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. 2023 Jan 23;18(1):e0280679. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0280679

Trend and factors associated with anemia among women reproductive age in Ethiopia: A multivariate decomposition analysis of Ethiopian Demographic and Health Survey

Berhan Tsegaye Negash 1,*, Mohammed Ayalew 2
Editor: Sidrah Nausheen3
PMCID: PMC9870172  PMID: 36689422

Abstract

Background

In developing countries like Ethiopia, anemia is a public health problem. Unfortunately, the progress of anemia reduction has been slow. Although the issue of anemia has received considerable critical attention nowadays, trends and factors associated with anemia among women of reproductive age have not been explored in Ethiopia.

Objective

This study aimed to determine trends and factors associated with anemia among women of reproductive age in Ethiopia from 2005 to 2016.

Method

Data from three consecutive Ethiopian Demographic and Health Survey (EDHS) from 2005–2016 were analyzed in this study. EDHS is a two-stage cluster sampling survey. Data were weighted to correct sampling bias in all surveys. A total of 46,268 samples were analyzed using a fixed effect model. For a measure of proportion, differences and slopes were computed. Bivariate and multivariable logistic regression analyses were done to identify predictors of the trend of anemia among women. Adjusted odds ratio (AOR) with a 95% Confidence Interval(CI) was computed, and the p-value < 0.05 is considered significant.

Result

Prevalence of anemia among women was 68%, 20.3%, and 27.3% in 2005, 2011 and 2016, respectively. The trend of anemia was reduced by 47.7 percentage points from 2005 to 2011; however, it increased by 7% points again from 2011 in 2016. Lack of mobile phones (AOR = 1.4, 95%CI, 1.2,1.6), Afar women (AOR = 1.5, 95%CI, 1.1,2.3) and Somali women (AOR = 1.5, 95%CI, 1.1,1.9) were associated with anaemia among women. On the contrary, the history of heavy menstruation in the last six months (AOR = 0.9; 95%CI, 0.85,0.98) was a factor negatively associated with anemia in 2005. In 2011, single women (AOR = 0.8,95%CI,0.7,0.9), watching TV less than once per wk (AOR = 0.9,95%CI,0.7,0.95), watching TV at least once per week (AOR = 0.8,95%CI,0.7,0.98) were variables associated with anemia. On the contrary, widowed women (AOR = 1.7,95%CI,1.4,2.0) were affected by anemia. In 2016, the richest women (AOR = 0.7, 95%CI, 0.6,0.8) and single (AOR = 0.8, 95%CI, 0.7,0.9) were affected little by anemia. Women of traditional belief followers (AOR = 2.2,95%CI,1.6,2.9) were more highly influenced by anemia than their counterparts.

Conclusion

The prevalence of anemia declined rapidly from 2005 to 2011, and increased from 2011 to 2016. Stakeholders should develop policies and programs to enhance the socio-demographic status of women and basic infrastructure for the community. Furthermore, they should design strategies for extensive media coverage of the prevention of anemia. The federal government should balance the proportion of anemia among regions by ensuring health equality.

Background

Anemia is described as a state of reduction in the number of red blood cells or their oxygen-carrying capacity so that they can not supply the body’s physiologic needs adequately [1]. It is characterized by fatigue, weakness, decreased productivity, and inhibited immune function [2, 3]. It can be caused by infections, chronic inflammatory conditions, micronutrient deficiencies or genetic disorders [4, 5]. Although anemia is caused by these etiologies, the most commonest (60%) type of anemia is iron deficiency anemia [6]. The causes of anemia vary by location, demography [6] or economic growth [7].

Globally, the prevalence of anemia varies across countries. For example, in the overall world population, nearly 14% of anemia occurs in high-income countries, and 50% of low-income countries are affected by anemia [810]. The world Health Organization (WHO) reported that women of reproductive age are at high risk of developing iron deficiency anemia [11]. Particularly, women in resource- poor countries often fail to get extra food and supplements needed to meet the necessary daily requirements for normal physiology during reproduction [12].

WHO classifies anemia based on the hemoglobin level as sever,moderate and mild anemia if its prevalence accounts for 40%, 20%-40%, and 5%-20%, respectively [13]. In Ethiopia, a meta-analysis study indicated that pooled prevalence of anemia was 31.6% among pregnant women [14]. Previous studies have indicated several predictors of anemia among women of reproductive age. These include the following socio-economic and reproductive health characteristics:young age, grand multi-parity, short inter-pregnancy intervals, low socio-economic status, low educational status, ignorance [15], heavy menstrual blood loss, history of using an intrauterine contraceptive device, previous history of anemia, and body mass index [16]. Anemia causes adverse pregnancy outcomes: still birth, abortion, low birth weight, maternal and neonatal mortality [17, 18], intrauterine fetal death, premature birth [19], decreases physical performance, and work capacity [20]. Consequently, the world Health Assembly (WHA) adopted a commitment to reduce the magnitude of anemia by half among women of reproductive age by 2025 [21].

According to the Ethiopian National Food Consumption Survey (ENFCS), dietary iron intake was high at the population level in Ethiopia, especially among adult women [22]. For example, 64 percent of women of reproductive age had intakes that exceeded the World Health Organization’s recommended upper intake levels [23]. Some techniques stated in the national nutrition program to avoid iron deficiency anemia among Ethiopian women of reproductive age include iron-folic acid supplementation, food fortification, and dietary diversification [24]. Pregnant women are given iron-folic acid tablets, but compliance is poor overall, ranging from 3.5% to 76% [25, 26]. Therefore, a food fortification strategy should be adopted. However, anemia is more prevalent among women of reproductive age. Even with the existence of a number of policies and programs, anemia among reproductive age women persists as a critical concern for the public health agenda [27]. Furthermore, previous studies have identified some key independent variables associated with anemia, such as residence, wealth index, and modern contraceptive use. However, the majority of them were small-scale, and conducted in specific localities rather than country-wide [2831]. Reducing the prevalence of anemia among women of reproductive age is considered a vital strategy to improve the health of women at reproductive age. Consequently, the world health organization has set a global target of achieving a 50% of reduction in the proportion of anemia among women reproductive age by 2025 [32].

In Ethiopia, previous studies focused on the level of anemia in certain vulnerable population groups, such as children, pregnant, and lactating women. However, few studies were conducted on the prevalence of anemia among women of reproductive-age [30, 31, 33]. Furthermore, although most studies were conducted on anemia among reproductive age women in different local areas in Ethiopia, they fail to show trends and associated factors with anemia among women of reproductive age at the national level. Therefore, this study aimed to assess trends and factors associated with anemia among reproductive-age women in Ethiopia from 2005–2016.

Methods

Study setting and period

Ethiopia is one of the East African countries which had an estimated population of around 107,406,158 in 2017. Accordingly,Ethiopians make up 1.4% of the global population, putting in the 12th place worldwide. Administrative, Ethiopia is divided into 10 regions. Each region is divided into zones. Furthermore,zones are further sub-divided into districts. Finally, each district in turn is sub-divided into sub-districts or Kebeles. Kebeles are the lowest administrative units, which consist of around 1000 households. Ethiopia has a diversified population with more than 80 ethnic groups. Most (80%) of the population of Ethiopians live in rural areas [12, 13]. Based on the 2007 Ethiopian national census report, the average size of household was 5, 4.6, and 4.6 persons in 2005, 2011 and 2016 respectively. The population proportion of males to females is equivalent in Ethiopia. The total fertility rate has declined from 5.5 in 2000 to 4.1 in 2014. In Ethiopia, women of the reproductive age group constitute 23.4% of the total population [34, 35].

Data availability

Ethiopian Demographic and Health Survey (EDHS) is a quantitative cross-sectional study conducted every five years in Ethiopia. The current research is a secondary data analysis of EDHS 2005,2011, and 2016. The main objective of DHS is to provide critical information on indicators of fertility, family planning, infant health, child health, adult health, maternal and child health, nutrition and sexually transmitted infections. First, we were registered and requested EDHS data for analysis from the ‘measure DHS’ online archive. Then, permission to access the database was officially obtained for this study. The database is available at the official website of DHS, which is found at the following link: https://dhsprogram.com.

Study population

Women of reproductive age in Ethiopia from 2005 to 2016 (15–49 years) were the target population. Women who lived in the selected clusters and presented during data collection period were the study population in this study. Pregnant and smoker women were excluded in this study as cut off anemia threshold varies compared to women of reproductive age. The primary sampling unit was enumeration area/ cluster/. On the contrary, secondary sampling units were households in this study. Each woman was the study unit in this study.

Sample size determination and sampling technique

The sample sizes for the EDHS are determined through consultation with senior statisticians, who consider survey precision, budget and accuracy. The Ethiopian central statistical agency conducts the Ethiopian national census. The 1994 Ethiopian national census was the source of sampling frame for EDHS 2005. Furthermore, the 2007 Ethiopian National Census was also the source of the sampling frame for EDHS 2011 and EDHS 2016. Enumeration areas(EAs) were created during the national population census.

Fig 1 displays that The EDHS is a stratified sampling technique survey with two stages. First, clusters were selected using a simple random sampling method. A total of 540 enumeration areas were used in the EDHS 2005. Furthermore, 624 clusters were considered for EDHS 2011, and 645 clusters were taken into account for EDHS 2016. In each cross-section of surveys, EAs were stratified into urban and rural areas. DHS is a two stage survey. In the first stage, clusters were selected and stratified by residence status. Households were chosen in the second stage in proportion to the number of households in each cluster. Each household was selected using systematic random sampling. Simple random sampling was applied to select women, if there were more than one eligible woman in the same household. The detailed methodology is explained in the survey reports [36]. In the first stage, clusters were divided into urban (145) and rural (395) clusters in the 2005 EDHS. Furthermore, in the 2011 EDHS, 187 urban and 395 rural clusters were considered. Finally, in the EDHS 2016, 202 urban and 443 rural clusters were used as the primary sampling units. Second, households were selected as the secondary sampling units from selected clusters proportionally. Accordingly, a total of 14,645 households were selected during 2005 EDHS. Besides, a total of 18,817 households were drawn from the sampling frame of clusters in 2011 EDHS. Lastly, a total of 18,008 households were used in EDHS 2016. However, among the selected households, only 13,181 households were occupied by people. Moreover, women lived in only 16,702 households in 2011 EDHS. Finally, nearly 16,650 households were occupied by women. Hence, the response rate of these surveys was considered as good in all three surveys. As a result, the response rate was reported as 99%,98.1% and 98% in 2005,2011 and 2016 respectively at the household level. Although these households were occupied by women in three consecutive surveys, all women were not eligible for these surveys. Hence, only 14,717 women were eligible in 2005. In addition, 7,385 women were eligible for EDHS 2011, but only 16,650 were eligible for EDHS 2016. However, only fourteen thousand seventy (14,070), sixteen thousand five hundred five-five(16,515), and fifteen thousand six hundred eighty-three (15,683) women have given full responses to questions, making a final response of 96, 95 and 95% during 2005 EDHS,2011EDHS, and 2016 EDHS, respectively (Fig 1).

Fig 1. Schematic presentation of sampling technique of EDHS among women of reproductive age in Ethiopia from 2011–2016.

Fig 1

Operational definition

Denominator

Number of women age 15–49 years measured for anemia in households selected for anemia testing.

Percentage of anemia by category

Is obtained by dividing the numerators by the denominator and multiplying by 100.

Numerators

Include the classification of the following terms: Any anemia, mild anemia, moderate anemia and sever anemia.

