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. 2022 Jun 10;17(6):e0269794. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0269794

Visual control during climbing: Variability in practice fosters a proactive gaze pattern

Guillaume Hacques 1,*, Matt Dicks 2, John Komar 3, Ludovic Seifert 1,4
Editor: Greg Wood5
PMCID: PMC9187105  PMID: 35687600

Abstract

In climbing, the visual system is confronted with a dual demand: controlling ongoing movement and searching for upcoming movement possibilities. The aims of the present research were: (i) to investigate the effect of different modes of practice on how learners deal with this dual demand; and (ii) to analyze the extent this effect may facilitate transfer of learning to a new climbing route. The effect of a constant practice, an imposed schedule of variations and a self-controlled schedule of variations on the gaze behaviors and the climbing fluency of novices were compared. Results showed that the constant practice group outperformed the imposed variability group on the training route and the three groups climbing fluency on the transfer route did not differ. Analyses of the gaze behaviors showed that the constant practice group used more online gaze control during the last session whereas the imposed variability group relied on a more proactive gaze control. This last gaze pattern was also used on the transfer route by the imposed variability group. Self-controlled variability group displayed more interindividual differences in gaze behaviors. These findings reflect that learning protocols induce different timing for gaze patterns that may differently facilitate adaptation to new climbing routes.

Introduction

During the realization of complex everyday skill, gaze behaviors appear to smoothly support movement, but the acquisition of how learners acquire skill-relevant gaze patterns remains an under researched area [1, 2]. Complex situations, such as walking over rough terrain, commonly comprise a series of actions where the visual system is confronted with a dual-demand: (i) the accurate control of the current movement; and (ii) the anticipatory search for environmental demands that will constrain future movements [3, 4]. Studies have revealed a trade-off between the two demands that are modified to adapt to the immediate spatiotemporal conditions [57]. For example, when walking on different terrains, walkers adapt their gaze behavior to the difficulty of the surfaces [5]. This adaptation enables walkers to perform accurate foot placement on stable locations and to maintain an efficient locomotion pattern. However, it remains unclear whether different practice conditions can invite learners to acquire gaze patterns that are oriented towards one demand or the other. The current study aims to assess the effects of a constant and two variable practice conditions on the performance and gaze behaviors of learners in climbing to further understand how the visual control of action adapts to different practice conditions and how this may facilitate the transfer of learning.

The timing of information pick-up and the dual demand on gaze control

When performing a continuous action in natural settings, the question of when and where to look in order to correctly control movement is of central importance. As information pick-up is dynamic, performers need to attend to the right information at the right time to guide skilled behavior [8]. The performer must find a balance between exploiting information for controlling their current movement and monitoring the environment for information that may constrain future movements [3, 5]. Walking across successive foot targets and walking over rough terrain represent paradigms that have been used to better understand how the visual system guides foot placement towards immediate and prospective targets [3, 6, 9, 10]. Research across these paradigms shows that the spatial demands of stepping accuracy impacts upon gaze behavior: the more accurate the performer’s step needs to be, the more they use online control of their movements [5, 6]. The constraints are also temporal as the availability of visual information is necessary in critical phases of the step cycle to accurately perform foot placement and to maintain energetically efficient locomotion [10, 11]. Although dealing with this dual demand is necessary for everyone, it appears that skill level influences how individuals visually control their actions. For example, older adults who were identified as potential “fallers”, responded to the dual-demand when approaching the target with a maladaptive gaze behavior that contributed to their poor stepping accuracy (and potential fall): their gaze shifted towards the next target before their heel had touched the ground in the immediate target [9]. In contrast, younger adults who were not at risk of a fall adopted a gaze pattern that resulted in them looking at the target until heel contact [9]. Thus, for precise visual control, it appears important to adopt a gaze pattern that prioritizes the accurate control of the current movement.

There is, however, evidence, which also points to conditions when gaze patterns are oriented towards future environmental conditions. For example, the visual control of movements when avoiding obstacles appears to change during development that coincide with the acquisition of different modes of locomotion [12]. For instance, infants that crawl or walk appear to rely more on the online visual guidance of their movements than children and adults who are able to proactively gaze toward obstacles (i.e., they can avoid obstacles while looking elsewhere) [12, 13]. Regarding the dual-demand, the proactive control of movements enables children and adults to anticipate what is coming ahead of them while infants–who are comparatively novices–needed to perform the actions one-by-one utilizing online control. Thus, the dual-demand on visual control can be affected by practice and coincides with the acquisition of motor skills.

In the realization of complex skills, performers are also often constrained by a dual-demand. For example, climbers need to control their ongoing movement while looking forward on the route to anticipate future movements. Climbing locomotion is performed on a vertical plane and climbers need to find support surfaces on the wall (the handholds and footholds) on which to apply forces to climb up the route while maintaining their balance with one to four points of contact (the hands and feet) [14]. In this context, the visual system is used (i) to locate the support surfaces on the wall, and (ii) to perceive and act on the opportunities for action that these supports and their configuration on the wall afford to the climber. Two studies have investigated the effect of practice on climbers’ gaze behaviors [15, 16]. The first study showed that after 6 trials, the number of fixations during ascents decreased without affecting the search rate (i.e., the number of fixations divided by the total duration of fixation) [15]. The second study investigated the changes in gaze behaviors of learners before and after performing 30 trials on the same climbing route (over 10 sessions). This study also assessed the transfer of learning by using three other routes that differed from the learning route by manipulating some properties of the handholds (i.e., the distances between handholds, their orientation or their shape) [16]. The results showed that the “quantity” of exploration (i.e., number of fixations) decreased and the gaze path–as measured by the entropy of the gaze transitions from hold to hold on the route—became less complex with practice. It appeared that gaze entropy was correlated with movement fluency, but only on the routes where the learners were attuned to the shape of the handholds. Taken together, these results suggest that with constant practice conditions, the demand on the anticipation of the future climbing movements decreased. However, the gaze entropy measure did not inform about the timing of the gaze movements relative to the climbing movements, which would reveal how performers deal with the dual-demand, either favoring online or proactive gaze control.

Variability in the practice of perceptual-motor skill

According to learning approaches rooted in dynamical system theory, different practice schedules have the potential to differentially guide exploration, which could affect the transfer of learning [17]. These approaches have proposed three different forms of variability in practice: intrinsic variability, unstructured variability, and structured variability [18]. When the same practice condition is repeated, variability in the performed movement has been found to occur from one repetition to the next. This variability is intrinsic to the motor system. The second form of variability aims to provide additional random noise to the learners’ movements during practice in order to find the global minimum of the perceptual-motor workspace and escape local minimums where individual intrinsic variability may be insufficient to facilitate learning [19]. This consists of adding unstructured variability to practice at the level of multiple task parameters [18]. Thus, it is hypothesized that unstructured variability in practice conditions may increase the learning rate of individuals and improve learning outcomes (i.e., retention and transfer) in comparison with constant practice conditions [19].

Unstructured variability may, however, be counterproductive if learners do not have the opportunity to stabilize the discovered movement patterns and optimize information-movement coupling [20]. A third form of practice variability motivated by the ecological approach to perception-action has revealed that the transfer of learning to different conditions occurs when learners attune to information during practice that is also available and reliable in transfer conditions [21]. In order to guide attunement, variability has been applied to practice conditions so that less useful information becomes unreliable during learning [22]. Learners in structured variable practice conditions have been found to attend to more reliable information resulting in better performance in a transfer task than learners in a constant practice group [21]. Moreover, the learners’ attunement and ability to transfer learning differed according to the parameter of the task that was varied during practice [21, 23], which shows that although variable practice improves generalization, this generalization is specific to the learning conditions.

The rhythm of changes in learning conditions following structured variable practice are usually imposed upon the participants by the experimenters (e.g., [21]). However, studies have shown that even when learners are exposed to the same practice conditions, they demonstrate different learning dynamics (e.g., [24]). Thus, some participants may not benefit from variable practice if the externally imposed rate of exploration is too great for them to stabilize the newly discovered movement solutions. A proposed solution is to give learners the opportunity to control when to change the practice conditions (e.g., [2527]). For example, when participants controlled the difficulty of a rollerball task, they were shown to reach a success rate during practice that was better than participants experiencing practice with a progressive increase of difficulty [25]. Furthermore, participants that were given control of their practice schedule when practicing three sequences of a key-pressing task performed better on a transfer task than participants who had their practice schedules imposed by experimenters [27]. These results also showed that most of the participants chose to start practice using a blocked organization (i.e., with numerous repetitions of one of the tasks before switching to another one) before changing later in practice to become more variable. Thus, by giving control to the participants on the rate at which their learning conditions change, they appear to adapt the changes according to their skill level and their needs in terms of task exploitation. Therefore, learning outcomes in self-controlled practice appear to benefit from a ratio between exploration and exploitation during practice, which are sensitive to individual learning dynamics in comparison to constant practice or an imposed structured variable practice [25, 27].

In existing research, intrinsic variability and unstructured variability in practice have primarily been investigated using discrete multiarticular tasks (e.g., [28, 29]). In contrast, structured variable practice has been shown to improve the transfer of learning for a discrete anticipation task [23] and in continuous tasks where learners had to adapt their actions to the unfolding dynamics of the task [21, 22]. The perceptual-motor tasks used in these structured variable practice studies were performed in virtual environments to facilitate the control (and variations) of the available information. However, this poses questions concerning the transfer of the findings to natural settings. First, the possible movements of learners are restricted during virtual environments. Second, virtual environments may lead to the attunement to information, which may be detrimental for the transfer of learning from virtual environments to natural settings [30, 31]. In sum, the available information in natural settings is likely to be greater, and the movements usually involve more degrees of freedom, which gives learners an increased variety of opportunities to explore (i.e., to pick-up information) through their actions.

The present experiment

It remains unclear how different practice conditions affect the acquisition of gaze behaviors and whether the changes in gaze behaviors are related to the learning outcomes. To address this gap, the aims of the current study were: (i) to investigate the effect of different types of practice on how learners deal with the dual-demand of gaze behavior; and (ii) to analyze the extent that this effect may be associated with the transfer of learning to a new climbing route.

