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. 2022 Apr 29;17(4):e0267405. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0267405

Academic enjoyment, behavioral engagement, self-concept, organizational strategy and achievement in EFL setting: A multiple mediation analysis

Xia Kang 1,2, Yajun Wu 3,*
Editor: Trinidad Garcia4
PMCID: PMC9053798  PMID: 35486654

Abstract

Motivated by the positive psychology movement in the English as Foreign Language (EFL), existing studies have demonstrated that subject-related enjoyment has a positive correlation with academic achievement. However, quite a few studieshave examined why academic enjoyment can predict positive academic achievement. This study aimed to investigate whether behavioral engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy mediated relations between academic enjoyment and achievement in EFL setting. 528 Chinese secondary school students (Male: N = 280; Female: N = 248) participated in the survey and completed the questionnaires on EFL-related enjoyment, behavioral engagement, self-concept, organizational strategy, and academic performance. Structural equation model (SEM) analyses showed that students’ academic enjoyment positively predicted their English achievement. Academic engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy had parallel multiple mediating effects between academic enjoyment and English achievement. Multi-group SEM analysis demonstrated that the model had invariance across genders, indicating that the model is applicable to both male and female students. Limitations and implications are discussed.

Introduction

This study aimed to further understand the association between achievement emotions and academic achievement in the context of English as a Foreign Language. Previous research has indicated that achievement emotions are not only a by-product of the learning process and/or achievement, but also play a critical role in subsequent academic achievement via mediators such as motivation, academic engagement, learning strategies, and competence beliefs [e.g., 14]. According to the control-value theory (CVT), positive emotions such as enjoyment, hope, and pride would benefit the improvement of academic achievement, while negative emotions such as anxiety, boredom, and hopelessness have negative impacts on student’s academic achievement [57]. Inspired by positive psychology, more and more studies were conducted to explore the positive effect of positive achievement emotions on academic achievement in the field of education. Specifically, the influence of academic enjoyment, as the most frequent and intense positive emotion [8, 9], on academic success and well-being has been widely explored in STEM fields (science, technology, engineering, and mathematics) [10, 11]. Recently, in addition to some studies focusing on language anxiety, interest in discussing positive achievement emotions is also growing (e.g., academic enjoyment)in the EFL setting [1214]. Furthermore, by quizzing undergraduates on their achievement emotions about mathematics, Latin, German, and English, [15] found that students’ achievement emotions are domain-specific. More research on the correlation between academic enjoyment and subsequent achievement is therefore needed in the EFL context. Besides, studies that examine the relationship between academic enjoyment and achievement have took university students or senior high school students as participants [11, 14, 16] and less attention has been paid to the population of secondary school students. To address these limitations, the present study aimed to examine the association between academic enjoyment and achievement as well as the mediaton mechanism between these two constructs in EFL context, in a sample of secondary school students.

Literature review

Academic enjoyment and English achievement

Control-value theory of achievement emotions postulates that control and value appraisals are the proximal antecedents of achievement emotions, which, in turn, affect students’ academic achievement [5, 17]. Based on control-value theory, researchers documented that achievement emotions would affect academic performance via mediators such as cognitive resources, achievement goals, motivational engagement, and strategy use [e.g., 18, 19]. In addition, the control-value theory [e.g., 20] and empirical evidence [e.g., 4, 21] demonstrated the reciprocal relationships between achievement emotions and academic self-concept, which implies that academic self-concept would also be one possible mediator between achievement emotions and academic performance. Achievement emotions refer to emotions directly related to achievement activities or achievement outcomes. Precisely, previous research has identified nine discrete emotions (i.e., enjoyment, hope, pride, relief, anxiety, boredom, hopelessness, shame, and anger) in three contexts (i.e., classroom, homework, and examination) [15, 22]. Moreover, achievement emotions are domain-specific [15]. Therefore, researchers [e.g., 22, 23] suggested that both the subject and context should be taken into consideration when discussing a particular kind of achievement emotion. Generally, positive emotions, such as enjoyment, would play a critical role in the learning process because positive emotions are believed to be closely related to students’ self-discipline, learning strategies, motivation, and the activation of cognitive resources [2].

Academic enjoyment is a positive predictor of achievement [16, 24]. However, little is known about the mediation mechanism between these two constructs. For example, [25]found that the higher level of students’ EFL-related enjoyment, the higher their attitude towards EFL and their enthusiasm to engage in speaking practice. Moreover, by conducting a correlation analysis, [26] compared the predictive effects of enjoyment and anxiety on EFL achievement and reported that the effect of enjoyment on EFL achievement was higher than that of anxiety. Researchers have recognized the positive effect of academic enjoyment on EFL achievement [14, 16, 24, 25]. Few studies have been conducted to explore the mediation mechanism between academic enjoyment and achievement in an EFL context in China. Therefore, it is of significance to explore the mediators underpinning the linkage between academic enjoyment and English achievement in the EFL context in a sample of Chinese secondary school students.

The mediating roles of behavioral engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy underpin the association between academic enjoyment and achievement

Mediation via behavioral engagement

Behavioral engagement is a multidimensional concept that refers specifically to student classroom conduct, participation in school-related activities, and interest in an academic task [27, 28]. Among them, students’ classroom conduct and participation in school-related activities are the passive aspects of behavioral engagement for activities in these two settings were assigned by teachers, and students were practically driven by teachers’ expectations. While interest in academic tasks is the active aspect of behavioral engagement because a student would energetically raise questions or participate in discussions in the classroom context.

Existing studies have shown the predictive effect of behavioral engagement on academic achievement [3, 29, 30]. For example, [29] explored the correlation between student engagement and academic achievement and noted that students with a high level of engagement perform better than those with a low level of engagement. Besides, research has also demonstrated the predictive effect of achievement emotions on students’ engagement [3133]. For example, [31] examed the promoting effect of positive achievement emotions (e.g., enjoyment) on students’ academic engagement and revealed that the higher the level of students’ positive emotions, the more engaged they would be in learning activities. Taken together, the present study proposed the structural mediational model that behavioral engagement plays a mediating role between academic enjoyment and achievement in an EFL context.

