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. 2022 Aug 24;17(8):e0273115. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0273115

The Abdominal Pain Unit (APU). Study protocol of a standardized and structured care pathway for patients with atraumatic abdominal pain in the emergency department: A stepped wedged cluster randomized controlled trial

Maria B Altendorf 1,*, Martin Möckel 2, Liane Schenk 1, Antje Fischer-Rosinsky 3, Johann Frick 1, Lukas Helbig 2, Dirk Horenkamp-Sonntag 4, Dörte Huscher 5, Luisa Lichtenberg 4, Thomas Reinhold 6, Daniel Schindel 1, Britta Stier 2, Hanna Sydow 6, Yves-Noel Wu 3, Grit Zimmermann 7, Anna Slagman 6
Editor: Steven Eric Wolf8
PMCID: PMC9401147  PMID: 36001620

Abstract

This study aims to improve emergency department (ED) care for patients suffering from atraumatic abdominal pain. An application-supported pathway for the ED will be implemented, which supports quick, evidence-based, and standardized diagnosis and treatment steps for patients with atraumatic abdominal pain at the ED. A mixed-methods multicentre cluster randomized controlled stepped wedge trial design will be applied. A total of 10 hospitals with EDs (expected n = 2.000 atraumatic abdominal pain patients) will consecutively (every 4 months) be randomized to apply the intervention. Inclusion criteria for patients are a minimum age of 18 years, suffering from atraumatic abdominal pain and being insured with a German statutory health insurance. Primary outcomes: acute pain score at time of discharge from ED, duration of treatment at the ED, patient-reported satisfaction. Secondary endpoints include patient safety and quality of care parameters, process evaluation parameters, and costs and cost-effectiveness parameters. Quantitative data will be gathered from patient-surveys, clinical records, and routine data from hospital information systems as well as from a participating German statutory health insurance. Descriptive and analytic statistical analysis will be performed to provide summaries and associations for primary patient-reported outcomes, process measures, quality measures, and costs. Qualitative data collection consists of participatory patient observations and semi-structured expert interviews, which will be inductively analysed. Findings will be disseminated in publications in peer-reviewed journals, on conferences, as well as via a project website. To ensure data protection, appropriate technical and organisational measures will be taken.

Trial registration: DRKS00021052.

Introduction

A common complaint in patients presenting in the emergency department (ED) is atraumatic abdominal pain with a prevalence of 5–20% per year [13]. Patients with atraumatic abdominal pain can have a very broad range of diagnoses, ranging from flatulencies to more serious underlying diseases, such as an acute pancreatitis. Most probably, due to the difficulty to quickly diagnose and treat patients with acute abdominal pain, the associated hospital mortality rate of 5.1% is relatively high, e.g. compared to chest pain (with a 0.9% hospital mortality) [1]. Among patients aged 65 years or older mortality even increases [4]. Thus, as Berner and Dormann stated [5] every patient presenting with atraumatic abdominal pain in the ED should be seen as a high-risk patient who is in urgent need for fast diagnosis and treatment. To date, no standardized care pathway for patients with atraumatic abdominal pain exists, why finding a diagnosis for those patients depends on each hospital ward’s internal standard of care, as well as each physician’s qualifications and experience [5]. To assure high quality of care and potentially reduce mortality, it seems imperative to implement a novel management pathway, which standardizes the process from start of care to final diagnosis, disposition and specific therapy of atraumatic abdominal pain patients in the ED. Therefore, a team of multidisciplinary experts has developed the „Abdominal Pain Unit“(APU) treatment process based on the Delphi method. The APU-process will be digitally supported by an application software (i.e. the APU-App). The App-supported APU-process aims to improve patients’ care by:

  1. Leading to a shorter duration of treatment in the ED while improving patient-reported outcomes (assessed as acute pain score or/and patient satisfaction) at discharge from the ED; or

  2. Improving patient-reported outcomes (assessed as acute pain score or/and patient satisfaction) at discharge from the ED while measuring a constant duration of treatment in the ED; or

  3. Leading to a shorter duration of treatment in the ED and unchanged patient-reported outcomes (assessed as acute pain score and patient satisfaction) at discharge from the ED.

