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. 2021 Jan 12;16(1):e0240677. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0240677

Undernutrition and its determinants among adolescent girls in low land area of Southern Ethiopia

Yoseph Halala Handiso 1,2,*,#, Tefera Belachew 3,#, Cherinet Abuye 4,#, Abdulhalik Workicho 5,#, Kaleab Baye 2,#
Editor: Eugene Kofuor Maafo Darteh6
PMCID: PMC7802945  PMID: 33434212

Abstract

Background

Undernutrition is one of the most common causes of morbidity and mortality among adolescent girls worldwide, especially in South-East Asia and Africa. Even though adolescence is a window of opportunity to break the intergenerational cycle of undernutrition, adolescent girls are a neglected group. The objective of this study was to assess the nutritional status and associated factors among adolescent girls in the Wolaita and Hadiya zones of Southern Ethiopia.

Methods

A community-based cross-sectional study was conducted, and a multistage random sampling method was used to select a sample of 843 adolescent girls. Anthropometric measurements were collected from all participants and entered in the WHO Anthro plus software for Z-score analysis. The data was analyzed using EPI-data 4.4.2 and SPSS version 21.0. The odds ratios for logistic regression along with a 95% confidence interval (CI) were generated. A P-value < 0.05 was declared as the level of statistical significance.

Result

Thinness (27.5%) and stunting (8.8%) are found to be public health problems in the study area. Age [AOR(adjusted odds ratio) (95% CI) = 2.91 (2.03–4.173)], large family size [AOR (95% CI) = 1.63(1.105–2.396)], low monthly income [AOR (95% CI) = 2.54(1.66–3.87)], not taking deworming tablets [AOR (95% CI) = 1.56(1.11–21)], low educational status of the father [AOR (95% CI) = 2.45(1.02–5.86)], the source of food for the family only from market [AOR (95% CI) = 5.14(2.1–12.8)], not visited by health extension workers [AOR (95% CI) = 1.72(1.7–2.4)], and not washing hand with soap before eating and after using the toilet [AOR (95% CI) = 2.25(1.079–4.675)] were positively associated with poor nutritional status of adolescent girls in the Wolaita and Hadiya zones, Southern Ethiopia.

Conclusion

Thinness and stunting were found to be high in the study area. Age, family size, monthly household income, regularly skipping meals, fathers’ educational status, visits by health extension workers, and nutrition services decision-making are the main predictors of thinness. Hand washing practice, visits by health extension workers, and nutrition services decision-making are the main predictors of stunting among adolescent girls. Multisectoral community-based, adolescent health and nutrition programs should be implemented.

Background

Adolescence is defined by WHO as the age range from 10–19 years, and it is a period of transition from childhood to adulthood [1]. The adolescent age group comprises 20% of the global population [2]. Malnutrition, particularly undernutrition, is highly prevalent among adolescents in low and middle-income countries [3, 4]. Nutrition status among adolescents is an important determinant of health outcomes; undernutrition affects the health status of adolescent girls. In addition to causing significant mortality, it creates long lasting effects on the growth, development, and physical fitness of survivors [5]. This, in turn, affects their ability to learn and work at maximal productivity [6]. Undernutrition is an indicator of poor nutrition and has major consequences on human health as well as the social and economic development of the population [7]. Physical growth and development during puberty increase requirements for energy, protein, and many vitamins and minerals, and deficiencies can lead to physiological, anatomical, and functional disturbances [8].

The nutritional status of adolescent girls can have intergenerational effects because adolescent girls with poor nutritional status are more likely to give birth to low birth weight infants [8, 9]. Focus on adolescent girls is important because their health and nutritional status before as well as during pregnancy influences fetal growth and newborn health. Adolescent girls’ health and undernutrition is an important determinant of adverse fetal outcomes, including low birth weight, preterm births, stillbirths, and an increased risk of neonatal mortality [10]. Therefore, adequate nutrition is key; it is associated with a better quality of life and has many intergeneration benefits[11].

Most causes of malnutrition are related to poor care, poor economic status, and food insecurity; however, malnutrition can sometimes be inherited genetically [12]. Presence of malaria infections, cigarette smoking, alcohol and drug use, environmental pollution, and domestic violence are predictors of undernutrition [13]. Similarly, age of adolescent girls, occupation of father [14, 15], poor dietary diversity score, meal skipping, not getting nutrition information, living in food in-secured households [16, 17], eating less than 3 meals per day, having family size >5, source of drinking water, monthly income were predictors of under nutrition among adolescent girls [1822].

In regions of South-East Asia and Africa, a large number of adolescent girls suffer from chronic undernutrition, which adversely impacts their own health and development, as well as that of their offspring, contributing to an intergenerational cycle of malnutrition [23, 24]. More than 10% of girls were underweight in Mauritius, Bangladesh, Maldives, Cambodia, and Vietnam [25]. Body mass index of adolescent girls were less than 20 in South Asia, Southeast Asia, East Africa, West Africa, and Central Africa [26]. A study from northern Ethiopia reported high levels of stunting (26.5%) and thinness (58.3%) among adolescents [27].

Even though the sustainable development goals (SDGs) include an adolescent nutrition service which is addressing adolescent malnutrition, the nutritional status of adolescent girls is not improving [28]. The government of Ethiopia officially launched the National Nutrition Program (NNP) in 2009, which aimed to reduce malnutrition in Ethiopia by integrating adolescents’ nutrition into community-based health and development programs but faced many challenges. The Ethiopian NNP II (2016–2020) incorporated initiatives to improve the nutritional status of adolescent girls, but these interventions are not effective [29, 30]. However, these studies were conducted among school adolescent girls. Thus, the results of these studies cannot be generalized to the whole adolescent girls. In addition to this, there are no community based studies conducted in Southern Ethiopia among adolescent girls. Therefore, understanding nutritional status and its associated factors are critical to timely address malnutrition in this age group.

Materials and methods

Study area

The study was conducted in the Wolaita and Hadiya zones of Southern Ethiopia. These zones are predominantly dependent on agriculture, practicing mixed crop-livestock production and living in permanent settlements. Within their landholdings, community members cultivate fruits, vegetables, roots, and tuber crops.

Fig 1 shows Map of the study sites (Wolaita and Hadiya zones) in southern nation nationality and peoples region (SNNPR), 2019. A community-based cross-sectional study was conducted at two zones in Southern Ethiopia from April 30, 2019 to May 30, 2019. The inclusion criteria were adolescent girls (both attending and not attending school) between the ages of 10–19 years in two Southern Ethiopian zones. Participants who met the inclusion criteria were randomly selected to be the study population. BMI-for-age Body mass index for age z-score and height-for-age z-score were the dependent variables. Age, educational status of the participant, family size, maternal and paternal educational level, access to nutritional counseling services in health facilities, deworming tablets, iron-folic acid supplementation, household monthly income, source of food, and number of meals per day were the independent variables for our study.

