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. 2023 Jan 26;18(1):e0277181. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0277181

A linear reciprocal relationship between robustness and plasticity in homeostatic biological networks

Tetsuhiro S Hatakeyama 1,*, Kunihiko Kaneko 1,2,3
Editor: Claus Kadelka4
PMCID: PMC9879506  PMID: 36701362

Abstract

In physics of living systems, a search for relationships of a few macroscopic variables that emerge from many microscopic elements is a central issue. We evolved gene regulatory networks so that the expression of core genes (partial system) is insensitive to environmental changes. Then, we found the expression levels of the remaining genes autonomously increase to provide a plastic (sensitive) response. A feedforward structure from the non-core to core genes evolved autonomously. Negative proportionality was observed between the average changes in core and non-core genes, reflecting reciprocity between the macroscopic robustness of homeostatic genes and plasticity of regulator genes. The proportion coefficient between those genes is represented by their number ratio, as in the “lever principle”, whereas the decrease in the ratio results in a transition from perfect to partial adaptation, in which only a portion of the core genes exhibits robustness against environmental changes. This reciprocity between robustness and plasticity was satisfied throughout the evolutionary course, imposing an evolutionary constraint. This result suggests a simple macroscopic law for the adaptation characteristic in evolved complex biological networks.

Introduction

In recent decades, robustness in biological systems has been studied extensively in systems and quantitative biology [13]. Robustness refers to the maintenance of certain features or functions of biological systems against noise or changes in the environment [46]. Mechanisms for the robustness of specific gene expression also have been intensively studied [7]. In particular, housekeeping gene expression levels are believed to be robustly maintained across different environmental conditions [8]. Recent measurements, however, have shown that not all housekeeping genes are robust against environmental changes, but are only partially robust [9, 10]. Thus, investigations are needed to determine the possible limitation in the degree of robustness across genes, the constraints on global gene expression changes, and how these mechanisms have evolved [1114].

Homeostasis refers to the constancy of “macroscopic” physiological quantities against environmental changes, such as body temperature and blood glucose level. Although the mechanism of homeostasis has often been attributed to interactions among few organs, many “microscopic” dynamics also play a role, including neurotransmission and gene expression. Here, we investigated the emergence of “macroscopic” homeostasis in a biological network consisting of multiple “microscopic” elements, inspired by recent studies demonstrating the relation between macroscopic thermodynamic quantities and microscopic molecular dynamics [15, 16]. Of course, the biological system is not in equilibrium, and microscopic elements therein are heterogeneous. Nevertheless, the evolved biological states are stable. By virtue of this stability similar to the equilibrium state in thermodynamics, some macroscopic laws between robustness and plasticity can be uncovered, with insensitivity of the homeostatic component and changeability of the remnant part in response to external changes. Indeed, previous studies demonstrated a linear relationship between robustness in the period and plasticity in the phase in the circadian rhythm [17, 18].

In this study, we explored gene expression dynamics governed by evolving a gene-regulatory-network structure numerically so that the expression level changes of core genes were insensitive to environmental changes. Then, a feedforward structure from the non-core part of the network (i.e., the regulator genes) evolved autonomously. The robustness in the expression of core genes and the plasticity in that of regulator genes showed a linear reciprocal relationship; the increase of the former was associated with the latter. The proportion coefficient between those genes is represented by their number ratio, as in the “lever principle”, in which a decrease in the ratio results in a transition from perfect to partial adaptation, with only a portion of the genes exhibiting robustness. This result suggests a simple macroscopic law for the adaptation characteristic in evolved complex biological networks.

Model and methods

Gene regulatory networks are among the most well-known examples of complex biological networks [1113, 1921], in which each gene activates or inhibits other genes, including self-regulation (Fig 1). In the present model, these interactions are represented as an interaction matrix, J; when the jth gene activates or inhibits the ith gene, Jij takes on a value of 1 or -1, respectively, and when there is no interaction, Jij is 0. Inputs from the environment were further introduced to study adaptation against environmental changes, which globally regulate the expression of all genes. The environmental inputs are multi-dimensional, and each gene can exhibit a different degree of sensitivity to these inputs in two directions, represented as hi = 1 or −1 for simplicity. Sign of hi is randomly chosen and fixed during each evolutionary process. The environmental changes are represented by a single parameter, α. If signs of α and hi are identical (different), the ith gene is activated (inhibited). We consider on/off-type gene expression dynamics with a given threshold: if the total input exceeds the threshold value, yth, the genes are turned on. Further, the expression level of each gene can also fluctuate due to noise. These dynamics are given by the following stochastic differential equations:

dxidt=11+exp(-β(yi-yth))-xi+ϵ+ηi(t),yi=jJijxjN+αhi,<η(t)>=0,<ηi(t)ηj(t)>=σ2δ(t-t)δij, (1)

where xi is the expression level of the ith gene, β is the steepness of gene induction around the threshold (i.e., when β is sufficiently large, the gene expression dynamics approach on/off-type switching, and β corresponds to the Hill coefficient in a model that is often adapted in biology), and N is the total number of genes; the interaction term is scaled by N considering the scale in random variables. ϵ is a small spontaneous induction, whose value does not change the result as long as it is much smaller than 1, and ηi(t) is the Gaussian white noise in the gene expression level. Of note, our model is quite similar to a neural network [20], and we can easily extend our results to other complex biological networks. Here, we set yth to 0.3, β to 20.0, ϵ to 0.05, and σ2 to 0.01.

Fig 1. Schematic representation of the gene regulatory network.

Fig 1

Each white circle represents a gene. Genes regulate the expression of other genes (including self-regulation). Triangular and flat arrowheads represent activating and inhibitory interactions, respectively.

We first investigated the adaptation dynamics involving a large number of components. In general, when the environment changes, organisms do not maintain all of the components constant but rather need to sustain only a portion of these essential components. Indeed, in adaptation experiments, the expression of only a portion of the genes in the network could be robustly maintained against environmental change, whereas the expression levels of most other genes were altered [22]. This is natural, because maintaining an entire system completely unchanged is impossible when each element is sensitive to the environment. To investigate the characteristics of these adaptation dynamics, we considered the following simple situation: some components behave as a core of homeostasis, while others function as regulators to maintain the core robustly against environmental changes. Accordingly, we designate genes incorporated in the core as core genes and the others as regulator genes (see Fig 1).