Any anemia

Number of non-pregnant women whose hemoglobin count is less than 12.0 grams per deciliter (g/dl).

Mild anemia

Number of non-pregnant women whose hemoglobin count is between 11.0 and 11.9 g/dl.

Moderate anemia

Number of non-pregnant women whose hemoglobin count is between 8.0 and 10.9 g/dl.

Sever anemia

Number of non-pregnant women whose hemoglobin count is less than 8.0 g/dl.

Measurement

Dependent variable

The outcome variable for this study is anemia. In the three consecutive surveys, the level of hemoglobin was measured through adjustments for altitude and smoking, which were already provided in the EDHS data. The hemoglobin level found in the survey data set was already adjusted for altitude using the adjustment formula: adjust = 0.032*alt + 0.022*alt2 and adjHb = Hb—adjust (adjust > 0). The presence of anemia was defined as a categorical variable with pre-defined cut-off points. These include no, mild, moderate, and severe anemia, as recommended by the WHO for women of reproductive age. We have re-categorized anemia again as a binary outcome variable: anemic and non-anemic. We have dichotomized anemia based on prior classifications of the dataset: no anemia, mild anemia, moderate anemia, and severe anemia because of the very small numbers of cases in the categories of severe and mild anemia.

Therefore, women whose hemoglobin level was 120 g/L were considered "anemic," and women whose hemoglobin level was 120 g/L or more were classified as "non-anemic." We have coded "anemia" as "1," otherwise "0," in this study. The independent variables were grouped under the following categories: socio-demographic characteristics, age, educational status (including husband’s educational status), religion, ethnicity, marital status, wealth index, and household size. Furthermore, the reproductive variables include age at first pregnancy, number of births, number of antenatal visits, and pregnancy status currently. In addition, factors related to the source of information include the following variables: frequency of listening to the radio, frequency of reading newspapers, and frequency of watching television. Principal component analysis was done to construct the wealth index [37]. The wealth index was created in three consecutive steps. First, the subsets of urban and rural household indicators were built separately. Second, scores were created separately for each household, both in urban and rural areas. Finally, a national-wide wealth index was created by combining both urban and rural settings [38].

Data collection

Blood specimens were collected for anemia testing from eligible women who voluntarily consented to the testing. Hemoglobin analysis was carried out onsite using a battery-operated portable HemoCue analyzer. Results were given verbally and in writing. Likewise, non-pregnant women were referred for follow-up care if their hemoglobin level was below 7 g/dl. All households in which anaemia testing was conducted received a brochure explaining the causes and prevention of anaemia. At the time of creation of a recode file, an adjustment of the hemoglobin count is made for altitude. Rather than change the cutoff points, the effective hemoglobin count is lowered as altitude increases since oxygen is less available. The adjustment is made with the following formulas: Adjust adjHb if adjusted > 0, where adjust is the amount of the adjustment, alt is altitude in 1,000 feet (converted from meters by dividing by 1,000 and multiplying by 3.3), adjHb is the adjusted hemoglobin level, and Hb is the measured hemoglobin level in grams per deciliter. No adjustment is made for altitudes below 1,000 meters. Both the adjusted and unadjusted hemoglobin counts are included in the recode files.

Data process and analysis

Initially, the data was checked for the presence of missing data, outliers, and consistency. The complex sampling procedure was also considered by using the SVY STATA command to control the clustering effect of complex sampling. The data was analyzed using Stata version 14.0 after the two datasets were merged using the Stata command "append." Then, we have created dummy variables for time. Finally, multivariate decomposition analysis was performed to determine the change in anemia and the factors that contributed to the change. The goal of the decomposition analysis was to determine the source of change in anemia among women of reproductive age from 2005 to 2016. The analysis used the output of the logistic regression model to decompose the observed difference in anemia into two components. The first variation was caused by differences in population structure or composition across the survey. The second change was due to a change in the behavior of the survey population, as the change in outcome was due to either a change in population composition, a change in behavior of the population, or both. The observed differences in anemia levels between different surveys were decomposed into characteristics (natural endowment or population composition) and a coefficient (effect of characteristics or behavioral effect). The logit-based difference can be decomposed as [37]

Y=F(exβ/1+exβ)+є (1)
YaYb=F(exaβa/1+exaβa)F(exaβa/1+exbβb)+є (2)
ΔY=[F(exaβa/1+exaβa)F(exbβa/1+exbβa)]+[F(exbβa/1+exbβa)F(exbβb/1+exbβb)+є. (3)

where Y is the dependent variable, X is the independent variable, is the coefficient, and F is the difference between X(ex/1+ ex) and Y. Hence, the result focused on how anemia responded to population composition and behavior and how these factors shaped it across different surveys at different times. The level of statistical significance was set at a P-value of less than 0.05. Analysis was carried out using three consecutive EDHS from 2005 to 2016. These data were appended for analysis of trends in the proportion of anemia. The analyses were done using complex sample analysis to adjust for the cluster sampling design used in the DHS. Whenever there is a non-proportional allocation of samples, the use of sample weights is an important step during analysis. Frequencies were first determined, followed by cross-tabulations to compare frequencies. At the bivariate level, the Pearson chi square (X2) test was used to test the association. Then, bivariate and multivariable logistic regressions were used to identify independent predictors of anemia in the three concurrent EDHS datasets. Results were presented in the form of odds ratios and 95 percent confidence intervals. Statistical significance was set at a p-value of 0.25 and a p-value of 0.05 for binary and multiple logistic regression analyses, respectively. Variables that did not have a significant regression coefficient were removed from the model. Variables that were not significant in the univariate analysis were added back to the model, and their significance was assessed in the presence of other significant variables. Subsequently, the goodness of fit of our final model was tested using the Hosmer-Lemeshow test. Data management and statistical analysis were done with SPSS version 22. In addition, multicollinearity was tested using the variance inflation factor (VIF), and we have a VIF of less than five for each independent variable with a mean VIF of 1.89, indicating there was no significant multicollinearity between independent variables [38].

Multivariate decomposition analysis of anemia

The decomposition analysis model has taken into account the differences in the characteristics (compositional factors) and the differences due to the effects of characteristics. We have selected the panel regression model from the one-way error component model as it recognizes the distinct heterogeneity in the data. In panel data regression, cross-sectional units or groups are not the same (they are heterogeneous). Hence, time dummies were created for the 2011 and 2016 surveys, making 2005 a constant that did not need a dummy in this study. As a result, the intercepts of this model vary and are expressed as: Yit = + 1X 1it + 2 X2it + t + Vit. After controlling the compositional factors, 64 points and seven percent (64.7%) of the change in proportion of anemia was due to the difference in effects of characteristics. Among the compositional characteristics, region is the key variable. As a result, women in Afar, Somalia, Harar, and Dire-Dawa had lower anemia rates than women in Tigray. On the contrary, women in Amhara were increasingly affected by anemia in the decade before 2016 compared to women in Tigray. Among the behavioral characteristics, women who had irregular menses, abortions, and the habit of seeking information from various sources (newspapers, television, and radio) had better odds of reducing anemia than their counterparts.

Poolablity test

Before assessing the validity of the fixed effect method, we need to apply tests to check whether fixed effects (different intercepts in each survey) should indeed be included in the model. Hence, we have done the standard F-test to check the fixed effect against the simple common intercept OLS method. Hence, we have a p-value less than 0.05, so we reject the null hypothesis of common intercepts for all surveys. All year dummies are significant except 2005 (constant). Then, we used the LSDV (fixed effect) model. Only 36.8% of the overall change was due to the difference in compositional characteristics.

Parameter estimation

Stata 14 was used to fit all the above models to the data set. The variables of the study were carefully selected through an adequate literature review. The F-test was conducted to check the fixed effect against the common intercept model. Hence, we used the LSDV (least square dummy variable) estimator in this study.

Model selection

The process of model selection was done in two distinct steps. First, we verified that the samples were drawn at random from the population. Second, we have evaluated both the fixed and random effect models. Then, they were compared using the Durbin-Wu-Hausman test. Huasman test is the test of random effect model of in the null hypothesis. We have selected a fixed effect model since the null hypothesis was rejected using a p-value less than 0.05.

Test of model fit

We have applied the F-test and obtained a significant value, so, we reject the null hypothesis of a common intercept. Moreover, we rejected the null hypothesis in the hausman test, which states that the ‘‘difference in the null hypothesis is not systematic ‘‘ the p-value is less than 0.05. Moreover, we have also checked using the Breusch-pagan LM test and the chow test. All are consistent in showing that the fixed effect model is the right model.

Ethical approval and consent to participate

Ethical clearance was granted by the federal democratic republic of Ethiopia’s ministry of science and technology and the Institutional Review Board (IRB) of ICF. The project numbers were 31406.00.002.12 at a date of September 30, 2008 for the 2005 EDHS(, 31561.00.042.00 at a date of February 28, 2011 for the 2011 EDHS, and FWA-00000845 at a date of June 17, 2017 for the 2016 EDHS. We registered, and we requested datasets from the DHS online archive for this study. Then, we received permission to access and download the data files [39].

Result

Descriptive analysis of socio-demographic characteristics

The participants in the study were 28 years old on average, with a standard deviation of 9.6 years. Table 1 presents the socio-demographic characteristics of the study participants. It is apparent from this table that the proportion of educated women showed an increasing pattern. For example, nearly two-thirds (66%) of the study participants were not formally educated in 2005. Further, half (50.2%) and 44.8% of the study subjects had no formal education in 2011 and 2016, respectively. Most (64.9%) of the study participants had no occupation in 2005. On the contrary, less than half (42.3%) of the study participants were jobless in 2011. Most of the study subjects (48.1%) were Orthodox Christians. However, only 2.1% of the study subjects were traditional believers in 2005. On the contrary, we can see that the proportion of Catholics in the study subjects was lowest in 2011 and 2016. There is a clear trend toward increasing wealth quantiles in all three surveys in this study.

Table 1. Socio-demographic characteristics of women from EDHS 2005-2016(N = 46,268).

Variable EDHS-2005 Wt (%) (N = 14,070) EDHS-2011 Wt (%) (N = 16,515) p-value EDHS-2016 Wt (%) (N = 15,683) p-value Absolute Difference (% in 2016 - % in 2005)
Age
15–19 years 23.2 23.22 0.003 22.3 0.138 0.9
20–29 years 36.0 37.58 36.65 0.65
30–34 years 12.8 17.66 14.29 1.49
35–49 years 28.0 21.54 26.76 1.24
Education
Non educated 65.9 50.12 0.000 44.84 0.000 21.06
educated 34.10 49.88 55.16 21.06
Working status
Work 34.9 57.7 0.067 46.02 0.000 21.06
No work 65.9 42.3 53.08 11.12
Residence
Urban 17.8 32.27 0.017 34.10 0.356 16.3
Rural 82.2 67.73 65.90 16.3
Region
Tigray 6.5 10.46 0.000 10.73 0.000 16.3
Afar 1 7.82 7.19 4.23
Amhara 24.7 12.64 10.96 6.19
Oromia 35.6 12.93 12.06 13.74
Somali 3.5 5.53 8.87 23.54
Benishangul 0.9 7.62 7.18 5.37
SNNPRs 21.3 12.32 11.79 6.28
Gambela 0.3 6.84 6.60 9.51
Harari 0.3 6.67 5.78 6.3
Addis Ababa 5.4 10.54 11.63 5.48
Dire Dewa 0.5 6.63 7.21 6.23
Religion
Orthodox 48.4 42.38 0.021 40.89 0.099 7.51
catholic 1.02 1.07 0.58 0.44
Protestant 16.36 13.79 17.94 1.58
Muslim 32.15 37.38 39.59 7.44
traditional 2.07 1.39 0.99 1.08
Wealth index
Poorest 17.3 18.1 0.081 18.1 0.015 0.8
Poorer 18.8 18.4 18.4 0.4
Middle 19.4 18.4 18.4 1
Richer 18.8 19.5 19.5 0.7
Richest 25.7 25.7 25.7 0
Ethnicity
Amhara 31.5 32.5 0.000 29.8 0.000 1.7
Oromo 32.4 32.5 34.0 1.6
Somali 3.0 1.9 2.8 0.2
Sidama 4.0 3.6 4.0 0
Others* 29.1 29.5 29.4 0.3

Key:

*- Tigre, Kenbata, Hadiya, Silte, Guarage, Gedio, Berta, Shinasha, Afar, Gambela, Gumuz, Hadrie, Agew, p-value.

