorer health than non-displaced. The third study illustrated medical care among IDPs, in South Sudan [81]. The findings identified that the IDPs have been attracted to services in the hospital because it was representative of improved access to healthcare that could control the health effects associated with displacement and war.

Two studies involving IDPs [44,85] have investigated the relationship between poverty and health inequality in Uganda. The first study explored the relationship between conflict, education, and the intergenerational transmission of poverty. The results confirm that conflict has long-term and intergenerational impacts on well-being and livelihoods [44]. It further confirms that education can limit the poverty impact of conflict on households and support a speedier post-conflict recovery. The other study examined factors that contributed to early relationships and informal marriages in post-conflict settings [85]. The findings note that fundamental shifts in economies and family relationships combined with structural changes encountered in settlements resulted in changed relationships and marriage patterns. In this study, poverty had affected the views and perceptions of the participants around relationships and marriage.

One cross-sectional study of the prevalence of mental disorders in post-conflict primary care attendees (with the majority of participants reporting more than one displacement experience) in the Northern Province of Sri Lanka reports unmet mental health needs in the region and the necessity to address these [120], suggesting that healthcare provision for IDPs remains inadequate and underfunded. This is consistent with previous research findings in northern Uganda where extremely high mortality rates and physical and mental illness amongst IDPs have been recorded [121].

People with symptoms of mental illness

We found seven studies [50,54,55,77,79,87,91] examining social determinants of mental health inequalities in post-conflict settings.

Two studies [77,79] assessed the prevalence of mental disorders in post-conflict environments. The first reported a cross-sectional epidemiological study in Nepal where high prevalence rates of mental disorders were found, especially among women, the elderly, widows/widowers, or people separated from their partners. Specifically, depression and anxiety prevalence rates were high compared to other epidemiological studies in high-income settings and comparable to the prevalence rates found in other conflict-affected settings. Study findings underscore the need to address the current lack of mental health care resources in post-conflict rural Nepal, especially for the most vulnerable populations. The second study examined the prevalence and factors associated with Posttraumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD) in northern Uganda. This study found that the prevalence rate of PTSD in the study communities was unacceptably high.

Elsewhere, a study analyzed the relation between exposure to the armed conflict and violence with mental health disorders and assessed the extent and determinants of socioeconomic inequalities in mental health-related to differential exposure to the conflict and violence in Colombia [55]. The findings indicate that victims of armed conflict have a higher probability of suffering mental health disorders compared to non-victims. It shows that differential exposure to armed conflict among lower socio-economic sub-groups explains high proportions of total inequality in mental health disorders.

Two studies [54,87] elaborate on resilience in a post-war context. The first study [54] evaluates a school-based primary prevention intervention designed to promote adolescents’ coping in the immediate aftermath of war exposure. Study findings provide validity for the effectiveness of the intervention in promoting its two targeted resilience factors of mobilization of support and self-efficacy. These findings indicate the need to apply interventions to children at the earliest possible time post-exposure. The second study [87] reports a qualitative, ecological, psychosocial ethnography study in Northern Sri Lanka. It explores psychosocial problems faced by families and communities and the associated risk and protective factors so that practical and effective community-based interventions can be recommended to rebuild strengths, coping strategies, and resilience. Study findings indicate that complex mental health and psychosocial problems at the individual, family, and community levels in a post-conflict context were found to impair recovery.

One qualitative study [50] explored concepts related to mental distress and coping strategies among adults in Burundi. The findings put forward that a general lack of knowledge and information on basic mental health concepts hinders treatment opportunities. For example, most individuals with symptoms of mental illness tend to stay home without receiving any treatment; however, some people seek help in the available infrastructure within their communities [50]. This suggests that more research is needed to know the characteristics of these available infrastructures and how a public mental health model could build from them.

One study exploring the mental health and psychosocial problems of displaced persons living in refugee settings reveals that one consequence of living in situations of pervasive adversity caused by experiences of discrimination, inequity, and violence is poor mental health and psychosocial well-being [91].

Both short- and long-term negative consequences of exposure to the conflict have been documented. Short-term effects included distress, shock, fear, phobic avoidance of public places, anger and emotional pain [122,123], and aggressive behavior [124], while long-term effects included PTSD [125,126], anxiety, and depression [127129], and sub-clinical symptoms [130]. These findings suggest the need to apply interventions at the earliest possible time post-exposure to traumatic events associated with war and its aftermath affects mental health at both the individual and community levels [54].

Key approaches aimed at addressing health inequalities in post-conflict settings

We found seventeen publications [46,49,5356,58,70,80,82,84,89,91,93,97,100,120] assessing approaches aimed to address social determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings. The majority of these publications set forth approaches that are believed to be accountable for the association between poverty, education, and health inequalities, such as (i) multi-dimensional local interventions to break the cycles of poverty [46]; (ii) the ‘diseases of the poor’ versus ‘diseases of the rich’ criteria used to prioritize which services to cover [93]; (iii) multi-sectoral approaches [56,58] that pay attention to the political, social and economic determinants of health; and (iv) combined approaches [89,97,100] with different systems being more appropriate at different stages of post-conflict recovery. Notably, two studies [70,100] provide evidence that incorporating economic components into public health interventions is essential for effectiveness across disciplines of global health. Other publications sum up approaches used to address social determinants of health inequalities in relation to healthcare utilization patterns. For instance, (i) interventions that increased quality and access of mental health treatments among victims of the conflict, also improved mental health among victims and significantly reduced inequalities in mental health [55]; (ii) the Community Score Cards (CSC)—a valuable tool for enhancing social accountability for patient-centered care facilitated the flow of information between citizens and service providers [49]; and (iii) a Community Health Workers program increased access to the primary health care services [80].

Other studies outline approaches which are accountable for the association between human rights and health inequalities, such as (i) good governance and respect for human rights reinforce each and influence people’s health [82]; (ii) the Ministry of Health acting as a steward of the health system, by contracting with NGOs to provide services but remaining responsible for the formulation of health policies (e.g., during the development of the Basic Package of Health Services) [53]; (iii) ‘for the people’ drive Community-Based Rehabilitation model (CBR), with equality of rights for people with disabilities (PWD) and their integration into the mainstream of community life [97], and (iv) training of primary care practitioners using a scaled-up intervention based on the WHO Mental Health Gap Action Programme (mhGAP) to address unmet mental health needs [120].

While a range of approaches aimed at addressing health inequalities in stable countries may not be replicable in post-conflict settings, some approaches appear to be promising in a post-conflict environment. For instance, education is essential for instilling stability and normalcy in the lives of children who have experienced war [131]. We found that multi-sectoral approaches and approaches incorporating economic and public health interventions and services prioritization criteria have been successfully used to address this association between poverty, education, and health inequalities.

When women have a role in the decision-making over household economics, the children in the household are healthier and more likely to attend school [132]. Thus, an important opportunity exists to use the microfinance program as a mechanism to provide information to household members on women’s safety and health topics through research [70].

We know now that enhancing community participation can promote positive health practices and motivate the most vulnerable citizens to access health services, better advocate for their needs, and reinforce accountability [133,134]. In Afghanistan, the Community Health Workers (CHW) program has increased access to primary health care services [80]. This finding is consistent with what has been shown in other countries (such as Ethiopia, Iran, Pakistan, and Brazil) with national CHW programs [135138]. We further found approaches aiming to address the association between human rights and health inequalities. For instance, the Basic Package of Health Services (BPHS) has become a model for the reconstruction of health systems in post-conflict countries. It is a government’s commitment to the population to provide broad coverage of essential services in Afghanistan [139]. This finding suggests that implementation of the BPHS program has resulted in increased access to basic health services for the entire population, especially those in rural areas, thus suggesting improved equity of care [4,140].

Community Driven Reconstruction (CDR) programs have been particularly popular in post-conflict areas. Advocates argue that the model is strong and effective. According to the World Bank, “CDR operations produce two types of results: more and better-distributed assets, and stronger, more responsive institutions—Page 18”. The results from a study of the effects of a large-scale CDR program on the economic well-being and the socio-political attitudes and behaviors of the populations in the DRC were negative [71]. These findings present a challenge to the CDR model and its ability to produce the social and economic impacts that advocates attribute to it [66].

Study strengths and limitations

Although many studies on health inequalities have been conducted in stable contexts, this review is, as far as we know, the first about structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings. It collates the current knowledge and knowledge gaps and assesses the effects of approaches aimed at addressing structural determinants of health inequalities. Therefore, it adds to a relatively small body of existing literature investigating this topic in a post-conflict setting. To identify relevant publications, we conducted a comprehensive and systematic review of the literature. We included quantitative, qualitative, mixed methods and other types of studies in the final review. Of particular interest was the inclusion of studies using at least one PROGRESS-plus factor in the final selection, making this an equity-driven process. There are, however, several limitations to consider when interpreting the findings of the current review.

First, we sought to ascertain the presence of health inequalities so that targeted interventions could be planned, implemented, and monitored. By doing so, we found significant heterogeneity of settings, populations, interventions, and outcomes of interest in the studies that were reviewed, making international comparisons of interventions and outcomes difficult. As such, we used the narrative synthesis to bring together the findings from all included studies; however, it should be noted that this approach is not underpinned by an authoritative body of knowledge or on reliable and rigorous techniques developed and tested over time. In the absence of such a body of knowledge, there is a possibility that systematic reviews adopting a narrative approach to synthesis might be prone to bias. This must be weighed against the counter-argument that we selected our evidence judiciously and purposively with an eye to what is relevant for our main review questions, including any future research questions we would like to address. Instead, the quality of the included studies was assessed systematically.