In the current study, we compared the changes in performance and gaze behavior of three learning protocols on a training route, and we assessed the transfer of learning to a new route (i.e., the transfer route). We expected that, with practice, the learners in a constant practice condition (Constant group, CG) and the learners in a structured variable practice group (Imposed Variability Group, IVG) would differently balance the dual-demand of gaze behavior. We expected that the IVG would demonstrate more proactive gaze behaviors than the CG on both the training and transfer routes. These differences would enable the IVG to adopt a gaze behavior that is better adapted to climbing a new route as it would enable them to have a more proactive control of their climbing movements. Conversely, the gaze behavior developed by the CG on the training route may not be best adapted to climbing a new route as learning may be attuned to the training route, where continual exploration will likely reduce after extended practice in the same learning environment. Second, we examined whether giving the participants the opportunity to control when to be confronted to a new climbing route (Self-controlled Variability group, SVG) would improve learning, and transfer of learning, in comparison to the group with an imposed schedule of climbing routes (the IVG). We expected that participants in SVG would benefit from learning to control the optimal ratio between exploration and exploitation during practice, which would result in better performance on the training and transfer routes. This optimal ratio would also translate into a gaze behavior that is less proactive than the IVG on both routes, suggesting a heightened skill in coupling information to movements.

Method

Participants

Twenty-four undergraduate students who volunteered to take part in the study were recruited (age: M = 20.6 years, SD = 1.1; 8 women and 16 men). Sample sizes were driven by the availability of participants (i.e., students able to attend to two learning sessions per week for 5 weeks) and previous work in this area (perceptual-motor learning in climbing; e.g., [15, 32, 33]). Their skill level was in the lower grade group according to the International Rock Climbing Research Association scale [34] as they had no or very little climbing experience. They all had normal or corrected to normal vision. Participants were randomly assigned to the CG, the IVG and the SVG. Before the first climbing session, the protocol was explained to all the participants, who then provided written informed consent to participate in this study. The protocol was approved by the French National Agency of Research (ID: ANR-17-CE38-0006 DynACEV) and conducted in accordance with the Declaration of Helsinki.

Experimental design

Learning protocols

Participants attended 10 learning sessions that lasted for 5 weeks, with 2 sessions per week. The participants in the CG always climbed the same route, called the training route (Fig 1A, 84 trials in total). The participants in the IVG practiced on the training route (learning session 1) and on nine subsequent variations of the training route (the variant routes). Thus, the IVG practiced on a new variation of the training route in each session. The SVG followed the same protocol as the IVG with the difference that at the end of sessions 2 to 9, they were asked whether they wanted to continue practicing on the same route or if they wanted to change the route on which they performed the highest number trials. Thus, they could follow the same protocol as the IVG if they always chose to change the route. The content of the sessions is summarized in Table 1.

Fig 1. Presentation of the training route and the climbing holds.

Fig 1

(A) Design of the training route. (B) Model of handhold (on the left) and model of foothold (on the right) used to create the routes.

Table 1. Program of the learning sessions for the three groups.
Constant Group Imposed Variability Group Self-controlled Variability Group
Session 1 1xTransfer | 3xTR | 3xTR 1xTransfer | 3xTR | 3xV1 1xTransfer | 3xTR | 3xV1
Session 2 9xTR 3xTR | 3xV1 | 3xV2 3xTR | 3xV1 | 3xV2
Session 3 9xTR 3xTR | 3xV2 | 3xV3 3xTR | 3xV? | 3xV?
Session 4 9xTR 3xTR | 3xV3 | 3xV4 3xTR | 3xV? | 3xV?
Session 5 9xTR 3xTR | 3xV4 | 3xV5 3xTR | 3xV? | 3xV?
Session 6 9xTR 3xTR | 3xV5 | 3xV6 3xTR | 3xV? | 3xV?
Session 7 9xTR 3xTR | 3xV6 | 3xV7 3xTR | 3xV? | 3xV?
Session 8 9xTR 3xTR | 3xV7 | 3xV8 3xTR | 3xV? | 3xV?
Session 9 9xTR 3xTR | 3xV8 | 3xV9 3xTR | 3xV? | 3xV?
Session 10 3xTR | 3xTR | 1xTransfer 3xTR | 3xV9 | 1xTransfer 3xTR | 3xV? | 1xTransfer

The table presents the content of each learning session for the three practice conditions. On the first and last session, the participants climbed a transfer route (Transfer). The participants in the Constant group climbed a training route (TR) 6 to 9 times per session. The participants in the Imposed Variability group climbed the training route 3 times on all the sessions and they climbed 9 variants routes (V1 to V9) across the learning protocol. The Self-controlled Variability group followed a similar protocol as the Imposed Variability group, but the number of variants routes discovered depended on the individuals choice during the practice. The data collected from the trials written in bold characters are those analyzed in the current study.

Transfer test

The transfer test consisted of two trials on a climbing route called Transfer route. The first trial was performed at the beginning of the first learning session and was used as a baseline. The second trial was performed after the last trial of the last learning session to examine the effect of the three learning protocols on the transfer of learning.

Route design

The experiment took place in a climbing gym where two walls were used: the first was used for the training route and the second for the transfer route and the variants. Two routes could be placed on the second wall. Each route was hidden with a tarpaulin so that participants could only see the route to be climbed. All routes were designed with the same two models of climbing holds (Fig 1B, Volx Holds®, Chessy-les-mines, France): one for handholds and one for footholds. The variants were designed with the same number of holds as the training route (i.e., 13 handholds and 7 footholds) and the transfer route was composed of 13 handholds and 6 footholds, but the layout of the holds on the wall differed between routes. The training route was 5.25 m high, and the other routes were 4.80 m high.

Instruction

Prior to each trial during the learning sessions, the participants were provided with the following guidance: (i) to climb as fluently as possible, avoiding pauses and jerky movements of the body; (ii) to use all the handholds in an order from the bottom to the top of the wall; and (iii) to use all the handholds and footholds with a single limb contact at a time (participants couldn’t use a hold with both hands or feet at once). These instructions were repeated before each trial to ensure that participants were aware that the goal of each climb was to efficiently chain movements to reach the top of the climbing route, a climbing skill commonly referred to as route-finding [35].

Procedure

Each session lasted approximately 1 h and therefore, the entire study comprised a total of 240 hours data collection (testing and practice of all participants). Each session started with a 10 min warm-up in a bouldering area. The participant was equipped with climbing shoes, a harness and the mobile eye-tracker and was told the instructions. On the first session, one of the experimenters demonstrated how to climb in a bouldering area in accordance with the instructional prompts and invited the participants to try. Then, the participant warmed-up while familiarizing with the prompts in the bouldering area.

Then, the same procedure was performed for each trial: (i) the route to be climbed was uncovered, the others were hidden with a tarpaulin, (ii) the mobile eye tracker was calibrated, and the recording started, (iii) the participant stood 3m in front of the route for 30s of route preview. The participant could stop the preview when they wanted. During the preview, the experimenters started the video recording. (iv) The participants were top roped, that is, the rope was anchored at the top of the wall and to the participant for security during the ascents. (v) The prompts were provided by the experimenter to the participant. (vi) The experimenter then performed the synchronization procedure (see Synchronization Procedure). (vii) The participants were placed in the starting position, holding the first handhold with two hands and their feet were on the first two footholds. (viii) When the participants were ready and secured, the experimenter announced that they could start the climb. The climbed ended when the participants grasped the last handholds and remained immobile for a few seconds. (ix) The participant was then lowered down, and all the recordings were stopped.

Data collection

Contact time with holds

The climbing walls were equipped with the Luxov Touch ® system (http://www.luxov-connect.com/en/products/#touch, Arnas, France) as used by [36]. This system uses a sensor technology to provide a measure of the time of contact and release of the handholds and footholds. The reported accuracy of the system is 1.57 ms at 99.7% confidence interval (see patent details: FR3066398-2018-11-23 / WO2018/211062A1-2018-11-22; https://patents.google.com/patent/WO2018211062A1/en). The starting time and ending time of the climb were obtained with this system. The start time was considered when the participant touched another hold other than the starting holds and the end of the climb was considered when the climber touched the last handhold. The time of the first contact with each of the handholds of the routes were also collected.

Tracking of the hip trajectory

Trials were filmed at 29.97 fps on 1920x1080 pixels frames with two GoPro 5 cameras (GoPro Inc. ®, San Mateo, CA, USA), each camera captured an entire wall. The cameras were placed at a height of 2.80m. On the back of the participants’ harness, a light was placed.

The videos of the cameras were imported in Kinovea© (version 0.8.25, Boston, MA, USA). The lens distortion was corrected by importing the intrinsic parameters of the cameras lens in Kinovea from Agisoft lens (version 0.4.1, Agisoft LLC, Saint Petersburg, Russia). A manually set grid was used to correct the perspective and to calibrate the distances by using markers placed on the climbing routes. The light on the back of the participant was tracked from the reference frame (when the experimenter tapped the hold) until the moment the climber touched the last handhold of the route. The tracking was used to get the projected coordinates of the hip position on the 2D wall for each frame of the video. The starting and ending times obtained from the Luxov Touch system were used to cut the temporal series of the hip position to have the fluency measure corresponding to the climbing period.

Gaze behavior

The climber wore mobile eye-tracking glasses (Tobii Pro Glasses 2©, TobiiAB®, Sweden) on each trial. The glasses tracked the eye movements at a frequency of 50Hz with two cameras under each eye which after calibration, provided the gaze location on the video scene camera that recorded at 25fps on 1920x1080 pixels frames. Before each trial, the calibration was conducted by placing a target (diameter of the target is 43mm) at an arm’s length from the standing participant. After the calibration, the accuracy of the gaze location was then checked by asking the participant to look at the target again. If the calibration failed or the point of gaze did not overlap with the target, the procedure was repeated until that the gaze location met the center of the target.

