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. 2022 May 27;17(5):e0269101. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0269101

Sex differences in outcomes from mild traumatic brain injury eight years post-injury

Nicola Jayne Starkey 1,*, Brittney Duffy 1, Kelly Jones 2,#, Alice Theadom 2,#, Suzanne Barker-Collo 3,#, Valery Feigin 2; on behalf of the BIONIC8 Research Group
Editor: Anna-Leena Sirén4
PMCID: PMC9140230  PMID: 35622845

Abstract

The long-term effects of mild TBI (mTBI) are not well understood, and there is an ongoing debate about whether there are sex differences in outcomes following mTBI. This study examined i) symptom burden and functional outcomes at 8-years post-injury in males and females following mTBI; ii) sex differences in outcomes at 8-years post-injury for those aged <45 years and ≥45 years and; iii) sex differences in outcomes for single and repetitive TBI. Adults (≥16 years at injury) identified as part of a population-based TBI incidence study (BIONIC) who experienced mTBI 8-years ago (N = 151) and a TBI-free sample (N = 151) completed self-report measures of symptoms and symptom burden (Rivermead Post-Concussion Symptom Questionnaire, Hospital Anxiety and Depression Scale, Post-traumatic Stress Disorder Checklist), and functional outcomes (Participation Assessments with Recombined Tools, Work Limitations Questionnaire). The mTBI group reported significantly greater post-concussion symptoms compared to the TBI-free group (F(1,298) = 26.84, p<.01, ηp2 = .08). Females with mTBI were twice as likely to exceed clinical cut-offs for post-concussive (X2 (1)>5.2, p<.05, V>.19) and PTSD symptoms (X2(1) = 6.10, p = .014, V = .20) compared to the other groups, and reported their health had the greatest impact on time-related work demands (F(1,171) = 4.36, p = .04, ηp2 = .03. There was no interaction between sex and age on outcomes. The repetitive mTBI group reported significantly greater post-concussion symptoms (F(1,147) = 9.80, p<.01, ηp2 = .06) compared to the single mTBI group. Twice the proportion of women with repetitive mTBI exceeded the clinical cut-offs for post-concussive (X2(1)>6.90, p<.01, V>.30), anxiety (X2(1)>3.95, p<.05, V>.23) and PTSD symptoms (X2(1)>5.11, p<.02, V>.26) compared with males with repetitive TBI or women with single TBI. Thus, at 8-years post-mTBI, people continued to report a high symptom burden. Women with mTBI, particularly those with a history of repetitive mTBI, had the greatest symptom burden and were most likely to have symptoms of clinical significance. When treating mTBI it is important to assess TBI history, particularly in women. This may help identify those at greatest risk of poor long-term outcomes to direct early treatment and intervention.

Introduction

It is estimated that more than 10 million people experience a TBI each year, with 70–95% of these being classified as mild [1, 2]. TBI has widespread impacts [3], and whilst the effects of moderate and severe TBI are well documented, much less is known about the long-term outcomes of mild TBI (mTBI). This may be because a significant proportion do not seek medical treatment at the time of injury and the term ‘mild’ implies little or no impact [2, 4]. Rehabilitation and recovery continue for many years post-TBI [5, 6], and the economic, personal, family and societal costs of sustaining even an mTBI can be substantial [79].

Symptoms of TBI vary but typically include what are commonly known as post-concussive symptoms. These are grouped into cognitive (e.g., forgetfulness, poor concentration, difficulty thinking), somatic (e.g., nausea, fatigue, dizziness), and emotional symptoms (e.g., irritability, feeling depressed, feeling frustrated). The majority of people who sustain an mTBI recover within three months of injury however, there is evidence that 46–65% of patients report persistent symptoms at 6 months [10, 11], and 10–53% of patients continue to experience persistent symptoms up to and beyond 1-year post-injury [1215]. At four years post-injury, people with mTBI in the BIONIC cohort reported significantly more cognitive symptoms than community controls [16]. Neuropsychiatric problems including depression, anxiety, and post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD) are also reported following mTBI, with anxiety and depression diagnosed more commonly than PTSD [17, 18]. In a longitudinal study of outcomes from mTBI, 38.1% of the sample met the cut-offs for anxiety and or depression on the HADS at 12 months post-injury (2.2% depression, 25.5% anxiety, 10.2% depression and anxiety) which decreased to 32.1% four years post-injury (7.7% depression only, 13.6% anxiety only and 11.8% depression and anxiety), similar to rates observed in community samples [19].

MTBI can also negatively impact functional outcomes including work and community engagement. The CENTER-TBI study reported that the majority of participants with few post-concussive symptoms had returned to work 6 months post-injury (83.2%). However, those with higher concussive or PTSD symptom burden had much lower return to work rates (46.1% - 62.5%), and some (17.2%) were working reduced hours [20]. The work-related impacts of mTBI appear to be quite persistent; four-year post-injury outcomes from the BIONIC cohort found that people with mTBI experienced more difficulty at work because of their health compared to the New Zealand (NZ) general population [21]. Also, 17.3% of people with mTBI left the workforce or reduced their hours within 4-years of injury, and 15.5% reported that their work was negatively affected by the injury [21]. Similar findings are reported from the Danish national concussion registry. Those with concussion were less likely to be working five years post-injury than matched controls (43% vs 30%) [22]. Participation in other everyday activities (e.g. socializing with friends, carrying out community and home-based activities) is also negatively impacted following mTBI [16].

These findings highlight the potential negative long-term impacts of mTBI and suggest the need for further longer-term follow-up studies to evaluate the full effect of mTBI across a range of outcomes and the need for long-term monitoring to provide appropriate support and rehabilitation when required.

Whilst a range of factors, including age, minority ethnicity, lower levels of education, lower socioeconomic status (SES), and previous TBI are linked to poorer outcomes [16, 2327], one of those which is least understood is sex. The findings regarding sex differences and TBI are inconsistent, and, the majority of studies have been conducted with specific groups (e.g., athletes, military) rather than with a general population sample. A systematic review reported that women experience a greater symptom burden 12- to 18-months post-injury than men [28], and the proportion of women experiencing persistent symptoms was greater than would be expected based on incidence [29]. A recent review concluded that women endorse more concussion symptoms than men, and evidence regarding sex differences in recovery rates or in relation to impairments in specific domains was inconclusive [30]. The authors highlighted the need for further work beyond the sports domain, with appropriate comparison groups and a longer follow-up period.

Several recent studies have explored sex differences in general population mTBI samples. The CENTER-TBI team found that 6-months after mTBI, women were at higher risk of poorer functional outcomes, were less likely to return to work, had greater post-concussion, depression and anxiety symptom burden and poorer health-related quality of life compared to men [31]. Outcomes varied by age, with women aged <45 and >65 years having the poorest outcomes compared to men [31]. The TRACK-TBI team also recently reported an interaction between sex and age with PTSD and post-concussion symptoms 6-months after mTBI in young adults (18–39 years) [32]. Females in the oldest age group (30–39 years) reported more symptoms compared to the other groups (males 18–29 or 30–39 years, females 18–29 years) [32]. At 12 months post-injury, women reported significantly more severe cognitive and somatic symptoms, a pattern not observed in an orthopaedic trauma control group. In addition, women with mTBI aged 35–49 years had more severe somatic symptoms compared with younger (17–34 years) or older participants (<50 years) [33]. A recently published 10 year follow up of health-related quality of life (HRQoL) after mild, moderate, or severe TBI found that a significantly smaller proportion of females (51.5%) reported good HRQoL compared to males (68.6%). Outcomes were worst in females aged 54–76 years, suggesting that older females may be particularly vulnerable to poor long-term outcomes [34]. Whilst these studies provide interesting insights into sex differences in outcomes from mTBI, it is still unclear which age group is likely to have the poorest outcomes. In addition, previous studies have several limitations, including the lack of a control group, a limited follow-up period and assessment of a limited range of outcomes [4]. To address these limitations, we report the 8-year outcomes following mTBI in a population-based cohort of adults (≥16 years at injury) compared to an age- and sex-matched TBI free sample [2]. The primary aim was to compare symptoms and symptom burden and functional outcomes in males and females with mTBI with an age- and sex-matched TBI-free comparison group. Secondary aims were to 1) compare outcomes at 8 years post-injury in males and females aged <45 years and ≥45 years (at injury) and 2) compare outcomes in those with single and repetitive TBI.

Method

Participants and study design

The study received approval from NZ Health and Disability Ethics Committees (#17/STH/247).

Participants with mTBI were identified through the BIONIC study, an epidemiological population-based incidence study of all cases of TBI in Hamilton, New Zealand, between 1 March 2010 and 28 February 2011 [2]. TBI was defined according to the World Health Organisation (WHO) criteria as “an acute brain injury resulting from mechanical energy to the head from external physical forces” [35]. Operational criteria for identification of TBI included the presence of one or more of: confusion or disorientation; loss of consciousness; post-traumatic amnesia; other neurological abnormalities (e.g. focal neurological signs, lesions or seizure) not due to drugs, alcohol, medication or caused by other injuries [2, 35]. MTBI was defined as a Glasgow Coma Scale (GCS) score of 13–15 and/or post-traumatic amnesia (PTA) of less than 24 hours [36]. Each mTBI case was further classified as having low, medium or high risk of developing intracranial hematoma based on the presence or absence of clinical findings (loss of consciousness, amnesia, vomiting or diffuse headache), neurological deficits, (impaired vision, hearing, speech, balance, walking difficulties or weakness), skull fracture and other risk factors (coagulopathy, drug/alcohol consumption, previous neurosurgical procedures, pre-trauma epilepsy, over 60 years of age) [37]. MTBI cases with no clinical or neurological deficits, no skull fracture or risk factors were classified as low risk. Those with clinical findings but no neurological deficits, skull fracture or risk factors were classed as medium risk. The high-risk group included those with clinical, neurological, skull fracture and/or other risk factors.

TBI cases were identified using multiple methods, including checks of hospital admissions, general practitioners, sports centres, community health centres, and self-referrals. The national accident compensation provider (ACC) databases were also screened to ensure that all cases of TBI (particularly mild injuries) were identified (see [38] for further details). For cases identified through the hospital or a medical provider, demographic and injury details were extracted from medical records and verified when participants were invited to take part in the TBI outcome study.

This study focused on those with mTBI aged ≥16 years at injury (i.e., ≥ 24 years of age at assessment). As shown in Fig 1, 341 participants completed assessments at 6/12 months post-injury, 346 were approached for the 8 year follow up (participants who had missed earlier assessments were also contacted), and 151 (43.6%) completed the 8-year post-injury assessment. The characteristics of the incidence sample and those completing the 8-year outcome assessments are shown in Table 1.

Fig 1. Participant flow through the study.

Fig 1

Table 1. A comparison of the demographic and injury characteristics of the Bionic incidence study cohort and the sample consenting to the 8-year follow-up.

Mean (standard deviation) or number (percentage) of participants for demographic and injury variables for the TBI incidence cohort and the sample consenting to the eight year follow up. Chi-square goodness of fit tests were used to determine if the 8-year sample was representative of the incidence sample.

Incidence sample (n = 870) 8-year sample (n = 151) Comparison
Sex Male, n (%) 533 (61.3) 77 (51.0) X 2 (1) = 6.71, p = .01 *
Age Mean (SD) 37.37 (19.28) 37.58 (16.99) t(150) = 0.15, p = .88
Ethnicity European 543 (62.4) 115 (75.5) X2 (2) = 12.58, p<.01*
Māori 254 (29.2) 30 (19.9)
Other 73 (8.4) 6 (4.6)
MTBI severity Low risk 155 (17.8) 19 (12.6) X2 (2) = 2.84, p = .24
Medium risk 193 (22.2) 36 (23.8)
High risk 522 (60.0) 96 (63.6)
Prior TBI None 266 (30.6) 61 (40.1) X2 (2) = 2.96, p = .23
1 or 2 179 (20.5) 56 (37.1)
3 or more 105 (12.1) 30 (19.9)
Unknown 320 (36.8) 4 (2.6)
Injury mechanism Fall 274 (31.5) 49 (32.5) X2 (4) = 1.55, p = .82
Traffic/MVA 192 (22.1) 39 (25.8)
Mech Force 178 (20.5) 30 (19.9)
Assault 190 (21.8) 30 (19.9)
Other 12 (1.5) 3 (2)
Unknowna 24 (2.8) 0
CT scan conducted 142 (16.3) 24 (15.9)
GCS 13 16 (1.8) 5 (3.3) X2 (3) = 68.15, p<.01*
14 14 (1.3) 16 (10.6)
15 398 (45.7) 67 (44.4)
Unknowna 353 (40.6) 63 (41.7)
Education Primary School 19 (2.2) 2 (1.3) X 2 (3) = 12.77, p <.01 *
High School 198 (22.8) 56 (37.1)
Polytechnic 108 (12.4) 41 (27.2)
University 90 (10.3) 46 (30.5)
Unknowna 455 (52.3) 6 (4.0)
Occupation Professional 69 (7.9) 34 (22.5) X 2 (2) = 6.61, p = .04 *
Skilled 119 (13.7) 44 (29.1)
Other 225 (25.9) 65 (43.0)
Unknowna 413 (47.5) 8 (5.3)

a ‘unknown’ cases were excluded from the chi square analysis.

* p<.05.

** <.01.

GCS = Glasgow Coma Scale score. CT = computerised tomography

An age- and sex-matched cohort (n = 151), free from TBI in their lifetime, were recruited for comparison purposes (Table 2). Participants were recruited from a panel maintained by ResearchNow, an online data collection company. Participants in the comparison group were screened for previous TBI or injuries likely to result in a TBI (e.g., car accident, assault resulting in hospitalisation) prior to completing the questionnaire.

Table 2. A comparison of the demographic characteristics of the males and females in the mTBI group 8 years post-injury and the comparison group.

