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. 2022 Mar 18;17(3):e0265561. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0265561

A qualitative study of knowledge, attitudes and perceptions towards malaria prevention among people living in rural upper river valleys of Nepal

Kiran Raj Awasthi 1,*, Jonine Jancey 1, Archie C A Clements 1, Justine E Leavy 1
Editor: Benedikt Ley2
PMCID: PMC8932613  PMID: 35303022

Abstract

Background

Nepal has made significant progress in decreasing the number of malaria cases over the last two decades. Prevention and timely management of malaria are critical for the National Malaria Program in its quest for elimination. The study aimed to explore the knowledge, attitudes and behaviour towards malaria prevention and treatment among people living in rural villages of Khatyad Rural Municipality in Nepal.

Methods

This qualitative study collected information through virtual in-depth interviews (N = 25) with female and male participants aged between 15 and 72 years.

Results

More than half of the participants knew about the causes of malaria, were aware of the complications of untreated malaria and knew that anti-malarial medicines were provided for free at the public health facilities. Participants indicated that their first choice of health care were public health facilities, however limited supply of medications and diagnostics deviated patients to the private sector. While tertiary care costs were not financially viable, participants opted against traditional care for malaria. Factors such as cost of treatment, distance to the health facility and the decision making authority in households influenced health related decisions in the family. Although long-lasting insecticidal nets were distributed and indoor residual spraying was done periodically, several barriers were identified.

Conclusion

Increased awareness of malaria prevention and treatment among people living in malaria risk areas is important for the National Malaria Program in its quest for malaria elimination in Nepal.

Introduction

Globally malaria contributes 409,000 deaths annually [1, 2]. The number of malaria cases in Nepal decreased from 11,000 in 2000 to 1,065 in 2019 and a low Annual Parasitic Incidence of 0.09 per 1,000 population at risk [3]. Among these 1065 malaria cases, 440 were indigenous (locally transmitted) and 625 were imported cases mostly from neighbouring India and countries in Africa [3]. Plasmodium vivax constituted 94.6% of the total cases in the country, whilst the remaining 5.4% were Plasmodium falciparum cases [3]. The decrease in cases is attributed to scaling up malaria prevention interventions including; the free distribution of long-lasting insecticidal nets (LLINs), periodic indoor residual spraying (IRS) of insecticides in high-risk areas, improved surveillance and active case detection, and the use of Artemisinin based Combination Therapy (ACT) for treatment of P. falciparum malaria, and support from external development partners such as the Global Fund [3, 4]. Nepal is well on course to reach elimination by 2025 as outlined in its National Malaria Strategic Plan 2014–2025 [3, 5].

Nepal is divided into seven provinces, of which two, Karnali and Sudurpaschim, contributed more than 70% of the country’s malaria burden in 2019 [3]. Geographically and topographically the country is divided into three distinct areas: the Terai plains in the south bordering India; middle hills; and upper mountains in the north adjoining Tibet [6]. The Terai plains constitute a large area of national parks and forests, which experience a subtropical climate, year-round cultivation, and constant cross border movement of people from Nepal to India through open borders [6]. The valleys between the middle hills and the upper mountains are often referred to as the upper river valleys (URV). The URV corridor recorded four separate outbreaks in six villages across five districts between 2017 and 2019 [7, 8]. In 2019, the URV contributed to 28% of the overall malaria cases in Nepal [7, 8]. Between 2017 and 2019, the largest numbers of cases (289, mostly indigenous Plasmodium vivax cases) were reported from Rigga, a village in Khatyad Rural Municipality (KRM), located in the URV of Karnali province [3, 8, 9]. The URV corridor is remote and has limited road access, creating significant challenges for preventing and controlling malaria transmission.

Temperature, humidity and rainfall are important environmental factors linked to malaria transmission [10]. Summer temperatures across the URV reach as high as 40 degrees Celsius and the rain during the monsoon season creates water reservoirs that act as mosquito breeding sites [11]. Studies have shown that malaria vectors can survive up to 3,000 meters above sea level [10]. The ability of vectors to survive and breed at higher altitudes is a cause for concern when it comes to preventing the transmission of malaria in the remote URV corridor.

Malaria is often considered a disease of the poor and has been associated with communities [12, 13]. The majority of people living in remote villages in the URV rely on traditional small-scale farming and have limited household income [14]. Families of lower socioeconomic status (SES) are less likely to seek health care early, leading to delayed malaria diagnosis and increased symptom severity [14, 15]. Delays in malaria treatment often lead to increased transmission and outbreaks. Moreover, a scarcity of funds influences household priorities, and purchasing bed nets and other prevention measures is not prioritized [13]. Furthermore, limited sources of income coupled with modest employment opportunities lead to villagers migrating to malaria endemic urban Nepal or neighbouring India, potentially exposing them to malaria [6, 16]. The seasonal back and forth movement of potentially infected migrants from high risk malaria areas, coupled with presence of the vectors locally can trigger malaria transmission in the community [16].

Nepal’s National Malaria Elimination Program (NMEP) distributes LLINs through mass campaigns in endemic areas every year [17]. Regular use of LLINs is dependent on various factors such as awareness of their importance, temperature (use can decline with hot weather), distribution of free LLINs from the NMEP and availability of hanging space in small rooms [18]. Additionally, periodic IRS in endemic areas of the country is carried out during pre and post-monsoon season by the NMEP [3, 5]. IRS reduces malaria incidence in highly endemic areas and is an important strategy for preventing malaria transmission [19, 20]. Local epidemiological data and vector behaviour studies are used to direct teams during an IRS campaign. Community acceptance is paramount to the success of any IRS campaign and several rounds of IRS within short time frames may cause fatigue and irritation among household members, leading to households refusing to allow the activity to be undertaken [20]. Given the barriers to the success of the malaria control interventions, this study aimed to explore the knowledge and attitudes about behaviour towards malaria prevention, and explain factors that might influence treatment among people living in two malaria-endemic wards (smallest administrative unit) of KRM.

Materials and methods

This qualitative research used a phenomenological approach to explore the real-life experiences of the Nepalese people living in the KRM [21]. The study was approved by the Nepal Health Research Council (ERB 632/2020, Ref. No. 1287) and Curtin University’s Human Research Ethics Committee number HRE2020-0701. The design and the results of the study followed the Consolidated Criteria for Reporting Qualitative Research (COREQ), with respect to: 1) the research team and reflexivity; 2) study design; and 3) reporting the results [22].

Research team

The research team comprised of six members located in Australia and Nepal. A Nepalese-born doctoral student enrolled in an Australian university, experienced in qualitative and quantitative research and community facilitation (KA); three university based academics with expertise in malaria epidemiology (AC), qualitative research and health promotion (JEL and JJ); and local research assistants (RAs) with a public health background and currently working for the national malaria program at the study site.

Study setting

The study was conducted in a remote URV high malaria risk village of KRM located in Karnali Province, Nepal [23]. The sites were selected based on past episodes of malaria transmission, with the wards classified as high-risk wards by the NMEP in their 2019 microstratification exerciseMajority of the population in this area rely on subsistence agriculture or seasonal labor migration for income and have a lower socioeconomic status [3]. The nearest road access is an hour by foot. The roads are not accessible during the monsoon season (June-August) due to rain, or during winter (January and February) due to snowfall. The closest public health facilities, the health posts (HPs), Ama HP and Hyanglu HP, are half an hour walk away, whilst a Primary Health Centre (PHC), Ratapani PHC, is a further two hour walk by foot. A private clinic with a pharmacy, locally referred to as a ‘medical’, is an hour walk from the villages.

Participant eligibility and recruitment

Twenty-five participants were purposively selected, including males (n = 10) and females (n = 15) between the ages of 15 to 72 years. The inclusion of elderly participants aged 60 years and above was to explore their experiences of malaria, both past and present, along with their roles in health related decision-making within extended families [24]. A younger age group was also recruited to explore the influence of cultural practices among adolescents (n = 2) whilst female community health volunteers were included (n = 4) to elaborate the health care seeking behaviour of the community. Participants were selected using a criterion-based sampling method, a criteria adopted to select a variety (farmers, local leaders, migrants, school teachers, and students) of participants, including males, females and people from varied age groups [13, 25]. Based on these criteria, a mix of potential participants were identified by the principal researcher from different cohorts that included priests, health workers, past malaria patients, teachers and students to generate rich information. The RAs supported in recruitment of these participants at the study site and arranged the necessary logistics for conducting the virtual interviews.

Qualitative data collection

Interview guide development

A semi-structured interview guide was developed based on similar research [17] and the researchers’ experience exploring the topic of malaria. In-depth interviews are used in public health research to explore the perspectives, experiences and thought processes of individuals and to understand how these influence behaviour choices [26]. Piloting of the interview guide was conducted (n = 3) to ensure there was no ambiguity in the questions. The comprehension of malaria specific terminology were assessed and questions were modified or excluded based on the feedback from the pilot stage.