Fig 1. Map of the study sites (Wolaita and Hadiya zones) in southern nation nationality and peoples region.

Fig 1

Sample size determination

A single population proportion formula, [n = z22P (1-P) /d2] was used to estimate the sample size. From the literature review, the prevalence of thinness (24.4%) and stunting (29.4%) were used for sample size calculations. Sample size calculation by using thinness (24.4%) was n = (Z α/2)2*p (1-p)/d2 = 748 and sample size calculation by using stunting (29.4%) was n = n = (Z α/2)2*p (1-p)/d2 = 843. So that for this study, stunting (29.4%) was selected to estimate the sample size as it gives a larger sample; considering a 95% confidence interval (CI) and d = 0.05%, the initial sample size was 383. By adding 10% for non-response and a design effect of 2.4, the final sample size was 843. n = (Z α/2)2*p (1-p) DE /d2. Where: Z = Standard normal distribution value at 95% CI = (1.96)2, DE = design effect, and d = 0.05 (5% margin of error).

Sampling procedures

This study used multistage sampling techniques and was conducted in the Wolaita and Hadiya zones. From these two selected zones, two districts were selected based on a simple random sampling procedure, the Humbo district from Wolaita zone and the Misrak Badawacho district from the Hadiya zone. Three kebeles (villages) were selected from each district using a simple random sampling method. A listing of adolescent girls was conducted at these selected kebeles. This listing was developed with the help of both the local government administration, woreda in particular, and health extension workers. During the development of the list, if there were more than one adolescent girl in a household, one adolescent girl was selected by simple random sampling (lottery method). From the selected six kebeles, 843 participants were chosen by simple random sampling method depending on the number of adolescent girls in each kebele. Participants were drawn from each kebele based on probability proportional to size (PPS) sampling techniques. The sampling techniques depended on the number of adolescent girls in each kebele. Adolescent girls with pregnancy, physical and mental disability were excluded from the study.

Data collection

Anthropometric measurements

Anthropometrics (i.e., height and weight) were measured on all sampled adolescent girls. Weight was measured to the nearest 100 g using a standard SECA digital scale while the participants wore light clothing and no shoes. The scale was calibrated after weighing each participant. Height was measured in a standing position to the nearest 0.1 cm using a vertical board with a detachable sliding headpiece. Measuring tape was attached to it. BMI-for- age z-scores and height-for-age z-scores were calculated using the height, weight, and age of the participants. WHO Anthro plus software was used to calculate Z-score.

A structured interviewer-administered questionnaire was used to collect data. The questionnaire was developed based on a thorough review of the current literature [3134]. A total of eight nurses with B.Sc. degrees; previous experience in collecting data; and knowledge of the culture, language, and norms of the community were employed to collect data using a pretested structured questionnaire. In addition to this, two supervisors with M.Sc. in public health were employed to supervise the data collection process. Data were collected on weekends for adolescent girls who attended school during the weekdays. The principal investigator controlled the daily overall study activities.

Statistical analysis

First, the data were checked for completeness and consistency for data entry and cleaning. Then, data were entered into the computer using EPI-data version 4.4.2 and exported to SPSS version 21.0 for further analysis. Descriptive statistics such as frequencies, proportions, and cross-tabulation were used to present the data. In addition, bivariate logistic regression analysis was performed to assess the association between independent and dependent variables. Variables that showed an association (p-value ≤ 0.25) in the bivariate analysis were included in the final multivariate logistic regression model. Odds ratios for logistic regression along with a 95% CI were estimated. A p-value less than 0.05 was declared statistically significant.

Data quality assurance

The questionnaire was prepared in English, translated to Amharic, and back translation to English to maintain consistency of the questions. Data collectors and supervisors were trained for 4 days to properly fill out the questionnaire and measure anthropometry. Data collectors were selected from each zone so they could communicate fluently in the local language and understand the socio-cultural practices of the community. The questionnaire was pre-tested on 5% adolescent girls in a similar area to the study sites to ensure reliability. Feedbacks from the pre-test were incorporated into the final questionnaire design. Principal investigator and supervisors performed checks on the spot and reviewed all the completed questionnaires to ensure completeness and consistency of the information collected.

Standardization of anthropometric measurements was conducted. To standardize anthropometric measurements, during training an expert took two heights and weight measurements for ten adolescent girls and then let each data collector take the measurements for all ten girls twice. Then, the averages of the two measurements for each adolescent girl taken by the data collector were compared with the average of the expert’s measurements. The technical error of measurement (TEM) and coefficient of variance (CV) were computed for all data collectors using Emergency Nutrition Assessment (ENA) for SMART software. Data collators with unacceptable TEM and CV were asked to repeat the steps again.

Ethical considerations

The study was approved by Addis Ababa University (AAU), College of Natural Sciences Research Ethics Review Committee. The official letter of cooperation was written to the Wolaita and Hadiya zones, and the district of health offices. The nature of the study was fully explained to the study participants and parents/guardians. Informed verbal and written consents were obtained from the parents/guardians for adolescent girls aged < 18 years old and assent was obtained from the participant before the interview. Participants ≥ 18 years aged were asked to provide verbal and written consent. The collected data were kept confidential. Each participant was given a code number, and the data were stored in a secure and password-protected database.

Results

Socio-demographic characteristics of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia

Eight hundred and twenty adolescent girls participated with a response rate of 97.3%.

As shown in Table 1, the mean age of the study participants was 14.6 (±1.9) years, the mean family size was 6.56 (±1.83) persons, while 69.3% of the households had ≥ 5 family members and 30.7% had < 5 family members. Most of the study participants (93.3%) were in grades 1–8 and only 0.2% had college and University education. Most of the study participants were Protestant (65.0%), but 34.3% were Orthodox Christian, and only 0.7% were Muslims. About one third (33.4%) of the study participants were from households that have less than 1000 ETB(31.25 USD) monthly income and 30.3% are from households that have greater than 2000 ETB (62.5USD) monthly income.

Table 1. Socio-demographic characteristics of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia, 2019.