Reproductive health characteristics of the study participants

Table 2 of this study subjects showed that most of the study participants (82.8%) had not read newspapers at all in all surveys. Only few(1.2%) study participants listened at least once per week. Most of the study participants (60.1%) did not listen to radio. Seven point nine percent (7.9%) of study participants had a termination of pregnancy in 2016. On the contrary, only 0.6% of the study participants had abortions. Women who owned mobile phones accounted for 9.8% in 2011. Nearly half (48.9%) of the study participants had menstruation in the past six months in 2005. However, only 44.4% of the study participants had menstruation in the past 6 months in 2016. Only one fifth of the households had electric in 2005. However, one third of the study participants lived in the household with out electricity in 2016.

Table 2. Reproductive health and source of information the study participants EDHS 2005-2016(N = 46,268).

Variable EDHS-2005 Wt (%) N = 14,070 EDHS-2011 Wt (%) N = 16,515 p-value EDHS-2016 Wt (%) N = 15,683 p-value Absolute Difference (% in 2016 - % in 2005)
Freq. of reading newspaper
Not at all 84.6 80.3 0.000 83.6 0.000 1.0
Less than 1/week 12.7 14.8 11.9 1.2
At least once/week 1.2 4.7 4.4 1.2
Freq. of watching TV
Not at all 81.5 43.0 0.000 72 0.000 8.5
Less than 1/week 10.5 34.7 12.1 1.1
At least once/week 7.7 22.3 15.8 8.1
Freq. of listening radio
Not at all 57.3 56.2 0.000 66.9 0.000 9.6
Less than 1/week 26.7 27.8 16.7 10.0
At least once/week 15.9 16.0 16.5 0.6
Abortion
Yes 0.9 0.6 0.144 7.9 0.46 7.0
no 93.1 91.48 92.1 1.0
Electricity
No 81.1 72.7 0.000 70.6 0.000 11.4
yes 19.9 27.3 29.4 1.9
Telephone
No 91.3 90.2 0.024 93.1 0.000 2.1
yes 6.8 9.8 6.9 0.1
Menses in the last 6 wk
No 48.9 48.2 0.063 44.4 0.103 3.5
Yes 51.1 51.8 55.6 4.5

Prevalence of anemia among women from 2005–2016

Based on the report of Table 3, Prevalence of anemia among women of reproductive age was 68%, 20.3%, and 27.3% in 2005, 2011 and 2016, respectively.

Table 3. The time predictor of anemia among study subjects from 2005-2016(N = 46,268).

Year COR AOR P-value
EDHS-2005 Reference Reference
EDHS-2011 0.023(0.014,032)* 0.01(0.093,0 .11)** 0.000
EDHS-2011 Reference Reference
EDHS-2016 0.076(0.067,0.085)* 0.034(0.023,0.045)** 0.000
EDHS-2005 Reference Reference
EDHS-2016 0.076(0.067,0.085) 0.13(0.12,0.14)** 0.000

Time specific trend of anemia among women from 2005–2016

Fig 2 depicts the trend of anemia; anemia declined in 2011 by 97.3 percentage points relative to the 2005 value. This is because the actual value can be calculated as (β0.023–1)*100. Furthermore, the prevalence of anemia in 2016 was reduced by 90.8 percentage points relative to the 2011 value. Finally, the prevalence of anemia was reduced by 64.7 percentage points relative to its 2005 value (Fig 2).

Fig 2. Trend of anemia among reproductive age group in Ethiopia from 2005–2016.

Fig 2

Level of anemia among women of reproductive age from 2005–2016

According to Fig 3 report, anemia was classified and displayed based on severe, moderate, and mild anemia, which accounted for 0.6%, 3.4%, and 7.6%, respectively, in 2005. In 2011, the proportions of severe (0.6%), moderate (2.8%), and mild (12.5%) anemia were also recorded. Finally, the prevalence of anemia among women of reproductive age was measured as severe (0.7%), moderate (4.8%), and mild (12%) in Ethiopia in 2016 (Fig 3). Anemia among women of reproductive age varied among regions in Ethiopia in the three DHS surveys. For example, anemia was most prevalent in Oromia (35.3%) and least prevalent in Gambela in 2005. Furthermore, Fig 4 indicates that women in the Oromia region accounted for the most significant proportion (13.5%) of anemia; however, women in Harari accounted for the lowest (0.1%) prevalence of anemia in 2011. In addition, women in the Oromia region (18.4%) were more frail than women in other regions. On the contrary, women in Gambela were the lowest victims of anemia (0.1%) in 2016 (Fig 4).

Fig 3. Severity of anaemia among women of reproductive age group from 2005–2016.

Fig 3

Fig 4. Regional difference in anaemia among reproductive age group from 2005–2016.

Fig 4

Decompositional change of anemia

According to Table 4 description, The decomposition analysis model has taken into account the differences in the features (compositional factors) and the differences due to the effect of characteristics. Only 29.2% of the overall anemia change was due to differences in characteristics. Among the compositional factors, a very significant contribution to the change in anemia among women of reproductive age was due to the region in which they lived. After controlling the effects of compositional factors, 70.8% of the change in anemia level was due to differences in the effects of characteristics.

Table 4. Decomposition change of anemia among women in reproductive age (N = 46,256).

Category Difference due to characteristics (E) Difference due to coefficients(C)
coefficient percent p-value coefficient percent p-value
Educational status
no formal education Reference
formal educated -0.00739 . -7.39 0.121 -0.0614184 -61.4 0.000
Religion
Orthodox Reference
Catholic 0.0527 52.7 0.019 0.0240821 24.0 0.133
Protestant 0.0386 38.6 0.000 0.0079874 7.9 0.139
Muslim 0.0455 45.5 0.000 0.0065698 6.5 0.001
Traditional 0.0365 36.5 0.043 0.0192629 19.2 0.004
Region
Tigray Reference
Afar 0.01485929 14.8 0.000 0.0145 14.6 0.000
Amhara 0.0103734 10.3 0.242 0.0194898 19.4 0.039
Oromia 0.0130753 13.0 0.166 0.0513826 51.1 0.000
Somali 0.0241835 24.1 0.000 0.0232967 23.2 0.000
Benishangul -0.001869 -1.86 0.862 -0.011323 -11.3 0.325
SNNPR -0.0407727 . -40.7 0.000 -0.000865 -0.8 0.937
Gambela 0.0332232 33.2 0.0008 -0.009723 -9.7 0.574
Harari 0.01339532 13.3 0.0999 0.0101653 10.1 0.000
Addis Ababa 0.0484661 48.4 0.0209 0.049897 49.8 0.000
Dire-Dawa 0.01553923 15.5 0.1237 0.01275 12.7 0.000
Residence
Urban Reference
Rural 0.014208 14.2 0.110 0.0262 26.2 0.006
Marital status
never married Reference
Married 0.0159146 15.9 0.004 .0095065 9.5 0.107
live together 0.0204363 20.4 0.142 -0.0375 -37.5 0.011
widowed 0.0269161 26.9 0.024 0.0355 35.5 0.005
divorced 0.0094399 9.4 0.347 -0.0072 -7.2 0.501
not live together 0.0270724 27 0.070 0.0257 25.7 0.106
Wealth index
poorest Reference
poorer -0.0154 -15.4 0.036 -0.0019 -1.9 0.805
middle -0.0186 -18.6 0.014 -0.00095 -0.9 0.906
Richer -0.0308 -30.8 0.000 -0.0167776 -16.8 0.039
richest -0.01876 -18.7 0.053 0.0550452 55 0.000
Abortion
no Reference
yes -0.00536 -5.3 0.822 -0.0273 -27.3 0.001
Menstruate in the last 6 wk.
no Reference
yes -0.0017 -1.7 0.238 -0.0068 -6.8 0.159
Freq.of reading newspaper
Not at all Reference
Less than once/week 0.0033 3.3 0.000 -0.0122 -12.2 0.099
At least once/week -0.02867 -28.7 0.766 -0.0026 -2.6 0.829
Almost everyday -0.01235 -12.3 0.326 0.03975 39.7 0.202
Frequency of watching Tv
Not at all Reference
Less than once/week -0.0050154 -5.0 0.609 0.0129586 12.9 0.029
At least once/week -0.0072573 -7.2 0.476 -0.00597 -5.9 0.000
Almost everyday 0.036423 36.4 0.544 0.02012 20.1 0.000
Frequency of listening radio
Not at all Reference
Less than once/week -0.0157 -15.7 0.022 -0.01042 -10.4 0.000
At least once/week -0.0348 -34.8 0.000 -0.01718 -17.1 0.000
Almost everyday 0.00035 0.35 0.980 0.008913 8.9 0.000

Factors associated with trend of anemia among women from 2005–2016

According to Tables 5 and 6 report,After adjusting for cofounders, region, telephone ownership, menses in the last 6 months, and frequency of reading newspapers were retained as explanatory variables in the final model in 2005. Women in the Afar region were 1.5 times more likely to suffer from anemia than women in Tigray (AOR = 1.5, 95% CI, 1.1, 2.3).Likewise, women who live in the Somali region had 1.6 times more odds of getting anemia than women in Tigray (AOR = 1.6, 95% CI, 1.2, 2.1). Women in Ethiopia’s southern region were 1.5 times more likely to suffer from anemia than women in Tigray (AOR = 1.5, 95% CI, 1.1, 2).Women had a 21% lower chance of reading newspapers less than once than men (AOR = 0.81; 95% CI: 0.73, 0.9).Women in Afar (AOR = 2.2, 95% CI = 1.5, 3.3), Amhara (AOR = 1.4, 95% CI = 1.2, 1.7), Oromia (AOR = 1.3, 95% CI = 1.04, 1.5), and Somalia (AOR = 3.9, 95% CI = 2.9, 5.3) were more susceptible to anemia than women in Tigray.Similarly, women who lived in Harari (AOR = 1.9: 1.1, 3.8), Adiss Ababa (AOR = 1.8, 95% CI: 1.4, 2.3), and Dire-Dawa (AOR = 2.7, 95% CI: 1.6, 4.7) were more likely to be affected by anemia than women in Tigray. Women who had menstruation in the past six months were 10% less likely to be anemic than their counterparts (AOR = 0.9, 95% CI, 0.85, 0.98). However, women who menstruated in the past 6 months were 20% less likely to be anemic than their counterparts in 2016 (AOR = 0.8, 95% CI, 0.8, 0.9).

Table 5. Socio-demographic predictors of anemia among study participants (N = 46,256).