Second, as with any systematic review, there were concerns about whether we might have missed certain evidence. To be as conclusive as possible, a significant effort was made by applying a rigorous search strategy and identifying articles from scientific and professional databases only.

Third, although we agree and recognize LGBTQ+ (Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, Trans, Queer, and others) people as belonging to the most vulnerable sub-groups in post-conflict settings—this sub-group was not included in our systematic review because LGBTQ+ issues require special attention. For the same reason, they could not reasonably be easily summarized in the current manuscript. To successfully tackle LGBTQ+ issues, special consideration must be given to the particular needs and risks faced by individuals based on their sexual orientation and gender identity. Future systematic reviews on health inequalities within the post-conflict environment should also include LGBTQ+ people as a vulnerable sub-group.

Despite the limitations noted above, some clear themes about structural health inequalities in post-conflict settings were evident. Ultimately, the breadth of the papers and grey literature reviewed, the study selection methods, and the appraisal process altogether provided a substantial body of evidence that supports our key findings reported in the review.

Conclusion and future directions

This systematic review documents the existing evidence and knowledge gaps about structural health inequalities in post-conflict settings. The results of our review assert the urgent need for addressing identified knowledge gaps as well as the need for developing appropriate approaches aiming at addressing health inequalities in this environment. To shape adequate responses, steps forward should include ways and means to address health inequalities successfully. In particular, priority should be given to studies from the “post-conflict real world”. Such studies should aim to: (1) ensure that the voices of the most vulnerable groups are heard, their active participation as agents of change is guaranteed, and local norms are respected. (2) exploring the novel design of a health system that would ensure both geographic and social equity.

A considerable range of approaches has been used to address health inequalities in post-conflict settings, including those used to address structural determinants that are accountable for the association between poverty, education, and health inequalities, the association between human rights and health inequalities, and the structural determinants of health inequalities in relation to healthcare utilization patterns. However, these approaches may not be the most suitable in this environment. They may not have involved vulnerable groups in decision-making processes and the implementation of strategies targeting relevant drivers of health inequalities.

Given the multifactorial characteristics of health inequalities, it is crucial to work with the beneficiaries in developing a multi-sector approach and a strategy targeting long-term impacts by decision-makers at various levels. Additionally, it may be best to combine approaches aimed to address health inequalities at different stages of the post-conflict recovery process.

This review has strengthened our conviction that there is room for innovation in developing potentially effective “real world” approaches, targetting and involving the most vulnerable groups in addressing health inequalities.

Supporting information

S1 Checklist. PRISMA 2009.

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S1 Fig. PRISMA flow diagram of selection process.

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S1 Table. Data extraction sheet information from selected studies.

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S2 Table. Characteristics of studies included.

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S3 Table. Approaches aimed at addressing health inequalities.

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S4 Table. Individual quality assessment for each study included.

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S1 File. Eligibility criteria.

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S2 File. Key concepts and search terms.

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S3 File. Web of Science search strategy.

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Acknowledgments

The authors gratefully acknowledge the following colleagues for their assistance in the study implementation and conduct:

  • Gregor Franssen—the Information Specialist University of Maastricht for support during bibliographic database searches.

  • Stefan Jongen—the Information Specialist University of Maastricht for EndNote support.

  • Suat Tuzgöl—Researchsoftware for support on the correct use of EndNote software thoroughly the process.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting information files.

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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Reviewer #1: Dear Editors,

Thank you for the opportunity to review this systematic review of research on health inequalities in post-conflict settings.

The article has many merits as it stands now. Relevant concepts (such as health inequalities, post-conflict, PROGRESS-Plus) are clearly defined. The aims of the study are appropriate, relevant, and narrow enough for the systematic review. My impression is that the authors conducted a rigorous, unbiased and comprehensive search for all studies according to the search strategy, which was clearly described and seems suitable for the aims.

Given the good shape of the article in its current condition, I believe the authors are capable of submitting an improved revised manuscript.

Some minor but important improvements are suggested below.

1) On page 6, the authors write “… the population of interest consisted of the most vulnerable population groups [34, 35] living in post-conflict areas such as women, children, internally displaced persons (IDPs), and the mentally ill – as these are generally affected the most.” Why were these groups identified as most vulnerable? In the results section it appears as if this choice was data-driven (e.g. “It is widely recognized that armed conflict has a particularly negative impact on women's lives [105, 106]” on page 13 and the paragraph starting with “Women and men have different needs, living conditions, and circumstances, including unequal access to and control over power, resources, human rights, and institutions, including the justice system” on page 21). But the earlier statement on page 6 makes it sound like it is theory-driven. Some clarification as to what guided the sub-group selection would be helpful.

I agree children, IPDs and the mentally ill are likely particularly vulnerable, but why are women included? Since women may make up far more than 50 percent of the population in post-conflict settings due to high male battle-related mortality, what is the logic behind identifying them as one of the most vulnerable groups? Feminist security scholars such as Cynthia Enloe have criticized the merged category “womenandchildren” for removing women’s agency by only portraying them as mindless victims. While I do not necessarily disagree that women are a vulnerable group, a clearer explanation to this effect would help.

A specific focus on women also risks sidelining men from post-conflict interventions, as argued on page 21. The study from Uganda [86] suggests that women were more likely to be widowed, which also likely means that men are more likely to die in war. Is that not also a vulnerability? Additionally, past research has shown that if post-war aid only focuses on women, it may drive intimate partner violence perpetrated by men who have lost their socioeconomic position as main breadwinners. See Sengupta, Anasuya & Muriel Calo (2016) Shifting gender roles: an analysis of violence against women in post-conflict Uganda. Development in Practice 26(3), 285–297. It connects to the statement on page 21 that “health services should be available to users in proportion to need (rather than social status)”.

Aren’t HBTQIA+ individuals a vulnerable group, due to the lack of appropriate health care overall and stigma (that may be heightened due to militarized masculinity in post-war settings)? Why were not these included? Or refugees displaced to other countries?

2) While I appreciate the clear distinctions of inequality vs. inequity, it seems that the authors sometimes use the terms interchangeably despite having stated the difference between the two terms. For example, on page 7 in this sentence: “We used the PROGRESS-Plus as an organizing framework to assess the structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings. Using PROGRESS-Plus enables the inclusion of a range of factors and circumvents reliance on any single measure to assess inequities, as this is insufficient.” It’s not always clear to me which of the concepts the authors actually want to explore. Relatedly, why were equality AND inequality included as search terms, but only equity and not inequity (according to Table S6)?

3) Some clarifications with respect to conflict vs. post-conflict are needed.

I appreciated the predetermined criteria for inclusion and exclusion. But I would add studies about ongoing conflict settings to the exclusion criteria if those were indeed excluded, in the parenthesis “(e.g., natural disasters/post-tsunami, terror victims, intimate partner violence)” on page 8.

The authors engage appropriately with the existing literature, for example by discussing the lack of consensus on what constitutes post-conflict. But does Colombia really count as a post-conflict setting? One of the studies included in analysis (Alzate, 2008) was published before the peace agreement between the government and FARC was signed in 2016, and since then the levels of violence have risen above pre-treaty levels. Several armed groups (including organized crime networks and the ELN guerrilla) are still actively fighting. What is the logic behind this inclusion?

Are there other studies included on active conflict settings at the time of publishing that count as post-war today?

5) While I commend the authors for providing such extensive documentation to support their arguments, the large number of tables and overlap between them rather reduce the level of clarity.

The authors have provided helpful documentation (such as the PRISMA check list and flow chart and the data extraction sheet) and describe clearly how quality was assessed. But is it necessary to have both Table S8 that summarize the findings, and S1 as a data extraction sheet? Both have summaries of the results, but these are not identical. Similarly, is it necessary to have three separate tables (S2–S4) sorted by data quality, when this information is also available in the data extraction sheet?

I also find the ordering/names of the tables a bit peculiar. They are mentioned in the following order in the text: S10, S5, S6, S1, S7, S2, S3, S4, S8, S9. Perhaps they could be renamed according to the order in which they are presented? It would make the process and document audit trail more transparent.

6) “Specifically, little is known about the effects of conflict and displacement on the provision of Sexual and Reproductive Health (SRH) services [90]” on page 20. I do not agree with this statement. A substantial amount of literature has been published on this topic in Conflict and Health, BMJ Global Health, and other outlets. See also the RAISE initiative at Columbia University, the BRANCH Consortium, and intervention studies on the Minimum Initial Service Package (MISP).

7) The section “Study identification” would be more logically placed before the section “Data extraction and analysis”, where the PRISMA chart is first mentioned. In fact, I do not see the point of having a separate heading for this section as it fits under “Study selection”.

8) It is interesting that, according to Table S7, Sub-Saharan Africa is substantially overrepresented in terms of geographical focus. Can this be reflected upon more directly? Does this reflect the incidence of post-conflict, or is it because of something else?