Materials and methods

Study design

The study design and a schedule of activities prior to trial and during the trial is illustrated in Fig 1.

Fig 1. Schedule of enrolment, intervention, and assessments.

Fig 1

A mixed-methods, multicentre cluster-randomized controlled stepped wedge trial (cRCT) will be applied (see Fig 2). Patients in the control group will receive care as usual, which will be according to the standard of care of each participating hospital and might differ between study sites. Patients enrolled in the intervention group will receive treatment according to the APU-process. Since the implementation of the APU-process will affect the entire ED, individual randomization of patients within centres is not feasible. Therefore, an alternative approach was chosen: the introduction of the process in the 10 study centres will take place in clusters of centres. As illustrated in Fig 2, this stepped wedge design [68] involves a sequential, randomized, consecutive transfer of clusters (every four months) from the control arm to the intervention arm until finally all clusters have implemented the new process. In this way, equal periods of control and intervention can be observed concerning all clusters but length of control and interventions period differs between different clusters.

Fig 2. Stepped wedge trial design.

Fig 2

Ethical approval was obtained from Charité’s responsible institutional review boards (EA2/219/20). Prior to study participation, written informed consent will be obtained from all study participants. Findings will be disseminated in publications in peer-reviewed journals, on conferences, as well as via a project website. To ensure data protection, appropriate technical and organisational measures will be taken.

Data collection is set to a time period of two years, until all clusters (n = 10) will have implemented the intervention for at least four months. Medical staff in each ED will receive thorough training of the APU-process immediately prior to intervention implementation in the ED.

The intervention

The App-supported APU-process (in the following and for clarity, the term APU-process will be used) starts with a patient who suffers from atraumatic abdominal pain presenting in the ED. By means of the APU-process, physicians will be supported in making a structured decision for the subsequent diagnostic and treatment process. Eventually, the APU-process ends with either the discharge of the patient with a sufficiently accurate diagnosis from the ED or the patient being admitted to another hospital unit for further treatment. Patients with a shock syndrome or sepsis leave the path for special intensive care early. The first step in the APU-process includes a medical history, a medical examination, measurement of blood parameters, and pain management for patients with atraumatic abdominal pain. In a second step, a re-evaluation will lead to a decision whether the patient will be discharged from the ED to ambulant care (i.e. in case of unsuspicious clinical findings) or if further diagnostic measures have to be taken. Thus, in a third step, the patient will receive a sonography, however, in the case of persistently unclear clinical findings, in a fourth step, either additional imaging methods will be used, such as computer tomography or magnetic resonance imaging, or a multi-disciplinary consultation and if necessary a patient observation for a few hours will be performed. Patients with worsening medical condition will leave the path for intensive care.

Measures

Quantitative and qualitative data will be collected to facilitate cross verification of data and to enhance credibility of the results [9]. Primary and secondary outcomes are presented in Table 1.

Table 1. Overview of primary & secondary outcomes.

Outcome Concept Instrument / parameter Time point of measuring (Module)
Primary outcomes
Acute pain score NRS [10] a t0 (Module 1)
Duration of treatment at ED Timespan between beginning and end of treatment in the ED t0 (Module 2)
Patient satisfaction Züricher Patientenzufriedenheit Fragebogen (ZUF-8; [11]) a t0 (Module 1)
Secondary outcomes
Quality of care / patient safety indicators E.g. Quality of life (EUROHIS-QOL-8 [12, 13]); Mortality, course of treatment in the hospital (e.g. inpatient stay following the ED treatment, ICU stay, duration of ICU stay) t0 & t1 (Module 1) t0 & t1 (Module 2, 3)
Process quality Process times (e.g. time until diagnostic measures are available / diagnostic examination, frequency of diagnostic procedures);
Qualitative data from semi-structured expert interviews & participatory observations: Potential success factors & pitfalls of the APU-process, feasibility in routine care, applicability in routine care
t0 (Module 2)
During course of study (Module 5)
Costs and Cost-effectiveness Costs of: hospital stays, outpatient visits, medication/pharmaceuticals, adjuvants and devices, total costs in relation to primary outcomes 12 months preceding the ED stay & during course of study (Module 2, 3, 4)