Synchronization procedure

The data from the mobile eye-tracker and the Luxov Touch system were synchronized by asking the participant to look at one hold while the experimenter tapped the location. Then the time of the first frame in the video of the eye tracker that showed the contact of the experimenter’s finger with the hold was used as a reference time to synchronize the two. This synchronization was used to obtain the gaze offset time (see in the subsection Gaze Behavior within the section Data Analysis for more details and reliability measures regarding this dependent variable).

Data analysis

Climbing fluency

The coordinates of the hip trajectory were used to compute the geometric index of entropy (GIE). The GIE was designed as a measure of performance that reflects the degree of coherence in information-movement couplings [37]. The GIE enables assessment of the degree of complexity of the hip trajectory. A complex hip trajectory would reflect a poor sensitivity of the climber to the environmental constraints, whereas a smooth trajectory would reflect fluent climbing movements. GIE is calculated with the following equation:

GIE=log2(2Lc)

L is the length of the hip trajectory and c the perimeter of the convex hull around the hip trajectory. Data analyses to obtain the GIE values were performed with Matlab R2014a ® software (version 8.3.0.532, The MathWorks Inc., Natick, MA, USA).

Gaze behavior

Gaze behavior measures focused on the gaze patterns oriented towards the handholds and hand movements of the participants. The analyses of the mobile eye tracker recordings were performed using Tobii Pro Lab© (version 1.102.16417, TobiiAB, Sweden). The raw filter was applied to provide data on the location of the gaze position on each frame. A circle with a 20 cm radius around each of the 13 handholds was considered as areas of interest (AOI). Two different aspects of gaze behavior were coded for each ascent: (i) the last period the participant’s gaze stayed within an AOI before touching the corresponding handhold for the first time in the trial, and (ii) the temporal series of the AOI locations that the point of gaze passed through.

For the first measure, the coder recorded the last period that the participant’s point of gaze stayed within an AOI before touching the corresponding handhold for the first time in the trial [9]. This was repeated for each handhold of the route with the exception of the starting and last handhold (N = 11). Subsequently, the onset and offset time of each gaze period that related to these periods of gaze within an AOI before contact were recorded. If the onset or offset time could not be collected due to missing gaze samples, the entire period was not considered for analysis. The gaze onset and offset times were related to the contact time of the handhold given by the Luxov Touch system. Thus, the visits with a negative offset time would correspond to a proactive control of the hand movement, as the participant’s gaze would have move away from the AOI before the moment of contact with the handhold. Using the offset time, we calculated the proportion of online visits, that is, the proportion of visits with a positive offset time, meaning that participant’s gaze was within the AOI at the moment of contact with the handhold. The duration of the gaze visit was also obtained from onset and offset time.

For the second measure, to be considered in the temporal series, the point of gaze needed to remain within the AOI of the handhold for more than 3 frames (i.e., 60ms), otherwise, it would be considered as an eye movement passing by the AOI and thus would not be coded [38]. Furthermore, the handhold would either be the one that was currently grasped by the participant, or another one above it. This coding procedure ensured that the results only informed about the gaze displacements relating to the current or future hand movements of the performer. The temporal series of visited AOIs was used to calculate the conditional visual entropy (H) measure, with the following equation [39]:

H=i=1np(i)[j=1np(i,j)log2p(i,j)],ij

with p(i) the probability of visiting the AOI i, and p(i,j), the probability that the point of gaze would shift from i to j. The higher the value of the conditional visual entropy, the more the gaze path went from one AOI to another in a random manner whereas a low value would reflect a structured gaze path [40]. It should be noted that, if the participants gaze shifted from one AOI to the next on the ascent, the value of H would be 0 as all p(i,j) would be 1. We expected that with practice, participants conditional visual entropy would tend to 0.

The reliability of the coding method was assessed on eight trials taken randomly. This sample was coded a second time by the original coder two months after the first coding and by a second researcher. For the three dependent variables relating to gaze behaviors, we performed Pearson correlations that showed that the intra-coder reliability ranged between r = .994 and r = .997 and the inter-coder reliability between r = .991 and r = .993. For the measure of the gaze offset time (which could be affected by the synchronization procedure), the intra-coder mean difference between the first and second coding was -0.9ms (Mean 95% CI = [-4.1ms, 2.3ms], SD = 14.6ms) and the inter-coders mean differences was -0.2ms (Mean 95% CI = [-3.8ms, 3.4ms], SD = 16.3ms).

Global observations regarding the gaze sample. The gaze behavior of one participant in the IVG was excluded from the analysis due to the loss of gaze data during the climbs. For the rest of the participants, the offset time and duration of the period of gaze within AOI was obtained for 91.3% of the visits on the training route and for 86.6% of the visits on the transfer route. There was no significant difference in the proportion of excluded periods in the three learning groups on the training route [χ2(2, N = 1205) = 0.98, p = .612] and on the transfer route [χ2(2, N = 381) = 0.66, p = .719].

Statistical analysis

The dependent variables were submitted to separate mixed ANOVA with Session (2) as a within participant factor and Group (3) as a between participant factor. The Levene tests for homogeneity of variance and Shapiro-Wilk tests for normal distribution were performed before running the mixed ANOVA. If the tests were significant for GIE or conditional visual entropy, outliers were (i) identified with the identify_outliers() function from the rstatix package [41, 42], and (ii) replaced by the mean of the corresponding series and the tests were performed a second time. For the offset times and durations of the gaze visits, if the tests were significant, outliers were removed, and the tests were performed a second time. In the event of nonsignificant results in the mixed ANOVA, we also performed Bayesian mixed ANOVA and reported the Bayes factors (BF) to assess the evidence in favor of the null or the alternative hypothesis [43, 44]. The BF values are interpreted according to the classification and thresholds presented by [45].The mixed ANOVA was followed by post-hoc tests with a Bonferroni correction of the p-value to examine the main factors Session and Group. In case of significant result regarding the interaction between Session and Group, planned contrast tests were used to examine the practice effect for each group, and to assess whether this practice effect was different between groups. The generalized eta squared (ηG2) is reported as a measure of effect size with values of .02 as small, .13 as medium and .26 as large effect [46]. These statistical analyses were run using JASP [47].

Results

Two participants only attended the first session and then dropped out and one participant injured herself after the fourth training session and could not continue the protocol. Unfortunately, we did not have the resources (time and availability of the climbing wall) to replace the three participants that dropped out, which equated to 60h of data collection (5 weeks of data collection for one participant represented approximately 20h of time). Thus, these three participants were not included in the statistical analyses and the final sample size was 21 participants (age: M = 20.6 years, SD = 1.1; 7 women and 14 men). The data used in the statistical analyses can be found in S1 Data.

Practice schedule of the SVG

The self-controlled scheduling of the practice condition for participants in the SVG are displayed in the Table 2. All the participants chose at least once to practice on the same climbing route in the following session, thus none of the participants of the SVG followed the same practice schedule as the IVG. Although the participants were, in general, likely to vary the practice route, the proportion of participants who chose to keep the same route increased on the two last sessions, with the proportion of change decreasing to .50 in the last session.

Table 2. Practice schedule of the participants in the SVG.

Participant Session
2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9
P1
P2
P3
P4
P5
P6
P7
P8
Proportion of change .875 .875 .750 .875 .750 .750 .625 .500

Grey frames show when participants chose to maintain the same route on the following session, whereas white frames display when they chose to practice on a new route. The proportion of change reflects the proportion of participants who chose to practice a new route on the following session.

Changes in climbing fluency and gaze behaviors on the training route

Climbing fluency

Fig 2 displays the GIE scores of the participants. The mixed ANOVA applied to the GIE showed a large effect of the factor Sessions [F(1,18) = 275.73, p < .001, ηG2 = .72], and a small effect of the interaction between the main factors of Session and Group [F(2,18) = 6.38, p = .008, ηG2 = .11], whereas the Group effect was not significant [F(2,18) = 1.00, p = .389, ηG2 = .08]. The results of the Bayesian mixed ANOVA suggested anecdotal evidence in favor of a Group effect (BF = 2.17). The contrast tests revealed that participants across all three groups had more complex hip trajectories in session 1 than session 10 (M = -0.51, CI = [-0.58, -0.45], ps < .001). This change in the spatial fluency score with practice was significantly higher for CG than for IVG (M = -0.11, CI = [-0.20, -0.03], p = .009) but no significant difference was observed between the IVG and the SVG (M = -0.01, CI = [-0.09, 0.07], p = .762).

Fig 2. Dynamics of the climbing fluency on the first and last session of the protocol for the three groups.

Fig 2

The black points represent the sessions mean and the error bars their standard error. The grey points and lines represent each participant’s dynamics.

Complexity of the gaze path

Fig 3 displays the visual entropy scores of the participants. Regarding the measure of the complexity of the gaze path (Fig 3), we performed the mixed ANOVA although the data on the session 10 were not normally distributed due to repeated values in the CG (n = 3). The mixed ANOVA showed a large effect of the factor Session [F(1,15) = 93.06, p < .001, ηG2 = .74] but no significant effect of the factor Group [F(2,15) = 1.52, p = .250, ηG2 = .10] and the interaction between Session and Group [F(2,15) = 1.50, p = .255, ηG2 = .08]. The Bayesian mixed ANOVA suggested anecdotal evidence in favor of the null hypothesis for the factor Group (BF = 0.58), and anecdotal evidence in favor of an effect of the interaction between Session and Group (BF = 1.03). The post-hoc test revealed that participants’ gaze showed less variability in session 10 compared to session 1 (M = -0.38, CI = [-0.47, -0.30], p < .001).

Fig 3. Dynamics of the visual entropy score on the first and last session for the three groups.

Fig 3

The black points represent the sessions mean and the error bars their standard error. The grey points and lines represent each participant’s dynamics.