9) A page number seems to be missing from the quote reference on page 14.

Reviewer #2: Health inequality and or equity is an important area of studies while studying the same issue in the post conflict setting has an added value in the literature. The authors did a fantastic job to compile all the important study findings and did a systematic review on the subject area. This has provided a solid basis for identifying the research gap and future research in this area. The study findings and the conclusion is consistent and very strong in terms of the claim. However, due to my limitation on the study methodology I am a bit concerned about the authors' strong claim of non applicability of the meta analysis due to the heterogeneity of the study settings, populations and interventions. Someone from the relevant field should be approached for her/his opinion on this matter. Finally, I am wondering whether the authors came across this paper "Improving Maternal Health Care in a Post Conflict Setting: Evidence from Chittagong Hill Tracts of Bangladesh, The Journal of Development Studies (2018); https://doi.org/10.1080/00220388.2018.1554211 as it is not found in the reference or the list of studies covered.

Reviewer #3: SUMMARY OF REVIEWER

This review collates the current evidence on the structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings and describes the approaches used to address them. The methods and results were clearly described; however, the introduction and discussion should be re-structured to strengthen the study (and set up the importance/rationale of this review). Overall, this study will add important findings to the literature base on structural determinants of health in post-conflict settings.

INTRODUCTION

The authors have done a good job assessing the current evidence around health inequalities and conflict. However, the structure of the introduction felt slightly unclear and hard to follow. Sub-titles would help the reader follow the background narrative leading up to the rationale of the current study. Currently, the structure seems to be: inequalities persist globally and worsen in conflict; social determinants of health (SDH) in conflict; conflict in children; definition of inequalities vs inequities; definition of post-conflict settings; conflict as driver of health inequalities (ex DRC); right to health; impact of conflict on health and health systems documented but not on SDH; and jump to structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings. Review these paragraphs and find a structure that leads the reader to the gaps in the evidence and rationale of your study. For example, how are these inequalities specific to post-conflict settings and why is there less evidence on this area specifically. Start broad and then narrow on to the rationale of your review.

Specific points:

• The authors use the term ‘emerging countries.’ This would need to be defined or just stick with the term LMIC.

• The authors define inequalities vs inequities in health (page 3). The definition of social determinants of health, specifically structural determinants of health, is needed higher up in the introduction and its definition should be referenced. Social determinants of health and structural determinants of health inequalities seem to be use interchangeably. Define and stick to the one which you will use for the review.

• The outcome of interest (structural health inequalities) listed in methods needs to be defined as well (or instead of other combinations of those words).

• There is a lot of literature within the post-conflict setting on health. This felt like a summary of this was missing in the introduction.

METHODS

The overall design of the study was appropriate and adequate to answer the research question. The search strategy, inclusion and exclusion criteria and study selection were adequately described.

Specific points:

• Add reference for why these vulnerable groups were selected (see comment later re general population).

• Upon reading the methods, I assumed you would organise the results according to the PROGRESS-Plus framework for structural determinants. Could this be further integrated into each section of the results? For example, within the children sub-section, describing the main PROGRESS-Plus risk factors.

RESULTS

The results answer the research question and are well presented.

Specific points:

• It would be helpful to the reader to add percentages (n/N total publications; X%) within the results section. For example, in the sentence “The majority of the studies were based on data collected in sub-Saharan Africa (n/N; X%), followed by South Asia and the Middle East and North Africa region.”

• The general population was added as a vulnerable population group in the results but was not described in the methods. This should be added or explained. Furthermore, in this section, post-conflict was not mentioned. All results should reflect the specificities and complexities present in a post-conflict setting.

• IDP acronym is defined various times throughout the manuscript.

• The term and section entitled – Mentally Ill. Could this be re-framed as people with symptoms of mental illness (see for reference of bias free language - https://apastyle.apa.org/style-grammar-guidelines/bias-free-language/disability).

DISCUSSION

An important strength of this work is its focus on post-conflict settings. The results should be reviewed to clearly state how the findings relate to the specific constraints/circumstances of a post-conflict setting, as at times it felt like unclear or not explicitly stated. For example, the sentence on children in armed conflict does not connect to the importance of this findings on a post-conflict setting.

Specific points:

• The paragraph about children is about armed conflict. Could this be better integrated into the evidence from your review about post-conflict?

• Could sub-heading be added to the discussion? Again, this will help the reader follow the main findings. These could be based on sub-sections in the results section (population group and approaches to addressing health inequalities).

• A figure describing the recommendations for future research or summarising the gaps in the evidence base would be helpful to the readers.

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Thank you for the opportunity to review this systematic review of research on health inequalities in post-conflict settings.

The article has many merits as it stands now. Relevant concepts (such as health inequalities, post-conflict, PROGRESS-Plus) are clearly defined. The aims of the study are appropriate, relevant, and narrow enough for the systematic review. My impression is that the authors conducted a rigorous, unbiased and comprehensive search for all studies according to the search strategy, which was clearly described and seems suitable for the aims.

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Some minor but important improvements are suggested below.

1) On page 6, the authors write “… the population of interest consisted of the most vulnerable population groups [34, 35] living in post-conflict areas such as women, children, internally displaced persons (IDPs), and the mentally ill – as these are generally affected the most.” Why were these groups identified as most vulnerable? In the results section it appears as if this choice was data-driven (e.g. “It is widely recognized that armed conflict has a particularly negative impact on women's lives [105, 106]” on page 13 and the paragraph starting with “Women and men have different needs, living conditions, and circumstances, including unequal access to and control over power, resources, human rights, and institutions, including the justice system” on page 21). But the earlier statement on page 6 makes it sound like it is theory-driven. Some clarification as to what guided the sub-group selection would be helpful.

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for the great question. Indeed, it might be difficult for the reader to understand what guided the sub-group selection during this review. Putting the sub-group selection process within the broad context of our review, we aimed to collate the current knowledge and knowledge gaps about structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings. Our understanding is that it is important to identify the characteristics of post-conflict environments that create vulnerability because they either create or contribute towards losses, which lead to vulnerability and negative well-being. Indeed, beforehand the majority of the most vulnerable population sub-groups were already identified. These included Women, Children, IDPs, and People with symptoms of mental symptoms. While applying a stepwise data extraction approach, we found an additional sub-group of interest which consisted of the general population and added this afterward to the final sub-group selection. To help the reader, we have slightly changed the text on page 6 as follows:

“… the population of interest consisted of the most vulnerable population groups [34, 35] living in post-conflict areas such as the general population, women, children, internally displaced persons (IDPs), and the people with symptoms of mental illness – as these are generally affected the most.”

I agree children, IPDs and the mentally ill are likely particularly vulnerable, but why are women included? Since women may make up far more than 50 percent of the population in post-conflict settings due to high male battle-related mortality, what is the logic behind identifying them as one of the most vulnerable groups? Feminist security scholars such as Cynthia Enloe have criticized the merged category “womenandchildren” for removing women’s agency by only portraying them as mindless victims. While I do not necessarily disagree that women are a vulnerable group, a clearer explanation to this effect would help.

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for agreeing with us that children, IDPs, and people with symptoms of mental illness are particularly vulnerable in this environment and therefore should be part of the sub-group selection. As noted previously, the final sub-group selection was based on a combination of both: a beforehand selection of the most sub-groups (including women) and an afterward selection of the general population sub-group.

While we tend to agree with your comment about the Feminist security scholars who have criticized the merged category “women and children” for removing women’s agency by only portraying them as mindless victims. We would not feel comfortable discussing the most vulnerable sub-groups in a post-conflict environment without giving proper attention to women and we have addressed this in the revised version of the manuscript: “In particular, we would not feel comfortable discussing the most vulnerable sub-groups in this environment without giving proper attention to women. The reasons for this are multifold: 1) traditional networks that form the foundation of women’s social and family roles may be disrupted during the conflict, 2) women may also leave their communities and husbands for other partners to guarantee a source of food for themselves and their families, and 3) women have to assume the role of the primary breadwinners and caretakers of their families – putting them more at risk [37, 38].” For these reasons, we prefer to point the reader in this direction and maintain the women sub-group in the most vulnerable study population group.

A specific focus on women also risks sidelining men from post-conflict interventions, as argued on page 21. The study from Uganda [86] suggests that women were more likely to be widowed, which also likely means that men are more likely to die in war. Is that not also a vulnerability? Additionally, past research has shown that if post-war aid only focuses on women, it may drive intimate partner violence perpetrated by men who have lost their socioeconomic position as main breadwinners. See Sengupta, Anasuya & Muriel Calo (2016) Shifting gender roles: an analysis of violence against women in post-conflict Uganda. Development in Practice 26 (3), 285–297. It connects to the statement on page 21 that “health services should be available to users in proportion to need (rather than social status)”.

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for your constructive feedback! Although we can agree in general with the reviewer’s assessment that both women and men are vulnerable in this environment, we still want to explain why women are most vulnerable than men in post-conflict settings. First, women and men have different exposures to situations that affect their health and access to health care, they also have differential power to influence decisions regarding the provision of health services. In particular, Sorenson (1998) documented one feature of post-conflict environments that is often ignored both by academics as well as policymakers which is the situation of women. Second, in environments where the involvement of women in the labor market is not the norm, women either remain unemployed or become underemployed. According to Bodewig (2002), because women may not be exceptionally educated, even the employment opportunities they could avail would be low-paying jobs.