Data collection

Virtual in-depth interviews were conducted between November and December 2020 (post monsoon) by the lead author (KA) with local support from Research Assistants. Due to COVID 19 travel restrictions, the interviews were conducted virtually using video conferencing. Whilst sixteen participants were interviewed in their own house, remaining nine including health workers were interviewed in a meeting hall of the nearby health post. Participants provided consent, both oral and written, before participating in the study and the written consent were collected by the RAs. Personal identifiers were neither recorded nor transcribed to maintain anonymity. Permission was also obtained to audio record the one-on-one interviews. All interviews were conducted in Nepali. Interviews were between 25 to 35 minutes in length. Anonymity was ensured by using pseudonyms and removing any identifiers including names and data were stored securely.

Data analysis

Audio recordings of the interviews were transcribed verbatim in Nepali and later translated into English by the lead researcher (KA). Inductive thematic analysis was used to identify and report the themes generated from the data using Braun and Clarke’s method: familiarizing with the data; generating initial codes; searching for appropriate themes; reviewing the identified themes and defining/ naming the themes [27]. Transcripts were read thoroughly twice and coded using NVivo software version 12 (QSR International Pty Ltd) by the lead researcher KA. Codes were created using an open coding process to explore all new ideas and concepts. Although the initial coding concentrated on the language and descriptions used by the participants, the information from the generated codes helped to identify the major concerns. The generated codes were organized and sorted based on similarities and clustered into core themes. Literature on malaria prevention and treatment was read concurrently during the data analysis to help understand and develop the generated themes. Themes were also identified independently by JEL and JJ and consensus was reached on the final themes. A concept mapping process was used to explain the relationships and associations between the generated themes based on the focus of the study [27, 28].

Results

The results of the interviews (n = 25) including illustrative quotes of the participants are presented. The participants included farmers (n = 13), priest/ traditional healers (n = 2), female community health volunteers (n = 2), school teachers (n = 2), students (n = 2), self-employed/service (n = 2) and local leaders (n = 2). The central concept ‘malaria prevention and treatment choices’ and the associated knowledge, attitudes and behaviours are discussed. Three themes were identified: 1) consciousness; 2) choices and preferences; and 3) availability and practices (Fig 1).

Fig 1. Concept map of identified themes.

Fig 1

Consciousness

More than half of the participants (n = 17) correctly identified “Gamgadas” (the local name for mosquitoes) as the cause of malaria, however, others were unclear about the actual cause. Two participants felt wearing thin clothing facilitated mosquito bites. A participant suggested that the environment around the house was related to an increase in mosquitoes that cause malaria “When there are ditches or potholes, dirt around the houses, mosquitoes are produced in the standing water in the ditches” (male, farmer). The remaining participants, however, had minimal ideas on malaria transmission. While some participants blamed the unclean water during the monsoon season for causing malaria, others associated it with undernutrition, consumption of stale food and sun (hot weather). A high school student shared her malaria knowledge “It [malaria] happens if we eat unhealthy and rotten foods, if we don’t wash our hands, if we drink dirty water, if we don’t wash our clothes and if we don’t wear thick clothes” (female). With regards to the severity of malaria, three of the participants thought that malaria would make them physically weak, while eight of the participants thought it could result in death.

Most of the participants (n = 19) knew that they could get anti-malarial medicine from the public HPs whilst fourteen participants knew they had to take two different types of tablets for a period of 14 to 15 days, a common duration required to treat Plasmodium vivax infection. Five participants however reported incidents of non-adherence to the treatment protocol in their family and neighbours. “They [villagers] take medicines for 4–5 days and feel better, and then they leave the medicine as it is. Some people did not have it [full medication course] due to shivering and thought that a reaction had happened. We [community health volunteers] and the health workers all went there [patient’s house], convinced them, and made them take the medicines.” (female, FCHV). She also recalled a relapsed malaria case that she had attended “She [patient] threw away the medicines after taking only half …. She had malaria again when she was pregnant”.

Altogether thirteen participants mentioned that the government had conducted programs including distribution of LLINs, IRS and community testing in the village. The remaining participants were either unsure or unaware of the role the government had played in the prevention of malaria in their village whilst three participants credited the support provided by external development partners (Non Governmental Organisations and International Non Governmental Organisations) for their role in malaria prevention and treatment.

Choices and preferences

First choice of health care

All the participants said that their first choice of health care was the public HP nearby. Participants preferred the public health facilities because of their proximity, free service and provision of medications “At first we will go to the health post. If the treatment is not done there [public health post] then we will go to the private medical [clinic]. Poor people can get free malaria treatment at the health post” (female, farmer). However nine participants identified limitations of the public HPs including inadequate resources and limited hours of outpatient services due to which they were compelled to seek service from the nearest private medical clinics. One participant commented “When the required medicines are not available in the health post, we go to the medical [private clinics]. We do check-up in the health post and get the medicine from the medical” (male, farmer).

For tertiary (advanced) hospital care including treatment of severe malaria, the participants explained that they had to either travel to Nepalgunj (the nearest city) or Kathmandu (the capital). Participants noted that in the past villagers would go to Nepalgunj for malaria treatment “Two-three years back, most of the people went to Nepalgunj for treatment of malaria. The main city near to us is Nepalgunj” (female, farmer). Travel to Nepalgunj and Kathmandu was an expensive, arduous journey taking several days “It takes a lot of time sir to go downwards [Nepalgunj]… it takes 4–5 days” (male, farmer). Although participants could fly to Nepalgunj from Kolti in Bajura, a four-hour walk from the villages, the flights were limited “A lot of times the planes do not fly. They [airlines] say the weather is not good…. as passengers are very few… there are no people coming up here [Bajura] from down there [Nepalgunj]” (male, photographer).

Traditional management of malaria was described by participants as visits to traditional healers known as ‘Dhamis’ or ‘Jhakris’. However, the use of traditional healers did not seem common. The participants reported that they would not seek care from Dhamis for malaria now “I don’t believe in Dhami-Jhankri sir. I am also one of them sir but I don’t believe” (male, priest). Nonetheless, the Dhamis’ advice was still sought for other illnesses including those related to faith “When we suspect someone being possessed by Lagubhagu [evil spirits] we go and visit the Dhami Jhakri, and show it to them” (female, farmer).

Factors influencing health decisions

The participants highlighted that distance to health care facilities, cost of treatment and the decision making authority of the head of the family, were factors that influenced decisions regarding health care choices and timely treatment. The participants shared the difficulties in accessing health care for different age cohorts and the severely ill due to the remoteness and distance to commute on foot to the nearest health facility. “We get dizziness, leg pain, bone pain while going there [health post] and we become tired after returning” (female, mothers group member). Another participant further described the difficulties surrounding several age groups and conditions “there are some people like old people, small children …for us, there is no problem… let’s say if there is delivery situation [childbirth] or sick elderly people, they have to be carried to the health post” (male, photographer).

The cost of treatment influenced health-related decisions often presenting as barriers. A participant highlighted the cost of the journey to get a family member treated for malaria after being referred to a public tertiary hospital in Nepalgunj “We took him in the plane, it cost NRs 5,000 [USD 50] and thereafter it took more than NRs. 60,000 to 80,000[USD 550–750]” (female, farmer/ housewife). Decision makers within a family were found to play a key role in health decision making and were influential in determining where the treatment is sought such as traditional versus public health facilities or private clinics. According to seventeen participants, the decision makers regarding health matters in the family were often the family head, mostly males (father/father-in-law/husband). However, among families where males were not around, the wives (n = 3) were the key decision makers. “My father is not alive. My mother takes it [the decisions]” (male, farmer).

Availability and practices

Use of long lasting insecticidal nets

The provision and subsequent use of LLINs from the Epidemiology and Disease Control Division (EDCD) in 2018 were explored. All the participants acknowledged receiving LLINS whilst most of them (n = 22) revealed they only used them for three to six months and not during the winter (December to February) as the mosquitos were sparse. However, three participants shared that they used the nets all year to protect themselves from other insects “There are ‘Chadchu’ [bedbugs] all the time, so we keep using it both in the rainy and winter season” (female, farmer).

Some participants (n = 3) shared that the nets distributed in 2018 were torn; the causes were frequent washing and use of detergents, including baking soda. A participant highlighted why it was necessary to frequently wash the nets “In the house, there is only one kitchen and same place for sleeping, it [LLIN] becomes black” (male, photographer). An elderly female explained the reason for using a detergent or baking soda while washing her nets, and how it affected the LLINs “When we kill the mosquitoes and the ‘Chadchu’ [bed bugs] the nets get stained with blood which would dry up. So when I washed it in the hot water with soda, again and again, to get the blood out, it tore out” (farmer). Ten participants mentioned that washed nets were dried in a shaded area as recommended by the manufacturer.

Indoor residual spraying

All the participants revealed that IRS was done in their houses every year. They shared that the spraying killed all the insects including mosquitoes and cockroaches in the households and believed it had contributed to the decrease of malaria cases in the village. However, fifteen participants reported experiencing several negative consequences of IRS, which caused some villagers to resist or refuse insecticide spraying in their houses. Altogether eleven participants shared their experiences of increased bed bugs after the spraying episodes “After spraying, the places where spraying was done, bed bugs were seen there. I think bed bugs were produced after that” (female, primary school teacher). One participant stressed how the IRS had disrupted the whole animal food chain that led to an increase in bed bugs. He presented his theory, “There are many bed bugs even in the winter and don’t let us sleep. Earlier, they [bed bugs] would be eaten by the cockroaches and lizards, but after the spraying, all cockroaches died and lizards went away so nothing to kill them [bed bugs]. My neighbour got cockroaches from her maternal home this year and reared them and is saying that the bed bugs are so less now. Maybe I will go and ask her for some [cockroaches] (laugh)” (male, serviceman).