Data are presented as mean (standard deviation) or number (percentage) for demographic variables for the mTBI and comparison group and for injury severity and medical diagnoses for the mTBI group (information not available for the comparison group). Two-way ANOVA or chi-square tests were used to explore differences by group and gender.

mTBI Comparison Statistical test
Male (n-77) Female (n = 74) Total (n = 151) Male (n = 74) Female (n = 77) Total (n = 151)
Age (mean, SD) 43.23 (16.15) 47.69 (17.78) 45.42 (17.05) 46.84 (15.13) 47.10 (16.34) 46.97 (15.75) Group F(1,298) = 0.64, p = .42, ηp2<.01 Gender F(1,298) = 1.57, p = .21, ηp2<.01 Int (F(1, 298) = 1.23, p = .27, ηp2<.01
Ethnicity (n, %) NZ European 62 (80.5) 53 (71.6) 115 (76.2) 62 (83.8) 72 (93.5) 134 (88.7) X2 = (1) = 1.45, p = .23, V = .08
Māori 14 (18.2) 16 (21.62) 30 (19.9) 7 (9.5) 2 (2.6) 9 (6.0) X2 = (1) = 2.70, p = .14, V = .26a
Other 1 (1.3) 5 (6.8) 6 (4.0) 4 (5.4) 3 (3.9) 7 (4.6) X2 = (1) = 2.24, p = .26, V = .42a
Education (n, %) Degree 18 (23.3) 22 (29.7) 40 (26.5) 27 (36.5) 23 (29.9) 50 (33.1) X2 = (1) = 0.72, p = .40, V = .09
Diploma 24 (31.2) 30 (40.5) 54 (35.8) 15 (20.3) 18 (23.4) 33 (21.9) X2 = (1) = 0.01, p = .93, V = .01
Trade/Tech 24 (31.2) 3 (4.1) 27 (17.9) 21 (28.4) 12 (15.6) 33 (21.9) X2 = (1) = 5.05, p = .03, V = .29*
Other 11 (14.3) 19 (25.7) 30 (19.9) 11 (14.9) 24 (31.2) 35 (23.2) X2 = (1) = 0.20, p = .66, V = .06
Occupation (n, %) Professional 27 (35.1) 20 (27.0) 47 (31.2) 27 (26.5) 21 (27.3) 48 (31.8) X2 = (1) = 0.01, p = .91, V = .01
Skilled 18 (23.4) 12 (16.2) 30 (19.9) 18 (24.3) 17 (22.1) 35 (23.2) X2 = (1) = 0.48, p = .49, V = .09
Other 31 (40.3) 38 (51.4) 69 (45.7) 29 (39.2) 39 (50.6) 68 (45.03) X2 = (1) = 0.07, p = .79, V = .02
Main earner (n, %) Yes 40 (51.9) 24 (32.4) 64 (42.4) 36 (48.6) 22 (28.6) 58 (38.4) X2 = (1) = 0.02, p = .96, V = .01
Missing 17 (22.1) 27 (36.5) 44 (29.1) 25 (33.8) 28 (36.4) 53 (35.1)
mTBI severity (n, %) Low risk 8 (10.4) 11 (14.9) 19 (12.6) X2 = (2) = .90, p = .64, V = .08
Medium risk 20 (26.0) 16 (21.6) 36 (23.8)
High risk 49 (63.6) 47 (63.5) 96 (63.6)
Other health diagnoses (n, %) Cardiovascular 9 (11.6) 9 (12.2) 18 (11.9) - - - X2 = (1)) = 0.01, p = .56, V < .01
Dementia 0 1 (1.4) 1 (0.7) - - - X2 = (1) = 1.05, p = .49, V = .08a
ADD 0 1 (1.4) 1 (0.7) - - - X2 = (1) = 1.05, p = .49, V = .08a
Neurological 2 (2.6) 2 (2.7) 4 (2.7) - - - X2 = (1) = 0.01, p = 1.00, V < .01 a
Psychiatric 6 (7.8) 11 (14.9) 17 (11.3) - - - X2 = (1) = 1.89, p = .20, V = .11
Diabetes 1 (1.3) 3 (4.1) 4 (2.7) - - - X2 = (1) = 1.11, p = .36, V = .09 a
Seizure 0 4 (5.4) 4 (2.7) - - - X2 = (1) = 4.28, p = .06, V = .17 a
Chronic fatigue 1 (1.3) 1 (1.4) 2 (1.3) - - - X2 = (1) = 0.01, p = 1.00, V < .01 a
Other 19 (24.7) 20 (27.0) 39 (25.8) - - - X2 = (1) = 0.11, p = .85, V = .03
Missing 2 (2.6) 2 (2.7) 4 (2.7) - - -
None reported 37 (48.1) 20 (27.0) 57 (37.7) - - -

a = Fischer’s Exact Test as some cell sizes <5.

*p<.05.

ηp2 = partial eta squared. V = Cramer’s V.

Measures

Participants completed a set of study specific questionnaires to gather demographic information, a screening measure to assist with recall of TBI, and a set of patient reported outcome measures (PROMS) assessing symptoms and symptom burden (post-concussion, depression, anxiety and PTSD symptoms) and functional status (community participation and work related productivity) [39].

Symptoms and symptom burden

The Rivermead post-concussive symptoms questionnaire (RPQ) is a 16-item self-report questionnaire designed to assess common symptoms after a head injury [40]. Participants rate how much of a problem each symptom is from 0 = not experienced, 2 = a mild problem, 3 = a moderate problem, to 4 = a severe problem. Participants rated their symptoms over the last 24 hours (as in [41]) rather than comparing their symptoms to before their injury. This was to improve the accuracy of the answers for those with mTBI (it was 8 years since their injury) and to make the questions applicable for the comparison group. (Note: the response of 1 = no more of a problem was excluded because it did not make sense as the participants were not comparing how they felt now to an earlier time point and scores of 1 are excluded from the calculation of the total score). The total RPQ score was calculated, and subscale scores for the cognitive, emotional and somatic domains. A score of 3 or more on four items was used to determine if participants met the DSM-IV symptom criteria for post-concussive disorder [42].

The Hospital Anxiety and Depression Scale (HADS) is a 14- item self-report questionnaire designed to measure levels of anxiety and depression [43]. It has high internal consistency, and sensitivity to change and has been extensively used with TBI populations [44, 45]. The HADS has two subscales, Anxiety and Depression, containing seven items each. For each item, respondents are asked to indicate the extent to which each statement applied to them over the past week. Responses are scored on a 4-point Likert scale (0 to 3) for each question. The minimum score for each subscale is 0, and the maximum score is 21, with higher scores indicating greater symptom severity. Scores of 8 and above are suggestive of clinical levels of depressive or anxiety symptoms.

The abbreviated Post-traumatic stress disorder checklist: Civilian scale (PCL-C) was used to screen for the presence and severity of post-traumatic stress symptoms. The measure was developed for use in primary care and has been validated for men and women aged 18–80 years [46]. To reduce participant burden, the abbreviated 6-item version was used (sensitivity = .95, specificity = .69 with a cut-off of 14) [47]. Participants indicate how much they have been bothered by six problems (e.g., disturbing memories from a past event) from 1 (not at all) to 5 (extremely). A positive screen is a score of ≥14.

Functional status

The Participation assessment with recombined tools–objective (PART-O) was used to assess participation in the community and everyday life. The original Part-O was developed to integrate three commonly used measures for people with TBI (Community Integration Questionnaire [48], Participation Objective, Participation Subjective [49], and the Craig Assessment and Reporting Technique [50]). The revised 17 item self-report tool measures three domains of community participation (Productivity, Out and About, and Social Relations) designed specifically for use in populations with TBI [51]. The items ask about the length of time or frequency of engagement in various activities in a typical week (e.g., cleaning, cooking). An average score is calculated for each domain.

The Work Limitations Questionnaire (WLQ) was developed to measure the impact of chronic health problems and/or treatment on work-related productivity [52]. The self-report questionnaire was validated in populations working at least 20 hours a week with various chronic health conditions, including respiratory, gastrointestinal and psychiatric disorders. The 25-item questionnaire has four subscales: Time Demands (e.g., work required hours, 5 items), Physical Demands (e.g., perform physical job-related tasks, 6 items), Mental/Interpersonal Demands (e.g., concentrate on your work, 9 items) and Output Demands (e.g., being able to cope with workload, 5 items). Participants respond by choosing one of five options from 0% (health makes the job demand difficult none of the time) to 100% (health makes the job demand difficult all of the time), or the item does not apply to their job. The subscales scores are the mean of the responses for the items within the scale, and indicate the percentage of the time their health makes their job difficult. The scale has good internal reliability and validity and has been used previously in TBI populations [21].

A screening questionnaire supplemented the PROMS to identify TBI in the comparison sample (the Ohio State University TBI Identification Method; OSU TBI-ID) [53]. Participants were asked five probe questions (e.g., ‘have you ever injured your head or neck in a fall or from being hit by something, or by playing sports or on the playground?’). Two additional questions followed each positive response: ‘did you lose consciousness?’ and ‘did you feel dazed or have a gap in your memory?’ Participants in the comparison group indicating loss of consciousness (LOC) or feeling dazed or confused after any incident were ineligible for the study. All participants were also asked for demographic information, and information about their living and work situations; those in the mTBI group were also asked about other health or medical conditions. All questionnaire responses were captured electronically via the Qualtrics platform.

Procedure

Participants with mTBI who had agreed to follow-up were contacted by phone or email 8 years (plus or minus two months) after their injury. Updated contact details were sought from next of kin, health care providers, and the electoral roll when necessary. Participants were given information about the study over the phone, and a copy of the participant information sheet and consent form was emailed or posted to them. Participants completed the measures online or face-to-face. Participants in the mTBI group received a $10 supermarket voucher as a thank you.

Participants in the comparison group were recruited through ResearchNow. Those interested in completing the survey were screened for previous head injuries using the OSU-TBI questionnaire. Eligible participants completed the measures online and were recompensed at a standard rate by the market research company.

Statistical analysis

Data were imported from Qualtrics into IBM SPSS version 27 and screened for missing values and outliers. Chi-square goodness of fit tests were conducted to check the representativeness of the sample participating in the study at 8 years with the original incidence sample. Descriptive statistics, supplemented by chi-square or ANOVA, were used to compare the demographic characteristics of the males and females in the mTBI and comparison group. Data from the RPQ, HADS and PCL-C were positively skewed. However, as the data were similarly skewed for each group, the sample sizes were reasonable, the data did not violate the homogeneity of variance assumptions, and ANOVA is considered robust to violations of normality; we considered it appropriate to use parametric analyses [54, 55].

A series of 2 (Group: mTBI, Comparison) x 2 (Sex: Male, Female) x 2 (Age: 16–44 years, ≥45 years at injury) between groups ANOVAs were conducted to examine differences between the groups for the PROMS. The age groups were selected because previous studies reported poorer outcomes in those aged <45 years [31], and this resulted in two relatively evenly sized groups for the analysis. Where the initial analyses showed no significant Sex x Age group or Group x Sex x Age group interactions, the ANOVAs were re-run without age to simplify interpretation and reporting (i.e., as 2 x 2 ANOVAs). When ANOVA showed a significant main effect of Sex or a Sex x Group interaction, additional ANOVAs were conducted for each item on the measure to identify the symptoms that differed in men and women with mTBI (the Bonferroni correction was used to adjust for multiple comparisons). For brevity, only statistically significant findings are reported in the main text for the item analysis (see S1 Table for the full analyses). For the ANOVA, partial eta squared (ηp2) of 0.01 was interpreted as a small effect, 0.06 indicated a medium effect and 0.14 a large effect [56]. Further analyses (chi-square tests) were conducted to examine the proportion of males and females exceeding clinical cut-offs for the RPQ, HADS and PCL-C. Cramer’s V of .01 indicates a small effect, .30 a medium effect and .50 a large effect [56].

Finally, to explore if repetitive TBI was associated with poorer outcomes, a series of 2 (Group: repetitive TBI, single TBI) x 2 (Sex: Male, Female) ANOVAs were conducted. Chi-square tests were conducted to determine if the percentage of males and females exceeding the clinical cut-offs for the RPQ, HADS, and PCL-C in the single and repetitive TBI groups differed.

Results

The demographic and injury details of the original incidence sample and those assessed at 8 years post-injury are presented in Table 1. The sample completing the 8-year outcome assessments was comparable to the incidence cohort for age, mTBI severity, number of prior TBI and injury mechanism. However, the 8-year sample had a significantly greater proportion of females, those of NZ European ethnicity, participants with a GCS of 14, and those with higher levels of education, and professional or skilled jobs. [Note: there was a large amount of missing data for the incidence sample for information not contained in the medical records (prior TBI, education and occupation), and GCS was not recorded in many cases].

The demographic characteristics of the males and females in the mTBI and the comparison group are shown in Table 2. There were no significant differences in age, or associations between the groups for age, ethnicity, levels of education (apart from trade/technical certificate), occupation, or being the primary income earner. However, there were medium effect sizes for the chi-square tests comparing the proportion of participants of Māori and Other ethnicities. This may be due to the higher proportion of Māori participants in the mTBI group and only a single male participant of ‘Other’ ethnicity in the mTBI group. A significantly greater proportion of men held a trade or technical certificate compared to women for both the mTBI and comparison group (medium effect size). There was no association between sex and injury severity or with pre-existing or comorbid medical conditions in the mTBI group, although the effect sizes for psychiatric and seizure diagnoses were in the small to medium range, with greater numbers of women being diagnosed with these conditions.

The 3-way ANOVAs, including age as a factor, did not show significant Sex x Age interactions; therefore the results of the 2-way ANOVAs (Group x Sex) are reported (Table 3).

Table 3. Descriptive and inferential statistics for the males and females in the mTBI (8-years post-injury) and comparison groups for the outcome measures.

Data are presented as mean (standard deviation) for males and females in the mTBI group 8 years post-injury and a TBI-free comparison group for measures of symptom and symptom burden and functional outcomes. Two-way ANOVAs were conducted to explore differences by group and gender.

mTBI at 8 years M (SD) n = 151 Comparison M (SD) n = 151 Two way ANOVA
Males (n = 77) Females (n = 74) Males (n = 74) Females (n = 77) Group (F, sig, partial eta square) Sex (F, sig, partial eta square) Group x Sex (F, sig, partial eta square)
Post-Concussion Symptoms (RPQ) (df = 1, 298)
Total 14.00 (12.92) 20.54 (16.49) 7.97 (10.28) 11.15 (11.18) 26.84, p<.01, ηp2 = .08** 10.68, p<.01, ηp2 = .04** 1.27, p = .26, ηp2<.01
Cognitive 3.53 (3.52) 4.53 (3.90) 1.58 (2.90) 1.96 (2.972) 35.56, p<.01, ηp2 = .11** 3.29, p = .07, ηp2 = .01 0.66, p = .42, ηp2<.01
Somatic 4.53 (4.80) 7.76 (6.83) 3.99 (5.17) 6.48 (6.65) 1.80, p = .318, ηp2<.01 17.71, p<.01, ηp2 = .06** 0.29, p = .59, ηp2<.01
Emotional 3.83 (4.13) 4.93 (4.41) 2.741 (3.50) 2.71 (3.12) 17.18, p<.01, ηp2 = .06** 2.857, p = .11, ηp2<.01 0.81, p = .3, ηp2<.01
Mood (HADS and PCL) (df = 1, 298)
Depression 4.00 (3.90) 4.68 (4.15) 3.50 (3.88) 3.29 (3.34 4.31, p = .04, ηp2 = .01* 0.32, p = .57, ηp2<.01 1.11, p = .29, ηp2<.01
Anxiety 4.58 (3.67) 6.04 (4.40) 4.84 (3.983) 5.743 (4.02) 0.15, p = .70, ηp2<.01 4.97, p = .03, ηp2 = .02* 0.90, p = .35 ηp2<.01
PTSD 9.66 (4.01) 11.78 (5.75) 9.64 (4.80) 9.06 (3.44) 4.44, p = .04, ηp2 = .02* 3.93, p = .04, ηp2 = .01* 4.22, p = .04, ηp2 = .01*
Community Participation (Part-O) (df = 1, 293)e
Productivity 2.12 (0.94) 2.16 (1.16) 1.97 (1.01) 2.05 (0.98) 1.09, p = .87, ηp2<.01 0.19, p = 665, ηp2<.01 0.03, p = .78 ηp2<.01
Social Relations 2.52 (1.01) 2.60 (0.89) 2.28 (0.94) 2.37 (0.83) 5.02, p = .03, ηp2 = .02* 0.39, p = .54, ηp2<.01 0.03, p = .87, ηp2<.01
Out and About 1.32 (0.63) 1.24 (0.65) 1.25 (0.55) 1.24 (0.66) 0.25, p = .62, ηp2<.01 0.42, p = .52, ηp2<.01 0.25, p = .62, ηp2<.01
Work Limitations (WLQ) (df = 1, 171)
Time Demands 8.87a (10.14) 18.31b (20.98) 12.52c (13.60) 11.81d (18.74) 0 .35, p = .56, ηp2<.01 3.22, p = .08, ηp2 = .02 4.36, p = .04, ηp2 = .03*
Physical Demands 11.79 (22.07) 18.90 (25.65) 9.83 (15.92) 8.63 (15.97) 4.00, p<.05, ηp2 = .02* 1.85, p = .18, ηp2 = .01 1.85, p = .18, ηp2 = .01
Mental/Interpersonal Demands 9.61 (11.02) 15.90 (16.57) 9.95 (12.90) 11.08 (18.22) 1.01, p = .32, ηp2<.01 2.92, p = .09 ηp2 = .02 1.42, p = .24, ηp2<.01
Output Demands 6.53 (10.27) 14.62 (21.17) 9.36 (13.62) 10.45 (16.86) 0.07, p = .879, ηp2<.01 3.95, p<.05, ηp2 = .02* 2.31, p = .13, ηp2 = .01

an = 52,

bn = 40,

cn = 45,

dn = 38 as only participants in employment completed this measure.

ehigher score indicates better functioning.

