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. 2022 Aug 3;17(8):e0271329. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0271329

Tune out pain: Agency and active engagement predict decreases in pain intensity after music listening

Claire Howlin 1,*, Alison Stapleton 2, Brendan Rooney 2
Editor: Urs M Nater3
PMCID: PMC9348657  PMID: 35921262

Abstract

Music is increasingly being recognised as an adjuvant treatment for pain management. Music can help to decrease the experience of both chronic and experimental pain. Cognitive agency has been identified as a specific mechanism that may mediate the analgesic benefits of music engagement however, it is unclear if this specific mechanism translates to acute pain. Previous attempts to understand the cognitive mechanisms that underpin music analgesia have been predominantly lab-based, limiting the extent to which observed effects may apply to participants’ everyday lives. Addressing these gaps, in naturalistic settings, the present study examined the degree to which cognitive agency (i.e., perceived choice in music), music features (i.e., complexity), and individual levels of musical sophistication were related to perceived pain. In an online global experiment, using a randomised between groups experimental design with two levels for choice (no choice and perceived choice) and two levels for music (high and low complexity), a sample of 286 adults experiencing acute pain reported their pain intensity and pain unpleasantness pre- and post-music listening. A bespoke piece of music was co-created with a commercial artist to enable the manipulation of music complexity while controlling for familiarity, while facilitating an authentic music listening experience. Overall, findings demonstrated that increased perceived control over music is associated with analgesic benefits, and that perceived choice is more important than music complexity. Highlighting the importance of listener engagement, people who reported higher levels of active engagement experienced greater decreases of pain intensity in the perceived choice condition, than those who reported lower levels of active engagement. These findings have implications for both research and practice, emphasising the importance of facilitating freedom of choice, and sustained engagement with music throughout music listening interventions.

Introduction

Music listening is increasingly being recognised as an adjuvant treatment for pain management [1, 2]. But there is still an open question in terms of what is driving the analgesic benefits of music listening. Previous studies that have targeted basic acoustic features such as tempo [3, 4], energy [5], or combinations of features leading to perceived relaxing properties in the music [6] or perceived arousal, valence and depth [7]. Yet these studies have found no relationship between basic perceptual properties, and decreases in pain perception. Indeed, the evidence from meta-analyses supports the view that specific features do not predict reductions in pain, which can be measured in terms of pain intensity and pain unpleasantness [4, 8]. Instead, it has been observed that effective music interventions can vary widely in terms of genre, tempo, loudness, duration, timing, and equipment used [3, 4, 9]; yet still achieve comparable results. This precludes the notion that a one-to-one relationship exists between musical features and physiological responses, and emphasises the role of functional equivalence in music interventions. This means that not only do different people often respond very differently to the same piece of music, reciprocally people can use different pieces of music to get the same functional effect of analgesia [10].

Given the lack of evidence to support the role of basic acoustic features in music listening interventions, and as predicted by the cognitive vitality model for music interventions for pain [11], we argue that greater consideration should be given to higher level cognitive processes, such as (i) cognitive agency (e.g. self-directed choice) and (ii) active cognitive engagement with music (e.g. active listening, musical absorption, self-reflection) [11, 12]. The cognitive vitality model outlines that a meaningful, rewarding, absorbing musical experience enhances the analgesic benefits of music [11]. The potential reward of music listening acts as an incentive for the person to continue to listen and maintain active engagement. Prolonged active engagement with music can lead to musical absorption, which is related to a decreased awareness of physical sensations, and the initial pain becomes less saliant. Additionally, the cognitive vitality model outlines that cognitive agency can enhance active engagement with music as people decide to listen more closely to specific streams in the music or focus on the lyrics.

Cognitive agency refers to an individual’s sense of control over their environment and contributes to greater feelings of health and wellbeing [5, 11, 13, 14]. The impact of cognitive agency in music interventions is underpinned by neuroimaging research that implicates the role of the default mode network in mediating the analgesic responses to pain [1517]. This emphasizes that music is involved in a top-down pain regulation strategy that may be enhanced by the act of choosing the music itself. This argument is supported by studies [2, 7, 16] and meta-analyses [8, 9] that demonstrate that patient preferred, self-chosen music is an important predictor of a successful music intervention for pain across a range of clinical and experimental contexts. Previous studies have demonstrated that increased agency over musical production can lead to a decrease in perceived physical effort during physical exercise [17]. A potential limitation of empirical work exploring this is that the act of making a choice of music is confounded by other things such as participants’ personal connection to the music or familiarity.

A recent experiment used a novel perceived choice paradigm to isolate the impact of cognitive agency on pain. In this study participants were given different degrees of perceived control over music selection, when in fact the music was predetermined by the experimenter [5]. The cold pressor task was used to stimulate pain, and when participants believed that they were selecting the music, their pain tolerance increased compared to when they had no control over the music. This experiment indicates that the actual act of making a choice over music can contribute to increases in pain tolerance when the music itself was controlled. The current study aims to extend these findings of acute pain tolerance beyond the lab to participants’ pre-existing everyday acute pain experience. While increasing the ecological validity of the previous study, the current study also aims to increase experimental control by working with a commercial music artist and producer to design a bespoke track specifically composed for this study. This is a methodological step forward compared to lab-based studies. Previous attempts to examine musical engagement in lab settings have used focused task paradigms with tone sequences rather than real pieces of music, which undermines the likelihood that sustained attention could occur and that people will actually enjoy the music [16].

Working with a music artists also allowed us to design a test of the contribution of the music features to pain experience. Individual responses to music are highly idiosyncratic, meaning different features are likely to evoke different types of emotional responses in different individuals [1821]. Therefore, music analgesia does not arise as an automated or induced response to music [5, 7, 22]. We suggest that music analgesia arises as from an interaction between the music and the listener that is characterised by an optimal level of active music engagement [2, 5, 7, 9]. Optimal engagement arises from a music listening experience that is neither too complex nor too simple for the listener [2325], based on their own personal music preferences, expertise, and baseline state of arousal [26]. This means that the music that a person will find optimal, will vary across different people, and vary for the same person at different times. If the music is too simple for the listener it can lead to boredom, and if it is too complex it can lead to irritation or over-stimulation [26]. Accordingly, the present study will manipulate the complexity of the music.

As mentioned, music engagement is an individual experience and there are a number of individual characteristics that influence the way that people engage with music, including one’s musical sophistication, the degree to which people experience musical reward, and an individual’s tendency to empathise with the emotional content in music. Musical Sophistication is an individual trait that can account for different levels of musical skills and interest across the general population [27]. Musical reward refers to the neural reward processes that can occur in response to listening to music [28], which tends to occur more frequently when listening to your own self-chosen music [29]. An individual’s tendency to empathise with the emotions expressed in a piece of music can be predicted by scores on the interpersonal reactivity index, which also accounts for why some people find enjoyment and pleasure in sad music [18]. Each of these individual traits can be measured using reliable psychometric measures which are used in the current study [27, 30, 31]. It is reasonable to expect that people with higher scores on musicality, musical reward or the interpersonal reactivity index will pre-dispose them to becoming more engaged, distracted, and absorbed by music. Conversely, people with less interest, experience, or who find less enjoyment from music are less likely to engage with it to the same degree.

Also it is important to note that because pain is multidimensional with both physical and emotional components [32], it is important to evaluate both the intensity and unpleasantness associated with a pain experience. Due to the inherently subjective nature of pain, it is not possible to measure pain with an objective measure and so self-report measures are used in pain management research [33]. Numeric rating scales (NRS) are considered the gold standard for measuring patient’s subjective feeling of pain intensity and pain unpleasantness, because they are more sensitive than other self-report measures that treat pain as a unidimensional construct [33]. Accordingly, this study uses two measures of pain experience, pain intensity, and pain unpleasantness.

Research questions and hypotheses

Before collecting data, we pre-registered our hypotheses based on the above rationale (https://osf.io/egqaz). The present study will examine the degree to which perceived control of music is related to a decrease in perceived pain in the context of everyday acute pain. Here we predict that increased perceived control predicts decreases in pain intensity and pain unpleasantness (H1). Although the benefits of music engagement have been well demonstrated for chronic pain [9, 16, 34], and experimental pain [2, 5, 35], it is not yet known the degree to which the analgesic benefits of music engagement translates to acute pain in everyday settings. Additionally, this study will explore the role of music engagement by manipulating musical complexity via an altered piece of bespoke music specifically composed for this study, to maximise engagement. We also recognise that individual attributes related to musicality (specifically active music engagement) may contribute to the analgesic responses to music for acute pain. Here we predict that pain experience will be different between the low music complexity and high music complexity conditions (H2) we make no specific directional prediction of how this might interact with participants’ level of active engagement. Before testing these hypotheses, as a manipulation check, it is important to make sure that the two music tracks used are comparable in terms of aesthetic and emotional responses. To this end, we examine if the tracks are different in terms of aesthetic or emotional responses. While much evidence has already demonstrated the benefits of music listening for pain, testing this is an important pre-requisite to our main hypotheses, given the bespoke nature of the music used in the present study. Finally, because the study recruits a large online sample, we collect data on a range of important individual characteristics listed above (musical sophistication, musical reward, empathy) so as to profile the participants on these important characteristics. In addition, they serve to compare the independent groups in terms of these variables to ensure their comparability.

Methods

Experimental design

This study design and analysis were preregistered on the Open Science Framework: https://osf.io/4ywjd/. The present study employed a randomised 2x2 between groups experimental design with two levels for choice (no choice and perceived choice) and two levels for music (high complexity and low complexity). One of the core aims of this study was to replicate a finding that was previously demonstrated in lab setting, to a real world clinical sample with acute pain. Due to the relatively fleeting nature of acute pain, online data collection was used to facilitate more rapid data collection from people at a time when they experienced acute pain.

Ethics

Participants provided informed written consent and could withdraw at any time. Since the study was classified as a low-risk study, a research ethics exemption was obtained from University College Dublin Human Research Ethics Committee (REFRN: HS-E-21-96). The Human Research Ethics Committee Guidelines and Policies specifically Relating to Research Involving Human Subjects were abided by in all aspects of conducting this research. No personal identifiable data was collected as part of this study, and anonymous links were used to share the study. With the consent of the participants, anonymous data will be retained indefinitely and shared on an open repository to facilitate the principles of open data sharing and open science.

Sample size

An a priori power analysis using G*Power indicated that a sample size of 329 participants would be required for a 2 x 2 ANCOVA analysis with 6 co-variates based on an effect size of f = 0.23 in line with the analgesic effect of music identified in a previous meta-analysis [4]. 585 participants completed the online experiment, and 286 participants were found to meet all of the inclusion criteria below, and completed all components of the experiment. A second power analysis was completed based on the observed power (Cohen’s d = .73 for pain intensity and d = .72 for pain unpleasantness), and so data collection was stopped based on the observed power calculation for a linear model.

Inclusion criteria

A two-stage screening process was used to identify eligible participants using the Prolific participant recruitment platform. The screening process and inclusion criteria were registered in the study protocol on the open science framework. In stage one 2691 people answered screening questions which were presented one at a time, based on each previous response along with red herring questions to reduce the likelihood that participants would guess the nature of the study. Eligible participants were provided with a link to the full study and invited to take part on later on the same day. A total of 585 participants completed the experiment. Participants were considered eligible for inclusion if they: (i) reported an age over 18 years; (ii) reported baseline pain of at least 2 on a pain intensity numeric rating scale (NRS) ranging from 1 to 10 (to ensure that they were experiencing a mild level of pain before music listening); (iii) experienced pain for less than 12 weeks (pain extending beyond 12 weeks is often classified as chronic pain [36]); (iv) had not taken pain medication in the past 8 hours; (v) were not on any routine prescribed medication; (vi) were not pregnant; (vii) passed all four attention checks during the online experiment; and (viii) had access to headphones. Based on this criteria, 299 participants were excluded because they did not meet the inclusion criteria. The final sample size comprised 286 adults distributed across Europe (38.4%) North America (38.4%), South Africa (11.2%), Australia and New Zealand (2%), Israel (.7%), and Chile (.3%). Median pain duration was between 1 day and 1 week. The most commonly reported type of pain was back pain (34.6%), followed by headache (16.4%), pain in the joints (15%), neck pain (9.6%), and period pain (9.6%) See Table 1 for participants’ demographic details and well-being scores. Participants were paid at a rate of £9 per hour for their participation, with an average completion time of 30 minutes.