We then optimized the network structure J to achieve robustness of the homeostatic core by mimicking the evolutionary process [11, 12, 14, 23, 24]. From mutants with a slight change in J, we selected those exhibiting higher robustness in the expression of core genes to environmental changes for the next generation, as parameterized by α. First, the condition without an environmental stimulus was represented by α = 0. The system was then allowed to relax to a steady state to obtain the expression pattern {xist(0)}, where xist(α) is a steady-state value of xi at α = α′. Steady-state value xist was calculated by averaging xi over 1,000 time steps after the relaxation for each genotype at each generation. We then changed α to both positive and negative values (α1 and −α1) and let the system in each case relax to the steady-state again to obtain {xist(±α1)}. Here, we set α1 to 1.0. To analyze the robustness and plasticity of the gene expression levels, we calculated the average change in the expression level of genes in different environments as follows:

ΔXC(NC)=icoreα{α1,-α1}(xist(α)-xist(0))22NC, (2)
ΔXR(NR)=iregulatorα{α1,-α1}(xist(α)-xist(0))22NR. (3)

An individual with a smaller ΔXC shows higher robustness in the core and is assumed to have higher fitness. Reproduction was asexual. Then, the kth individual with ΔXkC can produce an offspring with probability Pk, given as

Pk=exp(-βevoΔXkC)lexp(-βevoΔXlC), (4)

where βevo is the strength of the selection pressure. The networks J at the 0th generation are chosen randomly as described below. In each generation, each element in the offspring’s J is changed among {±1, 0} with probability pmut. We set βevo and pmut to 40.0 and 0.01, respectively.

Note that here the steady state without an environmental stimulus did not change much by evolution, so that the evolution of insensitivity against environmental changes to be observed was not due to the change in the steady state. This is because we set the standard deviation of η and ϵ much smaller than the threshold. When α is zero, all genes are activated only by the noise given by η and spontaneous induction given by ϵ. Then, all genes are normally turned off and fluctuate around xi = ϵ almost independently of J; since ϵ/N is 0.005, inputs from 60 genes (60% of the total genes) would have to concentrate on a given gene to exceed the threshold and to turn on a gene constantly without α. Such concentration hardly occurs due to the sparseness of networks. Hence, the average gene expression without input did not change through an evolutionary process, and all genes were kept to be off initially. In addition, since the threshold value was fixed, the sensitivity of genes against environmental changes was kept constant. Indeed, in Fig 2A (before evolution) and Fig 2B (after evolution), gene expression levels fluctuated around ϵ without input (time = 0–100), and those of the core transiently increased in response to changes in α (at time = 100 and 200), indicating that those genes were kept to be sensitive against environmental changes. This setting might seem biologically unrealistic, but we here focus on the evolution of responses against environmental changes and not on the nature of the steady-state gene expression pattern unlike previous studies (for example [25]). If we adopt constant selection for an arbitrary expression pattern, it will be difficult to distinguish the effect of the evolution of responses from that of the steady state. Thus, we adopt the present simplest settings, in which gene expression pattern is quite stable throughout evolution, and only responses can evolve.

Fig 2. Evolutionary process of gene regulatory networks.

Fig 2

(A, B) Adaptation dynamics of genes (xi(t)) of an individual with the highest fitness before (A: 0th generation) and after (B: 1000th generation) evolution. α was changed from 0 to 1 and from 1 to -1 at time 100 and 200, respectively. Black and gray lines indicate the time course of the core (NC = 10) and regulator (NR = 90) genes, respectively. (C) Changes in ΔXC from the 0th to 1000th generations and (D) the corresponding trajectory at the ΔXR–ΔXC plane. All of the trajectories start from the same point (ΔXC = ΔXR = ΔX0 ≃ 0.462). Different color lines indicate evolutionary trajectories with different NC/N: magenta for 0.1, red for 0.2, orange for 0.3, yellow for 0.4, lime for 0.5, green for 0.6, cyan for 0.7, blue for 0.8, purple for 0.9, and brown for 1.0. Gray dotted and dashed lines are given by Eq 5 for NC = 10 10 and 20, respectively.

In this study, we set N to 100 and the total number of individuals M to 300, unless otherwise noted. Initially, the elements in J take a value of 1 or -1 with a probability of plink set to 0.1, and take 0 with a probability of plink. We changed the fraction of the core genes to the whole genes, NC/N, from 0.05 to 1.0 and investigated the dependence of the behavior of evolved gene expression dynamics on NC/N. We repeated the simulation 100 times for each parameter set and plotted the average of those.

Results and discussion

For all NC values, the network structures evolved to decrease ΔXC (see Fig 2A and 2B as an example), whereas the final evolved state depended on NC (Fig 2C). When NC was sufficiently small, ΔXC reached a steady value in the early generations, which was close to zero; that is, the core genes showed perfect adaptation [26, 27]. In contrast, when NC was large, its steady-state value was larger than zero; that is, adaptation was only partial. This value increased with NC. The system showed a transition from perfect to partial adaptation at NC = NC*, which lies between 20 and 25. It is noteworthy that the relaxation was slowed down for NC/N = 0.2 to 0.6, in particular between NC/N = 0.2 and 0.3. In statistical physics, it is commonly observed that the relaxation of systems to the equilibrium is slowed down in the vicinity of the transition point. Then, the observed slowing down will be the sign of critical slowing down and provide evidence of a transition between perfect and partial adaptation regimes. Note that even when NC was equal to N (i.e., without the regulatory genes), ΔXC still decreased slightly throughout evolution; that is, the networks can show intrinsic robustness without regulators. We define this ΔXC value for the case of NC = N as ΔXint.

Interestingly, as ΔXC decreased during evolution, ΔXR increased almost monotonically in all cases (see Fig 2D). This result implies that under evolutionary selection, to increase the robustness of the expression of core genes, the plasticity in the expression of regulatory genes simultaneously increases. Here, the evolutionary trajectories in the space of ΔXC and ΔXR showed nearly linear behavior (Fig 2D). Evolution then stopped either when ΔXC reached approximately zero or when ΔXR increased and reached a certain threshold value, ΔXR* (≃ 0.471). Of note this threshold value depends on the stochasticity in gene expression dynamics. If there is no fluctuation, the steady state value of each xi is ϵ without environmental input, and 1 + ϵ under the input α with the same sign to hi. Because half of the genes have positive hi, and another half have a negative one, the threshold value would be estimated as 0.5 (= (1 + ϵϵ)2/2.0). However, because of fluctuation and a constraint to keep gene expression positive, the steady state value of xi without input will be higher than ϵ; xi can reach about 0.3 by fluctuation but is truncated at 0 at the bottom, as shown in Fig 2A and 2B, where we set ϵ as 0.05. Then, the noise in gene expression is asymmetric in the vicinity of xi = 0. Thus, the threshold value cannot reach 0.5 and will be slightly lower than 0.5. This suggests that there is an upper limit at which the regulator can buffer the changes in the core. If the buffering capacity is reached through evolution, the compensation by the regulators is not sufficient to allow for perfect adaptation of the core.

