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. 2022 Mar 23;17(3):e0262727. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0262727

The spatially heterogeneous and double-edged effect of the built environment on commuting distance: Home-based and work-based perspectives

Zhong Zheng 1,2,3, Suhong Zhou 2,*, Xingdong Deng 3
Editor: Wenjia Zhang4
PMCID: PMC8942273  PMID: 35320819

Abstract

Rich literature has examined the impact of the built environment on commuting distance. Linear models assume that the influence of the built environment is spatially homogeneous. However, given the spatial heterogeneity of urban space, conclusions might be different or even be contrary. The influence of the built environment might also be different by home and work locations. To explore the spatially heterogeneous effect of the built environment from both home-based and work-based perspectives, this study applied large-scale cellular cellphone data in Guangzhou, China. Commuting was measured by decay parameters of probabilistic distributions of commuting distances. Geographically weighted regression models were applied to examine the spatially heterogeneous effect, differentiated by home-based and work-based perspectives. Results confirmed that the impact of the built environment on commuting distance is spatially heterogeneous. The urban space is classified into clusters of central areas, inner suburbs, and outer suburbs. Results also revealed the double-edged effect of the built environment. Residential population, recreation facilities, and mixed development are residence-attractive factors that increase the home-based commuting distance and decrease the work-based commuting distance. Work population and transport facilities are work-attractive factors that decrease home-based commuting distance and increase work-based commuting distance. The results further provide evidence to support area-based policies in urban planning practice.

Introduction

Long commuting distance causes problems of traffic congestion, air pollution, and car dependence [1]. Rich literature has examined the impact of the built environment on commuting to provide planning suggestions for policymakers. Several built environment factors—such as the relation of jobs and housing, mixed land use, commercial development and infrastructure provision—are found to be related to commuting. However, there are still debates on how they affect commuting in a city-wide spatial context. For example, under the co-location hypothesis, the co-location of housing and jobs is associated with shorter commuting distance [2]; commercial land use decreases commuting distance in a mixed land use neighborhood, and mixed land use encourages non-vehicle trips [3]. However, some authors have different opinions. In tradition urban structure models (i.e. Burgess Model [4], Alonso Model [5]), it is natural to see imbalanced jobs and housing in industrial agglomeration areas. The co-location of housing and jobs would not significantly reduce commuting distance [6]. And mixed land uses have no significant impact on commuting distance [7].

The debate on the impact of the built environment, in our opinion, is mainly caused by the different mechanisms of human and urban space interaction: the market mechanism and the individual choice mechanism. The economic agglomeration effect triggered by the market mechanism shapes the urban spatial structure deeply. Economic agglomeration refers to a large number of firms existing in spatial proximity and benefit from cost reductions and efficiency gains [8]. It encourages capital facilities and buildings to be concentrated located [9]. The individual choice mechanism means that a decision maker chooses the residential and work location with the highest utility [10]. It assumes that workers choose home locations as close to their jobs as possible [6]. The two mechanisms have different impact on different urban locations. The market mechanism is more competitive at business centers, and the choice mechanism has stronger influence at residential and suburban areas [4]. Since the urban space is heterogeneous, the relationship between the commuting distance and the built environment should be spatially varied [11,12]. Most studies of commuting and built environments are based on linear models (or global models), which assume that the impact of the built environment is spatially homogeneous. However, their relations in a city are naturally heterogeneous due to the spatially varied effect of the market mechanism and the individual choice mechanism. For example, commuting patterns in a central area and a suburban area are different. Based on different theoretical framework, it is not surprising to see that the relationships between commuting and the built environment are different from study to study. From a geographical perspective, the Tobler’s first law of geography [13] assumes that near things are more related than distant things. It causes locational effects [14] that, for example, residents sharing the same range of geographical environments are likely to have similar and localized commuting behavior. More importantly, variables describing the heterogeneity of spatial attributes are often absent or cannot be obtained by researchers [15]. Hence, researchers should consider the spatially heterogeneous effect. It helps extend the understanding of commuting and built environment relations from a global context to a spatially varied and localized context.

Geographically weighted regression (GWR) is a spatial statistical model. It reveals geographical variations in the relationship between a response variable and a set of covariates [16]. The model estimates a set of spatially varying coefficients, which can capture heterogeneous effects. It is different from a ‘global’ linear regression model which estimates an averaged single coefficient value across the entire study area. Rather, GWR is a ‘local’ model that exhibits complex correlations in different areas. Again, the localized correlations are based on similar behavior of individuals who share the same range of spatial contexts.

In aggregate analysis, the commuting distance of a spatial unit is generally measured by the average value of all travelers’ commuting distances within that spatial unit [1721]. It is important to note that, for the same spatial unit or neighborhood, there are two ways of averaging the commuting distance: as a home-based measure and as a work-based measure. The home-based measure calculates the average travel distance of commuters who depart from the spatial unit, while the work-based measure is based on commuters who arrive at the spatial unit. Because the results of the two measurements are different, it is necessary to differentiate between home-based and work-based commuting distances. More importantly, the underlying mechanisms are different. From a work-based perspective, the economic agglomeration is the dominant mechanism. Industrial firms have much stronger land-rent bidding ability than individuals in a free market system. Local workers are forced to live far from workplaces [22]. From a home-based perspective, the co-location theory is the dominant mechanism. Workers can freely choose their home locations to save commuting time where the supply of housing land is adequate. Current studies are limited in not considering the home-based and work-based perspectives simultaneously. Analysis of the aggregate commuting distance based on the home location is mainstream in the literature [1721] since a travel survey is normally conducted at home locations. However, few studies have analyzed the built environment’s impact on both home-based and work-based commuting distances. In this study, an underlying hypothesis is that the impact of the built environment on home-based and work-based commuting distances may be different or even contrary. It causes a double-edged effect. To examine the double-edged effect, it is necessary to analyze the relationship between commuting distance and the built environment from both the home-based and work-based perspectives.

To address the research gaps, the paper explores the spatial heterogeneous and double-edged effect of the built environment on the home-based and work-based commuting. It develops a new method to explore the commuting pattern of a whole city using cellphone data. Commuting is represented by a decay parameter of the probability distribution of commuting distances. Geographically weighted regression models are applied to investigate the spatially heterogeneous impact of the built environment. The double-edged effect is examined by the different impacts of the built environment on home-based and work-based trips. The conceptual framework is presented as Fig 1. It assumes that there are two mechanisms which dominate the relationship between the built environment and the commuting distance: the market mechanism and the individual choice mechanism. The relationships are varied at different urban locations, causing spatially heterogeneous effect. Also, the market mechanism and the individual choice mechanism are the leading force of the work-based and home-based commuting, respectively. According to the conceptual framework, there are four research questions:

Fig 1. Conceptual framework.

Fig 1

  • Questions 1 & 2. What is the built environment’s spatially heterogeneous impact on home-based and work-based commuting distances?

  • Question 3. Does the double-edged effect exist based on the built environment’s different impacts on home-based and work-based commuting distance? To what extent does it influence commuting distance?

  • Question 4. Based on the spatial heterogeneous and double-edged effect, how can the spatial pattern of the built environment’s impact be summarized? And what planning strategies can we develop from the spatial pattern?

By answering these research questions, the paper contributes to current research in two ways. First, it examines the spatially heterogeneous effect of the built environment, which provides a new understanding of the built environment and commuting relationship. Second, it reveals the double-edged effect of the built environment’s impact. Research findings can be further applied to develop zonal planning policies for government.

Literature review

The relation between commuting distance and the built environment

The commuting distance and built environment relationship is traditionally analyzed from either the home-based or work-based perspective. Most studies are conducted at home locations. Several built environment factors, such as jobs and housing, recreation facilities, public transport, and mixed land use, have been found to be associated with commuting distances. The impact of the jobs–housing relationship is the issue of most concern. Most studies confirmed that the co-location of jobs and housing would shorten the commuting distance. Peng [23] investigated the relationship between VMT [vehicle miles traveled] and the jobs–housing ratio in Portland. VMT significantly changes when the jobs–housing ratio is less than 1.2 or larger than 2.8. Levinson [24] used data from 8000 household travel surveys in Washington DC to analyze the accessibility to work. It was found that residences in job-rich areas and workplaces in housing-rich areas are associated with shorter commutes. Sultana [25] examined the relationship between the average commuting time and job–housing ratio and house price using census data. The results confirmed that the imbalance between the locations of jobs and housing is the dominant factor in long commuting. Zhao et al. [21] used travel survey data in Beijing to investigate the relationship between commuting time and jobs–housing balance. Jobs–housing distance reduces the commuting time significantly. Results have also shown that workers living in Danwei housing (housing provided by employers) have shorter commuting time. Lin et al. [18] analyzed the relationship between commuting and job–housing ratio, social-demographic variables and transport modes in Beijing. The results showed that jobs–housing balance has significant influence on commuting time, and that commuting behavior is strongly related to income, gender, age, education and land use reform. Applying aggregate analysis to travel survey data in Gauteng, South Africa, Geyer and Molayi [26] examined the relationship between average travel time and the job–employed ratio, internal capture ratio and other social-demographic variables. They found that workers have higher average travel time in job-rich and balanced areas. These studies confirmed that the co-location of jobs and housing would reduce commuting distance or time. However, some studies have contrary findings that a jobs–housing balance does not significantly influence commuting. Self-selection related to housing location preference is the key factor rather than the jobs–housing balance, and a jobs–housing balance would not significantly decrease the commuting distance at the sub-area level [27]. Giuliano [6] argued that jobs–housing balance cannot effectively solve the traffic congestion problem since the relationship between jobs and housing is complex especially in multi-worker households.

Commercial and recreation facilities have also been found to be related to commuting. Gordon et al. [28] found a significant correlation between commuting times and commercial densities. Cervero [3] found that commercial land use near housing is associated with short commuting distances and low vehicle ownership. However, the authors in another study argued that jobs–housing balance is a more direct method to reduce travel than retail–housing mix [29].

Public transport service is normally believed to be an effective way to encourage non-vehicle travel [30]. However, new findings from Atlanta suggest that a new subway expansion would increase commuting trips, and non-vehicle trips would not be reduced as expected [31]. Song et al. [32] found that the choice of public transport is positively associated with commuting times, which suggests the need to provide a high-quality public transport system.

Land use mixture measures the diversity of urban space. It is assumed that mixed land use is associated with fewer trips [33]. Several studies have confirmed the assumption. For example, trip lengths are shorter at locations with mixed uses [34], and commuters living in mixed land use neighborhoods travel shorter distance [35]. However, it is also argued that a retail–housing mix does not reduce trips as much as the jobs–housing balance does [29].

Compared to home-based analysis, there is limited work-based analysis of the commuting distance and built environment relationship. Taking an industrial park as a case, Zhou et al. [22] found that excess commuting is correlated with the oversupply of industrial land and shortage of public and residential land, high housing price and increasing vehicle travel. Conducting travel surveys in universities, researchers found that employees with a large employer and higher income have a better jobs–housing balance. Lower income employees have to commute long distance to find lower housing prices.

Spatial effect of built environment on commuting

Recently, some researchers have noted that the impact of the built environment on commuting may not be linear. Rather, the spatial effect plays a large role in the relationship between the built environment and commuting because of spatial dependency, spatial heterogeneity and spatial heteroscedasticity [15]. Spatial heterogeneity refers to variations in relationships between the dependent (commuting distance, travel mode) and independent variables (built environment, social demographics) across spatial units. Ignoring the spatial effect would cause inconsistent parameter estimation because a single linear model can only ‘averagely’ reflect the global relation but not any local part of the relation [15]. Some researchers have already realized the problem. Taking a city or a part of a city as cases, studies of the heterogeneous impact of the built environment can be summarized in three aspects.