Table 1. Participant demographics and health and wellbeing scores for each experimental condition.

1 2 3 4
Experimental Condition No Choice Low Complexity (n = 73) No Choice High Complexity (n = 70) Perceived Choice Low Complexity (n = 67) Perceived Choice High Complexity (n = 76) Total (n = 286)
M (SD) M (SD) M (SD) M (SD) M (SD) α
Age 35.44(12.74) 34.29(13.53) 32.83(13.63) 34.68(13.47) 34.35(13.31)
Gender (Frequency)
 Female 38 42 40 44 164
 Male 33 27 27 32 119
 Self-Described 2 1 0 0 3
Musical Attributes
 GMSI F1 Active Engagementa 36.95(7.51) 36.2(7.77) 38.93(6.85) 36.75(6.60) 37.17(7.23) .79
 GMSI F2 Perceptual Abilities 41.49(5.13) 41.47(5.63) 41.4(5.21) 41.29(5.32) 41.41(5.296) .76
 GMSI F3 Musical Training 21.78(5.42) 21.2(5.75) 21.39(5.77) 21.45(5.98) 21.46(5.71) .88
 GMSI F4 Emotions 29.95(4.25) 29.3(4.33) 30.04(3.41) 29.32(4.31) 29.64(4.10) .70
 GMSI F5 Singing Abilities 29.7(5.61) 28.73(6.93) 29.09(5.75) 29.21(5.47) 29.21(5.94) .81
 Barcelona Musical Reward 79.26(9.32) 79.29(9.54) 80.16(8.63) 79.03(10.05) 79.42(9.38) .84
 IRI Fantasy Subscale 16.29(6.89) 17.56(6.07) 16.96(7.34) 16.86(5.98) 16.91(6.56) .85
Health and Wellbeing
 Health Statusb 8.32(2.01) 8.3(1.97) 8.1(1.93) 8(1.88) 8.18(1.94) .78
 Wellbeingc 6.23(2.93) 5.59(3.12) 5.43(2.67) 5.61(2.82) 5.72(2.89) .61
Cause of Pain (Frequency)
 Back Pain 27 18 25 28 98
 Headache 17 7 13 9 46
 Joint Pain (e.g. hips) 7 15 10 12 44
 Neck Pain 6 11 5 6 28
 Period Pain 3 11 7 6 27
 Other 9 1 1 6 17
 Injury 2 3 5 4 14
 Toothache or Earache 1 2 0 3 6
 Stomach Ache 1 2 1 2 6

Notes. Abbreviations GMSI Goldsmiths Musical Sophistication Index, IRI Interpersonal Reactivity Index, M Mean, SD Standard Deviation, f frequency. α The within-sample reliability co-efficient for each subscale was calculated using Cronbach’s alpha.

aPossibly due to coronavirus and its associated lockdowns/ public health restrictions, one item from the GMSI Active Engagement scale (‘I don’t spend much of my disposable income on music’) did not load well onto the scale and was deleted. The scale was re-calculated with 8 items for analysis.

bHealth status was assessed using the 4-item HowRu Health Status measure [37].

cPersonal well-being was assessed using the 4-item personal well-being measure [38].

Procedure and materials

Participants completed the experiment online through Qualtrics (Qualtrics, Provo, UT). First, participants reported their demographics, well-being, and pre-music listening pain intensity and unpleasantness. Next, using the Qualtrics randomiser participants were randomly allocated to one of the four conditions: (i) no choice and low complexity track, (ii) no choice & high complexity track, (iii) perceived choice and low complexity track, (iv) perceived choice and high complexity track. The perceived music choice paradigm [10] was used to examine the effect of perceived control on pain. In perceived choice conditions, participants ‘chose’ which track they would like to hear in full by sampling and subsequently selecting one track from four 2-second music clips. The instruction given to participants was ’Listen to each music sample and then choose the music you think would be the best thing to listen to when you have pain’. Participants in these conditions were unaware that each music clip came from the same piece of music (i.e., each clip was a different part of the same track) and that their final ‘chosen’ song was predetermined by their random condition assignment. All participants listened to their assigned piece of music in its entirety. Once the music finished, participants reported their (i) post-music listening pain intensity and unpleasantness, (ii) ratings of their emotional responses to the music, and (iii) individual attributes related to musicality, trait empathy, and musical anhedonia (see Fig 1).

Fig 1. Experimental procedure.

Fig 1

Participants were randomly allocated to one of four groups: (i) no choice and low complexity track, (ii) no choice and high complexity track, (iii) perceived choice and low complexity track, (iv) perceived choice and high complexity track. In the perceived choice conditions, participants listened to four 2-second music clips and selected which piece of music they wanted to listen to in full. Participants were naïve to the fact that they were listening to different parts of the same song (i.e., the final ‘chosen’ song was predetermined by their randomly assigned experimental condition.

Pain outcomes—Pain intensity and unpleasantness

Participants rated their pain intensity and unpleasantness before listening to the music on Numeric Rating Scales (NRS). The 100-point intensity scale had three anchor points ’no pain’ (0), ’moderate pain’ [39], and ’worst pain imaginable’ (100). The 100-point unpleasantness scale ranged from ’not unpleasant’ (0) to ’extremely unpleasant’ (100). After participants listened to the music, they provided a second set of pain intensity and pain unpleasantness on identical rating scales.

Ratings of emotional responses to music

Ratings of emotional responses to the music were assessed using the 9-item Geneva Emotional Musical Scale (GEMS-9; [40]). Participants rated their assigned track across nine emotional dimensions (e.g., Wonder, Transcendence, Power, Tenderness, Nostalgia, Peacefulness, Joyful Activation, Sadness, and Tension) on a five-point Likert scale ranging from 1 (‘Not at all’) to 5 (‘Very much’). Research has supported the factor structure of the GEMS-9, further demonstrating that it provides a better account of emotional responses to music than non-domain-specific emotional models [40].

Individual traits

Musical sophistication

The Goldsmiths Musical Sophistication Index v1.0 (GMSI; [27]) was used to measure musical sophistication, because it has been designed for use with the general population and demonstrates strong test-retest reliability and psychometric validity. The GMSI is comprised of five subscales (active engagement, perceptual abilities, musical training, emotional engagement, and singing abilities), described below that measure an individual’s tendency to engage with music on cognitive and emotional dimensions. Active Engagement captures a range of active musical engagement behaviours as well as the deliberate allocation of time and money on musical activities. Perceptual Abilities represents the self-assessment of a cognitive musical ability and is mostly related to music listening skills. Musical Training accounts for the extent of musical training and practice.

Emotions accounts for active behaviours related to emotional responses to music. Singing Abilities reflects different skills and abilities related to singing. Possible scores on the GMSI range from 18–126, with an average score of 81.58 across the general population. Participants responded on a 7-point Likert scale which ranged from ’completely disagree’ (1) to ’completely agree’ [6]. Population studies support the internal consistency, test-retest reliability, and validity of the GMSI [27]).

Empathy

The fantasy subscale of the Interpersonal Reactivity Index (IRI; [31]) was used as an indicator of trait empathy as it has previously been shown to be related to the degree to which people enjoy sad music [18]. The fantasy subscale taps respondents’ tendencies to transpose themselves imaginatively into the feelings and actions of fictitious characters in books, movies, and plays. Possible scores on the fantasy subscale of the IRI range from 7–35. Participants respond on a five-point Likert scale which ranges from ’Does not describe me well’ (1) to ’Describes me very well’ (5).

Musical stimuli

In collaboration with a professional music composer and global music production company, informed by existing research on music preferences in the general population [4144] and music preferences in pain management contexts [5, 7, 45], the lead researcher (C.H.) co-created a bespoke track for use in the present study, with multi-instrumentalist and composer, Anatole. This track was manipulated to create two versions varying in musical complexity by digitally removing different components of the melody, ornamentation, and percussion. Great care was taken to minimise the difference between the two versions, while achieving a perceivable difference. The core structure of the track was identical in both versions, such that the more complex track had a greater number of elements included. The high complexity track was designed to lead to sustained engagement and enjoyment from a general audience across all age groups. Specifically, the composer was asked to create a piece of music with a build-up of tension that gave way to a great sense of release in the last section of the track. This is a framework that is typically used in classical music, and helps to build a sense of anticipation [24] which may lead to higher levels of engagement. Note that the term “high complexity” is used as a description relative to the other condition, indeed both versions were still accessible to a general audience. To make the music more accessible to a general audience, the both versions of the track were kept quite short (3 minutes and 24 seconds). Although a familiar musical structure was used, different instruments and field recordings were introduced at different points to increase the level of novelty and surprise experienced by listeners.

The composer also varied the quality of different musical instruments, creating a slight sense of distortion on several sounds to create a sense of novelty using a familiar sound. A sense of novelty was emphasised during the creation of the track because novelty and surprise in musical experiences are related greater levels of pleasure and neural reward [46, 47]. Percussion was used extensively through the track to create a syncopated rhythm pattern as this tends to be preferred by a general audience [41] and distortion was used to emphasise the crescendo of the track. The tempo increased over the course of the track from 80 beats per minute to 120 beats per minute. The low complexity version of the track was much simpler than the main track. This version of the track kept the strings, piano, and bass of the original version but did not have any percussion, harmony, acoustic feedback, or field recordings, and had a consistent tempo of 80 bpm.

Data analysis

Multilevel modelling facilitates the simultaneous analysis of lower-level variables (e.g. individual effects) and higher level effects (e.g. group effects), and enables one to examine how variables from different levels interact together [48]. An additional benefit of multi-level modelling is that it does not rely on the assumption of independence of the residuals, which means that it can be used where data is clustered which can occur in research designs with independent groups. This was particularly important in the current study because the Intraclass Correlation Coefficient for each model identified that there was a relatively high degree of interdependence between the residuals. The ICC quantifies the degree of resemblance of the observations belonging to the same cluster and can range from 0 to 1. An ICC of 0 indicates perfect independence of the residuals [48]. In the current study the ICC was 0.67 for pain intensity, and 0.67 for pain unpleasantness, which can be considered as a very high level of homogeneity [49] and underpins the necessity of using a multilevel modelling approach. The details of each multilevel model are presented in the results section. All statistical analyses were conducted on SPSS version 26.

Results

Descriptive statistics

Descriptive statistics for the two dependant variables pain intensity and pain unpleasantness were calculated for each of the four experimental conditions (See Table 2). Inspection of the mean scores indicate that the perceived choice condition with high complexity had the greatest mean reductions in pain intensity (-11.04, SD 13.91), and pain unpleasantness (-13.67, SD 15.46).

Table 2. Pain reduction scores for each experimental condition.

1 2 3 4
Experimental Condition No Choice LC No Choice HC Perceived Choice LC Perceived Choice HC
n 73 70 67 76
M (SD) M (SD) M (SD) M (SD)
Pain Intensity Change -9.38 (14.01) -8.59 (12.15) -8.89 (11.66) -11.04 (13.91)
Pain Unpleasantness Change -11.80 (16.10) -10.60 (15.68) -12.33(13.71) -13.67(15.46)

Notes. Abbreviations M Mean, SD Standard Deviation, LC Low Complexity Music, HC High Complexity Music

Manipulation checks

Before testing the main hypotheses, a number of pre-requisite checks were performed and are reported first. Specifically before testing the first two hypotheses (H1 and H2), we tested if the tracks were comparable in terms of participants aesthetic and emotional responses towards them (H3).

Aesthetic responses to high complexity and low complexity music

In line with Berlyne’s model of aesthetic engagement [50] that positions aesthetic appeal as a combination of optimal complexity with optimal arousal complexity, enjoyment, interest, boredom, and attention ratings were collected to determine the aesthetic appeal of the two tracks. Participants rated both tracks highly in terms of enjoyment, interest, and the degree to which the track captured their attention, and low in terms of boredom, indicating that overall, both tracks were aesthetically pleasing to participants. A manipulation check was completed on participants’ aesthetic responses to the two tracks to examine whether music that was considered more complex by the composer was perceived as more complex by the participants. Independent samples t-tests were used to demonstrate that high complexity music was rated as significantly more complex than the low complexity music, t(558) = -3.41, p < .001 95% CI [-12.00, -3.22] Cohen’s d = -.29. This indicates that participants did perceive the ‘high complexity’ track as more complex than the ‘low complexity’ track.