Here, values of ΔXC (evolved from 0.462 to 0 at most) and ΔXR (evolved from 0.462 to 0.473) were asymmetrical, which was due to the setting to make gene expression be zero without input and to be one only under sufficiently strong input. Since α1 was set to be larger than the threshold yth, half of the genes whose h1 had the same sign as α were strongly activated. Then, at the beginning of evolution, when each gene regulatory network was random, only some, but not many, genes were suppressed if inhibitory regulations were concentrated on them. We set α1 and yth to 1 and 0.3, respectively, and then if seven inhibitory interactions were concentrated, core genes would be suppressed. Those genes’ expression levels would be intermediate between 0 and 1. Indeed, in Fig 2A, before evolution, some genes showed intermediate expression level, whereas those of almost all activated genes were around 1. Thus, when the environmental input was sufficiently strong, there was an asymmetry between the numbers of fully activated genes (whose expression level is almost 1) and intermediately activated genes (whose expression level is less than 1). When systems evolved to make robust core genes, inhibition of a large number of fully activated genes mainly contributed to ΔXC. In contrast, activation of a small number of intermediately activated genes mainly contributed to ΔXR. Therefore, the asymmetry between ΔXC and ΔXR emerged.

Evolved networks have distinct structures. The number of inhibitory interactions to the core genes from both the core and regulator increased (Fig 3A and 3B). In particular, when NC was small, inhibitory interactions from the regulators prominently increased, whereas those from the core increased only slightly. By contrast, when NC was large, the number of inhibitory interactions from the core also increased significantly. This suggests that regulation from the regulator is a primary driving force of homeostasis for small NC, whereas for large NC (i.e., small NR), the core itself also functions in maintaining homeostasis. Indeed, even when all of the interactions from the regulators were removed from the evolved networks, ΔXC still decreased when NC was large (Fig 3E). ΔXcore started to decrease at around NC ≃ 25–30. In the perfect adaptation region, the core genes were perfectly suppressed by regulatory genes, whereas if the regulation from the regulatory genes was lacking, the core genes never showed adaptation (below NC ≃ 30). In contrast, in the partial adaptation region, the core genes regulated each other because the number of regulatory genes was insufficient. Then, these showed partial robustness without the regulation from the regulatory genes (above NC ≃ 30). In contrast, the number of interactions from the core or regulator to the regulator changed only slightly compared with that of the initial random network (Fig 3C and 3D).

Fig 3. Interactions between the core and regulator genes in evolved networks with varied NC.

Fig 3

(A–D) Difference of the linking probabilities between two nodes in the evolved networks from the default value plink. RN indicates the random network. Each graph shows the linking probabilities (A) from the regulator to the core, (B) from the core to the core, (C) from the regulator to the regulator, and (D) from the core to the regulator. Red and cyan bars represent the linking probability for activating and inhibitory interactions, respectively. (E) ΔX of the core without every interaction from the regulator. (F) Flipping probabilities of each node from the off to on state or from the on to off state after a change in the sign of hi. Each flipping probability is averaged for every node. Cyan circles and squares represent the flipping probabilities of nodes in the core and the regulator for a change in a node in the regulator, respectively. Red circles and squares represent these flipping probabilities for a change in a node in the core, respectively. The gray dotted line represents the flipping probability measured for the random network.

In the evolved networks, the propagation of perturbation also showed distinct changes from the random network. We analyzed how local perturbation to a gene propagates to the entire network; we changed the sign of hi for a single gene and then counted the number of genes that were flipped between the on and off states. As shown in the cyan and red circles in Fig 3F, the flipping probability of each gene in the core increased with the increase in NC, which reached the maximal level at around NC ≃ 30. This will be related to the transition. If NC increased, the contribution of each regulatory gene to repress genes in the core needed to be increased, and then perturbation of one regulatory gene had a great influence. However, if NC was further increased above the transition point, the mutual regulation within the core genes turned to be relatively stronger than the regulation from the regulatory genes, then the influence of a flip of one regulatory gene decreased. Thus, we expect that the influence of perturbation will show the peak around the transition point from perfect to partial adaptation.

Note that the number of links to the regulator did not change (Fig 3C and 3D). Nevertheless, the flipping probability of each gene in the regulator decreased throughout evolution (see the cyan and red squares in Fig 3F). This result indicates that the expression of each regulator gene behaves more independently than those in the random network, which could increase the plasticity in the regulator genes, as shown in Fig 2D.

Then, we analyzed the quantitative relationship between ΔXC and ΔXR in the evolutionary steady state. The total change in gene expression in the core, NCXC − ΔX0), and in the regulator, NRXR − ΔX0), where ΔX0 is ΔX of the random network, is plotted in Fig 4A. For NC < NC*, where perfect adaptation occurs, the following linear relationship was found:

NC(ΔXC-ΔX0)-aNR(ΔXR-ΔX0) (5)

with ΔXC ≃ 0 due to perfect adaptation, where a is a positive constant (a ≃ 14.3). In contrast, for large NC, only partial adaptation could be achieved, and ΔXC remained finite but was still smaller than ΔXint, the value for NR = 0 (i.e., the case without the regulator). The difference ΔXC − ΔXint (< 0) for NC is supported by the plasticity of the regulator; that is, the increment of ΔXR from the random case. Indeed, for large NC, we found the following linear relationship (see Fig 4B):

NC(ΔXC-ΔXint)-aNR(ΔXR-ΔX0). (6)

Fig 4. Relationships between robustness and plasticity.

Fig 4

(A, B) Total change in gene expression in the core plotted against that in the regulator. Averaged values of ΔXC and ΔXR through 100 generations from the 900th to 1000th generation are used as the steady-state value. The difference of ΔXC from ΔX0 and from ΔXint is plotted in (A) and (B), respectively. Green dotted lines are drawn to fit the points for NC > 30 in (B). Two lines pass through the origin and have the same slope for both (A) and (B). (C, D) Lever principle for the robustness-plasticity relationship.

Again, to achieve the decrease in ΔXC, ΔXR changes more following the linear rule, where a takes on the same value as shown in Eq 5.

Interestingly, the linear relationship in Eq 5 was maintained throughout the evolutionary course. The time course of (ΔXC, ΔXR) satisfied Eq 5 as long as NC < NC* (see gray dotted and dashed lines in Fig 2D). This indicates that the linear relationship imposed a constraint at any evolutionary time point. Note that, in the case of large NC, the evolutionary trajectory did not follow the linear relationship because the intrinsic robustness evolved; in Eq 6, ΔXC approaches ΔXint as NR → 0, whereas the evolutionary trajectory started from ΔX0. If the evolution of the regulations from the regulatory genes were much faster than the intrinsic robustness, the linear relationship would hold in the early stage. However, the timescale of evolution depends on NC; if NC is much larger than NR, the number of intra-connections among the core genes is much larger than that of interconnections between core and regulatory genes and they can change with higher probability by the mutation in each generation. Then, intra-connections will typically change faster than the interconnections and evolve faster. This will be why we cannot observe the clear linear relationship for large NC.