We finally want to clarify that by giving a bit more attention to women's needs in this environment, our intention was not to take men’s needs away from post-conflict interventions. We only want to specify that women have different roles and perspectives from those men have.

The involvement of women and men at all stages in a response to post-conflict situations is desirable and beneficial.

Aren’t HBTQIA+ individuals a vulnerable group, due to the lack of appropriate health care overall and stigma (that may be heightened due to militarized masculinity in post-war settings)? Why were not these included? Or refugees displaced to other countries?

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for these great questions. The reviewer is most likely referring to the LGBTQ+ (which stands for Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, Transgender, and Queer) community. Here again, we can agree with the reviewer’s assessment that both the LGBTQ+ community as well as refugees are vulnerable populations in post-conflict environments.

As for the LGBTQ+ community, it was not specified beforehand as one of the most vulnerable sub-groups in this environment. Because of the already existing “LGBTQ discrimination”, their identification (based on sexual orientation or gender identity) would not be easy in practice and maybe could reinforce discrimination that is already present. For this reason, we believe it could have been hard to tell something about this sub-group based on currently available data. However, we certainly believe more attention should be paid to structural inequalities that keep the LGBTQ+ community apart, and that has been highlighted in post-conflict settings. For now, we prefer to point the reader in the direction of the subgroups we have identified as being most vulnerable in this environment (as explained above).

Regarding refugees, we have presented information on page 3 of our manuscript as follows: “For example, children and young people often comprise the highest proportion of the population in refugee and internally displaced persons (IDP) camps and are exposed to risks over which they have little control [6, 7].” By doing so, we acknowledge that it is a vulnerable group but not the most vulnerable one. On the other hand, when people cross an international border to find safety during a crisis, they come under the protection of the UNHCR. That means they can access the funding and resources of the UN. Decades of global news coverage have shown that life for refugees is difficult. But they do have some protections, often have access to camps built to provide shelter and food. However, we were ultimately interested in the Internally Displaced Persons (IDPs), as this sub-group stays within their own country and remains under the protection of their government, even if that government is the reason for their displacement. When people flee home but don’t cross an international border to find safety, they remain under the protection of their own country. It may seem like a better situation to find a temporary home within your country of origin. But in reality, it’s often a much more difficult situation. A country at war has extremely limited resources to help displaced people. And internally displaced persons are not protected under the UN. IDPs have not crossed the border to find safety and are therefore amongst the most vulnerable in the world because they often move to areas where it is difficult to deliver humanitarian assistance. Often, they are sheltered among the poorest communities, sharing scarce resources with host communities for years. Therefore, it can be an added value to make a distinction in how to respond to the needs of refugees or internally displaced people (IDPs), and provide critical services to these groups in vulnerable situations to ensure they can live with the safety and dignity they deserve.

2) While I appreciate the clear distinctions of inequality vs. inequity, it seems that the authors sometimes use the terms interchangeably despite having stated the difference between the two terms. For example, on page 7 in this sentence: “We used the PROGRESS-Plus as an organizing framework to assess the structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings. Using PROGRESS-Plus enables the inclusion of a range of factors and circumvents reliance on any single measure to assess inequities, as this is insufficient.” It’s not always clear to me which of the concepts the authors actually want to explore. Relatedly, why were equality AND inequality included as search terms, but only equity and not inequity (according to Table S6)?

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for appreciating our efforts to explain both terms: inequality and inequity. Indeed, by the fact that in languages (including English) where the two terms exist, they are often used interchangeably. Generally, the technical distinction between the two concepts of health inequality and health inequity is that health inequality can refer to all differences, and health inequity refers just to those differences which are unnecessary, avoidable, unfair, and unjust. To avoid confusion, we have provided the meaning of each concept. Accordingly, we have revised both concepts throughout our manuscript to help the reader better understand which of the two concepts the authors want to explore.

Finally, inequity was not included as a separate key concept and search term because it refers to a specific type of health inequality that denotes an unjust difference in health. As mentioned previously, this aspect is covered by health inequality as this concept refers to all differences?

Per supplemental Table 6. health inequality was included in the key concepts and search terms for our review. To mitigate the risk of whether we might have missed certain evidence, a significant effort was made by applying a rigorous search strategy (including the use of ineq*) and identifying articles from scientific and professional databases only (Page 29 of the revised manuscript).

3) Some clarifications with respect to conflict vs. post-conflict are needed.

I appreciated the predetermined criteria for inclusion and exclusion. But I would add studies about ongoing conflict settings to the exclusion criteria if those were indeed excluded, in the parenthesis “(e.g., natural disasters/post-tsunami, terror victims, intimate partner violence)” on page 8.

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for your constructive feedback. We have addressed your comments as described below: “Abstract-only studies, conference abstracts, studies about ongoing conflict settings, and studies on serving or former military personnel were excluded.”

The authors engage appropriately with the existing literature, for example by discussing the lack of consensus on what constitutes post-conflict. But does Colombia really count as a post-conflict setting? One of the studies included in analysis (Alzate, 2008) was published before the peace agreement between the government and FARC was signed in 2016, and since then the levels of violence have risen above pre-treaty levels. Several armed groups (including organized crime networks and the ELN guerrilla) are still actively fighting. What is the logic behind this inclusion?

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for this great question and for agreeing with us on the efforts to clarify what constitutes a post-conflict setting. As explained on page 4 of our manuscript, there is no consensus in the literature about the definition of post-conflict settings. Post-conflict describes the period immediately after a conflict is over. But, the term is more difficult to define for many reasons. Firstly, conflicts do not necessarily end with the signing of official peace agreements. Secondly, low-intensity conflict replaces violent conflict because one or several actors are either excluded or not content with the peace agreement. The end of a conflict and subsequently the start of the post-conflict phase, therefore, become difficult to determine. For these reasons, we have elaborated on what we understand under post-conflict settings and, we have also described what characterizes this environment. Specifically for Colombia, this country is a good example of a post-conflict situation. Although the peace agreement was not signed yet, the other characteristics of a post-conflict setting were present (as described on Page 5 of the revised manuscript).

The final selection of Alzate’s paper (The sexual and reproductive rights of internally displaced women: the embodiment of Colombia's crisis) was based on the fact that this paper met all criteria to be included in the final review. The fact that all of the post-conflict characteristics were not present simultaneously was not an issue as – at the time of the final paper selection, Colombia was at a stage of recovery from conflict or crisis and a stage of rebuilding and reconstruction starting from emergency and stabilization followed by transition and recovery, and peace and development.

Are there other studies included on active conflict settings at the time of publishing that count as post-war today?

>>> Author response: Thank you for pointing this out. In line with the explanation above, studies about structural determinants of health inequalities in contexts other than post-conflict environments were excluded.

5) While I commend the authors for providing such extensive documentation to support their arguments, the large number of tables and overlap between them rather reduce the level of clarity.

The authors have provided helpful documentation (such as the PRISMA check list and flow chart and the data extraction sheet) and describe clearly how quality was assessed. But is it necessary to have both Table S8 that summarize the findings, and S1 as a data extraction sheet? Both have summaries of the results, but these are not identical. Similarly, is it necessary to have three separate tables (S2–S4) sorted by data quality, when this information is also available in the data extraction sheet?

>>> Author response: We thank the reviewer for the nice comments and suggestions. To increase the level of clarity, we have decreased the number of tables as follows:

We combined Tables S1 (Data Extraction Sheet) and S8 (Summary of study findings) into one table (New S1). Importantly, we moved the findings S8 to the new S1 Table to make sure the reported findings are identical. Finally, tables (S2–S4) have also been combined to cut down the number of tables.

I also find the ordering/names of the tables a bit peculiar. They are mentioned in the following order in the text: S10, S5, S6, S1, S7, S2, S3, S4, S8, S9. Perhaps they could be renamed according to the order in which they are presented? It would make the process and document audit trail more transparent.

>>> Author response: Thank you for your nice reminder. We revised the ordering and naming of the tables throughout the manuscript to make them clearer and have the numbering in line with the order in which they are mentioned in the manuscript.

6) “Specifically, little is known about the effects of conflict and displacement on the provision of Sexual and Reproductive Health (SRH) services [90]” on page 20. I do not agree with this statement. A substantial amount of literature has been published on this topic in Conflict and Health, BMJ Global Health, and other outlets. See also the RAISE initiative at Columbia University, the BRANCH Consortium, and intervention studies on the Minimum Initial Service Package (MISP).

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for your constructive feedback. We agree with you that more is currently known about the effects of conflict and displacement on the provision of Sexual and Reproductive Health (SRH) services in post-conflict settings. For the sake of clarity, we have rephrased this in the revised version of the manuscript: “Although a substantial amount of literature has been published on the effects of conflict and displacement on the provision of Sexual and Reproductive Health (SRH) services in post-conflict settings, there is a lot we do not know yet about how to address the problem. These findings concur with the conclusion of a recent systematic review of monitoring and evaluation indicators for SRH, showing that rigorous reporting on a core list of indicators is a prerequisite for identifying the changes that a country wants to see concerning SRH and the investments required to save lives [111].”