Nine participants reported the consequences of IRS on the bee-farming family business. The people in the villages traditionally rear bees for honey inside their houses. Participants stated that their bees died or fled due to the insecticide (IRS) “Some villagers said that their ‘Mauras’ [bees] would die and they have to bear the loss, they don’t let them spray [insecticides] in their houses” (male, priest). For these villagers, the need to maintain their bees and source of livelihood, outweighed the potential health risks posed to them and the community from a lack of spraying. Lastly, five participants held negative views towards IRS due to concerns about the effect on existing health conditions, especially respiratory conditions like asthma. “They [villagers] requested not to spray as they had asthma patients and bees at their home” (female, teacher). Several participants (n = 3) commended the FCHVs and health personnel for their efforts in advocating and motivating the resisting villagers to support the preventive IRS activities.

Discussion and recommendations

This research explored the knowledge, attitudes and behaviour of the people of KRM with respect to malaria prevention and treatment. Our results found that many participants had a high level of current knowledge of malaria prevention and treatment. Factors such as cost, distance to the health facility and decision making authority among elders influenced health seeking behaviour in the community. This study will add to the limited literature on malaria in Nepal and inform the NMEP in formulating strategies to remove community-level barriers for malaria prevention and treatment.

The interplay of social and economic factors contribute to the complexity of malaria prevention and treatment in rural settings. This study found that, whilst half of the participants correctly identified the causes of malaria, several participants were unaware of the causes of malaria. Similar to our findings, Togbay et al. in Bhutan found participants perceived hard work in adverse weather conditions (heat and rain), cooking with firewood, dirty and unhygienic surroundings in and around the house, dirty water, and people sleeping outdoors during the harvesting as causes of malaria [29]. Described as a disease of the poor, knowledge related to malaria disease and transmission is associated with the SES [12, 30]. Yadav et al. in Rajasthan India, reported that 90% of their respondents from lower SES communities were not aware that mosquito bites caused malaria compared to 36% being unaware among those of higher SES [30]. Of interest, the participants knew that untreated malaria could make people severely ill, weak and even lead to death. As the majority of the population in KRM belongs to the lower SES group, future health promotion strategies targeted at awareness raising amongst lower SES groups on causes and prevention of malaria would be worthwhile.

Treatment adherence to anti-malarial drugs was found to be an issue. Participants were aware of anti-malarial medication and knew that it was provided free of cost from the public health facilities, however, our participants reported non-compliance with the treatment protocol after the third day as they were asymptomatic. The Nepal national malaria treatment protocol (NMTP) recommends two drugs for the treatment of Plasmodium vivax; a three-day Chloroquine and a two-week Primaquine course [31]. Interestingly, compliance issues exist in countries with the shorter seven-day Primaquine regimen, therefore it is a challenge for the NMEP to ensure Primaquine adherence for fourteen days, raising concerns of possible future relapses [32, 33]. Grietens et al. found that only half of their study participants completed a seven-day Primaquine course, with one-fourth experiencing relapses as a result of non-adherence [32]. Reasons for non-compliance included easing of symptoms within the first three days, bad taste of the medicine, loss of appetite, and allergies [32]. A multi-country randomized control trial revealed similar recurrence rates in a higher dose seven-day (1·0 mg/kg per day; 7·0 mg/kg total dose) and lower dose fourteen-day Primaquine regimens (0·5 mg/kg per day; 7 mg/kg total dose) [33]. This finding could provide the NMEP evidence to revise the existing NMTP. Nonetheless, there is a need to improve awareness in the population regarding the possibility of relapse due to Primaquine non-adherence. Directly observed therapy (DOT) of Primaquine through health workers, especially FCHVs, could be a viable way to increase compliance [34].

The participants were not aware of the role of the government in malaria prevention and management, which reinforces the need to increase the visibility of the NMEP at the grassroots level. In an effort to meet the program goals, the NMEP should work collaboratively with the local municipality. Therefore, a combination of top-down and bottom-up approaches when designing, implementing and evaluating malaria prevention activities will be one way to approach malaria prevention and control [35, 36]. Mlozi et al. in their study in Tanzania found that community engagement in malaria control interventions empowers people at risk, improves disease-specific knowledge and increases acceptability amongst targeted communities [36]. The involvement of experts from the government and health sector along with community members in all phases of the intervention will decrease the gap between the perceived needs and the actual needs of a population, thereby developing local ownership of the activities. This will make the population at risk aware of the national goals and ensure long-term sustainability.

This study found participants preferred public health facilities for malaria diagnosis and treatment compared with private and traditional healers. Malaria treatment is also free in these public health facilities across Nepal [7, 8]. Of interest the villagers still sought health care form Dhami’s and Jhakri’s, for diseases other than malaria. The participants including a Dhami stressed the need to take medication from the HP to cure malaria. This is a positive behaviour change, suggesting an acceptance of western-style health care service providers. Our finding contrasted with other countries where traditional healers still play a role in malaria diagnosis and treatment. Among rural indigenous communities in the Philippines, Matsumoto et al. [37] found a strong inclination of people to seek care for malaria treatment from the Albularyo’s (traditional healers). Strong cultural and traditional influences coupled with doubts on the treatment provided by health professionals were the factors influencing choices [37]. The NMEP should explore the reasons for this change in attitude on disregarding traditional healers for management of malaria and replicate it in other risk areas where it is still practiced.

Our study revealed certain limitations of public health facilities that compelled patients to seek service from private providers. Similar to a study undertaken in Bhutan, limited hours of outpatient services, and limited availability of resources including medication and diagnostic kits throughout the year were found to divert patients to private clinics [29]. Private clinics play an important role in bridging health care gaps in remote settings. However, the quality of diagnosis in treatment of malaria cases in these clinics is questionable, due to the weak monitoring system and lack of commercially available Primaquine in Nepal [12]. A multi-country study on the private sector role in malaria case management illustrated that informal providers (outlets run by individuals with minimal or no training) were responsible for up to 77% of health care interactions in Bangladesh, especially among in the rural poor [38]. Most private clinics in remote villages are not registered and cannot report to the national Health Management Information System (HMIS), resulting in missing cases in the surveillance system. It is, therefore, important for the NMEP to engage private sector providers in malaria risk areas in surveillance activities whilst updating them on the NMTP to ensure correct treatment [38]. Our study showed that referral to tertiary centres added financial burden to families, whilst the difficulties faced to travel further amplifies the need to ensure year-round availability of malaria diagnostic and treatment at facilities within the vicinity of the malaria-endemic wards. Such accessibility and availability would be crucial to prevent any local transmission or focal outbreaks. Outbreaks in such remote areas would be very costly, and difficult to contain promptly, whilst management of possible severe or complicated malaria (in case of Plasmodium falciparum) in the absence of tertiary care facilities in the locality would increase mortality risks.

Participants identified a range of factors that prevent timely access to treatment, namely cost, underlying physical condition and the existing patriarchal social structure. Cost of treatment is a barrier to accessing health care worldwide; this was evident in our results where it influenced health decisions among the participants [12]. In addition, Nepal does not have a universal health insurance system, and all health care costs are out-of-pocket (OOP), often delaying health care seeking among the poor [12, 30, 39]. Therefore the option for free malaria treatment is a step towards equitable and early care, thereby preventing severe malaria [5]. Physical condition such as weakness due to illness or old age of the participants was associated with altered health care seeking behaviour. In remote areas with limited or no transport infrastructure, a long commute by foot was reported to prevent early presentation for treatment [12, 40]. Such delays in malaria treatment can result in local transmission and focal outbreaks. In the Mekong region, active case detection using mobile health workers has ensured that the vulnerable and physically weak are tested and treated in the community mitigating travel concerns and preventing outbreaks [35, 41]. This strategy is very effective for rural, hard-to-reach areas that are often underserved by the national malaria programs due to limited access, cost and logistic difficulties [35]. Nepal is known as a patriarchal society, and we found that key decisions in the family were made by the elders and household heads (mostly males). A household in KRM has an average of six family members, a family size suggestive of large extended families [42]. Financial and health-related decision making authority in extended families lies with the parents or in-laws, leaving the young and especially the daughters-in-law vulnerable [43]. The NMEP should aim to engage and involve the elderly in social awareness activities to bring about desired changes in behaviour and decision making regarding prevention and treatment of malaria. A community advisory board comprising of the elderly to lead and implement activities was found to be widely accepted in the community and successful in malaria prevention in Laos [44]. Such a model could be replicated in highly endemic areas of Nepal to promote local level leadership, and involvement in implementing the programs and activities.