* p<.05.

** p<.01.

ηp2 = partial eta squared.

Symptoms and symptom burden

The mTBI group obtained significantly higher scores with medium to large effect sizes for the RPQ total cognitive, and emotional subscales compared to the TBI-free group, indicative of greater post-concussion symptom burden (Table 3). Women obtained significantly higher RPQ total and somatic subscales scores than men (medium effect size). Fig 2a shows the proportion of males and females exceeding the cut-off scores for the RPQ, HADS and PCL-C. For the RPQ, a significantly greater proportion (small to medium effect) of the mTBI participants met the DSM-IV symptom criteria for post-concussive disorder (30.5%,n = 46) than the comparison group (13.2%, n = 20; X2 (1) = -13.11, p <.01, V = .21). A greater proportion of men in the mTBI group were above the DSM-IV symptom cut-off compared to the TBI-free group, but this difference was not statistically significant with a small effect size (X2 (1) = 3.47, p = .06, V = .15). A significantly greater proportion of women (medium effect size) in the mTBI group met the DSM-IV symptom criteria than in the comparison group (X2 (1) = 10.63, p < .01, V = .27). In the mTBI group, a significantly greater proportion of women (small to medium effect size) met the cut-off scores compared to the men (X2 (1) = 5.22, p = .02, V = .19), but there was no significant association, with a small effect size, in the comparison group (X2 (1) = 0.75, p = .387, V = .07). Over a third (36%, n = 54, 27 men and 27 women) of the participants with mTBI reported that they thought they were still affected by the brain injury they had 8-years ago.

Fig 2. The percentage of participants in the mTBI and comparison group meeting the cut-off scores for the RPQ (a), HADS depression (b), HADS anxiety (c) and PCL-C (d) Note: Data are presented as the percentage of the group meeting the cut-off score.

Fig 2

N for mTBI group = 151 (males = 77, females = 74); N for TBI free group = 151 (males = 74, females = 77). The cut-off for the RPQ was 4 or more items with a rating >2; the cut-off score for the HADS was ≥8 and the cut-off score for the PCL-C was ≥14. * p<.05 **p<.01 from chi-square tests.

The ANOVAs for the item level analyses are presented in S1 Table. One item on the RPQ, blurred vision, showed a significant Group x Sex interaction (p = .003, with a small to medium effect size); women with mTBI reported significantly higher symptom severity than the other three groups. The mTBI group reported significantly increased symptoms on 13 of the RPQ items (headaches, dizziness, nausea, noise sensitivity, irritable, frustrated, forgetfulness, concentration, longer to think, blurred vision, light sensitivity, double vision, restlessness, ps ≤ .003) compared to the TBI -free group. Dizziness, forgetfulness and difficulty thinking showed the largest effects (ηp2≥.09), concentration, blurred vision and restlessness had medium effect sizes (ηp2≥.05). Women gave significantly higher ratings, with small to medium effect sizes, for five RPQ items (headaches, dizziness, noise sensitivity, fatigue, and blurred vision, ps ≤ .002) compared to men, regardless of group.

The mean scores for the HADS and the PCL-C were below clinical cut-offs (8 for the HADS, 14 for the PCL-C; Table 3). The mTBI group obtained significantly higher scores on the depression scale than the TBI-free group, but the effect was small. A significantly greater proportion of the mTBI group (n = 32, 21.2%) obtained scores over the clinical cut-off for the depression scale compared to the TBI-free group, with a small to medium effect (n = 18 (11.9%); X2(1) = 4.70, p = .03, V = .13). The proportions of men and women exceeding the cut-offs in the mTBI (X2(1) = 0.07, p = .79, V = .02) and TBI free groups (X2(1) = 0.17, p = .68, V = .03) were not significantly different (Fig 2b). The proportion of men with scores of 8 and over in the mTBI and comparison group were not significantly different (X2(1) = 3.47, p = .06, V = .15), although the effect size was in the small to medium range; the proportion of women did not differ significantly between the groups either (X2(1) = 1.45 p = .23, V = .10.

Women reported significantly greater anxiety than men regardless of mTBI status, but the effect size was small. There was no significant difference in the overall proportion of participants obtaining scores above the clinical cut-off for anxiety between the mTBI (n = 37, 24.5%) and comparison group (n = 42, 27.8%; X2(1) = 0.43, p = .51, V = .04), see Fig 2c. The proportion of males and females obtaining scores above the clinical cut-off did not differ significantly between the groups (males X2(1) = 2.27, p = .13, V = .12; females X2(1) = 0.27, p = .61, V = .04). There was no significant difference in the proportion of males and females exceeding the cut-off score in the TBI-free group (X2(1) = 0.45, p = .83, V = .02). In the mTBI group, a significantly greater proportion of females obtained scores above the cut-off than males with a small to medium effect (X2(1) = 4.93, p = .03, V = .18). The item level analysis for the anxiety scale revealed that women reported significantly more severe symptoms than men for one item, feelings of panic (p < .001), with a small to medium effect size.

Scores on the PCL-C showed a significant Group x Sex interaction, but the effect was only small; women with mTBI obtained significantly higher scores than men with mTBI and women in the comparison group (ps < .05). In addition, there were significant main effects of group (the mTBI group had higher scores than the TBI-free group) and sex (females had higher scores than males), both with small effect sizes. There was no significant difference in the proportion of participants in the mTBI (n = 34, 22.5%) and comparison group (n = 23, 15.2%) scoring over the PCL-C cut-off (X2(1) = 2.62, p = .11, V = .09), Fig 2d. In the mTBI group a significantly greater proportion of women compared to men scored above the cut-off, a small to medium effect (X2(1) = 6.10, p = .014, V = .20), Fig 2d. There was no sex difference in the comparison group (X2(1) = 0.11, p = .74, V = .03). A significantly greater proportion (small to medium effect) of women in the mTBI group scored over the cut-off compared to the TBI-free group (X2(1) = 6.10, p = .014, V = .20); there was no significant association for males (X2(1) = .11, p = .74, V = .03). The item level analysis revealed a main effect of group for one item, difficulty concentrating (p = .001). The mTBI group obtained higher scores than the TBI-free group, but the effect size was small.

Functional status

The scores on the community participation measure were similar for all groups except for the social relations subscale, where the mTBI group obtained a significantly higher score than the comparison group, indicating greater engagement in social activities. The effect sizes were small for all analyses (Table 3).

On average, in terms of work outcomes (WLQ), participants’ health impacted their ability to work less than 20% of the time (Table 3). The Time Demands subscale showed a significant Group x Sex interaction. Women with mTBI reported that their health had a significantly greater impact on this aspect of their work than the men with mTBI (p < .05) with a small to medium effect size. The mTBI group reported that their health had a significantly greater impact on the physical demands of their job compared to the TBI-free group. Overall, women reported that their health impacted the output demands of their job significantly more than men, regardless of their TBI status. However, the effect was small in both cases. There were no statistically significant effects from the item level analyses, and the effect sizes were small (S1 Table).

Interestingly, 12.7% of men and 13.6% of women in the mTBI group who had changed their job reported that they did so because of their injury. In addition, 17.6% of men and 15.7% of women reported having to make changes to their job to enable them to continue in their roles since their injury.

Outcomes from single or repetitive injuries

A series of 2 (Group: single/repetitive) x 2 Sex: male/female) ANOVAs were conducted to examine the effect of multiple TBI on the outcome measures. These data are summarised in Table 4. The group with repetitive TBI reported significantly more symptoms/greater symptom burden with medium effect sizes on the RPQ total, cognitive and somatic subscales than those in the single TBI group. Women had significantly higher RPQ total and somatic subscale scores than men, with medium effect sizes. A significantly greater proportion (small to medium effect) of those with repetitive TBI met the DSM-IV symptom criteria for PCS (n = 33, 36.7%) compared to the single injury group (n = 13; 21.3%; X2(1) = 4.05, p = .04, V = .17). As shown in Fig 3a, the percentage of males above the cut-off did not differ between the groups (X2 (1) = 0.59, p = .44, V = .09), but there was a significantly greater proportion of females with repetitive TBI above the cut-off compared to those with single TBI, a medium effect (X2 (1) = 6.90, p = .01, V = .31). There was no significant association between the proportion of those meeting the RPQ cut-off and sex in the single TBI group (X2(1) = .51, p = .48, V = .09), however, in the repetitive TBI group, a significantly greater percentage of females (medium effect size) were above the cut-off compared to males (X2(1) = 8.18, p < .01, V = .30).

Table 4. Descriptive and inferential statistics for males and female with single or repetitive TBI for each outcome measures.

Data are presented as mean (standard deviation) for males and females with a single or repetitive TBI eight years post-injury for measures of symptom and symptom burden and functional outcomes. Two-way ANOVAs were conducted to explore differences by group and sex.

Single TBI M (SD) n = 61 Repetitive TBI M (SD) n = 90 Two way ANOVA
Male (n = 24) Female (n = 37) Male (n = 53) Female (n = 37) Group (F, sig, partial eta square) Sex (F, sig, partial eta square) Group x Sex (F, sig, partial eta square)
Post-Concussion Symptoms (RPQ) (df = 1, 147)
Total 11.17 (12.12) 15.03 (14.47) 15.28 (13.18) 26.05 (16.72) 9.80, p<.01, ηp2 = .06** 9.15, p<.01, ηp2 = .06** 2.04, p = .16, ηp2 = .01
Cognitive 2.75 (3.19) 3.30 (3.72) 3.89 (3.63) 5.76 (3.72) 8.66, p<.01, ηp2 = .06** 3.91, p = .05, ηp2 = .03 1.17, p = .28, ηp2<.01
Somatic 3.17 (4.30) 5.42 (5.49) 5.15 (4.92) 10.11 (7.29) 12.26, p<.01, ηp2 < .08** 14.19, p<.01, ηp2 = .09** 2.03, p = .16, ηp2 = .01
Emotional 3.71 (4.47) 3.78 (4.06) 3.89 (4.13) 6.08 (4.49) 3.01, p = .09, ηp2 = .02 2.53, p = .11, ηp2 = .02 2.20, p = .14, ηp2 = .01
Mood (HADS and PCL) (df = 1, 147)
Depression 4.29 (4.56) 3.68 (3.60) 3.79 (3.59) 5.65 (4.43) 1.20, p = .28, ηp2 = .01 0.85, p = .36, ηp2<.01 3.38, p = .07, ηp2 = .02
Anxiety 3.52 (2.75) 5.11 (4.01) 5.04 (3.94) 7.00 (4.64) 6.24, p = .01, ηp2 = .04* 6.77, p = .01, ηp2 = .05* 0.08, p = .78 ηp2<.01
PTSD 8.67 (2.88) 10.05 (4.65) 10.11 (4.38) 13.51 (6.26) 9.15, p<.01, ηp2 = .06** 8.71, p<.01, ηp2 = .06** 1.54, p = .22, ηp2 = .01
Community Participation (Part-O) (df = 1, 146)e
Productivity 2.20 (0.86) 2.21 (1.02) 2.09 (0.98) 2.10 (1.29) 0.36, p = .55, ηp2<.01 0.01, p = .95, ηp2<.01 0.01, p = .98 ηp2<.01
Social Relations 2.37 (1.05) 2.58 (0.90) 2.62 (1.00) 2.60 (0.90) 0.68, p = .41, ηp2<.01 0.35, p = .55, ηp2<.01 0.53, p = .47, ηp2<.01
Out and About 1.19 (0.54) 1.37 (0.59) 1.38 (0.65) 1.11 (0.70) 0.11, p = .74, ηp2<.01 0.18, p = .68, ηp2<.01 4.30, p = .04, ηp2 = .03*
Work Limitations (WLQ) (df = 1, 88)
Time Demands 11.20 (12.98)a 17.28 (17.67) b 7.84 (8.60)c 19.71 (25.29) d 0.18, p = .89, ηp2<.01 6.62, p = .01, ηp2 = .07* 0.67, p = .41, ηp2<.01
Physical 11.71 (20.22) 16.67 (23.34) 11.83 (23.09) 22.06 (29.01) 0.28, p = .60, ηp2<.01 2.13, p = .15, ηp2 = .02 0.26, p = .61, ηp2<.01
Ment/Inter-personal 10.27 (15.23) 14.61 (15.26) 9.21 (8.69) 17.65 (18.53) 0.11, p = .74, ηp2<.01 4.51, p = .04, ηp2 = .05* 0.46, p = .50, ηp2<.01
Output 7.81 (13.90) 14.24 (22.68) 5.81 (8.29) 15.15 (19.61) 0.02, p = .88, ηp2<.01 5.05, p = .03, ηp2 = .05* 0.17, p = .68, ηp2<.01

an = 16,

bn = 23,

cn = 36,

dn = 17 as only participants in employment completed this measure.

ehigher score indicates better functioning.

* p<.05.

** p<.01.

ηp2 = partial eta squared.

Fig 3. The percentage of participants in the single and repetitive TBI groups meeting the cut-off scores for the RPQ, HADS depression, HADS anxiety and PCL-C.

Fig 3

Note: Data are presented as the percentage of the group meeting the cut-off score. N for single TBI group = 61 (males = 24, females = 37); N for repetitive TBI group = 90 (males = 53, females = 37) The cut-off for the RPQ was 4 or more items with a rating >2; the cut-off score for the HADS was ≥8 and the cut-off score for the PCL-C was ≥14. * p<.05 **p<.01 from chi-square tests.

The repetitive TBI group obtained significantly higher scores with medium effect sizes on the HADS anxiety scale and PCL-C than the single mTBI group. For both measures, women had significantly higher scores than men (medium effect, Table 4).

Fig 3 shows the percentage of participants in each group obtaining scores above the clinical cut-offs for the HADS Depression scale (b), Anxiety scale (c) and the PCL-C (d). There was no significant association between TBI history (single TBI n = 13, 21.3%; repetitive TBI n = 19, 21.1%) and exceeding the depression cut-off score (X2(1) < .01, p = .98, V < .01). The comparisons between males and females within each group did not reach statistical significance (single TBI X2(1) = 3.41, p = .07, V = .24; repetitive TBI (X2(1) = 1.32, p = .25, V = .12), although there was a medium effect size for the single TBI group. There were no significant associations between TBI history and sex (male X2(1) = 2.59, p = .11, V = .18; female X2(1) = 2.09, p = .15, V = .17) for the depression scale, with effect sizes in the small to medium range.

For the anxiety scale, 16.4% (n = 10) of the single TBI group exceeded the clinical cut-off compared with 30.0% (n = 27) of the repetitive TBI group (X2(1) = 3.64, p = .06, V = .15). The proportion of males did not differ significantly (small to medium effect) between the single and repetitive TBI groups (X2(1) = 1.82, p = .18, V = .15), but a significantly greater proportion of females exceeded the cut-offs in the group with repetitive TBI compared to the single TBI group (X2(1) = 3.95, p = .05, V = .23) (Fig 3c). In the single TBI group the proportion of males and females exceeding the clinical cut-off for anxiety were not significantly different with a small to medium effect size (X2(1) = 1.88, p = .17, V = .18). A significantly greater proportion of females exceeded the clinical cut-off in the repetitive TBI group compared to males, a medium-size effect (X2(1) = 5.25, p = .02, V = .24).

