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. 2022 Dec 30;17(12):e0279718. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0279718

A flashing light may not be that flashy: A systematic review on critical fusion frequencies

Alix Lafitte 1,2,*, Romain Sordello 1, Marc Legrand 1,2,3, Virginie Nicolas 4,5, Gaël Obein 2,6, Yorick Reyjol 1
Editor: Christopher Nice7
PMCID: PMC9803175  PMID: 36584184

Abstract

Background

Light pollution could represent one of the main drivers behind the current biodiversity erosion. While the effects of many light components on biodiversity have already been studied, the influence of flicker remains poorly understood. The determination of the threshold frequency at which a flickering light is perceived as continuous by a species, usually called the Critical Fusion Frequency (CFF), could thus help further identify the impacts of artificial lighting on animals.

Objective

This review aimed at answering the following questions: what is the distribution of CFF between species? Are there differences in how flicker is perceived between taxonomic classes? Which species are more at risk of being impacted by artificial lighting flicker?

Methods

Citations were extracted from three literature databases and were then screened successively on their titles, abstracts and full-texts. Included studies were critically appraised to assess their validity. All relevant data were extracted and analysed to determine the distribution of CFF in the animal kingdom and the influence of experimental designs and species traits on CFF.

Results

At first, 4881 citations were found. Screening and critical appraisal provided 200 CFF values for 156 species. Reported values of CFF varied from a maximum of between 300 Hz and 500 Hz for the beetle Melanophila acuminata D. to a mean of 0.57 (± 0.08) Hz for the snail Lissachatina fulica B. Insects and birds had higher CFF than all other studied taxa. Irrespective of taxon, nocturnal species had lower CFF than diurnal and crepuscular ones.

Conclusions

We identified nine crepuscular and nocturnal species that could be impacted by the potential adverse effects of anthropogenic light flicker. We emphasize that there remains a huge gap in our knowledge of flicker perception by animals, which could potentially be hampering our understanding of its impacts on biodiversity, especially in key taxa like bats, nocturnal birds and insects.

Introduction

We are currently facing a major crisis of biodiversity erosion [1] with species becoming extinct more and more rapidly, notably since the 1990s [2]. Simultaneously, satellite-detectable light has increased by at least 49% between 1992 and 2017, notably due to urbanisation and Light-Emitting Diode (LED) ‘rebound effect’ [3]. Furthermore, light pollution, generated by anthropogenic light sources, has been identified as one of the main factors behind the current biodiversity erosion [4, 5].

The effects of artificial light at night (ALAN) on species and ecosystems are now more and more acknowledged [6, 7] and have been linked to alteration of physiology, behaviour, reproduction, habitat use, mobility and inter-species relationships [8]. In plants, light pollution can disrupt the phenology and advance the timing of budburst as shown by ffrench-Constant et al. (2016) [9]. At higher trophic levels, Owens et al. (2020) [10] reported that ALAN may alter insects’ spatial distribution and life history, thus representing one of the main anthropogenic drivers behind insect decline. For birds, Dickerson, Hall & Jones (2022) [11] found that ALAN could suppress the nocturnal singing behaviour of the willie wagtail Rhipidura leucophrys L. and could be linked to a higher predation risk as individuals would be more easily spotted by predators under lighted conditions. Artificial light can also have adverse effects in aquatic environments and has been linked to reduced fitness in the common clownfish Amphiprion ocellaris C. [12]. In addition, ALAN could also have deleterious impacts on ecosystem functioning by, for example, disrupting two key ecosystem processes, namely pollination and seed dispersal [13, 14].

Impacts on biological organisms have been linked to several key components of artificial lighting, such as intensity [1517], spectral composition [1820], or temporality [21, 22]. Flicker frequency, another component of lighting [23], can be a consequence of either the alternating nature of power supply (i.e. 50 Hz in Europe and 60 Hz in the United States) or dynamic flashing rates of anthropogenic light sources and could represent a possible additional and significant source of impacts. For instance, Greenwood et al. (2004) [24] found a significant behavioural preference for a continuous light compared to a flickering one in the European starling, Sturnus vulgaris L. Sautter, Cocchi & Schenk (2008) [25] showed that a 1.5 Hz flickering light could increase the time that rats took to get out of a water labyrinth. Barroso et al. (2017) [26] examined the number of captured nocturnal insects between continuous and flickering light sources and found a potential flicker avoidance effect as lowered numbers of Diptera, Hemiptera and Lepidoptera were caught in traps associated with a flickering light. Flicker can also have potential significant effects on human health, as Wilkins et al. showed as early as in 1989 [27]. The qualification and quantification of the different impacts of flickering lights is becoming increasingly important as new technologies such as LEDs now allow for more advanced dynamic lighting to appear, notably concerning shopfronts and ad panels, or the development of traffic-regulated street lamps [7, 23].

Species perception of flicker may depend on their temporal resolution, which can be defined as the ability to resolve rapid movements [28]. Each species is likely to have a different temporal resolution, shaped, among other parameters, by its ecology—e.g. foraging behaviour and habitat [29, 30]. A species temporal resolution can be estimated using Flicker Fusion Frequency (FFF), defined as the threshold frequency at which a flickering light is perceived as continuous [31]. Because FFF values can vary with light intensity, Critical Fusion Frequency (CFF) is defined as the maximum flicker fusion frequency at any light intensity—i.e. the point where any further increase of light intensity does not lead to an increase of FFF [32]. A first step before assessing the impacts of flashing artificial light on animals is to gain better knowledge of variations in CFF across the animal kingdom. To this end, Inger et al. (2014) [33] published a set of 93 CFF measurements for 81 species and observed that a substantial amount of animal taxa, and especially birds and insects, were likely to perceive the flicker of a lamp on a 50 Hz or 60 Hz power supply. Healy et al. (2013) [34] also compiled a sample of 34 specific CFF values and showed that body mass and metabolic rate were correlated to temporal resolution. Both reviews, while useful, are not based on specific methods of evidence synthesis. The comprehensiveness or the transparency of their search strategy, screening process (inclusion/exclusion decisions of all articles) or data extraction may thus be limited. For decision-makers to be informed in the best possible way and to reach highly beneficial biodiversity protective actions, we argue that a more comprehensive and transparent literature survey is therefore needed [35, 36].

Here, we present a systematic review of animals’ critical fusion frequencies, using the method of systematic maps and reviews as recommended by the Collaboration for Environmental Evidence [37]. Systematic reviews are based on standardized protocols that have been developed in the field of ecology over the last few years and have proven very successful to provide strong scientific evidence for practitioners [3840]. To consolidate the existing knowledge and earlier published reviews, we used a comprehensive search strategy based on several databases and performed a critical analysis of accepted studies in order to assess their susceptibility to bias and to attribute levels of confidence in CFF values. A database was produced, containing all collected CFF values, as well as their associated metadata. Our analysis identified patterns in the distribution of CFF across the animal kingdom, which may notably result from the influence of some species traits. This work focused on wild and domestic animals, excluding humans, and aimed at answering the following questions: what is the distribution of CFF between species? Are there differences in how flicker is perceived between taxonomic classes? Which species are more at risk of being impacted by artificial lighting flicker?

Material & methods

This review, requested by professional lighting associations—i.e. the French Association on Lighting (AFE) and the French Association of Lighting Designers and Lighting Engineers (ACE)—followed the method of systemic review recommended by the Collaboration for Environmental Evidence (CEE) [37] and conformed to ROSES reporting standards [41] (S1 File). Deviations from CEE standards are listed in the section “Review limitations”.

Search for literature

We conducted a search for literature on three accessible databases from the Web of Science platform (Clarivate): Web of Science Core Collection (WOSCC), Biological Abstracts, and Zoological Records—using the access rights provided by the French National Museum of Natural History (MNHN). These databases were selected because they cover both biology and ecology and because their functionalities enable an advanced search of literature. The WOSCC search included the following citation indexes: SCI–EXPANDED, SSCI, A&HCI, CPCI–S, CPCI–SSH, BKCI–S, BKCI–SSH, ESCI and CCR–EXPANDED. A search string was built with English terms as follows:

("fusion frequenc*"OR "flicker threshold$" OR "flicker sensitivit*" OR "flicker detection$" OR "flicker vision$" OR "flicker fusion" OR "flicker frequenc*" OR "temporal sinusoidally-modulated full-field luminance variation$")

This search string resulted from an iterative building process achieved by both ecological and physic experts from the MNHN and the National Conservatoire of Arts and Crafts (CNAM) and was used to reach the best comprehensiveness—i.e. the best recovery from a previously established test list of relevant articles. This test list included 60 articles, of which 56 came from Inger et al. (2014) [33] and 4 were included by the review team (S3 File). Of these 60 articles, 39 were found in the three databases that we used, providing an 85% comprehensiveness (33/39). The final search was conducted on “Topic” (TS) on 1 February 2021.

Screening process

All citations were exported and screened through a three-stage process: firstly, on titles, then, on abstracts and finally, on full-texts. Each of the three screening stages was based on predefined inclusion/exclusion criteria—i.e. population, exposure and outcome—according to our review questions. Thence, we included all wild and domesticated animal species while excluding humans and other living organisms—e.g. plants, bacteria. Only artificial light sources at all wavelengths and colour temperatures were taken into account, whereas natural light sources or other types of waves like noise were excluded. We retained only citations measuring behavioural or physiological responses.

At the full-text screening stage, some additional criteria that could not be assessed at previous stages were included, regarding the language and the content and type of document. Only articles written in English and French were considered. We acknowledge that only including articles in those two languages constitutes a potential bias to our systematic review but this could not be avoided based on the linguistic competences of the review team. Articles which corresponded only to an abstract were excluded, as well as reviews and studies based strictly on modelling to keep solely studies with real in-situ or ex-situ collected data. At last, articles dealing with flicker which did not provide any CFF values were also discarded.