Our study identified certain barriers to preventive measures such as LLIN use and IRS. The majority of our participants used LLINs for three to six months each year and not during the winter. Sahu et al. in Orissa, India, noted a similar behaviour where 24 to 26% of the participants used LLINs seasonally, mostly during the rainy season [45]. Similar behaviour regarding periodic use of LLINs was reported in other studies such as the one conducted in Bhutan [29]. Similar to our findings, the reasons for underutilization of the LLINs in India and Bhutan included a lack of availability of LLINs, early attrition of the nets, reliance on other protective measures such as fire, smoke or fans, and low mosquito density in the houses during winter [29, 46]. LLINs are not available commercially in Nepal; a factor in the sparse use of nets among the participants. Therefore, the NMEP should coordinate with the local municipalities with a high risk of malaria to replace the LLINs periodically. The NMEP could also collaborate with private sector providers to make insecticide treated nets available and affordable commercially, allowing access for those that require a replacement in case of early attrition of the distributed nets [47]. Additionally, normal nets can still act as physical barriers to mosquitoes and other insects including bedbugs, therefore in the absence of LLINs, the use of these nets should be promoted. Interestingly, our participants used detergents and baking soda to wash LLINs to remove dried blood stains and discoloration caused by cooking using firewood in the kitchen. Even Sahu et al. found that 79% of their participants used a detergent or soap to wash LLINs in India [45]. Using coloured LLINs to minimize dirt visibility and making users aware of how detergents and soda can decrease the efficacy of the LLINS and durability, could facilitate behaviour change.

The participants highlighted the unintended negative consequences from IRS such as loss of bees, an increase in bedbugs and allergic reactions in the elderly. Negative consequences could promote community resistance and create further barriers to IRS roll out. Going forward it would be worthwhile to explore the possibility of moving the beehives outdoors to the fields so that they are not affected by the IRS. Locally available plants such as Citronella and Eucalyptus have shown repellent characteristics against both mosquitoes and bed bugs with a mortality rate of over 70% over a 24 hours exposure [48]. Such locally available plant derivatives could complement the IRS in addressing concerns around bed bugs. Interestingly, community resistance to IRS in other countries slightly differed from our findings. Barriers identified by respondents in an Indian study included people believing it increased rodents, left a bad smell, was tiring to shift household goods during spraying, and feared poisoning food, drinking water and domestic animals [30]. In Mozambique, Macago et al. identified additional factors such as disagreement over the selection of spray-men, negative experiences from previous IRS events and political factors such as the difference of opinions between the local leaders of different political parties on key decisions creating community resistance to IRS among the educated population [49]. The NMEP should take into account the negative experiences described by our participants and make the target population aware of the benefits of IRS while removing any misconceptions.

Strengths and limitations of the study

This study captures the perspectives of malaria prevention and treatment of the local community of Khatyad RM of Nepal. The study was conducted by a Nepalese researcher in the native language, which allowed the participants to fully express their feelings and views. The questions were pretested and the study was guided by the COREQ [22]. The inclusion of participants between 15 to 72 years of age allowed us to explore malaria prevention and treatment practices and changes across generations. Due to COVID -19 restrictions, the interviews were conducted virtually, which at times compromised the flow of the interviews due to limited internet services. However, the communication and conversation during the interviews was very similar to conducting face-to-face interviews. As information was collected only using virtual interviews, triangulation could not be done, a limitation of the study. Nonetheless, to our knowledge, this is the first study conducted in the rural malaria endemic areas of Nepal to explore the knowledge, attitudes and behaviour of people relating to malaria prevention and treatment.

Conclusion

In remote, malaria-endemic villages in Nepal, the choice of malaria treatment and healthcare is dependent on various factors such as cost, distance to travel and the knowledge and attitudes of the decision makers in the family. Furthermore, despite public HPs being the first option for malaria treatment and health care, a lack of resources and timely supply of diagnostic and treatment services are some of the limitations faced by people in rural areas. Despite the NMEP providing free LLINs and spraying IRS periodically, negative experiences coupled with a lack of awareness have resulted in the intervention not eliciting the required behaviour change nor full coverage. The NMEP needs to take note of these barriers and plan and implement strategies to overcome the barriers and enable change them. This would ensure maximum benefit from the preventive measures being implemented to prevent malaria transmission in rural communities and bring about sustained behaviour change.

Supporting information

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Acknowledgments

We would like to acknowledge the support of Mr. Mukunda Karki, Mr. Rohit Sah, Dr. Madan Koirala, and Ms. Tamanna Neupane for their support in conducting the study at the field level. We also would like to thank, the participants for their time and the officials of KRM for allowing us to conduct our research in their municipality.

Data Availability

The data has been deposited in the qualitative data repository with the link below https://doi.org/10.5064/F6WMOBYB.

Funding Statement

The principal investigator received funding support from the Research Training Program scholarship at Curtin University. However, the funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: This paper presented a qualitative study of people living in the remote village of Nepal that is considered to have high malaria risk by the NMEP, exploring the knowledge, attitudes, and behavior towards malaria prevention. Understanding community perception is key to disease control and prevention, particularly among communities living in remote villages where contact with health workers may be scarce. However, this paper has some methodological weakness and needs additional information on malaria epidemiology and social context.

Major comments

This paper presented findings from only one method and source of data collection and did not mention triangulation to test the validity of the findings. While the pandemic might restrict certain data collection methods such as observation, other strategies to test validity through the convergence of information from different sources could be sought.

Minor comments

The lack of information on malaria incidence in the study site made it difficult to interpret the findings on knowledge and awareness into context.

As the researchers were not present in the study site, the role of research assistants also needs to be explained more to reflect the sample selection and data collection process.

Section by section review

1. Introduction

Paragraph 1 (lines 45-52):

It would be helpful for the context of the research to have epidemiological measures both nationally and in the study site for the readers to get an idea of how big of a burden is malaria in Nepal and in the study site. The first paragraph of the introduction had numbers of malaria cases, but without any denominators it is difficult to put the information in context. I would suggest adding extra information such as annual malaria incidence. Having information on the proportion of P. vivax malaria will also make the result and discussion on treatment adherence more relevant.

2. Methods

Research team (lines 105-110):

Because the researchers were not present in the study site during data collection, it is important to describe in more detail about the local research assistants, who they are, what were exactly their role in the study, and what were their relationship with the study participants.

Participant eligibility and recruitment (lines 121-127):

I assume this research was done during the covid-19 pandemic so I expect some restrictions in contact between people. If this was the case at the study site, I think it is relevant to explain the method of approach and any non-participation.

Data collection (lines 137-145):

In the discussion section (line 453-454) it was mentioned that the majority of interviews were done virtually. How many were done in person and how many were done virtually?

Where were the zoom interviews held in the study site? Is it at a clinic? At participants’ own houses? Or elsewhere?

3. Results

In some of the quotes the participants mentioned their role as community health volunteers. It would be good if the results section started with a description of such characteristics. How many of the participants were community health volunteers? What about the other participants? What are their roles and positions in the society?

There is a paragraph in the discussion section about treatment adherence. Is there any data that can be added in the results section that might suggest malaria relapse or recurrence?

4. Discussion

The lack of test of validity of the findings due to using only one type of data collection methods with no triangulation should be mentioned as one of the limitations.

5. Title and abstract

As not all readers would be familiar with places in Nepal, I personally think it might benefit the paper if the title and/or abstract mentions more descriptive words such as “remote” and/or “upper river valley.”

Reviewer #2: Review of the paper “A Qualitative Study of Knowledge, Attitudes and Perceptions towards Malaria Prevention among People Living in Khatyad Rural Municipality of Mugu, Nepal” by Awasthi et al.,

Please find below my comments

Methods

Line 121 : Participant eligibility and recruitment : for in-depth interviews, participants are generally people who interact with many people in the community on a daily basis e.g. -head of districts, religious leaders, youth or women leaders etc.- as they are well informed on the population KAP… Pleased clarify if those people were included as participants. Also provide more details on the criteria used for the selection of participants.

Line 130 “A semi-structured interview guide was developed based on similar research [17] and the researchers’ experience exploring the topic of malaria” Can the author add as additional file the questionnaire or the guide used for the interview.

Was survey done during the rainy or dry season? Please clarify as this might affect perception or risk/attitudes toward malaria prevention and treatment.

Results

The author need to be more precise on the number who responded over the number interviewed.

For instance Line 183 “Most of the participants knew that they could get anti-malarial medicine from…” How many please give the number

Another Line 190 “Only half of the participants mentioned that the government had conducted…” They interviewed 25 persons what do they consider as half is it 12 or 13 people please clarify. There are many places in the document where similar terms are used they need to check the whole result section and provide full details on the number of respondent.

See again below

Line 264 : “The majority of the participants (n=10) informed that washed nets were dried in a shaded area as recommended by the manufacturer” is 10 out of 25 interviewed represents the majority ?

also see line 271 “However, most of the participants reported experiencing several negative consequences of….” Wow many please give the precise number

Line 273 “Nearly half of the participants (n=11) shared their experiences of increased bed bugs after…”. Please check and correct accordingly.

Line 296 : I don’t see the need of adding this figure

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Response to reviewers

Manuscript title: A Qualitative Study of Knowledge, Attitude and Perceptions towards Malaria Prevention among People Living in Rural Upper River Valleys of Nepal

Dear reviewers, thank you for your comments and suggestions which have been addressed and colour coded in the manuscripts for your kind perusal. We would also like to acknowledge the effort and time that you have provided to go through our manuscript.

Reviewer 1

Comment 1

This paper presented findings from only one method and source of data collection and did not mention triangulation to test the validity of the findings. While the pandemic might restrict certain data collection methods such as observation, other strategies to test validity through the convergence of information from different sources could be sought.