First, the urban space is roughly differentiated by central and suburban areas. The underlying hypothesis is that central and suburban areas have significantly different spatial contexts that affect commuting behavior. To a large extent, the difference relates to urban spatial structure, particularly the decentralization trend in city development. The trend of low density, dispersed suburbanization and decentralization in urban spatial structure could lead to either an increase or decrease in the average commuting distance [36]. Some studies have observed an increasing trend in commuting distance from a dispersed urban form. For example, the suburbanization of jobs is associated with increasing congestion, increasing trip lengths, and more work trips [24]. The shift from a monocentric to a dispersed city form increases commuting time [37]. A polycentric city model increased urban commuting more than a monocentric model [38]. However, other authors have contrary findings. The alternative of job relocation can significantly affect commuting travel savings. The spatial distribution of jobs should be decentralized to respond to the dispersed population distribution. The discussion on decentralization and suburbanization implies the spatial heterogeneous impact of the built environment. A noticeable difference is between city centers and suburbs [39]. Self-containment of employment is significantly affected by the jobs–housing balance in the suburbs but has limited effect in central areas [40]. Residents with better proximity to an employment sub-center and better subway accessibility would tend to travel shorter distance [35]. Shorter commuting is related to accessibility and increased residential land use at employment centers, and more jobs in public transport corridors [19]. Research on transport emissions has found that the impact from the built environment, such as residential density, entropy and intersection density, is significant in both urban and suburban areas, with residential density having more impact on suburban than urban areas [41]. These studies simply divide the urban space into two types of central areas and suburban areas, but a city is a far more complex system. A sophisticated classification is needed to reflect the nature of the urban space.

A better solution is to use a multi-level model, which is the second aspect of related studies. A multi-level model has a hierarchical structure with an individual level and a spatial level. The heterogeneous spatial effect is captured by the spatial level. It assumes that parameters vary by groups of people who locate in the same spatial unit. The urban space is no longer simply differentiated by centers and suburbs. Rather, the multi-level method can reflect the heterogeneity across different places. Applying a multi-level mixture hazard model, the spatial effect of the built environment’s influence on commuting distance was stressed, since parameters are significantly heterogeneous. The authors suggested that spatial heterogeneity should be further analyzed by a spatial model when considering the spatial autocorrelations effect or the horizontal spatial dependence among different locations [14]. Wu and Hong [31] similarly believe that using spatial models is important to analyze the relationship between urban form and travel behavior, because the influence of the built environment varies among different locations. Applying the multi-level analysis framework, the spatial heterogeneous effect of the built environment on car ownership was investigated in Maryland and Washington DC. It has been found that the built environment explains 42.8% of the spatial heterogeneity in household car ownership [42].

However, the multi-level model has a strong assumption that the impact of the built environment is homogeneous within the same spatial unit and heterogeneous among different spatial units. The multi-level model is especially suitable for studies based on travel surveys in which respondents are selected from several nonadjacent sampling places. Respondents living in the same neighborhood are assumed to be similarly affected by the built environment. However, it is also possible that a travel survey is conducted in all spatial units or census blocks. When dealing with spatial heterogeneity across the entire study area, the multi-level model has to imply the existence of a boundary and divide the study region into several sub-regions. It is doubtful whether and how boundaries exist, and there is also the ‘modifiable areal unit problem’ [43]. More importantly, the nature of spatial heterogeneity does not mean that spatially related individuals always have similar behavior. In contrast, it is also possible that near things are not alike because of negative spatial auto-correlation [44]. Therefore, new models are needed to describe spatially varying effects with non-predefined sub-regions.

The solution is the third domain of literature, a geographically weighted regression (GWR) model. The model applies a ‘local’ form of spatial statistical analysis to estimate a set of spatially varied parameters. It reflects the geographical variations in the relationship between a dependent variable and an independent variable [16]. It contrasts with a ‘global’ model or a linear regression model which estimates a unique parameter across the entire study area. The spatial variations in relationships between the built environment and commuting successfully capture the spatial heterogeneous effect [44]. The GWR model was applied to examine the spatially heterogeneous impact on land prices in Beijing, China. Results confirmed that a spatial model better reflects the nature of the land market than a non-spatial model, and there is a heterogeneous linkage between government-funded amenities and land prices [45]. Similarly, a study explored the heterogeneous relationship between transport accessibility and land value in the Tyne and Wear region in the UK. It was found that transport accessibility has a double-edged effect on the land value, with a positive impact in some areas but a negative impact in others [40]. The finding enhances the importance of the spatially heterogeneous effect compared to a global model [46]. Zhang et al. [47] used a multi-scale geographically weighted regression model to examine the spatial interaction of expressway transport flows in Jiangsu Province, China. It illustrates the spatial effects at varied scales between push and pull forces of express trips at a regional scale. Applying a GWR model, a study examined the spatially heterogeneous effect of the built environment on parking in Shenzhen. Results demonstrated that floor area ratio has a larger increasing effect in suburban areas, lot size has a stronger positive impact in areas with higher parking demand, and the impact from transit accessibility is inconsistent across the whole city [48].

In summary, the spatially heterogeneous or spatially varying effect is based on the locally similar behavior of individuals who share the same range of spatial contexts. Related studies have investigated the spatial effect indirectly or directly. However, the spatial heterogeneous effect in aggregated commuting behavior is still unclear. The heterogeneous effect should be revealed explicitly at a finer spatial scale since commuting is generally a city-wide issue. Therefore, it is necessary to apply a local model, a geographically weighted regression model, to give an overview of the structural relationship between commuting and the built environment of the whole city. The analysis can be further used by urban planners or policymakers to optimize the spatial layout of urban functional zones [49].

Study area and data

The model is tested using cellphone data from the inner city of Guangzhou, China (Fig 2). Guangzhou is one of the four first-tier cities in China and a provincial capital. The study area includes districts of Yuexiu, Tianhe, Haizhu, Liwan, Baiyun, Huangpu, and Panyu, the urbanized area but not the whole city. This area is of 2435.7 km2 and a population of 11.5 million in 2019 (Guangzhou Statistics Bureau: http://tjj.gz.gov.cn/tjdt/content/post_5727607.html). The city’s population is concentrated in the urbanized area such that 75% of the population lives in 32% of the area. We select it as the study case because the un-urbanized area is mainly rural and forest land with sparsely distributed residential settlements.

Fig 2. Study area.

Fig 2

A Chinese mobile operator provided the cellphone data. It accounts for about 20% of the user market. One month of data (September 8, 2017 to October 8, 2017) in the study area are used. Signal towers record cellphone users’ locations. A user has two possible status types: stay and movement. When a user stops at the same location for more than 1 hour, it is defined as stay. Otherwise, a user is in movement. When a user’s stay location at night (11 pm–5 am) is the same location over 20 days, the location is defined as the user’s residential place. Similarly, when a user’s stay location in daytime (9 am–5 pm) is the same location over 20 days, the location is defined as the user’s workplace. Movement between a residential location and a work location in the morning peak (7 am–9 am) is defined as a commute trip. To protect users’ privacy, the number of users is counted by spatial cells defined as 500 m by 500 m. The cellphone dataset contains 13.7 million commuting trips in one month.

Method

Measurement of the commuting distance

The commuting distance of a spatial unit is generally represented by the average travel distance of all commuters within that unit [23,26,50]. However, averaging the travel distances of all commuters into a single value leads to the loss of rich travel information. Instead, this study measures the commuting distance by the decay parameter of its probabilistic distribution. The distance decay parameter describes how the travel probability decreases with the increase of commuting distance in a spatial unit. Using the decay parameter to measure the commuting distance is advantageous in including all commuters’ travel distance information. In this study, the commuting distance of all cellphone users follows an exponential distribution (see [51]). The probabilistic distribution of commuting distance, represented by the cumulative distribution function (CDF) of an exponential distribution, is:

PXx=1expxβx0 (1)

where β is the decay parameter, and P(Xx) is the probability (CDF) that the travel distance X is less than value x, since the probability of a continuous random variable can only be expressed by a cumulative distribution function. β is estimated by a maximum likelihood method. The likelihood is given by [52]:

Lβ,x=Lβ,x1,x2,xn=i=1n1βexpxiβ (2)

xi is the observed commuting distance with n samples. β is estimated by maximizing L(β, x), and we get: β=x-. It implies that the decay parameter is the expectation of the distance distribution in an exponential distribution. Note that β is not simply a mean of commuting distances in a spatial unit. Rather, we should treat it as a weighted average of that, according to the property of an exponential distribution. In other words, the expectation value also shapes the slope of the curve. It represents either a high probability of longer distance and a low probability of shorter distance (large β), or a high probability of shorter distance and a low probability of longer distance (small β).

After revealing the exponential distribution of commuting distance, the method is applied to each spatial cell separately (1601 cells in total). Each cell has a unique commuting distance distribution. The number of trips in each cell derived from the cellphone data is large enough to define a distance distribution. Aggregating departure trips at a location represents a home-based perspective, while aggregating arrival trips at a location represents a work-based perspective. The decay parameter is spatially heterogeneous since travel distance distributions vary across different locations.

Variables

A geographically weighted regression (GWR) model is applied to examine the spatially heterogeneous impact of the built environment on commuting distance. The dependent variable is decay parameter β in Eq 1. The decay parameters β of commuting distance distributions are differentiated by departure trips and arrival trips, which represent home-based and work-based commuting distances respectively. Independent variables (Table 1) are selected according to the ‘Ds’ measurement [34] of the built environment: density, diversity, design, destination accessibility, and distance to transit. Points of interest (POIs) data are also applied to represent the built environment. A ‘point of interest’ data point records information about a coordinate location and a functional type of a spatial facility from a navigation map. POI data are sourced from the Baidu map and provided by the Daodaotong company. A total of 27,349 POIs are used in this study.

Table 1. Description of independent variables.

Type Independent variables Mean Minimum Maximum Std. Deviation
Local Residential population 867.32 0 7360 832.44
Work population 482.50 0 6019 555.02
Recreation POIs 63.40 0 1046 90.30
Transport POIs 7.01 0 269 12.82
POI mixture 0.54 0 0.8306 0.25
Road intersections 4.84 0 75 6.20
Bus stops 2.08 0 22 2.66
Global Closeness 0.000876 0 0.001304 0.000237
Distance to center 13233.89 0 36458.9 7358.59

This study does not include socioeconomic attributes, such as GDP, gender ratio, or elderly population ratio. The aim of this analysis is to explore the relation between the built environment and the commuting distance. By revealing the relation, the government can directly implement planning and policy measures for the built environment to address the problem of long commuting distance.

Density is generally measured by population which reflects the intensity of human activity. In this study, density refers to residential and work population. The impact of the jobs–housing relationship is the most concerning issue. Most studies have confirmed that the co-location of jobs and housing would shorten the commuting distance. For example, the analysis from Rivera and Tiglao [24] found that residences in job-rich areas and workplaces in housing-rich areas are associated with shorter commutes. Sultana [25] confirmed that the imbalance between jobs and housing locations is the dominant factor in long commuting. Following a similar approach, this study used the residential population and the work population as measures of density, which are identified from cellphone data.

Diversity is generally measured by the land use mixture. It assumes that mixed land use is associated with fewer commuting trips [33]. Several studies have confirmed the assumption. For example, trip lengths are shorter at locations with mixed uses [34], and commuters living in mixed land use neighborhoods would travel shorter distance [35]. However, it is also argued that mixing retail and housing does not reduce trips as much as the jobs–housing balance [29]. This study applied the mix of POIs instead. The advantage of the mix of POIs is that it considers the mixture of spatial facilities rather than land use. It is calculated by information entropy (pn is the percentage of the POI number with type n of the total POI number in a cell):

H=npnlogpn (3)

Diversity can also be measured by functional facilities. Diversity represents the degree to the land use difference represented by land area, floor area or employment [34]. Functional facilities such as recreation and transport facilities are found to be related to commuting. Results from Gordon et al. [28] revealed a significant correlation between commuting times and commercial facilities. It was also found that commercial land use near housing is associated with short commuting distance and low vehicle ownership [3]. Also, the provision of transport facilities such as parking and car services has been widely believed to be associated with increasing vehicle commuting [48]. Hence, in this study the functional facilities are measured by the number of recreation POIs and transport POIs. Recreation POIs include dining (20.6%), public services (15.7%), entertainment (11.5%) and shopping (52.2%). Transport POIs include parking lots (51.6%), car services (34.0%) and important transport navigation spots such as toll gates, bridges and train or bus stations (14.4%). Transport facilities are mainly associated with vehicle trips.

Design is measured by the number of road intersections in a cell.

Distance to transit can be alternatively measured by the number of stations per unit area [34]. In this study, it is the number of bus stops in a grid.