Mediation by self-concept

Self-concept refers to one’s self-perceptions that are formed through experience within the environment [34]. In line with this definition, [35] defined academic self-concept as students’ perceptions about themselves in achievement situations. More precisely, academic self-concept is about students’ self-perceptions about their academic ability, that is, students’ self-evaluation of whether they would achieve the specific achievement goals [36]. [37] reported that mathematics-related self-concept differed from the German- or general-school-related self-concept. This indicates that academic self-concept is domain-specific, and the measurement of academic self-concept should be conducted in a specific subject domain (e.g., mathematics, EFL, and science).

According to the CVT, positive self-concept implies students’ control over the learning activities, which, in turn, predicts students would experience enjoyment in the related learning activities [5]. [2] examined the mediating effect of academic self-concept on mathematics-related achievement and enjoyment. Similarly, in a sample of nine graders’ mathematics learning, [38] confirmed that academic self-concept was a complete mediator between academic achievement and enjoyment. Moreover, by conducting a longitudinal study relating to mathematics, [4] proved that academic self-concept fully mediated the link between enjoyment and achievement. In sum, the CVT model as well as empirical evidence suggested the reciprocal relationships between academic self-concept and achievement emotions [4, 20, 21], which means that academic-concept would be one possible mediator between academic enjoyment and academic performance. The mediating effect of academic self-concept between enjoyment and achievement was mainly verified in the context of mathematics, however, little work has been done to test this mediation model in the EFL context.

Mediation through organizational strategy

Organizational strategy, which refers to the selecting, sequencing, outlining, reordering, and summarizing important learning contents, is a commonly used learning strategy for foreign language learners [39]. For example, [40] argued that among the various foreign language learning strategies, those are related to comprehension, organization, and elaboration are most commonly used by foreign language learners in the context of East Asian Confucious culture.

Previous studies have verified the associations between learning strategies and academic achievement and positive achievement emotions, such as academic enjoyment. For example, learning strategies have been found to positively predict L2 proficiency through the mediator of academic engagement [41]. Besides, taking students from grade 5 to grade 10 as participants, [42] explored the correlation between academic enjoyment and learning strategies and found that the higher the level of academic enjoyment, the more likely they were to adopt complex learning strategies. By exploring the correlation between achievement emotions and cognitive/meta-cognitive strategies, [43] found that organizational strategy was positively correlated with academic enjoyment. As academic enjoyment, learning strategies (e.g., organizational strategy), and academic achievement are all domain-specific [4446], the present study examined the mediating effect of organizational strategy between academic enjoyment and achievement in an EFL context to expand the scope of this mediating model.

Aims and hypotheses of the present study

The present study aimed to examine the mediating mechanisms between academic enjoyment and achievement in a sample of Chinese secondary school students aged 11 to 14 years old in the EFL context. As the constructs of academic enjoyment, academic engagement, self-concept, organizational strategy, and achievement are domain-specific [42, 44, 46, 47], they were measured in the English subject. In Mainland China, English is a compulsory subject in the whole course of education (from primary grade 3 to Ph. D. education) [48, 49], and it is of significance for both further study and promotion at work [50]. The Ministry of Education of the People’s Republic of China stipulates that English should be introduced at primary three, however, to gain a competitive advantage, English was usually introduced as early as primary one or in the kindergarten phase in the high socioeconomic status schools [51]. Accordingly, gaining academic success in EFL, especially at the secondary school level, has been central to research efforts [11, 14, 16, 52]. However, researchon how positive achievement emotions (e.g., enjoyment) promote academic achievement in the EFL context needs further expanded, which may be helpful for understanding the mechanism of positive emotions on academic performance.

Necessarily, the present study filled the gap by exploring the mediation mechanism that underpins the association between academic enjoyment and English achievement among Chinese secondary school students in the EFL context. Four hypotheses were examined:

Hypothesis 1: Academic enjoyment has a positive predictive effect on Chinese secondary school students’ English achievement.

Hypothesis 2: Behavioral engagement partially mediates the link between EFL-related enjoyment and achievement.

Hypothesis 3: Self-concept plays a partial mediating role in the relationship between EFL-related enjoyment and achievement.

Hypothesis 4: Organizational strategy partially mediates the association between EFL-related enjoyment and achievement.

Methods

Participants and procedure

Ethics statement

The present study involving human participants were reviewed and approved by the Human Research Ethics Committee of the University of Hong Kong. Before conducting the survey, participants and their English teachers provided their written informed consent to participate in this study. Only the data of participants who agreed to take part in the questionnaire survey would be used. Besides, verbal informed consent was also obtained from participants’ parents or guardians. Students’ participants in this questionnaire was entirely voluntary and they could stop and withdraw from this survey at any time.

Participants

A total of 528 seventh- and eighth-grade students (male n = 280, female n = 248, missing n = 22; mean age = 13.65, SD = 0.61) from one secondary school in Kunming City, a new first-tier city in the Chinese setting were selected as the participants. Participants were all from the main urban area of Kunming City. And as far as the socioeconomic status is concerned, participants were majorly from the middle class. In addition, given that the participant were mainly composed of Han students, the English learning environment was influenced by the Confucian-heritage culture [5355].

Design and procedure

Students were recruited to complete the questionnaire during class with the help of a collaborator and English teachers and were told that they have the right to opt-out of the questionnaire if they do not wish to attend. Even if participants refuse to take part in the questionnaire, it will not affect them in any way. Expect for those who asked for leave, all the seventh- and eighth-graders in the school participated in the survey. The questionnaire took the participants about 20 minutes.