Characteristics of the last gaze visit

Offset time. Fig 4 displays the offset times of the last gaze visits on handholds before touching them. The results of the mixed ANOVA showed a medium effect of the interaction between Session and Group on the offset time [F(2,17) = 7.14, p = .006, ηG2 = .16], whereas the main factor Session [F(1,17) = 0.18, p = .68, ηG2 = .00] and Group [F(2,17) = 2.37, p = .124, ηG2 = .18] was not significant. The Bayesian mixed ANOVA suggests anecdotal evidences in favor of an effect of the main factors Session (BF = 1.35) and Group (BF = 2.29).

Fig 4. Offset time of the last gaze visit before the hand contacted the handhold for the three groups on the training route.

Fig 4

In (A), (B) and (C), the vertical dashed line shows the time the hand touched the handhold, each point represents one gaze visit, the half violin shows the density of points, the red/grey point with the error bar refers the mean of all the gaze visits and the standard deviation around the mean. The color of the half violin refers to the learning session: in grey, session 1 and in black, session 10. (D), (E) and (F) displays the individuals’ proportion of online visits on session 1 and 10. (A) and (D) show data for the constant practice group, (B) and (E) for the imposed variability group, and (C) and (F) for the self-controlled variability group.

The contrast tests showed that the change in the visit offset time was different between CG and IVG with practice (M = +68ms, CI = [+30 ms, +106 ms], p = .001) as the CG visit offset time occurred later on session 10 than on session 1 (M = +74 ms, CI = [+20 ms, +128 ms], p = .010), whereas practice had the opposite effect on IVG as the visit offset time occurred earlier on session 10 than on session 1 (M = -62 ms, CI = [-116 ms, -8 ms], p = .026). The change in the visit offset time with practice was not significantly different between IVG and SVG (M = -34 ms, CI = [-70 ms, +2 ms], p = .060), whilst practice did not significantly affect the visit offset time of SVG (M = +6 ms, CI = [-41 ms, +52 ms], p = .798).

For the CG, the proportion of online visits increased between session 1 and 10, from .40 to .68 [χ2 (1, N = 380) = 29.75, p < .001] (Fig 4D). Conversely, the proportion of online visits decreased between the two sessions for the IVG, from .44 to .27 [χ2 (1, N = 364) = 11.54, p < .001] (Fig 4E). For the SVG, the proportion of online visits did not change significantly [.41, χ2 (1, N = 461) = 1.87, p = .171] (Fig 4F). Thus, while the CG appeared to favor online control of hand movements with practice, the IVG tended to adopt a proactive control of hand movements.

Gaze duration. Fig 5 displays the duration of the last gaze visit on handholds before touching them. The mixed ANOVA revealed a large effect of the main factor Session [F(1,17) = 46.50, p < .001, ηG2 = .49] and no significant effect for the main factor Group [F(2,17) = 0.99, p = .394, ηG2 = .07] and the interaction between Session and Group [F(2,17) = 1.54, p = .242, ηG2 = .06]. The Bayesian mixed ANOVA suggested anecdotal evidence for the null hypothesis regarding the main factor Group (BF = 0.50) and the interaction between Session and Group (BF = 0.81). The post-hoc test showed that the duration of the visit was significantly shorter in session 10 in comparison to session 1 (M = -122 ms, CI = [-160 ms, -85 ms]), p < .001).

Fig 5. Duration of the last gaze visit before the hand contacted the handhold for the three groups on the training route.

Fig 5

In (A), (B) and (C), each point represents one gaze visit before a contact with a handhold, the half violin shows the density of points, the red/grey point with the error bar refers to the mean of all the gaze visits and the standard deviation around the mean. The color of the half violin refers to the learning session: in grey, session 1 and in black, session 10. (A), (B) and (C) shows data for the constant practice group, imposed variability group and the self-controlled variability group respectively.

Changes in climbing fluency and gaze behaviors on the transfer route

Climbing fluency

The Levene test showed that the assumption of equality of variances was violated on session 1 [F(2,18) = 6.36, p = .008]. The mixed ANOVA applied to the GIE revealed a large effect of the main factor Session [F(1,18) = 42.38, p < .001, ηG2 = .43] but no significant effect for the factor Group [F(1,18) = 2.06, p = .157, ηG2 = .13] and the interaction between Session and Group [F(2,18) = 0.39, p = .685, ηG2 = .01]. The Bayesian mixed ANOVA suggested anecdotal evidence for the null hypothesis regarding the main factor Group (BF = 0.77) and the interaction between Session and Group (BF = 0.62). The post-hoc test showed that the hip trajectory of the participants was significantly less complex in session 10 in comparison to session 1 on the transfer route (M = -0.42, CI = [-0.55, -0.28]), p < .001) (Fig 6).

Fig 6. Changes in the climbing fluency of the three groups on the transfer route.

Fig 6

The black points represent the sessions mean and the error bars their standard error. The grey points and lines represent each participant’s dynamics.

Complexity of the gaze path

The mixed ANOVA applied to the visual entropy scores revealed a large effect of the main factor Session [F(1,15) = 58.35, p < .001, ηp2 = .60] whereas the main factor Group [F(2,15) = 0.22, p = .809, ηp2 = .02] and the interaction between Session and Group [F(2,15) = 0.74, p = .495, ηG2 = .04] were not significant. The mixed Bayesian ANOVA suggested medium and anecdotal evidence in favor of the null hypothesis for the factor Group (BF = 0.30) and the interaction between Session and Group (BF = 0.44) respectively. The contrast test showed that the variability of the gaze path decreased on session 10 (M = -0.40, CI = [-0.51, -0.29], p < .001) (Fig 7).

Fig 7. Changes in the complexity of the gaze path for the three groups on the transfer route.

Fig 7

The black points represent the sessions mean and the error bars their standard error. The grey points and lines represent each participant’s dynamics.

Characteristics of the last gaze visit

Offset time. Fig 8 displays the offset time of the last gaze visits on handholds before touching them. The results of the mixed ANOVA showed a medium effect of the factor Session [F(1,17) = 16.88, p < .001, ηp2 = .20]. The factor Group [F(2,17) = 0.73, p = .498, ηp2 = .06] and the interaction between Session and Group [F(2,17) = 0.77, p = .479, ηp2 = .02] were not significant. The Bayesian mixed ANOVA suggested anecdotal evidence in favor of the null hypothesis for the factor Group (BF = 0.43) and the interaction between Session and Group (BF = 0.52). The post-hoc test revealed that the visit offset time occurred earlier in session 10 comparing to session 1 (M = -72 ms, CI = [-109 ms, -35 ms], p < .001).

Fig 8. Offset time of the last gaze visit before the hand contacted the handhold for the three groups on the transfer route.

Fig 8

In (A), (B) and (C), the vertical dashed line shows the time the hand touched the handhold, each point represents one gaze visit, the half violin shows the density of points, the red/grey point with the error bar refers to the mean of all the gaze visits and the standard deviation around the mean. The color of the half violin refers to the learning session: in grey, session 1 and in black, session 10. (D), (E) and (F) displays the individuals’ proportion of online visits on session 1 and 10. (A) and (D) show data for the constant practice group, (B) and (E) for the imposed variability group, and (C) and (F) for the self-controlled variability group.

The proportion of online visits was not significantly different between the three groups on session 1 of the transfer route (.53) [χ2(2, N = 191) = 0.964, p = .618] but was on session 10 [χ2(2, N = 190) = 11.87, p = .003]. More specifically, it appears that the CG maintained the proportion of online gaze visit on session 10 as with session 1 [.57, χ2(1, N = 118) = 0.31, p = .577] (Fig 8D). However, the IVG group utilized significantly less online visits in session 10 (.29) than in session 1 (.48) [χ2(1, N = 121) = 4.98, p = .026] (Fig 8E). The SVG maintained the same proportion of online gaze visit on session 10 compared to session 1 [.49, χ2(1, N = 142) = 3.44, p = .064] (Fig 8F).

Gaze duration. Fig 9 displays the duration of the last gaze visit on handholds before touching them. The Shapiro-Wilk test showed that the assumption of normality was violated for the IVG on session 10. The results of the mixed ANOVA showed a medium effect of the factor Session [F(1,17) = 10.48, p = .005, ηp2 = .14]. The factor Group [F(2,17) = 1.49, p = .253, ηp2 = .11] and the interaction between Session and Group [F(2,17) = 0.23, p = .801, ηp2 = .01] were not significant. The Bayesian mixed ANOVA suggested anecdotal evidence in favor of the null hypothesis for the factor Group (BF = 0.57) and the interaction between Session and Group (BF = 0.46). The post-hoc test revealed that the duration of the last gaze visit was shorter in session 10 compared to session 1 (M = -100 ms, CI = [-165 ms, -35 ms], p = .005).

Fig 9. Duration of the last gaze visit before the hand contact the handhold for the three groups on the transfer route.

Fig 9

In (A), (B) and (C), each point represents one gaze visit before a contact with a handhold, the halves violin shows the density of points, the red/grey point with the error bar refers to the mean of all the gaze visits and the standard deviation around the mean. The color of the half violin refers to the learning session: in grey, session 1 and in black, session 10. (A), (B) and (C) shows data for the constant practice group, imposed variability group and the self-controlled variability group respectively.

Discussion

The aims of this study were to examine how the gaze control of action is adapted to different practice conditions and how changes in gaze control may contribute to the transfer of learning. We measured the climbing fluency and gaze behaviors of novice climbers on a training and transfer route and we compared three practice conditions: constant practice (CG), imposed variable practice (IVG) and self-controlled variable practice (SVG). Results did not show any beneficial effects of IVG on the learners’ climbing fluency on the training and transfer routes in comparison with CG. Moreover, CG performed better than IVG on the training route in the last session according to the spatial fluency indicator. The complexity of the gaze path evolved similarly for the three groups on the training and transfer routes with a decrease in variability with practice. Finally, the three groups demonstrated different adaptations of the dual-demand of gaze when controlling their hand movements on the training route at the end of the learning protocol: CG used more online gaze control of their hand movements whereas, in contrast, IVG used more proactive gaze. SVG did not change their gaze pattern, that is they maintained a proportion of .41 of online gaze visits. In addition, on the transfer route, only IVG adapted the gaze control of hand movements in a similar fashion as the last session on the training route.