Note. ED = Emergency Department. NRS = Numeric rating scale; subjective measure for rating the pain on an eleven-point numeric scale from 0 (no pain at all) to 10 (worst imaginable pain). ZUF-8 = Züricher Patientenzufriedenheit Fragebogen. EUROHIS-QOL-8 = measure for Quality of Life, derived from the WHOQOL-100 and the WHOQOL-BREF; for this study, one item was extracted from the full scale.

a = assessed by study nurse. ICU = Intensive care unit.

The primary outcome, duration of treatment in the ED, is measured as the timespan between the time point when the patient registers at the ED desk with his/her health insurance card and the documented time point when the physician decides that the patient can leave the ED (discharge, t0). Once the patient is enrolled to the APU-study, secondary outcomes, such as patient safety and quality of care parameters (e.g. quality of life) and process parameters (e.g. time until diagnostic measures are available) will be collected. At discharge from the ED (t0) the study nurse will assess the remaining primary (patient-reported) outcomes, acute pain score and patient satisfaction, as well as remaining patient-reported secondary outcomes (e.g. demographics, subjective health status). At 30-days follow-up (t1), study nurses will follow-up on patient-reported outcomes (see Table 1) via phone or will send participants the URL to access an online survey.

Besides a quantitative effectiveness and process evaluation of the APU-process from patient questionnaires, hospital patient-records regarding acute pain scores, duration of treatment in the ED, and patient satisfaction among the targeted 2.000 patients, also a qualitative process analysis will be performed. The qualitative process analysis consists of participating observations (n = 25) and expert interviews (n = 35), in order to gain an understanding of the different perspectives and contexts, as well as the facilitators and barriers of the implementation of the APU-process. In addition, a cost and cost-effectiveness analysis will be performed based on health insurance data from the participating SHI.

Inclusion and exclusion criteria

Patients being 18 years or older presenting at the participating EDs with atraumatic abdominal pain will be screened for eligibility in the study. If patients have a legal representative, this representative has to agree to participation in the study and patients need to be insured with a German SHI for inclusion in the present study. Exclusion criteria are traumatic causes of abdominal pain, suspicion of sepsis (quick Sequential (Sepsis-Related) Organ Failure Assessment: qSOFA score ≥ 2 [14]) or suspicion of shock (shock index ≥ 1), and insufficient knowledge of German language.

Sampling, sample size and power calculation

Physicians working in the ED will recruit eligible patients. Specially trained study nurses will support the recruitment of patients and the data collection in the EDs (e.g., administering patient surveys, extracting data from hospital records). For qualitative data analysis, experts will be recruited at staff-trainings for the APU-process, as well as via email invitations.

As illustrated in Fig 3, for the trial period of two years, the average number of patients presenting with atraumatic abdominal pain in the ED in German hospital sites is expected to be between 1.750–3.500 patients [1].

Fig 3. Flow chart of patients admitted to the participating 10 emergency departments in Germany and resulting study population with atraumatic abdominal pain.

Fig 3

An a-priori power calculation based on the primary endpoints (acute pain score at discharge from ED, duration of treatment at the ED, patient satisfaction) with nQuery Advisor 7.0 [15] and corrected for the stepped wedge-design with 10 centers confirmed that a total sample size of n = 1.700 patients (which equals about n = 200 patients per study arm) is sufficient for analyzing the three endpoints in parallel adjusted for multiple testing; considering the potentially 15% study attrition rate the enrollment should aim for 2.000 patients.

Evaluation modules & data management plan

Recruitment of participants takes place in the EDs of all 10 involved German hospital sites by medical physicians. Study nurses will support baseline data collection (t0) in the EDs (i.e. administering patient surveys and documentation), and will carry out the 30-days follow-up data collection (t1). The evaluation process, which is divided in five evaluation modules, is illustrated in Fig 4.

