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. 2022 Dec 30;17(12):e0279898. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0279898

Association between myopia progression and quantity of laser treatment for retinopathy of prematurity

Eileen S Hwang 1,*, Iris S Kassem 2, Rawan Allozi 3, Sasha Kravets 3, Khalid Y Al-Kirwi 2, Joelle A Hallak 4, Deborah M Costakos 2
Editor: Shiying Li5
PMCID: PMC9803142  PMID: 36584135

Abstract

Background

Previous studies found that infants with retinopathy of prematurity (ROP) who were treated for more posterior disease with a greater number of laser spots developed higher myopia. These studies included multiple physicians with variations in laser density. In treatments by a single physician, laser spot count is a better surrogate for area of avascular retina and anterior-posterior location of disease, so that the relationship with myopia can be better assessed.

Methods

Our retrospective study included infants treated with laser for ROP by a single surgeon at a single center. Exclusion criteria were irregularities during laser and additional treatment for ROP. We assessed correlation between laser spot count and change in refractive error over time using a linear mixed effects model.

Results

We studied 153 eyes from 78 subjects treated with laser for ROP. The average gestational age at birth was 25.3±1.8 weeks, birth weight 737±248 grams, laser spot count 1793±728, and post-treatment follow up 37±29 months. Between corrected ages 0–1 years, the mean spherical equivalent was +0.4±2.3 diopters; between ages 1–2, it was -1.3±3.2D; and ages 2–3 was -0.8±3.1D. Eyes that received more laser spots had significantly greater change in refractive error over time (0.30D more myopia per year per 1000 spots). None of the eyes with hyperopia before 18 months developed myopia during the follow-up period.

Conclusions

Greater myopia developed over time in infants with ROP treated by laser to a larger area of avascular retina.

Introduction

Untreated retinopathy of prematurity (ROP) can lead to visually devastating outcomes such as retinal detachment. Fortunately, treatment can prevent preterm infants from developing severe vision loss [1,2]. Laser treatment prevents vision loss from macular dragging, retinal detachment, and vitreous hemorrhage. However, even when infants are successfully treated for ROP, they are at a lifelong risk of developing additional vision-threatening problems such as cataract, glaucoma, strabismus, amblyopia, retinal detachment, and refractive error, including myopia.

Myopia occurs after ROP treatment, and the risk of myopia is also elevated in spontaneously regressed ROP [3,4]. The risk of myopia is higher after spontaneous regression of posterior disease (i.e. zone 2) compared to anterior disease (i.e. zone 3) [5,6]. The CRYO-ROP study found more high myopia in treated compared to control eyes, although there were more eyes that could not be refracted in the control group [7]. In the subgroup of subjects that could be refracted in both eyes, there was no difference in myopia rates between treated and control eyes [7]. Anterior-posterior location of active ROP disease correlates with myopia, as well as the extent of final vascularization after spontaneous regression [5]. During laser treatment for ROP, the entire area of avascular retina is ablated to reduce the drive for neovascularization. Posterior location of ROP, and thereby a larger area of avascular retina ablated during laser treatment, may correlate with a greater risk of myopia [812]. Precisely measuring the anterior-posterior location or the area of retina treated are difficult. Laser spot count may serve as a surrogate, and previous studies have correlated laser spot counts and zone of treatment with myopia [812]. However, these studies included data from multiple treating physicians, and therefore, the number of laser spots could have reflected variations in treatment density between physicians rather than the area of retina treated. We sought to evaluate correlation between myopia and laser spot count after near-confluent treatment by a single ophthalmologist to eliminate variations in spot density as a confounder.

Methods

The Children’s Hospital of Wisconsin Institutional Review Board approval was obtained with a waiver of informed consent. This study conformed to the requirements of the United States Health Insurance Portability and Privacy Act. A retrospective chart review was conducted to screen 164 subjects treated for ROP from January 1, 2010 to July 1, 2019.