Therefore, we demonstrated linear relationships between robustness in the homeostatic core and plasticity in the regulator in evolved networks. Specifically, when the system shows higher robustness, it shows higher plasticity. If the fraction of the core is large, the homeostatic core will achieve only partial (i.e., not perfect) adaptation. Nevertheless, the linear relationship holds with the same proportion coefficient as in the perfect adaptation case.

Although the derivation of the linear relationships (Eqs 5 and 6) requires further study, an analogy with the lever principle may provide a more intuitive interpretation. For NC < NC*, all genes in the core show perfect adaptation and ΔXC approaches ∼0, for which the total plasticity in regulator genes NRXR − ΔX0) compensates for the original change in the core NC Δ X0 (Fig 4C). Then, if the number of plastic genes required to reach a balance exceeds NR, the plasticity of the regulator genes is not sufficient to cancel out changes in the core, and adaptation is only partial. In the latter scenario, the intrinsic robustness conferred by regulation from the core evolved (Fig 3E), so that “the weight” for compensation is deducted, whereas the action by the regulator is maintained (Fig 4D). Therefore, the linear relationship with the same coefficient also holds for the case of partial adaptation.

The coefficient a in the lever rule is estimated by noting that at the transition point from perfect to partial adaptation (NC = NC*, NR = NR*), the regulator genes are fully plastic, whereas ΔXC = 0 is maintained. Then,

a=-NC*NR*(0-ΔX0)(ΔXR*-ΔX0)

Noting that NC* ≃ 22, NR* ≃ 78 according to Fig 2, and recalling ΔXR* ≃ 0.471 and ΔX0 ≃ 0.462, a is estimated as a ≃ 14.3, which agrees well with the observed value.

Interestingly, the lever rule (Eq 5) is also valid for the evolutionary process. Consistency between evolutionary trajectories and the dependence of NC on the stationary state in Eq 5 indicates that evolutionary progress satisfies the balance between robustness and plasticity. Hence, the same macroscopic law governs both evolutionarily optimized states and their evolutionary trajectories.

Finally, we investigated the system-size dependence of the robustness by changing the total number of genes and numerically evolved the system (Fig 5). We found that the robustness of the core, ΔXC − ΔX0, was scaled by (NC/N)N3/4; if only the ratio of NC to N were the important control parameter, robustness should be scaled by (NC/N)N0, or if only the absolute number of the core genes were important, it should be scaled by (NC/N)N1. The actual scaling found numerically is intermediate between these two cases; the maximum core size that shows perfect adaptation increases with the total number of genes, but not in proportion to it, but with the power 3/4. This suggests that the balance between core and regulatory genes depends not simply on the number of genes.

Fig 5. System-size dependence of the robustness.

Fig 5

Dependence of ΔXC − ΔX0 on (A) NC/N and (B) (NC/N)N3/4 for systems with various numbers of genes.

The lever principle may impose a fundamental constraint on homeostasis. Previous analyses of gene expression changes in response to environmental stress revealed that the expression levels of some genes change transiently and then return to the original level, whereas those of others change continuously [22], corresponding to the core and regulator of our model, respectively. Interestingly, experimental data suggest that the total change in gene expression in the steady state is proportional or correlated to its transient change, which is similar to the reciprocity between robustness and plasticity according to the lever rule uncovered with our model. Further studies will be required to reveal how the lever rule emerges and if the rule can be generalized to other homeostatic behaviors in biology.

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This work was partially supported by the Japan Society for the Promotion of Science (JSPS) (https://www.jsps.go.jp/english/) KAKENHI (17H06386, 20H00123) to K.K., by JSPS KAKENHI (21K15048) to T.S.H., by Novo Nordisk Fonden (https://novonordiskfonden.dk/) to K.K. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: Review of "A linear reciprocal relationship between robustness and plasticity in homeostatic biological networks" by T. Hatakeyama and K. Kaneko, PLoS One D-22-14450.

The manuscript is a short report about the evolution of gene expression sensitivity to environmental disturbances in a theoretical gene network model. The authors simulated the evolution of a gene network when a set of genes, named "Core genes", were selected to be expressed at a constant rate whatever the environment. Another set of genes, the "Regulator genes", could evolve in order to help core genes to become stable. The authors shows that core genes were indeed able to evolve robustness, but this evolution was associated with a proportional increase in the sensitivity of regulator genes to the environment. The explanation proposed in the manuscript is that there is a global robustness-plasticity balance in the network, which can be distributed among core and regulatory genes.

As far as I can tell, the authors' results are original, the manuscript is clearly and carefully written (see below for a list of possible misunderstandings), and the conclusions are well-supported. On the down side, the paper is a short report, relatively technical, with little background, and virtually no discussion; it is thus up to the reader to replace the paper in the field, which limits the readership to a relatively small community, and makes it impossible for a non-specialist to assess the interest of the authors' results. As I recently happened to be interested in the very same question in similar theoretical gene network models, I found the results both interesting and insightful, but I am afraid that this opinion might be a bit confidential.

I have a major concern, and some detailed comments.

**** Major concern ****

1) The reference expression x^st(0) for the fitness function (2) conditions the optimal gene expression of the network, but I could not understand how it was determined. Was it computed from an arbitrary genotype at the beginning of the simulation, or was it recomputed for all genotypes? If the first option is true, then the authors need to make it much more explicit. The second option has some deep implications that need to be considered thoroughly. If selection only acts on the robustness of gene expression irrespective to the gene expression level, all non-plastic genotypes are equivalent. However, this will drive the evolution of gene expressions; because of the sigmoid scaling of the gene expression regulation (equation (1)), the sensitivity of the network to the environmental input depends directly on the distance between the sum of J_ij x_j and the threshold. If there is no selection on gene expression, evolution will proceed by maximizing or minimizing (probably minimizing) J_ij x_j to put it as far as possible from the threshold. As a consequence, a network where all core genes were off could be very robust. This could be an explanation for the pattern in fig 3A and 3B, as inhibiting interactions to core genes seem to largely dominate. Yet, I am not sure that a network that would stabilize its expression by shutting down all core genes would be biologically realistic. I assume the authors could track the evolution of average gene expression to ensure that the network is not progressively shutting down to ensure robustness. Constant selection for an arbitrary expression pattern (i.e., drawing randomly the optimal x for each gene at the beginning of the simulation) is also an option. Citing and discussing Siegal & Bergman 2002 (PNAS 99(16), 10528-10532) is probably relevant here.