Each step of the screening process was performed by two reviewers (ML and RS), in accordance with CEE guidelines [37]. To assess the consistency of the inclusion/exclusion decisions between screeners, a Randolph’s Kappa coefficient was computed on a random set of 5% of all articles to be screened at each step. The process was repeated until reaching a Kappa coefficient value higher than 0.6. In any case, all disagreements were discussed and resolved before beginning the screening process.

Other sources of literature

To complete our search for literature strategy, we retrieved documents from other sources. First, we extracted references identified when carrying out critical appraisal and where CFF data were cited but were not present in our initial corpus [28, 4245]. Additionally, we included values extracted from the two main previously published reviews on CFF in our corpus [33, 34]. Other relevant articles found by the review team, but not directly found in the three considered databases, were also added to the final corpus. As these articles all dealt with CFF, they did not go through any screening stage and were directly included in our corpus. A call for literature—and in particular non peer-reviewed articles published in French or in English—was also carried out by sending emails to a group of 40 experts on 12 February 2021. The corresponding documents were screened on full-texts according to the same inclusion/exclusion criteria as described above.

Critical appraisal

All the articles accepted on full-texts were split into studies—a study corresponding to one species and one method—in order to carry out a critical appraisal and assess their validity. First, a test was conducted on a subsample of studies by two reviewers (RS and AL) before critical appraisal was performed by AL for all studies. To define the criteria of this appraisal, a golden standard protocol was firstly determined in the context of an ideal study, supposedly granted with unlimited financing, time and workforce [37]. Six criteria were identified:

  • the number of individuals (Replication criterion),

  • the number of measures (Repetition criterion),

  • the presence of a control (Control criterion); namely a reference electrode in the case of an electroretinogram or a continuous light for a behavioural experiment,

  • the randomisation of individuals throughout experimental groups (Randomisation criterion),

  • how specimens were handled before the experiment (Population criterion),

  • how specimens were exposed to the treatment during the experiment (Exposition criterion).

Each criterion was assigned a ‘high’, ‘medium’ or ‘low’ risk of bias (see S6 File for details). Finally, an overall risk of bias was assigned for each accepted study:

  • ‘high’ for a study with three high-risk-of-bias criteria,

  • ‘medium’ for a study which had a medium risk of bias in the replication or control criteria or three medium-risk-of-bias criteria,

  • ‘low’ for remaining studies.

We considered a study to be unreliable, and therefore directly excluded it if there was a total absence of replication or control.

Data extraction

Several experimental methodologies have been used in the literature in order to quantify CFF. Electrophysiological protocols are the most frequently used and often involve electroretinograms (ERG) or, alternatively electroencephalograms, which respectively measure the electrical response of the retina and brain to flickering light. Behavioural protocols have also been used and are mainly of two kinds: either a two-alternative forced choice procedure that requires an animal to choose the preferred light source between the flickering one (usually with increasing frequencies) and the continuous one [28]; or optomotor protocols where the nystagmus reflex of the head or eye of an animal is monitored through increasing flicker frequencies [46].

CFF data were extracted by two reviewers (ML and AL). AL checked all the extracted data by ML, which means that half of the corpus was double checked. Also, a test was conducted on a subsample of studies by two reviewers (RS and AL). As our goal was to determine the maximum CFF at which animals could be impacted, if an article was to test different light intensities, we extracted the maximum CFF recorded by authors. If data were only presented on graphs, we extracted them using WebPlotDigitizer [47]. We also extracted metadata from each study: namely methods, either electrophysiological or behavioural, light sources, light intensities at which CFF were measured. We added a measure of the low, variable or high light exposure levels an animal is likely to experience in natural conditions (following the method from Inger et al. (2014) and Healy et al. (2013) [33, 34]). Briefly, a nocturnal or deep-sea foraging animal is likely to experience a low exposure to light compared to the high exposure of a diurnal or shallow water foraging animal. Cathemeral and crepuscular animals are considered to be exposed to variable quantities of light. Each species was associated with its taxonomic class [48], its trophic guild—i.e. herbivore, omnivore, carnivore—and a measure of its body size—i.e. very small, small, medium, large, very large. Categories were build thanks to data mainly provided by two available online trait databases [49, 50]. Animals with a body mass inferior to 1 g were arbitrarily considered to be very small, between 1 g and 103 g small, between 103 g and 104 g medium, between 104 g and 105 g large, and superior to 105 g very large. Each study was also assigned its critical appraisal risk of bias.

Statistical analysis

To assess the influence of taxonomic classes, risks of bias, methods, light sources, light exposure levels, body sizes and trophic guilds on CFF, we implemented a linear mixed modelling approach.

Due to high collinearity between our variables, we split our analysis into two linear-mixed effect models (LMM). We first assessed whether CFF varied between taxonomic classes by using a LMM with species as the random term. Using a subset of means, medians, ranges of values, and extrapolated CFF values, we considered 7 sufficiently represented taxonomic classes, which corresponded to 151 CFF values. Model fits (residual vs. fit plots) were visually checked and CFF was square root-transformed to reach the best normality of residuals.

A second more comprehensive LMM was then fitted to assess the influence of risks of bias, methods, light sources, light exposure levels, body sizes and trophic guilds on CFF. This model also had a species random term as well as a taxonomic class random term to account for the non-independence of CFF across species and taxonomic classes. Due to the low availability of data on body masses and trophic guilds for Insecta and Malacostraca, both classes were discarded and the analysis carried out on a subset of 79 CFF values. Like for the first model, CFF was square root-transformed and model fits were visually checked. The most parsimonious model was selected based on the computation of the relative importance (RI) of each variable proposed by De Kort et al. (2021) [51].

To assess to what extent variations of CFF were explained by our second model, we computed RGLMM(m)2, the marginal R2 representing the variance explained by the fixed effects and RGLMM(c)2, the conditional R2 representing the variance explained by both fixed and random effects. All statistical analyses were carried out on R software (version 4.1.2). The LMM was computed with the package ‘lmerTest’ [52]. The most parsimonious model and R² were determined thanks to the package ‘MuMIn’ [53]. Graphs were customized thanks to the ‘ggplot2’ package [54].

Results

Screening process

The complete literature screening process is presented on Fig 1. All citations and their inclusion/exclusion on titles, abstracts and full-texts, associated with the reason in case of exclusion, are listed in S4 and S5 Files.

Fig 1. ROSES flow diagram reporting the screening process of the articles and studies of the review [55].

Fig 1

At first, 4881 citations were exported from the three databases and 2276 were selected on titles, among which 1041 had an available abstract. Abstracts screening lead to 477 accepted citations. Among them, 445 full-texts PDF were retrieved, of which 106 were kept after the full-text screening step. Over the whole screening process, 45 citations were identified as duplicates and were removed. Sixty-eight additional records came from our call for grey literature but none passed the full-text screening. Lastly, 46 other articles found by the review team that directly dealt with CFF [28, 33, 34, 4245], but not directly found in the three considered databases, were added to the final corpus.

Overall, 152 articles were included and were split into 267 studies. After the exclusion of studies without any replication nor control, 200 studies were retained. The critical appraisal step resulted in 8% (16) of studies with a high risk of bias, 78% (155) with a medium risk of bias and 14% (29) with a low risk of bias (S6 File).

Bibliometric results

Accepted articles were published between 1935 and 2020 with a major increase in the mid-1990s with less than 10 articles being published every five years before 1990 to more than 40 between 2015 and 2020 (S11 File). We classified studies’ methodology into two groups: electrophysiology (153) and behavioural (47). In the first group, electroretinogram was the most frequently used methodology even if electroencephalograms and other physiological protocols were also used. For the second group, two-alternative forced choice procedures were more often chosen, followed by optomotor ones. In both types of studies, authors used several types of light sources to produce their stimuli, LED being the most frequently chosen one (79) along with gas discharge lamps (37) and monochromators (33). More rarely, incandescent lamps and monitor screens were also used.

Fifteen taxonomic classes were found. Actinopterygii was the most represented taxon with more than 44 species being examined, followed by Malacostraca, Mammalia and Insecta with approximately 30 species (S11 File). Aves were studied in 23 species and Elasmobranchii as well as Reptilia were less examined both with 14 species. Only three Cephalaspidomorphi species were studied and, for each of the 7 remaining taxonomic classes, only one study was carried out. Overall, on the 200 CFF values that were observed, 156 different species were recorded. Mus musculus L. was the most examined species with 8 occurrences, along with Gallus gallus L. (6 studies) and Rattus norvegicus B. (6 studies). The vast majority of species (133) were studied only once.

Distribution of CFF values

CFF was more often reported as a mean value (125 studies) but authors also used the range of values, the minimum or maximum, the median value or the extrapolation from their data. Among the 125 mean values, 77 were detailed by a measure of variation, either a standard error (65) or a standard deviation.

Reported values of CFF varied from a maximum of between 300 Hz and 500 Hz for the beetle Melanophila acuminata D. [56] to a mean (± SD) of 0.57 (± 0.08) Hz for the snail Lissachatina fulica B. [57].

Some commonly used light technologies such as LED or gas discharge (e.g. High Pressure Sodium) lamps may produce a flickering effect at a frequency of 100 Hz due to the 50 Hz electrical supply in Europe. For this reason, we considered a 100 Hz CFF threshold to identify species that might perceive ALAN’s flicker in real in-situ conditions, outside at night. When only considering species living under low and variable light exposure levels, seven insects and two fish species among three taxonomic classes, namely Insecta, Aves, and Actinopterygii, had CFF higher than this threshold (Fig 2).