The primary outcome measure was refractive error as spherical equivalent, measured by cycloplegic refraction with cyclopentolate. Only subjects treated a single time with laser photocoagulation by a single provider (DMC) whose charts contained complete information about laser spot count and refractive error with cycloplegia from at least one clinic visit were included in the primary analysis. Laser photocoagulation was performed with a 810 nm indirect laser with a 28 D lens to apply near-confluent spots (less than 1/4 spot width apart) to the entire avascular retina between the ora serrata to the vascular-avascular border. The minimum power used for a treatment was 191 ± 25 mW (mean ± SD) and the maximum power used was 217 ± 54 mW. We excluded 6 eyes with equipment difficulties during laser as this may have changed the laser spot count. 7 eyes that subsequently underwent intraocular surgery were also excluded since it may have altered emmetropization in these eyes. We excluded 63 eyes that received treatment with intravitreal injections at any time and 4 eyes that underwent more than one laser treatment as the effect of anti-VEGF agents and multiple lasers may confound results.

Statistical analysis

The refractive error spherical equivalent between ages 0–1, 1–2, and 2–3 years were calculated by using the latest cycloplegic retinoscopy measured within that time period. Spherical equivalent and laser spots were treated as continuous variables. Mean ± Standard Deviation (SD) were reported for continuous variables. Bivariate and multivariate linear mixed models with random subject intercept, random intercept for eye within subject, and random eye slope were used to evaluate the association between the number of laser spots used in treatment and change in spherical equivalent over time. A mixed effects model was used for final analysis if 2 eyes from one subject were included to account for a lack of independence between both eyes. A p-value of ≤ 0.05 was considered statistically significant. Data was analyzed using R (R Core Team (2019). R: URL https://www.R-project.org/).

Results

Relationship between laser spot count and change in refractive error over time

We analyzed changes in refractive error over time in 153 eyes from 78 subjects (36 female, 42 male; 13 Hispanic, 24 black non-Hispanic, 32 white non-Hispanic, 9 other race/ethnicity; gestational age 25 ± 2 weeks; birth weight 737 ± 248 g) who underwent laser treatment for ROP between 2010 and 2019 by a single provider at a single center. 111 eyes were treated for ROP in zone II and 42 eyes were treated for ROP in zone III. No eyes were treated for ROP in Zone I. The mean post-menstrual age at treatment was 41 ± 8 weeks. The mean number of laser spots administered was 1793 ± 728 per eye. The subjects were followed for 37 ± 29 months with 3 ± 2 refractive error measurements during that period (Fig 1). Three eyes of 2 patients had macular dragging noted on exam.

Fig 1. Changes in refractive error with age.

Fig 1

One line represents one eye. Eyes were plotted in subgroups based on the number of laser spots received during treatment for retinopathy of prematurity. (A) first quartile of laser spots; (B) second quartile; (C) third quartile; (D) fourth quartile.

Change in refractive error over time was chosen as the primary outcome rather than refractive error at a single time point as the best way to compare longitudinal data between eyes due to the heterogeneity of ages at which refractive error measurements were obtained. The mean refractive error appeared to change more between the first and second years of life than between the second and third years of life (Table 1), but statistical analysis of how the rate of change varied over time was not possible due to the heterogeneity of the data. Therefore, we utilized a linear model to make comparisons between eyes although some of the data may have been better fit by a bilinear or higher order model [13].

Table 1. Mean refractive error in eyes treated with laser for retinopathy of prematurity.

Corrected Age Spherical Equivalent ± SD Number of Eyes
0 - <1 year +0.4 ± 2.3 D 132
1 - <2 years -1.3 ± 3.2 D 70
2 - <3 years -0.8 ± 3.1 D 56

A multivariate linear mixed effects model was used to model change in refractive error over time. Birth weight, age at birth, age at treatment, plus, stage and zone were included as covariates in the multivariate model based on clinical relevance and the results of a bivariate analysis with laser spots as the primary predictor variable. The use of laser spots as a surrogate for the area of retina treated was supported by a very tight correlation between zone and laser spots (p <0.001). In the multivariate model, we found that eyes that received a greater number of laser spots had significantly greater change in refractive error over time. The mean rate of change in refractive error was -0.29 ± 0.48 D/year. The coefficient for the interaction between laser spots and time was -0.30 D (95% confidence interval -0.53 to -0.08), signifying that an increase in the number of laser spots by 1,000 is associated with additional myopia of 0.30 D per year. The coefficient in the bivariate model was similar (-0.31), indicating that other covariates are not confounding the association between spherical equivalent and the interaction of laser spots and time. Many eyes in the highest quartile in terms of number of laser spots (Fig 1D) did not develop myopia, indicating that there are other factors affecting myopia development after laser for ROP.