Destination accessibility is measured by space syntax closeness and distance to the center. The concept of closeness is from the space syntax theory. It measures the centrality level of the road network. Closeness, also normalized as syntactic ‘Integration’ [53], is a key index of the centrality. It indicates the accessibility and centrality level of spatial units [54]. In other words, it measures the closeness of any given road section to all other road sections in the system [55]. As an index of the destination accessibility, it is advantageous in not necessarily predefining a center. A road with the highest closeness means that it is close to all roads in the study area, and it is the geometric center of the road network. Therefore, a location with higher closeness value has better destination accessibility. The space syntax closeness of the road network is calculated by:

ci=N1j=1Ndij (4)

where dij is the shortest distance between road section i and j, N is the total number of road sections in the study area. The closeness of road sections is aggregated into cells by:

C=icili/ili (5)

where ci is the closeness of road section i in a cell, li is the length of section i.

The distance to the center variable is the Euclidean distance of a cell to Zhujiang New Town CBD.

Built environment variables should be further differentiated by local variables and global variables in a GWR model. A local variable means its coefficient value varies across different locations, while a global variable has a unique coefficient value across the entire study area like a linear regression model. Variables not able to capture the spatial relation, such as residential population, work population, recreation POIs, transport POIs, POI mixture, road intersections and bus stops are local variables. The value of local variables varies across different locations. In contrast, variables of closeness and distance to the center are global variables since they represent the location effect. These variables themselves can describe the spatial relation to the city center. In addition, all variables are measured in a single cell without including adjacent cells. Since the GWR model itself is a spatially weighted algorithm considering the built environment’s impact from adjacent cells, there is no need to measure the built environment from adjacent cells again. Spatial distributions of built environment variables are shown in Fig 3.

Fig 3. Spatial distributions of built environment variables.

Fig 3

Geographically weighted regression

A GWR model belongs to the regression model family, but its parameters are geographically varying. A typical GWR model is formulized by [16]:

yi=kbkui,vixki+εi (6)

where i denotes a location, y is the dependent variable, x is the kth independent variable, and εi is the Gaussian error, (ui,vi) is the longitude and latitude coordinate; and coefficient bk(ui,vi) is a geographically varying-parameter defined by a weighting function. The concept of a GWR model is that the dependent variable at location i interacts with independent variables of observations falling within a bandwidth of location i. An observation nearer to i impacts estimating parameters of i more than one farther away. The weighting function bk(ui,vi) reflects the distance decay effect. It is usually expressed by a Gaussian function:

ωij=exp12dijB2 (7)

or a Bi-square function:

ωij=1dij/B22jNi0jNi (8)

where dij is the distance between location i and j, B is bandwidth. Bandwidth is the search range of the model. A cell is affected by all other cells within the range of the bandwidth. Bandwidth can be manually chosen or determined by criteria such as cross-validation or Akaike information criterion (AIC) [56]. The GWR model is applied to home-based and work-based commuting separately.

Two-step cluster

To reveal the double-edged effect explicitly, a two-step cluster model is applied to further examine the area-based impact of the built environment and answer research question 3. The algorithm of the two-step cluster is defined in Rundle-Thiele et al. [57]. In brief, the first step pre-clusters the data into several small sub-clusters using a cluster feature tree, and the second step aggregates sub-clusters into clusters using the standard hierarchical clustering algorithm. The clustering algorithm can generate different numbers of clusters. The optimal number of clusters is determined by Schwarz’s Bayesian information criterion (BIC). In this study, built environment variables are transferred from continuous values into categorical values: positive, negative, and not significant. The categories of all variables from both home-based and work-based GWR models are the input to the two-step model. The model will identify clusters of spatial cells according to the similarity of the built environment’s impact. It will reveal a new urban spatial structure in terms of urban space and transport relationships.

Results of GWR models

This part answers research questions 1 & 2. The GWR model is firstly compared with an ordinary linear regression model. An ordinary linear regression model can be seen as a global result in a GWR model with spatially homogeneous coefficients. AIC is an indicator to test the performance of an ordinary linear regression model and a GWR model [58]. It tests both the accuracy and complexity of a model. This study used AICc instead. When the sample size is small, there is a probability that a model with too many parameters may have better AIC performance and the model is overfit. To address such potential overfitting, AICc was developed. AICc is AIC with a correction with small sample size such that AICc = AIC + 2K(K + 1)/(nK − 1) where K is the number of parameters and n is the number of observations [59]. When the difference of AICc value between the two models is greater than 3, the model with lower AICc is better. In this study, the AICc of the home-based model and the work-based model are both far less than ordinary linear regression models (Table 2). The R2 also proves that GWR models fit better than ordinary linear regression models.

Table 2. GWR model results.

Home-based model Linear regression GWR
AICc: -4776.435 -5008.079
R square 0.0570 0.274
Adjusted R square 0.0519 0.195
Work-based model Linear regression GWR
AICc: -3381.227 -3911.423
R square 0.233 0.540
Adjusted R square 0.229 0.457

The coefficients of the home-based and work-based models are displayed in Table 3. The significance is tested at the 0.05 level in the t-test. A GWR model does not generate a specific value for each variable. Rather, it produces a series of coefficient values for local variables to represent the geographically varying effect. Table 3 clearly shows the quartile, median and value range of each variable for the home-based and work-based models. Interestingly, most variables have both positive and negative effects on commuting distance. This challenges previous findings on the built environment and commuting distance relationship. The result suggests that spatial heterogeneity should be considered. Global variables have a unique coefficient value because they are assumed to be not geographically varying. Closeness measures how much a location’s road network is close to the center. Larger closeness is associated with shorter commuting distance in both home-based and work-based models. The distance to the center increases the commuting distance, indicating that people commute longer at a location further from the city center. The spatial distributions of coefficients of local variables reveal the heterogeneous impact of the built environment (Figs 4 and 5).

Table 3. Parameter estimation in GWR models.

Home-based model
Global coefficients Estimate Std. error
Closeness -0.014 0.0120
Dist. to center 0.327 0.0177
Local coefficients Mean Std. Dev Min. Max. Lower quartile Median Upper quartile
Intercept 0.118 0.035 0.036 0.197 0.099 0.121 0.144
Residential population 0.057 0.113 -0.474 0.369 -0.010 0.032 0.122
Work population -0.272 0.320 -1.446 0.087 -0.418 -0.175 -0.035
Recreation POIs 0.053 0.127 -0.535 0.495 -0.022 0.023 0.110
Transport POIs 0.081 0.375 -1.405 1.188 -0.043 0.075 0.287
POI mixture 0.031 0.029 -0.040 0.123 0.011 0.030 0.050
Road intersections -0.116 0.141 -0.499 0.639 1.139 -0.202 -0.087
Bus stops 0.000 0.104 -0.405 0.372 -0.048 0.004 0.052
Work-based model
Global coefficients Estimate Std. error
Closeness -0.0118 0.0160
Dist. to center 0.0719 0.0303
Local coefficients Mean Std. Dev Min. Max. Median Lower quartile Upper quartile
Intercept 0.178 0.059 0.050 0.338 0.288 0.133 0.176
Residential population -0.205 0.289 -1.912 0.592 2.505 -0.295 -0.154
Work population 0.360 0.396 -1.000 2.492 3.492 0.214 0.344
Recreation POIs -0.154 0.221 -1.628 0.652 2.280 -0.259 -0.122
Transport POIs 0.443 0.875 -1.823 4.191 6.014 0.020 0.208
POI mixture -0.033 0.063 -0.234 0.159 0.393 -0.069 -0.031
Road intersections -0.043 0.206 -0.907 0.657 1.565 -0.134 -0.056
Bus stops 0.051 0.168 -0.660 1.096 1.755 -0.022 0.035

Fig 4. Distributions of coefficients in the home-based model.

Fig 4

Fig 5. Distributions of coefficients in the work-based model.

Fig 5

For the home-based model, surprisingly, the city center is not significantly affected by most built environment factors (Fig 4). We do not conclude that the result violates the conclusions of current studies. Rather, it proves that the influence of the built environment is spatially heterogeneous. The residential population increases the commuting distance in eastern and southern suburbs, but it decreases commuting distance at the university town near the inner city. It has a significant influence on the Huangpu suburb in the east. Huangpu suburb has a strong jobs–housing connection with the city center, and a higher residential population is associated with longer commuting distance. However, at the university town, the residential population shortens the commuting distance. The provision of housing encourages employees in the university to live near their workplace, so jobs and housing are balanced. The work population reduces the commuting distance in suburban areas. Providing jobs locally would encourage people to work near their residence and reduce outgoing commuting in the southern suburbs, northern airport areas, and the eastern suburbs where job opportunities are not yet sufficient. Recreation facilities such as shopping, restaurants and public services have a positive impact in the northern airport suburbs and a negative impact in the southeastern suburbs. In the southeastern suburbs where there is a large residential community, better commercial development would encourage people to work near their residential neighborhoods. In contrast, in northern airport areas, recreation facilities increase home-based commuting distance slightly. The airport is a local administrative center. Well-developed public services would attract people to reside nearby, although they may work at other places. Transport facilities increase the home-based commuting distance in the northwestern wholesale market areas, where the provision of parking and car services encourages people to travel longer in the morning peak. POI mixture increases the commuting distance, which is contrary to previous study results. Traditionally it is believed that mixed urban function reduces commuting distance since different urban functions are located together [3]. We argue that Chinese cities have a different spatial context from North American cities which have experienced decentralization and suburbanization. Guangzhou has developed with highly mixed land use. The mixture in urban function implies a convenient living environment and services. It attracts employees to live there, although their workplace may not be near their residence. The density of road intersections would shorten the commuting distance in suburban areas, while it has little impact in the central areas. In the suburban areas where the road network is not as dense as the central areas, improving the design of the road network helps commuters choose closer workplaces. The number of bus stops also shortens the commuting distance in the southeast suburban areas, where there is the new developing university town in particular. Improving public transit would encourage people to work near their residential areas.

Different from the home-based model, population factors have a significant impact in the city center in the work-based model (Fig 5). The number of residents reduces the work-based commuting distance. Jobs are highly concentrated in the city center and sub-centers. Increasing residents in these areas would significantly decrease work-based commuting. The number of working people, in contrast, increases the work-based commuting distance. These results are consistent with previous findings that an imbalance between jobs and housing is associated with longer commuting [22,50]. Interestingly, the work population reduces the commuting distance in the newly developed university town. Providing more job opportunities would improve the jobs–housing balance, reducing work-based commuting distance. Recreation POIs negatively affect the commuting distance at the business center. Recreation facilities provide a convenient residential environment to attract people to live in. Employees are willing to live near their workplaces to get better commercial services. Transport facilities increase work-based commuting distances at the business center, the northern airport suburb, and the eastern high-tech industrial park. Well-developed parking facilities and car services provide good services for private cars, which makes it convenient for commuters to travel from distant locations. In contrast to the home-based model, POI mixture generally reduces work-based commuting distance. In suburban areas, mixed functions attract employees to live near their workplaces. The number of bus stops slightly increases the work-based commuting distances at the old town center. Good public transport services make it convenient for commuters to travel from distant locations.

Guidance for zonal planning policies

The study is significant in practice. Planners might propose less effective spatial development strategies when they are unaware of heterogeneous effects. To solve the problem of long commuting distance related to spatial heterogeneity, it is necessary to implement zonal strategies rather than a spatially homogeneous or city-wide strategy. A key question is what built environment factors significantly influence commuting at which locations. Uncovering the spatially heterogeneous relationship between the built environment and commuting distance would provide guidance.

The results from the GWR models have implicitly detected a double-edged effect of the built environment, such that the impact of a particular variable on home-based and work-based commuting can vary for a spatial unit. For example, the work population reduces home-based commuting distance but increases work-based commuting distance in suburban areas. The impact is also spatially heterogeneous. A key question is what the combined effects of all built environment variables are at a particular location. A two-step cluster model is applied to examine the double-edged effect of the built environment. It further answers the research question 3.

It is necessary to first decide an appropriate number of clusters. The model generates a series of clusters with up to 10 clusters (Table 4). Bayesian information criterion (BIC) is used to find the appropriate number of clusters. The greatest change between the two closest clusters indicates the most appropriate value. For the classification of three clusters, the BIC change of -2268.534 (0.721 ratio of change) is regarded as the greatest change. Accordingly, the spatial cells are classified into 3 clusters (Table 5).

Table 4. BIC of two-step cluster models.

