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. 2023 Mar 9;18(3):e0282641. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0282641

Factors associated with undernutrition among pregnant women in Haramaya district, Eastern Ethiopia: A community-based study

Meseret Belete Fite 1,*, Abera Kenay Tura 2,3, Tesfaye Assebe Yadeta 2, Lemessa Oljira 4, Kedir Teji Roba 2
Editor: Fernanda Penido Matozinhos5
PMCID: PMC9997975  PMID: 36893154

Abstract

Introduction

Although undernutrition in pregnancy has continued to get global attention as pregnancy is considered a critical period in the life cycle owed to increase the metabolic and physiological demands, evidence is scarce on undernutrition and associated factors among pregnant women in eastern Ethiopia. Therefore, this study assessed the undernutrition and associated factors among pregnant women in Haramaya district, Eastern Ethiopia.

Methods

A community-based cross-sectional study was conducted among randomly selected pregnant women in Haramaya district, eastern Ethiopia. Data were collected through face-to-face interviews, anthropometric measurement, and hemoglobin analysis by trained research assistants. An adjusted Prevalence ratio (aPR), and a 95% confidence interval (CI), were used to report associations. Poisson regression analysis model with a robust variance estimate identified variables associated with undernutrition. Data were double entered using Epi-data 3.1 and cleaned, coded, checked for missing and outliers, and analyzed using Stata 14 (College Station, Texas 77845 USA. Finally, the p-value <0.05 was the cut-off point for the significant association.

Results

A total of 448 pregnant women with a mean age of 25.68 (± 5.16) were included in the study. The prevalence of undernutrition among pregnant women was 47.9% (95% CI: 43%-53%). From the analysis, the undernutrition was more likely higher among respondents who had five or more family members (APR = 1.19; 95% CI = 1.02–1.40), lower dietary diversity (APR = 1.58; 95% CI = 1.13–2.21) and those who were anemic (APR = 4.27; 95% CI = 3.17–5.76).

Conclusion

Nearly half of the pregnant women in study area were undernourished. High prevalence was found among women who had large family sizes, low dietary diversity and anemia during pregnancy. Improving dietary diversity, strengthening family planning services and giving special attention to pregnant women, supplementation of iron and folic acid, and early detection and treatment of anemia is essential to improve the high burden of undernutrition and the adverse effect on pregnant women and the fetus.

Introduction

Undernutrition refers to deficiency primarily of calories, and overall inadequate consumption of food and nutrients to provide an individual’s requirement to support good health [1]. Moreover, undernutrition occurred due to the double burden of increased demands during pregnancy and inadequate intake of food during pregnancy [2]. Undernutrition is a key contributor to maternal mortality and morbidity, and adverse birth outcomes [3]. Mid-upper arm circumference (MUAC) is a proper measure for screening undernutrition during pregnancy [4]. MUAC is a good indicator of the protein reserves of a body, and a thinner arm reflects wasted lean mass and most appropriate anthropometric measure to detect short-term changes in the nutritional status [5].

Worldwide, nearly about 462 million pregnant women had malnutrition [6]. In low-resource countries, undernutrition among pregnant women is continuing to increase unremarked, as the main predictor of adverse birth outcomes [7, 8]. The reports of studies indicate that vulnerability to undernutrition in utero is linked with impaired growth and development in childhood, short stature in adults, reduced academic achievement and decreased economic productivity [9, 10]. Although literature points to the association of maternal undernutrition with adverse birth outcomes, little is documented about the risk predictors that influence prenatal nutritional status. Prenatal undernutrition is unacceptably high in developing countries [11], and Africa is the utmost severely overwhelmed [12]. More than one-fifth of Ethiopian women are exposed to malnutrition during their pregnancy [13] and, the risk is 68% higher among rural women compared to urban women [14].

Although Ethiopia has made a striding change in maternal health death over the last decades, undernutrition during pregnancy remains a significant public health issue with prevalence ranging from 14.4% in Gonder [15] to 44.7% in Gumay district [16]. Several studies indicated that factors including, maternal age, residency, literacy, marriage before 18 years old, ANC follow-up, meal frequency, meal skipping, and household food security [1620], were associated with maternal undernutrition. However, these studies have documented that the level of magnitude undernutrition and associated risk factors among pregnant women vary across the agro-ecological setups [19].

Although the Ethiopian ministry of health has tried to implement health extension program strategies to reduce maternal undernutrition, studies indicate malnutrition among pregnant women persistently remains a serious public health problem in the country [1520]. Moreover, evidence is scarce on undernutrition and associated factors among pregnant women in the Haramaya district. Therefore, this study assessed the undernutrition and associated factors among pregnant women in Haramaya District, Eastern Ethiopia.