Measures

Academic enjoyment

Participants’ classroom-related enjoyment in EFL context was assessed by the five related items that were adapted from the Achievement Emotions Questionnaire [19] to reflect students’ sense of satisfaction in the settings of their English classroom learning (e.g., ‘I like English class’). Participants responded using a five-point scale (1 = strongly disagree to 5 = strongly agree). All factor loadings were significant (p<0.001), and the Cronbach’s alpha reliability for EFL-related enjoyment ranged from .56 to .86. The internal consistency reliability of the scale of academic enjoyment was .866. Confirmatory factor analysis showed that the model fit of this scale was good: χ2/df = 3.107, CFI = 0.992, TLI = 0.983, RMSEA = 0.063, and SRMR = 0.021. In the SEM analysis, EFL-related enjoyment was treated as a latent variable.

Behavioral engagement

Engagement vs. Dissatisfaction with Learning Questionnaire [56] was adapted to measure participants’ behavioral engagement. The behavioral engagement was measured by four items and all items were adapted for English lessons or learning activities (e.g., “I try hard to do well in English class”). A 5-point Likert scale ranging from 1 (strongly disagree) to 5 (strongly agree) was used to describe participants’ willingness to devote themselves to English learning. The higher the score, the more willing participants are to devote themselves to English learning. The internal consistency reliability of the behavioral engagement scale was .848. Item factor loadings ranged between .65 and .85 and were significant at p<0.001. Besides, this scale showed a good fit:χ2/df = 4.993, CFI = 0.991, TLI = 0.973, RMSEA = 0.087, SRMR = 0.016. Behavioral engagement was also modeled as latent variable in SEM analysis.

Academic self-concept

The academic self-concept was measured with 5 items (e.g., “I am good at English”) that adapted from the Program for International Student Assessment 2015 (PISA 2015) [57]. Participants responded on a 5-point Likert scale (1 = strongly disagree, 5 = strongly agree) such that a high score indicated that participants have strong self-perception of their English ability. Item factor loadings ranged from .60 to .87 and were significant at p<0.001. The Cronbach’s alpha for the academic self-concept was .866. In addition, the confirmatory factor analysis demonstrated that the scale of academic self-concept has an adequate model fit: χ2/df = 1.971, CFI = 0.996, TLI = 0.992, RMSEA = 0.043, SRMR = 0.014.

Organizational strategy

The organizational strategy was measured using five items from the Goal Orientation and Learning Strategies Survey (GOALS-S) [39]. Items were adapted to refer to English learning activities (e.g., “I study English by organizing my English notes”). Items of the organizational strategy were rated on a 5-point Likert scale ranging from 1 to 5 with higher scores indicating a stronger endorsement of organizational strategy in students’ English learning activities. Item factor loadings ranged from .70 to .87 and were significant at p<0.001. The internal consistency reliability of organizational strategy was .897. Moreover, the model fit of the organizational strategy scale was good as χ2/df = 3.642, CFI = 0.991, TLI = 0983, RMSEA = 0.071, SRMR = 0.016 This measure was posited as a latent variable in SEM analysis.

English achievement

Participants’ English scores on the final course exam were used to represent their English achievement. The final course exam was uniformly developed and scored by the district education bureau according to the textbook and the syllabus. The total score of the test paper is 120 points. The higher the score, the higher the participants’ English achievement. In the present study, English achievement was treated as an observed variable.

Data analysis

Mplus 8.3 [58] was used to analyze the data in three stages. First, confirmatory factor analyses were conducted to verify the reliability and validity of each construct. Second, latent SEM was performed to test the path coefficients. Precisely, the mediating effects of behavioral engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy were estimated by employing the bootstrap approach with bootstrapped confidence intervals of 95%. Third, multi-group SEM was applied to examine the measurement invariance of between-constructs across genders (i.e., male and female students).

To measure the measurement invariance across genders, three hierarchical processes proposed by [59] were performed, including configural, metric and scalar invariance. To test the configural invariance, factor loadings and thresholds across the contrasting groups were set free. Once configural invariance was established, then metric invariance across groups would be tested by equally constraining the factor loadings. And if metric invariance was proved, scalar invariance across groups would be estimated by equally constraining both factor loadings and intercepts of all items. Measurement invariance across groups would be established only if the following two conditions are met: (a) the overall model fit is acceptable [60], and the value of ΔCFI between two nested models is smaller than or equal to 0.01 [61].

Results

Common method bias

In this study, Harman’s single-factor test was carried out to assess the common method bias [62]. The results of single-factor CFA were χ2/df = 10.014, CFI = 0.773, TLI = 0.744, RMSEA = 0.131, SRMR = 0.074, indicating that the model fit was poor. This means that there is no significant common method bias in the dataset of the present study.

Descriptive statistics and correlations

Table 1 shows the results of descriptive statistics and correlational analyses on the variables of academic enjoyment, behavioral engagement, self-concept, organizational strategy, English achievement, and gender. The results demonstrated that academic enjoyment, behavioral engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy were positively correlated with English achievement, while the correlation between gender and academic enjoyment was not significant.

Table 1. Descriptive statistics and zero-order bivariate correlational coefficients among the variables (N = 528).

Variables 1 2 3 4 5 6
1. Enjoyment -
2. Behavioral engagement .663** -
3. Self-concept .617** .627** -
4. Organizational strategy .588** .671** .582** -
5. Achievement .338** .424** .573** .291** -
6. Gender .002 .021 .023 .073 .111* -
Mean 3.752 2.957 2.587 2.874 90.691 -
SD .717 .556 .614 .588 21.797 -
Cronbach’α .866 .848 .866 .897 - -

Note.

**p<0.01

*p<0.05.

Examining the structural model

Total effect modeling analysis

Hypothesis 1 was verified by testing the linkage between academic enjoyment and English achievement without considering the intermediate variables-behavioral engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy. Regression analysis showed that academic enjoyment had a positive predictive effect on English achievement, with the non-standardized regression coefficient being significantly non-zero (β = 11.657, p<0.001). Furthermore, the standardized regression coefficient (β = 0.371) also indicated that H1 is valid.