Number of Clusters BIC BIC Change Ratio of BIC Changes Ratio of Distance Measures
1 25524.060
2 22376.430 -3147.630 1.000 1.356
3 20107.896 -2268.534 .721 1.879
4 18993.630 -1114.265 .354 1.087
5 17984.426 -1009.204 .321 1.060
6 17043.600 -940.827 .299 1.196
7 16289.617 -753.983 .240 1.221
8 15707.931 -581.686 .185 1.245
9 15279.649 -428.283 .136 1.052
10 14882.382 -397.267 .126 1.081

Table 5. Number of predicted variables by clusters.

Cluster Resi_H Work_H Recr_H Trans_H Mix_H Bus_H Inter_H
- not sig. + - not sig. - not sig. + - not sig. + - not sig. + - not sig. + - not sig. +
1 0 728 0 23 705 0 728 0 0 728 0 0 670 58 0 728 0 57 671 0
2 14 366 176 504 52 3 447 106 67 475 14 2 473 81 12 519 25 51 485 20
3 44 692 29 159 606 54 711 0 0 679 86 0 634 131 85 680 0 296 466 3
Total 58 1786 205 686 1363 57 1886 106 67 1882 100 2 1777 270 97 1927 25 404 1622 23
Cluster Resi_W Work_W Recr_W Trans_W Mix_W Bus_W Inter_W
- not sig. + - not sig. + - not sig. - not sig. + - not sig. + - not sig. + - not sig. +
1 292 436 0 0 0 728 112 616 0 579 149 119 576 33 0 643 85 0 728 0
2 317 239 0 24 182 350 4 552 5 380 171 163 393 0 7 513 36 21 528 7
3 0 762 3 67 688 10 43 722 6 716 43 72 693 0 11 742 12 20 730 15
Total 609 1437 3 91 870 1088 159 1890 11 1675 363 354 1662 33 18 1898 133 41 1986 22

Abbreviations.

Home-based model: Resi_H (residential population), Work_H (work population), Recr_H (recreation POIs), Trans_H (transport POIs), Mix_H (POI mixture), Bus_H (bus stops), Inter_H (road intersections).

Work-based model: Resi_W (residential population), Work_W (work population), Recr_W (recreation POIs), Trans_W (transport POIs), Mix_W (POI mixture), Bus_W (bus stops), Inter_W (road intersections).

Table 6 shows the two-step cluster result. Clusters 1–3 are visualized in Fig 6. Cluster 1 represents the central areas. Work population causes a double-edged effect with reduced home-based commuting distance but increased work-based commuting distance. The finding challenges traditional understanding of the commuting and built environment relationship. It also generates a challenge for urban planners in that a policy of jobs–housing balance may have an unintended effect. A good policy should balance outgoing and incoming commuting flows. POI mixture also has a double-edged effect. Mixed development is a good strategy for reducing the work-based commuting distance, yet not for the home-based commuting distance. Transport facilities and bus stops are significantly associated with longer work-based commuting distance. In job-rich areas, in particular, well-developed parking services and public transit services provide better accessibility for employees so that more commuters from distant locations work in these areas. It confirms the work-attractive nature of the transport facilities and public transit. Residential population and recreation POIs are associated with reduced work-based commuting distance. For local employees, they are encouraged to live near their workplace because of the good living environment and convenient commercial and public services.

Table 6. Cluster description.

Cluster Name N % Variables with a positive impact Variables with a negative impact
1 Central areas 728 35.50% Mix_H, Work_W, Trans_W, Bus_W Work_H, Inter_H, Resi_W, Recr_W, Mix_W
2 Outer suburbs 556 27.10% Resi_H, Recr_H, Mix_H, Work_W, Trans_W Work_H, Trans_H, Resi_W, Mix_W
3 Inner suburbs 765 37.30% Trans_H, Mix_H, Trans_W Work_H, Recr_H, Bus_H, Inter_H, Work_W, Recr_W, Mix_W

Fig 6. The spatial distribution of clusters.

Fig 6

Cluster 2 represents the outer suburbs. The residential population, work population, transport facilities and POI mixture have double-edged effects on commuting distance. Residential population increases home-based commuting distance and reduces work-based commuting, while work population reduces the home-based commuting and increases the work-based commuting. The double-edged effect of POI mixture in the outer suburbs is similar to the central areas. While transport facilities improve home-based commuting distance, they worsen work-based commuting. Recreation facilities also increase home-based commuting distance. Better commercial and public service development attracts employees to live in an area. For non-local employees, their workplaces are mismatched with their residences so their home-based commuting distances are increased.

Most cells in Cluster 3 are inner suburbs. Several factors have a negative impact on the commuting distance in Cluster 3. Work population and recreation facilities shorten both home-based and work-based commuting distances. The road network density and the number of bus stops are associated with shorter home-based commuting distance. Transport facilities increase both home-based and work-based commuting distances.

The results generate a further question about how to develop zonal planning policies according to the complex relations between the built environment and commuting (question 4). Based on the above analysis, some guidance is provided. According to the two-step model, the built environment’s spatially heterogeneous impact can be clustered into three types of areas: central areas, inner suburbs, and outer suburbs. The government should develop different spatial planning strategies for the three types of areas. First, the government should be aware of the double-edged effect of a ‘diversity’ strategy. Mixed development is a good strategy for reducing work-based commuting distance. However, it does not help solve the problem of long home-based commuting. In inner suburbs and outer suburbs which have long home-based commuting distance, mixed development should not be emphasized. Second, in the central areas, housing and recreation should be provided in job-rich areas. Residential population is associated with shorter home-based and work-based commuting distances. Recreation facilities also help reduce work-based commuting distance. However, transport facilities and public transit increase the work-based commuting distance. The provision of transport facilities and public transit should be increased outside the central areas and spatially equally across the whole city. Third, increasing the work population, recreation facilities, public transit services and road network density helps improve the long commuting problem in inner suburbs. Fourth, residential population, work population, transport facilities and mixed development have a double-edged effect on the commuting distance in the outer suburbs. Since the problem in outer suburbs is the long home-based commuting distance not the work-based distance, we suggest that more jobs and transport facilities should be provided in the outer suburbs to reduce home-based commuting distance.

Conclusions and discussions

This study investigated the spatially heterogeneous impact of the built environment on commuting distance using a massive mobile phone dataset in Guangzhou city, China. The travel distance of commuters was found to follow an exponential distribution. Geographically weighted regression models were applied to investigate the spatial heterogeneous impact of built environment variables on distance decay parameters.

Results showed that the impact of the built environment on commuting distance is spatially heterogeneous. The result can guide zonal planning policies. Based on a two-step cluster model, the urban space is classified into three clusters of central areas, inner suburbs and outer suburbs. Results revealed that the built environment has a double-edged effect on commuting distance, differentiated by home-based and work-based commuting. Residential population, recreation facilities, and mixed development are residence-attractive factors. In general, they have a positive impact on home-based commuting distance and a negative impact on work-based commuting distance. The work population and transport facilities are work-attractive factors. Their impact on commuting distance is contrary to the residence-attractive factors such that home-based commuting distances are decreased and work-based commuting distances are increased.

These findings have provided a new understanding of the relationship between the built environment and commuting distance. The relationship is dominated by different mechanisms—the market mechanism and the individual choice mechanism. From the results that the relationship is spatially heterogeneous, we can see the encounter between the two mechanisms across the urban space. The market mechanism dominates the relationship at the business center. For the home-based commuting at the business center, most built environment factors’ influence is not significant. It challenges the co-location theory, which believes that the co-location of jobs and houses would shorten the commuting distance [2]. Rather, our result supports the opponent opinion from Giuliano [6] that the co-location of jobs and housing is not significantly associated with the shorter commuting distance. The reason is that the dominant mechanism at the business center is not individual choice but the market. Individuals’ bidding ability is weaker than industrial firms, and they cannot freely choose their residential locations in the city center. Thus, they choose to live further and abandon the need of saving commuting time. The market mechanism works on the work-based commuting distance. The work-based commuting distance reflects how far the workplace can attract people from. Because of the industrial agglomeration, the business center attracts workers from the whole city. Also, oversupplying industrial land reduces the housing land, and workers are forced to reside further. These reasons lead to the long work-based commuting distance [51].

Interestingly, the individual choice mechanism dominates the relationship between the built environment and the commuting distance again at the residential areas. From the home-based perspective, our results are consistent with other home-based studies [1721]. However, it is surprising to see that mixed development is not always a good strategy for reducing commuting distance as previous studies have found [3335]. In this study, mixed development is associated with longer home-based commuting trips. A mixed development strategy should be emphasized more in job-rich areas than in housing-rich areas. Our explanation is that the mixed-development strategy [33,34] is also based on the individual choice mechanism. In residential areas, mixed development provides better public and commercial services. When people have free choices on residential locations, they prefer mix developed areas for better public service and convenient living environment. However, they only have free choices of housing locations in residential areas where the market mechanism has little influence. Since individuals’ preferred housing locations are outside the business center, they are far away from their workplaces. As a result, land-use mixture increases the home-based commuting distance.

From the literature, we can see that the relationship between the built environment and the commuting distance is different from study to study. This research provides a deep insight into these different opinions. In summary, because of shift between the market mechanism and individual choice mechanism, the theory to explain the built environment and the commuting distance relationship is not unique across the whole urban space. Rather, the relationship is spatially heterogeneous. The individual choice mechanism and the co-location theory are applicable for home-based studies, and work-based studies should apply the market mechanism. This finding contributes to the theory of the built environment and travel relationship that theoretical assumptions have different application conditions.

The study is limited in not incorporating individual socioeconomic attributes. Socioeconomic attributes are important factors which affect people’s commuting behavior. It is a common approach to explore the influence of people’s socioeconomic characteristic on the commuting distance, particularly in disaggregate analysis [17]. In this study, we did not consider socioeconomic attributes as independent variables. Our argument is that government can implement spatial planning measures to decrease the commuting distance by improving the built environment, but socioeconomic attributes cannot be easily changed and are not effective policy measures for the government. Nevertheless, socioeconomic attributes still have potential influence on commuting behavior. Excluding them would cause biased results of the built environment and the commuting distance relationship. Realizing the shortcoming, we will incorporate individual-level data to further explore the behavioral drivers of commuting distance in future research.

Supporting information

S1 Data

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Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting information files, except for the raw individual data.

Funding Statement

ZZ received some funding for this work from National Natural Science Foundation of China (http://www.nsfc.gov.cn/english/site_1/index.html, grant number 42101223), The Ministry of education of Humanities and Social Science project (http://www.moe.gov.cn/s78/A13/, grant number 20YJC630232), and Guangdong University Innovation Team Project (https://210.76.75.91/indexAction!to_index.action, grant number 2021WCXTD014). SZ received funding for this work from National the Natural Science Foundation of China (http://www.nsfc.gov.cn/english/site_1/index.html, grant number71961137003).

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Wenjia Zhang

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PONE-D-20-19283

Exploring spatially heterogeneous impact of built environments: The double-edge effect on home-based and work-based commuting

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Reviewer #1: This paper aims to examine the spatially heterogeneous impact of built environment on commuting distances using mobile phone data in Guangzhou, China. Some questions need to be addressed before consideration of publication:

1. The Literature review section needs to be reorganized. The two subsections have both reviewed the impacts of built environment on commuting. The spatial heterogeneity is not clear in the review section.

2. What is the difference between home-based and work-based commuting? Please make it clearer. In many cases, they might be similar. Commuting is influenced by built environment at both residential location and workplace.

3. Some figures are in poor quality, please modify them. Moreover, it had better provide some figures to illustrate the spatial distribution of built environment in Guangzhou before running the model.

4. Please give more details on the data.

5. There are several grammar errors in the paper. Please improve the language.

Reviewer #2: The paper uses geographically weighted regression models to examine the spatially heterogeneous effect of the built environment on commute. The authors concluded that the impact from built environment might vary over space and also be different for home-based and work-based commuting. I have several major concerns/suggestions:

• The contribution of the paper is weak. The authors need to highlight the values of your paper. If the value is to examine the spatial heterogeneity in the relationships, literature review needs to be rewritten with the focus of spatial context. What are the study areas of the existing studies? Is it region-wide, city-wide, or country-wide study? Could the complicating results be due to differences in spatial context? Also, need to add a conceptual framework explaining why the relationships could be spatially varied. Why separating home-based and work-based commutes and why the effects could be double-edged? Your conceptual framework should built upon existing studies.