Variables EDHS = 2005 EDHS 2011 EDHS = 2016
COR(95%CI) AOR(95%CI) COR(95%CI) AOR(95%CI) COR(95%CI) AOR(95%CI)
Marital status
married - - Ref. Ref. Ref. Ref
Single - - 0.74(0.67,0.80)* 0.8(0.7,0.9)** 0.8(0.7,0.85)* 0.8(0.7,0.9)**
Widowed - - 1.60(1.4,1.99)* 1.7(1.4,2.0)** 0.79(0.6,0.99)* 0.7(0.6,0.9)**
Divorced - - 0.91(0.76,1.08) 0.9(0.79,1.1) 0.7(0.6,0.8)* 0.8(0.6,0.9)**
Region
Tigray Ref. Ref. Ref. Ref. Ref Ref.
Afar 1.6(1.1,2.4)* 1.5(1.1,2.3)** 3.4(2.3,4.9)* 2.2(1.5,3.3)** 3.0 (2.1,4.4)* 2.3(1.6,3.4)**
Amhara 1.1(0.9,1.2) 1.05(0.9,0,1.2) 1.5(1.3,1.8)* 1.4(1.2,1.7)** 0.74(0.6,0.8)* 0.7(0.6,0.8)**
Oromia 0.95(0.81,1.10) 0.91(0.78,1.1) 1.6(1.3,1.93)* 1.3(1.04,1.5)** 1.4(1.2,1.7)* 1.1(1.5,3.4)**
Somali 1.6(1.2,2.05)* 1.5(1.1,1.97)** 5.9(4.5,7.9)* 3.9(2.9,5.3)** 5.5(4.4,6.9)* 4.2(3.2,5.4)**
Benishangul 0.94(0.63,1.41) 0.90(0.60,1.35) 1.7(1.2, 2.5) 1.3(0.8,1.9) 1.1(0.7,1.7) 1.0(0.6,1.5)
SNNPRs 0.79(0.6,0.93)* 0.76(0.65,0.89) 1.0(0.87,1.3) 0.8(0.7,1.1) 1.2(0.9,1.4) 1.0(0.8,1.2)
Gambela 1.2(0.6,2.3) 1.13(0.57,2.23) 1.7(0.92,3.0) 1.4(0.8,2.6) 1.4(0.6,2.6) 1.2(0.6,2.4)
Harari 1.0(0.5,2.0) 0.97(0.48,1.95) 2.3(1.2,4.4)* 1.9(1.01,3.8)** 2.1(1.1,4.1)* 2.1(1.1,4.1)**
Adis Ababa 1.0(0.84,1.2) 0.99(0.79,1.25) 1.5(1.2,1.9)* 1.8(1.4,2.3)** 1.0(0.8,1.3) 1.3(1.0,1.6)
Dire Dewa 1.21(0.70,2.1) 1.18(0.68,2.05) 3.2(1.9,5.4)* 2.7(1.6,4.7)** 2.2(1.3,3.4)* 2.1(1.4,3.4)**
Religion
Orthodox - - Ref . Ref. Ref. Ref.
catholic - - 1.51(1.1,2.1)* 2.0(1.4,2.9)** 1.08(0.71,1.7) 0.8(0.6,1.4)
Protestant - - 0.98(0.88,1.09) 1.2(1.0,1.4) 1.3(1.2,1.46) 1.1(0.9,1.3)
Muslim - - 1.8(1.6, 1.9)* 1.5(1.4,1.7)** 1.8(1.6,1.9)* 1.2(1.1,1.3)**
traditional - - 0.8(0.5,1.1) 0.8(0.6,1.2) 3.4(2.6,4.4)* 2.2(1.6,2.9)**
Wealth index - -
Poorest - - Ref. Ref. Ref Ref.
Poorer - - 0.94(0.84,1.07) 0.03(0.9,1.1) 0.65(0.58,0.7)* 0.8(0.7,0.9)**
Middle - - 0.84(0.74,0.95)** 0.9(0.8,1.0) 0.59(0.53,0.7)* 0.7(0.6,0.8)**
Richer - - 0.85(0.75,0.96)** 0.9(0.8,1.1) 0.54(0.51,0.6)* 0.7(0.6,0.8)**
Richest - - 0.79(0.70,0.88)** 1.1(0.9,1.3) 0.54(0.4,0.6)* 0.7(0.6,0.8)**

Table 6. Source of information and women reproductive health characteristics.

COR(95%CI) AOR(95%CI) COR(95%CI) AOR(95%CI) COR(95%CI) AOR(95%CI)
Reading newspaper
Not at all Ref. Ref. Ref. Ref.
< one /week 0.8(0.7,0.9)* 0.9(0.87,1.1) ** - - 0.6(0.5,0.7) * 0.8(0.7,0.9)**
One /week - - - - 1.1(0.8,1.2) 0.8(0.9,1.4)
Watching Tv
Not at all - - Ref. Ref - -
Less than 1/week - - 0.76(0.7,0.8) * 0.9(0.7,0.9)** - -
At least 1/week - - 0.74(0.6,0.8)* 0.8(0.7,0.98)** - -
Freq.lis radio
Not at all - - Ref. Ref. Ref. Ref.
Less than 1/week - - 0.87(0.8,0.9) * 0.9(0.86,1.1) 0.9(0.8,0.99) 1.1(0.9,1.2)
At least 1/week - - 0.7(0.69,0.8)* 0.8(0.7,0.9)** 0.8(0.8,0.9)* 0.9(0.88,1.1)
Abortion
Yes - - Ref. Ref. - -
no - - 1.4(1.2,1.6)* 1.4(1.2,1.6)** - -
Telephone
yes Ref. Ref. - - - -
no 1.2(1.1,1.4)* 1.4(1.2,1.62)** - - - -
Menses in 6 wk
yes Ref. Ref. Ref. Ref. - -
no 0.9(0.8,0.96)* 0.9(0.85,0.98)** 0.87(0.8,0.9)* 0.8(0.8,0.9)** - -

Key: COR: Crude Odds Ratio, AOR: Adjusted Odds Ratio, CI: Confidence Interval, P-value < 0.25, ** = p < 0.05.

In 2011, Catholic women were 2.9 times more likely to be anemic than Orthodox Christian women (AOR = 2, 95% CI: 1.4, 2.9). In addition, Muslim women were 1.5 times more likely to get anemia than Orthodox Christian women (AOR = 1.5, 95%CI, 1.4, 1.7). Women who watched TV fewer than once per week had 10% lower odds than women who did not watch at all (AOR = 0.9, 95% CI: 0.7, 0.9). Furthermore, women who watched TV at least once a week were 20% less likely to have anemia than women who did not (AOR = 0.8, 95% CI, 0.7, 0.98). Women who had previous abortions were 1.4 times more likely to be affected by anemia than their counterparts (AOR = 1.4, 95% CI: 1.2, 1.6). In 2016, Muslims were 1.2 times more likely to be anemic than orthodox Christian women (AOR = 1.2, 95% CI: 1.1, 1.3). Moreover, women who were traditional believers were 2.2 times more likely to get anemia than Orthodox Christian women (AOR = 2.2, 95% CI, 1.6, 2.9). In 2016, women in the richest wealth quantile were 20% less likely to develop anemia than the poorest women (AOR = 0.8, 95% CI: 0.7, 0.9). Compared with the poorest women, richer women were 30% less likely to get anemia (AOR = 0.7, 95% CI, 0.6, 0.8). Women in the middle, particularly wealthy women, were 30% less likely to get anemia than the poorest women (AOR = 0.7, 95% CI, 0.6, 0.8). Finally, poorer women were 30% less likely to get anemia than the poorest women (AOR = 0.7, 95% CI, 0.6, 0.8).

Discussion

Although many policies were implemented to minimize the magnitude of anemia, it is still high among women of reproductive age in Ethiopia. Further, although many studies have been conducted in the past decades regarding anemia, none of them have reported on the national trend and factors associated with the trend of anemia among women in Ethiopia from 2005 to 2016 [3942]. Therefore, we have found that the prevalence of anemia among women of reproductive age has varied significantly in opposing directions in the last decade. This might be due to drought, political instability, economic instability, and food insecurity.

In this study, we discovered a trend of an absolute difference in the proportion of anaemia in three consecutive Ethiopian surveys. It decreased significantly by 47.7 percentage points from 2005 to 2011 in Ethiopia. This finding is consistent with findings about the trend of anemia in most African countries [8].

The possible similarities might be due to effective policy implementation in areas such as malaria diagnosis and treatment, national policy on sanitation, iron and folic acid fortification, family planning, insecticides for household use, and iron fortification. Agriculture’s involvement has increased income, iron crop production, paultary and dietary diversity, and the health sector has effectively provided iron supplementation, family planning, malaria prevention, and environmental sanitation during health services [4345]. Furthermore, the prevalence of anemia increased by seven percentage points (7%) from 2011 to 2016. This finding is in contrast with the finding of a previous study done in Uganda, which showed a 17 percentage point reduction among women of reproductive age from 49% to 32% in 2006–2016, respectively [46]. The possible explanation might be due to income differences and political stability between countries, which have laid the foundation for food security and effective health service delivery.

In this study, we have assessed the time-invariant factors of anemia, which previous studies failed to show using the least squares dummy variable estimator. Generally, women with a lower wealth index were more likely to develop anema than their counterparts. This finding is consistent with the previous study’s finding [47].

This might be due to the fact that rich women have a greater chance of getting a balanced diet, a reduced risk of infection (morbidity), and better access to and utilization of health care services [48, 49]. Women in Afar, Oromia, Somalia, Harari, Addis Abeba, and Dire-Dawa had a higher risk of anemia than women in Tigray. This is consistent with other studies conducted elsewhere [16, 50, 51]. The reason might be due to variation attributable to cultural practices, societal beliefs, geographical conditions, climatic conditions, disease burden, access to health care services, and dietary-associated factors between regions [52, 53]. Furthermore, differences in maternal health care utilization [54], food consumption preferences [55] and differences in availability of healthcare facilities [56]. Women in less developed regions or states were more affected by anemia in this study than women in more developed regions or states [57]. The possible explanation could be a lack of clean water and unimproved latrine facilities, which result in soil-transmitted disease [58] and increased chance of anemia [59].

Single women had a lower chance of getting anemia than their counterparts. This finding is consistent with the findings of the study done in Rwanda [60]. The possible explanation might be due to variation in income, food habits, and menstrual regularity. On the contrary, a study found that married women were more likely to develop anemia than their Nigerian counterparts [61]. This could be explained by fetal iron depletion, blood loss during childbirth, and short birth intervals among married women, all of which contribute to short birth intervals. This study revealed that widowed and separated women had higher odds of having anemia than their counterparts. This might be explained by the fact that widows and women who have been separated from their husbands are vulnerable to economic deprivation, hunger, starvation, and a lack of access to health care [48, 62, 63].

Women can reduce their anemia by listening to the radio and reading the news more frequently. This finding is consistent with the previous study conducted in Indonesia [64]. The possible explanation might be associated with the fact that improved knowledge and behavioral change occurred as women got more information on anemia. This study has found that women who had previous abortions had higher odds of getting anemia than their counterparts. This finding is consistent with the study done in West Arsi, the Oromia region, that showed the history of abortion was significantly associated with anemia [65]. This could be related to the fact that anemia is caused by hemorrhage. Women who had a history of heavy menstruation in the last 6 weeks were more likely to be affected by anemia among women of reproductive age in this study [66, 67]. The possible explanation might be associated with prolonged bleeding [68, 69]. Lack of electricity was associated with anemia among women of reproductive age. This finding was consistent with findings from previous studies [70, 71]. The possible expulsion could be due to increased utilization of cooking fuel, which may in turn aggravate anemia [72]. The possibility is that the causal link between biomass smoke and anemia is due to its ability to induce systemic inflammation [73] which can be indicative of carbon monoxide and transitional metal content [74]. The provision of electricity and other clean energy sources may therefore eliminate the need for biomass and reduce the incidence of anemia [75]. Women who had no mobile phone were more likely to be anemic than their counterparts. This finding is consistent with previous studies [76]. The possible explanation might be associated with information they can get from different social media and the exchange of food items and medical advice through different applications [77].