Emotional ratings of high complexity and low complexity music

Participants provided emotional ratings on the GEMS-9 [40] after listening to the music track and completing pain ratings. High complexity music was rated as statistically significantly lower in terms of Tenderness, U(286) = 8464.5, Z = -2.59, p < .01 and Sadness, U(286) = 887.5, Z = -2.59, p < .05. There were no significant differences in ratings for Wonder, Tension, Activation, Power, Peacefulness, Transcendence or Nostalgia between the high complexity and low complexity music. Overall, this demonstrates that high complexity music was rated as less sad and less tender.

Independence of individual measures

Initially, it was planned to also include individual scores from the Barcelona Music Reward Questionnaire (BMRQ; [28]) and the fantasy subscale of the Interpersonal Reactivity Index (IRI; [31]). However, statistically significant correlations between the BMRQ, IRI and the GMSI meant that this approach would not be suitable as it would lead to covariance in the linear model. Instead only the subscales of the Goldsmiths Musical Sophistication Index were included in the linear modelling.

Changes in pain scores after music listening

A key question in this analysis was to identify if the bespoke music tracks could lead to a statistically significant decrease in pain scores. First, we examined if there were any decreases in pain scores overall. Paired sampled t-tests were used to compare pain scores before and after listening to music, for pain intensity and pain unpleasantness.

Overall there was a significant decrease in pain intensity, t(285) = 12.407, p < .001; 95% CI [8.00, 11.02] Cohen’s d = .734, of 9.51 (SD = 12.97) after music listening. There was also a significant decrease in pain unpleasantness, t(285) = 13.39, p < .001 95% CI [10.30, 13.85] d = .792, of 12.08 (SD = 15.26) after music listening. These effect sizes are at the upper range of what was expected based on the previously published meta-analysis which reports an effect size of g = .23 (5), and so we proceeded to test out hypotheses. The distributions of pain scores and their changes in response to music in each of the experimental condition are depicted in violin plots in Fig 2.

Fig 2. Violin plots of pain scores in each experimental condition.

Fig 2

Plots depict the distributions of pain scores and their changes in response to music in each of the experimental condition.

Hypothesis testing

For the core analysis we wanted to test hypothesis 1: that increased perceived control predicts decreases in pain intensity and pain unpleasantness and hypothesis 2: that pain experience will be different between the low music complexity and high music complexity conditions. We also recognise that individual attributes related to musicality (specifically active music engagement) may contribute to the analgesic responses to music for acute pain, but we make no specific directional prediction of how this might interact with music choice or music complexity. To address each hypothesis a multilevel model was used to compare the independent variables of level of choice, and music complexity while also accounting for the predictors of Active Engagement and Age. There were two levels for music complexity (high, low) and two levels for choice (perceived choice, no choice). The analysis was conducted for reports of both pain intensity and pain unpleasantness. Multilevel modelling was used to examine the role of individual effects related to musicality (e.g. GMSI Active Engagement Subscale) and higher level effects related to the music group which varied in terms of music complexity (high, low) and music choice (perceived choice, no choice) on the outcomes of pain intensity and pain unpleasantness. We had theoretical reasons to believe that there could be an interaction between different forms of musicality and music complexity, which warranted the investigation of cross-level interactions [39]. Pain reduction scores were calculated by subtracting post-music pain ratings from pre-music pain ratings. A separate linear model was calculated for each of the dependant variables, pain intensity, and pain unpleasantness.

Pain intensity ratings

A three-step approach to linear modelling was used [48] and the parameters for the null model and final model are presented in Table 3. As a first step we built an empty model and calculated the ICC. The ICC was 0.67, meaning that 67% of the variance in pain intensity reduction scores could be explained by music group condition (a large within-cluster homogeneity), indicating that multilevel modelling was warranted [5153]. As a second step, we built intermediate models using the GMSI subscales of musicality, and level of choice, and track complexity and we performed a likelihood-ratio test to see whether estimating the slope residuals improved the fit. The p-value of the Log Liklihood Ratio LR χ2 (2) was used to determine the best model fit. Age was controlled for because it has been related to music engagement in previous studies [54]. A threshold of p < 0.20 for the LR χ2 (2) was used for each model comparison to determine a significant improvement in model fit. A threshold of p < 0.20 for the LR χ2 (2), was chosen based on previous recommendations [48, 55] to balance between the risk of a type 1 error that may occur with an overly inclusive approach to modelling (e.g. a maximalist approach), and a parsimonious approach to modelling that would tend to exclude more parameters. The best fitting model for pain intensity was based on GMSI subscale of Active Engagement, Age, Choice and Music Complexity and had a p < 0.20 for the LR χ2 (2) meaning that estimating the slope residual variance and the covariance terms was warranted. As a third step, we built the final model using active engagement, choice, and the cross-level interaction as predictors, and we observed a significant cross-level interaction between perceived choice and active engagement ß = .45, 95% CI [.06, .85]. A simple slope analysis revealed that there was a relatively large effect for perceived choice on pain intensity decreases ß = -14.00, 95% CI [-27.23, -.77], and a small effect of for the individual trait of Active Engagement whereas the effect for music complexity was null for pain intensity, ß = –0.45, 95% [-1.87, 4.20]. See Fig 3 for residual plots of each hierarchical model. We interpret this result to mean that perceived choice is related to decreases in pain intensity, and this effect is slightly amplified for those who tend to be more actively engaged with music behaviour on a regular basis irrespective of the relative complexity of the music. Furthermore, the complexity of the music also did not impact pain intensity scores, even when age, and musicality was taken into account.

Table 3. Results of multilevel modelling for pain intensity reductions.
Model
Level and Variable Null Model Final Model
Estimate (SE) CIL CIU Estimate (SE) CIL CIU
Level 1
 Intercept -9.51 (9.19) -49.04 30.01 7.38 (10.67) -13.62 28.37
  Age -.09(.06) -.21 .02
 Active Engagement -.45(.15)** -.74 -.15
Level 2
 Choice (No Choice vs Perceived Choice) -14.00(6.72)* -27.23 -.77
 Track (High vs Low Complexity) 1.17 (1.54) -1.87 4.20
Cross Level Interaction
 Choice x Active Engagement .45(.20)* .06 .85
Variance Components
 Within-group variance 84.38 165.24
 Intercept variance (random) 83.80 83.23
 Slope variance (residuals) 165.24
 Intercept-slope variance -.69
Model Information Criteria
ICC 0.67
-2 Restricted log likelihood 2275.09 2247.68
Number of Estimated Parameters 3 8

Note: Values in parentheses are standard errors,

*significant at the p < .05 level;

**significant at the p < .01 level.

CIL Lower Confidence Interval, CIU Upper Confidence Intervals. Multiple comparisons were accounted for in each model using a Bonferroni correction.

Fig 3. Residual plots of hierarchical linear models.

Fig 3

Plots depict the relationship between the predicted residual values against the observed values for each model. To depict the choice by active engagement interaction on pain intensity scores plots for each level of choice are shown with model fit depicted according to active engagement. The plot lines fitted to the data are used to illustrate the degree to which the relationship between choice and pain changes depending on different levels of active engagement. The lines illustrate that higher levels of active engagement predict larger decreases in pain intensity in the perceived choice condition. Individual levels of active engagement were also the strongest predictor of decreases in pain unpleasantness.

Pain unpleasantness

Again, a three-step approach to linear modelling was used [48] to understand pain unpleasantness scores and the parameters for the null model and final model are presented in Table 4. As a first step we built an empty model and calculated the ICC, which was 0.67. This meant that 67% of the variance in pain intensity reduction scores could be explained by music group condition and indicated that multilevel modelling was warranted to understand the pain unpleasantness scores [5153]. As a second step, we built intermediate models using the GMSI subscales of musicality, and level of choice, and track complexity and we performed a likelihood-ratio test to see whether estimating the slope residuals improved the fit. The p-value of the Log Liklihood Ratio LR χ2 (2) was used to determine the best model fit. Age was controlled for because it has been related to music preferences [54]. A threshold of p < 0.20 for the LR χ2 (2) was used for each model comparison to determine a significant improvement in model fit. The best fitting model for pain intensity was based on GMSI subscale of Active Engagement, Age, Choice and Music Complexity and had a p < 0.20 for the LR χ2 (2) meaning that estimating the slope residual variance and the covariance terms was warranted. As a third step, we examined the model fit when interaction terms were included, however, given that they did not significantly improve the model fit, they were not included in the final model. A simple slope analysis revealed that perceived choice had a null effect on pain unpleasantness decreases ß = 1.59, 95% CI [-1.98, 5.15], and a small effect of for the individual trait of Active Engagement ß = -.26, 95% [-.50, -.03]. We interpret this result to mean that perceived choice was not related to decreases in pain unpleasantness, and that individual levels of active engagement were a more reliable predictor of decreases in pain unpleasantness. Additionally, music complexity was not related to decreases in pain unpleasantness even when individual levels of active engagement and age were controlled for. Together these findings indicate that the role of cognitive agency and active engagement are more likely to reduce pain intensity ratings compared to pain unpleasantness.

Table 4. Results of multilevel modelling for pain unpleasantness reductions.
Model
Level and Variable Null Model Final Model
Estimate (SE) CIL CIU Estimate (SE) CIL CIU
Level 1
 Intercept -12.08 (10.81) -58.57 34.42 -.55 (11.80) -23.80 -13.62
  Age -.12 (.07) -.25 .02
 Active Engagement -.26 (.12)* -.50 -.03
Level 2
 Choice (No Choice vs Perceived Choice) 1.59 (1.81) -1.98 5.15
 Track (High vs Low Complexity) .47 (1.81) -3.10 4.05
Variance Components
 Within-group variance 232.74 230.43
 Intercept variance (random) 115.97 115.64
 Slope variance (residuals) 230.43
 Intercept-slope variance .00
Model Information Criteria 0.67
ICC 0.67
-2 Restricted log likelihood 2367.69 2344.22
Number of Estimated Parameters 3 7

Note: Values in parentheses are standard errors,

*significant at the p < .05 level;

**significant at the p < .01 level.

CIL Lower Confidence Interval, CIU Upper Confidence Intervals. Multiple comparisons were accounted for in each model using a Bonferroni correction.

Discussion

To gain a greater understanding of the analgesic potential of music for acute pain, the present study examined three key factors related to music listening intervention success, cognitive agency, music complexity, and individual levels of trait active engagement. Supporting Hypothesis 1, the current study replicated the analgesic effects of cognitive agency using the perceived choice music paradigm, by demonstrating that the act of choosing music can reduce pain intensity, but not pain unpleasantness. Based on these results, we must consider the role of the cognitive agency of the individual when they choose a piece of music, appreciating that the choice itself may in fact change the way people engage with the music. As outlined in the Cognitive Vitality Model [11], when people are involved in music choice, they become more actively engaged in the music listening experience, which provides the basis for a greater degree of cognitive and emotional engagement with the piece of music, compared to a passive listening session.

Somewhat deviating from Hypotheses 2 and 3, although overall pain ratings changed from being classed as moderate pain to minor pain, music complexity was not related to decreases in pain intensity or pain unpleasantness. Consistent with previous findings [5, 6], there is no evidence that varying one aspect of the musical experience can account for the wide range of analgesic effects on participants. Instead, pain scores decreased by a similar degree in both the high complexity and low complexity track conditions. Considering that the effect sizes were at the upper end of what was expected based on previous results, and that participants rated both tracks highly in terms of a range of aesthetic responses, the findings demonstrate that there was no difference between the versions of the track used in the current study in terms of their effectiveness in reducing pain. Although participants provided slightly different emotional responses in the two different music conditions, this did not result in differences in pain responses. Aside from leading to less feelings of sadness and tenderness, and greater ratings of complexity the high complex track did not differ from the low complex track in terms of participants aesthetic responses or emotional responses. Without more data exploring this further, the most we can suggest here is that the differences in sadness, tenderness, and complexity were not enough to impact pain intensity or unpleasantness.