Response 1

Thank you for your suggestion. This has been now highlighted as one of the limitations of the study. Please refer to Page 22 Line 475-476

As the information was collected only through virtual interviews, triangulation could not be done, a limitation of the study.

Comment 2

Paragraph 1 (lines 45-52):

It would be helpful for the context of the research to have epidemiological measures both nationally and in the study site for the readers to get an idea of how big of a burden is malaria in Nepal and in the study site. The first paragraph of the introduction had numbers of malaria cases, but without any denominators it is difficult to put the information in context. I would suggest adding extra information such as annual malaria incidence. Having information on the proportion of P. vivax malaria will also make the result and discussion on treatment adherence more relevant.

Response 2

Thank-you for the suggestion. Additional epidemiological information has been added. Please refer to Page 2 and 3 Line 44-48.

Numbers of malaria cases in Nepal decreased from 11,000 in 2000 to 1,065 in 2019 and a low Annual Parasitic Incidence of 0.09 per 1,000 population at risk [3]. Among these 1065 malaria cases, 440 were indigenous (locally transmitted) and 625 were imported cases mostly from neighbouring India and countries in Africa [3]. Plasmodium vivax constituted 94.6% of the total cases in the country, whilst the remaining 5.4% were Plasmodium falciparum cases [3].

Comment 3

Methods

Research team (lines 105-110):

Because the researchers were not present in the study site during data collection, it is important to describe in more detail about the local research assistants, who they are, what were exactly their role in the study, and what were their relationship with the study participants.

Response 3

Thank-you for your suggestion. The details of the research assistants have been updated along with more information on their roles in the research. Please see page 5 line 113,

…local research assistants with a public health background and currently working for the national malaria program at the study site.

Page 6 line 131-135

Based on these criteria, a mix of potential participants were identified by the principal researcher from different cohorts that included priests, health workers, past malaria patients, teachers and students to generate rich information. The RAs supported the recruitment of the participants at the study site and arranged the necessary logistics for conducting the virtual interviews.

Page 7 line 151-152

Participants provided consent, both oral and written, before participating in the study and the written consent were collected by the RAs.

Comment 4

Participant eligibility and recruitment (lines 121-127):

I assume this research was done during the covid-19 pandemic so I expect some restrictions in contact between people. If this was the case at the study site, I think it is relevant to explain the method of approach and any non-participation.

Thank you for the comments. Additional information provided. Please refer to Page 6 line 131-135

Based on these criteria, a mix of potential participants were identified by the principal researcher from different cohorts that included priests, health workers, past malaria patients, teachers and students to generate rich information. The RAs supported the recruitment of the participants at the study site and arranged the necessary logistics for conducting the virtual interviews.

Comment 5

Data collection (lines 137-145):

In the discussion section (line 453-454) it was mentioned that the majority of interviews were done virtually. How many were done in person and how many were done virtually?

Where were the zoom interviews held in the study site? Is it at a clinic? At participants’ own houses? Or elsewhere?

Response 5

Thank-you for the comment. All the interviews were conducted by the principal investigator. Additional information added, please refer to page 7 line 149-151 …

While sixteen participants were interviewed in their own house, the remaining nine including health workers were interviewed in a meeting hall at the nearby health post.

... and correction made page 21 and 22 line 472-475

The inclusion of participants between 15 to 72 years of age allowed us to explore the malaria prevention and treatment practices and changes across generations. Due to the COVID -19 restrictions, the interviews had to be conducted virtually.

Comment 6

In some of the quotes the participants mentioned their role as community health volunteers. It would be good if the results section started with a description of such characteristics. How many of the participants were community health volunteers? What about the other participants? What are their roles and positions in the society?

There is a paragraph in the discussion section about treatment adherence. Is there any data that can be added in the results section that might suggest malaria relapse or recurrence?

Response 6

Thank you for your comments and suggestions. Details of the participants have now been added. Please refer to page 8, line 174-176.

The results of the interviews (N=25) including illustrative quotes of the participants are presented. The participants included farmers (n= 13), priest/ traditional healers (n=2), health workers (n=2), school teacher (n= 2), students (n=2), self-employed/service (n=2) and local leaders (n=2).

Regarding relapses, only general information was sought and there is no published data on malaria relapse and recurrence in Nepal. However, five participants shared their experience of relapse which has been added in the text. Please refer to page 10 line 202.

However, five of the participants reported non-adherence to the treatment protocol. “They [villagers] take medicines for 4-5 days and feel better, and then they leave the medicine as it is. We [community health volunteers] and the health workers all went there [patient’s house], convinced them, and made them take the medicines” (female, FCHV).

Comment 7

Discussion

The lack of test of validity of the findings due to using only one type of data collection methods with no triangulation should be mentioned as one of the limitations.

Response 7

Thank you for the suggestion. This has now been added in the manuscript under limitation, please refer to page 22, line 475-476

As the information was collected through virtual interviews, triangulation could not be done, a limitation of the study.

Comment 8

Title and abstract

As not all readers would be familiar with places in Nepal, I personally think it might benefit the paper if the title and/or abstract mentions more descriptive words such as “remote” and/or “upper river valley.”

Response 8

Thank-you for your suggestion. The title of the study has been changed accordingly please refer to Page1 Line 1

A Qualitative Study of Knowledge, Attitude and Perceptions towards Malaria Prevention among People Living in Rural Upper River Valleys of Nepal

Reviewer 2

Comment 1

Methods

Line 121 : Participant eligibility and recruitment : for in-depth interviews, participants are generally people who interact with many people in the community on a daily basis e.g. -head of districts, religious leaders, youth or women leaders etc.- as they are well informed on the population KAP… Pleased clarify if those people were included as participants. Also provide more details on the criteria used for the selection of participants.

Response 1

Thank you for your comments and suggestions. Details of the participants have now been added. Please refer to page 8, line 17r4-176.

The results of the interviews (N=25) including illustrative quotes of the participants are presented. The participants included farmers (n= 13), priest/ traditional healers (n=2), health workers (n=2), school teacher (n= 2), students (n=2), self-employed/service (n=2) and local leaders (n=2).

Comment 2

Line 130 “A semi-structured interview guide was developed based on similar research [17] and the researchers’ experience exploring the topic of malaria” Can the author add as additional file the questionnaire or the guide used for the interview.

Response 2

Thank you very much, we have included the domains of enquiry in English for the reviewer.

Comment 3

Was survey done during the rainy or dry season? Please clarify as this might affect perception or risk/attitudes toward malaria prevention and treatment.

Response 3

Thank you for your suggestion. Some information has been added, please refer to Page 7 line 146-147. The suggestion is an interesting concept and could be a potential area for further research.

One-on-one interviews were conducted between November and December 2020 (post monsoon) by the lead author (KA) with local support from Research Assistants

Comment 4

Results

The author need to be more precise on the number who responded over the number interviewed.

For instance Line 183 “Most of the participants knew that they could get anti-malarial medicine from…” How many please give the number

Another Line 190 “Only half of the participants mentioned that the government had conducted…” They interviewed 25 persons what do they consider as half is it 12 or 13 people please clarify. There are many places in the document where similar terms are used they need to check the whole result section and provide full details on the number of respondent.

See again below

Line 264 : “The majority of the participants (n=10) informed that washed nets were dried in a shaded area as recommended by the manufacturer” is 10 out of 25 interviewed represents the majority ?

also see line 271 “However, most of the participants reported experiencing several negative consequences of….” Wow many please give the precise number

Line 273 “Nearly half of the participants (n=11) shared their experiences of increased bed bugs after…”. Please check and correct accordingly.

Response 3

Thank you for your suggestion. The information has been added page 9 to 14 line 186-317 highlighted in blue.

Comment 4

Line 296 : I don’t see the need of adding this figure

Response 4

Thank you for the suggestion the figure has been removed.

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Comment 5

Additional Editor Comments:

Kindly add to the limitations section within the discussion as suggested by reviewer 1, and address all comments of both reviewers.

Response 5

Thank you for the suggestion. The limitation section has been revised with additional information based on reviewer’s suggestion. Please refer to Page 21 lines 475-476.

As the information was collected through virtual interviews, triangulation could not be done, a limitation of the study.

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PONE-D-21-28469R1A qualitative study of knowledge, attitude and perceptions towards malaria prevention among people living in rural upper river valleys of NepalPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Dear author

Thank you for addressing the comments made in the previous review. However, there are some additional things for the discussion section that I believe would improve the quality of the manuscript.

1. There is a paragraph about treatment adherence (lines 335-352) in the discussion section. However, I do not see this being a prominent finding in the results section. I would suggest to put more data about treatment adherence issues in the result section to justify this paragraph or remove/reduce discussion about treatment adherence issue (perhaps as part of malaria treatment knowledge?).

2. Socioeconomic status (SES) was mentioned and discussed in the paragraph regarding malaria knowledge (lines 322-334). In my view, this is also relevant in the later paragraph discussing access to treatment (380-401). While this manuscript is not focused on intersectionality between different factors, I think it will benefit the manuscript to bring readers' attention to the complexity of malaria-related problem in this setting.