Climbing fluency

Specificity of the individual-environment coupling

In contrast to our hypothesis, results indicated that variable practice conditions did not facilitate transfer to the new climbing route. Previous research in perceptual-motor learning has revealed benefits from variable practice for the transfer of learning [21, 22]. However, the results revealed that all three groups improved their climbing fluency on the transfer route. Therefore, even during CG practice, the findings in the current study suggest that this condition was sufficiently complex to foster adequate exploration. Indeed, the CG practiced on a climbing route that offered a range of opportunities for action, which, in contrast with the virtual learning environments used in the previous studies [21, 22], may have invited more perceptual-motor exploration during practice. Thus, CG may have benefitted from their intrinsic variability to discover a range of information-movement couplings, which facilitated performance on the transfer route.

The benefit of exploration within a constant learning environment is also supported by the lower complexity of the hip trajectory on the last session of CG compared to IVG on the training route. This measure was designed to assess the degree of coherence in information-movement couplings [37] and was recently reported to reflect climbing efficiency (i.e., a lower complexity is linked to lower energy expenditure) [48]. Thus, the difference between the two groups suggests that CG benefited from practice on the training route to discover improved information-movement couplings. Indeed, participants in IVG and SVG did not appear to improve their climbing fluency on the training route to the same extent as the CG. Thus, the results suggest that for novice climbers, practice on the variable routes did not adequately transfer to the original training route. Thus, it is plausible that variable practice environments–in climbing and other domains—may be more beneficial for participants with a higher initial skill level.

No benefit of self-controlled practice on climbing fluency

Overall, SVG had a lower variability of practice conditions than IVG during their practice, partly because they could only slow the rate of change in practice conditions but not increase it (Table 1). We expected that SVG would better reflect individual learning dynamics, thus, resulting in better learning outcomes than the imposed exploration interventions (IVG and CG). However, no differences in climbing fluency were observed between the three groups at the end of the practice period on the training route and on the transfer route. Moreover, participants chose to keep the same variants on the route in the final sessions as well as the first sessions (Table 2). This observation differs from the practice schedules observed by [27]. In their study, participants controlled their practice between three variations of a key-pressing task, and most participants chose to start with a blocked pattern of practice before finishing with rapid switches between the variations. In the current study, the chosen practice schedules of the SVG suggest that participants were initially more attracted by novelty before practicing a smaller range of climbing routes in the final sessions. This practice structure, from initial variability, reducing to blocked conditions may not be an optimal path for safely exploring and discovering the possible task solutions across the different routes. Therefore, it would be necessary for further research to investigate the effect of early variations on the effectivity of exploration in comparison to variations occurring later in the practice period [49].

The absence of differences in climbing fluency between IVG and SVG contrasts previous research on autonomy-supportive interventions (e.g., [50, 51]) that showed: (i) an increase in performance, even when the choice affects an irrelevant feature of the task (e.g., the color of a golf ball in golf putting, [50]); and (ii) improved performance on a transfer task when participants were given control over their practice schedules [27]. The results of the present study may be due to the duration of the practice period (5 weeks), which is longer and may therefore offer greater insight into the learning process than previous self-controlled research. A review of self-controlled practice interventions [52], revealed that practice took place over four days at maximum and most of the reviewed studies had practice completed in one day. Thus, the five weeks practice schedule in the current study may have diluted the perception of autonomy and associated motivational effect on performances. Moreover, in previous research, the autonomy offered to participants tended to be right after each trial (e.g., they chose to receive feedback or they chose the task condition for the following trial), whereas in the current study, the choice made by the SVG was with reference to the following learning session. Thus, the design of our study may have decreased the participants’ perception of control over their learning environment as the delay between the choice and its effect is much larger than in previous studies [52]. This may have prevented the motivational effect of the intervention in the SVG as according to the Control Effect Motivation hypothesis, motivation is sensitive to one’ s control over the upcoming events [53, 54]. This potential temporal effect of autonomy on motivation and performance needs to be further investigated.

Gaze behaviors

Constant practice conditions foster online gaze control

The CG relied more on online gaze control of their hand movements than the IVG, who conversely, showed more proactive gaze control with practice on the training route. Previous studies demonstrated that online gaze control supports more accurate stepping behavior [9] and that when walking over rough terrain, participants look a shorter distance ahead than when the terrain is flat [5]. Thus, comparable to these examples, participants in CG tuned their gaze behavior to perform their climbing movements as accurately as possible by exploiting proximal locations of the training route.

Conversely, IVG used more proactive gaze control following practice on the training route. This result showed that IVG participants tuned their gaze behavior to anticipate the constraints on future movements. This kind of gaze pattern has also been observed in natural tasks, when participants perform a series of action during goal achievement [4, 55]. That is, participants look at an object that they are about to manipulate (e.g., a cup) before reaching for it [56]. With such gaze behavior, Land [56] proposed that performers free their visual system as soon as other perceptual systems (e.g., haptic) are in sufficient contact to regulate the movement. Similarly, studies on the development of locomotion showed that infants relied more on online control than children and adults when walking in a room with obstacles [12, 13]. Thus, it appears that the participants in the IVG showed changes in gaze behaviors similar to those observed in the development of locomotion with a gaze behavior that, with practice, is used to guide the hand movements rather than to control them as participants learn to utilize haptic information with practice [57]. These gaze behaviors may support fluent climbing (i.e., chaining climbing actions smoothly); however, it appears that to reach higher climbing fluency, visual information during the contact phase is also necessary.

In the development of locomotion, research has indicated that the gaze behavior of infants was different in quadrupedal locomotion (crawling) than when walking [12]. Moreover, gaze control during quadrupedal locomotion used more online gaze control than walking, in a similar fashion as reaching for object [12]. Thus, as our study focused on the gaze control of hand movements, our results may not be directly applicable to the control of foot movements while climbing, as the literature suggests that more proactive (or even peripheral) control of action is preferred for foot placements when the task demand allows lesser accuracy demands of foot placement [9, 13]. Future studies may investigate further gaze control of action in climbing to better highlight the differences of how hand and foot movements are controlled with the visual and/or the proprioceptive system (e.g., [58]).

Proactive gaze control cooperates with the transfer route

In line with our hypothesis that the CG would develop a gaze pattern highly specific to the training route while IVG would lead to a more adaptive gaze pattern, results showed that the more proactive gaze strategy of the IVG on the training route was also observed on the transfer route. In contrast, the CG showed a similar fixation offset time on session 1 and 10 of the transfer route. Thus, although the climbing fluency measure did not indicate that variable practice facilitated transfer, the gaze behavior developed during practice led to the development of an exploratory (proactive) gaze behavior that was adapted to the task demand of a new climbing route [59, 60]. Conversely, the gaze behavior developed by CG on the training route was not utilized on the transfer route as participants reverted to the gaze behavior used on session 1 of the transfer route. Thus, for CG, the gaze behavior developed with practice competed with the task demand of the new route, compromising general transfer [59, 60]. Considered in tandem with the climbing fluency results, repetition of practice conditions is necessary to improve performance but extensive practice within the same conditions appears to “specialize” gaze behaviors, which limits adaptability. Specialization in this context refers to the learner becoming attuned to information that is variant across other environmental conditions [22]. In contrast, participants in the IVG “learned to explore”, that is, they developed a gaze pattern that facilitated the pick-up of information to act adaptively under new constraints [49]. Thus, the present study illustrates that learning and becoming skilled is not only revealed by the performatory activity (i.e., the coordination pattern used and the associated performance) but also by the changes in exploratory behaviors underpinning performatory activity [49].

The self-controlled group stayed in a comfort zone during practice? Or did they show different individual benefits?

Although practicing on the variable routes, the participants in SVG did not significantly change the time of fixation offset. Therefore, in comparison with IVG participants who adapted their gaze behavior, SVG did not adjust gaze patterns, which may be a function of the comparative decrease in the amount of variability during practice for SVG. This result suggests that participants in SVG chose (i.e., whether to train on a new route or not) to remain within a comfort zone during practice [25]. However, when individual data is considered, the effects of practice on the training route are distinct between SVG participants (Fig 4) with five of the eight participants clearly showed less online gaze control of their climbing movements on the transfer route (Fig 8). Thus, rather than all participants remaining in a comfort zone, it appears that on the training route, some developed a gaze behavior similar to CG while others were similar to IVG. These interindividual differences highlight the importance of considering variability in gaze patterns [61], revealing that some participants may have developed both gaze patterns and used them adaptively according to the task demands. Although, we did not manipulate the route difficulty, the confrontation to a new route is in itself more difficult than climbing a known route. Self-controlled practice may therefore represent a means to enable individualization of how challenging the learning environment is during practice [25, 26]. Further investigation on the individual learning pathways may be productive in better understanding how learners can benefit most from such interventions.

Summary and future directions

This study followed previous work that acknowledged the importance of the timing of the information pick-up in complex perceptual-motor tasks [62]. The findings of the present study highlighted that information pick-up was affected by practice conditions. This may explain why variable practice facilitates transfer of learning while constant practice may lead to a specialization of individuals to the learning task constraints. However, the location of the point of gaze with eye-tracking technology does not necessarily capture what information is used for movement control, whilst the practice schedules may have differentially affected participants’ attunement. Extant literature indicates that behavior and performances in complex perceptual-motor tasks follows a nonlinear learning process [6365]. In contrast, the learning dynamics of changes in gaze patterns during learning remains relatively unexplored [49]. Thus, the results from the current study, particularly given the interindividual variability in SVG suggests that a challenge for future investigations is to reveal the individual learning dynamics of information pick-up in tandem with behavioral dynamics. We may expect to observe different gaze patterns to achieve similar task outcomes within and between individuals, highlighting degeneracy in perceptual-motor control [61]. Such investigation may further understanding of why some individuals develop better adaptability than others, even when exposed to the same intervention.