Methods

Description of the study area

As a detailed description has been given elsewhere in the previous paper [21], the study was embedded into the Haramaya Health Demographic Surveillance and Health Research Centre (HDS-HRC), established in 2018. The HDS-HRC covers 12 rural kebeles (the lowest administrative unit in Ethiopia) out of 33 found in the district located approximately 500 KM from the capital city, Addis Ababa. Of 5252 pregnant women in the district during the study period, 2306 were followed by the HDS-HRC [22]. This study was conducted from January 5 to February 12, 2021

Study design and period

A community-based cross-sectional study was conducted from January 5 to February 12, 2021.

Source population and study population

All pregnant women living in the district constituted the source population; whereas all pregnant women who lived in the selected kebeles for at least six months during the study period were the study population.

Inclusion and exclusion criteria

Participants were a part of pregnancy surveillance initiated in HDS-HRC. For the reason that dietary practice is affected by the local social and cultural values, all pregnant women who lived a minimum of six months in the district were involved in this study. However, all pregnant women with reported acute and chronic illnesses, seriously ill and unable to communicate during the study period were excluded

Sample size determination and sampling procedures

The sample size was determined using single and double population proportion formulas with their corresponding assumption, and the largest sample size was considered. As such, the sample was computed using the single population proportion formula with the following assumptions: 95% confidence interval, the prevalence of undernutrition among pregnant women Gumay District, (44.9%) (16), 5% marginal error, and 10% non-response rate; the final computed sample size was 419. However, since this study was part of a larger longitudinal study (a prospective cohort study aimed to assess neonates’ birth weight and the association with maternal iron status), the same 475 pregnant women were included. A detailed description has been given elsewhere in the previous papers [21, 23, 24].

Data collection and measurement

Data were collected through face-to-face interviews, anthropometric measurement, and serum ferritin analysis by trained research assistants. The questionnaire contained data on socio-economic, obstetric, maternal perception, food consumption, dietary diversity, knowledge, attitude, and practices of pregnant women. In addition, mid-upper arm circumference (MUAC) and maternal height measurements were taken. The nutritional status of the pregnant women was measured with non-stretchable MUAC tape and the reading value was taken to the nearest 0.1-cm. All measurements were performed threefold and the average value of two concordant readings was considered as the ultimate value. Pregnant women with average MUAC measurements of less than 23 cm were categorized as having “undernutrition” otherwise normal [25, 26]. The questionnaire was initially prepared in English and translated to the local language (Afan Oromo) by individuals with good command of both languages. It was also pre-tested on 10% of the samples in Kersa District before actual implementation. Women’s hemoglobin concentration (in g/dL) was measured at each study site by well-trained medical technologists using HemoCue® Hb 301 system, according to the manufacturer’s instructions (HemoCue AB Ängelholm Sweden) which is a gold standard for fieldwork. A prick was done on the tip of the middle finger after the site was cleaned with disinfectant. The first drop of blood was cleaned off and the second drop was collected to fill the microcuvette which is then placed in the cuvette holder of the device for measuring hemoglobin concentration. Hemoglobin values were adjusted for altitude as per the Center for Disease Prevention and Control (CDC) recommendation [27].

As the detailed description has been given elsewhere in a previous papers [23, 24], the formerly validated food frequency questionnaire (FFQ) containing 27 of the most common lists of food items consumed by the district community was used to assess the dietary diversity of the study participants [2833]. The food items in the FFQ were grouped into ten food groups, including cereal, white roots and tubers, pulse and legumes, nuts and seeds, dark green leafy vegetables, other vitamin A-rich fruits and vegetables, meat, fish and poultry, dairy and dairy product, egg, other vegetables, and other fruits. The sum of each food group pregnant women consumed over seven days was calculated to analyze the dietary diversity scores (DDS) [32]. Furthermore, the dietary diversity score was converted into tertiles, with the highest tertile labeled as a "high dietary diversity score" whereas both lower tertiles combined were defined as a “low dietary diversity score". The food variety score (FVS) is the frequency of individual food items consumed during the reference period. Therefore, it was estimated by calculating each individual’s intake of the 27 food items over seven days.

Data quality assurance

Two training days were given for data collectors, laboratory professionals, and supervisors before the pre-test. The questionnaire pre-test was conducted on 10% of the sampled pregnant women in a district that was not included in the main study; appropriate adjustments were made based on the results. Supervisors closely managed data collection, checking the data daily before entry. The investigators administered all data collection activities. In addition, laboratory analysis quality assurance was maintained and trained and experienced laboratory professionals strictly followed standard operating procedures for all parameters.