3. Virtual interview is mentioned as a limitation of this study. In the current world we are living in, virtual interview and even virtual ethnography might be explored more. Is there anything readers could learn from your experience doing the virtual interviews? In your opinion, is this method of data collection have any influence on the results? Would the results of the interview be any different (apart from lack of 'rich' data and ability to triangulate) had it been done in person? How has the study participants react to their involvement in a study that uses this kind of technology? What was the measures taken to ensure confidentiality and anonymity, since I assume the recorded version of the interviews include video showing the faces of the study participants? The answers to these questions might worth a paragraph in the discussion section.

4. In relation to point #3, I think a paragraph needs to be added in the methods section explaining confidentiality and anonymity, including who have access to the recorded file and where it is stored.

5. In the abstract, I would prefer to use "in-depth interviews" rather than "one-on-one interviews" (line 26) as that is the common term and is what is stated in the methods section (line 138). Or perhaps "virtual in-depth interviews"?

Reviewer #3: Review of Chan et al. 2021 Manuscript

General comments:

• Make sure your qualitative approach, methods, and analysis are all in line with one another.

• Consider using the Oxford comma throughout the manuscript.

• Would be good to have scientific editors review this for language.

• Explain the limitations in sharing raw data from manuscripts in the methods section.

Specific comments:

Abstract

Line 29: remove “from” before females and males.

Remove “females and males” on line 30 and put “female and male” before participants.

Line 31: “the complications” explain/specify complications from or of what.

Line 32: “were provided freely,” freely does not mean free, would change the word to “for free” or “free of charge”

Introduction

Line 45: remove “to” after contributes; add “The” before numbers and remove the “s” from number. � “The number of malaria cases in Nepal decreased…”

Line 47: remove “of” before “malaria prevention interventions”; add a comma before “including”; add “the” before “free distribution”

Line 51: “all supported by greater international funding.” � what is meant by “greater” with regards to international funding?

Line 52: change “the National Malaria Strategic Plan: to “its National Malaria Strategic Plan”

Line 54: remove “to” after “contributed”; after “Geographically” add “and topographically”

Line 55: remove “further” before “divided”

Line 57: before “experience” add “, which”

Line 58: add “cross border” before “movement”; add “from Nepal” before “to India”

Line 59: after “The valleys” should “along” be substituted with “between”? Is it in between the two geographies you describe?

Line 60: change “outbreak episodes” to “outbreaks” ; Would also describe some of the epidemiological characteristics of the outbreak, including species distribution,…...

Line 63: “a village of Khatyad..” changed to “a village in…”

Line 64: change “situated” to “located”; change “URV of” to “URV in”

Line 73: remove “the” after “associated with”;

Line 74: remove of communities -> Line 73+74: “Malaria is often considered a disease of the poor and has been associated with communities’ economic status and living conditions.”

Line 76: move “early” from before “health care” to after “health care”

Line 79: add a comma “,” after priorities’ change “expenditure” to “purchasing”; Line 79+80� “…, and purchasing bed nets and other malaria prevention tools is not a priority.”

Line 82: change “lead to the migration of villagers to endemic urban plains in Nepal…” to “lead to villagers migrating to malaria endemic urban plains in Nepal..” + would provide more description of migration—short-term? Long-term? Daily? Weekly? Monthly?

Line 81-83: explain why this movement exposes people to an increase of malaria transmission.

Line 84: change “The” at the beginning of the sentence to “Nepal’s”

Line 86: is the “its importance” referring to regular use of the LLINs or simply the importance of LLINs? If it’s the importance of the LLINs then “its” should be changed to “their.”

Line 89: add “season” after “monsoon”

Line 92: change “repeated episodes” to “several rounds”

Line 94: Replace “leading to refusal to allow” with “leading to households refusing to allow…” ; Line 94+95 Replace “challenges to these key pillars of malaria control” to “barriers to the success of let malaria control interventions,”

Line 95: add “the” between “explore” and “knowledge”; add “of” after “knowledge”; add “about” after “attitudes”

Line 96: remove comma “,” between “treatment” and “among”

Line 97: define “wards”

Materials and Methods Line 100: remove parenthesis “)” after “[21]”

Line 116: add “season” after “monsoon” ; change “during winter” to “in the winter”

Line 120: add a comma “,” after “’medical’”

Line 123: remove “being” before “between the ages…”

Line 125: add “their” before “roles” ; add “health related” between “in” and “decision-making” + remove “for health care”

Would be good to mention the roles/occupation of those interviewed. Also, in the results community health workers are quoted, should mention that in the paragraph on participant eligibility and recruitment. Especially, given that a phenomenological approach was taken to the qualitative research, would have to explain why health care community workers were included in the interviews if this was about high-risk population/people living in the area and their experience with malaria, its treatment, and prevention.

Line 139: remove “the” before “COVID 19 travel restrictions”

Line 140: change “zoom platform” to “Zoom video conferencing”

Line 150: add “for” after “searching”

Line 155: remove “,” comma after “organized” + add “and” after “organized”

Line 157: change “elaborate” to “develop”

Line 153: given that you are conducting a phenomenological qualitative study and you used open coding, I would add a justification for the open coding here, perhaps that you are conducting exploratory research into ideas and concepts that have not been explored in this area before.

Results

Figure 1: I would change the order to have the “3. Availability and Practices” third on the right, so that it reads 1,2,3 from left to right.

Line 170: change “unclear of” to “unclear about”

Line 171: “Among them” who is the “them” referring to? If it is the participants, it is not needed.

Line 178: add “malaria” before “knowledge”

Line 181: “weakness”: what is meant by weakness here? Might be good to add an illustration if their conceptualization of weakness was explored.

Line 184: describes participants having to two different types of tablets for 14 to 15 days. Might need to comment here that this is the common treatment for vivax malaria or a least for the specific type of malaria the participants had.

Line 189/190: does the female FCHV say why her patient threw away the medicine, if so, might be good to include here.

Line 204: remove semi-collin “;”

Line 211-219: description of what happened in the “past several years” -> is this description something that is still happening or is it a thing of the past? If it is no longer happening, how and why did it change?

Line 220: change first two sentences to: “Traditional management of malaria was described by participants as visits to traditional healers known as ‘Dhamis’ or ‘Jhakris’. However, the use of traditional healers did not seem common. The participants reported…”

Line 226: look like a main header, should be under the ‘choices and preferences’ header right?

Line 239: remove “and journey of getting” and replace with “of the journey to get”

Line 242: move the USD cost before the ending quotation mark.

Line 244: change “the treatment options” to “where treatment is sought”

Line 245: change “for” to “regarding” + add “matters” after “health”

Line 252: division of what? | remove “the” before “LLINS”

Line 255: remove “round” after “year”

Line 258: add a comma “,” after detergents and add “baking” after soda otherwise need to explain what is meant by soda here.

Line 261: add a comma “,” between “nets” and “and”

Line 265: change “informed” to “mentioned”

Line 272: change “in the households” to “in their houses.”

Line 283: add “also” after “participants” ; change “the family business of bee-farming” to “bee-farming family businesses”

Line 288: remove comma “,” after bees

Line 293: “several participants in the community” -> are these interview participants?

Discussion Line 300: change “knowledge on” to “knowledge of” ; “However,” might not be necessary to start the second sentence on that line.

Line 303: “in the area” � what is meant by in the area? Which area?

Line 304: add “malaria” before “prevention and treatment”

Line 312: what is consistent with research by Yadaw et al? “90% of respondents” -> whose respondents are these—which study is this from. Not clear.

Line 314: change “the higher SES” to “those of higher SES”

Line 316: how are you defining lower SES group? What want to consider saying “are of low socio-economic status, but make sure to define.

Line 320: add “treatment” before “protocol”

Line 329: is this how the patients described their side effects? Anorexia and allergic reactions. Seems like pretty technical language.

Line 330: the trial talked about recurrence, not relapse. Would also add in the dosage information from the trial.

Line 350/351: “Malaria treatment is free in public health facilities across Nepal, a reason that could explain that preference.” Isn’t it the case that participants provided the reasoning for their preference of public health facilities? Would be careful how you formulate this sentence.

Line 352/353: description of traditional healing as still being an option. Is not quite in alignment with how you report it in the result section.

Line 354: change “acceptance to” to “acceptance of”

Line 355: change “(western)” “(western-style)”

Line 363: change “limitations in” to “limitations of”

Line 368: remove “completeness”

Line 369: change to “, due to weak monitoring and lack of commercially available Primaquine in Nepal [31].”

Line 373: countries like Bangladesh or actually Bangladesh? + remove “in” after “among”

Line 374: change “have no reporting access to the national…” to “cannot report to the national….”

Line 375: change “resulting in missed cases” to “resulting in the surveillance system missing cases.”

Line 377-380: feels like this sentence comes out nowhere. Would provide the findings this recommendation is based on first then provide the recommendation.

Line 382: add “at” between “treatment” and “facilities”

Line 383: change “this” to “Such accessibility and availability”

Line 384: explain why it would be crucial to prevent local transmission or outbreaks.

Line 389: Add comma “,” after “insurance system” and after “(OPP)”

Line 390: add “seeking” after “health care”

Line 892: remove “the” before “physical” + remove “s” at the end of “conditions” + change “and” to “or” before “old age”

Line 394: change “transport facilities” to “transport infrastructure”

Line 398: change “saving them” to “mitigating”

Line 400: change “for a” after “known” to “as a”

Line 401: add a comma “,” after “society” + change “taken” to “made” after “were”

Lines 407-409: where is the description?