Mediation effect modeling analysis

The proposed hypothetical model was tested by using the latent variable SEM, and the standardized path coefficients were presented in Fig 1. Results indicated that the proposed structural model had good fit indices, with χ2(164) = 549.917, χ2/df = 3.353, CFI = 0.939, TLI = 0.929, RMSEA = 0.067, SRMR = 0.069.

Fig 1. Multiple mediation models between academic enjoyment and English achievement.

Fig 1

Note. Standardized path coefficients and standard error are presented. *p < 0.05, **p < 0.01, ***p < 0.001.

The point estimates of standardized mediation effect of Path one (academic enjoyment→ behavioral engagement→ English achievement) were 0.214, and both the bias-corrected and accelerated 95% confidence interval (BCa 95% CI) were [0.078, 0.362], indicating that the mediating effect of behavioral engagement was significant. For the second Path (academic enjoyment→ self-concept→ English achievement), the point estimates of standardized mediation effect = 0.525, and the BCa 95% CIs were [0.423, 0.657] and [0.419, 0.647] respectively, showing that self-concept was a significant mediator in the association between academic enjoyment and English achievement as zero was not contained. The point estimates of standardized mediation effect of Path three (academic enjoyment→ organizational strategy→ English achievement) = -0.094, and the BCa 95% CIs were [-0.173, -0.023] and [-0.172, -0.022] respectively. The BCa 95% CI of Path three did not contain zero, indicating that the mediation effect of the organizational strategy was significant.

Results of the pairwise multiple comparison analyses (see Table 2) indicated that the mediation effects of the three mediators were all significant, and the strengths of these three mediation effects were different. First, the unstandardized estimate for the strength comparison of behavioral engagement and self-concept was -10.137, and the BCa 95% CIs were [-16.096, -4.248] and [-16.103, -4.252], indicating that the mediation effect of self-concept was significantly different from (zero didn’t occur in the BCa 95% CIs) and stronger than the mediation effect of behavioral engagement. Second, the unstandardized estimate for the comparison of the strength of the two mediation effects between behavioral engagement and organizational strategy was 10.026, and zero didn’t occur between the BCa 95% CIs ([4.600,16.592] and [4.587, 16.587]), which suggests that the behavioral engagement’s mediation effect is significantly stronger than that of organizational strategy. Third, the strengths of mediational paths between “academic enjoyment →self-concept →English achievement” and “academic enjoyment → organizational strategy → English achievement” were also compared. The unstandardized estimate for the strength comparison of these two mediational paths was 20.163 and zero didn’t occur in the BCa 95% CIs ([15.424, 25.869] and [15.457, 25.914]), evidencing that self-concept has a significantly larger mediation effect than organizational strategy. In terms of strength of the mediation effect, the mediation effects of self-concept, behavioral engagement, and organizational strategy decrease successively.

Table 2. Bootstrap-computed analyses of the mediation effects of behavioral engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy in the relationship between academic enjoyment and English achievement.
Types of paths Estimate Parameter Bootstrap 5000 times 95% CI
bias-corrected percentile
S.E. Est./S.E. Lower Upper Lower Upper
1 Enjoyment→Behavioral engagement→English achievement 0.214 0.072 2.979 0.078 0.362 2.469 12.306
2 Enjoyment→Self-concept→English achievement 0.525 0.059 8.937 0.423 0.657 0.657 21.858
3 Enjoyment→Organizational strategy→English achievement -0.094 0.038 -2.490 -0.173 -0.023 -5.757 -0.688
Total indirect effects 0.644 0.095 6.766 0.475 0.854 14.973 28.351
Direct effects -0.241 0.107 -2.261 -0.461 -0.049 -15.379 -1.498
Indirect effects comparison
1 Behavioral engagement–2 Self-concept -10.137 3.046 -3.328 -16.096 -4.248 -16.103 -4.252
1 Behavioral engagement–3 Organizational strategy 10.026 3.035 3.303 4.600 16.592 4.587 16.587
2 Self-concept–3 Organizational strategy 20.163 2.670 7.553 15.424 25.869 15.457 25.914

Note. The comparison of indirect effects was unstandardized output, while the remaining results were standardized output.

In the mediation model of the present study, the direct effect between academic enjoyment and English achievement is significant (BCa 95% CI were [-0.461, -0.049] and [-0.460, -0.049]) because the intervals didn’t contain zero, indicating that behavioral engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy play a partial mediating role in the relationship between these two constructs. Moreover, the mediation proportion, the total effect of academic enjoyment on English achievement via the three mediators, was 72.8% (PM = 0.644/(0.644+0.241) = 0.728)(see Table 2), signifying that the mediating effect accounted for 72.8% of the total absolute effect. The ratio-of-mediators (RM) was 2.67 (RM = 0.644/0.241 = 2.67), which indicated that the total mediating effect of the three mediators was 2.67 times of the direct effect. Furthermore, the proportions of the three mediators’ mediating effect to the total absolute effect were 19.9% (Rbehavioral engagement = 0.214/(0.214+0.525+0.094+0.241)), 48.9% (Rself-concept = 0.525/(0.214+0.525+0.094+0.241)), 8.8% (Rorganizational strategy = 0.094/(0.214+0.525+0.094+0.241)) respectively.

Structural invariance across genders

Multi-group SEM has been conducted to examine the measurement invariance of the between-construct relationships across genders. The measurement invariance across different groups (e.g., gender) is the logical prerequisite to testing the path coefficients invariance across the comparison groups. Therefore, establishing between-constructs measurement invariance across comparison groups would be first tested, and then examined whether the path coefficient has cross-group invariance.