For the PCL-C, there was no significant difference in the proportion of participants exceeding the clinical screening score between the single (8%, n = 9) and repetitive TBI groups (27.8%, n = 25; X2(1) = 3.54, p = .06, V = .15). Similarly, there was no significant difference in the proportion of males meeting the cut-off (X2(1) = 1.01, p = .32, V = .11) between the two groups. A significantly greater proportion of females exceeded the cut-off in the repetitive TBI group (X2(1) = 5.11, p = .02, V = .26) compared to the single TBI group, a medium effect (Fig 3d). Within the groups, there was no statistically significant association between gender and exceeding the PCL-C cut-off in the single TBI group (X2(1) = 1.30, p = .26, V = .15) however, a significantly greater proportion of females (medium effect size) exceeded the cut-off score in the repetitive TBI group compared to males (X2(1) = 7.49, p < .01, V = .29).

There was a significant Group x Sex interaction for the Out and About subscale of the Community Participation scale with a small to medium effect size for the functional outcome measure. Women in the single TBI group and men in the repetitive TBI group reported the highest levels of community participation (Table 4). There was no significant effect of prior TBI on work-related outcomes (WLQ), and the effect sizes were small. Women reported that their health negatively affected their work significantly more than men for the Time Demands, Mental/Interpersonal Demands and Output Demands subscales (medium effect sizes).

Discussion

The overall aim of the study was to explore sex differences in outcomes from mTBI in men and women at eight years post-injury by comparison with an age and sex-matched TBI-free sample. In addition, we explored sex differences in outcomes from single and repetitive TBI.

The comparisons between the mTBI and TBI-free group revealed that the mTBI group reported greater post-concussion symptoms, depression symptoms, a greater impact of their health on physical work demands and, surprisingly, significantly higher levels of community participation compared to the TBI-free group. Regarding sex differences, women reported more post-concussive symptoms, higher levels of anxiety and a greater impact of their health on work productivity than men. In addition, women with mTBI obtained the highest scores on the PTSD scale and reported that their health had the greatest impact on time-related work demands. Over twice as many females with mTBI met PCS cut-offs compared to any other group (40% compared to <20% for all other groups). In addition, a greater proportion of women with mTBI met the cut-offs for anxiety and exceeded the clinical screening score for PTSD, compared to males with mTBI and females in the comparison group. There was no evidence of interactions between sex and age at injury for the key outcome variables, but this may be due to the limited sample size.

Our sample was identified as part of an epidemiological study to determine TBI incidence, and almost two thirds had experienced a prior TBI. Those with repetitive injuries had poorer outcomes, reporting more post-concussive, anxiety and PTSD symptoms, but the higher symptom burden did not affect work. Within the TBI group, females obtained significantly higher scores (and a greater proportion met the cut-offs) for post-concussive, anxiety and PTSD symptoms compared to males.

Together these findings suggest that those with mTBI show heightened post-concussion, depression and PTSD symptoms up to 8-years post-injury, which may impact work productivity. Females with mTBI, particularly those who have experienced multiple TBI, had the poorest outcomes across a number of domains as shown by the significant proportion meeting the symptom cut-off scores for PCS and PTSD.

This study provides further evidence that the negative impacts of mTBI can persist for a significant period post-injury, and there seems to have been little improvement in PCS symptoms from 4 years post-injury [16]. The proportion meeting the cut-off scores for PCS had decreased from 12 months post-injury (47.9% at 12 months, 30.5% at 8 years), but the proportion meeting the clinical cuts off for the depression scale had increased (12.1% at 12 months, 21.1% at 8 years) and decreased slightly for anxiety (29.3% at 12 months, 24.5% at 8 years) [10]. Female sex was a predictor of poor outcomes for post-concussion symptoms, health-related quality of life- mental component, anxiety and general poor functioning (Glasgow Outcome Scale) at 12 months post-injury, but was no longer a significant predictor 4 years post-injury [10, 16]. Interestingly, only six participants in this cohort had any active TBI-related rehabilitation within 4 years of injury [16]. These findings suggest that symptoms present at 12 months post-injury are unlikely to resolve over a longer period. Some of the sex differences in outcomes may reduce over time, but as a result of attrition, our sample is getting smaller at each follow-up time point, so it is difficult to reach any firm conclusions.

Recovery from mTBI is complex, and there is increasing evidence that psychosocial factors play a key role [33], and careful management of return to work, school and sport can assist with good recovery whilst minimising the risk of subsequent injuries. This cohort was identified in 2010–2011, and at that time, much less was known about the potential adverse consequences of mTBI (or concussion), and as a result, many people did not seek medical attention, and there was limited ongoing monitoring and follow-up. Improvements in the acute management of mTBI and educating people about how best to cope with symptoms and when to seek medical support may help to ameliorate the long-term negative consequences of mTBI.

In general, women reported a higher symptom burden than men regardless of mTBI status, in keeping with previous reports [57, 58]. Our analyses did not provide a clear answer as to whether there were sex differences in long-term outcomes from mTBI. We did not find Group x Sex interactions for PCS, depression or anxiety, but a greater proportion of women with mTBI exceeded the clinical cut-off scores for PCS and PTSD. For PCS, this was a significant proportion of the women with mTBI in the study, 40%, double the proportion of any other group; 30% of the women with mTBI met the screening cut-off for PTSD, twice the proportion of any other group. For women with prior TBI, the proportion exceeding the cut-offs was even higher, over 50% for PCS and over 40% for PTSD. Overall, 24.4% of women with mTBI exceeded the cut-offs on 3 or more measures (PCS, anxiety, depression, PTSD) compared with 7.8% of men with mTBI. This suggests that women may be at greater risk of poor long-term outcomes post mTBI, particularly if they have a history of previous injuries.

Why this group have the poorest outcomes is unclear. The lack of intervention or treatment for prior injuries may have meant that another injury was sustained before full recovery, leading to a greater symptom burden [59]. Alternatively, undiagnosed psychiatric disorders (anxiety, depression, PTSD) may contribute to the higher symptom burden and longer recovery. Despite the high proportion of the sample exceeding the clinical cut-off scores across several measures, only 14.9% of the women with mTBI reported a formal mental health diagnosis, but this was almost double the proportion of men. Whilst these measures are only screening tools, the findings raise the possibility that there are undiagnosed mental health problems within this population. In the context of poor mental health, mTBI could be viewed as another stressor that exacerbates current symptoms. Thus, addressing mental health symptoms may help break the cycle of ongoing symptom burden.

Although recent studies reported interactions between age and sex with symptom burden after mTBI, we did not find any evidence of poorer outcomes for women within a particular age group [31, 32], albeit our sample size meant that we were not able to examine outcomes in smaller age bands. Given the inconsistent findings across studies, further work to explore the relationship between age at injury and sex differences in adult outcomes from TBI is warranted.

Strengths and limitations

The sample represents 17.4% of the original incidence sample (n = 870) and 43.6% of those who had agreed to be contacted for follow-up. These response rates are reasonable given that 341 (39.2%) of the original sample completed an assessment in the 12 months post-injury. The sample completing the assessment at 8-year post-injury contained 10% fewer males than the incidence sample. In addition, the proportion of Māori participants was also 10% lower. Māori (indigenous people of New Zealand) face many social and health inequities and are at greater risk of TBI than other ethnicities [2], and potentially poorer outcomes. Thus, we may have underestimated the impact of mTBI eight years post-injury.

A large amount of missing data for education, occupation, and injury severity (GCS) makes it difficult to draw firm conclusions as to the representativeness of the sample for these factors. One of the most challenging issues for longitudinal research is maintaining contact with participants. Contact and communication options have changed significantly since the incidence study in 2010–2011, with a shift towards mobile phones, email and social media rather than home phone and postal contact. We now routinely request multiple different types of contact information to assist with future contact. In addition, we used WHO criteria to define mTBI, not the American Congress of Rehabilitation, which includes the presence of observable signs and subjective symptoms (dizziness, confusion) [60, 61].

While we had a reasonably good follow-up rate, our sample was relatively small limiting our age analyses to two groups. Previous studies of mTBI have found that middle-aged women (30–49 years) have poorer outcomes as compared to other age groups [32, 33], and therefore, we may have missed any age-related differences in outcomes due to our limited sample size.

There were no significant differences between the mTBI and comparison groups on key demographic and occupational variables. Of note, there were no significant associations between group or sex in occupation level or the proportion who were the primary income earner. However, it would be appropriate to collect general medical information from the comparison sample in future studies to ensure that group differences were not a result of other co-morbid diagnoses. Ideally, we would include an ‘other’ injury comparison group [33], but this raises questions about what ‘other’ injury would be suitable. Our sample had mTBI, and the majority received no formal diagnostic testing or active treatment, and some did not seek medical treatment at the time of injury; thus a community comparison group was deemed most appropriate.

We used the RPQ differently from other studies as we asked participants to rate their symptoms over the 24 hours [41] rather than comparing how they feel now to before their injury to improve accuracy. As a result, we removed the response option 1, no more of a problem, as the response did not make sense without a comparison time-point. It should be noted that this did not affect the scores, as the rating of 1 is not included in calculating the total or subscale scores.

Future studies could consider including assessments of malingering, and social desirability or using measures that incorporate measures of response consistency. Finally, the assessment time point (8-years post-injury) was opportunistic (we applied for and received funding), and longer-term follow-up studies are warranted. Despite these limitations, the current study addressed key gaps in the literature by examining the long-term outcomes of mTBI in men and women.

In conclusion, at 8-years post-mTBI, people may experience a higher symptom burden, and women with repeat injuries appear to be at the highest risk of poor outcomes. Providing education about injury management, return to work, and screening for, and treating, mental health issues in the acute post-injury phase may help to decrease the long-term symptom burden.

Supporting information

S1 Table. Descriptive and inferential statistics for the males and females in the mTBI (8-years post-injury) and comparison groups for items on the outcome measures with a significant main effect or interaction of sex RPQ, HADS anxiety, PCL-C, WLQ Time demands, WLQ Output demands).

(DOCX)

Acknowledgments

Thank you to the participants for their ongoing commitment to the study and the research assistants involved in the data collection. We would also like to thank Waikato District Health Board, general practitioners and health care providers for their ongoing support.

BIONIC8 Study Group members include Nicola Starkey (lead author, nstarkey@waikato.ac.nz), Brittany Duffy (University of Waikato, Hamilton, New Zealand); Valery Feigin, Alice Theadom, Kelly Jones, Priya Parmar, Amy Jones (AUT University, Auckland, New Zealand); Suzanne Barker-Collo, Shanthi Ameratunga (University of Auckland, Auckland, New Zealand); Anthony Dowell (University of Otago, Dunedin, New Zealand), Michael Kahan (Waikato Occupational Services, Hamilton, New Zealand), Grant Christey (Waikato District Health Board, Hamilton, New Zealand), Natalie Hardaker (Accident Compensation Corporation, Wellington, New Zealand).

Data Availability

There are ethical restrictions on sharing of de-identified data for this study. We do not have the participants' or ethics committee's permission to share their anonymous data. The dataset includes sensitive information, and given the nature of the data and the relatively small region of data collection the participants may be identifiable despite efforts to annonymise the data. Qualified and interested researchers may request access to the data by contacting University of Waikato Ethics Committee (humanethics@waikato.ac.nz.)

Funding Statement

NJS, BD, KJ, AT, SBC, VF WMRF #289. Waikato Medical Research Foundation. https://wmrf.org.nz/ VF, AT, SBC, NJS 09/063A. Health Research Council of New Zealand. https://www.hrc.govt.nz/grants-funding. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: Due to major issues regarding the study design, the methods, results, and the statistical analysis, I made suggestions how the presentation of this important work could be improved for resubmission. Please see the attached file for all my comments. Thanks for your valuable work in the fild of neuropschiatric burdens after mild TBI.

Dear authors,

thank you very much for your scientific effort to elucidate long-term outcome after mild TBI (mTBI), which is an underestimated neuropsychiatric burden, and thus this work will help closing the gap of evidence in the field.

Please see my comments regarding weaknesses and my suggestions that might help to improve clarity of your manuscript.

• The study design needs to be clarified, as it seems to be a mixed design including retrospective data from a previous study (RPQ and HADS from 1- and 12-months after mTBI) and a cross-sectional analysis at 8-years after mTBI. Maybe I missed something, but in the current form it remains somehow unclear or even misleading. It is well known that long-term follow up after TBI is challenging due to immense loss of data/follow up, thus this idea of combining data in principle is good enough but should be clearly stated. As there were only early results at 1- and 12-months post-mTBI available for the RPQ and HADS this should be the primary outcome over time, and thus the study design should be clarified throughout the title, abstract and whole MS as mentioned above.

• It remains unclear why sample sizes are different (mTBI: N=151, controls: N=211), and it is important to have a control group which does not differ in terms of educational level and ethnicity, both relevant factors in terms of neuropsychiatric burdens after TBI.

• The definition of mTBI should be more precise according to the ACMR criteria with negative CCT scans. If these ACMR criteria were not used, it should be better explained and clarified. Alternatively, definitions which were used in the CENTER-TBI (uncomplicated, complicated mTBI) or TRACK-TBI study could be used and information on CCT/cMRI would be desirable.

• Mild TBI should be used as mTBI instead MTBI

• There is a need of explanation on the rationale for including adolescents aged > 16 years instead of merely adults. Were the 16-year-olds from the school or working population at the time of their TBI? Sometimes inclusion was > 16, sometimes ≥ 16 years; this should be adopted. However, I recommend including adults ≥ 18 years of age at TBI.

• Inclusion criteria should be specified, as it seems that also repetitive mTBI patients were included, these patients might hamper results and should be excluded, particularly as the pathophysiology of repetitive TBI and single TBI seems to differ according to the literature.

• The Methods part in terms of outcome measures should be more precise and I suggest the following organization:

1. Neuropsychiatric burden measured by patient-reported outcome measures (PROMs: RPQ, HADS, PCL-C) instead of using “health”

2. community participation (Participation Assessments with Recombined Tools)

3. work (Work Limitations Questionnaire)

• I suggest using the common wording of PROMs

• All outcome measures should be revised and particularly cut-off scores should be given.

• The paragraphs on assessing community participation and work would benefit from further clarity. Maybe I missed something, but it remained unclear whether those parameters were assessed by self-rating or external ratings? Were the applied instruments validated for the assessed age groups? Further information would be helpful.

• I suggest to be careful with the diagnosis of PTSD as you only assessed PTSD symptoms with the PCL-C checklist.

• The abstract would benefit from more concise description of the study design, measurement time points, patient- or external-rated assessments, and clear statements for the three outcome measures

1. Neuropsychiatric sequels measured by PROMs (RPQ, HADS, PCL-C)

2. community participation (Participation Assessments with Recombined Tools)

3. work (Work Limitations Questionnaire)

• The introduction would benefit from a better focus. Overall, the intro should be shorter with focus on mTBI and outcome with respect to neuropsychiatric burdens regarding RPQ, HADS, PTSD as well as community participation and work as well as sex differences; in the current stage the intro is broad and the reader gets somehow lost within lots of information which is not clearly focus on the presented study.

• The methods part is mixed with results (referral to Table 1). The same is relevant for Table 2, which is a result as well. I suggest to merely describe the methods which you used to get the controls. All details about the controls belong to the results part. I think it is a problem that controls and mTBI subjects differed in terms of education and ethnicity as stated above and this should be adopted when possible.