Data processing and analysis

Data were double entered using Epi-data 3.1. Data were cleaned, coded, checked for missing and outliers, and analyzed using Stata 14 (College Station, Texas 77845 USA). Frequencies, percentages, summary measures and tables were used to describe and present the descriptive information of respondents. The MUAC is a much simpler anthropometric measure than the BMI, as its use eliminates the need for expensive equipment, such as height charts and scales, and the need for calculations. It is also much easier to perform on a patient who is acutely unwell, bed bound or sedentary. Another important advantage of using MUAC is that there is minimal change in the MUAC during pregnancy, so it may be a better indicator of pre-pregnancy body fat and nutrition than the BMI. The outcome variable (undernutrition) was dichotomized as undernutrition (coded as 1) and normal (coded as 0). Poisson regression analysis models with a robust variance estimate were fitted to identify predictors of undernutrition. Next, the binary analysis variables with a p< 0.25 were entered into the adjusted log-binomial models. Results were presented using the crude prevalence ratio (CPR) and adjusted prevalence ratio (aPR). Akaike’s information criterion (AIC) and Bayesian information criterion (BIC) were used to test for model fitness. The goodness-of-fit was assessed using the Pearson chi-square and deviance tests, with the statistical significance level at alpha = 5%. The explanatory variables were examined for multi-collinearity before taking them into the multivariable model using a correlation matrix for the regression coefficients, the standard errors, and the variance inflation factor value.

The wealth index was employed to estimate the economic level of families. The wealth dispersion was generated by applying the principal component analysis (PCA). The index was calculated based on the ownership of latrines, agricultural land and size, selected household assets, livestock quantities, and source of drinking water, a total of 41 household variables. The previous paper [28] described nutritional knowledge and attitudes toward consumption of an iron-rich diet using the Likert scale applying the PCA; the factor scores were totaled and classified into tertiles. Women’s autonomy was evaluated using seven validated questions adopted from the Ethiopian Demographic Health Survey [34]. For each question, the response was coded as "one" when the decision was made by the woman alone or jointly with her husband, or "zero" otherwise. The detailed description has been given elsewhere in a previous papers [21, 23, 24].

Ethical consideration

This study was conducted in agreement with the Declaration of Helsinki-Ethical principle for medical research involving human subjects [35]. The proposal was approved by the Institutional Health Research Ethics Review Committee (IHRERC) of the College of Health and Medical Sciences, Haramaya University (ref No: IHRERC/266/2020). Written informed consent was obtained from all participants and legally authorized representatives "of minors below 16 years of age and illiterates,” and confidentiality was maintained by excluding all personal identifiers

Operational definition

Undernutrition

Nutritional status of pregnant women measured by MUAC was labeled as under-nutrition when

MUAC<23 cm, otherwise normal [25].

Anemia

Anemia was defined as a Hemoglobin level of < 11.0 g/dl during the first or third trimester or <10.5 g/dl during the second [36].

Mid-upper arm circumference (MUAC)

Is used as a measure of fat-free mass and a measurement of the circumference of the upper arm at the midpoint between the olecranon and acromion processes [26].

Nutritional knowledge

Was measured through16 nutritional knowledge questions on the feature of nutrition needed in pregnancy and the score was computed by conducting PCA. Then composite was ranked into tertiles [29].

Educational status

Respondents who had grade at least grade one education level were labeled as”formal”, whereas respondents those could able to read or write sentences were categorized as” Informal education”

Results

Socio-demographic characteristics

Out of 475 eligible pregnant women, the study included 448, yielding a 94.3% response rate. The mean age of the women was 25.68 (±5.16), ranging from 16 to 36. The majority of the respondents could not read or write (73.88%), were housewives (96.1%), farmers (93%), and had a family size of 1–5 (76.56%). Only 20.09% were in the wealthiest quintiles (Table 1).

Table 1. Socio-demographic of pregnant women in Haramaya district, Eastern Ethiopia, 2021 (n = 448).