Limitation of the study

This study is one of the few studies that report the level, trend, and predictors of anemia among reproductive women in Ethiopia at the national level. As a result, it employs a sufficient sample size, making the data more reliable. Furthermore, standard national tools and methods were used to make the measurements more accurate through an expert data collection process. On the contrary, this study might have recalled some past events. Besides, this study failed to incorporate factors related to the household living condition, such as ITN, source of drinking water, and type of toilet facilities. Hence, the findings of this study should be interpreted in light of these limitations.

Conclusion and recommendation

This study highlights that the trend of anemia among women of reproductive age has been fluctuating in the past 10 years, from 2005 to 2016. Low socio-demographic status and a lack of basic household facilities are the main factors associated with anemia among women in Ethiopia. Therefore, health policy makers, program designers, and local government authorities should enhance the socio-demographic characteristics and basic infrastructure of the community. Furthermore, they should design strategies for extensive media coverage about anemia. Finally, resources and social services should be distributed among regional states in the most equitable manner to prevent anemia throughout Ethiopia among women of reproductive age, who are an easily vulnerable group due to their biological and social roles differing from other population groups.

Public health implication

This study contributes input for public health policy to focus on media coverage to prevent anemia and minimize its impact on the general health condition of women. Furthermore, equitable health services and agricultural food production among regions are needed to prevent anemia. Finally, policies and programs should ensure equitable access to education and wealth among women in the country.

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Acknowledgments

We are grateful to the MEASURE DHS program for permitting us to obtain and use the 2016 EDHS data set.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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PONE-D-21-33298Trend of anemia among women reproductive age group in Ethiopia from 2005-2016: A Further analysis of Ethiopian demographic health survey.PLOS ONE

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General comment: Authors wrote very poor English, many of sentences were hard to understand. I strongly suggest the authors search for English proofreading services / checking by English native speakers to enhance English writing and reading. Data analysis was very poor which need to re-check, including the selected variables.

Title: This manuscript reported both the trend and factors associated with anemia among women of reproductive age. I suggested to revise the title of your manuscript to include factor associated with anemia. Also, women of reproductive age means the group of women aged 15-49 years itself, so, it is better to remove word ‘group’ after women of reproductive age throughout this manuscript. In addition, in my understanding we usually call: Demographic “and” Health Survey (DSH), Please revise the correct word of this survey? if my comment is correct, you need to revise this word throughout manuscript.

Abstract

Background. Please check the information regarding to anemia is the most common cause of indirect morbidity?

Methods. Please revise these paragraph, many information is not related to the result section, particularly the odds ratio, 95% confidence interval are not showing in the result section at all.

Result. Please revise all sentences because in the main text did not show the results of the positive or negative association of several factors with anemia.

Conclusion. Authors recommended several unrelated ideas which is not consistent with the findings from this study. Authors should revise this paragraph.

The introduction or background section: It is better to reconstruct this paragraph by describing the situation of anemia from global, regional (high-income/low-income countries), and country levels, respectively. Additionally, this study aimed to analyze the trend of anemia in Ethiopia, however, in this section is not describe about the trend of anemia as the priority problem in this study. Moreover, this section is significantly long text, I strongly recommend the authors divided this section at least two paragraphs.

Line 63. It is better to give the definition of anemia for a common understanding for the readers.

Line 66. Please revise this sentence with evidence regarding the cause of anemia, because “it might be caused” is not a clear statement because anemia can caused by infections, genetic conditions,… etc. So, Please clarify the cause of anemia.

Line 74-76. Can you give more information how this sentence related to anemia among women of reproductive age, particularly what kind of extra foods and supplement needed during pregnancy and lactation? Also, what is the mechanism of the physiological changes, metabolism, growth of fetus and breast feeding during pregnancy and lactating affect to anemia among these women?

Line 80-81. Physiological and nutritional change need to clarify for the completeness of sentence and can be merged with line number 74-76.

Line 84. What is the meaning of grand multiparity?

Line 90-92. In my opinion, using the word “previous studies” instead of the word “former studies” might be better, which is commonly used in scientific report. In addition, I am not sure about the intention of author would like to talk about this sentence on how is related to anemia research?

Line 94-95. What kind of the existing policies and programs which is addressed to anemia problem among women of reproductive age in Ethiopia? What is the barriers of these policies and programs which could not reduce the prevalence of anemia among these women in Ethiopia? Author might additional raise these important problem in this manuscript.

Line 99-101. Please revise this sentence: First point: This study “aimed” to analyze the trend and factors associated with anemia among…., Second point: If you use the word women of reproductive age, you need to use the same wording throughout manuscript to avoid the misunderstanding. Third point: the national data using to analyze in this study should be clearly with exact name and years.

Methods

General comment on study setting section. This paragraph is quite complicated in term of sentence order and unrelated ideas. This paragraph should be clearly provided information regarding to settings and locations where the data were collected and locations in which the study was carried out, including the country, region, city. Also, authors could provide other information about settings and locations that could have affected a study’s external validity such as social, economic, cultural environment and other special aspect of study settings, if applicable. In addition, I would like to suggest the authors to provide the decision trees that would be innovative to explore such data (merely a thought) in order to show the readers on how the sample were selected and excluded at each stages.

Line 107-109. Please revise this sentence started from About 20%..... until in rural areas by giving the exact numbers/percentages of people living in rural and urban areas. Nearly 80% is not exact number of 80%.

Line number 109-110. 1st point, I am not sure that we can say 4.6 individuals/persons or what is the meaning of 4.6 persons? 2nd point, This study used three different dataset of 2005, 2011 and 2016, but in this sentence mentioned only the survey conducted in 2016.

Line 111-137. Data source/study design, study population and sampling technique. The text of this section can be divided in three paragraphs separately under this sub-heading.

- Data source should be clearly mentioned the source of datasets using/analyzing in this study, year of conducting these surveys, type of data (primary/secondary datasets?) along with providing information about these surveys.

- Study population.

- Sampling technique. In my understanding the DHS survey used the multi-stage cluster sampling technique. Authors can re-check in the report of each original surveys, and please provide the related information into this section.

- DHS surveys typically provide altitude and smoking-adjusted levels of hemoglobin. In your study, I truly believe that smoking is not a concern; however, altitude might be. During data collection and building databases, some factors were used to adjust the levels of hemoglobin?

Line 116. Authors should provide the full text for EDHS as the first time state follow by the abbreviation in blanket. Also, this study used three cross-sectional data of 2005, 2011, and 2016 but the sampling frame mentioned only in 2016. Can authors provide the reason on this matter for clarification.

Line 165. non-governmental organizations.

Line 126. What is the different between cluster and EA in this sentence?

Line 127-134. 17,067 households had women of reproductive age. Can authors clarify why all of these women were not include? What is the eligible selection criteria?

Study variables

General comment for this section. This section is absolutely complicated with unnecessary information. It is better to separate this section into two paragraphs to show the dependent and independent variables separately, and under the independent variables can be divided in two categorization of socio-demographic characteristics of the participants follow by reproductive characteristics. Furthermore, due to this section describe specifically for the study variables, therefore, the information regarding to data collection and its process should be mention in above section of the data source/study design, study population and sampling technique.

Many independent variables were not mentioned in this section, but showed in result’s tables such as work status, residence, region, frequency of reading new papers, frequency of watching TV, Abortion, electricity, telephone, menstruated in the last six months. On the other hands, many independent variables mentioned in this section, but not showed in result’s tables such as husband educational status, age at first pregnancy, number of birth, number of antenatal visit, and current pregnancy. Authors must re-organize it clearly, and each variables must show its categorization, for example: education (uneducated vs educated).

Line 139-144. Authors provide two times regarding the definition of anemia among non-pregnant women, authors can select one of them. Also, please provide full definition regarding of anemia among pregnant and non-pregnant women because its definitions used the different cut point for mild, moderate and severe anemia.

Line 180. Please give the full text of CSA before it first statement of its abbreviation.

Data management and statistical analysis.

In statistical section, please refer to any post-hoc corrections to correct for multiple comparisons during your statistical analyses. If these were not performed please justify the reasons. Additionally, in your statistical analyses, please state whether you accounted for clustering by Kebeles or region?. For example, did you consider using multilevel models?

Line 187 and 201-201. Which version of SPSS used to analyze the data? And it should follow by showing the name of its company?

Line 188. How many datasets were analyzed for this study? Three or four? And it should be mentioned the year of each datasets!!

Line 189-190. Authors must understand this section which must provide only the statistical tests used/analyzed by yourselves.

Line 191. Are authors used the sampling weight for all analyzes?

Line 193-194. Which statistical tests whether chi-square or logistic used to analyzed the date?

Line 194: In which criteria that authors selected variables into multivariable logistic regression? And how do you treat with multicollinearity problem? These can be strengthened with a reference at least.

Line 195-196. I did not see the odds ratio and 95% confidence interval in the result’s tables.

Line 196-197. Which number of p-value consider as statistical significant 0.25 or 0.05 and please cited a reference?

Line 198-200. Please rephrase this sentence, I don't understand. Also, what is the different between univariate and bivariate analyses?

Line 203-208. Ethical consideration: Understandable, the secondary data analysis is not required the double ethical approval, however, authors should provide additional details regarding participant consent as well as which organization/agencies provided ethical approval for these surveys. Please ensure that you have specified what type you obtained (for instance, written or verbal, and if verbal, how it was documented and witnessed). If the need for consent was waived by the ethics committee, please include this information.

Result

Can authors show the number of participant in result’s tables 1 and 2 for each categories of each variables follow by its percentages?

Many independent variables were not showed in result’s tables 1 and 2 but mentioned in method section such as husband education, marital status, age at first pregnancy, number of birth, number of antenatal visit, current pregnancy. Authors need to re-check for clarification!!!

Authors did not show the result of logistic regression analyses with the result of odds ratio and 95% confidence interval?

Why the menstruated information was asked in the last six weeks? Because the menstruation were usually happened as monthly basis.

Line 210. Please revise this sub-heading. The correct word is “characteristics” and please re-check this word in other section as well.

Line 211. Mean age of the participants was 28, is ±9.6 years the standard deviation? Please provide clearly in such phrase.

Line 211-214. Majority mean more than half. Please revise the related sentences, along with providing full description of result of selected variables from each year of surveys 2005, 2011, and 2016, respectively. Due to this study used three different datasets from different years, authors should be careful to provide the clear description.

Line 216-217. In result section, authors should provide the exact number of percentage of each selected variable. The least proportion is not a common used in scientific report.

Table 1. (i) Please revise the name of this table, (ii) showing two p-value in a table can cause misunderstanding, other might select one of them and need to explain in statistical analyses section. (iii) age category is not in the similar frequency, for example: 15-19 years is within 5 years but other category of 20-29 years is within 10 years, do you have any reference to strengthen this categorization?

Line 226-230. I recommend to re-interpret the results of the table 2?? A swell as revising the name of the table 2.

Line 237-249. It is better to show the figures before or after the result’s interpretation. Authors should interpreted each figure with a separate texts.

Line 239-240. What is the different between 47.7% and 47.7 percentage points?