Fig 4. Evaluation modules.

Fig 4

Module 1: Patient-reported outcomes

Patients who present in the ED with atraumatic abdominal pain will be identified by the physician and asked by physicians to participate in the APU study. At discharge or transfer from the ED (t0), study nurses will collect patient-reported outcomes, i.e. acute pain scores (numerical rating scale, NRS 0–1 [10]), patient satisfaction (ZUF-8, [11, 16]), quality of life (EUROHIS-QoL-8, [12, 13]), and socio-economic data with tablets (i.e. digitally and online) or with a paper-pencil-manner. At 30 days post-ED admission (t1), patients will be followed-up on their acute pain score, their quality of life, and other care-related outcomes. Either the study nurses will send patients a link to access the follow-up survey online, or patients will be followed-up via telephone, or perform an in-hospital follow-up in case a patients is still hospitalized.

Module 2: Primary health care data

Study nurses will extract consented patient’s clinical parameters (e.g. vital parameters, pre-existing conditions, onset of pain, and procedures and results) and duration of treatment in the ED from hospital records to an electronic Case Report Form at t0 and t1. Moreover, at t1, re-admission data will be extracted.

Module 3: Secondary data from clinics

Routinely collected data from all patient suffering from atraumatic abdominal pain (identified by physicians), such as transport, timestamps, diagnosis, vital parameters, and blood parameters, as well as data from the potentially subsequent inpatient stay of all patients with atraumatic abdominal pain treated in the ED during the two-year study period will be extracted. Those data will be de facto anonymized.

Module 4: Secondary health insurance data

Module 4 consists of two different parts of data extraction, namely part a) and b):

  1. Patients who consented to participate in the APU study and are also insured with the participating health insurance company, will be asked to agree to the provision of routinely collected data by the insurance company to the evaluating institute. These data include frequency and amount of health care resource consumption, health data, such as diagnosis and associated health care costs one year prior to trial until t1. These data will be economically investigated by the evaluating institute from the perspective of the health insurance company in terms of costs and cost-effectiveness (total costs related to primary outcomes) of the APU-process compared to controls over the whole study duration. In addition, an economic evaluation from the perspective of the hospital will be performed to investigate whether the usage of resources in the ED might have changed. For this analysis, data collected in Module 3 will be used (e.g., the number of ED procedures).

  2. Moreover, the participating health insurance company will perform an internal evaluation of effects from data of all insured patients with atraumatic abdominal pain syndrome at the same duration (i.e. one year prior to trial until t1).

Module 5: Qualitative process evaluation data

Experts (n = 35, i.e. physicians working with the APU-process in the EDs) and patients from the intervention group (n = 25) enrolled in the APU study will be identified through purposive sampling. Interviews will be conducted at all locations. Prior to expert interviews, participatory patient observations will be conducted and documented as field notes which will subsequently be transferred into standardized observational protocols. Semi-structured interviews will be conducted via phone or face-to-face. Preceding the interviews, written informed consent will be given by participants.

Data analysis plan

Descriptive and associated statistical analysis will be performed to provide summaries and analytical results for patient-reported outcomes, process measures, quality measures and costs. The three primary outcomes will be analyzed as planned for the RCT implementing adjustment methods necessary for data received in a stepped wedge study design. Generalized linear mixed models (GLMM) will be used to analyze primary outcomes as these allow also non-normal standard deviations and binary outcomes. Moreover, GLMM can compensate for differing cluster size (e.g. number of participants differs between study sites). The detailed SAP is currently prepared based on information about the data structure provided by the clinical team and the data managing team. In case of unequally distributed confounders (e.g., age, gender case mix) or potential risk factors (e.g., smoking or post-operative state of patient) in the data, sensitivity analysis will be performed.

Primary qualitative data collected in Module 5, consisting of field notes from participatory observations and the transcripts from semi-structured expert interviews will be analyzed inductively.