7) The section “Study identification” would be more logically placed before the section “Data extraction and analysis”, where the PRISMA chart is first mentioned. In fact, I do not see the point of having a separate heading for this section as it fits under “Study selection”.

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for your suggestion that helped us to improve this manuscript. This section has been revised accordingly.

8) It is interesting that, according to Table S7, Sub-Saharan Africa is substantially overrepresented in terms of geographical focus. Can this be reflected upon more directly? Does this reflect the incidence of post-conflict, or is it because of something else?

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for this great question. In our opinion, the fact that 27 out of 63 (42.8%) selected studies were conducted in Sub-Saharan Africa (as described on page 13) is an interesting finding on its own. Indeed, it could reflect a high incidence of post-conflict situations in this specific region. In their study on Violent Conflict and Its Impact on Health Indicators in sub- Saharan Africa, David R. Davis & J. Kuritsky (2002) documented high levels of conflict in Sub-Saharan African countries but also poor health indicators. Furthermore, this could mean that Sub-Saharan Africa can be used to inform post-conflict planning when it involves determining the potential geographic extent strategy targeting health inequality-related questions.

9) A page number seems to be missing from the quote reference on page 14.

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for the comment. We have added a page number to help the reader immediately locate the source of the quote referenced on Page 14 from the original article.

Reviewer #2: Health inequality and or equity is an important area of studies while studying the same issue in the post-conflict setting has an added value in the literature. The authors did a fantastic job to compile all the important study findings and did a systematic review on the subject area. This has provided a solid basis for identifying the research gap and future research in this area. The study findings and the conclusion is consistent and very strong in terms of the claim. However, due to my limitation on the study methodology I am a bit concerned about the authors' strong claim of non applicability of the meta analysis due to the heterogeneity of the study settings, populations and interventions. Someone from the relevant field should be approached for her/his opinion on this matter. Finally, I am wondering whether the authors came across this paper "Improving Maternal Health Care in a Post Conflict Setting: Evidence from Chittagong Hill Tracts of Bangladesh, The Journal of Development Studies (2018); https://doi.org/10.1080/00220388.2018.1554211 as it is not found in the reference or the list of studies covered.

Response to Reviewer #2

>>> Author response: We thank the reviewer for the positive feedback on our manuscript and for the suggestion on how we could further improve it. Although we understand the reviewer’s question about the methodological choice for not using meta-analysis in this review, we want to ensure the reviewer that we explored this aspect more in detail. As reported in the manuscript (Pg 9), before making the final decision on how to proceed “. …we contacted experts for advice (e.g., the plan to use PRISMA standard in combination with PRISMA-E was discussed with the editor in chief of the Campbell Collaboration Library)”.

For several reasons, we strongly believe that using qualitative approaches was appropriate to report on this systematic review:

• The approach allowed to describe, analyze, criticize, and summarize data by the vulnerable sub-groups,

• The qualitative inferences were presented as systematically as possible as part of the evidence in this systematic review.

• The study strengths and limitation section has a section explaining this as a limitation and more importantly how the authors have dealt with it.

Our choice to focus on the qualitative approaches was the most appropriate because the data available is so heterogeneous that a meta-analysis is impossible. If we would run the study again, we still would not choose a meta-analysis because of this heterogeneity. More importantly, we extracted the available data judiciously and purposively with an eye to what is relevant for our main review questions.

We finally thank the reviewer for helping us with important references: "Improving Maternal Health Care in a Post Conflict Setting: Evidence from Chittagong Hill Tracts of Bangladesh, The Journal of Development Studies (2018); https://doi.org/10.1080/00220388.2018.1554211

Although this important study was published during the timing of our data extraction, it was not included in our final selection for this review because the main focus of this study is not about inequality, the study evaluates a development program with an important maternal health care component in the Chittagong Hill Tracts of Bangladesh - a post-conflict setting.

We are currently working on the next manuscript on health inequality trends with a specific focus on Maternal Health Care – we will use this important reference to address any relevant questions.

Reviewer #3: SUMMARY OF REVIEWER

This review collates the current evidence on the structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings and describes the approaches used to address them. The methods and results were clearly described; however, the introduction and discussion should be re-structured to strengthen the study (and set up the importance/rationale of this review). Overall, this study will add important findings to the literature base on structural determinants of health in post-conflict settings.

INTRODUCTION

The authors have done a good job assessing the current evidence around health inequalities and conflict. However, the structure of the introduction felt slightly unclear and hard to follow. Sub-titles would help the reader follow the background narrative leading up to the rationale of the current study. Currently, the structure seems to be: inequalities persist globally and worsen in conflict; social determinants of health (SDH) in conflict; conflict in children; definition of inequalities vs inequities; definition of post-conflict settings; conflict as driver of health inequalities (ex DRC); right to health; impact of conflict on health and health systems documented but not on SDH; and jump to structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings. Review these paragraphs and find a structure that leads the reader to the gaps in the evidence and rationale of your study. For example, how are these inequalities specific to post-conflict settings and why is there less evidence on this area specifically. Start broad and then narrow on to the rationale of your review.

>>> Author response: We thank the reviewer for the suggested modifications in the introduction section. To lead the reader to the gaps in the evidence and rationale of our study, we revised the introduction section (from pg.3-8) as follows:

1. Sub-titles were created to improve the structure:

• Social determinants versus Structural determinants of health

• Health inequalities versus health inequities

• Conflict versus post-conflict settings

• Right to health

2. Paragraphs were moved in the background narrative leading up to the rationale of the current study.

3. Unnecessary details are removed from this section.

Specific points:

• The authors use the term ‘emerging countries.’ This would need to be defined or just stick with the term LMIC.

>>> Author response: Thank you for your comment and suggestion. we have rephrased this in the revised version of the manuscript: “…the social determinants affecting children in crisis settings are the same as those affecting children in Low and Middle-Income countries….”

• The authors define inequalities vs inequities in health (page 3). The definition of social determinants of health, specifically structural determinants of health, is needed higher up in the introduction and its definition should be referenced. Social determinants of health and structural determinants of health inequalities seem to be used interchangeably. Define and stick to the one which you will use for the review.

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for your constructive feedback. We have addressed your comments as described below:

“Social determinants versus Structural determinants of health

Because the concept of ‘social determinants’ refers simultaneously to both the determinants of health and the determinants of inequalities in health, we will expand our review of social determinants of health to include the terms ‘‘structural determinants of health’’ as we assess the literature on this topic. In this article, the term "structural determinants of health inequalities" refers specifically to the interplay between the socio-economic-political context, structural mechanisms generating social stratification, and the resulting socio-economic position of individuals. These mechanisms configure social groups' health opportunities based on their placement within hierarchies of power, prestige, and access to resources [9]. We hypothesize that structural determinants affect the distribution of resources and have the potential to influence mental health inequalities.”

• The outcome of interest (structural health inequalities) listed in methods needs to be defined as well (or instead of other combinations of those words).

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for these comments. We agree with the reviewer that the outcome of interest (structural health inequalities) should be defined as this is required to interpret the results. As noted above, the term "structural determinants of health inequalities" refers specifically to the interplay between the socio-economic-political context, structural mechanisms generating social stratification, and the resulting socio-economic position of individuals. These mechanisms configure social groups' health opportunities based on their placement within hierarchies of power, prestige, and access to resources [9]. We hypothesize that structural determinants affect the distribution of resources and have the potential to influence mental health inequalities.

• There is a lot of literature within the post-conflict setting on health. This felt like a summary of this was missing in the introduction.

>>> Author response: Thank you for emphasizing the need to clarify that there is already a lot of literature available on health within the post-conflict setting. As suggested, we have summarized this in the introduction (see page pg.3-8). Additionally, in reply to your main comment, we have restructured the introduction section to address your comments.

METHODS

The overall design of the study was appropriate and adequate to answer the research question. The search strategy, inclusion and exclusion criteria and study selection were adequately described.

Specific points:

• Add reference for why these vulnerable groups were selected (see comment later re general population).

>>> Author response: Thank you for this helpful suggestion. We have added references for why these vulnerable sub-groups were selected. To help the reader, we have slightly changed the text on page 7 of the manuscript as follows: “… the population of interest consisted of the most vulnerable population groups [34, 35] living in post-conflict areas such as the general population, women, children, internally displaced persons (IDPs), and the people with symptoms of mental illness – as these are generally affected the most.”, they were selected because, often, they have been referred to in the literature as most vulnerable in post-conflict environments.

• Upon reading the methods, I assumed you would organise the results according to the PROGRESS-Plus framework for structural determinants. Could this be further integrated into each section of the results? For example, within the children sub-section, describing the main PROGRESS-Plus risk factors.

>>> Author response: We thank the reviewer for this valid comment and the suggestions. The reviewer is right, it could have been possible (an option) to analyze our data using the PROGRESS-Plus framework for structural determinants on health inequalities in post-conflict settings. However, we initially discussed the way they would use this framework to guide/support this review. In the manuscript (Pg 8), we referred to the framework under search strategy, underlining the fact that it enables the inclusion of a range of factors needed to measure inequities. According to Jennifer O’Neill et al. (2013), the PROGRESS-PLUS acronym can be used as an aide-mémoire, a framework to guide data extraction. We used all PROGRESS-PLUS acronyms to make the best selection of the studies to be included in systematic reviews. To ensure that decisions about structural determinants of health inequalities should be targeted with any future intervention, we found it useful to involve the most vulnerable groups – therefore, the results have been organized according to the representatives from these sub-groups.