Line 250-256. I am not sure that the result in this section came from which tables? The results are not show!!!!

Discussions:

In your discussions, please take care to avoid statements implying causality from correlational research. For example, avoid the use of terms such as "increased/reduced risk", "influenced by", “likely to” or “resulted in." Instead, consistently use terms such as "associated with" or "associations."

Line 261. Anemia vs anaemia are American and British English, please select one of them for whole manuscript.

Line 261-265. Authors don’t need to give the definition of anemia in this section which is already mentioned in the background section.

Line 266. In statistic, to show the full number like 68% must follow by dots zero as 68.0%, authors should revise other full numbers as well.

Line 265-277. It is good to compare the prevalence with other countries, however, the author should try to find the evidence to answer why the trend of prevalence of anemia was significantly reduced from 2005 to 2011, but increased from 2011 to 2016 in Ethiopia? This should be the main discussion regarding to the findings from this study. Had it any policy/intervention or event which influenced to this unstable trends? The comparison of prevalence of anemia among children and pregnant women with women of reproductive age might led to unrelated ideas, because the study participants are different. Also, authors should provide the year of the references’ cited for example in line 275-277, recent national DHS and other surveys were conducted in which years? is that only one reference for respective countries?

Line 277-278. What is the reduction of anemia among women of reproductive age important for child health?

Line 228-280. What is the meaning of this sentence “anaemia prevalence remains high and haemoglobin levels remain low in the low income countries”?.

Line 280-281. “If these trends are continued, the likelihood of reducing anemia by half from 2011 levels by 2025 in all regions among reproductive age women”. This prediction might be happened and might not be happened as well, the scientific research should come up with the fact and real evidence.

Line 282-283. What is the group of lower wealth indexes? According to tables’ result showed five categories from poorest to richest group? Which group is the reference group?.

Line 283-285. Can authors provide more evidence regarding to women from high socioeconomic status reduced risk of infection/morbidity which is contributed to reduce the prevalence of anemia?

Line 289-292. Can authors provide more evidence regarding to social beliefs and climatic conditions factors contribute to the reduction of anemia among women living in Tigray region? which is lover than in other regions.

Line 295-300. Why the marital status was discussed in these lines? According to result’s table, this study did not include this variable. It seem like authors raise unrelated ideas.

Line 300-303. Author showed the result of a study conducted in Indonesia, I am not sure how is related to the findings from this study? The explanation or reference from other studies should always come up after showing your findings.

Line 302-305. Authors need more discussion regarding to abortion, history of menstruation and electricity factors associated with anemia among women of reproductive age??? There is no explanation of these factors.

Do this study have any limitations?

Conclusion

Line 308-309. What is the meaning of percentage points?

Line 309-312. Please re-check the variables and re-phrases the sentences in these lines.

Line 312-314. How the policy-makers enhance the socio-demographic characteristics and basic infrastructure that could be contribute to reduce the prevalence of anemia? Authors should recommend the practical ideas which is related to the findings from this study?

Line 314-315. Please consider your recommendation with practical ideas in accordance with the findings from this study?

Line 315-316. Please consider your suggestion again on how to balanced the various factors among different state in Ethiopia? And how these factors prevent anemia in these states.

Reviewer #2: This is an interesting paper reporting anemia prevalence in Ethiopia. Should be checked for biostatistics .The paper could be shorten and comparison with prevalence of anemia in other African countries.

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PLoS One. 2023 Jan 23;18(1):e0280679. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0280679.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


15 Jun 2022

From ------------Berhan Tsegaye (Corresponding Author)

To----------------Editor in chief

Journal---------plose one

Date-----------26/05/2022A

Title --------Trend of anaemia among women reproductive age group in Ethiopia from 2005-2016: A Further analysis of Ethiopian demographic health survey.

Authors’ response for editor comment

Dear editor

Dear editor, we want to thank for the extensive revision of this paper which deals important public health issue. Based on the comments and questions we tried to revise the paper completely and extensively through several editing process. We revised our cover letter for free waiver for this paper as we are eligible for plose publication fee assistance program and our country is in G-1.we also attached the Ethical review letter for this study in the supplementary file. We are now ready for further improvement for this paper for readers if needed. If you need any clarification please contact the corresponding author. We have made the track change and clean manuscript in this revision. Besides, we answered the questions and comments of each reviewer as follows.

Reviewer 1

Reviewer comment

General comment: Authors wrote very poor English, many of sentences were hard to understand. I strongly suggest the authors search for English proofreading services / checking by English native speakers to enhance English writing and reading. Data analysis was very poor which need to re-check, including the selected variables.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we would like to thank you for your extensive reviewing and give valuable comment. We accepted the comment and we corrected the language of the manuscript with extensive reviewing, editing and proof read through expert consultation also. In the current revision, we also are revising the tables and analysis of the variables.

Reviewer comment

This manuscript reported both the trend and factors associated with anaemia among women of reproductive age. I suggested revising the title of your manuscript to include factor associated with anaemia. Also, women of reproductive age means the group of women aged 15-49 years itself, so, it is better to remove word ‘group’ after women of reproductive age throughout this manuscript. In addition, in my understanding we usually call: Demographic “and” Health Survey (DSH), Please revise the correct word of this survey? If my comment is correct, you need to revise this word throughout manuscript.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, once again we thank for the comment. It is relevant. We accepted the comment and corrected you suggestion in the current revision. In the current revision, we have made the following correction on the title indicated in bold:

a. We add the phrase ‘factors associated’ with anaemia.

b. We remove ‘group’ from the phrase which describe the study population ‘women in reproductive group’ as it is redundant.

c. We replaced description of ‘Ethiopian Demographic Health survey’ by ‘Ethiopian Demographic and Health survey’

Reviewer comment

Abstract

i. Background. Please check the information regarding to anaemia is the most common cause of indirect morbidity?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, according to your recommendation we have revised the sources for ‘most common cause of indirect morbidity’. Hence, we have found that anaemia is one of the 20% common cause ‘not the most’ cause of the indirect mortality. We accepted your concern and corrected it as ‘one of the common’ cause of indirect morbidity.

ii. Methods: Please revise these paragraph, many information is not related to the result section, particularly the odds ratio, 95% confidence interval are not showing in the result section at all.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, once we want to ask apologizes and we wonder your patience as the paper lost integrity. We wrote rigorously the whole document in consecutive steps. We specifically wrote the results including COR and AOR consistently in different section of the paper. You can check it.

Reviewer comment

iii. Result. Please revise all sentences because in the main text did not show the results of the positive or negative association of several factors with anaemia.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we feel sorry for the inconvenience we made. We accepted the comment and revised it. We showed the direction and magnitude of the association for factors in the current revision clearly.

Reviewer comment

iv. Conclusion: Authors recommended several unrelated ideas which is not consistent with the findings from this study. Authors should revise this paragraph.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, you are correct of course. We accepted the comment and revised the conclusion based only on the finding of the study.

Reviewer’s comment

The introduction or background section: It is better to reconstruct this paragraph by describing the situation of anaemia from global, regional (high-income/low-income countries), and country levels, respectively. Additionally, this study aimed to analyzed the trend of anaemia in Ethiopia, however, in this section is not describe about the trend of anaemia as the priority problem in this study. Moreover, this section is significantly long text, I strongly recommend the authors divided this section at least two paragraphs.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, once we want to thank you. We wrote related sufficient context for the problem we raise in this revision coherently. We also wrote clearly and concisely by dividing paragraphs as you mention.

Reviewer comment

Line 63. It is better to give the definition of anaemia for a common understanding for the readers.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we accepted your comment and correct it.

Reviewer comment

Line 66: Please revise this sentence with evidence regarding the cause of anaemia, because “it might be caused” is not a clear statement because anaemia can caused by infections, genetic conditions, etc. So, please clarify the cause of anaemia.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have corrected and revised as your suggestion. We have corrected as the statement of fact rather than ‘hedge’ that express as possibility.

Reviewers’ response

Line 74-76. Can you give more information how this sentence related to anaemia among women of reproductive age, particularly what kind of extra foods and supplement needed during pregnancy and lactation? Also, what is the mechanism of the physiological changes, metabolism, growth of foetus and breast feeding during pregnancy and lactating affect to anaemia among these women?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewers, the study population of this study are women of reproductive age which is from 15-49 in Ethiopian context. That means these women might be pregnant, lactating or neither of them. Hence, pregnancy and lactation can increase iron demand. For this reason, women are advised to take iron tablet (supplements). Besides, they are advised to take iron reach foods like: Teff, beef and egg, and to reduce drinks that reduce iron absorption like: Soft drinks and coffee.

Reviewers’ author

Line 80-81. Physiological and nutritional change need to clarify for the completeness of sentence and can be merged with line number 74-76.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have accepted and corrected your comment. we have merged the nutritional information together.

Reviewers’ author

Line 84. What is the meaning of grand multi-parity?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we mean for woman who gave birth more than five times are called ‘grand multipara’ while a woman delivered only once is called ‘primi-para’. For the sake of clear understanding of the audience in different profession, we wrote as the non-professional meaning of the term.

Reviewers’ comment

Line 90-92. In my opinion, using the word “previous studies” instead of the word “former studies” might be better, which is commonly used in scientific report. In addition, I am not sure about the intention of author would like to talk about this sentence on how is related to anaemia research?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we thank again for you question. We accepted and incorporated the better explanation of previous studies than former let us make it clear. Furthermore, our intention for the sentence of line 90-92 is to show the gap on the specific population group (lactating and pregnant women) than the population of the current study (women in reproductive age group).

Reviewers’ comment

What kind of the existing policies and programs which is addressed to anaemia problem among women of reproductive age in Ethiopia? What are the barriers of these policies and programs which could not reduce the prevalence of anaemia among these women in Ethiopia? Author might additional raise this important problem in this manuscript.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, the Ethiopian nutrition program and policy has put 3 main strategies towards anaemia: Iron-folic acid supplementation, food fortification and dietary diversification among women of reproductive age group in Ethiopia. Specifically, iron-folic acid tablets are usually given for pregnant women during their antenatal care visits. However, compliance is generally low with great regional variations, 3.5% to 76% and some of the strategies proposed such as food fortification have not yet implemented.

Reviewers’ comment

Line 99-101. Please revise this sentence: First point: This study “aimed” to analyse the trend and factors associated with anaemia among…., Second point: If you use the word women of reproductive age, you need to use the same wording throughout manuscript to avoid the misunderstanding. Third point: the national data using to analyse in this study should be clearly with exact name and years.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have received these important comments and modify accordingly.

Methods section

Reviewers’ comment

General comment on study setting section. This paragraph is quite complicated in term of sentence order and unrelated ideas. This paragraph should be clearly provided information regarding to settings and locations where the data were collected and locations in which the study was carried out, including the country, region, and city. Also, authors could provide other information about settings and locations that could have affected a study’s external validity such as social, economic, cultural environment and other special aspect of study settings, if applicable. In addition, I would like to suggest the authors to provide the decision trees that would be innovative to explore such data (merely a thought) in order to show the readers on how the sample were selected and excluded at each stage.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we read and agree on your comment. Hence, we made revision based on it. We also prepared a figure which shows the schematic presentation of the sampling technique.

Reviewer comment

Line 107-109. Please revise this sentence started from About 20%..... until in rural areas by giving the exact numbers/percentages of people living in rural and urban areas. Nearly 80% is not exact number of 80%.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have accepted and reviewed the comment. We have corrected in this revision.