Fig 2. Distribution of maximum Critical Fusion Frequencies (CFF).

Fig 2

Only species living under low and variable light exposure levels in Actinopterygii, Aves, and Insecta, the three classes that had species with CFF higher than 100 Hz, are represented. The dashed line represents the flicker frequency of a lamp on a 50 Hz electrical supply—i.e. 100 Hz.

Effects of taxonomy, experimental design characteristics and selected life history traits on CFF

The first LMM testing only for CFF variability between taxonomic classes, namely Insecta, Aves, Actinopterygii, Elasmobranchii, Malacostraca, Mammalia and Reptilia, was fitted on a subset of 123 species and 151 comparable CFF values. The effect of taxonomic classes was found to be highly significant (F-value = 28.11, df = 6, p-value < 0.001). Over the 7 taxonomic classes, Insecta had significantly higher CFF than Aves (p-value = 0.001), with respectively 150.6 (± 88.2) Hz and 89.4 (± 29.2) Hz. Both classes had also significantly greater CFF than the other five taxa (p-value < 0.007). Actinopterygii, Reptilia and Mammalia had similar CFF with respectively 51.5 (± 23.2) Hz, 45.0 (± 18.2) Hz and 41.6 (± 20.0) Hz. Even if not consistently significant, CFF from Malacostraca and Elasmobranchii were inferior with 27.2 (± 13.7) Hz and 26.6 (± 12.5) Hz (for all other comparisons between taxonomic classes see Fig 3 and Table 1).

Fig 3. Distribution of square root Critical Fusion Frequencies (CFF) across the most studied taxonomic classes.

Fig 3

The dashed line represents the flicker frequency of a lamp on a 50 Hz electrical supply—i.e. 100 Hz. Sample size: Insecta (n = 26), Aves (n = 17), Reptilia (n = 13), Actinopterygii (n = 35), Mammalia (n = 19), Malacostraca (n = 29), Elasmobranchii (n = 12). Linear mixed effect model significant differences (p-value < 0.05) are indicated by the letters above each boxplot.

Table 1. Linear-mixed models (LMM) results testing for differences of Critical Fusion Frequencies (CFF) between the most studied taxonomic classes.

Insecta Aves Reptilia Actinopterygii Mammalia Elasmobranchii Malacostraca
p-value p-value p-value p-value p-value p-value p-value
Insecta - 1.44E-3 ** 4.87E-11 *** 1.31E-13 *** 9.82E-8 *** 7.37E-16 *** 4.49E-20 ***
Aves - 7.04E-4 *** 8.90E-4 *** 6.66E-3 ** 3.61E-7 *** 1.09E-8 ***
Reptilia - 0.46 0.82 0.05 0.03 *
Actinopterygii - 0.73 2.80E-3 ** 3.19E-4 ***
Mammalia - 0.06 0.04 *
Elasmobranchii - 0.99
Malacostraca -

Significant differences are indicated as follows:

*** p-value < 0.001,

** p-value < 0.01,

* p-value < 0.05.

The second model was fitted on a subset of 79 CFF values. The most parsimonious model only comprised the two fixed effects critical appraisal and light exposure levels (S11 File), which were both significant (F-value = 3.52, df = 2, p-value = 0.04; F-value = 11.74, df = 2, p-value < 0.001). Even though the majority of the variations of CFF was explained by random terms, a significant proportion was still explained by the two fixed effects (RGLMM(m)2 = 0.28; RGLMM(c)2 = 0.72). CFF values provided by studies rated with a low risk of bias were significantly higher than those provided by medium risk of bias studies (p-value = 0.01) (Fig 4A). Animals exposed to variable and high levels of light had significantly higher CFF (p-value < 0.001) with a mean of 86.1 (± 30.8) Hz and 65.8 (± 29.5) Hz compared to 33.4 (± 16.9) Hz for animals exposed to low light levels (Fig 4B). Animals exposed to variable levels of light had also significantly higher CFF than those exposed to high light levels (p-value = 0.02).

Fig 4.

Fig 4

Square root Critical Fusion Frequencies (CFF) for (A) low, medium and high risks of bias and for (B) low, variable and high light exposure levels. The dashed line represents the flicker frequency of a lamp on a 50 Hz electrical supply—i.e. 100 Hz. Sample size: (A) Low (n = 20), Medium (n = 55), High (n = 4); (B) Low (n = 30), Variable (n = 4), High (n = 45). Linear mixed effect model differences are indicated as follows: *** p-value < 0.001, ** p-value < 0.01, * p-value < 0.05, ns non significant.

Discussion

Before the potential effects of flickering light on species can be evaluated, an essential prerequisite is to build a comprehensive knowledge base on CFF values—the latter being a first estimate of flicker perception by animals. We thus aimed at updating previous reviews on CFF [33, 34] by following a more comprehensive and transparent method of systematic reviews preconized by the CEE [37]. We identified that wide gaps of knowledge in CFF values remain to date for numerous taxa (e.g. Amphibia, Arachnida and some aquatic taxa) which should be filled by further experimental investigations.

When comparing our CFF values to those found by Inger et al. (2014) [33], the maximum CFF remained the same—i.e. between 300 Hz and 500 Hz for the beetle Melanophila acuminata D.—while a lower minimum was found—i.e. 0.57 (± 0.08) Hz for the snail Lissachatina fulica B.—which can be explained by the more extensive literature search strategy carried out here. Even though Hammer et al. (2001) [56] acknowledged that their measure of CFF from M. acuminata’s pit organ was not accurate, those two upper and lower boundaries for CFF have not been challenged for nearly 20 years. Thus, we can hypothesise that they represent solid limit frequencies within the animal kingdom.

When fitting similar models as Inger et al. (2014) [33] on our broader set of species, the similar overall results were observed in the present study: neither the methodology, electrophysiological or behavioural, nor the light source significantly explained differences in CFF, while taxonomic classes and light exposure levels did. Insecta had the greatest CFF followed by Aves, both of which had significantly higher CFF than the ones observed for all other classes. The ability to fly, which many birds and insects have, could explain their high critical fusion frequencies since fast visual systems may be required to accomplish accurate manoeuvres and possibly avoid collisions [29, 33]. This latter finding is also interesting when considering the current decline of insect populations [58, 59] of which ALAN, alongside the loss of natural habitats and the use of pesticides [60], may be one of the main drivers [4, 5]. We can, therefore, hypothesise that flicker might represent a meaningful component of light pollution, along with intensity, spectral composition and temporality.

Even though we were not able to show any significant effect of trophic guilds on CFF with our model, the prey-predator relationship and its impact on CFF have already been discussed extensively in the literature. Indeed, Potier et al. (2019) [28] have linked the temporal resolution, defined as the ability to resolve rapid movements and estimated by the CFF, to the speed of the prey of diurnal raptors. They showed that the peregrine falcon, which hunts birds, had a higher temporal resolution than the Harris’s hawk which eats mainly terrestrial mammals. Likewise, in clear water marine habitats, McComb et al. (2010) [30] related the higher temporal resolutions of bonnethead sharks to their shallow and bright reef habitats and their fast-moving prey compared to the lower temporal resolution of blacknose sharks, which may forage in deeper and dimmer water environments. Differences in temporal resolutions may even rely on a co-evolutionary relationship between the prey and the predator. Indeed, Boström et al. (2016) [29] argued that the high speed of insect prey could represent a major driver of high temporal resolutions in flycatchers, their bird predator, which could, then, drive those of insects further away.

Similar to our examination of trophic guilds, our model did not show any significant effect of body size on CFF. However, one could think that the smaller the animal, the higher the CFF might be (S11 File). Our analysis also showed that nocturnal animals had significantly lower CFF than crepuscular and diurnal ones, which is in line with the often reported trade-off between light sensitivity and temporal resolution—i.e. higher light levels are needed for high rates of sampling [30, 33, 34]. Those two previous results have already been assessed by Healy et al. (2013) [34] who demonstrated the correlation between body mass, metabolic rate and temporal resolution—i.e. small animals with high metabolic rates in high light environments tend to have much higher CFF than large animals with low metabolic rate in darker environments.

One additional result provided by our modelling approach concerns the degree of confidence that should be granted to reported CFF values. Indeed, we found that CFF coming from low risk of bias studies were significantly greater than those from medium risk of bias studies and also possibly high risk of bias studies—the latter being not significant which may be due to the small sample size (only 4 studies). This result shows that, in order to correctly assess a species’ CFF, a robust experimental protocol is needed and determines the level of confidence that can be granted to a CFF value. Then, replicating the experiment, repeating the measures, having a clear control, randomising the selection of individuals and appropriately preparing specimens before the experiment seem to directly influence the accuracy of CFF values. In addition, regarding the exposure criterion, studies experimenting on several increasing light intensities were more usually given low risk of bias that the ones using only one unique light intensity. Indeed, we considered that several increasing light intensities had to be trialled to ensure that a true maximum of FFF (i.e. the CFF) was reached.

The perception of artificial anthropogenic light flicker

Due to the alternating nature of power supply, some anthropogenic light sources may flicker at a frequency of 100 Hz. This flicker has been thoroughly studied in fluorescent lighting [24, 33, 61, 62] but can be found in vapour discharge luminaires as well. While the latter are still used for outdoor lighting, it has hardly ever been the case for fluorescent lighting. Be that as it may, both types are increasingly being replaced by LEDs, that are proving much more energy-efficient. Various LED technologies have been engineered and each one may or may not show a 100-Hz flickering effect depending on the quality of their driver, the electronic component supplying power to the diode, and their dimming technology which relies, in the case of Pulse Width Modulation (PWM) technology, on rapid ON/OFF sequences at varying frequencies (usually 100 Hz–400 Hz) according to the chosen light intensity.