• “Dependent variable is decay parameter beta in Eq.1. It represents the mean of the distance distribution.” Is it the mean of the distance or the slope of the decay? Please explain why using beta as dependent variable and refine your interpretation of beta. If it represents the mean, why not simply using the mean of all local distances? Your result interpretation need to be consistent with your definition of beta. For example, on page 9, “Residential population increases commuting distance….” It should be residential population increases beta, correct?

• The independent variables need clarifications. How are independent variables selected? For instance, why commercial and recreation function could influence commute? Are the built environment variables measured for a single cell? Are surrounding cells included? “Infrastructure POIs represent the transportation facilities”. What types of transportation facilities? Why Closeness and Distance to center are global variables?

• The current study area is the inner city of Guangzhou? Any particular reasons why the paper only focus on the inner city?

• Please also add more discussions about the value of the cluster analysis. Within a single cluster, a variable could also have double-edged effect on commute, right?

Other editorial suggestions:

• On page 2, “Most studies of commuting and built environment are based on global models, which assume the impact of built environment is spatially unique.” It should be “spatially homogeneous”.

• “Human activity in a city is naturally heterogeneous, i.e. the distributions of populations, daily activities and traffic flows.” the writing needs to be revised to focus on the heterogeneity of the relationships (instead of human activity).

• On page 3, “[13] investigated the relation of VMT [vehicle miles traveled] and jobs-housing ratio.” Double check the citation requirement of the journal. Normally, the paper still needs to list the authors’ names in citations.

• On page 5, “to reveal the heterogeneous effect explicitly, it is necessary to apply a local model, a geographically weighted regression model e.g., to give an overview of the structural relation between commuting and built environment of the whole city”. Move “e.g.” before “a geographically weighted regression model”.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


28 Dec 2020

GENERAL COMMENTS TO THE EDITOR AND REVIEWERS:

We are pleased to resubmit our revised manuscript of PONE-D-20-19283, which entitles ‘Spatially heterogeneous and double-edged effect of built environments on aggregated home-based and work-based commuting’. We appreciate thoughtful comments and constructive suggestions of the reviewers.

We explain how we revised the paper based on each comment as outlined below.

RESPONSE TO REVIEWER #1:

This paper aims to examine the spatially heterogeneous impact of built environment on commuting distances using mobile phone data in Guangzhou, China. Some questions need to be addressed before consideration of publication:

1. The Literature review section needs to be reorganized. The two subsections have both reviewed the impacts of built environment on commuting. The spatial heterogeneity is not clear in the review section.

Response: Thanks for your comments. We totally rewrote the literature review part (lines 129-235). The new one has reviewed three aspects of spatial heterogeneity analysis: differences between centers and suburbs, a multi-level model, and a GWR model. It enhances the theoretical construction of this study according to your suggestion.

2. What is the difference between home-based and work-based commuting? Please make it clearer. In many cases, they might be similar. Commuting is influenced by built environment at both residential location and workplace.

Response: Thanks for your suggestion. Home-based and work-based commuting are differentiated by two groups of commuters – residents and employees - in the same spatial unit. They are not differentiated by land-use of residence and work. For example, departure trips in the morning in a work-rich area is home-based commuting because we are observing commuters who live there. A same built environment variable’s impact is on two groups of people, that’s why we separate them and propose the ‘double-edged effect’ hypothesis. We gave a more details that:

‘It is important to note that, for the same spatial unit or neighborhood, there might be two distinct groups of commuters with totally different behavior: residents and employees. The former is home-based commuters who depart from the spatial unit, while the latter is work-based commuters who arrive at the spatial unit. Because of the behavioral differences of two commuter groups, it is necessary to differentiate between home-based and work-based commuting. ‘(lines 79-85).

‘In this study, an underlying hypothesis is that the built environment’s impact on home-based and work-based commuting may be different or even contrary, causing the double-edged effect. To examine the double-edged effect, it is necessary to analyze the relation of commuting and built environment from both home-based and work-based perspectives.’ (lines 91-96)

3. Some figures are in poor quality, please modify them. Moreover, it had better provide some figures to illustrate the spatial distribution of built environment in Guangzhou before running the model.

Response: Yes, we have improved quality of figures. The poor figure quality may be due to the compression of figures in the submission system. Original figures can be downloaded from the link at right upper corner of figure pages. We also provide the spatial distribution of built environment variables in Fig 2.

4. Please give more details on the data.

Response: We gave more details on the cellphone data and POI data. For example, we added in lines 254-260 that ‘The cellphone data have identified 13.7 million commuting trips in one month.’ And that ‘Points of interest (POIs) data are also applied to represent the built environment. A piece of ‘point of interest’ data records information of a coordinate location and a functional type of a spatial facility from a navigation map. POIs data are sourced from the Baidu map and provided by the Daodaotong company. Totally 27349 pieces of POIs are used in this study.’

We also give details of recreation and transport POIs in variable description part (lines 312-315) that ‘Recreation POIs include dining (20.6%), public service (15.7%), entertainment (11.5%) and shopping (52.2%). Transport POIs include the parking logs (51.6%), car services (34.0%), and important transport navigation spots such as toll gates, bridges, train/bus stations, etc. (14.4%).’

5. There are several grammar errors in the paper. Please improve the language.

Response: Yes, we did another round of proofreading throughout the article. We have revised more than 200 grammar errors or inappropriate sentences.

RESPONSE TO REVIEWER #2:

The paper uses geographically weighted regression models to examine the spatially heterogeneous effect of the built environment on commute. The authors concluded that the impact from built environment might vary over space and also be different for home-based and work-based commuting. I have several major concerns/suggestions:

• The contribution of the paper is weak. The authors need to highlight the values of your paper. If the value is to examine the spatial heterogeneity in the relationships, literature review needs to be rewritten with the focus of spatial context. What are the study areas of the existing studies? Is it region-wide, city-wide, or country-wide study? Could the complicating results be due to differences in spatial context? Also, need to add a conceptual framework explaining why the relationships could be spatially varied. Why separating home-based and work-based commutes and why the effects could be double-edged? Your conceptual framework should built upon existing studies.

Response: Thanks for your thoughtful suggestions. In this round of edit, we made a major revision on the literature review part. We totally rewrote it and emphasized the spatial heterogeneity. Related studies are reviewed by three aspects: differences between centers and suburbs, a multi-level model, and a GWR model. See contexts in lines 130-235.

Commuting is basically a city-wide issue, although some studies compare different cities’ commuting and built environment relations. This study narrows it in a city-wide spatial context. We state it in contexts ‘there are still controversies on how they affect commuting in a city-wide spatial context (lines 46-47)’ and ‘taking a city or a part of a city as cases, studies of the heterogeneous impact of the built environment can be summarized in three aspects. (lines 140-142).’ Exploring the spatial heterogeneity in a city-wide improves our understanding of the urban space in a finer scale that ‘Since commuting is generally a city-wide issue, the heterogeneous effect should be revealed explicitly on a finer spatial scale. Therefore, it is necessary to apply a local model, a geographically weighted regression model e.g., to give an overview of the structural relation between commuting and the built environment of the whole city. (lines 230-233)’

Separating home-based and work-based commuting is because they represent different behavior of two commuter groups, those depart from a spatial unit and those arrive at a spatial unit. A same built environment variable’s impact is on two groups of people, that’s why we separate them and propose the ‘double-edged effect’ hypothesis. We gave more details:

It is important to note that, for the same spatial unit or neighborhood, there might be two distinct groups of commuters with totally different behavior: residents and employees. The former is home-based commuters who depart from the spatial unit, while the latter is work-based commuters who arrive at the spatial unit. Because of the behavioral differences of two commuter groups, it is necessary to differentiate between home-based and work-based commuting. (lines 79-85).

We also added a conceptual framework in Fig 1, and the article is re-organized by answering four research questions according to the framework.

• “Dependent variable is decay parameter beta in Eq.1. It represents the mean of the distance distribution.” Is it the mean of the distance or the slope of the decay? Please explain why using beta as dependent variable and refine your interpretation of beta. If it represents the mean, why not simply using the mean of all local distances? Your result interpretation need to be consistent with your definition of beta. For example, on page 9, “Residential population increases commuting distance….” It should be residential population increases beta, correct?

Response: Thanks for your comment. Please see our response as follows: ‘The decay parameter also represents the expectation of the distance distribution in an exponential distribution. is not simply a mean of commuting distances. Rather, we should treat it as a weighted average of that, according to the property of an exponential distribution. In other words, the expectation value also shapes the slope of the curve. It represents either a high probability of longer distances and a low probability of shorter distances (large ), or a high probability of shorter distances and a low probability of longer distances (small ). The decay parameters of commuting distance distributions are differentiated by departure trips and arrival trips, which represent home-based and work-based commuting respectively. (lines 283-291)’

• The independent variables need clarifications. How are independent variables selected? For instance, why commercial and recreation function could influence commute? Are the built environment variables measured for a single cell? Are surrounding cells included? “Infrastructure POIs represent the transportation facilities”. What types of transportation facilities? Why Closeness and Distance to center are global variables?

Response: Thanks for your questions. We answered them in our manuscript: Independent variables (Table 1) are selected according to ‘Ds’ measurement [42] of the built environment, including density, diversity, design, destination accessibility, etc. (lines 292-293)

Influences from commercial and recreation function on commuting can refer to previous studies. They are explained in lines 304-309.

All variables are measured in a single cell without including surrounding cells. Since the GWR model itself is a spatially weighted algorithm considering the built environment’s impact from surrounding spatial units, there is no need to measure the built environment from adjacent cells again. (see lines 343-347)

Transport POIs include the parking logs (51.6%), car services (34.0%), and important transport navigation spots such as toll gates, bridges, train/bus stations, etc. (14.4%). Transport facilities are mainly associated with vehicle trips. (see lines 314-315)

Built environment variables should be further defined as local ones and global ones in a GWR Model. A local variable means its coefficient value varies across different locations, while a global variable has a unique coefficient value across the entire study area like a linear regression model. Variables not capable to capture the spatial relation, such as residential population, work population, recreation POIs, transportation POIs, and POI mixture, are local variables. The value of local variables varies across different locations. Variables of closeness and distance to the center, differently, are global variables since they represent the location effect. These variables themselves can describe spatial relation to the city center. (lines 335-343)

• The current study area is the inner city of Guangzhou? Any particular reasons why the paper only focus on the inner city?

Response: Actually the study area is the urbanized area of Guangzhou. We explained it in texts that ‘the study area is the urbanized area but not the whole city. The urbanized area of the city has an area of 2435.7 km2 and a population of 11.5 million in 2019[ Guangzhou Statistics Bureau: http://tjj.gz.gov.cn/tjdt/content/post_5727607.html]. The city’s population is concentrated in the urbanized area that 75% of the population is distributed at 32% area. The rest un-urbanized area is mainly rural and forest land with sparsely distributed residential settlements. That is the reason why we select the urbanized area as the study case. (lines 239-244)’

• Please also add more discussions about the value of the cluster analysis. Within a single cluster, a variable could also have double-edged effect on commute, right?

Response: Yes, based on a new conceptual framework, the value of the cluster analysis is stated in lines 452-460: ‘The results from GWR models have implicitly detected a double-edged effect of the built environment, that the impact of a particular variable on home-based and work-based commuting could be contrary at a spatial unit. For example, the work population decreases home-based commuting distances but increases work-based commuting distances in suburban areas. The impact is also spatially heterogeneous. A key question is what the combined effects of all built environment variables are at a particular location. To reveal the double-edged effect explicitly, a two-step cluster model is applied to further examine the area-based impact of the built environment and answer Research Question 3. ‘

Other editorial suggestions:

• On page 2, “Most studies of commuting and built environment are based on global models, which assume the impact of built environment is spatially unique.” It should be “spatially homogeneous”.

Response: Yes, we revised it.

• “Human activity in a city is naturally heterogeneous, i.e. the distributions of populations, daily activities and traffic flows.” the writing needs to be revised to focus on the heterogeneity of the relationships (instead of human activity).

Response: Yes, we revised it as ‘However, their relations in a city are naturally heterogeneous, causing spatial issues [7] because of locational effects.’