A novel aspect of the present research relates to the use of bespoke pieces of music specifically designed for the study. Utilising bespoke music ensured that the tracks were unfamiliar to participants, and also accounted for a potential confound observed in most previous research (i.e., when given a choice, participants often select music that is familiar to them) [16]. Using the perceived choice music paradigm [10], any analgesic effects associated with the act of choosing are isolated from the potential effects of any music features. While this paradigm somewhat controls for familiarity, it is always possible that participants have heard the chosen track. The present study employed a track that was specifically designed for this study and at the time of testing was unavailable for listening elsewhere. Therefore, findings demonstrate that the effects of cognitive agency are strong enough to work even when the music is unfamiliar to participants. But while every effort was made to manipulate complexity while controlling all other aspects of the track, it is possible that the perceived tempo may have also varied due to the added percussion and ornamentation, despite the fact that the core structure of the music was identical in both tracks. This could be examined further in psycho-acoustic experiments.

The present findings also demonstrate that the benefits of cognitive agency are amplified among people who report that they often actively engage with music in their everyday life, as measured by the Active Engagement subscale of the GMSI. Previous studies hypothesised that cognitive agency may lead to greater tendency to actively engage with music [10], and the present results further support the interaction between cognitive agency and active engagement on pain. However, it is important to note that the main effect of cognitive agency, and the interaction between cognitive agency and active engagement were only observed in relation to decreases in pain intensity and not pain unpleasantness.

A strength of the present study arises from the use of a naturalistic setting to explore analgesia from music listening in a real-world sample of adults experiencing acute pain. Previous attempts to examine the cognitive mechanisms of music interventions for pain have been predominantly lab-based [5], sometimes utilising abstract tone sequences that are unlikely to lead to an enjoyable or cognitively absorbing experience [45]. In addition, a recent meta-analysis found that, when examined in a laboratory setting, relative to observations conducted in naturalistic settings, smaller relationships are observed between pain behaviour and self-reported pain intensity, suggesting that naturalistic settings give rise to more accurate and reliable reporting [56]. Finally, measuring pain and music analgesia in a real-world setting increases the likelihood that ratings and observed improvements are representative of participants’ daily lives [57]. Given that the present study is more ecologically valid than previous lab-based experiments, findings suggest that the cognitive mechanism of cognitive agency as outlined by the cognitive vitality model [11] can meaningfully reduce pain intensity associated with acute pain in day-to-day living. To summarise, lab-based music analgesia experiments are likely to (i) hinder engagement with music, (ii) fail to capture the relationship between self-reported pain and pain behaviour, and (iii) fail to be representative of individuals’ lived experience of pain. The present study accounted for these limitations by enabling people to take part outside the laboratory in a naturalistic setting. Further strengths arise from the use of bespoke music tracks controlling for familiarity, attention checks embedded throughout the experiment, and an emphasis on traits of the individual listener that may impact music engagement.

Due to potential carry over effects from one music condition to another [58], the current authors used a between measures design. This is a clear limitation of the current study because a between measures design does not facilitate close inspection of interindividual differences in pain perception. Yet, with our real-world setting, it would not be possible to eliminate carry over effects and this was deemed a more serious concern to be controlled given our use of a pre-listening baseline. An additional weakness of the current study is that there is no group with no music as a control. This means that the observed changes can only be attributed to the group conditions, and not directly to the music. Future clinical studies should consider addressing these limitations of the current study. Regardless, the present study extends and advances literature on the role of music listening interventions for pain management. The present findings replicate the effects of both music analgesia and cognitive agency in a naturalistic setting with a novel underexplored pain sample, namely those experiencing acute pain, in addition to demonstrating that the effects of cognitive agency persist even with music that is unfamiliar to participants.

The role of personal agency, and the impact of choosing music on subsequent active engagement with music should be considered in future experimental and clinical studies. A robust body of evidence [59] demonstrates the impact of self-chosen music in pain management contexts, and this study helps to provide evidence in terms of why this happens, which may in turn help to maximise these effects. In line with this, future research could explore means of facilitating sustained engagement with music among people with low levels of Active Engagement perhaps with strategies that can enhance musical engagement such as visual imagery strategies. Music listening interventions that promote personal agency are likely to maximise the analgesic pay-off, and provide individuals with proactive approaches for their own pain management.

Summary and conclusions

The present study replicated the finding that even the illusion of choice has analgesic benefits. When participants felt that they were controlling the music, they reported greater decreases in pain intensity compared to when they had no control of the music. Although this study did not identify the impact of perceived choice on pain unpleasantness, it did replicate the broad finding that perceived choice is more important than music features. Specifically, in this paper the feature of music complexity was targeted, but it was not found to effect reductions in pain intensity or pain unpleasantness scores, even when individual musicality traits were accounted for in the linear model. Previous papers that have targeted other music features such as tempo [4, 6, 7], energy [5], perceived relaxing properties in the music [6] have not found relationships between basic perceptual properties, and decreases in pain perception. Indeed, several meta-analyses support the view that specific features do not predict reductions in pain [4, 39]. Instead, we argue that it is the way that people engage with music (e.g. focussed listening, self-reflection, meaning-making) that mediates the analgesic benefits of music listening. This argument is supported by the number of studies [5, 41] and meta-analyses [4, 7, 39] that continue to demonstrate that personal choice is the strongest predictor of a successful music intervention for pain. The current study extends previous findings that demonstrate the importance of cognitive agency beyond a laboratory setting to a sample who are experiencing real acute pain. This emphasises the importance of making a choice over music in analgesic settings and suggests that decision-making may play a role in the degree to which people actively engage with the music. Despite the observed strength of the effects of cognitive agency, our findings also demonstrate that they are more pronounced for those more actively engaged with music in their everyday life. This suggests that it may be important to consider the extent to which an individual engages with music when planning music therapy interventions. However even those with low reported levels of Active Engagement reported decreases in pain intensity associated with having perceived control of the music, which underscores the importance of facilitating choice and control in music interventions. The present study has implications for both research and practice, emphasising the importance of attending to individuals’ cognitive agency and engagement, while also identifying means of facilitating and supporting sustained engagement with music throughout music listening interventions.

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Acknowledgments

The authors would like to extend their sincere gratitude to the musician and composer, Anatole, who created the bespoke pieces of music used exclusively for this experiment.

Data Availability

All anonymous data are shared publicly. Data are available on the Open Science Framework. https://osf.io/4ywjd/ DOI 10.17605/OSF.IO/4YWJD.

Funding Statement

This research was supported by Nurofen funding (https://www.nurofen.co.uk/) awarded to CH (Ref.No.: 70037). The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: Review

Analgesic effects of music listening predicted by agency and individual characteristics

NOT musical features

The authors investigated the role of perceived control, complexity, and active engagement for the effects of music listening on everyday pain. I appreciate the approach of investigating different underlying mechanisms of analgesic effects of music listening in an experimental online setting. However, there is a range of major and minor issues which should be addressed by the authors:

1. The research gaps should be further specified, based on empirical research, and the novelty and the benefit of the study should be more emphasized in the introduction.

a. Regarding the role of control, the authors mention only one study on pain tolerance – which they actually don’t measure themselves. Other studies did not show that participants’ own choice of music (full control) would be associated with stronger analgesic effects than music chosen by others. A more differentiated view would be necessary.

b. The role of music features is widely under-researched, thus general statements about their weak impact should be avoided. It should be clarified if complexity has already been investigated in the context of analgesic effects of music listening or not. Interpretation (s. abstract, conclusions) should not be generalized on music features as a whole, but only on the investigated feature (complexity, evtl. mixed with tempo, s. 12).

c. The authors highlight active engagement and assume that higher levels of musical sophistication may be associated with stronger pain-reducing effects. However, they don’t explain enough why they assume so and if they assume this only for active engagement or also the other sub-components. This and the research gaps should be further clarified.

2. The hypotheses should target the research gaps and should be specified, mainly hypotheses 2 and 3. In hypothesis 2, the role of complexity should become clear. In hypothesis 3, it should become clear which individual attributes are meant. The introduction suggests that musical sophistication or active engagement are targeted, but more individual attributes are investigated. It is not clear if an interaction between complexity and engagement is expected.

3. In line with 2., the title lets assume that several individual attributes and features are targeted, but the introduction doesn’t focus on several ones. This should be adapted.

4. In line with 2., in the methods section, more parameters are introduced than the theoretical introduction lets assume (e.g. emotional responses and other individual traits than active engagement). Also, it is not always clear how and when variables were assessed. It should become clear which parameters are investigated as primary outcome variables for the investigation of the main hypotheses, and which parameters are additionally investigated and for what reasons, including how and when they were assessed.

5. Apart from the research ethics exemption, it is not specified whether the authors followed any ethical guidelines. A data monitoring section including where and how long data is stored, who has access and how confidentiality is ensured is missing.

6. With regard to the study design, the researchers should clarify why they decided for an experimental online setting on persons with different types of pain instead of a controlled laboratory experiment and/or a pre-defined type of pain.

7. It is unclear why the authors examined a sample size of 286 subjects. Was the group size based on expected effect sizes? Was a power analysis performed? Was it a convenience sample?

8. A control group with no music or an alternative stimulus presentation is missing. Decreases in pain intensity and unpleasantness can therefore not be clearly attributed to the music, but only comparisons between the groups can be interpreted. The general effects (and effect sizes) of music listening should be interpreted with more caution.

9. The sample is very heterogenous. Different types of pain, gender, countries, languages, general medication intake, physical diseases, psychological disorders, body mass index, drug consumption, pregnancy, and music-related profession do not seem to be checked or controlled for. Since these parameters can potentially influence pain perception, the interpretation should be done with much more caution.

10. It should be specified how participants were recruited, why a pain rating of 2 in the NRS, and pain for less than 12 weeks were inclusion criteria, if for any of the points mentioned in 9. was controlled for, and, if measured, how the groups can be described with regard to these points.

11. The instructions regarding the process of music listening should be specified.

12. It is not clear why the composed music conditions differ besides complexity also in tempo. For the investigation of complexity, an additional difference in tempo is not necessary and might limit the interpretability of the results. The reasons for this approach should be explained.

13. The authors write in a table note that one item of the GMSI Active Engagement scale was deleted because it did not load well. Given that the authors mention that the GMSI is validated, this approach is unusual. Changing the scale may affect validity. A citation should be given to support this approach, and validity should in best case be checked before interpreting the results from the new scale. The change should be described in the main text. Instead of citing a book for the validation of the GMSI, the research papers should be cited directly. Regarding fig. 2, it should become clear how the cut-off values for Active Engagement were chosen.

14. More details regarding the multilevel modeling are necessary: Were pain intensity and unpleasantness included in one model or separate models? Was the model fit evaluated with a specific parameter? Were all possible effects included and then non-significant effects deleted, or were effects included step-by-step? Were all possible interaction effects investigated or only specific ones, what were the reasons? It is not clear why age was included as a predictor – its role should be introduced based on research.

15. The results of the different multilevel models (at least null model and final model) should be made available for the reader, and more parameters are necessary. For an example and recommendations on multilevel modeling, see e.g.: Aguinis, H., Gottfredson, R. K., & Culpepper, S. A. (2013). Best-practice recommendations for estimating cross-level interaction effects using multilevel modeling. Journal of Management, 39, 1490-1528.

16. General recommendations for the therapeutic context should not be given. Too little is known about interpersonal differences regarding perception, traits, and (emotional) reactions.

17. Limitations are missing in the discussion section.

18. It should become clear earlier that an online study was conducted.

19. A description of potential dropped out participants and how was dealt with them in the analyses is missing.

20. Block randomization should be described in more detail regarding its settings/criteria.

21. Regarding the manipulation check of complexity, another term than “Aesthetic responses” should be chosen because complexity was rated and not the aesthetic evaluation. It should be specified how complexity was evaluated by the participants.

22. In the discussion, the authors write that repeated-measures experiments would not be possible in an acute pain context. However, repeated measures studies are recommended for pain research due to strong interindividual differences in pain perception. In order to prevent carry-over effects, longer time periods between the measures are necessary.