Dissemination

The project will be implemented under the consortium leadership of the Emergency and Acute Medicine, Campus Mitte und Virchow Klinikum Charité. The scientific evaluation is led by the Institute of Medical Sociology and Rehabilitation Science and the Institute of Health Services Research in Emergency Medicine together with the Institute of Medical Biometrics and Clinical Epidemiology and the Institute of Social Medicine, Epidemiology and Health Economics of the Charité–Universitätsmedizin Berlin. TMF e.V. is responsible for data protection aspects, such as the creation and coordination of the data protection concept, as well as for aspects regarding medical device regulations.

Discussion of potential strengths and limitations

Despite the potential limitation that a comprehensive implementation of the App-supported APU-process in all German hospitals will be challenging, since technological barriers could potentially arise, such as depending on the Wi-Fi-connection, slow response time, or system down time, a universally deployable application will be developed to efficiently guide ED care of atraumatic abdominal pain in the future. It is assumed that findings of this study are generalizable and can be broadly transferred into practice since hospitals included in this study are of different size, and location in Germany.

However, based on the exclusion criteria that participants need to have sufficient German language proficiency, as well as have to consent to participation either themselves or by their legal representative, migrant population or elderly with advanced dementia might be underrepresented in this study. For instance, especially for the migrant population, the experience of pain differs culturally [17]. Potentially excluding these patient groups from this study might subsequently lead to an underrepresentation of these vulnerable groups.

However, to generate highest possible evidence in the APU-study, sophisticated data triangulation from different sources will be used. In this triangulation process data will be linked from individual, patient-reported outcomes with secondary, objective data from clinical routine documentation and health insurers as well as qualitatively gathered data from participatory observations and expert interviews.

Another point for discussion is the potential risk of an ‚over-diagnosis‘, due to physicians blindly following the App-supported APU-process. In that case, patients could have a higher exposure of imagining diagnostics and subsequently a higher exposure to radiation or a longer duration of stay in the ED. This could also lead to a potential increase of inpatient stays as well as higher use of resources. Yet, no German standard of care for patients with atraumatic abdominal pain in the ED exists, why such over-diagnosis are potentially currently happening as well. The novel APU-process aims to offer clear indications for when, for instance, imaging diagnostics need to be taken, which on the contrary could prevent over-diagnosis. Further, it needs to be mentioned that based on the current absence of common German care standards for patients with atraumatic abdominal pain in the ED, major differences between the control groups of the participating centres might become a potential challenge for data analysis in this study. The control group in this study consists of care as usual, which is a different standard of care, diagnosis and treatment of patients with atraumatic abdominal pain in each study site, depending on the physician working in the ED. Another reason, why implementation of an evidence-based care standard, namely the APU, seems imperative for the best possible quality of care for this group of patients.

It is expected that the APU-process will have high potential to improve quality of acute care and quality of life for patients with atraumatic abdominal pain by a standardized diagnosis and treatment pathway. Moreover, we expect that patients´ experience of treatment in the ED will improve as a consequence of potentially shorter treatment times and faster diagnosis. As a result of this study, the standardized APU-process is expected to be ready to be scaled up nationwide.

Supporting information

S1 Checklist. SPIRIT 2013 Checklist: Recommended items to address in a clinical trial protocol and related documents*.

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S1 Protocol. Antrag auf Beratung durch die Ethikkommission zur Durchführung eines medizinisch-wissenschaftlichen Vorhabens, welches weder die klinische Prüfung eines Arzneimittels noch Medizinproduktes beinhaltet.

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S2 Protocol. Application for advice by the ethics committee on the implementation of a medical-scientific project that does not involve the clinical testing of a medicinal product or medical device.

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Abbreviations

APU

Abdominal Pain Unit

cRCT

Cluster randomized controlled trial

ED

Emergency department

ICU

Intensive care unit

NRS

Numeric rating scale

qSOFA

quick Sequential (Sepsis-Related) Organ Failure Assessment

SHI

Statutory health insurance

TK

Techniker Krankenkasse (the participating German statutory health insurance)

ZUF-8

Züricher Patientenzufriedenheit Fragebogen

Data Availability

No datasets were generated or analysed during the current study. All relevant data from this study will be made available upon study completion.