• On page 3, “[13] investigated the relation of VMT [vehicle miles traveled] and jobs-housing ratio.” Double check the citation requirement of the journal. Normally, the paper still needs to list the authors’ names in citations.

Response: We have revised them according to the citation format requirement.

• On page 5, “to reveal the heterogeneous effect explicitly, it is necessary to apply a local model, a geographically weighted regression model e.g., to give an overview of the structural relation between commuting and built environment of the whole city”. Move “e.g.” before “a geographically weighted regression model”.

Response: Yes we moved it.

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Decision Letter 1

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PONE-D-20-19283R1

Spatially heterogeneous and double-edged effect of built environments on aggregated home-based and work-based commuting

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Thanks for submitting your manuscript to PloS One. Because a previous reviewer declined to review the paper, we had to find another reviewers to read your manuscript. It takes some time and I have now heard back from two reviewers, who are still not happy with the manuscript, although the manuscript is significantly improved. I will solicit once more the advice of the reviewer, and if the critical points are not resolved I will have to stop moving on due to the requirement of the journal. So please do carefully address each point of the comments.

Besides, I quickly went through your manuscript and I think you should address and clarify the following questions as well:

1. There are lots of language issues, still. For example, “rich literatures”, “commuting distances”, “built environment’s impact”, “considering…, conclusions”, Two “however in Line 57”, and so on. Please do find a native proofreading editor to go through the whole manuscript.

2. Similarly, some statements are vague and confusing. Like the paper title, which features of commuting do you focus on? Volume of commuters? Commuting means a lot, it could be distance, time, volume or more. Be specific.

In the abstract, “the analysis generally assumes…”, such a statement is not academically rigorous, because it is not a “general” truth in built environment-travel studies. “To fill in the research gaps…” what gaps? It needs to be specific. Also, what are “home-based” and “work-based perspective”? They may be explained in the manuscript, but it confuses the readers without much context in the Abstract. I cannot point out all the academic writing issues here, but you should rewrite some sentences in the whole manuscript to make each sentence clear and connected with context.

3. As mentioned by one reviewer, the definition of home-based and work-based commuters are weird. Each commuter is both a resident and an employee. So how can we say “residents and employees” are “two distinct groups of commuter” (Line 80)? Are they just similar to the concepts of Trip attraction and trip departure in traditional transport literature.

Now I see your definition of “commuting” as “decay parameters of probabilistic distributions of commuting distances” what is P,D in Equation (1), how beta is estimated is unclear, some examples to interpret beta could be helpful. Do you need to standardize the data since you use an estimated parameter to represent commuting. So another issue here is how to define beta as what kind of commuting feature in your study. You can’t generally say it as “commuting”, as pointed out in Comment #2. Why not defining clearly what beta means, then using the a very clear concept to replace the vague statement of “commuting”. If I don’t misunderstand your definition, you actually look at the probability of long-distance commuting departing versus arriving at a zone (spatial cell), right? Is that what the “home-based” versus “work-based” commuting represents?

4. Related to the conceptualization of heterogeneity, or the “contextual effect”, you may refer to Zhang and Zhang 2018a,b in JPER and Urban Studies.

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Reviewer #3: 1.According to reponse" home-based commuters who depart from the spatial unit,

while the latter is work-based commuters who arrive at the spatial unit", Usually a person starts from space unit A(home) to space B(work) , there is a problem: The same travel behavior is not only the starting point of space a, but also the arrival point of space B, should it be counted twice as both home and work based commuting?Another problem is that he work and resident at same space unit.How to Identify and differentiated two groups of commuters – residents and employees through the data processing, please give processing flow and why did you do that.

2.The independent variables need clarifications. How are dependent variables indicators?

3.As the REVIEWER #2 suggest"Also, need to add a conceptual framework explaining why the relationships could be spatially varied". The figure added is so simple and cannont explain, more detailed influence action path and mechanism are needed.

Reviewer #4: This is an interesting study, and I think the authors' data material and their findings of differentiated relation between land use and commuting in 4 different clusters can potentially result in a published article of high importance. However, in its present form, the paper has some serious shortcomings that must be amended before I can recommend publication.

1. For one thing, the author uses two ambiguous concepts (i.e. home-based commuting, work-based commuting). Of course, I think I understand what the meaning is here; each spatial unit may become a residential area or workplace area, depending on the direction of commuting. But why not directly use the residential area and workplace area here, or you can define a spatial unit to have both residential area and workplace area attributes. In short, ‘home-based commuting’ and ‘work-based commuting’ are not general academic terms.

2. In Literature review section, the author needs to add some literature about the relation between built environment of residential area and workplace area, and the commuting. You can easily search for them on the google scholar. This is the most relevant research to your research. Further, you may find that your research question is not a huge gap.

3. In the framework, the author does not control any socioeconomic attributes, which may cause inaccurate results. For aggregated data, both statistical yearbooks and censuses can provide basic socioeconomic attributes in Chinese city, such as GDP, gender ratio, and elderly population ratio. Second, this research used a “5Ds” framework, but ignored Design and Distance to transit. Why? Because public transit accessibility, such as distance to bus/subway station or density of bus/subway station, is generally considered to be a very important factor affecting commuting. I think the author needs a very convincing reason here or needs to re-examine the framework.

4. For Variable Section, functional facility density belongs to Diversity rather than the Density (Pg. 15, line 295, 304-306; Ewing and Cervero 2010). Second, why choose Zhujiang New Town as the city center, and is Guangzhou a monocentric city? (Pg. 17, line 332-334). However, based on your statement: “The provision of housing encourages employees in the university to live near their workplaces, so the jobs-housing would be balanced. The work population decreases commuting distance in suburban areas (Pg. 22, line 413-415)”. In traditional monocentric city research, home-work distance is positively correlated with the distance to the city center. If you find that there is a low commuting distance area in the suburbs of Guangzhou, then I think Guangzhou may not be a monocentric city. So, you may need to re-examine how many city centers there are in Guangzhou. Besides, Closeness is not a general built environment variable; why use Closeness rather than road network distance to city center.

5. Method section lacks an introduction to Two-step cluster models.

6. I suggest that the author add an introduction map of the research area, may be in the Study area section, otherwise it is difficult for readers to understand where the airport suburb, university town, and Huangpu suburb are.

7. Pg. 3, line 55: the authors write: "Among these reasons, the spatial context is the most important one". Why? You need some evidence.

8. Pg. 5, line 86: the authors write: "Home-based commuting represents the morning traffic peak and work-based commuting represents the evening traffic peak". I don’t agree, because commuting is two-way. Both of residential area and workplace area are very congested in the morning and evening.

9. Pg. 5, line 98: "Area-based planning strategies" is an ambiguous scale. You need a clear definition.

10. Pg. 13, line 256-260: You can merge this paragraph into the following paragraphs about land use variables (Pg. 16, line 317-325).

11. I would also like to see more explicit acknowledgement that this is a cross-sectional that reveals associations but does not prove causation. The authors should be qualified in their language, and they should be careful to use wording that does not suggest a longitudinal study or causal relationships.

12. Other minor comments/typo/errors

Pg. 4, line 57: A typo: one 'However' should be deleted

Pg.12, line 237: the authors write: " Guangzhou is the largest city in Southern China and Provincial Capital". This is ambiguous statement. How to define the largest city? Area, population, or GDP? How about Shenzhen and Hongkong?

Pg. 13, line 250 and 252: “it defines a residential location” is ambiguous. This is a Chinese expression.

Pg. 13, line 259: “27349” -> “27, 349”

Pg. 13, line 266-267: in equation one, you need give a definition for ‘D’?

Pg. 15, line 299-300: ‘[14]’ -> ‘Rivera and Tiglao (2005)’

Pg. 18, line 346-347: “there is no need to measure the built environment from adjacent cells again” why? Do you think the surrounding environment of adjacent cells will not affect the commuting of travelers?

Pg. 19, line 366: ‘bandwidth’ needs further explanation

Pg. 19, line 374-375: I know AIC, but what is AICc? Based on your statement: “difference between the two models is more than 3”. Does this mean the difference of AIC value between the two models is greater than 3?

Pg. 20, line 381, 382: This looks like two tables, and the significance should be marked in the table with * or something else.

Pg. 22, line 427: “servicesencourages” -> “services encourages”

Pg. 31, line 590-591: “In contrast, mixed development would worsen the traffic in the morning peak.” I think your research results may be difficult to support such a conclusion.

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PLoS One. 2022 Mar 23;17(3):e0262727. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0262727.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


22 Aug 2021

GENERAL COMMENTS TO THE EDITOR AND REVIEWERS:

We are pleased to resubmit our revised manuscript of PONE-D-20-19283, which entitles ‘Spatially heterogeneous and double-edged effect of built environments on the commuting distance: from home-based and work-based perspectives’. We appreciate thoughtful comments and constructive suggestions of the reviewers.

We explain how we revised the paper based on each comment as outlined below.

RESPONSE TO EDITOR:

1. There are lots of language issues, still. For example, “rich literatures”, “commuting distances”, “built environment’s impact”, “considering…, conclusions”, Two “however in Line 57”, and so on. Please do find a native proofreading editor to go through the whole manuscript.

Response: Thanks for your careful work. Yes, we have invited an native editor to do the proofreading through the manuscript.

2. Similarly, some statements are vague and confusing. Like the paper title, which features of commuting do you focus on? Volume of commuters? Commuting means a lot, it could be distance, time, volume or more. Be specific.

In the abstract, “the analysis generally assumes…”, such a statement is not academically rigorous, because it is not a “general” truth in built environment-travel studies. “To fill in the research gaps…” what gaps? It needs to be specific. Also, what are “home-based” and “work-based perspective”? They may be explained in the manuscript, but it confuses the readers without much context in the Abstract. I cannot point out all the academic writing issues here, but you should rewrite some sentences in the whole manuscript to make each sentence clear and connected with context.

Response: We changed the title as ‘Spatially heterogeneous and double-edged effect of built environments on the commuting distance: from home-based and work-based perspectives’.

Response: We changed the title as ‘Spatially heterogeneous and double-edged effect of built environments on the commuting distance: from home-based and work-based perspectives’.

We revised the abstract part as: ‘Linear models assume that the influence of the built environment is spatially homogeneous. However, given the spatial heterogeneity of urban space, conclusions might be different or even be contrary. The influence of the built environment might also be different by home and work locations. To explore the spatially heterogeneous effect of the built environment from both home-based and work-based perspectives, this study applied large-scale cellular cellphone data in Guangzhou, China.’

3. As mentioned by one reviewer, the definition of home-based and work-based commuters are weird. Each commuter is both a resident and an employee. So how can we say “residents and employees” are “two distinct groups of commuter” (Line 80)? Are they just similar to the concepts of Trip attraction and trip departure in traditional transport literature.

Now I see your definition of “commuting” as “decay parameters of probabilistic distributions of commuting distances” what is P,D in Equation (1), how beta is estimated is unclear, some examples to interpret beta could be helpful. Do you need to standardize the data since you use an estimated parameter to represent commuting. So another issue here is how to define beta as what kind of commuting feature in your study. You can’t generally say it as “commuting”, as pointed out in Comment #2. Why not defining clearly what beta means, then using the a very clear concept to replace the vague statement of “commuting”. If I don’t misunderstand your definition, you actually look at the probability of long-distance commuting departing versus arriving at a zone (spatial cell), right? Is that what the “home-based” versus “work-based” commuting represents?

Response: Thanks for your comments. The definition of home-based and work-based commuting is determined how the commuting distance is aggregated into a spatial unit. In aggregate analysis, the commuting distance of a spatial unit is generally measured by the average value of all travelers’ commuting distances within that unit. It is important to note that, for the same spatial unit or neighborhood, there are two ways of averaging the commuting distance: home-based measure and work-based measure. The former measures the average travel distance of commuters who depart from the spatial unit, while the latter is based on commuters who arrive at the spatial unit. Because of the results of two measurements are different, it is necessary to differentiate between the home-based and work-based commuting distances. Current studies are limited in not considering the relations from home-based and work-based perspectives simultaneously. In addition, this study used the concept of ‘distance decay parameter’ instead of the average distance.

We replaced D by X in the equation (1) to make it consistent with a general form of CDF: P(X<=x). Beta is estimated by a maximum likelihood method. The likelihood is given by eq.2.