23. L. 217/218: “Low in boredom” is not equivalent to “aesthetically pleasing”.

24. L. 237 and following lines: Wording of the hypotheses should be consistent.

Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents an experimental online study of music induced analgesia in individuals suffering from acute pain conditions. Overall I think that this is an interesting and important study, yet more detailed information is needed in the manuscript to assess its methodological and scientific merits.

The study was performed online in a group of 286 adults experiencing acute pain from various causes. I feel that the studied group needs to be described in more detail in terms of demographics (gender information is missing), as well as in terms of the pain-related metrics. Were there any participants that were recruited but did not finish the study? Did they differ in terms of individual characteristics from participants that finished the study? Additionally, I think that with this kind of online methodologies, there is a significant possibility of introducing all kinds of biases. The manuscript would benefit from a section of the discussion outlining these. Another problem is the huge heterogeneity of pain conditions (back pain, headache, joint pain, neck pain, period pain etc.). This heterogeneity may be in part the cause of large indivitual variance that has been reported and was not controlled for in the statistical model. I feel that this should also be addressed in the discussion.

Furthermore, I am not sure about the phrasing of the hypotheses 2 and 3:

- "Hypothesis 2: There are analgesic benefits from music specifically designed and composed to

maximise individual engagement." In comparison to? Music not maximising individual engagement? I'm not sure if the study addresses this hypothesis. Perhaps it is a matter of phrasing the hypothesis differently.

- "Hypothesis 3: individual attributes related to musicality predict analgesic responses to music for acute pain" Musicality? From what I understand, it was not tested here. Or did you mean active engagement or sophistication?

Also, the Statistical analysis and Results sections need more clarification:

- What was the rationale behind using a mixed model instead of a regular linear model? Did the authors compare ratings before and after music, independently for each of the experimental conditions? Or did they compare "pain reduction scores" (pre-music pain - post-music pain)? This should be explained more thoroughly.

- Descriptive statistics for pain intensity and unpleasantness are much needed. I would also advise including a plot that visualizes the distributions of pain scores and their changes in response to music in each of the experimental conditions.

- A discussion of statistical power and sample size justification would be appropriate.

- I don't understand why the authors decided to use only the Active Engagement subscale of the GMSI and exclude other GMSI subscales from the models.

- In Table 2, do I understand correctly that for unpleasantness, no interactions were tested? Why?

- I don't think that the conclusion that "The present study also replicated the finding that choice is more important than music features..." is valid. The present study addressed one music feature (complexity) by manipulating it systematically. Other musical features (ie. melody, harmony, timbre, genre, production style, syncopation) were not considered but may influence MIA. This conclusion is also apparent in the title of the paper and I think it gives a wrong impression about what has been tested in this study.

Other considerations:

- L180: What about the running time of the low-complexity track? Was that the same as high complexity? If not, the effects could be attributed to different running times.

- How do the differences in emotional responses to high vs low complexity music influence the results? Emotion is an often discussed factor in MIA. I feel this should be addressed in the discussion.

- The OSF repository cannot be freely accessed, as if it has not been made public. This might be intentional, altough as a reviewer, I would gladly look at the preregistration report.

- I don't think I understand the point in the discussion about repeated measures (L336-340). Why is it a limitation if the present study was not using a repeated manipulation?

- Line 62: Might want to check the reference to Brattico & Pearce, 2013

- L88: "At the same time, this study will explore how individual levels of the trait Active Engagement in the general population relate to the analgesic benefits from music listening."

Why general population? Perhaps this sentence should be phrased differently.

- L200: "linear modelling was used because the intraclass correlation was .34, which indicates the need for multilevel modelling" according to whom? A citation is needed here.

- L233: "This indicates that mean pain ratings went from being classed as moderate pain to minor pain." According to which classification? Can we say that for all participants, or is this just a group mean score? Overall, I'm not sure if this is justified.

- In the methods section, it would be great to see brief descriptions of the subscales of GMSI.

- L263: "Together these findings indicate that the role of cognitive agency and active engagement play a bigger role in reducing pain intensity compared to pain unpleasantness." Please check for grammar.

- L365: "The current study furthers these findings by extending them beyond the laboratory to a sample who are experiencing real acute pain and by demonstrating that these effects remain when the music is completely unfamiliar to participants." Please check grammar.

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PLoS One. 2022 Aug 3;17(8):e0271329. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0271329.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


16 Mar 2022

Dear Dr. Natar,

We sincerely thank the editor and the reviewer’s for their careful consideration of this manuscript, and would like to extend our appreciation for the time and effort taken to do this. The suggestions and comments from the review team have been most helpful to improve the clarity of reporting.

After careful consideration, we have decided to revise the paper in light of the recommendations made by the two reviewers. We have attached point by point responses to the issues raised as requested, and we hope you will find these to be satisfactory.

Additionally we have amended the title to reflect the final results more closely.

Yours Sincerely,

Claire Howlin

1. The research gaps should be further specified, based on empirical research, and the novelty and the benefit of the study should be more emphasized in the introduction.

Response: On further consideration, the authors agree with the reviewers that a more nuanced and extended consideration of the literature needs to be included, and each of the points below have been addressed.

a. Regarding the role of control, the authors mention only one study on pain tolerance – which they actually don’t measure themselves. Other studies did not show that participants’ own choice of music (full control) would be associated with stronger analgesic effects than music chosen by others. A more differentiated view would be necessary.

Response: A number of experimental and clinical studies demonstrate the importance of personal choice, and personal agency in mediating the analgesic benefits of music listening have been included in the introduction. The revised document also clarifies that the aim is to extend the previous findings beyond pain tolerance to explore the pain experience. Line 65 - 69 and 78-79

b. The role of music features is widely under-researched, thus general statements about their weak impact should be avoided. It should be clarified if complexity has already been investigated in the context of analgesic effects of music listening or not. Interpretation (s. abstract, conclusions) should not be generalized on music features as a whole, but only on the investigated feature (complexity, evtl. mixed with tempo, s. 12).

Response: Several studies have tested if basic acoustic properties or if combinations of musical features of music are directly related to the analgesic benefits of music engagement, without much success. The previous version of the document overlooked these and the revised document now elaborates on the previous literature exploring the role of musical features in mediating the analgesic benefits for pain has been included from Line 37 - 46.

c. The authors highlight active engagement and assume that higher levels of musical sophistication may be associated with stronger pain-reducing effects. However, they don’t explain enough why they assume so and if they assume this only for active engagement or also the other sub-components. This and the research gaps should be further clarified.

Response: In the revised document, we now put forward an argument based on the cognitive vitality model that outlines why higher cognitive processes such as cognitive agency and active cognitive engagement with music should be considered to understand how music can help to reduce pain. Line 48 - 59. Additionally a more explicit link is made between individual characteristics and music engagement. line 96-106.

2. The hypotheses should target the research gaps and should be specified, mainly hypotheses 2 and 3. In hypothesis 2, the role of complexity should become clear. In hypothesis 3, it should become clear which individual attributes are meant. The introduction suggests that musical sophistication or active engagement are targeted, but more individual attributes are investigated. It is not clear if an interaction between complexity and engagement is expected.

Response: The hypotheses have been revised in line with the comment above. Indeed, our pre-registered hypotheses were paraphrased in the introduction (but not the discussion) in the previous document. The revised document includes the elaborated pre-registered hypotheses. Line 114 - 124

3. In line with 2., the title lets assume that several individual attributes and features are targeted, but the introduction doesn’t focus on several ones. This should be adapted.

Response: In the revised manuscript the individual traits are introduced more explicitly in the introduction. The title has also been changed. Line 96-106

4. In line with 2., in the methods section, more parameters are introduced than the theoretical introduction lets assume (e.g. emotional responses and other individual traits than active engagement). Also, it is not always clear how and when variables were assessed. It should become clear which parameters are investigated as primary outcome variables for the investigation of the main hypotheses, and which parameters are additionally investigated and for what reasons, including how and when they were assessed.

Response: All of the individual characteristics are now introduced in the introduction of the revised manuscript. Line 96-106. In addition, the revised “Research Questions and Hypotheses” section now clarifies the rationale for their inclusion and their relative importance in the research. Line 130 - 133.

5. Apart from the research ethics exemption, it is not specified whether the authors followed any ethical guidelines. A data monitoring section including where and how long data is stored, who has access and how confidentiality is ensured is missing.

Response: An extended ethics statement and declaration of data storage procedures has now been included in the revised text. In addition it can be added that the anonymous data were collected using a secure online platform which is compliant with Data Protection regulations and downloaded to a cloud-based university server, as an encrypted zip file protected by a strong password. Line 147 - 152.

6. With regard to the study design, the researchers should clarify why they decided for an experimental online setting on persons with different types of pain instead of a controlled laboratory experiment and/or a pre-defined type of pain.

Response: We previously conducted a lab-based experiment using a cold pressor task to test the role of cognitive agency, musical features and individual attributes in mediating the analgesic benefits of music listening. One of the core aims of this study was to test if the findings that we had observed in the lab would hold in a real world context. Line 78 - 78, and 139 - 142.

7. It is unclear why the authors examined a sample size of 286 subjects. Was the group size based on expected effect sizes? Was a power analysis performed? Was it a convenience sample?

Response: Here we pre-registered our recruitment strategy and the inclusion/exclusion criteria before collecting data. We then followed these steps. The revised document now includes further details in relation to the a priori power calculation, and decision for stopping based on the observed power. Only participants who met the full inclusion criteria were included. Line 153 - 161.

8. A control group with no music or an alternative stimulus presentation is missing. Decreases in pain intensity and unpleasantness can therefore not be clearly attributed to the music, but only comparisons between the groups can be interpreted. The general effects (and effect sizes) of music listening should be interpreted with more caution.

Response: The lack of a control group with no music has been highlighted as a limitation of the study, and references are made in the text at the level of the group rather than directly to the music. Line 45-459

9. The sample is very heterogenous. Different types of pain, gender, countries, languages, general medication intake, physical diseases, psychological disorders, body mass index, drug consumption, pregnancy, and music-related profession do not seem to be checked or controlled for. Since these parameters can potentially influence pain perception, the interpretation should be done with much more caution.

Response: While not all of these variable were controlled for, the use of random assignment to the conditions means that it is extremely unlikely that the groups differ systematically on any of these variables. For these reasons it is typical in experimental design to treat the groups as comparable in these regards. Inferential statistics are used in the analysis to estimate the impact of these “noise” variables and remove them from the estimated models as “error” variance. What remains are the statistically significant effects of the systematically measured variables. It is these variables (choice, complexity and active engagement) upon which we make inferences and claims.

Nonetheless, several factors were taken into consideration when screening participants for inclusion, including drug consumption, and pregnancy. The revised manuscript includes a more extensive description of the recruitment procedure and inclusion criteria on lines 120 -134. One of the core aims of this study was to replicate a finding that was previously demonstrated in lab setting, to a real world clinical sample. For this reason we felt it was appropriate to include a relatively heterogenous sample to represent different types of acute pain, to increase the generalisability of the findings.

10. It should be specified how participants were recruited, why a pain rating of 2 in the NRS, and pain for less than 12 weeks were inclusion criteria, if for any of the points mentioned in 9. was controlled for, and, if measured, how the groups can be described with regard to these points.

Response: These inclusion/exclusion criteria were specified in the pre-registration before data were collected. The text has been amended to highlight that a pain rating of 2 was used in the inclusion criteria 'to ensure that they were experiencing at least a mild level of pain before music listening', line 171 and that 'pain extending beyond 12 weeks is often classified as chronic pain (31)' according to the international classification of diseases (ICD-11) line 173..

11. The instructions regarding the process of music listening should be specified.

Response: The instruction given to participants in the process of music listening is now included in the revised manuscript. Line 191 - 193.

12. It is not clear why the composed music conditions differ besides complexity also in tempo. For the investigation of complexity, an additional difference in tempo is not necessary and might limit the interpretability of the results. The reasons for this approach should be explained.

Response: The variation in tempo is unavoidable, given that extra percussion was added to the track to increase the complexity, the perceived tempo also increases - even though the core structure is unchanged. To highlight the great care that was taken to minimise the difference between the two versions, while achieving a perceivable difference. The revised manuscript has been amended to reflect this at line 256-259.