**** Details ****

2) I am not sure that enough details are provided to reproduce the simulations. Some details of the numerical procedure were implicit, and it is probably better if the authors made them explicit. For instance, were numerical simulations repeated several times? They might be affected by a substantial amount of genetic drift, as the population size is rather small (M=300). How was the "steady state expression" obtained? Since the differential equations were stochastic (sigma^2 > 0 in equation (1)), expression never reach a perfect equilibrium (there is always a chance to switch genes on and off randomly), and some threshold was probably used. Such a steady state might not exist for large values of sigma^2, as the network may regularly switch between different equilibria when disturbed. Was reproduction clonal? Was the steady state recomputed in non-mutated offspring? (because of the expression stochasticity, clones might have a slightly different fitness).

As a side note, the authors indicated that "All data are within the manuscript and the Supporting Information files"; I might have missed them but I could not find the corresponding links (to the data and/or the computer code).

3) The first part of the results (lines 66 to 84) probably belong to the methods.

4) Fig 2A and 2B: what does the y axis (labelled "x") stand for? Is it x(i) (gene expression?) or DeltaX (as suggested in the text line 90?).

5) I was expecting that the authors discuss the fact that DeltaXc evolves a lot (-100% to -10% depending on Nc) while DeltaXr evolves on a very small scale (0.461 to 0.471, which is about 2%). If plotted on the same scale, the evolution of DeltaXr would be invisible in panel 2D. This asymmetry is not well-represented in fig 4; the drawing features similar weight differences for R genes vs C, while in reality it would be impossible to distinguish the weight difference for regulatory genes.

6) Line 161, the authors develop an interesting argument: the critical number of core genes is reached when there is not enough R genes to balance the evolution of plasticity. The idea that the ratio Nc/Nr rather than the absolute number of core genes Nc drives the evolution of plasticity is an interesting idea, but this idea could be directly checked by running simulations with a higher number of R genes while maintaining Nc constant. Alternatives include explanations based on genetic load and/or genetic drift (e.g. natural selection in small populations is not strong enough to force robustness on more than Nc genes). If this was true, then Nc should depend on M, not on Nr.

Signed: Arnaud Le Rouzic

Reviewer #2: Reviewer's report

Summary:

The authors conducted evolutional simulations for a model of gene regulatory networks, which consisted of the core genes and the regulatory genes. As a fitness, they required the homeostasis of the core genes. For the evolved networks, they found that the robustness (homeostasis) of the core genes and plasticity of the regulatory genes were reciprocally correlated. Thus, the robustness of the core genes is compensated by the plasticity of the regulatory genes. In case the ratio of core genes is higher than the threshold value, this compensation was incomplete. They also observed the lever principle held between these two.

I think these results are novel and interesting enough, and will induce future research both in computational and experimental biology. Thus, it is worth publishing in PLOS ONE, provided the following points are made clear.

Major

L.96

The authors write that there is a transition from the perfect adaptation to the partial adaptation, and the critical value of Nc lies between 20 and 25. However, I do not observe the transition in Fig.2C; the lines for Nc/N=0.2 to 0.6 do not reach steady-state within 1000 generations and thus it is difficult to distinguish whether the steady-state value gradually changes or there indeed is the transition. This point should be clarified, for example by presenting the steady-state values for Nc/N=0.2 to 0.6. Whether this transition point agrees with Nc/N that Delta_X_R reaches the threshold value before Delta_X_C reaches zero should be clarified (although written briefly in L.106).

L.106

The authors write that there is a threshold value near 0.471 and I notice there indeed is the threshold. Intuitively, this threshold value is a consequence of the stochasticity of evolution and depends on beta_evo. Do you think this intuition correct, or there is other reason for this threshold? The author should mention the meaning or origin of this threshold value at least qualitatively.

L.127

In Fig.3E, the value starts to decrease near Nc=30, and in Fig.3E, peaks are also near Nc=30. Is this a mere coincidence or do they have some common reason? Also, Nc=30 is close to the transition point mentioned before. Is this also a mere coincidence.

L.146

The authors write that the linear relationship was maintained throughout the evolutionary course for Nc<nc*. but="" fig.2d="" seeing="">Nc* until Delta_X_R reaches the threshold value without taking Delta_X_int into account. Do you think this expectation is correct? If so, the evolutional process is divided into two regimes for Nc>Nc*; in the early stage, the linear relationship holds, and in the late stage after Delta_X_R reaches the threshold value, the linear relationship should be modified to include the effect of Delta_X_int. I think this is natural because in the early stage of evolution the system does not know the existence of the threshold. I do not know if it is the case, but it is desirable to make some comments.

L.174

I think the statement "Thus, the lever principle imposes a fundamental constraint on homeostasis" is too strong. The results presented in this paper are important but still weak for drawing such a conclusion.

Minor

L.22 equivalent -> similar?

L.28 I feel that summary of this last paragraph of Introduction should be added in the abstract, because the results are only very briefly written in the abstract.

L.143 Fig.4C -> 4D?</nc*.>

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29 Aug 2022

Below we address the corrections suggested by the reviewers in a point-by-point manner. Note that the reviewers’ comments are noted with brackets, and the corrections are highlighted by red in the revised manuscript.

Reviewer #1:

[ The manuscript is a short report about the evolution of gene expression sensitivity to environmental disturbances in a theoretical gene network model. The authors simulated the evolution of a gene network when a set of genes, named "Core genes", were selected to be expressed at a constant rate whatever the environment. Another set of genes, the "Regulator genes", could evolve in order to help core genes to become stable. The authors shows that core genes were indeed able to evolve robustness, but this evolution was associated with a proportional increase in the sensitivity of regulator genes to the environment. The explanation proposed in the manuscript is that there is a global robustness-plasticity balance in the network, which can be distributed among core and regulatory genes.

As far as I can tell, the authors' results are original, the manuscript is clearly and carefully written (see below for a list of possible misunderstandings), and the conclusions are well-supported. On the down side, the paper is a short report, relatively technical, with little background, and virtually no discussion; it is thus up to the reader to replace the paper in the field, which limits the readership to a relatively small community, and makes it impossible for a non-specialist to assess the interest of the authors' results. As I recently happened to be interested in the very same question in similar theoretical gene network models, I found the results both interesting and insightful, but I am afraid that this opinion might be a bit confidential.

I have a major concern, and some detailed comments. ]

Thank you for your positive evaluation and constructive suggestions.