We thus considered the 100-Hz threshold to be relevant in order to assess the potential perception of anthropogenic flicker by animals. By isolating nocturnal and crepuscular animals, we were able to identify seven insects and two fish species which were much more likely to experience adverse effects from artificial light flicker. As we observed important intra-specific variation in CFF, we could also expect that some other species near the 100-Hz threshold were at risk of being impacted. Chatterjee et al. (2020) [63] provided the latest data on nocturnal and crepuscular insects CFF and looking at maximum values, they measured CFF of 230 Hz, 173 Hz and 149 Hz, respectively in the crepuscular butterflies Melanitis leda L., Gangara thyrsis F., Hasora chromus C., and 146 Hz, 116 Hz, 110 Hz in the moths Hippotion sp. H., Daphnis nerii L., and Eupatula macrops L., finally covering one of the poorly studied groups that Inger et al. (2014) [33] highlighted. Contrary to Inger et al. (2014) [33] who argued that the actual perception of flicker by animals should be limited—as they found that only diurnal animals were able to perceive flicker—we identified some crepuscular and nocturnal species that could, in fact, be influenced by flickering ALAN. Nonetheless, the actual perception of flicker—in real in-situ conditions—relies on more complex patterns and cannot be deduced solely by comparing species’ CFF and light sources flicker frequencies. Indeed, the flicker perception depends also on light intensity and thus indirectly on the distance to the light source, as Inger et al. (2014) [33] stated. Flicker from an intense light source would indeed be perceptible from further away, hence the importance of keeping outdoor lighting at low light levels. In addition, the orientation of light sources could also be crucial because, as light emitted horizontally or worse upwards can be spotted from farther away by animals, its flickering effect could be more perceptible as well.

Eventually, we would like to point out that animals may be subjected to the deleterious effects of flicker even though they cannot perceive it consciously. Indeed, Lu et al. (2012) [64] argued that a chromatic flicker at frequencies between 42.5 and 75 Hz, superior to the human CFF and therefore consciously unperceivable, was still able to entail their human subjects’ alerting and orienting attentional networks. Even though a first assessment of CFF seems essential, such results could challenge their wider use and justifies the need for a potential future systematic review on the specific matter of the impacts of flashing and flickering light on biodiversity.

Knowledge gaps

As was first noted by Inger et al. (2014) [33], this review highlights how an overall lack of data on animals’ CFF remains and continues to hamper our understanding of the impacts of anthropogenic lighting on biodiversity. We, thence, reiterate the important need for additional primary research in order to improve our knowledge of CFF in as many species as possible. Indeed, on the millions of species that populate the Earth, just over 150 were studied thus far accounting for only 15 taxonomic classes. This scarcity of data is particularly noticeable in key nocturnal taxa, which are likely to be greatly disturbed by ALAN. As such, the flicker perception of many more nocturnal and crepuscular insect species should be studied as well as those of nocturnal birds and bats, two other groups on which no additional data was retrieved in our systematic review compared to previous reviews [33, 34].

Additionally, based on critical appraisal, we identified that very few studies achieved a low risk of bias according to the criteria defined in this review. For instance, a large number of authors failed to indicate if they had performed any repetition or randomisation. Likewise, very little information was provided on the state of animals prior to the experiments in some studies, which could be an important predictor of an animal’s response to light treatments [65]. Too few studies in our corpus used several (or not as many as needed) light intensities in order to reach the true maximum flicker fusion frequency that is the CFF. Some studies could not report true maximum FFF as the highest frequency that their apparatuses could attain was too low for their specimens. In this case, we chose to report the highest FFF the authors could attain as a provisional CFF value. Such values should later be reassessed in order to build a more accurate CFF database. We also advocate the need for a strong and consistent reporting of CFF data. Indeed, accurate values of CFF should absolutely be reported as a mean attached to a measure of variation, which only one third of our studies provided, despite being a basic statistical need. Last but not least, we remind the essential need for replications and controls in order to measure reliable CFF values. Many recent studies have only used one specimen or have failed to report the use of a reference electrode for electroretinograms and had to be excluded after critical appraisal. While we acknowledge the difficulties in collecting and/or training large numbers of individuals, it is nonetheless critical to include measurements of multiple individuals for robust estimates of a species’ threshold of flicker perception.

Review limitations

Due to time limitation and financing constraints, we sometimes had to reduce our requirements comparing to CEE guidelines. First, we could not include search engines (e.g. Google Scholar) in our search strategy, nor could we request supplementary databases (e.g. Scopus) which would have probably increased the reliability of our search by increasing the number of test list articles indexed in the requested databases. In addition, after title screening, we had to set aside citations that did not possess an appended abstract. Indeed, dealing with these citations would have meant searching for the full-texts of these 1235 citations, which represented an additional workload unfeasible within the scope of our project. However, this additional work remains feasible subsequently thanks to the S7 File which lists these citations without abstract. We also could not exploit the reviews (i.e. articles that might include some CFF values through their full-texts) identified through citation screening—except Inger et al. (2014) [33] and Healy et al. (2013) [34]—and we then collated them in S8 File for further exploitation. We are conscious that these shortcomings may lead to an underestimation of the number of identified CFF, which could potentially have been assessed in more species, and could provide less robust data as more values for a given species might have been found. Nevertheless, our database already provides many additional CFF values compared to previously published reviews [33, 34].

Lastly, studies were only critically appraised by one reviewer whereas CEE guidelines call for a double independent assessment by two reviewers. However, we performed a test between two reviewers on a subsample of articles before starting critical appraisal. Accordingly, we could not carry out a double independent data extraction on the whole corpus, as requested by the CEE, and only performed the double independent extraction on one half of the corpus.

Conclusions

This systematic review, based on the method preconized by the CEE, provided a database of 200 critical fusion frequency values for 156 different species. This database complements the existing reviews on CFF by providing a wider range of more confident values. It, then, represents a current and qualitative state of knowledge of flicker perception in the animal kingdom, which could be helpful for scientists and researchers as well as for practitioners, such as lighting managers and designers. Here, we found that the beetle Melanophila acuminata D. could perceive the highest flicker frequency among all the recorded species whereas the snail Lissachatina fulica B. had the lowest temporal resolution. Insects and birds were the two taxa with the highest CFF. Moreover, nocturnal species had lower CFF than diurnal and crepuscular ones. We observed that some nocturnal and crepuscular insects could potentially perceive the flicker of anthropogenic light sources, which means that they could be subjected to its deleterious adverse effects. We also identified that ensuring the best experimental practices possible when determining CFF is crucial in order to report robust and accurate values of a species threshold of flicker perception. Nevertheless, the number of collected CFF values remains very low in relation to the number of all living animal species. In addition, this lack of data especially concerns key nocturnal taxa like birds and bats that are likely to be exposed to outdoor lighting. Therefore, the results presented here are necessarily provisional. We thus argue that many more species should be pressingly investigated by researchers to improve our knowledge of flicker perception by animals.

Supporting information

S1 File. ROSES reporting standards.

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S2 File. PRISMA checklist.

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S3 File. Articles from the test list.

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S4 File. Citation screening.

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S5 File. Citations excluded at full-text.

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S6 File. Studies critical appraisal.

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S7 File. Citations without an abstract.

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S8 File. Reviews identified through screening.

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S9 File. Unobtainable articles at full-text.

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S10 File. CFF dataset.

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S11 File. Statistical analyses results.

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Acknowledgments

We would like to thank Simon Potier who enlightened us about behavioural and optomotor CFF discrimination protocols. We also wish to thank Françoise Viénot, Christophe Martinsons, Jack Falcón, Christian Kerbiriou, Léa Mariton and Matthieu Iodice for providing us with literature, as well as Dakis-Yaoba Ouédraogo and Simon Blanchet for their fruitful statistical advice which contributed to substantially improve the quality of our manuscript. At last, we sincerely thank Marie-Pierre Alexandre for her support and advice all along our study.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

This research was funded thanks to the support of the AFE (French Association on Lighting), the ACE (French Association of Lighting Designers and Lighting Engineers), Citeos and PatriNat (French Office for Biodiversity (OFB) – French National Museum of Natural History (MNHN) – French National Centre for Scientific Research (CNRS)).

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PONE-D-22-13677A Flashing Light may not be that Flashy: a Systematic review on Critical Fusion FrequenciesPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: This paper is focussed on the observed phenomenon that animals vary in their ability to detect flashing lights and this trait has potential behavioural and hence possible conservation relevance. This paper is effectively a description of a dataset; albeit one that has been collected very rigorously. While there is some analyses of the data presented, there is little by way of a hypothesis driven approach and ultimately the analyses performed are not well directed or executed. There have been previous studies on what might explain variation in this trait among animals, but this current paper does not clearly develop those findings and does not provide obvious new discoveries.

The paper swaps a lot between stating that its main aim is to publish a rigorous dataset or that its aim is to describe the potential impacts of this trait on biodiversity and light pollution. Ultimately i think this is really a dataset description at its core and the value to understanding variation in the trait is secondary. My advice would be to either focus on the dataset itself and submit for publication in a journal such as Nature Publishing Group's journal Scientific Data https://www.nature.com/sdata/publish or Elsevier's Data in Brief https://www.journals.elsevier.com/data-in-brief . The alternative is to go back and formulate some clear questions that can be answered using this dataset, that are based on sound logical argument based on the literature and make these objectives the key focus of the narrative.

My justification for this assessment is based on various statements in the abstract and introduction.