13. The authors write in a table note that one item of the GMSI Active Engagement scale was deleted because it did not load well. Given that the authors mention that the GMSI is validated, this approach is unusual. Changing the scale may affect validity. A citation should be given to support this approach, and validity should in best case be checked before interpreting the results from the new scale. The change should be described in the main text. Instead of citing a book for the validation of the GMSI, the research papers should be cited directly. Regarding fig. 2, it should become clear how the cut-off values for Active Engagement were chosen.

Response: Checking the validity of a scale would not be possible based on the data collected. However, construct validity can be inferred from the reliability of the measure. It was indeed this analysis that identified the poor loading of one item. It was removed to as to increase the construct validity of the measure. The plot lines fitted to the data are used to illustrate the degree to which the relationship between choice and pain changes depending on different levels of active engagement. The description for figure 2 has been updated to indicate this more clearly.

14. More details regarding the multilevel modelling are necessary: Were pain intensity and unpleasantness included in one model or separate models?

Was the model fit evaluated with a specific parameter?

Were all possible effects included and then non-significant effects deleted, or were effects included step-by-step?

Were all possible interaction effects investigated or only specific ones, what were the reasons? It is not clear why age was included as a predictor – its role should be introduced based on research.

Response: The revised manuscript now includes more details about the multilevel modelling approach taken in the data analysis section line 284 - 294..

15. The results of the different multilevel models (at least null model and final model) should be made available for the reader, and more parameters are necessary. For an example and recommendations on multilevel modelling, see e.g.: Aguinis, H., Gottfredson, R. K., & Culpepper, S. A. (2013). Best-practice recommendations for estimating cross-level interaction effects using multilevel modelling. Journal of Management, 39, 1490-1528.

Response: The revised manuscript now reports the results of the multilevel models according to the best practice guidelines recommended by the reviewer, and now includes information about the null model and additional parameters in table 3 and table 4.

16. General recommendations for the therapeutic context should not be given. Too little is known about interpersonal differences regarding perception, traits, and (emotional) reactions.

Response: General recommendations for therapeutic contexts have been replaced with the relevance of these findings to future clinical and experimental studies has been highlighted. Line 458 - 459.

17. Limitations are missing in the discussion section.

Response: The discussion has been amended to reflect the limitations of the study more clearly from line 447 to 454.

18. It should become clear earlier that an online study was conducted.

Response: The first section of the methods section now indicates that this study was conducted online. "The experiment was presented online using the Qualtrics platform on line 184.

19. A description of potential dropped out participants and how was dealt with them in the analyses is missing.

Response: From an initial sample of 585 participants that completed the survey, 286 people completed all components of the experimental procedure. The revised manuscript includes a more extensive description of the recruitment procedure and inclusion criteria on lines 120 -134.

20. Block randomization should be described in more detail regarding its settings/criteria.

Response: The term Block randomisation was misused in error and the details of simple randomisation to independent groups is now clarified.

‘using the Qualtrics randomiser, participants were randomly allocated to one of the four conditions:’

21. Regarding the manipulation check of complexity, another term than “Aesthetic responses” should be chosen because complexity was rated and not the aesthetic evaluation. It should be specified how complexity was evaluated by the participants.

Response: A number of ratings were collected to determine the aesthetic appeal of the music including complexity, enjoyment, boredom, interest, attention in line with Berlyne's model of aesthetic engagement. The revised manuscript has now been amended to reflect this from line 311 - 315.

22. In the discussion, the authors write that repeated-measures experiments would not be possible in an acute pain context. However, repeated measures studies are recommended for pain research due to strong interindividual differences in pain perception. In order to prevent carry-over effects, longer time periods between the measures are necessary.

Response: The discussion has been amended to reflect more clearly that the between participants design is a limitation of this study on line 452-459.

23. L. 217/218: “Low in boredom” is not equivalent to “aesthetically pleasing”.

Response: A number of ratings were collected to determine the aesthetic appeal of the music including complexity, enjoyment, boredom, interest, attention in line with Berlyne's model of aesthetic engagement. The revised manuscript has been amended to highlight this from line 306 - 310.

24. L. 237 and following lines: Wording of the hypotheses should be consistent.

Response: the wording of the hypotheses has now been amended to be more consistent.

Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents an experimental online study of music induced analgesia in individuals suffering from acute pain conditions. Overall I think that this is an interesting and important study, yet more detailed information is needed in the manuscript to assess its methodological and scientific merits.

The study was performed online in a group of 286 adults experiencing acute pain from various causes. I feel that the studied group needs to be described in more detail in terms of demographics (gender information is missing), as well as in terms of the pain-related metrics. Were there any participants that were recruited but did not finish the study? Did they differ in terms of individual characteristics from participants that finished the study? Additionally, I think that with this kind of online methodologies, there is a significant possibility of introducing all kinds of biases. The manuscript would benefit from a section of the discussion outlining these. Another problem is the huge heterogeneity of pain conditions (back pain, headache, joint pain, neck pain, period pain etc.). This heterogeneity may be in part the cause of large individual variance that has been reported and was not controlled for in the statistical model. I feel that this should also be addressed in the discussion.

Response: The revised manuscript now includes additional details (including gender and pain type) about the overall sample and the composition of each group has been provided in the demographics section and table 1. Additionally more detailed information has been included in relation to our screening and recruitment procedure for the study on Line 120-134. The use of random assignment to the conditions means helps to ensure that the groups do not differ systematically on any of these variables. For these reasons it is typical in experimental design to treat the groups as comparable in these regards. Inferential statistics are used in the analysis to estimate the impact of these “noise” variables and remove them from the estimated models as “error” variance. What remains are the statistically significant effects of the systematically measured variables. It is these variables (choice, complexity and active engagement) upon which we make inferences and claims. One of the core aims of this study was to replicate a finding that was previously demonstrated in lab setting, to a real world clinical sample. For this reason we felt it was appropriate to include a relatively heterogenous sample to represent different types of acute pain, to increase the generalisability of the findings.

Furthermore, I am not sure about the phrasing of the hypotheses 2 and 3:

- "Hypothesis 2: There are analgesic benefits from music specifically designed and composed to

maximise individual engagement." In comparison to? Music not maximising individual engagement? I'm not sure if the study addresses this hypothesis. Perhaps it is a matter of phrasing the hypothesis differently.

- "Hypothesis 3: individual attributes related to musicality predict analgesic responses to music for acute pain" Musicality? From what I understand, it was not tested here. Or did you mean active engagement or sophistication?

Response: The hypotheses have been revised in line with the comment above. Indeed, our pre-registered hypotheses were paraphrased in the introduction (but not the discussion) in the previous document. The revised document includes the elaborated pre-registered hypotheses that clarify the issues raised. Line 114 - 124

Also, the Statistical analysis and Results sections need more clarification:

- What was the rationale behind using a mixed model instead of a regular linear model? Did the authors compare ratings before and after music, independently for each of the experimental conditions? Or did they compare "pain reduction scores" (pre-music pain - post-music pain)? This should be explained more thoroughly.

Response: The revised manuscript now includes more details about the multilevel modelling approach taken, and the rationale for this approach in the data analysis section line 279 - 289. Further clarification has also been included to explain how the pain reduction scores were calculated on line 279 - 280.

- Descriptive statistics for pain intensity and unpleasantness are much needed. I would also advise including a plot that visualizes the distributions of pain scores and their changes in response to music in each of the experimental conditions.

Response: The revised manuscript now includes descriptive statistics for pain reduction scores in terms of pain intensity and pain unpleasantness on line 296 - 300.. Violin plots have also been included that visualise the distributions of pain scores and their changes in response to music in each of the experimental conditions on line 285-286.

- A discussion of statistical power and sample size justification would be appropriate.

Response: Here we pre-registered our recruitment strategy and the inclusion/exclusion criteria before collecting data. We then followed these steps. The revised document now includes further details in relation to the a priori power calculation, and decision for stopping based on the observed power. Only participants who met the full inclusion criteria were included. Line 153 - 161.

- I don't understand why the authors decided to use only the Active Engagement subscale of the GMSI and exclude other GMSI subscales from the models.

Response: A top-down linear modelling strategy with a loaded matrix structure was used. Items that did not significantly contribute to the best model fit were removed from the model. The active engagement sub-scale was the only sub-scale of the GMSI that significantly contributed to the best fitting model.

- In Table 2, do I understand correctly that for unpleasantness, no interactions were tested? Why?

Response: A top-down linear modelling strategy with a loaded matrix structure was used. Items that did not significantly contribute to the best model fit were removed from the model. Unpleasantness interactions did not significantly contribute to the best fitting model, and so they were removed from the final model.

- I don't think that the conclusion that "The present study also replicated the finding that choice is more important than music features..." is valid. The present study addressed one music feature (complexity) by manipulating it systematically. Other musical features (ie. melody, harmony, timbre, genre, production style, syncopation) were not considered but may influence MIA. This conclusion is also apparent in the title of the paper and I think it gives a wrong impression about what has been tested in this study.

Response: The conclusion has been amended to contextualise the current findings within a growing consensus that supports the argument that music features are not as important as personal choice. line 475 - 485. Additionally the title has been amended to be more precise.

Other considerations:

- L180: What about the running time of the low-complexity track? Was that the same as high complexity? If not, the effects could be attributed to different running times.

Response: The manuscript has been amended to indicate that " both versions of the track were kept quite short (3 minutes and 24 seconds) on line 260.

- How do the differences in emotional responses to high vs low complexity music influence the results? Emotion is an often discussed factor in MIA. I feel this should be addressed in the discussion.

Response: Although participants provided slightly different emotional responses in the two different music conditions, this did not result in differences in pain responses. The text has been amended to note this on line 404 - 410.

- The OSF repository cannot be freely accessed, as if it has not been made public. This might be intentional, although as a reviewer, I would gladly look at the preregistration report.

Response: The OSF repository is now publicly available at and we invite the reviewers to look at the preregistration report. https://osf.io/egqaz

- I don't think I understand the point in the discussion about repeated measures (L336-340). Why is it a limitation if the present study was not using a repeated manipulation?

Response: The discussion has been amended to reflect more clearly that the between participants design is a limitation of this study on line 452 - 459.

- Line 62: Might want to check the reference to Brattico & Pearce, 2013

Response: The reference to Brattico & Pearce, 2013 has been updated into the correct format.

- L88: "At the same time, this study will explore how individual levels of the trait Active Engagement in the general population relate to the analgesic benefits from music listening."

Why general population? Perhaps this sentence should be phrased differently.

Response: This statement has been amended 'At the same time, this study will explore how individual levels of the trait Active Engagement relate to the analgesic benefits from music listening.'

- L200: "linear modelling was used because the intraclass correlation was .34, which indicates the need for multilevel modelling" according to whom? A citation is needed here.

Response: Further clarification has been included in the revised manuscript and an additional references were added to support this approach. Line 284 - 294.

- L233: "This indicates that mean pain ratings went from being classed as moderate pain to minor pain." According to which classification? Can we say that for all participants, or is this just a group mean score? Overall, I'm not sure if this is justified.

Response: Upon recommendation from the reviewers this section has been removed.

- In the methods section, it would be great to see brief descriptions of the subscales of GMSI.

Response: The revised manuscript includes brief descriptions of the subscales of the GMSI on line 229 - 234.

- L263: "Together these findings indicate that the role of cognitive agency and active engagement play a bigger role in reducing pain intensity compared to pain unpleasantness." Please check for grammar.

Response: The text has been amended "Together these findings indicate that the role of cognitive agency and active engagement are more likely to reduce pain intensity ratings compared to pain unpleasantness." Line 384-386.

- L365: "The current study furthers these findings by extending them beyond the laboratory to a sample who are experiencing real acute pain and by demonstrating that these effects remain when the music is completely unfamiliar to participants." Please check grammar.

Response: The text in the current manuscript now reads 'The current study extends previous findings that demonstrate the importance of cognitive agency beyond a laboratory setting to a sample who are experiencing real acute pain'. Line 485-487.

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Tune out pain: agency and active engagement predict pain decreases after music

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This study on the role of perceived control, complexity and active engagement for the effects of music listening on everyday pain has been carefully revised by the authors. I appreciate the effort made by the authors and see that the manuscript has improved a lot in structure and clarity. There are still some issues that should be addressed by the authors.