Reviewer comment

Line number 109-110. 1st point, I am not sure that we can say 4.6 individuals/persons or what is the meaning of 4.6 persons? 2nd point, this study used three different dataset of 2005, 2011 and 2016, but in this sentence mentioned only the survey conducted in 2016.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we accepted and corrected your comment. Actually, the average household in both in 2011 and 2016 was 4.6 persons/household. But, the average household size in 2005 was 5. In the revision, we exclusively describe household size for each DHS.

Reviewer comment

Line 111-137. Data source/study design, study population and sampling technique. The text of this section can be divided in three paragraphs separately under this sub-heading.

- Data source should be clearly mentioned the source of datasets using/analyzing in this study, year of conducting these surveys, type of data (primary/secondary datasets?) along with providing information about these surveys.

- Study population.

- Sampling technique. In my understanding the DHS survey used the multi-stage cluster sampling technique. Authors can re-check in the report of each original surveys, and please provide the related information into this section.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have corrected according to your advice.

Reviewer comment

- DHS surveys typically provide altitude and smoking-adjusted levels of hemoglobin. In your study, I truly believe that smoking is not a concern; however, altitude might be. During data collection and building databases, some factors were used to adjust the levels of hemoglobin?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewers, we want to thank you for your nice comment. We have excluded pregnant women and smoker women whom information about smoking was collected as these factors misclassify cases and cannot be merged and analyzed with women of reproductive age group. Therefore, these women should be disaggregated and analyzed. However, haemoglobin was adjusted by consideration of Altitude. The calculation was as follows:

Calculation

At the time of creation of a recode file, an adjustment of the haemoglobin count is made for altitude. Rather than change the cut off points, the effective haemoglobin count is lowered as altitude increases, since oxygen is less available. The adjustment is made with the following formulas:

Adjust

adjHb if adjust > 0

where adjust is the amount of the adjustment, alt is altitude in 1,000 feet (converted from meters by dividing by 1,000 and multiplying by 3.3), adjHb is the adjusted haemoglobin level, and Hb is the measured haemoglobin level in grams per decilitre. No adjustment is made for altitudes below 1,000 meters. Both the adjusted and unadjusted haemoglobin counts are included in the recode files.

Similarly, an adjustment is made for women who smoke (if information was collected). The adjustment is to be made in accordance with the following table:

Cigarettes Smoked Adjust Hb (g/dl) concentration by

Less than 10 per day No adjustment

10-19 per day -0.3

20-39 per day -0.5

40 or more per day -0.7

Unknown quantity or non-cigarettes smoking -0.3

Reviewer’s comment

Line 116. Authors should provide the full text for EDHS as the first time state follow by the abbreviation in blanket. Also, this study used three cross-sectional data of 2005, 2011, and can authors provide the reason on this matter for clarification?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have corrected according to your advice and 2016 but the sampling frame mentioned only in 2016. We apologize for ignorance of the sampling frame for 2005 and 2011 sampling frame. We mentioned for all surveys in this revision.

Reviewer’s comment

Line 165. Non-governmental organizations.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we want to describe the stakeholders which participate in DHS like non-governmental organization but since the detail of the methodology is found in the report of each EDHS, we want remove such texts to shorten the manuscript by making citation.

Reviewer’s comment

Line 126. What is the different between cluster and EA in this sentence?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, enumeration areas and clusters are similar words in this study so that we can use them interchangeably.

Reviewer’s comment

Line 127-134. 17,067 households had women of reproductive age. Can authors clarify why all of these women were not included? What is the eligible selection criterion?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, all households were not occupied by women of reproductive age during data collection time.

Reviewers’ response

Study variables

General comment for this section. This section is absolutely complicated with unnecessary information. It is better to separate this section into two paragraphs to show the dependent and independent variables separately, and under the independent variables can be divided in two categorization of socio-demographic characteristics of the participants follow by reproductive characteristics. Furthermore, due to this section describe specifically for the study variables, therefore, the information regarding to data collection and its process should be mention in above section of the data source/study design, study population and sampling technique.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we thank again. We accepted the comment and correct it.

Reviewer comment

Many independent variables were not mentioned in this section, but showed in result’s tables such as work status, residence, region, and frequency of reading new papers, frequency of watching TV, Abortion, electricity, telephone, menstruated in the last six months. On the other hands, many independent variables mentioned in this section, but not showed in result’s tables such as husband educational status, age at first pregnancy, number of birth, number of antenatal visit, and current pregnancy. Authors must re-organize it clearly, and each variable must show its categorization, for example: education (uneducated vs educated).

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have made correction extensively in this revision. Hence, we describe these variables consistently in different part of the paper to avoid ambiguity. Especially, variables in the variables section and tables. Furthermore, we have described the variables organization and categorization.

Reviewer comment

Line 139-144. Authors provide two times regarding the definition of anaemia among non-pregnant women; authors can select one of them. Also, please provide full definition regarding of anaemia among pregnant and non-pregnant women because its definitions used the different cut point for mild, moderate and severe anaemia.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we want to thank for your critical view. Since our study population were women of reproductive age, we selected them and remove the information about pregnant women. Besides, we critically define anaemia among women of reproductive age.

Reviewer comment

Line 180. Please give the full text of CSA before it first statement of its abbreviation.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have accepted and corrected the comment.

Reviewer comment

Data management and statistical analysis.

In statistical section, please refer to any post-hoc corrections to correct for multiple comparisons during your statistical analyses. If these were not performed please justify the reasons. Additionally, in your statistical analyses, please state whether you accounted for clustering by Kebeles or region? For example, did you consider using multilevel models?

Author’s response

Dear reviewer, we did not use post-hoc correction for correcting multiple comparisons. Although Post hoc tests do a great job of controlling the family-wise error rate, but the trade-off is that they reduce the statistical power of the comparisons. This is because the only way to lower the family-wise error rate is to use a lower significance level for all of the individual comparisons. Furthermore, we did not perform multi-level model (mixed effect model) analysis, as we did not assume multi-level factors are associated with anaemia. Moreover, our data did not allow multi-level analysis as ICC >0.05. However, we performed weighing and complex

Reviewer comment

Line 188. How many datasets were analyzed for this study? Three or four? And it should be mentioned the year of each datasets!!data analysis for accounting the sampling bias.

Author’s response

Dear reviewer, we have utilized 3 datasets (EDHS 2005, EDHS 2011 and EDHS 2016) for women data. We have made sampling weight and complex analysis for each survey.

Reviewer comment

Line 189-190. Authors must understand this section which must provide only the statistical tests used/analyzed by you.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer let us clarify on the sampling weight and complex sampling issue. DHS is not only simple raw data from scratch. It is designed and analyzed to some extent like descriptive report is given and the way how to deal with the data to the end of analysis for the given topic has been elaborated in the report and videos are prepared by owner of the data for maximum utilization of the data by the end user (authors). That means the data can be compiled in many forms and given for analysis clarifying steps and codes how to do. The data can be provided in different software packages. We receive it with SPSS software so that we analyzed following the instruction for each dataset for a given population. Consequently, we can get the result finally. Therefore, we analyzed by ourselves following instruction of the steps of the data owner.

NB: some variables were re-categorized or recoded based on the aim of the study and LR in this study.

Reviewer comment

Line 191. Are authors used the sampling weight for all analyzes?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we adjust the each data set (EDHS 2005,2011 and 2016) using the weighting variable.

Reviewer comment

Line 193-194. Which statistical tests whether chi-square or logistic used to analyzed the date?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have used both tests. We used chi-square to test the presence of association only. However, since chi-square test cannot show magnitude and direction of the association. We further analysis in logistic regression. We showed the result of logistic analysis with table.

Reviewer comment

Line 194: In which criteria those authors selected variables into multivariable logistic regression? And how do you treat with multicollinearity problem? These can be strengthened with a reference at least.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we use p-value less than 0.25 for variable eligibility criteria for multi-variable logistic regression analysis. Multicollinearity tests were performed to check the presence of correlations among explanatory factors. We computed the variance inflation factor (VIF) for each predictor variable by doing a logistic regression of each predictor on all the other predictors; in each case we obtained VIF within the range of recommended cut of points

Reviewer comment

Line 195-196. I did not see the odds ratio and 95% confidence interval in the result’s tables.

Authors’ comment

Dear reviewer, we mentioned COR, AOR and their 95%CI.

Reviewer comment

Line 196-197. Which number of p-value considers as statistical significant 0.25 or 0.05 and please cited a reference?

Authors’ comment

Dear author, we used p-value less than 0.25 for binary logistic regression analysis and 0.05 in multi-variable logistic regression analysis as the level of significance.

Reviewer comment

Line 198-200. Please rephrase this sentence, I don't understand. Also, what is the different between univariate and bivariate analyses?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we thank again for the comment. Let us clarify the issue, univariate analysis means simply descriptive analysis which consist only variable. Bivariate means binary logistic regression analysis. Hence, we described them separately for clear explanation as ‘descriptive’ data analysis and ‘binary logistic regression analysis’.

Reviewer comment

Line 203-208. Ethical consideration: Understandable, the secondary data analysis is not required the double ethical approval; however, authors should provide additional details regarding participant consent as well as which organization/agencies provided ethical approval for these surveys. Please ensure that you have specified what type you obtained (for instance, written or verbal, and if verbal, how it was documented and witnessed). If the need for consent was waived by the ethics committee, please include this information.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, Ethics approval and participant consent were not necessary as this study involved the use of a previously-published de-identified database by Central Statistical Agency of Ethiopia.

Reviewer comment

Result

Can authors show the number of participant in result’s tables 1 and 2 for each categories of each variables follow by its percentages?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we can do that but the information of the table become overburden so that we only write the weighted percentage for each variable level or cross tabulation. We also recommended this issue from other paper we publish to ignore double reporting of frequencies both in number and their percentage as it reduce the quality of paper.

Reviewer comment

Many independent variables were not showed in result’s tables 1 and 2 but mentioned in method section such as husband education, marital status, age at first pregnancy, number of birth, number of antenatal visit, current pregnancy. Authors need to re-check for clarification!!!

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we received and corrected the comment.

Reviewer comment

Authors did not show the result of logistic regression analyses with the result of odds ratio and 95% confidence interval?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we received and corrected the comment.

Reviewer comment

Why the menstruated information was asked in the last six weeks? Because the menstruation were usually happened as monthly basis.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, the level of anaemia depends on amount of blood loss, duration of blood loss, and cycle of menstruation. It is clear that when the women bleed for longer months, they tend to be anaemic.

Reviewer comment

Line 210. Please revise this sub-heading. The correct word is “characteristics” and please re-checks this word in other section as well.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer we have accepted and corrected the comment.

Reviewer comment

Line 211. Mean age of the participants was 28, is ±9.6 years the standard deviation? Please provide clearly in such phrase.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer we have accepted and corrected the comment.

Reviewer comment

Line 211-214. Majority mean more than half. Please revise the related sentences, along with providing full description of result of selected variables from each year of surveys 2005, 2011, and 2016, respectively. Due to this study used three different datasets from different years, authors should be careful to provide the clear description.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer we have accepted and corrected the comment.

Reviewer comment

Line 216-217. In result section, authors should provide the exact number of percentage of each selected variable. The least proportion is not a common used in scientific report.

Table 1. (i) Please revise the name of this table, (ii) showing two p-value in a table can cause misunderstanding, other might select one of them and need to explain in statistical analyses section. (iii) age category is not in the similar frequency, for example: 15-19 years is within 5 years but other category of 20-29 years is within 10 years, do you have any reference to strengthen this categorization?