Variables Frequency(n) Percentage (%)
Age (years)
<18 25 5.58
18–35 400 89.29
>35 23 5.13
Mean (± SD) 25.68 (± 5.16)
Educational level of the woman
Can’t read or write 331 73.88
Read or write 26 5.81
Formal education 91 20.31
Educational level of husband 49(23.33)
Can’t read or write 259 57.81
Read or write 61 13.62
Grade 1–8 102 22.77
Grade 9 and above 26 5.8
Occupation of the woman
Housewives 433 96.65
Merchants 15 3.65
Occupation of husband
Farmers 420 93.75
Daily labors 28 6.25
Family size
1–5 343 76.56
≥5 105 23.44
Agricultural land possession
No 271 60.49
Yes 177 39.51
Wealth Index (Quintile)
Poorest 90 20.09
Poor 90 20.09
Middle 89 19.87
Rich 90 20.09
Richest 89 19.87

Anthropometric and nutritional status of respondents

Among 448 respondents, 47.9% (95% CI: 43%- 53%) were undernourished and 45.98% were anemic. Of the total respondents, 29.46%, 37.50%, 24.8%, and 26.12% of them had high dietary diversity, high food variety score, high consumption of ASFs, and > 4 meal frequency respectively, Table 2.

Table 2. Anthropometric and nutritional status of pregnant women in Haramaya district, eastern Ethiopia, 2021 (n = 448).

Variables Frequency(n) Percentage (%)
Nutritional status
Normal 233 52
Undernutrition 215 48
Anemia status
Anemic 206 45.98
Non-anemic 242 54.02
Dietary diversity
Low 316 70.54
High 132 29.46
Consumption of ASFs
Low 337 75.22
High 111 24.78
Food Variety Sore (FVS)
Low 280 62.50
High 168 37.50
Meal frequency
< 4 331 73.88
≥ 4 117 26.12

Factors associated with undernutrition

In the bi-variable analysis, women’s educational level, stage of pregnancy, family size, dietary diversity, consumption of ASFs, skipping meals, anemia status, antenatal care, perceived confidence, food restriction, and khat chewing were found to be a candidate for multivariable analysis at p<0.25. Using the Poisson regression analysis model with a robust variance estimate, undernutrition was more likely higher among respondents who had more than five family members (APR = 1.19; 95% CI = 1.02–1.40), low dietary diversity (APR = 1.58; 95% CI = 1.13–2.21) and had anemia during pregnancy (APR = 4.27; 95% CI = 3.17–5.76), Table 3.

Table 3. Factors associated with undernutrition among pregnant women in Eastern Ethiopia, 2021.

Variables Undernutrition CPR(95%CI) APR (95%CI) P-value
Yes No
(n = 215) (n = 233)
Educational level of women
Can’t read or write/Informal 177(82.33) 180(77.25) 1 1 0.334
Formal 38(17.67) 53(22.75) 0.73 (0.46,1.16) 1.12(0.89,1.41)
Stage of pregnancy
First trimester 8(3.72) 11(4.72) 1 1 0.755
Second trimester 137(63.72) 159(68.24) 1.18 (0.46,3.03) 0.89 (0.74,1.30)
Third trimester 70(32.56) 63(27.04) 1.53 (0.58,4.04) 0.96 (0.72,1.27)
Family sizes
1–5 152(70.70) 191(81.97) 1 1 0.028*
≥5 63(29.30) 42(18.03) 1.88 (1.21,2.94) 1.19 (1.02,1.40)
Dietary diversity
High 32(14.88) 100(42.92) 1 1
Low 183(85.12) 133(57.08) 0.23 (0.147,0.37) 1.58 (1.13,2.21) 0.008*
Consumption of ASFs
low 182(84.65) 155(66.52) 1 1 0.777
High 33(15.35) 78(33.48) 2.39 (1.74, 3.28) 1.05 (0.75,1.46)
Skipping meals
No 79(36.74) 83(35.62) 1 1 0.784
Yes 18(63.26) 150(64.38) 0.95 (0.65,1.40) 1.03 (0.85,1.24)
Anemia status
Non-anemic 42(19.53) 200(85.84) 1 1 < 0.001**
Anemic 173(80.4) 133 (14.16) 4.84 (3.656.41) 4.27 (3.17,5.76)
Antenatal care
No 69(32.09) 95(40.77) 1 1 0.111
Yes 146(67.91) 138(59.23) 1.46(0.99,2.15) 1.14(0.97,1.33)
Perceived confidence
No 168(78.14) 168 (72.10) 1 1 0.318
Yes 47(21.86) 65 (27.90) 0.72(0.47,1.11) 0.90 (0.73,1.11)
Food restriction
No 133(61.86) 166 (71.24) 1 1 0.807
Yes 82(38.14) 67 (28.76) 1.53(1.03,2.27) 1.02(0.85,1.23)
Khat chewing
No 73(33.95) 107 (45.92) 1 1 0.261
Yes 142(66.05) 126(54.08) 1.65 (1.13,2.42) 1.10(0.93,1.31)