Variables Frequency(n) Percent (%)
Age 10–14 393 47.9
15–19 427 52.1
Median age 14.6 ±1.9 years
Educational status No formal education 4 0.5
1–8 grade 765 93.3
9–12 grade 49 6.0
College and University 2 0.2
Religion Orthodox 281 34.3
Protestant 533 65.0
Muslim 6 0.7
Family size <5 family members 252 30.7
≥5 family members 568 69.3
Median family size 6.56 ±1.83
Monthly household income < 1000 ETB (31.25 USD) 274 33.4
1000 ETB(31.25 USD)– 2000 ETB (62.5USD) 298 36.3
> 2000 ETB (62.5USD) 248 30.3

Source: Field survey, 2019; ETB, Ethiopian Birr

Nutrition service and health-related factors of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia

As indicated in Table 2, 70.4% of the study participants did not receive nutrition education. Only 29.6% of the study participants had nutrition education. Similarly, 54.9% of the study participants never received deworming tablets. Out of the participants who took deworming tablets (45.1%), 65.6% have taken two tablets (albendazole,400 mg) and 34.4% have taken one tablet every six months. When considering iron and folate supplementation, only 0.4% of the study participants have taken iron-folate supplement. Of the total study participants with access to nutrition services, only 60.4% received friendly nutrition service. In 66.1% of the households, the fathers were the primary decision-makers regarding nutrition service. 27.8% of the study participants had a cough in the two weeks before data collection.

Table 2. Nutrition service and health-related factors of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia, 2019.

Variables Frequency(n) Percent (%)
Received nutrition education within the last three months Yes 243 29.6
No 577 70.4
Received deworming tablets every six months Yes 450 54.9
No 370 45.1
Number of deworming tablet received One 155 34.4
Two 295 65.6
Received iron folic acid supplementation (IFAS) Yes 3 0.4
No 817 99.6
Friendly nutrition service received Yes 495 60.4
No 324 39.5
Decision maker for nutrition service Father 542 66.1
Mother 78 9.5
Jointly(Mother & Father) 200 24.4
Presence of cough within 2 weeks before data collection Yes 228 27.8
No 592 72.2

Source: Field survey, 2019; IFAS, = Iron- folic acid supplementation

Health and sanitation-related factors of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia

Table 3 describes the health and sanitation related conditions of the adolescent girls. Of the total 820 subjects, 53.0% of the adolescent girls lived in houses with mud floors, and 58.5% of the adolescent girls lived with domestic animals in the same house. Similarly, 53.3% washed their hands sometimes before eating their food, 41.7% usually washed their hands before eating, 3.4% did not wash their hands at all, 93.2% washed their hands after using the toilet, and 6.8% did not wash their hands at all after using the toilet. When washing their hands, 90.1% of the study participants reported using soap. Out of the total participants who used soap when washing their hands, only 42% usually used soap and 58% sometime used soap.

Table 3. Health and sanitation-related factors of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia, 2019.

Variables Frequency(n) Percent (%)
Type of floor adolescent girls are living on Cement 385 47.0
Muddy 435 53.0
Living with animals in the same house. Yes 480 58.5
No 340 41.5
Number of windows in the entire house 0 3 0.4
1 43 5.2
2 231 28.2
3 297 36.2
4 235 28.7
5 11 1.3
Frequency of teeth brushing (times per day) 0 29 3.5
1 401 48.9
2 267 32.6
3 123 15.0
Hand washing before eating Not at all 32 3.9
sometimes 442 53.9
Usually 346 42.2
Hand washing after using the toilet Yes 764 93.2
No 56 6.8
Using soap when washing hands Yes 739 90.1
No 81 9.9
Frequency of using soap when washing hands Sometimes 429 58.0
Usually 310 42.0

Source: Field survey, 2019

Meal patterns of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia

As indicated in Table 4, 39.5% of the study participants ate ≥ four times per day and 59.8% of the study participants ate three times per day. This indicates only 0.7% of the study participants skipped regular meals. Similarly, 41.6% of the study participants ate smaller meals that do not satisfy their needs. Maize was the primary staple food for 40.6% of the study participants, and 38.8% consumed both teff and maize as a staple food. Participants purchased food from the market (40.4%) or produced their own food (50.6%).

Table 4. Meal patterns of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia, 2019.

Variables Frequency(n) Percent (%)
Number of meals per day Two times 6 0.7
Three times 490 59.8
Four times and above 324 39.5
Skip regular meals Yes 6 0.7
No 814 99.3
Staple food Teff 169 20.6
Maize 333 40.6
Teff & Maize 318 38.8
Source of food for the family Produce your own 415 50.6
Market purchase 336 41.0
Produce your own and market purchase 69 8.4
Eat small meals Yes 341 41.6
No 479 58.4

Source: Field survey, 2019

Nutritional status of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia

As shown in Table 5 and Fig 2, 69.5% of the adolescent girls have a normal body mass index, i.e. body mass index-for-age z-score is between -2 and +2. From the total adolescent girls, 19.5% were moderately thin as defined by a body mass index-for-age z-score is -3 ≤ BAZ < -2 and 8% were severely thin as defined by a BMI-for-age z-score is BAZ < -3. Only 3% of the adolescent girls were overweight (BAZ ≥+2).

Table 5. Nutritional status of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia, 2019.

Variables Level Frequency(N) Percent (%)
Normal -2< BAZ <+2 569 69.5
Moderate thinness -3 ≤ BAZ < -2 160 19.5
Severe thinness BAZ < -3 66 8.0
Overweight BAZ ≥+2 25 3.0
Normal height HAZ > -2 748 91.2
Moderately stunted -3 ≤ HAZ ≤ -2 64 7.8
Severely stunted HAZ <-3 8 1.0

Source: Field survey, 2019; BAZ, BMI-for-age z-score; HAZ, height-for-age z-score

Fig 2. BMI for age z-scores (BAZ) among adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia, 2019.

Fig 2

As shown in Table 5 and Fig 3, 91.2% of adolescent girls had a normal height-for-age z-score is HAZ > -2, 7.8% were moderately stunted (-3≤ HAZ<-2), and 1% were severely stunted(HAZ <-3) [35]. As indicated in Figs 4 and 5, nutritional status of adolescent girls was lower than the reference population according to WHO-2007 growth chart.

Fig 3. Height for age z-scores (HAZ) among adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia, 2019.

Fig 3

Fig 4. Comparison of BMI-for-age z-scores (BAZ) of the study population (N = 820) with the 2007 WHO growth reference populations.

Fig 4

Fig 5. Comparison of height-for-age z-scores (HAZ) of the study population (N = 820) with the 2007 WHO growth reference populations.

Fig 5

Association between variables and nutritional status of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia

The present study showed an association between some variables with nutritional status, as defined by BMI for age z-score (BAZ), of the study participants. Low BAZ was statistically and positively associated with younger age, large family size, low monthly household income, not receiving deworming tablet(s), low educational status of the participant’s fathers, separate decision making for nutrition service, source of food for family from market and not being visited by health extension workers at home (Table 6).

Table 6. Factors associated with nutritional status (BAZ) of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia, 2019.