Line 418: Remove “The” before “LLINs” change “a factor for” to “a factor in”

Line 420: add “a” before “high risk of malaria” + remove comma “,” after “malaria”

Line 421: remove “the” before “private”

Line 422: change “access to” to “access for”

Line 423: add “Additionally,” before “Normal nets”

Line 426: add “baking” before “soda” + change “for washing the LLINs” to “to wash LIINs” + remove the comma “,” after “LLINs”.

Line 428: change “for washing” to “to wash”

Line 431: change “negative consequences of IRS” to “unintended negative consequences from IRS”

Line 433: change “barriers for” to “barriers to”

Line 434: change “shifting” to “moving” before “the beehives” + add an “s” to “outdoor” + change “in” to “to” after “outdoor”

Line 439: add “from our findings.” after “differed” + end the sentence there and start a new one with “Barriers identified by respondents in xxxx included people believing it increased rodents….” -> need to also add context to these barriers i.e., location.

Line 443: examples of political factors.

Line 443: first word, change “for building” to “creating”

Line 445: add “described by our participants” after “negative experiences”

Line 446: change “albeit” to “while”

Limitations

Line 450: “the local community” -> specify which local community.

Line 452: remove “the” before “malaria prevention”

Line 453: remove “the” before “COVID-19 restrictions”

Line 455: add “malaria” before “endemic”

Line 456: change “people on” to “people relating to”

Conclusion

Line 463: “people in rural areas to seek alternative care from traditional healers and private medicals.” -> This isn’t in agreement with your results. Would make this more nuanced so it is in line with the reporting of results.

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PLoS One. 2022 Mar 18;17(3):e0265561. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0265561.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


2 Mar 2022

Reviewers Response

Manuscript title: Title: A Qualitative Study of Knowledge, Attitudes and Perceptions towards Malaria Prevention among People Living in Khatyad Rural Municipality of Mugu, Nepal

Dear reviewers, thank you for your comments and suggestions which have been addressed and track changed in the manuscript for your kind perusal. We would also like to acknowledge the effort and time that you have provided to go through our manuscript.

Reviewer 1

Comment 1

There is a paragraph about treatment adherence (lines 335-352) in the discussion section. However, I do not see this being a prominent finding in the results section. I would suggest to put more data about treatment adherence issues in the result section to justify this paragraph or remove/reduce discussion about treatment adherence issue (perhaps as part of malaria treatment knowledge?).

Response 1

Thank you for your comments and suggestion. There is a paragraph on treatment adherence in the results section please refer to page 11 line 216-222. Some additional information has also been added. Knowledge and practice of drug adherence was an important finding in the study, particularly due to the fact that Plasmodium vivax is the predominant species in the area.

Comment 2

Socioeconomic status (SES) was mentioned and discussed in the paragraph regarding malaria knowledge (lines 322-334). In my view, this is also relevant in the later paragraph discussing access to treatment (380-401). While this manuscript is not focused on intersectionality between different factors, I think it will benefit the manuscript to bring readers' attention to the complexity of malaria-related problem in this setting.

Response 2

Thank you for your comments. As you have correctly indicated, the paper is not focused on intersectionality. The study explored the underlying factors of how SES may be associated with poor knowledge and reluctance to seek appropriate health care (please refer to page 16 line 345- 346).

Comment 3

Virtual interview is mentioned as a limitation of this study. In the current world we are living in, virtual interview and even virtual ethnography might be explored more. Is there anything readers could learn from your experience doing the virtual interviews? In your opinion, is this method of data collection have any influence on the results? Would the results of the interview be any different (apart from lack of 'rich' data and ability to triangulate) had it been done in person? How has the study participants react to their involvement in a study that uses this kind of technology? What was the measures taken to ensure confidentiality and anonymity, since I assume the recorded version of the interviews include video showing the faces of the study participants? The answers to these questions might worth a paragraph in the discussion section.

Response 3

Thank you very much for this is an interesting observation. The virtual interviews compromised the discussion slightly due to poor network, however we still felt the interaction was successful and very similar to conducting a face to face interview. Please refer to page 23 line 508-511. Only audio recordings were saved (page 8 line 170) and anonymity was maintained by using pseudonyms and removing any personal identifiers (page 8 line 171-173).

Comment 4

In relation to point #3, I think a paragraph needs to be added in the methods section explaining confidentiality and anonymity, including who have access to the recorded file and where it is stored.

Response 4

Thank you very much for your comments. This research has been approved by two ethical research committees, (i.e. NHRC ethics of Nepal and HREC of Curtin University) and anonymity and confidentiality have been strictly adhered to. All the raw data has been securely stored in the Curtin university HREC repository and this has been added in the manuscript. Please refer to page 8 line 172.

Comment 5

In the abstract, I would prefer to use "in-depth interviews" rather than "one-on-one interviews" (line 26) as that is the common term and is what is stated in the methods section (line 138). Or perhaps "virtual in-depth interviews"?

Response 5

Thank you for the suggestion. The one-on-one interviews have been changed to in-depth interviews as suggested (page 2 line 29 and page 8 line 162)

Reviewer 3

Section Reviewers Comments Response

Thank you for your meticulous effort in providing editorial feedback on the manuscript which is highly appreciated. We have corrected the grammatical errors and punctuations as per the suggestion.

Abstract Line 29: remove “from” before females and males.

Remove “females and males” on line 30 and put “female and male” before participants. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 2 line 30

Line 31: “the complications” explain/specify complications from or of what. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 2 line 32

Line 32: “were provided freely,” freely does not mean free, would change the word to “for free” or “free of charge” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 2 line 33

Introduction Line 45: remove “to” after contributes; add “The” before numbers and remove the “s” from number. � “The number of malaria cases in Nepal decreased…” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 3 line 46

Line 47: remove “of” before “malaria prevention interventions”; add a comma before “including”; add “the” before “free distribution” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 3 line 53

Line 51: “all supported by greater international funding.” � what is meant by “greater” with regards to international funding? Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 3 line 56

Line 52: change “the National Malaria Strategic Plan: to “its National Malaria Strategic Plan” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 3 line 58

Line 54: remove “to” after “contributed”; after “Geographically” add “and topographically” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 3 line 61,62

Line 55: remove “further” before “divided” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 3 line 62

Line 57: before “experience” add “, which” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 3 line 64

Line 58: add “cross border” before “movement”; add “from Nepal” before “to India” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 3 line 65

Line 59: after “The valleys” should “along” be substituted with “between”? Is it in between the two geographies you describe? Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 3 line 66

Line 60: change “outbreak episodes” to “outbreaks” ; Would also describe some of the epidemiological characteristics of the outbreak, including species distribution,…... Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Additional information added to bring clarity to cases. Please refer to page 3 line 68 and page 4 line 70

Line 63: “a village of Khatyad.” changed to “a village in…” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 4 line 71

Line 64: change “situated” to “located”; change “URV of” to “URV in” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 4 line 72

Line 73: remove “the” after “associated with”; Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 4 line 81

Line 74: remove of communities � Line 73+74: “Malaria is often considered a disease of the poor and has been associated with communities’ economic status and living conditions.” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 4 line 82

Line 76: move “early” from before “health care” to after “health care” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 4 line 84-85

Line 79: add a comma “,” after priorities’ change “expenditure” to “purchasing”; Line 79+80� “…, and purchasing bed nets and other malaria prevention tools is not a priority.” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 4 line 82, 87

Line 82: change “lead to the migration of villagers to endemic urban plains in Nepal…” to “lead to villagers migrating to malaria endemic urban plains in Nepal..” + would provide more description of migration—short-term? Long-term? Daily? Weekly? Monthly? Thank you for the suggestion. The editing has been done as per advice and addition clarity in information has been added for the case characteristics. Please refer to page 4 and 5 line 89, 91-93

Line 81-83: explain why this movement exposes people to an increase of malaria transmission. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 4 and 5 line 91-93

Line 84: change “The” at the beginning of the sentence to “Nepal’s” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 5 line 95

Line 86: is the “its importance” referring to regular use of the LLINs or simply the importance of LLINs? If it’s the importance of the LLINs then “its” should be changed to “their.” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 5 line 97

Line 89: add “season” after “monsoon” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 5 line 100

Line 92: change “repeated episodes” to “several rounds” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 5 line 104

Line 94: Replace “leading to refusal to allow” with “leading to households refusing to allow…” ; Line 94+95 Replace “challenges to these key pillars of malaria control” to “barriers to the success of let malaria control interventions,” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 5 line 105-107

Line 95: add “the” between “explore” and “knowledge”; add “of” after “knowledge”; add “about” after “attitudes” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 5 line 108

Line 96: remove comma “,” between “treatment” and “among” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 5 line 109

Line 97: define “wards” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 5 line 110

Materials and Methods Line 100: remove parenthesis “)” after “[21]” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 6 line 113

Line 116: add “season” after “monsoon” ; change “during winter” to “in the winter” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 6 line 132

Line 120: add a comma “,” after “’medical’” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 6 line 135

Line 123: remove “being” before “between the ages…” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 7 line 139