CPR = Crude Prevalence Ratio; APR = Adjusted Prevalence Ratio, CI = Confidence Interval at 95%

APR, CI and P-Value were found from multivariable Poisson regression analysis model with a robust variance estimate

** Statistically significant at p-value <0.001

* Statistically significant at p-value <0.05

Discussion

Despite the encouraging improvement in maternal death in, undernutrition among pregnant women remains a public health issue in in Ethiopia [34]. In this study, we reported the prevalence of the undernutrition and associated factors among pregnant women in Haramaya district. We found that the prevalence of undernutrition among study participants was 47.9% (95% CI: 43%-53%) and was noted to be nearly half. Moreover, the risk factors of undernutrition were higher among women who had greater than five family sizes, low dietary diversity and were anemic.

The present finding is comparably consistent with studies conducted in Northwest Tigray, Ethiopia [37] and South West Ethiopia [16]. However, the result of current is higher than studies carried out in Gambela, Ethiopia [19] and Eastern Ethiopia [13] and southern Ethiopia [38], Kenya [39], Sudan [40], and Nigeria [41]. The possible variation might be due to culturally diverse countries, thus it is not important to introduce direct correlation of the current the result with the findings of the studies carried out in different countries. Farmers in the Haramaya district have been growing khat for many years and are a major cash crop in this study area. Moreover, khat chewing amongst pregnant women is common in the district [22]. Therefore, the higher prevalence of undernutrition in this study setup might be due to increased nutritional demands in pregnancy and the decrement of dietary intake as of the effects amphetamine found in khat to reduced appetite [42]. On other hand, the difference in methods and measures used might contribute to the variations. In our study we used a community-based cross-sectional study design to assess the undernutrition and associated factors s among pregnant, whereas, some previous of the studies were carried out at the institutional level.

In the present study, we observed that having low dietary diversity was independently associated with maternal undernutrition during pregnancy, which is in agreement with studies conducted in different parts of Ethiopia [19, 43, 44]. The inappropriate dietary practice among pregnant women was noted in this study [23]. This is might be due to maternal dietary habits, food taboos, and cultural beliefs that can affect nutrition during pregnancy and women do not consume additional meals during the pregnancy. Nutritious diets, essential nutrition services and optimal nutrition practices are essential to prevent all forms of malnutrition before and during pregnancy. Therefore, nutrition education and counseling of pregnant women is critical for every antenatal care and should be intensified.

Anemia during pregnancy has maternal and perinatal various effects and it increase the risk of maternal and perinatal mortality [45, 46]. This study observed that pregnant women with anemia were more likely to be undernourished. The proportion of undernutrition was significantly more among anemic pregnant women compared to normal hemoglobin level pregnant women. This result is comparably in agreement with studies employed in Walayita Sodo town, Southern Ethiopia [47], in Gonder northwest Ethiopia [15], and India [48], which shows the risk of undernutrition tends to increase among anemic women. This could be due to the reality that anemic pregnant women have a greater risk of being inadequate in micronutrients and therefore more likely to be undernourished. The nether reason might be the fact that khat chewing is the most common in this study area and most of the women chew khat, which could decrease.

Having a large family size was one of the determinants, which were independently associated with undernutrition during pregnancy. This study revealed that pregnant women who were from greater than five members of households were a greater prevalence of undernutrition, which is in line with studies conducted in different parts of Ethiopia [16, 19] and Western Nepal [20]. The result could be because, food insecurity is more common in households with large family sizes, women play a sacrificial role and are more vulnerable to being undernourished than other family members [49]. Large family sizes may lead to inadequate food intake. In Ethiopian culture, women habitually served their meals after all family members are addressed. Thus, pregnant women are more exposed to food insecurity and associated with inadequate nutrient intakes for two fundamental reasons. First, the physiological changes occur during pregnancy. Women’s nutrient needs increase during pregnancy and lactation. Maternal nutrient needs increase during pregnancy and breastfeeding, and when these needs are not met, it may contribute to wasting and fatigue. Second, women have a sociological vulnerability. Studies reveal that, during periods of decreased food supply, women expose to reduced consumption comparative to men. Furthermore, women are expected to decline their consumption to safe those of babies and small children [50].

Trained health workers and medical laboratory technologists collected and analyzed the socio-demographic data and blood samples. One strength of this study is the use of hemoglobin as an indicator of nutritional status, which is preferable to a community-based study. Various limitations need to be considered when interpreting our results. Since the study was cross-sectional, limiting the causal inference between under-nutrition and its correlates.