Variables   BAZ (≤ -2) N(%) BAZ (> -2) N(%) Crude OR (CI) Adjusted OR (CI)
Age (years) 10–14 144(17.6) 249(30.3) 2.397 (1.75–3.28)*** 2.91 (2.03–4.17)***
> 15 83(10.1) 344(42.0) 1 1
Family size ≤ 5 57(6.9) 195(23.8) 1 1
> 5 170(20.7) 398(48.6) 1.46 (1.034–2.064)* 1.63 (1.105–2.39)*
Monthly income ETB (USD) < 31.25 126(15.4) 148(18.1) 3.37 (2.28–4.98)*** 2.54 (1.66–3.87)***
1000(31.25) -2000(62.5) 49(6.0) 249(30.3) 0.779 (0.504–1.205) 0.74 (0.475–1.158)
> 2000(62.5) 52(6.3) 196(23.9) 1 1
    Nutritional status    
Variables BAZ(≤ -2)N(%) BAZ(> -2)N(%) Crude OR (CI) Adjusted OR (CI)
Receiving deworming tablets Yes 101(12.3) 349(42.6) 1 1
No 126(15.4) 244(29.7) 1.8 (1.3–2.4)*** 1.56 (1.1–21)*
Father’s educational status No formal education 30(3.6) 51(6.3) 1.94 (1.1–3.4)* 2.3 (1.1–4.8)*
1–8 grade 73(8.8) 190(23.2) 1.28 (0.82–1.96) 1.7 (0.96–2.87)
9–12 grade 81(9.9) 210 (25.6) 1.27 (0.83–1.95) 1.78 (0.86–3.01)
College and University 43(5.3) 142(17.3) 1 1
Decision-maker for nutrition service Father 168(20.5) 374(45.6) 2.05 (1.37–3.07)** 1.89 (1.22–2.94)**
Mother 23(2.8) 55(6.7) 1.905 (1.37–3.07)* 2.022 (1.016–4.024)*
Jointly 36(4.4) 164(20) 1 1
    Nutritional status, N(%)    
Variables   BAZ (≤ -2) BAZ (> -2) Crude OR (CI) Adjusted OR (CI)
Visited by health extension worker regularly Yes 83(10.1) 303(37.0) 1 1
No 144(17.5) 290(35.4) 1.81 (1.32–2.48)*** 1.72 (1.7–2.4)**
Source of family food Produce own 109(13.3) 306(37.3) 3.74 (1.57–8.89)** 3.288 (1.3–8.1)*
Market purchase 112(13.6) 224(27.3) 5.25 (2.21–12.5)*** 5.14 (2.1–12.8)***
Produce own and market purchase 6(0.73) 63(7.7) 1 1

*p-value < 0.05

**p-value < 0.01

***p-value<0.001

BAZ, BMI- for- age z-score

There was also an association between some variables with nutritional status, as defined by height-for-age z-scores (HAZ), of the study participants. Low HAZ of the study participants was statistically and positively associated with separate decision making for nutrition service, not washing hands before eating and after using the toilet, and not visited by health extension worker (Table 7).

Table 7. Factors associated with nutritional status (HAZ) of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia, 2019.

Nutritional status
Variables HAZ (≤ -2) HAZ (> -2) Crude OR (CI) Adjusted OR (CI)
Decision-maker for nutrition service Father 54(6.6) 488(59.5) 2.65 (1.241–5.68)** 2.53 (1.106–6.087)*
Mother 10(1.2) 68(8.3) 3.529 (1.4–9.310)** 2.58 (0.89–7.45)
Jointly 8(1.0) 192(23.4) 1 1
Hand washing before eating and after toilet Yes 61(7.4) 703(85.7) 1 1
No 11(1.4) 45(5.5) 2.82 (1.39–5.73)** 2.25 (1.079–4.675)*
Visited by a health extension worker Yes 15(1.8) 237(28.9) 1 1
No 57(7.0) 511(62.3) 2.13 (1.14–3.93)* 2.036 (1.059–3.914)*

*p-value < 0.05

**p-value < 0.01

***p-value<0.001

HAZ, height-for-age z-score

Discussion

Health and nutritional status of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia

The BAZs revealed that 19.5% of the adolescent girls were moderately thin and 8% were severely thin. Similarly, 7.8% of adolescent girls are moderately stunted and 1% are severely stunted. The prevalence of thinness is higher in this study than in a study conducted in the Amhara Region [36]. Similarly, the prevalence of stunting in the current study was lower than in the study conducted at the Amhara Region [17] and in Adwa, northern Ethiopia [20]. The prevalence in this study were also lower than those reported from a study conducted in Bangladesh [19].

The reasons for the observed undernutrition among the current study participants might be due to their low monthly household income, large family size, low educational status of fathers’ of the adolescent girls and poor hand-washing practice with soap before eating food. Our finding is supported by a study conducted in the Somali Region of Ethiopia, which indicated that hand washing with soap after using the toilet and before eating affects the nutritional status of adolescent girls [18]. This might be due to the association between diarrheal disease with not washing hands, which can also affect the nutritional status of adolescent girls [37]. Moreover, 40.4% of the study participants purchased their food from the market, whose amounts and quality can depend on their income, distance to markets, and price fluctuations [38].

The decision-making power of the family might also affect the nutritional status of adolescent girls. Decision-making for receiving nutrition services was found to be under the control of fathers’ in 66.1% of the study participants. As indicated by a study conducted in Jimma Zone, Southwest of Ethiopia, women autonomy in decision-making is important to improve nutritional status women and their children [39, 40]. Similarly, 45.1% of the study participants did not receive a deworming tablet. As indicated by a study conducted in Angolela, Ethiopia, stunting of study participants was associated with intestinal parasite [41]. Therefore, this might further aggravate the low nutritional status of the study subjects [42].

Factors associated with the nutritional status (BAZ) and HAZ of adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia

Adolescent girls between the ages of 10–14 years were 2.9 times more likely to be thin than adolescent girls ≥ 15 years old. This finding is in line with the study conducted in the Amhara Region [17]. This might be due to the rapid growth and reproductive maturation during adolescence(10–14 years age), which increases energy and nutrient requirements and hence the need for quality diets [43, 44].

Adolescent girls with a family size > 5 were 1.6 times more likely to be thin than those from a family with ≤ 5 people. This finding is supported by studies conducted in the city of Arar [45], Nigeria [46], and the Amhara Region [17]. Large families may share food among family members [20], constraining the availability of adequate amount of quality food [47].

Adolescent girls from families whose monthly income was < 1000 ETB (31.25 USD) were 2.5 times more likely to be thinner than those from families who have monthly incomes > 2000ETB (62.5 USD). This finding is in line with studies conducted in Bangladesh [48, 49] and Nigeria [22]. This might be because the household’s low monthly income, which affects the purchasing power leading to the consumption of suboptimal quantity and quality food. Consequently, adolescent girls from low monthly income were more likely to be thinner [50].