Results of testing measurement invariance showed that the overall model fits were good, and ΔCFIs were 0.005 or smaller between two nested models (see Table 3), which were smaller than 0.01, indicating that configural, metric and scalar invariances were established in the proposed model for genders. Therefore, structural invariance was examined next.

Table 3. Fit indices for measurement invariance tests of the model across genders.

Model χ 2 df CFI ΔCFI TLI RMSEA SRMR
M2a: Configural model 532.259 292 0.960 - 0.954 0.056 0.054
M3a: Metric invariance 552.242 307 0.960 0.000 0.955 0.055 0.060
M4a: Scalar invariance 596.001 326 0.955 0.005 0.953 0.056 0.061

Note: CFI = comparative fit index (>0.90); TLI = Tucker–Lewis index (>0.90); RMSEA = root mean square error of approximation (<0.10); SRMR = standardized root mean square residual (<0.08) [63].

a Fit index for measurement invariance tests of the model across genders (Nboy = 280; Ngirl = 248).

We then examined the null hypothesis of equality of path coefficients in the proposed model across genders with the ‘Model test’ command in Mplus 8.3 [58]. If the Wald chi-square test was significant, we constrained one specific structural path to be equal at a time to identify paths with significant gender differences. If no significance was identified, we stopped the analysis. The differences in path estimates of the SEM model across genders were assessed by equally constraining the corresponding path coefficients for each group. The results of omnibus Wald tests across genders (in which gender as a control variable was excluded; Wald χ2(7) = 7.427 and p = 0.39) showed no significant difference in the path coefficients, indicating that there was no significant difference that all paths were equal for male and female students.

Discussion

The present study aimed to investigate the association and the mediation mechanism between positive achievement emotion (i.e., enjoyment) and academic achievement in an EFL setting. With the rise of positive psychology, a growing number of studieshave concentrated on how positive achievement emotions relate to the subsequent academic results. Relations and mediation mechanisms between these two constructs have been comparatively less studied in the EFL context, especially those that took secondary school students as participants. EFL-related Data of a sample of Chinese secondary school students in seventh and eighth grades were collected. The latent SEM was conducted to calculate the correlation coefficients and model relationships among the variables for data analysis.

The hypothesis that academic enjoyment has a significant positive effect on EFL achievement (H1) was supported. A large body of research has been inspired by CVT, showing that academic enjoyment is positively correlated with academic achievement [e.g., 5, 11, 64, 65]. The present study contributes to the literature by offering empirical evidence that positive achievement emotions such as enjoyment have a predictive effect on academic achievement based on samples of Chinese secondary school students’ EFL learning. However, academic enjoyment positively influences English achievement via the mediators of behavioral engagement, academic self-concept, and organizational strategy. However, academic enjoyment alone is not enough to guarantee English achievement because behavioral engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy are also necessary [66]. This shows that the mechanism of achievement emotions on academic achievement is complex, and more research is needed to deepen the understanding of how achievement emotions affect students’ academic engagement.

The hypotheses that behavioral engagement (H2), self-concept (H3), and organizational strategy (H4) are the mediators between academic enjoyment and English achievement were also confirmed. Researchers have explored the mediation mechanism between enjoyment and achievement across a wide range of subject domains [e.g., 4, 10, 31, 67, 68]. And a succession of mediators such as achievement goals, academic engagement, academic self-concept, psychological capital, and learning strategy was certified [6972]. However, most of the existing studies only discussed one single mediator between these two constructs [73], and few studies have simultaneously investigated multiple mediators. Furthermore, this study also calculated and compared the path coefficients of the three mediators. In this study, PM (the ratio of the indirect effect to the total effect) = .728 represents the total mediation effect size of enjoyment on English achievement was 72.8%. Self-concept took up the highest mediation effect, accounting for 48.9% of the total mediation effect. While the mediation effect sizes of behavioral engagement and organizational strategy decreased sequentially, accounting for 19.9% and 8.8%, respectively. The finding that academic enjoyment predicted English achievement via the mediators of self-concept, behavioral engagement, and organizational strategy supports the existing studies documenting this linkage in Chinese secondary school students’ EFL learning [e.g., 2, 5, 10, 11]. It is a novel contribution to the literature that the mediating effect of variables (i.e., self-concept, behavioral engagement, and organizational strategy) between academic enjoyment and English achievement differed in samples of Chinese secondary school students’ EFL learning. Accordingly, the findings suggest that in addition to evoking students’ organizational strategy, their EFL-related self-concept and behavioral engagement are more requested to give full play to the predictive effect of academic enjoyment on English achievement.

Both measurement invariance and path coefficients invariance of the assumed multi-mediation model across genders were verified. The multi-group confirmatory factor analysis and multi-group SEM analysis showed that both factor loadings and item intercepts were equivalent across genders, indicating that solid measurement invariance was established across genders. In addition, the omnibus Wald test across genders (Wald χ2(7) = 7.427 and p = 0.39) indicated that all paths were equally applicable to both male and female secondary school students.

Implications, limitations, and directions for future research

This study has both theoretical and practical implications for the relevance of student-perceived enjoyment to their academic achievement in an EFL setting. CVT posits that achievement emotions (e.g., enjoyment) are generated by the synergistic effects of control and value appraisals [11]. Moreover, control and value are considered to be two malleable constructs [9, 73], which implies that important socializers such as educational practitioners and parents could exert a positive influence on children’s control and value appraisals and thereby enhance their positive emotions (e.g., enjoyment). Given the positive correlation between perceived enjoyment and academic achievement in the EFL context, we would anticipate that increasing students’ perceived enjoyment in English learning would improve their English achievement. Specifically, educational practitioners were suggested to adopt an open, extrovert, and agreeable attitude in EFL teaching [74], and parents were advised to praise their children [75, 76], these measures would be beneficial in enhancing students’ academic enjoyment and thus improve their EFL achievement. In terms of theory, this study contributes to the achievement emotion literature by providing empirical evidence that positive achievement emotions such as enjoyment could affect academic achievement directly or indirectly via the mediators of behavioral engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy.