Supporting information

S1 Data. Tabular presentation of the dependent variables.

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Acknowledgments

We thank Héloïse Baillet for her contribution to the data collection and treatment. We also thank the participants for their cooperation and involvement in the study.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

This project received the support of the French National Agency of Research awarded to LS (URL: https://anr.fr/Projet-ANR-17-CE38-0006, ID: ANR-17-CE38-0006 DynACEV). The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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PONE-D-22-01772Visual control during climbing: Variability in practice fosters a proactive gaze patternPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: The manuscript describes a technically sound piece of scientific research that addresses a previously under-researched area of study. The study is novel, in that it extends current body of research related to practice schedules and the acquisition of climbing skill. Furthermore, the study adopts a research paradigm that has previously been under-utilised within the study of climbing performance, combining mobile eye-tracking technology with pressure-sensitive climbing holds and GIE data. Previous research utilising mobile eye-tracking technology has been criticised for being reliant upon aggregated gaze behaviours and not adequately capturing the temporal aspect of participant’s gaze behaviour, due to the labour-intensive nature of manual analysis. One of the distinct strengths of this study, is combining multiple complimentary measures: Aligning gaze data with the timestamps from pressure-sensitive holds, enables the temporal aspect of gaze behaviour in climbing performance is successfully captured. In this respect, gaze behaviour is captured in the context in which it occurred. The further addition of GIE data enables inferences to be made as to not only which form of practice schedule is most effective (increased fluency), but also make inferences about which gaze strategies might be more effective.

A succinct rationale for the study is provided, drawing upon relevant literature to draw parallels between the attentional demands of climbing movement, in regards to the visual search strategies adopted, and the attentional demand of walking/climbing. Whilst this comparison is valid in many respects, the manuscript may have benefitted further from a fuller discussion of the performance demands of climbing - how they differ from walking/running (e.g. multiple points of contact used in conjunction, more 3D in how forces are applied, etc) and how this inevitably impacts attentional focus and gaze behaviour.

The cognitive processes involved whilst engaged in climbing performances are perhaps oversimplified, categorising attentional focus as a dichotomy between maintaining current movement and monitoring the environment for information that may constrain future movements. This may potentially disregard a wide range of other factors (e.g. thoughts of anxiety, apprehension) that may impact upon attentional focus and gaze behaviour. Furthermore, the embodied nature of gaze behaviour might also be worth further exploration. For example, as climbing movements become practised does visual search become more intuitive, and not consciously deliberative? There is a brief mention of this in lines 713-716, but could be elaborated further. Finally, whilst I am personally an advocate for the utility of eye-tracking technology, recording the point of gaze does not necessarily capture what information is drawn from that location and how that relates to cognition. A brief reference to these limitations might, therefore, be appropriate.

The report adheres to standard reporting guidelines, providing a good level of detail on the study’s proposed methodology for data collection and analysis. The methods section provides a generally excellent level of detail giving clear consideration to considerations of reliability and future replication. There were a few small areas that would benefit from additional detail or clarification. Firstly, one of the main challenges with using mobile eye-tracking technology in real-world climbing tasks is the limited trackable visual range (vertical 52 deg) of the glasses, as compared to the normal human field of vision (vertical 125 deg). Given that climbers are in close proximity to the wall, they are presumably required to use the extreme vertical range of their visual field in order to see prospective holds above and their feet placement below, perhaps exceeding the trackable range of the glasses. Would the researchers clarify whether there was any additional instruction provided to the participants to circumnavigate this limitation? If so, it might be worth detailing in the procedures section.

The methods for analysing the GIE, gaze, and Luxov Touch data were all appropriate, described to a high level of detail, and conducted to a high technical standard. One small area for clarification might be how gaze behaviour for ‘online movements’ were analysed. The defined areas of interest were clear, but I think you stated that you only focused on hand holds, presumably omitting some fixations that were focused on feet movements or prospecting foot holds? The rationale for adopting this approach were not 100% clear, nor how it may have impacted the proportion of time split between online/proactive gaze control.

The practice schedules for the three control groups were clearly outlined and logically structured. Perhaps the only small detail omitted was the rest period between attempts, as this has implications for time available for route reading from the ground. One small area for concern was in the instruction to participants to ‘not pause’ when climbing, as this strategy is not representative of what would be considered ‘normal’ climbing. Most climbers will commonly take any resting opportunity to not only recover, but also to route read ahead to plan their next series of movements. In this respect, the experiment may encourage a gaze strategy that is not representative of normal climbing performance. This said, the manuscript provides more than sufficient detail for the reader to decide the validity and transferability of the results.

Reviewer #2: The authors studied whether different practice schedules would differentially affect gaze behavior in climbing. This manuscript represents a huge effort to address their goal: many hours of data collection, long-term practice, and appropriate design (pretest transfer, posttest transfer, etc). I applause the authors on this.

Major:

- My main concern reflects the issue of sample size. Despite the authors stating that they calculated the required sample size through GPower, I believe that there is a mistake in their calculation. As far as I am aware (also see Faul et al., 2007, Behavior Research Methods, 39(2), 175-191), the value that one must include in "number of measurements" is the number of repeated measures and, in this case, it should be 2 (not multiplying it by number of groups, as the authors performed). Doing the calculation for 80% power, medium effect size, 3 groups, and 2 measurements leads to 42 participants (not 24). The actual power is 52% (if I am correct). In the end, having only 21 participants, this decreases even further to 46%.

The only power that they are guaranteed to find (with 80%) is a large effect size.

I understand that having to collect more data is always an issue (lines 420-427), especially when the data collection is so demanding. However, I would not use this as an argument to not achieve the required sample size for the effects I would like to observe (even more when considering that the paper was funded).

- Another concern that is spread over the paper is that the authors have the tendency to bring strong statements that are not fully supported by the literature. This is problematic and, in my opinion, not even necessary for the paper. For instance, the authors claim that instrinsic variability is insufficient for learners to progress in learning which I (see below) cannot agree. Other instance, in the discussion, the authors claim that previous research in perceptual-motor learning has revealed benefits from variable practice for transfer. This, again, is not true in general. There are examples through all introduction and discussion (even though I mostly highlighted the ones in the intro). My suggestion would be to revise the paper and add the nuances here and there that the literature demonstrates.

Other than that, the paper has only minor issues:

- Line 59 - "The performer must find a trade-off" . I would change trade-off for "balance".

- Line 78 - No need for "however" here.

- Lines 74 and 84 - Tt seems that refs (9) and (12,13) are opposing findings regard the same age range (young adults). If I understand correctly, the task dimension is important to determine when one type of gaze is important or not. This should be more explicitly stated.

- Line 110 - The (16) paper did show that transfer depends on exploration - systematic change over time - rather than variability. In fact, no measure of variability (in the sense of data variance or spread) was maintained in their prediction of transfer performance. You could say that different practice schedules have the potential to differentially guide exploration.

Lines 114-115: This statement is wrong. If the authors want to mean that constant practice is insufficient, there are many examples of studies with tasks that have a single condition that leads to change in initial behavioral tendencies. In fact, the main theoretical formalisms of dynamical systems were considered in terms of a system practicing a single task condition (see Schoner et al., 1992; Zanone et al., 1992). If the authors want to mean that intrinsic variability is insufficient for changing initial tendencies, it is also problematic. Initial tendencies in tasks that require new movement patterns lead to great competition between organism and task. This, in turn, leads to increased variability (arising from the system). This, as stated above, would be sufficient to lead the system to a new solution and, thus, "progress from their initial behavioral tendencies". My suggestion would be to direct the argument in terms of "differential" guidance of exploration rather than "insufficient variability". In fact, this would be in line to (17) who proposed different goal spaces for variable and constant practice.

- Lines 153-156 - As far as I am aware, self-controlled studies have shown, mostly, results in transfer tests. Not much during practice (or retention). From your rationale, the performance during acquisition should also differ. How can your explanation deal with the rest of the literature?

- Lines 172-173: So far, the argument was that, if the variations allow perception of more useful information, then transfer would be better (if the given information was also useful in this new context). Now, it became that variable practice leads to more adaptable behaviors - which is wrong (see van Rossum, 1990; or even Pacheco et al., 2018 - Experimental Brain Research). I would delete this sentence. The paragraph does not need that statement.

- Lines 338-340: I am not sure that more complex hip trajectory leads to "poor sensitivity of the climber to the environmental constraints". more or less complexity depends on the task (as highlighted by Newell & Vaillancourt, 2001 - Human Movement Science). I would add a rationale supporting this expectation in this task.

- Statistical Analyses: I do not understand why the authors do not use JUST the Bayesian statistics. The idea, usually, is that the Bayesian approach represents another approach to statistical analyses (not a complementary one). Using both does not make much sense as they have different "rationales" or "physolophical assumptions".

- Line 447 - "Error! Reference source not found"

- Lines 633-636: I do not think the authors provided sufficient rationale to point out that the variable practice provided in the present paper would be sufficient to attune individuals to A higher-order information that would facilitate transfer. The issue that I am raising comes from the fact that not all variable practice should be related to all transfer tests and not all variable practice should lead to attunement - considering the direct learning idea or any other approach.

- Line 639: It could be transfer was not sufficiently complex to need exploration in practice. How exploration was measured?

- Lines 642-643: In the intro, the authors claimed that intrinsic variability was not enough. Now, it is.

- Lines 659-661: I believe it is one thing to claim that there are intrinsic dynamics that affect what is the best for a given individual in a given task and another to claim that individuals would be aware what is best for them. The authors assumed both - why would that be the case?

- Lines 741-743 - Did the CG showed overspecialization? Or any decrement to support the statement of lack of "general transfer"?

I hope my comments help the authors.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


15 Apr 2022

Dear Dr. Wood, Dear Reviewers,

We would like to thank the reviewers for their helpful comments, which provided us the opportunity to improve the manuscript. We addressed all the reviewers’ comments and questions. You can find in the text below our point-by-point responses (marked with *). The indicated line numbers correspond to those of the manuscript with marked changes (changes are highlighted in red).