Study participants who did not take deworming tablets every six months were 1.56 times more likely to be thinner than those who took a deworming tablet every six months. According to the WHO preventive deworming recommendations, a biannual single-dose of albendazole (400 mg) is recommended as a public health intervention for all non-pregnant adolescent girls and women of reproductive age in order to reduce the burden of soil-transmitted helminthes which can affect nutritional status of adolescent girls [51]. Indeed, a systematic review and meta-analysis indicated that taking deworming tablets improves the nutritional status of adolescent girls [52], by causing diarrhea and reducing absorption of nutrients. The odds of stunting were also lower among adolescents that washed their hands prior to eating meals (P< 0.05).

Study participants whose fathers had no formal education were 2.3 times more likely to be thinner than those whose fathers completed college and university level education. This finding is in line with a study conducted in the cities of Tehran [53] and in Adama in Central Ethiopia [54]. This might be due to educated families having better access to information, nutrition education, and quality diets [55].

Decision-making power for nutrition services was statistically associated with the nutritional status of the study participants. Adolescent girls that had both parents jointly making decisions on access to nutrition services were significantly less likely to be thin and stunted than adolescents whose decision to access to nutrition services were solely made by the father or the mother. Other studies have shown that women’s participation in decision making is important for improving the nutritional status of women and children [56].

Adolescent girls acquiring their food from their household production or from purchases form the market were 3.28 and 5.14 times, respectively, more likely to be thinner than those who were getting their food from both home production and market purchases.

Visits by health extension workers were statistically associated with the nutritional status of adolescent girls. Adolescent girls who were not visited by health extension workers in their homes were 1.72 times more likely to be thinner than those who were visited by health extension workers at their homes within the past three months. This might be due to nutritional counseling that can result in the improvement of nutritional knowledge and behavioral change for improved nutrition [57]. Similarly, adolescents visited by health extension workers in the last three months had lower odds of being stunted.

Conclusions

Thinness and stunting were found to be high in the study area. Age, family size, monthly household income, fathers’ educational status, visits by health extension workers, and nutrition services decision-making power are the main predictors of thinness. Hand washing practice, visits by health extension workers, and nutrition services decision-making power are the main predictors of stunting among adolescent girls in Southern Ethiopia.

Recommendation

  • Income-generating activities should be implemented to improve the income of the families as it affects the nutritional status of adolescent girls.

  • Health extension workers should visit and give nutrition education regularly for adolescent girls at their homes and at community meetings.

  • Hand washing practice before meals and after visiting toilets should be improved

  • Joint decision-making on household resources by both parents should be promoted

  • Health extension workers should give counseling that discourages adolescent girls from skipping regular meals.

Strength of the study

This study tried to include large sample size and relatively wider geographic area of the region which can be an input for the design and implementation of adolescent nutrition interventions.

Weaknesses of the study

Using cross-sectional study design might not allow causal inferences. So, this study cannot tell cause and effect relationship.

Supporting information

S1 Checklist. STROBE statement.

(DOCX)

S1 File

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S1 Data

(XLS)

Acknowledgments

We acknowledge the Wolaita and Hadiya zones health office leaders and experts for their valuable cooperation during data collection. We would like to extend our gratitude to all the data collectors and adolescents who participated in this study. We are also grateful to the Center for Food Science and Nutrition, Addis Ababa University and Tufts University for the facilitation and support for the study.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

Addis Ababa University Center of Food Science and Nutrition, Wolaita Sodo University and Tufts University have supported small research grant.

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Under nutrition and its determinants among adolescent girls in low land area of southern Ethiopia

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18 Mar 2020

First of all, I would like to thank academic editor and reviewer#1 for their scientific, reasonable and convincing comments and questions. Really, I have got interesting lesson from them. Thank you very much.

I tarried to respond to all comments and questions bellow:

Response for comments and questions raised by academic editor

1. We ensure that our manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements. Our manuscript was edited and formatted by ‘editage Cactus’-licensed English edition.

2. We have developed questionnaire after reading different literature based on objective of our study. We attached the questionnaire as supporting documents during manuscript submission.

3. Yes, I have ORCID iD: https://orcid.org/0000-0001-6191-9027

4. We have referred to figure 1-5 in our text

5. All figures were not copied from other persons’ work. There are no copyright holders for these figures. These all figures are my own work. I have developed/ drawn these figures by using WHO Anthro plus, SPSS and ArcGIS software.

Response for reviewer#1 comments and questions

Abstract

Line 7: multistage random sampling if the authors used random in all the stages.

Response: Yes, random sampling procedure was used. Equal chance was given all participants.

Line 11: Did you actually estimate or generated through the software?

Response: we generated through software by using SPSS version 21.0.

Line 12: Did you actually estimate or generated through the software?

Response: we generated through software by using SPSS version 21.0.

Line 18: Let us know the nature of the association. This is not clear.

Response: Nature of association is positive.

Large family size, low monthly income , not taking deworming tablets , low educational status the fathers’, the source of food for the family only from market, not visited by health extension workers and not washing hand before eating and after using the toilet were positively associated with undernutrition of adolescent girls.

Introduction

Line 24: Defined by who?

Response: age range of adolescent was defined by world health organization (WHO).

Materials and methods

Line 61: Materials and methods please.

Response: we changed it to “Materials and methods”

Line 66: Use an active verb such as shows instead of colon.

Response: we changed it to Figure 1 shows

Line 71: BMI-for-age

Response: we changed it to BMI-for-age

Line 72: Height for age is a compound word and should be written as such.

Response: we changed it to height-for-age

Line 73: Add level

Response: we added “level”

Line 78: You did not use both (thinness and stunting) for sample size determination.

Response: we used both thinness and stunting for sample size determination. But, we took stunting because it gave larger sample size.

Line 81: non response.

Response: we changed it to response

Line 88: simple random sampling method. Was it by balloting or what?

Response: we inserted “sampling”; we used SPSS version 21.0 software for random selection. When we ran, it automatically selected 843 adolescent girls from all listed adolescent girls. First census was developed by health extension girls from each selected kebele.

Line 92: Which type of random was used?

Response: If there was more than one adolescent girl in a household, one adolescent girl was randomly selected by lottery method.

Line 93: Are kebele households? If no, how were households selected? There was no mention of house selection. What happened when there are more than one household per house?

Response: No, kebeles are not households. Kebeles are “the lowest administrative unit in Ethiopia.”

Kebele includes many households. In average, 500-800 households are in one kebele. Census of adolescent girls was conducted from all randomly selected kebeles. So, all households in the randomly kebele which were with eligible adolescent girls were included in census.