**Abstract**

The stated objective is "This review aims at collecting CFF values for as many animal species as possible through a comprehensive, transparent and replicable systematic literature survey according to the Collaboration for Environmental Evidence standards." This says that the paper is about a dataset, and makes no mention of testable hypotheses.

The stated methods are entirely around collation of the dataset.

The results start to bring in some patterns of variation among taxonomic groups or individuals species, but this comes out of nowhere based on the previous content in the abstract.

**Introduction**

It is stated that artificial light at night (ALAN) affects species and ecosystems, but no mechanism is explored (ultimate effects are discussed though), and hence does not set the scene for hypotheses about what factors might explain variation in CFF as a trait.

Statements are made that new technologies such as LEDs can have an impact, but again no mechanisms or details are provided. Do LEDs flicker? are they more intense? etc...

The new study is stated as an improvement over Inger et al 2014 and Healy et al 2013. Certainly the data collection aspect of the current study is more comprehensive and rigorous than these two papers, but they are not "reviews" as stated in the text as they both aimed to test actual hypotheses. Their aim was not to collate a dataset but rather draw some inference on the drivers of CFF in specific groups. This comparison and criticism is perhaps not entirely warranted and should be rephrased.

The introduction concludes with a statement "This work focused on wild and domestic animals, excluding humans, and aimed at answering the following review question: until which frequency a species can perceive flicker?" which is not a well stated question or hypothesis. It ultimately comes down to stating that something was measured and the aim is to right down those numbers. Maybe the aim is to identify which species are perhaps most likely to be affected by ALAN but even if that is the case it is not clear how exactly that assessment can be made using the data in question because sensitivity to flickering light at 50Hz is not the same as negatively impacted by same.

**Material & Methods**

The approach is very rigorous and well described. While the authors point to potential biases in not following a rigorus protocol such as the one they have adopted, they do rather casually state that only articles written in English and French were considered. This of course could be a source of bias no different to the others they identify and should be acknowledged as such.

The critical appraisal section is very rigorous and welcome.

Healy et al 2013 showed a clear trend of log(CFF) with log(body mass), but here the authors choose to collapse body size into large, average and small. There is no detailed description in the main text for how these categories were defined and decided, and it seems like a big missed opportunity to just include body mass, which is known to be a key trait in nearly all studies of within and between species variation.

It is not clear from the main text what variables were included as random factors and which were fixed factors in the models. One aspect of Healy et al 2013 that was a key feature of analysing variation i CFF between species as the inclusion of a phylogenetic random term but this appears to not be included in the present study. Some discusison of this is at least warranted. Presumably the main issue might be a lack of a good tree for insects?... but it seems like a missed opportunity to simply ignore this aspect.

Square root transforming the CFF data seems a bit arbitrary. Is there a mechanistic reason to do so? There might be a mechanistic reason to go for 1/CFF which would be 1/Hz which is wavelength and hence a measure of the integration window of perception. Equally Healy et al 2013 argued for modelling log(CFF) ~ log(body mass) as a logically argued allometric scaling relationship.

**Results**

Why was one of the criteria that a paper had to have an abstract?

The recording of whether a study was electrophysiological or behavioural is welcome.

The threshold of 100Hz is not well explained. That is it is not clearly explained how potential perception of ALAN's flicker is linked to CFF or indeed how one might prove an impact.

Running a LMM, not getting the result you expected and then running a random forest is not a rigorous way to perform an analysis and risks fishing for results. What about all the other approaches we could have used? It seems a shame to have gone to good detail on compiling a rigorous dataset only to throw multiple statistical approaches including model selection and random forests at the data without a well argued reason.

**Conclusions**

Ultimately the conclusions support my sense that this paper is primarily about compilation of a rigorous dataset and does not test well argued questions or hypotheses about the variation in this trait. As such i feel that it would be more naturally published as a dataset and not as a research article.

Reviewer #2: In this interesting paper the authors have compiled a comprehensive database of CFF in the animal kingdom. Importantly, they have used a rigorous process following standardised guidelines to compel the database and they have detailed the entire process. Then, using this database, which I believe is the largest and most comprehensive of its type, they performed analyses to (1) identify ecological correlates of CFF (such as body size, activity patterns and environmental light levels, and trophic guild and (2) to identify species that may be particularly at risk from flicker caused by anthropogenic lighting, assuming a critical frequency of 100 Hz. The latter is particularly important because anthropogenic light pollution is increasing and there is strong evidence that it is having detrimental effects on ecosystems worldwide. Using their large database, the authors have also been able to identify knowledge gaps such as amphibians and nocturnal aerial species like bats, birds, and insects. I enjoyed reading this manuscript. However, my main concerns are to do with how the authors assigned different ecological categories to each of the species in their database. At the very least I think they need to provide more information onto how the categories were defined and justify trying to fit should a brough range of animals representing the entire animal kingdom onto such simple 3- or 4-point scales of, for example, body size and tropic level/guild. I also found numerous examples of grammatical errors that need to be addressed, and some passages of text where I do simply not understand what the author s mean by what they have written.

Abstract

• Change “Insects and birds had higher CFF than all other taxa studied whereas nocturnal species had lower CFF than diurnal and crepuscular ones.” to “Insects and birds had higher CFFs than all other taxa studied. Irrespective of taxon, nocturnal species had lower CFF than diurnal and crepuscular ones.”

• Change “We also found that primary consumer might have greater CFF than species from higher levels of the food chain.” to “We also found that primary consumers might have greater CFFs than species from higher levels of the food chain.”

Introduction

Page 4

• Change “anthropogenic driver behind insect decline” to “anthropogenic drivers behind insect decline”.

• Change “and have been linked” to “and has been linked”.

• Change “At last, ALAN could also” to “In addition, ALAN could also”.

• Change “disrupting two key ecosystem services that are pollination and seed dispersal” to “disrupting two key ecosystem processes, namely pollination and seed dispersal”.

• Change “Light impacts on biological organisms have been linked to several key components of lighting,” to “Impacts on biological organisms have been linked to several key components of artificial lighting,”.

Page 5

• Change “as it lowered the number of captured Diptera, Hemiptera and Lepidoptera individuals.” to “as lowered numbers of Diptera, Hemiptera and Lepidoptera were caught in traps associated with a flickering light.”

• Change “Species very perception” to “Species perception”

• Change “build a better knowledge on CFF distribution in the animal kingdom. In this purpose,” to “gain better knowledge of variation in CFF across the animal kingdom. To this end, “.

Page 6

• Change “may then be” to “may thus be”.

• Change “we propose a systematic review on” to “we present a systematic review of”.

• I do not understand what the research question “until which frequency a species can perceive flicker?” means. Can this be rephrased please?

Materials and Methods

Page 10

• Change “which both measure the electrical response of the retina or brain to flickering light.” to “which measure the electrical response of the retina or brain to flickering light, respectively.”

• Change “require an animal” to requires an animal”.

Page 11

• I have concerns about how species were categorised based on trophic status. In the CFF database (file S10) species are coded on a four-point scale from 0-3. However, in the text the authors state that species were classified as being a primary consumer, omnivorous (this should be omnivore and predator). How do these three categories match onto the four-point scale of 0-3? Also, what constitutes a predator? Does this category include secondary and tertiary consumers? How were different species assigned into these ecological categories? Was this based on the literature, or intuition, or the authors own knowledge? Did the authors try to further separate predators into secondary and tertiary consumers? Having tried to classify large datasets of species into different trophic level I do appreciate that it is very difficult to classify such a wide range of animals, but I wonder if using such a simplistic scale means that important biological information is lost here. For example, all of the elasmobranchs within the database are classified as having the same trophic level (3). However, although they are all predators, they actually operate on different trophic levels in aquatic food webs. For example, rays and guitarfish feed on invertebrates and can be considered secondary consumers, while sharks such as scalloped hammerhead sharks, feed on rays and so are tertiary consumers. In addition, although not included in this study, there are other apex predator species of shark that occupy the roles of quaternary consumers, that will feed on both rays and scalloped hammerhead sharks.

• I also think the authors need to provide more information and clarity about how all of the species in the data based were classified in terms of body size. In a study dealing with so many different forms of animal life ranging across several orders of magnitude, how is it possible to divide them into large, average and small? For a species to be grouped into one of these three categories, did it have to be above or below a certain body size, for example? Also, what does the average category mean? Average body size in respect to what? All species in the animal kingdom, species included in this study? Perhaps the authors mean small, mid-size and large as opposed to small, average and large? More information is required. I also find it strange that whatever scheme the authors have used has resulted in, for example, all of the insects and birds being grouped in the same category (small), even though a house fly may be a few mm in size, weighing a fraction of a gram, whereas a Harris hawk can weigh 800-1000g and have a wingspan of over 1 metre. The system used also means that the Great horned owl, which is a very large bird with a wingspan of over 1 metre is classified as ‘small’, whereas a domestic cat, which weighs more than a great horned owl, but which is smaller in terms of body size/length, as classified as ‘average’. Another example is that a trout (30-60 cm, 05-3 kg), cuttlefish (30-40 cm, 2-4 kg) and sheep (50-100 kg) are all considered to be ‘average’. At the very least the authors need to better define and quantify their body size categories, and I think they should potentially consider have a broader range of categories.

Results

Page 13

• Change “two-force choice procedures” to “two-alternative forced choice procedure”.

• I do not understand the rationale for presenting the CFF values a for a species in the text, both on page 13 and throughout the manuscript. Why is the mean value plus/minus standard deviation or some other measure of variability enclosed within parentheses? For example, I would change “to (0.57 ± 0.08) Hz for the snail Lissachatina fulica B.” to “to 0.57 (± 0.08) Hz for the snail Lissachatina fulica B

• Results in general. I think the results and analysis are fine as the manuscript stands, but if the authors end up revising their categorises for body size and trophic level, for example, then this will have an impact on the results and statistical analysis.