Conclusion

This study finding has shown that the prevalence of that undernutrition among pregnant women in Haramaya district is high. In addition, dietary diversity, family size, and anemia in pregnancy were identified as factors that hindered their maternal status. Therefore, it is important that nutrition education and counseling are given during each antenatal visit should be intensified. Nutritional counseling and intervention should be tailored to meet the need of pregnant women and to improve their dietary practice and good nourishment. We suggest nutrition policy, programs and interventions should be aimed at encouraging prenatal dietary practice focusing on dietary guidance, and raising awareness on the benefit of quality diet in pregnancy for both the mother and the newborn. Strengthening family planning services and giving special attention to pregnant women, supplementation of iron and folic acid, and early detection and treatment of anemia are suggested.

Acknowledgments

Special thanks go to the Haramaya district health office staff for their enormous support during the data collection period. Finally, we like to thank all the women who participated in the study, the data collectors, and the supervisors.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the manuscript.

Funding Statement

This study was fully funded by Haramaya University after the proposal has been defended. The funder has no role in conception, design of the study, statistical analysis, result interpretation and in writing up the manuscript. The funding institution has no role in the publication consent or approval.

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PONE-D-21-17941Determinants of Under-nutrition Among Pregnant Women in Haramaya District, Eastern EthiopiaPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Abstract

Under Methods

Line 6: Authors need to add the word cross to Sectional study

Line 8: Authors need to change Data “was” to were

Line 9: Authors need to change was to were after food frequency questionnaires

Introduction

Paragraph one

Authors need to get more updated statistics since the figure of 3.5 million is from a 2008 reference.

Consider citing (Sserwanja, Q, Kawuki, J, Mutisya, LM, et al. Underweight and associated factors among lactating women in Uganda: Evidence from the Uganda demographic health survey 2016. Health Sci Rep. 2021; 4:e356. https://doi.org/10.1002/hsr2.356) with updated statistics

Paragraph four

Line 2: Authors need to remove s between and & nutritional status

Methods

Paragraph 3: Source population and study population

Authors need to revise the grammar of the first sentence

Paragraph 4: Inclusion and exclusion criteria

Authors need to revise the grammar of the first and second sentences

Paragraph 6

Authors need to change data was to data were in the first sentence

Authors need to elaborate to the readers why they choose MUAC as a method of assessing undernutrition and why not other methods

Paragraph 8: Analysis

Authors need to clarify if by normal being coded as 0, did this include overweight and obese women, or they were unable to measure this?

Were descriptives done? If yes, authors need to mention this.

RESULTS

Paragraph 1:

Authors need to explain why they chose to have cannot read and write, informal and formal education as the sub-categories. What was the cut off for formal education? Was a primary school candidate the same as a tertiary institute candidate? How was informal education defined?

Why was the classification of husband education different from that of the woman?

Under husband education, how different was can read and write from high school and above?

Note: Authors need to describe how these were agreed upon in the methods section

Gravidity and Parity are the almost same. Why did the authors add both?

Discussion

Paragraph 3:

Revise grammar of first sentence

Conclusion

Revise grammar of second sentence

References

Reference 8: Change to (Sserwanja, Q., Mukunya, D., Habumugisha, T. et al. Factors associated with undernutrition among 20 to 49 year old women in Uganda: a secondary analysis of the Uganda demographic health survey 2016. BMC Public Health 20, 1644 (2020). https://doi.org/10.1186/s12889-020-09775-2). It is the same paper but the one cited was a thesis and this is the published article

Kindly revise all the other references to ensure that they are complete with journal name, issue/volume and page number (OR as per journal’s requirement)

Reviewer #2: Review Reports to the authors

Manuscript Id: PONE-D-21-17941

Title: Determinants of Under-nutrition Among Pregnant Women in Haramaya District, Eastern Ethiopia

Comments

*While the title and the objectives talk about determinants of under-nutrition, the authors used a cross sectional study and reported only factors associated with under-nutrition, not the determinants. The authors should have used case control study. You have to modify the title as “Factors associated with under-nutrition among Pregnant Women in Haramaya District, eastern Ethiopia”, or otherwise the evidence presented doesn’t match your title and objectives.

*I suggest to write “Among” as ‘among’ and “Eastern” as ‘eastern’ in your revised title

You used different font styles for similar headings and sub-headings. Please check and revise it.

*The manuscript is full of grammatical and editorial errors. Please go through it line by line (thoroughly) and revise it, better checked by language professionals. Some of such errors are indicated below.

Abstract

Methods: - sectional study design was….

*But, what is sectional study design? Please make it clear.