1. The authors improved the introduction in different aspects. One issue should still be considered in order to strengthen the introduction even more. The authors focus on findings on pain tolerance, and aim to extend these findings on everyday acute pain experience. In the part of research questions and hypotheses it turns out that pain intensity and unpleasantness are investigated as the main outcome variables of interest but these parameters are not mentioned before. I recommend to introduce pain intensity and unpleasantness as well as potential existing or a lack of existing findings on these important outcome variables already in the introduction of the manuscript.

2. The research questions and hypotheses are now clearer. Three issues should still be considered in this section:

2a. The authors write that it would be important to make sure that the music tracks are comparable in terms of “aesthetic and emotional responses” (lines 125-126). However, in the next sentence, the third hypothesis only targets the “aesthetic response”, even though both aesthetic and emotional responses are investigated separately. This should be adapted.

2b. I highly appreciate the mentioned pre-registration of the project and its hypotheses. However, even though the project is specified as public, the downloadable zip-folder is empty in the given link to the webpage of osf.io. This is also important regarding the data availability.

2c. As the authors argue, too low complexity of music can lead to boredom, and too high complexity of the music can lead to irritation or over-stimulation (lines 92-94). It can be assumed that the optimal level of complexity would be between low and high complexity. Still, the authors decided to only investigate low and high complexity which might both not lead to optimal results. It is still interesting to investigate the two rather extreme forms of complexity, but the missing “moderate” complexity condition might be a limitation of the study or eventually one possible explanation for not having found an effect for complexity, and could be discussed later in the manuscript.

3. The methods section is now more elaborated, and important paragraphs have been included. One issue still remains to be considered. The percent values of the distribution of the participants (lines 176-177) across Europe (37.41%) and the United States (36%) don’t sum up to 100%, so the question arises if also other continents are involved or if the percent values should be adapted. Also, the other percent values regarding the different types of pain seem to be not completely correct. These percent values should be re-checked.

4. The results are now clearer and very informative details on multilevel analyses are given. Some remaining issues concern mainly the discussion part. In general, some parts of the hypotheses should be answered in more detail in the discussion part. It could be considered to discuss at first the results regarding H1, then H2, then H3, and then findings on the profile of individual characteristics. The following issues should be considered:

4a. The authors write that H1 would be supported by having replicated the analgesic effects of cognitive agency which demonstrated the benefits of choosing music in a pain context (lines 387-389). H1 targets both pain intensity and pain unpleasantness, but choice only had an effect on pain intensity in the depicted results. This should also become clear in the discussion part by mentioning and discussing that the hypothesized effect was confirmed for pain intensity but not pain unpleasantness.

4b. Similarly, the authors discuss the sig. interaction effect between choice and active engagement (lines 421-427). It should also be mentioned and discussed that this interaction effect was found to be sig. for pain intensity but not pain unpleasantness.

4c. The authors conclude that the findings suggested that the cognitive mechanisms outlined by the cognitive vitality model could meaningfully impact acute pain in day-to-day living (lines 437-439). Keeping in mind that the hypotheses were only partly confirmed (see also 4a and b), this conclusion should be formulated in a more differentiated or cautious way. For the same reason, some of the following conclusions and discussions on the analgesic effects of active engagement and choice should rather target specific aspects of pain than pain in general, also in the part “Summary and Conclusions”.

4d. The authors write that in a real-world setting, it would not be possible to recreate the feeling of acute pain once it has been decreased by music engagement (lines 449-450). Since acute pain can sometimes re-occur after some time, I recommend to change the formulation of the sentence.

4e. Keeping in mind that the hypotheses are only partly confirmed regarding the effect of choice on different pain outcomes, that the eligibility criteria were not so many, that different types of pain were mixed in the study, that a between-subjects design was used and the hypotheses have not yet been investigated in a therapeutic context, it is too early to give the recommendation of letting clients select music themselves in a therapeutic context (lines 461-463).

4f. I highly appreciate that the effort was made to compose new music for the study. It should be considered to discuss in the discussion that the complexity conditions differed in tempo also.

5. The new title lets assume that agency and active engagement predicted pain decreases in the different pain outcomes, which has been found only partly. The title would be improved by formulating it in a way that represents more results, for example by writing “the role of…” instead of “predict”.

6. The authors made clearer in the introduction and the discussion that the results and previous findings can only be interpreted for investigated music features. In the abstract it still says “Overall, findings demonstrated that the illusion of choice has analgesic benefits, and that perceived choice is more important than music features” (lines 28-29). The authors should make clear that this can be concluded only for the “investigated” or “selected” or “specific” music features, or write about “complexity/ (eventually tempo)” instead of “music features” in general.

7. In line 452 it should say that there is “no” group with no music as a control.

8. The manuscript should be re-checked regarding typos and small grammar mistakes (for example l. 103: „emotions“ instead of „emotion’s”, l. 133: “ensure” better than “insure”, l. 238: “Barcelona Musical Reward” can probably be deleted, or should be specified otherwise, l. 348: “.” is missing, l. 356 & 357: “were”).

Reviewer #2: Thank you to the authors for revising the manuscript. While much of the issues were clarified and resolved, I am still very concerned about the logic and the reporting of the statistical analysis. Specifically:

1. I still do not understand the merit of using mixed models in an independent samples design. The authors state that model fit was not improved by including a random factor for participants, "Therefore, random factors were excluded from the final models.". If by random factors authors mean random effects (in R terminology), why even consider them if there are no repeated measures for participants? A regular linear model seems an obvious choice in this experimental design. Using it would also enable the authors to quantify the variance explained by their models using (easily-interpretable) R^2 statistics.

2. What do the numbers presented in Tables 3 and 4 stand for? Are they model estimates for each of the predictors? If so, they should be labelled as such.

3. I do not understand the rationale behind "A top-down linear modelling strategy with a loaded mean structure" (L284). How exactly was the initial model specified? Did the results of the initial model reveal the same significant effects as the final model? If so, why remove the non-significant effects? If not, can the authors explain why? How does this influence the interpretation of the results? Why age was included and not other demographic variables, such as gender? Were all possible interactions explored? If so, why? If not, why? Was the procedure automated? Assuming this approach is similar to step-wise regression procedures, when it was set to stop (that is, which model was considered the most "parsimonious")? Was this decision based on log likelihood or on "removing non-significant effects" (L286)? What was the criterion for "non-significant effect"?

4. Also, I am not sure if this approach is necessary, or even valid here. There are clear hypotheses and a simple experimental design. Including all measured individual difference variables in the model could be beneficial, as it would account for any variance arising from these variables (even if they are "not significant"). This would then enable more robust judgments about the presence (or lack thereof) of main effects and interactions. The authors used what looks like an exploratory approach (although it is hard to tell for certain) that is rarely seen in experimental studies and does not seem to be justified.

5. Finally, the way results are presented is puzzling and unclear. For example, the authors state "significant main effects of both choice, F(1, 269) = 4.82; p < .05, and active engagement, F(1, 272) = 4.21; p < .05.". Why F-test results are given? What are these test actually veryfing? If they were testing the significance of main effects (or, perhaps more accurately, model parameters as this is linear modelling), why not use the t-test? Why do degrees of freedom seem to vary between different parameters of the same model? And crucially, where are the parameter estimates reported?

All these issues may potentially bias the results, therefore it is hard to judge the conclusions of this study without claryfing the statistical issues first.

Other issues:

- The added sections and clarifications contain some grammatical errors that need to be correted. I would suggest a thorough proof-reading of the manuscript.

- Figure 1 appears to be missing.

- Describing the track comparisons in terms of "Hypothesis 3" is a bit misleading, as these comparisons are in fact manipulation checks and not verifications of a hypothesis derived from theory. I understand that this is related to pre-registration, but I would suggest not describing these as "H3" in the text.

- L166-167: "In stage one 2691 answered screening questions which were presented one at a time, based on each previous response along with red herring questions to reduce the likelihood that participants would guess the nature of the study." It is unclear what "2691" refers to.

- The authors indicate that the data from the study will be made publicly available in the OSF, yet the repository is empty as of writing this review.

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PLoS One. 2022 Aug 3;17(8):e0271329. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0271329.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


26 Apr 2022

Response to reviewers.

We thank each of the reviewers for their time and attention on this manuscript. In response to the reviewers requests we have added further clarification sand details on several points, supplied further details on the data analysis and have re-organised where all of these details are found, and carefully reviewed and revised the entire manuscript to eliminate typos and minor errors. We hope that you will agree that the manuscript has been further strengthened it terms of clarity and structure, and should be of high interest to the readers of PLoS one.

Thank you for agreeing and taking the time to complete this additional review. Below you will find a point by point response to each of the queries raised.

1. The authors improved the introduction in different aspects. One issue should still be considered in order to strengthen the introduction even more. The authors focus on findings on pain tolerance, and aim to extend these findings on everyday acute pain experience. In the part of research questions and hypotheses it turns out that pain intensity and unpleasantness are investigated as the main outcome variables of interest but these parameters are not mentioned before. I recommend to introduce pain intensity and unpleasantness as well as potential existing or a lack of existing findings on these important outcome variables already in the introduction of the manuscript.

Response: The introduction now introduces the concepts of pain unpleasantness and pain intensity, and the rationale for using these measures to measure pain. Line 120 - 127.

2. The research questions and hypotheses are now clearer. Three issues should still be considered in this section:

2a. The authors write that it would be important to make sure that the music tracks are comparable in terms of “aesthetic and emotional responses” (lines 125-126). However, in the next sentence, the third hypothesis only targets the “aesthetic response”, even though both aesthetic and emotional responses are investigated separately. This should be adapted.

Response This section of the text has now been amended (Line 143 - 144).

2b. I highly appreciate the mentioned pre-registration of the project and its hypotheses. However, even though the project is specified as public, the downloadable zip-folder is empty in the given link to the webpage of osf.io. This is also important regarding the data availability.

Response: There seems to be a technical issue with the OSF repository, on our side we can see the review at the link https://osf.io/egqaz. Or on the OSF wiki page, it is under the tab 'registrations'. The project was registered on 26th July 2021. The authors have also attached a pdf version of the protocol registration for ease of access.

2c. As the authors argue, too low complexity of music can lead to boredom, and too high complexity of the music can lead to irritation or over-stimulation (lines 92-94). It can be assumed that the optimal level of complexity would be between low and high complexity. Still, the authors decided to only investigate low and high complexity which might both not lead to optimal results. It is still interesting to investigate the two rather extreme forms of complexity, but the missing “moderate” complexity condition might be a limitation of the study or eventually one possible explanation for not having found an effect for complexity, and could be discussed later in the manuscript.

Response: Optimal complexity is a relative term. We used the terms “high” and “low” to describe the conditions relative to each other. The section on “Musical Stimuli” details our thinking behind the design of these conditions. Working with the music composer, the “high complexity” track was designed to lead to sustained engagement and enjoyment from a general audience across all age groups. While it was high relative to the low condition, we can distinguish it from one that is “too high” to be enjoyable to a general audience. We could rename the conditions as “moderate complexity” vs “simple” but we have retained our naming in the revised manuscript for the sake of simplicity. Nevertheless, tis has been clarified in Lines 279 and 280.

3. The methods section is now more elaborated, and important paragraphs have been included. One issue still remains to be considered. The percent values of the distribution of the participants (lines 176-177) across Europe (37.41%) and the United States (36%) don’t sum up to 100%, so the question arises if also other continents are involved or if the percent values should be adapted. Also, the other percent values regarding the different types of pain seem to be not completely correct. These percent values should be re-checked.

Response: Additional details of the geographical distribution of participants have been included 194-195. The values representing pain are frequency values rather than percentages so they sum to the total number in the sample. All of the values have been re-checked and one value was found to need correction so this was updated.