Although we provided empirical evidence supporting academic enjoyment as a direct and indirect predictor of academic achievement among secondary school students in an EFL setting, three limitations need to be addressed. First, we solely focused on the correlation between enjoyment and academic achievement, as being the most common but under-researched positive emotion [8, 64]. However, other positive emotions such as hope, pride, and relief yet need to be discussed in the EFL setting. Future research on positive achievement emotions and academic achievement should consider these emotions. Second, the correlational nature of this study determines that a causal relationship between the variables of enjoyment and academic achievement cannot be drawn. A longitudinal design would be preferable for future research to establish causality between enjoyment and academic achievement. Third, while this study explored the mediation effects of behavioral engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy in the relationship between academic enjoyment and English achievement, it did not exhaust all the mediators between these two constructs. For example, coping styles, achievement goals, psychological flexibility, and psychological capital [67, 70, 71, 77, 78] are also possible mediators that need to be verified in future research.

Conclusion

This study aimed to explore the association between academic enjoyment and English achievement and the mediation mechanism between these two constructs in a sample of students aged 12 to 14 years. The findings showed that students’ English-related enjoyment had direct and indirect predictive effects on their English achievement. In addition, we also found that self-concept, behavioral engagement, and organizational strategy play a mediating role between perceived enjoyment and English achievement, and the mediation effects decrease successively. This study significantly enriched the extant literature on academic enjoyment in the EFL domain. Theoretically, we provided empirical evidence for the hypothesis that positive emotions (i.e., enjoyment) promote academic achievement in EFL settings. The mediation mechanism between academic enjoyment and English achievement was also explored, which figured out that behavioral engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy are the effective paths for enjoyment to affect academic achievement in the EFL context.

Acknowledgments

We thank the principal, teachers, and students for their support and participation.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the manuscript.

Funding Statement

The authors received no specific funding for this work.

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Reviewer #1: Since it is rare to find the studies examning why acaemic enjoyment can predict positive academic achievement, this study focused on investigating whether behavioral engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy mediated relations between academic enjoyment and achievement in the English as Foreign Language (EFL) setting, in a sample of secondary school students.

The background was presented reasonably. It is also found that the literature review covered main points of the study. As for the methods, the detailed information was damonstrated clearly. The way for presenting the results is consistent with the purposes of the study. Besides, the fact and argument were integrated and written systematically.

Therefore, this manuscript was accepted to publish.

Reviewer #2: Academic Enjoyment, Behavioral Engagement, Self-concept, Organizational Strategy and Achievement in EFL Setting: A Multiple Mediation Analysis

This study aimed to investigate whether behavioural engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy mediated relations between academic enjoyment and achievement in an English as a foreign language setting in China. Overall, 528 learners participated in the study. The paper has several strengths (e.g., a decent sample size and strong data analysis section). However, I believe there are a number of issues that need to be addressed before considering this paper for publication. Please see my comments below which are in no particular order of importance.

1.Abstract:

•The abstract needs to be improved.

a.The first two sentences need to be revised - the authors need to highlight the need for studies exploring the mechanisms through which enjoyment predicts academic achievement.

b.The abstract does not include all the information needed for the reader. E.g., there is no indication where this study took place and age/gender of the participants.

c.In the abstract, the authors just report the percentages of the mediating effects. I would suggest that they simplify this section and just directly state whether the proposed mediators mediated the relations between enjoyment and achievement.

2.Introduction and literature review

•In the introduction, the authors make false claims – e.g.,

“However, except for a few studies focusing on language anxiety, positive achievement emotions, for example, academic enjoyment, was seldom explored in the EFL setting”

a.Anxiety is not a positive emotion.

b.There are at least 10 studies conducted by Prof Jean-Marc Dewaele and many other recent publications by other scholars. In fact, language enjoyment is the most widely studied positive emotion in the field.

•I expected to read more information about why language enjoyment or positive emotions more generally matter for language achievement. There are loads of studies on emotions in the field – so rather than claiming that there are little research, I would suggest that the authors highlight the importance of the topic and why we need to explore the mechanisms through which enjoyment predicts language achievement.

•It is not clear anywhere in the manuscript how the authors decided on the mediators. Why did they choose “Behavioural Engagement, Self-concept, Organizational Strategy” as the mediators? Why was it important to explore these three constructs together?

•Did the authors use the CVT as their theoretical framework? Then, what does the CVT say about emotions predicting the achievement? They need to expand on this a bit more.

•The relations between the study variables should be better articulated. The authors say, for example,: “Goetz et al. (2008) examined the mediating effect of academic self-concept on mathematics-related achievement and enjoyment.” In this study, enjoyment seems to be the outcome and self-concept is the predictor – how do the authors explain enjoyment being predictor and self-concept the outcome/mediator in their study?

•There needs to be a section or at least mention of a few studies showing the relations between the mediators.

3.Method & Results

•In 2.3., the authors repeat that “However, studies have yet to investigate how positive achievement emotions (e.g., enjoyment) promote academic achievement in the EFL context”. Again, there are studies investigating these relations already. I suggest they highlight the strengths of their study and why it is needed/different/important.

•The section 3.1. needs to be revised. Some sections are not clear – e.g., students “…were told that they could choose not to fill out the questionnaire without affecting them”.

•Also, in Section 3.1., the authors need to explain the context a bit more. Currently, the only information we have about the participants is that they are secondary school students based in China. I think we need more information about their context to make better sense of why enjoyment matters for this particular group of learners.

•Measurement invariance should be reported before the mediation analyses are presented.

•Regarding the measurement invariance, I wonder why the authors did not test residual variance. They need to explain it.

•It is difficult to follow 4.3.2. I suggest the authors do not include the CIs in text as they are already presented in the table.