[ **** Major concern ****

1) The reference expression x^st(0) for the fitness function (2) conditions the optimal gene expression of the network, but I could not understand how it was determined. Was it computed from an arbitrary genotype at the beginning of the simulation, or was it recomputed for all genotypes? If the first option is true, then the authors need to make it much more explicit. The second option has some deep implications that need to be considered thoroughly. If selection only acts on the robustness of gene expression irrespective to the gene expression level, all non-plastic genotypes are equivalent. However, this will drive the evolution of gene expressions; because of the sigmoid scaling of the gene expression regulation (equation (1)), the sensitivity of the network to the environmental input depends directly on the distance between the sum of J_ij x_j and the threshold. If there is no selection on gene expression, evolution will proceed by maximizing or minimizing (probably minimizing) J_ij x_j to put it as far as possible from the threshold. As a consequence, a network where all core genes were off could be very robust. This could be an explanation for the pattern in fig 3A and 3B, as inhibiting interactions to core genes seem to largely dominate. Yet, I am not sure that a network that would stabilize its expression by shutting down all core genes would be biologically realistic. I assume the authors could track the evolution of average gene expression to ensure that the network is not progressively shutting down to ensure robustness. Constant selection for an arbitrary expression pattern (i.e., drawing randomly the optimal x for each gene at the beginning of the simulation) is also an option. Citing and discussing Siegal & Bergman 2002 (PNAS 99(16), 10528-10532) is probably relevant here. ]

First and foremost, we computed the x^st(0) for each genotype at each generation. This approach might give worry, as you point out, that the initial gene expression itself might have changed so that the expression patterns are less and less sensitive to environmental changes. This is not the case: we set ε and the standard deviation of η much smaller than the threshold (ε = 0.05, σ^2 = 0.01, and y_th = 0.3). When α is zero, i.e., there is no input, all genes are activated only by the noise given by η and spontaneous induction given by ε, so that they fluctuate around x = ε. Then, all genes are normally turned off almost independently of J_ij; since ε / sqrt(N) is 0.005, inputs from 60 genes (60% of the total genes) would have to concentrate on a given gene to exceed the threshold and to turn on a gene constantly without α. Such concentration hardly occurs due to the sparseness of networks (p_link is set to 0.1). Hence, the average gene expression without input did not change through an evolutionary process, and all genes were kept to be off initially. In addition, since the threshold value was fixed, the sensitivity of genes against environmental changes was kept constant. Indeed, in Figs. 2A (before evolution) and 2B (after evolution), gene expression levels fluctuated around ε without input (time = 0 – 100), and those of the core transiently increased in response to changes in α (at time = 100 and 200), indicating that those genes were kept to be sensitive against environmental changes.

This setting might seem biologically unrealistic, but we here focus on the evolution of response against environmental changes and not on the nature of the steady-state gene expression pattern. If we adopt constant selection for an arbitrary expression pattern, it will be difficult to distinguish the effect of the evolution of response from that of the steady state. Thus, we adopt the present simplest settings, in which gene expression pattern is quite stable throughout evolution, and only response can evolve. If we evolve the environmental response from any given stable expression pattern to be robust, inhibiting interactions to core genes will increase so as to suppress a difference of gene expressions from its steady-state level. Then, the pattern in Figs. 3A and 3B will not be due to our setting but will be universal.

We added a detailed explanation of this point in lines 83 and 97.

[ **** Details ****

2) I am not sure that enough details are provided to reproduce the simulations. Some details of the numerical procedure were implicit, and it is probably better if the authors made them explicit. For instance, were numerical simulations repeated several times? They might be affected by a substantial amount of genetic drift, as the population size is rather small (M=300). How was the "steady state expression" obtained? Since the differential equations were stochastic (sigma^2 > 0 in equation (1)), expression never reach a perfect equilibrium (there is always a chance to switch genes on and off randomly), and some threshold was probably used. Such a steady state might not exist for large values of sigma^2, as the network may regularly switch between different equilibria when disturbed. Was reproduction clonal? Was the steady state recomputed in non-mutated offspring? (because of the expression stochasticity, clones might have a slightly different fitness).

As a side note, the authors indicated that "All data are within the manuscript and the Supporting Information files"; I might have missed them but I could not find the corresponding links (to the data and/or the computer code). ]

We repeated the simulation 100 times for each parameter set and plotted the average of those.

Gene expression fluctuated only around the fixed point, as you can see in Figs. 2A and 2B, and switching between on and off hardly occurred due to relatively small noise (σ^2 = 0.01). Then, with a sufficient number of samples, the fluctuation effect should disappear, and thus we can observe the steady state. We computed the steady state by averaging between time = 90 and 100; since we set the time step as 0.01, and then we averaged 1,000 time steps, which will be sufficient to observe the steady-state value.

We set the reproduction as clonal and not sexual, but the mutation was added to J_ij in each generation.

We added a detailed explanation of the above points in lines 124, 83, and 91.

Further, we added the data.

[ 3) The first part of the results (lines 66 to 84) probably belong to the methods. ]

We reconstructed the manuscript according to your suggestion.

[ 4) Fig 2A and 2B: what does the y axis (labelled "x") stand for? Is it x(i) (gene expression?) or DeltaX (as suggested in the text line 90?). ]

The y axis represents x(i) as the gene expression (x_i(t)). We added explanation to a legend of the figure.

[ 5) I was expecting that the authors discuss the fact that DeltaXc evolves a lot (-100% to -10% depending on Nc) while DeltaXr evolves on a very small scale (0.461 to 0.471, which is about 2%). If plotted on the same scale, the evolution of DeltaXr would be invisible in panel 2D. This asymmetry is not well-represented in fig 4; the drawing features similar weight differences for R genes vs C, while in reality it would be impossible to distinguish the weight difference for regulatory genes. ]

The asymmetry between ΔXc and ΔXr was due to the setting to make gene expression be zero without input and to be one only under sufficiently strong input. Here, since α_1 was set to be larger than the threshold y_th, half of the genes whose h_i had the same sign as α were strongly activated. Then, at the beginning of evolution, when each gene regulatory network was random, only some, but not many, genes were suppressed if inhibitory regulations were concentrated on them. Here, we set α_1 and y_th to 1 and 0.3, respectively, and then only if more than seven inhibitory interactions were concentrated, core genes would be suppressed. Those genes’ expression levels would be intermediate between 0 and 1. Indeed, in Fig. 2A, before evolution, some genes showed intermediate expression level, whereas those of almost all activated genes were around 1. Thus, when the environmental input was sufficiently strong, there was an asymmetry between the numbers of fully activated genes (whose expression level is almost 1) and intermediately activated genes (whose expression level is less than 1). When systems evolved to make robust core genes, inhibition of a large number of fully activated genes mainly contributed to ΔXc. In contrast, activation of the small number of intermediately activated genes mainly contributed to ΔXr. Therefore, the asymmetry between ΔXc and ΔXr emerged.

We added the above explanation in line 163.