Although there could be some differences in the way these results were presented (PROGRESS-PLUS framework versus the most vulnerable sub-groups), these results depend entirely on how the studies were selected and if the quality assessment was done. In both situations, we believe the results are useful as they contribute to the body of knowledge on structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings.

RESULTS

The results answer the research question and are well presented.

Specific points:

• It would be helpful to the reader to add percentages (n/N total publications; X%) within the results section. For example, in the sentence “The majority of the studies were based on data collected in sub-Saharan Africa (n/N; X%), followed by South Asia and the Middle East and North Africa region.”

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for the helpful suggestions. We have integrated them in the results section (pg.13) as follows: “The majority of the studies were based on data collected in sub-Saharan Africa (27/63 total publications; 42%), followed by South Asia (7/63 total publications; 11%) and the Middle East (6/63 total publications; 9%) and North Africa region (6/63 total publications; 9%). Three regions, including Asia Pacific, South America, and Europe, had similar data - This is potentially an indicator that some recent peace agreements have been reached in these regions. Only one study collected data in the Russia and Eurasia region.”

• The general population was added as a vulnerable population group in the results but was not described in the methods. This should be added or explained. Furthermore, in this section, post-conflict was not mentioned. All results should reflect the specificities and complexities present in a post-conflict setting.

>>> Author response: Thank you for the helpful suggestions. We have integrated them in the methods section (pg.7) as follows: “The outcome of interest was structural health inequalities and the population of interest consisted of the most vulnerable population groups [35, 36] living in post-conflict areas such as the general population, women, children, IDPs, and people with symptoms of mental illness – as these are generally affected the most, they were selected because, often, they have been referred to in the literature as most vulnerable in post-conflict environments.” On several occasions, we have also made reference to post-conflict areas in the Materials and methods sections and sub-headings (from pages 7 to 12).

• IDP acronym is defined various times throughout the manuscript.

>>> Author response: Thank you very much for pointing this out. We revised this throughout the manuscript and used the IDP acronym appropriately.

• The term and section entitled – Mentally Ill. Could this be re-framed as people with symptoms of mental illness (see for reference of bias free language - https://apastyle.apa.org/style-grammar-guidelines/bias-free-language/disability).

>>> Author response: Thank you for your comments. As suggested by the reviewer, we have re-framed the term Mentally Ill as people with symptoms of mental illness throughout the manuscript.

DISCUSSION

An important strength of this work is its focus on post-conflict settings. The results should be reviewed to clearly state how the findings relate to the specific constraints/circumstances of a post-conflict setting, as at times it felt like unclear or not explicitly stated. For example, the sentence on children in armed conflict does not connect to the importance of this findings on a post-conflict setting.

Specific points:

• The paragraph about children is about armed conflict. Could this be better integrated into the evidence from your review about post-conflict?

>>> Author response: Thank you for your nice reminder. We revised the paragraph about children to make it clearer that it is more about post-conflict settings than conflict situations. The revised text reads as follows:

“Children

The effects of armed conflict on children’s physical health and development are not well understood. In particular, little is known about how the circumstances of a post-conflict setting could affect the health status of children. A recent systematic review of the effects of armed conflict on child health and development [8] shows some gaps in the medium and long-term effects. The authors report a striking paucity of data on child health in relation to conflict and further supports the need for research on how conflict and structural inequalities affect children and subsequent generations. According to the Human Security Centre, child mortality is high in post-conflict countries due to food insecurity leading to malnutrition and the disruption of the water supply and sanitation.[118]. This suggests that children are more vulnerable during and after conflicts, as a consequence of a quick transition from conflict to post-conflict in these environments”.

• Could sub-heading be added to the discussion? Again, this will help the reader follow the main findings. These could be based on sub-sections in the results section (population group and approaches to addressing health inequalities).

>>> Author response: Many thanks for the helpful suggestions. To help the reader follow the main findings of our review, we have integrated sub-headings in the discussion section of the manuscript (from pg.22-27) as follows: general population, Women, Children, IDPs, and Persons with symptoms of mental illness) and approaches to addressing health inequalities.

• A figure describing the recommendations for future research or summarising the gaps in the evidence base would be helpful to the readers.

>>> Author response: Although we are happy to add figures, we are not sure whether a visual representation would be the best way to present the recommendations and/or summarize the gaps. In fact, we are not even sure how such a figure would look like. If the reviewer has clear suggestions on this, then we are happy to reconsider.

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PONE-D-21-08382R1

Health inequalities in post-conflict settings: A systematic review.

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Dear Editor,

We would like to thank you and the reviewers for evaluating our manuscript and providing additional constructive comments. We appreciate your input and we have tried to address your suggestions about the reviewer’s comment as best as we could. We have copied the review decision from the submission menu of the editorial manager and used this format to write our responses. Below we provide the point-by-point responses to the comments. We carefully rechecked the entire manuscript for wordings that were not original and reworded them to represent original contributions. All modifications in the revised manuscript have been highlighted (with Track Changes). Of course, we remain at your disposal should you have any further suggestions for improvements to our paper.

Dear Editors,

Thank you for inviting me to review this manuscript a second time. I believe the authors have done a decent job addressing the comments by all reviewers in the first round of revision, but several major issues still remain before the manuscript is ready for publication.

* Why did you not do a database search to cover the period December 2020 and onwards? This would add to the longevity of the article, as it is already missing a whole year of potentially relevant publications for inclusion in the systematic review. Limiting the new search to the past 12 months should likely not be too time consuming.

>>> Author Response: Thank you for this very important insight into the design and conduct of this review. As explained in the search strategy (Page 7), the database search was a comprehensive search initiated in March 2018 and ultimately updated in December 2020. Thereafter, all selected papers were reviewed and our initial submission to PLoS One took place in March 2021. Hence, the year is mostly caused by the review time. That being said, we consulted PLOS ONE additional guidance (Sagoo GS et al., March 3, 2009) to critically look at the methodology. Not more than two years have passed between the searches and submission. However, we would be happy to update the database search if the reviewer would strongly feel the need for it, but this would require an additional extension.

* Even if the review is supposed to be restricted to post-conflict, there are some places where it sounds as if conflict is actually the main interest. The first 1.5 pages only covers conflict. The same goes for the paragraph “Many studies have investigated --- not well documented” on page 6. Another place is page 13 where the authors write “We found thirty studies --- health in conflict-affected general populations”. Why did you not write about post-conflict, if this is the context you are interested in?

>>> Author Response: Thank you for emphasizing the need to clarify the context we are interested in. Because the end of a conflict and the start of the post-conflict phase is difficult to determine, we have previously elaborated on what we understand under post-conflict settings. As explained on page 6 of our manuscript, post-conflict describes the period immediately after a conflict is over. But, the term is more difficult to define for many reasons. Firstly, conflicts do not necessarily end with the signing of official peace agreements. Secondly, low-intensity conflict replaces violent conflict because one or several actors are either excluded or not content with the peace agreement. The end of a conflict and subsequently the start of the post-conflict phase, therefore, become difficult to determine.

At this point, we still want to confirm that we are interested in a post-conflict setting for many reasons:

• this is indicated in the title of our manuscript: “ Health inequalities in post-conflict settings: A systematic review” – Page 1

• this systematic review aims to collate the current knowledge and identify knowledge gaps about structural determinants of health inequalities within post-conflict settings and assess the effects of approaches aimed at addressing structural determinants of health inequalities in this environment- Page 6

• the search strategy was comprehensive to allow for a wide variety of study designs and interpretations of structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict environments to be included – Pages 6-7

However, we clearly understood that additional clarifications were needed to orient the reader in a post-conflict-focused systematic review. By explicitly referring to conflict and post-conflict environments instead of conflict only, we rephrased the following in the manuscript:

• Conflict and post-conflict environments are now referred to in the first 1.5 pages instead of conflict only.

• On page 6: The same goes for the paragraph “Many studies have investigated --- not well documented”.

• As regards the term ‘conflict-affected’: we use this term because, obviously, the interest in post-conflict areas arises from the very fact that the conflict-affected the health situation of the population.

• On page 14: the text reads as follows “We found thirty studies --- health in conflict and post-conflict environments”.

* The introduction has some structural problems. It takes almost six pages before the authors explain what the article is about. I propose moving the paragraph “Very few empirical studies --- health inequalities in post-conflict settings” on pages 6-7 to the very beginning of the article.

>>> Author Response: Thank you very much for your feedback! As the reviewer suggested, we have moved the section starting with “Very few empirical studies --- health inequalities in post-conflict settings” on pages 6-7 to the very beginning of the article. We added the following paragraph at the first page of the Introduction:

” Very few empirical studies have measured health equity in conflict-affected settings, but those have suggested that conflict has a significant impact [4]. Most importantly, there is limited evidence on appropriate approaches for health equity in such environments. To accomplish equity, the prerequisite is first to ascertain the presence of inequality so that targeted interventions can be planned, implemented, and strategically monitored to determine the progress [5]. This systematic review aims to collate the current knowledge and identify knowledge gaps about structural determinants of health inequalities within post-conflict settings and assess the effects of approaches aimed at addressing structural determinants of health inequalities in this environment. It contributes to the body of knowledge on structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings which is also the main outcome of this study”.