Line 97: This is data collection method.

Response: we corrected it.

Line 100: How? Were the authors the ones that calibrated the scale? Is calibration the same as maintaining the scale at 0?

Response: -No, the authors are not the ones that calibrate the scale. Data collectors calibrate the scale at each time whether it works properly or not.

- Calibration is not only maintaining the scale at 0, but also it includes checking the tool is working correctly.

Line 101: Was this calibrated or did you attach a measuring tape to it? This is not clear.

Response: we used the height measuring board which was with measuring tape. The measuring tape was attached to the board and fixed already.

Line 102: BMI-for-age

Response: we corrected it

Line 102: Height-for-age

Response: we corrected it

Line 102: It would be better if the method of calculating the Z scores is explicitly shown.

Response: we used WHO Anthro-plus software to calculate Z- score from weight, height and age in month of adolescent girls.

Line 104: Was anthropometry not part of your data collection method?

Response: anthropometry is parts of data collection method. We corrected it

Line 106: B.Sc.

Response: we corrected it

Line 107: experiences in collecting

Response: we corrected it

Line 109: M.Sc.

Response: we corrected it

Line 110: Data were

Response: we corrected it

Line 122: rendered or translated

Response: Back translation to English was conducted

Line 125: This similar area needs to be mentioned.

Response: In similar kebeles which were selected for the study.

Line 128: How many principal investigators did the study have?

Response: one, we corrected it.

Line 131: When did you standardize the measurements? In the field or during training? This is not clear.

Response: Standardization was took place during training

Line 134: add (TEM)

Response: we added (TEM)

Line 135: Let us have ENA in full first with the abbreviation in brackets.

Response: Emergency Nutrition Assessment (ENA)

Line 136: Were asked to instead of could.

Response: it was corrected

Line 142: girls aged

Response: it was corrected

RESULTS: Variables in the tables should be reported in the text as the appeared in the tables i.e. sequentially. Results must be reported in past tense.

Line 149: This figure was not shown in Table 1.

Response: we inserted/corrected the missed figure

Line 150: This information is lacking in Table 1.

Response: we inserted/corrected the lacking information

Line 150: This is not true of your Table 1.

Response: It was corrected

Line 151: See Table 1 for clarity.

Response: It was corrected

Line 151: Table 1 does not have 5-8 nor 1-4.

Response: It was corrected

Line 153: This figure is not the same as the figure on Table 1.

Response: It was corrected

Line 153: figures are not in the table.

Response: It was corrected

Line 153: Do not use about when you are stating the exact figure.

Response: It was corrected

Line 154: It is good to also include this value in USD.

Response: <31.25 USD

Line 155: Let us have the value (>2000) in USD.

Response: >62.5 USD

Line 156: Use colon and not period i.e. Table 1:

Table 1

Response: we used colon

Expunge level.

Response: Level was expunged

Line 172: Source: Field

Response: It was corrected

Line 174: Expunge approximately because you are stating the exact figure.

Response: the word approximately was expunged

Line 177: Who took

Response: it was corrected

Line 177: 2 tablets of how many mg each?

Response: At this research study area, albendazole (400 mg) was given every six months for adolescent girls. But, adolescent girls don’t know the dose and types of deworming tablets. During data collection period, data collectors asked whether adolescent girls took deworming tablets or not. If they took, how many (one or two) deworming tablet. In the study area some adolescent girls were no taking deworming tablets. Because, they don’t know the importance of it.

Line 178: This is a bit confusing. Why would they take two tablets every 6 months?

Response: in Ethiopia, adolescents were universally supplemented deworming tablets every six month. That means, twice annually adolescent girls were taking deworming tablets

Line 179: This is not clear. What do you actually mean by having supplement/receiving supplements? Is this the same as taking it? Be specific on the type of supplements. There are quite a number of them

Response: that means taking iron-folic acid tablet

Line 181: were not satisfied was not stated in Table 2. Either you include it in the table or you expunge it.

Response: It was expunged

Line 185: Rearrange the variables so that they can be sequential. E.g. decision maker for nutrition service should be moved to after friendly nutrition service received.

On Table 2:

Response: it was corrected

Expunge level. It was corrected. It was removed

Is nutrition education not part of friendly nutrition service?

Response: friendly nutrition education is parts of nutrition education.

It is how they are giving nutrition education politely. Friendly nutrition education is the way of approach how health extension giving nutrition education for adolescent girls.

When? i.e. received nutrition education i.e. how long ago?

Response: with in the last three months

Received deworming tablets: How long ago? Duration needs to be stated.

Response: twice annually deworming tablets were given for adolescent girls.

Friendly nutrition service given: use received instead of given.

Response: It was corrected

Presence of cough, include 2 weeks before data collection.

Response: All are corrected by track change

Line 189: The table says of adolescent girls and not of the study participants.

Response: corrected as ‘’adolescent girls’’

Line 190: See Table 3 for the correct figure.

Response: It was corrected

Line 190: girls lived in houses with mud floors

Response: it was corrected

Line 191: study participants lived with domestic animals.

Response: it was corrected

Line 194: Figure (90.1%) is not the same as what is in the table.

On Table 3:

Response: it was corrected as ‘’93.2%’’

Expunge level.

Response: level expunged

All sub percentages must add up to 100.0%

Response: it was corrected

Recast as living with animals in the same house.

Response: it was corrected

Number of windows in the entire house or per room? Be specific.

Response: It is the number of windows in the entire house

Questions are not used as variables.

Response: we have changed questions to variables

The total percent is not up to 100.0%. It is 98.4%

Response: It was corrected

Line 201: as indicated in Table 4, about 39.5%........

Response: It was corrected

Line 201: No, it does not show that 60.5% skipped meals because 4 and above is not the standard. We have 3 standard meals a day. It rather shows propensity to overweight due to overeating.

Response: we corrected it. The right comment was given for us. We give many thanks for the reviewer#1.

Line 206: 50.0% is not the same as the figure on the table.

Response: It was corrected. It is 50.6 % on the table

Line 208: Meal pattern

Response: It was corrected

Line 208: Why do you have a different table pattern here?

On Table 4

Expunge level.

Response: level expunged

Meal skipped: Percentage should be based on 496 as 100.0%.

Response: It was corrected i.e. removed from the table

Line 212: I believe that you mean -1 and median. Normal includes this and +1. So normal BMI-for-age refers to Z scores between -2 and +2 (excluding -2 and +2) or you say it ranges from -1 to +1.

Response: We used WHO 2010 manual for comparison and We used WHO Anthro plus software for Z-score calculation.