We hope that our responses and rewrite will meet your expectations.

With best regards

Reviewer #1:

- The manuscript describes a technically sound piece of scientific research that addresses a previously under-researched area of study. The study is novel, in that it extends current body of research related to practice schedules and the acquisition of climbing skill. Furthermore, the study adopts a research paradigm that has previously been under-utilised within the study of climbing performance, combining mobile eye-tracking technology with pressure-sensitive climbing holds and GIE data. Previous research utilising mobile eye-tracking technology has been criticised for being reliant upon aggregated gaze behaviours and not adequately capturing the temporal aspect of participant’s gaze behaviour, due to the labour-intensive nature of manual analysis. One of the distinct strengths of this study, is combining multiple complimentary measures: Aligning gaze data with the timestamps from pressure-sensitive holds, enables the temporal aspect of gaze behaviour in climbing performance is successfully captured. In this respect, gaze behaviour is captured in the context in which it occurred. The further addition of GIE data enables inferences to be made as to not only which form of practice schedule is most effective (increased fluency), but also make inferences about which gaze strategies might be more effective.

- A succinct rationale for the study is provided, drawing upon relevant literature to draw parallels between the attentional demands of climbing movement, in regards to the visual search strategies adopted, and the attentional demand of walking/climbing. Whilst this comparison is valid in many respects, the manuscript may have benefitted further from a fuller discussion of the performance demands of climbing - how they differ from walking/running (e.g. multiple points of contact used in conjunction, more 3D in how forces are applied, etc) and how this inevitably impacts attentional focus and gaze behaviour.

*We added l.91 to 96 a description of the performance demands in climbing: and how it impacts gaze behaviour : “Climbing locomotion is performed on a vertical plane and climbers need to find support surfaces on the wall (the handholds and footholds) on which to apply forces to climb up the route while maintaining their balance with one to four points of contact (the hands and feet) (14). In this context, the visual system is used (i) to locate the support surfaces on the wall, and (ii) to perceive and act on the opportunities for action that these supports and their configuration on the wall afford to the climber.”

- The cognitive processes involved whilst engaged in climbing performances are perhaps oversimplified, categorising attentional focus as a dichotomy between maintaining current movement and monitoring the environment for information that may constrain future movements. This may potentially disregard a wide range of other factors (e.g. thoughts of anxiety, apprehension) that may impact upon attentional focus and gaze behaviour.

*We go beyond the presented dichotomy in the results as we consider some other aspects of gaze behavior (although they were not central to the paper research question) by measuring the visual entropy and duration of the gaze visit of the handholds, as gaze behavior can also be used to look for the chain of actions and to investigate the holds respectively. We also agree with the reviewer’s comment that gaze behavior in climbing task can be affected by other cognitive factors. For example, anxiety was shown to affect gaze behavior in climbing (Nieuwenhuys, Pijpers, Oudejans & Bakker, 2008). As we were aware of this potential effect, we designed the climbing task to limit this effect as much as possible: the maximum height of the routes was about 5m (which is low for a climbing route) and the participants were climbing top-roped (which is less engaging than lead climbing).

- Furthermore, the embodied nature of gaze behaviour might also be worth further exploration. For example, as climbing movements become practised does visual search become more intuitive, and not consciously deliberative? There is a brief mention of this in lines 713-716, but could be elaborated further.

*This is an interesting question that we cannot respond based on our measures. The change in gaze behavior that we observed in this study should be implicit to the learning protocol that we designed. Indeed, the participants were not instructed to perform any of the observed gaze behaviors: the observed changes should be due to the different practice schedules. We would expect that their attentional focus would be directed toward the task goal (i.e., climbing as fluently as possible avoiding pauses and jerky movements). Thus, we would expect that the participants would never “consciously” perform one form of gaze behavior or another, but that the participants implicitly “organize” their gaze behavior with practice to improve the chaining of their actions on the climbing routes.

- Finally, whilst I am personally an advocate for the utility of eye-tracking technology, recording the point of gaze does not necessarily capture what information is drawn from that location and how that relates to cognition. A brief reference to these limitations might, therefore, be appropriate.

*We added a sentence about these limitation in the “Summary and future directions” section l.782-785 : “However, the capture of the location of the point of gaze with eye-tracking technology does not necessarily capture what information is used for movement control, whilst the practice schedules may have differentially affected participants’ attunement.”

- The report adheres to standard reporting guidelines, providing a good level of detail on the study’s proposed methodology for data collection and analysis. The methods section provides a generally excellent level of detail giving clear consideration to considerations of reliability and future replication. There were a few small areas that would benefit from additional detail or clarification. Firstly, one of the main challenges with using mobile eye-tracking technology in real-world climbing tasks is the limited trackable visual range (vertical 52 deg) of the glasses, as compared to the normal human field of vision (vertical 125 deg). Given that climbers are in close proximity to the wall, they are presumably required to use the extreme vertical range of their visual field in order to see prospective holds above and their feet placement below, perhaps exceeding the trackable range of the glasses. Would the researchers clarify whether there was any additional instruction provided to the participants to circumnavigate this limitation? If so, it might be worth detailing in the procedures section.

*Indeed, the limited trackable visual range is one of the limitations in the use of eye-tracking system in sporting tasks. In climbing, and specifically with the Tobii 2 eye tracking glasses, the point of gaze was lost when the participants were looking toward their feet while standing. As capturing the gaze related to the feet movements would have required to constrain the visual field of the climber, or to instruct them to perform unnatural head movements, we chose to focus on the gaze behavior related to hand movements. However, on session 10 we observed that some participants of the constant practice group were never looking down at their feet during their climb of the control route, which suggested that, whilst they used more online control of their hand movements, they did not use foveal visual information to control their feet movements. Thus, as we stated l.725 to 734, whilst investigating the differences in the visual control of hand and feet movements in quadrupedal locomotion such as climbing is definitely an interesting line of study, given the current state of eye tracking technology, it would be necessary to apply additional constraints to the visual system of the participants.

- The methods for analysing the GIE, gaze, and Luxov Touch data were all appropriate, described to a high level of detail, and conducted to a high technical standard. One small area for clarification might be how gaze behaviour for ‘online movements’ were analysed. The defined areas of interest were clear, but I think you stated that you only focused on hand holds, presumably omitting some fixations that were focused on feet movements or prospecting foot holds? The rationale for adopting this approach were not 100% clear, nor how it may have impacted the proportion of time split between online/proactive gaze control.

*We focused on the gaze behavior related to hand movements as explained in the previous response to the reviewer’s comment. More precisely, “online” and “proactive” gaze were measure based on the gaze offset time, that is the time difference between when the handhold was touched and when the point of gaze moved away from the handhold (l. 362-364).

- The practice schedules for the three control groups were clearly outlined and logically structured. Perhaps the only small detail omitted was the rest period between attempts, as this has implications for time available for route reading from the ground. One small area for concern was in the instruction to participants to ‘not pause’ when climbing, as this strategy is not representative of what would be considered ‘normal’ climbing. Most climbers will commonly take any resting opportunity to not only recover, but also to route read ahead to plan their next series of movements. In this respect, the experiment may encourage a gaze strategy that is not representative of normal climbing performance. This said, the manuscript provides more than sufficient detail for the reader to decide the validity and transferability of the results.

*As indicated l.285, the participants had a maximum of 30s to read the route for all trials: “(iii) the participant stood 3m in front of the route for 30s of route preview.” The routes that were not climbed were hidden with a tarpaulin to prevent additional route previewing. Thus, regarding the rest period, the participant had the 30s of previewing the route and approximately 1min while the experimenter calibrated the eye-tracker, repeated the instructions, uncovered the route and checked the safety rope. These steps are described l.283 to 295.

*Regarding the climbing task used for the experiment, these instructions are commonly used in studies about perceptual-motor learning in climbing. The instruction “to chain movements without pauses” was designed to challenge the participants throughout the learning protocol and to observe to what extent they could perceive and act on nested affordances with practice (for a review on the topic, see Orth, Davids & Seifert, 2015, Sport Medicine).

Reviewer #2: The authors studied whether different practice schedules would differentially affect gaze behavior in climbing. This manuscript represents a huge effort to address their goal: many hours of data collection, long-term practice, and appropriate design (pretest transfer, posttest transfer, etc). I applause the authors on this.

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- My main concern reflects the issue of sample size. Despite the authors stating that they calculated the required sample size through GPower, I believe that there is a mistake in their calculation. As far as I am aware (also see Faul et al., 2007, Behavior Research Methods, 39(2), 175-191), the value that one must include in "number of measurements" is the number of repeated measures and, in this case, it should be 2 (not multiplying it by number of groups, as the authors performed). Doing the calculation for 80% power, medium effect size, 3 groups, and 2 measurements leads to 42 participants (not 24). The actual power is 52% (if I am correct). In the end, having only 21 participants, this decreases even further to 46%.

The only power that they are guaranteed to find (with 80%) is a large effect size.

I understand that having to collect more data is always an issue (lines 420-427), especially when the data collection is so demanding. However, I would not use this as an argument to not achieve the required sample size for the effects I would like to observe (even more when considering that the paper was funded).