The concept of beta is explained as follows (lines 353-361): beta is estimated by maximizing L(beta,x) and we get: beta=mean(x). It implies that the estimated beta value equals the mean of observed samples of commuting distances. Despite that, measuring the commuting distance by a decay parameter cannot be simply seen as averaging all commuting distances in a spatial unit. The decay parameter beta represents the travel distance distribution of all commuters. For example, small beta value indicates a higher probability of shorter commuting distance and lower probability of longer commuting distance, whilst large beta value indicates a higher probability of longer commuting distance and lower probability of shorter commuting distance. The decay parameter also represents the expectation of the distance distribution in an exponential distribution. beta is not simply a mean of commuting distances. Rather, we should treat it as a weighted average of that, according to the property of an exponential distribution. In other words, the expectation value also shapes the slope of the curve. It represents either a high probability of longer distances and a low probability of shorter distances (large beta), or a high probability of shorter distances and a low probability of longer distances (small beta).

4. Related to the conceptualization of heterogeneity, or the “contextual effect”, you may refer to Zhang and Zhang 2018a,b in JPER and Urban Studies.

Response: Thank you for providing these critical references. We added them in the introduction part (lines 58-62): ‘Among these reasons, the spatial context is the most important one since it has both direct and indirect effects on travel. The direct effect means that built environment is treated as one of influencing factors along with transportation services and social demographic factors, such as in linear models. The indirect or moderating effects include multiplicity, interaction and scalability [7,8].’

7. Zhang M, Zhang W. When Context Meets Self-Selection: The Built Environment–Travel Connection Revisited. J Plan Educ Res. 2020;40: 304–319.

8. Zhang W, Zhang M. Incorporating land use and pricing policies for reducing car dependence: Analytical framework and empirical evidence. Urban Stud. 2018;55: 3012–3033.

RESPONSE TO REVIEWER #3:

1.According to reponse" home-based commuters who depart from the spatial unit,

while the latter is work-based commuters who arrive at the spatial unit", Usually a person starts from space unit A(home) to space B(work) , there is a problem: The same travel behavior is not only the starting point of space a, but also the arrival point of space B, should it be counted twice as both home and work based commuting?Another problem is that he work and resident at same space unit.How to Identify and differentiated two groups of commuters – residents and employees through the data processing, please give processing flow and why did you do that.

Response: Thanks for your careful review work. In aggregate analysis, the commuting distance of a spatial unit is generally measured by the average value of all travelers’ commuting distances within that unit. It is important to note that, for the same spatial unit or neighborhood, there are two ways of averaging the commuting distance: home-based measure and work-based measure. The former measures the average travel distance of commuters who depart from the spatial unit, while the latter is based on commuters who arrive at the spatial unit. Because of the results of two measurements are different, it is necessary to differentiate between the home-based and work-based commuting distances. Please check the statement in lines 87-95.

2.The independent variables need clarifications. How are dependent variables indicators?

Response: Yes, we added a description of independent and dependent variables in details in the section ‘Variables’. The dependent variables are the decay parameter beta in equation P(X<=x)=1-exp(-x/beta) (x>=0). It implies that the estimated beta value equals the expectation of the distance distribution in an exponential distribution. beta cannot be simply seen as averaging all commuting distances in a spatial unit. Rather, we should treat it as a weighted average of that, according to the property of an exponential distribution. In other words, the expectation value also shapes the slope of the curve. It represents either a high probability of longer distances and a low probability of shorter distances (large beta), or a high probability of shorter distances and a low probability of longer distances (small beta).

3.As the REVIEWER #2 suggest"Also, need to add a conceptual framework explaining why the relationships could be spatially varied". The figure added is so simple and cannont explain, more detailed influence action path and mechanism are needed.

Response: Thanks for your suggestion. We remade the conceptual framework (figure 1).

RESPONSE TO REVIEWER #4:

This is an interesting study, and I think the authors' data material and their findings of differentiated relation between land use and commuting in 4 different clusters can potentially result in a published article of high importance. However, in its present form, the paper has some serious shortcomings that must be amended before I can recommend publication.

1. For one thing, the author uses two ambiguous concepts (i.e. home-based commuting, work-based commuting). Of course, I think I understand what the meaning is here; each spatial unit may become a residential area or workplace area, depending on the direction of commuting. But why not directly use the residential area and workplace area here, or you can define a spatial unit to have both residential area and workplace area attributes. In short, ‘home-based commuting’ and ‘work-based commuting’ are not general academic terms.

Response: Thanks for your careful review work. In aggregate analysis, the commuting distance of a spatial unit is generally measured by the average value of all travelers’ commuting distances within that unit. It is important to note that, for the same spatial unit or neighborhood, there are two ways of averaging the commuting distance: home-based measure and work-based measure. The former measures the average travel distance of commuters who depart from the spatial unit, while the latter is based on commuters who arrive at the spatial unit. Because of the results of two measurements are different, it is necessary to differentiate between the home-based and work-based commuting distances. Please check the statement in lines 87-95.

2. In Literature review section, the author needs to add some literature about the relation between built environment of residential area and workplace area, and the commuting. You can easily search for them on the google scholar. This is the most relevant research to your research. Further, you may find that your research question is not a huge gap.

Response: Yes, we added a new literature review part about the relation between built environment and commuting distances (lines 139-201).

3. In the framework, the author does not control any socioeconomic attributes, which may cause inaccurate results. For aggregated data, both statistical yearbooks and censuses can provide basic socioeconomic attributes in Chinese city, such as GDP, gender ratio, and elderly population ratio. Second, this research used a “5Ds” framework, but ignored Design and Distance to transit. Why? Because public transit accessibility, such as distance to bus/subway station or density of bus/subway station, is generally considered to be a very important factor affecting commuting. I think the author needs a very convincing reason here or needs to re-examine the framework.

Response: We did not include the socioeconomic attributes in the model. Our reason is that ‘This study does not include socioeconomic attributes, such as GDP, gender ratio, or elderly population ratio. The aim of this analysis is to explore the relation between the built environment and the commuting distance. By revealing the relation, the government can directly implement planning and policy measures for the built environment to address the problem of long commuting distances.’ (lines 382-386)

Thanks for your suggestion about Design and Distance to transit. We added two new variables: road intersections and bus stops. Based on that, we did new analysis using GWR and two-steps cluster models.

4. For Variable Section, functional facility density belongs to Diversity rather than the Density (Pg. 15, line 295, 304-306; Ewing and Cervero 2010). Second, why choose Zhujiang New Town as the city center, and is Guangzhou a monocentric city? (Pg. 17, line 332-334). However, based on your statement: “The provision of housing encourages employees in the university to live near their workplaces, so the jobs-housing would be balanced. The work population decreases commuting distance in suburban areas (Pg. 22, line 413-415)”. In traditional monocentric city research, home-work distance is positively correlated with the distance to the city center. If you find that there is a low commuting distance area in the suburbs of Guangzhou, then I think Guangzhou may not be a monocentric city. So, you may need to re-examine how many city centers there are in Guangzhou. Besides, Closeness is not a general built environment variable; why use Closeness rather than road network distance to city center.

Response: According to the definition of density, it refers to ‘the variable of interest per unit of area (Ewing and Cervero, 2010)’. We think a single functional facility’s number still belongs to density, because it is measured by each type separately. We also have a diversity measurement, which calculates the POI mixture of all types.

Based on our previous analysis, we found that Guangzhou is a mono-centric city, and the center is Zhujiang New Town (Zheng et al. 2021). Although the work population decreases commuting distance in suburban areas, the city is still a monocentric city.

Closeness is actually a measurement of the centrality of the road network. A road with the highest closeness means that it is close to all roads in the study area, and it is the geometry center of road networks. We do not use the road network distance to center, because it is too similar with the distance to city center variable.

5. Method section lacks an introduction to Two-step cluster models.

Response: Thanks for your suggestion. We added an introduction of the two-step cluster model (lines 467-474): ‘To reveal the double-edged effect explicitly, a two-step cluster model is applied to further examine the area-based impact of the built environment and answer Research Question 3. The algorithm of the two-step cluster can be referred to Rundle-Thiele et al. [48]. In brief, the first step pre-clusters the data into several small sub-clusters by a cluster feature tree, and the second step aggregates sub-clusters into clusters by the standard hierarchical clustering algorithm. The clustering algorithm could generate different number of clusters. The optimal number of clusters is determined by Schwarz’s Bayesian information criterion (BIC).’

6. I suggest that the author add an introduction map of the research area, may be in the Study area section, otherwise it is difficult for readers to understand where the airport suburb, university town, and Huangpu suburb are.

Response: Thanks for your suggestion. We added a map of the study area (Figure 2).

7. Pg. 3, line 55: the authors write: "Among these reasons, the spatial context is the most important one". Why? You need some evidence.

Response: The spatial context is import because it is a scientific issue which is not fully discussed in literature. Issues of built environment measurement and data source are relatively less important than the spatial context since they are method and technical issues which can be solved by improving the model. Studies from Zhang and Zhang (2018, 2020) confirm the opinion. We state it in the texts that ‘Among these reasons, the spatial context is the most important one since it has both direct and indirect effects on travel. The direct effect means that built environment is treated as one of influencing factors along with transportation services and social demographic factors, such as in linear models. The indirect or moderating effects include multiplicity, interaction and scalability [7,8]. These components cannot be directly measured by linear components.’ (lines 58-63)

8. Pg. 5, line 86: the authors write: "Home-based commuting represents the morning traffic peak and work-based commuting represents the evening traffic peak". I don’t agree, because commuting is two-way. Both of residential area and workplace area are very congested in the morning and evening.

Response: Yes, we realize your comment is correct. We remove the statement.

9. Pg. 5, line 98: "Area-based planning strategies" is an ambiguous scale. You need a clear definition.

Response: We revised it into ‘zonal planning’.

10. Pg. 13, line 256-260: You can merge this paragraph into the following paragraphs about land use variables (Pg. 16, line 317-325).

Response: Yes, we merged them. Thanks for your suggestion.

11. I would also like to see more explicit acknowledgement that this is a cross-sectional that reveals associations but does not prove causation. The authors should be qualified in their language, and they should be careful to use wording that does not suggest a longitudinal study or causal relationships.

Response: Yes, this is a cross sectional study that reveals the associations.

12. Other minor comments/typo/errors

Pg. 4, line 57: A typo: one 'However' should be deleted

Response: Yes, we deleted one.

Pg.12, line 237: the authors write: " Guangzhou is the largest city in Southern China and Provincial Capital". This is ambiguous statement. How to define the largest city? Area, population, or GDP? How about Shenzhen and Hongkong?

Response: We changed the statement as ‘the study area is the inner city of Guangzhou, China. Guangzhou is one of the four first-tier cities in China and Provincial Capital.’

Pg. 13, line 250 and 252: “it defines a residential location” is ambiguous. This is a Chinese expression.

Response: We changed it as ‘the location is defined as his/her residential place’.

Pg. 13, line 259: “27349” -> “27, 349”

Response: Yes.

Pg. 13, line 266-267: in equation one, you need give a definition for ‘D’?

Response: We re-edit the equation using x and X instead of d and D. P(X<=x) is the probability (CDF) that the travel distance X is less than value x, since the probability of a continuous random variable can be only expressed by a cumulative distribution function.

Pg. 15, line 299-300: ‘[14]’ -> ‘Rivera and Tiglao (2005)’

Response: Yes.

Pg. 18, line 346-347: “there is no need to measure the built environment from adjacent cells again” why? Do you think the surrounding environment of adjacent cells will not affect the commuting of travelers?

Response: Travelers’ commuting is already affected by adjacent cells in a GWR model. Thus, for the variables themselves, there is no need to consider adjacent cells again. Otherwise it conflicts with the GWR model.

Pg. 19, line 366: ‘bandwidth’ needs further explanation

Response: Bandwidth is the search range of the model. A cell is affected by all other cells within the range of the bandwidth. Bandwidth can be manually chosen or determined by criteria such as cross-validation or Akaike information criterion (AIC). Please also check it in lines 461-465.

Pg. 19, line 374-375: I know AIC, but what is AICc? Based on your statement: “difference between the two models is more than 3”. Does this mean the difference of AIC value between the two models is greater than 3?

Response: AICc is AIC with a small sample correction. AICc = AIC + 2K(K + 1) / (n - K - 1) where K is the number of parameters and n is the number of observations. When the sample size is small, there is a substantial probability that AIC will select models that have too many parameters, i.e. that AIC will overfit. To address such potential overfitting, AICc was developed: AICc is AIC with a correction for small sample sizes. Please check it in lines 489-496.