Comparison of early and final refractive error

In the preceding analysis, we observed that much of the change in refractive error occurred in the first 1–2 years of life. We then hypothesized that refractive error before 18 months would be predictive of final refractive error. For the 40 subjects treated with laser who had refractive error measurements at age ≤ 18 months and > 24 months, early (≤ 18 months) and final refractive error were compared (Table 2). For each subject, the eye with the largest magnitude of refractive error was selected for inclusion. 32 of eyes remained in the same refractive error category. None of the early hyperopic eyes became myopic, and all of the early myopic eyes remained myopic. However, 4 of the 12 early emmetropic eyes became myopic.

Table 2. Early refraction compared to final refraction for eyes that underwent laser treatment for retinopathy of prematurity.

Early refraction final refraction number of eyes
hyperopia hyperopia 13
hyperopia emmetropia 3
hyperopia myopia 0
emmetropia hyperopia 1
emmetropia emmetropia 7
emmetropia myopia 4
myopia hyperopia 0
myopia emmetropia 0
myopia myopia 12

early, refraction at latest follow up prior to and including 18 months of age.

final, refraction at last follow up after 24 months of age.

hyperopia, spherical equivalent ≥ +1 D.

emmetropia, spherical equivalent ≥ - 1D and < +1D.

myopia, spherical equivalent < -1 D.

Discussion

In subjects treated with laser for ROP, we found that more posterior disease and a larger area of treated retina corresponded to a greater degree of myopia over long term follow up. Since a single provider performed all of the laser treatments in a standard fashion, we were able to use the number of laser spots as a surrogate for the anterior-posterior location of disease and the area of treated retina. We hypothesized that eyes with more posterior disease would develop greater myopia. We found higher myopia in eyes that received a higher number of laser spots, which correlates well with findings of previous studies correlating laser spot count with myopia [811]. Previous studies analyzed refractive error at a single time point, and in contrast, we investigated change in refractive error from baseline and we found that myopia progressed more quickly in eyes that received a greater number of laser spots. Earlier studies included data from multiple treating physicians, and the number of laser spots could have reflected variations in treatment density between physicians rather than the area of retina treated. In our study, all subjects were treated by a single surgeon. Our interpretation of laser spot count as a surrogate for treated area is also supported by our finding of a high correlation between spots and zone, as well as the work of Young-Zvandasara et al. [9], who measured lasered area on photographs and correlated this with the number of laser spots administered.

The myopia of prematurity and of spontaneously regressed ROP usually increases in early life and remains fairly stable thereafter [3,4,7]. In our study of eyes that underwent laser for ROP, we found that myopia developed primarily within the first two years of life, consistent with previous reports. Of importance to determining potential follow-up for children with a history of laser treatment for ROP, we found that in 32 of 40 eyes (80%), the refractive error category did not change between 18 months and the end of the follow up period (average of 37 months). The time course of development of myopia in ROP contrasts with school age myopia, which begins around ages 5–6 years and stabilizes in the teenage years. The follow up period of our study was not adequate to determine whether or not children treated with laser for ROP are at risk for school age myopia. The anatomic basis of myopia in prematurity and ROP differs from that of school age myopia as well. Premature eyes are characterized by greater lens thickness, shallower anterior chamber, and steeper corneas whereas in school age myopia, increased axial length is the primary abnormality [1417]. Primate studies have indicated that defocus over the peripheral retina leads to local scleral changes in axial myopia, but does not alter anterior segment anatomy [18]. The role of the peripheral retina in myopia of ROP is suggested by data from studies including ours correlating a greater area of healthy peripheral retina with less myopia, but the mechanisms are likely to differ from that of axial myopia. Alternate experimental models that mimic the anterior segment changes seen in premature infants are needed.