• Table 1 is a result and should be changed in terms of the column order, thereby it would be easier to anticipate which sample was included and which differed significantly (p-values should directly be incorporated). As the analyzed sample is not representative for the initial sample in terms of age, sex distribution and ethics, this is not ideal for data interpretation, and thus results in the current format need to be handled with care and should merely be descriptive. Due to this major limitation, I suggest to get another statical support and recalculate the data by using imputation analysis, or ITT or completer analysis, which might strengthen the conclusions.

• Could you please improve resolution of images?

• Could you please provide an abbreviation list, e.g. for SES p. 5, line 87

• What is the rationale for defined age groups 16-44 and 45 +? This should be clarified.

• Which confounders were assessed to minimize gender factors that might influence the detrimental females’ outcome such as financial inequity, social position, marital status, etc. between sexes?

• Some wording should be double checked, e.g. the “8-year anniversary”, p. 13, line 239

• The stats part needs revision in terms of primary and secondary outcome measures as indicated above. It seems that there were also patients with more than a single mTBI, these should be analyzed separately and not included in this study. Was data normal distributed, descriptive analysis should be given.

• In the result part absolute numbers e.g. for the RPQ should be interpreted in terms of the given cut-offs in the literature. For example, it should be stated whether patients had a manifest post-concussion syndrome. For definitions see e.g. Riemann et al. 2021 (DOI: 10.3171/2020.9.PEDS20421).

• The current literature should be updated, e.g. include references from doi.org/10.1016/S1474-4422(17)30371-X; doi.org/10.1186/s12955-020-01391-3; doi.org/10.1007/s11357-020-00273-2

• I assume that the authors are English native speakers. However, some parts of the manuscript would benefit from scientific/ language editing aiming a concise scientific English language.

Thank you very much for your immense research effort.

Reviewer #2: This is an interesting article focusing on the long-term consequences of mild TBI in context of sex or gender. Because of the inclusion of a comparison group, long follow-up, inclusion of mild TBI patients from a broad range of settings, and the analysis of the longitudinal trajectory, this study could contribute to the literature in the field.

However, there are some important limitations and concerns related to the analyses, reporting of the results and interpretation/ implications of the results.

Analysis and reporting of the results:

- The analyses do not adequately adjust for differences in ethnicity and education, although the authors state themselves in the Introduction that these differences can be related to outcomes.

- The characteristics of participants are not reported in sufficient detail: characteristics of mTBI patients (GCS, mechanism of injury, prior TBI etc.) should be added to Table 1., so that it is visible how they relate to attrition.

- The characteristics of participants are not reported for all subgroups (e.g. group by sex) being compared (Table 2).

- Statistically insignificant results and associated average results are not reported, as they should be, at least in Supplement.

- It is not clear if other relevant medical history and sociodemographic characteristics were measured in this study: if yes, they should be reported and included in the analyses. If not, that should be discussed in detail as limitation.

- Sex or gender is very important in this study but it is not explained how exactly was measured.

Discussion and conclusion

- The results are not sufficiently interpreted in regard to study population/ characteristics of the included participants, methodological limitations and the literature in the field. The study limitations should be discussed thoroughly. Plausible explanations and clinical implications of the results should be also discussed.

In more detail:

- Abstract: the conclusion and the implications of your results are not clearly stated.

- Introduction: there are couple of other studies in general population, and a recent study in TRACK-TBI data that does include a comparison group and could be mentioned.

- I suggest finding a different wording instead of “mood outcomes” .

- The authors talk about men and women, but about “sex” and not “gender”. How was this variable measured and how is the term understood by the authors?

- There are differences in education and ethnicity. “The MTBI and Comparison group differed in terms of ethnicity and education, but as these were true group differences it was deemed inappropriate to include these variables as covariates in the analyses.(48, 49)” – But it is stated (correctly) in the Introduction that “a range of factors including age, minority ethnicity, lower levels of education, and SESare linked to poorer outcomes” . Therefore, if you would like to compare outcomes in groups with history/no history of TBI, they should be adjusted based on these factors (ethnicity, education), in the way you are incorporating age. Otherwise, you cannot know if the (lack of) difference is due to TBI status or differences in education and ethnicity. In addition, considering the recruitment and data collection process, how can you know that “these were the true group differences”?

- Descriptive characteristics e.g. sex and ethnicity are not presented for subgroups you analyze ( separately for women with/without TBI, for men with/without TBI ). In addition, are there other available information for the groups?

- What are the characteristics of participants who did and did not complete the 8-year measurement in terms of GCS, mechanism of injury, CT abnormalities?

- Reporting results based on p-values is inappropriate. I would like to see average values for all compared subgroups at least in Supplement.

- Why the comparison “TBI-free group” was not compared with the 1-month and 1-year results of the mTBI group?

- The RPQ was used differently (without the comparison before the injury) than in other TBI studies- that should be noted in the Discussion and related to the observed average scores.

- Is it possible to report and include in the analysis other very important factors: psychiatric and general medical history/ health status? If not, this should be discussed in detail as a limitation. How could that influence the results and comparison between groups?

- The average age is relatively low, and the percentage of prior mTBI and the percentage of mechanical force-induced injuries is high. Does it mean that the study included substantial percentage of sport or work- related injuries in young adults/adolescents? How could this influence the results in the context of age?

- It is not discussed how the time could influence the results- e.g. maybe sex x group differences exist 3-6 months after injury but disappear with time (maybe not)? Moreover, discuss why you would expect symptoms after mild TBI so long as 8 years after injury.

- How the patterns can be explained? Why women with mild TBI showed more PTSD symptoms and time-related work demands? How come that symptoms do not change from 1 year to 8 year? To what degree could that be related to the characteristics of responders?

- Age comparisons (age subgroups)- 8 years is a long time. What is more important, the age of injury or 8 years after, considering relevant biological and social factors?

- What are the implications of the results for clinical practice and patients with mild TBI?

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PLoS One. 2022 May 27;17(5):e0269101. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0269101.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


14 Jan 2022

15th December 2021

Dear Editor and Reviewers,

Thank you for your comprehensive and thoughtful feedback on our manuscript. We have endeavoured to address all of your comments. We have provided line and page numbers to point the reviewers to the revised sections of the manuscript where appropriate. It should be noted that we have made significant changes to the manuscript so the tracked changes version may be rather difficult to follow.

At the outset you might find it helpful to know that we have removed the longitudinal analyses and the paper now focuses on outcomes at eight years post-injury. We have also added some additional analyses comparing participants with their first versus repeat TBI (in response to one of the reviewers’ comments).

The data is available on request from the University of Waikato Ethics committee (email: humanethics@waikato.ac.nz). (Please note that because the research required review by the National Health and Disability Ethics Committee (HDEC), the University Committee did not review the application as the national committee supersedes them; they will however be the contact point for data access as this service is not provided by the national committee). The data cannot be shared because the participants did not provide consent for their data to be shared (even in a de-identified form). The ethics approval for the study and consent process stated that data would not be shared beyond the study team. In addition, New Zealand is a small country and participants are drawn from a region within NZ. Our dataset contains a lot of personal details and medical information, including information about date, time and place of injury, medical provider and subsequent illnesses and injuries. The level of detail in the dataset means that the participants are potentially identifiable by the amount and nature of the data we hold.

We have provided affiliations for every member of the BIONIC8 research group and contact details of the lead author in the acknowledgements section. Finally, we have uploaded the supplementary table as supporting information.

Editors comments.

Abstract:

1. Please include a more concise description of the study design, measurement time points, patient- or external-rated assessments, and clear statements for the three outcome measures. Please also provide a conclusion and a clear statement of the implications of your results.

We have provided a clear statement of the research questions, the assessment time point, and that all measures were self-report. We have also provided a clear statement of the implications of the findings

Introduction:

2. Please rewrite with focus on mTBI and outcome with respect to neuropsychiatric burdens regarding RPQ, HADS, PTSD as well as community participation and work as well as sex differences. Additional references to studies in general population should be included.

We have re-organised the introduction to describe previous research describing outcomes from mTBI for the measures we used (ie, post-concussive symptoms, anxiety, depression, PTSD, participation and work outcomes). We have added more recent references that incorporate general population samples and several more recent studies examining the interaction between sex and age on outcomes from mTBI. We have removed the more general information that was not of relevance to the study.

Methods:

3. The mixed study design: please clarify the data collection and clearly indicate which patient data are retrospective data from a previous study and which part represent the cross-sectional analysis at 8-years after mTBI.

We have removed the longitudinal analysis and the paper focuses on the data at eight years post-injury. The injury related information and demographic information presented in Table 1 were collected as part of the original incidence study. The remaining data (presented in Table 2 onwards) was collected as part of the 8-year outcome study.

4. Different sample size: please clearly explain and justify the different sample size for the mTBI and control groups.

We initially recruited a comparison group matched on age and sex (on average rather than one to one matching) which was larger than the mTBI cohort. In light of the reviewers comments we conducted additional matching of the groups on occupation and reduced the number of participants in the comparison group to 151 (the same as the mTBI group)

5. Control group: Please indicate whether the control group matched the mTBI group in terms of educational level and ethnicity.

The smaller comparison group now matches the mTBI group in terms of educational levels and ethnicity as shown in Table 2. A significantly smaller proportion of women in the mTBI and comparison group had completed Trade or technical certificates compared to the men in both groups

6. Please provide a more precise definition of mTBI

We have provided further explanation of the definition of mTBI cases as shown below. The study took place prior to the CENTER TBI and TRACK TBI studies and used the most suitable criteria available at the time (page 8 line 158 onwards):

“mTBI was defined as Glasgow Coma Scale score of 13-15 and/or post-traumatic amnesia (PTA) of less than 24 hours (39). Each mTBI case was further classified as having low, medium or high risk of developing complications based on the presence or absence of clinical findings (loss of consciousness, amnesia, vomiting or diffuse headache), neurological deficits, (impaired vision, hearing, speech, balance, walking difficulties or weakness), skull fracture and other risk factors (coagulopathy, drug/alcohol consumption, previous neurosurgical procedures, pre-trauma epilepsy, over 60 years of age) (40). mTBI cases with no clinical or neurological deficits, no skull fracture or risk factors were classified as low risk. Those with clinical findings but no neurological deficits, skull fracture or risk factors were classed as medium risk. The high-risk group included those with clinical, neurological, skull fracture and/or other risk factors.”

7. Inclusion criteria should be specified, as it seems that also repetitive mTBI patients were included, these patients might hamper results and should be excluded, particularly as the pathophysiology of repetitive TBI and single TBI seems to differ according to the literature.

The mTBI cohort was originally identified as part of a population-based epidemiological study of TBI and included those with and without prior TBI. As the overall aim of the study was to explore the symptom burden, health and functional outcomes of this group in comparison to a TBI-free group 8 years post-injury, we have retained the analyses for the whole group, as we think the findings provide useful insights into recovery 8 years after injury, regardless of prior TBI status (which is often not documented or known by clinicians when people seek treatment).

We also acknowledge that those with single or repeat injuries may show different outcomes. To address this, we have conducted additional analyses comparing the 8-year outcomes for men and women who had either single or repeat injuries. These findings are reported in Table 4.

8. Please also justify the inclusion of adolescents aged > 16 years instead of merely adults.

The age of consent in New Zealand is 16 years of age, so we included all of the participants who were able to provide their own consent for the original incidence study. All participants aged 16 years or over completed the same assessments. The current analyse focus on the participants 8 years post-injury so the minimum age of the sample is 24 years.

9. The paragraphs on assessing community participation and work would benefit from further clarity. Maybe I missed something, but it remained unclear whether those parameters were assessed by self-rating or external ratings? Were the applied instruments validated for the assessed age groups? Further information would be helpful.

We have added additional information about the measures in the Measures section. All were self-report measures and validated for this age group. (p12 line 230 onwards)

10. Explain how the parameter sex/gender was evaluated. Which confounders were assessed to minimize gender factors that might influence the detrimental females’ outcome such as financial inequity, social position, marital status, etc. between sexes?

In the BIONIC incidence and outcome study sex/gender was determined from medical records or self-report by the participant (depending on how the case was located). We have carried out additional analyses comparing males and females in the mTBI and control group for level of education, occupation, and if they are the main income earner (see Table 2). There were no significant associations between gender, group and these variables. In addition, we also explored if the participants reported having enough money to live on (not reported in the manuscript for brevity), and there were no significant associations between group, gender and response to this question.

11. The description of the statistical analyses needs to include primary and secondary outcome measures.

The study was observational and aimed to provide a broad overview of long-term outcomes following mTBI. As this wasn’t a clinical trial we did not have primary and secondary outcomes measures. We have reworded the research questions to clarify the primary and secondary aims of the study for clarity (page 8 line 143 onwards):

“The primary aim was to: 1) Compare symptoms and symptom burden, health-related behaviour, and functional outcomes in males and females with mTBI with an age- and sex-matched TBI-free comparison group. Secondary aims were to: 1) Compare outcomes at 8 years post-injury in males and females aged <45 years and >45 years (at injury) and 2) Compare outcomes in those with first in lifetime and repeat TBI.”

12. Please provide sufficient detail about the participant characteristics including parameters such as GCS, mechanism of injury, prior TBI etc.) in Table 1.

The revised Table 1 compares the characteristics of the original BIONIC study incidence sample (n=870) to the group completing the 8-year outcome assessment (n=151) to determine the representativeness of the sample. We have included additional demographic (education, occupation) and injury-related information (mechanism of injury, mTBI severity, number of prior TBI, GCS, number with CT scan) in the Table. Please note that there is a missing data for some of the variables for the incidence sample (prior TBI, education, occupation) as this information was obtained via interview, rather than from medical records, and we were not able to interview all of the incidence cohort.

13. In Table 2 please report the characteristics of participants for all subgroups. Statistically insignificant results and associated average results should be reported.

We have provided descriptive statistics for all subgroups (male/female; mTBI/comparison), and included the relevant inferential statistics in Table 2. The descriptive and inferential statistics for the item level analysis have been included in a supplementary table (Table S1)

Results and Discussion

14. In the Results absolute numbers e.g. for the Rivermead Post-Concussion Symptom Questionnaire assessments should be interpreted in terms of the given cut-offs in the literature.

We have added information about cut-off scores that meet the symptom criteria for DSM-IV post-concussion syndrome in the measures section, and provided further explanation of the percentage of participants in each group that meet the cut-offs in the relevant sections of the results and in Figs 2 and 3.

15. Interpretation of the data should include the possible influence of study population/ characteristics of the included participants, methodological limitations and the literature in the field. The study limitations should be discussed thoroughly. Plausible explanations and clinical implications of the results should be also discussed

We have added a strengths and limitations section in the discussion that includes discussion of the study population and how it compares to those identified in the original incidence study. This also includes discussion of our modifications to the RPQ, the suitability of the TBI free comparison group and the use of self-report assessments (p32 lines 549-578).

We have compared the current findings with outcomes at earlier time points, and it seems that symptoms have not improved much from 12 months post-injury. This suggests that early intervention is the key to preventing long-term symptom burden. Of note only 6 participants in our 4 year follow up reported any type of treatment for their injury (beyond the first medical presentation for the injury). (page 30 line 501 onwards).

Females with repeat mTBI appear most at risk for ongoing symptoms burden (in terms of the proportion exceeding the clinical cut-offs for the RPQ, HADS and PCL-C). The proportion of participants exceeding the clinical cut-offs for the depression/anxiety/PTSD scales far exceeds the number reporting a diagnosed psychiatric condition, suggesting that there may be a significant number of people with undiagnosed mental health issues. Given the complex interplay of psychosocial factors in post-concussion symptoms as well as depression and anxiety, early intervention after concussion to ensure that symptoms have fully resolved may be key to preventing long-term symptom burden.

16. Descriptive characteristics e.g. sex and ethnicity should be presented for all subgroups.

This information has been added to Table 2

17. Information on the characteristics of participants who did and did not complete the 8-year measurement should be provided in terms of GCS, mechanism of injury, CT abnormalities.