[ 6) Line 161, the authors develop an interesting argument: the critical number of core genes is reached when there is not enough R genes to balance the evolution of plasticity. The idea that the ratio Nc/Nr rather than the absolute number of core genes Nc drives the evolution of plasticity is an interesting idea, but this idea could be directly checked by running simulations with a higher number of R genes while maintaining Nc constant. Alternatives include explanations based on genetic load and/or genetic drift (e.g. natural selection in small populations is not strong enough to force robustness on more than Nc genes). If this was true, then Nc should depend on M, not on Nr. ]

To investigate whether the ratio Nc/Nr or the absolute number of core genes Nc determines behaviors of the system, we altered the total number of genes and numerically evolved the system. Then, we found that robustness was scaled by (Nc/N)N^3/4; if only the ratio is the important control parameter, robustness should be scaled by (Nc/N)N^0, or if only the absolute number is important, it should be scaled by (Nc/N)N^1. Then, the actual scaling was intermediate between these two cases. This suggests that the balance between core and regulatory genes depends not simply on the number of genes.

We added the results (Fig. 5) and noted this point in line 262.

Reviewer #2:

[ Summary:

The authors conducted evolutional simulations for a model of gene regulatory networks, which consisted of the core genes and the regulatory genes. As a fitness, they required the homeostasis of the core genes. For the evolved networks, they found that the robustness (homeostasis) of the core genes and plasticity of the regulatory genes were reciprocally correlated. Thus, the robustness of the core genes is compensated by the plasticity of the regulatory genes. In case the ratio of core genes is higher than the threshold value, this compensation was incomplete. They also observed the lever principle held between these two.

I think these results are novel and interesting enough, and will induce future research both in computational and experimental biology. Thus, it is worth publishing in PLOS ONE, provided the following points are made clear. ]

Thank you for your positive evaluation and constructive comments.

[ Major

L.96

The authors write that there is a transition from the perfect adaptation to the partial adaptation, and the critical value of Nc lies between 20 and 25. However, I do not observe the transition in Fig.2C; the lines for Nc/N=0.2 to 0.6 do not reach steady-state within 1000 generations and thus it is difficult to distinguish whether the steady-state value gradually changes or there indeed is the transition. This point should be clarified, for example by presenting the steady-state values for Nc/N=0.2 to 0.6. Whether this transition point agrees with Nc/N that Delta_X_R reaches the threshold value before Delta_X_C reaches zero should be clarified (although written briefly in L.106). ]

Thank you for raising an important point that the relaxation was slowed down for Nc/N=0.2 to 0.6, in particular between Nc/N=0.2 and 0.3. In statistical physics, it is commonly observed that the relaxation of systems to the equilibrium is slowed down in the vicinity of the transition point. We considered that slowing down, you pointed out, is the critical slowing down and can be evidence of a transition between perfect and partial adaptation regimes. Since it will take a very long time to relax to the steady state in the vicinity of the transition point, it will be difficult to clarify the actual transition point numerically. However, it is clear from Fig. 2D that ΔX^C will reach zero in the extension of the evolutionary trajectory for Nc/N=0.2, whereas ΔX^C will never reach zero for Nc/N=0.3. Thus, it would be clear that the transition point lies between Nc/N=0.2 and 0.3, even though the relaxation to the steady state was not complete.

We clearly describe this point in the revised text in line 133.

[ L.106

The authors write that there is a threshold value near 0.471 and I notice there indeed is the threshold. Intuitively, this threshold value is a consequence of the stochasticity of evolution and depends on beta_evo. Do you think this intuition correct, or there is other reason for this threshold? The author should mention the meaning or origin of this threshold value at least qualitatively. ]

We consider that the threshold value will depend little on beta_evo and strongly on the detail of the dynamics. Here, the threshold value depends on the stochastic dynamics of gene expression; if there is no fluctuation, the steady state value of each x is ε without environmental input, and 1 + ε under the input α with the same sign to h_i. Because half of the genes have positive h_i, and another half have a negative one, the threshold value will be estimated as 0.5 (= (1 + ε - ε)^2 / 2.0). However, because of fluctuation and a constraint to keep gene expression positive, the steady state value of x without input would be higher than ε; x reached about 0.3 by fluctuation but was truncated at 0 at the bottom, as shown in Figs. 2A and 2B, while we set ε as 0.05. Then, the noise in gene expression was asymmetrical in the vicinity of x = 0. Thus, the threshold value cannot reach 0.5 and will be slightly lower than 0.5.

We added an explanation of this point in line 149.

[ L.127

In Fig.3E, the value starts to decrease near Nc=30, and in Fig.3E, peaks are also near Nc=30. Is this a mere coincidence or do they have some common reason? Also, Nc=30 is close to the transition point mentioned before. Is this also a mere coincidence. ]

As mentioned above, the transition point from perfect to partial adaptation was in the vicinity of Nc=30, and the characteristics you pointed out will be deeply related to the transition. In the perfect adaptation region, the core genes were perfectly inhibited by regulatory genes, and if the regulation from the regulatory genes was lacking, the core genes never showed adaptation (below Nc = 30 in Fig. 3E). At the same time, if Nc increased, the contribution of each regulatory gene to repress core genes increased, and then flipping the expression of one regulatory gene had a great influence (Fig. 3F). In contrast, in the partial adaptation region, the core genes regulated each other because the number of regulatory genes was insufficient. Then, these showed partial robustness without the regulation from the regulatory genes (above Nc = 30 in Fig. 3E). Moreover, if Nc increased in the partial adaptation region, the mutual regulation within the core genes became relatively stronger than the regulation from the regulatory genes, then the influence of a flip of one regulatory gene decreased. Thus, we expect that the influence of flipping the expression of one regulatory gene will show the peak around the transition point from perfect to partial adaptation.

We added an explanation on this point in lines 189 and 204.

[ L.146

The authors write that the linear relationship was maintained throughout the evolutionary course for NcNc* until Delta_X_R reaches the threshold value without taking Delta_X_int into account. Do you think this expectation is correct? If so, the evolutional process is divided into two regimes for Nc>Nc*; in the early stage, the linear relationship holds, and in the late stage after Delta_X_R reaches the threshold value, the linear relationship should be modified to include the effect of Delta_X_int. I think this is natural because in the early stage of evolution the system does not know the existence of the threshold. I do not know if it is the case, but it is desirable to make some comments. ]

For Nc < Nc*, as you expected, evolution of the regulation from the regulatory to core genes was sufficiently fast, and the linear relationship was observed until Delta_X_R reaches the threshold value. However, for Nc > Nc*, evolution of intra-connections among the core genes was also fast and it was difficult to observe the clear linear relationship. If the evolution of the regulations from the regulatory genes were much faster than the intra-connections among the core genes, the linear relationship would hold in the early stage, as you described. However, the timescale of evolution depends on Nc; if Nc is much larger than Nr, the number of intra-connections among the core genes is much larger than that of interconnections between core and regulatory genes. Here, the intra-connections can change with higher probability by the mutation in each generation. Then, intra-connections will typically change faster than the interconnections and evolve faster. Then, we cannot observe the clear linear relationship for Nc > Nc*.

We added a comment on this point in the footnote.