Discussion

Page 16.

• The results show that insects and birds have the highest CFF values. A logical next step for me at least would be to think that there is some correlation between needing a faster visual system and the sensory demands of flight. However, the authors do not seem to even mention this. Are flying animals more or less likely to be exposed to anthropogenic flickering light sources?

Page 17

• In the discussion of CFF in sharks the authors mention that McComb et al. hypothesized that variation in CFF between bonnethead, scalloped hammerhead and blacknose sharks could be because bonnethead and scalloped hammerhead sharks (which have relatively higher CFFs) live in shallow and bright reef habitats and feed on their fast-moving prey compared blacknose sharks, which usually forages in deeper and dimmer water environments. However, in table S10 the authors have classified bonnetheads as experiencing ‘high’ light exposure while both scalloped hammerheads and blacknose sharks are classified as having ‘low’ light exposure. It seems that the light level classifications assigned to these species contradicts the primary source of information. It also seems strange that the authors have highlighted these sharks as an example when their own coding of these specie sin their database appears to contradict the primary reference source.

• Change “Our data showed that primary consumer” to “Our data showed that primary consumers”.

• Change “Such assumptions should, nevertheless, be studied” to “Such assumptions should be studied”.

Page 18

• Change “When the latter are still used for outdoor lighting” to “While the latter are still used for outdoor lighting”.

• What does “Chatterjee et al., (2020) [61] brought the latest data” mean? What do the authors mean by ‘brought’ in this context?

Page 19

• Change “For as crucial assessing an animal actual perception of flicker is” to “As crucial as assessing an animals actual flicker perception is”.

• Change “As it was first noted by Inger et al. (2014) [33] and even if more and more studies have been carried out lately, an important lack of data on animals’ CFF remains and is hampering our understanding of the impacts of anthropogenic lighting on biodiversity” to “As was first noted by Inger et al. (2014) [33], this study highlights how an overall lack of data on animals’ CFF remains and continues to hamper our understanding of the impacts of anthropogenic lighting on biodiversity.”

Page 20

• Change “There, nevertheless, remains many recent studies using only one specimen or failing to report the use of a reference electrode for electroretinograms” to “Many recent studies have only used one specimen or have failed to report the use of a reference electrode for electroretinograms”.

Page 22

• Change “outdoor lightings. Then, this result is necessarily provisional.” to “outdoor lighting. Therefore, the results presented here are necessarily provisional.”

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PLoS One. 2022 Dec 30;17(12):e0279718. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0279718.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


28 Oct 2022

Editor:

Two reviewers have examined this manuscript and both contributed important comments. Reviewer 1 has some strong comments about the organization of the manuscript and suggests that the authors could focus more on answering ecologically or taxonomically motivated questions in addition to compiling the data on CFF. I tend to agree somewhat with Reviewer 1's comments, but also note that this is not a requirement for publication. Consequently, I will leave it to the authors to decide how much revision they would like to do in this respect. Reviewer 2 provides many good comments that should be considered.

I also include a file with tracked changes in which I identified a small number of typographical or grammatical errors.

=> We thank you and the reviewers for your interest in our manuscript. We detail here how we have integrated the requests. All revisions to the manuscript by the editor were taken into account in this new version.

=> Based on comments from Reviewer #2, we rewrote some parts of our manuscript to better answer the ecological questions at the heart of this work. Notably, we rephrased our ecological questions: “what evidence exists regarding animal critical fusion frequencies? What is the distribution of CFF between species? Which species are more at risk of being impacted by artificial lighting flicker?” (p. 6-7)

=> Overall, we decided to improve the quality of our database and statistical analyses. First, we built a more accurate database for trophic guild (renamed to better fit our new categories) and body mass by extracting data on as many species as possible on online available trait databases - mainly FishBase (www.fishbase.org) and Animal Diversity Web (https://animaldiversity.org). We also more clearly defined how we classified species (into 5 categories instead of 3) as being Very small, Small, Medium, Large or Very Large weight categories. In addition, we chose to only consider 3 levels of trophic guilds that are Herbivore, Omnivore and Carnivore.

=> Due to the lower availability of data for trophic guilds and body masses notably for Malacostraca and Insecta and also based on the comments from Reviewer #1, we improved our modelling approach. First, we dropped our RandomForest to only focus on the results from our LMMs. To take into account collinearity, we decided to split our linear-mixed modelling approach in two by first assessing the effect of taxonomic classes alone. We also added taxonomic class as a random factor in the second model to account for phylogenetic non-independence between CFF values. We added this new methodology to the ‘Material & Methods’ section and corrected the ‘Results’ and ‘Discussion’ sections accordingly, notably concerning critical appraisal and taxonomic classes significant comparisons. (p. 11-12 and 16-19 and 21)

=> We corrected Fig 1 and the main text after spotting a misclassified duplicate that altered the reported the reported volumes of citations. We also changed our additional files to improve conciseness (see S11 File).

Reviewer #1:

This paper is focussed on the observed phenomenon that animals vary in their ability to detect flashing lights and this trait has potential behavioural and hence possible conservation relevance. This paper is effectively a description of a dataset; albeit one that has been collected very rigorously. While there is some analyses of the data presented, there is little by way of a hypothesis driven approach and ultimately the analyses performed are not well directed or executed. There have been previous studies on what might explain variation in this trait among animals, but this current paper does not clearly develop those findings and does not provide obvious new discoveries.

The paper swaps a lot between stating that its main aim is to publish a rigorous dataset or that its aim is to describe the potential impacts of this trait on biodiversity and light pollution. Ultimately i think this is really a dataset description at its core and the value to understanding variation in the trait is secondary. My advice would be to either focus on the dataset itself and submit for publication in a journal such as Nature Publishing Group's journal Scientific Data https://www.nature.com/sdata/publish or Elsevier's Data in Brief https://www.journals.elsevier.com/data-in-brief . The alternative is to go back and formulate some clear questions that can be answered using this dataset, that are based on sound logical argument based on the literature and make these objectives the key focus of the narrative.

=> Based on these remarks, we tried to better phrase our questions. Our questions are now phrased: “what evidence exists regarding animal critical fusion frequencies? What is the distribution of CFF between species? Which species are more at risk of being impacted by artificial lighting flicker?” (p. 6-7)

My justification for this assessment is based on various statements in the abstract and introduction.

**Abstract**

The stated objective is "This review aims at collecting CFF values for as many animal species as possible through a comprehensive, transparent and replicable systematic literature survey according to the Collaboration for Environmental Evidence standards." This says that the paper is about a dataset, and makes no mention of testable hypotheses.

=> Agreed, we added the lacking ecological hypotheses: “what evidence exists regarding animal CFF? What is the distribution of CFF between species? Which species are more at risk of being impacted by artificial lighting flicker?” (p. 2)

The stated methods are entirely around collation of the dataset.

=> Agreed, we added a sentence on the statistical analyses we carried out “All relevant data were extracted and analysed to determine the distribution of CFF in the animal kingdom and the influence of experimental designs and species traits on CFF” (p. 2)

The results start to bring in some patterns of variation among taxonomic groups or individuals species, but this comes out of nowhere based on the previous content in the abstract.

=> We hope that previous additions answer that comment.

**Introduction**

It is stated that artificial light at night (ALAN) affects species and ecosystems, but no mechanism is explored (ultimate effects are discussed though), and hence does not set the scene for hypotheses about what factors might explain variation in CFF as a trait.

=> To improve the conciseness, clarity and understandability of the introduction, we had decided to address this topic and discuss it based on our results in the section ‘Discussion’. Indeed, we did not want to have an extended and unclear introduction.

Statements are made that new technologies such as LEDs can have an impact, but again no mechanisms or details are provided. Do LEDs flicker? are they more intense? etc...

=> Same as above, we decided to talk about ALAN flicker in the ‘Discussion’ section. First drafts of our introduction were considered too long and therefore its understandability was minimal.

The new study is stated as an improvement over Inger et al 2014 and Healy et al 2013. Certainly the data collection aspect of the current study is more comprehensive and rigorous than these two papers, but they are not "reviews" as stated in the text as they both aimed to test actual hypotheses. Their aim was not to collate a dataset but rather draw some inference on the drivers of CFF in specific groups. This comparison and criticism is perhaps not entirely warranted and should be rephrased.

=> As both articles collected data from numerous publications (and even applied a literature search strategy similar to ours in the case of Inger et al. (2014)), we considered them as reviews. We rephrased in the MS: “For decision-makers to be informed in the best way possible and to reach highly beneficial biodiversity protective actions, we argue that a more comprehensive and transparent literature survey is therefore needed”. (p. 6)

The introduction concludes with a statement "This work focused on wild and domestic animals, excluding humans, and aimed at answering the following review question: until which frequency a species can perceive flicker?" which is not a well stated question or hypothesis. It ultimately comes down to stating that something was measured and the aim is to right down those numbers. Maybe the aim is to identify which species are perhaps most likely to be affected by ALAN but even if that is the case it is not clear how exactly that assessment can be made using the data in question because sensitivity to flickering light at 50Hz is not the same as negatively impacted by same.