Pg. 20, line 381, 382: This looks like two tables, and the significance should be marked in the table with * or something else.

Response: Yes, we have split it into two tables. Significant variables are shown in maps with color, insignificant results are in grey color.

Pg. 22, line 427: “servicesencourages” -> “services encourages”

Response: Yes.

Pg. 31, line 590-591: “In contrast, mixed development would worsen the traffic in the morning peak.” I think your research results may be difficult to support such a conclusion.

Response: We revised as ‘In contrast, mixed development is associated with long home-based commuting trips’.

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Reviewer #3: 1.The logic of introduction is not very smooth,especially line106-112 jump out with other parts, I recommend to put in line 584 “Guidance for area-based planning policies”.

2.The line 818 “Conclusions and discussions” this part is too thin. Authors should focus on the comparison of the research results with other studies and the reasons for this result

3.As the REVIEWER #2 suggest "Also, need to add a conceptual framework explaining why the relationships could be spatially varied". The figure added is so simple and cannont explain, more detailed influence action path and mechanism are needed. Sad to say that nothing seems to have changed in the revised version.

4.Why such hypothesis is puts forward? From the current version, it just lists the achievements of others, rather than discuss the how built environment impact commuting distance.

5.Some other minor defects shows that the author is not serious enough, such as:

1)Response: We changed the title as ‘Spatially heterogeneous and double-edged effect of built environments on the commuting distance: from home-based and work-based perspectives’.

2)In part of RESPONSE TO EDITOR, response 2 repeated the following paragraph:

“Response: We changed the title as ‘Spatially heterogeneous and double-edged effect of built environments on the commuting distance: from home-based and work-based perspectives’.”

3)As REVIEWER #4:9response, Area-based planning strategies ere revised into ‘zonal planning”, but I have seen” Guidance for area-based planning policies” as obvious secondary title in line 584.

4)Line43 Long commuting “distances” should be “distance”.

6. The authors use exactly the same paragraph replied to REVIEWER #3: 1 and REVIEWER #4: 1. Although the two comments are similar to some extent, the authors should still give a targeted answer.

Reviewer #4: The authors have made considerable improvements followed up my comments. However, several indicator classification error in the new text should be corrected.

1. In the most land use-travel researches, socioeconomic attributes are often used as the control variables in the model. One important reason is that you need to exclude the potential influence of the difference of socioeconomic attributes on the land use-travel relationships. In other words, if you do not control the socioeconomic attributes, the result can be biased. Therefore, you should at least clarify this limitation in the Discussion.

2. In 5Ds framework, Density measures the intensity of human activity per areal unit, such as population density and job density, rather than all the variables named density (Ewing and Cervero 2010). Diversity measures pertain to the number of different land use in a given area and the degree to which they are represented in land area, floor area, or employment (Ewing and Cervero 2010). So, functional facility density is closer to Diversity rather than Density.

3. Besides, space syntax closeness does not seem to belong to Destination accessibility. Destination accessibility measures ease of access to trip attractions, such as distance to employment center, distance to shopping center, and distance to city centers. However, space syntax closeness measures the form of network. So, space syntax closeness looks closer to Design, you may need some literature to support this variable.

4. Pg. 21, line 420: Public transit accessibility → Distance to transit

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PLoS One. 2022 Mar 23;17(3):e0262727. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0262727.r006

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11 Dec 2021

Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The revision is significantly improved. Besides the comments from the two reviewers, the authors can further proofread and refine the language, and make it more succinct for readers (e.g., by separating long paragraphs into two and deleting some unnecessary sentences or conjunctions)

Response: Thanks for your suggestion. We made another round of proofreading. We improved the language in several sentences (line 53,81,87,112,159,173),And there are other revisions on improving the sentences. Please see them in the manuscript with track, at lines 239, 274, 275, 297, 230, 304, 309-310, 313-314, 321-325, 329-332, 348-349, 363, 413, 610-611, 618-619, 629, etc.

RESPONSE TO REVIEWER #3: 

1.The logic of introduction is not very smooth,especially line106-112 jump out with other parts, I recommend to put in line 584 “Guidance for area-based planning policies”.

Response: Thanks for your suggestion. We moved the paragraph into line 592.

2.The line 818 “Conclusions and discussions” this part is too thin. Authors should focus on the comparison of the research results with other studies and the reasons for this result.

Response: Thanks for your suggestion. Yes, we added a new part to the conclusions and discussions. We compared our results with other studies. We emphasized the difference part and discussed the reason. The findings of the relationship between the built environment and the commuting distance are different from study to study. The reason is that these studies are based on different theoretical framework. For example, based on the co-location theory and individual choice mechanism, the co-location of jobs and housing reduces the commuting distance. However, other researchers have different opinions. In our study, we gave an explanation. In residential areas where the individual choice is the dominate mechanism, the co-location theory is convincing, but in business centers where the market mechanism is dominating, the co-location of jobs and housing has little effect on the home-based commuting distance. Industrial firms have much stronger bidding ability than individuals. Thus, individuals do not have free choices of housing locations at the business center. Similarly, it also explains why mix development increases the home-based commuting distance. Please see the lines 701–746 for details.

3.As the REVIEWER #2 suggest "Also, need to add a conceptual framework explaining why the relationships could be spatially varied". The figure added is so simple and cannont explain, more detailed influence action path and mechanism are needed. Sad to say that nothing seems to have changed in the revised version.

Response: We appreciate this suggestion very much. After re-considering the theory behind our research findings, we made a new conceptual framework:‘It assumes that there are two mechanisms which dominate the relationship between the built environment and the commuting distance: the market mechanism and the individual choice mechanism. The relationships are varied at different urban locations, causing spatially heterogeneous effect. Also, the market mechanism and the individual choice mechanism are the leading force of the work-based and home-based commuting, respectively.’ (lines 126-130)

4.Why such hypothesis is puts forward? From the current version, it just lists the achievements of others, rather than discuss the how built environment impact commuting distance.

Response: Thanks for your comment. This question is related to the conceptual framework. We added new statement about the hypothesis underlying the spatially heterogeneous effect: ‘The debate on the impact of the built environment is mainly caused by the different mechanisms of human and urban space interaction: the market mechanism and the individual choice mechanism. The market mechanism triggers agglomeration economic and shapes the urban spatial structure. Economic agglomeration refers to a large number of firms existing in spatial proximity and benefit from cost reductions and efficiency gains. It encourages capital facilities and buildings to be concentrated located. The individual choice mechanism means a decision maker chooses the residential and work location with the highest utility from a set of alternatives. It assumes that workers choose home locations as close to their jobs as possible. The two mechanisms have different actions on different urban locations. The market mechanism is more competitive at business centers, and the choice mechanism has stronger influence at residential centers and suburban areas. Since the urban space is heterogeneous, the relationship between the commuting distance and the built environment should be spatially varied.’ (lines 56 – 68)

And we also discussed the hypothesis behind the home-based and work-based commuting distance: ‘Because the results of the two measurements are different, it is necessary to differentiate between home-based and work-based commuting distances. More importantly, the underlying mechanisms are different. From a work-based perspective, the economic agglomeration is the dominant mechanism. Industrial firms have much stronger land-rent bidding ability than individuals in a free market system. It forces local workers to live far from workplaces. From a home-based perspective, the co-location theory is the dominant mechanism. Workers can freely choose their home locations to avoid commuting time cost where the supply of housing land is adequate.’ (lines 99-107)

5.Some other minor defects shows that the author is not serious enough, such as:1)Response: We changed the title as ‘Spatially heterogeneous and double-edged effect of built environments on the commuting distance: from home-based and work-based perspectives’.2)In part of RESPONSE TO EDITOR, response 2 repeated the following paragraph:“Response: We changed the title as ‘Spatially heterogeneous and double-edged effect of built environments on the commuting distance: from home-based and work-based perspectives’.”3)As REVIEWER #4:9response, Area-based planning strategies ere revised into ‘zonal planning”, but I have seen” Guidance for area-based planning policies” as obvious secondary title in line 584.4)Line43 Long commuting “distances” should be “distance”.6. The authors use exactly the same paragraph replied to REVIEWER #3: 1 and REVIEWER #4: 1. Although the two comments are similar to some extent, the authors should still give a targeted answer.

Response: Thank you. This is a very useful suggestion that we learn from your comments. It’s true that the response should be targeted to different question. (for comments 1,2 and 6)

We revised ‘area-based planning’ to ‘zonal planning’ (for comments 3).

We revised ‘distances’ to ‘distance’ (for comments 4).

RESPONSE TO REVIEWER #4: 

The authors have made considerable improvements followed up my comments. However, several indicator classification error in the new text should be corrected.

1. In the most land use-travel researches, socioeconomic attributes are often used as the control variables in the model. One important reason is that you need to exclude the potential influence of the difference of socioeconomic attributes on the land use-travel relationships. In other words, if you do not control the socioeconomic attributes, the result can be biased. Therefore, you should at least clarify this limitation in the Discussion.

Response: Thanks for your comments. We discussed the limitation of not incorporating socioeconomic attributes in the new edition: ‘The study is limited in not incorporating individual socioeconomic attributes. Socioeconomic attributes are important factors which affect people’s commuting behavior. It is a common approach to explore the influence of people’s socioeconomic characteristic on the commuting distance, particularly in disaggregate analysis. In this study, we did not consider socioeconomic attributes as independent variables. Our argument is that government can implement spatial planning measures to decrease the commuting distance by improving the built environment, but socioeconomic attributes cannot be easily changed and are not effective policy measures for the government. Nevertheless, socioeconomic attributes still have potential influence on commuting behavior. Excluding them would cause biased results of the built environment and the commuting distance relationship. Realizing the shortcoming, we will incorporate individual-level data to further explore the behavioral drivers of commuting distance in future research.’ (lines 747-759)

2. In 5Ds framework, Density measures the intensity of human activity per areal unit, such as population density and job density, rather than all the variables named density

(Ewing and Cervero 2010). Diversity measures pertain to the number of different land use in a given area and the degree to which they are represented in land area, floor area, or employment (Ewing and Cervero 2010). So, functional facility density is closer to Diversity rather than Density.

Response: Thanks for your comments. We made revisions according to your comment. Please check them in lines 409-422.

3. Besides, space syntax closeness does not seem to belong to Destination accessibility. Destination accessibility measures ease of access to trip attractions, such as distance to employment center, distance to shopping center, and distance to city centers. However, space syntax closeness measures the form of network. So, space syntax closeness looks closer to Design, you may need some literature to support this variable.

Response: In our opinion, Closeness is still a destination accessibility index. Closeness in space syntax refers to the centrality level of road. Closeness (also normalized as syntactic ‘Integration’ (Hiller, 2010)) is a key index of the centrality. It indicates the accessibility and centrality level of spatial units (Li et al., 2019). In other words, it means the closeness of any given road section to all other road sections in the system (Hiller, 1984). Traditionally destination accessibility is measured by the distance to the city center. An underlying problem is that sometimes a city center is arbitrarily selected according to experience and subjective perception of a city. The index of ‘closeness’ solves the problem. It does not predefine a center. Rather, it measures a road section’s overall ease of moving to all other sections. Therefore, a location with higher closeness value has better destination accessibility. We also stated it in the manuscript at lines 426-436.

References:

Hillier B, Stonor T. Space syntax - strategic urban design. City Planning Institute of Japan. 2010.

Li Q, Zhou S, Wen P. The relationship between centrality and land use patterns: Empirical evidence from five Chinese metropolises. Computers, Environment and Urban Systems. 2019;78. doi:10.1016/j.compenvurbsys.2019.101356

Hillier Bill, Hanson Julienne. The social logic of space. Cambridge University Press; 1984.

4. Pg. 21, line 420: Public transit accessibility → Distance to transit

Response: Yes, we revised it according to your suggestion: ‘Distance to transit can be alternatively measured by the number of stations per unit area, namely public transit accessibility. In this study, it is the number of bus stops in a grid.’ (lines 424-425)

5. Please list the corresponding manuscript changes in quotation marks under the reviewer’s questions, if necessary.

Response: This is really a useful suggestion. We list changes in quotation marks to make it easier for reviewing.

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