This information has been added to Table 1. Please note that there is a significant amount of missing data for the incidence sample for some of the variables (e.g., GCS) as this was often not recorded in the medical records, or participants had not sought medical attention soon after injury. As shown in the Table only a small proportion of the sample had a CT scan, and any CT abnormalities were considered when classifying the mTBI injury severity as low, medium or high risk.

18. Report and include in the analysis psychiatric and general medical history and health status of the participants.

Information about current and previous health issues (reported at 8 years post-injury) has been added to Table 2 for the participants with mTBI. There were no significant associations between health conditions and sex in the mTBI group. We did not ask participants in the comparison group for information about their current /previous health diagnoses.

19. Rivermead Post-Concussion Symptom Questionnaire was used without the comparison before the injury. This unusual reporting should be noted in the Discussion and related to the observed average scores.

We have provided further information about scoring and our use of the RPQ in the measures section and raised it as a limitation in the Discussion. We excluded the rating of 1, no more of a problem, because the response option did not make sense when participants were asked to rate their symptoms over the last 24 hrs as they had no previous time point to compare with. Previous studies of general population samples have asked participants to provide ratings over a 24-hour period (e.g., Voormolen et al 2019). We used the 24-hour time period because we thought that participants would be unable to accurately rate their symptoms now compared to 8 years ago, and we could use the same question for the mTBI and comparison groups

20. The literature should be updated.

We have carried out another literature search and added more recent references as appropriate (including those suggested by the reviewers and recent publications on sex x age interactions after mTBI from the TRACK-TBI team).

Reviewer 1

Due to major issues regarding the study design, the methods, results, and the statistical analysis, I made suggestions how the presentation of this important work could be improved for resubmission. Please see the attached file for all my comments. Thanks for your valuable work in the field of neuropsychiatric burdens after mild TBI.

Thank you for your helpful and constructive feedback

21. The study design needs to be clarified, as it seems to be a mixed design including retrospective data from a previous study (RPQ and HADS from 1- and 12-months after mTBI) and a cross-sectional analysis at 8-years after mTBI. Maybe I missed something, but in the current form it remains somehow unclear or even misleading. It is well known that long-term follow up after TBI is challenging due to immense loss of data/follow up, thus this idea of combining data in principle is good enough but should be clearly stated. As there were only early results at 1- and 12-months post-mTBI available for the RPQ and HADS this should be the primary outcome over time, and thus the study design should be clarified throughout the title, abstract and whole MS as mentioned above.

Apologies for the confusion. The main purpose of the study was to explore sex differences across a broad range of outcomes from mTBI 8 years post-injury. The longitudinal analysis was supplementary and not the main purpose of the paper (we thought the findings made an interesting addition to the paper, and highlighted the importance of including control group data when examining long-term outcomes). We have removed the longitudinal analysis to ensure the aim of the study is clear, and we have incorporated additional analyses examining outcomes for those with and without prior TBI to address one of your later comments.

22. It remains unclear why sample sizes are different (mTBI: N=151, controls: N=211), and it is important to have a control group which does not differ in terms of educational level and ethnicity, both relevant factors in terms of neuropsychiatric burdens after TBI.

We initially recruited a comparison group matched on age and sex (on average rather than one to one matching) which was larger than the mTBI cohort. In light of the reviewers comments we conducted additional matching of the groups on occupation and reduced the number of participants in the comparison group to 151 (the same as the mTBI group). The smaller comparison group now matches the mTBI group in terms of educational levels and ethnicity as shown in Table 2. A significantly smaller proportion of women in the mTBI and comparison group had completed Trade or technical certificates compared to the men in both groups

23. The definition of mTBI should be more precise according to the ACMR criteria with negative CCT scans. If these ACMR criteria were not used, it should be better explained and clarified. Alternatively, definitions which were used in the CENTER-TBI (uncomplicated, complicated mTBI) or TRACK-TBI study could be used and information on CCT/cMRI would be desirable.

We have provided further explanation of the definition of mTBI cases as shown below. The study took place prior to the CENTER TBI and TRACK TBI studies and used the most suitable criteria available at the time (page 8 line 158 onwards):

“mTBI was defined as Glasgow Coma Scale score of 13-15 and/or post-traumatic amnesia (PTA) of less than 24 hours (39). Each mTBI case was further classified as having low, medium or high risk of developing complications based on the presence or absence of clinical findings (loss of consciousness, amnesia, vomiting or diffuse headache), neurological deficits, (impaired vision, hearing, speech, balance, walking difficulties or weakness), skull fracture and other risk factors (coagulopathy, drug/alcohol consumption, previous neurosurgical procedures, pre-trauma epilepsy, over 60 years of age) (40). mTBI cases with no clinical or neurological deficits, no skull fracture or risk factors were classified as low risk. Those with clinical findings but no neurological deficits, skull fracture or risk factors were classed as medium risk. The high-risk group included those with clinical, neurological, skull fracture and/or other risk factors.”

24. Mild TBI should be used as mTBI instead MTBI

This has been corrected throughout

25. There is a need of explanation on the rationale for including adolescents aged > 16 years instead of merely adults. Were the 16-year-olds from the school or working population at the time of their TBI? Sometimes inclusion was > 16, sometimes ≥ 16 years; this should be adopted. However, I recommend including adults ≥ 18 years of age at TBI.

Participants aged 16 years and over were classed as adults for all of the BIONIC studies (including the original incidence study), as those aged 16 years or over can legally consent to participate in research without parental permission in New Zealand. Those 16 years and over completed the same adult assessments, all of our previous publications from this cohort have been based on this age range. As this assessment was 8 years post-injury the minimum age of the participants was 24 years (maximum 90 years).

26. Inclusion criteria should be specified, as it seems that also repetitive mTBI patients were included, these patients might hamper results and should be excluded, particularly as the pathophysiology of repetitive TBI and single TBI seems to differ according to the literature.

The mTBI cohort was originally identified as part of a population-based epidemiological study of TBI and included those with and without prior TBI. As the overall aim of the study was to explore the symptom burden, health and functional outcomes of this group in comparison to a TBI-free group 8 years post-injury, we have retained the analyses for the whole group, as we think the findings provide useful insights into recovery 8 years after injury, regardless of prior TBI status (which is often not documented or known by clinicians when people seek treatment).

We also acknowledge that those with single or repeat injuries may show different outcomes. To address this, we have conducted additional analyses comparing the 8-year outcomes for men and women who had either single or repeat injuries. These findings are reported in Table 4.

27. The Methods part in terms of outcome measures should be more precise and I suggest the following organization:

1. Neuropsychiatric burden measured by patient-reported outcome measures (PROMs: RPQ, HADS, PCL-C) instead of using “health”

2. community participation (Participation Assessments with Recombined Tools)

3. work (Work Limitations Questionnaire)

• I suggest using the common wording of PROMs

We have reorganised the measures section (p 19 line 192 onwards). We used a TBI screen and the remaining measures could all be classed as PROMS. We have grouped the PROMS under three commonly used categories (as described by Weldring & Smith 2013): symptoms and symptom burden (Rivermead post-concussive symptoms questionnaire), health-related behaviours (Hospital Anxiety and Depression Scale, Posttraumatic Stress Disorder: Civilian Scale) and functional status (Participation with Recombined Tools – Objective, Work Limitations Questionnaire). The description of the TBI screen has been incorporated into the paragraph describing the study specific questions as it is not a main outcome measure.

28. All outcome measures should be revised and particularly cut-off scores should be given.

We have provided further information on the outcome measures and added cut-off scores for the measures where they are available (page 10 line 199 onwards).

29. The paragraphs on assessing community participation and work would benefit from further clarity. Maybe I missed something, but it remained unclear whether those parameters were assessed by self-rating or external ratings? Were the applied instruments validated for the assessed age groups? Further information would be helpful.

All of the data were based on self-report and information about the suitability of the measures, and their development has been added to the measures section. The measures have been validated for this age range and the PART-O was designed for use with a TBI population.

30. I suggest to be careful with the diagnosis of PTSD as you only assessed PTSD symptoms with the PCL-C checklist.

Thank you for pointing this out. We have modified the wording and clarified that the measure was used to screen for the presence and severity of posttraumatic stress symptoms; we have also modified the wording for the HADS, as similarly we were only assessing self-reported symptoms, and it was not a clinical interview.

31. The abstract would benefit from more concise description of the study design, measurement time points, patient- or external-rated assessments, and clear statements for the three outcome measures

1. Neuropsychiatric sequels measured by PROMs (RPQ, HADS, PCL-C)

2. community participation (Participation Assessments with Recombined Tools)

3. work (Work Limitations Questionnaire)

We have restructured the abstract to provide a clearer description of the study design and outcomes

32. The introduction would benefit from a better focus. Overall, the intro should be shorter with focus on mTBI and outcome with respect to neuropsychiatric burdens regarding RPQ, HADS, PTSD as well as community participation and work as well as sex differences; in the current stage the intro is broad and the reader gets somehow lost within lots of information which is not clearly focus on the presented study.

We have re-organised the introduction to describe previous research describing outcomes from mTBI for the measures we used (ie, post-concussive symptoms, anxiety, depression, PTSD, participation and work outcomes). We have added more recent references that incorporate general population samples and several more recent studies examining the interaction between sex and age on outcomes from mTBI. We have removed the more general information that was not of relevance to the study.

33. The methods part is mixed with results (referral to Table 1). The same is relevant for Table 2, which is a result as well. I suggest to merely describe the methods which you used to get the controls. All details about the controls belong to the results part. I think it is a problem that controls and mTBI subjects differed in terms of education and ethnicity as stated above and this should be adopted when possible.

We have restructured the method as suggested and all data and tables have been moved to the results. We carried out some additional matching between the mTBI and comparison group so that the n was the same and there are no longer significant differences between the groups.

34. Table 1 is a result and should be changed in terms of the column order, thereby it would be easier to anticipate which sample was included and which differed significantly (p-values should directly be incorporated). As the analyzed sample is not representative for the initial sample in terms of age, sex distribution and ethics, this is not ideal for data interpretation, and thus results in the current format need to be handled with care and should merely be descriptive. Due to this major limitation, I suggest to get another statical support and recalculate the data by using imputation analysis, or ITT or completer analysis, which might strengthen the conclusions.

We have revised Table 1 to compare the original incidence sample with those completing the 8-year outcome study, and added the inferential statistics. We have included additional variables as requested (injury severity, GCS, education etc). The sample completing the 8-year assessment had a higher proportion of females and a greater proportion of those of NZ European ethnicity, but were similar in age. As can be seen in the table many of the other variables had a large amount of missing data for the incidence sample (as they did not participate in the outcome study and we only had information from medical records). We have acknowledged this as a limitation in the discussion.

We have removed the longitudinal analysis from the paper, so we have not changed the statistical analyses.

35. Could you please improve resolution of images?

The figures have been changed, and we hope the resolution has improved. They are clearer when the image is downloaded rather than viewing it within the pdf

36. Could you please provide an abbreviation list, e.g. for SES p. 5, line 87

Apologies for not writing the term in full. We have checked the manuscript and written each term in full followed by the abbreviation the first time we use it.

37. What is the rationale for defined age groups 16-44 and 45 +? This should be clarified.

The two age groups were based on the findings from the TRACK TBI study. Due to the limited sample size we were unable to divide the group into smaller age ranges as the group sizes would be too small for the analyses. This has been clarified in the statistical analysis section as follows (p 15 line 295):

“The age groups were selected because previous studies reported poorer outcomes in those aged <45 years (39) and this resulted in two relatively evenly sized groups for the current analysis.”

38. Which confounders were assessed to minimize gender factors that might influence the detrimental females’ outcome such as financial inequity, social position, marital status, etc. between sexes?

We have carried out additional analyses comparing males and females in the mTBI and control group for level of education, occupation, and if they are the main income earner (see Table 2). There were no significant associations between gender, group and these variables. In addition, we also explored if the participants reported having enough money to live on (not reported in the manuscript for brevity), and there were no significant associations between group, gender and response to this question

39. Some wording should be double checked, e.g. the “8-year anniversary”, p. 13, line 239

We have re-read the manuscript and clarified the wording where required e.g. p13 line 266:

“Participants with mTBI who had agreed to follow-up were contacted by phone or email 8 years (plus or minus two months) after their injury”

40. The stats part needs revision in terms of primary and secondary outcome measures as indicated above.

We have revised the statistical analysis section to fully describe all of the analyses, including checking the distribution of the data. As explained earlier we did not identify primary and secondary outcome variables, and we have removed the longitudinal analyses.

41. It seems that there were also patients with more than a single mTBI, these should be analyzed separately and not included in this study.

The mTBI cohort was originally identified as part of a population-based epidemiological study of TBI and included those with and without prior TBI. As the overall aim of the study was to explore the symptom burden, health and functional outcomes of this group in comparison to a TBI-free group 8 years post-injury, we have retained the analyses for the whole group, as we think the findings provide useful insights into recovery 8 years after injury, regardless of prior TBI status (which is often not documented or known by clinicians when people seek treatment).

We also acknowledge that those with single or repeat injuries may show different outcomes. To address this, we have conducted additional analyses comparing the 8-year outcomes for men and women who had either single or repeat injuries. These findings are reported in Table 4.

42. Was data normal distributed, descriptive analysis should be given.

We have added an explanation to the statistical analysis section about the distribution of the data (p14 line 283-292). Descriptive data has been included in the tables and the figures (the descriptives for the item-based analyses are in the supplementary table).

“Data were imported from Qualtrics into IBM SPSS version 27 and screened for missing values and outliers. Chi square goodness of fit tests were conducted to check the representativeness of the sample participating in the study at 8 years with the original incidence sample. Descriptive statistics, supplemented by chi square or ANOVA were used to compare the demographic characteristics of the males and females in the mTBI and comparison group. Prior to the main analysis we checked the distribution of the data and found that data from the RPQ, HADS and PCL-C were positively skewed. However, as the data were similarly skewed for each group, the sample sizes were reasonable, the data did not violate the homogeneity of variance assumptions, and ANOVA is considered robust to violations of normality, we considered it appropriate to use parametric analyses. (62, 63)”

43. In the result part absolute numbers e.g. for the RPQ should be interpreted in terms of the given cut-offs in the literature. For example, it should be stated whether patients had a manifest post-concussion syndrome. For definitions see e.g. Riemann et al. 2021 (DOI: 10.3171/2020.9.PEDS20421).

We had stated that 30.5% of the mTBI group endorsed four or more symptoms as being at least a moderate problem as compared to 14.6% of the comparison group but had neglected to explain the meaning of these scores. We have added an explanation of the cut-off scores to the measures section (i.e., a score of 3 or higher on four or more items was used to determine if participants met the DSM-IV symptom criteria for post-concussive disorder). We have used these criteria in previous publications. We have also explained these findings in the results and carried out additional chi-square tests to compare males and females in the mTBI and comparison groups for the RPQ and the HADS.

44. The current literature should be updated, e.g. include references from doi.org/10.1016/S1474-4422(17)30371-X; doi.org/10.1186/s12955-020-01391-3; doi.org/10.1007/s11357-020-00273-2

We have carried out another literature search and added more recent references as appropriate (including those suggested by the reviewers and recent publications on sex x age interactions after mTBI from the TRACK-TBI team).

45. I assume that the authors are English native speakers. However, some parts of the manuscript would benefit from scientific/ language editing aiming a concise scientific English language.

We have tried to make the wording more concise throughout.

Reviewer 2

This is an interesting article focusing on the long-term consequences of mild TBI in context of sex or gender. Because of the inclusion of a comparison group, long follow-up, inclusion of mild TBI patients from a broad range of settings, and the analysis of the longitudinal trajectory, this study could contribute to the literature in the field.