[ L.174

I think the statement "Thus, the lever principle imposes a fundamental constraint on homeostasis" is too strong. The results presented in this paper are important but still weak for drawing such a conclusion. ]

We toned down the conclusion.

[ Minor

L.22 equivalent -> similar? ]

We revised the expression according to your suggestion.

[ L.28 I feel that summary of this last paragraph of Introduction should be added in the abstract, because the results are only very briefly written in the abstract. ]

We added some sentences in the indicated paragraph to the abstract.

[ L.143 Fig.4C -> 4D? ]

We corrected the typo.

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Reviewer #1: Review of "A linear reciprocal relationship between robustness and plasticity in homeostatic biological networks" by T.S. Hatakeyama and K. Kaneko, PONE-D-22-14450R1.

This is the revision of a manuscript I reviewed a few months ago (PONE-D-22-14450). The scientific content of the manuscript was sound, and in spite of a rather technical content, I found it suitable for publication in PLoS ONE. I had a major concern and a few comments, each having being addressed in the response to the reviewers, and in the text of the paper. The most significant changes were in the abstract (which as mostly rewritten), in the methods (many of the reviewers' comments were related to the methods), and in the results/discussion, with additional explanations provided in 6 paragraphs, as well as an additional figure (new figure 5). This revision is substantially longer than the original version (~ 2 pages), and has the same pros (scientifically sound) and cons (probably accessible to specialists only) than the first submission. Most of the changes in the manuscript are verbatim copies of the responses to the reviewers, which is not problematic per se (although it does not help to make the manuscript more accessible). Note that data/software sharing is minimal, and (in my opinion) does not match at all PLOS transparency guidelines.

About my comment #1 (what the optimal gene expression fixed at the beginning of the simulations), the authors now make it clear how the optimal expression was determined. Although I may not necessarily agree with the modeling choice (which implies that the network is completely shut down when the environmental signal is at zero), the authors now discuss the consequences of this model setting, and cite the paper by Siegal & Bergman about the relationship between stabilizing selection for an optimum and selection for network stability, which is probably more than enough to inform the reader about potential pitfalls.

About my comment #2 (not enough details to reproduce the simulations): the authors have expanded the model description, and it is probably easier now to re-implement the model. Note that the author's statement about data availability states that "data are fully available without restriction", which I find misleading: the authors have provided only summary statistics (basically, the location of the points on the figures). As far as I can tell, there is nothing available about the simulation code (the implementation of the model), nothing about the analysis code (how data was extracted from the simulation output, how summary statistics were computed from the 100 replicates, etc). This is as far to "open science" as possible, and, as far as I can tell, contradicts directly PLoS One policies about data sharing (https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability) and software sharing (https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/materials-software-and-code-sharing).

My comment #3 (structure of the manuscript) has been fully addressed.

My comment #4 has been addressed (in the caption of the figure, not in the figure itself, not a big deal).

My comment #5 (range of evolution for DeltaX) is now addressed in the manuscript.

My comment #6 has been addressed in a very satisfactory way, with a new figure and more insightful results.

In the text: line 91, "We set the asexual reproduction" sounds awkward (perhaps "Reproduction was asexual"?).

Signed: Arnaud Le Rouzic

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Arnaud Le Rouzic

Reviewer #2: No

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PLoS One. 2023 Jan 26;18(1):e0277181. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0277181.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


20 Oct 2022

Below we address the corrections suggested by the reviewers in a point-by-point manner. Note that the reviewers’ comments are noted with brackets, and the corrections are highlighted by red in the revised manuscript.

Reviewer #1:

[ This is the revision of a manuscript I reviewed a few months ago (PONE-D-22-14450). The scientific content of the manuscript was sound, and in spite of a rather technical content, I found it suitable for publication in PLoS ONE. I had a major concern and a few comments, each having being addressed in the response to the reviewers, and in the text of the paper. The most significant changes were in the abstract (which as mostly rewritten), in the methods (many of the reviewers' comments were related to the methods), and in the results/discussion, with additional explanations provided in 6 paragraphs, as well as an additional figure (new figure 5). This revision is substantially longer than the original version (~ 2 pages), and has the same pros (scientifically sound) and cons (probably accessible to specialists only) than the first submission. Most of the changes in the manuscript are verbatim copies of the responses to the reviewers, which is not problematic per se (although it does not help to make the manuscript more accessible). Note that data/software sharing is minimal, and (in my opinion) does not match at all PLOS transparency guidelines. ]

Thank you for your comments.

As you pointed out, it is harder for non-specialist to access our revised manuscript than the first submitted version. Thus, we moved some sentences to the reference list (as a footnote) to improve the readability.

[ About my comment #1 (what the optimal gene expression fixed at the beginning of the simulations), the authors now make it clear how the optimal expression was determined. Although I may not necessarily agree with the modeling choice (which implies that the network is completely shut down when the environmental signal is at zero), the authors now discuss the consequences of this model setting, and cite the paper by Siegal & Bergman about the relationship between stabilizing selection for an optimum and selection for network stability, which is probably more than enough to inform the reader about potential pitfalls. ]

Thank you for your positive evaluation.

[ About my comment #2 (not enough details to reproduce the simulations): the authors have expanded the model description, and it is probably easier now to re-implement the model. Note that the author's statement about data availability states that "data are fully available without restriction", which I find misleading: the authors have provided only summary statistics (basically, the location of the points on the figures). As far as I can tell, there is nothing available about the simulation code (the implementation of the model), nothing about the analysis code (how data was extracted from the simulation output, how summary statistics were computed from the 100 replicates, etc). This is as far to "open science" as possible, and, as far as I can tell, contradicts directly PLoS One policies about data sharing (https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability) and software sharing (https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/materials-software-and-code-sharing). ]

Since the total number of files is huge (100 files for each point in each figure), we uploaded the averaged data as samples in the last time. In the revised manuscript, we uploaded the codes for Fig. 2AB, for Figs. 2CD, 4, and 5, for Fig. 3ABCD, for Fig. 3E, and for Fig, 3F, to assure the reproducibility.

[ My comment #3 (structure of the manuscript) has been fully addressed.

My comment #4 has been addressed (in the caption of the figure, not in the figure itself, not a big deal).

My comment #5 (range of evolution for DeltaX) is now addressed in the manuscript.

My comment #6 has been addressed in a very satisfactory way, with a new figure and more insightful results. ]

Thank you for your positive comments.

[ In the text: line 91, "We set the asexual reproduction" sounds awkward (perhaps "Reproduction was asexual"?). ]

We have corrected the sentence.

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Decision Letter 2

Claus Kadelka

24 Oct 2022

A Linear Reciprocal Relationship Between Robustness and Plasticity in Homeostatic Biological Networks

PONE-D-22-14450R2

Dear Dr. Hatakeyama,

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