4. The results are now clearer and very informative details on multilevel analyses are given. Some remaining issues concern mainly the discussion part. In general, some parts of the hypotheses should be answered in more detail in the discussion part. It could be considered to discuss at first the results regarding H1, then H2, then H3, and then findings on the profile of individual characteristics. The following issues should be considered:

4a. The authors write that H1 would be supported by having replicated the analgesic effects of cognitive agency which demonstrated the benefits of choosing music in a pain context (lines 387-389). H1 targets both pain intensity and pain unpleasantness, but choice only had an effect on pain intensity in the depicted results. This should also become clear in the discussion part by mentioning and discussing that the hypothesized effect was confirmed for pain intensity but not pain unpleasantness.

Response Line 436-437 have been amended to report the findings with more detail.

4b. Similarly, the authors discuss the sig. interaction effect between choice and active engagement (lines 421-427). It should also be mentioned and discussed that this interaction effect was found to be sig. for pain intensity but not pain unpleasantness.

Response Line 478-480 have been amended to report the findings with more detail.

4c. The authors conclude that the findings suggested that the cognitive mechanisms outlined by the cognitive vitality model could meaningfully impact acute pain in day-to-day living (lines 437-439). Keeping in mind that the hypotheses were only partly confirmed (see also 4a and b), this conclusion should be formulated in a more differentiated or cautious way. For the same reason, some of the following conclusions and discussions on the analgesic effects of active engagement and choice should rather target specific aspects of pain than pain in general, also in the part “Summary and Conclusions”.

Response Line 491-492 and the summary and conclusion have been re-formulated in a more differentiated way.

4d. The authors write that in a real-world setting, it would not be possible to recreate the feeling of acute pain once it has been decreased by music engagement (lines 449-450). Since acute pain can sometimes re-occur after some time, I recommend to change the formulation of the sentence.

Response: Line 503-505 have been reformulated to more precisely express the point.

4e. Keeping in mind that the hypotheses are only partly confirmed regarding the effect of choice on different pain outcomes, that the eligibility criteria were not so many, that different types of pain were mixed in the study, that a between-subjects design was used and the hypotheses have not yet been investigated in a therapeutic context, it is too early to give the recommendation of letting clients select music themselves in a therapeutic context (lines 461-463).

Response: Lines 514-517 have been revised.

4f. I highly appreciate that the effort was made to compose new music for the study. It should be considered to discuss in the discussion that the complexity conditions differed in tempo also.

Response The impact of the additional ornamentation and percussion on the perceived tempo has been highlighted from line 468-472.

5. The new title lets assume that agency and active engagement predicted pain decreases in the different pain outcomes, which has been found only partly. The title would be improved by formulating it in a way that represents more results, for example by writing “the role of…” instead of “predict”.

Response: The title has been amended to reflect that the outcomes have been found partly.

6. The authors made clearer in the introduction and the discussion that the results and previous findings can only be interpreted for investigated music features. In the abstract it still says “Overall, findings demonstrated that the illusion of choice has analgesic benefits, and that perceived choice is more important than music features” (lines 28-29). The authors should make clear that this can be concluded only for the “investigated” or “selected” or “specific” music features, or write about “complexity/ (eventually tempo)” instead of “music features” in general.

Response The abstract has been amended to specifically refer to music complexity.

7. In line 452 it should say that there is “no” group with no music as a control.

Response: Line 505 has been amended.

8. The manuscript should be re-checked regarding typos and small grammar mistakes (for example l. 103: „emotions“ instead of „emotion’s”, l. 133: “ensure” better than “insure”, l. 238: “Barcelona Musical Reward” can probably be deleted, or should be specified otherwise, l. 348: “.” is missing, l. 356 & 357: “were”).

Response: The document has been carefully revised and corrected for typos.

Reviewer #2: Thank you to the authors for revising the manuscript. While much of the issues were clarified and resolved, I am still very concerned about the logic and the reporting of the statistical analysis. Specifically:

1. I still do not understand the merit of using mixed models in an independent samples design. The authors state that model fit was not improved by including a random factor for participants, "Therefore, random factors were excluded from the final models.". If by random factors authors mean random effects (in R terminology), why even consider them if there are no repeated measures for participants? A regular linear model seems an obvious choice in this experimental design. Using it would also enable the authors to quantify the variance explained by their models using (easily-interpretable) R^2 statistics.

Response The core reason for using a multilevel model in an independent samples design is to account for the hierarchical structure in the data, which can be empirically identified by the presence of an intraclass correlation coefficient of over 0.2. In the current study an ICC of 0.67 is identified which demonstrates that the residuals are not independent, which precludes the use of a regression analysis based on an ordinary least squares calculation. An additional reason for using a multilevel model in this context is because it allows you to simultaneously examine higher order effects from lower order effects, which means you can disentangle which effect is accounting for more of the variance. The paragraph that highlights the rationale for using multi-level modelling has been further amended to highlight this, and includes further citations to support this approach line 274 - 286.

2. What do the numbers presented in Tables 3 and 4 stand for? Are they model estimates for each of the predictors? If so, they should be labelled as such.

Response Additional labels have been added in table 3 and 4.

3. I do not understand the rationale behind "A top-down linear modelling strategy with a loaded mean structure" (L284). How exactly was the initial model specified? Did the results of the initial model reveal the same significant effects as the final model? If so, why remove the non-significant effects? If not, can the authors explain why? How does this influence the interpretation of the results? Why age was included and not other demographic variables, such as gender? Were all possible interactions explored? If so, why? If not, why? Was the procedure automated? Assuming this approach is similar to step-wise regression procedures, when it was set to stop (that is, which model was considered the most "parsimonious")? Was this decision based on log likelihood or on "removing non-significant effects" (L286)? What was the criterion for "non-significant effect"?

Response: The reporting of the results has been re-written and re-organised to facilitate a clearer representation of the final results. The rationale for using the linear model is detailed in the data analysis section in the method, and the three step process used for the linear modelling approach has been outlined for each of the two dependant variables, and this is reported in the results section. Additional citations have been provided that outline the rationale for using multilevel modelling with independent samples.

4. Also, I am not sure if this approach is necessary, or even valid here. There are clear hypotheses and a simple experimental design. Including all measured individual difference variables in the model could be beneficial, as it would account for any variance arising from these variables (even if they are "not significant"). This would then enable more robust judgments about the presence (or lack thereof) of main effects and interactions. The authors used what looks like an exploratory approach (although it is hard to tell for certain) that is rarely seen in experimental studies and does not seem to be justified.

Response: The core reason for using a multilevel model in an independent samples design is to account for the hierarchical structure in the data, which can be empirically identified by the presence of an intraclass correlation coefficient of over 0.2. In the current study an ICC of 0.67 is identified which demonstrates that the residuals are not independent, which precludes the use of a regression analysis based on an ordinary least squares calculation. An additional reason for using a multilevel model in this context is because it allows you to simultaneously examine higher order effects from lower order effects, which means you can disentangle which effect is accounting for more of the variance. The paragraph that highlights the rationale for using multi-level modelling in the data analysis section of the method has been further amended to highlight this, and the authors have included further citations to support this approach line 274 - 286.

5. Finally, the way results are presented is puzzling and unclear. For example, the authors state "significant main effects of both choice, F(1, 269) = 4.82; p < .05, and active engagement, F(1, 272) = 4.21; p < .05.". Why F-test results are given? What are these test actually veryfing? If they were testing the significance of main effects (or, perhaps more accurately, model parameters as this is linear modelling), why not use the t-test? Why do degrees of freedom seem to vary between different parameters of the same model? And crucially, where are the parameter estimates reported?

Response: The reporting of the results has been re-written and re-organised to facilitate a clearer representation of the final results. The rationale for using the linear model is detailed in the data analysis section in the method, and the three step process used for the linear modelling approach has been outlined for each of the two dependant variables. F statistics have been removed for the models, and confidence intervals have been included with the parameter estimates. Additional citations have been provided that outline the rationale for using multilevel modelling with independent samples.

All these issues may potentially bias the results, therefore it is hard to judge the conclusions of this study without claryfing the statistical issues first.

Other issues:

- The added sections and clarifications contain some grammatical errors that need to be correted. I would suggest a thorough proof-reading of the manuscript.

Response The document has been carefully revised and corrected for typos.

- Figure 1 appears to be missing.

Response Figure 1 is submitted as a separate document and appears at the end of the document.

- Describing the track comparisons in terms of "Hypothesis 3" is a bit misleading, as these comparisons are in fact manipulation checks and not verifications of a hypothesis derived from theory. I understand that this is related to pre-registration, but I would suggest not describing these as "H3" in the text.

Response The final analysis is no longer described as a 'hypothesis 3' to aid understanding.

- L166-167: "In stage one 2691 answered screening questions which were presented one at a time, based on each previous response along with red herring questions to reduce the likelihood that participants would guess the nature of the study." It is unclear what "2691" refers to.

Response Line 183 has been amended.

- The authors indicate that the data from the study will be made publicly available in the OSF, yet the repository is empty as of writing this review.

Response: There seems to be a technical issue with the OSF repository, on our side we can see the review at the link https://osf.io/egqaz . Or on the OSF wiki page, it is under the tab 'registrations'. The project was registered on 26th July 2021. The authors have also attached a pdf version of the protocol registration for ease of access.

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Decision Letter 2

Urs M Nater

2 Jun 2022

PONE-D-21-33092R2Title: Tune out pain: agency and active engagement predict decreases in pain intensity after music listeningPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #2: Thanks to the authors for revising the manuscript. The statistical analyses section is now easier to understand and I am grateful that the authors decided to refrain from using the term "mixed model" (even though they refuse to admit it directly!). To clarify: linear mixed modeling is a different statistical technique than multi-level approach to linear modeling that has been performed here. As it is right now, the manuscript presents the results in a clear fashion, although some minor issues remain:

1. "A threshold of p < 0.20 for the LR χ2 (2) was used for each model comparison" Why p < .20? There should be some justification to this. Would a smaller p value lead to different parameter selection? This is important is it may potentially influence the results.

2. What does B stand for in the Results? (L424-425) If it is the model estimate, it would probably be more appropriate to use Beta (ß) instead.

3. L437: "Supporting Hypothesis 1, ...". It seems that this hypothesis was only partly supported, given that there was no significant effect on pain unpleasantness. (L132-133: "Here we predict that increased perceived control predicts decreases in pain intensity and pain unpleasantness (H1)."). The authors should address this in the discussion.

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Author response to Decision Letter 2


7 Jun 2022

Response to reviewers.

We thank each of the reviewers, and the editor, for their time and attention on this manuscript. In response to the final comments from reviewers, we have added further clarification in relation to the statistical analysis and discussion.

Additionally, one of the reviewers is quite right to point out that there is a difference between mixed models, and hierarchical models. They can overlap, but there is a difference, and it is important to get that right. We hope that you will agree that the manuscript has been further strengthened it terms of clarity, and should be of high interest to the readers of PLoS one.

Below you will find a point by point response to each of the queries raised.

1. "A threshold of p < 0.20 for the LR χ2 (2) was used for each model comparison" Why p < .20? There should be some justification to this. Would a smaller p value lead to different parameter selection? This is important is it may potentially influence the results.

Response: The following text was added to provide a justification for this threshold:

"A threshold of p < 0.20 for the LR χ² (2), was chosen based on previous recommendations (47,55) to balance between the risk of a type 1 error that may occur with an overly inclusive approach to modelling (e.g. a maximalist approach), and a parsimonious approach to modelling that would tend to exclude more parameters."

2. What does B stand for in the Results? (L424-425) If it is the model estimate, it would probably be more appropriate to use Beta (ß) instead.

Response: ß has been inserted to report the model estimate.

3. L437: "Supporting Hypothesis 1, ...". It seems that this hypothesis was only partly supported, given that there was no significant effect on pain unpleasantness. (L132-133: "Here we predict that increased perceived control predicts decreases in pain intensity and pain unpleasantness (H1)."). The authors should address this in the discussion.

Response: The revised manuscript includes the following text on line 483- 485:

"However, it is important to note that the main effect of cognitive agency, and the interaction between cognitive agency and active engagement were only observed in relation to decreases in pain intensity and not pain unpleasantness."

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Decision Letter 3

Urs M Nater

29 Jun 2022

Title: Tune out pain: agency and active engagement predict decreases in pain intensity after music listening

PONE-D-21-33092R3

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Urs M Nater

8 Jul 2022

PONE-D-21-33092R3

Tune out pain: agency and active engagement predict decreases in pain intensity after music listening

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