*Thank you for highlighting this point as it appears that we made a mistake in our calculation on GPower. As observed by the reviewer, the number of measurements should be 2. In an earlier version of this manuscript, we used a linear mixed model to analyze the effect of Groups, Session and Trial on our main dependent variable (that is the Gaze offset time), which enabled us to avoid averaging this data to perform a mixed-ANOVA, which is presented in the current version of the manuscript. Moreover, our “raw” dataset – e.g., the “offset_duration.csv” file in the S1_Data folder of the Supporting Information– on the control route includes approximately 33 measurements per session and per participant. However, after discussing our analysis with a researcher external to the project, it was recommended that we simplify the statistical model used and to add the Bayesian analysis to give more information relative to the non-significant results. As such, the linear mixed model previously used showed that same results as the current mixed-ANOVA (that is only a significant Group x Session interaction):

*“The final linear mixed model included participant and handhold as adjustments of the intercept. The fit of the LMM applied to time of the gaze visit offset, was improved by the interaction between Session and Group [LLR χ² (2) = 51.41, p < .001]. The fixed effects Group [LLR χ² (2) = 5.49, p = .064], Trial [LLR χ² (2) = 0.50, p = .777], Session [LLR χ² (1) = 0.62, p = .430], the interaction between Session and Trial [LLR χ² (2) = 2.00, p = .368], Trial and Group [LLR χ² (4) = 2.27, p = .686] and between Group, Session and Trial [LLR χ² (4) = 0.404, p = .982] did not significantly affect the LMM fit.”

*Thus, the study design that we initially planned had 6 within participants measurements (3 Trials x 2 Sessions) for our main dependent variable of interest as we indicated in the GPower analysis. Also, the results showed a medium effect size according to the generalized eta squared of the Session x Group interaction on this variable, giving an observed power >.80. These results would still need to be replicated to be confirmed as this study is the first to propose this analysis of the gaze behavior in a climbing task, but now this study can provide a first value of effect size that can be expected.

- Another concern that is spread over the paper is that the authors have the tendency to bring strong statements that are not fully supported by the literature. This is problematic and, in my opinion, not even necessary for the paper. For instance, the authors claim that instrinsic variability is insufficient for learners to progress in learning which I (see below) cannot agree. Other instance, in the discussion, the authors claim that previous research in perceptual-motor learning has revealed benefits from variable practice for transfer. This, again, is not true in general. There are examples through all introduction and discussion (even though I mostly highlighted the ones in the intro). My suggestion would be to revise the paper and add the nuances here and there that the literature demonstrates.

*We changed the sentence relative to intrinsic variability as we agree that it was not appropriate and could be misunderstood: “When the same practice condition is repeated, variability in the performed movement has been found to occur from one repetition to the next. This variability is intrinsic to the motor system.”

*We also made changes to the manuscript in the introduction and discussion according to the reviewer’s comments

Other than that, the paper has only minor issues:

- Line 59 - "The performer must find a trade-off" . I would change trade-off for "balance".

*We changed as suggested.

- Line 78 - No need for "however" here.

- Lines 74 and 84 - Tt seems that refs (9) and (12,13) are opposing findings regard the same age range (young adults). If I understand correctly, the task dimension is important to determine when one type of gaze is important or not. This should be more explicitly stated.

*The refs (9) and (12,13) are not opposing findings. The observed gaze behavior is different for young adults in the two studies because the task demand is different. In (9), the task was walking while stepping on the center of the target (the task goal was to be as accurate as possible) whereas in (12,13), there was no demand for accuracy. The participants were just walking in a room with obstacles. From the l.64 to 77, we try to focus on conditions where online control is required whereas the following paragraph focus on conditions where proactive gaze behavior is possible.

- Line 110 - The (16) paper did show that transfer depends on exploration - systematic change over time - rather than variability. In fact, no measure of variability (in the sense of data variance or spread) was maintained in their prediction of transfer performance. You could say that different practice schedules have the potential to differentially guide exploration.

*Thank you - we changed as suggested by the reviewer (l.114-116): “According to learning approaches rooted in dynamical system theory, different practice schedules have the potential to differentially guide exploration, which could affect the transfer of learning (16)”

-Lines 114-115: This statement is wrong. If the authors want to mean that constant practice is insufficient, there are many examples of studies with tasks that have a single condition that leads to change in initial behavioral tendencies. In fact, the main theoretical formalisms of dynamical systems were considered in terms of a system practicing a single task condition (see Schoner et al., 1992; Zanone et al., 1992). If the authors want to mean that intrinsic variability is insufficient for changing initial tendencies, it is also problematic. Initial tendencies in tasks that require new movement patterns lead to great competition between organism and task. This, in turn, leads to increased variability (arising from the system). This, as stated above, would be sufficient to lead the system to a new solution and, thus, "progress from their initial behavioral tendencies". My suggestion would be to direct the argument in terms of "differential" guidance of exploration rather than "insufficient variability". In fact, this would be in line to (17) who proposed different goal spaces for variable and constant practice.

*Indeed, this sentence was not appropriate in this context and could be misunderstood. Thus, we removed the second part stating that intrinsic variability was “insufficient for learners to progress from their initial behavioral tendencies” (l.120-122). We also moved and modified the sentence “This consists in adding unstructured variability to practice at the level of multiple task parameters (18).” (l.126-127) so that now the paragraph gives more clearly the definition of intrinsic and unstructured variability.

- Lines 153-156 - As far as I am aware, self-controlled studies have shown, mostly, results in transfer tests. Not much during practice (or retention). From your rationale, the performance during acquisition should also differ. How can your explanation deal with the rest of the literature?

*From our rationale, the performance should differ both during acquisition and transfer as illustrated by the examples from refs (24) and (26). A review on the topic by Sanli et al. (2013, Frontiers in Psychology) pointed out that self-controlled practice benefitted transfer but also immediate and delayed retention. This review also showed that transfer tests are not the most common test used to assess the effect of self-controlled practice when control of the practice schedule is given. Ref 26 is one of the rare studies using a transfer test.

- Lines 172-173: So far, the argument was that, if the variations allow perception of more useful information, then transfer would be better (if the given information was also useful in this new context). Now, it became that variable practice leads to more adaptable behaviors - which is wrong (see van Rossum, 1990; or even Pacheco et al., 2018 - Experimental Brain Research). I would delete this sentence. The paragraph does not need that statement.

*This sentence was removed as suggested (l.179-181).

- Lines 338-340: I am not sure that more complex hip trajectory leads to "poor sensitivity of the climber to the environmental constraints". more or less complexity depends on the task (as highlighted by Newell & Vaillancourt, 2001 - Human Movement Science). I would add a rationale supporting this expectation in this task.

*The Geometric Index of Entropy is very often used in the context of the study of perceptual-motor behaviors in climbing. In the context of this sentence, the adjective “complex” may not be the best suited as we meant a “noisy” or “random” hip trajectory. As the reviewer emphasized, this measure can be task-sensitive: the values should differ from one climbing route to another if the path of the hip is also expected to differ. However, if only the holds are modified between the routes (not their locations), this measure enables researchers to assess the participant sensitivity to the route constraints. In the context of the current study, as the GIE scores are only compared within the same climbing route at different time periods (session 1 and 10), the measure reflects how well participants are able to chain their movements on the route before and after practice.

- Statistical Analyses: I do not understand why the authors do not use JUST the Bayesian statistics. The idea, usually, is that the Bayesian approach represents another approach to statistical analyses (not a complementary one). Using both does not make much sense as they have different "rationales" or "physolophical assumptions".

*We added the Bayesian statistics as suggested by a researcher external to the project. It was recommended that nonsignificant results in inferential statistics should be checked with Bayesian statistics for drawing conclusions. Such statistical approach has already been used in other related studies (e.g., Iodice et al. 2019, PNAS) as proposed by Dienes (2014, Frontiers in Psychology).

- Line 447 - "Error! Reference source not found"

*This was removed.

- Lines 633-636: I do not think the authors provided sufficient rationale to point out that the variable practice provided in the present paper would be sufficient to attune individuals to A higher-order information that would facilitate transfer. The issue that I am raising comes from the fact that not all variable practice should be related to all transfer tests and not all variable practice should lead to attunement - considering the direct learning idea or any other approach.

*We wanted to emphasize here that we varied the layout of handholds of the routes in variable practice conditions so that participants would learn to perceive the chaining of actions from the layout of handholds (for example, from the patterns that the holds shape on the wall). However, it is true that we don’t know what would be the higher order informational variables that would specify how to use the handholds. This is a question that we wanted to address in this project but for which we still need more investigations. Thus, we removed this sentence to avoid speculations about the results of this study (l.639-642).

- Line 639: It could be transfer was not sufficiently complex to need exploration in practice. How exploration was measured?

*In this sentence, we refer to exploration as changes in movement performance during practice. This sentence is clearly speculating about what could explain that the three groups improved their climbing fluency on the transfer route. The tasks used in motor learning studies are usually much less complex, so we wanted to stress that the nature of the task that we used may already have provided participants with the opportunity to discover various movement solutions (even in a constant practice condition and even if we the designed climbing task was simplified in comparison to a real one). The specific study of exploration on the control route for the three groups is planned in a future research project.

- Lines 642-643: In the intro, the authors claimed that intrinsic variability was not enough. Now, it is.

*We modified the sentence in the introduction as it seemed confusing. We acknowledge that this sentence was not appropriate.

- Lines 659-661: I believe it is one thing to claim that there are intrinsic dynamics that affect what is the best for a given individual in a given task and another to claim that individuals would be aware what is best for them. The authors assumed both - why would that be the case?

*We expected that individuals in the SVG would benefit from the control they were given over their practice schedule because previous studies that we presented in the introduction suggested this would be the case. Notably, Liu et al. (2012) showed that by giving control to the learners over their practice schedule, this appeared to enable them to challenge themselves more optimally than when the practice schedules induced regular changes in task difficulty. Similarly, the results of Wu and Magill (2011) suggested that learners in a self-controlled group had better results in transfer test because they could shape their practice schedule in a more optimal way.

- Lines 741-743 - Did the CG showed overspecialization? Or any decrement to support the statement of lack of "general transfer"?

*The participants in CG changed their gaze behavior on the control route with practice but on the transfer route, the gaze behavior did not appear to change between session 1 and 10. This result is why we stated that CG “overspecialize” their gaze behavior to the control route and that there was no transfer of the gaze pattern to the transfer route. As “overspecializing” may suggest an associated decrease in performance, we changed the manuscript to say that CG “specialize” their gaze behavior (l.749, l.750 and l.782).

-I hope my comments help the authors.

*We want to thank the two reviewers for their helpful comments that we think have contributed to improve this manuscript.

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