An alternate measure of the area of avascular retina is zone of ROP at time of treatment. However, zone is a generalized categorical measure that encompasses a large area of retina and may be somewhat subjective, in contrast to laser spots, which are a more precise, continuous measure. Therefore, we chose to use the number of laser spots as our primary predicter variable. In the Early Treatment for Retinopathy of Prematurity study, they analyzed zone rather than laser spots, and found greater prevalence of high myopia in eyes treated for ROP in Zone I compared to Zone II [19]. Because of the lack of guidelines on when to treat ROP in Zone III, clinicians must weigh the benefits and risks. We included eyes treated for ROP in Zone III, and found that these eyes, which required fewer laser spots to treat, were less likely to develop myopia.

One limitation of analyzing change in refractive error over time is that clinically relevant differences in refractive error arising before the first measurement could be missed. The mean refractive error at years 0–1 of 0.4 D suggests that our first measurement was early enough to capture the development of myopia over time.

In conclusion, we found that myopia after ROP laser correlated with laser spot count when a consistent spot density was used. These findings support correlation between myopia and the area of avascular retina treated rather than spot density.

Supporting information

S1 Dataset. De-identified complete dataset.

(XLSX)

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

This study was supported by an unrestricted grant from Research to Prevent Blindness https://www.rpbusa.org/rpb/ (University of Utah), the Alsam Foundation https://fconline.foundationcenter.org/fdo-grantmaker-profile/?key=ALSA001 (University of Utah), the National Institutes of Health EY014800 (University of Utah) and K08 EY024645 (ISK), and the Children’s Research Institute https://childrenswi.org/medical-professionals/research/about-childrens-research-institute (ISK). This investigation was conducted in part in a facility constructed with support from a Research Facilities Improvement Program, grant number C06RR016511 from the National Center for Research Resources, National Institutes of Health (Medical College of Wisconsin). Its contents are solely the responsibility of the authors and do not necessarily represent the official views of the National Institutes of Health. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: The topic of this article has certain significance,which explore the impact of laser treatment on the visual develop in ROP childen. after carefuly reading the article,the following factors should be considered.

1. currently, Anti-VEGF has been partially replaced the laser treatment on ROP.so ,the advancement of this article were be weakend.

Myopia is a multifactorial disease, which is related to genetic, environmental and other factors. Therefore, the refractive status of the parents of the children with ROP should also be taken into account in the study.

3. Eye axis related to the aging and mopia, If the length of the ocular axial involved in the research, the conclusions are more credible.

Reviewer #2: Hwang et al. retrospectively investigated myopia development in laser-treated ROP. The authors report a statistical correlation between the number of applied laser spots and the degree of myopia. They conclude that higher myopia develops in infants that received more laser treatment. This study is interesting and clinically relevant. The following issues should be addressed before consideration for publication.

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1. CRYO-ROP demonstrated a strong correlation between severity of ROP and development of myopia, independent of treatment (Quinn 1992). The more posterior the disease, the higher was the risk of myopia development. As mentioned on page 8, there is similar data from ETROP. The more severe and the more posterior the disease, however, the more likely it also needs treatment.

This means that laser treatment (or the extent thereof) may just be a confounding factor in this scenario: Myopia development correlates with ROP severity, and only because more severe/more posterior disease requires more laser treatment, there appears to be a relationship between those latter two.

The only way to proof or disproof that retinal ablative treatment in ROP is indeed influencing myopia development is a randomized trial design. CRYO-ROP randomized one eye per infant to cryotherapy and the other to observation and did not find a statistical difference in subsequent myopia development in pairwise comparison (Quinn 2001). This provides strong evidence that myopia in ROP develops independent of retinal ablative treatment.

Today, clinicians in ROP treatment are faced with the challenging decision between laser and anti-VEGF. Laser has several advantages over anti-VEGF including dramatically shorter follow-up time, no risk of systemic side effects, and no endophthalmitis. To facilitate informed decision making, the non-evidence-based impression that laser causes myopia in ROP should be avoided.

These issues should be incorporated into the manuscript’s abstract and discussion. When stating that more laser is associated with more myopia, it should be clarified that more laser is a surrogate marker for more posterior/more severe disease.

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2. According to US and international guidelines, zone III ROP does not normally require treatment. What was the rational for treating 42 eyes with zone III ROP in this study?