- Data was collected with interviewers-administered questionnaires by well-trained health professionals.

*Make it data were collected with…. And this is also same under method section.

*well trained health professionals….who are these, HDSS staff? What do you mean by well trained? Please clearly indicate what their profession is, their level of education is and how their training was for this data collection. Describe these details under your methods section.

Results: line 2- “Under-nutrition” is written in different font from others.

-Line 3 Breakfast should be written as ‘breakfast’

Conclusion: -The the present study“

*What is “the the”? Please edit it.

- High prevalence “was observed on” women who “reported chat less than four times”

* was observed on should be written as “was found among”

*reported chat less than four times should be “ reported to chew Khat less than four times”

-Nutrition policy, programs and interventions….

* This is too general and ambiguous conclusion. Based on your findings specify to the point and indicate which policy, program and intervention should do what to improve which problem.

Introduction

*This section is not well written since doesn’t indicate the picture of maternal under-nutrition during pregnancy from global, regional, national and local contexts.

* The literatures are not well searched, and hence the introduction is too shallow. So many other related articles were missed.

*What is the importance of this study since the factors identified were already well known as you indicated under paragraph three? What is special now in this study? Can’t we use studies from other settings in Ethiopia for eastern Ethiopian regions?

-Line 2 ….affecting the healthy of women both in developed and developing countries, where, more than…

* write it as ‘affecting health of women both in developed and developing countries where more than…

Line 3…Moreover, under-nutrition occurred due to the…

*Write it as ‘Moreover, under-nutrition occurs due to the….

-Paragraph 4 line 2 ….and s nutritional status among

* re-write it as … and nutritional status among

Methods

*Chat has to be written as ‘Khat’, revise it accordingly throughout the document

*You excluded all pregnant women with reported acute and chronic illnesses. How trustable this reported illness is? And what number or how many percent of the women were excluded with these criteria?

-The sample size required and adequate for estimating the determinants of dietary practices of pregnant women was computed….

*Are you calculating for determinants of dietary practice or under nutrition? Be consistent, clear and to the point in line with your objectives.

*For sample size determination you just stated of using single and double population proportions. Would you indicate the double proportion formula and calculations used? *How many variables were used to try calculating your sample size using double proportion formula? Please indicate these as well.

* You described the role of agro-ecolocolgical difference on under-nutrition, but used study from Gumay district for sample size determination. Why? Any effect it might pose?

* Also mention names of those kebeles (with their total sample allocated), you used under the DSS and techniques followed using a simple diagrammatic presentation.

-After translation, it’s the consistency * write it as “its consistency”

* Indicate/cite literatures you used for developing your questionnaire

- Hemoglobin analysis was carried out in the health post located in each Kebele by laboratory technologists.

* How was this practical? You were collecting data home to home but hemoglobin at health center? Were you calling each women to health center? What is the need to go to health center since you used Hemocue?

-Hemoglobin level was adjusted for altitude before the data were entered.

*How was the adjustment done- any formula? What about adjustment for other factors- did you considered any? Indicate how you classified anemia under analysis part.

* standard operating procedures (SOPs)….indicate these under the procedures….only SOP you used.

* How was anthropometric measurement standardized? Any TEM (technical error of measurements) done? Try to answer this in relation to the data collectors training, profession and how were they trained as raised above?

* under analysis- you still stated “to identify determinants of under-nutrition”….you rather should say factors associated with under-nutrition, not determinants…..And you may also need to re-consider your method of analysis appropriate to this…..logistic regression is one.

* What about those women under age regarding consent to participate? You had 24 women under the age of 18 years.

Results

*How do you see 100% response rate in a community based study like yours?

*Table 1- would you classify and present women’s education similar to husbands’ case?

*How do you see the wealth index vs women’s and husband’s occupation? Mismatch?

* Table 2: nutritional status ….write it as under-nutrition and normal….check typos errors in the table and also do not mix acute…make it consistent from title to conclusion.

* Chat chewing….make it “Khat”

* Table 3…factors determinants of under-nutrition…..vs the sub-title factors associated with??? And also vs manuscript title, check it again. I suggest this analysis method to be changed as indicated above.

* And also try to present some of your data with other data presentation techniques than table…

Discussion

*This section is very shallow. You are not supposed just to say similarity and difference ,rather explain what the public health implication of each finding is and interprete.

E.g. You put “This might be the gio-ecological variation of study set up, methodology used, where some of them were conducted at facility level which does not really show the real magnitude of the problem as of community level”.

*You have to tell the readers how geo-ecological variation matters, what method difference brought difference in the findings,,,,etc?