4.Discussion and Conclusions

•Discussion needs to be improved.

E.g. the authors state that: “With the rise of positive psychology, a growing number of studies, especially in STEM domains, have concentrated on how positive achievement emotions relate to the subsequent academic results.” This also applies to the field of SLA.

•The authors claim that “However, most of the existing studies only discussed one single mediator between these two constructs, and few studies have simultaneously investigated multiple mediators.” I think they need to provide the relevant citations here. Which studies do they refer to?

•The authors need to improve the implications section. Currently, the only suggestion they give is to increase enjoyment in the EFL classrooms. I think there are more implications to discuss here.

5.Other issues:

-Proofreading is needed.

-Citations and references need to be checked.

Reviewer #3: I appreciate the effort made in this paper. I believe that this study represents a crucial topic in the EFL context because the number of studies that examine the psychological state of students and its relation to their achievement in the EFL setting is limited. The present study reveals that academic enjoyment and achievement are strongly related. To study this relation, three mediating factors are used, which are self-concept, behavioral engagement and organizational strategy. The objectives of the study are clearly stated and supported by good evidence and examples. Also, the use of the mediating mechanism is a good strategy to show how achievement emotions and academic achievement are related. Moreover, the study is well organized and consistent. Finally, the researchers mention a number of limitations and suggestions for future research at the end of the study.

Note: I must say that I don’t have the adequate knowledge to revise the provided statistics and tables. However, I suggest more explanation on the provided results. The study mentions that a number of items from different questionnaires is used for each variable (without stating them in the study and merely giving one example on each). For example, researchers indicate that "academic self-concept was measured with 5 items", but only mention one example “I am good at English”. Also, the results are immediately drawn based on the overall percentages of the major category of each factor. The provided discussion is based on a mere statistical analysis lacking interpretive analysis on the given statistics.

Reviewer #4: The study presents the results of novel and original research.

The language is very good and is written in standard English.

The methodology is acceptable: Experiments, statistics, and other analyses are performed to a high technical standard and are described in sufficient detail.

The authors presented their results, discussion and conclusions in an appropriate manner.

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4 Apr 2022

Academic Enjoyment, Behavioral Engagement, Self-concept, Organizational Strategy and Achievement in EFL Setting: A Multiple Mediation Analysis

This study aimed to investigate whether behavioural engagement, self-concept, and organizational strategy mediated relations between academic enjoyment and achievement in an English as a foreign language setting in China. Overall, 528 learners participated in the study. The paper has several strengths (e.g., a decent sample size and strong data analysis section). However, I believe there are a number of issues that need to be addressed before considering this paper for publication. Please see my comments below which are in no particular order of importance.

1. Abstract:

• The abstract needs to be improved.

a. The first two sentences need to be revised - the authors need to highlight the need for studies exploring the mechanisms through which enjoyment predicts academic achievement.

b. The abstract does not include all the information needed for the reader. E.g., there is no indication where this study took place and age/gender of the participants.

c. In the abstract, the authors just report the percentages of the mediating effects. I would suggest that they simplify this section and just directly state whether the proposed mediators mediated the relations between enjoyment and achievement.

Authors’ response: Thank you very much for your valuable comments and suggestions. First, to highlight the need for exploring the mechanism between academic enjoyment and academic achievement, research background and research gaps were added in the revised edition. Second, according to your recommendation, the gender and nationality of the participants were introduced in the revised edition. Third, we accept your suggestion and simplify the finding part of the abstract.

2. Introduction and literature review

• In the introduction, the authors make false claims – e.g.,

“However, except for a few studies focusing on language anxiety, positive achievement emotions, for example, academic enjoyment, was seldom explored in the EFL setting”

a. Anxiety is not a positive emotion.

b. There are at least 10 studies conducted by Prof Jean-Marc Dewaele and many other recent publications by other scholars. In fact, language enjoyment is the most widely studied positive emotion in the field.

• I expected to read more information about why language enjoyment or positive emotions more generally matter for language achievement. There are loads of studies on emotions in the field – so rather than claiming that there are little research, I would suggest that the authors highlight the importance of the topic and why we need to explore the mechanisms through which enjoyment predicts language achievement.

• It is not clear anywhere in the manuscript how the authors decided on the mediators. Why did they choose “Behavioural Engagement, Self-concept, Organizational Strategy” as the mediators? Why was it important to explore these three constructs together?

• Did the authors use the CVT as their theoretical framework? Then, what does the CVT say about emotions predicting the achievement? They need to expand on this a bit more.

• The relations between the study variables should be better articulated. The authors say, for example,: “Goetz et al. (2008) examined the mediating effect of academic self-concept on mathematics-related achievement and enjoyment.” In this study, enjoyment seems to be the outcome and self-concept is the predictor – how do the authors explain enjoyment being predictor and self-concept the outcome/mediator in their study?

• There needs to be a section or at least mention of a few studies showing the relations between the mediators.

Authors’ response: Thank you very much for your comments and suggestions.

1. Recently, scholars such as Prof. Jean-Marc Dewaele and Dr. Li studied the effect of achievement emotions (e.g., enjoyment, anxiety, and boredom) on academic performance in EFL context. One the one hand, their research has beneficial inspiration for the present study. On the other hand, the claim “However, except for a few studies focusing on language anxiety, positive achievement emotions, for example, academic enjoyment, was seldom explored in the EFL setting”. Besides, anxiety is one kind of negative achievement emotions (i.e., anxiety, hopelessness, boredom, shame, and anger). Based on reviewers’ comments, we rewrote this sentence.