3. Page 3, line 53: Myopia secondary to ROP is usually not due to increased axial length and thus not resulting in myopic macular degeneration. Therefore, what is meant by “retinal disease” caused by myopia secondary to ROP? The cited reference #3 does not seem to provide supporting evidence or clarification for this.

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PLoS One. 2022 Dec 30;17(12):e0279898. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0279898.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


27 Sep 2022

Reviewer #1: The topic of this article has certain significance,which explore the impact of laser treatment on the visual develop in ROP childen. after carefuly reading the article,the following factors should be considered.

1. currently, Anti-VEGF has been partially replaced the laser treatment on ROP.so ,the advancement of this article were be weakend.

Our finding of less myopia after treatment for anterior ROP suggests that laser may be favored over anti-VEGF if the disease is far anterior.

2. Myopia is a multifactorial disease, which is related to genetic, environmental and other factors. Therefore, the refractive status of the parents of the children with ROP should also be taken into account in the study.

We agree that a confounder could be the refractive status of the parents. Unfortunately, this information was not available in this retrospective study. However, we are not aware of any reason to believe that parental refractive error correlates with zone of ROP so we do not think this affected our final conclusions.

3. Eye axis related to the aging and mopia, If the length of the ocular axial involved in the research, the conclusions are more credible.

Post-ROP myopia is not axial myopia (see references below). Unfortunately, this information was not collected in this retrospective study.

15. Wu WC, Lin RI, Shih CP, Wang NK, Chen YP, Chao AN, et al. Visual acuity, optical components, and macular abnormalities in patients with a history of retinopathy of prematurity. Ophthalmology. 2012;119(9):1907–16.

16. Cook A, White S, Batterbury M, Clark D. Ocular growth and refractive error development in premature infants with or without retinopathy of prematurity. Investig Ophthalmol Vis Sci. 2008;49(12):5199–207.

Reviewer #2: Hwang et al. retrospectively investigated myopia development in laser-treated ROP. The authors report a statistical correlation between the number of applied laser spots and the degree of myopia. They conclude that higher myopia develops in infants that received more laser treatment. This study is interesting and clinically relevant. The following issues should be addressed before consideration for publication.

Major comments

1. CRYO-ROP demonstrated a strong correlation between severity of ROP and development of myopia, independent of treatment (Quinn 1992). The more posterior the disease, the higher was the risk of myopia development. As mentioned on page 8, there is similar data from ETROP. The more severe and the more posterior the disease, however, the more likely it also needs treatment.

This means that laser treatment (or the extent thereof) may just be a confounding factor in this scenario: Myopia development correlates with ROP severity, and only because more severe/more posterior disease requires more laser treatment, there appears to be a relationship between those latter two.

The only way to proof or disproof that retinal ablative treatment in ROP is indeed influencing myopia development is a randomized trial design. CRYO-ROP randomized one eye per infant to cryotherapy and the other to observation and did not find a statistical difference in subsequent myopia development in pairwise comparison (Quinn 2001). This provides strong evidence that myopia in ROP develops independent of retinal ablative treatment.

Today, clinicians in ROP treatment are faced with the challenging decision between laser and anti-VEGF. Laser has several advantages over anti-VEGF including dramatically shorter follow-up time, no risk of systemic side effects, and no endophthalmitis. To facilitate informed decision making, the non-evidence-based impression that laser causes myopia in ROP should be avoided.

These issues should be incorporated into the manuscript’s abstract and discussion. When stating that more laser is associated with more myopia, it should be clarified that more laser is a surrogate marker for more posterior/more severe disease.

We appreciate this reviewer's perspective that the greater myopia may be due to more posterior location of active ROP disease. We incorporated this concept into the abstract, introduction and discussion.

The background section of the abstract now reads:

Previous studies found that infants with retinopathy of prematurity (ROP) who were treated for more posterior disease with a greater number of laser spots developed higher myopia. These studies included multiple physicians with variations in laser density. In treatments by a single physician, laser spot count is a better surrogate for area of avascular retina and anterior-posterior location of disease, so that the relationship with myopia can be better assessed.