Funding Statement

MM received funding from the Innovation Funds (https://innovationsfonds.g-ba.de/) from the German Federal Joint Committee (G-BA) under the grant number 01NVF19025 for this project. The funders had and will not have a role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Comments to the Author

1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions?

The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Partly

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: The paper references a possibility of ‘over-diagnosis’ and over-exposure to radiation. When subjective information is protocolized, there is lots of variation and misdiagnosis.

Guidelines are molded in the vein of being a clinician and coming to a diagnosis. The general pathway of medicine is history and physical exam then laboratory data/imaging to confirm the diagnosis. A guideline then provides treatment modalities based on the diagnosis and patient condition.

The fear of creating a standardized protocol for the emergency department may lead to less clinical judgement and more reliance on following a standardized practice that does not individualize the patient.

It would be good to see a protocol that could help triage the severity of the diagnosis and how not to delay consultant involvement. Severe pancreatitis was referenced in the paper, and it can be a very deadly disease. To diagnosis the diseases you need two of the following 1) Typical pain presentation 2) Elevated lipase greater than 3 times the upper limit of normal 3) imaging (CT or US) finding of pancreatic inflammation. Epigastric pain that radiates to the back may present in these patients, but is also found in ruptured aortic aneurysms (which is acutely more lethal). Would this protocol recognize this difference in severity? Early recognition of a diagnosis and resuscitation is what reduces mortality. This is done initially with a thorough history and physical. Imaging and labs only confirm diagnosis and should not be the leading factor in initial management of critical patients.

Reviewer #2: the authors have embarked on a worthwhile albeit difficult journey. i am concerned that time in the ED is the primary endpoint. Time in the ed is dependent on so many variables, often not related directly to improved patient care or outcome. i would suggest the authors focus on a more patient centered outcome that is indicative of improved care, rather than a process measure. additionally there is little mention of how pain will be measured and controlled. Please describe

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


18 May 2022

Response to review on manuscript “The Abdominal Pain Unit (APU). Study protocol of a standardized and structured care pathway for patients with atraumatic abdominal pain in the emergency department: A stepped wedged cluster randomized controlled trial.” (PONE-D-21-28548)

We would like to thank the reviewer for his/her thorough review of our manuscript and the constructive, relevant remarks and suggestions. In the following, we will try to explain how we solved remarks indicated by the reviewer. The remarks of the reviewer are depicted first, followed by our responses in italics.

Reviewer's comments:

Reviewer #1:

The fear of creating a standardized protocol for the emergency department may lead to less clinical judgement and more reliance on following a standardized practice that does not individualize the patient. It would be good to see a protocol that could help triage the severity of the diagnosis and how not to delay consultant involvement.

We thank the reviewer for his/her critical thoughts on the tested standardized APU-process and we agree that a standardized treatment process may have its benefits and limitations. The reviewer fears that a standardized treatment process, such as the APU-process could potentially lead to less clinical judgement and more reliance on the process. We argue that treatment guidelines or standardized processes do not lead to potential delay in consultation and/or treatment. Other standardized treatment processes, such as the chest pain unit (1, 2), show very promising indications that such processes can improve processes and patient-centered outcomes are also standardized processes within the clinical setting. Moreover, physicians follow clinical guidelines for certain diagnoses, which differ between hospital(s wards). Also, as mentioned in the manuscript on page 4 & 5, line 89 ff.: “[…] no standardized care pathway for patients with atraumatic abdominal pain exists, why finding a diagnosis for those patients depends on […] each physician’s qualifications and experience (3).” As described in our manuscript (page 5, line 96 f.), the APU-process was developed by a multidisciplinary team of experts in a Delphi process (4) and therefore, seems very promising in increasing patient safety, patient satisfaction with the care provided and subsequently reducing mortality.