=> After comments in the abstract, we decided to improve the way we phrased our review questions: “This work focused on wild and domestic animals, excluding humans, and aimed at building a comprehensive knowledge base on animals’ CFF as well as answering the following questions: what evidence exists regarding animal critical fusion frequencies? What is the distribution of CFF between species? Which species are more at risk of being impacted by artificial lighting flicker?” (p. 6-7)

**Material & Methods**

The approach is very rigorous and well described. While the authors point to potential biases in not following a rigorus protocol such as the one they have adopted, they do rather casually state that only articles written in English and French were considered. This of course could be a source of bias no different to the others they identify and should be acknowledged as such.

=> Agreed, such bias exists in this work but it is acknowledged in the Collaboration for Environmental Evidence standards. We added a sentence on the matter: “We acknowledge that only including articles in those two languages constitutes a potential bias to our systematic review but this could not be avoided based the linguistic competences of the review team” (p. 8)

The critical appraisal section is very rigorous and welcome.

=> We are deeply thankful for this comment.

Healy et al 2013 showed a clear trend of log(CFF) with log(body mass), but here the authors choose to collapse body size into large, average and small. There is no detailed description in the main text for how these categories were defined and decided, and it seems like a big missed opportunity to just include body mass, which is known to be a key trait in nearly all studies of within and between species variation.

=> Based on general comments from Reviewer #2, we decided to improve the quality of our database by extracting body mass values from two online trait databases. However, due to heterogeneity on data types (either means, ranges of values or maximums) between the different databases, we decided to collapse body mass into 5 body sizes categories. This allowed to have the largest dataset possible for our modelling approach. As very little data could be found for Insecta and Malacostraca, they had to be discarded from our analyses.

=> We added explanations in the section ‘Material & Methods’ on how our categories were built and how it changed our statistical analyses. (p. 11-12)

It is not clear from the main text what variables were included as random factors and which were fixed factors in the models. One aspect of Healy et al 2013 that was a key feature of analysing variation i CFF between species as the inclusion of a phylogenetic random term but this appears to not be included in the present study. Some discusison of this is at least warranted. Presumably the main issue might be a lack of a good tree for insects?... but it seems like a missed opportunity to simply ignore this aspect.

=> Based on this comment, we decided to implement a taxonomic class random term in our modelling approach (See answer to Editor). We added: “This model also comprised a species random term as well as a taxonomic class random term to account for the non-independence of CFF values between taxonomic classes.” (p. 12)

Square root transforming the CFF data seems a bit arbitrary. Is there a mechanistic reason to do so? There might be a mechanistic reason to go for 1/CFF which would be 1/Hz which is wavelength and hence a measure of the integration window of perception. Equally Healy et al 2013 argued for modelling log(CFF) ~ log(body mass) as a logically argued allometric scaling relationship.

=> We used the square root transformation of CFF data as, in our case, it achieved the best normality of residuals compared to the log transformation preferably chosen by Healy et al. (2013) or Inger et al. (2014). This is classically carried out in modelling approach.

**Results**

Why was one of the criteria that a paper had to have an abstract?

=> We were confronted to a large number of citations without an appended abstract. Due to time constraints, we could not retrieve all full-texts associated to these citations and screen them. To do this would have represented an additional workload of 1235 full-texts to search and screen which was not possible within the scope of our funded project. We therefore had to put them aside. We however stress that such citations are clearly identified thanks to Supplementary file 7 to allow any person to undertake this work in order to complete the review.

The recording of whether a study was electrophysiological or behavioural is welcome.

=> We are deeply thankful for this comment.

The threshold of 100Hz is not well explained. That is it is not clearly explained how potential perception of ALAN's flicker is linked to CFF or indeed how one might prove an impact.

=> We tried to rephrase that sentence to improve its understandability: “As some commonly used light technologies such as LED or gas discharge lamps (e.g. High Pressure Sodium) may produce a flickering effect at a frequency of 100 Hz due to the 50 Hz electrical supply in Europe. For this reason, we considered a 100 Hz CFF threshold to identify species that might perceive ALAN’s flicker in real conditions outside at night.”. (p. 16)

=> Such results are later discussed in the ‘Discussion’ section.

Running a LMM, not getting the result you expected and then running a random forest is not a rigorous way to perform an analysis and risks fishing for results. What about all the other approaches we could have used? It seems a shame to have gone to good detail on compiling a rigorous dataset only to throw multiple statistical approaches including model selection and random forests at the data without a well argued reason.

=> Yes, we agree. Based on this comment, we decided to only keep our LMM and not to take into account the RandomForest anymore. We reformulated both the ‘Results’ and ‘Discussion’ sections accordingly. (p. 17 and 20)

**Conclusions**

Ultimately the conclusions support my sense that this paper is primarily about compilation of a rigorous dataset and does not test well argued questions or hypotheses about the variation in this trait. As such i feel that it would be more naturally published as a dataset and not as a research article.

=> As we believe this paper also aims at identifying CFF variations between species and which species are more at risk of being impacted by flicker, we rephrased our hypotheses in the ‘Abstract’ and ‘Introduction’ sections. (p. 6-7)

Reviewer #2:

In this interesting paper the authors have compiled a comprehensive database of CFF in the animal kingdom. Importantly, they have used a rigorous process following standardised guidelines to compel the database and they have detailed the entire process. Then, using this database, which I believe is the largest and most comprehensive of its type, they performed analyses to (1) identify ecological correlates of CFF (such as body size, activity patterns and environmental light levels, and trophic guild and (2) to identify species that may be particularly at risk from flicker caused by anthropogenic lighting, assuming a critical frequency of 100 Hz. The latter is particularly important because anthropogenic light pollution is increasing and there is strong evidence that it is having detrimental effects on ecosystems worldwide. Using their large database, the authors have also been able to identify knowledge gaps such as amphibians and nocturnal aerial species like bats, birds, and insects. I enjoyed reading this manuscript. However, my main concerns are to do with how the authors assigned different ecological categories to each of the species in their database. At the very least I think they need to provide more information onto how the categories were defined and justify trying to fit should a brough range of animals representing the entire animal kingdom onto such simple 3- or 4-point scales of, for example, body size and tropic level/guild. I also found numerous examples of grammatical errors that need to be addressed, and some passages of text where I do simply not understand what the author s mean by what they have written.

Abstract

• Change “Insects and birds had higher CFF than all other taxa studied whereas nocturnal species had lower CFF than diurnal and crepuscular ones.” to “Insects and birds had higher CFFs than all other taxa studied. Irrespective of taxon, nocturnal species had lower CFF than diurnal and crepuscular ones.”

=> Modified. (p. 2)

• Change “We also found that primary consumer might have greater CFF than species from higher levels of the food chain.” to “We also found that primary consumers might have greater CFFs than species from higher levels of the food chain.”

=> Based on statistical analyses modifications, we decided not to report this result in this new version. (p. 2)

Introduction

Page 4

• Change “anthropogenic driver behind insect decline” to “anthropogenic drivers behind insect decline”.

=> Modified. (p. 4)

• Change “and have been linked” to “and has been linked”.

=> Modified. (p. 4)

• Change “At last, ALAN could also” to “In addition, ALAN could also”.

=> Modified. (p. 4)

• Change “disrupting two key ecosystem services that are pollination and seed dispersal” to “disrupting two key ecosystem processes, namely pollination and seed dispersal”.

=> Modified. (p. 4)

• Change “Light impacts on biological organisms have been linked to several key components of lighting,” to “Impacts on biological organisms have been linked to several key components of artificial lighting,”.

=> Modified. (p. 4)

Page 5

• Change “as it lowered the number of captured Diptera, Hemiptera and Lepidoptera individuals.” to “as lowered numbers of Diptera, Hemiptera and Lepidoptera were caught in traps associated with a flickering light.”

=> Modified. (p. 5)

• Change “Species very perception” to “Species perception”

=> Modified. (p. 5)

• Change “build a better knowledge on CFF distribution in the animal kingdom. In this purpose,” to “gain better knowledge of variation in CFF across the animal kingdom. To this end, “.

=> Modified. (p. 5)

Page 6

• Change “may then be” to “may thus be”.

=> Modified. (p. 6)

• Change “we propose a systematic review on” to “we present a systematic review of”.

=> Modified. (p. 6)

• I do not understand what the research question “until which frequency a species can perceive flicker?” means. Can this be rephrased please?

=> We indeed rephrased our hypotheses to better grasp the ecological matters we tried to answer: “This work focused on wild and domestic animals, excluding humans, and aimed at building a comprehensive knowledge base on animals’ CFF as well as answering the following questions: what evidence exists regarding animal CFF? What is the distribution of CFF between species? Which species are more at risk of being impacted by artificial lighting flicker?” (p. 6-7)

Materials and Methods

Page 10

• Change “which both measure the electrical response of the retina or brain to flickering light.” to “which measure the electrical response of the retina or brain to flickering light, respectively.”

=> Modified. (p. 10)

• Change “require an animal” to requires an animal”.

=> Modified. (p. 11)

Page 11

• I have concerns about how species were categorised based on trophic status. In the CFF database (file S10) species are coded on a four-point scale from 0-3. However, in the text the authors state that species were classified as being a primary consumer, omnivorous (this should be omnivore and predator). How do these three categories match onto the four-point scale of 0-3? Also, what constitutes a predator? Does this category include secondary and tertiary consumers? How were different species assigned into these ecological categories? Was this based on the literature, or intuition, or the authors own knowledge? Did the authors try to further separate predators into secondary and tertiary consumers? Having tried to classify large datasets of species into different trophic level I do appreciate that it is very difficult to classify such a wide range of animals, but I wonder if using such a simplistic scale means that important biological information is lost here. For example, all of the elasmobranchs within the database are classified as having the same trophic level (3). However, although they are all predators, they actually operate on different trophic levels in aquatic food webs. For example, rays and guitarfish feed on invertebrates and can be considered secondary consumers, while sharks such as scalloped hammerhead sharks, feed on rays and so are tertiary consumers. In addition, although not included in this study, there are other apex predator species of shark that occupy the roles of quaternary consumers, that will feed on both rays and scalloped hammerhead sharks.