However, there are some important limitations and concerns related to the analyses, reporting of the results and interpretation/ implications of the results.

Analysis and reporting of the results:

46. The analyses do not adequately adjust for differences in ethnicity and education, although the authors state themselves in the Introduction that these differences can be related to outcomes.

As the comparison sample was larger than the group with mTBI, we carried out additional matching on occupation. This reduced the sample size to 151 (the same as the mTBI group) and there were no significant differences between the groups for ethnicity or education (or any other demographic variables) as shown in Table 2 (p 18)

47. The characteristics of participants are not reported in sufficient detail: characteristics of mTBI patients (GCS, mechanism of injury, prior TBI etc.) should be added to Table 1., so that it is visible how they relate to attrition.

We have added this information to Table 1 (p16) and compare the sample completing the study at 8 years post-injury with the incidence sample (n=870). There is a large amount of missing data as we were not able to contact all of the incidence sample and the only information available was from medical records.

48. The characteristics of participants are not reported for all subgroups (e.g. group by sex) being compared (Table 2).

We have revised Table 2 to provide information about the demographic characteristics of the sub-groups of participants (p18)

49. Statistically insignificant results and associated average results are not reported, as they should be, at least in Supplement.

We have simplified Table 1 and now only compare the incidence sample with the sample completing the study at 8 years post-injury. The table now includes all of the descriptive and inferential statistics.

The descriptive and inferential statistics for the item-level analysis are included in a supplementary Table (Table S1, p 44-45)

50. It is not clear if other relevant medical history and sociodemographic characteristics were measured in this study: if yes, they should be reported and included in the analyses. If not, that should be discussed in detail as limitation.

Apologies for not including this in the earlier version of the manuscript. We collected a wide range of medical and sociodemographic data (e.g., GCS, CT scan, occupation, main income earner, major medical diagnoses) from the mTBI sample and this has been incorporated into Tables 1 and 2. (p16 and p 18)

51. Sex or gender is very important in this study but it is not explained how exactly was measured.

This is a very good point, sorry for the omission. For cases identified through the hospital or medical provider we extracted demographic details from the medical records and verified when participants were invited to take part in the TBI outcome study. We have added this information to the method section (p9 lines 172-175)

Discussion and conclusion

52. The results are not sufficiently interpreted in regard to study population/ characteristics of the included participants, methodological limitations and the literature in the field. The study limitations should be discussed thoroughly. Plausible explanations and clinical implications of the results should be also discussed.

We have added a strengths and limitations section in the discussion that includes discussion of the study population and how it compares to those identified in the original incidence study. This also includes discussion of our modifications to the RPQ, the suitability of the TBI free comparison group and the use of self-report assessments (p32 lines 549-578).

We have compared the current findings with outcomes at earlier time points, and it seems that symptoms have not improved much from 12 months post-injury. This suggests that early intervention is the key to preventing long-term symptom burden. Of note only 6 participants in our 4 year follow up reported any type of treatment for their injury (beyond the first medical presentation for the injury). (page 30 line 501 onwards).

Females with repeat mTBI appear most at risk for ongoing symptoms burden (in terms of the proportion exceeding the clinical cut-offs for the RPQ, HADS and PCL-C). The proportion of participants exceeding the clinical cut-offs for the depression/anxiety/PTSD scales far exceeds the number reporting a diagnosed psychiatric condition, suggesting that there may be a significant number of people with undiagnosed mental health issues. Given the complex interplay of psychosocial factors in post-concussion symptoms as well as depression and anxiety, early intervention after concussion to ensure that symptoms have fully resolved may be key to preventing long-term symptom burden.

In more detail:

53. Abstract: the conclusion and the implications of your results are not clearly stated.

We have restructured the abstract and added a conclusion and a sentence about the implications of the findings (page 3 lines 46-50):

“Thus, at 8-years post-mTBI, people continued to report high symptom burden, and some impacts on work. Women with mTBI, particularly those with a history of prior TBI had the greatest symptom burden. When treating mTBI it is important to assess TBI history as this may help to identify those at greatest risk of poor long-term outcomes to direct early treatment and intervention.”

54. Introduction: there are couple of other studies in general population, and a recent study in TRACK-TBI data that does include a comparison group and could be mentioned.

Thank you for letting us know about the recent TRACT-TBI publication. We have updated the literature and added several recent publications including those from the CENTER-TBI and TRACK-TBI teams

55. I suggest finding a different wording instead of “mood outcomes”

As suggested by reviewer 1 we have renamed the outcome measures as PROMS and have grouped them under three commonly used categories (as described by Weldring & Smith 2013): symptoms and symptom burden (Rivermead post-concussive symptoms questionnaire), health-related behaviours (Hospital Anxiety and Depression Scale, Posttraumatic Stress Disorder: Civilian Scale) and functional status (Participation with Recombined Tools – Objective, Work Limitations Questionnaire).

56. The authors talk about men and women, but about “sex” and not “gender”. How was this variable measured and how is the term understood by the authors?

Apologies for the lack of precision in the language. We recorded the sex of the TBI cases from medical records, and checked the accuracy of the information with the participants in the outcome studies. We have tried to be more accurate throughout the paper and we are describing biological sex differences, not gender differences.

57. There are differences in education and ethnicity. “The MTBI and Comparison group differed in terms of ethnicity and education, but as these were true group differences it was deemed inappropriate to include these variables as covariates in the analyses.(48, 49)”But it is stated (correctly) in the Introduction that “a range of factors including age, minority ethnicity, lower levels of education, and SESare linked to poorer outcomes” . Therefore, if you would like to compare outcomes in groups with history/no history of TBI, they should be adjusted based on these factors (ethnicity, education), in the way you are incorporating age. Otherwise, you cannot know if the (lack of) difference is due to TBI status or differences in education and ethnicity. In addition, considering the recruitment and data collection process, how can you know that “these were the true group differences”?

We have carried out additional matching with the comparison group and there are now no significant differences between the mTBI and comparison groups. In the previous version of the manuscript we were trying the explain why it wasn’t appropriate to control for the differences between the groups even though they are important in terms of outcomes from TBI. When the covariate and experimental effect are not independent in can produce unreliable analyses, and make the analyses hard to interpret. Essentially, we cannot separate the variances of the effect of mTBI from those of SES or ethnicity. We are aware that a lot of people do use ANCOVA in this way (i.e., adding a covariate to control for group differences), but it is not strictly correct (see Miller & Chapman 2001 for a paper on misuses of ANCOVA).

58. Descriptive characteristics e.g. sex and ethnicity are not presented for subgroups you analyze (separately for women with/without TBI, for men with/without TBI ). In addition, are there other available information for the groups?

We have included the sociodemographic characteristics of the sub-groups in Table 2 (p 18).

59. What are the characteristics of participants who did and did not complete the 8-year measurement in terms of GCS, mechanism of injury, CT abnormalities?

We have provided additional information in Table 1 (p16). We have simplified the Table and just carried out analyses between the original incidence sample and those completing the assessment at 8-years post-injury. Unfortunately there is quite a lot of missing data as some information was not available in medical records.

60. Reporting results based on p-values is inappropriate. I would like to see average values for all compared subgroups at least in Supplement.

We have included all of the descriptive and inferential statistics in Table 1. Additional information for the item level analyses is reported in the supplementary table (p 44-45)

61. Why the comparison “TBI-free group” was not compared with the 1-month and 1-year results of the mTBI group?

We have removed the longitudinal analyses from the paper, and now include analyses of single and multiple TBI. We could not compare the TBI-free group with the sample at earlier injury points because they would not match on age (the TBI-free group was only recruited at the 8-year time point).

62. - The RPQ was used differently (without the comparison before the injury) than in other TBI studies- that should be noted in the Discussion and related to the observed average scores.

We have noted this as a limitation in the discussion (p33 lines 573-578). Under normal circumstances responses of 1 are not included in the total score, so the scores can be directly compared to other published studies.

63. Is it possible to report and include in the analysis other very important factors: psychiatric and general medical history/ health status? If not, this should be discussed in detail as a limitation. How could that influence the results and comparison between groups?

We have added information about medical diagnoses to Table 2. Unfortunately, we did not collect this information from the comparison group, and have noted this as a limitation in the discussion (page 32 line 566). Interestingly there was no significant differences in the proportion of males and females in the mTBI group in terms of prior diagnoses Table 2 (page 18).

64. The average age is relatively low, and the percentage of prior mTBI and the percentage of mechanical force-induced injuries is high. Does it mean that the study included substantial percentage of sport or work- related injuries in young adults/adolescents? How could this influence the results in the context of age?

The sample was identified as part of an epidemiological study of the incidence and outcome from TBI (across all ages and severities), and therefore reflects the characteristics of the injuries occurring in New Zealand in 2010-2011. As it was an epidemiological study we identified mTBI cases that did not seek medical care, so this may explain why our sample is somewhat different to others that have focused solely on cases presenting to hospital. Rates of TBI were highest in children, adolescents and young adults (0-34 years) (Feigin et al (2013). Of the 1369 cases identified 291 were sustained during sport, and 39% or these were in children aged <16 years and were not included in this study (Theadom et al, 2014). The sample identification process may mean that we have a greater number of ‘mild’ mTBI in our sample as they may not typically be included in other outcomes studies, but then we would expect there to be few long-term effects which doesn’t seem to be the case.

We know that the environment / injury management immediately post-injury is crucial in ensuring a good recovery and to reduce the possibility of subsequent injuries. However, there are numerous papers describing the risk-taking behaviour of adolescents and young adults and this may well be a contributing factor to the relatively poor outcomes observed. In addition, the incidence study was conducted ten years ago. Knowledge about the potential negative consequences of concussion/mTBI has grown enormously over the last ten years (in terms of management and the general public’s understanding of concussion), and it is possible that ten years ago these injuries were not taken as seriously, and things that are now taken for granted (such as time off from sport) did not form part of the recommendations. This has been noted in the discussion (p30, line 514).

65. It is not discussed how the time could influence the results- e.g. maybe sex x group differences exist 3-6 months after injury but disappear with time (maybe not)?

This is a good point. We have raised this issue in the discussion (p 30, line 507-510). Data from the same cohort at 12 months post-injury showed that female sex was a significant predictor of poor outcomes across a number of domains (RPQ, HRQoL, anxiety and GOS), but this was not the case at 4 years post-injury suggesting that perhaps the sex differences diminish over-time (or it may be due to participant attrition).

66. Moreover, discuss why you would expect symptoms after mild TBI so long as 8 years after injury.

- How the patterns can be explained? Why women with mild TBI showed more PTSD symptoms and time-related work demands? How come that symptoms do not change from 1 year to 8 year?

The revised analysis indicates that a significantly greater proportion of females exceed the cut-offs across a number of measures compared to males. We have suggested that this may be due to either lack of early intervention, or possibly undetected anxiety/depression (p 31 line 536 onwards) which is linked to higher symptom burden. Only 14.9% of females had a formal mental health diagnosis but a much greater proportion exceeded the HADS and PCL cut-offs. The additional analyses revealed that females with multiple TBI appear to be at the greatest risk of poor outcomes.

67. To what degree could that be related to the characteristics of responders?

We have compared the characteristics of the incidence sample and the those completing the assessment at 8-years post-injury. The 8-year sample appeared to be more highly educated and were more likely to have professional or skilled jobs, but there was a lot of missing data so it is hard to draw firm conclusions. There were no significant differences between the males and females in the mTBI group with regard to other health diagnoses, occupation etc so it seems unlikely that these factors could explain the outcomes. Unfortunately, we did not obtain information about health conditions from the control group, but will in future follow-up studies. It is possible that those who completed the 8 year follow up have more ongoing symptoms that those who didn’t, but this is impossible to assess. In all of our interactions with the participants we stress that we want to know how everyone is doing – whether they think they have ongoing symptoms or not.

68. Age comparisons (age subgroups)- 8 years is a long time. What is more important, the age of injury or 8 years after, considering relevant biological and social factors?

We think age at injury, rather then current age is more important in outcomes. The immediate post-injury environment plays a key role in outcomes from mTBI, particularly not doing too much too soon, and also taking steps to reduce the likelihood of a second injury. In terms of sex differences, the interaction between the chemical cascade produced as a result of injury and sex hormones may also play a role, albeit the research about whether female hormones are protective is contradictory. In the post-injury period, other broader psychosocial factors likely come into play, such as stress, pre-existing health conditions etc.

69. What are the implications of the results for clinical practice and patients with mild TBI?

We think it is crucial to provide appropriate post-injury advice to minimise a subsequent injury, instructions about a gradual return to normal activities, as well as clear information about when (and where) to seek further help and support if the symptoms do not seem to be improving. Females who have prior TBI appear to be a greatest risk of poor outcomes so asking about prior TBI would help identify those at greatest risk of long-term symptoms as well as screening for mental health issues. This information has been incorporated into the discussion (p34, lines 592-596).

We hope these extensive changes have addressed your concerns,

Kind regards,

Professor Nicola Starkey

Decision Letter 1

Anna-Leena Sirén

14 Feb 2022

PONE-D-21-27103R1

Sex differences in outcomes from mild traumatic brain injury eight years post-injury.

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Reviewer #1: Dear authors,

thank you very much for your immense work and effort that have improved your manuscript significantly. However, I have minor suggestions that would help to improve the manuscript further:

• Please provide another orthographic check

• Please double check some wording and grammar by another scientific English native proofread

• I suggest adapting the last part of the abstract and the conclusion by being as specific and congruent in terms of the key results and messages.

• I suggest differing between single mTBI and repetitive mTBI throughout the manuscript

Thank you very much for your effort.

Reviewer #2: I congratulate the authors on a thorough revision. The focus of the study is more clear now.

Abstract- It appears to be too extensive, I suggest describing the results in a more condensed/ summarized manner, and indicating only the most important results. Only the p-values have been reported- it would be more appropriate to report less results but more information: F, df, or effect sizes.

Introduction – More relevant studies are included now. However, it would profit from shortening and summarizing.

Methods- Risk of complications after mild TBI: What kind of complications- Intracranial abnormalities or symptoms (based on the factors mentioned it seems intracranial abnormalities)? I suggest describing more clearly.

Multiple comparisons are quite relevant here, particularly because the authors put a lot of emphasis on statistical significance. What did the authors do to to correct for multiple comparisons? It should be described better how the p-values were obtained and reported.

Depression, anxiety and PTSD do not seem part of “health-related behaviors” but rather “symptoms and symptoms burden”.

Results

Table 1- what does “CT scan” mean?

Table 2- is comparison for “main earner” is correct- who is compared? What was tested in “Health”? The sex difference in psychiatric diseases seems considerable! What did you test exactly- it is not clear from the table.

Injury severity is described by sample (incidence/ complete) but not by sex for mTBI. Why?

“In contrast, a significantly greater proportion of women in the mTBI group met the DSM-IV symptom criteria than in the comparison group (X 2 347 (1) = 10.63, p<.01).”- Why in contrast? The difference is in the same direction, and the sample of women is larger.

There is too much emphasis on statistical significance and not on size of differences or effect sizes. The size effects are calculated but not commented, and percentages/ number of participants should be consistently reported.

Figures- sample sizes should be clearly stated.

Discussion- You mention the results of other timepoints of this study, which is appropriate and interesting-they should be introduced more clearly in the Introduction.

“The data was self-report which may be subject to bias”- but these are patient reported outcomes, they should be self-report.

Could the lack of age difference be due to not controlling for injury severity?

Limitations: It would be good to mention different percentages of males and females at 8 years and missing data on injury. In addition, lack of statistical differences between males and females in a relatively small sample does not mean that the differences were not there and do not matter (also, it is not clear if the authors tested differences between group or sex in Table 2)- importantly, there is a considerable difference in the percentage of psychiatric disorders.