For this study: Normal, -2 < BAZ< +2

Moderately thin, -3 ≤ BAZ < -2

Severely thin, BAZ < -3

Overweight, BAZ >+2. \\anthro_pc_manual_v322.pdf

Line 213: Moderate thinness or moderate stunting is BMI-for-age or Height-for-age Z score that equals -2 or you say less than (<) -1.

Response: Moderately thin, -3 ≤ BAZ < -2 or moderately stunted -3 ≤ HAZ < -2

Line 214: Severe thinness or severe stunting is BMI-for-age or height-for-age Z score <2 or exactly

-3.

Response: Z-score is < -3.

Line 217 - 220: The figures should come in after Table 5.

Response: Now, I put figures after Table 5.

Line 225: Details of the associations should be stated in all cases e.g. were the younger adolescents affected more than the older ones? Were children from households with family size of >5 affected more than those with 5 and less?

Response: the details of the associations were now stated well.

Line 228: The variables should be discussed sequentially as they appeared in all the tables.

Response: It was corrected

Line 232: The use of frequencies did not equalize the figures for comparison. I suggest the authors translate the N values to percentages for easy comparison.

Response: we translated frequencies to percentages

On Table 6: BAZ is ≤-2

Response: It was corrected as BAZ is ≤-2

Line 234: Is this right? Do you not mean <0.01 for 0.001 and <0.001 for 0.000?

Response: it was corrected. We mean <0.01 for 0.001 and <0.001 for 0.000. Thank you very much

Discussion

Line 246: Restatement of results are not allowed. You can only refer to them.

Response: we corrected it

Line 252: than the findings/results from a study......

Response: we corrected it

Line 253: observed undernutrition among the……..

Response: we corrected it

Line 254 to 259 are on results. Results are not restated in discussion.

Response: now we have written it well.

Line 260: indicated that hand washing with soap after using the toilet and before eating affects the nutritional status of adolescent girls. How? This should be made clear.

Response: This might be due to adolescent girls who were not washing their hand before eating and after using toilet can be affected by diarrhea and other communicable diseases. If they affected by diarrhea and other communicable diseases, absorption as well as utilization of nutrient can be affected, and which can lead to stunting.

Line 261-262: This might lead to the low nutritional status of adolescent girls. Explain the mechanism through which this occurs.

This might be due to adolescent girls who were not washing their hand before eating and after using toilet can be affected by diarrhea and other diseases and which can lead to stunting.

Line 262: the result of a study conducted………

Response: It was corrected

Line 264: replace was with as.

Response: It was corrected

Line 266: How does it affect their nutritional status?

Response: Buying food from distant market takes time and which can affect accessibility of the household for the food consumption. Sometimes market price fluctuation can affect food consumption. So, this might affect nutritional status of the adolescent girls.

Line 269-271: Please state the implications of the results stated.

As indicated by the study conducted in Jimma Zone and World Health Organization report, women autonomy in decision-making is important to improve nutritional status themselves and their children.

Line 275 and throughout the discussion session, expunge malnourished and use only the specific terms: thinness or stunting.

Response: we expunged malnutrition and used specific term thinness or stunting

Line 275: This is the association I expected to see in the result section. Please move it there and explain all associations there.

Response: now we corrected it well.

Line 290-292: According to WHO preventive deworming recommendations, a biannual single-dose of albendazole (400 mg) or mebendazole (500 mg) is recommended. If this is so, why did you have 2 tablets?

Response: At this research study area, albendazole (400 mg) was given every six months for adolescent girls. But, adolescent girls don’t know the dose and types of deworming tablets. During data collection period, data collectors asked whether adolescent girls took deworming tablets or not. If they took, how many (one or two) deworming tablet. In the study area some adolescent girls were no taking deworming tablets. Because, they don’t know the importance of it.

Line 293-294: What is the mechanism of action?

Response: Intestinal parasite may share the food that adolescent girls have eaten. Sometimes, intestinal parasite cause diarrhea disease and which can decrease absorption of important nutrients. This can lead to low nutritional status of adolescent girls.

Lines 302-309: What you have here is result and not discussion.

Response: It was corrected

Line 309: expunge malnourished and use thin.

Response: it was corrected. Malnourished was changed to specific word “thin”

Lines 324 to 331 were on results. Tell us the implications of your findings.

Response: now the implications are written well

Line 325: ‘whose decision-maker the father or mother’ what is missing here?

Response: here is ‘’either…or’’ missing. we have corrected it.

Acknowledgement

The use on ‘I’ indicates single author.

Response: it was corrected as “we”

Responses to the comments raised by Reviewer #1

i. there is no specific research hypotheses that are being examined or tested;

Response: there are specific research hypothesis that are stated well at the end of introduction section.

Research hypothese1. Prevalence of under nutrition among adolescent girls in the study area is high

Research hypothesis2. Socio-economic, nutrition service, health and hygiene related variable are associated factors for under nutrition among adolescent girls

ii. there are several other similar published papers from Ethiopia examining factors associated with undernutrition and stunting in adolescent girls, so it is not apparent that this study adds any new or significant insights (see references number 18, 19, 21, 22)-other than being in a different region of the country;

Response: study is new for southern Ethiopia among adolescent girls.

iii. this study does not include any novel approaches or methods that bring original or new insights into tackling nutritional challenges in the population;

Response: our study design is community based cross sectional, and which give equal chance to all adolescent girls to be included in the study. Most of the research conducted on school adolescent girls and which cannot be generalized for adolescent girls who are not following the school. But our research based on community.

iv. the study does not consider the changes in BMI and height during the adolescent growth spurt and the timing of this relative to the growth spurt of the reference population used to calculate z-scores. Age should be included as a continuous variable in analyses to try to lesson the effects of age differences in adolescent growth;

Response: Age of the adolescent girls grouped as 1) Early adolescent (10-13years), 2) middle adolescents (14-16 years) and 3) late adolescents (17-19 years). WHO as well as many literatures grouped adolescent girls’ age like this. Growth spurt of adolescent girls is different in different age groups. Growth spurt of adolescent girls is high during 10-13 years old than 17-19years. During 10-13 years age, they need high quality and quantity diet. Analyzing age as continuous variable by linear regression model and analyzing age as grouped variable by binary logistic regression, there are no the effects of age differences in adolescent growth. So, our analysis by grouping age is not wrong.

v) a whole range of variables are analyzed without a specific rationale of how these relate to the research hypotheses.

Response: variables were analyzed with the specific rationale in relation to research hypotheses.

Vi) Developing a conceptual framework based on detailed review

I developed conceptual framework from literature review. Most of the time used for analysis but not submitted with manuscript.