Authors’ comment

Dear reviewer, we accepted and corrected your comment for removing confusion for our reader of the paper. Furthermore, we corrected the age range actually this was the editing problem.

Reviewer comment

Line 226-230. I recommend to re-interpret the results of the table 2?? A swell as revising the name of the table 2.

Authors’ comment

Dear reviewer, we totally accepted your comment and revising the result in the table and its labelling

Reviewer comment

Line 237-249. It is better to show the figures before or after the result’s interpretation. Authors should interpreted each figure with a separate texts.

Authors’ comment

Dear reviewer, we accepted and corrected the comment.

Reviewer comment

Line 239-240. What is the different between 47.7% and 47.7 percentage points?

Authors’ comment

Dear reviewer let us clarify this issue. 47.7% is simply the prevalence (proportion out of 100). However, percentage point means it is the difference in prevalence or the increase in prevalence from one certain level to the other (next).

Reviewer comment

Line 250-256. I am not sure that the result in this section came from which tables? The results are not show!!!!

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we want to ask apologize for the missing tables. We corrected and supplied in the current revision as table 3&4.

Reviewer comment

Discussions:

In your discussions, please take care to avoid statements implying causality from correlational research. For example, avoid the use of terms such as "increased/reduced risk", "influenced by", “likely to” or “resulted in." Instead, consistently use terms such as "associated with" or "associations."

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have got your idea. Your comments are well accepted.

Reviewer comment

Line 261. Anaemia vs. anaemia are American and British English, please select one of them for whole manuscript.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have selected the second (British) word and made consistent throughout the document currently.

Reviewer comment

Line 261-265. Authors don’t need to give the definition of anaemia in this section which is already mentioned in the background section.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have accepted the comments and corrected it.

Reviewer comment

Line 266. In statistic, to show the full number like 68% must follow by dots zero as 68.0%, authors should revise other full numbers as well.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have accepted the comments and corrected it.

Reviewer comment

Line 265-277. It is good to compare the prevalence with other countries; however, the author should try to find the evidence to answer why the trend of prevalence of anaemia was significantly reduced from 2005 to 2011, but increased from 2011 to 2016 in Ethiopia? This should be the main discussion regarding to the findings from this study. Had it any policy/intervention or event which influenced to these unstable trends? The comparison of prevalence of anemia among children and pregnant women with women of reproductive age might lead to unrelated ideas, because the study participants are different. Also, authors should provide the year of the references’ cited for example in line 275-277, recent national DHS and other surveys were conducted in which years? is that only one reference for respective countries?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have accepted the comments and corrected it. The study population were women of reproductive age group one of the vulnerable group for anaemia. We correct those unrelated ideas and cite the specific year for the data and references.

Reviewer comment

Line 277-278. What is the reduction of anemia among women of reproductive age important for child health?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, the anaemia level of women is highly associated with intrauterine life of the foetus and child. For example, still birth, abortion, low birth weight and preterm labor. Furthermore, infants are dependent of their mothers’ iron store during early childhood during lactation. This explanation is supported by previous studies.

Reviewer comment

Line 228-280. What is the meaning of this sentence “anaemia prevalence remains high and haemoglobin levels remain low in the low income countries”?.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we want to ask for those inconsistent sentences. we have accepted and corrected currently.

Reviewer comment

Line 280-281. “If these trends are continued, the likelihood of reducing anemia by half from 2011 levels by 2025 in all regions among reproductive age women”. This prediction might be happened and might not be happened as well, the scientific research should come up with the fact and real evidence.

Reviewer comment

Line 282-283. What is the group of lower wealth indexes? According to tables’ result showed five categories from poorest to richest group? Which group is the reference group?.

Reviewer comment

Line 283-285. Can authors provide more evidence regarding to women from high socioeconomic status reduced risk of infection/morbidity which is contributed to reduce the prevalence of anaemia?

Reviewer comment

Line 289-292. Can authors provide more evidence regarding to social beliefs and climatic conditions factors contribute to the reduction of anaemia among women living in Tigray region? This is lower than in other regions.

Reviewer comment

Line 295-300. Why the marital status was discussed in these lines? According to result’s table, this study did not include this variable. It seem like authors raise unrelated ideas.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we accepted your comment. Marital status is one of the main factors associated with anaemia among women. We accepted that the result table was incomplete to show these factors. We have corrected in the current revision.

Reviewer comment

Line 300-303. Author showed the result of a study conducted in Indonesia, I am not sure how is related to the findings from this study? The explanation or reference from other studies should always come up after showing your findings.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have accepted your concern and revised it.

Reviewer comment

Line 302-305. Authors need more discussion regarding to abortion, history of menstruation and electricity factors associated with anemia among women of reproductive age??? There is no explanation of these factors.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have described adequately in the current revision.

Reviewer comment

Do this study have any limitations?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we thank you for remind us. This study had strengths and limitations. We included them in the current revision.

Reviewer comment

Conclusion

Line 308-309. What is the meaning of percentage points?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we have described that it is the difference of two percentage/prevalence/

Reviewer comment

Line 309-312. Please re-check the variables and re-phrases the sentences in these lines.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we accepted your advice and revised it.

Reviewer comment

Line 312-314. How the policy-makers enhance the socio-demographic characteristics and basic infrastructure that could be contribute to reduce the prevalence of anemia? Authors should recommend the practical ideas which are related to the findings from this study?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we accepted your advice and revised it.

Reviewer comment

Line 314-315. Please consider your recommendation with practical ideas in accordance with the findings from this study?

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we accepted your advice and revised it.

Reviewer comment

Line 315-316. Please consider your suggestion again on how to balance the various factors among different state in Ethiopia? And how these factors prevent anaemia in these states.

Authors’ response

Dear reviewer, we accepted your advice and revised it.

Reviewer #2: comment

This is an interesting paper reporting anemia prevalence in Ethiopia. Should be checked for biostatistics .The paper could be shorten and comparison with prevalence of anemia in other African countries.

Author’s response

Dear reviewer, we want to thank you for your nice comment. We have tried as much as possible to shorten the paper compare the findings with other comparative African countries and we also consult the biostatician for the statistics in our paper.

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Decision Letter 1

Sidrah Nausheen

22 Sep 2022

PONE-D-21-33298R1Trend and factors associated with anemia among women reproductive age in Ethiopia: A Further analysis of Ethiopian Demographic and Health Survey from 2005-2016.PLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Berhan Tsegaye,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

ACADEMIC EDITOR:   dear author ,  there are still grammatical errors in the manuscript . please correct them also review your statistical analysis as suggested by reviewer. 

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Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #2: The paper could be published after statistical review.Although not very novel but is an important attempt to study anemia

in developing country

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PLoS One. 2023 Jan 23;18(1):e0280679. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0280679.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


25 Oct 2022

From: Berhan Tsegaye

Date: 25/10/2022

To: The Editor

Journal Name: Plose one

Re-submission of a manuscript

Dear Editor/reviewer/, I am Berhan Tsegaye, on behalf of correspondent authors submits the following manuscript for publication. ‘Trend of anemia among women reproductive age in Ethiopia from 2005-2016: A Further analysis of Ethiopian demographic health survey’.

Dear editor, we are asked to correct the language and statistical analysis in this revision round.

Hence, we have revised, edited the manuscript again and again. Furthermore, we have made some statistical revision which can not affect the previous result. We have corrected the manuscript though many consecutive rounds so some revision including statistical revision might not be indicated in the track change. Furthermore, as we are from Ethiopia, we cannot pay all cost of the publication and we are eligible for ‘PLOS Publication Fee Assistance Program’. We want to remind this ahead of time. Once again, we would like to thank all the reviewers and editors for their comment and contributions. We are also ready to take any suggestions and comments further if it is necessary.

Corresponding Author

Berhan Tsegaye

Email – birieman67@gmail.com

Attachment

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Decision Letter 2

Sidrah Nausheen

7 Dec 2022

PONE-D-21-33298R2Trend and factors associated with anemia among women reproductive age in Ethiopia: a multivariate decomposition analysis of Ethiopian Demographic and Health survey.PLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Tsegaye,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ==============================Dear author

there are multiple grammatical mistakes which need to be corrected

you said menstruation in last six months is associated with anemia. every woman has menstruation, but all are not anemic. so please change you statement and write heavy menstruation is associated with anemia.

reading news paper has protective effect in your study then why using mobile phone is not protective . mobile phone and social media gives you more information so please correct line 510 and 511.

why are you associating anemia with electricity ?? it does not make sense . either remove it or give logical interpretation

==============================

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Additional Editor Comments:

dear author

there are multiple grammatical mistakes which need to be corrected

you said menstruation in last six months is associated with anemia. every woman has menstruation, but all are not anemic. so please change you statement and write heavy menstruation is associated with anemia.

reading news paper has protective effect in your study then why using mobile phone is not protective . mobile phone and social media gives you more information so please correct line 510 and 511.

why are you associating anemia with electricity ?? it does not make sense . either remove it or give logical interpretation

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Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #2: Yes

**********

3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #2: Yes

**********

4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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The paper is acceptable for publication

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PLoS One. 2023 Jan 23;18(1):e0280679. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0280679.r006

Author response to Decision Letter 2


19 Dec 2022

From: corresponding author

To: Editor in chief

Submission ID: PONE-D-21-33298R2

Journal: plose one

Title: Trend and factors associated with anaemia among women reproductive age in Ethiopia: a multivariate decomposition analysis of Ethiopian Demographic and Health survey.

General comment of the editor

Dear author

There are multiple grammatical mistakes which need to be corrected

you said menstruation in last six months is associated with anemia. Every woman has menstruation, but all are not anemic. So, please change you statement and write heavy menstruation is associated with anemia.

Authors’ response

We want to thank the editor for his/her valuable comment for general correction and editorial problem. We accepted and corrected the language problems (grammatical errors, misplaced modifier tense etc.) throughout the document in the current revision. We have tried our effort to make our paper readable for our readers.

Editor’s specific comment

Reading newspaper has protective effect in your study then why using mobile phone is not protective. Mobile phone and social media gives you more information so please correct line 510 and 511.

Authors’ response

We want the reviewer to thank for this comment. We wrongly interpreted the correct finding in the table which is editorial problem. We have corrected it. Social media had great impact in prevention of anemia.

Editor’s specific comment

Why are you associating anaemia with electricity?? It does not make sense. Either remove it or give logical interpretation

Authors’ response

We thank the reviewer for this comment. We have given the logical interpretation with evidence.

Attachment

Submitted filename: Response for reviewer.docx

Decision Letter 3

Sidrah Nausheen

6 Jan 2023

Trend and factors associated with anemia among women reproductive age in Ethiopia: a multivariate decomposition analysis of Ethiopian Demographic and Health survey.

PONE-D-21-33298R3

Dear Dr. Berhan Tsegaye,

We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements.

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Reviewers' comments:

Acceptance letter

Sidrah Nausheen

12 Jan 2023

PONE-D-21-33298R3

Trend and factors associated with anemia among women reproductive age in Ethiopia: a multivariate decomposition analysis of Ethiopian Demographic and Health survey.

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    Ethiopian Demographic and Health Survey (EDHS) is a quantitative cross-sectional study conducted every five years in Ethiopia. The current research is a secondary data analysis of EDHS 2005,2011, and 2016. The main objective of DHS is to provide critical information on indicators of fertility, family planning, infant health, child health, adult health, maternal and child health, nutrition and sexually transmitted infections. First, we were registered and requested EDHS data for analysis from the ‘measure DHS’ online archive. Then, permission to access the database was officially obtained for this study. The database is available at the official website of DHS, which is found at the following link: https://dhsprogram.com.


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