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


31 Mar 2022

31st March 2022

Dear Professor Sirén,

Re: PONE-D-21-27103R1

Sex differences in outcomes from mild traumatic brain injury eight years post-injury.

Thank you for the comments on the revised version of the paper. We have outlined how we have addressed your comments and those of the reviewers in the letter below. Please note that the page and line numbers refer to the tracked changes version of the paper. Please let me know if you need any further information,

Kind regards,

Professor Nicola Starkey

Responses to the Editor’s comments

1. Shorten the abstract and specify the conclusions providing the key message of your study.

We have shortened the abstract and focused on reporting the most important results. We have incorporated the statistical results into the abstract as appropriate (as requested by R2).

2. Use the definitions “single mTBI” and “repetitive mTBI” throughout the manuscript.

We have changed this throughout the manuscript

3. Specify complications that you consider as increased risk in Methods.

The sub-classification of mTBI severity is based on the risk of developing intracranial hematoma. This has been included in the methods (p9, line 172).

4. Include in statistical analysis the method you used to correct for multiple comparisons.

We have explained that we used a Bonferronni correction (p15 line 314) and have added/commented on effect size throughout the results

5. Check headers and legends in Tables for clarity and add sample size to Figure Legends.

We have provided more detailed descriptions for the table headers, and added more detail to the Figure legends, including the sample size and the cut-off scores. We have also indicated on the Figures which groups are significantly different.

6. In Discussion elaborate more in detail on the limitations of the study and discuss the impact of gender and age on your findings.

We have elaborated on the limitations of the study, in particular the lower percentage of males, and those of Maori ethnicity in the 8 year follow up sample. We have also highlighted that our sample size limited our ability to explore fully the effects of age on outcomes (page 37).

7. Proofread the text for accurate scientific language

We have carefully proof read the paper.

Responses to Reviewer #1:

1. Please provide another orthographic check

We have double checked the spelling and abbreviations

2. Please double check some wording and grammar by another scientific English native proofread

The wording has been simplified throughout

3. I suggest adapting the last part of the abstract and the conclusion by being as specific and congruent in terms of the key results and messages.

The abstract has been shortened to make it more focused on the key findings and conclusions (pages 2-3).

4. I suggest differing between single mTBI and repetitive mTBI throughout the manuscript

Thank you for that suggestion – it’s a much simpler way to refer to the two groups. We have changed this throughout the manuscript

Response to Reviewer #2:

I congratulate the authors on a thorough revision. The focus of the study is more clear now.

1. Abstract- It appears to be too extensive, I suggest describing the results in a more condensed/ summarized manner, and indicating only the most important results. Only the p-values have been reported- it would be more appropriate to report less results but more information: F, df, or effect sizes.

We have shortened the abstract as suggested and focus on the key findings. We have incorporated the statistical results as appropriate.

2. Introduction – More relevant studies are included now. However, it would profit from shortening and summarizing.

We have shortened the introduction and removed the less relevant information (e.g. p 5 lines 87-92; p 6 lines 115-123)

3. Methods- Risk of complications after mild TBI: What kind of complications- Intracranial abnormalities or symptoms (based on the factors mentioned it seems intracranial abnormalities)? I suggest describing more clearly.

Sorry for the lack of clarity. The categorisation of mTBI was based on the risk of developing intracranial hematoma. This has been clarified p 9 line 172

4. Multiple comparisons are quite relevant here, particularly because the authors put a lot of emphasis on statistical significance. What did the authors do to correct for multiple comparisons? It should be described better how the p-values were obtained and reported.

The Bonferonni correction was used to adjust for multiple comparisons for the item level analyses (i.e., the p value, .05, was divided by the number of items on the measure). This has been clarified p 15 line 314

5. Depression, anxiety and PTSD do not seem part of “health-related behaviors” but rather “symptoms and symptoms burden”.

We have removed the title “health-related behaviours” so that depression, anxiety and PTSD are part of the “symptoms and symptom burden” section

Results

6. Table 1- what does “CT scan” mean?

It is the number (%) of cases that had a CT scan. We have changed the row heading to ‘CT scan conducted’ to make it clear to the reader

7. Table 2- is comparison for “main earner” is correct- who is compared?

The analysis compares males and females who are the main income earners in the TBI and comparison group. A contingency table was produced to calculate the chi square statistic and z tests were calculated to compare column proportions (i.e., between males and females). We have removed the ‘No’ row for clarity.

8. What was tested in “Health”? The sex difference in psychiatric diseases seems considerable! What did you test exactly- it is not clear from the table.

The health section of Table 2 provides details of the participants previous or co-morbid diagnoses. Participants were assigned a code based on the health conditions they reported (e.g. cardiovascular disease, diabetes, seizure). A contingency table was produced for the observed frequencies for each diagnosis for males and females, and a z-test was used to compare cell counts across the column proportions (i.e. between males and females). We have now re-run the analyses as separate tests for each diagnosis for clarity and added Cramer’s V as a measure of effect size. The difference in psychiatric diagnosis was not statistically significant but did show a small to moderate effect size.

9. Injury severity is described by sample (incidence/ complete) but not by sex for mTBI. Why?

This was an oversight and has now been added to Table 2. There was no significant association between injury severity and sex in the mTBI group.

10. “In contrast, a significantly greater proportion of women in the mTBI group met the DSM-IV symptom criteria than in the comparison group (X 2 347 (1) = 10.63, p<.01).”- Why in contrast? The difference is in the same direction, and the sample of women is larger.

We have reworded this section of the results and simplified the wording throughout the results section to avoid contradictory statements.

11. There is too much emphasis on statistical significance and not on size of differences or effect sizes. The size effects are calculated but not commented, and percentages/ number of participants should be consistently reported. Figures- sample sizes should be clearly stated

We have included comment on the effect sizes throughout the results section and calculated Cramer’s V as an effect size for the Chi-square tests. In most cases the statistically significant findings had larger effect sizes.

We have reported the number and percentage of participants in the text only where it is not reported in the table. We have added the total sample size to Tables 3 and 4. Both Tables includes a footnote to indicate that the sample size for the work limitations questionnaire was smaller as the measure was only completed by those in employment. We have also expanded the descriptions of the Tables and added more details to the Figure legends, including the sample sizes.

12. Discussion- You mention the results of other timepoints of this study, which is appropriate and interesting-they should be introduced more clearly in the Introduction.

We have amended the introduction to highlight earlier findings from the same cohort (by stating in our previous research, or findings from the BIONIC cohort) – p4, line 78; p 5 line 85, line 99

13. “The data was self-report which may be subject to bias”- but these are patient reported outcomes, they should be self-report.

We agree and have deleted this statement. It was included at the suggestion of a previous reviewer.

14. Could the lack of age difference be due to not controlling for injury severity?

We think it is unlikely – we ran a one-way Anova comparing the mean age of each injury severity group and it was not significant and had a small effect size. I do think sample size is an issue though – we need a much larger sample to properly explore the impact of age at injury, and I have added a comment about this in the limitations section (page 37, line 651-655)

15. Limitations: It would be good to mention different percentages of males and females at 8 years and missing data on injury.

We have added further information about the differences between the incidence cohort and the 8-year sample, as well as the lack of information about injury severity (i.e. GCS) in the discussion section (p36-37, line 636-641, line 644).

16. In addition, lack of statistical differences between males and females in a relatively small sample does not mean that the differences were not there and do not matter (also, it is not clear if the authors tested differences between group or sex in Table 2)- importantly, there is a considerable difference in the percentage of psychiatric disorders.

We agree and have further emphasised our small sample as a limitation of the study (p 37 line 651-655. For Table 2 we carried out chi-square tests and used z test to compare the column proportions (i.e., sex differences). There were no statistically significant differences between the proportions of males and females for either group.

Decision Letter 2

Anna-Leena Sirén

4 May 2022

PONE-D-21-27103R2Sex differences in outcomes from mild traumatic brain injury eight years post-injury.PLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Starkey,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Please clarify the unclear sentence “38.1% of the sample met the cut-offs for anxiety and/or depression on the HADS at 12 months post-injury (similar to rates observed in community samples in our previous research; 7.7% for depression, 13.6% for anxiety which decreased to 32.1% four 72 years post-injury” in the Introduction as suggested by the Reviewer 1.

Please in methods that mTBI was not defined strictly according to the American Congress of Rehabilitation Medicine criteria and cite the correct literature for these criteria.

Please use systematically the term mTBI for mild traumatic brain injury.

Please correct the orthographic mistakes throughout the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: Dear authors,

thank you very much for your efforts that clarified your manuscript. However, I have still minor suggestions that would help to improve the manuscript further:

• There are still minor orthographic mistakes, such as spaces, double points, etc. The authors should thoroughly double check this or it should be done by PLOS One during the final editing. Please see further minor points that need corrections:

Within the introduction (page 4, line 67) the term mild TBI should be replaced by mTBI. The sentence (page 5, line 73) should start with a capital letter, thus MTBI. NZ population (page 5, line 80) should be introduced as New Zealand… when used for the first time.

• Content-wise: the intro (p.4-5, lines 67-72) should be clarified as the following sentence is somehow confusing: “38.1% of the sample met the cut-offs for anxiety and/or depression on the HADS at 12 months post-injury (similar to rates observed in community samples in our previous research; 7.7% for depression, 13.6% for anxiety which decreased to 32.1% four 72 years post-injury”

Most probably the authors meant that the initial 38.1% of mixed anxiety and/or depressive symptoms decreased by 6% between year 1 and 4 after mTBI. Why did the authors mention the community samples, is this sample a mixed sample of TBI positive and negative humans? It would be particularly of interest whether the portion of psychiatric symptoms was increased in comparison to the general population. Please, could the authors clarify this point?

• Methods (page 8, lines 141-143): as mTBI was not clearly defined according to the ACRM criteria, this should be stated in the limitation part (lack of information on the time of loss of consciousness). I am very sorry for not having this mentioned before. Please see references: Medicine ACoR. Definition of mild traumatic brain injury. Journal of Head Trauma Rehabilitation. 1993;8(3):86-87; Silverberg ND, Iverson GL. Expert Panel Survey to Update the American Congress of Rehabilitation Medicine Definition of Mild Traumatic Brain Injury. Archives of physical medicine and rehabilitation. 2021;102(1):76-86;

Besides of the definition of mild TBI, my comments are minor issues. Thanks for your effort researching long-term outcome after mTBI that provides important information for patients, clinicians, and future research.

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Author response to Decision Letter 2


9 May 2022

Dear Anna-Leena Sirén,

Re:PONE-D-21-27103R2

Sex differences in outcomes from mild traumatic brain injury eight years post-injury.

PLOS ONE

Thank you for the helpful editor’s and reviewer’s comments on our revised manuscript. We have explained how we have addressed each of the comments below and hope the manuscript is now acceptable for publication in PlOS ONE.

Editor’s comments

1. Please clarify the unclear sentence “38.1% of the sample met the cut-offs for anxiety and/or depression on the HADS at 12 months post-injury (similar to rates observed in community samples in our previous research; 7.7% for depression, 13.6% for anxiety which decreased to 32.1% four 72 years post-injury” in the Introduction as suggested by the Reviewer 1.

We have revised the wording as follows:

“38.1% of the sample met the cut-offs for anxiety and or depression on the HADS at 12 months post-injury (2.2% depression, 25.5% anxiety, 10.2% depression and anxiety) which decreased to 32.1% four years post-injury (7.7% depression only, 13.6 % anxiety only and 11.8% depression and anxiety), similar to rates observed in community samples.”

2. Please in methods that mTBI was not defined strictly according to the American Congress of Rehabilitation Medicine criteria and cite the correct literature for these criteria.

We have added this to the limitations sections as suggested by the reviewer (p 36, line 598-600):

“contact. In addition, we used WHO criteria to define mTBI, not the American Congress of Rehabilitation, which includes the presence of observable signs and subjective symptoms (dizziness, confusion) [60, 61]. “

3. Please use systematically the term mTBI for mild traumatic brain injury.

Corrected throughout

4. Please correct the orthographic mistakes throughout the manuscript.

Corrected

Response to the reviewer

1. There are still minor orthographic mistakes, such as spaces, double points, etc. The authors should thoroughly double check this or it should be done by PLOS One during the final editing.

We have checked this again and corrected all of the issues we could find including the reference format and punctuation around the brackets.

2. Within the introduction (page 4, line 67) the term mild TBI should be replaced by mTBI.

We have corrected this

3. The sentence (page 5, line 73) should start with a capital letter, thus MTBI.

Corrected

4. NZ population (page 5, line 80) should be introduced as New Zealand… when used for the first time.

Corrected

5. Content-wise: the intro (p.4-5, lines 67-72) should be clarified as the following sentence is somehow confusing: “Most probably the authors meant that the initial 38.1% of mixed anxiety and/or depressive symptoms decreased by 6% between year 1 and 4 after mTBI. Why did the authors mention the community samples, is this sample a mixed sample of TBI positive and negative humans? It would be particularly of interest whether the portion of psychiatric symptoms was increased in comparison to the general population. Please, could the authors clarify this point?

Apologies for this – we agree it doesn’t make sense and I suspect it happened when we shortened the introduction. Your interpretation is correct, rates decreased by 6% between 1- and 4-years post-injury. It was not a mixed TBI and community sample. At 4 years post-injury the rates of anxiety and depression were similar to those observed in community samples.

We have now reworded it as follows and added details about rates for anxiety, depression, and comorbid illness separately (pages 4-5 lines 71- 76):

“38.1% of the sample met the cut-offs for anxiety and or depression on the HADS at 12 months post-injury (2.2% depression, 25.5% anxiety, 10.2% depression and anxiety) which decreased to 32.1% four years post-injury (7.7% depression only, 13.6 % anxiety only and 11.8% depression and anxiety), similar to rates observed in community samples.”

6. Methods (page 8, lines 141-143): as mTBI was not clearly defined according to the ACRM criteria, this should be stated in the limitation part (lack of information on the time of loss of consciousness). I am very sorry for not having this mentioned before. Please see references: Medicine ACoR. Definition of mild traumatic brain injury. Journal of Head Trauma Rehabilitation. 1993;8(3):86-87; Silverberg ND, Iverson GL. Expert Panel Survey to Update the American Congress of Rehabilitation Medicine Definition of Mild Traumatic Brain Injury. Archives of physical medicine and rehabilitation. 2021;102(1):76-86;

Thank you for the citations. We have added the following to the limitations section (p 36, line 598-600):

“contact. In addition, we used WHO criteria to define mTBI, not the American Congress of Rehabilitation, which includes the presence of observable signs and subjective symptoms (dizziness, confusion) [60, 61]. “

Please let me know if you need any additional information,

Yours sincerely,

Professor Nicola Starkey

Email: nstarkey@waikato.ac.nz

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Decision Letter 3

Anna-Leena Sirén

16 May 2022

Sex differences in outcomes from mild traumatic brain injury eight years post-injury.

PONE-D-21-27103R3

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thank you very much for your thorough work and important contribution in terms of return to work after mild TBI.

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18 May 2022

PONE-D-21-27103R3

Sex differences in outcomes from mild traumatic brain injury eight years post-injury.

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    Data Availability Statement

    There are ethical restrictions on sharing of de-identified data for this study. We do not have the participants' or ethics committee's permission to share their anonymous data. The dataset includes sensitive information, and given the nature of the data and the relatively small region of data collection the participants may be identifiable despite efforts to annonymise the data. Qualified and interested researchers may request access to the data by contacting University of Waikato Ethics Committee (humanethics@waikato.ac.nz.)


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