It is important to note that there are no mandatory automatisms in the APU treatment process. The goal of the APU-process is to give guidance to physicians in a very complex field of emergency medicine. All final decisions in the treatment of atraumatic abdominal pain – even within the APU-process - are made by the physician. The APU-app guides-process can be seen as a checklist, which only supports physicians to not miss crucial aspects in treatment and diagnosis while being focused on clinical judgement.

Severe pancreatitis was referenced in the paper, and it can be a very deadly disease. To diagnosis the diseases you need two of the following 1) Typical pain presentation 2) Elevated lipase greater than 3 times the upper limit of normal 3) imaging (CT or US) finding of pancreatic inflammation. Epigastric pain that radiates to the back may present in these patients, but is also found in ruptured aortic aneurysms (which is acutely more lethal). Would this protocol recognize this difference in severity? Early recognition of a diagnosis and resuscitation is what reduces mortality. This is done initially with a thorough history and physical. Imaging and labs only confirm diagnosis and should not be the leading factor in initial management of critical patients.

We thank the reviewer for the attentive question whether the APU treatment process, may recognize the difference in severity, as for instance, between a ruptured aortic aneurism and a pancreatic inflammation. The APU treatment process is specifically designed to not miss crucial, time-critical diagnoses. This is ensured by various checks within the treatment process. The first step in the APU-process ensures that the attending physician recognizes signs of clinical instability, shock or sepsis based on vital parameters (like blood pressure, vigilance, heart rate) and clinical appearance. At the beginning of the APU-process, every patient receives an ECG to warrant that no ST-Elevation myocardial infarction is overlooked, which may present as upper abdominal pain. In a next and second step of the APU-process, a thorough history and physical examination, as well as pain management and abdominal lab will be executed. Then, as a result of the second step, a clinical evaluation of the patient’s condition will be done and again vital parameters will be checked. These steps have been designed to ensure that crucial diagnoses will be recognized as early as possible. As essential part of the APU-process, at many time points, physicians are reminded to watch out for “red flags” to guarantee, that they do not miss time-critical diagnoses, such as ruptured abdominal aortic aneurysm, incarcerated hernia, testicular torsion, hollow organ perforation, ileus, mesenteric ischemia, splenic rupture and myocardial infarction.

Opposed to the reviewer’s remark that imaging and labs might be leading factors in the initial management of critical patients, in the APU-process these two tools are only used to confirm or reject certain diagnoses.

Reviewer #2:

The authors have embarked on a worthwhile albeit difficult journey. i am concerned that time in the ED is the primary endpoint. Time in the ed is dependent on so many variables, often not related directly to improved patient care or outcome. i would suggest the authors focus on a more patient centred outcome that is indicative of improved care, rather than a process measure.

We thank the reviewer for this careful observation about potential concerns regarding the measurement and interpretation of the parameter time in the ED (i.e. we defined this parameter as “duration of treatment in the ED”). We agree with the reviewer that the parameter “duration of treatment in the ED” depends on various parameters, such as the triage level, chief complaint, and mode of arrival (5), and might therefore only partially illustrate improved care. However, a shortened duration of treatment can directly benefit patients regarding shorter waiting times for diagnostics and treatments. This is, because medical personal might be readily available and not engaged with other patients.

However, as suggested by the reviewer, we also do focus on patient-centered outcomes (see page 5, line 98 ff.), to have a primary, aggregated aim of our study (consisting of three hypotheses):

“1) Leading to a shorter duration of treatment in the ED while improving patient-reported outcomes (assessed as acute pain score or/and patient satisfaction) at discharge from the ED; or

2) Improving patient-reported outcomes (assessed as acute pain score or/and patient satisfaction) at discharge from the ED while measuring a constant duration of treatment in the ED; or

3) Leading to a shorter duration of treatment in the ED and unchanged patient-reported outcomes (assessed as acute pain score and patient satisfaction) at discharge from the ED.”

Thus, we can highlight that we also measure patient-centered outcomes as main/primary endpoints. Namely: Patient-reported outcomes: patient satisfaction and acute pain score.

Moreover, it is to be mentioned that by combining three different outcomes, it is possible that lower assesses pain score and higher patient satisfaction alone can be interpreted as an improvement of patient’s care, while the duration of treatment in the ED stays constant.