2. The present study was conducted for three reasons. First, previous studies indicated that academic enjoyment has a moderate to strong positive relationship with academic achievement (e.g., Goetz et al., 2008) and the change in the level of academic enjoyment would lead to the corresponding change in academic performance (Ahmed et al., 2010). Second, inspired by the positive psychology movement in EFL context (see Li, 2020), exploring the mediating effects of academic enjoyment on academic achievement would help educators to clarify the indirect effect of academic enjoyment on academic achievement. Specifically, self-concept accounted for 48.9% of the total effect, while behavioral engagement and organizational strategy accounted for 19.8% and 8.8%, respectively. Third, mediation effect analysis would provide information on whether the relationship between independent variable (i.e., academic enjoyment) and dependent variable (i.e., academic performance) is partly or wholly attributable to mediators (i.e., academic self-concept, organizational strategy, and behavioral engagement) (Mackinnon, 2008), which would be helpful for educators to understand the relationship between independent variable(s) and dependent variable(s).

3. The present study focused on the mediating effects of behavioral engagement, organizational strategy and academic self-concept between academic enjoyment and academic performance in the EFL context. There are two reasons for the selection of mediators between academic enjoyment and academic performance. One is that previous studies have confirmed the mediating effects of these three variables between achievement emotions and academic performance in other disciplines (e.g., mathematics)(Fredricks et al., 2004; Goetz et al., 2008; Pinxten et al., 2014). In view of the domain-specific nature of achievement emotions (e.g., Pekrun et al., 2006), it is meaningful to verify the mediating effects of these three variables between academic enjoyment and academic achievement in the EFL context. The other one is that self-concept, organizational strategy, and behavioral engagement are significant indicators of academic achievement (e.g., Froiland & Oros, 2014; Habók & Magyar, 2018), which would reveal the mechanism by which academic enjoyment affect academic performance.

4. Thank you for your recommendation. The present study was based on the control-value theory (CVT) that proposed by Pekrun et al. (2002) and Pekrun et al. (2006). We accept your suggestion and add the effect of achievement emotions on academic performance by the CVT (see Section 2.1).

5. Both theoretical framework and empirical evidence demonstrated the reciprocal relationships between achievement emotions and academic self-control (e.g., Clem et al., 2021; Pekrun et al., 2007; Pinxten et al., 2014). According to your suggestions, we added literature on the reciprocal relationships between achievement emotions and academic self-control (see Section 2.2.2).

3. Method & Results

• In 2.3., the authors repeat that “However, studies have yet to investigate how positive achievement emotions (e.g., enjoyment) promote academic achievement in the EFL context”. Again, there are studies investigating these relations already. I suggest they highlight the strengths of their study and why it is needed/different/important.

• The section 3.1. needs to be revised. Some sections are not clear – e.g., students “…were told that they could choose not to fill out the questionnaire without affecting them”.

• Also, in Section 3.1., the authors need to explain the context a bit more. Currently, the only information we have about the participants is that they are secondary school students based in China. I think we need more information about their context to make better sense of why enjoyment matters for this particular group of learners.

• Measurement invariance should be reported before the mediation analyses are presented.

• Regarding the measurement invariance, I wonder why the authors did not test residual variance. They need to explain it.

• It is difficult to follow 4.3.2. I suggest the authors do not include the CIs in text as they are already presented in the table.

Authors’ response: We appreciate your high-value comments and suggestions.

1. In recent years, researchers such as Prof. Dewaele and Dr. Li conducted studies on the relationships between positive achievement emotions and academic performance in field of English as a foreign language (e.g., Dewaele et al., 2018; Li, 2020; Li et al., 2020). These studies provide valuable insights to the present study. However, the claim that “However, studies have yet to investigate how positive achievement emotions (e.g., enjoyment) promote academic achievement in the EFL context” is a bit strong. We accept reviewer’s suggestions and revised this statement. The revised sentence would emphasis the importance of the present study rather than the lack of related research.

2. We revised the sentence. E.g., “…were told that they could choose not to fill out the questionnaire without affecting them”. Besides, more information related to the participants was also provided in Section 3.1.

3. The major aim of the present study was to test the mediating effect of behavioral engagement, organizational strategy, and academic self-concept between academic enjoyment and academic performance in a sample of 528 Chinese secondary school students. Ensuingly, Multi-group SEM has been carried out to exam the measurement invariance of the between-constructs relationships across genders. That is, boy students and girl students were treated as a whole in the mediation analyses. Wang and Wang (2019: 255) listed four criteria for measurement invariance: (1) pattern invariance; (2) weak measurement invariance; (3) strong measurement invariance (i.e., metric and scalar invariance); (4) strict measurement invariance (i.e., metric, scalar, and error variance invariance). The present study adopted the strong measurement invariance criterion instead of the strict measurement invariance criterion. There are two reasons for this choice. Measurement invariance in most of the previous studies include configural, metric, and scalar steps and only a few study test the residual invariance (Putnick & Bornstein, 2016), which means that existing studies mainly adopted the strong measurement invariance criterion. Besides, Bentler (2006) documented that residual invariance is unnecessary for many disciplines. Although a few studies tested the residual invariance for the purpose of examing the item reliabilities across groups (Schmitt et al., 1984), however, “this is true only if factor variances are invariant across groups” (Wang & Wang, 2019: 256).

4. Discussion and Conclusions

• Discussion needs to be improved.

E.g. the authors state that: “With the rise of positive psychology, a growing number of studies, especially in STEM domains, have concentrated on how positive achievement emotions relate to the subsequent academic results.” This also applies to the field of SLA.

• The authors claim that “However, most of the existing studies only discussed one single mediator between these two constructs, and few studies have simultaneously investigated multiple mediators.” I think they need to provide the relevant citations here. Which studies do they refer to?

• The authors need to improve the implications section. Currently, the only suggestion they give is to increase enjoyment in the EFL classrooms. I think there are more implications to discuss here.

Authors’ response: Thank you for your valuable suggestions. According to your suggestions, implication section as well as some statements in Discussion section were rewrote.

5. Other issues:

- Proofreading is needed.

- Citations and references need to be checked.

Authors’ response: Thank you very much for your suggestions. Authors proofread the whole manuscript and the references were checked one by one.

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