We hope this helps to immediately indicate to the reader what the article is about.

* The subheadings “Social determinants vs structural determinants of health”, “Conflict versus post-conflict settings”, and “Right to health” are useful, but these sections would be more appropriately placed in a section called, for example, “Key concepts” or “Background”. This section should come after the introduction, where the authors should explain what they are about to do.

>>> Author Response: Thank you for your comment. We followed the instructions provided by the reviewer and created a new section after the introduction. This section is named: Key concepts. To explain to the reader what we main by key concepts, we added the following paragraph at the beginning of this new section as follows:

” To study health inequalities, it is of importance to clarify the following concepts: social determinants versus structural determinants of health; inequalities versus inequities in health; conflict versus post-conflict settings, effects of conflict on health equity and right to health is relevant. Without clearly understanding those key concepts, no one can develop effective policies for health equity. This paper helps to define those key questions that are needed to better understand health inequalities in post-conflict settings, such as...”

* There should be a new subheading after “Right to health” when the authors go back to explaining their study (the sentence starting with “Many studies have investigated…” on page 6).

>>> Author Response: Thank you very much for your suggestion that helped us to improve the structure of the introduction section. We added a new subheading after ”Right to health” This section has been named: ”Effects of conflict on health equity”- see page 7.

* The paragraph “The outcome of interest was --- better paying job [35]” on page 7 should probably be cued earlier, so the reader knows already in the beginning that this is a key focus for the article.

>>> Author Response: Thank you very much for pointing this out. We tend to agree with the reviewer that moving the section referred to in the comment, might help the reader to capture the key focus for the article from the beginning. We have carefully tried to cue this section earlier. Even so, we feel it still fits better where it is right now because the other paragraphs from the introduction focus more on study rationale, literature review, and key concepts - see page 7. To help the reader to capture the key focus for the article from the beginning, we rephrased the following on page 3 - specifically referring to the main study outcome as follows:

”It contributes to the body of knowledge on structural determinants of health inequalities in post-conflict settings which is also the main outcome of this study”.

* I am not convinced by the authors’ arguments to exclude LGBT+ as a vulnerable group. The Progress-Plus acronym includes Gender/Sex. It seems very peculiar to apply this category only to mean women, and not gender identity and sexual orientation.

>>> Author Response: Thank you very much for coming back to this relevant question. In reality, many people continue to face acute violence and discrimination based on their sexual orientation and gender identity (OHCHR, 2011), and this violence can be exacerbated in post-conflict times. The very complex post-conflict environment is characterized by large numbers of vulnerable people to be absorbed into civilian life. Additionally, there is a reduced functioning of coping mechanisms at the individual, community, and national levels and many other demands to be met. For these reasons and many others (such as the institutional destruction to be addressed), we very much agree with the reviewer’s assessment that LGBTQ+ people belong to the vulnerable population sub-groups in post-conflict environments. However, it might be more relevant to place this into the right perspective by defining what is meant by post-conflict vulnerability, who is vulnerable, and to what particular risk?

How gender identity and sexual orientation (about inequality in health) should be handled in a post-conflict context is indeed an important issue. As noted previously, the focus of our review was to collate the current knowledge and knowledge gaps about structural determinants of health inequalities within post-conflict settings and assess the effects of approaches aimed at addressing structural determinants of health inequalities in this environment. In particular, we found sufficient empirical evidence on gender identity in our review, but less on sexual orientation concerning inequality in health, suggesting that this important issue cannot be easily summarized in the current manuscript. Luckily, we can already learn about this topic from a stable (non-conflict) context. Findings from a recent comprehensive UK scoping review about the Politics of LGBT+ Health Inequality, Elizabeth McDermott et al. (2021) notes that the current body of UK LGBT+ health inequality research is relatively small but there is clear evidence of health inequities between the LGBT+ community, suggesting that the evidence base is insufficient to address this nationally recognized health inequality. Thus, although many people agree (and we are among them) and recognize that LGBTQ+ people as part of the most vulnerable populations (particularly in post-conflict settings) - they require special attention when developing public health interventions that can successfully tackle LGBT+ health inequality. Special consideration must be given to the particular needs and risks faced by individuals based on their sexual orientation and gender identity (e.g. LGBTQ+ people).

Because the reviewer is a strong proponent of including LGBTQ+ people as a separate sub-group in our review, we would not feel comfortable discussing this sub-group without giving it proper attention in the search terms used to identify publications. Thus, this would simply require running an entirely new search and writing a new paper on this (which we may consider doing in the future given the socially relevant topic). For now, we prefer to point the reader in the direction of the sub-groups we have identified as being most vulnerable in this environment.

* The review should not include the reference to Alzate (2008). The study selection criteria on page 9 say “a) post-conflict environment was explicitly described as study setting”. In the early 2000s, Colombia had the highest levels of conflict-related mortality. On page 17, the authors write: “From a human rights perspective, [42] notes that IDPs have been denied the opportunity to participate in the development process or their engagement has been seriously compromised in Colombia.” Alzate’s article does not discuss IDPs in a post-conflict scenario (which by any standard definitions, would be after the Havana Peace Accords signed in 2016). The Peace Accords have instated many programs to address health needs of IDPs. This article is just too old to be relevant for the case of Colombia, if the authors are indeed selecting on post-conflict settings.

>>> Author Response: We thank the reviewer for this valid comment and the suggestions. Although the paper by Alzate was initially included because it fulfilled the search criteria, we removed it. Furthermore, we still want to emphasize that on page 6 of our manuscript, we referred to additional criteria for the final selection of publications including - (i) containing at least one of the three key concepts (post-war, inequality, and health) (S2 File).

Indeed, the reviewer is right by pointing out that Colombia shouldn’t be seen as a post-conflict setting by the time Alzate’s article was published in 2008. One argument supporting this statement is that we didn’t find a signed peace agreement (part of the characteristics used to define post-conflict settings in our manuscript) this time.

To better understand the history of the conflict in Colombia, we checked and found the classification by Ramos Jaraba et al. (2020) relevant to this discussion - see summary below:

Period/years Description

FIRST PERIOD (1958–1982) Emergence of guerrilla forces, subversive violence, and violence between two political parties.

SECOND PERIOD (1982–1996) Was defined by the military strengthening of guerrilla forces and their territorial expansion, as well as the appearance of paramilitaries and proliferation of drug trafficking. Also there were peace process with some guerrilla groups.

THIRD PERIOD (1996–2005) Exhibited the greatest upsurge in the conflict with the expansion of illegal armed groups, massacres, extortion, kidnapping, drug trafficking.

FOURTH PERIOD (2005–2012) Known as the period of “readjustment of the armed conflict,” was defined by two crucial processes: 1) a military offensive by the Colombian state, and 2) negotiations and subsequent demobilization of paramilitary groups.

FIFTH PERIOD (2012–2017) Peace dialogues in Havana between the national government and FARC-EP guerillas, dialogue with ELN guerillas in Quito, reconfiguration of other armed groups in the country.

Alzate’s paper was published in the fourth period of the long conflict. Although this period does not refer to a signed peace agreement in Colombia, it indicates that negotiations and demobilization of paramilitary groups were ongoing.

Finally, we addressed all comments and removed the reference to Alzate (2008) through the manuscript. We also updated supplemental study materials (PRISMA and extraction table) to reflect this change.

* Reference 95 on page 16 about prenatal exposure is not correct. In this article, Roseboom writes “In fact, epigenetic studies have shown that prenatal exposure to violence leaves lasting epigenetic marks on the glucocorticoid receptor that can still be detected 10–19 years later.” Why do you refer to a literature review, and not the empirical article? Also, the wording of the sentence is a clear case of copy-paste. (The authors write: “Similarly, [95] notes that prenatal exposure to violence leaves lasting epigenetic marks on the glucocorticoid receptor that can still be detected 10–19 years later.”) I strongly encourage the authors to use their own words, and not refer to literature reviews but directly to empirical articles.

>>> Author Response: Thank you very much for your constructive feedback. We have addressed your comments as described below.

Page 19. In a study of the effects of the conflict on mortality both in utero and during the first year of life in the DRC, Dagnelie and colleagues [64] show that in utero exposure to conflict negatively affects the number of males (by a reduction of the number of male fetuses) reaching birth. Furthermore, the authors show that conflict exposure increases infant mortality specifically among girls. Possible explanations for such an outcome are in utero biological factors.

In another study discussing why achieving gender equality is of fundamental importance to improve the health and well-being of future generations, Roseboom (94) notes that prenatal exposure to violence has been associated with long-term effects on children’s health, especially on brain structure and neural function, that can still be detected many years later.

* On page 21 and many other places in the article, the authors refer to the general population as a population sub-group. A general population cannot also be a population sub-group. Please rephrase.

>>> Author Response: Thank you for constructive feedback. For clarification, this has now been rephrased and changed to “civilian population ”. Accordingly, it has also been modified throughout the revised manuscript.

* The discussion seems quite repetitive/similar to the results. I suggest the authors to merge the discussion section until mid-page 26 into the results, and to let the parts starting with the “Study Strenghts and Limitations” be the discussion.