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Decision Letter 1

Eugene Kofuor Maafo Darteh

9 Jul 2020

PONE-D-19-32334R1

Under nutrition and its determinants among adolescent girls in low land area of southern Ethiopia

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The authors are advised to ensure consistency and coherency in the methods section.  At one breathe,  they indicated that they used a census, however, they had a sample size and had a sampling approach. This inconistency must be corrected. Also, the authors should ensure that all the reviewers comments are addressed.

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Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Partly

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #3: No

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Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed most of the issues raised. The followings if addressed will put the manuscript in a better shape.

Abstract

Line 10: Replace estimated with generated.

Line 17: Please add poor to nutritional status.

Introduction

Line 23: Please reference WHO properly with the appropriate number.

Materials and methods

Line 93: was selected by simple random sampling (lottery method).

Line 108: B.Sc. Please add period after c.

Line 130: investigator

Results

Line 156: Please do not expunge your currency. Use your currency but insert USD in parenthesis for easy estimation of value e.g. > 2000 ETBirr (62.5 USD)

Table 1: Variables not variable

Table 1: Please see earlier comment. Let the USD value be in brackets. An example has been given.

N.B. All results must be presented in past tense.

See the example below:

Line 216 to 217: Report all results in past tense

E.g.

1. 48.7% of the study participants brushed their teeth.....

2. 53.3% washed........

3. 41.7% usually washed their........

4. 3.4% did not wash....... etc

Please results should be reported in past tenses.

Lines 233 and 238: Do Table 5 and figures 4 and 5 have the same information? I think the information they contain should be described differently.

Line 250: Low BAZ was statistically….

Table 6

Total for age vs BAZ ≤ -2 =227; BAZ > -2 = 587 = 814. What happened to 6 respondents?

Please do not expunge your currency. Use your currency but insert USD in parenthesis for easy estimation of value e.g. > 2000 ETBirr (62.5 USD)

Line 258: height-for-age

Line 259: Add low to HAZ of the study participants were statistically….

Table 7

Expunge level

HAZ ≤ -2 and not <-2

HAZ ≤ -2 =72 HAZ > -2 = 748 but Visited by a health extension worker has HAZ ≤ -2 =74 HAZ > -2 = 746. Which one is correct?

Discussion

Line 277: which can lead to diarrhoea.

Lines 304-305: Please do not expunge your currency. Use your currency but insert USD in parenthesis for easy estimation of value e.g. > 2000 ETBirr (62.5 USD).

Line 308: Families with lower monthly incomes are more likely to eat

Line 309: expunge that

N.B. I am not at peace with the tenses used in the result and discussion sections. The tenses should be reviewed. This is very important.

Reviewer #3: Thank you for the opportunity to review a revised manuscript entitled “Undernutrition and Its Determinants among Adolescent Girls in low land area of Southern Ethiopia”. Although I find the study interesting, and an improvement based on the previous comments, there are still major issues that need to be addressed to help improve the manuscript. These issues are outlined below:

Abstract

1. Line 14, should read low educational status of father, not status the father’s

2. This is a structured abstract, therefore I entreat the authors to separate their conclusion from the results section in the abstract

3. If the authors wish to caption the background of the abstract as background, then the introduction as found in the main manuscript must be changed to background or vice versa for consistency sake

Background

4. Replace developing countries with low and middle-income countries, line 25 page 1

5. Line 34 there is no full stop

6. Line 46, page 2, how large is large. Specify the exact proportion or percentage

7. Line 55 page 2, the sentence…is missing a connection. It presupposes the authors have reviewed previous studies conducted in the study area or creating a gap. As this is a great step, the gap is not clear/well-articulated. Please the gap very clear and strong.

8. The literature review on the predictors of under nutrition is not adequate. This needs strengthening. In addition, provide specific references for particular predictors. E.g low household income [2], age [3], type of place of residence [4] etc…

9. In addition, the predictors the authors found in their study were not reviewed at the background to inform the discussion appropriately

Materials and methods

10. Between line 60 and 61, please provide a sub-section “study area/setting”

11. Line 79 check the statement. It doesn’t read well recast

Sampling procedure

12. Line 87, p3 what informed the selection of the 2 zones? Likewise the selection of the of the three kebeles why 3?

13. Line 92, the authors stated that they used a census, why then did they use a lottery method to select one adolescent in household with more than one adolescent?

14. Again, if the authors claimed they used a census, why did they have a sample size?

15. Apart, from the issues raised, with regards to the census, the sampling approach the authors used is not well-articulated. This should be explained in detail.

16. Line 67-68, the authors mentioned that both in and out of school adolescents constituted the study sample. What was then the exclusion criteria? See line 96-97. Please describe those who were not eligible.

Data collection

17. Line 107 kindly make reference to the literature you adapted instrument/questionnaire from

18. Also make reference that the instrument is attached as a supplementary file.

19. Describe how the independent variables were measured. Especially monthly income. Why didn’t the authors use the approach by the demographic and health survey which uses household assets to create the wealth variables by using the principal component analysis technique

Data quality assurance

20. Specify the area the pretesting was done

Results

21. Check Table 1, the column with the percentages are not well presented

Discussion

22. Line 268, where is the reference for the study you are comparing your results with?

23. Line 276-277, please recast

24. Line 291, the independent variables should come before the outcome variable.

25. The authors failed to acknowledge the strength and weaknesses in their study. This should be discussed extensively

26. At the acknowledgement section, it appears the study was conducted by one author. This should be relooked at.

27. The authors should get a native English speaker to proofread the manuscript to correct errors.

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Decision Letter 2

Eugene Kofuor Maafo Darteh

15 Sep 2020

PONE-D-19-32334R2

Under nutrition and its determinants among adolescent girls in low land area of southern Ethiopia

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Dear Dr. Yoseph Halala Handiso,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

I think there has been a marked improvement in the maunuscript. However, at the discussion section, the authors should limit the repetition of results."For example, "In this study, the BAZs of the study participants was statistically associated with the age of the adolescent girls (p<0.001)". Repetition the p-values at the discussion in my view is not necessary again. They are already at the results section.

The authors should kindly fill the STROBE CHECKLIST and attach it as a supplementary file.

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Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: No

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Reviewer #2: Variable in Table 3 should read variables.

With the exception of the above, the authors have satisfactorily responded to earlier queries raised.

Reviewer #3: Thanks to the authors for addressing most of my comments.

I must say the manuscript has improved substantially. Kudos!

However, at the discussion section, the authors should limit the repetition of results.

"For example, "In this study, the BAZs of the study participants was statistically associated with the age of the adolescent girls (p<0.001)". Repetition the p-values at the discussion in my view is not necessary again. They are already at the results section.

The authors should kindly fill the STROBE CHECKLIST and attach it as a supplementary file.

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Reviewer #2: Yes: Dr Rufina N.B. Ayogu

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Undernutrition and Its Determinants among Adolescent  Girls in low land area of Southern Ethiopia

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