*Re-look at the strengths and limitations you put…a lot of limitations with less strengths.

Conclusion

*How would you comment on wealth status and high under-nutrition in your findings?

*Check comments to the comments to conclusion under abstract

* And re-look at your recommendations regarding anemia and Iron folic acid supplementation.

Consent for publication

-Not applicable

*Authors should agree and give their consent for the publication of this paper…check that.

Reference

*Check other references are exhaustively searched and included. Reference style also needs some editorial corrections in line with journal requirements.

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Dear Editor! we have tried to revise the comments . Since this is the part of large longitudinal study from which some papers were recently published the methods section share some charactestics and overlap. However We have tried to refere with citation . Others are edited according to your request .

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PONE-D-21-17941R1Factors associated with undernutrition among pregnant women in Haramaya District, Eastern Ethiopia: A community-based studyPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Thank you so much for working on the comments.

General comments

Kindly line number the manuscript and in the responses, add pages and line numbers for easier follow up

In the methods, kindly add a section describing the independent variables and how they were classified

Specific comments

Kindly see my comments on your responses:

Your response

Reviewer#1 comment: Authors need to elaborate to the readers why they choose MUAC as a method of assessing undernutrition and why not other methods

Authors’ response: Thank you so much. We appreciated your comments. We have clearly described why we use MUAC as a method of assessing under-nutrition in the revised manuscript. We have stated as the following

“The body mass index (BMI, kg/m2) is currently the gold standard for measuring body fatness. However, pregnancy-associated weight gain and oedema, as well as late booking into antenatal care in our population setting, causes us to question the reliability of using the BMI to assess body fat or nutritional status in pregnancy. The MUAC is a much simpler anthropometric measure than the BMI, as its use eliminates the need for expensive equipment, such as height charts and scales, and the need for calculations. It is also much easier to perform on a patient who is acutely unwell, bed bound or sedentary. Another important advantage of using MUAC is that there is minimal change in the MUAC during pregnancy, so it may be a better indicator of pre-pregnancy body fat and nutrition than the BMI”

My comment:

I seem not to see this. Kindly line show which pages this information is.

Your response

Reviewer#1 comment: Were descriptives done? If yes, authors need to mention this.

Authors’ response: Thank you so much. We appreciated your comments. We have to do descriptive analysis of socio-demographic characteristics and anthropometric and nutritional status of respondents

My comment

Kindly add this in the data processing and analysis section

Your response

Authors need to explain why they chose to have cannot read and write, informal and formal education as the sub-categories.

What was the cut off for formal education? Was a primary school candidate the same as a tertiary institute candidate? How was informal education defined?Why was the classification of husband education different from that of the woman? Under husband education, how different was can read and write from high school and above?

Authors’ response: Thank you a lot for your substantial effort. We have revised the women’s educational sub-categories as “cannot read and write, can read and write and formal education “. We had collected all the educational level of the respondent. However most of the respondents cannot read and write. Thus we put sub-categories into three. Formal education is defined as the educational status with minim of grade one in school. Those women who had adult functional education were label as “can read and write”

Moreover we had collected all the educational level of the husbands. However since the information on their educational status was majorly distributed with in sub-categories of “cannot read and write, can read and write 1-8 Grade 1-8 and Grade 9 and above”. Thus we put the available information within sub-categories

My comment:

1. Did you base on the national guidelines to say grade 1 is formal education for women?

2. Why did you remove formal education sub-category for women and only considered can read and write and can not read and write in Table 3?

3. Kindly add this categorization in the methods section

Your response

Reviewer#1 comment:

Note: Authors need to describe how these were agreed upon in the methods section

Gravidity and Parity are the almost same. Why did the authors add both?

Authors’ response: Thank you so much. We appreciated your comments. We have used the stage of pregnancy in the revised manuscript. :

My comment

Its good to look at the stage of pregnancy but also good to maintain parity/number of children/gravidity. Any particular reason why you decided to remove this?

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Decision Letter 2

Fernanda Penido Matozinhos

21 Feb 2023

Factors associated with undernutrition among pregnant women in Haramaya District, Eastern Ethiopia: A community-based study

PONE-D-21-17941R2

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #3: No

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Reviewer #3: I would like to congratulate the authors for their work and for looking carefully at the comments made in the previous round of review. The article brings important contributions to maternal and child health.

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Acceptance letter

Fernanda Penido Matozinhos

28 Feb 2023

PONE-D-21-17941R2

Factors associated with undernutrition among pregnant women in Haramaya District, Eastern Ethiopia: A community-based study

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