>>> Author Response: We understood that clarifications were needed to avoid repetitions in the results section. As suggested by the reviewer, we merged the discussion section until mid-page 26 into the results. As a result, the parts starting with the “Study Strengths and Limitations” are now in the discussion section.

* In reference to the authors’ rebuttal with respect to IDPs versus refugees, I want to point out that not all international refugees enjoy protection from the UNHCR.

>>> Author Response: Thanks for your comment. We agree with the reviewer that not all international refugees enjoy protection from the UNHCR.

* On page 12, the authors write “Three regions, including Asia Pacific, South America, and Europe, had comparable data …”. What does “comparable data” mean? Please clarify.

>>> Author Response: Thank you very much for pointing this out. We rephrased the sentence to explain what we mean by comparable data. The revised text on page 13 reads as follows: ”

”Small numbers of papers emanated from three regions, including Asia Pacific, South America, and Europe – potentially an indicator that recent peace agreements have been reached in these regions. Only one study collected data in the Russia and Eurasia region.”

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On inclusion/exclusion of LGBT as a vulnerable group: the authors’ counterarguments are fine, but then I suggest adding this as a limitation and a gap for future work. Picking two or three sentences from the rebuttal letter would suffice.

The paragraph on page 4 starting with: ”There is evidence that conflict can be a primary driver of health inequalities (9). The following example from the DRC clearly illustrates this point.” What does this example have to do with health inequalities? It’s more about the difference between direct and indirect mortality in conflict. For it to have something to do with health inequalities, it would have needed information about how mortality differs across SES groups.

Page 13 “… potentially an indicator that recent peace agreements have been reached in these regions.” This can easily be checked, so there is no need for speculation. See for example https://www.peaceagreements.org/. I would assume Sub-Saharan Africa is more researched due to the many international development cooperation initiatives in the region.

Page 17 “According to Sorenson (115), one feature of post-conflict environments that is often ignored by academics and policymakers is the situation of women.” What does this mean? Women’s situation in post-conflict has been extensively researched.

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This manuscript has been much improved. For example, I particularly like that the authors use the term “civilian population” rather than “general population” and explain their rationale for this.

Some minor comments remain before the manuscript is ready for publication:

Reviewers' comment:

On inclusion/exclusion of LGBT as a vulnerable group: the authors’ counterarguments are fine, but then I suggest adding this as a limitation and a gap for future work. Picking two or three sentences from the rebuttal letter would suffice.

>>> Author Response:

We thank the reviewer for this valid comment and the suggestions. The revised text on page 27 of our manuscript reads now as follows:

”Third, although we agree and recognize LGBTQ+ (Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, Trans, Queer, and others) people as belonging to the most vulnerable sub-groups in post-conflict settings – this sub-group was not included in our systematic review because LGBTQ+ issues require special attention. For the same reason, they could not be easily summarized in the current manuscript. To successfully tackle LGBTQ+ issues, special consideration must be given to the particular needs and risks faced by individuals based on their sexual orientation and gender identity. Future systematic reviews on health inequalities within the post-conflict environment should also include LGBTQ+ people as a vulnerable sub-group”.

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The paragraph on page 4 starting with: ”There is evidence that conflict can be a primary driver of health inequalities (9). The following example from the DRC clearly illustrates this point.” What does this example have to do with health inequalities? It’s more about the difference between direct and indirect mortality in conflict. For it to have something to do with health inequalities, it would have needed information about how mortality differs across SES groups.

>>> Author Response:

We thank the reviewer for raising this question. We went back to the paper in which the relionship between conflict and health inequalities has been extensively discussed (Ranson et al, 2007). Specifically, we focused on the broad context of interest for our systematic review, which includes inequality in health within the post-conflict environment. While reading Ranson’s review again - a few arguments came up that explain why we selected the example from the DRC to illustrate the link between conflict and health inequalities (which we have made explicit in the revised version of the manuscript – as described below).

First, we agree with the reviewer that socio-economic status (as measured by education, income or occupation) is a key determinant of health. However, there are other relevant determinants of health which are specific to the post-conflict environment, such as: 1) differential exposure – which may vary (by type, amount, and duration) between social groups 2) differential vulnerability – even when a given risk factor is distributed evenly across social groups, its impact on health may be unevenly distributed due to underlying differences between social groups in their vulnerability or susceptibility to that factor and 3) differential consequences – the impact of a certain health event differs depending on an individual’s or family’s socio-economic circumstances or health.

Second, life expectancy and mortality trends are familiar ways of measuring health status and monitoring health inequalities. The example of the DRC illustrates the links between conflict and geographical inequalities in mortality, suggesting that mortality rate was higher in unstable eastern provinces, and supporting the idea that life expectancy is lower in more deprived areas.

To clearly explain this point to the reader, we have revised the paragraph on page 4 of the manuscript, emphasizing the link between conflict and health inequalities in the DRC, and we have rephrased this sentence as follows:

”There is evidence that conflict can be a primary driver of health inequalities (9). Specifically, socio-economic status (as measured by education, income or occupation) is a key determinant of health. But, there are other more important determinants of health which are specific to the post-conflict environment, such as : 1) differential exposure – which may vary (by type, amount, and duration) between social groups 2) differential vulnerability – even when a given risk factor is distributed evenly across social groups, its impact on health may be unevenly distributed due to underlying differences between social groups in their vulnerability or susceptibility to that factor and 3) differential consequences – the impact of a certain health event differs depending on an individual’s or family’s socio-economic circumstances or health.

Furthermore, life expectancy and mortality trends are familiar ways of measuring health status and monitoring health inequalities. Countries without basic data on mortality (including post-conflict countries), by socioeconomic indicators might have difficulties progressing their health equity agenda. The example of the DRC illustrates the links between conflict and regional inequalities in mortality. It indicates that mortality rate was higher in unstable eastern provinces compared to stable provinces, and suggest that life expectancy was lower in more deprived areas.

Through a series of mortality surveys conducted between 2000 and 2004, the International Rescue Committee (IRC) has documented the humanitarian impact of war and conflict in the DRC. These studies estimated that 3.9 million people had died since 1998, arguably making the DRC's conflict the world's deadliest crisis since World War II. Less than 10 percent of all deaths were due to violence, with most deaths attributed to easily preventable and treatable health conditions (indirectly caused by conflict- and resulting in inequitable health) such as malaria, diarrhea, respiratory infections, and malnutrition (10). Furthermore, deaths are often used as the primary indicator for the effect that conflict has on civilians; indeed, the number of these deaths declined in the DRC following an increase in security (11-13).”

Reviewers' comment:

Page 13 “… potentially an indicator that recent peace agreements have been reached in these regions.” This can easily be checked, so there is no need for speculation. See for example https://www.peaceagreements.org/. I would assume Sub-Saharan Africa is more researched due to the many international development cooperation initiatives in the region.

>>> Author Response:

Thank you for sharing this very interesting hyperlink about peace agreements status. We checked the Peace Agreement Database (https://www.peaceagreements.org/) and found relevant information about the specific regions of interest (e.g.: Asia Pacific, South America, and Europe). Between 1990 and 2021, 381 peace agreements were signed in the Asia Pacific, 414 in Europe, and 195 in the Americas - which support our previous reporting that recent peace agreements were reached in these regions. For the sake of clarity, we have rephrased this in the revised version of the manuscript on Page 13: “…an indicator that recent peace agreements have been reached in these regions ”, omitting the ‘potentially’.

Reviewers' comment:

Page 17 “According to Sorenson (115), one feature of post-conflict environments that is often ignored by academics and policymakers is the situation of women.” What does this mean? Women’s situation in post-conflict has been extensively researched.

>>> Author Response:

Thank you very much for your question. We agree with the reviewer that women’s situation in post-conflict has been extensively researched and findings suggest that their situation is characterized by fundamental weaknesses or imperfection in several ways (e.g. Targeting women for professional health care training is a key to improving the community's health status, In addition, it may also provide valuable opportunities for long-term employment. However, in practice, many programs continue to discriminate against women when enrolling people in training activities). This has serious implications for both our understanding of women's situation and our ability to effectively and efficiently assist them.

To explain what we mean by “often ignored”; we revised the sentence on page 17 as follows:

“According to Sorenson (115), health care and other social facilities remain inadequate for women’s health in the post-conflict period. As such, they face new challenges (e.g. their traditional roles and relationship) and inherit additional responsibilities. The social transformation occurring in the post-conflict context opens up opportunities that should not be missed for women ”.

Reviewers' comment:

References # 14 and # 105 (and possibly others) are not complete.

>>> Author Response:

Thank you very much for the reminder. For completeness, missing details were added to references # 14 and #105 in EndNote. Furthermore, relevant details were added to references #7, #10, #13, #16, #18, #20, #21, #22, #23, #28, #32, #37, #59 and #105 in the revised manuscript.

Reviewers' comment:

Last sentence on page 5: “throughout” – not “thought”.

>>> Author Response:

Thank you for this comment. We have made revisions accordingly. The original sentence on page 5 of the manuscript has been modified with the inclusion of the correct word: ”throughout”. As a result we believe the message now is more clear.

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Health inequalities in post-conflict settings: A systematic review.

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