Additionally there is little mention of how pain will be measured and controlled. Please describe

With regards to the reviewer’s remark on the measurement of pain, we have now added a description of the measurement of pain with the NRS below Table 1 (page 8, line165 ff.): “NRS = Numeric rating scale; subjective measure for rating the pain on an eleven-point numeric scale from 0 (no pain at all) to 10 (worst imaginable pain).”

References

1. Breuckmann F, Rassaf T, Hochadel M, Giannitsis E, Munzel T, Senges J. German chest pain unit registry: data review after the first decade of certification. Herz. 2021;46(Suppl 1):24-32.

2. Keller T, Post F, Tzikas S, Schneider A, Arnolds S, Scheiba O, et al. Improved outcome in acute coronary syndrome by establishing a chest pain unit. Clin Res Cardiol. 2010;99(3):149-55.

3. Berner L, Dormann H. Unclear abdominal pain in central emergency admissions. An algorithm. Med Klin Intensivmed Notfmed. 2013;108(1):33-40.

4. Helbig L, Stier B, Romer C, Kilian M, Slagman A, Behrens A, et al. [The abdominal pain unit as a treatment pathway : Structured care of patients with atraumatic abdominal pain in the emergency department]. Med Klin Intensivmed Notfmed. 2021.

5. Ding R, McCarthy ML, Desmond JS, Lee JS, Aronsky D, Zeger SL. Characterizing waiting room time, treatment time, and boarding time in the emergency department using quantile regression. Acad Emerg Med. 2010;17(8):813-23.

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Decision Letter 1

Steven Eric Wolf

1 Jul 2022

PONE-D-21-38548R1The Abdominal Pain Unit (APU). Study protocol of a standardized and structured care pathway for patients with atraumatic abdominal pain in the emergency department: A stepped wedged cluster randomized controlled trial.PLOS ONE

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Reviewers' comments:

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Comments to the Author

1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions?

The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses?

The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable?

Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: No further suggestions. Having a this protocol can be very helpful in the emergency setting.

Reviewer #2: A minor comment,... The authors focussed on pain control, patient satisfaction and time in the ED. However, how will this insure that improving these outcomes also will improve standard quality of care outcomes? Please address this in the paper.

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


13 Jul 2022

We would like to thank the reviewer for his/her thorough review of our manuscript and the constructive, relevant remarks and suggestions. In the following, we will try to explain how we solved remarks indicated by the reviewer. The remarks of the reviewer are depicted first, followed by our responses in italics.

Reviewer's comments:

Reviewer #2:

A minor comment,... The authors focussed on pain control, patient satisfaction and time in the ED. However, how will this insure that improving these outcomes also will improve standard quality of care outcomes? Please address this in the paper.

We thank the reviewer for his/her critical thoughts on the outcomes of the APU study and the improvement of quality of care standards. The APU process is no standardized care process, but the project aims to implement a standardized process to quickly diagnose atraumatic abdominal pain in a symptom-based manner. Due to the very heterogeneous nature of the symptoms of abdominal pain, yet no standardized quality of care outcomes/ key indicators exist. For this reason, we aim to mirror an improvement of care with the three primary outcomes (i.e. acute pain, duration of treatment in the ED, and patient satisfaction). Moreover, we also assess quality of care / patient safety and process quality outcomes (e.g. mortality, course of treatment, ICU stay, process times) in the APU study, as mentioned in the manuscript in Table 1 ‘secondary outcomes’ (see yellow highlighted text, page 8 in revised manuscript).

We hope that we adequately addressed all concerns and we would like to thank the editor and the reviewer once again for the helpful comments and suggestions. We would, however, be happy to consider further specific suggestions you might have.

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Decision Letter 2

Steven Eric Wolf

3 Aug 2022

The Abdominal Pain Unit (APU). Study protocol of a standardized and structured care pathway for patients with atraumatic abdominal pain in the emergency department: A stepped wedged cluster randomized controlled trial.

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