The second paragraph of the introduction now reads:

Myopia occurs after ROP treatment, and the risk of myopia is also elevated in spontaneously regressed ROP [3,4]. The risk of myopia is higher after spontaneous regression of posterior disease (i.e. zone 2) compared to anterior disease (i.e. zone 3) [5]. The CRYO-ROP study found more high myopia in treated compared to control eyes, although there were more eyes that could not be refracted in the control group [6]. In the subgroup of subjects that could be refracted in both eyes, there was no difference in myopia rates between treated and control eyes [6]. Anterior-posterior location of active ROP disease correlates with myopia, as well as the extent of final vascularization after spontaneous regression [7]. During laser treatment for ROP, the entire area of avascular retina is ablated to reduce the drive for neovascularization. Posterior location of ROP, and thereby a larger area of avascular retina ablated during laser treatment, may correlate with a greater risk of myopia [8–12]. Precisely measuring the anterior-posterior location or the area of retina treated are difficult.

The first paragraph of the discussion now reads:

In subjects treated with laser for ROP, we found that more posterior disease and a larger area of treated retina corresponded to a greater degree of myopia over long term follow up. Since a single provider performed all of the laser treatments in a standard fashion, we were able to use the number of laser spots as a surrogate for the anterior-posterior location of disease and the area of treated retina. We hypothesized that eyes with more posterior disease would develop greater myopia.

Minor comments

2. According to US and international guidelines, zone III ROP does not normally require treatment. What was the rational for treating 42 eyes with zone III ROP in this study?

Since there are no guidelines regarding whether to treat or observe ROP in zone III, practice patterns vary. Zone III subjects were treated to reduce the need for intensive follow up with scleral depressed exams. Our inclusion of treatments for ROP in zone III actually strengthen our evaluation of the correlation between spot counts and myopia by providing greater variation in spot counts, since laser in zone III is to a smaller area that requires fewer laser spots. Our data provide evidence that treatment in zone III is unlikely to create myopia.

3. Page 3, line 53: Myopia secondary to ROP is usually not due to increased axial length and thus not resulting in myopic macular degeneration. Therefore, what is meant by “retinal disease” caused by myopia secondary to ROP? The cited reference #3 does not seem to provide supporting evidence or clarification for this.

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Reviewer #3: The authors retrospective studied the ROP-treated infants and found the correlation between myopia and the area of avascular retina treated rather than spot density. However, there are some questions as below.

1. Line 50~53, please add some references for this description.

2. Line 123, please keep only one ‘.’ In the end of ‘variable’

3. Line 149~152, as you described, ‘32 of eyes…’, you’d better discuss these results in the discussion.

4. In ‘Discussion’, it would more interesting if you discussed some mechanisms of the area of avascular retina contributed to the myopia beyond your hypothesis in line 163~165.

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


11 Dec 2022

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Reviewer #3: The authors retrospective studied the ROP-treated infants and found the correlation between myopia and the area of avascular retina treated rather than spot density. However, there are some questions as below.

1. Line 50~53, please add some references for this description.

Response: added an additional reference in line 51 to:

Dikopf MS, Machen LA, Hallak JA, Chau FY, Kassem IS. Zone of retinal vascularization and refractive error in premature eyes with and without spontaneously regressed retinopathy of prematurity. Journal of AAPOS. 2019;23(4):211.e1-6.

2. Line 123, please keep only one ‘.’ In the end of ‘variable’

Response: the double period has been corrected to a single period at the end of line 128.

3. Line 149~152, as you described, ‘32 of eyes…’, you’d better discuss these results in the discussion.

Response: We added a sentence to the discussion, lines 177-178, "we found that in 32 of 40 eyes (80%), the refractive error category did not change between 18 months and the end of the follow up period (average of 37 months)."

4. In ‘Discussion’, it would more interesting if you discussed some mechanisms of the area of avascular retina contributed to the myopia beyond your hypothesis in line 163~165.

Response: I edited the discussion (lines 185-191) to read: Primate studies have indicated that defocus over the peripheral retina leads to local scleral changes in axial myopia, but does not alter anterior segment anatomy [18]. The role of the peripheral retina in myopia of ROP is suggested by data from studies including ours correlating a greater area of healthy peripheral retina with less myopia, but the mechanisms are likely to differ from that of axial myopia. Alternate experimental models that mimic the anterior segment changes seen in premature infants are needed.

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Association between myopia progression and quantity of laser treatment for retinopathy of prematurity

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