=> Based on this comment, we extracted trophic guild data from available online databases, mainly FishBase (www.fishbase.org) and Animal Diversity Web (https://animaldiversity.org) as well as numerous other references to try to improve our trophic guild dataset (see CFF database for all references). We fit animals into 3 categories to limit problems of data overcategorisation in our model: ‘Herbivore’, ‘Omnivore’ or ‘Carnivore’.

=> We rephrased: “Each species was associated with its taxonomic class [48], its trophic guild (i.e. herbivore, omnivore, carnivore)…” (p. 11)

=> This new improved dataset changed the volume of CFF data that could be used in our model and we had to redo our analyses accordingly (see response to Editor)

• I also think the authors need to provide more information and clarity about how all of the species in the data based were classified in terms of body size. In a study dealing with so many different forms of animal life ranging across several orders of magnitude, how is it possible to divide them into large, average and small? For a species to be grouped into one of these three categories, did it have to be above or below a certain body size, for example? Also, what does the average category mean? Average body size in respect to what? All species in the animal kingdom, species included in this study? Perhaps the authors mean small, mid-size and large as opposed to small, average and large? More information is required. I also find it strange that whatever scheme the authors have used has resulted in, for example, all of the insects and birds being grouped in the same category (small), even though a house fly may be a few mm in size, weighing a fraction of a gram, whereas a Harris hawk can weigh 800-1000g and have a wingspan of over 1 metre. The system used also means that the Great horned owl, which is a very large bird with a wingspan of over 1 metre is classified as ‘small’, whereas a domestic cat, which weighs more than a great horned owl, but which is smaller in terms of body size/length, as classified as ‘average’. Another example is that a trout (30-60 cm, 05-3 kg), cuttlefish (30-40 cm, 2-4 kg) and sheep (50-100 kg) are all considered to be ‘average’. At the very least the authors need to better define and quantify their body size categories, and I think they should potentially consider have a broader range of categories.

=> Based on this comment, we extracted body mass data from available online databases, mainly FishBase (www.fishbase.org) and Animal Diversity Web (https://animaldiversity.org) as well as numerous other references to try to improve our body mass dataset (see CFF database for all references), notably on Insecta and Malacostraca. However, despite all our endeavours, very few body mass data were available for these two taxonomic classes. We then categorised animals with a body mass inferior to 1 g as ‘Very small’, between 1 g and 103 g ‘Small’, between 103 g and 104 g ‘Medium’, between 104 g and 105 g ‘Large’, and superior to 105 g ‘Very large’.

=> We rephrased and added: “Each species was associated with its taxonomic class [48], its trophic guild (i.e. herbivore, omnivore, carnivore) and a measure of its body size (i.e. very small, small, medium, large, very large). Categories were build thanks to data mainly provided by two available online trait databases [49,50]. Animals with a body mass inferior to 1 g were arbitrarily considered to be very small, between 1 g and 103 g small, between 103 g and 104 g medium, between 104 g and 105 g large, and superior to 105 g very large.” (p. 11)

=> This new improved dataset changed the volume of CFF data that could be used in our model and we had to redo our analyses accordingly (see answer to editor)

Results

Page 13

• Change “two-force choice procedures” to “two-alternative forced choice procedure”.

=> Modified. (p. 15)

• I do not understand the rationale for presenting the CFF values a for a species in the text, both on page 13 and throughout the manuscript. Why is the mean value plus/minus standard deviation or some other measure of variability enclosed within parentheses? For example, I would change “to (0.57 ± 0.08) Hz for the snail Lissachatina fulica B.” to “to 0.57 (± 0.08) Hz for the snail Lissachatina fulica B

=> Modified throughout the MS.

• Results in general. I think the results and analysis are fine as the manuscript stands, but if the authors end up revising their categorises for body size and trophic level, for example, then this will have an impact on the results and statistical analysis.

=> We modified the result section according to our new dataset and statistical analyses (see answer to Editor)

Discussion

Page 16.

• The results show that insects and birds have the highest CFF values. A logical next step for me at least would be to think that there is some correlation between needing a faster visual system and the sensory demands of flight. However, the authors do not seem to even mention this. Are flying animals more or less likely to be exposed to anthropogenic flickering light sources?

=> We indeed did not discuss this matter at first. We added a short sentence and cited Inger et al. (2014) and Boström et al. (2016) who talked about this matter: “The ability to fly, which many birds and insects have, could explain their high critical fusion frequencies since fast visual systems may be required to accomplish accurate manoeuvres and possibly avoid collisions [29,33].” (p. 19-20)

Page 17

• In the discussion of CFF in sharks the authors mention that McComb et al. hypothesized that variation in CFF between bonnethead, scalloped hammerhead and blacknose sharks could be because bonnethead and scalloped hammerhead sharks (which have relatively higher CFFs) live in shallow and bright reef habitats and feed on their fast-moving prey compared blacknose sharks, which usually forages in deeper and dimmer water environments. However, in table S10 the authors have classified bonnetheads as experiencing ‘high’ light exposure while both scalloped hammerheads and blacknose sharks are classified as having ‘low’ light exposure. It seems that the light level classifications assigned to these species contradicts the primary source of information. It also seems strange that the authors have highlighted these sharks as an example when their own coding of these specie sin their database appears to contradict the primary reference source.

=> We used Healy et al. (2013)’s nomenclature, “as the light levels of species that inhabit turbid waters are typically orders of magnitude lower than typical daylight levels where light levels are comparable to nocturnal light levels (Palmer & Grant 2010), we categorized these species as inhabiting low light level environments.”. As such, Healy et al. (2013) categorised the scalloped hammerhead as living in ‘Low’ light exposure levels because McComb et al. (2013) described them as living in turbid while shallow waters.

=> We thus decided to clarify our sentence and to only talk about clear water inhabiting species, namely the bonnethead and blacknose sharks: “Likewise, in clear water marine habitats, McComb et al. (2010) [30] related the higher temporal resolutions of the bonnethead sharks to their shallow and bright reef habitats and their fast-moving prey compared to the lower temporal resolution of blacknose sharks, which may forage in deeper and dimmer water environments.” (p. 20)

• Change “Our data showed that primary consumer” to “Our data showed that primary consumers”.

=> Based on new statistical analyses, this sentence was removed. (p. 20)

• Change “Such assumptions should, nevertheless, be studied” to “Such assumptions should be studied”.

=> Based on new statistical analyses, this sentence was removed. (p. 20)

Page 18

• Change “When the latter are still used for outdoor lighting” to “While the latter are still used for outdoor lighting”.

=> Modified. (p. 22)

• What does “Chatterjee et al., (2020) [61] brought the latest data” mean? What do the authors mean by ‘brought’ in this context?

=> We corrected this error thanks to the editor’s suggestion and rephrased as follows: “Chatterjee et al. (2020) [61] provided the latest data” (p. 22)

Page 19

• Change “For as crucial assessing an animal actual perception of flicker is” to “As crucial as assessing an animals actual flicker perception is”.

=> As pointed by the editor, this whole sentence was unclear. We rephrased it as follows: “Eventually, we would like to point out that animals may be subjected to the deleterious effects of flicker even though they cannot perceive it consciously. Indeed, Lu et al. (2012) [62] argued that a chromatic flicker at frequencies between 42.5 and 75 Hz, superior to the human CFF and therefore consciously unperceivable, was still able to entail their human subjects’ alerting and orienting attentional networks. Even though a first assessment of CFF seems essential, such results could challenge their wider use and justifies the need for a potential future systematic review on the specific matter of the impacts of flashing and flickering light on biodiversity.” (p. 23)

• Change “As it was first noted by Inger et al. (2014) [33] and even if more and more studies have been carried out lately, an important lack of data on animals’ CFF remains and is hampering our understanding of the impacts of anthropogenic lighting on biodiversity” to “As was first noted by Inger et al. (2014) [33], this study highlights how an overall lack of data on animals’ CFF remains and continues to hamper our understanding of the impacts of anthropogenic lighting on biodiversity.”

=> Modified. (p. 24)

Page 20

• Change “There, nevertheless, remains many recent studies using only one specimen or failing to report the use of a reference electrode for electroretinograms” to “Many recent studies have only used one specimen or have failed to report the use of a reference electrode for electroretinograms”.

=> Modified. (p. 25)

Page 22

• Change “outdoor lightings. Then, this result is necessarily provisional.” to “outdoor lighting. Therefore, the results presented here are necessarily provisional.”

=> Modified. (p. 27)

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28 Nov 2022

PONE-D-22-13677R1A flashing light may not be that flashy: a systematic review on critical fusion frequenciesPLOS ONE

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The authors have responded to reviewer comments and made extensive revisions. The manuscript is improved and nearly acceptable. I suggest one additional revision. The formulation of research questions is an improvement. However, the first question, "what evidence exists regarding animal CFF?," does not seem to capture the authors' objectives. That question suggests that CFF might not exist or is somehow controversial. Perhaps the authors can delete this first question, elevate their second question to the first question and add a new second question that connects to the statistical analysis of differences among taxa (Table 1). For example: Are there differences in CFF between major taxonomic lineages? (or something to similar).

=> We are thankful for your acknowledgement of our work in revising the MS. Based on your comment and because we acknowledge this first question might be misleading, we revised our review questions: “what is the distribution of CFF between species? Are there differences in how flicker is perceived between taxonomic classes? Which species are more at risk of being impacted by artificial lighting flicker?”

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