Line 125: add “their” before “roles” ; add “health related” between “in” and “decision-making” + remove “for health care” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 7 line 141

Would be good to mention the roles/occupation of those interviewed. Also, in the results community health workers are quoted, should mention that in the paragraph on participant eligibility and recruitment. Especially, given that a phenomenological approach was taken to the qualitative research, would have to explain why health care community workers were included in the interviews if this was about high-risk population/people living in the area and their experience with malaria, its treatment, and prevention. Thank you for your suggestion. Additional information has been added as suggested. Please refer to page 7 line 142-146

Line 139: remove “the” before “COVID 19 travel restrictions” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 8 line 164

Line 140: change “zoom platform” to “Zoom video conferencing” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 8 line 165

Line 150: add “for” after “searching” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 8 line 178

Line 155: remove “,” comma after “organized” + add “and” after “organized” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 8 line 184

Line 157: change “elaborate” to “develop” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 9 line 186

Line 153: given that you are conducting a phenomenological qualitative study and you used open coding, I would add a justification for the open coding here, perhaps that you are conducting exploratory research into ideas and concepts that have not been explored in this area before. Thank you for your suggestion. Additional information has been added as per the suggestion. Please refer to page 8 line 181

Results Figure 1: I would change the order to have the “3. Availability and Practices” third on the right, so that it reads 1,2,3 from left to right. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made to the figures suggested. Please refer to page 10 line 198-199

Line 170: change “unclear of” to “unclear about” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 10 line 203

Line 171: “Among them” who is the “them” referring to? If it is the participants, it is not needed. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 10 line 204

Line 178: add “malaria” before “knowledge” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 11 line 211

Line 181: “weakness”: what is meant by weakness here? Might be good to add an illustration if their conceptualization of weakness was explored. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 11 line 214

Line 184: describes participants having to two different types of tablets for 14 to 15 days. Might need to comment here that this is the common treatment for vivax malaria or a least for the specific type of malaria the participants had. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 11 line 218

Line 189/190: does the female FCHV say why her patient threw away the medicine, if so, might be good to include here. Thank you for your suggestion. Some additional information has been added as per the suggestion. Please refer to page 11 line 221,222

Line 204: remove semi-colin “;” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 12 line 240

Line 211-219: description of what happened in the “past several years” � is this description something that is still happening or is it a thing of the past? If it is no longer happening, how and why did it change? Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 12 line 247

Line 220: change first two sentences to: “Traditional management of malaria was described by participants as visits to traditional healers known as ‘Dhamis’ or ‘Jhakris’. However, the use of traditional healers did not seem common. The participants reported…” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 13 line 256-258

Line 226: look like a main header, should be under the ‘choices and preferences’ header right? Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 13 line 264

Line 239: remove “and journey of getting” and replace with “of the journey to get” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 14 line 277

Line 242: move the USD cost before the ending quotation mark. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 14 line 280

Line 244: change “the treatment options” to “where treatment is sought” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 14 line 282

Line 245: change “for” to “regarding” + add “matters” after “health” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 14 line 284

Line 252: division of what? | remove “the” before “LLINS” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 14 line 291. EDCD is a proper noun and is a section under the Ministry of Health in Nepal that oversees communicable and non-communicable diseases.

Line 255: remove “round” after “year” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 14 line 294

Line 258: add a comma “,” after detergents and add “baking” after soda otherwise need to explain what is meant by soda here. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 14 line 298

Line 261: add a comma “,” between “nets” and “and” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 15 line 302

Line 265: change “informed” to “mentioned” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 15 line 305

Line 272: change “in the households” to “in their houses.” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 15 line 312

Line 283: add “also” after “participants” ; change “the family business of bee-farming” to “bee-farming family businesses” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 16 line 323

Line 288: remove comma “,” after bees Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 16 line 328

Line 293: “several participants in the community” � are these interview participants? Thank you for your suggestion. These are the interview participants. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 16 line 333

Discussion Line 300: change “knowledge on” to “knowledge of” ; “However,” might not be necessary to start the second sentence on that line. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 16 line 339

Line 303: “in the area” � what is meant by in the area? Which area? Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 16 line 342

Line 304: add “malaria” before “prevention and treatment” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 16 line 343

Line 312: what is consistent with research by Yadav et al? “90% of respondents” � whose respondents are these—which study is this from. Not clear. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 17 line 353

Line 314: change “the higher SES” to “those of higher SES” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 17 line 355

Line 316: how are you defining lower SES group? What want to consider saying “are of low socio-economic status, but make sure to define. Thank you for your suggestion. The lower SES has been rephrased as per the suggestion. Please refer to page line 6 line 129 under methods. The referred study Yadav et al. conducted in Rajasthan of India does not clearly state the SES categories.

Line 320: add “treatment” before “protocol” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 17 line 363

Line 329: is this how the patients described their side effects? Anorexia and allergic reactions. Seems like pretty technical language. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 18 line 371-372

Line 330: the trial talked about recurrence, not relapse. Would also add in the dosage information from the trial. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested and additional information on dosage has been added. Please refer to page 18 line 373-375

Line 350/351: “Malaria treatment is free in public health facilities across Nepal, a reason that could explain that preference.” Isn’t it the case that participants provided the reasoning for their preference of public health facilities? Would be careful how you formulate this sentence. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 19 line 395

Line 352/353: description of traditional healing as still being an option. Is not quite in alignment with how you report it in the result section. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 19 line 396-398

Line 354: change “acceptance to” to “acceptance of” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 19 line 399

Line 355: change “(western)” “(western-style)” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 19 line 399

Line 363: change “limitations in” to “limitations of” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 19 line 408

Line 368: remove “completeness” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 19 line 413

Line 369: change to “, due to weak monitoring and lack of commercially available Primaquine in Nepal [31].” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 19 line 414

Line 373: countries like Bangladesh or actually Bangladesh? + remove “in” after “among” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 20 line 418

Line 374: change “have no reporting access to the national…” to “cannot report to the national….” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 20 line 419

Line 375: change “resulting in missed cases” to “resulting in the surveillance system missing cases.” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 20 line 420-421

Line 377-380: feels like this sentence comes out nowhere. Would provide the findings this recommendation is based on first then provide the recommendation. Thank you for your suggestion. This has been removed. Please refer to page 20 line 429-433

Line 382: add “at” between “treatment” and “facilities” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 20 line 428

Line 383: change “this” to “Such accessibility and availability” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 20 line 429

Line 384: explain why it would be crucial to prevent local transmission or outbreaks. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 20 line 430-433

Line 389: Add comma “,” after “insurance system” and after “(OPP)” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 20 line 438

Line 390: add “seeking” after “health care” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 20 line 439

Line 892: remove “the” before “physical” + remove “s” at the end of “conditions” + change “and” to “or” before “old age” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 21 line 441

Line 394: change “transport facilities” to “transport infrastructure” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 21 line 443

Line 398: change “saving them” to “mitigating” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 21 line 447

Line 400: change “for a” after “known” to “as a” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 21 line 434

Line 401: add a comma “,” after “society” + change “taken” to “made” after “were” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 21 line 450-451

Lines 407-409: where is the description? Thank you for your suggestion. The description is provided in the paragraph starting page 21 line 452 and 459

Line 418: Remove “The” before “LLINs” change “a factor for” to “a factor in” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 22 line 469

Line 420: add “a” before “high risk of malaria” + remove comma “,” after “malaria” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 22 line 471

Line 421: remove “the” before “private” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 22 line 472

Line 422: change “access to” to “access for” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 22 line 473

Line 423: add “Additionally,” before “Normal nets” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 22 line 474

Line 426: add “baking” before “soda” + change “for washing the LLINs” to “to wash LIINs” + remove the comma “,” after “LLINs”. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 22 line 477

Line 428: change “for washing” to “to wash” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 22 line 479

Line 431: change “negative consequences of IRS” to “unintended negative consequences from IRS” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 22 line 483

Line 433: change “barriers for” to “barriers to” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 22 line 485

Line 434: change “shifting” to “moving” before “the beehives” + add an “s” to “outdoor” + change “in” to “to” after “outdoor” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 22 line 486, 487

Line 439: add “from our findings.” after “differed” + end the sentence there and start a new one with “Barriers identified by respondents in xxxx included people believing it increased rodents….” � need to also add context to these barriers i.e., location. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 23 line 492,493

Line 443: examples of political factors. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 23 line 497

Line 443: first word, change “for building” to “creating” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 23 line 498

Line 445: add “described by our participants” after “negative experiences” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 23 line 500

Line 446: change “albeit” to “while” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 23 line 501

Limitations Line 450: “the local community” � specify which local community. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 23 line 504

Line 452: remove “the” before “malaria prevention” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 23 line 507

Line 453: remove “the” before “COVID-19 restrictions” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 23 line 508

Line 455: add “malaria” before “endemic” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 24 line 514

Line 456: change “people on” to “people relating to” Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 24 line 515

Conclusion People in rural areas to seek alternative care from traditional healers and private medicals.” -> This isn’t in agreement with your results. Would make this more nuanced so it is in line with the reporting of results. Thank you for your suggestion. Correction has been made as suggested. Please refer to page 24 line 521

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A qualitative study of knowledge, attitudes and perceptions towards malaria prevention among people living in rural upper river valleys of Nepal

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